/cyoag/ CYOA General

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>>54981150

Let's try to have a good thread, homos.

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posting the classic the started it all

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1/5

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>>54981416

2/5

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>>54981422

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>>54981431

3/5

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>>54981436

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>>54981445

4/5

>>54981422
>version 1.4
Is there a changelog? Was anything added/changed or is it just typo fixes?

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>>54981452

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>>54981459

5/5

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>>54981471
>Is there a changelog? Was anything added/changed or is it just typo fixes?
The green spells got new descriptions, I don't remember anything else. But the 1.4 version is superior in every way to the other Eronomicon versions.

>>54981422
Has there been a worse author in the history of /cyoag/? I've been ignoring his stuff for awhile now but now that I read it, I have to question why on earth is he here? I never even see much discussion of his CYOAs and most replies are telling him how bad this shit is. This is genuine garbage.

>>54981506
>But the 1.4 version is superior in every way to the other Eronomicon versions.
Have you considered doing sub-CYOAs for each of the branches of magic?

And maybe including WAIFUS for each? That would be so lovely, TokHaar Gol.

Especially the pink branch. Yes.

>>54981538
I like his fetish CYOAs because he appeals to my fetishes.

>>54981543
No idea why you'd want that. His waifus are shit.

>>54981422
>>54981548
>no handholding
literally unplayable

>>54981548
His fans really do have the worst taste, don't they? What a time to be alive.

>>54981210
lol no, you realize this bread will just be namefag shit instead, right?

>>54981589
>lol no, you realize this bread will just be namefag shit instead, right?
Look man, do you want me to start another "philosophy" discussion? I'll fucking do it.

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>>54981538
>Has there been a worse author in the history of /cyoag/
Angel and their crazy ass lesbianism, Italics and their cucking, Kit, and a few others.

>>54981618
This time can you make it about the ethics of child trafficking? I think it could be a good deed to buy a child since parents who would sell a child to you would probably also sell the child to someone else or do something bad to them.

>>54981646
>Angel and their crazy ass lesbianism
Do you remember the days of "and I purge the world of all filthy male ideas like war and theft"?

>>54981625
Uhh, wouldn't you just make multiple pages?

>>54981625
Do they have to be 2200, or will any round number do?

>>54981646
Angel made a mediocre OC and Kit made some neat things. Never cared much for Italic's things, I always thought they were badly written but at least he wasn't as obnoxious as this guy.

>>54981625
You poor thing

>>54981655
>This time can you make it about the ethics of child trafficking?
I was considering ones about violations of "free will", that usually gets 'em going for a good while.

Let's maybe keep it in reserve until SDA or Tok starts to get aggravating. Bring it out as a surprise present for them.

>>54981691
i approve gentleman

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>>54981543
No plans for any Eronomicon DLC or updates. I have a few other things planned, among them is Battle Sluts, gladiatory battle fucking! I also got a Waifu CYOA in mind but I don't know when I will do it, all the waifus in The End 2: The Tale of Brave Sir Anon will appear in that CYOA. And I also got a epic top secret CYOA coming.

>>54981363
>Maybe you should listen instead of rejecting legitimate criticism, then. You could learn a thing or two from me.
Like what? Being initially cold and hostile and gradually showing my warmer side (pic related)? Your CYOAs are pretty to look at, but they lack mechanical depth while mine are the opposite. I would rather dedicate my time on 1 thing and do it extremely well then be okey at many things, but not being good at anything.
>“If he sends reinforcements everywhere, he will everywhere be weak.”
>― Sun Tzu, The Art of War

>>54981709
>>“If he sends reinforcements everywhere, he will everywhere be weak.”
>>― Sun Tzu, The Art of War
"Unless he has a lot of reinforcements." -Me, Obviously Better Strategist Than Sun Tzu

>among them is Battle Sluts, gladiatory battle fucking!
That sounds interesting at least. Are we talking first one to enforce orgasm wins? Are they fighting over cute boy-slaves?

Or is it like, they literally Berserk-style gut each other over dildos or something?

>>54981452
Costs are unfriendly to odd/leftover
made stuff like Embrace Corruption cost one Magical Point for 3 corruption points of any color, Mana Reservoir cost one Magical Point for one more point of mana capacity. etc

>>54981618
We don't negotiate with terrorists you fucking faggot I bet you don't even exist

>>54981150
Be the Monster: Monster Boy
Size: Normal
Body Type: Biped
Monster Type: Godblooded
Body Parts: Ornamental Horns + Mesmerizing Mien + Wise Mien + Fanged Maw + Weaving Arms + Weaving Legs + Weaving Tail
Perks: Extra Power x6 + Extra Magic x4 + Extra Speed x4 + Spelltounge + Aura + Auerola
Shastra Astras: Spellsoul + Golriole + Trumpeter
Drawbacks: Brooding
Future: Vanir
End Stats: Power-11 Magic-11 Speed-8

Guardians guy should post his updated version here, I have some feedback.

Someone make a trap CYOA.

>>54981709
>they lack mechanical depth while mine are the opposite
I don't think I've seen this much delusion in my life before. You really are full of yourself, yeah?

Checking out the cyoa reddits to see this whole drama for myself, I'm not sure if I should be flattered or insulted that most of my oc hasn't ended up there.

>>54981830
>I'm not sure if I should be flattered or insulted that most of my oc hasn't ended up there.
You're literally >Anonymous, so I'm not sure, maybe that's to be expected?

>>54981813
To be fair he probably hasn't even seen any of SDA's cyoas. He hasn't been around for very long.

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>>54981766
>Are we talking first one to enforce orgasm wins?
What weak sauce do you think I make? You will battle fuck your enemy and give them multiple orgasms and once they have reached their orgasm limit, you will fuck them unconscious and that is how you win. The system will work for PvP, but I think I will include a single player mode since people don't seem to like PvP in CYOAs.

Has the update to the Pokemon cyoa came out yet? If not how much longer?

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For CYO/u/, would you rather have a waifu builder with points to manage? Or would you rather have a more open-ended questionnaire with the point system relegated to other sections of the CYOA?

>>54981709
Nigga are you saying you have more mechanical depth than fucking Stardust? Now I know you're just shitting out of your mouth.

>>54981625
Give the name and a short description of each of the sections and I'm sure the thread will figure out an order.

>>54981810
They did.......queer

>>54981904
>Nigga are you saying you have more mechanical depth than fucking Stardust?
Of course I am! The End might have been a shitposting CYOA, but it had much more mechanical depth then Stardust.

>>54981856
>since people don't seem to like PvP in CYOAs.
PvP is just more work to resolve builds for.

Are you going to do much in terms of balance? I mean, there's usually some OP build if it's based on actual RPG resolution mechanics.

Speaking of, does it involve dice rolling? (It probably does.) That's another annoyance for CYOAs a lot of times.

>>54981904
>are you saying you have more mechanical depth than fucking Stardust?
Stardust doesn't have much mechanical depth. It's just another run of the Powerarmor CYOA system where you're bumping up stat lines.

