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>>53240687
>Archives and other resources: http://pastebin.com
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>>53240749
>>53240687
http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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>>53240749
He's not wrong.
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>>53240687
http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

>>53240749
If people want it they should have to work for it
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>>53240749
I could've sworn that I copy-pasted the whole link... Ah well, >>53240763 (and >>53240771) already posted the correct one.
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>>53240801
>>53240815
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>>53240687
So can Mammon buy other witch items? Specifically Charms and Potions. I expect they would get rather expensive of course.
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Here's a new CYOA. OC.
(1/2)
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>>53240801
>>53240815
>>53240832
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>>53240842
(2/2)
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>>53240842
*action*

No thanks.
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>>53240869
ok...
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>>53240687

>Sorceress
12

>Potions 5
7
>Witchery 5
2
>Consortation 2
0

>Bottle Stash
>Necronomicon
>Potion of Witchiness (Consortation 3)

I so wish this were real!
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>>53240842
Beri?

>>53240861
>End bullying
Truly a noble mission.
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>>53240842
>tfw youre about to become the next Hitler but cute anime girls kidnaps you and ruins your destiny
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>>53240794
This is just me asking for my niche, but I would love it if there was a non-romantic viable option, or possibly a 'matchmaker' option where you can just match companions off with each other instead of yourself.

Also, as much yuri pandering as you can bear.
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>>53240894
Yeah?

>>53240895
Do you really want a destiny like that?
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>>53240895
>Ruins
>Get to do great good instead of great evil
Nah.
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>>53240842
Ehh, as an Assassin won't various Arma is not really optimal?

Things like Medic and Music Arma sounds cool, but I simply can't see them doing assassination. Especially Music Arma with it's bulky chair.
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>>53240842
Murder is bad, Beri. Back to the drawing board.
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>>53240919
The assassins don't seem like they do a lot of outright assassination, they're more like lethal superheroes. So you'really going to need a lot of niches for different missions beyond just having a sniper.
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>>53240832
Can invulnerability be used for extremely short periods of time with the cool down being proportionally small? What about with the second trigger?
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>>53240953
This is him letting his grimdarkness show. More mature themes and grittiness like the fans wanted.
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>beri cyoa
>cant become a loli

??? Did i miss something?
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>>53240919
Though people normally picture a ninja or spy or sniper when they hear assassin, it really just requires killing high-priority targets (which is only about half the contracts anyhow). For some, you might rather have a balanced squad with medics and tanks (audio Arma).

>>53240953
You don't have to kill things. I mean, the narrator could have just killed you but opted to look for an alternative solution instead.
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>>53240995
Yes. The bottom right option of the first page.
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>>53240985
What grittiness? It just cute anime girls "assassins" dressed head to toe in bright and easy to spot colors doing super heroics.
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>>53241006
>>53240995
You could probably work something out with Network Tunnel too, since it lets you switch bodies and shit.
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>>53240960
>>53240996
Soooo, it's a really niche choice even then? I mean sure, medic sounds useful, but sounds arma?

Bulky chair that really not good in much thing.
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>>53240842

Very cool!

>Flight Arma
Gotta go fast! Nimble silent air attacks!

>Aim Assist 2
Good offense and defense!
>Lock-On 2
Bad guys aren't getting away!
>Holo Suit 2
Kick butt and look good while doing it!
>Shock Touch 2
Extra surprise attack!
>Attack Drones 2
Bad guys shall fear the army of drones!

>Explosives
Bombing bad guys from the air!
>Heavy Gun
Blast bad guys!

>Stop a Scientist
Try to get her to join us. If not, blast her!
>Hunt A Monster
Bomb the island to smithereens!
>Guard An Heir
Good contract for an army of drones!
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>Post cyoas that will be remembered as the crowning achievement of mankind.
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>>53240842
Is becoming a cute girl part of the conversion to an assassin? It better be if they're going to kidnap me from my destiny of sitting around in a chair all day.
>Arma Type
Shatter Arma.
Now I can pretend to be the Neo Granzon.
>Special Abilities
Aim Assist, Arma Summon 2, Info Uplink 2, AI Assistant, Shock Touch 2, Audio Override 2.
Audio Override is the most important part here, gotta be able to play music whenever the occasion calls for it. Which is always.
>Weapons
Big Melee, Heavy Gun.
Another step towards pretending to be Neo Granzon.
>Contracts
Hunt a Monster, Slay a Dictator, Fight a Traitor
This can't end well, but its all part of the plan, I swear.
Also there's a typo in End Bullying.
>Or maybe you could teach the kill to make friends out of bullies.
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>>53240842
>Wire Arma

>Aim Assist 2
>Shock Touch 2
>Attack Drones 2
>Hacking Support 2
>Info Uplink 2

>Small Melee
>Stealthy Gun

>Counter Strike
>Kill a Billionaire
>Slay a Dictator


I guess I'm Hei from Darker than Black now.
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>no matter how much you love her, your imouto will never have a single friend.
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>>53241149
>no matter how much you want one, you'll never have an imouto
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>>53241171
They're not that great, they just take up space and love in your heart. And you're always worried that someone is going to bully them or hurt them because then it's your responsibility to beat the shit out of that person.
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>>53241077
Ooh, you're very blasty. Between aim assist, lock-on, and explosive weapons, I don't think anyone is going to be evading your attacks. Other than the guard duty, you won't have to worry much about collateral damage, and like you said, your drones can help you guard things.

>>53241115
>Is becoming a cute girl part of the conversion to an assassin?
Technically, no. But if you give them enough permission with augment Arma, you could be an androgynous or effeminate android. Or, there's always the Holo Suit.
>Audio Override is the most important part here, gotta be able to play music whenever the occasion calls for it. Which is always.
I agree wholeheartedly.
Between shatter Arma & Audio Override, you can be pretty stealthy, but you still need a rough line of sight to make portals effectively, so you might have a hard time getting your weapons out near the target.
Also, you're brave going after the traitor.
Thanks for pointing out the typo.

>>53241146
>I guess I'm Hei from Darker than Black now.
You know, I realized that possibility of that with wire Arma the moment I finished writing Shock Touch.
Your small weapons, while good for general assassination, might not be enough for the dictator. But then again, you have your shock wires.
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>>53240842
>Medic Arma
>Network Tunnel (2)
>Arma Summon (2)
>AI Assistant (2)
>Holo Suit (2)
>Sync Bodies (2)
>Small Melee
>Stealthy Gun

>Stop a Scientist
I'm sure we can come to a peaceful understanding about academic responsibility. If not, a medic kit surely has tranquilizers somewhere, right?
>End Bullying
Everyone just needs to calm down and think about the consequences of their actions, and all I need to do is give them a space to work it all out
>Guard an Heir
The most difficult contract, but I'm fairly sure I can manage with the stealthy gun if something actually comes up and cover any minor mistakes with the medic Arma.
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>>53240842

Arma Type
>Stealth Arma

Abilities
>Aim Assist 2 (2)
>Arma Summon 1 (3)
>Lock On 1 (4)
>Info Uplink 1 (5)
>Hacking 2 (7)
>Audio Override 1 (8)
>Attack Drones 2 (10)

Weapons
>Small Melee
>Stealth Gun

Jobs
>Kill a billionaire
>Slay a dictator
>Fight a traitor

>Forced to become an assassin because some random seer said I was a danger
>Forced to live a live as a killer and a spy for the very people who were going to kill me
>Even forced to rely on the same kind of person who got me into this mess for all my hacking needs
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>>53241192
They're not that bad.
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>>53241234

Going for major blastiness from the air. After my required contracts are don, I'm going after terrorists all over the world.
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>>53241192
Honestly, thinking it over, I should probably swap my small gun for bombs. It's redundant with wires and shocking.
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>>53241149
At this point, the friends section should just be removed, since this will never ever get updated.
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>>53240869
onomatopoeia, not action.
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>>53240842
>Plasma Arma
This does everything I could want. Stat boosts, flight, energy beams, and collateral damage.

>Aim Assist
>Network Tunnel+
>Arma Summon+
>Lock-On
>Shock Touch+
>Holo Suit
I thought about Audio Override but I'm just not going to be able to be subtle. If I can manage supersonic, there's also no way that ten meters will dampen out the sound of my flight, and even if I can't, I'll still be too bright to hide, from all the fire and lightning. I switched the point to Summon+ so I can get a hammerspace to keep my weapons with me.

>Big Melee
>Heavy Gun
I want a hammer with a rocket on it. Ideally, it will also fold up into a baseball bat, for discretionary purposes, but mostly to look cool. I also need a cannon. A really big one.

>Kill a Monster
>Slay a Dictator
>Fight a Traitor
I am Collateral Damage Man. I hold in my hands the power of the Fun. It is my duty to use it responsibly - and that means, of course, as much as possible.
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>>53241274
Yeah, I'd say medic Arma would supply you with tranquilizers.
I don't know that I'd agree that guarding the heir is the most difficult contract, unless you meant "the most difficult of those you chose." Because that traitor is dangerous. And the dictator is full of all those phantoms.

>>53241285
I sorta question your choice on contracts. You're pretty light on the damage output, which might be a problem when trying to break through the traitor's energy shields. Of course, for something like that, you might not be attempting the contract alone, but still. You're golden for taking down the billionaire, though, with all your info and hacking and everything.
I wouldn't blame the seers too much. They're just doing their job, being future-predicting super-computers.

>>53241291
You'll eventually get more contracts if you want to keep getting maintenance and support, but yeah, you'll have time to go after terrorists.

>>53241300
That's probably true. Other than projectile speed, a gun doesn't really have any advantages over shock wires.

>>53241408
Goin' all out against the big enemies? You chose perfect contracts for your collateral damage. But I would keep an eye on your energy. From the tone of your post, it seems like you might use a bit too much and either shut down or explode.
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>>53241450
>unless you meant "the most difficult of those you chose."
Oh, yes, that is what I meant. Sorry for being unclear. It's the most dangerous of the contracts I have any hope of dealing with. But if the choice is between becoming an Assassin and death, I'd rather be a friendly sort who helps people rather than hurting anyone.
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>>53241408
I forgot the + on Holo Suit for my tenth ability. Hello panacea, please shift my body into the picture of good health.

>>53241450
An entirely fair concern. Yeah, my plan is to blitz and rely on Networking to get positioning and breathing space, but I'll almost definitely jump the gun a few times.
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>>53241450

If I need to keep doing contracts for maintenance and support, then I'll keep doing contracts! Guess I'm their slave now....
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>>53240842
Can I get a waifu summon ability to lighten my load?
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>>53241450
>I sorta question your choice on contracts.
Oh yeah sorry, to be honest I kinda skimmed them looking for the more assassin-y ones. I probably should have gone for the scientist instead.

>I wouldn't blame the seers too much. They're just doing their job
I need someone to blame, even if its misplaced, its all I have.
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>>53241489
That's understandable. I tried to leave enough options for nonviolence to be possible.

>>53241506
You don't really need Holo Suit for health benefits. As much super science as they have, you don't need to worry about healthcare.

>>53241509
>Guess I'm their slave now...
You get paid, and can quit after a few pivotal months of you not being in your normal life, if you want.

>>53241511
Yes, sorta. You'll need:
Holo Suit II
Sync Bodies II
AI Assistant II
Aim Assist II
Holo Suit into a waifu shape. Get Sync Bodies. Let your AI inhabit one, since it can control your body, controlling a clone would be identical. Then Holo Suit back to how you want to look.

>>53241539
Counter Strike is a good ol' fashioned assassination. You just have to kill some sneaky guy with a gun. You could also go with Save an Assassin and join them for killing some guy on an island.

I'm goin' to sleep. Goodnight thread.
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>>53241511
>lighten my load
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>>53241629

I can't quit though! I want to keep all my cool stuff!
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>>53241672
Just rebel with the traitor senpai
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>>53240687
Why won't she tell us about hell?
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>>53240842
>stealth arma

>network tunnel 2
>info uplink
>AI assistant 2
>hacking support 2
>sync bodies 2
>attack drones
under the belief that my AI can maneuver the drones and bodies

>small melee
>high range guns

>save an assasin
>stop the blast
>kill a billionaire

Have fun dealing with half a dozen teleporting invisible snipers. Unfortunately they can teleport into your security room and take it over.
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>>53241788
You won't want to be a witch if you know what hell's like.
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>>53240846
Could I get Humble Beginnings, and then use Cauldron vial to immediately get 20 free points? Which adds up to a total of 25 points... kinda broken if you ask me
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>>53241718

But I want to stick with the good guys!
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What is this Trap Queen CYOA that I've heard people talk about?
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>>53241970
>>53240683
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>>53240912
>>53240916
Maybe after all Hitler did nothing wrong.
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>>53242042
You should go ask on /d/.
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>>53241009
But you kill people annon.
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>>53241914
So if we become a witch god sends us to hell? Why would anyone be one?
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>>53240842
Sweet, a new Beri CYOA.

>Stealth Arma
Gotta be stealthy, quiet, quick.
>Sync Bodies 2
Avoid risking myself when necessary.
>Hacking Support 1
>Holo Suit 2
More stealth.
>Audio Override 1
All the quiet!
>Lock-On 1
>Aim Assist 2
>Info Uplink 1

>Stealthy Gun
>High-Range Gun
Even a short-range gun severely outclasses a knife.

