CYOA thred

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I want a comfy powerfantasy cyoa that is actually challenging and will test me to the fullest of my abilities in a grand battle for life and death.

>>52635579
Well you can't get one. You idiot.

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>>52635579
Fuck off back to the old thread.

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Every thread until you like it.

There's a person who literally reposts the same phone image in every thread. How pathetic can you be.

I don't know if SDA is skulking around the thread or if this has been answered before but can Dreadnoughts hold a frigate in their hangerbay? I mean they are triple the size of the Carriers so it makes sense they could but I was just wondering.

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>>52635620
Stop.

>>52635593
Why?!

>>52635640
Instead of crying about being useless, take a break from power fantasies and get a fucking job. Because I'm 80% sure you're an underage parasite.

Did that big intergalactic text cyoa where anon was one of the 100 shards of a demiurge or something ever finish? Could someone post it?

>>52635664
>said the guy who's talking shit on a korean wakeboarding enthusiast forum

>>52635664
>just get a job
>JUST
>smile and give a firm handshake is all it takes

Boomers must leave cyoag.

Fuck off

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UPDATE
WHEN

>>52635703
Well he's right, getting a job is easy. Getting a job you want is hard. Kind of the same thing as finding someone to have sex with.

>>52635695
Well, excuse me, princess, but even though I may visit mongolian basketweaving sites, at least I don't whine in every thread and avatarfag while I'm at it.

>>52635703
Congrats for finding a bogeyman that you can use to make up excuses for your own pathetic failures.

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>>52635734

>>52635739
Do you see an avatar in my goddamn image section, boy? No, you do not.

I came in on the tail end of this argument you've been having, but drink some water, purge some salt, and calm the hell down.

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>>52635756

>>52635772
Why yes, I've seen a few. Let me remind you that avatarfagging is a bannable offence. Do not reply to me ever again.

>>52635579
>>52635640
>>52631966
>>52631437
>>52605478

>>52635817
One day I'll read it. But every time I try I stop because I'm forced to read about 20 text-pages of waifus and I ain't having none of that.

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>>52635841
You have opened my eyes.

>>52635841
You are a sad little midget, aren't you?

>>52635678
Universal War? It's at v1.6 but I don't have it. Someone please lend your assistance.

>>52635888
That's an awfully specific thing to call someone. I wonder where you got the idea?

>>52635841
All those reply tags, and only a single (You) at the very top.

Maybe you *are* some old boomer wandering 4chan, your eyesight's clearly gone to shit.

>>52635920
He must have seen your micropenis and extrapolated from that.

>>52635579
>comfy powerfantasy
>actually challenging and will test me to the fullest of my abilities
Pick one.

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Whatever happened to that 'Neighbours CYOA' ?

Any progress?

>>52635938
>image has the exact same name but it's totally not me u guize!!!

>>52635947
>You awake one day in bed
>With girls that represent political ideologies
How hard did I get fucked?

>>52635973
Author quit because this place is a pigsty. You throw mud in a pigsty, not diamonds.

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>>52635965
Eldritch gods playing multiversal chess with actual empires as pieces to determine an intergalactic war.

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>>52635983
Anon...

I hate to break it to you.

But you might be a pleb.

>>52636000
This is bait.

Author didn't quit.

>>52635910
>1.6
Wasn't the halloween update the latest one?

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>>52636104
Post it. Here, receive this humble anime girl in tribute.

>>52636015
Anon...

I hate to break it to you.

But I'm someone else tired of shitheads shitting up every fucking thread.

>>52636119
I don't have it.

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>>52636145
Seems to me that if the thread didn't want to get shitted, it wouldn't take the bait in the first place.

>>52636000
I would like to see the actual words "I quit" from the actual author.

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>>52636150
Then give me back the girl + interest, bitch.

>>52636186
Anon you dumb fuck I'm trying to fix this hellhole.
Only way I know how is to make you fucks think you killed authors. But you don't care, you're not here for CYOAs

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>>52636188
Here, have this anal idol.

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>>52636223

>>52635493
I got a lot of art of cute monstergirls and I'd like to make a slice of life monstergirls-urban fantasy cyoa.
Not sure what to have outside of cute girls to pick from? Help please?

>>52636200
I am definitely here for good quality CYOAs.

>>52636223
Male+Female

The world could use a good reset

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>>52635878
>>52635841
now that's a lie
glasses back on,
frog

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>>52636223
>dumb
>old

Bye bye, BOOMERS!

>>52636223
>Black
>Dumb
That killed almost all fat people too which takes off a huge load on the health industry. Now there's finally more money for technology and science

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>>52636252
How about cute boys?

>>52636252
Regarding the "slice of life" and "urban fantasy" aspects, what sort of stuff were you thinking about?

>>52636223
Muslim
Capitalist

That eliminates the two most dangerous ideologies on the planet

>>52636252
How about we inherit a supernatural criminal syndicate hidden from the mundane world that was previously ownded and led by a family member who was actually the leader of a bloodline which we too inherited?

>>52636331
>not jewish

>>52633027
>oh go this is the beginning of "my everything proof shield stops your unblock-able spear - nuh huh, my spear pierces all shields"

So normal Fate plot, then.

>>52635940
It really depends on the weapon. I assume a T1 or T2 weapon has a 360 rotating base, while something as huge as a Anti-Matter Cannon can't rotate so it functions as a real 'Spinal Weapon' in that it takes half your ship's back to hold it. Lower-tier spinal weapons presumably don't take so much space so they are able to rotate.

>>52636223
>Young
>Male
>I won't be affected

The old trick.

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>>52636247
>Color
Mental Illness
Language Barriers
Ignorance
Religion
Scarcity
Political Extremism
Human Death
Pollution
Crime
Waste

>Pic Related
Money
Wish
Drugs

>>52636223
>Young
>Male
>I won't be affected

The old natural selection trick.