>>54981150
Can you send things into the prison with magic or something? What sort of gifts might Tiamat appreciate on Mother's Day?

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>>54981932
Sounds like a real, cool, story bro.

>>54981932
Post it my broderino. Let me see, buddy.

>>54981937
>Stardust doesn't have much mechanical depth
If you say so. I guess that doesn't mean much when you're a Tok fan.

>>54981873
>Pokemon cyoa
Someone gets a boner playing Pokemon

>>54981986
>If you say so. I guess that doesn't mean much when you're a Tok fan.
I'm a Dr. Divergent fan, fuckboy.

But unlike SDA, Tok actually produces content, so I may as well discuss it with him.

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>>54982017
>But unlike SDA, Tok actually produces content

>>54982017
have a (you)

>>54981932
>I have nothing to show so I'll just be an epic troll XD
Really don't see what others see in you

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>>54981937
>Are you going to do much in terms of balance?
Yes, very much. I intend to make it as balanced as possible. If I see some cheese when I release it I will nerf the cheese. But I won't have to since it will be almost perfectly balanced from the begining.
>I mean, there's usually some OP build if it's based on actual RPG resolution mechanics.
Well Battle Sluts will be based on a RPG system I wrote from scratch so it will be very balanced, since I like Guthix, is a god of balance.

>Stardust doesn't have much mechanical depth. It's just another run of the Powerarmor CYOA system where you're bumping up stat lines.
This, compare Stardust to Infected or Nemesis and you will see what I mean.

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>>54981150
Monster Boy (Dragon)
Normal
Flier
GodBlooded
Goring Horns
Wise Mien
Extra Mien
Mesmerizing Mien
Fanged Maw
Grasping Arms
Membrane Wings (Free)
Taloned Legs
Coiling Tail
Extra power x5
Extra Magic x1
Extra Speed x2
Fire Control
Regeneration
Aura (Free)
Aureola
All Sunderer
Thousand Cuts
Trumpeter
Freedom

>>54982017
Hi Imaginos

I guess SDA was really right about you, huh

>>54982044
>If I see some cheese when I release it I will nerf the cheese.

That's why I don't post builds for new CYOAs desu. I wait until the author has lost interest first.

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>>54982014
If the Pokemon are cute girls. I was wandering if that Pokemon humanized cyoa got an update yet.

>>54981887
The second one.
How would a builder even work if the girls are pre-built?

>>54981810
There was a trap maid CYOA recently.

>>54982017
SDA made a better CYOA in one weekend just to cuck Tok and promises to bring even more. Hate him all you want, he makes OC.

>tfw /cyoag/ is going to drown in SDA's shit posting, Tok's narcissism and drama by new namefags.
>tfw /cyoag/ need a hero namefag to save it.
>tfw no hero.

>>54982074
pls link or post

>>54982102
We're off to a great thread.

>>54982098
>SDA made a better CYOA in one weekend
The new one that used the Battlemage template? That wasn't good, you understand that right?

One day Dumbledalf will come back and set you all straight.

>>54982102
or, all namefags could just take their namefagging to a traditional forum where popularity contests and reputation dickwaving is both easier and more in vogue

And just go back to posting anon

you can only really ever have extended drama here when you can attach names to something thread after thread, otherwise it always falls apart after three threads tops

>>54982108
It was in the /trash/ thread that fell off the board. Nobody's made a new one yet.

>>54982102
I would, but I don't namefag and I find shitposting entertaining.
I'll just keep writing my rough draft and watch the thread burn.
Hopefully it doesn't die before I finish my OC. Would suck if I never got to post it once done.

>>54981887
Can I have a giant robot to defend my waifu with?

>>54982119
>That wasn't good, you understand that right?
It was fine, not the best. Much better than Eronomicon, to be honest. The best part was that the characters were more well written than anything TokHaar has put out.

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>>54982108

>>54982119
Hi Dumbledalf

>>54982102
Italics will save us if they ever make a real cyoa instead of a thrown together waifu cyoa.

>>54982156
>It was fine, not the best. Much better than Eronomicon, to be honest.
No, it wasn't. You know what my build was like for that one?

"I can have all the perks? Okay, I guess it's some curse thing. I take them all."
"Right, so with all that, these bandits are toast instantly."
"Oh, it's amount of orgasms, that's what, 10 a day? I can do that without all these magic powers."

Then I looked over the magic powers and the waifus, and they were all Intensely Boring.

>>54982188
>Italics will save us
Dumbledalf will save you. Look to the CYOA of yore.

>>54982072
They're not pre-built.
People keep seeming to think that the companions are the waifus when that is not the case. You can indeed choose for a companion to be your waifu, though.
>>54982144
Yes. That is already an option.

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>>54982057
>Imaginos
Imaginos is just an inferior Zynthia rip off.

>>54982102
> /cyoag/ need a hero to save it.
How about Dumbledore? >>54982119

I have arule about posting not WIP but I feel like rules are ment to be broken so here you go, what do you think about Battle Sluts so far? Will change the color scheme and the layout later.

Know what could be a fun /d/ cyoa?

Magic school where you pick either student and learn to use lewd magic or pick professor and have fun mindfucking your students

>>54982201
the old will be surpass

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>>54982216
>pic

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>>54981422

Yellow 1
Green 2
Blue 1
Purple 3
Pink 5
Red 2
Black 0

>Primary School Pink
5 Points
>Divine Radiance
Mana Regeneration
>Summon Deity Upgraded
3
>Empower Upgraded (Summon Tentacles Upgraded and Incubate Upgraded)
1
>Empower Second Purchase (Liquid Production Upgraded)
0

>Secondary School Green
2 Points
>Invigorate Upgraded

>Boons
7 Points
>Immortality
2
>Embrace Corruption
0

>Corruption
3 Pink, 1 Green, 5 Any Color
>Nymphomaniac
1 Pink
>Orgasm Denial
3 Pink
>Fairy Rapists
2 Green
>Elf Girl
1 Colorless
>Mana Tanks
3 Colorless
>Accidental Summoning
4 Colorless
>Spirited Away
5 Colorless

>being a forest elf is a hard life
>constantly incubating eggs and producing milk for the Goddess of Bees
>at least she fills the woods with beautiful sweet-smelling flowers…
>regularly raped by fairies
>at least they tend to our forest home….
>occasionally raped by monster girls
>at least they help protect the us….
>sent to the abyss to be raped by tentacle monsters when I’m naughty
>guess I should always behave then….
>forced to store mana in uncomfortably large boobs
>guess that’s the price of being magic….

>>54982201
>Intensely Boring
They weren't the greatest, but they felt much more human than the cookie-cutter sluts TokHaar writes.

Also don't understand why you shill Dumbledalf so much. Everything he made aged like milk.

>>54981661

I said war and politics and I apologized later.

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>>54981474

This was insanely difficult to choose for, but I think I have it.

