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CYOA Thread: Let's forget last thread-edition

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>>54755310
Is our last thread
>https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
Is that pastebin that has good shit and you ought to read
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Does Slut Life Anon still hang around these threads or has he left?
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>>54766110
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>>54766134
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Post our cyoa, you know the one.
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>>54766158
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>>54766165
I can't, it's NSFW.
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>>54766110
>mages only just decriminalized (conveniently during wartime)
>mages forced to join the army as canon fodder
>even little girls some of which show clear mental distress or a reluctance to enter
>no reward or guarantee of post-war freedom for your people whatsoever

Wizard rebellion when?
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New OC
>V2 Changes
Small description change to Heaven Afterlife.
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>>54766261
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>>54766260
>Reincarnation
>Otherworld
>Soulmate
This is by far the best choice. You get a waifu and to get the fuck out of this gay earth.
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>>54766536
And now i noticed that i want to reincarnate in a specific world and i don't want to leave it fuck me.
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>>54766536
But you won't be able to decide which form your new existence takes. You could reincarnate on this world or that, as a rat even. Only with karma can you have some say in your new life.

For me, Reincarnation with Karma and Keep Memory

CYOA unrelated
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>>54766901
Would it really matter if you were reincarnated as a rat? You probably wouldn't even be aware enough to realise how bad a situation you were in.
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>>54767010
Rats are smart enough to suffer and feel depression, so yeah.
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>>54766605
Don't worry, you won't remember being disappointed anyway.
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>>54767021
Ah, point taken.
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The last CYOA I made.
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Warcraft CYOA when
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>>54766260
Oh, this CYOA is a very interesting one.
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>>54767229
Pretty good but where's the waifus?
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>>54766260
>Reincarnation
How hideous. Maybe emphasize the positive aspects of reincarnation a little more to offset the 50% technical 50% horrific ratio that is the current state of its description.
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>>54767327
Wait for the Sister of Battle DLC.
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>>54766239
Are you ashamed of your newest CYOA?
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>>54767394
What do you mean hideous? The description seems fine to me. I don't see what you're on about. I'm not the author btw.
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>>54767425
2 paragraphs: 1 technical 1 negative. Seems a little off-balanced compared to the others. Obviously not intentional, so I am not criticizing the author's concept.
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>>54767423
I don't see why I would be. It's just too explicit to post here.

I also don't believe that censoring/replacing the images is a good excuse.
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>>54766191
Young
Despair
Void S
Undermine A
Abandon A
Carnal A
Reserve A
Stamina A
Siphon A
Defense B
Sword
Minimal, armor
Ash bat
Clean up, slay phantoms
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>>54767394
>>54767425
Author here, yeah Reincarnation does sound more negative from the description. I'll see what I can do. Probably remove being reincarnated into vermin creatures, but still allow normal animals, and change Karma to be just a, pick how you want to live your life, thing,
Thanks for pointing that out.
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>>54767574
It would be nice to ''Know'' how your karma status is currently doing so you might be able to rectify it before dying and reincarnating in a bunny or something.
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>>54767574
Or just mention what kind of unusually good life can be obtained with good karma, so it's not 100% "if you're super evil you live as a maggot over and over". I see no problem with including the negative, just as long as positive is there in equal measure.
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>>54767229
What? No AdMech? Tech-Heresy!
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>>54767574
Maybe make Karma the default, and change the option to Karma Boost, which basically gives you enough positive Karma to push you up to human even if you're a total shit, and lets you get Saint levels of customization if you try at all.
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>>54766260
>Afterlife
>Hell
By far the best option, both from a hedonistic and a moralfag viewpoint.
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>>54766260
Probably Phoenix; it allows me to remain me, while still experiencing what life has to offer.
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>>54767922
>Enjoy succubutt
>Delight your ears with the screams of sinners
I can see the appeal
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>>54766110
>L1A1
>not FAL
This cyoa is not /k/ approved
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>>54768029
What better setting in which to do good works than a Hell where you are immune to every demonic torment?
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>>54768061
Thank you!
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Have you ever gotten most of the way through making a CYOA and suddenly realize there is no incentive to actually play it?
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>>54768307
Many times, It feels like such a waste to have gotten soo far and done soo much for nothing.
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>>54768307
Yes, but normally that only happens when I get to a section that ruins my imagination or build.
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>>54768307
I did that with Horsemen. Multiple times.
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>>54766134
>>54768086
Also both submachine gun choices are from ww2 of course idk when during the cold war this >>54766158
No flamethrower option for westerners in "not Vietnam"
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>>54768356
I take that back there's fire magic
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>>54768307
Sure. That's the point I usually fabricate that incentive whole and inject it into the existing work. Usually an intro rewrite, a few image changes, a few words here and there is enough.

Of course, sometimes you're just borked, but those can be the most fun to work and fix.
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>>54768356
the sterling wasn't from wwii and the ppsh-41 wasn't replaces until the 90s
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What's the most /ss/ cyoa?
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>>54768502
Serene Serendipity.
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>>54766260
I was going to do this CYOA but with slight changes, but you did it better than I ever could. Incidentally, I would rather have 3 starting ghost abilities than 2.
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Is there a Bard CYOA?
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>>54768502
Either what >>54768531 suggested, or Geenymous' Incest CYOA.
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>>54766260
>Reincarnation
>Otherworld
>Keep Memory

Soulmate is tempting, but it's not like I cannot find new loves and romances in whatever world I end up in.
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>>54768576
But they'll never be as good as your soul mate would be. It would kill me, to know that there's someone better out there.
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>>54768567
>>54768531
You guys know where to find these?
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>>54768587
Not an issue unless you actually meet your soulmate.
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>>54768608
https://drive.google.com/drive/u/0/folders/0B0h6Ycwh1mNzQjdQXzlfWUQxelU
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>>54768587
But this way, there's always someone new. Variety is the spice of life/lives.

Plus, the idea that you and your soulmate die together has me a bit miffed - it's kind of unfair if my waifu has to die early, too, because I happen to get hit by a car, and vice versa.
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>>54768629
Soulmate would never get boring, she's made for you.
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>>54768642
Maybe you were made to be bored.
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>>54766191
>>54767567
>Dark magical girls
The only reason you're not on the 'To Smite' list is because you make good season 2 villains who then become allies.
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>>54768544
>I was going to do this CYOA but with slight changes
I'm sure I've heard that excuse before.
>I would rather have 3 starting ghost abilities than 2.
I feel like 3 choices would make the Ghostly Spirit Afterdeath a more OP choice.

Though it makes more sense. I'll probably change it to 3, but what does anyone else think? 3 abilities for Ghostly Spirit or keep it at 2?
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>>54768496
Mb just looked at the pic and thought sten
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>>54767697
I second this, making it the default and boost an option would be ideal. The way it stands right now it seems like I basically have to pick Karma, leaving reincarnation with only one choice instead of 2. >>54767574
Please fix this
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>>54768608
I'll post the other one. Page 1/3.
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>>54768714
Page 2/3.
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>>54768669
What do you mean excuse? I'm not excusing anything, just saying I was gonna do it. Good CYOA regardless though. Keep it What YOU want.
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>>54768734
Page 3/3.
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>>54766260
How did you do that line under the title? Where it's fatter in the middle?
Luckily I don't subscribe to that "lose your memories = you dead boy" thing so I'm good with
>Reincarnation
>Otherworld
>Karma
Well, gotta be a better person now. Gotta get that best life. Not a big fan of being forced to do good - is it really good if you did it because it was good?
Please don't start a debate on types of ethics, I know there's one where it's still a good act if you're doing it only to be good.
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>>54768642
>>54768587
>soulmate
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aUgQPzq6ifc
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It wasn't that angelic/ghost form one was it? I'm still looking forward to that.
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>>54768817
It was. I'll still make it, just personal stuff going on doesn't let me get to a computer yet.
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>>54768817
What?
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>>54768669
3 Seems kind of OP (less mechanically and more that you get so many more choices than other options).

>>54768741
Excusing the fact that you're no longer gonna do it.
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>>54768714
>Ophelia
mom
>Madeline
Aunt
>Tia
>Nina
Big sisters
no little sisters because I wanna be the youngest.
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>>54768801
Pen Tool
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>>54768664
>Not smiting them and THEN befriend them
Come on i know you are better than this!
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>>54768871
There's a difference between smiting and befriending. One, you can walk afterwards. The other, not so much.

That's about the only difference, mind you...
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>>54768870
Darn. When I tried to do it I made a triangle then made it skinny.
I didn't know how to make a triangle. I had to make a square and spent too long figuring out how to make a diagonal to make one of those triangles with a 90 degree angel.
I'm pretty sure I'm retarded.

