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>>55229505
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I do wonder if it's a specific person that starts these up at a specific time, or if it's just whoever feels like it.
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>>55229588
We had the hog guy before but he left.
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>>55229603
Why did he leave?
Did SDA bully him?
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>>55229505
>>55229536

Where are the other four pages?
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>>55229611
I dunno, maybe he was killed to death.
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>>55229621
I've only ever found the two, unfortunately... honestly I didn't even know there were any more than that. Which makes me kinda sad, since I really like that one.
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>>55229588
A fool, probably. CYOA threads were better before they were generals.
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>>55229651

I've only seen the first two pages as well but it does say they're out of six
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>>55229606
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>>55229672

I always figured that was just because it was an incomplete Cyoa. Kind of makes me want to go through the archives though. That'd be a bit pointless, unfortunately, since I've already gone back as far as I could but the thought is always nice.
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>>55229757
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>>55229757
Why Charlotte gotta be such a lying bitch?

>charlotte

>milking, spanking, No escape, Humiliation, sexual predator, rumors, endurance test, pet, post-orgasm torture, forced orgasms, anal play (16)

> Mansion (12)

>New you (10), Awakened power (6), Guardian angel (5), Irresistible (3), Futa (1), well endowed (0)
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>>55229665
I don't really like jumpchain CYOA though... just seems kinda dumb to me.
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>>55229979
What does that have to do with jumpchain?
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>>55229728
No, there is only two pages. The second was made much after the first too. The author has a few unfinished Cyoas which sucks because he's good.
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>>55229990
The cyoa doesn't, I was just trying to combine a response and cyoa post because of the timer between replies... (also captcha is annoying, even if it is necessary.)
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>>55230053
I know, nigga. What does jumpchain have to do with the post you quoted?
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>>55230066
Oh, well he said /cyoa/ generals were retarded, but the only other cyoa threads I've seen are tower princess, and jumpchain... I hate both.
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>>55230082
Pretty sure he was comparing to how things used to be. Especially since it's specifically referring to generals, which those also are.
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>>55229757
>Jessica, Beatrice, Emely, Charoltte, Tara, Tamiko

>Mixed School 2

>Mansion -2

>Well Endowed, Guardian Angel, New You, Power of Love, Bully Harem x2 -13

>Milking, Humiliation, No Escape, Sexual Predator, Forced Oral, Rumors, endurance Test, Cuckqueen, No Mercy, Pervert Test, Post Orgasm torture, Relenteless, Light Beating 0

Please girls, I'll do whatever you want. I just want to be loved.
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>>55230110
I'm pretty new, so I don't really know much about all that.
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>>55229993
I figured, but that still really sucks.
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>>55230229
>Mystery box not spoiled
RIP!
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Doing my customary 1 repost.

Should I focus on making new stuff or reworking my old CYOAs?
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>>55230252

Sorry, I don't actually know how to spoiler pictures yet. (Still figuring out a lot about 4chan, since it's apparently fairly hostile to teaching newcomers.)
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>>55230302

.....Found the spoiler button.
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>>55225463
I really like the premise behind this one.

Skills:
>Personal Combat Lvl 3
>Tactics Lvl 1
>Strategy Lvl 5
>Patrician Politics Lvl 2
>Plebeian Politics Lvl 1

Betrothals:
>Leonita (Legios Qomani)
>Ken-Eytor (Unseen Blades)

Faction Loyalty:
>9/10 - Boundless Flame
>5/10 - Cosmech Faithful
>4/10 - Crucibii
>9/10 - Xernite Frontier
>2/10 - Legios Auxilios
>10/10 - Legios Qomani
>5/10 - House Renon
>7/10 - Unseen Blades
>0/10 - Orion Empire
>-1/10 - Futurist Front
>9/10 - Solar Lords
>7/10 - Syntetica

First, I intend to maximize my hard power for the purposes of maintaining stability and power within the Empire. To this end I can rely on military support from the Xernite Frontier and Legios Auxilios, I can obtain raw material/manpower from the Solar Lords, I can rely on intelligence/subterfuge from the Unseen Blades, and I should be able to rely on the continual provision of tech and weapons from the Syntetica. Even though the Crucibii have relatively poor loyalty, I am sympathetic to their aspirations and thus likely to gain their support in time. Despite effectively being in open rebellion with the Futurist Front, I actually share some goals with them and I hope that I will be able to come to an understanding with them in time. At any rate, my main intentions are to increase the centralization of government power, increase military power, weaken the noble houses, and introduce more egalitarian and free market policies. Through these actions, I hope to return the Orion separatists to the Empire, crush the Feral Xernites, and re-organize the Syntetica into more effective organization.

I'm not even sure that I have an optimal build for what I intend to do, but, as always, the main consideration in my betrothal choices was that I found Leonita and Ken-Eytor the cutest.
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>>55229757
Welcome to the Tripfag Club, you're in good, despised company!
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>>55230300

I'd add more content to this castle one before moving on... as I suggested on the last one, some anti-siege options would be great. As well as drawbacks (perhaps choose what types of enemies/ the frequency of attacks you'd be subjected to?)
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>>55230300
I feel that what you have there could easily be expanded to include more things; nearby villages, soldiers, companions, dangers, etc.

It's a good base for something more if you know what I'm saying. Right now your Castle CYOA seems a bit too bare.
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>>55230362
Don't encourage the faggot.
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>>55229505
Will you fucking cunts just learn to copy+paste the pastebin and other shit?

Literally the first time I go to use it, AND IT'S NOT FUCKING THERE.
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I've been gone for about a week, we have any OC in that time? Dropbox anon doesn't seem to be keeping up well last I checked.
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>>55230583
>literally first time making one of these threads

>doesn't even know what 'the pastebin' is

.... I'll get right on that buddy.
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>>55229606
>>55229726
Stop posting this shit
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Have some OC
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>>55229757
this is stale
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>>55230664
I've nothing to give at the moment.
If it's any consolation, im working on something and it'll be done soon as it doesn't look like shit and I have better pictures.
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>>55230946

I may add a box eventually, but at a later date. Enjoy this for now
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>>55230903
Damn my dude you're quick with this shit and good at it too. It's nice to see some original art
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I think this CYOA is just perfect
>gives a power fantasy while retaining a sense of challenge
>no points system that you'd need a calculator for to mess with
>gives bonuses for specialization, but no so much that variety doesn't have its own merits
>has a lot of options for waifuing
>secretly inserts my fetish while being subtle about it
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>>55231109
>secretly inserts my fetish
Which is?
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>>55230485
Yes I definitely will add some more stuff onto the castle one, but I'm wondering what I should do after.
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>>55231132
He's a macrophile. All of the ultimate summons are giantess waifus.
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>>55231132
Let's just say I remember that demon loli from a certain macrophile artist (although I actually prefer the World Smith).
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>>55231171
>Virgin probably wants his dick ironed out
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How respected are text-based cyoas?
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>>55230955
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>>55230903

Suz is the only one i like at all.
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>>55231171
>Let's just say I remember that demon loli from a certain macrophile artist
Got any more of her then?
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>>55231224
The artist's name is Yilx if you want more.
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>>55230664
>We have any OC?
No. Welcome to the skelly club.
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>>55231278
Do you ever get off that bench
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>>55231185
You're doing god's (my) work, anon.
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>>55229757
Please make a better CYOA next time.
This is not trolling or bait. I think that you can do better then this. You have done it before.
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>>55231332
He reallly hasn't.

I'm gonna laugh when his next work is just as terrible.
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>>55231349
Maybe you should give CYOA's like that a try S-DA. We need lewd heroes.
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>>55231349
I can't imagine the abomination that is going to be spawned when the two of you finally hate fuck.
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>>55231309
Its been months since I have. Waiting for that PPP+ to come.
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>>55231209
Hopefully a lot, or I'm in trouble.
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>>55230903
Deb seems interesting. As an engineer it'd be cool to see what kinda gadgets she whips up. Let's just hope the more important toys dont blow up eh.

Brooke. Brooke seems.... actually like a decent person to hang with. Be cynical about all the stuffs. Random complaints. People watching (see: judging). Followed by presumably very aggressive sex. (plus she's tiny.)

Mag might be ok, depending on the cons. At least you'll get to see her in and out of a lot of interesting costumes.

Elizabeth. Yessss. But, why wait for the party? Besides, training and supporting cute high school girls? Wouldnt be my first time.

Suz.
...
Is this your self insert anon? Its ok anon. If you were a cute girl I'd watch cartoons with you and or tease you and play with you.

