/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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Alright, most of this is now in the finished build. Doubt I'll rebalance/rewrite anything from this point onwards

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>>52722498

>>52722206
So what the hell are the powers you get from these personas? Do they get the abilities mentioned while describing the spirit or are they just punch ghosts? Some of them seem super fucking powerful, others not so much.

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Version 4 hit late last thread.

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>>52722398
Isn't this one where Lunestier is much better than other schools?

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>>52722576
Here's the final (new) one, companions

>>52722506
>>52722576
>>52722650

Excellent! I shall begin a build post-haste!

>>52722637
They 'think' they're much better than other schools and there were a few threads where some anons had fun with this by being uppity snobs.

>>52722541
In the games, Personas grant access to typical JRPG magic. Elemental attacks, buffs and debuffs, that sort of thing.

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>>52722637
Lunestier has always been the best school. Not that there is much competition. Although if you want to learn the fine art of rat hunting and eating, St Flares is your "school".

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My first ever C.Y.O.A., just something simple.

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>>52722678
>Wanting to socialize with inbreed snobs and backstabbers
LMAO
St. Flares and Uzuza best schools.

>>52722637
Lunestier is always best school because they can remove the only real drawback of best magic

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Edited error pointed out in emilia's profile two threads ago, thanks anon.

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>>52722650
So there IS a vampire love interest with rock hard abs.

Consider your cyoa blessed!

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>>52722742
Nothing changed here yet, hopefully it'll stay that way. Page three incoming.

>>52722670
Ah, well then.
Kali, the Strength
Kaoru
Honoka

Shenanigans ensue and I end up using my persona as a punch ghost anyways because four arms equals twice the smash.

>>52722678
I like you anon. You're fun and committed.

>>52722650

Templars; Dei Bellator
Blessed Melee Weapon 3 (Greatsword) [7]
Armor 3 [12]
Small Guns 3 (Submachine gun) [17]
Long Guns 3 (Shotgun) [23]
Explosives 1 [24]
Small Melee Weapon 1 (Dagger) [25]
Long Guns 3 (Sniper Rifle)

Arthur Adalard
Katyusha Volkov

Arthur and I shall crusade together, to PURGE this world of its magical heresy! Kat shall watch us from above, and her rifle will keep any sneaky mages from stabbing us in the back. DEUS VULT!

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>>52722760
Last page I'll make for this, im not creative enough to make any more profiles. Too much overlap as it is already.

>>52722777
Them digits.
Deus vult!

>>52722506
How should one go about removing the Templars from this world?

>>52722778
If anyone notices any errors, I'll fix them and post a fixed version at a later date. Hope ya'll enjoy!

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>>52722742
Would this cyoa be better or worse if you had to pick dads and brothers?

>>52722777
Oh, shit I just noticed, you have to buy the previous rank before you get the next one, so in total, getting a standard rank 3 thing is 10, or a faction specific is 15.

>>52722794
With guns and maybe Ripsnarl the swearwolf.

>>52722813
Worse

>>52722813
People would raise a shitstorm. Luckily for the author most pedophiles here are straight-ish.

>>52722813
Worse for hetfags. Better for bi/gayfags.

>>52722643
>Dat asn chick:

Ladylike & classy

Likes civ IV & Morrowind

Likes her man to cook for her

Into fem-dom

Politically centre-conservative, but regards politics as a personal, private thing.

This woman might have been writen specifically for me.

Na Nguyen for days.

>>52722650
>>52722506
>>52722576
>Faction
None

>Magic
Elementalism Rank 3
Healing Magic Rank 3
Alchemy Rank 2
Magical Enhancement Rank 3

>Equipment
Magical Robes Rank 3
Magical Supplies Rank 3
Bow Rank 2
Explosives Rank 2

>Allies
Reinhard Sauer
Simon Haueter

The factions are kind of meh in my opinion. I don't much care for England, Magical Blackwater isn't my cup of tea, Knights Templar are too fanatical, lol Russians and Germans, and obvious Cthulhu cult.

>>52722778
It's probably for the best. The more choices you add the less percent of choices people can pick. With this many pages now it's pick 4 out of 30. 15% seems reasonable to keep it as, so this works out well. You'll probably want to get rid of the end of part 2 where it says you get an extra girl, unless that was intentional and you get a total of 5, in which case you should probably make that a rule in page 1.

>>52722721
>Uzuza
>faggots too scared to use magic

lol look at this loser

>>52722817
Ooooooh, shit. Well, most of what I needed was just the sword, and the armor, so:

Blessed Melee Weapon 3 (Greatsword) [15]
Armor 3 [25]
Small Guns 2 (X500 revolver) [30]

DEUS STILL VULT!

Might wanna clarify that; most things either have stacking costs (level three requires the costs of level one and two) OR the costs go up by larger amounts, as you've done. It looks like >>52722872 made the same mistake.

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>>52722650
I want to fuck that wolf.

>>52722763
That's actually not a bad idea, they can do punch ghost stuff. Pretty strong ones, too, the Physical skills can be more effective than the strongest elemental ones. Just be warned that having your Persona fight physically drains your stamina rather than your mana, so you can actually hurt yourself if you push it to far.

Reposting from old thread

>>52719115

>WW3
>Not extinction risk.

Also, the Counter force was all over the fourth war, and the fifth. Only reason you don't see any guardians is because the counter force itself was sufficient.

>>52722872
Also I made a mistake, meant to write Magical Enhancement Rank 2, not 3.

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>>52722900
>He doesn't know magic corrupts
(You) guys need people to keep you line. Last time, you almost caused the end of world.

>>52722909
It does mention you have to purchase the previous rank to get the next one, though perhaps I'll make it a little clearer.

>>52722909
As I said >>52722925 I realized the costs, I just hit the wrong button by mistake lol

>>52722911
You can't post that shit and not drop some sause

>>52722927
If the world ends via magic, then it deserves to end.

>>52722869
>The epitome of politeness
That kind of person is really exhausting to be around. Are you sure about this?

>>52722911
Wolf is not for lewd.
Do not lewd the wolf.

>>52722916

Hmm, I'm not really known for my stamina, asthma and whatnot. I suppose I'll save the punching for finishers

>>52722927
Uug Uag too you to my philistine friend

>>52722936
I might have just been skimming too quickly, having been mentally ready for this for a few days. Now that I read it over again, I do see where it says that, plain as day.

