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Which cyoa lets me punish bullies or help survivors of bullying?
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>>53232646
Nemesis
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>>53232646
Anything with powers
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>OC

You probably don’t remember, but I started making CYOAs somewhere around one year ago. And what better way to celebrate this than by returning to my roots and trying to fix my old mistakes? And, as one wise Anon said: Worm CYOAs were a mistake. It’s time to correct it.
This is simply something that I started, so I just have to keep walking on my chosen path regardless of what I think about it now.
I'm using Worm CYOAs as a business to get experience... so I can end Worm CYOAs as a business!
Behold - the Worm CYOA to end all Worm CYOAs!
Well, not really.

Changelog:
1. Page width is now 1600 pixels instead of 1280.
2. There is now one background for each page instead of 3 different ones.
3. There is now 4 pages in total.
4. Obnoxious narrator was deported to Siberia.
5. The whole thing is now more casual friendly for those who never read Worm. At least I think it is.
6. Implemented a system with two different types of points.
7. Extras were renamed, expanded and put at the beginning of the CYOA.
8. Paths were expanded and actually have some use mechanically later in the CYOA.
9. A new path – Endbringer. It’s exactly what it says on the tin.
10. You can now choose your origin, civillian identity and so on during the initial characterization.
11. Created a specific panel dedicated to choosing your costume.
12. You can pick mundane skills to help you both in and out of costume.
13. Reworded, expanded and reevaluated costs in the Shard panel.
14. Reworked most of the perks and drawbacks.
15. Godslayer and Manton Effect Bypass perks were abolished. Their functions were combined into a single Second Trigger perk, which also makes your power more… powerful, I guess.
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>>53232799
16. Followers section was removed due to them being bad fanfiction-tier in favour of a system where you can create your own bad fanfiction-tier followers via a perk with the same name.
17. There is now a Second Trigger section under each power, describing how exactly its upgraded version works, because I was tired of answering such questions for Godslayer and Manton Effect Bypass. You would think that “It’s the same, but it now works on Endbringers/humans/yourself” was obvious, but apparently not.
18. I stopped pretending that I know how freedom units work and switched to the ones normal people use.
19. Changed costs and renamed many powers and tweaked how they worked. There’s now 137 powers in total, deleted around 50 unsatisfactory powers and replaced them with different ones.
20. Added some anime flavoring to the power list, because sometimes things just aren’t OP enough.
21. Top powers are now clearly more powerful compared to the rest of them, as I attempt to satisfy the powerfag crowd that wants guarantees that they will win (but it’ll still upset them because it’s still not enough). There’s still not enough points to buy these top powers without taking some drawbacks first to satisfy adventurefag crowd that hates easy mode powers, so you don’t have to take them if you don’t want to, all other powers are pretty balanced, I think (but it’ll still upset them because overpowered powers still exist). Also they now cost 25 points instead of 20 like before to further discourage people from taking them. You might ask “Why wouldn’t we simply take the drawbacks and just go for the strongest powers anyway, as drawbacks won’t matter then?” and I will answer “Why wouldn’t you just choose the easiest mode instead of ‘Skitter Mode’ in the earlier Worm CYOAs then?”, because this is almost the same thing. This is a CYOA, you can do anything you want, after all.
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>>53232825
Also, I want to thank the Anon who gave me advice on how to balance powers (now that everything changed again, I’ll likely need his help once more).
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>>53232799
Ooh, I like the option to choose when you enter the setting, or even do alternate timelines. That's going to be a fun change.
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>>53232851
And that’s it. I don’t think I missed anything, but I probably did and will only realize it hours after posting. Oh well. Wait, it’s spelled ‘civiLian identity’, not ‘civiLLian’? Damn you, English, you’ve let me down yet again (or is it the other way around?)! But whatever, I don’t care enough to go through the entire CYOA to fix this grammar error everywhere and then recompile it together again. It will take hours, so pretend that I did it right. I’ll fix it next time.
Not really satisfied with how this one turned out, but this is still better than what it was before, surely. I guess I won’t be able to top Magocratic Convention in graphical department (or content in general) just yet.
The next on the list is Time of Troubles update, but it will probably take eons for me to finish it.
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>>53225953
>>53226003
>>53226059
>>53226067
I'm a bit busy today, so I'll have to get back to comments about balance and stuff later, but I realized I exported an older version of Page 3, again. Sometimes I think having multiple backups on multiple devices is more trouble than its worth. In any case, I figured it would be gauche to post the entire thing myself again without an update, but here is the proper version of Page 3 with the fixed typos. I'm sure I missed a few though. The only changes are in some wording, some grammar errors, some terminology changes and such, not balance.

Again, I'd like to thank people who have posted feedback and builds. I always love reading peoples' write ups.
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>>53232799
I'm not sure whether I'm too autistic or not autistic enough for this cyoa...
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thanks for posting that cyoa senpai
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881
Aww, no way to make Tinkertech comprehensible to regular people? Darn. Well, I guess that will be the challenge for me to occupy myself with after the world's problems have been solved, advancing mankind's scientific knowledge until we can do it on our own.
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>>53232799
You're amazing m8, I recently came across CYOAs and your worm CYOA was the first I ever read and is by far my favourite, there are soo very few well designed ones that don't look like they were half assedly mspainted, and even fewer with such replayability as yours. Thanks for all your work anon.
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Is there like an archive of only the images? Like a storage spot for these? I dont want to go back 50 threads to get new stuff.
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>>53233241
It's in the first post, anon.
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>>53233241
pastebin
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Anyone know if you're supposed to take your build from A New Magical Girl and build your A New Dark Magical Girl build off of that or no?
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>>53232799
Love the new options for designing a character, lots of numbers tho, kinda confusing
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Do any CYOAs let me be a crazy scientist?
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>>53232799
>You are limited to your Path-specific section
Isn't everyone though? Or am I misunderstanding something?
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>>53233255
You technically are, although IIRC the only relevant choice would be your relative age.
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>>53233251
>>53233250
Thats weird, thought I checked that out before and didnt find what I wanted. Thanks.
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>>53233267
Yes, the one you make.
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>>53233286
There's link to both Dropbox account and Google Drive account that collect them. They might have small variances but in theory they should have some content. In practice I spotted couple lewd CYOAs in Dropbox that aren't in Drive but also got old version of Immortality Quest from there.
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>>53233281
So if you build for Dark you lose all your regular MG stuff and have to rebuild completely, keeping nothing from your MG save for your age. Is that correct?
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>>53225701

Eedra Nasok, Desire of All

Genitalia
>Vagina (1)
>Embellishments
>Lubrication
>Musculature
>Cilia
>Lumen
>Plush (x3)
>Penis (1)
>Flare
>Knot
>Spines
>Prehensile
>Lumen
>Pillar (x3)
32

Shape
>Enticing
32

Chest
>Cursed
34

Influences
>Kleptozoological
>Oversaturated
>Pseudodevascent
38

Face
>Regal
38

Flourishes
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness
>Lactation
>Bountiful
>Nurturing
>Aphrodisiac
>Dependent
>Ejaculation
>Aphrodisiac
>Gate to Ecstasy mouth
>Reproductive Channel
>Plush (x1)
>Puzzle Genitalia
>Carnal Atmosphere
56

Strategy
>Brooding
56

Dowry
>Title (1)
>Nuptial Torc
>Primordial Woad
>Abyssal Ink
>Celestial Charms
>Regal Array
65

Bonds
>Sensual Ritualists
>Prime Mate
77

Urges
>Mating Dance
>Throne's Shadow
>Cerebral Recurve
>Mental Morass
>Spoiled
>Nightmare Cycle
68

Stigmata
>Stigma of the Crystal Heart

Ambition
>Desire of All Hearts
>Cherished Carnal Treasure
70

Pedigree 1
Status 1
Allure 16

Eedra's most ardent desire was to be wanted and loved by all. So Teiatat gifted her with an unnatural and supremely beautiful form and demeanor that would awaken love, lust, and jealousy in all who beheld her. She was meant to be a gift to the most loyal courtiers and brides, but that hasn't lasted long. Eedra has changed hands many times as intrigue and even war have followed her everywhere. Very few who behold her can contain themselves for long from trying to seduce or seize her. Though at times this makes her situation difficult, it is mostly to her liking. She is wanted by all and taken to many different worlds to see many wondrous things and gifted amazing treasures to please her.
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>>53233436
Is this an angel build?
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>>53233386
Some of the categories in DMG include stuff from MG, so you're not forced to throw _everything_ away. Also there's a thing that lets a DMG use MG magic.
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>>53233268
If you are talking about the Endbringer text, then tt means that you are supposed to ignore the rest of the CYOA and stick to the Path Specific part at the end of it.
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>>53233447

Yes. Experimenting with one that has woman and man parts.
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>>53233570
>Futa shit
>Desire of all
Nope.
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>>53233713

I took Puzzle Genitalia option so it can be retracted inside and not noticeable.
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>>53233570
Good on you for branching out.
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do naga futas exist
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>>53233761
What, some kind of Rubik's Cock?

Anyway, CYOA about being a bad guy/girl/thing
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>>53233847
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>>53232799
Is there any way I could convince you to upload the images you used to like an imgur abulm or something? There's like a bunch of htem that I would love to have.
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>>53233870
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>>53233780

Thanks!

>>53233847

It's just an option that's there to cover unusual kinds that don't quite fit the other options.

Looks like fun cyoa!
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>>53233916
The bottom of the fucking last page has flavour text that you lose your personality and memories, your body is gone anyway. Fucking owned. My build is Ultimate End and nothing else, fuck you whoever you are that inherits this shit job.
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>>53232799
>Page width is now 1600 pixels instead of 1280.
Dropped this shit. People check those things on all kinds of screens, including 4:3 ones if not even less wide in case of some mobile devices. You were to improved the CYOA, not make it worse.
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It says here that in cyoas you have used words in ways not conform to their official dictionary definitions. Care to explain?
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>>53233761
You'd be repulsive for even having it. Wouldn't touch.
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>Browsing for CYOAs on mobile
>Having a sub-1080p screen
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What is the best way to get a stando in this CYOA?
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>>53234105
>women are in charge of everything because waifus make my penis happy
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>>53234061
Is this show any good, or has the reaction face become common independently of the show's quality?
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>>53234061
No.
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>>53234122
meta-cyoa
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>>53234105
Sometimes I need my waifu fix on the go
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>>53234130
>tumblr
Submit to the matriarchy, anon.
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>>53234105
Why is every society in your cyoas matriarchal? Are you a cuck?
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>>53232799
Well I do love the fact that you gave us scenario options. Giving us two sets of points was a good idea.

The powers section is better though I do wish there were more options. Don't get me wrong there are a lot of cool options.

Now onto questions.
Can I combine the effects of powers? Such as using Presence to ignore line of sight limits on certain powers?
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>>53234105
Is it done about now? Come on, SDA, what are you doing that's more important than cyoas? Nothing is more important.

>>53234130
He makes a valid point even when its covered in shitpost. Will every division ruled by women? Pls no.
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>>53234105
>Current year
>Nazis
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>>53234223
>Using /pol/ memes to complain about nazis
You're obviously banting, mate.
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>>53232799
I've always been confused about the Shroedinger power, "Locked in the same single point in space" does this mean the only action I could take is thinking different things in each quantum level? Is this like Coil's power?
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>>53234105
Yes.
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>>53234183
It's hot as long as the girls don't behave like real women
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Which author is the most selfish?
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>>53234257
You for not posting OC and trying to start a shitstorm
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>>53234105
I've got no idea what that is, but it's got me a half mast.
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>>53234257
>>53234255
Oh boy they're here early this time.
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>>53234257
None are selfish. Since they create free content for the benefit of strangers, it is by definition impossible for any of them to be selfish.
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>>53234216
It will be half and half.
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>>53234255
It's hot when it's one of the options from among many. Make it a standard thing and it becomes fucking dull.
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>>53234276
>>53234284
>>53234292
He's an old IP, probably the same guy that posted the cat picture.