(But I mean, if I had to choose one it'd be the probably rich naiveish high school girl amiright. But. You know. Why choose. They all seem like they'd enjoy the little extra human contact, emphasis on the contact.)
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>>55231209
Depends on how good they are obviously, of course lurkers are up in the air concerning whether they'll look at it or not, but there are enough text CYOAs out there that people enjoy to make it not a fruitless effort.
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>>55231390
You should stop pushing this meme, Tok. I know it's the only defense you have left for your shitty excuses of OC but you don't have to keep preaching about it.
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>>55231185
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>>55231576
I have no idea what's going on. I know Tok's CYOA's have declined as of late but who the heck are you?
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>>55231576
So Tsundere
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>>55231464
>Is this your self insert anon?

Actually no. I thought it would just make the most sense if she never left home cause she made all her money on the compy. Also
>implying I make money with art
That's a good joke
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>>55231778
Dare ye open the box?
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>>55231788
No need when yila is best girl
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>>55231810
>Yila
>Descendant of aliens and not even a pure bred.
>Not royalty
>Her species of aliens got btfo by Naibelums
>Can't even give you 70000 children
>Not being into shark-squid pussy.
What kind of faggotry is this?
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>>55232010

I mean... She eats raw fish dude, her breath probably smells fucking rank. Also, blowjobs would be insanely dangerous unless you just happen to have a spare dick lying around.

(Besides, Blair is the best.)
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>>55232091
>She eats raw fish
We humans also eat raw fish. What is sushi?

>Blowjobs would be insanely dangerous.
The danger is what makes it better. Also she has other parts than the mouth.

>Blair is the best.
What?

>>55232101
You delete that.
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>>55232136

>We humans also eat raw fish

I don't fucking trust it man. Cook your food before eating that shit. Also, you don't even know what those parts are, she's an alien.
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>>55231906
>Fallen titan

>Learn from the past, Paragon, legendary strike

>Glory

>Titan's ring

>Into the fray!

>Nameless camp
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>>55232241
>I don't fucking trust it man. Cook your food before eating that shit.
Sush is actually pretty good and healthy for you, Anon. You need to get out of your comfort zone.

>Also, you don't even know what those parts are, she's an alien.
It can't be that bad. I mean Yila's people can mate with humans and there is the fact Italics said Humans had a space empire until getting btfo. There is also the fact humans from where the cyoa take place is different from the humans that built an empire and so there is a HIGH chance we can fuck the equivalent of squid-shark pussies and impregnate her.

She's also the 2nd Princess of the empire. You would be sitting close to being Emperor.
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>>55230955
Gonna hang out with Heather, Suz, and Maggy, and eventually romance Maggy.
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>>55232274
>You would be sitting close to being Emperor

I feel like that would open you up to a lot of assassination attempts from 'rivals'. Wonder if you'd get bodyguards out of the deal, or if their empire is more of a 'do it yourself' kinda business.

Either way, you do you man. I'ma stick with Blair and see about borrowing myself some space ships.
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>>55232136
Sushi and fish in general tastes like shit.
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>>55231906
>Shrine
Legendary Commander
>Perk
Lead By example
>Flaw
No Charisma
>Skill
Create opening
>Reward
Power (can get all the other stuff with this)
>Artifact
Shrine fragment (without this my combat skills don't get better)
>Starting activity
Networking
>Camp
Nameless

My plan is real simple, Befriend a nameless hero with Inspirational speaker/Collateral Damage/any skill and fight in the flanks together as a duo of semi-badasses with an army at our backs.
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>>55232274
>Sush is actually pretty good and healthy for you, Anon.
Enjoy your diphyllobothriasis, anon.
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>>55232399
Your tastes are shit.

>>55232295
>I feel like that would open you up to a lot of assassination attempts from 'rivals'
> Wonder if you'd get bodyguards out of the deal, or if their empire is more of a 'do it yourself' kinda business.
They are super militaristic and trying to convert majority of the galaxy into their hive worlds for their people and be the dominant people. There is also the fact that the cyoa implies you beat up the Emperor and P.P's brother, so I doubt anyone would fuck with you if you destroy that shark-squid pussy and decided to become royalty by marriage.
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>>55232412

Huh, titan guy here. Wouldn't mind getting in on that... more the merrier and all. (I'll watch you sleep... to stop the assassins.)
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>>55229505
>/cyoag/ Cyoag general
>/Cyoa general/ cyoa general general
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>>55232474
Honestly, can you imagine family gatherings? PP hanging off your arm while you all sit around, her father and brother awkwardly trying to avoid looking at you two and thinking about how you smashed their asses and wreck her pussy every night.
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>>55232474

Nobody would challenge you in an outright duel. Assassins use poison, backstabbing, (in this setting it's high tech so probably could expect snipers as well.)

The whole point is to _not_ fight fairly.
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>>55232519

I'll keep it in mind.
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>>55229757
Where can i get the uncensored version?
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>>55232512
Well if I knew a Titan would join I might have chosen Snakes Head but given that I don't want to spend too much time in the heart of battle we may not be able to join up all that often.
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>>55232647
I feel like you probably shouldn't have taken 'lead by example' if that were the case... just because it's going to put you in a lot of danger constantly, no matter where you wind up.

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>>55232524
> PP hanging off your arm while you all sit around, her father and brother awkwardly trying to avoid looking at you two and thinking about how you smashed their asses and wreck her pussy every night.
I can only imagine the smell of salt coming off of them. I mean losing to a human and the princess loving human cock. They might need some seppuku to fix that broken pride.

>>55232542
In this setting you got psychic powers. I'm sure you can bullshit your way through anything. Sensing an incoming bullet and stopping it, enhancing your smell for the poisons, etc.
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>>55232563
Just call it /cyoagg/ for convenience's sake.
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>>55232647
Playing hero with a nameless warrior on the flanks in engagements I have planned and strategized for is not the same as being in the heart of a thousand year old meatgrinder.
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>>55232771

Yeah, that seems to make sense. I think I'll do that in the future.
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>>55232808
Meant for
>>55232677
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>>55232817
And make sure to point out it's a general like this: /cyoagg/ general

It's not obvious otherwise.
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>>55232808

Fair enough. But if you ever feel like the flanks are starting to get boring, take a stroll through the slaughter house with me. I'm sure you can try your more effective strategies there.
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>>55231778
Rika is true patrician taste. She is the girl you are meant to marry and who will be a faithful woman and who can act without choking on your dick 24/7. She even broke up with her former friend Titania for your happiness and kept her away from bullying you.

Blair and Yilafags are just terrible. Lalu comes in second place because she's a needs a happy ending in her tragic life.
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>>55232616
In the garbage, along with your taste.
No, really >>>/trash/11384948
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>>55232868
Thanks.
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>>55232855
Lindsy is pretty comfy, you have to admit. A cute imouto who wants to play videogames with you.
Paris is a top cute.
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>>55232886
Paris a useless. A USELESS! I rather have Morgana than her. Paris is still cute.

Lindsy just needs friends.When you think about it almost all the girls need friends because of some big flaw they have.
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>>55232845
Okay assuming I have at least one titan playing bodyguard for me I would change to
>Legendary commander
>We move as one
>Snakes head
>Ambush
>Power
>Sphinx blood (to see the battle field)
>Networking
>Sphinx camp (who better to stay safe from assassins with)

I would want a sphinx and a nameless hero as lieutenants. One to rally the troops the other to telepathically communicate orders. The titans that are learning from the past just got a new commander to organize them into shield walls!
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>>55232910
Oh absolutely. Unfortunately, Some like Titania and Kurka would be too much for your average normal guy or girl.

Not to say I'm any different. I don't know how long it would take before I got sick of Titania's shit and fought back.
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>>55232924

An entire Titan shield wall? Throw in one nameless hero, everything else you've said, and a Dark disciple and we'll have this thing wrapped up _way_ sooner than 50 years.
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>>55232975
I said a nameless hero. What we really need is a colossus with siegemode to serve as our foreword command center haha.
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>>55230955

All of this art is self-created right? You are a serious badass. Hah, and it's a waifu CYOA. My-Man.

Kara: Possibly Intelligent Drop-out. Good entrance.

Debbie. (Where are the safety glasses?!) Tinkerer with no sense of safety. Nonzero chance of one or both of us dying horribly.

Brooke: I've no idea what to make of her. No etiquette.

Heather: She's nice! Could do with a diet, but nice!