There's gotta be a way to make it without the pen tool because I used that once and it went horribly.
So, what, you drew a line that wasn't entirely straight?
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>>54768942
>a 90 degree angel
Sounds like the angel in question could use a blanket or few.
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>>54768929
>being befriending so hard your hips are shattered
Thicc grills are the best!
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>>54768714
>Mothers: Chelsea
>don't expect much time at home
>expect hundreds of sweaty sessions at home
Make up your mind, author!
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>>54768942
Make a thin Rectangle, use the 'Add Anchor Point' Tool to add anchors in the middle of both left and right faces, delete the anchors on the 4 edges of the rectangle and click every anchor with the 'Convert Point' Tool to make them straight. Use a the ruler guides to make sure the points are centered.
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>>54769020
*Forgot to add, also add anchor points to the center top and bottom of the rectangle
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>>54768974
God verdammt it.
I can figure out the difference between "then" and "than" but apparently not "angle" and "angel".
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>>54768815
But it's fictional, so there literally is someone for you
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>>54769002
Presumably something along the lines of "you won't be spending much time at home, but when you will, it'll be cuddle city".
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>>54769020
i know some of these words.
Thanks, I'll try it out when I get on this one CYOA I've been thinking of for a few days.
I was thinking of doing it the other way around (add anchors in the middle), but it doesn't matter too much.
To avoid using a ruler I'd probably make one quarter of the line, then dublicate it and flip vertically, then copypaste both and flip them horizontally.
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>>54768714
>Mother
Diana
>Older Sister
Emilia
>Younger Sister
Penelope

Let's get cracking, these wombs won't fertilize themselves!
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>>54769114
Here you go senpai, I'm pretty bad at describing things.
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Post some cancerous CYOA.
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>>54768714
>>54768750
>Evelyn
>Fuuka
>Emilia
>Penelope
14 years old and already the man of the house~ Showing mom I can be the perfect husband in every way; taking charge just how my big sister Fuuka wants; Giving Emilia all the encouragement and support she needs; and teaching Penelope all about life. Ahhh, bliss...
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>>54766260
>V3
- Change to Reincarnation description
- Change 'Karma' choice to 'The Choice' and its description

I really feel like Ghostly Spirit should have 3 Abilities, may be my bias for it though. I see more people choosing other Afterdeaths. But I'll leave it as it is for now. Thanks for the feedback.
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>>54769210
You are a saint thank you very much!
It's such a simple graphic but it's very aesthetic.
I think I could do it with the lasso select tool but it wouldn't be as clean.
>>54769231
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>>54768734
>Mother
Roseanne
>Older Sister
Veronica
>Younger Sister
Alice
>Additional Girl
Diana

>>54768750
3rd page worst page. Faith is the least garbage, an urban version of her might have been nice; Nina runner-up, but intolerable.
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>>54769288
>>54769288
See,I want to possess and dreamwalk so I can fuck with people until they agree to let me possess them, but I also wanna see them aliens
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>>54767229
>no Blank option with every choice but psyker
It's shit
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Did that guy give up on a comfy-dark CYOA?
Because this comic is giving me the need.
http://imgur.com/gallery/2nRLR
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>>54769288
>>54769288
>Reincarnation, Otherworld, Keep Memory
I want to be a good person anyway; this is just more incentive to increase my Karma.
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>>54768714
>Mom/Aunts
Diana(Mom), Chelsea, Roseanne
>Older Sister
Veronica
>Younger Sister
Penelope
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>>54769288
>Reincarnation
>Otherworld
>The choice
Royal revival here i go!
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>>54766260
Groundhog Loop.

Always seemed like the most fun to me.
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>>54769288
Ghostly Spirit, Possess, Unbound. Seems strictly better than Reincarnation, since I can possess anyone I want without concern for Karma, keep all my memories, and travel from universe to universe as I please. Plus, I can choose my level of involvement, from psychic voyeur to guiding spirit to body snatcher.
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>>54766191
Age: Old
Pit: Fury

>Magic:
Acidic C
Tremble C
Curses C
Void B [18]
Shadow C [17]
>Physical:
Mental B [16]
Defense S [13]
Reserve B [12]
Strength S w/ Lycanthrope [8]: Wolf ears, Pronounced canines
Stamina A [5]: Glowing eyes
Flexibility C [4]
Agility S [0]: Pale skin, Red eyes
Dexterity B [-2]

Tool: Sword
Outfit: Armored/Flowing [0]
Familiar: Shimmer
Offer: Physical (+35% Physical, -35% Magical)
"Jobs": Clean Up, Slay Phantoms, Destroy Puppets
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>>54769082
Even fiction obeys certain rules in order to function. For any given set of rules, there is a person and a way for that person to be excluded from happiness.
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>>54769347
What are you talking about? Faith is awesome, she's easily the best sister in the CYOA.
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>>54768785
>I've got Gluttony and Give and Take as my challenge
Easy. I start a detective company, focusing on solving murders. So long as the victim's heart can be found, I'll gladly eat it and tell them exactly what happened before they died. I help people out, make a good bit of coin, and with a good bit of frugal living should have no problem paying off my debts in a year.
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>>54769376
I, too, want Unbound, but I would rather cross it with the Telekinetic/Ghost Form combo so I can fix space ships and rescue astronauts.

>tfw you know the spacewalk you need to do will be the last one you do
>tfw you're still sealing your cracked helmet, and you look out the airlock
>tfw there's already someone out there fixing it
>tfw they give you a thumbs up, and a permanent toothy grin meets your gaze from behind their missing visor
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>>54769552
https://youtu.be/UqU7W8LdRd4

Your story reminds me of this song. Atmospheric!
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>>54769497
>a way for that person to be excluded from happiness.
And sometimes you're excluded from happiness because you'd prefer to be miserable and choose not to pursue happiness when it's bending over and wiggling its hips provocatively at you, metaphorically speaking.
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>>54769608
I was actually thinking of that when I was writing it! Ha!
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>>54768061
Are you retarded?
That's undeniably an L1A1 get your faux-/k/ shit outta here
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>>54766260
Why would I choose anything but heaven?
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>>54769647
It is a bit boring
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>>54769082
>But it's fictional
Stop reminding me. :(
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>>54769647
I don't know why you would choose something else. I'm bad at mind reading.
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>>54769647
Hell has blackjack and demonic hookers.
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>>54769676
>Reminder that all that could be good and nice in the world is a fiction
>Reminder that you are not a fiction thus you are stuck here
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>>54769647
You... don't want to rip and tear demons?
Are you a woman? Are you in South America and eat large quantities of chicken? Do you drink water from plastic bottles and not the tap?
Seriously man, get your test checked.
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>>54769613
>And sometimes you're excluded from happiness because you'd prefer to be miserable and choose not to pursue happiness when it's bending over and wiggling its hips provocatively at you, metaphorically speaking.

>accidentally walk in on happiness in the bath, getting changed, fall into happinesses' boobs and generally end up sleeping in happinesses bed sometimes
>never actually fuck happiness, because fuck happiness
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What happened to this WIP? Abandoned?
https://pastebin.com/f0aet7Dy
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>>54769745
It was abandoned. You must carry on his flame!
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>>54769288
Reincarnation: Otherworld + Keep Memory

If I get stuck in a boring world with no magic, or trapped in a female or animal body, my plan is to relentlessly preform kind acts while constantly being on the look out for an oppotunity to sacrifice my life to save the lives of others (big karma boost and an oppotunity for reincarnation somewhere better).
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>>54766191
>>54760126
Reposting my build from last thread and calling upon those pure of heart to help purify these rogues!

Old
>Tomboyish, lithe figure. Small to average breasts, and a nice butt

30% Physical -40% Magical

I think Will Suits me best.

Arma S (17)
>Excellent weapons and armour infused with the Blood Rite make me tankier and hit harder.
Blood A (15)
>The more I or my allies get hurt, the stronger I'll be and the faster we can end this.
Shock B (13)
>A huge burst of speed to put huge power behind a single attack
Frost S (10)
>Freeze enemies in place to ensure that I get the hit that I need

Strength S (7)
>More Power!
Defense S (3)
>I'll be right up in the enemy's face so I should be able to take a hit
Mind B (2)
>This is just so it's easier to use my magic in the thick of it
Stamina B (0)
>I need to be able to last long enough in a fight to use the second form of my armour if it comes to that.

Sword
>A huge two handed battle-axe, maybe a head taller than me when on it's end.

Elegant
>A black Chinese dress--think typical monk in an mmo
Phased
>End the fight quick, but if I can't, then I've got a second form.

Shimmer
>Just show me the weak point so can hit it. Hard.

Slay Phantoms
Purify Rogues
Save the World

Come, Sisters, and show these girls the light!
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>>54769288
Does Hell and Heaven get internet access? Can I watch anime there?
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>>54769894
Umm... Probably their own separate servers I guess.
I'm imagining a devil watching cute devil anime girls.
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>>54769822
I've got eleven different torches to keep alight. You might expect a flame to see the light of day, but I shall not carry this spark. Bequeath it onto another.

... damn, I write a lovecraftian CYOA and he had a writing style like that, well, extravagant, but I seriously need to tone my language down a notch. I just sound like a pretentious dick.
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>>54769311
>Body [15]
Male
Masculine
Muscular
Disease immunity

>Everything Else [55]
A perfect fit
Induce arousal
Domination
Harem
Skilled
Read desires

>Friends and Lovers [10]
Valerie (love)
Allie (love)
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>>54769288
Can love bloom in the deepest depths of hell?
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>>54769929
>I'm imagining a devil watching cute angel anime girls.

Fixed that for you.
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>>54769894
Anime is probably a sin so yes in hell
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>>54769929
>actual christianity succubus seeing cute anime succubi prancing around
>pretends to laugh at how silly and innacurate they are, but every once in a while she "innocently" asks if you find the anime type prettier than her
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>>54769536
I actually really enjoy hiking and having sex outdoors, as well as a fetish getting caught in public.