I can tell you point blank that nobody involved last thread is trying to bring it back up. This guy is just our general shit stirrer.
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>>53234296
Does that mean we'll get futa divisions?
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>>53232799
This look awesome as usual, but the small font in the description of powers on Powers page is kinda hurts my eyes.
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>>53234104

I'm not into it myself. I was just trying something new.
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Is there any tips people have for balancing stuff?

Stat stuff is easy because at least you have numbers to work with, but when your dealing with things that give perks its hard to figure out what is fair.
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>>53234361

>Is there any tips people have for balancing stuff?
Nobody gives a shit since nobody will do fucking PvP, just have it make sense from a narrative POV and any autist that bitches about it can go play EVE Online.
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>>53234361
Don't bother. INT and magic >>>>> strength and punching people is just the way it is.
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>>53232958
Please rate this statement as true of false
"A bonus bottle should not be a way to gain free power, but rather a way to gain an additional companion genie"
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/cyoag/, what CYOAs do you think have the best graphic design?
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>>53234361
Consider first how hard you want it to be in general, what's the setting. For example, many comfy CYOAs allow plenty of options and perks up to point of demigodhood since it's meant to be mix of escapism and power fantasy. But the same won't fit more realistic or darker setting.

If the CYOA IS about some sort of semigodhood/magic etc, then certaint raits like immortality etc may be default. But if you make CYOA about something more down to earth or depending on survival, then immortality may not even be an option or it has to be overwhelmingly expensive one.

Lot of it will be subjective. Is this option worth more than several others? Make it more expensive than those others.
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>>53234361
Make magic STR based, thanks.
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>>53234411
First, since I am omnipotent I make the 300 words requirement void. Then I enjoy myself in many ways.
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>>53234361
Make magic meme based. Thanks.
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>>53234465
You forgot to say that you'd do it retroactively.
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>>53232974
>>53233266
It's not that hard, is it?

>>53233208
Well, that's how it works in canon, so there's nothing I can do about it.

>>53233219
Oh, thanks Anon.

>>53233268
I actually was going to make that part more clear and then kinda forgot.
What it means is that you are limited only to the Endbringer Path-Specific section at the end of the CYOA, since the rest of the panels aren't appropriate for this option.

>>53233874
I'm sorry, the only images I have saved are the technical things like textures and stuff. I always just google the pictures I need and don't save their originals anywhere.

>>53233959
Ok.

>>53234199
>The powers section is better though I do wish there were more options.
>137 powers
>Not enough
Damn.
>Can I combine the effects of powers? Such as using Presence to ignore line of sight limits on certain powers?
Only if it wouldn't break things too much.

>>53234239
I meant that in a way that you can't walk away from where you stand to do something else somewhere far away, while you also remain where you were originally at the same exact time (this limitation is removed by the Second Trigger upgrade).
It should work like Assassin's Tsubame Gaeshi from Fate. Meaning that you can swing your sword in three different directions at the same time while you stand still. Or things similar to that.

>>53234318
I suspected it would cause some problems, but I didn't want to separate powers for different pages. Well, it's always easy to read pretty much anything for me, so I can never know whether it will be difficult to read for others or not.
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>>53234361
Make shitload of lewd, waifu options that give one little of a power but appeal to fantasies. It'll balance itself out when neckbeards will choose those waifu options at the price of something actually powerful.

Yes, it's half-serious answer but only _half_-serious one. Great choice of many little options make the person prioritize, not get too OP while still having fun.
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>>53234449
>or it has to be overwhelmingly expensive one.
This is always a mistake.

Making immortality cheep or default is fine, as is making it completely unavailable. Either way takes it off the table for discussion. The CYOA then gets to focus on whatever it is it was made for and hopefully you get to see some interesting builds.

Making it debilitatingly expensive however only serves to turn it into a CYOA about "how best can I achieve immortality". This generally does not serve to create very interesting build variety or discussion unless the entire CYOA is dedicated to different methods of doing this, and that's already been done half to death.

If you are ever considering making immortality expensive, just don't put it in at all. Your CYOA will be better off without it.
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>>53234284
>>53234304
Wat
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>>53234526
>Making it debilitatingly expensive however only serves to turn it into a CYOA about "how best can I achieve immortality".
I disagree. It only depends how important immortality is in context of the CYOA. For example if in the context of the setting you constantly reincarnate or continue sme mission as sort of revenant before becoming something more/else, then immortality suddenly becomes merely an alternative, not a powerful boon.

So, "it depends on the setting" is kinda right.
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>>53234411
Nothing. Everything. That's omnipotence, and not. It's a paradox. No matter how grand or insignificant an action is for you the opposite is as equally true and false. It's THE Mary Sue power and the end all be all. Makes me think too much to care about the facade of all this, desu.
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>>53234547
That may not be the immortality in the traditional sense, but it's still a 'death is not the end' type of deal.
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>>53234547
>If in the context of the setting you are already immortal, than immortality merely becomes an alternative form of immortality

On the other hand, I'll admit that in "fantasy character builder" CYOAs immortality kind of isn't important enough to get special rules. Of course if you ask me that entire "genre" doesn't serve any purpose to begin with.
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>>53234578
No, in case of those examples it'd be very much traditional immortality - "you don't die". It's just if the CYOA assumes death is not the end, like you say - and there are many opportunities after, then immortality becomes aforementioned alternative with cons of lack of the same options dying would provide. Varied price for immortality, including it being greatly expensive is a valid design choice at times, anyway, depending on what that immortality entails and what are the alternatives. That's how balancing works.
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>>53232799
Do Drop-Ins get the +2 character points from No Identity, or is that +2 only for Inserts who decide to take it? Basically, what I'm saying is, if I pick Drop-In, do I get +5/+3, or just +3/+3?
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>>53234631
The problem is you cannot actually balance it. Assuming the CYOA character is yourself, the value of immortality is infinite and the cost is always finite, basically a form of Pascal's Wager at play.

No amount of giving it a higher finite point cost will ever balance against infinite value. All it ultimately does is make the choice obvious when the CYOA says "I could give you all this cool stuff, or you could be boring and choose immortality instead".
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Kickass person who illustrated the CYOA about cuddling Monstergirls: If you're here, I have another short MG CYOA idea about visiting a cafe.
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>>53234773
Who?
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While the last thread was pretty fucking awful, by standards of cyoa threads is was almost civil. Have Raven of Happiness as reward.
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>>53234790
mystery box, I guess, I don't think opening this locks you into it so not sure why it's a secret box. Open it anyway.
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>>53234810
mystery feather
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next part will be posted a bit later, so feel free to make your choice
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>>53234823
I'm taking the feather and hoping for a comfy mad scientist option.
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>>53234810
Community got to vote on which of the four themes the fifth option would follow. I think that's as far as the mystery goes.
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>>53234515
>Well, that's how it works in canon, so there's nothing I can do about it.
You've got plenty of other options that break canon. Like "your shard doesn't mess with your head" or "you can actually violate entropy, not just look like you are". I figured that "you can coherently explain how your technology works" wouldn't be unreasonable. But like I said, it's no big deal if you don't want to include it. I'll need a project for after I eat Zion, figuring out how to translate Entity technical knowledge into something humans can understand is a good one.
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>>53234361

If magic and physical powers are to stand side by side, the easiest way to balance them is for both to be a battle of willpower.
You can have a great and powerful Archmage high on his tower throwing great globs of flaming death... and on the other side you have the Barbarian Wargod who looks at those great globs of flaming death and SCREAMS them to death instead.
The will of one who is sure in his capabilities after years and years of hard research affirming them, or the will of one who steps forward in blind faith without shadow of doubt.
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>>53234549
Oh god, are you one of those faggots who cry that immortality is a trap option? If you can't figure out omnipotence you likely are one.
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>>53234654
A wholesome CYOA? In my /tg/?
Thank you for sharing anon!
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>>53235054
Not him, but having omnipotence is a boring option. Fun in life comes from uncertainty, challenges, and limits. That's why people like difficult vidya.
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>>53234654
guess now is a good a time as any to start being a good person

A shoulder to cry on -mundane
Stop the tears -mundane
Food magic - mundane
would you lie with me -mundane
Trust -mundane
Those three words - mundane

Headpats -magical
Love -magical
A contagious smile - magical
Warmth - magical

Cure Vices - Miracle

and the foxgirl is case No.1
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>>53235083
>Fun in life comes from uncertainty, challenges, and limits.
Some of the fun, sure. There are ways to make pure imagination fun. Granted omnipotence wouldn't give you any fitan challenges, but the ability to be endlessly creative and see what those creations do in the long run is enormously attractive to me.
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>>53234790

I think I'll take the Mystery Box option. It's great.
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>>53234697
>Do Drop-Ins get the +2 character points from No Identity
Yes.
>>53234957
Well, the "shard that doesn't mess with your head" makes sense. Contessa's shard doesn't drive her towards conflict, I think. But what you say is right, though I guess that figuring out how tinker-stuff actually works isn't as important or relevant.
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>>53235063
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>>53234697
>>53235115
>Drop-Ins
For a minute there I thought I was in a jumpchain thread.
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>>53235063
>>53235146
I like this, but it'd be nice if there was more of it or to it.
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>>53234654
Hey Anon is this OC you made?
I like it.

I'll turn 2 Mundanes into a magical

Compassion: Mun
A shoulder to cry on:Mun
Would you lie with me: Mun
Those Three Words: Mun

Headpats: Mag
Trust: Mag
A Contagious Smile: Mag
Protector: Mag
What they Need to hear: Mag

Healing: Mir

I'll dedicate myself to making peoples lives easier and protecting the weak.
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>>53235107
I could see that, and I guess if you are omnipotent you can possibly create a situation where you've limited your abilities somehow
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>>53235115
Just checking, with eyes of death we can "kill" our own lifespan so that way we are immortal?

Assuming of course that we take the proper perks. Also is second trigger needed
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>>53234790
The hell is the ghost arms pic from? That's fantastic.
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>>53235198
Or you can just choose to not hit your easy button all the time. Your challenges would be self-imposed. Kinda like playing a vidya with a broken combo and choosing not to use the broken combo.
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>>53234973
No, apparently the fundamental powers of creation are trivial to control for anyone wearing a bathrobe. And if this person also stops shaving, with merely wiggle of his eyebrow he can accomplish feats that would cause seasoned genie to pass out from envy. If you can imagine that magic can do it, it can do it, trivially and for no cost.
Whereas a warlord is wearing armor and don't you know that metal is heavy, so he can't actually run. And heh, can you imagine someone actually having magical shouting? Impossible. And warlord really can't even lead armies as my Axis & Allies simulation shows. If you can imagine a reason why fighter can't do something, he can't.

The one thing all wizards live in terror is a rogue sneaking up behind them, sword ready, glinting in moonlight. And putting it in wizard's hand, thus instantly forcing him into ultra-realism mode while "ACHTUALLY" echoes thro the world, turning his phenomenal cosmic powers into card tricks and instantly killing him via scurvy.