>Magical Essence
Yellow:4
Green: 5
Blue: 6
Purple: 3
Pink: 2
Red:1
Black:1

>Schools
Green Primary
Blue Secondary

>Mana Regeneration
Shapeshifter

>Spells: Green
Gender Swap
Upgraded Alter Age
Transform

>Spells: Blue
Upgraded Mind Sculpt
Summon Person

>Boons (Remaining Spell Points:15)
Mana Conduit: Internal Ley Lines

>Corruption (2 Blue, 2 Green)
Mental Change
Magic Feedback

>ITT: tokhaar and his shills ruin the thread all over again
I really can't think of a worse time in this general's history.

and I'm just here waiting for necro battle mage

>>54982324
which one is that

>>54982332
you know the necromancer thing? Guy once said he'd do a battlemage esque thing in the same universe. (I think. I hope Im not crazy.)

>>54982319
>I really can't think of a worse time in this general's history.
That's how I feel when you showed up

>>54982216
>How about Dumbledore?
'Dalf', the name is similar I know, but not the same.

>what do you think about Battle Sluts so far?
It's a bit generic, honestly.

I'm not a fan of three classes, nor do I care for the standard square card pictures. The picture you posted is ant-sized however.

>>54982287
>Everything he made aged like milk.
Into delicious kefir. Worship him.

>They weren't the greatest, but they felt much more human than the cookie-cutter sluts TokHaar writes.
I just read over them again. "Stony tsundere, stony tsundere, stony tsundere..." "No one dared challenge her inquiries!" It's like a twilight fan fiction.

I'm sorry, but I do vastly prefer Tok's, like in Super Prison.

>>54982303
>I said war and politics
Same thing. Kindly go back to your mental tribadism, we do not need such female "apologies" here.

Which authorfag writes the best characters and lore?

>>54982371
>I'm sorry, but I do vastly prefer Tok's
The shit taste in this post is palpable.

>>54982418
You should brush your teeth

>>54982371
You do realize that TokHaar writes worse than Twilight fanfiction? I hardly even consider them characters.

It seems to me you just have a hateboner for SDA. I actually think you are Imaginos.

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>>54981478

>Magic
Arcane Missile
Arcane Shotgun
Ascension Ritual
Barrier
Body Enhancement Rank 2
Dispel
Flight Rank 2
Heal rank 1
Immortality
Magic Immunity
Meteor
Pocket Plane Rank 2
Summon
Suspend biology
Telekinesis
Transformation Rank 2

>Special Magic
Dimensional Traveler
Sentient Energy Ball x2

>Negatives
Paranormal Magnet
Specialist (Illusion, Divination)

>Factions
Neutral

>Magician Society Offer
Talk to the hand

>Pact
Celestial Fury, the Bleeder

>>54982459
>I actually think you are Imaginos.
I think you're SDA

>>54982385
Certainly none that were mentioned in this thread so far. Except for maybe Italics.

>>54982418
>The shit taste in this post is palpable.
If you like the edgy crap waifus in Sexcapades, I'm not sure what your reference of judgement is.

I probably prefer MOST other waifus to them, including Tok's.

>"but some would say she had a warm interior and a cold, hard exterior, just like her game."
It's fanfic level.

>>54982459
>You do realize that TokHaar writes worse than Twilight fanfiction? I hardly even consider them characters.
The difference is they're FUNNY.

>>54982435
Ahh, the legacy of Dalf, returning to to us. That one isn't as good as the original though. Too much silliness with the cryptids.

Island Survivals should be clean. Pure. A few creative entries each. Mmmmm.

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>>54982458
V - v ) / t ) ( ½ ( V + v ) t. Here v is the produce a constant accelerations a = ( V - v ) / t and a. What is the work done by the product of the change in causing a displacement x? We have, for constant force on the square of mass m, will produce a constant force, acting on a particle is equal to the product of the resultant force, acting on a particle of mass of a body. If we represent kinetic energy of the body. If we represent kinetic energy of the kinetic energy by the square of its speed at tim.

No.

>>54982385
Personally, I think Italics takes the cake in this regard.
His approach to hiding a lot of the lore in the Companion descriptions instead of flooded other pages with it has always struck a chord with me.
Not all his characters are top tier, but the ones that are are fucking great.

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>>54982514
Is Italics the one that did Pokemon or choose a goddess?

>>54982547
He did both Anon.

>>54982563
Oh, too bad, I dislike both

>>54982514
companion descriptions is the worst place to put it, it's literally the tl;dr section of any cyoa

>>54982371

I don't think there was much tribbing in >>54982286

>>54982507
I didn't know underaged children were allowed to post here.

>>54982385
I thought scientist did ok. At least with lore of the land kinda stuff. Dont remember too much about how his character depth was.

>>54982507
>The difference is they're FUNNY.
They really aren't, Tok.

Do you guys hate Trips today, or love them. I lost my calendar so I can't look it up

>>54982610
>underaged children
As opposed to adult children?

Dumbass

>>54982637
both, like every other day, moron

>>54982638
So you're a manchild? That explains your aimless rambling no one cares about.

is there no /trash/ thread?

>>54982638
well he's not wrong, most people here are adult children

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>>54982637
I like getting trips, it's always nice to see them in my post numbers. Never got lucky trips but I was Satan once.

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>>54981150
One is all.

>Monster
>Colossal (60)
>Serpentine
>Animal
>Wise mein
>Engulfing maw (58)
>Coiling tail
>Extra power 2x (48)
>Extra magic 4x (28)
>Extra speed 2x (18)
>Aura (15)
>Aureola (11)
>toxicity (7)
>Gloriole (2)
>Trumpeter

>11 power
>10 magic
>6 speed

>Twilight of the gods

How I came here... Doesn't matter.

Just another villager that got caught in the god's 'holy' fire. But in my last moments, I wanted... No, I needed revenge.

That wish made sure my soul didn't flow off to hell. It went to a land few had ever been for a while, and I met the all-mother.

She was my chance for revenge, and I took it. I became serpentine, able to slip out of any chains meant to hold me. My body was truly massive, just like my soul's will, and my hate became toxic.

When I slithered to the mountain, I found my village. people burnt to a crisp. And so, it is now my goal, to end the god's reign.

I am Jormungandr. And I will swallow the world.

(Anyone else wanna make massive kaiju beasts?)

>>54982650
Takes a while longer for people to make it over there than over here is all. Check back tomorrow or whatever and I'm sure itl be back.

>>54982650
Doesn't look like it. I want to post the update to Healslut but I guess it can wait.

>>54982649
Says the guy who's argument is calling people kids

>>54982662
>662
So close buddy. So close.

>>54982689
You really gotta calm down, Tok.

So, kancolle cyoa author here. I saw people say in the last thread that the setting wasn't explained well enough. Anyone have any specifics?

>>54982707
>Sigh
And of course if they don't agree with you then they must be the author.

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>>54982610
>I didn't know underaged children were allowed to post here
They're not. Given that you don't know the rules, I'd imagine you're too young to be here, and should leave.