Hiking nude is a nice fantasy, but it's not practical in most environs. Maybe if her description included a "no debilitating bugs / animal attacks" or the like it might be nice.

In any case, it's much hotter doing trenchcoat-style urban nudity and risking getting caught where there are actually people around and near misses are easier to come by.
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>>54770027
There is no love, only hot, sweaty, sticky lust.
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>>54770027
>>54770102
Only asians can fall in love in hell. Something about the pure lotus blooming untarnished in filth.
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>>54770041
sounds cute!
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>>54770027
To engage in true love, one must engage in the most vile of fornications _____Handholding____ and __Eskimo kisses___
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>>54769288
>No eating or sex
What's the point of heaven, I'll go with Hell.
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>>54769311
Magic ID is a ridiculous point tax.
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>>54770177
B-but eternal peace and tranquility,,
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>>54770177
It says you don't feel the need to do them, not that you can't do them.
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>>54769288
Well, I'll still take it.

Ghostly Spirit
-Ghost Form
-Unbound

Though it's a little awkward, I can still accelerate objects in 0G. I can finally get out to the big black.

See, in life, the thing I really want will never happen. With the way the blood vessels are shaped in my brain, high G forces are a risk, and a few hours in 0G is a death sentence. No one is going to waste rocket fuel on me.
But that doesn't stop me from learning what I can about space travel. Combine that interest with the perfect recall of this new ghost form, and I should be able to learn how to fix anything on whatever space vessels I encounter in short order. I can help by alerting the crew to problems before they escalate, or by intervening with my limited physicality. That mostly just boils down to making sure things and people don't float away, or slowing down dangerous objects.
Hell, if it comes down to it, I can just help the injured and dying by giving them some company.
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Mainly need much more description.

Any of these, anon, jump out at you as a *particularly* shitty choice. Because that might affect how I describe them.
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>>54770263
You're on a roll lately. What the fuck are you snorting?
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>>54770071
I'll take this version of hell over the real deal.
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>>54770289
LIFE. In seriousness, all I needed for this one was the idea, and discord anons helped with input greatly.

The format is recycled from Mentor, Lover, Rival, Friend, if that's not clear. Just found 8 pics, edited them to 5x6 each, a bit of text editing, cliche descriptions and limitations, and voila. So that's literally 45 minutes work. No big deal. It will take me longer to fill out the descriptions in a satisfying way.
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>>54766191
>>54760126
>>54769880
Well if you say it like that i guess i will repost my build too.

>Young
Mandatory cute little girl magic power.

>Cute
I kinda feel ashamed to admit that i like to do cute things.

>Magic rites
Idol S -3
Smiting evil via singing, lights and music for dramatic effect, they are a must! Even more if you have people cheering you on their TVs.
Hex S -3
Reverse plot armor for the enemy. This makes fights way more easy.
Form C
It might be useful in the future to look like someone else.
Scale C
Cute!
Astra S -4
''Bullet hell 101'' Satisfaction guaranteed.
Crysta S -4
Great offensive and defensive applications
Love C -1
Knowing who is in need of help is an amazing tool.

>Physical rites
Flexibility S -3
Agility B -2
Mind C
Reserves C
Singing alone won't do it, you have to have some great moves!

>Weapon
Instrument
A microphone duh.

>Outfit
Impactful
Phased
A good entrance and a great finale is the key to a great show.

>Pet friend
Shimmer
She is a cute, i am going to dress her in some sort of idol outfit for the shows.

>Questing
Help people
This thing is magical girl 101 it should be mandatory
Purify Rogues
Everyone can have a bad day sometimes. But that is not an excuse to do such awful things! And because of that i am going to fuck them up until they say sorry.
Save the world
Another mandatory quest. At least this one is more fun.
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>>54770263
Nice. Want Werewolf and Vampire in there. Also a description of the world and general expansion seems like it would feel pretty organic and easy to write.
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>>54769721
What's wrong with drinking from plastic bottles? That's all I do. But I always pick the be the girl options in CYOAs, so...
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>>54769144
>>54769156
Easy + 20
Retroactive
Stay the same age for one year, then age normally. Starting age : 3
Mind Upload (Permenant) +30, one free Attribute. others half cost.
Body : Average
Face : Girly + 1 (51)
Chest : Oppai -8 (43) (I will grow into this. I obviously don't have this now since I'm 3, but since my change is permenant I am planning for the future.)
Bottom : Well - rounded -8 (35)
Gender : Female
Genitalia : Female
I'm not taking any of the oversized, functional, or libido choices because I will grow into those at puberty.
Attributes :
Strength : 1 + 0 (35)
Intellect : 4 FREE
Wisdom : 4 -6 (29)
Fast Learner : -5 (24)
Energetic: -4 (20)
Bedwetter: +3 (23)
Incontinent: +4 (27) (Baby)
High Metabolism: +3 (30)
Companions :
Nobleman: +20 (50)
Luxury Options half cost
3 or more hobbies
Big Mama: +21 (71) ( -4 (-2 each) so that her personality is shifted down one level for authority and personal traits) (She's also not black)
Baby options half cost
Discipline, 2 or more routines
2 or more punishments
Other :
Nanny: +12 (83)
+1 routine and +1 punishment in addition to parental requirements.
Babysitter: +8 (91) (Schoolteacher)
Total requirements and bonuses are now:
3 or more routines
3 or more punishments
Baby options half cost
Peers:
Siblings:
Bookworm: -1 (90)
Twin: -5 (85)
Artist: -1 (84)
Friends:
Demure: -4 (80)
Airhead: -4 (76)
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>>54760126
>>54769880
>>54770473
Everyone else is, I may as well...

>Old Appearance
Because you bet your sweet butt I'mma look gorgeous as shit while kicking evil square in the pills!
Who even needs lewd?

>Will
Give me power, even a little power and I swear with my life, I will power through to the end and protect everyone and everything, with these two hands! Plus it gets me secondaries in Romance and Joy, which are pretty cool too.

Also screw that "Only cute girls can become famous," thing. Alone and together, we will be the WORLD'S SYMBOL OF PEACE, LOVE AND JUSTICE!

Free rites
>Frost. Meh. I can take or leave that. Honestly I don't know why this is under will...
>Motion. Useful, but I'll make too much use of it
>Arma. Oh FU- uhm... HELL YEAH, here we go! That's a point in an essential I don't have to spend!
>Blood. Uhh... Let's keep this at C, but still, useful in a pinch!
>Strength. Again, that's a point I don't have to spend in an essential skill!
>Mind and Reserves. Standard-issue means it's always useful!

>Arma S
Utterly essential. Completely and totally rip off Saber with a holy sword of awesome and get me some regal-looking armour
>Idol C
Screw you; I'mma rock up into battle with theme music and/or play something hype as shit when the chips are down!
>Sol S
Lasers, dazzling radiance, awe aura... What's not to love about the power of the unconquered sun?!
>Life B
Really just too useful to leave at home. When I said I'll save everyone, I meant it!
>Circa C
For when you just have to turn this one up to 11!

Cont...
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>>54770580
https://youtu.be/n2cHkN-hbw4
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>>54770595
Continued.
Miscellaneous:
Pet: -5 (71)
Home:
Rural Estate: -10 (61)
Deluxe Bedroom: -10 (51)
Basic Bath: -5 (46)
Lounge: -6 (40)
Hobby Room: -6 (34)
Pool: -8 (26)
Garden: -6 (20)
School:
Graduate: -6 (14)
Academia Obscura: -8 (6)
Clothing:
Basic Closet: -2 (4)
Cute Wardrobe: -4 (0)
Warm Clothes: -4 (-4)
Onesie: -1 (-5) (Baby)
Swimwear: -4 (-9)
Footwear: -4 (-13)
Hats: -3 (-16)
Accessories: -3 (-19) -------
Food:
Home Cooking: -6 (-25)
Bottlefeeding: -2 (-27) (Baby)
Breastfeeding: -2 (-29) (Baby)
Hobbies:
Literature: -4 (-33)
Tabletop: -5 (-38)
Recreation: -10 (-48)
Nature: -8 (-56)
Miscellaneous:
Cassandra: +5 (-51)
Language Barrier: +8 (-43)
Discipline:
Routines:
Bedtime (Tier 2) (Cuddling): +7 (-36)
Bathtime (Tier 2): +6 (-30)
Dressing: +2 (-28)
Punishments:
Spanking (Tier 2) (Maintenance): +9 (-19)
Mouthsoaping: +5 (-14) (I doubt I will know many curse words anyway, since I am taking Language Barrier and will be learning another language.)
Pacifier (Tier 2): +5 (-9)
Diapers (Tier 3) (Forced Use): +15 (-6)
Miscellaneous:
Shared Discipline: -6 (0)
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>>54770599
>Strength A
My 'age' helps with this. Taking raw power any further is just pointless. If I really want to catch a skyscraper, I have power-up options
>Agility A
Wingswingswingswings!
>Defence B
Armour covers what this doesn't. And there's really less impact to an awesome pump-up speech if you haven't got at least a little f- messed up first. Damn but moderating my language is going to be hard!
>Stamina B
Gimme just a sec... I'll be back in the fight before you know it!
>Mind B
Like it says, a sharp mind is essential!
>Reserves B
Some of my powers are a bit mana-hungry, so I'd better take enough to make sure I can use them freely. Luckily, will is easy to charge up mid-combat.

