Alternative Art/Stylization General

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Something I probably won't finish.

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>>2755385

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friends character for sprite game

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also this

>>2755385
>>2755387

isnt /ic/ under the third rule?

>>2755416
only if it's pornographic and even then only if you've a history of shitposting too hard from what i've seen

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>>2755445

*teleports behind you*
nothing personal, kid.

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>>2755450
*leans into mic*
*ahem*
[spoiler]migh turn[/spoiler]

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sum mecha girl

>>2755399
>>2755493
both of you color like you're in middle school art class. stop it

>>2755445
>She's not farting
Nice try James

>>2755493
why did you scribble all over your drawing?

>>2755555
ahem. it's called shading like a pro Yoh yoshinari yo shade technique.

You have yet to learn young padawan

>>2755555
to distract from the fundamental errors

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>>2755493
Nice torso

>>2755416
is SFW

>>2755544

im the same person

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I M S T I L L I N A D R E A M

S N A K E EATERRRRR

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>>2755385
Her arms are too thin, she has mans shoulders (women are usually 2 heads length, man are 3 like in your pic), those hips are misplaced (they make them look like grannie hips. I suggest practicing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2ZerTdtudk https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PWGRsD0xen0 ), the lineart is inconsistent (it changes its weight too much), those hands are doomed (couldn't do much for them. Learn to draw them.), the eyes (in relation with the position of the head and nose) are misplaced. I used this 3D to try to sort it out. Many furries have problem with these so I cant recommend enough using it: https://sketchfab.com/models/dcff879d197b4335948b84f5f34faa97 )

>>2755707
This is amazingly good for being so messy.

>>2755387
Chicken scratching and too half-assed background.
I like the brushes you used here tho

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>>2755399
>>2755493
>>2755707

>>2755445
Your strokes lack confidence m8

>>2755261
is the OP pic digital or traditional? if digital how do you get that pencil texture

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Tried to draw an Eva suit with only rounded forms.

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>>2755746
And I was trying out this new digital watercolor brush too

>>2755746
>>2755750
blog?

>>2755762
Ah so you are the guy that sarcastically asks everyone for their blog

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>>2755764
What? No I'm serious

>>2755709
Wow. Thank you very very much. Aside from the fucked up hands I didn't notice a single thing about what you pointed out.
The videos, especially, will come in handy to fix this.
You're even more based for trying to fix it. It highlights the mistakes even more.
Thanks again.

>>2755719
Damn, those are chicken scratches? I didn't clean up the sketch but I though that term was only used for extremes cases.
Thanks for the brushes, I don't find them anything special though. Maybe because they aren't heavily blurred.

>>2755764
Most people ask seriously, trust me it's actually pretty rare people meme about this, and even if they do it's not worth doubting them, anon.

I like your Eva suit.

>>2755750
I like the coloring.
Definitely not a fan of the art-style

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My furry ass again...just the sketch so far, feedback, please? Do limbs match up?

>>2755864
make it a sexy pic and post it into porn thread please.

>>2755750
good god

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How's this so far?

>>2755873
Is this supposed to be sexual? Or is it a vampire ripping into a dude's neck? If it's not supposed to be sexual, consider removing the pevlic tilt a bit because it looks like the knife-ear is begging to take a BBC.

>>2755261
WHO IS THE OP ARTISTS?

WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO?

A MAN NEEDS A NAME

>>2755886
pixelnoodle.tumblr.com

They can't draw much anymore because they injured themselves ;-;

>>2755892
read his blog, such a shame

hope he gets well soon

>>2755764
Why would we be asking sarcastically? most of us actually do want to take a look.

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>>2755880
Vampire- I assume you mean the tilt on the red ish colored figure.

These are what ones I am trying to Draw. having trouble with blue figures face angles...

>>2755940
In his defense there is a guy that sarcastically asks for a blog in that flippant manner, but it's pretty obvious when he's doing it for bantering purposes.

>>2755941
Blue guy's face angles are fine; red guy's angle is fucked. Needs the top of the head tilted farther away from the viewer to demonstrate a real bite.

Also, blue figure gesture is weak for having his neck ripped in to. Arch that back; perhaps open the mouth.

As for previous statement, I guess this is supposed to be gay ecchi, then, so the pelvic tilt is fine. Still needs more gesture in the blue figure, though.

>>2755947
Thanks ! I find this advice as very useful I will try to re work such.