>>52636319
None. Sorry man I only save art of cute girls
>>52636321
That's what I'm asking. I was thinking maybe you moved to a new neighborhood, with monstergirl neighbors, maybe live with one?>>52636362
... how is that slice of life?

>>52636252
Slice of life adventures alongside bright magitech adventures.
Get your magic abilities, your tech abilities, and a few mixers.
Cutesy monster grill companions, and at least one bro.

>>52636223
Male
Female
That solves almost every problem.
Now there's only 72 million fuckers left.

Still wish I could push the buttons a few more times.

>>52636331
Congratulation.
You killed the relatively low population of muslim that are capitalists in this world.
It was pretty smart of you to fix saudi arabia but I see that you did not intend to do this.

>>52636407
Sex Appeal
Painproof
Wish Pill

>>52636439
>and at least one bro.
Do you mean bro (waifu) ?

>>52636433
You could make it slice of life.

One of those cutesy crime syndicates where everyone acts like a delinquent with a golden heart but they insist they're evil and bad.

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>>52636392
We need more Fate plots in this thread.

>>52636442
Eh, still works out fine Saudi Arabia is kind of a shit hole anyway

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>>52636433
I'm going through the calculations again but "female companions" simply does not compute. Men and women can't be frienss unless it involves something called "cucking" but whatever that is, it's classified. Give me a sec... I'm in... let's see- HOLY SHIT!

>>52636464
No, but I'll take what I can get. I'm not making the cyoa after all.

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>>52636474
No thank you but please feel free to keep suggesting things.

>>52636552
Not him, but stop pretending. You want to make waifu shit, make waifu shit. Don't include some other half-assed options and settings you barely spellchecked when what it's really about are the waifus and the detailed lists of their fetishes.

>>52636551
I'm not either. I just thought you made a mistake so I fixed it !

>>52636433
Any premise can be slice of life as long as you ignore any overarching conflict.
A heroes journey can be SoL if the focus lies on the misadventures in-between Major events.
A post-apocalyptic setting can be SoL, as long as the focus isn't on them trying to solve anything (they can still be solving or encountering stuff in the background)
An extra-dimensional super prison can be SoL.
A shrunken city on the back of a dust mite can be SoL.
A group of gangsters can be SoL. A group of vampires can be SoL. A group of vampire gangsters can be SoL.
Superheroes can be SoL. Supervillains can be SoL. The ancient evil coming to destroy the world can be SoL.
All that matters is the kind of stories you tell.

>>52636603
Who ate your peanutbutter?

>>52636252
>monstergirls

this reminds me. Wasn't someone about to finish a monstergirl waifu cyoa?

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>>52636552
I'm always down for a slice of life monstergirl cyoa. Moving into a neighborhood is a good idea.

Participate in city events, vote for laws about the neighborhood watch

choose your neighbors and shit sounds comfy and hot

>>52636433
>>52636552
You could have a section for "what's peculiar about this neighborhood".

For example, Yakuza/Mafia/other organized group that no longer does any crimes (but still look intimidating enough that some people wouldn't believe it). Instead, they do stuff like volunteer work (keeping places clean, fixing broken stuff, etc.), and if someone starts making trouble in the neighborhood, they're taken aside and given a good talking-to (to the point of working out why they're acting like they are, and offering ways to apply themselves in a more constructive manner)?

>>52636725
I was thinking something like
>Pick which street/part of town you live in
Monstergirls could split into different areas, like the "spooky" part was ghost-girls and vampires and shit, the "park" area has alraunes, cat-girls and such.
>Pick a roommate
Each roommate has some job that helps explain how the city works.
>Pick a job
Not sure about this one. Obviously you have to help out the city that only seems fair but it doesn't have to be menial labor. Something like playing with the kids in the park or visiting the more eccentric monstergirls counts too.

City events and voting on laws is an excellent idea! Thank you!

>>52636480
All the fate builds last thread were a pleasant surprise to be honest, especially since some were quite creative. Most of them were crazy OP of course, but a couple were at least creatively so.

>>52636795
I'm going to pretend this includes my build because it makes me happy

>>52636223
>Agnosticism
>belief

>>52636442
not sure if it kills people who are both this AND that or this OR that, but i'm leaning towards OR because you can do shit like male + female

>>52636885
Which one was yours?

How autistic is /cyoag/ today, anons?

>>52636480
>>52636795
I'll repost mine since the thread died shortly thereafter.

>Become a Saber
Lawful Evil
Saber of Red - Wrathful, Conflicted, Honorable, Friendly, Proud
Caster

>Physical Features
Female Saber
Adorable
Teen Saber
Lone, short ahoge

>Clothing
Ceremonial (+NBL)
Scantily Clad
Skimpy Outfit

>Parameters
STR B+
END C/D+
AGI C+/A+
MAG EX
LCK D
NBL A/EX
+ALL in Territory

>Class Skills
Independent Action A (EX free with "Become a Saber")
Territory Creation B
Mad Enhancement E
Magic Resistance C
Presence Concealment C

>Personal Skills
Mana Burst E
High-Speed Spellcast C
Golden Rule E
Expert Specialization D
Bravery D
Clairvoyance B
Information Erasure EX
Divinity E

>Noble Phantasms
Shapeless Divinity, Unwritten Scripture: Founder of Faith (Anti-Unit/Army, A/A++)
No Death Without Burial (Anti-Self, EX-)
Lion's Claw: Stone Ritual Knife (Anti-Unit, C)
Divinity Sight (Anti-Unit, E)

Fights like an assassin unless in territory, upon which she becomes a nightmare to fight against. Can cast true magic only when not in combat, so it's mostly to irresistably alter the battlefield to her advantage. She also wipes all residue of her presence and acts alone, making her a great wildcard.

>>52636972
Complete autismo/10, same as usual, anon.