>Sword
Dibs on Excalibur! I called it first, you all heard me!

>Phased/Flowing
I like the idea of having a hidden super-mode for when things really hit the fan. Upon phasing, I can fancy my robes up, acquire more/cooler armour from my Arma rite and pluck a sweet crown out of the air for dramatic headpiece-donning!

>Shimmer
Cute, stylish, smart and helpful! What's not to love? (I swear, if you tell me to "Hey, listen!" you are going in a mason jar!)

>Emergency Rescue
>Purify Rogues
>Save the World
I really, really, really, really wish I could take Help People too... I'll have to leave that to my team-mates. My powers are just better for more direct action. That's not to say I won't help people when I see them, of course-! But when it comes to saving people from natural disasters and redeeming our own gone rogue, you can count on me! And of course, you know I'll be right there in the vanguard for the final battle. I WILL save everyone and everything. With these! Two! Hands!

So we're doing a team-up and figuring out what our series will be like, right?
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>>54770534
Hmm... I'm intentionally avoiding options that can easily pass as human, but I'll see if I can fit those in in an interesting way, while abiding by that restriction.

I'm hoping to flesh out the world through the monster descriptions themselves, for the most part. Thanks!
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>>54770606
That was just some atrazine near california. I don't think it would be in my plastic bottles.
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>>54770617
and because I feel I haven't been contributing, here's some CYOAs. This one's short, but honestly one of the hardest choices I've seen.
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>>54770181
What? It's incredible utility for a low cost.
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>>54770642
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>>54770263
Dryad
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>>54770671
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>>54770688
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>>54770414
Discord shilling fags would be way less annoying if they actually lived up to the hype and weren't naturally bad for thread culture.
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>>54770630
Make the vampires bat-like monstrosities and keep the werewolves in bipedal wolf form?
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>>54770263
For the Djinn, is it just the classic greek elements (fire, water, earth, air)?
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>>54770738
Or don't make them bipedal but keep them in wolf form? That removes the "can pass as human" part, right?
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>>54767552
Is it the one about the flooded world and catgirls?
If not, what is it about? (and is there any progress in the catgirls one?)

I had to stay out of CYOAG for about ~3 months, I'm trying to catch up with the news.

(also, if someone could tell me if ZBG posted the guardian CYOA I would be grateful).
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>>54770263
Hmm... i can't decide between tree person or water djinn.
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>>54770794
It's a lewd one where you get some powers but are subsequently cursed by a demon to orgasm X amount of times in a year or else you die.
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>>54770794
SDA just made a leaf cyoa unrelated to the car one for no reason other than to fuck with Tok. Cat is coming. In the meantime, you probably missed SDA releasing Magic Mentor. Guardian Spirit is somewhere off in the distance still, but in the meantime ZBG released a three-mysterybox cyoa thing and is working on a one-pager.
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>>54766191
>>54766210
>>54766237
>>54766261
>>54766280

Well let me peruse this... there may be some useful powers for a dark knight here, but I suspect most of them will be for harlots.

Old

Wicked

Tremble B
Curses A
Void S - seems like a decent boost to my mace, but it certainly costs a lot of mana
Undermine C
Shadow C
Twist C
Deviance C
Inseperable A - Watch my foes tremble as I simply keep coming back to full heath!

>Physical

THIS IS AN OUTRAGE! How dare you try to trick me into giving up my humanity! I am wise to your schemes. Though it may make me weaker in the end, I shall give no quarter to any inhuman traits.

Mental C
Defense S
Reserve C
Strength B
Flexibility C
Dexterity B

Sword - at least my mace is unharmed

Armored
Thematic (Void) - Essential considering the mana cost for void vs arma.

Dusk Critter - both dark and high utility! This shall make an excellent minion!

Physical Boost

Clean up
Slay Phantoms
Destroy Puppets

Grr.. I think I am weaker than before, this harlot shall pay for the indignity she has heaped upon me.

In the meantime though, time to siege kingdoms, kidnap fetching princesses, etc.
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>>54770813
Someone could just threaten to cut down your tree if they wanted power over you. Djinn is better between the two.
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>>54766191
I forgot how good this was. Though is it just me or do the stat changes for age not match the age descriptions?
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>>54770863
>leaf
>car
Truly the power of auto-correct.
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>>54770879
Can't i just impale the woodcutter in a root or something?
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>>54770828
>>54770863
Thank you kind anons, I was here when magic mentor was released, but it was around that time that stopped coming, more or less.
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>>54767229
Psyker
Telekinesis, biomancy
Terror
Inquisition - Ordo Malleus

>>54769177
Tentacle abomination
Fantasy ruins
Madness
Insanity strikes
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>>54767229
It lacks the Assasin option
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>>54760126
>>54769880
>>54770473
>>54770599
Old
Hope

Luna - S
Love - S
Tempora - S
Shift - S
Tech - S
Astra - S
Dexterity - C
Mind - C
Stamina - B
Reserves - S

Elegant
Flowing

Pip & Pop

Slay Phantoms
Purify Rogues
Rebuild Utopius

A whole bunch of magical girls have appeared, however, I sense darker, mirrored emotions coming from them. I witnessed one of them slaying a phantom, before proceeding to rob a bank. I might have to start bringing a combat-focused partner along to counter this.
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>>54771050
I might be wrong but i think you used too many points
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>>54770794
Feast your eyes on autism:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B01t_JeqhEkuUFNhazdoT1c3Qzg

probably gonna take a break for awhile, i have a week off at the end of the month where i'll probably just sit down and work on my WIPs

>>54770955
also completely redesigned Magic Mentor, but it's mostly the same info with some added sections

>>54770863
>a leaf cyoa
hwat
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>>54771050
You can count on me!
>>54769880
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>>54769177
>Form
Slime Liquid

>Location
The Citadel

>Ability
Property Control

>Destiny
They came from the portals

Plip plop. Wiggle wiggle.
I found a new house!
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>>54769880
>>54770473
>>54770599
>>54771050

Refined version of "one shot literally anything". Mostly, I just give thematic up so I can get hybrid.

>Age
Young

>Well
Hope

>Rites
Luna C
Love S
Tempora C
Scale A
Shift C
Astra C
Circa C
Blood A
Idol A
Mind S
Stamina C
Reserves S

>Tool
Ampoule

>Outfit
Phased
Hybrid (Love-> Life) - I lose a significant amount of power without Thematic, but in return I gain the ability to buff allies. I can even deputize nearby civilians if there are no allies to buff. This should make ampoule much easier to charge.
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>>54770738
>>54770787
Both good options that I will consider, thanks.

>>54770687
Cool. I assume that's your pick, and not your answer to my question "which ones seem particularly bad".

>>54770749
That was my thought, certainly. If you have an idea for expansion on that I'm willing to consider it, but no "time" djinns, or anything. No "wood" element because that infringes on dryad.

>>54770813
>>54770879
>>54770949
Yeah, I suppose it depends on how powerful the one doing the threatening is. Neither one realistically has anything to fear from a commoner.
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>>54769721
>plastic bottles bad

Yeah let's just ignore the crumbling lead-based piping that makes up a majority of the US water systems.
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>>54769647
Question of the millenia right there.
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>>54769647
Because it sounds like boring quasi-personality death?
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>>54770645
It's 10 points to be able to function in society if you pick any of the body changes. You might as well make it a 70 point CYOA and say she's taken care of your ID.
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>>54771501
No, I think you're misinterpreting anon. You only need the Magic ID if you're going to be actively switching between different forms. I think if you just have one altered body, you get ID for it.
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>>54769647
I don't know why you wouldn't, but I just like this world, and want to keep helping those that live in it. After that inevitably ends, I could go check out some other worlds.
I'm going ghost.
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>>54770868

>>54760743
>>54760763

Dude you joined Team Morally Questionable. Why is being caught in a wordplay faustian reacharound surprise you?
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I will mix both magical girl CYOAs and pick whatever power I want, I will trascend being a girl and become a magical boy instead

I REJECT THIS GIRLINESS, CYOA GENERAL
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>>54771688

B-back off! I was promised power, not inhumanity!
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>>54766191
>>54766210
>>54766237
>>54766261
>>54766280

young
I wanna be cute and powerful

carnal pit for funsies

Magic
Invocation A rank
Exhibition S rank
Culminate S rank
Alteration S Rank I can morph the loli body to max my carnal pit powers

Physical
Mental A rank makes using magic easy I need this
Defense S rank cause I wanna survive almost anything
Agility S rank becoming a vampire for speed and powers
Siphon S rank becoming a succubus similar weaknesses to Vampire so combining them only is a bonus

tool
tome more powers!

Outfit
Flowing
poofy
once again fear my cuteness!