>>2755870
Is that good or bad

>>2755892
>#2016 worst year
JUST

>>2755991
>666+666+666+6+6+6

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Getting into a muscle mood again, rendering them is always a challenge for me... Where's muscle-loli-senpai when you need him...

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I am focusing in 2 principal styles, this is one. What do you guys think

>>2755750
theses are fun

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trying to draw comics again but I've learned since then that my composition sucks balls. how would I go about making this read better?

is there an easier way to stylize water? I'm going to go insane drawing each individual wave

also crit is appreciated, thanks

>>2755864
You just want to straight up fuck cats. I mean, I get like shagging humanized cats, but like dude those are just cats. don't shag cats

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>>2756042
Personally I would just contour around the muscles but I rarely draw bara and I don't want to speak out my ass

>>2755544
Only one of those is coloured you fucking homo

>>2756112
Pretty nice senpai. You could turn the camera a bit so we get a longer view towards the vanishing point, then you could add more rocks more spaced and further off to give it a slightly more ebin feel. Right now it feels more claustrophobic than anything else.

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Haven't been able to draw lately.

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>>2755764

Player hater of the year.

>>2756112
cool

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>>2756142
Thank you so much for this, I hope you don't mind that I heavily referenced this as I often face the challenge of simplifying shadows.

I'd love to see some of your work

>>2756222
Doings lines for the upper chest as well as the collar bone looks weird. Get rid of those lines and drop the dip of the collarbone a bit. The guy who did the drawover did it and it looks much better.

>>2756226
I did it and it does look a lot better, thanks!

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>>2755864
One of the biggest things I'd comment on is the fact that you're symbol drawing the faces. It's very important to have strong shapes blocked out so the piece looks cohesive. The rough draft especially should have some movement and cartoony-ness. Once you get the hang of it your art will quickly look a lot more fun.

(cont.)

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>>2756238
If you do it properly it's easy to build good anatomy that makes sense spatially. It won't look as flat. See how I placed the girl's feet forward slightly to give the illusion of depth? The original picture has feet that look like they're floating.

(cont.)

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>>2756240
I got lazy at this point but I'm sure you get the point.

>>2756238
>>2756240
>>2756241
pls dont do this again

>>2756222
Nigga, pecs aren't pillows stuck to the front of your chest

>>2756238
>>2756240
>>2756241
So let me get this straight.
You drew not one but three pictures and at no point did you experience that flash of realization where you look at what you've done and say "shit, what am I even doing with this crit, I can't even draw"?

>>2756269
well for the record they did make it look slightly better, in case your blind ass didn't take time to realize that while desperately trying to fill the urge to troll a low population enthusiast board on 4chan.

>>2756286
Hi,
no he didnt.
Sorry that youre blind

>>2756300
what did you say to me you artless cunt? I eat pastels like you for breakfast in the morning and you want to start an art brawl with me you little nobody? also he clearly did help look closely you fucking bat.

I agree that the guy who did the "redline" is far from being great, but he did help, especially in showing how to start constructing the drawing.
I'm fucking sick of idiots who just throw insults without any arguments.
He's at least trying to help. If you want to insult, at least say why.

>>2756189
Literally where I'm at right now. I get to this point and then have no idea how to progress for some reason

>>2756250
>>2756269
I'm confused, he definitely showed a point to furryanon with his examples. 3rd one looks more 3Dish and pleasing to look at than the original furry pic.

If you guys disagree with the advice anon gave at least spout one sentence or two as to why. Faggots.

>>2756189
Hella stiff, pops

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>>2756477
nice

>>2756455
yah not as good as the usual stuff he posts

>>2756240
>>2756241
>>2756241
Thanks! This helps me a lot :)
I'm dumb as hell though, and I am not sure what symbol drawing means? I did draw it with basic shapes first, but I sort of suck that bad that it looks off anyway.
>>2756250
>>2756269
>>2756376
Even if it's not 100% perfect, I still really appreciate the point of view. I can still take away something from it, and I'm grateful that they spent their time helping me.

>>2756477
Things seem really mismatched here. Almost like you traced the feet but forgot to do the same for the hands.
Then there's the face...

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Finished the sketch for a clients book cover

>>2756523
Hmm, I'm really not sure what you mean.

It is really difficult to get a fresh viewpoint of your own drawing, that's why it's so hard to improve. So can you clarify?