>>52722778
Do we get 4 family members total or 5?

>>52722813
If you had Dad's the mothers would be pretty REEE worthy, unless you meant instead.

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>>52722986
>He thinks only "ignorant" people know the dangers of unstained magic
lol No wonder you guys get rekt. It doesn't take a genius to know the dangers of magic.

>>52722778
How does the last page and the reincarnation work? Do I instantly become 12 again and instantly have both my bigger and smaller sisters?

>>52722742
>Evelyn
>Emilia, Luara, Nadia
>Quinn

>>52719873
>only uses 30% of brain

Using 100% of your brain is called having a seizure. Can you make that part less retarded?

>>52722958
I'm pretty polite myself (or I'd like to think so, anyway), so I don't mind.

>>52722778
This angel is hard at work.

>>52723077
We all use 100% of our brains all the time, even when asleep or unconscious.

People who fall into comas sometimes suffer brain damage because they stop using part of thier brains, & if we stop using part of our brain that part dies.

>>52722716
porter loo.

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>>52723156
dont be pedantic anon

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>>52722506
>DOG/weird science
Hitler's secret final solution shall come to pass through my hands. The world shall become a paradise of cute gay aryan animal boys. Sieg heil!

>Weird Science III
>Thaumaturgy III
>Magical Enhancement III
>Defensive Magic III
>Elementalism III

A master of magic I'll use weird science and madness to turn the whole world into aryan cute animal boys for our late fuhrer.

>Adolfo
>Ripsnarl

They have penis and are animalistic. Good start. Yes.

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>>52723144
God this one is bad, and even worse the idea of fighting demons is so cool.

>Everything is so over the top it becomes boring and plain
>Even the most basic enemies have some kind of random annoying power
>40k dick sucking without the sweet flavor of actual 40k
>Rise to the Challenge 3 will make you stronger than anything you fight pretty much making boss fight a laughing matter

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>>52723015
Five!

>>52722884
That's a good idea, will probably add that in

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>>52723251

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>>52723222
fucking captchas

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>>52723114
Sure, but it's Southern Asian politeness. The kind that demands that you show humility at all times and never develop honest kinship with others.

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Trust me. You're going to need it this thread.

>>52722398
Uzuza
>
Unamred Combat x3
Ki Attunment x3
Physical Training x3
Berserking x1
>
Kengen: Friend and Rival. Mostly Friend. Most to the time.
Tarkun Ironstout
Trap-Catcher: We'll help him with his grades. Wouldn't want to lose one of the most active members of the disciplinary squad
Kara'tee
Helena: The other friend and rival, but mostly rival. most of the time.

Team Punch-Shit is a go
>
Battle Royal: this was never up for debate
Basilisk Den: Burn it all
Security
Body Guard: I was tempted to go with blind date for a twist, but there's a 50% chance of rolling a dude. My fists might swing that way, but my dick does not.
>
Disciplinary Squad

The tale a young lad named Oak. Just Oak. Like the tree.
>>52722678
>Thinking you can be any kind of adventurer, living like a fop in a castle
>>52722900
>>52722986
>Not using superior Ki
Plebian

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>>52722650
Given that the Knights Templar are being directly blessed by God, they're clearly right about magic. I'll be signing on with them.

>Bellator Dei

I'll be taking that equipment, thanks.

>Tier 3 Blessed melee weapon (pollaxe) [15]
>Tier 3 armor [5]
>Tier 2 long gun (SCAR 17) [0]

HAHA TIME TO BE A HOLY WARRIOR

>Arthur
>Katyusha

Let the Crusade begin!

>>52723375
>All is Boy's Love

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>>52722778
> Fiona.
> Grace.
> Opal.

I would very much like to test a few hypotheses of mine. Fiona's description states that the sisters are loyal to her, whereas Grace is stated to be purely loyal to you. If the two scenarios were to merge, which theoretical outcome would materialize? Would Grace, in the merged timelines, be mindbroken, or will she be some sort of aegis against the Mother's sexual abuse? Once that observation is made then we can move on to the fun.

Regardless, I will play along and ensure that my Mother's love is unconditional, having endeared myself to her wholly. At some point after a long period of time I will procure a gun and shoot myself in the head, preferably whilst staring either the Mother or Grace in the eyes. If Grace stayed adamant against the Mother I will be staring the Mother in the eyes while crying about her abuse and how I can't stand it anymore. If Grace had succumbed then I will be looking her in the eyes while crying about how she didn't save me.

Once the circumstances surrounding the Angel's offer have been realized, I will choose the exact same thing. The same Mother and Sister(s). Is the timeline reset for me personally? How can a decision made by me alone affect the whole world? Am I merely shifted to some other world? With the existence of souls, could it be that they would retain some memory across their incarnations? I would observe any differences in their behavior to see if any possible trauma had passed into their new selves. Maybe this Grace would even exist in a different mental state than her previous incarnation? After a long enough time of observation I will repeat the process, killing myself to further any theoretical accumulated trauma to be tacked onto their "souls." If I am never to observe any differences in their behavior then I will need to kill myself in their presence in a far slower way, so that I can see the changes in their response.

So is the version of Stardust posted two threads ago the finial one or SDA going to release another one?

>>52723401
Well... God doesn't need to be in the right.
And it could be that the Templar are just dirty, dirty liars.

Or maybe they aren't.

>>52723206
Wondered how long it'd take for people to realize that DOG are basically the last battalion.

>>52723311
For a woman like that, I'd be more than happy to learn.

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>>52723458
This is it, this is the best (you) I will ever get.

>>52723507
You posed a beautiful scenario rife with unpleasant implication unseen by most. I merely did my part to search for the truth!

For science! Excelsior!

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>>52723468
>Well... God doesn't need to be in the right.

How do you figure? "Being right" seems to go with the territory of "being God."

>And it could be that the Templar are just dirty, dirty liars.

Maybe. Still sticking with my choice.

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>>52723598
Not knocking your choice, I'm just saying that we're talking about a magical universe where God is directly intervening in the world.

The only people saying that he's the capital G God are the templar, who to be fair, are fanatics.

There's nothing saying that he's the one and only God. Most religions are polytheistic.

And I think the Brotherhood of Erebus implies the existence of at least one other deity.

