Old Thread: >>2639209
Immortalize your girl at:
http://tower-girls.booru.org/
(pls)
Rolling tool:
https://www.random.org/
(good for re-rolls)
Book Mobile: https://mega.nz/#F!es1BSKQR!spODyd0iaQmMelGA2GscFw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcDvzifP_gk
after-the-lock
>>2686561
MY DIQ
>>2686556
This shit's been on my desktop for weeks and i'm never going to finish it
>>2686591
>>2686593
>>2686598
>>2686601
Good stuff overall. To respond to your earlier question about foreshortening, it doesn't look too bad from my perspective as a layman, however, the formal way to do it I THINK is to encompass the cylindrical form of the spear or whatever object in a rectangular form that extends to a vanishing point, and then extend THAT form into a slightly larger, similar form to give yourself some idea of how much space the grip will take up and draw accordingly.
>>2686594
I like the sharp angles. Her eyes and ears are a bit asymmetrical. Keep workin'.
>>2686604
Always a pleasure Firez. Cute face as usual. I feel like her top kind of forces the breasts into an uncomfortable line tangent. We can see the base of one of her tiddies but not the other, however the jagged lines so closely skirt the contours of where her other breast would be (in fact, I'm fairly confident we would be able to see it) it creates kind of a muddled appearance, at least for me. Perhaps consider raising the bottom of stage-left portion of her top a bit to be more congruent with its counterpart on the right (exposing a little more skin in the process) and taming some of those rips and tears.
>>2686607
Cute, but it's also very "safe" if that makes sense. The ear appears a but too close to her eye perhaps. I feel like the earlobe should perhaps be overlapped by the indication of the jaw rather than the reverse.
>>2686609
H.R. Giger, is that you? Really creative. I think that the "lattice" of the stage left shoulder is a little high relative to its counterpart while the "collar" shape is lower. It also appears her head and neck are slightly off center as well. Pretty cool though, keep it up.
>>2686708
>those Hal Jordan lats
Always be mindful of sexual proportions, the female is typified by slighter shoulders and more robust hips that are nearly parallel to them in width, hips can often be increased in size beyond that for the purposes of exaggerating the feminine form, too. Right now you have kind of a "top heavy" masculine form owing mostly to that huge v-taper.
The hands, fingers-to-palm should be long enough to reach the brow ridge, they look a little small there. Also the elbow should land about where the ribcage ends. I think if you tamed that sharp curve of the latissimus and extended the contour you currently have demarcating the bicep a bit closer to the deltoid it would help. Keep practicing.
>>2686757
thanks! i sketched her body very lightly below the dress but it seems i have overdone it a bit, the dress came out too non-symmetrical wich makes the whole anatomy look bad. But eh, better try next time
Goblin Princess
Rollio
>>2686880
I'm a fan of this.
Merchant Princess and PRINCESS GET.
It's messy, yea, and not very good. But I finally realized what that x thing on the dress is for.
>>2686556
rollie
>>2686757
Thanks a lot anon, sorry for the past abomination, I hope this is considerably better
>>2686609
blog?
>>2687048
Good on you for trying a tough angle, the body and the hand of her golem are quite well done (notably, her stage-right hand looks a bit off compared to its much larger opposite though). However, the angle of the face seems a bit muddled, I feel like you're struggling to consolidate the angle of the features and their placement with the structure of the head itself, at least at first glance. The harsh and sharp lines and pitch black shadows under the chin aren't doing her any favors here either as they're real attention-grabbers. While they do show the construction and the angle of the head, it wouldn't be a bad idea to perhaps try a subtler approach.
>>2687353
I like the additional rendering and you definitely improved the situation with her top, even if you decided to keep it asymmetrical it looks quite a bit better I'd say. You've left some of the tatters so it remains characteristic and consistent with your earlier portrayal, but you've toned them down so it's not so overpoweringly erratic. I also like the new expression, which looks fun and mischievous rather than the sentimental and/or dour visage that usually adorns your pretty ladies.
Keep it up man.
>>2686561
This looks really great, I especially love your lighting. Blog?