I'm thinking that it might be because of my stiff linework on the feet. But I'm not sure what sets it apart from the hands and the rest of the drawing

But what about the head?

>>2756533
My point is, parts of your drawing are mismatched. It's a bit of a proportion issue as well as a lack of detail/ form in certain areas to the sell the foreshortening you're going for. The hands are too small and the legs are stretched out.

>>2756477
muh dickerino

>>2756539
Kind of see the deformed hands but the feet seems like that because of foreshortening.

But yeah, the nails and fingers in the hand seem potato.

>>2756250
>>2756269
kill yourself

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>>2755746

>>2755750
Still waitin' on that blog, fampaisano!

>>2755750
blog?

>>2755736
sorry Ill try to make better lines in the future

>>2756605
Read a coloring/pencil rendering/pen and ink book m8

>>2755746

I like it! Reminds me a bit of the Pfhor race from the old Marathon series. I don't think the last step is doing the presentation of your drawing any favors. The noise filter and the scratched metal overlay looks pretty bad to be honest and it takes away from the nice and clean look of the middle step.

If you could be bothered to post a version of just the clean colors and the simple cel shading I'd actually be really happy.

>>2756611
I quite like it but it the eyes are too separated and the ears are close to her eyes

>>2756610
the what in the where now

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>>2756581

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>>2756623
One of these

>>2756626
Not to sound ungrateful for you advice, but drawing digitally is vastly different than traditional drawing
My line confidence on real pen and paper is actually pretty good.

>>2756581
Kill it before it lays eggs!

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>>2755445
>>2756610
>>2756626
>>2756623
Going to one of those books will make your Stokes confident, lines and circles will become second nature to you, or at least how to make clean non wobly strokes

>>2756628

What software are you using? I'm the same as you but I found that when I switched from Photoshop to Clip Studio my linework resembled my traditional stuff much more. If you haven't tried it check it out.

>>2756628
>>2756631
Plus try this, it should help you translate from paper to digital
vkDOTcomSLASHdoc4043932_410550271?hash=bb43cefd66b2639318&dl=e2712e4cd5a66a27ca
Is very unlikely that you are using this specific software, but whatever you are using should have an equivalent of wathever lesson are teaching.

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>>2756513
sry

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>>2756655
just fast sketchs of body

>>2756638
Krita, but I don't use the stabilizer. Its not that great anyway

>>2756655
>>2756657
So good, got any images of your rendering?

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I'm only starting to get into stylized work, but I am digging it.

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>>2756264
Is it the shape or the shadows? I changed the shadows a bit so they don't look as balloon-ish.

>>2756580
^ this

>>2756755
I think there's too much outline around the bottom of the pecs. Outlines can suggest there is a parallel to your line of sight, so the way out outlined the pecs makes it seem like they are separate from or overlapping over the chest area.

>>2755864
this is one of the very few "furry" pics that don't make me cringe or feel uncomfortable

i mean, it looks very cute and light-hearted.

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could anybody comment on this?

>>2756879
on this

>>2756892
what a smug comment

>>2756892
dad what are you doing here

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>>2756763
I dimmed down the outline under the pecs, also finished the rendering, how does it look?

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oh god i want to die
i made small, insignificant gains and was happy for a bit but then realized i'm stuck in the 3/4 view comfort zone
art is hard (´・ω・｀) help

>>2756907
me the main dude

>>2756526
That's pretty cool, Anon, where can I get this book?

>>2756908
your lines are neat

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>>2755746
>>2755750
evaneley.tumblr.com

>>2756613
Yeah I don't know if I like it anymore either... Here ya go.

>>2756941
why aren't you more popular ? the stuff you post on tumblr are neat and interesting

>>2756755
you're that guy who draws like the daft punk artist. love your work.

>>2756945
I would all over my desk, chair and rug if he had a porn account, but only if it catered to at least 2 of my myriad fetishes. That's why he isn't more popular.

Still fucking good, just doesn't give you that sexual tingle.

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>>2756941
Man, I like your colors but your art-style does kinda suck.

If I had to recommend you similar art-style pics so you have appealing art that is similar to yours, the best options are butch hartman series (fairly odd godparents, danny phantom, that dog one. Mostly fan-art tho, danny phantom is the only kinda appealing to look at but even that's far-fetched and you would need a lot of cherrypicking) and powerpuff- girls (specially powerpuff girls Z). A lot of EQG MLP fan-art fits that mold pretty well too.