Joyce: I've had my soul taken by corporate for the barest moment and bailed. I get the lack of a spark. She's alright.

Trish: Super-badass; probably too much so.

Maggy: Do I want to trust someone that cosplays a princess? Reading into it; high maintenance.

Elizabeth: Ahahah, no.

Suzie: The hex maniac choice. Not bad?

Out of all of these, Kara seems like my favorite, with Suzie and Brooke as runners up. Seems like a good person to hang with, with a hint of weakness placed away. All of these characters are well rounded, I'd be friends with the rest of them. Though I'd avoid Debbie. I don't want to get brained by anything.
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All in all, a very well made waifu CYOA. The art is the main selling point, along with good character balance. Major props.
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>>55232968
>Oh absolutely. Unfortunately, Some like Titania and Kurka would be too much for your average normal guy or girl.
Kurka wouldn't be too much.

>Not to say I'm any different. I don't know how long it would take before I got sick of Titania's shit and fought back.
That is all according to her keikaku for you to fuck her.
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Does anybody else remember a ridiculously huge CYOA with like a million different companions and a million different worlds across a multiverse? I remember the first few pages were primarily black with white text describing worlds, and two of the companions were Rick and Morty. The last two companions were two dudes who believed in opposing ideals.

It really was huge, name or something to look for in the pastebin resources would be a lot more helpful.
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>>55233132
Uh... Travelers tale anon.
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>>55233132
>>55233143
Its at the beginning of the thread.
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>>55233143
>>55233163
Oh... I remember it being more, well, aesthetically pleasing. Tanks though.
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>>55233143
>Updated Image Version Never
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>>55233254
Oh yea the image version. That has not been updated in forever.
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>>55233254
The image version is outdated, but this is it if that's what you mean by "aesthetically pleasing."
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
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>>55233376
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>>55233007

It is a good thing I did not sign up to be the commander.
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>>55231906

>Crumbling Colossus
>Mobile Fortress (and Mobile Fortress Flaw)
>Siege Mode
>Glory
>Titan's Ring
>Boot Camp
>who the fuck needs a camp, I'm a goddamn castle
>Heart of Battle

My job is to WRYYYYYY forward into the middle of the enemy, and then turn Siege Mode to provide a bulwark for our armies to occupy. Then, when the front lines have moved up, I'll do it again and again and again until I've set up a castle right on the Darkness' doorstep.
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>>55230903
I want to make Brooke happy so hard.
I want to could befriend all girls and slowly introduce them to Brooke and have her know the joy of friendship.
I want to find out what the fuck is going on here, that guy couldn't have written a bible-thick book about those fine waifus and just hand them over like that. I'd spend the night reading that binder.
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>>55233007

>What we really need is a colossus with siegemode

Oh hey, good thing I showed up then. >>55233440
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>>55231778
Where is the original cyoa this is based on?
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>>55233523
Incomplete and in permanent cold storage until Italics releases one of the other projects he's working on.
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>>55233477
I will proudly issue telepathic orders to the titans from my vantage point at the top of you.
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Neptune dorm is the Respect Women Dorm.
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>>55233586
>rupture academy
That typo gave me eternal bleeding
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>>55233596
You should get this bleeding checked out then. Sounds Like you might die soon.
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>>55233543
>Incomplete and in-permanent cold storage
>Until Italics releases one of the other projects he's working on.
So its never coming is it?
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>>55231278
Nah, being the cuckposter is working out better than skeltals. I was just sick the past week and forgot to check the thread, wanted to make sure I didn't miss anything like Catastrophe.


>>55232091
>Also, blowjobs would be insanely dangerous
If Free Cities has taught me anything, it is that giving a chick fake shark teeth and then having her be so great at blowjob nothing changes is amazing.
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>>55233624
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>>55233616
Oh, it'll come out, after Traveller's Tale 2.5.
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>>55233640
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>>55233647
Such a waste of an interesting setting/background.
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>>55233623
>Catastrophe
Ain't coming for a long awhile. I'm working on Apocalypse first, and it's gonna probably take me all month, if not more. I spent all day today just designing one section.

I think you can expect CATastrophe around Christmas time.
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>>55231945
>>55231906
>>55231927
Nameless hero
Face in the crowd
Standard issue
Rally
Health
Colossus Dust
Into the Fray
Nameless


I won't even be remembered as the nameless hero, my deeds unnoticed and my person unrecognized, but the line WILL hold.
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>>55230903
I like the design (both drawn and written) of all of them. That was a neat read, good job!
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>>55233616
You don't need a prequel to enjoy it. The vagueness makes it better
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>>55231810
Agreed
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Imagine being so insecure about yourself that you need to use a tripcode to make sure no one says naughty things under your name.
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>>55234053
It's one thing for someone to go "I'm SDA and I'm a faggot", it's another when someone goes and says "I'm ZBG and I'll be releasing Guardian tommorow"
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>>55234071
If he would only use a name when discussing his OC, no one would bother impersonating him. Imagine being so lonely and insecure that you need to blog on a 4chan thread every day for validation that you're an interesting and swell guy to be around (but also ignoring any and all criticism)
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>>55233962
>You don't need a prequel to enjoy it.
That is a lie. I need more details on the aliens and Ikeman. I like Ike. I want Ike.
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>>55234053
>>55234096
This is a case of whining about people countering your shitposting. You're mad because they've mad it harder for you to be a retard.
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>>55233007
>>55232924
Well you found your nameless hero I guess >>55233897, but it's less of a "lieutenant" and more of a "guy who just happens to be there to get shit done"
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>>55233897
Hey, I've got some friends for you.

>>55232272
>>55232924
>>55233440
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Hey guys new CYOA coming soon, mark my words. It'll be better than anything I've ever made before, mark my words. Anyways, how's your guy's weeks going? Tough monday's?

Love,
Gwen Poole
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>>55231906
>>55231927
>>55231945

Shrine: nameless hero
Perk: Face in the crowd
Drawback: Standard Issue
Skill: Intimidating display
Reward: Health
Boon: Behemoth claw
Starting activity: boot camp
Campsite: nameless hero
Front: skirmishers

All spank and no tank.

Good thing I have a runner's physique.

As befitting a champion of the rank and file, I will wield the weapons my station merits and nothing an inch better. Drill will bring my existing skills up to speed, and in the camp of my comrades I will make countless friends to save and be saved by in turn in the heat of battle. Inspiration works better when you know the man that's killing a beastie several times his size because you've had a drink with him; he is not some untouchable hero to you, he's just like you, and if he can do it then you can most certainly manage it too.

Intimidating display will likely manifest most of the time as thunderous war cries and cants that are uttered as we go haring into battle, bolstering a weak spot in our line or exploiting a gap in the enemy's. Behemoth claw will capitalize on that, rendering our charges into unstoppable displays of ferocity that shake the earth itself.

Face in the crowd should enable me to pick and choose the larger enemies I go after, rather than being singled out by them as a lynchpin, and help to negate the fact that I didn't take the scroll on tactics to take them down. I plan to get my start taking down ones that have already been wounded, and once I've developed my ability I'll move on to trying to deal with them outright. In the absolute worst case, I can serve as a distraction for them that is just dangerous enough they have to deal with me while my larger allies pummel them.

I'm not a superhero by any stretch of the word, but superheros can only do so much. It's the rank and file, throwing their lives away in the millions, that pick up the slack. So I'm going to provide them with every ounce of mettle I can.
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>>55234160
Kys attention whore.
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>>55234192
You fit better with that >>55234152 group
than I >>55233897 do. I'm the one to snatch victory from the jaws of defeat, in the darkest hour when things look their worst. You are the one to lead the charge to begin with and push forward the ever advancing stratagem.
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>>55234226
Not nice! You guys are my friends and I'm just trying to make conversation.

Love,
Gwen Poole
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>>55232741
iocaine powder
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>>55234243
Heh... we've got a castle, so there's plenty of space.

Besides, I'm sure we'll need someone to help hold the line eventually. You're more than welcome to decline, of course, but 'the more the merrier' as they say.
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>>55234243
>>55234332

I don't think I would be of too much use. The Titan's in the heart of battle and so is the castle, I'm more of a skirmisher.

I'd be happy to be part of the commander's strategies, but I'm all about that charge - I'm not terribly useful manning a fortress.