Reminder, a dev of Pathfinder nerfed Weapon Chain because he tied a mouse cord around his wrist, flailed like a retarded chimp with live wire up it's ass and declared that weapon chain doesn't actually make it any easier to get your weapon back. No, you can't take hold of the chain with your other hand, you have to play the most retarded ball and cup game ever made and since he couldn't do it, it was impossible for some fighter or rogue with measly 25 DEX to accomplish.
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>>53235198
>>53235288
That's what I would do. Set up a world I want to live in, then shut off my powers and go live in it. I'd probably keep some failsafes in place of course. The real thing to watch out for is omniscience. Once you know everything that will be there's no real point in doing anything at all.
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please be nice, otherwise the spirit of raven of happiness will cry
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>>53235347
Doesn't look like you'll get locked into mystery box this time either so go hog wild
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>>53233847

Commandant Gisela Kroll

>Manipulated
>The Chosen World (Alternate Timeline, Nazis Won)
50
>Counsilwoman
350

>Personality and Looks
Commandant Kroll has luxurious blond hair, pure sky blue eyes, and porcelain white skin. A perfect example of what the Reich expects a Commandant to be. All her life she's been tight-laced and by the book. Perfectly disciplined and demanding of herself and of others. She was raised on a farm in Bavaria, but left home to join the Wehrmacht when she heard the desperate plea for anyone who could fight to join and defend the Reich. She was quickly promoted as her superiors were killed. Now a battle hardened Commandant, she takes everything seriously and looks at all situations with a tactical mindset. Though loyal and dutiful to a fault, recent events have caused her to question everything. What if everything she believed and fought for is a lie?
400
>Motif
Villainous Vixen Turned to Good
425

>Fighting Mastery
375
>Ageless
275
>Regeneration
175
>Silver-tongue
125
>Blessed
75
>Charm
50
>Style
25
>Immunity
0

>All Hail Me

While Gisela was fighting to defeat the enemies of the Reich, she didn't know what horrible things her leaders were doing back home. As the Great War winds down, and their enemies' capitals burn, reports find their way to Gisela of the unspeakable cruelty of the leaders to whom she swore loyalty! Must she betray her oath? Is it right? What will she do if she succeeds?
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>>53235365
fether shop
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>>53233268
Endbringers only get the stuff from their Path section. They don't get normal powers, Gifts, or a civilian identity.
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>>53235365

Mystery Box again. The mystery box ones are just so good.
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>>53232799

Is Unlimited Shard Works as god-tier as it looks when Second Triggered? If you play your hand right with friends, Kingmaker and cauldron vials, you basically win everything forever.
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is it out?
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>>53235471
Yes. I don't have it though
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>>53235063
I feel like this really need rules or at least guidelines into how you should make a Pantheon.
Like, how many gods it should max have, what happens if two gods have same themes.
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>>53233208
There is a work-around for this, if you're smart.

Voice In My Head. You don't know how the tinkertech works, but your Passenger does. All you have to do is figure out how to communicate and interpret that.
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One good opinion that came from the previous thread.

little girl(male), 1
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>>53232799
I spent way too much thinking of how to build for this. Don't know shit about it, but who cares.

Scenario
>Golden Age
Path
>Villain
Origin
>Drop-in
>Male
>Adult
Civilian Identity
>No Identity
Costume
>Budget
Skills
>Martial Arts
>Hacking
>Investigation
>Survival
>Parkour
Shard
>Foreign Element
Perks
>Power Slot
>Second Trigger x4
>Noctis Cape
>Negentropy
Flaws
>Worst Day Ever x3
>Humble Beginnings
Gifts
>Payoff
Powers
>Peak Condition
>Immunity
>Regeneration
>Adaptation
Path Specific
>Empire 88
Perks
>N/A
Flaws
>Kill Order
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>>53235471
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>>53235576
THANK YOU
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the final raven
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>>53235755
final mystery box
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>>53235755
Actually, this is final raven
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>>53235755
but- but I'm unhappy about only getting to choose one :(
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>>53235835
I'll take her!
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>>53235856
too late, called dibs years ago
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>>53235835
But this is the Last Raven
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>>53235847
You have my special permission to pick extras.

The catch is that you must post a build for some other cyoa for each extra you pick. You can choose some of the cyoas already posted or post something yourself.
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>>53235063
>Terrestrial

>Prophecy
>Cunning
>Creativity
>The Home
>Entertainment
>Trading

Up on the hill o'er yonder, there is an old house. In that old house there is a yet older man, a kind old man who will trade any passing weary traveller a warm meal and a comfy bed in exchange for naught but a story, provided it be one he enjoys.
If you would ask more of the old man in the old house, he will allow you to ask but a single question of the untold, that which is yet to come, with the stipulation that you must discern the meaning of his answer yourself. As fate is complicated and winding, so too are his revelations, for if you do not understand his words, the future will remain clouded to you.
Even if you are not concerned about what may be, anyone who has visited the old man in the old house will reccommend a visit, for you will be hard pressed to find a warmer atmosphere, a better meal, or a more enjoyable evening anywhere else.
All for the price of a good story.
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>>53235877
I think you'll find this is the last raven.
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881
I will have you know friend I alway Wait for you, Now All it will be really amazing if Worm 4 will update too...
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Holy shit text-based triple box CYOA????

Pick your destiny! Or don't.

() Penis in vagina: a cute girl will have sex with you. You'll do such a good job that she'll fall in love with your penis. Literally. She has conversations with it, pretends it's an actual person and tolerates you at best. Lots of sex though.

() Money in wallet: an old man offers you $1000 a month. In exchange you will need to pretend your his grandson's gay homosexual lover. The grandson is /pol/ incarnate and hates you. The old man might be mildly insane.

() Comfy in bed: you suddenly realise how comfy your bed is and how naggy you are being. You will soon fall asleep and have wonderful dreams. The thing under your bed won't kill you tonight. Sweet dreams, anon and anoneating monster.
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>>53235993
N-nani?!

Am I having a deja vu or did I create this cyoa almost a year ago? It really looks like something out of my experimental shitposting phase.
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>>53235993
THE BOX
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>>53232608
Why did no one tell me that making a cyoa meant I wouldn't have time to read other cyoas?
Am sad now.

Starting Worlds Collide page 3. Focus on cities and maybe enemies if I have space. Final page should be companions and quests/daily life.
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>>53235993
>>53236059
http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/47287745/#47289664
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>>53236078
Reminder that the maximum image height is 10000 pixels. Last I checked, the first two pages aren't even half that, so you could just as well merge them into a single page.
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>>53236059
no idea, it was in Drive as "Mini.txt". Do you claim the 10" Banana as yours?

>>53235993
Second phase???? Technically you should only pick one but I can't stop you from picking many.

() The Popplio: you will be transported to the beautiful world of pokemon, or pokemon mystery dungeon if you prefer, but you will be a popplio. You can be a shiny popplio if you want but that will probably only make you uglier.

() The Banana: you will be given an enchanted 10" banana. For every inch of the banana you manage to stuff inside your asshole, you get $100,000. The more inches you stick in, the more violently homosexual you become.

() The Bedroom: the monster under your bed will transform into a beautiful monstergirl waifu who will truly love you. However with no monster under you bed to scare the bad dreams away, you will suffer nightmares for the rest of your life. Nothing can change this.
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>>53233590
I'll be wizard.
Good cyoa.
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>>53236108
Define violently.
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>>53236108
Yes, those are mine!

Geez. Where does the time go. Back then I used to be big into comfy posting and hime posting. Nowadays it's all cats and despair. And gay stuff. And whatever the hell strikes my fancy. Not the husbando shit though. That guy is but a baby. Pfffffffff.

Insane. To see my quality posting evolve like that. Who knows what I will be like next year? Will I still be here next year?

... Cyoag is my personal hell, isn't it...
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>>53236178
'shoving 10" banana up your ass'
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>>53236224
So, the curse is that shoving an equal amount of banana up your ass is now your fetish?

Not that it matters. Monsterwaifu for monsterlaifu, yo. Night horrors ain't all that.
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>>53232799
"Player 1"
>Worthless Opponent
Villain
Drop-In
No Identity
Shard: Abaddon
>Costume
Thematic
>Skills
First Aid, Hacking, Investigation, Banter
>Perks
Second Trigger (Voodoo)
Blindspot
Secret Lair
>Flaws
Case 53 (pic related for general appearance and costume)
>Gift
Failsafe
>Powers
Radar, Voodoo (2nd Trigger), Robotics Tinker
My tactic is to create robotic likenesses of my targets and make them into Voodoo puppets. Radar tech will help me know the target's situation and puppeteer them properly from afar - just like playing vidya, thus my name.
>Path
Other, start up my own operation
Mooks
Money
Dishonorable
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>>53234515
>>The powers section is better though I do wish there were more options.
>>137 powers
>>Not enough
>Damn.
That's spread over 12 different categories. I mean I can't make Purity/Legend build.

>>53234515
>>Can I combine the effects of powers? Such as using Presence to ignore line of sight limits on certain powers?
>Only if it wouldn't break things too much.
So Telekinesis combined with Presence wouldn't let me sense and and use my power on everything within a 25 meter radius?

Anyway I'll probably just make a tinker build since that lets me be immortal for cheap.
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>>53235556
I just realized I don't really need Survival, might as well switch it for Stealth which will be way more useful.
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>>53232851
>>53232825
>>53232799
>>53232881
shouldnt villain's bonus be swapped with vigilante's bonus considering they have an extra set of path-specific drawbacks and vigilante is about taking the hurt?
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>>53236106
Yeah, but I want it to be a reasonable size overall. Big enough to pull in the guys that like long builds/backstories, and short enough to attract the one/done guys.
Might make this page a bit longer.
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>>53236380
Not him, but I think his point is that it's easier for people to post you stuff if you make larger files instead of lots of little ones.
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>>53236281
I actually forgot villain gives me more flaw points.

I'll take Plot Convenience, Power Slot, and Pocket Room.
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>>53236078
Some of the companions should be cute boys but not too cute. I hate people who are too cute.
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>>53234387
The game-mechanic intent of Bonus Bottle was to give you a place to spend leftover points before the ability to convert them into extra accessories, outfits and such existed. From a more narrative perspective, I thought it would be more fun if people could write interactions between two characters instead of just designing a waifu in isolation. That's also why Interlopers exist and all can be combined with Bonus Bottle, as a sort of short writing prompt that presents you with a pre-existing scenario if you can't or don't want to think of one yourself. The 0.75X limitation, and later the 20>=X>=1 limitation were intended to prevent people from offloading all their drawbacks on one character then getting a drawback free character later. I guess I didn't get it all the way done, but maybe on the other hand if people want to play that way should I really interfere? I don't want to declare anything badwrongfun.

>>53226974
Thank you. It does feel nice to see people respond positively.

>>53228899
Yes, but then you'll have the inherent limitations of Marid and will have to use drawbacks to be able to afford crucial upgrades for her like No Misunderstandings.

>>53228908
Minor shapeshift is enough to shift into anything humanoid within 10% mass of her base form.

>>53229363
>Hoping to make it more of a motherly figure than a waifu, since I hate the idea of having two waifus (there's really no valid option in the Attitude section for this)
Dominant would probably be your best bet, especially the part where she tricks you into doing things for your own good.

>>53230346
>>53230784
>>53231497
I always love reading creative builds, especially when people elaborate on character interactions or backstory. I hope you enjoyed it.
>>
Did Ordion end up making that superhero cyoa?
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>>53236418
Good point. Might merge them, might leave 'em in parts.
>>53236443
Already planned on it. Faggot.

Finding good images to use is a pain in the ass, so if anyone has specific pictures to use for companions, lemme have 'em please.
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>>53236531
I'm not a fag, bro, I just do gay stuff sometimes.
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>>53233570
>Angel is into futa

Never knew you could get even more shit
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>>53236600
>Futa is shit
Do you even know where you are?
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>>53235063
>no god of truth
Dropped
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>>53236600
I think it's kinda hot, desu
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>>53236600
Don't worry, it's shit and gay I think it too.
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>>53236735
As long as it's a feminine penis.
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>>53236797
Exactly
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>>53236600

>Angel is into futa

Not really. Just trying a new character concept.
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>>53236890

It's okay Angel, you can admit you like dicks.
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>>53236890
>>53233570
It's only a matter of time, now.
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>>53236890
Shhhh. Don't spoil it for me. I'm fully supportive your new interesting in remaining a woman yet slinging the D to other women.
>>
Angel likes men with vaginas, I don't know why everyone is surprised.
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>>53236915
Answer the question >>53234311, taint-polisher.
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>>53236600
Why why why why did you respond to a 3hr old post and start another shitposting chain?