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>>52722398
>SCHOOL: Odesium
>CLASSES: Knowledge (Engineering) [9], Smithing [8], Mage Armor x3 [5], Enhancement x2 [3], Airship Training [2], Explosives [1], Unarmed Combat [0]

My name is Marten Wright, and tonight I'm gonna show you why remotely piloting a magic robot from your airship is the coolest way to slay a dragon.

>CLASSMATES: Bathsheba, Kengen, Znanje, Jiel, Eloise Avery
These are my pals. Together we're gonna figure out a way to build a human-sized Mage Armor strong enough to beat Kengen hand-to-hand! And then? Then we're gonna rig up a system so kids can engage in exciting robot combat.

>EVENTS, YEAR 1: Battle Royal, Fund Raising, Security, Party Planner
>EVENTS, YEAR 2: Sports, Fund Raising, Research Proposal, Party Planner
>EVENTS, YEAR 3: Battle Royal, Escort, Security, Party Planner
>EVENTS, YEAR 4: The Great Hunt, Fund Raising, Research Proposal, Party Planner
>EVENTS, YEAR 5: Battle Royal, Fund Raising, Security, Blind Date
Wait, a date? With who?

>CLUBS: Educational (Engineering), Newspaper
Gotta know my robots, ya know?

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>>52723458
Gee, I wonder who the fuck was behind this post.

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>>52723690
Oh, so my new paramour is from exotic Jah'Kara Tel? Who is it?

This Eldaah girl seems interesting.

>>52723643
Fair enough, though I confess I'm biased in the Templars' favor regardless. I think I'd rather take the chance and side with the fanatics I already somewhat agree with. What's this about the Brotherhood of Erebus, though? I didn't see that in the CYOA.

>>52722643
It's almost impressive how you can nearly double the number of choices in a CYOA and retain such exquisite shittiness. Literally none of them has any appeal whatsoever.

I know you meant this because you're a troll with no life, so I won't tell you "good job", but still impressive.

>>52723756
It was going to be a faction, but ended up getting scrapped at the drawing board. I mentioned it in Simon's backstory though

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>>52722506
>Name
Jasper Kennedy
>Organization
The Order of the Raven
Perk: Highborn, +10 magic points and more effective against the Undead, Werewolves, and Abbysals
>Magical Abilities
Healing Magic Rank 3
Defensive Magic Rank 3
Thaumaturgy Rank 3
Elementalism Rank 2
>Equipment
Magical Robes Rank 3
Small Gun Rank 3 (Smith & Wesson M&P Shield named Samuel)
Explosives Rank 3 (Elemental Effect: Frost)
>Allies
>Adolfo Moretti
He's such a jerk and I don't think he trusts me, but his blood magic will be useful. And the protection he gets from working with me convinces him to help.
>Ripsnarl Murdermash
Every group needs muscles and he's the man-wolf(?) for it.

Being an enforcer is a tiring job.
>Implying the Templars aren't being manipulated by the Devil or Abyssals to weaken the world.
Seems odd they see everyone else as evil but yet can't the corruption in their ranks.

>>52723392
>>52722678
>>52722721

Guys, this is unbecoming of you.

>>52723784
Ah, I see it now. Shoot, that sounds kinda interesting. Anyway, I really like the premise of the CYOA, and all the factions feel very distinct. One of the rare times I appreciate a CYOA for its setting.

>>52723465
One more planned, which is just going to address some minor issues. Then that should be the final.

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>>52722398
>Name
Darnell Best
>School
Lunestier
Everyone here is so wonderful! They're nice, helpful and have great food. Their fake smiles and rehearsed manners are too obvious.
>Classes
Physical Training 3x
Smithing 3x
Diplomacy 3x
Assassination 3x
I'm not aiming for the spotlight. I just want to help heroes. Besides, someone has to do the dirty work others won't do.
>Classmates/Companions
Kengen
Luvyna
Suzette Highking
Everyone needs friends in this world.
>Events
Sports 5x
Basilisk Den 3x
Party Planner 4x
>Clubs
Newspaper
Sports
>Drawbacks
Exchange Program
Hated Prodigy
I don't know who I ticked off to cause this. The rumors of me killing that guardsman is not true! Because of that, I had to transfer to Lunestier since it became too much to handle. At least, I still have a few friends and more time for studying.

>>52723865
Cheers. I think a setting is what really gives a CYOA staying power. Without setting it's just unstructured, which is a double edged sword, because some people prefer to come up with their own canon.

>>52723868
In the Asmodai description, should "then shall be worshiped as gods" be "then WE shall be worshiped as gods"?

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Tell me about your upcoming cyoa using only a picture.

>>52723907
I want to fuck your character. Just saying.

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>>52722398
>>52722421
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>>52722452
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>>52722517
> Name: Jerry McSlaughterfuck.
> Ej Har Institute.
> Illusion 3.
> Potion mixing 3.
> Arcane magic 3.
> Summoning magic 2.
> Knowledge: Magic theory 3.
> Inas.
> Inas.
> Inas.
> Battle Royal.
> Fund Raising.
> Research Proposal.
> Part Planner.
> Disciplinary Squad.
> Hated Prodigy 2.

Same as always! There are so many horrible people out there that it only makes sense to seek some form of protection against them. You know what's a pretty good defense? Deterrence through fear! There are so many horrible things that can be done to the innocent, but luckily I can counter some of those. All those horrible potions and poisons that control the mind and heart have cures which I possess. But that's just in case someone actually tries to use them on someone that matters, like Inas, but that shouldn't be a problem given my own abilities. There are an infinite amount of ways to make someone suffer when you can control the senses of others, and with a position of authority in the school there will be plenty of opportunities to exercise this ability in order to cultivate a reputation by which I might deflect any antagonistic actions that would have been targeting Inas. Also I have a fucking stand I guess.

Inas best girl.

>>52723046
The second and third pages are just extra options to choose from, plus each page gives you an extra choice. You instantly become twelve and have the family you have chosen, then just come back and pick a different (or same if ya want) family.

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>Tried to make a big, nice looking CYOA like all the big boys
>Realize I made all the boxes too small for any of the text I wrote out. At least without the picture being weirdly huge.
>The original file is a fucking train wreck and changing anything would be more effort than it needs to be

>>52724030
This pleases me.

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>>52723966
Do gifs count?

>>52724067
Same, so I revised what I wrote and then set a word limit for the rest of the section.