I debating whether the 40 exobytes of porn that Damain Galt brings with him is worth dealing with him hitting on the female crew.

>>52636988
Seems interesting. Could you clarify how the Noble Phantasms function?

>>52636988
>>52636736
The slash stats are for switching out the clothing. I'm assuming you can't stack clothing together because no one would ever pick modern clothes. As for the noble phantasms:

>Shapeless Divinity: Founder of All Faiths
Rank: A
Form: Concept
Type: Anti-Unit
Grants the ability to make sacred vows, so long as the target has faith in Caster's Divinity and deliberately agrees to it. When honoring a vow and opposed by an enemy unit who obstructs the vow, Caster is enveloped by the vow, raising Luck to the enemy's Luck (minimum Caster's Luck) against the enemy. Completing a vow grants extra Divinity ranks, which diminish over time.

>Shapeless Divinity, Unwritten Scripture: Founder of All Faiths
Rank: A++
Form: Concept/Location
Type: Anti-Army
As above, but only in Ceremonial. Condition: If the enemy uses a Noble Phantasm that is based in or significant to religious faith, the vow manifests as a reality marble, fully encompassing Caster, the enemy, and all allies involved in the fight. The marble is treated as territory granted by Territory Creation. Divinity is increased to EX while inside.

>No Death Without Burial
Rank: EX-
Form: Ability
Type: Anti-Self
Divinity cannot go below rank E. Renders one's death null so long as Divinity is rank E or higher, respawning instantly at the territory core. Condition: Cannot null a death sourced from a higher Divinity rank.

>Lion's Claw: Stone Ritual Knife
Rank: C
Form: Weapon
Type: Anti-Unit
A knife that appears before those who are within the territory and wish to end their own life. It whispers sweet words of sacrifice and value to the wielder. Intentional, self-inflicted wounds are always lethal, which transfers lifeforce mana to the owner. The knife can be destroyed but reappears whenever conditions are met.

>Divinity Sight
Rank: E
Form: Ability
Type: Anti-Unit
Can passively see if someone has higher Divinity ranks. Line of sight.

>>52636945
The Assassin one with the edgy noble phantasm and the one that was apparently an extra good Gae Bolg

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>>52636915
Well, I mean, the creator must have intended for this to be people who are both this AND that, because otherwise it's retarded, right?
There is no sense of limit, right?
All this color-coding can't be here for nothing right?

I wanted to stat out the Twin Fangs with fifty million credits each, but I think I'm going to break down and give them the full hundred.

Spaceships are expensive.

>>52635637
Yes, they can.

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>>52637086
>/b/ tier button CYOA
>Not retarded
Sorry Anon but you are now retarded by association.

>>52637055
I liked that one!

I feel that the edgy sacrifice Noble Phantasm was made a bit less generic by the fact you put it on an assassin IMO, since you don't have the durability for it to be likely that you survive your rage.

The super Gae-Bolg was a bit iffy, but it's not strictly speaking an insta-kill like Gae Bolg is even if it bypasses armor and stuff, so I don't think it's that unfair.

>>52637037

That's an interesting network of abilities. I feel that your biggest weakness by far is Anti-World and Anti-Fortress attacks that could level your domain and thus bypass your No Death Without Burial, but except for that it's a solid set of abilities. I especially like Lion's Claw, for creativity. You did sort of cheese the Noble Phantasms-it feels like the two Shapeless Divinities shouldn't count for the same thing in terms of points, but I definitely don't think your Servant is stronger than some of the monsters from the other thread so I can't complain too much.

I'm tempted to try going through all the Servants posted so far and try to give them a tier list.

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>>52637028
>>52637037
The knife is based off of the Aurignacian lion man statue, which is the world's first known anthropomorphic statue. My Saber is based on the first priestess to ever exist, hence why she's insufferable and the supposed founder of all faiths. She honors the prayers of the faithful and in return she gets power. It was also almost certain that faith was founded as a need for some ritual during burials, hence the deep connection to death.

Divinity Sight is just something nice to have yet super limited in scope.

>>52637210
>I liked that one!
Aw gee thank! It's always so nice to know people read your build.
>put it on an assassin
Yeah that was the idea: It's a last-ditch effort to protect my Master. I'm not meant to survive after using it. It's designed for self-sacrifice.

>>52637243
My main complaint about this cyoa is that it's too stingy with points. Now call me a slut and spank me, daddy.

>>52637146

Thanks. I was working with that assumption.

>>52637160
>CYOA
>Not retarded
You just got nae nae'd

>>52637298
I will. Point-slut

>>52636186
>>52636200
He's not wrong. Some have left in the past due to all the bullshit here. It's personally turned me off from being creative and making content here. Haven't worked on a cyoa in going on 2 months now due to it.

>>52637286
I can't help but think that your Assassin would be similar to poor old Diarmuid in Fate/Zero. One of the most sympathetic Servants, but ends up dying tragically with a Master undeserving of them.

In all honesty I think if not for all the overlapping classes, we'd have quite an interesting Grail War lining up now from all the posts this thread at last. Not sure who would win though, looking at them all.

>>52636621
>A heroes journey can be SoL
Yeah, if it's a journey down to the supermarket.

>>52637350
We all know this. It's just the specific author in question hasn't quit per se.

Unless I'm wrong.

>>52637358
>Diarmuid
You mean best servant?
I'm glad to be compared to him. And yeah I agree, I would probably get wrecked. Picked Assassin mostly because I like that whole "being able to protect my Master at all times" thing they have going. I'll be destroyed by people who can actually take hits and deal out damage.

>>52637350
Just make things you want to make, dude. This place may be autistic but I really don't care what people say about me here, even though I'm the one people shitpost most about. I've barely worked on my own stuff lately but that's due to time constraints more than anything else.

>>52637450
Hey SDA would you mind answering this >>52636942
>Would Combat Driving from Star Soldier let you fly the Dropship?

