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i havent posted my hands lately. its still all i draw but i usually cant put together a whole page that looks good

>>2714418
blog?

>>2717813
What, were /ic/ mean to you in the past? Well, look how well we whipped your ass into shape.

>>2717813
This is Dishonoured concept art right...?

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>>2717841
Now be careful boy, you're treading on dangerous ground here.

Overpriced af for paper a little bit above the quality of printer paper and binding you can do yourself at home with book glue.

>>2714895
Are they like printer paper? I was hoping for something with texture

>>2714897
They're not anything like printer paper. It's a very thick sturdy paper that can take a lot of abuse. It's incredibly smooth, so it feels like it's almost glossy when you draw on it as the pencil just glides along the surface. Imagine smooth newsprint but without the soft give of the paper because it is thicker and stiffer.

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I don't get it.

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People legitimately pay thousand for this.

>>2715820
How can he still be better than 20% of the beginner thread?

>>2715830
he said he is from an art school

>>2715820
>Raminfard School of Arts
Buullllllshit

This has gotta be bullshit

>>2715396
Long Beach, CA. USA
>Local Art Shop

They're pretty chill. All around nice people. If they don't have what you're looking for in stock, they will either order it for you, or call up another local shop down the street and ask if they have it. Either the owners are friends, or they're just that nice. They have a great selection of brushes, and inks. They even have pen nibs you can buy individually instead of just getting the speedball set. They alwas have a 30% off deal for art students, and constantly have sales. I always stop by when it's a new school session for their $5 hardbound sketchooks.

Don't know much about the local galleries or museums. The art scene here in Long Beach is practically non-existant, and very beach town-ish, unless you count the murals on buildings. There is a museum of Latin american art, but I have yet to stop by and visit. I usually go to the Getty in Los Angeles.

>>2715428
aye long beach reppin. I go to lb state, but i'm from la. you a student too or just a local?

>>2715447
Sup bro.
Not really a student. I'll take a few art classes here and there at the community college for the studies and training, but I mostly just draw on the side and do comics. Been meaning to take the next level of figure drawing since the last class really helped with my skills, and being in that sort of atmosphere was a lot of fun.

How you liking LB state?

This definitely has potential.

>>2717467
My main problem is the pacing.
Everything is too rushed
The first two pages are pretty well paced. You get time to actually appreciate what's happening.
Past that feels very rushed and it's hard to figure out what's going on at a glance.

>Page 3
First two panels are fine, third panel it's hard to realize that she went outside just off that image.
I would have done something like a closeup of her hand reaching for the doorknob or something, or actually having her midway through the door leading outside.
A panel with her outside before it starts raining (I'd do this as a kind of top view, so we see a larger view of the outside, maybe even having the pool partially in shot), then doing the panel-in-panel of her noticing it starting to rain. And finally the panel with her attention being grabbed.
I think this would be better over two pages or at least most of it in one page and then the rest for the first half or so of the next page.

I'm not gonna go in-depth with the other pages, but going forward just put more thought into making things clear to the reader without telling the reader

The girl speaks/thinks too much to herself.
You could essentially get rid of every speech bubble from page 3 to 5 and it would be a lot better.
You don't have to TELL the reader what's happening. It's a comic. You should SHOW the reader.
As it is right now though it may be a bit hard to figure out but if you can get the reader to understand what's happening without writing a single word of the character's thoughts then your comic will be way more interesting to read.
I like the first page and the last 3 panels of the page 2 for this reason.
You don't really need the speech bubbles in the third page to tell what's going on or what the character is thinking.
You can tell that she's curious about the fairy based on her expressions and actions, and you can see that the fairy is going somewhere and that it's starting to rain.


Gonna stop here because character limit and cbf

If you want to seel your art you need your space. forget bandcam forget etsy forget shapeways 3d hub scupteo reverbnation topspin noisetrade all of that shit that's nothing youre just another product and theyre the thing selling the stuff. you dont make your music you make their music like theyre a world of their own people go there and say ok these guys didnt make it to labels so they selling here throu this people they know in before the music wont be the best out there is just will be the best music of that particular community and it will be just the music that interest to the grow of the community like it is not even the interest of the artist but the community, it simply not great and goes pretty much the same for any online descentralized-indepedent shop society6? all their clones? none of that it's cool but your artwork wont never likely make it.

So you need your own space your .com your hosting. make hostings almost free request hosting go pay hosting is just 2-5$ a month and youre really making interesting stuff none of that cdbaby distrokid tunecore and the likes that not even seel your music. can you even track stats there?? is pure crap. for 5$ or less youre in your own space like your local in reallife stret and you can go blogspots ezines blogs like techcrunch venturebeat but art realted of course and look over the frakin millions of blogs and ezines out there you can even go look reallife zines of ur zone but thats more like a different thing I think. Out in street no shit is going to buy your art like simply noI mean if you like your local stuff then go for it but if you lurked to much over the internet and youre already

>>2717498

I didn't read all that crap, but that car "design" is just awful.

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>>2717498
>thing I think. Out in street no shit is going to buy your art like simply noI mean if you like

Haha yeah no fucking way dude.

if he knows so much why did most of chipmunk adventure look like shit

>>2717681
Are you talking about the water effects?, other than that I can't recall stuff that looked bad
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H0kscrWF7nA
Also, I don't think richard had anything to do with it

>>2717681
Let this post serve as a reminder that plebs (the world) will judge your skill by your worst works and performances.

post some serious artwork op

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after-the-lock

>>2716788
Congratulations youre retarded. Reported for underage b&

>>2716793
Nice butthurt, faggot.

Next.

>>2716794
What do i even have to be butthurt about you idiot

Heres your "next": youre also a cuck

blog?

>>2713944
Better than 90% of ic desu

>>2713944
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

I FEEL HARDCORE

ALWAYS HARDCORE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ygWV__SMt7M

>>2714960
If you have to make a thread to ask this question you could figure it out yourself it's self explanatory - no one needs to fucking spoonfeed you every single bit of information use your fucking head.

>>2714960
I've seen multiple threads like this in the past month alone. Just search the archives.

>>2714960
I wanna go pro but I'm not even close to making it ;_;