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>>52722398
>Name
Akihi Aroha
>School
Uzuza
>Classes
Beast Taming 3x
Physical Training 3x
Potion Mixing 3x
Martial Combat 3x
First Aid 2x
>Companions/Classmates
Allyce Westhold
Trap-Catcher
Yung Tashi
>Events
-The Tournament
The Great Hunt 5x
A great way to meet strange and monstrous creatures from exotic lands.
-The Harvest Festival
Fundraising 3x
Big brother's circus and my sister's beast sanctuary need money to pay off debts from collectors. I told them that the Yagi Clan are a bunch of loan sharks.
-The Grand Summit
Security
I will put the skills I learn during my first three years to good use.
-The Gathering of Life
Blind Date
The road of a Hero is a lonely one. Finding a wife, or aibou (non-romantic life partner), is a goal of mine.
>Clubs
-Music and Disciplinary Squad
Singing and playing the harp are my favorite hobbies. I don't mean to toot my own horn but I think I'm pretty good. Someone has to keep the other students in line and D.S. is right for me.
>Drawback
Hated Prodigy 2x
Being part of the Disciplinary Squad didn't exactly make me popular with the other students. It doesn't matter now; it just means the friends I was able to make are more precious to me and I have more time to further improve myself.

This small pack will become the story of legends!

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>>52723966

>>52724030
I love cyoas that let me be the yandere waifu.
>>52724067
Why didn't you put in the text first to see how big the boxes should be? Why aren't you making the font size smaller? Or the boxes bigger?

>>52723986
Why thank you, Anon?

>>52722884
I always hated this line of thinking. No, there is absolutely nothing saying a cyoa should be 15% or any other % pickable. This isn't some sort of standard they should aspire to, and it isn't an argument for anything, including the "more pts pls" it most often gets used forn

Rolled 4 (1d4)

>>52724105
>Odesium
They're quite the smart bunch. Let's see who's my date.

>>52724126
>Why aren't you making the font size smaller?
Not him, but what is the limit for readable font that isn't annoying? I'm terrified of actually translating my word document + collected images into an actual CYOA for exactly the same problems he encountered.

>>52724153
>Liene
I hope she's nice. Elves for some reason don't like me.

>>52723957
Yes, actually. I wanted to fit the whole passage of Asmodeus being a faggot towards Solomon but it didn't fit. I'll have to edit it in.

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>>52723966
I finished four pages in the past few days.

>>52724149
It's not an exact percent, but after a certain point you just get too many choices. Too many choices especially when you have very little picks can just make it worse, just like too many picks and too few choices can. This is something for game design in general, and not just CYOA.

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>>52724030
posting better version

>>52724175
Eh, she's a swell gal. Shouldn't be a problem.

I REQUIRE HUSBANDO CYOA

YAOI IS ACCEPTABLE

>>52723907
>Diplomacy 3x
>Assassination 3x
But Exchange program gives only one point to spend from different school, doesn't it?

>>52724330
Only cute boys get husbandos.

>>52724174
No idea. It depends on the font sadly.
I usually write in size 18 or 20. It's very easy to read, but also means I quickly fill up a page without saying very much.
You can do things that make small fonts easier to read, the biggest being high contrast between the color of the font and the background. Text boxes are your friend.

>>52724275
I empqthically disagree. A 3% or even less can be awesome becaise of it. Look for example at the large and versatile selection conduit has. It would be retarded if everyone had enough points for several worlds. If you wanted to get it up to 15% you could go the other way, by removing worlds. And that demonstrates perfectly why this % idea is stupid.

There are no rules of thumb here. Some cyoas work well with a % that is higher, some lower, and trying to set it to an arbitrary amount just because you're used to the range they most often fall into because of practical concerns is a big mistake.

>>52724292
nah, that's the shitty one

>>52724394
Rules of thumb are general, not hard rules. For must things a certain general amount of choices you can and can't pick works best. There are plenty of exceptions, like Conduit, but on average an approximate percent works.

>>52724126
>Why didn't you put in the text first to see how big the boxes should be?
Because I'm dumb and unorganized.
>Why aren't you making the font size smaller?
I tried but once it gets small enough it either gets unreadable or is just kind of uncomfortable.
>Or the boxes bigger?
Because I'm dumb and unorganized

Basically I made a very specific framework and was just reusing the same exact asset over and over again. Editing the first one instead of doing the smart thing and making copies for anything I needed to change. I need to basically do all of it from scratch. Which sucks because it already took a few weeks to get to this point.

>>52724417
DELET

>>52724423
And rules of thumb aren't appropriate when they don't bring any advantages with them.

>>52724394
>A 3% or even less can be awesome becaise of it.
The low ratio of 'how many can I choose vs how many options are there' for Space Refuge is why I never managed to finish it. Three full pages of companions and I can pick only three (without paying) is not balanced.

When there are too many options I start forgetting what the first were and end up not bothering to read the rest. If I know beforehand there are too many options I pick whichever of the first seem to be okay.

>>52722506
Whats the difference between magic circles and runes when it comes to abilities? It seems the same to me

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>>52724030
>>52724292
Wait a second...

>>52724490
Magical Circles are single use, Runes are multiple use.

For example, if you made, say a circle with illusion magic, you could create a hologram or something, that could be triggered remotely at will. If you used a rune, you could permanently hide something except in certain situations.

>>52724427
Do you use Photoshop? Compared to most CYOAs, my font sizes are rather small but are still readable. Readability often depends on the font, and basic fonts like Aria are designed to look fine at around 9-12 point font. I think most body text in Star Dust is 11 point.

Also, work on creative writing. The best way to do that is to actually continue working on your CYOAs; you get used to it eventually. Discipline yourself to formulate the quality of your writing in the amount of space available.

And often times, you will overestimate the amount of space. Whenever I request a collaboration of writing from others, like the Christmas collab or the Battlemage player companions, I have to cut down descriptions by a huge amount.

>>52724465
Your bad memory is a shame, but not really an argument for the average person who can easily remember the handfull of companions they actually liked on that big list.

Same for any other long list of choices. It's not like most of them will really interest you.

>>52724174
12-14 is probably good

>>52724527
Yo, I made a new build.

https://pastebin.com/aEMK64R0

>>52724527
I feel like I stepped into the Matrix whenever SDA isn't smugposting but giving constructive advice.

>>52724521
Where's this from?

>>52724666
Red pill shows how deep the butt hole goes, Satan.