>>52637450
SDA is wise.

Even though he devours penis on a daily basis.

>>52637350
You're not alone in that.

>>52637461
I suppose so, but I'd say it's more piloting.

>>52637469
I do not like dick, like most of the people here. Like Angel.

>>52636223
>Can't use the buttons to delet myself

But why?

>>52637495
>not liking dick

What are you? Gay?

Are there any news about Necromancer update? Not trying to meme, genuinely interested. I remember Scientist saying that it's almost done.

>>52636223
Evil and Old. Those two options eliminate 99% of the problems with the world.

>>52637450
>Just make things you want to make, dude.
That's good and all, until you remember the people who read your shit. I could probably make CYOA's if I only showed them to friends.
You're all cunts.

>>52637532
Old people are hardly the problem.

>>52637534
I think you just kinda need to detach yourself from criticism to be honest (assuming you want to share them). Ultimately as long as you get more enjoyment from the idea of getting (you)s than the moaning, it's worthwhile.

Speaking from experience making other things and sharing them online, haven't finished a CYOA yet.

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>>52636247
>Red: Myself
>Orange: Language Barriers
>Yellow: Selfishness
>Green: Innumeracy
>Aqua: Scarcity
>Blue: Political Extremism
>Indigo: Cruelty
>Violet: Pollution
>Pink: Crime
>White: Waste

"But anon," you ask. "Why delete yourself?"

Because I'm creating a world I don't deserve to exist in.

>>52636223
Muslim and dumb. Two things happen: first at least 1.6 billions of people die, and then like 85% of people. What a beautiful world I created.

>>52637534
Dude, who cares? Hammer them in to shape if you must and don't go out of your way to appeal to concepts you don't want to. People tell me all the time that the things I'm doing are wrong but you have you realize that that's just their opinion. I don't care if half the thread yells at me for a mechanic that they think is wrong. I'll weigh the rationality, but if I don't personally come to the same conclusion, I'm not gonna do it. I'm the author.

>>52636223
>Muslim
>Evil
I mean, maybe a bit redundant, but you can never be too sure.

>>52637495
>Angel doesn't like dick

No, but phallic organs that splooge eggs or semen inside her and impregnate her own eggs are okay

>>52637616
Is "dumb" also counting "foolish," or just "unintelligent?" Because if you're selecting against low INT and not low WIS, you haven't actually fixed anything.

Some of the absolute worst disasters in history have been caused by people with incredibly high INT but abysmal WIS. Spent so much time on whether or not they /could/ that they didn't bother thinking of whether or not they /should/.

>>52637210
Something like Excalibur would easily level the physical domain. However, that power is granted by divinity, so it would be feasible to create a reality marble to absorb the attack. That would be extremely limited due to the insane amounts of mana required. And as mentioned before, Divinity doesn't actually do anything unless otherwise specified, so really all the ++ gets is a conditional territory creation. The A-rank I thought was alright because all it does is up to the enemy's LCK, which could very well be just a slight bump in stats. Is there anything about Divinity that I'm missing?

>>52637426
I really liked that build as well. I'm pretty sure that you're built to fuck me up, but that shouldn't be surprising given our classes. That Laevateinn would compete with an EX-level ability, which is the level of my respawn ability. Given the readings, it should disable the respawn ability, so it really depends on who finds out about the other's noble phantasm first.

Yeah, this is a really interesting Grail War.

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>>52637243
I'm going to ignore points and design my ideal werewolf form.

>STR: 2
Stronger than a human but not too strong.
>REC: 3
I'm a slut for self-healing, sorry.
>SPD: 2
Peak human speed is great.
>Forms: 3
I want both forms at their strongest.
>Moon: 2
Whenever I want but forced once a month to stay a werewolf thematically.
>Instincts: 2
This is just fucking cool. In control but with wolf instincts.
>Agression: 3
No, thank you.
>Silver Weakness: 3
No, thank you.
>Aging: 3
Immortality, yes.
>Senses: 2
I don't want to smell through brick walls.
>Spirit: 3
This is my fetish.

>Weakness: Wolfsbane
This is just cool.

So basically my ideal werewolf form needs 27 points. Oh, well. Could be worse.

>>52637634
SDA, can I potentially take Old-Timer and create a ship that can't be targeted by E-War modules? I mean, jammers would probably work if they just create interference, but not something that would hack into weapons/shields, right? I kinda considered that when I remembered Battlestar Galactica Cylon problem.

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>>52637692
"Lacking good-judgement" is what I'm aiming at.

>>52637583
>Ultimately as long as you get more enjoyment from the idea of getting (you)s than the moaning
Absolutely not. The whole idea of liking that some neckbeard said my shit is good is a crazy thought to me.
>>52637634
If all you get from the readers is shit and more shit I don't see a reason to post what I made. If I post it it's because I want to share it and think they will enjoy it.
I'm not bringing my ball to play if all you do is piss on it.

>>52637705
Oh shit, wrong build. Let me look at yours as well.

>>52637741
I know right? People here act as if getting attention is the only thing that making a CYOA could possibly be about. Even though it has never been about that for me at all.

>>52637705
>I really liked that build as well.
Thanks!
> it really depends on who finds out about the other's noble phantasm first.
That is another reason I like my hidden Noble Phantasm so much: You wouldn't expect an Assassin to have a self-sacrificing Berserker-esque trick up her sleeve.

>>52637688
I meant to imply that she did.

>>52637714
You can still take a cyber security officer and e-war modules when using Old Timer.

>>52637450
All I do is make what I want. The attitudes none the less have really soured wanting to make anything, so I haven't.

>>52637387
No. You don't understand.
Lots of things are allowed to happen in SoL. But they can't be the focus. The focus must be any mundane concern of the day. The big stuff must happen in the background.