Best I could do is clear a path for the fortress to advance, then for him to plop himself down and become a new strongpoint. But that would take the commander calling in some favors to get my skirmisher unit in his area in the first place.
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>>55233809
You... could take a shot at expanding the setting?
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>>55234160
>better than anything I've ever made before
You've never made anything.
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>>55229757
>>55229776
Loved this, bullying is my biggest turn on. Thanks.
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>>55232645
Post that custom weapon thing made by SDA.
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>>55234575
Uh of course I have? I made the the highly acclaimed "Battlemage CYOA". Ever hear of it? I bet you have you shmucko.

Love,
Gwen Poole
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>>55234629
I'm afraid I don't actually have that one. Sorry.
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>>55234762
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>>55234635
Nope, not familiar at all. Bottlemage? Drunk wizard wars?
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Is Italic's Pokemon Personified the CYOA with the most comprehensive lore? It seems like the most detailed setting and I'm curious how many CYOAs bother to worlbuild.

Also don't mention Traveller; multiverses are fucking bullshit.
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>>55234762

>Portal projector

>detect, House

>Agelessness, peak fitness, Powerhouse, Healing, calculation, Eidetic

>Warform, armour, shards, Reach

>Sword, pistol, power armor, Furnishings, Medical pod

>Homeless, Hunted, Followed, Relentless

Now I have everything I need to combat whatever insane menace is hunting me through the multiverse, and a safe place to retreat to should it become necessary.
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>>55234860
Forgot to add
>Pocket
But did account for it in costs.
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>>55234822
Very possibly, I struggle to think of anything that comes close in terms of the sheer amount of setting related content.

This doesn't not necessarily make it a good cyoa though.
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>>55234112
Italics posted a lore dump on all of the races, but I didn't save it.
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>>55235168
Not even Order?
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>>55234822
>Also don't mention Traveller; multiverses are fucking bullshit.
But the thing is all the Lore comes from the Travellers and their actions. Not the multiverse itself.
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>>55233596
You in House Ceres, too? The Juno house parties can be rough at first but internal bleeding can be fixed right up and you build a resistance to the date rape drugs.
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For CYO/u/, what kind of options would you like to see regarding the player designing their ideal wedding with their cute yuri wife?

(I'm still having technical issues but I've set up a backup that should hopefully prevent me from losing any data in case any nasty BSODs keep happening.
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>>55235598
Space tourism.
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>>55235367
On principle, I refuse to read any fictional setting that is about multiverses because if everything is infinitely possible then none of it fucking matters and it carries no weight. At that point it's not even a setting, it's just a "pull shit out of my ass and it all makes sense because lol anything's possible with infinite possibilities".

Just comes across as very lazy and unimaginative. Plus I prefer my settings focusing on really fleshing out one world. If there's so many damn worlds in your setting, then I really doubt any are going to be that interesting or varied beyond one notable thing.
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>>55235644
So you haven't read any of Traveller and are just dismissing it as 'multiverse shlock' then?
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>>55235307
Definitely comes to mind but without having both in front of me I wouldn't be able to say decisively
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>>55233586
This CYOA always made me sad. I don't like seeing girls cry, I want them to be happy.
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Could someone post an image version of traveller? If one even exists?
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>>55235709
Nigger that shit is 40 pages just get to it through the text version. There's a link.
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>>55235691
Than make them happy, Anon. You've been given a chance to protect those smiles. Why aren't you using it?
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>>55235691
That's Why I pick house Neptune.
Plus more field trips and respecting women.
Memes aside, Neptune just fits my personality more than the other dorms.
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>>55235347
Comfy
Seems like there should be more, ends kinda abruptly
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>>55235722
>>55235743
Is there a build that makes it possible to turn the school (and the frowns) upside down and stop the rape?
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>>55235598
All sorts of holy looking stuff and effects courtesy of the /u/ goddess, Maybe angels too? Because yuri is the purest of loves
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>>55235764
This guy would no doubt fit into Neptune just fine. And then dismantle the school once the horrible fate for girls meets his idealism.
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>>55235598
All participants, staff, etc. getting to be cute little girls, for the ceremony and the afterparty both. With appropriate cute-girl activities.
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>>55235658
I haven't actually, yeah. That was the point I was making.
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>>55235691
That's why you rape them so hard they end up smiling.
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>>55235924
Tok please.
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>>55235938
Do we just associate rape with Tok now?
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>>55235924
What? I thought Tok was into getting cucked, isn't that why he puts that Hex Maniac everywhere?
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>>55236033
That and cuckoldry. I prefer to connect Tok with involuntary anal sex when SDA is involved myself.
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>>55235691
I know you were raped yourself but deal with it
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>>55229505
I have no idea why this guy linked the thread that actually died. Did he just go dig it up from the archive or did he think that was the actual thread all along and waited on it until it died?
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>>55234822
It's also 36 pages of companions. Plenty of room to dump worldbuilding.
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>>55236246
Sda and/or tok
would seem like the guys that would find it fun to have a house neptune friend just to corrupt him.
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>>55229757
>>55229776
Update!

Changelog
>New You: Longer description
>Impregnation: Has a short description about what happens if your female.
>Milking: Has a short description about what happens if your female.
>Ball Busting: Has a short description about what happens if your female.
>Chastity: Has a short description about what happens if your female.

Uncensored Version:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTgloWVZzLVZBNFl0Zmc?usp=sharing

Or

>>>/trash/11392375
>>>/trash/11392388
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>>55236327
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>>55236327
>Cynthia still isn't removed
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>>55236347
>wanting best girl removed
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>>55236246
Is it so wrong to have conversative views on sexuality? The whole idea of corruption of innocence makes me sick.
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>>55236488
For now.
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>>55236488
I thought i was the only one, keep up the good fight Anon.
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>>55236488
Quick someone post the Angel rape cyoas!
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>>55236488
ikr?
I feel the same way.
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>>55232274
>You need to get out of your comfort zone
I'm never in my comfort zone.
I don't have a comfort zone.
I am literally always uncomfortable.
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>>55236488
>Is it so wrong to have conversative views on sexuality? The whole idea of corruption of innocence makes me sick
You're weak, your ancestors are weak, your bloodline is weak and your weakness sickens me.

>>55236537
>Quick someone post the Angel rape cyoas!
On it! It's a classic and one of my favorite short CYOAs!

>>55236469
Your a man of culture like me.

>>55236033
>Do we just associate rape with Tok now?
Yes, please.
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>>55236553
I'm always in my comfort zone
I don't get concerned about anonymous shitposts in a imageboard
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>>55236575
>You're weak, your ancestors are weak, your bloodline is weak and your weakness sickens me.
>Says while he is part of the cucklords that are shredding apart the past and bloodline of his antecesors
Really makes you think...
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>>55236575
I now want a consensual lesbian waifu, but I'm not a girl. Life isn't fair.
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>>55236575
I pick everything up to water torture. I would choose rape/butt rape, but never stick your benis in crazy, even unwillingly
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>>55236575
I'll take the second half, plus spanking.
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>>55236327
>>55236339
On one hand, I understand that you want to make this CYOA customizable to individual anons' specific kinks. On the other hand, it's kinda lame that every girl has the exact same punishment options. It makes them all feel generic.

I'm also disappointed you didn't do one based on Sophia from Worm. But I guess that'd require you to make a character darker than a light suntan, and you're clearly not into that.
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>>55236709
So what a straight up yandere/psychopath athlete with phasing powers? Or just black?
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>>55236488
I have a corruption fetish and it makes me sick too.
Inner conflict just ain't fun.
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>>55236787
Psychopath with phasing powers who's trying to break you one way or the other. Either you give up and she wins, or you really fight back and she wins.
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>>55233044
What's with this dumb ass bird?
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>>55236575
You're weak, your ancestors are weak, your bloodline is weak and your weakness sickens me.
I bet Tok is a member of antifa
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>>55236936
tfw when you forget to put the quote symbol in.
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>>55235598
A choice to have a quiet legal marriage without a ceremony.
Just for those weirdo NEET couples that don't like crowds and loud noises interrupting their hard work.
Those families aren't going to disappoint themselves, you know!
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>>55235598
The best and most yuri activity: raw, animalistic fucking (and subsequent impregnation) on their wedding night.
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>>55233586
Evil Route - House Bacchus
3(+1) Allure, 1 Elusive, 2 Force, 2 Study, 2 Threat.
Driving, Language Arts. Guardian(House bonus!), Wealth 2+(100$ per week). Celebrity. Cute. Dream Girl(Boy, actually). -Nymphomania.

