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>>2916984

Rotate and resize, then we can talk.

>>>/beg/

>>2916984
It is a good start. Keep shading in different values to make your darks darker and erase to make your lights lighter.

Is that one of your paintings? Do you in general tend to paint game art and shit? That might be your problem

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Nah, that is only 1 of two video game themed paintings I've done

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Here is my website: www.calebpowelloilpaintings.com

Kyle has been drawing for years.

Post your work.

>>2895516

Probably like, two or three weeks, tops.

>>2919650

People like you are pathetic.

porn is good source material

No I mean how should I draw naked people without anyone finding out? I don't want anyone to look into my sketchbook and see dirty drawings

>>2919593
Just leave out the tee tees and wee wees from your drawrings

>>2919252
Just buy a setting spray

>>2919252
Use this at your favor and say its your style and the fading is proposital

Adaptabilty is a blessing

>>2919252
Bound sketchbooks are better for graphite because the pages can rub against each other easily

>hand not touching paper

Wtf is this possible? How would you have any control?

I do both depending on the angle of my canvas and the material I'm working with.
It is better not to touch in my opinion, when my hand touches the paper I tend to draw with my wrist and fingers and less with my arm.
Also smudging could be avoided by not touching.

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>>2918940
>touching the paper
>the paper
>paper

What book is this

>>2918080
http://imgur.com/a/2Er8Y/all

It's from this, enjoy.

It's mostly for gesture warmup and trying to see how much you can capture in such a short amount of time (line of action, flow, basic shapes, maybe some form construction - depending on how fast you work)

But I'm assuming you ask that question becasue you're not able to, meaning you should slow down and take as much time as you need. Do plenty of gestures slowly (don't set any timers) and build up that speed.

Edit, same guy here, it appears to be made by someone by the name of G.Grey, that is our guess though, we can't make their handwriting out.

Probably done my some local artist, it doesn't worth much if that is what you want to know

>>2918794
https://youtu.be/ZXsQAXx_ao0

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Just do it.

Not to sound too optimistic but hey at least you would of tried right? Me I want to make a cartoon and perhaps a video game. If I even had to skill to do so I know it'll fade into the internet with no one watching but I'm still gonna do it. Sooo you know it JUST DO IT fail. Try again fail try again fail and maybe one day you'll make it or hey maybe you'll die in old age and become really famous leaving a legacy just do it

Quite a few. That one included.

I would recommend Animation 1 by Preston Blair. Gets straight to the point.

If you want more of the theory and concept of art I would suggest The Art Spirit by Robert Henri.

Really enjoyed the Disney segment that pulled some points from the book when it came to art.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OAl9P4T12Rs

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Google for:

mechanical joints
sheet metal design
HVAC
sports car exhaust

and similar. Think for a bit what are the characteristic features of the products you will see.

I'll tell you on the basis of pic related case for computer power supply:

- everything based on rectangle/box shape
- grooves and holes are repeating
- concentricity and order
- consistency: bending is everywhere the same with the same radius
- lots of holes for screws

Same with joints, keep them simple looking mechanisms.

Now, if you want to actually make a Gundam, it is even easier - it's just a guy in helmet with a bunch of cardboard boxes, sometimes cut in half to have pointy triangles.

Instead of trying to go with organic shapes, just draw everything with boxes and if it is too blocky for you, cut them in half so you will have some pointy triangle.

>>2919050
Cute as fuck, sauce?

>>2918399
If you think that's good then you are a hopeless case

>As good as this
First of all I'd recommend to look up what real artwork looks like
PS: you have a shit taste OP

>>2918399
LOL

>>2919154
>I made a Sonic the hedgehog animation
And i took a shit today. Guess which is worth more

the shit