>>52637779
I haven't made any so I don't know if my feelings would change but I really don't see what authors get out of it. Sounds like a lot of work and people treat you like dirt because you didn't include their fetish or some shit.

>>52637731
Right, you're most likely okay on that front then.

>>52637688
>>52637791

http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/52530853/#52538922

>>52637387
I don't think you understand what Slice of Life means.

>>52637741
>>52637779
Then that issue comes with yourself. Maybe you need to improve your writing skills, world building or something else to do with CYOA creation. Maybe it's because you just share different interests with the people here, I don't know. But blame these threads all you want, something abot your delivery isn't working and you need to address that if you want positive feedback.

This is different from knowing whether or not to listen to other's opinions and doing things properly. Either way, if you're bitching like this, then you should probably either take a break or just leave.

>>52636407
>wish pill
>wish to be immune to instant combustion
>take the other nine pills

OR

>drug pill
>choose to be affected by all nine other pills
>no side effects

>>52637709
>>Spirit: 3
>This is my fetish.

Funny, it's my fetish to be in a pack with a strong alpha-male. Who do you look for in a pack?

>>52637830
A Hero's Journey isn't some mundane occurrence, hence the joke about going to the supermarket.

>>52637840
Since I'm not really doing it for others I am not affected by any vitriol they might send my way. I just do it because I like expressing myself and my ideas, and more or less everything else I've ever tried like drawing or writing prose take a lot more sustained effort to complete a work. So it's easy and fast creativeness basically.

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>>52635605
>using a Heroes III skill icon as a shitpost on 4chan

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>>52637867

>>52637784
Yeah, that ability is very good. In terms of a fight, I'd go berserk and wouldn't stop fighting, so this basically turns everything into a standstill, unless if my higher STR stat can overwhelm your higher AGI stat. Probably would resolve as really straightforward fights do. The best part is that we'd both erase the fight, so we'd keep wailing on each other and not know where our wounds are coming from.

Ultimately I think it boils down to you overpowering me by taking advantage of the fact that I can't ignore pain from my wounds, while I would try to find a way to use magic against you out of battle. Your EX Luck would foil a lot of my attempts while my D Luck would let you shit on me unless if I entered a vow to take you down.

What kind of heroic figure were you basing your Saber off of?

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>>52637900
You trying to ERP? Bad anon. That's improper lewd behaviour.

To answer your question, either a pack of misfits (a pack full of outcasts under my protection I could power of plot to greatness in an urban fantasy setting), a classic pack where every person has a clear role (in a high fantasy jungle tribal setting), or a pack that doubles as a crime syndicate (maffia werewolves in the criminal underbelly of a major city- omega prostitutes, beta is my second-in-command, etc.).

>>52638001
>this basically turns everything into a standstill, unless if my higher STR stat can overwhelm your higher AGI stat
Well I don't know how long you can keep up an EX rank Noble Phantasm. My +2 modification won't trigger unless you target my Master.
I will lose to a Berserker, IF I try to fight like someone who isn't an Assassin.

>What kind of heroic figure were you basing your Saber off of?
I wasn't. Just like I wasn't basing the Noble Phantasms on anything from the series.
I just thought about how I could best be the waif-
I mean, a good Servant that protects her Master!

>>52638075
I'm not gonna pretend I wouldn't be up for ERP but no, I didn't try to.
Dammit I'm not into any of those packs.

>>52637243
4/10, needs more drawback options.

>>52636795
yeah, sorry about mine being uninspired garbage

but even my OP(?) build had its weaknesses and could realistically loose a war

>>52637552
Depends on what it means by old. Wiping out anyone over the age of 50 will make the world a much better place.

>>52638075
>omega prostitutes
Male or female prostitutes?
Think carefully before answering

>>52637976

?

>>52637890

Oh, and on my Star Dust ship I'm switching the broadside weapons to Flak Cannons and the spinal weapons to a Tachyon Laser Cannon and Ragefire Railgun. So I think hta makes it more balanced like you said.

>>52638155
Then describe your perfect werewolf pack.

I'm gonna include a high school/college pack to my list too. All jocks would be pack members, team captain would be the alpha. Cheer squad could be omegas. All members of the same frat/sorority. This idea needs some work.

>>52638175
Oh look how cute. The newfag namefag thinks he matters.

>>52638188
Both.

>>52638001
which build is yours?

>>52638210
>>52584880

>>52638090
>I will lose to a Berserker, IF I try to fight like someone who isn't an Assassin.
Yeah, but I'm not a Berserker, I'm a Caster whose sanity goes out the window in a fight. The stat boost comes from my Mad Enhancement. Things get sillier if I'm in my territory of course, but I can't generate a territory to fight against you because nothing you have relates to the divine whatsoever. I don't get my A/A++ NP against you, except for vows.

>My +2 modification won't trigger unless you target my Master.
Would a love triangle trigger it?

>>52638232
I'm the one on this thread.
>>52636988
>>52637037

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>ERP
>Here
>Not on >>>/soc/ or >>>>/b/

>>52636988
>Independent Action A (EX free with "Become a Saber")
im sorry, where is this? did i miss points i could of spent on more abilities?

>>52638244
I like it but imo it'd be better if there were some betas too to keep things interesting.

>>52638298
It was mentioned a long time ago by the creator of the CYOA. >>51665786

>>52637037
>>52636988
oh god this caster is a pain to deal with

its going to be a permanent loop of respawns and death lazers if our servants fight

>>52637784
>>52638001

Just finished going through all the Servant builds so far to see how I think they'd do in a Grail War. First, I'll recap all of them.

1: Lancer, an obscenely strong male true neutral Servant who's immune to anything A Rank or higher, has high Magic resistance, an EX+ Anti-World nuke and a few more tricks besides. Can't really do anything at all other than fight, and his Luck is atrocious. Winner of the 'My dude could totally beat Gilgamesh' award.