Familiar
Fluid Flipper why not it's cute

Boost
magical I am already tiny

stuff to do
slay phantoms
purify rogues
destroy puppets
I wanna fight fight fight!
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>>54770263
Vampires with fabulous abs.
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Let me be a sissy little fairy boy
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>>54769177
This cyoa gives me nightmares. What even is the point?
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>>54766191
>Old
>Pit of Obsession
Infestation C
Loftiness B
Mental A
Defense C
Reserves S
Dexterity B
I don't need anything else
>Tool
Device: Loftiness B
>Outfit
Thematic (Infestation)
Armored
>Familiar
Shimmer
>Quests
Clean Up
Help People
Slay Phantoms
Save the World

I'll show the world not to underestimate a scrawny little bug girl.
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>>54756300
Found an abusable loop here. Power Up grants 1 point. It adds 2 cup sizes, 1 lewdness, and 1 sensitivity. Lowering lewdness and sensitivity grant 1 point each. Lowering breast size costs 1 point for 2 cup sizes. The net result is that you can gain +2 points every time you pick all three with no change
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>>54771869
>>54771737
you need to calm down, son
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>>54771379
>Cool.
Yes. In answer to your question, Phoenix immortality seems particularly weak, and life as a troll seems pretty unattractive.
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>>54770630
That sounds good. I just thought it would be fun to see different enemies and factions that you would be up against in that world. Maybe a trait you can specialize in?
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>>54767229
>no orks

yous a little grot
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>>54771551
This anon makes more sense. Anyone can get mundane ID updates through mundane methods; 10 points gives you MAGICAL ID that will MAGICALLY update your ID, IN REAL TIME.

Additionally, never deal with dmv-type braindead bureaucracy cogs, lines, parking, etc. again.
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If you were designing a ship to be comfy in, what ship or class of ship would you want?

Current list:

Crystalline Ship
Serenity
USS Enterprise
The Heart of Gold (HHGTTG)
40k ships
The Normandy
Generic Luxury Yacht
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>>54771379
>Both good options that I will consider, thanks.
Not either of them and i know I'm late but you could make it a point thing, like if you want to be closer to humanoid that's a point or a choice instead of closer to a more feral being that has increased ferocity or something of the sort, for those who want to retain some humanity and those who want to be murder machines that get put down by the pure silver stake of God.
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>>54772280
What variety of Crystaline ship? Like...everything's transluscent? Protoss armada with crystal devices? Floating geometry?

Serenity is pretty cozy if you can keep it going.

Enterprise is a bit too big for one person; you'll start going crazy in short time without some variety of mental quirk; anti-social is one thing but too much space with no company sets you up for all kinds of paranoia.

Heart of Gold is a bit more posh and stylish than Serenity, but there's accounting for preferences; some folks want a bit more rustic/ low-tech flavor.

40k ships are lucky to be working at all. I don't care that some of them can blow planets up or look gothic as fuck it would still be stupid.

The Normandy seems like a nice middle-ground between Serenity and and the Heart of Gold.

Generc Luxury yaght is a bit open-ended but it can work if you want more customization.


Normandy does it for my part. Enough floors to have some fun, weapons/engineering bay for cool shit, sensory suite, comm systems, plenty of screens for content of various media outlets. Decent weapons/stealth sets for travel.

Plus if EDI or something like her is available you can stave off the inevitable crazy.
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>>54771779
Team.
Morally.
Questionable.

Besides, you saw how my magic works, I've got plants and bugs and extra hearts along with most of my guts. It's not like being abhuman's that bad.
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>>54772280
escape velocity has some nice ships, like those psychic vell-os ones and the bio-tech polaris ones
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>>54772444
A ship made of self-shaped crystal that can regrow damage and reshape its structure to a limited degree.

I'm planning to include companion options, and I'm looking for more input as to what ships should be added, if any.

>>54772465
I'll have to look into that, I don't think I'm familiar with it.
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>>54772280
Generic Luxury Yacht, by which I assume you mean either something commercial (along the lines of the Axiom from Wall-E) or more old-world luxury with space technology woven throughout (scifi Bond villain yacht in space). Heart of Gold is acceptable decor, but examples are kind of too sparse to get a strong sense of the style at play.
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>>54772280
>comfy
>crystalline
>40k
>comfy
What in the holy hells is wrong with you.
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>>54772518
I don't personally see how 40k ships are comfy, but I'm not getting many other suggestions.
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>>54772497
Might also look at
>Millenium Falcon, or similar corellian freighter.
>Weatherlight or other Spelljammer if fantasy aspects come up.
>Dune's massive floating cylinders.
>Farscape-styled organic ships, possibly with psychichs powering/directing them.
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>>54772545
I'm saying they're not comfy, and neither is cold, brittle, angular crystal.
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>>54772575
Oooh, the Falcon, how could I forget that one? Organic ships and Dune ships are good, too.

>>54772595
Neither is cold, angular metal. You fill the ship with things to make it comfy.
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>>54770263
If I'm a bird why do I have I bear in my mind?
do we maintain our mental faculties?
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>>54772399
Thanks for the suggestion. At least for the first version of this I'm going to stick with a simple "pick one" though. We'll see from there.

>>54772622
I'm... 75% sure this is a joke. In case not: http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/bear+in+mind
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>>54766260
Reincarnation - Otherworld, Keep Memory. How else will you escape the earth being swallowed by the sun (while being able to have a body).
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>>54769463
Congratulations on memory death tho
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>>54772773
The other option is spirit, possess, unbound. Unbound explicitly allows cross-universe travel as well, so you can run from entropy that way.
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>>54770263
Looks promising. If dragons have transformation magic to get me some human time, probably dragons. Otherwise, maybe a earth or water Djinn.

In terms of shitty, Dryad seems kinda shitty. Would be nice if you made it tied to a treant that slowly slowly moves. Or maybe tied to an entire forest.

And a phoenix is just a bird. Its just a stupid bird.
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>>54772810
Yeahhhh but the universe is still gonna end. You're liable to end up in eternal darkness as everything moves away from you faster than the speed of light (eventually).
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>>54769288
>Fluffy Cloud Heaven of peace and nothing else with no food

Why does this meme exist? Aside from conflating Heaven and the New Earth, the afterlife described in Abrahamic religions is generally described as anything but. The peace certainly exists, but Islam, for instance, has Paradise as a bountiful garden full of virgins, while Christianity actually describes a re-created, redeemed, and perfect physical world where God rules directly and openly, and it includes the VAST and glorious city of the New Jerusalem. The pleasures of the flesh exist, but the temptation to abuse them to the point of sin no longer does. It's all the good things about the world unshackled from vice and wickedness.

In other words, Heaven, assuming you mean it as a generic Abrahamic righteous afterlife, should be -exciting-. Pic related is an unbelievably garbage depiction of New Jerusalem that does not at all match the glorious city described in the Revelation, but it's already WAY more interesting than the dull portrayal in the CYOA.
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>>54772280

She is my shipfu
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Abducted by lolis CYOA soon, probably in a few hours or so.
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>>54772899
I'm really curious about what you're going to to with it.
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>>54772857
I just said it allows cross universe travel
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>>54772887
Hmmmm. It's a bit larger than I was thinking, but I'll consider it.
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>>54772965
oh derp. Ehhhh Im good. like maybe if it was 3 perks instead of 2 but yeah I'm ok with reincarnation.
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>>54772899
They told me that they had a mint condition first pressing of In the Court of the Crimson King. They didn't even have a reissue.
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>>54772659
I think you could make a pretty decent split then! One for the people who want to retain humanity and those who give in to their new instincts. Two choices for each race! Not to bog you down but I think it would add just that split more of variety and maybe allow you to split more choices between humanity and animalistic beings.
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>>54772887
Those are fun to shoot at in Empire at War. Shame the gold version breaks for me.
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>>54772977

>Hmmmm. It's a bit larger than I was thinking, but I'll consider it.

Bless you anon

>>54773058
>Those are fun to shoot at in Empire at War. Shame the gold version breaks for me.

You deserve your fate for attacking the beautiful Venator
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>>54773001
The upside to Spirit is that you get to choose your lifestyle. The downside is you have to take it by force.

Reincarnation allows for a more normal life, but you can also end up as something really shitty.
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>>54772280
I'm not really into ships
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>>54772887
Space hotrod, easy
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>>54772622
>>54772659
I think he meant 'what', not 'why do I have bear in mind'. Does being a bird means being dumb like a bird or just not having human hands.
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>>54772280
I'd take the Red Dwarf, because why not. I can't name a bigger ship...
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>>54773263
Oh, no, these are all sapient species.
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>>54773145
Yeah but couldnt you just kill yourself? It's more or less a matter of luck yeah (so long as you dont take karma anyways)?
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>>54768714
I wish this had more dlc
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>>54772280
https://ftlwiki.com/wiki/The_Gila_Monster

The Gila Monster is my Shipfu. A dominant tsundere.
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>>54770263

Ooh, another Acheld CYOA, very prolific.

They seem fairly balanced; I'd take Dryad and start a grove myself. With all of these choices though comes the lonely immortality problem, especially the ones where you're limited to an area.
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>>54773325
It's possible. Spirit would also allow you to spend multiple lifetimes in the same world and benefit from them in some way
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Rolled 134, 72, 77, 131, 35, 8, 66, 13, 69, 55 = 660 (10d150)

>>54768785
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>>54773517
Well all in all, if you're spending your 2 boons for spirit on possession and being unbound, then you're not really that much better or worse off than reincarnation. If he moves it to 3 boons like he said he was thinking about, then it becomes significantly better, with the whole being in tune and modifying evolution etc boon.
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>>54772280
>If you were designing a ship to be comfy in, what ship or class of ship would you want?

either pic or Fury class interceptor
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>>54766191
I like helping people, but I'm just not cut out to be a magical girl. I don't really feel the extremes of positive emotion nessicary for their power.
If you don't mind, I'll just keep to myself while I do my world saving.

>Age
Average

Physical leaning.