>Stop a Scientist
Seems easy enough, especially since they lack major defenses.

>Guard an
wait
>an
Beri
fix this
>Guard a Heir

>Kill a Billionaire
He'll likely be a good challenge to take down, unless his office has a lot of poorly guarded windows with nice camping spots outside.
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>>53242042
>>>/d/7420446
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>>53241629
Hey Berri these assassins how forgiving are they of collateral damage or if I fuck up and accidentally end up killing the royal or pop star I'm suppose to defend?
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>>53241970
Getting power points from other sources should prevent you from being able to gain anything from a vial personally. They do nothing for people who already have powers from any source, vial, trigger, whatever.
I think the vials were intended for you to be able to give to minions.
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>>53242175
>"accidentally"
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>>53242149
>Guard a Heir
I always thought that you use an when it's a silent H in front of a vowel, since a/an is based on whether it's near a vowel sound, not necessarily what letter. Or is this an accent thing where heir is pronounced with a hard H some places but not others?
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make rwby cyoas
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>>53242212
Maybe the latter. Everybody around here pronounces it like "hair".
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>>53242221
I already exists. We don't need a new one. What we need is a new season.
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>>53242199
https://youtu.be/KFNBHk5PX-M?t=102
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>>53240842
I was gonna use this pic for a similar build in the Worm CYOA, but I'm far too tired to fuck around with all those numbers & powers. Luckily, works just as well here.

Arma: Stealth
>Abilities:
Aim Assist
Arma Summon+
Lock-On
Info Uplink+
AI Assistant+
Hacking Support
Audio Override

Weapons: Small Melee, High-Range Gun
Contracts: Save Assassin, Kill Billionaire, Slay Dictator
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>>53242144
Because they were tricked. Happy Halloween!
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>>53240909
Holy fuck anon, I totally forgot about pairing companions with each other. That will definitely be included now, as there's little purpose in me creating so many children if they're only produced by the player. I'll try and throw in some yuri for you since you reminded me about something so important.

As for the suggestions in the last thread, I hear all of you and will try to include as much as possible. I said the focus of this CYOA was on companions and relationships, but there are a lot more detailed options than just those, so expect this to be a pretty large comprehensive Isekai cyoa.
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>>53242266
It* already exists
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>>53241132
Well I'm certainly feeling uneasy now.
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>>53242348
This will be the first CYOA I complete (don't lose faith in me now that you know that), but I am a long-time lurker and I'm pretty much drawing from my favorite aspects of other people's creations. I'm making something with a level of depth/options that I enjoy and like to see. Hopefully I am successful in appealing to all of you as well.
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>>53242348
Make it entirely optional to pair people up, please.
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>>53242384
The best way to appeal to me is to have no lesbians. Just bisexuals at worst. There's nothing worse than seeing a nice girl only to realize she'll only eat tacos.
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>>53242384
>Hopefully I am successful in appealing to all of you as well.

A false hope anon, but commend for trying.
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>>53242198
>Humble Beginnings
Yeah but thats my point. Humble Beginnings says you dont have powers, you havent triggered yet
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>>53240842
>Lace Arma

The idea of rail grinding while hunting down and killing targets, as well as using them in evasive maneuvers sounds pretty metal to me.

>Aim Assist+, Arma Summon+, AI Assistant+, Lock-On, Attack Drones+, Hacking Support
The Aim Assist and AI Assistant upgrades, in addition to Lock-On, will help take care of the worries of aiming and dodging so I can focus on the direction of the rails. Arma Summon upgrad for ease of access, Hacking Support so I can keep my momentum, and the Attack Drones upgrade for distractions and shit.

>Small Melee, High-Range Gun
I'm not planning to get close to my targets, but if I need to shorter melee weapons would be useful for the extra dodges of the Aim Assist and AI Assistant. The High Ranged Rifle will be my go-to weapon for stylish moving takedowns.

>Save an Assassin, Stop the Blast, Hunt a Monster

These three seem to agree with my Absolute Mobility build, and don't require as much stealth or stillness as the others.

Basically, always keep moving with the rails, stylishly jumping from one to another while taking shots at targets. Not particularly stealthy, but creative in its potential.
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>>53242424
Can do. Do you request that because you'd like to avoid the tedium of pairing all of your companions up, or are you just not interested in it at all?

I'm going to limit the number of companions you can pair up in the first place, by the way.

>>53242432
I am trying to figure out how I should handle this. I could make everyone bisexual/have an orientation that depends on the player's choices, but I feel like that will decrease the degree to which I can detail their preferences. I'll find some compromise.

>>53242433
I'll at least be proud I finally followed through with something, even if I get shat on.
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>>53242471
You shouldn't be going into big detail with sexual preferences anyway. That makes things annoying and narrow.
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>>53240687
Witch (male)
15 points + 1 item.

Witchery lvl 5. Teleportation is super useful. Plus pocket space and putting and summoning things. All good. And I can go into space? I guess?

Catmancy. lvl 5 Yeah. You see not aging doesnt really grant me immortality. I can still be killed. 9 lives sure helps. Sides, I get a cute pet. Probably a nice little pup. Hope it gets along with kitties.

Potion. lvl 5 Safe way to grant a small circle of friends immortality. Not to mention interesting things like shape shifter and curing diseases and reviving the dead. Requires rare materials but invisibility and pocket space should help.

Items: 4 items.
Potion of Witchiness: Transmutation 1
Charms: going to need some like humor, stamina, perception, luck, libido, maybe some of her skill charms, etc. I mean as long as shes not using these.... I might as well take them.

Bottle Stash. For my potion making.

Witch hut. Because having somewhere to teleport to helps.
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>>53242501
I agree. I don't want this to be about the fulfillment of sexual fantasies, anyway. Children are incorporated because I think the combinations between player traits and companion traits that will determine theirs will be really cool. I just hope the fuss over sexuality doesn't inhibit my ability to give companions some romantic depth.
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>>53242545
The thing to remember is that most of the stuff people like can cross gender barriers. Both men and women, and gay men and lesbian women, like someone who can cook, for example. As well, something that might be considered fairly girly can still be fulfilled by a male player if they're into that.
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>>53242619
>lesbian women
Girls cannot love other girls.
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Would you prefer a waifu picker with a horizontal or vertical image?
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>>53242633
Little girls can.
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So uh, how 'bout them husbandos?
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>>53242619
I appreciate the advice. I'm leaning towards making it so that the player can romance anyone they want and phrasing things to allow that. The only problem is that a same sex couple isn't going to naturally produce offspring. I think I'll allow players to adopt children at the cost of them not inheriting hereditary traits of the player.
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>>53242633
Not with that attitude!
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>>53242657
Depends on the images. If profiles then vertical works best, if landscapes then horizontal works best. If it's some random object with a tight center of mass then square is fine.
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>>53242677
die you nigger
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>>53242677
Don't worry, my CYOA will have tons of hunky wolfo dick
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>>53242695
Certainly possible.
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>>53241132
This is such a lovely CYOA. The very slightly off-kilter sort of supernatural is among my favorites.

Apartment
>European Historic
>Penthouse Suite
Bigger the house the better, to a reasonable extent.

Local Businesses
>The Heretic's Library
I hope the books don't have a chance of death tied to them.
>BlockBuster LLC
It's a shame you can't use the tapes to blackmail and destroy people's careers. It'd be a potent political weapon, if used right. Still a good source of entertainment.
>Abandoned Store
A bit of variety.
>Irregular Grocery
"Everything you could possibly want" is a dangerous phrase. I wonder if they have life-extending products.

Furniture & Appliances
>Painter's Memento
Paintings are nice, and so is cash when I don't need more paintings.
>Vending Machine
Did I mention I'm a fan of unusual food and drink yet?
>Sentient Microwave
Not having to spend long periods of time cooking dishes is a godsend.
>First-Aid Kit
Just in case.

Friendly Tenants
>Ancient Witch Irina
>Paranormal Maniac
It's a shame she'll never see the madness around here.
>Demon Falfarafax
With any luck, we share game interests.
>Painter's Apprentice
Seems like a nice kid.
>Basement Apparition
If nothing else, rather benign.
>The Chessmaster
I need to work on my chess skills.
>Apartment Gargoyle
>Noire Radio Host
>Apartment Janitor
>Hallway Wanderer

Paranormal Phenomena
>Gravity Anomaly
>Bashful Haunt
Free maid/friend!
>Outdoor Courtyard
>Give and Take Well
I wonder what it would cost to gain intricate knowledge of the various costs of things that don't necessarily have prices.
>Odd-Jobs Listing
>The Infinity Line
I hope it doesn't refuse being used for recreational purposes the first time or two.
>The Illustrated Stalls
Hopefully the offers aren't just sexual favors or along that line.
>Open Door Day
>Unremarkable Jack

Hostile Phenomena
None.
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>>53240842
Shatter Arma. Useful for movement and also redirecting enemy fire I presume.

Attack Drones lvl 1. Very useful. More bullets coming in various directions, more things for me to redirect in a weird angle.

AI assist 2. Whats a robot without a cute AI. Plus they can run all the programs.

Lock on 2. Not only do bullets get redirected, they curve. Seriously.

Aim Assist 2. Just in case I'm not good at you know reflexes n shit. Curving bullets cant do everything.

Arma summon 2. Being able to store things is super helpful. Luggage sucks.

Holo Suit. Sometimes a disguise is handy even if youre not wearing a mecha suit. Like. I can change clothes without changing clothes.

Gun: High Range gun, Stealthy gun

Missions
Stop a scientist. I can get behind talking science and potential with scientist I bet. Convince her we can get her plenty of funding as long as we make sure it doesnt you know take over the world.
Save an assassin. Should be easy enough. Bet my holo suit can work as camo.
End Bullying. I assume my training will teach me martial arts so I can teach him. OR I can just run a shooting obstacle course with his bully and classmates invited to watch.
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>>53242657
If you mean the CYOA itself, then definitely vertical (and preferrably not wider than 1900 pixels).
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>>53240801
Quanta

hero
worthless opponent
insert
female
teenager
high schooler

armor
mechanics
tactics
investigation
banter
martial arts
worst day ever (x2)
noctis cape
rough start
secret lair (1 point because it comes with nothing)

payoff

foreign element
second trigger
shroedinger
mountain
revenant blade
case 53 (blue crystallike hands and a little bit above that)
psychic nosebleed

wards
fan club

look kind of like pic related, but without the cat ears and bright blue crystal instead of the spiky fur motif (like in second related pic)
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>>53240842

>Stealth Arma
Fits best with the contracts I plan to take.

>Aim Assist
I mean, I'm an assassin. This is pretty much necessary.
>Arma Summon
For added mobility.
>Lock-On
See "Aim Assist."
>Info Uplink
Yes please.
>Shock Touch
Biribiri!
>Sync Bodies 2
I don't want to die.
>Audio Override
By creating an extremely small field around me, I'll be basically undetectable.
>Holo Suit 2
The perfect disguise.

Damn, there are so many cool upgrades here... I seriously had to think about which ones to take.

Wait, I can't contact anyone? Shit. They'll think I'll killed myself. I hope I can at least leave something before they do something drastic.

>Small Melee
For if I need to do some defending in a pinch
>Stealthy Gun
Go ahead, make my day.

>Stop a Scientist
I'm sure we can reason with each other... right? I mean, look at all the cool tech we have!
>Kill a Billionaire
For the sake of the proletariat!
>Slay a Dictator
Sic semper tyrannis!
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How long is the ideal CYOA length in terms of pages for you?
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>>53242847
also pic related
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>>53242869
Zero
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>>53242910
Who hurt you?
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>>53242928
I did, it was me.
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I-I think I'm gonna do it. The text is written out now, I just have to make the image. New OC soon.
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>>53242869
1-3. Though it depends how much of the size limit people are using for their pages.
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>>53242940
I WANT IT AND I WANT IT NOW
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>>53240801
>>53240815
>>53240832
>>53240846
Name: The Jackel
Setting: Gestation 15c 15s(real value 20, see Vial)
Path: Vigilante
Gifts: Metaknowledge
Entry: Drop-in, no identity 20c 23s
Targets: Ambivalent 24c 27s
Costume: Budget

Flaws: Case 53 III 30s with skin a deep shade of blue and eyes an almost glowing red, The Jackel stands out in a crowd, constantly breathing out abit of steam as if frozen internally
Worst Day Ever II 26c 32s
Psychic Nosebleed 35s
Numbed emotion 37s
Humble beginnings 31c 42s
Nemesis 34c
Endbringer target 39c 46s

Skills: Marksman 34c
Banter 33c
Hacking 32c
Mechanic 30c
Shard: Foreign 29c 43s
Powers: Macgyver+ 42s
Repair+ 40s
Radar+ 38s
Training Montage+ 31s
Masquarade+ 21s
Protocols 20s
Perks: Negatropy 22c 15s
Second trigger V 2c 0s
Cauldron Vial "Experiment 37-Q" 0c


Don't mind me, i'm not a repost.
Im just another "anon"
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>>53242869
TWELVE
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You get to take one author on a cruise vacation for a week. Who do you choose?
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>>53242979
DSA. Comfy Bermuda Triangle cruise.
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>>53242979
As they actually are, or personas (i.e. Beri as a slimegirl?)