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i always end up liking just the lines more...

>>2756988
tumblr?

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did this rly quickly for a drawthread but would really appreciate tips on how to make furries furrier

>>2757004
bring out the snout a bit, add some spots maybe.

dunno not a furfag

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>>2756939
sarcasm hurts my feefees

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>>2757004
Snout, snout snout. Push it further on the right.
Also make the face rounder/shorter, more animal-like

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>>2756941
>>2756975
Also a dump of the powepuff girls Z concept art.
>>>/c/2793895
Cause It looks pretty neat and fits with art-style

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>>2757007
>>2757014
would this be pushing it enough? snouts in front view and 3/4 view are hard ;;

>>2757009
i wasnt being sarcastic at all ! i like it, really.

push the snout out a bit but not as much as >>2757014 or >>2757026

>>2756949
Thanks anon, that's me, although I do try to keep my bara and regular art separate haha

>>2756611
>5312x2988

>>2756908
Nice mang, better then my shit

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hands are so hard you guys
i have the second pair vaguely sketched out but i can't think of anything interesting to do with the first pair

>>2757094
I cannot stress this enough: Use reference.

>>2757094
do that one emoji that became a meme. the ok hand sign

>>2756992
lordslump

>>2757094
Why are those breasts trying to detach from her body

>>2757105
>>2757127
roger that!
>>2757130
): ah i hadn't even noticed
i'm not very used to drawing breasts, are they going out too far horizontally? it does look like they're pulling away.

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>>2757029
>>2757086
i can't shake the feeling that this is some advanced memery, but thanks if it's not i guess ＿("_´ω`)_
i hope this looks a little better. i want to be done with drawing front views for now, they're really boring.

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Not too sold on the front arms/hands, looks too unnatural.

>>2756042
thats hot, blog?

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done with lines

>>2757235
BLOG

>>2757225
No shit mang.
Front faced foreshortened hands are the size of your head (half of your face if closed). That thing looks like those hulk hands toys.
They shouldn't be much bigger than those arms on the opposites.

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>>2757236
nm I think I remember that brush and that linework; you're bbc chan aren't you? Your sketches always look fantastic

There is no board on 4Chan about already existing, "professional" art, right?

>>2757226
made one yesterday, I'll probably post all of my bara stuff on there
ruisselait.tumblr.com

>>2757263
I think thats http://ahtto.tumblr.com/ , not to be confused with http://haohi.tumblr.com/

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>>2757244
Thanks senpai, looks way less shit. Couple more adjustments and I should be about done this step I think.

>>2756924

You can't unfortunately, it's a custom book that the client made for someone as a gift, so it won't get published it would just get printed at lulu.com

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have been playing with this today

>>2757311
The perspective of this is just so confusing. Camera at around below waist height? But foot placement makes everything wonky? Dude's head is so big for his body.

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I've been doing some heavy stylization to my current style.

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>>2757469

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>>2757470
Hope ya don't mind traps

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>>2757473

>>2757474
that's about it

>>2757475
>>2757474
>>2757473
>>2757470
>>2757469
You have a really cute Artstyle

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>>2757484
Thank you! I forgot about 2 more drawings

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>>2757498
There we go

>>2757474
>>2757498
>>2757500

Doesn't most of the stuff in this thread belong in the beginner thread? Or does it get a pass for being kind of anime inspired?

>>2757503
I just saw "stylization" thread and thought "I been doing that for a while, should post and get some advice"

to be honest I've never posted in the beginner thread, I should but I don't go here that much.

>>2757263
flattered, but no.
What nosebro said

>>2757503
His stuff isn't beginner at all.

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>>2756661
no sry, im stil learn basic

>>2757523
very nice. I love your oc.

>>2757523
I really like her face, it looks very nice with the proportion of her head

>>2757523
I wish I could steal your art talent.

>>2757581
just trace like he does and pretend to type in broken english

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>>2757529
it was not my oc(
>>2757581
ike i steal from others)

>>2757606
>>2757523
im 99% sure thats the same head on both with slightly altered hair strands... why

>>2757614
EXPOSED 2K16

>>2756907
The wikihow artist strikes again

>>2757517
Then you are also a beginner if you think that.