Fish, might refine or redo later.
>>2686556
rolling!
>>2686757
Thanks, The ear does look strange now that I've moved the eye a bit more backward, will edit that.
Lamia Princess, rolled her in the previous thread. Again criticism is welcome!
>>2684797
>>2687402
Thanks for the crit, I really appreciate the feedback. The inconsistent hands thing has been mentioned before, so I'm gonna double down on studying that for a while.
Thanks again.
>>2686556
123
>>2682937
I wanted a goblin prince instead of a princess
>>2686556
rolling to distract from wanna kms
>>2686556
I did this a long time ago and never posted it to any threads ,and, so here it is...
I've gotten better since then, but i dont do digital much anymore (doing traditional stuff to gain better skills)
Thats sad, actually, i have a fucking cintiq 13hd.
Ill make some digital paintings later i guess.
>>2689490
First one is pops, search for vk com imnotpops
>>2687589
Not bad. Hands are positioned awkwardly considering the action, and are quite huge though. She looks like she could palm her entire head like Shaq can palm a b-ball, my nigga.
>>2687919
Tangents. Tangents everywhere my man.
http://schweizercomics.tumblr.com/post/11966164633/the-schweizer-guide-to-spotting-tangents
The "drool" tear drop shape sliding into the mouse's nose, the mouse's head is skirting too closely to her bottom lip, her cheek transitioning to the mouse's ear, her hair volume into her stage-right shoulder, the contour of her hair on the stage-right toughing the rat's tail, that bit of hair overlapping her mouth, that bit of hair being overlapped by her stage-right eyelash, and her snek rattle is causing some problems too. Also her scales on her tail don't appear to be following any sort of form so they're making it appear "flat" as consequence.
Don't despair, but unfortunately it might take a bit more effort to fix these problems than simply starting something new might be. It's a very cute idea with a lot of character though, if you don't want to fix this piece after reading the article I'd posted above, consider setting this one aside for later. Keep workin'!
(also, don't be afraid to overlap forms after you read that, I hope you don't end up overcompensating on whatever your next piece might be just because this one has a lot of areas that could use a bit of TLC)
>>2688648
I'M NOT GAY and YOU CAN'T MAKE ME!
With that said, fairly well done. The torso and legs seem quite a bit too long in the standing position, though appear correct in the reclining one. The rendering is simple but appealing. Very nice expressions.
Also did I mention that I'm not gay?
>>2688721
I like it, nothing too heinous that I can see, from a craft perspective. Though her horns look a bit askew considering the other features of her face. A solid, colored sketch.
>>2689645
Thanks man, really helping my compositioning out. Except for the "long line" tangent I did not really know the other tangent types could cause trouble, I'll have to pay attention to that now. I probably won't fix this image yet (messed up some layer things), but I'll definitely apply it to my next piece. Appreciate the feedback!
>>2686880
Heh, I have that exact crop
rollin'
>>2689645
thanks for your critique, hetero anon! i see what you mean, so I shortened the torso and legs
>>2686556
rowl
Rowwin
done a rough
I rolled frog princess
>>2689812
Used this post as my roll. Haven't done any traditional drawings in quite some time anymore so I thought it was a good opportunity to try that again.
>>2686556
Rolling
I'm only posting this so other people can feel better about themselves.
Raider Princess and PRINCESS GET!
>>2686556
Rollllll
>>2690911
No gf so you draw girls? haha loser.
Damn, I might redo this in the future.
Roll
Rorrinh
>>2690703
I'd like to see this not so rough. I like the pose. It feels nice.
Rollski flava
>>2686556
rolllll
Roll lad
>>2690911
Do you have a blog?
>>2692299
Thanks for this critique, dude!
I know what you mean with the arms, it looks kinda funky but I gotta admit I was too lazy to correct it.
>>2692499
my tumblr is kinky-melon
>>2686556
rollarino
r-roll
>>2686556
rolling
rolle
>>2692874
i really hate how it turned out but I guess it's better than nothing
roll again
>>2692899
got dubs and went for dullahan princess
roll again
>>2692924
cyclops princess
roll again
>>2686556
Roll
>>2692299
Thanks, didn't even notice one of the shoulder was raised, will fix that. Also, reroll!