>Pit
Despair

I'm quite comfortable in the pit of despair.
You don't need to follow me.

>Magical Glamours
Void C
Undermine S
Abandon C
Shadow C
Inseparable B
Infestation C
Invocation C

>Physical Glamours
Mental S
Defense S
Reserve S
Strength C
Stamina B

Arms bursting from the ground to grab and claw.
Bugs biting and stinging.
All of me marching forward, barely flinching and always around the corners my target retreats towards.
I'm a one girl zombie army.
Being a tentacle orgy is also fun, but that's for when I'm off the clock.

>Tools
Sword

I couldn't not, could I?

>Outfit
Pure
Hybrid (Undermine/Inseparable)

Break, or build?
Who knows? Maybe I'll find someone worth pulling myself together for.

>Familiar
Pip and Pop

A little birdy told me where to go. Have a shiny.

>Stuff to do.
Slay Phantoms.
Slay Phantoms.
Slay Phantoms.
Maybe some other stuff.


Find them.
Surround them.
Drag them down.
Bury them in bodies.
It's nice to be close.
I know it hurts, I'm sorry.
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>>54768785
>>54773533
Super hero sense
Nuke - trash
Heat vision
Machine spirit
Doppelganger - trash
Drunken master - trash
Cryo
Day empowerment
Obvious joke
Master soldier

Odd set. I guess my only option here is to be a superhero.
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>>54772614
I didn't choose any of the cold, angular metal options. But at least metal can be rounded, coated, enameled, cushioned. You can hide crystal behind all that stuff, but it kind of invalidates the aesthetic.
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>>54768531
>>54768714
>that feel when CYOAs will never compare when you have actual little sisters
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>>54773657
Then don't pick it.
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>>54773657
>>54772614
Now I'm envisioning a CYOA with "choose your comfy torture device", "choose the comfiest creature to be devoured by", etc.

>>54773674
They literally started the post by announcing they didn't pick it. Don't be redundant with an entire post.
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>>54773657
Have you never seen a cabochon? Crystals don't need to be cut.
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>>54769721
>not eating chicken
Gotta get them protons
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>>54773701
Crystals grow naturally in the form of a Bravais lattice, and this is a big part of the aesthetic; otherwise the aesthetic is better described as glass, which people associate with many of the same elements as crystalline aesthetic but with an expectation of smooth curves and flat panes. No one mentioned cutting or polishing.
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>>54771390
>this nigger drinks water from lead pipes
Seriously though, that is rough for you. I guess Americans were dumb enough to ignore the scientific community's warnings of the hazards of lead in paint long enough to throw away an entire generation, so drinking water is no big deal either.
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>>54768714
Evelyn, Tia, Penelope
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>>54766191
Old Age
Carnal Pit
>Glamours:
Twist B (18)
Noxious A (15)
Alteration B (14)
Invocation S (11)
Culminate C (11)
Mental S (8)
Defense C (8)
Reserve C (8)
Strength A (5) Cat eyes
Flexibility S (0) golden shacles & forehead jewerly
Siphon B (0)
>Tome
Twist A
Noxius S
Exibition C
>Outfit
Body runes
Elegant
>Companion
Shimmer

Looking like an hybrid between a genie and a succubus, her mission is to teach about sex to all people in any sort of ways: talks/chats/classes, taking virginity, rapeing molesters, comfort these who had been cheated, and so on. Sometimes more aroused than teacher but always with good intentions
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>>54773825
America harbours large numbers of people who consider AIDS a hoax. If something that takes 10 years to see the reality of firsthand is too much for them, never mind the populace made dumber over an entire generation of lead exposure or catastrophic climate change over a few hundred years.

Their attitude is clear. It's not real, and if it's real it'll be too late by the time we figure it out; leave the earth to the survivors.
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>>54773896
Nobody in America considers AIDS a hoax. That's an opinion in Africa, not here. Here, our stupid people think AIDS was created by the government to kill black people.
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>>54773912
America's a big country, and there's all kinds of stupid here. Sorry to hear about the particular brand of stupidity you happen to be familiar with.

Hoax covers a broad range, too. There are people who argue that AIDS isn't real, or that HIV doesn't lead to AIDS. The communities that circulate that denialism are pretty scary when you look into it.
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>>54773941
There aren't 'large' numbers of people who believe that, tex. At least stick to something publicized and well known, like the anti-vaccine retards.
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>>54773912
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HIV/AIDS_denialism#U.S._courts
>In 1998, HIV/AIDS denialism and parental rights clashed with the medical establishment in court when Maine resident Valerie Emerson fought for the right to refuse to give AZT to her four-year-old son, Nikolas Emerson, after she witnessed the death of her daughter Tia, who died at the age of three in 1996. Her right to stop treatment was upheld by the court in light of "her unique experience."[51] Nikolas Emerson died eight years later. The family refused to reveal whether the death was AIDS related.[52]

Source: http://www.nytimes.com/1998/09/20/us/boy-is-healthy-without-drug-for-hiv-mother-says.html
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>>54773987
>1998
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>>54766191
>old
>Carnal
>Glamours
>Carnal Alteration C Invocation B Culmination C
>Wicked Shadow B Twist S Deviance C
>Vanity Noxious C Loftiness B Exhibition C
>Physical S defense Succubus
>Bag
>Body runes Armored
>Fluid Flipper
>Magic Boost
>Purify Rogues
>Phantoms
>Help People
I'd say its a typical protag of an edgy fanservice show.
>Get carried away with the Love part, get labeled rogue, decide to retcon reality to go back and survive while doing it. Then settle down and help others
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>>54773974
>lol that was 20 years ago we're ok now

>33% of attendees at gay pride events doubted that HIV causes AIDS (2005)
>African Americans are exceptionally likely to believe that HIV does not cause AIDS, partly because they sometimes perceive the role of HIV in the disease as part of a racist agenda (2008)
>1 in 5 people living with HIV/AIDS think that there is no proof that HIV caused AIDS and that HIV treatments did more harm than good (2010)

Yes, because what ignorant crackpots excel at is admitting when they are wrong. Wake up, man. That generation of denialists aren't dying off for another 50+ years.
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>>54774091
>33% of attendees at gay pride events doubted that HIV causes AIDS (2005)
I thought gay people were generally well educated. I'm kinda shocked by that number.
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>>54774010
>people who were dumb in 1998 are all dead or smart now
Yeah some douche tried to convince me America had large numbers of racists with some outdated info from the 90s, I told his lazy nigger ass to stop lying by using the past.
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>>54769288
>Ghostly Spirit
>Dreamwalk
>Ghost Form
It's really fucking hard to choose between Ghost Form and Unbound, but I gotta go with Ghost Form, Dreamwalk is enough to fill the void Unbound will leave behind.

Also, under the abilities, the lines aren't connected to Possess and Unbound.
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>>54772899
Sounds interesting-ish.
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>>54774115
>>54774091

>He doesn't know the GAY COMMUNITY loves spreading diseases

And that's not even half of it
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>>54774091
[citation needed]
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>>54772899
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I would like to see it finished
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>>54774115
Depends on the source, is it from the guys who claimed mid 70's gay dudes were chomping down 50 dicks a month?
Because if so I kind of doubt it's a good source.
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>>54774115
Gay people are just people, man. It's not a guarantee of culture, liberalism, gentleness, atheism, good hair, good taste, or anything else so fundamental.
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>>54772899
all of my want
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>>54772280
The heart of gold
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>>54774147
You could just read the Wikipedia article that was linked. But I guess that would be hard.
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>>54772280
A gigantic blob of gray goo and computronium that I can upload myself to and quietly eat the unnecessary parts of the universe with.
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>>54774163
At the height of 70s gay culture, before the AIDS scare? 50 is lowballing it. Obviously not every gay man was into that culture, but the scene was definitely there and definitely dominant.
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>>54774213
In San Francisco at a gay fucking bathouse you might someone who hits that level anon If they were payed for it but the you're seriously overestimating the amount of dicks a person who isn't a gay prostitute can take.
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>>54772088
Thanks for the feedback

>>54772399
>>54773476
Concerning the humanity / lonely immortality problem, I was considering adding at the end the choice between two options.

One, you would have the ability to change back and forth from a human to the monster form. While in the human form that form would age normally and would be vulnerable. If it died, you would revert to your monster form and stay like that.

Two, you'd be guaranteed to meet a "soulmate" monster of the same type as you.

Thoughts on that?
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>>54773588
>I don't really feel the extremes of positive emotion nessicary for their power.
Neither do I, but I'm still going to give it my all! And I'm not going to just stand by and let you fall into a pit of despair and anguish either! I don't care how you try to drag me down; you are getting hugged and you are getting befriended, dammit!

>>54771986
Skitter, you're getting hugged too! Goodness knows you need it and your bugs can't pierce my skin or break my shield to choke me.

Do not try to fight me on this; I WILL get the others and make this a group hug if I have to!
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>>54774266
Blowjobs aren't really that hard to come by or perform, if you're into that scene. And if you recall, we are talking about oral sex; see >>54774163, "chomping down".
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>>54773912
There are a few idiots who consider bug chasers a hoax.
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>>54774170
Different groups of people can be very dissimilar, anon.

Contrast eg the average number of partners between straight people and gay people.
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>>54774338
That's largely a matter of culture, though. There is a bit of that that comes with the motivations and pressures involved, but there isn't actually a biological imperative where "I'm gay so I have to have many partners!"