>>2757606
Don't listen to the haters, I still really love your stuff, and i'm sure many others do too. They are just jealous they can't draw like you. Keep up the great work!

>>2757648
is this a troll self congratulating and jerking himself off? seems that way, because all I see is shit art. maybe I'm so good that novice artists look like beginners to me though, so that could be it.

>>2757651
There's been about 4 or 5 worthless posts in the last 20 minutes. Take your guess.

>>2757651
Shove a pencil up your ass, lets see you draw something like that you egotistical faggot.

>>2757653
oddly enough it LOOKs like that's exactly how anon made the picture. I was half expecting to see shit smeared on it. god, I leave for a couple months and this place goes to shit again.

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>>2757635
Alright, what's your
>no beginner
Benchmark

>>2757659

His benchmark for whether something is beginner is whether he likes it / if someone disagrees with him.

Nobody ever provides a clear metric for how they define that shit, they just throw it around to feel smug.

>>2757661
Line quality, there is no value, lots of symbols, lots of messed up perspective and flat anatomy. I won't explain how benchmarks work to you because it takes a certain level of artistic knowledge before you're able to see that far. That's just your current limit.

>>2757667
Anyone can have "artistic knowledge" from watching a few pirated videos. It's where they fail to implement what they talk out their ass on a website for cartoons like in your case.

>>2757675
Except they posted multiple examples that can be seen right here in this thread. Not questioning your intelligence, but it's below average.

>>2757667
>strokes and anatomy are bad
How so? I mean yeah, the line art is unfinished but is far from chicken scratching or not showing confidence. In the anatomy department I also don't understand since is on point where it counts ( the size of the body in heads and where they are placed, how are the member attached to the body, the dynamism, etc)
>messed up perspective
Where?
There is not even an horizon in any of the pics
>it takes a certain level to see this kind of stuff and that's yours
Alright. Usually I would avoid memeing but post your work master vilpu, show us how it's done

>>2757681
that anon's work is very flat, look at the hands for instance. drawing in a cartoony style does not give you free run to ignore the basics, it just hides them easier.

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>>2757656
So the quality of this thread is dependent on you? AHAHHAHHAHA XDDDD XD FUKKKEN GRATS THANK U FO BEING THERE

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>>2757685
Out of the last 2 pics where does he hides them?

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Any takers on mine? Not realistic but that's what I like. Could post some more examples if you people aren't revolted by it.

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MOOOOOOOOOOOODS
ENFORCE RULE 2
>Only constructive criticism will be accepted. Rude or offensive comments will result in a ban.

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i really liked this one

>>2757697
That rule has the most flexibility ever on this board. You would have to really get a ton of (you)'s to break it.

>>2757695
Your line-art is an oddball.
Is consistent on its weight and thickness but wobbly.

Also proportions are kinda fucked up

i wonder what happened to the dude that used to draw stuff with MSPaint

>>2757698
Why do they have negroid facial structure?
It trows off

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>>2756755
The pecs attach under the end of the deltoid senpai. ca. halfway between shoulder and elbow.
Keep going : )

>>2756755
Do you work at wikihow

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>>2757695
>9000 x 8000

>>2757695
why are you using such a big canvas size?

>>2757700
What do you mean with wobbly lineart? What would you say could be improved?

>>2757709
>>2757716
I had some weird settings in ps for a few months without realizing. Just a dumb mistake.

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Alright, it's just barely crooked, but the horizon lines and all are straight, I swear. Thoughts?

>>2757695
Practice your stokes.
Try learning different ways of cleaning your line-art
http://friendlyhand.deviantart.com/journal/Tips-for-smooth-clean-line-art-359879866

>>2757726
meant to >>2757717

>>2757725
Oh yeah, and I also need to do the hands, those are just rough shapes right now.

>>2757725
Her chest seems to not have curvature, depth.

Practice basic shapes again

>>2757726
Thanks for the tip

>>2757725
Blog? I don't want to lose sight of your potential.

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>>2757735
Alright, I was iffy on the top because of the wind-up pose, thanks for the advice. Anything else?

>>2757741
I don't have one, sorry. But wait, are you memeing me?

>>2757756
I'm serious, anon. You're awesome.

>>2757758
Well, thanks very much! I'll try to post here at least once a week, then. I've been lurking for a while, mostly because I like what Pops and Muscle Loli do.