>>2692899
If you hate how it turned out you should spend more time on it. I'd like to see how a princess of yours would look if you spent enough time on just one instead of multiple to see your best work.
>>2692891
Jester princess. I guess.
>>2692976
I like the marker brush in mspaint. that's just how it is.
>>2686556
rorru
I know its not necessarily the thread for it but ppl here know the answer. does anyone have tips or a quick tut on simplifying drawing characters I keep getting bogged down on planning and doing details I don't ever finish. I just wanna be able to contrib instead of posting a wip and never getting through it tyvm
>>2693231
I honestly don't know how to finish work this is about as good as it gets all I can really do is sketchy looking shit past the sketching part I have no idea what to do really
Rolling.
>>2693971
And posting. Before work, even.
>>2686899
Dullahan Princess
aslo roll
>>2691178
Roll again
Frog princess. Hey, mates, what go you think, will i lift much moneys if i start drawing pron (i can actually render shit, i just don't do it much lately)? I'm not getting a lot of SFW commissions and i'm tired of being broke as fuck.
Also rolle.
>>2694576
Try it. Your anatomy looks up to par besides the fucked up neck and thats all you really need
>>2694583
I expected to hear complaints about hands on this one honestly, since i intentionally made them to look froggish. The neck is kinda news to me. Can you show me where i fucked up?
>>2694588
Its about twice as long as it needs to be.
Also her pelvis isnnt facein the same direction as her knees
>>2692829
Rockin' tiddies. It's a pretty flat, graphic style; I can't really offer much constructive to say. The contour of her belt seems to "creep" as it moves across her body, increasing in size from right to left, one of her boots is a little lower than the other, and its "cuff" towards the top is a bit thinner. She's got some interesting neck action going, the picture's taken at an angle but it does look a bit odd.
>>2692899
>>2692924
>>2692941
Nice sketches, keep it up family man.
>>2693357
Good expression. I am having a hell of a time trying to imitate her hand gesture though.
>>2693447
You wield it well, but perhaps you could find something similar in a more robust drawing program like Krita. Well done very cute.
>>2693995
There is a large disparity in size between her two wings. If you look near the shoulders and follow through with a line where the the wings would meet you you'll see that it travels the opposite way her shoulders are going, almost making a "<" shape. To that end, the wings would look better, even drawn as is, were they on opposite ends of her shoulders.
Keep pluggin' away at it.
>>2694390
Fantastic work.
Her stage-left breast is far bigger than its counterpart on the right and a couple other inconsistencies like with that belt wrapped around the base of her ribs, criss-crossing underneath the belts running down her abdominals.
>>2694415
The breasts appear to be some cross between breast tissue and pectoralis muscle, lying flat across the chest like a fluffy pancake, this is exacerbated by the fur draped over them, which doesn't seem to really react to the shape of the breasts underneath in a meaningful way.
>>2694531
Very cute, I like her big paw hands. Both her feet and legs appear to have a considerable difference in size.
>>2694576
You have done consistently solid stuff from the beginning, and I don't think you will have too much trouble finding people to pay you for work. However, consider practicing color.
>>2694607
I disagree with the neck thing. If it is too long, we're talking like 10 pixels or so.
Also I'm not sure what you mean by the "pelvis isn't facing the same direction as the knees". You (at least I assume it was you) said this in another thread, and I don't get it. Are the femur, tibia and fibula not fairly mobile? I feel I can turn my knee a good 45 degrees from the default 90. It's not comfortable, but I can practically point them towards each other or away from each other in kind and stand without much of a problem, though as a general rule perhaps you're on to something.
>>2694671
With the way shes standing, you cant balance if your body is like that.
Also, the neck is completely too long, too much anime.
>>2694662
>However, consider practicing color.
I can color shit (pic related), i just focus on sketching lately so i could learn to sketch quickly. Tower grillz is the part of my sketching routine.