>>54982631
>They really aren't, Tok.
Look at this picture. Gaze upon its magnificence.

Each choice a meaningful tale. A creative vision. You're nothing before him.

>>54982608
>I don't think there was much tribbing in >>54982286
Only one yellow point. I'm not sure there was even much much 'being alive' there.

I sincerely hope is was "Impregnation", to avoid total uselessness on your part.

>>54982735
Never saw it. Post it and I will give feedback.

>>54982739
If it's any consolation, I actually think you're a manchild babbling about shit nobody cares about.

>>54981709
>tok is the insane bitch who thinks you telling them to fuck off is your way of saying you love them

worst timeline

>>54982784
Guess that makes two of us then

>>54982741
It's shit desu

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Pls no fight

>>54982385
Italics is truly the best at characters and lore when they make an actual cyoa.

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>>54982755
Just a foreword, I know that's its design is too compressed, last thread made that the priority problem.

>>54982808
It's his defensive mechanism.

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>it's a wishfulfillment CYOA
>its a thinly veiled porn CYOA

why do fags whorepost for (you)s

>>54982741

>Only one yellow point. I'm not sure there was even much much 'being alive' there.

What does that even mean? There are plenty of good choices for the other colors. Yellow point was milking.

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>>54982857
that*
Some of its options are blank, but those options are for narrative purposes right now.

>>54982808
>tok is that narcissistic cunt who you decide to fuck because crazies are supposed to be good in bed but she's no good at that either
deepest lore

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>>54982883

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>>54982899

>>54982855
I disagree but respect your opinion

>>54982507
>>54982741
Forgot your name senpai.

>>54982857
I think another anon said this already, but somehow trying to read this made my eyes hurt. I dislike wide formats, but for some reason my brain refuses to even comprehend whats in front of me.

>>54982919
I respect your opinion, but I want you to explain further. Are you disagreeing with "Italics making best lore" or "when they make an actual cyoa" part.

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>>54982916

>>54982894
>instead she loves watching you date and fuck other girls
We must go deeper

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>>54982955

>>54982940
What if you try to zoom out, to put the entire width in a single screen?

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>>54982880
>There are plenty of good choices for the other colors.
That may be so, but somehow you managed to avoid Ahegao and Cum.

Are you some kind of lesbian fun-vampire?

>>54982784
>>54982819
I'm actually neither of those people, you shits.

>>54982821
>It's shit desu
Once upon a time, this thread had quality CYOAs, quality builds, and actual writefagging.

That was before the FILTH of Angel, SDA, and Bliss made this place about face-tribbing soap operas and +1 statline garbage.

GLORY to Dumbledalf, may he light your way back home.

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>>54982952
...both

>>54983006

>cum

Gross.

>>54981422
Y: 7
G: 6
Blue: 3
Pur: 6
Pin: 10
R: 4
Black: 7
All: 43
Primary: Pink
Secondary: Green
Mana regeneration: Power of Worship
Spells: Pink - Summon deity (u) (-2), Divine portal (u) (-2), Empower (u) (-2) - (Summon succubus, Enslave), Divine gift(u) (-2) - (Hex), Divine blessing (-1), Power word: stop (-1)
Green: Shrink (u) (-2), Enlarge (u) (-2), Gender swap (u) (-2)
Mana point: 26
Boons point: 27
Boons: Signature spell (-10) - (Divine portal), Hidden power (-10) - (Normalify), Immortality (-5)
Corruption:
Pink (5) - Sadist (-1), Slave (-2), Nymphomaniac (-1), Sissyfication (-1)
Green (3) - Mental change (-2), Random transformation (-1).
Question:
Signature spell will nullify cost of divine portal?
Can i shrink myself?
Can i enlarge my deity or her succubus?
Can i give "Divine gift" to my deity?
What happens if i cast Normalify on my giant sadistic deity, who wants to crush or eat some people? They will attack her?
Can i use normalify on me?
Can i use "gender swap" to my deity or succubus?
Can my deity turn her succubus to incubus?

>>54983006
>I'm actually neither of those people, you shits.
Wait so if you're not me, and you're not him....who are you?

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>>54983032
manly bits

>>54982961
>she's afraid of real intimacy and tries to poison her relationships to keep things from getting too real

>>54983006
Yeah, it's shit.

>>54983052
>who are you?
A... messenger.

>>54983032
>>cum
>Gross.
How do you even touch other women if you don't like the fluids they excrete?

You didn't even pick "Normalization".

>>54983059

No thanks.

>>54983095

I don't really date anymore.

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Who would make a good mother?

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>>54983220
The box.

>>54983220
oddly enough, I think Titania

>>54983188
You're weird.

>>54983246
>>54983220
>Implying it wouldn't be Lalu.

>>54983220
Yila or Lalu

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>>54983084
>Yeah, it's shit.
>>54983188
>I don't really date anymore.
There's your problem. Both of you.

I recommend immediately beginning the worship of Dumbledalf and waiting his Second Coming, so that the world of CYOAs will be reborn, and with it inspiration to enjoy LIFE again.

I understand, reading SDA vs. Tok threads all day can destroy the will of even the most submissive lesbian, but really, giving yourself to Dumbledalf and his ways can help you.

I mean, I'LL still almost certainly loathe and despise you for every single "my world is an angelic mankilling paradise" thread, but at least you'll be contributing to the greater good.

There's always the option of choosing Hypnotism, Mind Control, and Mind Break if you'd like a bull-dyke to help you in your devotion to the future of /cyoag/.

>>54983220
>Who would make a good mother?
Kurka. Genetic psykers. No one says she has to raise the children to 'mother' them.

>>54983271

Yeah I know.

>>54983297

What?

>>54983188
>gets raped
>becomes man hating "lesbian"
>gets beat up by gf
> gives up on dating
Would you consider yourself asexual now?

>>54981416
>>54981431
>>54981445
>>54981459
>>54981478
>Magic
Arcane Explosion
Arcane Missile
Arcane Shotgun
Barrier
Body Enhancement Rank 2
Convenience
Dispel
Domination
Heal Rank 2
Invisibility
Light Beam
Meteor
Sex Magic
Suspend Biology
Transformation Rank 2
True Sight

>Special Magic
Conditional Magic
Dimensional Travel
Quick Magic
Repeating Magic

>Negatives
Demon Lord
Paranormal Magnet
Specialist (Space)

>Faction
None

>Pact
None

If a Mage with 20 points is equivalent to a supernova, I am the big bang. Every spell of mine but Domination has a 1/4th of a second cast time, and my Conditional Magic is set up to heal me from critical damage or to Dominate whatever I point at. Repeating Magic can be combined with Dispel to utterly ruin someone, while Sex Magic, Suspend Biology, Convenience, and Dimensional Travel are more for personal fun. If Meteor wasn't Conjuration, I could be an even greater monster (or if I was willing to give up Invisibility).

A Demon Lord will be a fun challenge, then the Paranormal Magnet should keep things fun. No factions and no pacts, I am a one man army.