>>2757743
Like I said, depht.
Her clothes seem to be part of her skin rather than clothes over her.
Also they have no wrinkles and seem to bee vacuum sealed
Read a clothing/folding/wrinkles book

>>2757503
>>2757667
I don't think you understand what value, line quality and symbol drawing mean.

There are decent fundamentals behind this, and if you don't see that you may just not have developed the eye for it yourself.

Look at the volumes. Each shape and has a clear volume and a relationship with the space it occupies as well as adjacent objects.

Lines are deliberate, the thickness is not arbitary and there is a clear hierarchy of lines and they are easily readable.

Are there symbols? Sure, and let's look at it with an example:

>>2757500

You have symbols in the clashing flames and the simplified eyes in the background characters. But they are used deliberately. Comics and stylized works LIVE from symbols and being easily readable, conveying an emotion is in many cases more important than realism. So you have simplified eyes in background characters because you want the eye to go there, pick up the information, then go back to the actual focal point, which is the characters' conflict.
If you compare the eyes of the foreground and background characters, the ones in the foreground have eyes that occupy a volume in relation to the other volumes surrounding them. I.e. they are not symbols. You put the detail where you want the eye to linger.

The flames / crackling energy helps suggest an intensity that one would otherwise have to build up with text, more background or some sort of known history. (This is also why for example biblical paintings don't need them, the conflicts and emotions of the stories are known.) But because this is for humour, you need something to quickly suggest this idea. That's the same reason why long-winded jokes are rarely as funny as simple, straight-to-the-point ones. You use symbols to convey ideas quickly where you need to do so.

If you disagree with me, I would absolutely love to hear your explanation, as I'm currently learning to do more stylized work myself and I am glad for any input.

>>2757961
Thats pretty bad

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Drawing the Masked Royal, would love some help with the foreshortening, couldn't find a reference in the pose I wanted so it turned out a bit wonky.

>>2757705
Thanks for that, it's kinda tricky to implement as I like to draw pecs that are on the... big and squishy side but I definitely want them to look a lot more cohesive, so I'll keep trying!

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>>2758054
>couldn't find a reference in the pose I wanted so it turned out a bit wonky.

http://www.posemaniacs.com/category/pose/sitting

>>2758086
Thanks, I actually came across some of these while looking for reference and I used a few but none of them were the pose I wanted, I'll do a bit of a revision and hope it looks better.

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hihi

can someone tell me how to resize? If I snip my drawing the quality comes out worse.. :(

>>2758123
Cute!
Do you got a blog?

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>>2758123

>>2758125
work on a larger canvas. Then shrink it. it should stay clean. Also try to crop before resizing

>>2758257
Creepy but cute at the same time.

>>2757850
artist here! thank you anon! I don't think I've would have explained it better myself.

(Honestly, I don't think I would have. I don't know jack about art terms. Just that I've been practicing a lot and studying to make comics)

Thanks again!

>>2758257
i really like this, so fucking cute.
blog?

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>>2755261
help pls

>>2758122
keep in mind that finding/searching for references doesn't mean you need to find something that 100% matches the idea that's in your head.

generally you should/might take a few aspects of a reference photo to incorporate into your drawing: the position of a food/hand/face, but not the whole drawing.

obviously this is more applicable in some situations than others, but you get the idea.

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some Lol Adcs, trying out their looks for a potential comic.

>>2758268
and thank you to the other anons as well! I really want to know what that anon's benchmark is. Least he can do is open up and share his knowledge.

>>2758320
I feel like I've seen you in less-than-reputable places. Blog?

>>2758320
Ezreal looks older and more feminine than he actually is.Otherwise, they just look flat and boring-

>>2758320
that draaaaaaaaven looks very good!

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>>2758326
http://4xiszero.tumblr.com/ I didn't upload in a while though.

>>2758328
Ok. also, have you seen ezreal's dance ?

>>2758337
yeah Draaaaven always looks good dude.

>>2758339
Okay, yeah. I'm almost certain I know you. Now to actually identify you, lul.

>>2758348
identify me ? from what ?

>>2758311
Yeah, that's what I ended up doing, it took me a bit out of my comfort zone (cause it's easier to just reference an entire pose) but this is definitely my first time having to switch tabs to look at different parts of a body as I sketch, but again thanks for the advice, I'll keep on doing stuff like this.

>>2758129
Lol stahp the memery

>>2758165
thanks finally understand how to resize..