>>52724707
Where's your face, faggot.

>>52724527
Do you think the whole "Serif fonts are better for body" thing is true?

>>52724734
Not really. I think it might matter more for printed materials, but for digital media it's a meme.

I go with Serif for fantasy/classical/historical settings and Sans for modern/futuristic settings. Both are easy to read, go with what looks nicer.

How should magic be performed? A flick of a wrist? A chant, prayer, or aria to the spirits and gods of the world? Long, complicated rituals with dozens of regents required for even the most basic of magic?
What is magic in its most basic sense? Altering reality at a fundamental level? Making use of the spirits of the world to perform supernatural stunts? Asking the Gods to do something that would otherwise not happen? Or is it something else entirely?
How do you apply logic to something illogical? Should there even be a sense of structure and order to magic, or should it be intentionally strange and nonsensical?
I got caught up on these questions while working on my cyoa. Can /cyoag/ lend a hand with them?

>>52722742
My God. Looking at this CYOA, and considering this is how OP perceives younger siblings, I'm glad I don't have one.
I'm going with Naomi, Emilia and Alice. Naomi and Emilia could simulate the conflicts my IRL mother and sister had while I was a teen, while being better off. Alice seems like the most fun option between the younger sisters.

>>52724832
It doesn't have to be sexual you know.

>>52724810
However you want.

It's magic I ain't gotta explain shit.

>>52724810
Theorycraft it yourself.

I like the thought of magic being structured like code and spells are like scripts being executed by your mind. It's how magic generally works in Battlemage.

>>52724292
Why can't I find a desperately insecure girl to nurture and love?

>>52724862
Because orphanages are pretty few and scattered.

>>52724862
Because much like yanderes and girls with mental or physical disabilities they're a lot cuter to read about in manga than they actually are in real life.

>>52724810
According to D&D lore, a magical matrix is integrated into the whole universe. Performing magic is really harnessing and manipulating that matrix. Gods tend to have unchallenged mastery in this, and rituals channel the matrix for the performers' intentions.

>>52724810
I like Shadowrun's magic where it's a deeply personal thing, and represents the caster's inner beliefs.

That or it the exact opposite where it's like hacking the universal code, and there's an input/output sort of relationship.

>>52724918
Why would being uncute make them harder to find

>>52724844
>The filenames
>Forthright descriptions of an intimate or sexual nature
If you say so.

>>52724862
Because many of them are shut-ins who you'll only meet if you worked in certain situations like mental health care facilities, or are dead.

>>52724810
Short answer: Just do whatever, man.
Long answer: It depends on the overall impresion you want to give to the magicians. If you look at real world cultures, there are thousands of ways to make magic work. And that's not mentioning fiction. Praying could, in itself, be considered a form of magic. Same thing could be said about the Tarot, codexes or grimoires, runes and glyphs, leylines, alchemy (FMA sort), etc...
All those magics represent and behave differently. Ones are more tied to clairvoyance, others require a physical item or a chant. Some others require an emblem to be drawn, or communion with spirits...
All in all, you should understand what fits your setting better and act upon it. So, when it comes down to it, just do whatever fits best.

>>52724810
I like short spells casted with just hands, medium length spells with some words, and long spells with chants and rituals.

>>52724961
>>52707325
>>52707485
>>52723458

Hope always finds a way.

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I forgot to say: I'm currently working on updating this one CYOA right here. If there's anything you'd like to see, give me a heads up.
And, just as a bit of an FYI and because some have already asked me, I am not changing the tone. I was feeling miserable when I made the CYOA and I think changing it would fuck it up majorly.

>>52725019
Shit, I read that as The Vile Carrots at first.

>>52724965
That's really sad

The way it would be creepy to get a job like that with these motives I mean

>>52724942
He said "find to nurture and love". You can find them easy enough, nurturing and loving them is a lot more difficult than visual novels would have you believe.

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>>52725019
I plan on doing a major rework. As in, either more curses, more characters or both as well as more spells and a slight variation on the stat system. It won't be numbered, but it'll still be easy to tell what works and what doesn't.

>>52725052
That's a pretty odd way to look at it, but I accept it as a way

That guy that did a "You're a monster but you aren't aware of it" CYOA and posted the in-progress version last week, did he ever come back?

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>>52723458

>>52725019
This looks so early 90s computer art, I am impressed, and feel like I should be playing quake or something

>>52724862
Because they need someone confident and attractive.

>>52725156
It DID take me (roughly) 6 hours to make, after all. I can understand why you'd say that.

>>52724707
How deep does your butthole go, SDA?

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>>52725019
So many waifus and no men. At least I can destroy the world, slowly. Bastards should've offered me cute boys if they wanted me to save it.

>>52724030
Ooooohh fuuuk I can't wait

>>52725248
All the way up to the mouth

Whichexplains the shit that spews forth

>>52724810
I like the Dresden Files style of magic where it's all a matter of using focuses. The strongest wizards bind creatures of magic, demons, spirits, etc with nothing more than chalk and salt while the less experienced have to use expensive ritualistic stuff like gold and crystals.

It's been a while but even reading the first two books could be insightful as far as a way you could go with your "rules" of magic.

>>52725309
fag

>>52725309
Yeah. I'm REALLY starting to think of changing some of the characters. I kinda don't wanna, cause getting tose pics was a fucking hustle already, but...I mean, kinda blatantly waifubait, innit?

>>52725347
dresden filesmagic is not focus bound, and the m(st powerful use only their mind and will

even butters uses chalk, and he is not powerful in magic

>>52725359
It's only faggotry if something enters your ass.

>>52725360
He's gay, anon

>>52725359
>>52725397
>Not broing it up and doing on adventures
What a fag.

>>52725360
Don't be intimidated, he's just a gay who wants you to cater to his needs

>>52725397
Didn't doubt it for a second.

>>52725407
Gaaay

>>52725360
Then don't do it
>>52725380
>wanting to do anal
thats fag in my book
>broing
what?