Beri either way.
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>>53242869
12
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>>53243007
Isn't beri the only author with a persona? Nobody else has something like that.
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>>53242677
What anime is this from?
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>>53240842

Assassin Code Name: Sabotage
Arma Type: Stealth
>Sneaking sneaking I am sneaking.

Abilities:
Network Tunnel 2
>Cyber teleport, yes please
Hacking Support 1
>Great for breaking in
Sync Bodies 2
>We are legion, ha ha!
Armo Summon 2
>Armo on, Armo off, Armo on, Armo off
Shock Touch 1
>His death was certainly a shock to us....he he
Holo Suit 2
>Obligatory shape-shifting perk

Weapons:
Stealthy Gun
>It goes pew pew not bang bang
Explosives
>I like explosions....a lot

Contracts:
Stop a Scientist
>Build Sync Body with explosive charge in chest cavity, negotiate with scientist if they fail to agree wrap my arms around them and detonate.
Save an Assassin
>Straight forward covert drop and stealth to meeting point, plan from there
End Bullying
>Use holo suit to change identity, learn names of bullies, break into school records and learn their home addresses. Go to bully's home and proceed to beat their parent to a pulp, all the while telling them that this is their kid's fault and if I hear they let him bully again I'll cut them up and feed them to him, that way they can literally be shit parents.
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>>53240801
How does Kingmaker work with Foreign Element (Abaddon) as it says that powers from Abaddon are far more potent then described and can grow even more powerful.
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>>53243057
junon-boy
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>>53243057
https://youtu.be/a3ZlpTp_dJA
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>>53243057
Barakamon. The character is an actual fujoshi.
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Anyone know if there is a newer version of RWBY cyoa?
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>>53240842

>Medic Arma

>Aim Assist 2
>Arma Summon 2
>Lock-on 2
>AI Assistant 2
>Holo Suit 2

>Stealthy Gun
>High-Range Gun

>Stop a Scientist
>Save am Assassin
>End Bullying

I'd rather not do any killing if possible.
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>>53243063
I assume they're pretty much twice as powerful as they're described, and can grow to be three times as powerful, if not more. There's really no reason not to pick it over the other ones.
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>>53243086
>No one has made a CYOA one tenth as rad as this
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So yeah worm high level powers can be crazy, I mean ptv solves all your problems, also the mystic eyes of death perception ain't bad.
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>>53243086
I got a boner from watching this.
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>>53243140
>No one has made a CYOA one tenth as rad as this

But what if they were trying?
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>>53243186
That sounds awesome
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>>53242441
If you trigger, you would get the powers you paid for. At which point, a vial would no longer work.
If you use a vial, I don't think you could trigger and all of the points you spent on powers would be lost.

That's just my opinion as someone who has read the story. I think the CYOA maker should add some clarifying text and possibly a % chance of vials fucking the user up. CYOAs always gloss over the dangers of the vials. Something like on an 8, 9, and 0 you get 1, 2, or 3 X "Case 53" without gaining any points from it.
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>>53242972
Name: Firerat
Setting: Gestation 15c 15s
Path: Villain
Entry: Drop-in, no identity 20c 18s
Targets: Ambivalent 24c 22s
Costume: Budget

Flaws: Worst Day Ever II 30c 28s
Psychic Nosebleed 32s
Numbed emotion 35s
Endbringer target 34c 40s

Skills: Marksman 29c
Banter 28c
Martial arts 24c
Tactics 20c
Shard: Foreign 17c 37s
Powers: Combo 27s
Atmosphere control 17s
Omnicombustion 14
Perks: Negatropy 12c 9s
Second trigger III 0c 0s

MMMMPH MMMMPH!
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>>53243233
So just get 3 vials instead.
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>>53242869
It's less the pages of the cyoa itself but I would like for my response to fit inside one post with some explanations and stuff ideally.
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>>53240842
Shatter
Network Tunnel 2, Aim Assist 2, Lock on 2, Drones 2, Info Uplink 2
Explosives, Explosives

EXPLOSIVE CHAN ALREADY TOUCHED THAT DEVICE
and then it explodes.
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>>53243475
Chucking grenades through portals with aim assist and lockon sounds like fun.
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Post ideas for CYOAs you think would be cool

I'll go first

A haunted house CYOA where you move into an old residence filled with spooky ghosts and strange phenomena. You design the look and feel of the place as well as what rooms it has and which ghosts are present within the house. Some extra sections for benefits like guardian angels living in the house and drawbacks featuring demonic entities and things that cause sleep paralysis and other not so comfy strange things to happen.
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>>53243641
someone actually putting the effort into finishing a MMORPG cyoa that can actually get people to join up into partys
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>>53243641
A magic school cyoa, where you choose options for what the school is to be like, and are basically just creating the school, what it teaches, what magic there is, the students, the world it's in, if it's a degenerate lewd school or not. Then you choose at the end if you are a student, a teacher, the principal, or what.
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>>53243641
Fantasy Colonization Cyoa where you have various ways to gain control over all kind of civilizations and a couple of different colonial powers as rivals
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>>53243641
Office Barbarians.

In an alternate dimension made purely of office buildings, there is only destruction.

Men in business suits wielding blades going on raids to pillage coffee reserves and staples.
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>>53243641
>>53243643
>>53243682
>>53243746
These are all really neat ideas.
>>53243773
I think this guy wins though...

I may or may not see if I can't convert an old setting I was working on from the end of high school through most of college into a CYOA once I'm done with Brides...
Would you guys prefer the generic Post-Apocalyptic version or the more flushed out 400 Year jump to Post-Post-Apocalyptic?
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>>53243886
I like post-post because I associate with happy JRPG settings with all kinds of greenery and cool super-scifi ruins and ancient weapons in a world where things are kind of weird because of how the planet has been damaged and the remains of that technology have changed people's lives. Like there's floating islands and things because some ancient civilization's gravity bomb or a crashed ship engine or something have fucked up the local gravity to allow such a thing.
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>>53243375
If you took one then the others wouldn't do anything for you. If you mixed them together, I don't know what would happen, but it probably wouldn't be good.

If I were to put it to a system, for 3 vials I would do something along these lines:

The case 53 keeps going after 3.
Roll 1 and get a random number of points between 20 and 60.
Roll 2 and get a random number of points between 20 and 60 & Case 53 lvl 1
>Mostly normal looking but with some significant , but not overly impairing abnormalities. (Made of metal, tail and off coloured skin, etc.)
Roll 3 and get a random number of points between 20 and 60 & Case 53 lvl 2
>Significant physical abnormalities, some impairment, many people would run in fear
Roll 4 and get a random number of points between 20 and 60 & Case 53 lvl 3
>Inhuman. Significantly impaired. (Nothing but a head and tentacles that you have difficulty controlling, etc)
Roll 5 and get a random number of points between 20 and 60 & Case 53 lvl 4
>Monsterous. May have some control of what you would have to call its body. Maintains some lucidity. You can't feel pain without some lucidity.
Roll 6 and get a random number of points between 20 and 60 & Case 53 lvl 5
>Is this living anymore.
...
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>>53240842
>Demo Arma
>Aim Assist 2
>Lock On 2
>Shock Touch 2
>Attack Drones 2
>Holo Suit 2
>Big Melee
>Explosives

I'm big slow and loud. I'm not at all subtle or sneaky - if anyone from higher up asks, I took the holo suit 2 to give me a stealth option, but I really took it so I make myself into an 8 feet tall superhuman. Collateral Damage? Phah! My job is to kill things - its not to NOT kill things. And I won't take 3 jobs, I'll take all of them.

-Stop a Scientist
This man will have a giant plant monster. Unfortunately for him, I have napalm.

-Save an Assassin
It technically counts as saving her if I kill everyone else on the island first, right?

-End Bullying
Well this is clearly a problem that could be solved by a few strategic carbombings if I ever saw one. What? Aw fine. I'll bomb their cars when they AREN'T inside them. Stops them from getting to school. Is that okay, MOOOM?

-Guard an Heir
Scan the area with mass drones using infrared and heatvision. Anything weird shows up get lock on with a drone and hit it with a homing missile.

-Counter Strike
Am I really an assassin or a bodyguard? Uh. Scan the concert with drones, kill anything weird that shows up.

-Stop the Blast
Uh. Well Shit. This actually sounds like a difficult mission. Uuuhhhhhhhh... I guess I could... pretend that one of the lasers is still running the old codes... and set a trap for them? Yeah, I'll do that.

-Kill a Billionaire
>No Explosives
Fuck you don't tell me how to do my job.

>Hunt a Monster
Oh, this one sounds fun. Find it with the drones, kill it with the melee. I'd use missiles, but this sounds more fun.

>Slay a Dictator
Bless my missiles, padre, then tell me where he lives.

>Fight a Traitor
So. Uh. An enemy who is faster than me and always knows when I'm coming. And her shield stops most weapons? You guys fucked up royal with this one. But if she loves smiting evil so much, I get the feeling she'll come to me.
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>>53243938
1 vial 3 levels of case 53
2 vials 6 levels of case 53
3 vials 9 levels of horror
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>>53240801
Please forgive my autism.

Scenario: Gestation +15cp +15sp (Total) 31cp 25sp
Path: Vigilante
Ambivalent +4cp +4sp

Origin: Insert
Male
Senior

Civilian Identity: No Identity +2cp
Costume: Custom -4cp

Skills:
Stratergy -5cp
Tactics -4cp
Hacking -1cp
Investigation -2cp

Vigilante Equipment:
PRT Info -5cp
Supply Line -4cp

Shard: Natural Trigger +3cp
Perks:
Plot Convenience -1cp
Secret Lair -2cp
Blindsport -3cp -4sp
Flaws:
Slaughterhouse 9 Target +4cp +2sp
Endbringer Target +3cp +4sp

Gifts: Plot Relevance

Powers:
Genetics -10sp
Replication -10sp

Short Term Goals:
Create a Replication me to genetically alter original me, giving Superintelligence (recommend reading 'Understand' by Ted Chiang), Superstrength, basically an all round improved body and mind, Replicate myself with all improvements 9 more times, and all 11 of me will begin to plan for mid-long term goals.

Mid Term Goals:
I would Imagine that superintelligent beings could quickly lean all they need to know about the sciences to begin development of Tinker comparable devices so basically attempt to replicate, via normal means, the capabilities of tinker tech. Just because Tinker Tech exists doesn't mean normal technology doesn't, it's just a matter of advancement

Long Term Goals: Genetically alter All of Humanity into a superior version of itself.
Think the Physiology of Warhammer Astartes
and 2nd/5th Men in Olaf Stapledon's book 'First and Last Men'
The superintelligence of'Understand' by Ted Chiang

I don't know how many people here read books but First and Last Men one is amazing at conveying an idea of what a perfected Humanity and their society and psychology would look like.
Understand is a short story that'll give a glimpse into the capability of a superintelligent mind.

How could all this be done? Well, how can any normal human comprehend how a superintelligent mind conceives of problems? It'll just be done somehow.

>Tfw comment to long.
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>>53243132
So you could make 10pt powers with kingmaker/abaddon combo easily. Wonder if 25pt would be doable. 7pt power x2 is 24pts soo..
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>>53243904
Good to hear!
That's the one I already converted to a Savage Worlds campaign so it'll be less work to CYOAify.
For now I must sleep and prepare to finish Aries tomorrow. Maybe more if my muses stop being such fickle and unreliable bitches!
Good Night /cyoag/,
Get hyped for Sheep Bride
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>>53243938
>rolling
Great, we need more of that shit.
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>>53243641
CYOA where you are given the tools and ingredients to make any kind of sandwich in an uncomfortable amount of detail. It acts as a tool for anons to compete to see who can come up with the best original sandwich and give it an official name. Anons vote on the best sandwiches of each category and the winners get added as waifu options. Categories a sandwich can win include nutrition, creativity, lewdness, spiciness, cost, cuteness and more.

Maybe some brave anon will try to replicate some of their builds in reality and see what happens.
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>>53244008
>7x2 is 24
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>>53244010
No.

I like Psycho Yoga Bride.
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>>53243773
This actually sounds amusing, like the Walmart Apocalypse setting (which incidentally would make a CYOA), but for offices.
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>>53244098
>Walmart Apocalypse setting

The what now?
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>>53244106
One of those /tg/ homebrew settings, like the one black metal inspired one. I'll see if I can find it.
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>>53244106
>>53244126
Found it for you.

https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Walmart_Apocalypse
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>>53244135
This is highly interesting, thank you Anon.
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Here's some not!Ace Combat OC

Let me know if there's any issues or if you'd like to see anything if I ever the chance to expand on the idea.
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>>53244180
>Here's some not!Ace Combat OC

So where's the mystery box where we blow up a dragon and its rider from a fantasy universe thus jump-starting the apocalypse and making a spin-off series?
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>>53244226
Oh I must have forgot, here it is
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>>53244253
Holy fucking shit dude.