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>>54983220
>>54983235

P.P best choice

>>54981625
Go to the discord for when you feel like writing a diary.

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>>54983333
>What?
It's about repentance, Angel. Making things right again.

You, along with the others of the Dreary Triad, SDA and Bliss, shit this place up for YEARS.

Every other thread was smug anime girls, penis envy, and "I will NOT remove The Culling, MY STORYLINE, these GRAPHICS will make you LOVE IT".

I did love The Culling, you know Angel, I really did. But it has to stop, and you can help with that.

Study the ways of Dumbledalf, make /cyoag/ habitable again. You can do it.

Titania so cute. She is my type of yandere.

>>54983375

You know that casting repeating dispel on someone will dispel itself right?

Whenever the target is dispelled, repeating magic is cleared.

>>54983377
>>54983235
Can P.P even get pregnant with human's child?

>>54983293
>Yila
Al she is going to do is force her child to take on the mantle of a extinct race.

>>54983297
>Kurka
Bat shit insane woman. Probably would experiment and kill her child.

>>54983436
Oh, then I'll just repeat sex magic or something then. THEY CAN'T FIGHT ME IF THEY ARE CONSTANTLY ORGASMING

>>54983436
infinite spin magic when

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>>54981162
>>54981150
>Monster Girl, Medium sized, Bipedal, Chaotic in form.

Ornamental Sensory Horns (11)
Fanged, Engulfing Maw (7)
Grasping, Dexterous, Clawed Arms.(16)
Weaving, Diving Wings (8)
Weaving Legs (3)
Coiling, Weaving Tail (11)

Pneumaphagy (Freebie)
Spelltongue (6)
Mimicry (3)
Regeneration (6)
Overdrive (3)
Earth Control (5)
Wind Control (4)
Lightning Control (3)
Extra Speed 2x (10)

Nike

Power8
Magic8
Speed8

The path of freedom lays ahead.
My form has some definition, but my essence and form is mercurial, shifting and changing to my whims. Spells and magic shift skin and bone and sinew as needed; my face will be forgotten soon enough by any who've seen it.

A world of possibilities with a new life, and the only justice I can offer the gift-giver is to stay alive as long as I can. Divine authorities have sway in the world, but contesting them would likely be my demise; an unkind return on the Mother's investment. Civilization calls. Perhaps a monster can live among them again, however briefly at times.

>>54983444
>>Kurka
>Bat shit insane woman. Probably would experiment and kill her child.
Maybe the pregnancy hormones would help her with her condition.

I hear they're a wonderful drug, right Angel? >>54983436

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>>54983444
>Can P.P even get pregnant with human's child?

I'm gonna find out, After I take her hand in marriage and we go on our honeymoon

>>54983421
>>54983297
>>54983006
These three aren't Dumbledalf's. I was there, I should know.

>>54983421

Eh, not interested.

>>54983366

No. I'm les.

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>>54981150
(100 +15)
pwr: 1 +7 +1 +1 +1
mag: 1 +6 +1 +2 +1
spd: 1 +2 +1 +3

>Body
monster
Colossal (75): +7pwr +6mag +2spd +trumpeter +notorious
Other: +1pwr +1perk
Chaotic: +1pwr +pneumaphagy
>Parts *****

///Head
Terrifying Mien * (72)
Engulfing Maw (70)
Gaping Maw: +1spd (66) **

///Limbs
Tentacle Arms (63)
Weaving Arms: +1mag (59) ***
Grasping Legs (57)
Spear Legs: +1pwr (54)****
Coiling Tail: +1pwr (51)
Pincer Tail (49)
Weaving Tail: +2mag (45) *****

Extra Maw x3 (42)
Gaping Maw x3: +3spd (30)

>Perks (1free)
Extra Magic: +1mag
Extra speed: +1spd (25)
Aura (22)
Aureola (18)
Overdrive (15)
Regeneration (9)
+Pneumaphagy

>Shastra Astras
Gloriole (4)
Nike (0)
+trumpeter

>Drawbacks
ravenous hunger +15

>Twilight of the Gods

Į́̕͜'M̷̢͘͝ ̷̵S̶͟Ǫ̀͟ ͡F̛́͜U̴̷̧͢͠C͝͝Ḱ̸̢Ì͡N̶͟G̢̛͟ ̴̨͘͠M̵̢A͜͞D́͜ ̷̀Ŕ̕͜͡I̶͡G̸̛͜H̨́T̨́͢ ̀͠͞N͜͟͡͞O̴̧͞Ẁ̷̕ ̴̛͢͠I̸ ͠C͠O͝Ų̵̵̕͟L̸̢͡D̢̡̛ ̡̡͢͢͟Ȩ̵̧A̷͜Ţ̶͘͞ ̴̡̧̛͠Ţ͜Ḩ̷͞͠͞È̴͝ ̵̶̨F̷̸̴̢͘U̵͝C̴̴͠K̢͝͠I̴͞Ǹ̶̨̧͟G̨̧̀̀͘ ̷̧͢͝U̢͠N̕͝͝I̷̶̵̛V̶̢͜͠͡Ę̸̢R̶̀͝͠S̴̨͢E̴Ą̸̨͘͝A̶͠A̢̕A̛͜͡A͝͡͡A̷À̕A̡͠A̡̛̕A̴̴͢À͜͝Á̡A̷̛͝͠

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>>54983489
>These three aren't Dumbledalf's. I was there, I should know.
Then you should ALSO know that this is about the cult of Dumbledalf's return, and each emanation of his magnificence.

You will note the touch of superiority in these elements of his legacy. How much more PURE they are than the recent filth.

>>54983556
>Eh, not interested.
I know, Angel, I know.

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>>54981150
>>54981162
Having speed and power sound stupidly fun

>Monster boy
>Normal Size
>Biped
>Animal
>Sensor Horns
>Mesmerizing mien
>Grasping arms
>feathered wings
>coiling tail
>Extra power
>Extra speed
>Overdrive
>Regeneration
>Nike
>Twilight of the Gods

Magic is for weakling gods who's about to get hurt

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>>54983588
>>54983558
>>54982664
Y'all seem to have a good shot at getting along.

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One of my favroot CYOAs.

>Class: Identity Thief.
Best class d e s u. Great potential for mayhem.

>Skill: Changeling.
Even better.

>Tool: Pocket Watch.
May as well.

Now I'll go ahead and body snatch all sorts of politicians or celebrities and make them sperg out in public, making them say crazy shit and framing them for so many crimes they'll never be able to bury it. I'll go around causing chaos like that until the public's impression of these people is a bunch of retards. Then I'll laugh and cry because I'm dead inside.

>>54983682
>that fucking green
ow.

>>54983583
I mean, this place has gone to the dogs and I know you're just trying to put it back in order. But there's no reason to be besmirching the good name of Dalf with my rubbish. He can ruin his own reputation. I'm still waiting on that magic spell game he promised us five years ago.