Didn't your mothers teach you to not say anything if you don't have something nice to say?
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>>53236923
>men with vaginas
>vomiting adorable anime girl
>>
I have a question /cyoag/, if you take a monstergirl say a medusa and replace her crazy snake head hair for dicks and all the dicks function, but she still has her womanhood, would this character be considered a futa?
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>>53236909
>>53236915
>>53236917
>>53236923

No! It's just a character that's different from my others. How come nobody's commenting on >>53235384 ?
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>>53236963
Go back to >>>/d/
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>>53236963
Nope. The dick needs to co-located with the vagina. A succubus with a tail-cock isn't a futa.
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>>53232851
>Perpetuance
What kind of immortality is this?
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>>53236975
>How come nobody's commenting on
Because I hate looking at CYOAs on my phone, so I don't know what it's referencing. The writeup is neat and while I don't have a nazi fetish, women in uniform do look hot.

8/10, wood reed moar
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>>53236963
Hermaphroditic, sure, but not futanari.
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>>53236975
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>>53233442
>Name
Montblanc Variét
>History
New Arrival (Age 17, Male)
>Race
Faunus: Fennec fox, Ears & Eyes
>Starting Location
Vacuo

>Semblance
Dust Conversion: The ability to either create dust from his aura, or to replenish his aura by absorbing dust. The conversion is pretty inefficient at first, but will improve with training. Efficiency can also be improved by converting more slowly, usually requiring a calm environment.

>Gifts & Talents
Memory (20)
Survival (20)
Energy (20)
Medicine (40)

>Weapon

Melee: Halberd
+Collapsible: Dagger (basically, it just gets smaller)
[150]

Ranged: Hand Crossbow
+Collapsible (Folds back to be holstered)
+Dust Mod (Hollow bolts ready to be loaded with whatever dust is needed)
+Weight Reduction
[400]

>Items & Gear
Scroll [0]
Wilderness Gear [50]
Rebreather [50]
Targeting Glasses [150]
Dust Collection x2 [200]
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>>53237023

Thanks!

>>53237033

No! All my characters are totally different and there are no man parts. I'll prove it.
>>
I got inspired to try to make my first CYOA and I've decided to go with HoMM III as my theme. I'm currently working on towns as you can see and would like some feedback. Other things to choose from would be skills, spells, artifacts, mixed armies and such. It isn't exactly sticking to the lore but I try to make it fair.
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>>53237033
>>53237072

http://pastebin.com/7tk3pN8g
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>>53237100

http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/52906213/#52906340
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>>53237093
I guess if you're shit at the game you can play this instead.
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
What does Wavelength Even actually do? Beside broad application doesnt tell you anything
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>>53237145

http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/52915927/#52918939
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881
Is there anything stopping me from taking the Humble Beginnings Flaw, buying 3 vials and getting 60 points worth of powers to play with?

Great job on this anyways. Really liking the powers section.
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>>53232799
Scenario
>Gestation

Path
>Vigilante

Origin
>Drop-In

Civ Identity
>No Identity

Costume
>Budget

Skills
>Martial Arts
>Tactics
>Parkour
>Banter

Shard
>Foreign Shard

Flaws
>Worst Day Ever x3
>Slaughterhouse 9
>Endbringer Target
>Psychic Nosebleed

Perks
>Second Trigger x2
>Blind Spot
>Noctis Cape
>Plot Convenience

Gift
>Metaknowledge

Powers
>Rocky
>Regeneration

Path
>Anti-Villain
>Bombs
>Tinkertech
>Tool Belt

My plan? Just start going around Brockton Bay knocking on the doors of various gangs and villains and telling them to suck my dick. Get into as much shit as possible, and therefore take as much damage as possible, and rapidly grow in strength. Soon enough, I'll be growing out of control and when the Slaughterhouse/Endbringers start showing up I'll just get even more powerful. Twenty bucks says by the end of the day Brockton bay is a crater but the world has been pretty much cleaned of all problems and I can bench press a galaxy.
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>>53237175

http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/53066420/#53069609
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>>53236725
A place where most people shit on it when it comes up, funny enough.
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>>53235063
Generic Goddess of Love Go!
>Aetherial
2 major 3 minor
>Fertility & Love
>Beauty, The Home, Marriage


>>53235489
Agreed.
>>
>>53237211

http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/53225517/#53225736
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>>53236464
He's in China right now anon.

Probably military training or something.
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>>53237093
Nice! Heroes III is one of my very favourite games.
My unqualified advice is to do things the videogame could not do, but a CYOA can.
>>
>>53236464
Preparing to end all of western civilization. He'll be the one to press the button that launches the nukes.
>>
>>53236464
He quit.
>>
>>53236464
He said he's going on a potentially indefinite hiatus from CYOAs and 4chan in general. That was only a month or two ago if memory serves, so don't expect it anytime soon.
>>
Speaking of elusive CYOA makers, is Imaginos working on anything these days? Love dat boy.
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>>53232799
Aw hell yeah. Making a build for this now
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>>53237289
>is Imaginos working on anything these days
yer mums fat ass
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>>53232851
>>53232825
>>53232799
>>53232881
Is there fucking ANY way to properly safeguard my mind from being raped? I'm not really seeing one.
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>>53237282
You know what, I think I'll join him.

Expect no more CYOAs from me for a few months, I need to focus on my real life before things get any worse.

See you on the flipside friends.
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>>53237309
>Anonymous
And nothing of value was lost.
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>>53237309
>Anonymous
Are you retarded?
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>>53237304
Be a bad enough dude.
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>>53237302
I'll have you know my mother is svelte.
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>>53237309
Bye i hope you manage to un-fuck your life
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>>53237334
Does she have fat milf titties? Post pls.
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>>53237330
Not really going to work on Simurgh or Khepri.
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>>53237309
>Improving your actual life.
>Not abandoning the world for the better one in your head.
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>>53237181
It means your Tinker specialization is 'Wavelengths'.
So any machine that manipulates wavelengths for whatever purpose is technically under your purvey.
And since wavelengths can be found in virtually anything and everything in the universe…
You can make Tinkertech to do just about anything you want to do.

There's a reason Hero was considered the greatest Tinker to ever live.
Maybe make a raygun that fires beams that neutralize the wavelengths of matter and energy it hits, completely disintegrating them.
Make hardlight generators. Super-efficient jetpacks. Badass communicators that work anywhere.
Go crazy with it.
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>>53237304
>>53237330
>>53237358
Oh god. Is Second Trigger Protocols the only one?
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>>53237358
Not with that attitude.
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>>53237316
>>53237325
Even if you don't know my name the fact that we share a hobby like CYOAs means that we're already friends, and until we meet again I'll be working on CYOAs to share with all of you for when I get back. I
>>53237346
Thanks I really appreciate it.

>>53237361
I think people can find heaven in anything, whether it's a CYOA or the real world. As long as you face things with the right attitude.
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>>53237415
Fair enough, m8. Best of luck, hope you sort it out.
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881
Scenario: Golden Age (+10c +20s)
Path: Vigilante
Targets: Ambivalent (14c 24s)
Entry: Drop-in (17c 27s)
Identity: None (19c)
Costume: Custom (15c)

One Black military-grade flak-jacket, one painted helmet, two bandoliers, two handgun holsters, one knife sheath, one light rifle sling over a large rucksack, one pair of black steel-toe combat boots, one pair of reinforced combat gloves, one large all-weather coat.

Equipment: Supply line (11c)

Skills: Marksmanship (6c)
First aid (3c)
Mechanics (1c)
Hacker (0c)
Shard: Foreign (-3c 24s)

Flaws: Nemesis x2 (5c)
Case 53 x3 (30s) Unnaturally pale, as if bleached of all natural color other than white and black, sounds like he drinks gravel for breakfast every day, facial features of a canine-like beast
Worst day ever x3 (14c 36s)
Psychic nosebleed (40s)
Numbed emotions (43s)

Perks: Negatropy (9c 38s)
second trigger x2 (1c 32s)

Powers: Wavelength, second trigger (7s)
Training montage, Second trigger (0s)
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>>53237309
oh that's a shame, but it's good to get your priorities straight, I don't think anyone can blame you for that.

Who were you anyway? No point in telling people you're taking a break if they have no clue who you are.
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>>53237400
It canonically doesn't work.
There's no known defense against the Master effects of Khepri or Simurgh, except to be out of their range.

>>53237390
You might be able to pull something off with the Wavelengths Tinker specialty.
Since their mind-control powers work through telekinetic manipulation of the brain, maybe you could rig a device that gives you a sort of Faraday cage for your brain?
Or maybe just a device to jam the signal entirely?
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>>53237357
Let's no go there my friends already annoy me enough about her.
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>>53233386
Basically yes but as >>53233469 pointed out there are some options to let you use MG powers as a DMG/Monster Girl.

What I like to do is Create a MG, then decide how she'd fall and become a DMG keeping to a basic theme or close to one with new DMG powers.
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>>53237528
>there are some options to let you use MG powers as a DMG/Monster Girl.
I'm assume those are the ones that let you imbue items with your powers? That's all I could find with respect to that.
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>>53237489
Honestly, even Khepri and Simurgh aren't too bad, since Simurgh isn't instant and Khepri isn't permanent. Cherish can destroy you literally with a glance, and the most obvious counter to this (THE FUCKING COUNTER POWER) specifically won't work on it.
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>>53237489
You could also take second trigger augmentation and be a computer that's so complex they can't control it.
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>>53237512
Damn, man. Now I'm getting interested. At least post an animoo cake pic to give me an idea.
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>>53237462
You'll know me when I get back
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>>53237573
A jamming device would definitely work on Cherish too, since her power is functionally identical.
Leet, while not the best example of a Tinker, was able to make a machine that aped Skitter's bug control in a heavy-handed way, so we know such things are possible.

>>53237592
Khepri can't control machines or some of the more exotic Case 53s, but I'm not so sure about the Simurgh. You'd have to go really overboard with it.
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Didn't the author say Occupied Mirror, Your Secret Admirer, and the Girl behind the door were all the same girl? Or am I confusing the girl next door scarlet youth in paint and how does bashful haunt come into it.
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Wait. I realized something.

The "waifu with a selfish streak" that started that autistic argument.
Anon was right about the dictionary meaning being the right one, but words do have some leeway and I think many would understand what the other anon meant. But that isn't the point.
The whole premise of the waifu was never really that the waifu was a actually selfish by definition. Just that she secretly wanted to be assertive. Secretly, which means she is ashamed of it. So the only one who would call it a selfish streak is, in fact, the waifu herself.

All along, the flaw was never actually a selfish streak, but low self-esteem and a very unhealthy concept of what selfish means which causes her to limit herself. Calling it a selfish streak makes sense, but only from a first person perspective, as it reveals the waifu's warped perception and internal flaw.

And that means, the anons who agreed that "selfish streak" was the correct way to describe it? They are the waifu.
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>>53237573
Actually, on second-read, I was mixing up Counter and Adaptation. Counter can definitely work, since it applies to all powers. Second Trigger Counter is effectively a total immunity to all active power effects, since you can preemptively decide to reflect all powers back on the source.
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>>53237652
We have to go deeper
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>>53237649
Occupied Mirror, Your Secret Admirer, and Bashful Haunt are the same person.
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>>53237649
Not the author, some anon said that, I think. And it's mirror, admirer and bashful haunt.
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>>53237649
He said they could be if you wanted them to be I think. Though it was the bashful haunt, not the girl behind the door.
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>>53237649
>>53237681
Aren't not the same person.
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>>53237678
We're all the waifu.
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>>53237649
The way I see it

Occupied mirror, Bashful Haunt, and Secret Admirer can be the same person, they don't necessarily have to be the same person, but they can be if you want them to.

The girl behind the door is a separate entity that can only be interacted with outside your apartment.
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>>53237729
I'd shank any number of people to become my ideal waifu.
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>>53237652
So the people who would call it a selfish streak are those who suffer from low self esteem? No wonder.
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>>53237749
Looks like someone has a selfish streak.
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>>53237432
Name: Annihilo
Path: Endbringer

Powers: Gravity
Summoning
Time

Appearance: Beastial
Size: 30 meters

"LITTLE THEIF, LITTLE LIAR!"
"FOR STEALING SUCH FIRE FROM MY HORDE AND TRYING TO RUN YOU WILL BE HUNTED FOR THE REST OF YOUR DAYS!"