I actually wanted to do something cool but then I realized that a comfortable life getting handed everything I wanted would be just as good.
Free Booze and if needed, chicks form Ceres.
I mean, why not?
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>>55237109
>and subsequent impregnation
Are you telling me that you two are going to Hold hands
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>>55235598
BDSM wedding. Everyone in full kink regalia, a play party as a reception, and the sub and dom get a collar and lead instead of rings.
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>>55235764
No the school is designed for rape but you can use the skills you will learn there to make the world a better place. With the waifu you'll save as her Neptune hero.
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>>55237152
with a massive feminine creampie in at least one of their holes, yes.
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>>55236797
I know! I have the same fetish, but I still hate morally seeing girls corrupted and it makes me horny but sick! And then I project onto other people with the fetish and call them bad people.
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>>55235764
Pick Noblebright, and high levels of elusive and allure.
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>>55235598
best answer (>>55237012)
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>>55235598
The option to be a guy.
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>>55230903
>hmm that introduction is pretty neat
>>55230927
>a girl offers me a date right after seeing me for the first time
>suspension of disbelief instantly bursts
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>>55229963
>Yesterday; Dream
Babylon sounds like fun. Let's magic things up.
>Tactician, Bookworm.
I'm going to need to study hard to get anywhere, and good tactics will (hopefully) help me to survive.
>Scripter
Words are power, and they are a power I plan to invest in.
>Taylor
An athletic combat magician; a female one at that. An oddity for this day and age, but I think I'll get along well with an oddball. Besides that, I could really use someone who will be good in a scrap on my side.
>Orphan
Meh, screw it. Running low on points. I do wonder what's in the basement, though... probably not-quite-dead-parents, that'll be fun...
>Attunement
Swimmer's body. Stream-lined, dexterous, and graceful.
>Minor Noble House
Despite the death of my parents, my family name still has some clout in this realm. As the scion of the house, I'll have to work hard to keep it going.
>No siblings
Goin' it alone.
>Intricate Bond
With Taylor. Synergized spellcasting is now a thing, and woe unto our enemies.
>Library
The extra information will be helpful.
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>>55233376
>Location
Secret Base

>Recruitment
Path of the Mentor

>Skills
Major- Poisons, Seducer, Blade in the Mist
Minor- Anatomical Knowledge, Stealth, Infiltration, Observation/Deduction, Blade Dancer

>Contact
Meeting Points

>Price
No One Knows

>Uniform
None

>Rival
La Silhouette
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>>55235644
So you read fucking Pokémon instead?
>>
multiverse shit is almost as bad as time travel

ree
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>>55230903
>>55230927
>>55230946
>>55230955
Can't think of anyone here I don't like. I'd probably accept everyone's offers to hang out, and get to know everyone better before making a move. I definitely would a Suz or a Maggie, but I can see potential for any of them. Except maybe Trish and Heather, since I think they'd probably leave me exhausted.
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>>55234375

>Skirmishers range ahead to clear a path for fortress
>fortress charges ahead backed by titan shield wall
>fortress sits itself down and is manned by titans
>wait a little to consolidate position and let the battle line move towards us a little (maybe get reinforcements?
>Skirmishers range ahead again
>fortress gets up and prepares to charge ahead once more
>hope the strategy gets us to the Darkness before the fortress falls apart and strands us behind enemy lines

That about it?
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>>55235307
Order was as mediocre cyoa. Italics sure got btfo after working on it for months.
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>>55236575
>Tell her she should kill herself
>Spanking her
>Gagging Her
>Rape
>Butt Rape
>Kiss Her
I have a boner
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>>55235299
The lore dump Italics did was on the three biggest factions.

Naibelums were the squid sharks who basically want to rule the galaxy and be the number 1 race. A single female can produce 70000 children.

The second was the Mother System which is robot Empire controlled by an AI who searching the galaxy to harvest technology and replace organics with cyborgs and robots.

The third is called the Celestials who stop galactic monopolies from forming and record shit that happens in the galaxy and are at war with Shark-squids.

Italics also said there was an imperium of man who got btfo by the celestials and hate humans from where the cyoa is set in for lore reasons.
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>>55235644
Honestly the drama/action in Traveller comes from fighting against Extra-Dimensional incursions like Great Old Ones trying to break in, and ideological disputes causing them to fight each other.

Travellers have probably wrecked more worlds they have saved with their wars.
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>>55231778
Daily reminder that Mini-seath AKA: P.P is best girl because she understands how to REJOICE IN THE GLORY OF COMBAT.
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>>55231945
>plate mail
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>>55231906
Shrine of the nameless hero

Perk: Face in the crowd

Flaw: Standard issue

Skill: Rally


Reward: Wealth

Artifact: Behemoth claw

Starting activity: Boot camp

Campsite: nameless
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>>55238139
plait male?
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>>55232387
>Path of the Mentor
Sounds like fun.
>Reef of the Desperates
All of these places sound unbearable, but I do like rain.
>99 Pirouettes
Why parry when you can dodge?
> Burning Whip (Free), Sensory Deprivation, The Liar's Game, Mental Chessboard, Endurance Race.
Neither physical nor mental torture will work on me; I'll always be one step ahead of anybody I'm dealing with (except maybe those of a higher rank in the guild); stamina for days. Mostly, I see myself filling the role of diplomat or spy, with the bonus being that I need no guards.
>The Mermaid's Mark
As a diplomat (or spy), being able to travel without delay is immensely beneficial, as is free stays at inns (because that means there's less of a 'footprint' of where I've been), to say nothing of the benefits of being able to understand and speak all languages.
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>>55230903
Maggy best girl.

7,5/10 idea - started a bit paranormal but it's still fine like that.
8,5/10 form
9/10 writing
7/10 waifus - the descrpitions are nice but some of the girls seem more like personifications of popular archetypes instead of actual people. 7/10 means I still think they're good, but /cyoag/ made me really picky

bonus points for drawing the girls on your own
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>>55235347
>Rivers & Streams (1 & 2)
It wouldn't be nice without some water; making it crystal clear and pure just makes it super awesome.
>Holy Tree (1 & 2)
Sweet fruits to nom on, and some new occupants for the forest. Neat.
>Scattered Ruins (1 & 2)
Some fun to be had, and nifty things to find. Plus, quick travel.
>Animals
To make the place more lively.
>The Wise One (1, 2, & 3)
Having a bro is nice. And I can learn a hell of a lot in this world where time stands still.
>Mighty Manor
That place just plain looks cool. And I'll need plenty of space to put my treasures.

Agreeing with the other anon about the CYOA ending rather abruptly. I feel like there should be a section for decking out your house with stuff.
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>>55238403
Well it is a WIP so that is normal
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>>55238403
There is more, that's a WiP. That anon posted a second page with house customization, even though the house portion sort of thematically clashed with the first page. A third page was also promised
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sooooo... is sda ever gonna make that limbo roommate cyoa?
or was that a trick to get votes for his reddit contest?
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>>55238574
SDA only shitposts and autistically fucks around in photoshop. The cyoas are just an accidental result of the latter.
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>>55238574
Be patient. SDA is a hard-working AI hivemind, but perfectionism takes time. And it is working on Apocalypse right now, so don't hold your breath for Limbo.
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>>55238622
fuck ass
every since his waifu cyoas i cant enjoy other waifu cyoas
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>>55238574
afaik he has several WIPs so there's no telling when that one will be finished. on the bright side, if it's not the top on his priorities right now at least you'll eventually get some OC from him to hold you over
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>>55236488
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>>55235598
Wacky wedding shenanigans
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>>55235598
Rosanon, just one suggestion. Don't go full blown autism mode like you did with the giantess growth one. There was way too many pointless choices there. I don't give a shit what sound she makes when she's growing.

Jjust chill with that kind of stuff.
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>>55236488
As someone who has a bunch of fetishes, the best fetish by far is a long lasting monogamous relationship between you and the woman you love

>inb4 Mephisto
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>>55234822
>Is Italic's Pokemon Personified the CYOA with the most comprehensive lore?
I personally don't know, but I would like to think so.. Too bad medical shit been fucking me up last year and half of this year, so I'm not able to work on the backstory to the Original Ones and what the Ultra Beasts are up to in PPP+. as much as I like to.
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>>55238810
Objectively correct.
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>>55238810
>that spoiler
Never again bring that name to my house anon
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>>55238873
>38873 ▶
>File: do it faggot.jpg (16 KB, 480x329)
>>55238873
Sure this is all just a meme, right?
You guys don't really like rape, corruption, etc?
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>>55235347
Rivers and Streams (4). Don't want to get dehydrated when I'm out and about. I'm going to have to bring a filtration system, though, because I can't afford the upgrade.