Shitpost not the Watchers.
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>>53244070
She ain't going anywhere, you two can still dance through the blood and paint with all the colors of the wind.
And that fucking muse I was talking about just woke me up with an idea for Sheep Bride.
So if you have questions or just want to tell me my OC is shit and I should commit sudoku, I'll be lurking a little while longer.
I'll even post the first three pages for anyone who hasn't seen em. 2 pages and 6 Brides to go!
And maybe a 6th page with a special way to get 6 elixirs instead of 3, but it only becomes available if you pick the secret 13th Mystery Bride, but let's not get ahead of ourselves.
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>>53244357
Can I take the same elixir multiple times for no added benefit whatsoever?
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>>53244357
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>>53244367
Last one I have done, working on Aries as we speak.
>>53244363
I suppose you could... You only get the one injection of it before the war unless you pick the Mystery Bride, why would want it if it does nothing?
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>>53241132
This is most likely one of my favorite CYOA's

Architectual Style:
>European Historic
Never realized how much I loved the architecture of my city until I saw this CYOA

Apartment Location:
>Upper Floors

Local Businesses:
>Gunrunners Depot
In case i feel like doing some exploring in the basement.
>Bar Between Floors
I would love to have a classy bar to socialize in.
>Irregular Grocery
>Apartment Gym
With a gym this close I would have no excuse to slack off.

Furniture & Appliances:
>First-Aid Kit
Again, if I decide to go down into the basement.
>Refrigerator Morse
>Local Channels
>Occupied Mirror
>Vending Machine
There are so many discontinued sodas and snacks i want to eat again.
>Ex-Tenant's Journals
Could be useful

I would take Multi-Fauceted Sink, but it would almost certainty get me killed.

Friendly Tenants:
>Hallway Wanderer
>Paranormal Maniac
>Nurse Erika
>Apartment Maid
>Arm in the Basement
>Stair Standing Stones
>Veteran Kowallski
>Bearded Chronicler
>Noire Radio Host
>The Chessmaster

Paranormal Phenomena:
>The Stairwell Window
>High Five hands
I will slap the SHIT out of those hands.
>Bashful Haunt
Hell yeah for free breakfast and not needing to clean.
>Outdoor Courtyard
>Odd-jobs Listing
Just the thought of random, wacky small jobs are appealing to me.
>The Infinity Line
>The Night Fair
>Hokousha Tengoku
>Open Door Day

Hostile Phenomena:
None
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>>53243022
Nah, SDA has level 69 Mara.
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>>53244399
>why would want it if it does nothing?
Because that's who the fuck I am, that's why. I am so sick and tired of people just scoffing and walking away, always saying that I should stop injecting magical elixirs that do nothing into my bloodstream. You know what? Fuck that. Every day I wake up and smile, knwoing that THIS day might be the day where I get to take magical drugs that literally do nothing. It's the only thing keeping me going. I lie awake at night thinking about how amazing it would be to take a magical potion or implant or anything else that does literally nothing and is totally useless. I'll smile as I trudge through the day knowing that it will happen to me one day. It's how I've stayed sane in this hellhole of a world.

This is who I am, and no one is going to keep me from it.
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>>53244399
The white text for the names of the girls is a bad idea, it blends in the background too much. Go for a bolder color.
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>>53243773
Congratulations, you just reminded me of that bento fight cyoa I need to finish. I love/hate you now.
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>>53243641
Have you tried this one?
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>>53244399
>that tiny libra text
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>>53244444
Shit, now I really have to finish it.
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>>53244444
>>53244454
WITNESS YOUR DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM
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>should be finishing up my CYOA
>finding pictures for the next one instead
Why do I do this to myself?
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>>53244424
Holy shit dude, okay calm down.
Sebastian's not trying to hold out on you, he just only brought the 12 syringes and 1 of each elixirs.
You can have as many as you want once the War is won and you're king.
I'm here if you need me while I work tinishing it so you can achieve that dream.
Also, you should really consider the Mystery Bride because they may or may not be The Court's Head Alchemist.
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>>53244471
You fear the unknown.

Plunge towards your final foe.

Slay the final seal on what is to be.

Visit death upon the time before its creation, ushering in a new age of it existing.

Fondle your niece.
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>>53244481
Okay I'm fine I forgive you okay it's all going to be great because I know it's okay when it's fine and it can't not be okay because I know that it's fine when it's great which it is because it's okay isn;t it I know this yes I do I said so so I know it because I told meisn;t great haha I love it so muchc because everything is okay and I'm going to do it I'll do it all and no one no one no one no one no no no no one is going to stop it?
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>>53240801
Gestation - 1515
Insert Female Teenager
No Identity - 17 15
Costume - Thematic 14, 15

>Skills
First Aid - 11, 15
Strategy - 6, 15
Tactics - 2, 15
Parkour - 0, 15
Banter - -1, 15

Abaddon - -4, 15

>Perks And Flaws
Rough Start 3 - 2, 15
Case 53 1 - 2, 16
Worst Day Ever 3 - 8, 19
Identity Reveal - 11, 19
Humble Beginnings - 16, 26
Negentropy - 11, 19
Second Trigger 2 - 3, 13

>Powers:
Regeneration (2nd Trigger) - 3, 3
Razor Hands (2nd Trigger) - 3, 1
Power Sight - 3, 0

The Wards
Fan Club

Hey guys I made a mary sue what do you think?
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>>53244442
That is one of the few things I can easily fix! White was just the best color I could think of for air zodiac signs since blue obviously water.
>>53244452
It was the best I could manage. Any larger bled too far off the page to be able to leave any room for the House Info and Search hostory.
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>>53244511
A mid to darkish gray perhaps?
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>>53244501
Hardly a mary sue.
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>>53244493
It's gonna be okay, Junkie Anon.
Once you're King you can have all the placebo syringes you need and a loving Queen Waifu who won't judge you for what makes you happy.
Take some deep breaths, maybe some Ambien, and everything's gonna be fine.

Hey guys, I have to go work on Aries, can someone stay with him and make sure he's okay?
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>>53244519
>mid to darkish grey
As in clouds...
Fuck me that seems obvious now.
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>>53244534
16 year old girl with Abaddon Shard whose power is basically being wolverine + being a great strategist. My trigger was being attacked by Slaughterhouse Nine, almost escaping and then being attacked by an Endbringer on the same day (see below). Plus I'm a case 53, but not like, an ugly case 53. Also everyone loves me.

>>53244501
Realised I left out the shard cost of Abaddon Shard, taking Endbringer Target drawback to make up for it. Gives me enough Cape points to buy Martial Artist.
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>>53244550
You misunderstand. I am always "okay." My "okay" are like my dreams, and my dreams are like my pox. Inside each of you. I feel them, evolving past flesh and becoming the tongues of something screaming at every inch of my flaked and borrowed flesh.

I didn't want them to see me like this, but I just didn't have time to put on my fingers.

I'm not sure why it is that you're thinking that I am incapable of minding myself. I am a perfectly capable individual who knows only that which any mortal man may know. What is, and what isn't. I am as normal as your corpse: Yet to be realized.
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>>53240801
Holy shit, a new Worm CYOA?!? So excited!
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>>53244357
Regarding the potion picking as it is now, it feels a bit weird that choices are 'as fragile as you are now' and 'literally invulnerable'. And with Sebastian hinting that it's going to be a warzone, Vitality feels basically like a mandatory pick.

Guess you could handle it with Magic but if Magic does everything, then best choice is inject it three times, even if it doesn't do anything beyond first one.

Also the girls will probably cry if I don't pick B-04 :'(
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>>53240832
How does Shard Administration work, especially with second trigger? Can you eliminate people's powers by destroying their shards?
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>>53244180
you're awesome and you should feel awesome, I was playing with the idea of making an ace combat cyoa myself.
though I see you went with NOT-5 rather then NOT-Zero, and you added a planebuilder mechanic where I would have offered a choice of realistic planes.

but yours is pretty high quality and you actually made it, so thanks a lot!

don't have time to make a build right now, but I will when I get home.
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>>53244649
>not being a 6'8" 9/10 male model turbojock with an 11"x7" dick

What the fuck are you even doing here, nerd?
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>>53244180
Drawback to make it lace combat.
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>>53244501
>Identity Reveal
>incompatible with no identity
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>>53244649
I think magic would probably only be that good when backed up by M-06: Skill. The thing with magic is that it will take some time to master it, and the bride free-for-all is going to start pretty much immediately. You'll need M6's inhuman learning speed for magic to really do you much good in the short term.

Personally, I think a good general setup is:
B3 Vitality
M6 Skill
S9 Magic
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>>53244649
Pheremones? Chances are they'll be pretty unhappy if you're flinging those around and arousing every female in your entire court on an animal level.
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>>53244685
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>>53243773
>business fantasy CYOA
FUND IT
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>>53240842
Summon
Aim, Network, Summon, Uplink, Shock2, Sync2, Holo2.
Stealthy, Big guns
Stop scienstist, save assassin, kill.
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>>53244649
>>53244793
That still shows that vitality is pretty much a must. Though I'd much rather go with vitality, beauty, and domination. I'd be able to get the brides to stop fighting pretty quickly and rule as a god-king with a harem of 13 brides (assuming you only get a two-for-one deal with Gemini).
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>>53244683
Thank you very much that's extremely kind of you to say.

>I was playing with the idea of making an ace combat cyoa myself
If you get the chance I would really like to see that sometime, especially if it was going to be NOT-zero because i think the whole ace style aspect really transitions well for CYOA.

>>53244763
Would that be like pic related?
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>>53244797
It's also just plain beauty as well, which your bride would probably appreciate.
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>>53244841
Yes, but is it worth having all those other girls salivating over you and making the castle ripe with the stench of bitches?
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>>53244797
Anon might be a girl. B-04 makes the recipient a dude, and without that you could end up with a very disappointed bride.
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>>53244501
>>53244685
Alright,so I ditch no identity. I have hero points to spare
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>>53244808
This could actually be really cool, although I'm a huge weeb so I'd probably ruin it. I'm imagining some sort of global martial arts tournament where the winners get prestigious positions as CEOs in global corporations.
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>>53244808
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>>53240801
>>53240815
>>53240832
>>53240846

Your efforts have not gone unnoticed, friend. Autismo the Great and Powerful returns.
Autismo is eternal.

At a glance, it's a major improvement on the previous version both visually and mechanically. My main concern is that it seems to heavily encourage min-maxing. I feel the cost of perks could be tweaked a bit at least.
Autistically in-depth analysis to follow within the next day or so.
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>>53244872
What manga is this from?
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>>53244910
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>>53244853
>tfw yuri option is highly discouraged
Do I have to become a man to make them love me?
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>>53245018
Stop whining. At least there is a yuri option. I need to go meta to give Vignette a cute penis.
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>>53240846
>>53240836
>>53240832
>>53240815
>>53240801
realised i made mistakes last time i posted

>Golden Age
>Villain
EDGEMODE ACTIVATE

>Origin
Entry: Insert
Gender: Male
Age: Teenager (17)
>Civillian Identity
High Schooler

>Costume
Thematic (7) - some kind of black knight outfit

>skills
Martial Arts (3)
Parkour (1)
Banter (0)

>Shard
Natural Trigger (3)

>Perks and flaws
worst day everx3 (9) (26)
Numbed Emotions (9) (29)
case 53x3 (9) (35) - pale, use of powers results in fault lines and infernal appearance - discolored scolera
Second Trigger (5) (32)
Plot convenience (4) (32)
Memory Death (9) (32)
Followerx2 (3) (32)

>Gift
Failsafe

>Powers
Broken limiter: Second Trigger (7)
Counter (2)
Vampirism (0)

>Villain
Gang: other
Perks: Money (0)
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>>53245041
> ruining best daughteru like that
You are swine.
>>
Are there any creators that are grill btw besides Angel?

I'm not entirely convinced Angel isn't a joke persona either.
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>>53244910
Something great.
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>>53245079
Let's see. 90% of posters are part of the SDA mind and we know the SDA mind can be any gender it pleases. So yeah, there are plenty of girls here.
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>>53241132
>The vacant lot is notorious for the number of corpses
Living corpses?
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>>53244357
>Cassandra
Between her skill, ambition, and thing for femdom, I get the feeling she'd probably end up being the power behind the throne. So nah. Also she doesn't bring much to the table in terms of her own power. Just shitty tundra.

>Vignette
2pure, please protect. But also maybe a little too innocent to get into politics. Please go home before you get hurt.

>Abirathi
Sounds like a security nightmare, always running around. I can sympathize with not wanting to get caught up in royal court shenanigans, but that comes with the whole "Queen" thing.

>Gwendolyn & Gracia
Yeah, let's go ahead and appoint a horse as the steward and declare pants illegal, that'll go over well. Games are good but you can't just play pranks on an entire country. Also more than one waifu is always a bad idea.

>Lizette
She's either getting a restraining order or thrown in a dungeon, because there's no way it's safe to have her anywhere nearby. She needs therapy, not a crown.