"EVEN IF I MUST CRUSH THE CONTINENT I STAND ON OR SEND MY AGENTS THROUGH TIME TO CRUSH YOUR SKULL, I WILL HAUNT YOU UNTIL I SQUEEZE THE BREATH FROM YOUR LUNGS PERSONALLY!"

"DO NOT THINK YOU CAN HIDE IN SUCH A BACKWARDS WORLD WHILE I SLUMBER FOR EVERY MOMENT OF EVERY DAY YOU BUILD YOUR PRECIOUS TOYS I WILL TAKE PERSONAL PLEASURE IN TEARING THEM AND THIS WORLD INTO TATTERS"
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>>53237770
I'm going to call it Antonio.
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>>53237765
Yup
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>>53237776
Can someone give a crash course in the apparent hatred for TokHaar? Where does it spring from? Is he really that bad? Is it just a meme?
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>>53237652
>Waifus are real and browse /cyoag/
We did it boys CYOAs are real (somewhere)
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>>53233442
I honestly think that Semblance mechanics should be based on what the Semblance can do rather than what it is.
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>>53237776
>Your Body
>blank character sheet
>no longer exist
>suicide is painless

Good end.
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>>53237823
Some of his CYOAs are shit, most are okay. The hate has more to do with his big ego and shameless shilling than the content itself.
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>>53237823
Everything is a meme, anon. Everything is faggotry, and you have to call all of it out.
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>>53237823
It is a meme, but it has its basis

1. Extremely fetish topics cause division whenever it doesn't cater to someone

2. His tendency to post his own CYOAs for several months. Recently stopped I think

3. Shitty image design that looks like paint.net
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>>53237770
>3 powers
>no drawbacks
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>>53237823
He's a shill. That's my main problem with him. He's found his audience on /d/ but I think he should stay over there. He has much more success with that kind of content, and people here who enjoy it likely visit the /d/ thread anyway.
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>>53237652
What is your hourly rate, Mr. Freud?
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>>53237776
>Power: the Beyonder from Marvel
>Universe: the Culture

Honestly feel no need to spend that third point.
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881

dont know jack dick about worm - so here goes

>Golden Age
>Villain
EDGEMODE ACTIVATE

>Origin
Entry: Insert
Gender: Male
Age: Teenager (17)
>Civillian Identity
High Schooler

>Costume
Thematic (7) - some kind of black knight outfit ( think

>skills
Martial Arts (3)
Parkour (1)
Banter (0)

>Shard
Natural Trigger (3)

>Perks and flaws
worst day ever (6) (22)
Numbed Emotions (5) (24)
case 53 (5) (25)
Slaughterhouse 9 (10) (28)
Endbringer target (14) (33)
Second Trigger (10) (30)
Plot Convenience (9) (30)

>Powers
Broken Limiter (Second Trigger) (9) (5)
Counter (9) (0)

>Villain
Perks: Money (6) Connections (2)


and using leftover points -Secret Lair (0)


Im either utterly fucked or about to bend some of the nastier elements of the setting over without lube
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>>53237950
Any of the 25p powers make you stupidOP. You're probably fine.
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>>53237925
>the Beyonder
>not the One-Above-All
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>>53237999
what are slaughterhouse 9 anyways? the worm version of the thunderbolts?

and causality reversal isnt actually that strong - you are still vulnerable to anything that hits you
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>>53238022
>the One-Above-All
>not Squirrel Girl
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>>53238022
But is that one that is above all FOR all?
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>>53238035
Basically they were a group of supervillains who leader just wanted to watch the world burn, it helps that they had some of the most busted powers in their team. Also their leader is directly responsible for causing the Golden Morning event by basically telling the entity to find joy in being an edgelord.
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>>53238048
>All Might will never be your world's symbol of peace.

Why
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>>53238022
I don't have any comics featuring the One-Above-All IIRC. But I do have issues of New Avengers: Illuminati with the Beyonder in them.

>>53237925
I guess I'll add:
>Vehicle: Naboo N-1 starfighter
just because chicks dig spaceships.
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>>53238104
how busted? enough to take a 25pt power?
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>>53237980
>HIGHLANDERRRRR
>reverse time, speed up time, slow down time
>superhuman strength, godly attractiveness
>sixth sense, precognition
>never have to eat/drink
>poorer family

COME AT ME SWORDBROS. COME FOR THE TIMEKEEPER.
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>>53238114
It hurts.
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>>53238126
More along the lines of the 10 point ones but some would be a bit stronger like the time loop and natural precognition the leader had.

http://worm.wikia.com/wiki/Slaughterhouse_Nine

Scroll down to members if you want to see a basic summary.
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>>53238168

Sitmut-Nefert

>PreAgriculture 10,000BC, Anywhere
>Mysterious Stranger
>Polyglot (5)
>Flight 1 (7)
>Strength & Speed 1 (11)
>Reflexes & Reaction 1 (15)
>Impervious 3 (27)
>Non-Reactor (29)
>Regeneration 3 (38)
>Endurance 2 (46)
>Super Senses 1 (48)
>Temperature Tolerance 2 (54)
>Diet 2 (59)
>Sanitary Convenience 2 (63)
>Iron Gut (64)
>Beauty (66)
>Bestmaster Major (75)
>Blessed One Major (85)
>Stormsage Major (95)
>Firedancer Major (105)
>Other 3 Elemental Schools (135)
>Enchanting Minor (140)
>Master of Motion (150)
Shared World 5 points left over for equipment.
>Personal Omni-Weapon 2 (152)
>Pesonal Omni-Wear 1 (153)

Quests
>Sorceress Supreme
>The Empire Eternal
>Myth Maker

Drawbacks
>The Slow Pace of History
>Shared World

>invited to rule new world as a Goddess alongside a newly ascended God
>rule as protector mother Goddess of tribe on Mediterranean island
>other newly ascended God becomes God Emperor of Romans
>eventually Romans become strong and conquer my tribe, I'm defeated in epic God battle
>flee to America very upset about losing tribe that I loved
>AZTECS BUILD YOUR NEW GODDESS BIGGEST PYRAMID OF ALL TIME OR I'LL MAKE IT RAIN FIRE!
>MAKE SACRIFICES TO YOUR NEW GODDESS EVERY MONTH OR I'LL SUMMON STORMS TO RUIN YOUR CROPS!
>BUILD YOUR NEW GODDESS A TEMPLE IN EVERY TOWN OR I'LL MAKE THE ANIMALS OF THE WILD TURN AGAINST YOU!
>IF YOU WANT YOUR NEW GODDESS TO HEAL YOUR SICK THEN BRING ME GIFTS AND TREASURES FIT FOR AN ENTIRE EMPIRE!
>teach Priestesses of my following minor Blessed one and Minor Stormsage, High Priestesses might learn Minor Beast Master
>Coyote God from the north pulls prank on me and releases sacrifices
>invade the north with a huge army, killing and destroying
>Coyote Trickster God confronts me and makes me think he has powerful army full of monstrous creatures
>flee and order army to withdraw while I summon volcano to devastate the land

To be continued?
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>>53238168
Add-on
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>>53233570
Angel's evolving. I'm proud of you.
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>>53238234
Psychosoma and hatchet face seem like the only possible threats

but yeah - sounds like they get anally annihilated
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>>53237304
Blindspot, plus at least one of: Counter (2nd trigger) or Adaptation (2nd trigger) or Observer.

Alternatively, being an independent Endbringer would also allow you to no-sell most powers.
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>>53237432
Name: Raven of Mountainheim (10c 20s)
Path: Villain
Gang: Other, The Followers of The Dark
Entry: Insert
Gender/Age: Male, Senior
Identity: none (12c)
Costume: Armor (7c)
Skills: Strategy (2c)
tactics (-2c)
Survival (-5c)

Shard: Dead (23s)
Flaws: Kill order (1c 29s)
Rough start x2 (5c)
perks: Plot convenience (4c)
Second trigger (0c 26s)

Powers: Save and Reload, Second trigger (16s)
Destiny weaver (9s)
Unlimited shard works (2s)


>>53237861
hey, I forgot to put down the "Dormant Period" Flaw
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>>53238273
YOU FOOL

SOON SHE WILL BEGIN EVOLVING BEYOND HUMANITY

SHE WILL BECOME THE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T STOP HER IN TIME
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>>53236940
>Didn't your mothers teach you to not say anything if you don't have something nice to say?
Can you imagine it? cyoag would be a desert...tumbleweeds rolling around in the wind. Cyoa posted now and then with actual discussion and builds...and then stretches of silence, blessed, peaceful silence.
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>>53237681
If you take all three then she's basically your waifu, and you can't have sex with anyone without cucking your waifu.
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>>53238370
>SHE WILL BECOME THE ULTIMATE LIFEFORM BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T STOP HER IN TIME
I dunno, I've always been cool to her except when she's been shitty. She gets uplifted, I like my odds. Who knows, I might even be able to parlay that into some kind of boost for myself.
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>>53238370
That's cool. She'll be able to create reflections of herself and give us all a waifu.
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>>53237304
Some characters backended their minds into their shards at the expense of some their faculties but with Voice in my Head perk you could probably bypass that, when like this I don't believe most mental powers would affect you if you did this.
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>>53238382
Reading that made me feel like i was floating on a cloud.
I'm high as fucking shit
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>>53232799
Welp. It's what everyone was waiting for. A stupid minmaxer appears!

Scenario: Gestation (15/15)
Path: Villain
Origin: Drop-In (+3/3)
Identity: None (+2c)
Costume: Budget (free)
Skills: Martial Arts (-4), Marksmanship (-5), Strategy (-5), Tactics (-4), Stealth (-3), Hacking (-1), Parkour (-2), Investigation (-2)
Shard: Natural Trigger
Perks: Noctis Cape (-1s), Second Trigger x3 (-12c/9s), Cauldron Vials x3 (-6), Follower (-3)
Drawbacks: Case 53x2(+4s), Endbringer Target (+4/5), Slaughterhouse 9 (+5/3), Worst Day Ever x2 (+6/4), Unruly Passanger (+5s), Numbed Emotions (+3s)
Gift: Metaknowledge
Powers: Perpetuance (-25), Counter (-5), USW (-7)
Path: Money (-3c), Kill Order (+6/6)

Cauldron Vials: (20p each)
1st: Infection, Living forest
2nd: Sting, Replication
3rd: Infinite Treasury, Respawn

Follower:
Path: Villain
Scenario: Gestation (15/15)
Origin: Insert, Female, Adult, PRT Agent (-4c)
Costume: Bodysuit (-1)
Skills: Investigation (-2)
Shard: Dead Shard (+3s)
Perks: Second Trigger x2 (-8/6), Secret Lair (-2)
Drawbacks: Humble Beginnings (+6/6), Numbed Emotions (+3s)
Powers: Kingmaker* (-10), Enthrallment (-10), Power Sight* (-1)
Path: Connections (-4)

So. My initial goal was just to avoid a horrible fate (dying/getting mindraped) but once I decided on how to do that (Perpetuance + Counter) I figured I should just go for broke. I reflect all powers. All powers I see used I copy permanently. I have vials containing 6 of the 10p powers I thought would be interesting to copy. My follower is free of any significant drawbacks, and has a killer combo of granting second-trigger powers and enthralling people. Technically, I can gain access to every non-Trump 7p and cheaper power, second trigger version, in a few minutes, with her cooperation. Once we finish that up, she can become a prominent villain with her powerset, independent of me. I can go do pretty much whatever I want. Maybe collect powers for fun. Bet I could abuse Eidolon like crazy.
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>>53238585
>taking Eidolon's power and subjecting the world to the whims of your subconscious

It created the endbringers for a low self esteem guy just imagine what would spawn for an anon.
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>>53235554
Why no cute, chubby tummy?
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>>53235554
>Someone reposted my shitty OC
I should make a sequel.
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>>53238665
Nah. I can only copy powers I see. Eidolon's connection to the Endbringers would require me to see it to copy it. Meanwhile, I would just copy any power he accessed.
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>>53238673
Do it
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>>53238273

I just wanted to try something different.
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>>53238730
It's okay. Keep trying new things. And if you do super-evolve swing by my place because I have a few favors to ask. Not like that.
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>>53238585
There's actually a more minmaxed version of this build, where instead of directly buying vials, you get three followers who each have three vials. Alternatively, if you can get a version of this build to work with the Conspirator path, that opens up a lot of vial/extra powers to gain.
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>>53237649
>Didn't the author say Occupied Mirror, Your Secret Admirer, and the Girl behind the door were all the same girl? Or am I confusing the girl next door scarlet youth in paint and how does bashful haunt come into it.