>>2694607
Okay. I kinda just like drawing girls with longish necks. I don't feel like it's so long it's broken, but maybe i'll notice it later.
The left knee is supposed to face the same direction with the pelvis and the right one is turned inwards. It's maybe an uncomfortable one, but not an impossible position to stand in.
>>2694390
Crystal Princess, this one was fun
>>2694662
Yeah, I see the breast thing now, and i do go crazy sometimes with belts, too much Final Fantasy in my childhood i guess. Thanks for pointing it out.
Also rolling again
>>2694921
Also, reroll. I got faerie princess on my last roll, but i've done her already.
>>2694662
>Good expression. I am having a hell of a time trying to imitate her hand gesture though.
Yeah, the original position of the arms changed pretty drastically. But by then, I was already happy with the hands themselves. Habit I really ought to get out of!
>There is a large disparity in size between her two wings
Yikes, now that you point it out, yeah. The wings were the last thing I put on there and you can definitely tell.
Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it!
>>2694921
>I can color shit
to be honest I instantly regretted including that in my post, I knew it was presumptuous to imply that you'd never colored anything before or something. I was going to delete it and ask you to POST something you'd colored instead but by the time I wrote all that up I was too lazy.
>>2694932
>those planes
Looks great
>>2694983
Nah, it's fine. It actually would be a good idea to practice color more, because when i decide to color something i often end up spending hours and hours trying to find the color scheme that works. I should be able to do it more quickly.
>>2693995
Faun... Princess?
I'm really not hitting the "princess" aspect very hard.
should have made the pose more interesting oh well
>>2695054
ah sorry resized
>>2686556
haylo
>>2695057
Rolling
rollster
hello
uuuuuuuuu
>>2686556
Rollinggg
rolllll
>>2692278
Garbage anatomy = rolling again
W0W
>>2686556
roll
>>2696011
This is quite nice, anon, I think it'd look very good if you just cleaned your linework up a bit.
>>2693222
Well that's wasted trips. This is all I could manage to save after my PC decided to crash, the .psd is corrupt. Not planning to redo it..
raul
>>2696505
I have no shame whatsoever
>>2687400
so a while ago i rolled these dubs and chose djinn princess
I'll roll something.
We got a buttload of new princesses over on the /tg/ thread, also, dont forget to upload your drawings to the booru
rohli
rol
>>2695020
Not bad.
This kind of straight-on pose isn't exactly glamorous but it's an important exercise in symmetry in proportions and volumes nonetheless. Judging by your post it's hard to tell whether this was intentional or not, but her frame isn't very feminine. Go for an upper body that's about two heads at its widest point (just above the deltoid tuberosity), with hips roughly the same width. Her stage-left forearm is both somewhat thinner and longer than its counterpart on the right. The humeral portion of her arm terminating at roughly the same point, but her wrists and hands beginning further down.
>>2695055
The simple rendering has some appeal and the added texture is a nice touch. Those lower legs are a bit peculiar however. The knees appear to be at a 3/4 view and the feet are basically in profile. I know it's a cartoon but it still looks extremely painful. Both her stage right hand and foot are suffering from line tangents, with the contours of her robe and her other foot being the culprits, respectively. One thing I'd also caution against, is that scar you've drawn is in a position where it's nearly overlapping and parallel with a common fold in the facial skin, the nasolabial fold.
>>2696011
Pretty sexy fampaisano; the "closeup" has a couple nitpicks. The jewel on her neck is off center, and her eyes appear to be to be slightly askew. I can see the faint construction line you'd drawn, and while you'd caught that the line itself was off somewhat, I feel like you might have overcompensated slightly. The margin of error is so small though, I could certainly be wrong.
>>2696165
Bummer, I would have liked to see it complete.
>>2696517
Youtube: Peter Han Dynamic Sketching
>>2696773
The scene itself looks pretty cool. I love the coinage and other miscellaneous items everywhere. That said the characters themselves could use some love from an experienced lover. Keep practicing fambalaya
>>2699081
here ya go
what does ic think?
I know her pose is very stiff and kinda awkward looking, anyone have some advice on how to fix that?