The comparison is a bit misleading because gay culture is considered deviant and so lack social institutions rooted in norms and tend to suck candidates into itself and to get more and bigger exposure and become more well known (gay truckstop raids, gay nightclub killings, etc.). You don't hear much about the dull homebody gays because, well, they're not flaming screaming through the streets sucking dicks like they're the only source of oxygen.
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>>54774306
Yea and I'm saying that there's a disproportionate valve being stated for anyone who isn't a manwhore, as stated above. If we want to get into the business semantics, demand and market acquisition of gay blowjobs in for a man slut it's a different ball game to a standard American queer outside of San Francisco and New York. Which of course is probably a worthless venture seeing as how this thread is almost dead and the complexity of the issue is without worth without sufficiant depth of date (which, sadly is either hilariously inflated because San Francisco and the massive chunk of closeters or non present because good luck weeding out the queers of Louisiana or ND at this time.)
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>>54774293
Stranger danger! I don't know you! Activate self defense protocol!
>The body you hold goes limp, flopping listlessly in your arms. While it's still breathing, it's eyes stare vacantly, and it makes no attempt to respond to anything you do.

Speaking of breathing and hiveminds. You're going after Skitter, the Queen of Escalation? You don't still need to breath, do you? For the love of god, remember that insects can physically fill your lung tissue!
I should know, I've tried it on myself. Terrible way to go. It isn't comfy at all.
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>>54774437
Fitting for this general
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>>54774338
> there isn't actually a biological imperative where "I'm gay so I have to have many partners!"

[citation needed]

Contrast the partner count between male and female gays, then try again.
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>>54774420
>outside of San Francisco or New York
When discussing the height of 70s gay culture, you are de facto talking about Castro in San Francisco. It's not that the rest of us didn't exist, we just didn't create the cultural icon that exemplified an entire community.

I mean, there were other nomadic horse tribes during the time of Genghis Khan. But that's not what people are talking about when they mention the golden horde.
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>>54774437
These people unironically deserved to be lynched.
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>>54774437
The problem with basing a society/movement/whatever on a sexuality is that, because the whole thing's organized around the thing, there's going to be a lot of indulging in bad ideas and increasingly depraved shit.

Lust was a mistake.
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>>54774499
That's discrimination anon. These people need to be welcomed into your community, especially as youth counselors.
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>>54772462

Please, aside from these new harlots trying to muscle in on my turf, I AM team morally questionable.
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>>54774498
> When discussing the height of 70s gay culture, you are de facto talking about Castro in San Francisco.
> Gay dudes in the 70's weren't chopping down 50 dicks monthly
Nigger you are putting words in my mouth, we are not talking about San Fran during the 70's but the average for homosexuals, if you wanted to say, "yo this was a thing for San Fran and there's a history of promiscuity particularly in the club and bathhouse scene" I'll give you that but you can't just shove the entirety of Yankie gay boys on fucking San Fran. If we by your comparison we were talking about Nomads we would begin on Nomads then you just shove everything onto the Mongolians.
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>>54774602
You don't actually raise questions though. You raise armies to do bad things.

Kind of a no-brainer.
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>>54774549
I don't mind homosexuals, I just don't like "homosexuals", if you catch my drift. If you're going to fuck a man do it, but don't turn it into your whole identity. I think, although I'm not sure if it was him, that Ayatollah Khomeini said something along the lines of "we do not have homosexuals in our country like you do in yours."
Now this is, on the surface, obviously an absurd statement. There are of course going to be men who fuck men found in the entirety of the Iranian population. What he means is that there is not a homosexual subculture, where people base their identities off of who they like to fuck. No one comes out, they all just quietly fuck men on the side and it's not a big deal, everyone really knows it's happening. Of course I don't want them to be stoned or thrown off a building ala ISIS or anything, but I think the folks who turn it into an identity are annoying and vapid. It should just be normal and who cares, then we would start to see all this depravity and degeneracy in the homosexual subculture die out.
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>>54774491
Men and women are different, yes. Male and female gayness are similarly different.
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>>54774546
That's not the problem, it's the root cause of the deviation combined with the lack of wholesome basis for said subculture.

It's ok to be about sex and fucking, as long as you get around to acknowledging that there are other important aspects of life too.
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>>54774640
Fun fact about Iran, you can escape execution for homosexuality by coming out as transexual. The government will even pay for your transition and hormones.
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>>54774422
It's a possum! Or, is that an opossum?
What the fuck are these things?
>>
Dammit, and I just compiled all the shots of A New Magical Girl from the thread BEFORE this one. Sigh, guess I'll have to do this one, too...
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>>54774437
WHAT THE FUCK
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>>54766191
>>54766210
>>54766237
>>54766261
>>54766280
is there anyway to make a third version of this?
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>>54774707
A possum is just an opossum who speaks with drawl.
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>>54766110
why does the soviet union SF not have a cz75, or even just the Stechkin APS,
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>>54774720
Just imagine the shittiest people on 4chan, and all of the things they claim and sometimes even actually do. Now imagine the portion of that population that is also crazy gay.

7 billion people is a whole lotta people, anon. .0001% of that, 1 in a million, is still 7000 of those fuckers out there. Plenty enough for a website or two.

>>54774744
That CYOA is far from /k/ approved.
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>>54774707
Oh, how cute. Depends on where it is.
Possums are marsupials native to Australia.
Opossums are found in the western hemisphere.
Though, some foreshorten the word Opossum to 'possum when speaking with certain American accents.
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>>54774700
Is that a better alternative than the constructed homosexual identity we have here in the west?
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>>54774738
Laughed anon, thanks. Most of the time we talk the o sounds default to a sounds, so tomorrow would turn into ta ma ra
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>>54774825
I dunno, but it's better than getting stoned.
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>>54774840
Getting stoned is fun. 420 blaze it
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>>54774849
Marijuana then? Take you pick anon
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>>54774849
>420 blaze it

Pretentious pothead
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>>54774729
We've got
>Magical Girl, (Protag, Heroine)
>Dark Magical Girl (Semi-Protag, Anti-Heroine)
>Technically Nemesis or various other villain CYOAs for Bad Guy Of The Week.

Maybe a CYOA specific to mascots or background characters but idk how much interest there would be in that.
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>>54774961
I'm moving out of my mother's basement.
Adderall, to me! I request your aid on the valiant hunt for a new apartment! I will require assistance!

Now if you excuse me, Ambien wants my attention.

>>54774293
And I'll see you tomorrow! Anguish? Dragging others down? Scoff!
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>>54774961
Steroids.
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>>54772280
The TARDIS, obviously. Or just the RDIS if time travel is off the table.
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>>54775064
Invisible Guardian of Ocular Ability
Crystal Gem of Sleep and Wakefulness
Fetishy Undergarments of Reliable Attractiveness
Instant Break Time of Indefinite Length
Truthful Statistics of Myriad Information
Bank Account of The Philanthropic Hobbyist
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>>54774629

Hey, I destroy things that cause other people trouble too.

Remember those puppets?

And the Kaiju?

I stop those things all the time!

Besides, since I use operant conditioning to control my subjects, it takes too long to raise actual armies. I can probably only raise around 3-4 at a time and it probably takes a year or two before I can reliably call upon their services.
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>>54774832
I took inbound tech support calls from all over NA back in the day. Enough of those calls were from the Southern United States that I developed a bit of an accent. It sure helped diffuse some situations with irate customers, let me tell you. Funniest thing to me was how in some dialects you can't differentiate the sounds between "pen" and "PIN".
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>>54775164

Ooh! Ooh!


Infinite power exploit time!

The Answers
The Journey

Use The Answers to lead me to convenient mcguffins that will safely increase me in power, focusing on those mcguffins that are relatively unguarded at the point in the story that I portal into.
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>>54770688
Gifts- Archer, Horselord, Intimidating, Weaponer
Herds-Common+Tinkers, Food+ Watchdogs, Swift+ Raptors, Hunter +Kheshik
Sacrifice- Ancestors
Retinue-Mummified Abbot, Hostage Princess, Welkin Witch, Strategic Consort, Sworn Brother, Condor Kings
Artifacts-Stele of the Fallen Empire
The Steppe-Kinship Network
Beyond- West- Oasis of Trade, North- Frozen Graveyard, East- Cold Woodsmen
Empire-Great River, Fortified Marches, Southern Clans, The Polymath
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>>54775240
Yeah, most everything gets slurred a lot, and I don't have as bad of an accent as the stereotype is but sometimes people misunderstand me. I can code switch just like how a black person does, talk "professionally" (normal/yankee) in one circumstance and then talk more texas-like.
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0.2
* Added human/shifting and waifu/husbando/companion option in opening preamble
* Filled in a lot more description.

Wendigo still is incredibly unappealing, though maybe that's just me. I had originally thought they would be more interesting that a vampire, but maybe they'll get switched out. (Wendingo/Vampire is too similar to have both, I feel).

Still plan to add werebeasts, though I'm not sure how to make them appealing. They will be carnivorous and require a lot of food, though it does not have to be humans or intelligent beings. Bears will do just fine.
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>>54774832
Around here, only an o at the beginning of a word has a chance to fall victim to that. You might get a tamorro, but never a tamara.
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>>54775240
I'm surprised you pronounce them differently, myself.
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>>54772659
>>54773263
the bear part was a joke, the other was a legit question
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>>54775329
Nice fleshing out, although I'll say that the Phoenix only being able to blaze once a day still seems sketchy to me (though you have made it much, much better with your additions).