Scattered Ruins (3), All Upgrades (6). Pretty much ideal. We Metroidvania forever now.

Animals (2), All Upgrades (3). I feel like the friendly animals upgrade should be bottom tier, honestly. "There are tigers or dragons" might sound cool, but not if "they don't want to eat you" isn't already selected.

Holy Trees (1). Perfect for the views.

The Wise One (0), All Upgrades (0). It'll be good to have someone to talk to if I ever end up deciding to stay here for a long time.

Home: Towering Castle. Although I wish it'd be nestled into some of the giant trees.

If the author is reading this, I don't think there's any real reason to have tiered upgrades. There's only a couple that build on each other (ruins needing puzzles to regenerate, spirits needing communication methods to serve you), and those can probably specifically need others. Meanwhile, for the others, you might as well just let people select what specific bonuses they want. You'll get more unique builds that way.
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>>55238948
Are you asking me to engage in your hand hold fantasies?
I will fuck your wife in front of you.
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>>55238810
>Mephisto

He also hit her that one time
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>>55238011
Is that a good or a bad thing if those worlds only exist because the Traveller's took one up the ass at the Denial for all of reality?

>>55237645
Honestly, everyone has their triggers about autistic things.
But it is kind of stupid that Multiverse shit with defined rules is the thing that bothers him when authors just handwave magic and sci-fi shit all the time.

To each their own I guess.
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>>55238948
He's talking about the second spoiler
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>>55238574
>>55238613
>>55238622
>>55238666
>>55238689
Limbo Roommate is likely something I'll get to when I don't feel like working on something else, like when I'm immediately done Apocalypse. I'm too invested in this one to move away right now.
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>>55239059
fuck ass
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>>55238810
I don't know if you ever watched modern family, but the Phil and Claire marriage is so sweet and ideal
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>>55234053
>>55234096
Your qualms are understandable, me.
But I've made my decision, and believe it or not, I am trying to only put on my trip when someone mentions me or when I am talking about my OC.
It seems I haven't been doing a good enough job of that.
My apologies.
Also, how long you guys think power/ability descriptions should be? I'm thinking three sentences, but should I try for more?
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>>55239390
>I am trying to only put on my trip when someone mentions me or when I am talking about my OC.
How bout just don't do it?
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>>55239390
You promised me you would chill on the tripfagging, and then the next morning went right back to blogging.
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>>55239390
desu it doesnt matter whether you have a trip on. Your posts are easy to recognize because of formating and reaction image selection
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>>55237782
I liked it. I personally see Pokemon Personified mediocre in comparison.
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>>55239390
>Also, how long you guys think power/ability descriptions should be? I'm thinking three sentences, but should I try for more?
Long enough to explain the power sufficiently.
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Full World Below when?
Time of Troubles update when?
Stand and Tower when?
When?
Whe...
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>>55239450
>When?
>Whe...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMM-GELlqoU&t=12
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>>55239450
When you make it!
When the russkie makes it!
When you make it!
You!
Yo...
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>>55239425
Think that matters? Enough anons are autistic enough that their day is ruined because someone put a name on.
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>>55239416
'Fraid that's unlikely friendo, I'm too much of an Autistic, Narcissistic, Attention whore for that.
>>55239423
I did? I have no memory of this.
I"m sorry for breaking my promise, if I made it.
I just wanted to respond to my doppelganger and apologize formally.
>>55239425
>Your posts are easy to recognize because of formating and reaction image selection
Does that mean you can tell which ones are my builds too?
>>55239443
Alright, I think three sentences should be enough then.
Here's the amount of space I'm working with, for referance.
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>>55239538
...Are you using that in Guardian, Not-ZBD? Or is that for another project, for a certain moba?
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>>55239588
>moba
Ew. Use the proper name, anon
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>>55239615
Multiplayer Online Battle Arena?
DOTA XDD
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>>55239508
yes it matters because once you start namefagging you'll always be a namefag. Even if he stops namefagging now people will still see his posts (like this >>55239538) and think, 'oh, it's that ZBD-nuu faggot again'

>>55239538
>Does that mean you can tell which ones are my builds too?

if you include replies to other posts or go for some autistic multi-post-roleplaying yes, if it's just a build then probably not. Though it might be because I don't read posts with just builds.
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>>55239650
I hope they keep getting triggered then. It's easy to filter namefags (other than SDA), so those idiots have only themselves to blame.
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>>55239450
>Full World Below when?
>>55239507
>When you make it!
I'm pretty sure he's not the guy that's making it, though...
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>>55239538
>Does that mean you can tell which ones are my builds too?
Yes it's fucking easy.
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>>55239588
Now, I found a nice set of tarot style cards that an artist did for each of the skin's transformations, so I'm using them for all the magic type Abilities.
>>55239615
>Use the proper name, anon
>pic related
>>55239650
>go for some autistic multi-post-roleplaying
Yup, that's me!
>>55239716
>Yes it's fucking easy.
Well, at least I don't tripfag them?

Anyway, I replied to myself.
I had my question answer.
So, unless any of you have good pictures of a character wielding a shit ton of weapons (that isn't Gilgamesh, I'm going back to work and back to lurking.
Toodles!
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>>55239638
I just wanted to call someone an assfaggot, why you gotta ruin my jokes with your ironic XDs
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>>55239588
>>55239615
>>55239638
Don't you mean "Aeon of Strife Styled Fortress Assault Game Going On Two Sides", or ASSFAGGOTS for short?
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>>55236327
>>55236339
Made a small update to MSB. Forgot to change the description for females on Sissification (you become a reverse trap tomboy). You can find the latest version on my google drive: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTgloWVZzLVZBNFl0Zmc?usp=sharing

>>55239390
You can't please everyone ZBG. Some people just want to shit on others to make themselves feel better. It's because they are talantless losers who don't have anything to take pride in. So they take pride in enforcing arbitrary social rules to shame others and make themselves feel superior to others (this type of person is often SJW, TVW or soccer moms who take pride in their childrens achievements, because they have no achievements of their own).

You should be more like me ZBG, I don't give a fuck about social rules, cultural rules, social norms or others opinions. Like why live like a slave and follow illogical rules if you don't want too? Be based and do what you want. A talantless losers opinion is not worth anything. So if you want to namefag just do it.
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>>55239837
What is with you namefags and the egos? It's inherently egotistical to take a name of an anonymous image board, but I swear you and SDA have gotten worse after your little pissing contest got futa'd
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>>55239837
Talentless hacks deserve no quarter.
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>>55239867
>It's inherently egotistical to take a name of an anonymous image board
Did you miss the part where I said I don't give a fuck about illogical social rules which are made by lesser men for lesser men?
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tok is /cyoag/'s best comic relief
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>>55239930
Tok isn't fatposter
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>>55239837
Holy shit you're so deluded it's not even funny.

You're like a retarded kid who looked at SDA, wanted to be like him, and deluded yourself into thinking you're as good as he is.

And I don't even care about SDA that much, he's mostly just a popular, mostly entertaining shitposter who makes good content.

> It's because they are talantless losers who don't have anything to take pride in

Sounds pretty familiar, huh?
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>>55239924
No, just a little bit dumbfounded that you think shitposting on a crappy message board means you're some kind of Nietzschian ubermensh.

Your life is a joke, and your ego is the punchline.
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>>55239837
>I don't give a fuck about other people's opinions
>that's why I need people to notice me on an anonymous imageboard
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>>55239837
>I make the same cyoa over and over in paint
>I have talent
L
M
A
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>>55239059
>Projected weapons
MUH DICK

I need to ask is there going to be some sort of crystaline magic or weapon in apocalypse?
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>>55240008
>crystaline magic
Explain? Do you mean something like the crystal spells in Dark Souls?

