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Too much going on and the font is stretched. You could maybe add a single building silhouette in the moon, make the wolf smaller then add the text beside the graphic or below.

Also I don't like the font personally.

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>>251937
I think that you should do something like this (pic related) and hear the advise of 251939

>>251943
Btw, I think that the position of the letters isnt the right one

>>252345
Heh fair enough! I wouldn't mind more specific feedback though

It looks too generic

flat/material design?

>>252269
I guess what you're looking for is called modernism, check out the work of Chermayeff & Geismar or Paul Rand for example

>>252269
and btw it's a movement and not a "style"

No, they'll delete system32 and notify the police of your heinous crimes automatically.

Lmao yes they'll work perfectly fine

Just as long as it doesnt execute order66 and haha Cheers

>>252312
>>>/wsr/

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I don't think important lengthy information should be displayed vertically. Either way, the direction of your text is wrong as the composition goes from top to bottom, while the text goes bottom up. The reader has to go through the poster two times
You have blank space left so try playing more and rearrange the elements.

The dots don't reflect pointillism correctly. They evoke more of pop art impression. Try to find another way to convey the idea.

The shapes and brush strokes could be more organic to reflect painting more naturally. When you zoom into a mondrian it's clear there is something going there in the black lines. You can see some canvas fabric, the slight uneveneess of the lines.

>>252289
Slab serif is not really the best font for a post-impressionist thing. Better off using something from the period , try a Modern or transitional

>>252297
>>252301
OP here:
Thanks for the feedback :)

>>>/wsr/

>>251679
It's a grey area that'd have to be determined in court. However, the claim itself would be worth less than the court fees I'm sure (if this is your work.)

It's a dangerous line to tread and either way, its just a shitty piece that looks bad in your portfolio and makes you look like an unreputable hack.

>>251680

Yeah it's a little thing I'm messing with at home w/o a scanner or note pad. I needed a reference and was not sure where the line lies.

>>251679
Insperation. There are enough differences.

much like people who say they can't cook, you're either a complete idiot or incredibly lazy.

Visit >>>/ic/ and look or ask for HyperAngle references.

>>252255
> >>>/wg/

use >>>/wsr/

Howto get that dildo out of your ass?

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am i disgusting

>>251696
recommend a good beard wax brand. and also mention a few stores you buy your hipster clothes from

>>251387
>>>/3/

IT'S IT!

>>251387
I think it could be a demo of the facerig the guys creating The Lord Inquisitor are using?

thelordinquisitor.com/

>>252230
the effect is called motion tracking

Motion Kinematic and Kinetic Analyser (Mokka)

SkillSpectors and SkillCapturs

MaxTraQ 3D

Kinovea

or after effects cc

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjibpxwdwbM

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>>252233
Thanks champion

help

Find what you wanna do, look for a tutorial


Something else its just to follow photoshop/etc tutorials, doesnt matter if you arent interested in doing that image/logo you'll learn the steps for it and just take it from there