>>52725407
>>52725428

>>52725447
bro-ing
Being bros with a cool bro and doing cool bro shit

>>52725464
ooh sorry bro

>>52722568
Reposting my magical trapster.
>Sorcerer
>+3 Int

>Finesse 19
>Spellsurge 18
>>Arcane 17
>>Inscribe 16
>>Psionic 15
>>>Detect Magic 14
>>>Combine 13
>>>>Barriers 10
>>>>Warp 7

>One With Nature 6
>Poisons 5
>>Monster Within 4
>>Bindings 3

>Marksmanship 2
>>Enchantment 1

>Recall 0

>Twilight Ruins
>Ancient Desert

STR * 1
DEF **** (***) 4-7
AGI *** 4
INT ***** ***** **** 14
SKL ** 2

THT ***** **** (9)
TRB 115

>Gender: Hermaphrodite 110
>Beauty 105
>Traveler 85
>Exempt 60

>Library 50
>Market 40
>Training 35
>Scavenging 30
>Diner 25
>Club 20
>Underground 15
>Inn 5

Every few weeks, I place magical traps fucking everywhere and let Scavengers take the dead or incapacitated monsters (and occasionally hunters) back for me to execute, sell, or ransom.

>>52724859
hey SDA, are there any benefits to work on government rather than being independent contractor in Stardust?

>>52725360
Don't touch the Phantom of the Opera ripoff. I like my choices there.

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>>52725331
That's your dinner, anon.

>>52725060
What are the Tales based off of? Pale Frost is obviously Snow White, and Songstress seems to be the Phantom of the Opera.

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>mfw I make a stardust build so huge I need to split it into multiple pastebins so it isn't a clusterfuck

what do

>>52725580
Cut the fat.

>>52725424
It's kind of funny how these posts always show up when an author says he's considering adding male characters, maybe. Angrily asking the author not to "give in" and "cater to any needs" while simultaneously demanding the author to cater to their needs.

>>52725589
Like what anon, I can't really cut half of my ships or else it doesn't work

>>52725539
Id rather eat your toes, i bet they have lots of crunch

>>52725488
Well, governmental positions usually come with a slew of benefits. I imagine that any of the major factions have suitable positions to fill, even entities like the Red Daggers (albeit much less formal). In fact it'd probably be less beneficial to most people to go independent contract since doing so is much more reliant on carrying your own weight than being funded by a governmental structure, even if the most successful independent entities rival governmental power.

I don't think I've seen a political-centered build before, to be honest. I'd like to see what someone could come up with.

>>52725360
It is waifubait. Blatantly so, yes. The whole setting and plot clearly exist as background to the waifus and your ability to have sex with them.

Whether that is good or bad is entirely subjective.

>>52725613
Then it's too late. If it's like that then nothing else will work. Either double check and see if you take out some things you don't really want or leave it as is.

>>52725613
Keep going, and post it all on /cyoag/,

Don't worry its not being obnoxious if your build takes up 15+ or even a hundred posts, the threads are just going to drown in shitposts anyway.

>>52725613
He's subtly telling you to lose some weight. You've really let yourself go.

>>52725539
How big is your penis, SDA?

Oh sorry I meant vagina.

>>52725639
>ultimate star dust build
>using only the cheapest fighter
>two big titles
>all the contracts available
>each post is a single fighter
>marginally different from each other

I wonder how many posts it'd take

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>>52725539
smug anime girls exist to be bullied

>>52725639
>>52725613
>>52725580
I'd read it.

...I don't really see how you would need multiple pastebins though unless you reach the huge size limit.
>>52725618
Gay

>>52725564
Well, it's mostly stuff I remember someone telling me at some point. Mythos and actual stories.
Cold Ashes is Cinderella. Hand & the Key is a story about the Alhambra. Coveted One is a tibetan tale in which the three characters have the same name and are all in love for the same woman. And Curse of the Young is about an Irish tale. Tir tarngire I think.
Or maybe that's Shadowrun. Can't remember the name well.
>>52725627
I mean, plot came first, setting came second and waifus were sort of a backup plan in case I couldn't get the pics I wanted. Which sort of happened.
But I guess I'll keep it waifubait then. It'd seem folks don't care that much.

>>52725649
My vagina is q WW2 era depth charge

>>52725677
>...I don't really see how you would need multiple pastebins though unless you reach the huge size limit.

I don't need them as in I hit the size limit on pastebin, it's just at some point the formatting gets so huge it's just clunky to read. I can't stand it.

>>52722760
What is the source of that nadia picture? I want more from that artist.

>>52725695
Hey SDA, if you take The Traveler/The Fatebreaker, will the wormhole be able to appear before you've completed any of the contracts you've taken? I see you've added a way to disable the teleport jammer, but what is the defence against that? I suppose its range isn't too great, and previously you'd have to disable it after you got on a ship, but aside from the honey pot module, what lets you defend against e-war shit?

Hey, anyone got Jojo?

>>52725619
>I don't think I've seen a political-centered build before, to be honest.
It's hard to make politically centered one, since most politicians would not fly around to fight pirates. Most possible are government watch dogs or off-paper death squads. Since government provide for me I don't think I'll need ore refiners, time to make something good

>>52725627
There's nothing subjective about it. Waifubait is the lowest form of entertainment. It's the sign of a bad cyoa that can't stand on its own made by a bad author who can't produce interesting content and has to rely on "sex sells" for his You's.

>>52725822
the wormhole is random you moron

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>>52725861
Aye

>>52725895
Thank you good sir.

>>52725822
>what lets you defend against e-war shit?
McAfee

>>52725886
So I should still take the money from the contracts even though I might not be able to complete them?

>>52725019
It's awesome, i love what you did with those fairy tales. Hopefully it won't change, but rather just some stuff would be added in. And the intro is really confusing, haven't seen such thing in a long time, i literally can't understand what is going on. Is there only one Storyteller who is immortal? Do others come to kill them or some over people? Why would Storytellers need powers to fight other Storytellers, others just get equal powers so the balance of power is still the same as if they were powerless. Please make it more clear.

What is the death condition for the Coveted One?

>>52725919
Sure, assuming you're okay with dying and/or worse

>>52725935
It's not like whoever hired me is gonna travel halfway across the universe to kill me just because of that.

>>52725935
that makes 0 sense

>>52725978
Not my problem you make no sense

>>52725969
I'd travel halfway across the galaxy to kill whoever bought the last jar of pickles before I could. You don't know people.

>>52725927
>What's the death condition for the Coveted One
Given that, and I quote, "People will crave for a taste of your flesh and blood", it's not really death condition as much as you toruning people into cannibals that want to eat you and you only. Fun stuff, huh?
I was going to change the intro blurb so those questions are actually pretty helpful.
>Is there one Storyteller?
Once, yes. Currently, no.
>Immortal?
There's a catch.
>Do others come kill them?
They kill each other.
>Why do storytellers fight?
Because only one can reach Naver's domain.