>>2758388
Dude, stop.
Everyone is telling you it looks bad.
Go back to studying faces

>>2758388
>that one thumbnail in the back with color
Can we see it?

>>2758393
sorry if you don't like my art, I just draw for fun :)

>>2758409
if you draw "for fun" then you have nothing to do here. fuck off and go elsewhere like facebook or tumblr to earn attention.

>>2758418
If you're not having fun, then you should do something less soul-crushing than art.

>>2758433
>This is fun
>except receiving these comments that this place is made for

>>2758433
you didn't get my point. sure, you can have fun while drawing, but you should put some kind of effort and interest in it, if getting better isn't the goal, then /ic/ isn't the right place for feedback.

>>2758443
Why does getting better have to be the goal?

>>2758446
Well.
Maybe because is the point of this fucking board.

>>2758446
i never said that getting better HAS TO BE the goal, i said that this is the wrong place for attention.

>>2758388
I like your style, but the thing is, eyes are EXTREMLY far away from each other, so just work on that, use manga artist that you like as a reference, even in anime the distance of one eye to the other one, it's the eye itself, i recommend studying from life too, stylization comes from the fundamentals.

>>2758455
>implying the manga artist anon likes doesn't do that too

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Doing expression practice, probing the depths of something resembling a style, thoughts, friendos?

>>2755399

Best in thread probably

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>>2758403
is this the one you're talking about?

>>2758418
k.

>>2758441
yeah. kinda feels bad sometimes, having to hear a guy say that your art is shit, but then again it's 4 chan lol..

>>2758443
umm I didn't really say I don't put effort into it, I just said I try to have fun while drawing. Sry if you think that way.

>>2758455
thanks, and yeah, it's something I get a lot about my art, I guess it's become a kind of habit that I'm too lazy to break away from.

>>2756812

Gotta agree with this. Even sfw furry shit tends to make me feel uncomfortable, but this pic is fucking adorable in every way possible.

I'm new to /ic/, but muscle loli means yilx, right?

>>2758481
>umm I didn't really say I don't put effort into it, I just said I try to have fun while drawing. Sry if you think that way.
...you are joking, right ? there is no way you put actual effort into the thing you posted earlier.

>>2758498
>there's no way an artist puts actual effort into their art!
Post your work

>>2758499
>"an artist"

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>>2758481
Alright.
I'll break it for parts so you can understand
>You are showcasing it.
1-You are posting your art for the world to see and appreciate. If we don't appreciate it it may mean is because there is nothing worth appreciating.
2-If you just posted your art with only intention of showcasing a turd, >>>/i/ is one click away. Thousands of other boorus, forums, websites,etc. The sky is the limit when you don't give a shit.
>"it's 4chan lol"
Just because is 4chan doesn't excuse yourself from sucking. Yes, the commoners in here are rough but also have valuable input that can help you into getting better. Shielding yourself from that feedback will only be your loss, not ours. We understand that there is a lot of shit, but even a broken clock is right twice a day.
>If you're not having fun, then you should do something less soul-crushing than art.
Satoshi Urushihara said that he didn't enjoy the process of making art, but rather the fact that it something that came out of your mind and that it exists. He enjoyed the fact that he made art, rather than making it.

I'll take a wild guess and say that's what most of us here do.

Sure, it must be cool have abs, or a lot of money, but very little must enjoy the way there yet they do it because the fact of not having those is worse than the the pain of doing it.
>" feels bad sometimes, having to hear a guy say that your art is shit"
The only way of stopping those feels is getting better at it. You can shout as much as you want that your art does not need improvement, but other people are going to think otherwise.

1/2

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>>2758481
>>2758521
2/2
And now that I feel gave something away than can get through that thick skull of yours, I'm going to give you some advice so we stop being too "4chan" or "not fun" to you:

1-Your characters lack a zygomatic bone so hard that it hurts to look at.