I'll go Wendigo, this time.
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>>54775329
looks nice, why don't djinn carry their totems often tho?
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>>54775485
Cause tactically it's better to hide them, unless they need to travel far. Carrying them leaves them potentially exposed if someone can defeat the Djinn.
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>>54774961
Steroids for her looks and for self improvement, though ketamine is real close
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>>54766260
>Ghostly Spirit
>>Possess
>>Unbound
Objectively the best option. Go anywhere, be anyone, and have a cup of tea along the way.
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>>54775449
>>54775329
Give the Pheonix a "teleport to safety" effect when it dies.
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>>54774437
>the one nigger who wants to infect his normal son

It takes a lot to upset me these days, but wew.
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>>54775569
Doesn't really need one, I don't think? It's invincible for a minute after coming back, and it already has teleport abilities, so it can just pop away itself, no?
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>>54770263
Dragon seems like a bad choice because you're essentially a prey species for a few centuries, and once you get too old you spend your whole time sleeping.
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>>54774293
Are you trying to befriend the others? Ahh... This is what i get for going to sleep, i miss out all the fun.
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>>54775623
Fair. My thinking was that young dragons are usually stupid; you have an advantage of having a more mature mind. The implied advice is to seek patronage when you are young, the example given is as a familiar to a wizard. And you're right about the sleeping; maybe I should just tone that down to "less active"
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>>54775609
I missed that it already had teleport, it's fine then.
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>>54775748
The drama has dried up. Move on.
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where would one go for the lewd cyoa's?
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>>54775833

church
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>>54775329
Penix is clearly the best
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>>54775838
very funny
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>>54775833
/thrash/ throg and nsfwcyoa rebbit
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>>54775064
2x gem of sleep and wakefulness, one for a friend
bank account of the philanthropic hobbyist
infallible salvation of information if it lets me fix thumbnails and get deleted videos, if not then lazy comforts
eternal impunity of the smug anime girl
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>>54775398
Where are you from? North Texas here
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>>54775329
I can only spend 0% of my life as a human huh. Thats tough. Oh well better than not at all I suppose.

...
...

Dragons can still mate with humans in their dragon form right?

Actually reading through, it seems like dragons arent all that powerful? It looks like djinns and liches might outclass them in magic and kraken outclasses a water dragon in everything.
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>>54776015
NC.
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>>54775329

As fast as ever with updates I see.

I'll still stick with dryad, I'll probably take a 63 mile walk around the edge of my territory and lay stones or otherwise mark the edges, then begin to cultivate a massive garden. Ideally, this area will be somewhere absurdly inhospitable, a desert, death valley, the artic, what have you.

I'll start off by establishing a non-dendrovorous food chain from fruit, to insects, to birds, to massive herbivores (elephants/giraffes/rhino/hippos). This will provide defense against anyone I would consider an asshole. Hopefully, this would establish a unique group of species to defend my funny grove circle that people could visit without causing trouble.

As for the idea of a wendigo. I think you're looking for an immortal with a parasitic relationship with mortals without doing something overdone (vampires).

Wendigo are kinda boring in that sense, perhaps you want something that takes something more abstract than life? Perhaps this creature would feed off happiness, worship, knowledge, or something else?
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>>54776207
You do know that Wendigo exist beyond this CYOA, right? And that eating human flesh is their big thing? In fact, humans become Wendigo in the first place by eating it in the first place.
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>>54775164
>Wallet
>Redesign
>Perfect Photographic Memory
>$1000 A Week

This CYOA trips my autism a bit. It says you can take 2 powers, or 1 power and 3 perks, or 7 perks. Shouldn't be 2 powers, 1 power and 4 perks, or 8 perks? That way 1 power is worth 4 perks.

It bugs meeee.
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>>54771124
No comrade, it's all good.
20 Default +2 Flowing +3 Tome

Luna (H) - C -> S (3)
Love (B) - C -> S (4)
Tempora (H) - C -> (3)
Shift (H) - C -> S (3)
Tech (B) - C -> S (4)
Astra (H) - C -> S (3)
Dexterity (B) - C (1)
Mind (All) - C
Stamina (H) - C -> B (1)
Reserves (All) - C -> S (3)

Total Points = 25/25

Wait a minute, I FORGOT TO PUT MY WEAPON AGAIN!
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>>54775329
Cool stuff. I'd probably go Dragon; Djinn as a close second. Would stalk thread for updates
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>>54776207
>>54776428
Wendigo are kinda like Wild Vampires.
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>>54776621
no
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>>54776683
yes
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>>54776154
>>54775329
Yeeaaaaah. I guess I'd still go with dragon. Maybe try to be worshipped and be some kinda holy dragon? Probably start out as two mini dragons hunting in the forest and waiting to come across some magically talented little girl to become our treasure.

I do like Djinns still but Im not a fan of forced bodyguarding and also I dont think they can lewd the humans without wasting their transformation. Liches.... might have been interesting pick too. Maybe learn holy magic ? I mean, you did say it's limited only by time.
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>>54776835
>Learning holy magic as a lich
That is like a vampire wanting to go to the beach to get a tan
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>>54766110
Just going to pick out one more thing in this massively non-/k/ CYOA

>SVD
>Sniper rifle
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>>54769288
After Life Heaven
Eternal Peace I'd take any day.
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>>54775833
/trash just type cyoa in the search bar.
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>>54775833
Ask for a specific one. Don't listen to >>54775855
>>54777113
Who are shitposters. Plenty of lewd is made and posted here.
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>>54760126
>>54766191
>[This CYOA is intended to be played with A New Magical Girl CYOA]
Alright then...

Age: Old
Well: Lewd (Hope)
Pit: Carnal (Wicked/Despair)

Magical Rites
Tempora S
Shift S

Magical Glamours
Twist S
Alteration S

Physical Rites/Glamours
Mind S
Reserves S
Defense S
Strength A
Stamina A
Agility A
Dexterity A
Flexibility S+ (Genie)

Tool: Ampoule
Outfit: Phazed Strange Age
Familiar: Copycat

Quests:
-Clean Up
-Help People
-Emergency Rescue
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>>54777123
That's true, but I'm sure he's talking about the ones like deus vault and the other NSFW ones.
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>>54772886
What about waifus? Will I finally be able to hold her?
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>>54776440
Think of it this way:

- You have 7 points.
- Powers cost 3 points each, perks cost 1 point each.
- It costs 1 point to unlock the power section.

Is your autism soothed?
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>>54766110
Are you just tricking me into being a soldier?
Those spells you taught me seem like just normal gear
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>>54775164
Change appearance at will
Infinite Lifespan
Regenerate/Immunity
Indexed Memory

The first 5 perk points here are my mandatory choices. Immortality+Shapeshifting, with immunity being a necessary component of immortality. The last choice could really be anything on the list, they are all about equal value to me. I think the memory synergizes better with immortality over the long term though.
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>>54777497
Well not ANYTHING, the "get fit" option is mostly superfluous with shapeshifting. Maybe it makes me healthier (also superfluous with immunity) and stronger and maybe shapeshifting doesn't, but I'm not nearly as interested.
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>>54772886
Yeah, I wanted it to be something like that at first, and I was worried about only having 2 Christian Afterlives and missing out any others. It's not perfect but I had to balance it some way, Hell gets sinfull abundance, heaven gets eternal bliss.
>>54774138
>Also, under the abilities, the lines aren't connected to Possess and Unbound.
How the hell'd that happen? Thanks for spotting that.
I'll post it fixed in the next thread.
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>>54772899
nigga when we gettin dis
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>>54774961
LSD for the ability to spend infinite amounts of subjective time.
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>>54777621
I finished it a little while ago, waiting for the next thread.
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>>54767229
>40k cyoa
Min neger
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>>54772280
Not sure The Normandy would be very comfy since it's a fairly spartan military ship and kind of small. The SR II is a bit better for the captain and key personnel though.
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Here's a new thread: >>54777731
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>>54777777
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>>54777745
Loser.
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>>54777773
u rite
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>>54777644
It's finished
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>>54777791
NOT Author, just excited it's finished. :D
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>54777791
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>>54777731
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>>54766536
This dude gets it.
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>>54777814
>No keep memory
Might as well have just picked oblivion
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>>54770414
>Discord
Oh no.
Not even acheld, the normie author, is safe.
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>>54770414
Discord robs anons of their ability to critique CYOAs.
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>>54774437
Literally the equivalent of taking screenshots of a loli thread on /b/ and claiming all straight people are pedophiles. "Bug chasing" is a niche community within a niche community within a niche community.
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>>54778545
It's been theorized many times that the overwhelming majority of people are attracted to teens. While not literally pedophilia, the difference is negligible in society.
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>>54778560
My point stands. It's ludicrous to take a few screenshots and then assume it's a HUGE thing amongst the gay community. I just checked and the reddit bugchasing group has 22(!) subscribers. It's clearly not even a thing amongst normies.
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>>54778587
>It's clearly not even a thing amongst normies.
Clearly. Humanity would be doomed if that were the case. The amount of damage one person can do in this is substantial. Particularly if they are a woman as women can get laid easier. A thousand times in a lifetime isn't a stretch.
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