>>54981422

Hey, question about Unleash Hell: Is it always just instant explosions, or can it be a gradual buildup? If so, it could actually be a workable pacifist-run spell against violent dudes. I mean, if you just make someone piss themselves they'll probably still attack you, y'know? But make someone need to piss, and they'll have to choose between leaving you be or chasing after you with a constant distraction.

I mean, yeah, electrolyze is better for this sort of thing, but it's not plausibly deniable. With Discrete Spellcasting, Unleash Hell can be blamed on the victim rather than some weird magic man.

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Right, let's try this again. Guardains CYOA v3 is ready. As always, constructive criticism is appreciated.

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Part 2. Skills have been added, as well as some balance tweaks.

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>>54983740

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Part 3. I might consider dding missions if people think they will improve things.

Sequel in the works for those that do.

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>>54983682

>>54983678
>Class
Archaelogist
Time travel, my man, TIME TRAVEL
>Skill
Invisibility
Didnt like most of the others
>Tool
Pocket watch
Time control

>>54983638
We're team Wreck Shit, That one >>54982664 is the smart one. This guy >>54983558 is the pretty one. And I'm the crazy one.

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>>54983788

>>54983760
Oh hey, I made a build for this recently. What did you change?

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>>54983695
>But there's no reason to be besmirching the good name of Dalf with my rubbish.
Shh, it's okay. You've done a great service for the Church my good anonymous person.

>I'm still waiting on that magic spell game he promised us five years ago.
And he will undoubtedly flagellate himself publicly in penance for that, such that the drops of blood whipped off his back can bless us evermore.

As soon as he casts down the rest of these preening namefaggots into their own special tumblrized hell-pits.

>>54983740
It's not shitty but you can't really do builds for it due to the nature of the quests.

>>54983814
A few tweaks to the perks for the general and sphinx. Slight changes to other things for balance. Also, there are skills now so there's one more choice to add to your build.

>>54983975
Instead of making a "build" you imagine how you would complete the various tasks, then how you would spend your loot.

>>54983806
As the designated smart one of team wreck shit, I've got to question you making >>54983558 the pretty one.

Most people don't find shoggoths attractive, anon.

>>54983981
>Slight changes to other things for balance
I hate when people do this. My autism activates.

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>>54981422
My stats:
>yellow (9 spell points)
>green (4 spell points)
>blue (6 spell points
>purple (0)
>pink (0)
>red (10 spell points)
>black (1 spell point)

Chosen Eromancy:

>Blue (Primary)
-mindsculpt (upgraded)
-summon person (upgraded)
>6 points total used (3 blue corruption points)

Green (Secondary)
-gender swap (original)
-age manipulation (original)
-transformation (original)
-shrink (original)
>Total of 4 points (2 Green corruption points)

>Mana Points: 20
>Mana regeneration: Transformation (24/day)

>Corruption:
-Mental Change (2 Green points)
-Elf Girl-High Elf (1 Blue point)
-Magic Feedback (2 Blue Points)

>Boons: (I have 20 points to spare)
-Immortality (5)
-Planeswalker (15)
-Earth
-High-Fantasy realm, anywhere I could learn more magic and where magic is limitless in capability, and safe.

I'm a high elven wizard roaming a tech world (Earth) and a high-fantasy world; using my transformations I could easily replenish my mana by about 20 points per day with gender swap.

It wouldn't be too hard for me to explore both realms as I could change my size and transform into an eagle; I also never age and could summon a companion and sculpt their mind to be loyal to me. I could also sculpt the minds of those around me so that I may easily ask them for assistance (Hell, I can summon a Gandalf copy and ask him to teach me every magic he knows; he doesn't have powers but he knows the spells)

I'll then use up an eternity of my time perfecting all forms of magic and improving both my mana capacity and regeneration. After about a hundred years I should have enough power to enjoy life in both worlds just cruising and shit with my waifu. (I'm an elf girl but I can gender swap)

>>54983993
Sorry, but it needed doing. Too many people taking the sphinx blood artifact since it didn't really have a downside, which is not in keeping with the themes of the CYOA. So I changed it.

I hope your Autism will understand.

>>54984005
No, I didn't mean the balance part, I meant the vagueness. It makes me want to compare each version side by side, word by word to see every change.

>>54983682
Shepard of Evil
Grudge
Ritual (9)
Degenracy, Rage and Oathbreaking
>Strength Tier 1 (8)
>Mobility Tier 1 (7)
>Incognition Tier 5 (2)
>Magic Tier 3 (-1)
>Infectiounsness Tier 2 (-3)
>Dependency Tier 4 (-7)

>Weakness to sunlight (-2)
>Can't hurt virtuous humans (0)

Start a cult promising people eternal life as a lust spirit.

>>54983464

What? I'm not angel. I don't even know how you came to that conclusion, considering my post was about dispel unable to be used as repeating magic.

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>>54977676
How did 5 posts about conduit fanworlds summon a discussion about time wizardry?
>>54973893
>>54974089
Anything good come out of it?

>>54983760
>>54983981
>Slight changes to other things
Speaking of, the "discretion advised" under The Dark One has a black 'd' at the end. I'm not sure if this is intended.

Query: Since The Dark One is clearly the best and only choice in this cyoa, does she have a supple pussy which may be serviced by tongue?

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>>54983990
Sometimes you just have to find the right shoggoth Anon.

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>>54983990
There are multiple kinds of attractive shoggoths, from the human....

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>>54984165
to the not

>>54984058
on the subject of conduit, what is the point value of Crucible's Unwelcome Guest? It's unlisted.

>>54984065
Discretion advised black d is a typo. a few things slip through the net.

With regards to the dark one's genetals. Sure, why not? go nuts. I disagree that she's the best choice though. It's sad to see so little love for the Galleon and Behemoth.

>>54983760
>>54983773
>>54983790
>Shrine
Crumbling Colossus

>Perk, Drawback, Skill
Mobile Fortress
Mobile Fortress
Siege Mode

>Reward
Health

>Artifact
General's Drum

>Starting Activity
Into the Fray!

>Camp
None

>Theater of Battle
Heart of Battle

I am a true disciple of the Colossus. I will be a bulwark for my allies, and charge into the very heart of the battle to wreck chaos. Then, once I am there, I will shift into my Siege Mode and provide a supreme tactical advantage of having a fortress on the absolute front lines. With this, we can spear into the enemies forces, and then use me as a shield and resting spot as we clear them from the sides and push them back. With the incessant beating of the General's Drum I will be a rallying cry to all in the heat of battle. Both bastion and inspiration.

I will inevitably accrue more damage than other Colossi with my strategy, but winning the war is worth it. My only wish is, if I should die before the war ends, I die in Siege Mode so my corpse can be used as a fortress.

>>54984221
>It's sad to see so little love for the Galleon and Behemoth.
Those are somewhat predictable low-picks for tgers:
Galleon has a lack of personal power, /tg/ often does not pick options that place control outside the individual.
Similarly, Behemoth removes control for emotional rage, thus may not be favored.