I'm still brainstorming ideas for attributes (spell elements), so it's a possibility, actually. Though I have a "Cryo" attribute that pretty much freezes things, so I think that kind of covers crystalline type magic. What sort of things would crystalline magic even do?
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>>55239962
I like SDA because he posts smug anime girls.
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>>55240050
Do lewd anime girls work?
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>>55240070
Only when the time is appropriate, anon. Otherwise, stick to smug. I also use disdain faces, too.
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>>55240070
They do, indeed.
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>>55239837
That almost sounds philosophical... Almost.
You've proven once again, Tok-Senpai, that, even I'm not really the target audiance for a lot of your CYOAs, (excluding Deus Vult, because I love that one) I like you.
You're degenerate deviant, through and through, but I like you.
Also, I adore the character you borderline avatarfag with.
>You should be more like me ZBG
>pic related
Well, let's not get too hasty.
>Like why live like a slave and follow illogical rules if you don't want too?
A man chooses. A slave obeys.
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>>55240046
Yes like the crystal magic in dark souls. What do you mean with spell elements?
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>>55239837
That's some ego you faggot. Go to reddit.They'll enjoy sucking your cock.
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>>55232924
Ill bite
>titan
>shield
>paragon
>resilience
>500 years
>collosus dust for extra endurance
>berkerker camp for extra fighting
>into the fray for luck
Where ever we all end up i guess.
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Rolled 6 (1d18)

>>55229757
Damn
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>>55239962
>Be me
>Be glorious
>Was ranked Platinum in LoL season 7, only 11.20% of LoL's player base is ranked Platinum or above. That means I am better then 88,80% of LoL's player base. LoL has a player base of over 100 Million monthly players. I'm better then 88 800 000 people.
>Was a moder on nexus and have one of your lewd mods #18 in nexus highest ranked adult mods for Fallout 4.
>Is the best lewd CYOA author in the world and have made 15 different high quality CYOAs.

I have many more achievements, but I only used the ones I can prove.
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>>55240206
hes been. he came back. it was attention grabbing. it was shit.

please don't give him ideas or attention
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>Weapon Mastery Abilities
Do you guys like left or right better?
(Posted the size they'll appear in the CYOA itself, let me know you want the original sizes.
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Rolled 22 (1d30)

>>55236339
damn...
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>>55238782
no lol. Just skip the choices you don't like, nerd.
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>>55240242
>only one I can prove
>best author of anything

I thought you said made 15 different CYOAs not reskin one 14 times?
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>>55240242
>Fallout 4
>League
>Reddit
I just fucking ate, Tok. Unless vomit is on your fetish list.
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>>55240274
Left is better because it's cuter.
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>>55240274
Right one has more focus on the weapons. On the left one they seem more like an afterthought.
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>>55240200
I don't want to spoil too much on this front, but basically, spells can take on different attributes or elements.

But my question is, what would crystalline magic even do? What effect does crystallizing things really have that a different element/attribute doesn't? You have to remember that these spells have to compete with things like railguns and autocannons.
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>>55240274
I prefer anime tiddies
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>>55240298
That looks really fucking good, you beautiful autist
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>>55236797
>>55237301
I like corruption into a succubus instead of personality corruption. That way I can assume her personality and selfhood aren't ultimately changed. Sure she's lewd, but she's still a good person and all.
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>>55240298
>Using shitty vectors to attract people to your CYOA
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Fug are all the tripfags coming out of their hiding place?
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Anybody have the latest kingdom diplomacy?
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>>55239837
The severity of your narcissism and victim complex is out of control. One day you will grow up out of this bratty teenager mindset and all you'll be able to do is cringe.
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>>55240298
>What effect does crystallizing things really have that a different element/attribute doesn't?
Maybe upon impact it makes it so it painfully grows crystals inside the targets. Or maybe concentrates spells making them stronger at the cost of area of effect. Or it could make it so the affected thing becomes brittle and easy to destroy. Or the crystals really sharp cutting/piercing things. Or they blow up in deadly bursts of shrapnel. I think the whole making walls and structures is already taken by cryo but that could be a thing too. That is what comes at the top of my head because i am not sure how the thing works.
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>>55240444
No one else here has, why would he?
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what is a cooler(pun intended) "final ability" for ice powers

- a giant expulsion of cold that drains a spherical field around you of energy, bringing everything to a standstill and bringing most matter to absolute zero, cauzing even the slightest provocation to shatter it- this will also eliminate most enemy attacks in the area

or

- after mastering your power you realize that you freeze things by draining them of energy. your ice powers now employ black frost, which naturally absorbs energy from its surroundings, neutralize enemy energy based attacks and does not melt or thaw- you can even set it up in complex patterns to redirect absorbed energy
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>>55240206
Sad thing is he tried and they didn't.
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>>55240458
First one, the second one seems more like a mix of void and ice than pure ice.
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>>55240458
A gun that shoots absolute zero. And a parka.
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>>55240298
Maybe crystallizing makes them physical, which means they can bypass magic or elemental resistance? You could also make crystalline projections extremely sharp or sturdy, so a crystalline blast would be able to cut lesser armor to ribbons while a crystalline shield could deflect many attacks.

I dunno how you're balancing these, or what you already have, so I'm just guessing.
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>>55240458
Latter sounds more interesting.
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>>55240515
while "crazy mofo with super-science" will be a option, a gun isnt exactly a psychic power
go to jail snart

>>55240506
well the idea is that ice powers are all about draining energy, since they arent being packaged as a sub-power of water manipulation
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>>55240324
Lazy, I know. Wanna take over the project for me?

>>55240450
>Maybe upon impact it makes it so it painfully grows crystals inside the targets.
I'm not sure how effective that is when you can just take the Thermal attribute and just vapourize them instead.

>Or maybe concentrates spells making them stronger at the cost of area of effect.
I can dig this, though. A concentrating or amplifying effect, but what would that have to do with crystallization? I kind of already have another attribute that does this, though.

>Or they blow up in deadly bursts of shrapnel.
This is good, I'll see if I can use this, then.

>>55240522
>Maybe crystallizing makes them physical
That kind of is what the Kinetic attribute is for.

>You could also make crystalline projections extremely sharp or sturdy
Sharpening might be cool. If I use crystalline magic, I'll combine this with shrapnel effects.

>I dunno how you're balancing these
General ideas are fine, I'm not expecting you to balance it for me. Thanks for the brainstorming.
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>>55240457
Because that's what happens as you grow up, child.
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>>55240570
>using shred twice right next to each other
How does your autism permit this. Or are you purely the visual type?
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>>55240298
crystals are the "antimagic/energy" attribute- they redirect and dissipate magic, allowing them to both penetrate magical defenses and protect from magical attacks, but at the cost of being fragile and ineffective against blunt force
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>>55240570
Do any of the stats mean anything? Do I have to care about them?
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>>55240590
when does it happen tho?

t. donald
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>>55240552
You can make it a GER type ability but as an aura effect that grows stronger the closer things get to you.
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>>55231109
if it didn't have the stupid weeb art and all that waifushit It could have been fun to read maybe
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>>55240635
>GER
i have no idea what GER does apart from "is the strongest"

and for comparison the other level 5 powers are things like "fire a railgun" or "massive fire supernova thing" or "lazers" for that category
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>>55240644
>If this appealed to me and not them I would like it better.
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>>55240570
>But what would that have to do with crystallization?
The crystal acts some sort of conduit for the other spell increasing its intensity but constraining most of its effects in the crystal. Does that make sense or it is dumb?
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>>55231109
>>55231124
So what happens if you do a Major Summon with tomato juice?
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>>55240298
You can the crystalline version of spells take on attributes of the magic and as as a physical conduit of magic that can be man made for alchemy and magi-tech weaponry.
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>>55240570
>>55240522
>>55240450
Ah... apparently I already have an attribute I can use. I'll use the crystalline abilities for this.

>>55240600
Everything in writing is placeholder, actually. I wrote those descriptions to fill the space, hours apart from each other.

Don't know why you have to hurl insults though. I suppose you're angry at me for some reason (enough to point out a dumb misstep in typing?).

>>55240605
They're there for relative purposes, but I don't really care if you take thoughtful liberties in your choice making.

Your fault if you take too many liberties to be taken seriously, though.

>>55240686
I get it, but I just have another attribute that amplifies/concentrates so I'd rather have crystalline for something like shrapnel.

>>55240744
You will be able to combine two attributes per each spell, so if you want flaming crystalline shrapnel, you can have flaming crystalline shrapnel.

>magi-tech weaponry
You ARE magi-tech weaponry. The fluff is that the Apocalypse program is just that; mana-tech is what made the Heralds so powerful.
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>>55240242
>Acting like being above average at a shitty moba makes you somehow better than anybody

Prove? I can prove your CYOAs are low quality shit. And you're delusional if you really think you're the best lewd CYOA author. All of your CYOAs combined don't hold a candle to something like Slut life.