>>2686556
Roollaaa
>>2686556
rol
Something fun please.
>>2699287
Do more gesture studies, observe how things move, and don't be afraid to exaggerate movement it a little bit. It'll become natural with practise.
>>2699357
Hay guise, I'm new to this. Rolled a 57, got Amazon Princess with the fur bikini and the skull in her hair. Love the subject matter and tried to give her a Frank Frazetta feel. Sorry about the stains and stuff, I'm a bit sloppy with my sketchbook. Any and all advice welcome.
>>2699473
a little messy but i like it.
>>2699705
this was also meant to be a roll.
>>2686880
nice shortstack, senpai
>>2690911
please do you have a art blog
>>2686556
roll
Fairy princess. How'd I do?
>>2700818
went a bit overkill on those leg proportions
>>2686556
rolli
>>2686556
rollolololo
>>2699705
my eldritch princess. no crown but things that are eldritch dont give a damn about crowns just like they dont give a damn about us . i went a more Cthulhu route than the last eldritch princess in this thread.
Trap princess. Fiddled with the colour scheme a bit.
>>2700915
another one
>>2701050
nigga i aint drawin no triclops, reroll
>>2700970
bitch did you copy me? I made this same design a year ago and showed it to like one person on here
>>2701087
lol really , i wasn't that person . i have only been here for like half a year.
>>2701087
post it , i wanna see anon.
>>2686556
GOIN FOR A ROLL
Rollin'
rollolololo
Yeah, roll
>>2701268
guess i know what i'm drawing for inktober when i wake up tomorrow (today?)
ROLLO
Rolles
Last princess i rolled was the slime one and i haven't done it yet, but i'm doing a bunch of halloween-themed stuff and this one kinda fits the theme of waifus, so i thought i'd throw it in.
Also, when i rolled the witch princess however the fuck long ago, i absolutely butchered it, so this would be a redemption of sorts.
>>2686556
roll
Moth princess 82!
rowliang
>>2701269
Witch Princess
((Didn't like the line-art so i colored)
yeah but consider
>>2686556
paladin, played around with some symmetry for the design was pretty fun desu
>>2704135
also anyone got any tips on making the weapons look more like theyre flying into her hands?
>>2686556
rawlin them rawls
>>2702366
that hand
RORR
Rawlin
rolls
rollerino
>>2696165
>>2698757
Kept bothering me that I didn't get to finish it, so eventually not doing it felt even worse than redoing it. I'm glad I did, might even color it.
>>2687353
Done
Roll, last time i'm gonna rely on this for a drawing for inktober
>>2705298
this looks great anon, blog?
>>2705332
That's firez, nigga.
http://firez-tbr.tumblr.com
>>2705329
kill me thanks
>>2705411
also
>>2686556
I'm tall when I'm young and I'm short when I'm old.What am I?5
>>2705444
A goddamn faggot!
rollin.
hopefully my motivation will pull me through at least one.
>>2686556
R O L L
>>2701837
>>2705444
>I'm tall when I'm young and I'm short when I'm old
A CANDLE OR A PENCIL
[SPOILER]FAGGOT[/SPOILER]
>>2707335
>tfw you are a Dog with a knife in it's mouth
>>2686556
rollin
>>2688721
>I did this a long time ago and never posted it to any threads
rlly? I've had that pic in my reference folder for several months now at least desu
>>2686556
rolu desu
>>2707929
1st of these I've done
rooll
Squire Courtier is a qt! A qt boy!
>>2686556
Fuck it
>>2686556
DYEL?
Llor
>>2686556
Hey this will be a great way to break in my new tablet. Rolling!
>>2704879
>Didn't comment earlier for some reason
>Really liked it and was kinda sad it didn't get done
Primeval doesn't get enough art and for whatever reason, I really have taken a liking to this style. Thanks, friend.
rollazolla
rollllllllllllan
looking at mine, i almost don't want to post it because of how bad it is compared to the other ones. Im a beginner so i know im not great, but ill get better. Also, i rolled Plant.