If you were talking about the questions I had with DSA, I had asked him a few questions and these were the answers he gave me

Q. Can I ever meet the secret admirer one day?
A. "I want to say yes but I'm not sure you can also have one of the tenants as you secret admirer if you want"

Q. Can I make the Bashful haunt my Secret Admirer?
A. "Sure you can although if the Haunt already lives with you I'm not sure why'd you need that"

Q. Will I ever be able to see the Bashful haunt?
A. "Not directly but you will be able to it out of the corner of your eye and in photos"

Q. What if I accidentally yell at the haunt will it leave me and will I at least have some time to apologize?, Because sometimes I get angry when I get tired.
A. "The first thing the Bashful haunt would try to do is make you some soup and try to figure out why you are angry but the Bashful haunt will only leave if you purposely yell at it and tell it to go away"

If you want more concrete answers from the author when I asked him for those questions I can go archive diving if you want anon
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>>53238669
Obesity is not attractive. Stop trying to make authors leave by selfishly forcing them to change their CYOAs.
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>>53238801
>Obesity is not attractive
Attractiveness is unfortunately subjective. Chubby chasers are a thing for a reason anon.
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>>53238730
It's good. I'd happily jerk her off.
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>>53238771

Best trick is to take the 'villain' drawback and deconstruct the fuck out of the villain so that they have a really bad first day thanks to flaws. and each have conspirator-empowered vials. Take powers/allies that give you good mobility, be writefag enough to give the villains a backstory that lets you predict their location on your appearance day. Cue scry-and-die tactics where you warp in, steal their powers and vial powers, and quickly remove them. Obviously this isn't fair play, but if you wanted to maximise munchkinry that's the way.
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>>53232799
Lets go Endbringer, because nobody has ever gone with the "Benevolent Endbringer" Angle, right?
Name: Ryley "Yaldabaoth" The Structurebringer
Path: Endbringer
Origin: Giant Glowing Snake.
Civilian Identity: Worlds largest Architecture Student.
Costume: Glowingness.
Skills: Friendliness, Being Polite, Well Educated.
Shard: What happens when people hit me hard enough.
Perks
-Follower: Have a lot of them on PHO.
-Plot Convenience: Not really a concern for me.
-Secret Lair: I can dig a nice hole.
Flaws:
-Nemsis: I must concede that I'm not the most popular person in the world.
-Rough Start: I am all of the above!
-Case 53 x 10: I don't look quite human.
-Worst Day Ever: Everybody is being kind of a dick. Don't know why.
-Identity Reveal: They aren't quite buying into my brilliant costume.
-Endbringer Target: They're just jealous because I'm the cool one.
Gift: A winning personality!
Powers: This is something I actually have to do later.
Path Specific
Powers:
-Megastructure: Got those mad architecture skills. I guess I'll just build homeless shelters or something.
-Time: I have an unhealthy fixation on this kind of ability!
-Telekinesis: Do you know what's fucking hard, Taylor? Being an Architect without hands.
Appearance: I'm a snake with a sun for a Face.
Size: Let's go for the full 40!
Flaws
-Sibling Rivalry: I'm the one that isn't a rude asshole, and they're rude assholes about that.
Anyways, I'm just going to fly around and make buildings to help people, avoiding my siblings and trying to convince people that I'm a cool guy and maybe make some friends. On Golden Morning I'll just time travel forward and help with reconstruction.
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>>53238779
I would actually like to see what the initial replies to this cyoa are. But I'm not sure how far back the archive goes nor what the file was initially named.
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>>53238854
Damn. That's good. Even if you don't metagame your nemesis characters, you can still create a big enough powergap to use this tactic. May have to revise the build now.
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>>53232799
So you can't build any of the classic people with this like Eidolon or Contessa. Contessa alone costs 45 sp (25 for PtV and 20 for hypothesis Can't get enough drawbacks to do that).
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>>53238944
He was pretty clearly intending this to be a "build your OC!" CYOA. There's no fun in using a CYOA just to create a character that already exists.
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>>53238832
>Chubby chasers are a thing for a reason anon.
Not like they'd be hard to catch...they don't move very fast.
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>>53238914

Yeah, I'm the anon ( >>53235456 ) who pointed out that Shard Works was absolutely broken earlier. Have a half finished build centred around it, but have way too little time atm to make it properly. Maybe in a couple of days.
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>>53238688
If you could scrape up one more shard point, you could buy Power Sight?
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>>53232608

I've got a couple of questions about this one I found in the archives you guys have.

1. Can I find the author? I don't see any credits anywhere on the image and I'd really like to know where they found the art for some of these entries, especially the suits. Its fantastic, and if they did it themselves they are very talented.

2. If I were to try and run this as a setting, what the hell system would I use? GURPS is the obvious answer, but I'd have to both learn and teach my players at the same time.
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>>53239051
I could. There's room in the build for it. But I already accomplished my main goal in the build, which was to be able to have a zero-risk life. Copying all possible powers is not a major goal.
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>>53238386
That's fine with me. Sex is fucking gross. I'm more into consensual masturbation anyway.
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>>53239130
>I'm more into consensual masturbation anyway.
As opposed to rapey masturbation?
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>>53239167
Depends on my mood but that's generally the way to not get them to call the cops, yeah. Could probably get away with most things here if you really wanted to.
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>>53232799
Munchkin McBroken

Scenario
>Golden Age
Path
>Villain
Origin
>Drop-in
Civilian Identity
>No Identity
Costume
>Budget
Skills
>Hacking
>Investigation
Shard
>Foreign Element
Perks
>Second Trigger x2
>Blindspot
>Negentropy
Flaws
>Case 53 x3
Gifts
>Payoff
Powers
>Mirror Image (ST)
>Power Fluctuation
>Kingmaker (ST)
Path Specific
>Other
Perks
>N/A
Flaws
>Kill Order

So, with Kingmaker x4 from chainbuffs I can have every non-Trump power of this list. Assuming this works as intended, I basically win this CYOA.
Fortuna did nothing wrong.
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>>53238585
Hmm. No Blindspot? How are you protecting yourself against the Simurgh's precog (and that of others)? Mechanically precog works 'for' the user.

... though given all your other powers, precogs probably just get "run. just run."
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>>53238386
Would you guys all start living in your bathroom just to spend the rest of your apartment life with your waifu?
Cause I would totally hook up a small tv and radio. Start keeping my books in there. If it's big enough I may put a small couch in there and just let her lay with me while I browse and play video games on my laptop.
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>>53239056
Was there a part 2+?
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>>53232799
>Scenario
Golden Age (10c 20s)
>Path
Villain
>Entry
Drop-in (13c 23s)
>Civilian Identity
No Identity (15c 23s)
>Costume
Budget
>Skills
Strategy (10c 23s)
Stealth (7c 23s)
Parkour (5c 23s)
>Shard
Dead Shard (5c 26s)
>Gift
Metaknowledge: I can generally only remember the big things, so this'll help.
>Perks & Drawbacks
Negentropy (0c 21s)
Second Trigger: Regeneration (-4c 18s)
Psychic Nosebleed (-4c 22s)
Numbed Emotions (-4c 25s)
Case 53 x2 (-4c 29s)
Worst Day Ever x3 (5c 35s)
Second Trigger: Shard Administration (1c 32s)
>Villain Gang
Other: I think this is the only one I can take, the other gangs won't have formed yet, except maybe E88
>Villain Flaw
Birdcaged (5c 36s)
If I can, I'd try to get Dragon to send a message to Alexandra hinting that I know about cauldron and can help. My freedom in exchange for unblocking Contessa's PtV is a fair price imo, but I'm willing to work for Cauldron for longer if needed. I shouldn't have TOO much to worry about while inside the birdcage.
>Powers
Regeneration+ (5c 26s)
Shard Administration+ (5c 1s)
Power Sight (5c 0s)

My plan:
1) Have Alexandria get me out of the birdcage on the condition that I work for Cauldron.
2) Ramp up all loyal capes' shards to their full potential.
3) Have Flechette on board for stopping Scion, since her power is hella strong against him
4) Look for other useful capes to join me
5) Post Scion, live like a goddamn king since no-one who feasibly can stop me, will want to. Maybe destroy Contessa's PtV, just in case.
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>>53239260
Just move the mirror, you autismo.
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>>53239268

yeah there's a second, no info on it either, but here you go
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>>53233442
This gets posted every thread, might as well make a build.

>Name
Orca Riel
>history
New arrival, 20 years old, male. Fantasy high school is still high school. No thank you.
>race
Human because bear ears would look dumb
>starting location
Haven academy, Mistral seems to haeva good variety of biomes and places to explore. Having more criminals around just means more fights I won't get arrested for winning, and the corrupt government can't do shit to me if I live in the wilderness.
>semblance
Executioner, fuck your magic bullshit let's fight. It was either this or unstoppable.
>gifts
energy -20
strength -20
agility -20
>talents
combat -40
I'm already familiar with the basics of survival and tracking, investing in more all-around fighting ability seems wise.
>weapons
long knife (melee, 100 lien) just a good, sturdy knife I can wield in the off-hand and have around for general use.
tomahawk/revolver (variable, 400 lien) tomahawk and knife is the best combo, having a ranged weapon as an option is probably just necessary for getting by. Either a long barreled single action army or one of those sexy mateba revolvers would be cool. It would be stupid to throw the hawk now though. I'll probably make it a longer non-throwing hand axe.
+weight enhancement (100), I'd love a tomahawk with some good weight to it
>gear
free scroll, cause why not
wilderness gear (50) seems necessary
rebreather (50) because fighting requires breathing
armor (100) because there's no endurance or defensive perk
parachute and grappling hook (150) because falling is how most jobbers die.
I'll save the rest and put it toward a sweet bike later.
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>>53234736
>Assuming the CYOA character is yourself, the value of immortality is infinite and the cost is always finite
But that's the wrong assumption. Value of immortality isn't infinite if there are there are other tempting options immortality renders unavailable or if immortality comes with some other side-effects.
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>>53239056
anything with adequate gun rules and low HP, with body augs, and with drone control. So maybe try Shadowrun but without the magic, or some other less popular cyberpunk system that doesn't have magic
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>>53239241
Exactly. I felt that I was, in fact, strong enough to handle literally anything.
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"Knock Knock."
"Who's there?"
"Libra."
"Libra who?"
"Libra took a lot longer than I thought she would, but here's a preview."
ON TO THE SOUTHERN HOUSES!
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>>53239463
Want
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881
Just because I am severely fucked in the head doesn't mean I can't kick people for justice!
>Gestation.
>Vigilante.
>Drop In.
>Male.
>Teenager.
>No Identity.
>Budget.
>Tactics.
>Stealth.
>Foreign Element.
>Slaughterhouse 9.
>Plot Relevance.
>Jump.
>Elemental.
>Sting.
>Ambivalent.
So many unspent points holy shit.

That's right city destroying God-like monsters! Behold my power of justice! The power of justice that allows me to set my right leg on fire and jump really fucking high! With my smiting kick I will wipe clean the corruptions of this world! With my foot aflame, I shall crash down from the heavens to bring forth to bear the wrath of justice against the forces of darkness. I am the star of justice. The homeless avenger. The end has come. Why the fuck is there a voice in my head talking about kicking things across other dimensions?

Also, why the fuck is a meat processing plant after me? Wait, they have a loli? WAIT HOLD ON A SEC
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>>53238770

Ok. If I ever ascend to Goddesshood I'll let you know.