2: Assassin Waifu, skilled with stealth and has surprisingly good direct combat skills for an Assassin. Both Phantasms are powerful and well suited for a Grail War. Her master is a lucky guy. Winner of the 'best waifu' award.

3: Caster Heroine, a manifestation of Angra Mainyu's counterpart. Physically very weak, but she has some really impressive tricks that let her protect her Master in interesting ways. Personally my favourite one because it seemed like a lot of thought went into her narrative role as well as her character (although I liked all of them). Winner of the 'Nasu, is that you?' award.

4: Caster Gambler, a full-on reality warper who depends on the most bullshit singular Noble Phantasm imaginable but is otherwise very easy to kill. Winner of the 'working out how to kill this guy is going to hurt' award.

5: The Berserker who acts like a Caster. Not very fleshed out, unfortunately. Winner of the 'wait, an EX +4 Noble Phantasm!?' award.

6: The Spiteful Assassin. Full disclosure, I wrote Loki. An extremely versatile Servant who lacks the ability to really go toe-to-toe with most of the others in a fair fight, but he's insanely hard to put down and remains a huge threat even after dying. Winner of the 'I'm not giving my own creation an' Award.

7: The Ur-Priestess Caster. Not the most immediately intimidating Servant, but her complicated network of synergistic abilities and flexibility make her a force to be reckoned with. Winner of the 'fuck, nearly none of us have Divinity' Award.

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>>52638377
>Winner of the 'My dude could totally beat Gilgamesh' award.

I understand the award is derogatory - but that was precisely my goal


also

- 1 Lancer
- 2 Assasins
-3.5 Casters
-0.5 Berserkers


surprised by lack of archers/sabers

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>>52638440
I won't pretend that it wasn't tongue-in-cheek, but it wasn't intended to be a full on insult. The war would be boring if it was all super tactical masterminds spying on each other for a long time, and your Lancer introduces an element of chaos to things.

>>52638249
>spoiler
Huh? What? No?
The first trigger is saying you will, or me otherwise feeling like, you're threatening my Master.
The +2 modifiers trigger is attempting to harm my Master.

I'm not really into threesomes. Makes me think that I'm not good enough to satisfy them. I would honestly probably just put myself into the perma-friendzone if it was clear my Master preferred you. And then be sad but keep protecting my Master.
>>52638373
Yeah from what I can tell I can avoid most of them (no divinity) except his No Death Without Burial
>>52638377
>Winner of the 'best waifu' award
Gee thanks! I just pick what I would like to pick if this were real.

>>52638469
fair- but to be fair, as entertaining and interesting as the mastermind/operator servants are, its often their bullshit that gives HGW's a bad wrap

if everyone just slugged it out the whole affair would be so much more pleasant

>>52636480
One thing that bothers me about this CYOA whenever I see it is its description of the luck state. It isn't a measurement of how likely things are to go in your favor, it measures your ability to defy fate.

It's how Saber avoids being insta-gibbed by Gae Bolg, it let's you force your way past absolutes. An EX luck state might get around>>52637037 No death without burial, for example.

>>52638519
I personally like a mix. All masterminds makes things boring, all heavy hitters means that it's just the least creative 'my dude is immune to everything and hits super hard' guy who wins. A good mix of masterminds, fighters and wild cards is what makes an exciting war imo.

>>52638377
>>52638497
so - what do you think each servants wish is?

my lancer doesent really have one (unless Gilgamesh or similar are present, then its fighting them)- but hes a sucker for waifus

>>52638468
>Vigorous Body
Free STRENGTH? An body that will be passed down through the Armstrong family for generations!

>Powers
Pah! Who needs any powers other than STRENGTH?

>Gear
Twice the ARMS for twice the STRENGTH! That's the secret of the Armstrong family!

>Armour
Skin made of LUCERNIUM is how the Armstrong family produces sparkles that hang in mid-air.

>Training
Every member of the Armstrong family is a master Mechanic and Close-Quarters combatant!

>Companion
Hazel Jones is nearly as STRONG as an Armstrong!

>Adventures
ALL. Heroism is a trait that has been passed down through the Armstrong family for generations!

>>52636247
>Mental Illness
>Poverty
>Ignorance
>Natural Disasters
>Scarcity
>Disability
>Cruelty
>Bigotry
>Crime
>Waste

>>52636480

Was bored, made a Rider.

Wish: Become a Saber
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Archetype: Saber Sakura (Cheerful, Friendly) (Kind, Resolute, Wrathful)
Class: Rider
Gender: Female
Impression: Normal
Physical Appearance: Adult Saber
Ahodge: Lone, Short
Clothing: Formal Gown, Scantily Clad, Heavy Armour

Parameters:
STR: C
END: C/EX
AGI: EX/C
MAG: E
LCK: B
NP: EX

Class Skills:
Riding: B
Independent Action: EX
Presence Concealment: D

Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation: EX
Instinct: B
Eye of the Mind (True): A

Noble Phantasm(s):

First Horse, Leveller of the Steppe (EX+++, Anti-Fortress, 'Equipment'): Rider's mount, the first horse ever to be domesticated. It's charge is powerful enough to flatten the largest of mountains or structures, and it leaves behind nearly perfectly flat featureless steppe in the wake of its charge. The +++ modifier is activated when Rider's mount encounters something that would prevent it from turning the path of its charge into steppe, and amplifies its power so that it may do so.

Hands of the Tamer (A, Anti-Self, Ability): Allows Rider to control and summon the First Horse, as her Riding Skill isn't high enough to allow her to do so by herself. Also allows her to instantly tame any wild animal currently domesticated by humans.

Trails (A, Anti-World, Ability): Rider knows the location of any magical being that steps onto or over the path of flat ground left behind by the charge of the First Horse.

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>>52638436
PDF is full of artifacts, posting the image version.