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>>52726094

>>52725919
>>52725822
That wasn't me.

It appears at random but I'm not gonna stop you from fluffing it. I'd rather see your own interpretations to be honest.

The defence would be the Incident Module and potentially the Honeypot. I wanted to emphasize the defensive nature of e-war. Remember that, ultimately, the "winner" of the e-war fight lies in whoever's skill rating is higher, though I don't really specify that.

>>52725969
>>52725978
Also not me.

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>>52722398

>Ej Har Institute

>Tactics
>Teamwork
>Maneuvers
>Blood Magic
>Unholy Arts
>Blood Magic
>Physical Training
>Martial Combat
>Stealth
>Assassination

COMPANIONS
>Sanyo (Crowd control )
>Farhat (Support bard and total bro can buff Cassiopeias dolls)
>Cassiopeia (Summons dolls that fight for her)
>Hana (Illusionist and strong as fuck physically)
>Bathsheba (Golem, maybe Cassiopeia can learn from her and improve her "dolls" and is basically our tank)
>Me (Use softer approach in combat relying on stealth, tactics, and teamwork to best utilize my blood magic and melee prowess)

EVENTS
>Battle Royal (With our unique style of fighting we would do very well, I think)
>Escort (Perhaps Cassiopeia could attach the spirit to a doll and keep her here after the festival giving us another ally and even, dare I say, a waifu?
>Security (Using illusions, stealth, and trickery this should be an easy job)
>Bodyguard (Getting on good terms with the first princess to the throne could be profitable, and it would look amazing on a resume)

CLUBS
>Paranormal Research (I could learn a lot about the enemy and enhance my own dark arts potential
>Student Government (Power over other heroes is invaluable.

Tried finding a picture that would suit my character while staying within the anime artstyle so I found this.

I imagine he would have yellow eyes and shorter hair the same color. The equipment is pretty accurate though.

Really nice CYOA, entertained me for a good while

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>>52726055
@karla

>>52725919
That's up to you, really. You won't benefit from non-credit rewards that you haven't earned yet, though. I imagine that there's nothing that can be done about you being thrown away in a wormhole though.

>>52726151
Are you supposed to get nothing from Asunder, Sweet? Aside from power armor, but it must be one of a kind. Though the description doesn't make it seem like that.

>>52726236
I left it wishy washy because it's a nod to Apocalypse. Wait for it.

>>52726274
>Apocalypse
What?
Now that I think about it, that would be an awesome name for a ship.

>>52726274
The more you allude to it, the harder it is to wait.

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>>52725721
Proof?

>>52726306
You have to form the next Riders of the Apocalypse team.

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>>52725721
>Traveler PDF in 2 days
HIGHLANDER YOU BETTER NOT BE JERKIN' MY CHAIN

>>52725721
!?

>>52725619
I had made a build at one point with a Glaive that was fluffed as a sort of Enforcer for a trio of Red Dagger groups in different systems

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>>52726236
>reward is one of a kind power armor, with only 5 existing in universe
>while you can buy your own Gundam for 9mil. that is much better than it
Sasuga SDA

>>52726445
Would really like to share that, I'm saddened by the lack of Red Dagger builds.

Whenever I build for them I always fluff them up with being in a gang-wars-like situation.

>>52726449
You're really persistent tonight. Are you the guy who has a crush on me?

>>52726495
>share
I mean see.

>>52726495
I'd have to redo some of it, since costs changed, but I'll get it back to you when I get that

>>52726528
Wait for the next recalibration. Should be soon, and I want to stop working on it after that.

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>>52725895
Stand name: 「Ballroom Blitz」
Ability: Blade manipulation (http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Blade_Manipulation)

DP: A 「6」
S: C「5」
R: D「4」
D: B「3」
P: C
L: A「0」

「Ballroom Blitz」 appears as a long lacy ballroom dance glove with a silver shine to it. It allows its user to manipulate blades in any way, bending them, extending them, but it cannot create blades.

Fabulous as fuck「4」
Gender swap 「3」
Minor villain 「2」
Sharp dresser 「1」
Do you even pose?「0」

Name: Polina Von Priest

A wealthy woman of Russian descent, a heart as cold as her homeland, and several connections to the mob, Polina assisted the arc's villain for power, eventually achieving it in the form of a stand. After a battle with the arc's Jojo, resulting in her breaking a leg, she realizes that the bizarre plan of the villain is more trouble than it's worth and wipes her hands of the whole affair.

>>52726495
I'm probably gonna make a red dagger build soon, though I might end up using the Space Refuge crossover stuff because I like the idea of a bunch of sadistic British aristocracy pirates.

>>52726544
While you're at it, can you make OG mobile suit more akin to fighters?

>>52726572
That was my original intention for including them.

Their effectiveness is more akin to better drones, though. Or, they should be.

>>52726591
>better drones
Should boast better weaponry then, else they are worse Brawler drones. Also how 10 mobility and 6 armor translates to ship equivalent of Nav, HA, SD?

>>52726629
Weaponry I agree with.

I didn't intend the stats to be able to be transferred that straight, but I will say that 10 mobility would be akin to mid-high levels of navigation.

>>52726660
Have you already corrected the things you intended to fix with the latest Stardust update, regarding quest rewards and such?

>>52726677
I'm not even home right now and am living on 4 hours of sleep fueled by coffee and energy drinks. My voice is sore from barking orders 5 hours straight and negotiating with other teams because end of semester funtimes with stupid expectations and incompetent professors.

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>>52725895
Reposting a build I made centuries ago.

Name: Charlie Chavman
Stand Name: Sugar Rush (pic related)
Stand Power:Earth Energy Manipulation
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Earth_Energy_Manipulation

DP: B
S: C
R: A
D: B
P: D
L: A

Fabulous AF (4)
BroJo (2)
DYEP? (1)
Plot Armor (0)

Charlie is as much of a chav as you can find. Even with his attire. A m8 of his pushed him into the Thames, but he came out with a Stand, instead of 20 different illnesses (some of them undiscovered). He doesn't like nobody to mess with his nan. You insult his grandma and he will jump at the chance of kicking your ass. He became a fiend of the protagonist after he saved his nan several months ago. During his teenage years, he got lost in the Arizona desert, being taken in by a native american that taught him how to pose. As such, his poses can bring strength or cause unbridled terror.