>>53238845

.....
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>>53239416
Any option that makes immortality unavailable gives you finite time to enjoy that option, because you will eventually die. Immortality gives you infinite time to enjoy it, and whatever else you have. Ergo, immortality is always the absolute highest priority for a rational decision maker.
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>>53239517
So what about settings where death is very explicitly not the end?
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>>53239238
Kingmaker has a point limit. You can't get anything 10p or more without copying off a cauldron vial.
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>>53232799
>Infinite Treasury
>Conjure 1 ton of anti-matter

Could... could that be conjured inside an Endbringer's core for an instant kill?
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>>53239537
Depends on how not-the-end death is. If some minor revenant of me survives, but I clearly stop being myself, then death is still, in fact, the end. If there's a for real, legit, continuity-of-self afterlife, then yeah, you can argue that immortality is no longer top priority.
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>>53239569
Yes, but it would also destroy the solar system. Possibly the galaxy.
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>>53239463
Oh my...
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>>53239056
Hello, I made that CYOA. I agree with you about those suits. I found them while running an image search on artstation and the entire artist gallery is practically pornographic in how amazing his designs are. I was inspired to make the entire CYOA after finding the suit images and feeling the inspiration to write about them, everything else came second.

Pretty much all the art came from artstation in fact, a few of the companion pieces came from gelbooru but even then it was only a few.

After I come home I might search for him on artstation and post the link, he has a very distinct artstyle and is quite popular from what I remember.
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Just doing this as a test to see how the entire CYOA would look in one image.

Much better than the .pdf to be honest.
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>>53239056
It's DSA. He frequents here so he should pop up sooner or later.
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881

golden age +10/+17
abaddon shard
flaw - identity reveal

Rogue - product sales
Insert, male, teenager, high school

armor 5
Mechanics 2, hacking 1, parkour 2

gift - payoff

powers:
nanotechnology 10
repair 2
augmentation 5

What a messy world. Let's give it a good nano-tech scrubbing.
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>>53238888

QUADS DEMANDS

Here is the anon saying that the haunt, secret admirer , and mirror ghost are all the same

>>53181480

This is is DSA answering my question about the Haunt leaving if you are yelling at it and the Secret admire

>>53174421

This is where I asked him if you can meet the secret admirer and does the haunt have a visible form

>>53170183

And here is when Urban Unease was first posted

>>53146550
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>>53239056
I spoke too early. I found him already, he's Ariel Perez on artstation.

https://www.artstation.com/artist/arielp

Plenty of great pieces and diverse tastes ranging from dark fantasy to space opera. If you're looking for similar art he's got a lot to comb through.
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>>53239669
Reads fine but the flow is weird.
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>>53239352
Thanks. Gott damn but do I want to play this vidya.
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>>53239669
>Much better than the .pdf
This is not a surprise, pdf a shit.
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>>53239568
>You can't get anything 10p

Yes. That's the whole point why I need PowerFluced Power Fluctuation.
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>>53239463
That poor girl's spine.
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>>53239772
Don't worry, she'd been practicing.
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>>53239772
Magic.
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>>53239772
Spine? Where we're going we don't need spines.
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>>53239463
I have picked prematurely.
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>>53236455
Mind sharing your opinions about >>53226668 ?
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>>53239463
>"Knock Knock."
>"Who's there?"
>"Libra."
>"Libra who?"
>"ME FROM HELL."

And then anon stabbed someone with his car keys and started his car with a power drill.
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>>53239772

When I make busty character, which is most of the time, I assume they either have magic or physical alterations that allow them to deal with it without to much trouble.
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>>53239652

Neat. Thank you very much!
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>>53239981
I share your taste and assumptions. Well done, anon.
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>>53239750

Even better, Thanks a lot man. I really appreciate it. The art is great, but the way your CYOA is written really lends to the setting.
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>>53239981
>not wanting to relish in her suffering
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>>53239760
I think it's just something to consider when formatting CYOAs. Maybe we could solve multipages this way.
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>>53238585
You missed Stand over in Master, which gets you the ten pointers for the categories besides Trump, Tinker, Thinker, and Master.
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>>53240296
Did it work?
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>>53232799
I dont really "get" worm and its universe but I'm pretty bored so I'll make a build anyways.

Scenario: Golden Age. More power, more time to prepare for the end. [10/20]

Path - Villain. Heros are pompous and inefficient. Most villains fail to see the bigger picture. It takes an outside villain to work with both sides. To work against both sides. And to flip this system upside down. While gaining massive power and support of course.

Origin: Drop in, no identity.

Costume: Budget. We'll work something out with the costume once we've made some money eh?

Skills:
Banter (-1/0) Clearly the most important.
Tactics (-4/0)
Strategy (-5/0)

Shard: The Foreign Element. Growth potential is much more important than starting and whatever. [-3/-3]

Flaws:
Rough Start x2 (+4+1+1/0) , Im a drop in anyways.
Case 53 (0/+1+1) small cosmetic changes arent so bad.
Nemesis x 2. Two heros, a pair. (+6+1+1/0)
Psychic Nosebleed (0/+3+1)

Perks
Follower (-3/0)
Second trigger x2 (-8/-6)
Plot Convenience (-1/0)
Negentropy (-5/-5) Because having your eternal life not be eternal sucks.

Gift - Second Chance, because even eternal life can end.

Powers: Unlimited Shard Works , Body Swap, both second triggers. Body swap can be useful for infiltration and getting me powers I cant get with shard works as well as a new identity if things go badly. Shard works gives me a large collection of powers even as I change bodies.

I'm in the golden age so I cant have a gang yet, but I can make my own in time.

Connections (-4/0)

Birdcaged (4+1/4+1). Sure prison and all that but we'll see if I can body swap my way out. Maybe use my connections to send in a sacrifice. I bet all the guards know I pretend to be someone body swapped into my body to try to get out.
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>>53240296
If you're getting Connection Error when posting, use the form at the top of the page instead of the one that pops up elsewhere.
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>>53234654
I use my wish(es) to wish that the girl gets her auntie back
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>>53232799
Scenario
>Golden Age

Path
>Hero

Origin
>Drop In

Civilian Identity
>No Identity
More power and I‘m assuming I have days off to fuck around

Costume
>Budget
I ain’t got no time for no bullshit son. I need my powers.

Path choice and Perk
>Other
I will spend 3 here so I’m not locked to the government.
>Companionship
I could plan ahead for the gestation by forming a network between all but Endbringer classes and having a temporary alliance/cease-fire to deal with the threats.
Can I do that?

Powers
>Unlimited Shard Works w/ Second Trigger
With companionship it’ll be super fucking easy to rack up powers, right?
>Power Hub w/Second Trigger
Fucking hell, with this I can sense the powers around me and I know how to fully use them. All I have to do is get them to let me see it. I’ll offer a quick match to compare powers and the strongest wins. I go first with the weakened version, they get cocky and use theirs. I lose bet, but gain the full power.
>Peak Condition
It could help while I’m basically powerless.

Skills
>Martial Arts
>Investigtion

Shard
>The Outsider Entity
I’ll have a long time to collect powers, as well as be able to use them. I’ll be there for the final battle, with centuries of powers to trow at it.

Perks
SecondTrigger x2
Blindspot

Flaws
>Worst Day Ever
With this as a boost, I can gain more powers to use. Not a Flaw at all!
>Noxious Cape
Might as well spend the extra point.


Gift
>Plot Relevance
I’m the star baby.

I go by the name John Doe, but the public calls me Jack. I can take anyone’s power and force it to be mine.I work as a hero, but I have a network spanning all capped positions, fellow heroes, villains, vigilantes. I can talk to them all and ask for their help anytime. I run a heroes for hire business that deploys hero all over the globe as guardians. Funding comes from the public since the government doesn’t like me not being under their leash.
I wonder how long it’ll take to get every knowable power?
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>>53240440
Shit, Noxious Cape shouldn't be there.

Sorry if my math was wrong with the points.
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>>53240249
With that setup, I could theoretically use my follower to create an infinite number of ST-Stands and copy them all, if you assume that each stand counts as a unique power.
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>>53235063
Ascension: Celestial

Major themes: Sun, magic , death and nature

Minor themes: Moon and seasons
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I hate Worm. Everything is so gritty and falls into precise categories and takes place in a grand cosmology. It's an autistic edgelord's wet dream.
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>>53237614
If.
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>>53237181
Seriously though, any reason I'm not seeing for why Humble Beginnings plus 3 Cauldron Vials wouldn't work?
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>>53240555
Seems like it would.
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>>53235456
>>53239022
Honestly, ST-USW is the only really broken thing left in the CYOA, since even the 25p powers are balanced and limited to some degree.

With ST-USW you can walk into BB, hang out until you happen to see a Lung fight, and use use power as leverage to pretty much become unstoppable. ST-USW is a massive power boost in Worm's setting.
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>>53240555
You could only take one vial yourself. Vials only work on unpowered people. But you could take one for yourself and give two to people you trust.
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>>53232799
Trump powers are borderline i Win, especially with Second Triggers.

The idea of loading up on drawbacks only to take Planeswalker, then fuck off, is amusing.
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>>53240579
*use that power
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Fairy King page 3 when.
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>>53240628
After page 2 is done, presumably.
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>>53232799
With Nergentropy couldn't you just use a living shard and make it bud and give it to the entities in return for them fucking off.

The entire reason they are doing this is to stave off the universal death by entropy right?
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>>53240628
Before page 4 is complete
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>>53240595
Just put that shit in one container and drink it all.
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>>53239706
Thanks anon. Didn't even realize I got quads. I'm a mess with navigating that pastebin. I would never have known otherwise.
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>>53239652
Crap, I was hoping you were the author that left.

Now I have two things to be irritated about.
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>>53232958
Since my latest build resurrection was a success. I fixed my previously fixed builds accounting for your new fixes...

1 of 2

Peri
Criminal Record*
Numb
Curvy
Barefoot
Wirst Bangles
Collar+Leash
Wedding Dress
Glorified Jewelry
Courtesan
Scheherazade
Ring
Itty Bitty +4
Haint*
>Science and technology specialist. Since advanced enough technology can effectively be counted as magic, she only needs to be powerful enough to produce the requisites for the devices needed and be able to assemble and operate them. Combo option with Scheherazade.

>Perks 19p
Loving Heart
Lusty Soul
Magical Realm
Curse bane -2
No Misunderstandings
Extra Skill -> Nurse
Minor & Major Psychic Link*
Bonus Bottle -12

>Interloper
Old Friend*
Xian*
Dominant*
Weird Science
>She blames the other one for being the cause of her rejection. She intended to prove herself while demonstrating that the other one is useless and should be tossed out and buried forever, but got too carried away, ending up in the bonus bottle.

Overkill
High Heels
Wrist Bangles
Tattoos
Chinese Dress
Maid
Housewife
Businesswoman
Courtesan*
Ruler*
Brass Lamp -1
Single Room -3
Haint*
>As powerfull as the original, but with a different focus, she is a BDSM and restraints specialist. Her room is a fully featured BDSM dungeon.

>Perks 5p
Loving Heart
Lusty Soul
Magical Realm
No Misunderstandings
Djinn-ja -2
Friend Upstairs*


>Pitfalls
Terminal Battery*
A wish your Heart Makes
>She just wanted to have been accepted and be working like a normal Xian would.

>Goal
Companionship
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>>53240662
You first have to deal with Scion's suicidal depression, so it might be easier to hand it over to Eden, but basically. Now that you're here to invent magic, you can literally solve the entire plot with a wave of your hand.
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>>53232958
>>53240709

2 of 2

Marid
Voluntary*
Happy to be here
Overkill
Barefoot
Motherly face
Flexible
Chinese Dress
Maid
Housewife
Businesswoman
Scheherazade*
Nurse*
Gourd
Pocket dimension -6
Phenomenal Cosmic Power*

>Perks 8p
Loving Heart*
Magical Realm
No Misunderstandings
Friend Upstairs -2
Curse bane -2
Bonus Bottle -2

Pure of Heart*
Three Wish Limit*

>Interloper
Endless In laws*
>Mother who noticed what was happening and took the bonus bottle opportunity to also try it, besides it being an excuse to remain close to her daughter and to use the psychic links. A bit of a role reversal given that the motherly one is the daughter.