>TALISA
The objectively best choice. Good in combat, concerned about the common people, somewhat humble, has embraced the eternal truth of pants being the best form of leg clothing, and cares about trying not to kill the other combatants. Also, her family's lands are the agricultural base on which the kingdom is fed, so that's important. Her only problem is that she's maybe got body issues, and that's a minor thing.
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>>53245112
Hey, the SDA mind's gender is solely 'smug little anime girl', you fucking cis scumlord.
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>>53245154
Please kill yourself if you're not picking Vignette. He's the cutest!
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>>53240687
Sorceress.

Max potions and cats. Familiar, still deciding, actually....
Get the Witchery potion and a level 4 charm.. probably... stamina or something.

Use a potion to change my form into a dude with hidden nonhuman traits. Be sorceress level sexy. Save cats when I have to but otherwise ignore them.

How to get the first gold bar, though.. hmm.
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>>53244367
Still waiting on water signs, as they will be best girls by far.
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>>53240861
random typo correction:
in the End bullying contract "teach the KILL" should be "teach the KID"
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>>53244399
How come this one isn't organised Cardinal Fixed Mutable like the North Houston?
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>>53245285
House* fucking autocorrect
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>>53245045
time for waifus - i mean followers

>Golden Age

>Path
Villain

>Entry
Insert
Female
Teenager (17)
Highschooler

>Costume
Thematic (witch) (7)

>Skills
Tactics (3)


Natural Trigger (6)

>Perks and Flaws
Psychic Nosebleed (6) (24)
Worst Day Ever (9) (26)
Case 53 x2 (9) (30) pointed ears, pale skin & abnormal colour eyes
Secret lair (7) (30)
Second Trigger (3) (27)

>Powers
Shard Administration (2) Second Trigger
Presence (0)

>Villain
Gang: Other
Perks: Money (0)


no idea what the power does - but it was expensive and in the buff section, so i took it
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>>53245335
It's a power that modifies powers. In the previous version, it would let you break the game, but now it comes pre-broken, so that one is basically like a special developer room that was left in the game for playing around. Specifically, it lets you edit the condition of other powers, as well as their effects, so it's like spawning a bunch of enemies, but then changing their equipment and allegiance, in order to build custom boss fights.
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>>53245154
>o more than one waifu is always a bad idea
Anon, don't you know the corollary? Twins don't count as multiple waifus, they are collectively a single waifu. So they won't ruin your laifu.
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>>53245418
I'm pretty sure you just made that up.
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>>53244603
Holy shit...
I was gone like an hour tops.
Do you need something man? I'm worried about you.
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>>53245440
It's in the rulebook anon, check. Everyone recognizes that inseparable twins compliment each other like that.
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>>53245444
>>53245285
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>>53245485
The very existence of twins is evidence that they should be together.
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>>53245045

>scenario
Golden Age

>path
Villain

Insert
Female
Teenager (17)
High Schooler

Costume:: Bodysuit (9)

>Skills
Hacking (8)
Strategy (3)

Natural Trigger (6)

>Perks and Flaws
Secret Lair (4) (20)
Case 53x2 (4) (24)
worst day ever (7) (26)
Second Trigger (3) (23)
power slot (3) (22)

>powers
Power Fluctuation (17)
Unlimited Shard Works (10)- Second Trigger
Animate Constructs (5)
Blink (0)

>villain
Gang: Other
Perks: money (0)
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>>53245387
so she can edit say "broken limiter" to be immune to ALL supernatural effects rather than most?
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>>53245506
Exactly. It's a metaphysical thing.
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>>53244481
> Also, you should really consider the Mystery Bride because they may or may not be The Court's Head Alchemist.
Boning your pusher seems like a bad plan.
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>>53244357
I dont even need your final build - mine aint changing

S-09: Maggic
S-11 Telekinesis
B-03: Vitality


Vignette


there, the powers i want - and theres no way one of the other girls is topping vignette
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>>53244649
>>53244649
I've seen this issue raised a lot and once I'm done with all of the brides I think I'll come back to the Elixirs to adjust some wording.
Did I ever even mention in their that they're divided by Body, Mind, and Soul?
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>>53245545
It's going to be a sorry sight to see in the war when the anons who picked another bride get to Vignette and have to execute her. I imagine her to be the type to break down, crying and begging.
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>>53245555
> executing the other brides
> not finding a way to end this whole clusterfuck peacefully
> possibly with an actual clusterfuck
Pleb.
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>>53244511
>White was just the best color I could think of for air zodiac signs
if we go with weaboo traditions, then wind is green
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>>53245555
>have to execute her.
well they dont HAVE to - they can just make a loud noise and scare her into surrendering

nothing says you have to kill all of the ones you didnt pick
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>>53245560
Why would you want to go to all that trouble, again?

>>53245569
It's best to. Eliminate all rivals and challengers.
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>>53245572
The fact that you think it's best is different from everyone having to do it.
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>>53245572
>>53245569
>not throwing them into the dungeons to ensure the loyalty of your vassals
do you even monarch?
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>>53240801
Why is negentropy redundant with perpetuancy? Won't the latter eventually stop working without former?
And do powers like regeneration/nanomachines/clones prevent aging?
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>>53245154
This is highly insightful and I'll do my best to keep decent options coming.
>>53245173
Also, stop making me seriously consider retconning vignette into a trap!
Goddamnit. Now what's the point of having the Mystery Bride.
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>>53245572
>>53245572
>>53245584

>Vignette
>rival/challenge to the throne

if you are the kind of monarch who is threatened by her , i have bad new
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>>53245623
>making Vignette a trap
You'd better fucking not
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>>53245623
>retconning vignette into a trap!
dont you fucking dare
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>>53237776
>Your Power
I actually had a harder time then you'd think with this, because it felt wrong being say, Batman or Spiderman, so I wanted to think of a character that is more of a mantle that's had multiple wearers. So I went with Dr Fate.
>Your Body
I'll pick an old Champions character I had Captain Comet, who was pretty much Captain Marvel (The DC one)
>Your Universe
Any of the Dragonlance novels. Honestly its not the greatest setting, but it was the series that got me into fantasy as a child and I can't help but feel with my cosmic tier power I could make it a much better place.
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>>53245219
Fire first, I'm afraid...
But I'll get them to you as fast as I can.
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>>53245623
>Goddamnit. Now what's the point of having the Mystery Bride.

> mystery bride is a trap
> mystery bride is also the way of getting 6 injections instead of 3

Being a bit open about your fetish there.
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>>53245623
>a trap
>not a reverse trap
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>>53245637
>with my cosmic tier power I could make it a much better place.
How so? Kill All Kenders?
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>>53245285
...Because I didn't realize that's what I was doing in the Northern Nouses...
Welp, wasn't falling asleep anyway...
LETS UNFUCK SOME SHIT UP!
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>>53245623
Vignettw gives me in the boner right in the heart. This is something no woman can accomplish. Therefore he is a trap, he must be!
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>>53245693
That's because you're a fag, son.
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>>53245693
>all those mistakes
I think I'm drunker than usual.
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>>53245681
It was really by accident? You even made Capricorn the most powerful one. An impressive accident indeed. Libra seems to be the most powerful Eastern house so that works pretty well.
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>>53245693
vignette makes me want to protect and cherish her- something no man can do, therefore she is a girl
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>>53245637
>dragonlance fan who wants to make a difference in the setting
cool. you ever played this
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1qb0_OLhDrDenE0RDdYaklROUk/view?usp=drive_web
?
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>>53245700
I'm not a fag, dude. That ain't me. I'm a straight guy who likes to do gay stuff with cute boys because I'm so comfortable in my sexuality.
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>>53245725
>im not gay
>i just fuck little boys
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>>53245716
It really bothers me when you use Gilgamesh to post stuff like that because he's canonically and even historically gay or at least bi.
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>>53245693
This angers me because you're de facto sullying the girl Vignette's image actually is.
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>>53244357
>>53244367
>>53244399
>Vignette's search history
That isn't fair, how can the others compete

I think when this is done my build will be something like
B-03 Vitality
M-08 Analysis
S-10 Guardian

To be an indestructible king with a Persona and Sherlock scan.

The fact that literally every build seems to take vitality might mean it needs tweaking though. I'd appreciate a bit more info about Guardian too, would it be able to stand up to the other combat options?
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>>53245555
...and this is why this is a single player game. Holy shit I need to edit that so it clearly says killing your opponent isn't the only way to win.

Check out this video on YouTube:

http://youtu.be/9Deg7VrpHbM
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>>53245733
his romantic attraction in fate has always been to girls (saber)
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>>53245173
>Vignette
>He

You get out of here with that anon.
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>>53245748
>Saber
>girl
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>>53245758
GODDAMN WIZARDS
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>>53245731
>being so uncomfortable with your heterosexuality you can't even fuck a guy

Dude.
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>>53245764
>being so uncomfortable with your heterosexuality you have to fuck guys to prove how confident in it you are
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>>53245676
Gently discipline them when they go to far. Most of them aren't that bad really, even in the books themselves. The one in Lord Toede was downright cute (proper cute, not YOU SHOULD LIKE THIS cute). But Lord Toede may as well be noncanon anyway.

I suspect most of my cosmic power would be spent keeping the more problematic gods on both sides of the alignment chart in line for the most part.

>>53245721
Nope, but I will now!
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>>53245748
>Gilgamesh is in love with King Arthur who is actually a girl
Nasu Gilgamesh belongs to Enkidu just like "real life" Gilgamesh. Kindly kill yourself with your fanfiction tier otp.
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>>53245736
>not M-05 Knowledge, M-06 Skill, and S-09 Magic
Imagine reaching the peak of all sorcerous knowledge and power by just getting some shots.
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>>53245780
Magic won't stop your waifu from cucking you with court jester Chad.

You should at least pick one option that makes you more charismatic or attractive.
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>>53245779
>Nasu Gilgamesh belongs to Enkidu
he has only ever referred to Enkidu as friend - nothing more or less, likewise Enkidu treats him as just a friend
>>
I think the best compromise here is that Vignette stays as girl, but she just has penis(feminine)
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>>53245795
>stays as girl, but she just has penis(feminine)
but that would make her not a girl
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>>53245790
I couldn't care less about the historical delusions of a chink who thinks King Arthur was secretly a girl craving japanese cock.
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>>53245787
There's shape changing magic for that.
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>>53245630
>>53245635
Don't worry I'm not going to.
That raises too many issues about what happens when you die and you didn't produce an hour and... Hey look! A sequel!
Seriously, too much work. And I'd feel bad for ruining Gilgamesh's favorite. He's been a vocal supporter since I first posted Vignette.

>>53245662
Why yes, I like cute traps and I cannot lie.
The injections thing was legitimately accidental innuendo. I'm more a doctor than a patient, if you know what I mean.You get the other 3 from him because he's the head alchemist and he blackmailed Sebastian to tell you can only handle 3 unless you pick him.
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>>53245795
Frail princes raised as princesses for political leverage are patrician.
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>>53245810
Zodiac Brides Guy is not a mongrel!
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>>53240801
Munchkin McBroken

Scenario
>Golden Age
Path
>Villain
Origin
>Drop-in
Civilian Identity
>No Identity
Costume
>Budget
Skills
>Hacking
>Investigation
Shard
>Foreign Element
Perks
>Second Trigger x2
>Blindspot
>Negentropy
Flaws
>Case 53 x3
Gifts
>Payoff
Powers
>Mirror Image (ST)
>Power Fluctuation
>Kingmaker (ST)
Path Specific
>Other
Perks
>N/A
Flaws
>Kill Order

So, with Kingmaker x4 from chainbuffs I can have every non-Trump power of this list. And with builds like that >>53245335 I can finally take second step on my Path to Power: Final Form (Power-Mimic). Assuming this works as intended, I basically win this CYOA. And you can't stop me.

Fortuna did nothing wrong.
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>>53245795
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>>53245810
> You get the other 3 from him because he's the head alchemist and he blackmailed Sebastian to tell you can only handle 3 unless you pick him.

So can I string him along enough for him to tell me that I can get 6 injections, then have him executed for deceiving his king and pick one of the brides as normal while still getting 6 injections?

Traitors deserve to die.
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>>53245741
It is the best way, though.
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>>53243641
Combination of chillzone, multiverse exploration, and self-customization as an immortal little girl.
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>>53245830
Don't anon, Sebastian is pure.
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>>53245627
It's more that someone could use her as a puppet to push a claim on the throne.
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>>53245820
aren't your mirror images still (you)? so shouldn't you not be able to give them powers?

>>53245838
with what claim? the whole war is to marry you - the sole claimant
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>>53245810
>high magic high fantasy setting
>all governments are hereditary monarchies ruled by semi-immortal godkings
>penis in marital vagina is a requirement
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>>53245712
Told accident.
This is the little cheat sheet I use when I'm writing the letters.
It organizes by them by element and month... sorta?
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>>53245079

Highlander's a girl. And Angel's posted pics of herself.
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>>53245837
Depending on what the blackmail is, I may forgive Sebastian for his deception. Maybe. But the alchemist is definitely getting a one-way trip to the gallows.
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>>53245736
Personally I assumed that Guardian would be a Stand.
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>>53245813
No, they're worthless because they cannot complete the primary duty of royalty/nobility: producing heirs.