Hell, if you go to your precious reddit, even they don't think your CYOA is the best.
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>>55240777
No insults here, friend. I simply view your autism as a fact, I'm not utilizing it as an attack on your work. I am baffled that you read anger in that post, given the vitriol you're commonly shown is much worse
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>>55240242
Man this is the first time I've heard someone claim to be good at LoL without the tinest hint of shame
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>>55240718
What do you think happens?
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>>55240242
>18th highest ranked adult mods for Fallout 4.
so you are ranked no.18 for the least moddable and popular Bethesda game? WOW

also
>plat
>thinks hes good
kek- plat is the second bronze
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>>55240808
I'm just saying there's less rude ways of saying "those two sentences are awkward." By all means, be as excellent as you wish to be.
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>>55240868
Your existence is awkward.
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>>55240868
I'll keep that in mind when presenting future criticism towards your content. To be honest, being rude has never once struck me as something you'd care about. Would have thought the opposite.
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>>55240868
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>>55240777
Okay good I'm ignoring the stats since they have no meaning.
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>>55240853
>Fallout 4
I still have buyers remorse fucking hell.
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>>55240900
Being rude to me will just make me rude towards you, I don't know what you're expecting. I do that all the time.

>>55240916
>since they have no meaning
Well, okay then. I guess you're stuck with taking pistols instead of railguns since pistols are cheaper.

But seriously, this whole CYOA hinges on costs and stats, so that sort of mentality probably means this CYOA isn't for you.
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>>55240928
how do you think i feel? i bought the season pass
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>>55240868
Holy shit please be the real SDA.
I can't. There's no way the smugcunt acts this way when others aren't sucking on his balls.
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>>55240940
Why would you ever do this?
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>>55240938
>Being rude to me will just make me rude towards you
You have select behaviors for certain anons? How do you tell which one is which?
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>>55240940
Yeah, me too. It was on a discount but still...
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>>55240938
>presents stats with no meaning
>doesn't say what enemies you're facing or what their stats are
>thinks CYOAs are tabletops
One gun having +1 Stopping Power means fuckall when we don't know how much stopping power is needed to kill bitches. It's completely arbitrary and worthless.
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>>55240868
These two sentences in this post of yours are awkward. You enormous butt munching cockhole.
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>>55240940
I feel that. I got it cheap and decided to give the game another shot. What a fucking mistake that was.
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>>55237410
>Zedland
>Zed

Get out of here you damn snowback!
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>>55241013
>doesn't say what enemies you're facing or what their stats are
Well urr, the CYOA is not done?
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>>55229757
>>55229776
>>55236327
>>55236339
>>55239837
Updated MSB yet again... fucking hell. Hopefully this is the last update. I keep forgetting gendered options.

Changelog
>Sissification: Females can choose to either be a bimbo or reverse trap.
>Well Endowed: new description for females
>Degradation: longer description
>Forced Orgasms: fixed a typo

Note to self, always expect anon to want to be the girl.

>>55240815
>Man this is the first time I've heard someone claim to be good at LoL without the tinest hint of shame.
Pic related
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>>55241053
Fuck forgot to link to my google drive: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTgloWVZzLVZBNFl0Zmc?usp=sharing
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>>55241013
I think they are used as help for you to see how good is your weapon at killing things to death.
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>>55241053
>bronze>gold>silver>plat
so impressive

lol CYOA when?
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>>55241032
By all means, if he makes stats have any kind of meaning and being able to compare stats of one kind to another (unlike what he did in Stardust where 8 Acceleration didn't mean the same thing for different classes), I'll get down on all four and pray to SDA.
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>>55240950
I'm somewhat offended that you take me for all the memes people make me out to be, but I did ask for it, I guess. I can be civil too, you know.

>>55241013
>doesn't say what enemies you're facing or what their stats are
Okay. If you say so.

There's gonna be a whole quest section, actually. Things like fighting an evil space wizard in the court of his giant douche dreadnought while a giant space battle erupts around the orbit of a pale blue moon, for example.

>It's completely arbitrary and worthless.
Sure, I'm fine if you take it that way. It's better than people REEing at me when one weapon has 1 point less than another weapon of the same cost, even though I intended for them to have roughly the same destructive power.

As the author though, I care about the stats because they're a representation of what I want the weapons to be in the setting. If you don't like that, then by all means, make your own CYOA of that nature.
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>>55241093
>stats of one kind to another
*Stats of one weapon type to another type.
That is, 8 Stopping Power means 8 Stopping Power no matter if it's a shotgun or a pistol.
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>>55241093
>compare stats of one kind to another
Hahah, no. I'm not that autistic, nor am I asking to suicide.
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>>55241110
>That is, 8 Stopping Power means 8 Stopping Power no matter if it's a shotgun or a pistol.
That's the idea, yes.
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>>55241107
No, Daniel. You are the meme.
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>>55241107
>There's gonna be a whole quest section, actually. Things like fighting an evil space wizard in the court of his giant douche dreadnought while a giant space battle erupts around the orbit of a pale blue moon, for example.
And... what part of the quest explains why I need 8 Stopping Power instead of 7?
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>>55240274
>Do you guys like left or right better?
Left one or this one.
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>>55241133
Hey, can you post your weapon cyoa? The one that kinda goes with Battlemage.
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>>55237012
>>55237371
Thirding this.
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>>55240274
I didn't expect to ever write these words, but ...
>>55241241
I agree with Tok. His pic is good.
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>>55241237
See >>55241121

You realize that if we get to that point, I'm literally going to have to code up a game engine for this, right? Because stopping power isn't the only factor here.

I'm leaving enemy stats arbitrary like I always do because I don't want to kill myself.

>>55241284
Sure.
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>>55241312
I'm not even sure why that anon is asking. Outside of shit that never gets posted, like Wilds Outside, what cyoa actually bothers to give firm mechanics like that, in addition to enemy mechanics? I wonder if it's the same dude who got schooled by Quiet.
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>>55241121
>I'm not that autistic, nor am I asking to suicide.
>>55241312
>because I don't want to kill myself.
Spoilsport. Don't you know that burning yourself out until your body shuts down in a fit of autism is all the rage these days?
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>>55241336
>what cyoa actually bothers to give firm mechanics like that, in addition to enemy mechanics?
It can be done, but if I were to make an approach for that, I'd go with much simpler stats.

The problem I have with actually defining how to beat an enemy with certain stats is that it makes theorycrafting a bit too mechanical. I'd rather leave it open to interpretation on how players feel like they can take on a challenge.

>>55241344
I would like to make something that complex, but I really, really don't have the time to commit to something like that. CYOAs are a hell of a lot of work in of themselves.
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>>55230927
>Kara
>Why does that sound so familiar?
My first girlfriend was named Cara, and she's much like Kara. Yeah, that does sound VERY familiar. The hell?
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>>55240661
It can basically complete negate anything by returning it to zero, or its origin state. No one really knows what it could theoretically do because Giorno claims he can't even think of all the things GER could accomplish.

The only thing that can beat it is World Over Heaven, which has the ability to completely rewrite reality by punching it.
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>>55229963
>Today;Always (12)
>Revolution, Uplifted, Mundane (Art, Writing, Music) (45)
>Companions: Cooper, Ren, Mark, and Yuki (60)
>Loving Home, Unknown Family (15)
>Siblings: Vivian and Garret (10)
>Pet: A cat named Jackson (5)
>Threat Level +2, Scarred, Amputee (-47)
All in all, I think I pulled everything together to make a pretty good story. I have a good amount of supporting characters, a good degree of narrative tension, and some plot armor as insurance against said narrative tension.
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>>55240274
Left I can barely tell what's going on with right.
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Anybody have the latest kingdom diplomacy?
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>when you finally have some free time to write cute waifus
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>>55241741
>When you worry if your waifus will get paired with a good Anon
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>>55241784
I automatically assume they'll kick the anon out if he's a meanie.
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>>55240291
>>55241241
>>55241693
Left one out becuase I'm going to have the 1st 10 Offensive Abilities to show girls and the rest being guys
>this one
>>55241300
That is great, but that would better for the Weapon Summoning Ability rather than the Weapon Mastery Ability.
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>>55241560
>It can basically complete negate anything by returning it to zero, or its origin state.
thats WAAAAAAAAY too OP for the powerlevel of the setting/CYOA

a guy who makes things change directions is a bigshot for refference
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>>55240458
Black ice is cooler.
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>>55241807
>tfw no meanie but no good enough for a waifu
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>>55242175
Waifus are worth the effort to change for the better.
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>>55242139
yea, thinking about it i agree- i also kindof want ice to be different that fire/electricity/energy
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