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>>2407193

you try to give some volume but it doesn't make any sense, try to understand why you put big lines

Graphitti art is so specialized its hard to know what to discuss or critique.
I'd start by saying that you should use real paper and not a sheet of notebook paper.
The shapes have lots of insets and cutouts that don't really make sense and make them look lumpy.
The thick lower borders suggest volume but the overlapping parts ruin the sense of dimensionality.
The shading is inconsistent and I see evidence of scratchy lines instead of flowing single strokes.
Also the word is hard to read but I don't think that's really an issue.

>>2407193

Work on your presentation. You took a shitty cell phone pic of a drawing in a lined paper notebook at an angle. The same picture drawn with a marker on white paper and scanned with levels adjusted would look much better.

I'll wait for you to english normally

I am Caucasian.

I think that I finally draw in a way that is normal.

>>2402551
This looks good for what it is Kiva

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>>2414374
quality bait.

>>2414381
WTF are you talking about? Not bait, I would really appreciate any advice. Dumbass.

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>>2414374

If it ain't broke...

>>2389472
I'd rather shitpost than contribute or git good, but yeah I think the sticky could use some love.

http://drawabox.com/lesson/1 should be added

>>2389553
>drawabox

:^)

>or go outside.
>look at real life
>draw that.
but if you're too afraid to leave your house, jerk off to loomis and use porn for references

>>2414089
That's what studies are.

>>2414128
Life drawing parrots like you don't understand that drawing from life is meant to be an exercise to deepen your understanding about stuff you have already studied. It's not meant to replace proper forms of education like studies from anatomy masters, reading books, taking classes, doing style studies etc. Maybe you should just bite the bullet and indeed study some Loomis instead of doing your worthless life drawing scribbles that haven't gotten you anywhere so far.

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>>2413749
>Those breasts

Whore!

>>2413749
>How do you reach these guys btw
spam their email

whats with the squidgirl porn lately

what a terrible drawing,

uninstall photoshop and kill yourself.

you dont have the spark
you need the spark

You need some sticky in your life

>>2394850

have you not been paying attention? pretty girls all day every day.

>>2394850
Hashtag/Tag your shit.

Update for at least every two days even just a decent sketch.

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>>2394850
PANDER TO POPULAR FANDOMS OR QTs F-A-M

>>2413768
just think of it as a low saturated red orange cube as the base.

afterwards just add extra FX like hue variation because skin.

you can add more FX like sub surface scatter.

What fucks me up is the amount of grey and green that appears in light skintones.

>>2413768
it's not. Skin is partly transparent so the colors of the blood and bone beneath show. Then it's just a matter of the light sources in the area shining their colors on it like with everything else.

it blots because of the heat from your hand.

>>2413542
Hmmm, that might be true

But the casing is pretty far from the actuall ink, does it really affect it?

If so what are some solutions?

>>2413543
I just drop using ballpoint, I didn't bother searching for solutions.

you can confirm it by using a pen that's lying around for a while, if it does not blot at the start then blots after you been using for a while then it's your hand giving heat that's causing the ink to blot.

Fuck you Im first here

>>2412605
hey, I liked that dudes stuff.
>RIP

>>2412608
PLEASE BE FIRST POSTER

>>2410613
why?

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Hey buddy, I see that you are new here.
There is a topic that is permanently above every other topic and we refer to it as the "sticky". Might I suggest reading there or asking in a different topic?

>>2410628
fuck off

Last time I asked this question I got told to just draw more.

Since that never helped me I just gave up on any kind of art that doesn't let me refine my lines in the finishing stage.

>>2412990
try looking up some of the exercises from scott robertson. he has some pretty solid line work.

Just grab a piece of paper and do it.

At least once a day and whenever I start drawing, I always fill up a page or two with just circles and lines. I'll also usually try to do some rough shading to turn the circles into spheres and I'll try to draw additional lines parallel to the first lines. I wouldn't spend more than five to ten minutes on it, but I personally find that it helps warm up my arm and improve the crispness of my marks. Just make sure you're drawing things at a variety of sizes and that you get your arm, wrist, and fingers involved, otherwise it'll be a waste of time.

>>2411208
No, it's because you're conditioning yourself to appreciate a different kind of art.

>we
Speak for yourself.

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I was drawing 4 serious before I watched anime and it looks hella nice to me. Maybe youre just gay.

Imo everything starts to look better the more you draw.

> was only trying to do only detailed faces at first
> came to realize the purpose of simpleness in a anime face and now draw both simple and detailed faces

Feels good.