You're already in-CYOA the last of your line, so choosing her means you inevitably plunge Zodiac into a succession crisis upon your death. Good fucking job, you put your dick before your throne.
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>>53245780
No, I want Guardian, I want to see what my manifested psyche turn out like. And besides, it'll be more regal staying back with occasional spear or arrow bouncing off my skin while my persona ravages the enemy.

>>53245787
>Magic won't stop your waifu from cucking you with court jester Chad.
Analyze should let me see that coming, as well as how to emotionally manipulate her into staying true though that won't be necessary so long as I pick a nice sweet girl like Talisa
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>>53245741
Well, to be fair, first introduction of the system calls it fight to death.
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>>53240801
Gestation - 15, 15
Hero
Insert Female Adult
Bodysuit - 14, 15 (Powers don't really need anything special)

Skills:
Martial Arts - 10, 15
First Aid - 7, 15
Strategy - 2, 15
Tactics - -2, 15
Parkour - -4, 15
Banter - -5, 15

Abaddon - -8, 12

Perks and Flaws
Rough Start 3 - -2, 12
Case 53 1 - -2, 13
Worst Day Ever 3 - 4, 16
Identity Reveal - 7, 16
Slaughterhouse 9 - 11, 18
Endbringer Target - 14, 22
Humble Beginnings - 19, 27
Negentropy - 14, 22
Second Trigger 2 - 6, 16
Power Slot - 6, 15

Powers
Regeneration (Second Trigger) - 6, 5
Razor Hands (Second Trigger) - 6, 3
Peak Condition - 6, 2
Power Sight - 6, 1

Protectorate
Fan Club

Points left over, so
Stealth - 3, 1
Investigation - 1, 1
Plot Convenience - 0, 1

Payoff as Gift,

I really like building characters with this CYOA, thought I'd run through and do it again. Tried to make my Mary Sue even Sue-ier. She got her Abaddon shard when she was attacked by the S9 as a human and then second triggered when they were attacked by an Endbringer. She's a case 53 - she has cat ears, cat eyes, longer fangs and a cat tail. She also has peak condition now, so she's fit.

When I first went to rebuild her I did so as a villain, and that was all kinds of broken. The villain bonus when combined with stuff like Rough Start, Case 53 and especially Worst Day Ever gave me obscene bonuses. Do multiples of the same flaw count as separate flaws or just one? It should be the latter, I think.

Now to make some sidekicks...
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>>53245852
Did you miss the part where this is a high fantasy setting with magic? Did you miss the part where the King is an absolute ruler?

>cyoa turns you into a semi-immortal godking ruling absolute over a magical kingdom
>you need to marry a designated, monogamous waifu or the world explodes
This really is the worst meme.
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>>53245844
I see. Well you had me fooled, I think it'd be a nice touch if you continued the cardinal/fixed/mutable pattern. Do whatever you want though, most people wouldn't notice anyway.

For reference, the orders for the houses would be

Libra Aquarius Gemini
Aries Leo Sagittarius
Cancer Scorpio Pisces
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>>53245787
>cucking you with court jester Chad.
>allowing that to happen
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>>53245734
Holy shit is there a legit KagerouBro in this thread?
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>>53245869
>magic is arbitrary
more news at 11
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>>53245867
>Tried to make my Mary Sue even Sue-ier
No, THIS >>53245820 is a mary sue
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>>53245869
I think it just naturally evolved when certain authors got pissed gays and girls ignored the waifus but took everything else. They've been shoved down the throat ever since.

Either that or there's a sizeable number of /pol/posters who have their sensibilities triggered at any sign of a cyoa setting not having monogamous, heteroexclusive christian marriages.
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>>53245851
Not everything is Jojo

The CYOA even uses a Persona picture as the example
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>>53245810
>Don't worry I'm not going to.

Thank God. Please, PLEEEEASE don't retconn number one waifu(female).
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>>53240842
>>53240846
Conjure Arma
Aim Assist 2
AI Assistant 2
Sync Bodies 2
Attack Drones 2
Network Tunnel 2
Heavy Gun
Explosives
Save an Assassin
Guard an Heir
Hunt a Monster

One man army mode. Several AI controlled duplicate bodies each themselves capable of conjuring multiple attack drones all with lots and lots of firepower. Of course I can move between bodies at will via network tunnel, and I can use network tunnel 2 to transport everything into hostile territory in order to launch a strike. The only thing I can't do is subtlety.
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>>53245787
>>53245873
I think you know what to do.
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>>53245623
>This is highly insightful
It's just one irrelevant guy's opinion.
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>>53245887
>magic can do everything except replace the female vagina
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>>53245896
I haven't played those games so didn't recognize it. Don't you need to shoot yourself in head to get your persona come out?
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>>53245881
She's a trap in megutown too though.
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>>53245840
Even if someone can say that perfect copy and original are same thing, that's still irrelevant. They aren't perfect.
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>>53245881
Nah sorry I'm a casual about it, though I'd like to get into it more sometime. I was a fan of the song series years ago, still haven't watched the anime yet. But Kozakura Mary is top tier wife material.
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>>53245911
I hate you and your horrible image.
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>>53245915
It varies from game to game. One you use magic guns to shoot yourself in the head, the latest you pull a mask off your face.
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>>53245869
>>53245813
>>53245795

>>>/lgbt/

You keep your hands off my waifu, closet dwellers!
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>>53245929
but these are copies of (you) and since you cant give (you) superpowers you cant abuse it - just take USW(2nd trigger) and some kind of foresight- observe every power and abuse that
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>>53245915
No, the fake gun thing was basically a spellcasting aide. The SEES group can summon them automatically now. The fourth and fifth games also use different triggers that don't seem to mean anything but thematics, but they also do so in imaginary worlds that don't physically exist.
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>>53245842
Why do you always make it so obvious you're the one shitposting?
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>>53240842
I was going to cause a greate (tragic) future all on my own without a deus ex machina living my life the way I was going to and they come to stop me?
I still haven't made my build but surely it will be something about betraying them and returning to study what I was doing before.
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>>53245887
>>53245894
>>53245956
Look people, it's the same guy that shitposted and threw a fit at three other CYOAs for not allowing gay marriage/mpreg/gayness how he likes it. He's just a shitposter. He's shitposted as other ways too under the name Mommy in the jumpchain thread, also often about gayness.
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>>53245957
They're copies, that's the important part.
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>>53245979
but they are (you) as well
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>>53245982
But not really.
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>what's this?
>I-it's your child, anon... The h-heir to your throne... Is s-something wrong... y-ou impregnated me... why a-are you angr-?
>REEEEE YOU FUCKING WHORE IM IMMORTAL I DONT NEED NEED HEIRS HOW DARE YOU GIVE BIRTH TO THE USURPER OF MY THRONE ILL EAT HIM AND TEACH YOU TO BIRTH MY SEED YOU TREASONOUS VIXEN!!
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>>53245945
>>53245959
Ok, I remembered that ad from years ago. Kinda knew that they wouldn't be blowing their brains out every time they got into a fight but never bothered to look at what they actually were doing.

Next question, what's the difference between a Persona and a Stand?
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>>53245989
delet this
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>>53245989
At least she didn't make unsalted potatoes
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>>53245989
Hi Cronus.
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>>53245990
Personas involve the collective unconsciousness and magic and Nyarlathotep and shit. Stands involve willpower and superpowers and even more bullshit.
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>>53245989
Cronus?
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>>53245989
Unsalted Potatoes is the best girl in all of cyoas.
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>>53245989
This one wasn't even prompted at all.
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>>53245869
>This truly is the worst meme.
Is it? Because securing lines of succession and alliances among noble houses is exactly how this works. Otherwise what's the fucking point of a nobility if it's not hereditary? Why are you even king if royalty means nothing? Why do you need a queen (or queens) if you aren't concerned about heirs?

It's a magical kingdom, but it's a kingdom nonetheless.

>absolute ruler
The noble houses are clearly powerful vassals jockeying for influence and prestige by trying to get their girl by their new King's side. Your rule isn't absolute, otherwise this whole song and dance wouldn't be necessary.

Also being faithful to your Queen (and vice versa) is important, because otherwise you might end up with snags in the line of succession or start a feud with some group of nobles.
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>>53245990
>Next question, what's the difference between a Persona and a Stand?

Details mostly, the broad strokes are pretty close. I'm not too well versed in JoJo but I get the impression Stands are a lot more specific in their powers, Personas generally have an elemental theme but have several abilities under that umbrella
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>>53246045
Dude, if you have magic, you can produce heirs in other ways than the natural one. You can probably produce heirs by yourself. You probably don't even plan to need an heir. That's his problem with it. It's not an important focus like it in real life where you will die, and soon, and you need to have a man and a woman together to make a successor.
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>>53240801
>>53245867
Sidekick Number One
Gestation- 15, 15
Hero
Insert Female Senior
No Identity (Full-time Protectorate) - 17, 15

Costume - Armour - 12, 15

Skills
Mechanics - 10, 15
Hacking - 9, 15

Dead Shard - 9, 18

Second Trigger 2 - 1, 12

Powers
Armoured Warfare
Fortifications

Protectorate
Team Leader

Ok, here's the first of the actually interesting, not-an-exercise-in-giving-mysef-immortality characters. An old trophy wife who decided she wanted to live out her remaining years as a superhero and stole millions from her husband to do it. As one of Cauldron's agents she's made it to the head of the local protectorate team. She's a tinker who specialises in large, cumbersome fortifications or warmachines, although only she can operate them. She needs the support of a large organisation to get the pieces for the machines she makes.

I enjoyed building this one a lot more than the other. Without all the flaws to milk for Shard points the character comes out much more balanced.
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>>53246045
See >>53245976
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>>53246059
>He
Liar.

Not all magic is omnipotent. Assuming magic can do everything because magic can do anything is the same thing as saying radiation can like they did in the 50's. That's full retard.
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>>53246045
You're basing all of this on our historical views on monarchy. None of this automatically applies in a high fantasy setting. The opposite might even apply. An unaging king-pair could have up to 1 child a year, which is a hundred children per century. Who is going to marry all those children? Who is going to supress the hundreds or thousands of claims upon your unfortunate passing?

Besides that, there's ruling by divine favour, procreation through magic, fucking mitosis, etc.

Society in a high fantasy setting would most likely in but few ways resemble our historical ones.
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>>53245787
>Magic won't stop your waifu from cucking you with court jester Chad
Put a geas on her
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>>53246068
It's too late anon. The shitposters found the weak spot.

This thread and possible the next two threads are doomed.
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>>53246077
See >>53246076

Stop samefagging please.
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>>53245891
No, that's broken. Not perfect. Needs to be physically attractive and be good at everything, with everyone loving them except for the people who are jealous of how totally awesome they are. Also their only flaws are clumsiness and being a girl.
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Is the Worm CYOA worth doing if you don't know the source material?
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>>53246076
Assuming magic can never do something because it renders themes and issues in mundane society redundant is laughable and pointless. And given that one of the previous arguments had the author try to claim that magic can't help explicitly because he wants your marriage to be an issue and not for any other reason, here I am laughing.
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>>53246093
Worm is shit and nothing about it is worth tolerating.
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>>53246097
He's the author, shitposter. If his magic can't conjure babies then it can't fucking conjure babies.
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>>53246092
>No, that's broken. Not perfect
In other words, more than perfect.
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Here's proof that even if you give Mommy/the gay shitposter a gay marriage option, he'll throw a fit because he just wanted to shitpost. Never, ever humor him.
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>>53246100
Not this author; I think it was Ordion.
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>>53246077
And yet that's clearly not how this kingdom works, otherwise they wouldn't have had to scrounge around on Earth for the genealogical loose change that is the player. It's a high fantasy kingdom, but still one that plays by mainly familiar rules. If magic could solve this, then the generations of previous kings would've done so.
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>>53246116
Why do you people insist on replying to proven shitposters? You can't out-argue shitposting.
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Why do you people indulge obvious attempts to destroy these threads
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How do we invariably find quite new stupid pointless argument each thread, each more autistic than the last?
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>>53245830
>>53245833
THAT'S IT! NO MYSTERY BOX!
It's tearing us about and I haven't even gotten through the brides yet.
Fuck it!
Instead, I'll make one last page where Sebastian outlines the rules of the War in more detail.
>>53245871
Okay... I think can still fix this.
Looking at my mock up only the air and water houses don't match pattern

>>53245934
The anime is legitimately my favorite of all time.
But that is only because I listened to song series while reading the English fan translations of the lyrics.
I have a hard time believing anyone would enjoy the show nearly as much as I did without that background.
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>>53246100
The setting makes no sense either way. You could potentially live up to hundreds of years if not more. If you regularly sleep with your waifu you're going to end up with at least a few dozen heirs. This isn't a stable system.
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>>53246098
Is that your opinion of the CYOA or the source materal
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>>53246093
its basically a low power superhero setting as attacked by Cthulhu

the CYOA is well made and honestly pretty good- but any of the 25( discounting death perception ) can break the setting, as they can basically OHKO said Cthulhu or transcend reality
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>>53246129
Yeah, I had a friend who watched the anime without background and didn't much care for it, so it put me off a bit. I forgot half of the story from the songs so gotta refresh on that first.