>>2701712
>that upskirt
Good stuff
>>2702090
Here feelers look like they're positioned in a way that's the opposite of how they'd actually appear considering the tilt of her head (stage-left appears closer, right further). Always consider perspective. Also with that said her head appears a bit small for her frame.
>>2702366
The thumb should originate from the "medial" side of the hand, the portion of it that faces inwards towards the rest of her body.
>>2702416
Brutal
>>2704135
>>2704138
Fun stuff, watch out for tangents such as those created by the contour of the "wings" and her fingertips.
>>2704879
She looks tired
>>2705298
Looking great Firez. Sometimes her arms look too short to me and sometimes they don't. Can't explain it. I will say that it's kind of difficult to tell what she's doing with her hands in my opinion either way.
>>2705411
*kills u*
Nice hypnotoad princess
>>2707335
I like the angular style. Her big hair doesn't keep her head from appearing quite a bit too small for her body. Or maybe her head isn't too small and it's just the fact her ears are coming out of her temporal protuberance that's throwing me off. I like it, though she seems a bit top-heavy with those broad shoulders, flaring lats, and that sternum that's as side as an oar.
>>2707969
This is darling, though the lack of overlapping forms can kind of have a flattening effect. If you don't want to draw her gooch perhaps put a few lines suggesting the inguinal ligament in that area to kind of show how the legs are inserting into the pelvis if nothing else.
>>2708678
Given the position of that dixie cup sized ding dong head it looks like his winger dinger is coming straight out of his rectus abdominis. Remember that the dorkus malorkus comes out from beneath the pubic symphysis as opposed to the abdominal muscles which are tucked in above it.
PRINCESS GET!
>>2701712
Another uncertified wifu, sorry.
you'd rather see me be in the pen than me and Lorenzo rolling in a Benz-o
>>2712815
thx
im in a runt, roll
>>2686556
rell
>>2712061
Here, a certified one!
Rollahu akbar.
>>2713419
That looks really cool fampaisano,
>>2713419
Love it. Blog?
BTW Roll
Let's have another go at this
Roll mother fucka!!!
rool
>>2702362
pretty fun
>>2701108
8 on the image dice and 8 in your post roll HOLY SHIT
Also rolling
Gimme something
>>2686556
rool
Rol
>>2714455
>>2713434
>Love it. Blog?
Made one just for you, baby: http://liarjohnny.tumblr.com/
Can someone explain me how do you add the "ask me anything" section to the blog on this radfem site?
>>2715110
You find Settings which should be somewhere on your dashboard. Under settings you find whichever blog you have, click on that and scroll down a bit, where a option called "ask" should be. Turn that on and it should be good to go
>>2715118
Cool, thanks.
>>2686556
rolland
>>2686556
rolll
rollster
rrrollll
reroll
I will roll u
okk
quick imp doodle
Rockin & ...
fk it ima rollieoli
gggg
Crystal Queen
>>2686556
Boy howdy!
Goo
Rolle
Rollator die
rollo
>>2686556
rolling for skelly princess
Yeh
Roll
rrrrr
>>2686556
roll
>>2716813
roll again
>>2716818
again
So much rolls but so few drawings...
not very happy with this one...
>>2686556
rellon
>>2717387
I love the sense of perspective on her legs and the legs themselves.
Keep up the good work Mathias
>>2717387
rat?
rollio
>>2717422
chimera thing, kinda just messing around
Hey can someone help me with the arms? I want them to go under the breasts kind of propping them up but no matter what i do it always looks off.
>>2717574
i gotchu my dude
R O L L
whatever
>>2686556
roll
>>2693743
Just give them plain looking s with some minor details. It's not that hard amigo, keep going!
>>2714045
I like it. It's extremely sweet looking.
bread roll
>>2711550
Just give up. You're gonna be like fifty years old and still shit.
cinnamon roll
>>2686556
Broll
>>2686556
rolli
>>2718699
Messy sketch. Mushroom princess.
Roll for dumb pen study
>>2718792
Jester princess.
LETS GOOOO
rollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
im still pretty new 2 art. this is the 1st time im posting my work. forgive me if its shit
>>2720325
and i rolled knight princess agian...
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