>>52638596
Well, my own is pretty simple (and boring): I want to keep serving my Master.
It's what I'd wish for if I got a real wish.
Okay not true I'd wish for omnipotence and use that to get the "be the waifu" wish

>>52637890
Regardless of the threads being so shit as to drive people away, I do miss Derelict Station Anon and Highlander posting more frequently.

>>52638377
>>4: Caster Gambler, a full-on reality warper who depends on the most bullshit singular Noble Phantasm imaginable but is otherwise very easy to kill. Winner of the 'working out how to kill this guy is going to hurt' award.
Thanks for the evaluation buddy. The inspiration for my build was that I won $1000 from a local raffle last night, and in a fit of drunken revelry I decided to make a build for the Seibah CYOA since everyone was doing it. Thank God I don't feel hangovers.

>>52638596
>so - what do you think each servants wish is?
I haven't really thought about what my servant's wish would be, what does a man who can bullshit his way through everything even want? Probably leave the wishing to someone else.

The most important question is: how do we decide who wins, dice?

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>>52638671

>>52636247
>Bigotry
>Obesity
>Mental Illness
>Disability
>Human Death
>Pollution
>Cultural Bias
>Waste
>Crime
>Uncreativity

Not quite a utopia, but populated by the kind of people who could make one.

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>>52638685

>>52638377
I really appreciate you writing this. It's fun to see how others view your build.

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>>52638708

>>52638377
>implying any of these could beat some of the sabers before

someone made a Rider who literally flooded the world with water

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>>52638724

>>52638670
>END: C/EX
>AGI: EX/C

im confused -how do you manage a 3 tier swing ? or is it a uncertainstat?

>>52638728
you mean Moses? a proto saber beats proto Gilgamesh who has the same ability - and not all servants would die to it anyways

>>52638752

It starts at B, they go up 2 (to EX) or down 1 (to C) depending on whether it's heavy armour or skimpy outfit.

>>52638718
seconded, doing gods work

>>52638682
>how do we decide who wins?

well first it would need to be a war, and then masters and such - so we cant and it would ruin the point if we could. we dont even have the servanst for a war anyways

>>52638773
it was noah i think, after the whole 40 days of rain thing

>>52638793
oh - im a idiot

>>52638804
>noah
thats the one - im not a clever man

>>52638671
Do we have to be the Pilot? I'd rather sit at a command chair ordering people.

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>>52638671

Switched weapons around a bit to be more balanced.

Cpt. Shalik Prassan
Ship: The Raven

>Choose Your Own Adventure

Skills
>Basic Piloting
>Standard Piloting
>Advanced Piloting
>Ship Gunnery
>Standard Combat Training
>Diplomacy

Ship
>Wolf 30m
>Rom v22.4
>Antimatter Core
>Aegis Shielding 60m
>Columbus BTR37 62m
>Nano Armour Coating 66m
>Hull Repair Drone 69
>Drop Ship 75m
>Salvage Harvester 78m
>Comm Scrambler 90m

Rooms
>Captain's Quarters 95
>Basic Infirmary 96
>Advanced Evacuation 105
>Standard Mess Hall 107
>Cargo Space/Engineering Bay 110
>Arsenal 114
>Holding Cells 115
>Hypercomms Room 117

Weapons
>Missile Pod x2 (on drop ship) 122
>Light Laser Cannon x5 (point defense) 128
>Flak Cannon x8 (broadside) 145
>Tachyon Laser Cannon 1 (spinal) 155
>Ragefire Rail Gun 1 (spinal) 167

Contracts
>And the Fire Grows T4 151
>Heat T2 126
>Escalation T2 8
>Search and Rescue T4 -20
>Rogue Drones T3 -38
>The Twin Fangs T2 -50
>All Aboard T1 -58

Crew
>Lux -44
>Trisha Lim -41
>Lyra Miralda -34
>Amanda Lynch -28
>Styx -10
>Arachne -4
>Lauren Lazuli -4
>Patricia Cooper -2
>Medics x10 (if people get hurt) -1.5
>Engineers x10 (if ship needs work) -1
>Mercenaries x20 (run things) 0

Be mercenary Pilot and mostly work escorting ships to protect them from bandits and stuff. Have adventures along the way and hopefully make money.

>>52638773
Everyone should be able to kick Gil's ass. He's a fucking Gary Stu and I hate him

Arcueid and prime Zelretch would definitely kick his teeth in.

>>52638826
Nah, you can hire Pilots, so nothing says you have to be one if you don't mind spending.

>>52638377

Before I begin, I'll say that I've made some adjustments so that everyone is technically under a different class, just so they can be distinguished more easily. I'll also give everyone a Wish here-sorry if anyone dislikes what I've allocated to their Servant, if you say and it's not too late for me to change, I will do so.

1: Lancer: An Artificial Heroic Spirit created by the Einzberns as a representation of humanity's potential to surpass the Age of Gods. Requires insane mana to sustain him, so he's bound to a Homunculus. Goddamnit, Einzberns. Wishes to join the Throne of Heroes, so that he can prove himself the equal of the 'natural Heroes', if not the superior.

2: Assassin: A nameless member of the Hassan-i-Sabbah who had a habit of getting too emotionally attached to her handlers and marks despite her immense skill. Bound to a young rogue member of the same assassin cult who trained Kuzuki. She hasn't fully come to grips with her wish, but it's to live a proper life with someone she can love (spoilers: Her Master.)

3: Saver, a failed attempt to create a Ruler who could oversee the Grail war. Bound to the young son of this War's deceased Supervisor. As Ahura, her only wish is to ensure that the Grail isn't polluted. If her human aspect has a separate wish, she isn't aware of it yet.