It is possible to make the characters have those facial characteristics and still make it appealling (clannad, Yuri Kuma Arashi and The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya comes to my mind)

2-STUDY HEADS
The lack of space between the ears, the same-face and the lack of confidence with your strokes point out that you are still a begginer.
It doesn't matter if you want to draw only in your style, you still need to learn how to make the bases, fundamentals and construction of a drawing so you can make something in your style and not ending up looking like a turd. Even if you are not going to learn anatomy, you still need to gain confidence in your strokes getting through a rendering book.
Here: https://www.google.com.mx/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjDlvCah8vQAhWHyoMKHQ3zBbIQFggbMAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.alexhays.com%2Floomis%2FAndrew%2520Loomis%2520-%2520Drawing%2520the%2520Head%2520and%2520Hands.pdf&usg=AFQjCNGO3HKhisI_s-V0rtsBP1oNWUgl6g&sig2=Y9h5GY58lhClRQAnc_verg [[Loomis: Heads and hands]] and https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S66wc0Z2BXU [[Burne Hogarth Drawn The Head Original classroom small]]

>>2758522
>>2758521
Well played anon.

>>2757389
Nice

>>2758123
>>2758388

I don't know why but the only thing I really like about your art is the eyes being wide apart, it has a certain appeal I can't explain, ignore the idiots telling you to conform, keep exploring dude.

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a plant

>>2758390
Depends on the program you're in. Look in the toolbars. Usually in the "image" dropdown, and hit resize image. Not sure about sai.
I'm not to sure.
Also Sarcasm isnt Needed anon. They were trying to help

>>2757697
Are you on everyfucking board? STFU

>>2758163
kek

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just made some steel donuts

>>2758744
clothes are hugging the bodies too much, they look very constricted

>>2758783
which ones

>>2758622

It looks like you drew with your dick on the 2nd doodle and didn't pay attention to the leg area.

>>2755261
What am I supposed to focus on when drawing figures?

>>2758800
don't think, feel

>>2756907
>>2758320
>>2758054

In all seriousness you anons must give me your blogs.

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>>2758587
Thanks man, honestly if it weren't for you I was seriously thinking of just giving up, and quitting. To be quite frank I lose confidence in myself very easily, and wasn't sure what to do.. I'll be sure to post something better next time.. I am aware that my drawings that I posted yesterday were lazy attempts at drawing.. And thank you, I really mean it dude.

>>2758826
please marry me kinpatsu anon

>>2758587
>>2758826
I like it too. Don't worry so much about what d/ic/ks have to say. A place like this is full of negativity and pushes people towards being all the same shit. Draw what you enjoy. Fix things you dislike. Stay focused on what YOU want and for the most part ignore the nitpickers.

>>2758826
If you don't plan on getting better just go somewhere else like deviantart. I don't want to see another waste of space posting worthless drawings as if they were the only one on this board.

>>2758875

you too

>>2758826
No problem anon, Your art regardless of it's fundamental flaws stick out to me (positively) more than 80% of the stuff I see on here, I'd honestly follow your blog if you had one (I don't think the other anon was memeing).
You should still work on your fundamentals, or at least study it to give you some better understanding of the different directions you can go with your current style.
Also check out Tsutomu Nihei, your art reminds me a bit of his earlier works, with less cute.

>>2758826
You need to find a balance between personal works and study. If you're not learning, you're gonna be even more disappointed when you see how far others have come in terms of skill when compared to your own.

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did a bianca

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>>2755864
Far from done, but thoughts, please?

>>2759065
The faces feel flat, I think you should kinda realign the nose?

>>2759065

The girl cat's head isn't lined up with her face.

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Testing out my new scanner.

>>2759072
Looks like Initial D style. Nice.

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>>2759081
Thanks, Initial D is actually one of my favorite anime.
I seem to having a bit of problem dealing with the contrast of the lines it seems.

>>2759072
I really like the style and dig Initial D, keep it up
However I feel this piece needs loomis lad >>2759107

>>2759117
I know, I haven't had the time to Loomis it up but I will eventually. Any tips on not fucking up my scanning?

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>>2755261
send help
something bothers me but I can't see what's wrong

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yтpa)

>>2759212
The only problem I see is the side-mouth

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>>2758054
Finished the outline and base color.

>>2758816
I made it like two days ago so there isn't much on it ruisselait.tumblr.com

>>2759019
cutie

>>2759065
end this shit meme

>>2759065
In the first pic you posted, the guy furry seemed to be telling somewhat of a story to the girl furry, but in this one, the guy just seems to be so desperate for pussy. Just my 2 cents.

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I got a scanner for my birthday.
Now if only I could get talent.

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just a quick set up

>>2759300
Yeah, I know. I enjoyed my first mood more, but the person I'm doing it for wanted the girl looking mad and clutching her dress.

new threaddo >>2759454