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>>52726660
Can OG suit be put on Lamprey Boarding ship and fight inside enemy ships?

>>52726765
Depends on the size of the ship. I don't think you'll be able to move much in a frigate, you're probably better off with a normal mech.

Don't think of mobile suits in this setting as gundams--they're almost exclusively for 0G roles.

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>>52725895
Stand name: 「The Bad Touch」
Caustic Phasing: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Caustic_Phasing

Destructive Power A [2]
Speed A [4]
Range C [5]
Durability B [7]
Precision D [8]
Development Potential C [8]

Stand User:Uncle Vincent Bernard-Thomas
Fabulous as Fuck [2]
Minor Villain [3]
Sharp Dresser [4]
Cool Hair [5]
Plot Armor [6]

>>52726791
If to think that they primary role is in direct combat in space they pretty much outclassed by swarm of drones or packed fighter so I was trying to find uses for OG suits that those two other groups don't have

>>52726055
I know what I have to do.

>Natalie
>Spirit Potion, Soulbloom Amulet

And she shall be the judge of my fate. I'll only know how much of me was a mistake by learning how much will burn away.

>>52722813
Worse in every possible way.

>>52722716

Loo-wd is the only good choice.

'Porter Loo is a close second, but it doesn't specify whether or not other people can see you. If you are invisible and can still hear, you can sit in on business meetings and the likes and blackmail people for millions.

Anyone remember when these used to be small and fun and not 10+ images?

>>52727015
No

>>52726945
Nope, you're fully visible & audible. I would've specified otherwise.
(also, thanks for feedback.)

>>52726870
Actually they were meant to be good against drones. I'll have to do something about that.

>>52725895
Stand Name
>「Wayward Son」becomes「The Splendour」
Stand Power
>http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Courage_Empowerment

Stats
>DP: A 6
>S: D
>R: D 5
>D: A 3
>P: C 2
>L: A 0

>Fabulous as Fuck 4
>JoJo 2
>Do you even pose? 1
>Cool Hair 0

Name
>Joachim Johansson aka YoYo

Courage is a relative thing, so only when the situation is actually most dire and it is most obvious that I'm going to fail does my stand transform from Wayward Son to The Splendour, so probably in the final battle after my master has died and I've been defeated by the villain once or twice.

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>>52725895
>Johnny Johnson
>Stand Name: 「DARK SIDE OF THE MOON」

>Exactly the Same
>Imperceptibility
>Destructive Power: A
>Range: A
>Durability: E
>Precision: A
>Learning: B

>BroJo
>Sharp Dresser
>Do You Even Pose?
>Cool Hair
>Plot Armor x1

「DARK SIDE OF THE MOON」 is completely unnoticeable to other stand users save one occasion - when Johnny is embarrassed. When this does occur, the stand manifests properly - a very thin, pitch-black sillhouette of a spaceman. Even Johnny doesn't even really know when for sure he got his stand - the first time he ever saw the thing was when his crush asked him for a date.

Johnny himself is an awfully vain and spiteful man - petty and easily angered, he has made a habit of knocking other stand users down a peg and relishes seeing the reaction on their face when they realize that SOMEONE in the busy city crowd around them has a stand that they can't see. It was during one of these escapades that someone else - a certain person with the exact same initials and everything - stole the credit for punking some creep. Insulted, Johnson immediately set out to beat the shit out of this guy's stand whenever he could. He confronts JoJo's party a few times coming on top, but eventually loses his edge - and the fight - when his girlfriend runs into him in the middle of their final brawl. Beaten and bloodied, Johnny finally swallows defeat rather than risk getting the shit beat out of him, joining JoJo on his journeys.

>>52727015
Most of the recent stuff is only 1-3 pages, trending towards 1.5. Only some CYOAs are really big ones, and it's usually from the same people that make big CYOAs on a regular basis.

Remember when you actually fact-checked yourself before spouting off shit that doesn't actually happen?

>>52727044
>more than 1 image over 5mb each aren't big
lmao

>>52727015
>>52727044
I'm finishing up MGSI, which is six pages, but that's only because I'm updating something that already existed. After that, I have a 1-2 page SCP one planned.

>>52727063
>over 5mb
What, are you on a modem or something?

>>52725790
Sorry mate, i can't remember where I got it myself.

>>52722506
DOG. Freedom and research sounds fun.
Mad Science: Who needs equipment when you can have magic?

[60 pts]

Healing rank 3 [50]
Defense magic rank 3 [40]
Weird Science rank 3 [25]
Thaumaturgy rank 3 [10]
Elementalism rank 3 [0]

> No waifus sad

Simon Haueter and Siegfried Koch I guess?

I want to suck SDA's throbbing boner

>>52722778

>Faith

Yessss I am ok with this, even if she's not a little sister.

>>52727159
And die from his toxic jizz?

You have a death wish.

>>52727159
Girls don't have boners.

>>52727201
Sometimes they do.

>>52727201
Clits do engorge.

>>52722795
>>52722742
I noticed a spelling error.
Madeleine's profile says "More often than not there is at least fire alarm being set off whereever she goes" Did you mean "a fire alarm"? Other than that it's very good, thanks for posting.

>>52727121
I don't do waifus, friendo.

Though some people really want to suck that werewolf's dick.

>>52727268
Its cool. I guess being sorta useful is ok too. It does look like people are more annoying to work with than not most of the time though.

>>52727286
How do you mean?

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>>52725895
Stand User: Jack Walker
Stand: Behind the Bars
Alcohol Manipulation

DP B [1]
S B [3]
R B [4]
D A [6]
P E [6]
L B [8]

Ripped As fuck [1]
Mentor [2]
Sharp Dresser [3]
Do you even pose [4]

Jack Walker always carries on him various liquors to use with his stand, as well as to help him get through the day. As a young man Jack Walker was wrongfully arrested for the murder of his one and only love. He hopes to find the real killer with what little time he has left on earth, but he grows more pessimistic about his chances as time goes on

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>>52727159

>>52727346
You're cute.

>>52727159
Settle down Angel.

>>52727346
https://pastebin.com/WqDL6qvN

Here's that Talon build I was talking about, no fluffing in there, because I'm shit at writing and I only ever make myself cringe

>>52727459
Shit, meant Dagger