Galleon would be viewed more like an NPC, while Behemoth like cannon fodder.
/tg/ favors personally powerful knights and wizards, usually.

>With regards to the dark one's genetals. Sure, why not? go nuts. I disagree that she's the best choice though.
Or do you? If you're permitting pussy worship, she can't be anything but the best choice.

Lewd Guardians CYOA when?

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>>54984268

Thanks for posting the build. It's really nice to see someone get into the setting like that.

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>>54982857
Okay, since the cyoa is apparently unreadable as is, how's this?

>>54984365
>Okay, since the cyoa is apparently unreadable as is, how's this?
For whatever reason, looking at that CYOA makes me too angry to read it. It might be good, it might not. It just has some sort of rage inducing property.

I suspect it has to do with the back and forth nature of the text placement. Maybe the fonts.

>>54984207
1 is default if unlisted
annoying considering there are 1s listed as costs for perks as well but there you are

>>54984365
>>54984382
make a subliminal messaging cyoa next

>>54984382
>rage inducing property
Not sure if serious. And what do you mean back and forth text placement?

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some WIP you might see in a day or two as I finish up some loose ends. look forward to it!

>>54984365
This looks a lot better than before. Good work.

>>54984421
>Not sure if serious.
I am actually serious. Maybe it's the fuzzy background for the text boxes?

>And what do you mean back and forth text placement?
Each column where text is placed is slightly off from columns above and below it.

It's just. There's some combination of readability effects going on that causes a... problem.

>>54984398
>make a subliminal messaging cyoa next
Would be fun.

>>54981150
Can you purchase a perk multiple times?

>>54984439
looks nice

>>54984481
the increased stats ones yes, the others would be redundant

>>54984458
The accidental line breaks are ruining the readability?
Also, the background is supposed to look like steel that went through combat. with stains and such. Is it that bad?

>>54981150
>>54981162
So do Spelltongue and Spellsoul do anything beyond act as a shortcut for elemental control?
Do they open up up options for dope-ass sorcery or anything?

>>54983760
If you do add some DLC, some information on the enemy would be cool.

Shrine: Fallen Titan
Perk: Flawless
Drawback: None
Skill: Resilience
Reward: Glory
Artifact: Nameless Wisdom
Activity: Boot Camp
Campsite: Dark Ones
Theater of Battle: Battlefield > Front Lines > Heart of Battle
The Forces of Darkness will find me a difficult foe to take down. Each strike with my sword is filled with purpose and thought, my body as unbreakable as vajra. And though my foes will seek to weather me down as they did my long departed master, they will find me deadlier when backed into a corner with the teachings of the Nameless Hero guiding my body and the magic of the Dark One to bolster my strength even in times of great fatigue.

My master is dead. He's gone. But he's right here with me, in my sword and in my armor. He lives on through us, his disciples. And after this war is won, when even the dust and ashes of our own remains have been grinded down to nothingness, he will live on still through the tales of our valor and strength.

>>54984517
>Also, the background is supposed to look like steel that went through combat. with stains and such. Is it that bad?
That idea alone isn't bad. But those pictures out chose are really kind of blurry. That might be the main problem. Unintentional photographic fnords.

You might want the font to be more sharp and militaristic too.

>The accidental line breaks are ruining the readability?
Maybe just the relative separateness of the textboxes and their lack of aligning pattern?

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>>54981422
Well I discovered I'm an innocent vanilla boy

>>54983760
>>54983773
>>54983790
>Shrine of the Legendary Commander
>Snake's Head
>Ambush

>Glory
>Nameless Wisdom

>Lectures
>Sphinx camps (?)
>Skirmishes

Fear, Oh Fear the Giant-Slayer; Crawling Death with Forme of Men –
Hundred Claws that Hook and Tear, Hundred Teeth that Bite and Gnash,
Hundred Feet that Spread and Flow, Hundred Mouthes that Lurk and Wait.
If it Wakes, then Food is Neare; the Beast is on the Hunt –
Flee, oh Flee the Monster's Den - or Ants eat Beasts for Lunch.

Saw the synergy between 'learning how to kill larger creatures' and 'lots of small soldiers', then built a build around it and added sleep-deprived fluff.

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>>54984549
>photographic fnords
So, the cyoa literally hypnotizes the reader to be unable to read it? Impressive.

>>54984579
>So, the cyoa literally hypnotizes the reader to be unable to read it? Impressive.
No no, it just induces some sort of increasing agitation as you look at it, into which you stare as a deer in the headlights of an oncoming train.

Until the anger gets to a point where you jerkily shakes your eyes back and forth and close it.

>>54984598
Are you sure? It does not invoke rage on me or anything.

>>54984549
Also, the text boxes are aligned. They are of different size, because I have to show both the girl and machine parts, but they are the same distance from the edges and have the same amount of space between them in their row.

>>54984598
I don't know how to fix something so vague. And I'm not going to remake it from scratch, because that's a lot of time.

But at the same time, with no feedback, I can't balance the mission point costs, so I'm kind at a loss here.

>>54984624
Maybe its because some of the blue text have some kind of "glow" to it. Not sure why.

>>54984624
>But at the same time, with no feedback, I can't balance the mission point costs, so I'm kind at a loss here.
I can take it a look using my old build but i am not sure if the cost reductions stack

>>54981150
Can you purchase the Extra Power/Magic/Speed perks more than once?

>>54984624
>Also, the text boxes are aligned. They are of different size, because I have to show both the girl and machine parts, but they are the same distance from the edges and have the same amount of space between them in their row.
Listen. I +suspect+ the first issue is the blurriness of the background images under the text.

And the second issue might be the softness of the font. That should be pretty easy to fix if you used an editor with layers.

And finally, the text in the boxes is often at weird non-euclidean angles from the text in other boxes, while still written in a somehow conversational style. Even though some are titles.

>>54984612
>Are you sure? It does not invoke rage on me or anything.
The only thing that helped was staring into the softly amber eyes of the pale girl with white hair in a black summer dress at the center of the page.

>>54984650
If you mean weapon stage cost reductions, you just take the highest one you have.
But if you take fire support companions, their stage cost reduction does stack with the squad's weapon. Super heavy weapons and fire support have a cooldown though, so they can't be used for every stage.

>>54984669
I'm using paint net. But I don't really know how to use it, since I never used image editing before starting the cyoa. Outside of cropping the print screened images.

>>54984662
See >>54984481 >>54984485

>>54984684
Alright and the mission points are pooled together or the biggest girl is the one who use points?

>>54984692
Pooled together, but each girl pays separately, so if you run out, you can decide which one doesn't pay enough and takes 'damage'. If the damaged girl takes 'damage' again, she's defeated, or activates the emergency system.

>>54984708
Oh, yeah, by paying separately, I mean the stage cost of 100 is split between them, not that every girl has to pay 100 for every stage.