Which song is your favorite?
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>>53246126
It's a hard job, but someone's gotta do it.
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>>53245867
this isnt even that sue-ish, its just wolverine+ which doesn't seem to be all that powerful
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>>53246116
The setting doesn't work either way. It makes no sense for a kingdom so obsessed with hereditary titles to tolerate their last king having absolutely zero heirs.

Letting anon take the throne is not different from making a random australian the king of mongolia.
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>>53246139
How can the MEoDP not kill said Cthulhu?
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>>53246173
for the same reason that shiki cant really fight servants - if you can cut the line it would kill it, but they are too fast/have kill auras/fly

and you get no stats bonuses for them - hell the Gae Bolg choice is only useful because its ranged and doesn't rely on you being able to land a hit
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>>53246139
>discounting death perception
Why? To me the second trigger version of Death Perception seems like the most broken power.
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>>53246170
The houses probably didn't contest bringing in anon because they think he's just some chump from the uncivilized outside world they can mold like putty in the victor's hands.

Joke's on them, Sebastian and his gay alchemist buddy whipped up some good shit.
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>>53246199
with second trigger maybe - but its a bit vague and you might end up irreparably breaking the universe
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>>53246196
You say that like he wouldn't tank it like a moron. I mean, it's not a bad strategy if a guy's coming at you with a knife, it's just. Y'know, dotstab.
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>>53240801
>>53245867
Sidekick number 2
Gestation
Hero
Insert Female Teenager
High Schooler

Cape - 13, 15

Parkour - 11, 15
Banter - 10, 15

Natural Trigger - 13, 15

Second Trigger 2 - 5, 9

Powers
X-Ray Vision - 5, 8
Temporal Blast - 5, 1

The Wards
Fan Club

Another Character that was more fun to build than my main one. And probably more OP too - she can shoot you in the past THROUGH WALLS. Technically if you're anywhere near her she can kill you. The PRT tries to keep this aspect of her abilities quiet for surprise attacks, leading to her being marketed as a generic blaster. Despite this, her bubbly personality has garnered her a fair bit of attention from the public.
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>>53246150
My Top Five Are
>Gunjou Rain
>Ayano's Theory of Happiness
>Toumei Answer
>Lost Time Memory
>Yobanashi Deceive

The specific rankings change, but these are pretty much my favorite things ever made by a vocaloid.

Gunjou Rain still makes me and my brother cry when we hear it.
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>>53246170
The houses in setting seen to have really strong powers that are purely inherited.

Also, I agree that pulling in some jackass because he has tiny connection to the bloodline is dumb but it's magic, it's entirely feasible that the Throne itself allows only someone bloodrelated to the first emperor to rule.

As for why wouldn't there be someone a bit more blood related in the world here the emperors have ruled for quite while, maybe something happened there that either killed them all or in some other way made them incapable of ruling, the player avoids that because he's stuck on earth.
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>>53245989
Can someone explain?
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>>53246214
i know of three Cthulhu's - one has a 30m kill aura that causes organics to burn up

one is massively fast and fight using tsunamis

and one is a flying mind control angel

all three area bad match for MEoDP
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>>53246173
Said Cthulu, or world devouring space whale that lends out super powers for other people to level up before explode/eating their world as it is in this case, beamspams from the sky. MEoDP can't reach it, even if attacking it's avatar on earth did transfer the attack to the main body, which is in another dimension.
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>>53246221
Actually, figured out an asnwer for that last one and also for why the last emperor didn't marry. The previous few emperors decided to keep the bloodline very...pure.
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>>53246217
>>53245867

this >>53245045
is an OP character - yours appear to be fine
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>>53246126
>>53246124
It's a shitposter doing it on purpose and everyone else is a retarded lemming.
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>>53246238
We were talkin' 'bout Scion, yo.

>>53246247
It doesn't really matter that the incredibly vast majority of his body isn't there. Some part of his body is, and you can see his lines. So if you stab his tiny little human projection body, his fat spacewhale ass dies. It's a conceptual death effect.
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>>53245712
No girl should be obviously the most powerful. That just creates one true builds. Or I guess four.
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>>53246280
But everyone knows best girl is Vignette
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>>53246275
oh - i mean the endbringers

scion is just superman on drugs

but yes - if you cut it MEoDP will kill it, no ifs ands or buts
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>>53246291
Ignoring that Scion is actually an interdimensional worm-whale using a human avatar to interact with the world.

A suicidally depressed worm-whale.
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>>53246221
>the player avoids that because he's stuck on earth

Y-yeah! That's why. It wasn't because that was the first thing that came to mind or anything...

No, the sad truth is that the previous ruler never found love and outlived all his family. Kings of Zodiac have an unnaturally long life expectancy, but they do die eventually. Jeremiah the Solitary just outlived all his relatives and never have a kid. In the premise, the player is legitimately the only person alive with enough of the blood of the old line before shift out of Earth's reality who is:
1)Un-wed
2)At a young enough age to marry, but not too old that he may struggle to produce an heir
3)Most likely to just go with this because I assume most people in these threads are as desensitized as I am
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>>53246303
well yes - but i meant in terms of abilities

could scion even 1v1 endbringers?
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>>53246275
I'm not really arguing it won't work, I'm just arguing attacking that avatar is not reasonable with that power.
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>>53246306
I'm just not feeling it. I think I'm going to marry a whore, centralize my power, have my bride accidentally killed, and then build myself a harem of cute traps.
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>>53246341
And so the reign of King Anon the First and Hopefully Last began.
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>>53246348
Nah, after my death they'll magically find some NEET with one percentage of my blood to marry. Jeremiah knew how to live it up good.
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>>53246341
Same. I don't feel anything for these mandatory wives. I can't help but think I'm going to end up falling in love with someone else for real down the road. Then this will have to get messy. It's what it is I guess.
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>>53246322
The space whales are made out of shards, and considering what kind of powers they give, why wouldn't they be able to?
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>>53246280
Not the girl herself, the family she's from.
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>>53246376
Scion is an autistic buffoon who barely understands his own powers. All Entities are like that though. It's like they have an warehouse full of the deadliest guns known to man but all they do is throw the guns at people.
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>>53246403
Goddamn space whales can't do anything right.
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>>53246376
well the avatar is said to have been unable to defeat the remaining endbringers after they adapted according to his wiki entry

>>53246403
>literally Gilgamesh
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>>53246341
>>53246370
Concept doesn't interest you, don't play the CYOA, children.
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>>53246322
>>53246403
He blows one up in the story. So yes.
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>>53240832
There's alot of intricacies to powers that are left to guessing, I suppose that's what you have to live with, with such small boxes of text.
Does Recordless 2nd Trigger include no footprints?
Is Save and Reload Groundhog Day? the "Precognition based power" Throws me off.

Do you have any plans to go through this once more with changes?
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>>53246428
he helped defeat behemoth

im wondering whether he can 1v1 - like the 25 powers probably can
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>>53246441
>Helped
Behemoth gave no shits to what anyone else did, senpai.
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>>53246418
The concept interests me. The waifus don't. That's not specific to this cyoa though. Something about needing a cyoa to give you a gf strikes me as extremely emasculating.

I'll marry one to produce some heirs and keep my own concubines on the side.
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>>53246306
Is there a way to avoid them to kill eachother without marrying them all?
Some of them I may not exaclty see an ideal romantic parthner, but I still wouldn't want dead (Vignette for instance).
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>>53240842
>Shatter Arma

>Network Tunnel 2
>Hacking Support 1
>Shock Touch 2
>Sync Bodies 2
>Audio Override 1
>Holo Suit 2

>Small Melee
>High-Range Gun

>Stop a Scientist
>Save an Assassin
>Kill a Billionaire
I get in, I get the job done, I get out. No more, no less. I'm a professional and I'll damn well act like one.
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>>53246462
just make them surrender- seeing as its a fight to marry (you) it shouldn't be difficult
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>>53246461
Write a CYOA to your tastes.
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>>53246484
>I don't like some things about this book/movie/game
>THEN MAKE YOUR OWN BOOK/MOVIE/GAME

Chill, dude.
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>>53246461
so you dislike half of the CYOA - since the CYOA is half choosing your powers and half choosing your princess
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>>53246500
He's been whining about the same shit every day for the past week. He really needs to stop and just making something he likes.

>>53246494
You read above.
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>>53246500
No, I dislike the waifu part. Powers are cool and the world(building) too. I just have no intention of picking a life partner in a ffa deathmatch.
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>>53244357
>>53244367
>>53244399
>Albedo has no respect for marriage
Sad!

>weird yoga girl
That's probably going to be the only way to go unless you're legit into cuckoldry or fucking kids.
>>
>>53246494
>i dislike a book/movie/game
>i shall now bitch and moan about getting it changed so that it suits my taste rather than the people who do like it

>>53246518
so half (or even more) of the content?
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>>53246515
Or I could just stay here and enjoy the general. No need to get angry, friend.
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>>53246540
I don't understand how anything I said involved you leaving. Just to stop whining.
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>>53246532
>sharing your opinion on a cyoa is bad, toxic and triggering if it's not praise

>>/tumblr/
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>>53244399
How many brides are you going to add? And do you need any suggestions?
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>>53246524
You must be Australian if you think anything other than cow tits is 'underage'. Then again you're a paranoid idiot so you could just be uniquely ill.
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>>53246550
How many zodiac signs are there, dipshit?
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>>53246515
I'm doubtful all complaining this week is one person
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>>53246548
your opinion is that a major aspect of the CYOA is bad and should be removed
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>>53246571
Anon feels better if he thinks it's all vs one.
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>>53246571
>All complaining
No, just the one guy making the same complaint in the same way. Not all the whiners.
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>>53246579
I didn't say it should be removed. Don't put words in my mouth. I'm just saying one part of the cyoa does less than nothing for me so I personally get no enjoyment out of that part.
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>>53246583
It's named Zodiac Brides. Can you read?
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>>53246563
You are a very rude anon, and even if it's natural to expect at least 12, nothing guarantees that the author won't use shenanigans to put a little more.
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>>53246601
>Chinese Zodiac Brides that look like they fell out of a Wuxia novel
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>>53246601
>wanting the author to add more waifus

How can 12 women designed to lust after your microscopic cock not be enough for you?
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>>53246582
What's that then? Because this is the first complaints I've heard about zodiac brides

>>53246601
They could use the 13th
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>>53240801
>>53240815
>>53240832
>>53240846
Unlimited shard work second trigger seems a little too OP for a 7 point power
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>>53245937
>not being alpha enough to dominate anyone who would try to steal your grills
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>>53246609
>>53246612
Yes, the author was already considering putting a trap mistery box, for instance. Also, Ophiuchus.
>>53246610
I never said that it wasn't enough, I wasn't the anon that made the question, I was just pointing out that the anwser isn't so obvious and that you was being rude, as you are now.
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>>53246612
Not about this specific CYOA, just that same complaint.

Also, the 13th was going to be the mystery box, but was just removed because the shitposter used him as a vehicle to shitpost.
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>>53246636
>Being enough of a loser that you not only forgive the woman for cheating on you, but put her in a situation where she can fuck her new boyfriend any time she wants.
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>>53246623
i mean- it doesent work on powers without a visual effect ( so super-strength/speed/mental powers) are out of the question
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>>53246646
You make a good point.
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>>53246601
Indeed. cyoas twist their source material all the time.
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>>53246638
I get a legitimate rush everytime my posting leads to the alteration of a cyoa no matter in which way.
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>>53246663
Did you fail your finals or something to become so pointlessly caustic and hateful here?
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>>53246646
>>53246653

Actually, I think I would just give him a chastity belt.
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>>53246588
>>53246563
>>53246306
Don't forget Ophiuchus!
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>>53246653
That's my entire issue with it. If you want to fuck the guy in the ass, go ahead, but don't keep her around or make him your concubine if you're keeping her.