Marid*
Voluntary*
Excited*
Curvy
Barefoot
Collar+Leash
Belly Gem
Glorified Jewelry
Lovely Assistant
Courtesan
Entertainer
Ring
Itty Bitty +4
Phenomenal Cosmic Power*
>Likes submitting and being saved, choose the acessories, clothes and the interior herself.

>Perks 5p
Lusty Soul*
Magical Realm
No misunderstandings
Minor Psychic Link*
Major Psychic Link -2
We Got You Something Special -3
>Chrismas will never disappoint.

Pure of Heart*
Three Wish Limit*
Easily Trapped +2

>Goal
Companionship
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>>53232851
Which powers couldn't you copy with Unlimited Shard Works? Stuff like peak condition, that can't really be used?
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>>53234216
Someone should tell whoever made that pic that labeling your opinion as "Realism" doesn't mean that it is.
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>>53234403
Dream Prince is great in that regard, and a great CYOA in general. One of my favorites.
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>>53239537
>>53239593
That is just another form of immortality, specifically the very same offered by most religions and the core concept behind Pascal's Wager (always bet on the existence of God/Heaven, because if it exists than the potential reward is infinite, and if it does not the potential loss is only finite)
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>>53240730
>Implying my floating broadsword can't have a muscular hilt and well toned blade
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I'm working on an isekai-themed CYOA with an emphasis on companions/romance options that lead to children, pretty heavily inspired by the recent FE games. Are there any companion/child archetypes you might like to see, or other general suggestions? I can't promise anything, and I won't post a WIP because I'd rather not get people's hopes up and fail to finish it.
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>>53240360
Follower :
Villain, female insert, Teenager.
High Schooler, to get access to all the corruptible youths unsatisfied with the hero system.

She wears a cape. Of course she wears a cape. God.

Skills are Parkour. Because of course it is.
Also Martial arts as any street rat learns.

Lets also give her the outsider entity. Because really I dont need someone who wants conflicts or burns herself or whatever.

Flaws: Same 2 nemesis as me, but I'm going to not count those points I guess?
Rough Start x2. A poor little high school girl. Very susceptible to switching to the dark side, no?
Case 53x2. A little more, ah, altered by her powers. Probably got bullied about it too or something.

Humble Beginnings. Lets say She had a bad run in with some "heros" who were "rescuing" her as a kid.

Perks:
Negentropy, again losing your power sucks.
Second Trigger
Secret Lair. Some abandoned place she found while wandering the streets.
Plot convenience

Powers:
Infection. Sometimes she'll subconciously turn herself gooey as a defense mechanism. She also learned she could do that in that encounter with the "heroes". Also, I presume this gives her immortality yeah? We all know slime girls live forever.
Paramount. Actually incredibly strong and useful. Not to mention I can learn a lot of them with my shard works. She can actually fuck some shit up if she uses Exchange and Power Sight. Imagine finding people with good abilities I cant learn with power sight and giving it to me using exchange. If she can somehow give me second trigger paramount (maybe someone else also has it) I can do it to her too.
Also as a bonus, Elasticity. Probably helps her squeeze through tight alleys.

Her reputation on the street is dishonorable. Of course. But that's not important. Soon the most important thing will be she's my second. She could also use the new identity power if she has to.
She does know a lot of mooks though. Just more street rats really.
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>>53240709
>>53240723
Sorry to make you keep rewriting it, I'm just awful at balancing apparently. I really like that you elaborate on specific backstories. Thanks for making builds.
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>>53240794
Yandere.
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>>53240774
Wrong thread, m80.
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>>53240814
Just a hobby. We all enjoy it, this is what matters.

Looking forward to your expansions.
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>>53240794
Sexy witches
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>>53240794
>Are there any companion/child archetypes you might like to see, or other general suggestions?

A privately submissive muscle waifu and a son who wants to be surpass the parents
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>>53240697
I'm terribly sorry to disappoint you Anon. What else is bothering you?
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>>53240683
You'd explode. Or go insane, turn into a giant monster, and end up killed by the triumvirate.
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>>53240858
I'm bothered by you and that I don't know who left.
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>>53240723
Quick fix due to the newly discounted pocket dimension I forgot to account for:

>Perks 9p
Extra Outfit -> Wedding Dress
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>>53240871
Doesn't say anything about that in the description, so I'm good.
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>>53240850
10/10, would waifu
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>>53240874
Well I hope you feel better and that it was an author you really hate.
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>>53240858
Not him, but the fact that I am a giant dude with a tiny dick has plagued me for years
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>>53240889
That's just you.

>>53240899
I'm glad I'm not you, though.
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>>53240794
Cute bakas and dojikkos.
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>>53240884
It's how the setting works, mate. If you want to change the rules so you can do whatever you want,we can't stop you. But you might as well just declare that all powers cost 1 point at that point.
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>>53240899
That sounds rough, we're all born into things we can't control. I hope in the future new developments in science gives you the dick you always wanted.

>>53240906
Well then lets try to be friends.
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>>53240921
Should be included in the description then.
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>>53240906
>I'm glad I'm not you, though.
This is the correct response

>>53240925
>I hope in the future new developments in science gives you the dick you always wanted.
This is a welcome response
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Anybody have some of those Choose your Waifu CYOAs they want to share?
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>>53240794
Be a kemonomimi!
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>>53240794
If I could design my own family.

companion traits:
>willing to take a leadership role and have you be the companion
>ambitious, won't stop until they're at the top
>possessed of indomitable spirit, will fight to the death before surrendering or accepting defeat
>hopelessly romantic, but would see the beauty in a tragic or bittersweet ending

Child traits:
>sharp, attentive and self-sufficient, in a hurry to grow up
>way too brave for their own good
>wants to be able to keep up with the parents' adventuring lifestyle and be a valuable party member
>craves praise and genuine recognition for a job well done
>always learning
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>>53240925
No.
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>>53240949
I have this one. I should really get some more.
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>>53240978
Too bad, by the way I wanted to know if you really do just hate me for the whole netorare quest thing or if there was some other motive. Am I really the only author to make you unhappy Anon?
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>>53240992
What's Laura's deal?
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>>53240643
Okay. Completed Fairy King page 2 when.
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>>53241001
>Am I really the only author to make you unhappy Anon?
You're giving him a lot of attention, which is exactly the thing he's after. I'd argue that makes you his favorite author, just not for CYOA reasons.
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>>53240794
How about an actually well written pair of twins? They would pretty much have the same opinions and interests. But one would be more confident and comical but secretly depressed about their low intellect while the other twin would be a great artist, but easily annoyed, quiet, and ashamed to be a twin. Talk about jealousy between the two of them, how they try and distance themselves from one another, and how at the end of the day there is no one else they'd rather depend on than each other.
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>>53241022
She's a bitch. Bitches be crazy.
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>>53240811
>>53240360
2 nemesis Heroes.
Not even going to count points for this one.
These two are sisters. In fact, they're high schoolers that go to the same school as my follower.

They go with a thematic bodysuit, kinda matching but opposite kinda deal.

Skills are investigation and First Aid

They're rich girls I guess, so they bought Dead Shards

Flaws: Identity Reveal. Everyone in school knows about them. Thats why they're popular. (The skintight suits and being rich helps too). They're part of the problem really. All mightier than thou and bully some of the "less heroic materials".
They have a lair too. Of course.

No perks but they have 23 points of powers each so they're still quite tough.

Twin A Powers: Kingmaker, Enthrallment, Lawgiver
Twin B: Replication, Infinite Treasury, Power Hub.

Lets say their powers were highly influenced by their personalities.

These two are only technically part of The Wards. They disregard most of the rules and meetings and whatever though.

They're the only official heroes in this part of town, but they stand out and thus have their own fan club.


...

...

man now that I wrote that, those two are annoying even in my head. Rich stuck up blond girls. Maybe I should take one of their bodies and let my follower temporarily control the other.
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>>53241022
She is a level 10 chuuni
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>>53241028
It's late at night and we're on page 10, I wouldn't respond if I thought there were any more of the thread to salvage but we're towing the end of the line, you know? What's the worst that can happen?
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>>53240794
Elves.
Who are totally superior to you filthy humans and wouldn't dream of consorting with such creatures. Ignore that gaggle of half-elven children, no proper elf would ever stoop to mating with a lowly human. Ignore them I say!
Okay, maybe they are kind of cute...
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>>53241001
>I wanted to know if you really do just hate me for the whole netorare quest thing
I do. I despite it and you for it.
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>>53240949
I'm working on it, dammit!
Also, I'm making mine because I've already played every one I can find.
Archangel/demon Roommate, Branching Heart, Picking A Goddess, and Trap Queen are the best I've found.
If you've played all those, just do what I do and find a way to turn every female companion in every other CYOA into your own harem.
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>>53238965
For you maybe but for others that's part of the fun. Another anon even mentioned you can't build Eidolon and someone else, so there's more then just myself who feels that disappointment.
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>>53241067
Humans, no.

Orcs on the other hand....
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>>53241087
>Trap Queen

Ah, I see you're a man of culture as well
Thanks for the recommendations, looking forward to the full Zodiac
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>>53240794
A guy who lives for murder, and if left to his own devices, will rack up a kill count higher than both World Wards combined.
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>>53240794
Yandere witch dog girls.
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>>53241087
>>53240949

There was this one series of posts that wasn't a CYOA, but it had a fun selections of arthropod girlfriends.

This was one of them, but there was another that contained more that I don't have. There was also one with a scorpion waifu who wanted babies to carry around on her back if memory serves.
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>>53240992
>Want to choose olivia
>I wont be able to pull off something passable with her clothes
>Want to choose Umeko
>Public sex is going to kill me with shame
Rosa it is then
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>>53241083
That's very saddening. You'll always have a place in my heart though Anon, so please feel free to consider my offer of friendship. I love you and I hope wherever you are that you're warm, dry, with a full stomach, happy, and with people who really truly love you.

Sleep well tonight.
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>>53232958
What is the source for the pic from Terminal Battery?
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>>53241247
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>>53241324
Irresponsible Captain Tylor OVA
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>>53241247
I'd rather I not.

>>53241335
>Don't make a post because I'm too busy.
>Some anon tries to perpetuate it anyway.
Hmm.
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>>53239915
Oh, sorry, I didn't see this before. That would be sort of a big content update. But I don't think those drawbacks should be incompatible with Marids, since they willingly undergo the binding spell. And the idea of a lost dream seems like it could easily apply to Marids in any case: maybe there's something they wanted they didn't want to use their magic on, or they wanted a different life but feel too much responsibility/pressure to stay as they are. I try not to put in limitations where I can so people can write or imagine whatever suits them.
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>>53232799
>>53232825
>>53232851
>>53232881

Golden Age (+10B/+20S)
Conspirator
Drop In (+3B/+3S)
No Identity (+2B)
Budget (-0B)
Parkour (-2B)
Foreign Shard (-3B/-3S)
Follower (-3B)
Plot Convenience (-1B)
Voice In My Head (-2S)
Noctis Cape (-1S)
Case 53 (+1S)
Worst Day Ever (+2B/+1S)
Psychic Nosebleed (+3S)
Memory Death (+4B)
Humble Beginings (+5B/+5S)
Metaknowledge

{2nd (-4B/-3S)} SAVE/LOAD (-10S)s
{2nd (-4B/-3S)} UNLIMITED SHARD WORKS (-7S)
{2nd (-4B/-3S)} PROTOCALS (-1S)

Boogeyman (-1B)
Door Me (-2B)
Infinite Credit (-2B)
(0B/0S)

Waking up in a dark alley with no idea how I got there, but total ideas on where I was, getting kidnapped by a nebulous organization because of those ideas, joining said organization, and being contacted by an extradimensional entity and receiving powers from it. My first day on the job was, interesting, to say the least.

(Follower posted later)
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>>53240794

Gloomy Girls
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>>53241684
She's junk.
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