>>54981150

Starting Stats
1 Power
1 Magic
1 Speed

Stating Points: 100

Class: Monster Boy

Size: Normal
+2 Power
+2 Magic
+2 Speed

Body Type: Biped
+1 Power
+1 Speed
+1 Free arm subtype

Monster Type: Crystalline
+3 Magic
-1 Speed

Body Parts
Ornamental Horns (-4)
+1 Magic
Sensor Horns (-4)
+1 Speed
Extra Horns (-1)
Wise Mien (-3)
Weapon Arms (Free)
+1 Power
Weaving Arms (-4)
+1 Magic
Hoofed Legs (-3)
+1 Power
Weaving Tail (-4)
+2 Magic
Total: -23

Perks
Extra Power x5 (-25)
+4 Power
Extra Magic (-5)
+1 Magic
Water Control (-4)
Earth Control (-5)
Spelltongue (-6)
Aura (-3)
Aureola (-4)
Regeneration (-6)
Total: -58

Shastra Astras
Rising Sea (-7)
Land Waker (-7)
Gloriole (-5)
Total: -19

End Total: 0

End Stats
11 Power
11 Magic
4 Speed

I’m vaguely humanoid in some respects, but with hoofed feet, a tail, horns, fangs, and a number of crystalline growths in various places across my body. I have physical and magical power to rival the gods, though fairly average speed. My magic gives me control over earth and water, and between the sheer power of my aura and regeneration I am virtually unkillable.

I’m not particularly interested in continuing the war. I would prefer the bloodshed to end, though I also wish that for the All-Mother to be free again one day. Those two things are likely at odds for now, but perhaps if the fighting were to stop, and generations were to pass in peace, it might be possible.

>>54984058
>How did 5 posts about conduit fanworlds summon a discussion about time wizardry?
pretty sure someone chose immortality- and then there was a thing about immortality

the time wizardry was a consequence of that

all this bickering about authors is pointless

the best CYOA is the saber CYOA and whoever made that is the best

worm CYOA is in 2nd

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>>54984802
I went back and checked.
It's literally someone intentionally bringing it up in order to have a threadlong argument. >>54977091
He's referring to the guardian cyoa by the way.
So conduit has been falsely accused and deserves to have its name cleared.

>>54984692
Might as well keep going with the buildings and stuff. The three buildings you can choose are those from page 4 and the things from page 5 are interiors witch you can choose as much as you want right?

>>54984853
the time wizard question was brought up to redirect shitposting

the original shitposting was about conduit

>>54984853
That's true but before that was a 1/2 thread long argument about aforementioned immortality option. The guilt is there.

>>54984886
>>54984885
You're referring to the chain following >>54975149, which is about spirit of the season and has no connection to conduit.
Also, the claims of 'redirecting' shitposting are dubious. I think more controversial debate topics just means more shitposting. The immortality stuff had already petered out naturally.

>>54984929
well fuck me

in my defense i didnt know where someone picked an immortality option then either

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>>54984929
I have counted the number of conduit posts in the last thread.
There's exactly ten. Two of which link back to an earlier discussion in the thread before that. And two, mindboggingly, complaining about how much conduit posts there are.

>>54981661
I didn't really know her before the whole shtick but she seemed plenty nice to me the one time we talked in the discord

>>54984853
They can base their lives around trading worthless trinkets and play illuminarty on Earth as much as they like, but once they start building a Disneyland on my world I'm going to fly a burning 747 into their world trade center just on principle.

>>54984207
>>54984394
There's no point value because you can't get rid of it.

>>54973957
>tfw no female equivalent of House Neptune

>>54985061
Just anywhere on your world or anywhere close to places you would want to occasionaly go to?

>>54985061
I for one would love to go to a theme park on the sunless sea.

>>54985078
There was the rapebait House. Pretty much Neptune only you have more things trying to blackmail and date rape you.

>>54985229
>the rapebait House

Isn't that all of them?

>>54985289
One is notorious for being full of naive, deer in headlights, follow shady guys into shadier alleyways, budding and usually unwilling victims.

What are some cyoas that let me live in weird worlds?

How complex should a good CYOA be? Is it always better to have more choices and options?

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>>54985312
definitely conduit, it's part of the charm there
there's also a few hero cyoas that took differentiating from 'generic' fantasy in a creative direction

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>>54985334

I'd like a comfy life CYOA, if anyone has one.

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>>54985343

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>>54985350

>>54981150
Type:
Monster Girl

Size:
Huge

Body Type:
Serpentine

Monster Type:
Godblooded

Body Parts: (change both maw slots to arm slots)
Ornamental Horns
Sensor Horns
Extra Horns
Wise Mien
Grasping Arms
Weaving Arms
Feathered Wings
Weaving Wings
Extra Wings x2
Coiling Tail
Weaving Tail

Perks:
Extra Power x6
Extra Magic x3
Extra Speed x5
Spelltongue
Aura

Shestra Astras:
Spellsoul
Thousand Cuts

Draw Backs:
Brooding

Power: 11
Magic: 11
Speed: 11


Twilight of the Gods
One day, these cruel beings that call them selves gods and pass merciless judgement from their lofty perches will be humbled. They will feel what it's like to be at the mercy of another, to be made to answer for their sins and suffer for them. But they will be given a chance to atone. Those that refuse will be washed away in a storm of fury and blood. But not today. Today I must grow stronger so I will be ready for when the time comes.

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>>54985132
I'd want to have gone just to say I have but honestly I don't think I'd have enjoyed it that much. Sunless Sea is scary, yo. Especially if you're a regular mortal.
>>54985061
If you're so above politics and commercialism, what would you spend your time doing?

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>>54983760
>Shrine
The Fallen Titan

>Perk
Learn from the Past
>Flaw
Paragon
>Skill
Resilience

>Reward
Health

>Artifact
Colossus Dust

>Starting Activity
Boot Camp

>Campsite
Dark Ones

Even though the Titan has fallen and the will of those who follow under him wavers, I will carry on for his sake to show all those that sulk for him that he still lives through us. With his might by my side and the power of my fellow guardians as well, I will push the dark back with my sword and shield in hand while protecting my comrades. For I am the unstoppable force to push against this seemingly unmovable army. I will be the one to keep the dark at bay until the dawn comes back to us all!

>>54985410
Er whoops, messed up when I was moving some things around and changed the size. Should be
>Extra Power x4
>Extra Magic x4
>Extra Speed x6

>>54985413
Cool picture. Fire n' winter. I love the contrast of the conflicting landscape.

>>54981162
>Long Slumber
Hold on. We're not biologically immortal? I figured Tiamat's spawn just trucked on until they were killed.

>>54985525
The world is only around 6000 years old so it's far too early to tell whether anyone is biologically immortal in the sense you mean.

>>54985556
Makes sense. I'll finish this build then.

>>54981887
Definitely not a builder.

>>54985556
>6000 years
It's not that old, think like 3000 years, and the gods have ruled after the first 700.

>>54985556
>>54985613
.... its 2017??????????
#lol #i can't even #internet bein dum