>>53246677
Don't need the dick for sex.
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>>53246674
Unlike in Kazachstan my finals are in june.
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>>53246638
Anon there are lots of people who aren't interested in waifus or in certain ones, which seems to be the person's complaint
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>>53246650
super strength and speed have pretty distinctive visual effects
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>>53246682
Male concubines are the way to go. The only responsible harem option that doesn't threaten your heirs.
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>>53246689
Yes, but he's making the same post whining about how he hates being handed a waifu at every new waifu CYOA, making him an annoying whiner and obviously the same person.
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>>53246683
There must be some reason you decided to start openly shitposting.
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>>53246694
Irrelevant, but divorcing her and taking her boyfriend as your concubine and fucking him in the butt daily while she gets neither of you is a fair punishment.
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>>53246696
You're my favourite poster. I don't know why but you sound cute. Can't I marry you instead of a Zodiac Bride? <3
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>>53246692
you can see the effect of them - but i assume there isn't really an effect to say "broken limiter"

so you can notice that someone is using mind control- but you cant see them using it if that makes sense
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>>53246702
SDA touches me at night.
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>>53246727
delet SDA is PURE
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>>53246571
It is one person (maybe two, there is a little ambiguity) who makes a very specific type of extended complaint whenever an author gives him half an opening, but the arguments that spring from that likely involve different people each time depending on the exact topic.
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>>53246752
It's beautiful, isn't it? The author provides the soil, I plant a seed, someone waters it, and before you know it a glorious tree with a myriad of branching possibilities has sprouted.
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>>53246719
If you interpret it that way then you can't really copy anything. You don't really know how someone is firing beams from his eyes, you don't really know how that guy is flying, etc etc.
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>>53246770
I wonder how powerless you are in life if shitposting gives you this much of a power trip.
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>>53246680
THESE MOTHER FUCKERS DON'T DESERVE ORIADNE OF HOUSE OPHIUCHUS, SENPAI!
They're all planning to kill the waifus I worked so hard to build for them!
>insert crying baby noises here
In all honesty, the 13th Bride thing was a fun concept, but the zodiac would be just as good without Ophiuchus and my CYOA will too.
Shame I'll never get to use this picture though...
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>>53246800
you see them firing a beam/fire

you see the golem/endbringer

you cant really see the super strength - you can just see its effects
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>>53246803
I live in SDA's basement and she only feeds me bread crusts.
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>>53246827
You live in your mother's basement and she doesn't give you enough tendies.
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>>53243127
>Name
Argent Creed
>History
Guardian (10)
>Race
Human
>Starting location
Atlas
>Semblance
Ring Leader
>Gifts & Talents
Intelligence (10)
Tactics (20)
Guile (20)
Stealth (40)
>Weapons
Ranged: Pistol [200]
Ranged: Pistol [200]
>Items & Gear
Scroll [0]
Armor [100]
Combat Drone [250] (Conveniently hidden nearby before fights even start)
I don't even need to spend the rest of the cash.

CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED!
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>>53246812
>hey're all planning to kill the waifus I worked so hard to build for them!


don't worry - some of use intend on cherishing vignette. we're not all psycopaths
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>>53246812
>They're all planning to kill the waifus I worked so hard to build for them!
Nuh uh. I'm going to waifu Gemini.

I just don't mind killing the rest of them in the war.
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>>53246812
>create a ffa waifu deathmatch cyoa
>throw a tantrum anon is killing waifus
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>>53246812
Harem Link is such a cute.
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>>53246751
>>53246727
SDA (female) rapes me constantly
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>>53244357
>>53244367
>>53244399
Very cool work so far, looking forward to seeing the rest of the Zodiac soon. Kind of torn with wanting more than 3 of the powers but understand the limitation means the choices are more meaningful. Still, damn.

Pretty sure even with Charisma wouldn't be able to convince all 12 (plus too much waifu can ruin a king's lifu) so rather figure would prefer to know what they are all like and pick 1 to support or even go for that 'secret' option.
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>>53246817
they are all effects
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>>53246812
You're losing it. Take a deep breath, ignore this thread, and follow your original plans.

You're one post away from talking in *actions*.
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>>53246841
you aren't meant to kill the one you marry! hell you don't even-need to kill most of them anyways

>>53246851
shooting fire IS the power

superstrength makes you very strong regardless of whether you are lifting - the ability to move thing is the effect

or thats how i view it anyways
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>>53246829
SDA is my mom though.
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>>53240801
Dont really know Worm, but I like superhero stuff. Having a brief look through I'm quite certain my build is going to tremendously underpowered though.

>Name: Bugbite

>Gold Morning
Seems the most optimistic option, I'm burned out on dark stuff lately
>Hero (So follower x 2, but I'm not going to bother making those right now... though if any other heroes out there want to be my team mate, I'm all ears!)
>Drop In
>No Identity
>Thematic

>Stealth
>Hacking
>Banter

>Foreign Element

>Second Trigger (Shrinking)

>Shrinking (with Second Trigger; I'm assuming shrinking enemies means their strength diminishes appropriately)
>Flight
>Shock and Awe

>Companionship (opening up my potential friends!)

Basically I shrink down and zip about at high speed, clamping on to a hard to reach spot before my enemies notice and shocking the hell out of them, or alternately shrinking them down to 1cm (or smaller or for longer, if thats how the Foreign shard works? Longer would be good) if that'll take them out more effectively (so vs most melee builds). With stealth and hacking on top of my shrinking and flight I should be a good infiltrator and spy as well.
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>>53246871
I wasn't planning on killing Vignette. I plan to use my magic and manipulate her into letting me give her a cute cock like a proper wife.

A man has needs. You can't blame me.
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>>53246875
That would make you an ass baby, which is appropriate, as you are a piece of shit.
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>>53246812
Anon, I don't even like traps, and probably wouldn't miss anything with it not being an option - but what about the decent people who do?

Will you private them from it just because of one or two shitposters? There always will be shitposters, you should just ignore them. Otherwise, this malacious people won't just bother the thread - they will indirectly take out the enjoyment of innocent people.
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>>53246903
>being a degenerate
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>>53246917
Shut up. He's doing the right thing. Traps are abominations.
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>>53246882
Hmm. Now that I think on it, Bugbite might make a better villain then hero, though he'd be a thief at worst and most likely a somewhat silly (but very hard to capture) saturday morning cartoon style villain.
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>>53246751
SDA is a filthy slut that had a muslime perform magic to get them laid.
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>>53246928
>Shitpost in favor of gay options.
>Can cause drama by being anti-gay
>Shitpost to remove gay options.

Do you play any CYOAs at all?
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>>53246918
Oh no, the only Servant who lost in a fair match to a human is judging me. Whatever shall I do...
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>>53246928
i dislike traps - and hate that fuck who wants vignette to be one

but>>53246917
is right, if someone was a trap originally - why not keep them that, giving in to shitposting gives those fucks power. which is a horrendous outcome
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>>53246957
>saber
>rider
>archer
>medea
>herc
>darkened saber

>only
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>>53246944
Yes, but I do so by resonating with their memetic projection through the 11th dimension. You wouldn't understand.
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>>53246832
I wasn't talking about you Gilgamesh. I we're cool.
>>53246840
I'll take what I can get!
>>53246841
Melodramatic typing helps me cope with the fact that I can really express my feelings out loud without fear of being shunned by those closest to me.
>>53246846
Is there anything on this Earth that Harem Pants can't make sexy and cute?
>>53246861
I can't ignore this thread, anon. Because then I wouldn't be able to see you being sweet and trying to keep me away from lethal levels of autism.
I'm fine, I just got carried away with the joke.
>>53246917
You guys making me want to have fake tantrums more often. Everyone's being so kind and having my back.
Trap Bride is on hold till I can think of a way to work him in, no pun intended, without somehow making it Sebastian's fault.
Sebastian's become my favorite character in this CYOA.
A bro too pure for this world.

Also here's the "fixed" version of page 3.
Reorganized:
>Cardinal
>Fixed
>Mutable
And I tried a gray text to make the names easier to see against the parchment.
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>>53246959
Like I said from the day Vignette was revealed, I'm going to use this cyoa to canonically turn Vignette into a trap.

There is nothing you can do about it.
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>>53246871
I get what you are saying (from the start) but it's still way to hazy, what could be considered a power and what an effect?
Blasting lazers is an easy example but what about others, if you see someone regenerating is it an effect of his regenerative power? if you see someone flying is it an effect of his flying power?
Obviously powers you can't copy are Thinker (and tinker most likely), master and stranger powers but most of the others are pretty much up to interpretation with how it's worded.
>>
Does it sound like cheese to take a Hero follower who takes the 'companionship' perk when you're a villain? I'd quite like to be a villain with a hero friend for fluff reasons, and it seems like it would be more mechanically powerful to just have a fellow villain given their insane personal power.
>>
>>53246980
Are you really this pathetic?
>>
>>53247006
For Worm, to clarify.
>>
>>53246994
Well the thing is, what a king needs more than anything else in the world is a good right hand man. Naturally, his head butler/lord of the manor is always a good individual to be such a right hand man.
>>
>>53247008
You can't begin to comprehend my true nature.
>>
>>53247022
So yes
>>
>>53246994
>Sebastian is the best character

Agreed. How do I marry him?
>>
>>53246943
This is true

Quiet now has a voucher to get into Muslim heaven
>>
>>53246959
You are a nice guy Gilgamesh, if I ever enter a Holy Grail War I will take it into consideration.
>>
Sure is summer in here
>>
>>53247051
Don't joke about Quiet please. He's pretty much confirmed death. It's really bad taste.
>>
>>53246994
Gemini girls are the best. Great for taking cities while I deal with the opponent princess using non lethal force with telekinesis, skill and vitality. Keeping the princesses alive should help in subjugating the population and their princess friends
>>
>>53241868
You'd need aim assist 2 for the AI to control humanoid bodies, but I'd say it can handle the drones fine. Tunneling to security rooms and immediately hacking them is a good plan.

>>53242149
>Even a short-range gun severely outclasses a knife.
Only because you have Audio Override. It's a matter of stealth. Also, the handle for an energy knife is smaller and easier to conceal than a gun. But yes, the range helps a lot.
Those are some good contracts for all your stealth.
>Guard a Heir
>>53242212
I pronounce it like "air." I'll ask google what it should be later.

>>53242458
Oh, hey, someone chose lace Arma. Yeah, it was one of the ones that felt like it'd be more fun to use. Letting the AI handle a lot is a good idea.

>>53242175
They would be very upset, but it isn't like they'd kill you over an honest mistake. They might ban you from guard contracts for a while.

>>53242792
Between shatter Arma and Lock-On, they'll have a very hard time tracing your location. Using the Holo Suit as camo is a good idea, too.

>>53242848
Don't worry too much about not being able to contact anyone. That's just for a few months. Your weapons seem a little weak for the dictator. He's more of an up front fight than stealthy kill. But then again, you do get support when fighting him.
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>>53247077
When is your next cyoa coming?
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>>53247016
"And I shall stand by your side from this moment till my last, Sire. Once the war is at it's end, I shall be there whenever you need me and even when you don't.
As the young people of Earth would say, I have your back, hommie! Brothers before whores, am I not correct?
Words addressed toward the woman who birthed you.
Sebastian out."
>>53247034
"Court me with a pure heart and take me for a walk by the lake in the park.
I adore feeding the ducklings.
And if you're feeling, as they say, frisky we might stop for a coffee and descretely hold hands under the table.
Then after somewhere between 6 months and a year we shall have a fabulous yet humble wedding in the Aries Family's Chapel.
After you've asked my father's permission of course."
>>
>>53247071
Those girls are bloodthirsty, sure they'll accept that?
>>
>>53247149
It seems more like they want let loose abit and rough house a bit. They never say they want to kill the others
>>
>>53246994
If you want to make Sebastian be honest, you can just say that he didn't know that the Alchemist was lying to him, tho that might make him look too trusting.

One solution could be that more than three actually does make you explode but the alchemist will agree to monitor you nonstop, brew stabilizing elixirs and drain certain...emissions...before they can build up.

If you try to threaten him into doing it, he'll just do the vanishing act because it's hard and boring work. He would still be somewhat selfish but at least there's clear reason why he wouldn't want to bother.
>>
>>53243061
You've got a lot of stealth options & using your Holo Suit to infiltrate the school is a good idea... but I feel like you're going to end bullying by increasing child abuse.

>>53243130
You're pretty well set up to not kill. Though you'd at least be tangentally involved with Save an Assassin.

>>53243475
>>53243522
That sounds terrifying. Very hard to evade.

>>53243643
These things take time.

>>53243942
Oh, finally some demo Arma! Nothing assassinates quite like indiscriminate destruction.
I like the image of you trying to find ways to do the precise and intellectual missions with bombs. Trapping the laser terrorist is a good idea.
And don't blame the organization for making better Arma. If not for R&D, you wouldn't have yours.

>>53245245
Yeah, thanks. I'll fix that.

>>53245907
That's a good plan to get a lot of bullets anywhere you need them really quickly. Simultaneous Sync Bodies gives you a lot more energy for conjure Arma.

>>53246467
Your build is pretty well set up for those raw assassination missions, but I do wonder why the scientist is such a popular choice. Antarctica is miserable and cold without stasis Arma. The lightweight shatter Arma has it especially bad. And anyone going to such a hostile environment to be off the grid won't have an internet connection for Network Tunnel.

>>53247114
Dunno. Recently I've just been making them on weekends, but I'll be busy this weekend.
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>>53244357
B-04
M-06
S-09

Fuck tradition.
Marry all of them either through seduction or great magics and insert your own progeny at the head of the houses.

MENTULA VULT!
>>
>>53247416
So which would you say would be most Dakka? Demo armor with sync, AI/Aim, and drones, or Conjure arma with sync, AI/Aim, and drones?
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>>53243773
so that office pirates thing with the filebox cannons?
>>
>>53247822
Demo has more longevity. Conjure Arma can surpass demo for bursts but will quickly run out of energy if you do so, leaving you very vulnerable.
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>>53247077
(I'm >>53242848)

My main worry is that someone will do something drastic while I'm gone for a few months, so I just want at least an indicator I'm alive somehow.

And I plan to face the dictator as part of a team; I can be the spy who gives the main party valuable information or something.
>>
>>53243773
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7YUiBBltOg4
>>
>>53247944
Well, if they'd do anything too bad, the seers would know ahead of time & let you prevent it.
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>>53247129
>Sebastian is manly as fuck
>A proper and noble gentleman, handsome to boot
>Is bashful and innocent

Wtf I'm gay now
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