4: Archer, the Heroic Spirit of a forgotten fortune deity from ancient times. As always with Archers, doesn't know what a bow is. Instead fights more like a stunningly lucky Caster, firing enchanted Tarot Cards that can create a number of incredibly powerful effects. Was summoned accidentally by a weak orphaned Magus girl, and in a fit of drunken generosity promised to win her the war. He trusts in fortune to provide all he desires, and thus wishes only that the girl gets a happy ending.

>>52638839
Iirc, word of god is that Arcueid would lose, not because he's less powerful but because his GoB is a hard counter to her own abilities.
I doubt Zelretch would need to be in his prime though, especially considering what a dumbass Gil is.

>>52638373
We Touhou now.

>>52638377
>Winner of the 'fuck, nearly none of us have Divinity' Award.
I laughed. Thanks for doing a recap. I agree that Caster Heroine is the best. Really does feel like Nasu.

>>52638497
Looks like romance is your big weakness then. Beware of the seductress Assassins out there...

>>52638596
Wish? Well, I'd wish for martyrdom to not be a thing. Headcanon - after the first priestess' death, people deemed her a martyr and thus religious extremism was born.

>>52638739
And now my (tentative) build.

CYOA (3m off ships)

Skills: Basic Piloting, Standard Piloting, Advanced Piloting, Mercantile, Standard Combat Training, Mechanics, Nuclear

Titles: The Space Cowboy (+200), The Guardian (+240)

Venture
AI: Winston v9.0.4
Power: Nuclear Fission x2
Shields: Advanced Shielding
Ship Mods: "Columbus" BTR37, Paint Job (because I can)
Hull Mods: Hangar Bay
Ship Weapons:
Broadside: Auto Cannon x4, Missile Pod x2
Point Defense: Flak Cannon x2, Light Laser Cannon x2
Spinal: Heavy Laser Cannon
Salvage Harvester
Tractor Beam
Rooms: Standard Infirmary, Lounge+Observatory, Engineering Bay+Cargo Space, Cargo Space x2, Safe Room, Teleporting Platform, Hypercomms Room, Crew Quarters Upgrade


PI V17
AI: Lai'na vERR.ERR.ERR
Power: Capacitors x2
Shielding: Advanced Shielding
Command Mods: Herald "Blink"
Hull Mods: Overdrive Afterburner x5, Nano Armor Coating, Broadside Upgrade
Ship Weapons
Broadside: Missile Pod x4, Light Particle Blaster x2
Point Defense: Light Laser Cannon x4
Spinal: Mana Blaster x2, Torpedo Silo
Drones:
(on the Venture)
Scout Drone x4 (all with Light Laser Cannon)
Hull Repair Drone x1
(on the PI V17)
Scout Drone x2 (Light Laser)
Combat Drone x1 (Heavy Laser Cannon)
Shield Drone x1

Crew:
"Hailey" (pilots the PI V17)
Trisha "Props" Lim
Bethany Parks
Owen Baker
Sasha Baker
Faith Nichols

>>52638883
Word of god stated Arcueid under 30% would lose. Anything above that is fair game.

Zelretch is a fucking monster vampire wizard who punched out the moon.

>>52638902

280 remaining. No idea what the fuck to spend it on. I could buy another ship, but it just doesn't fit my build, not thematically. I don't have any need for more crew members, nor do I really want them. The whole idea is "tight-knit crew on wacky space adventures." Hailey is deadly as fuck in the fighter docked where we found her (and holy fuck is that thing incredible, can outfly nearly anything and shoot the hell out of it too), Trish and I grew up together on the same junkyard planet until we could get the Rustbucket (the Venture) flying right, Owen and Sasha we picked up looking for work when we were looking for crew, and we hired on Faith the first time Owen got into a bar fight and we needed someone to set his arm.

>>52638839
of the builds posted - he could wreck the priestess, the magezerker and maybe hassan il mashu - definite loss to my lancer (i can disable GoB and Ea and Enkidu cant hurt me) the dumb luck build probably goes even with him , and the saver is disadvantaged but EX magic is dumb as balls

>>52638862
i like the spirit of the change - lacks the big game hunter aspect i was going for tho, could you somehow include that maybe? pretty please.

on the plus side all einzbern waifus are top tier- just below medea, worth protecting/10

you are doing good work anon

>>52638891
>spoiler
Yeah...
That is probably the easiest way to defeat me: Death through heartbreak. >>52638862
These are really really good and I am very happy with your write up for me.

>>52638468
Taking all the Adventures on this one so that is an extra 70 points, 2 companions and a free training
>Body
Vigorous Body
>Special Powers
Strength [free]
Genius
Atomic Heart
Multi-wavelength Vision
Anti-gravity Flight
>Gear
Radio
Toolbox
>Armour
Lucernium
>Training
Mechanic [free]
Close Quarters
Marksman
Diplomatic
>Companions
Adam King
Jetpack Man
Vertex

Got any CYOA's about being a zombie?

>>52639023
Who wants to be a zombie?

You can't get boners.

>>52638930

Maybe you could get more harvester things so you can mine asteroids and stuff and not just salvage.

Hey SDA if you're around could you tell me how powerful this ship build is? Its kind of expensive so I'm thinking of cutting some stuff depending on how it stacks up against other ships

Class- Destroyer
PI Vd3
Lai'na v15.3.2
Nuclear Fusion
Nuclear Fusion
Advanced Shielding
"Columbus" BTR37
Point-Defense Upgrade X 3
Broadside Upgrade X 3
Overdrive Afterburner X 3
Vehicle Bay X 4
Hanger Bay X 4
Nano Armour Coating
Active Cloaking
Teleport Jammer
Shield Extender
Hull Extension

Weapons
Spinal-
Ragefire Rail Gun X 2
Tesla Overcharger

Broadside-
Missile Launcher X 2
Heavy Laser Cannon X 10
Heavy Particle Blaster X 8

Point Defense-
Flak Cannon X 4
Light Laser Cannon X 4
Missile Pod X2
Auto Cannon X 2

Equipment
Salvage Harvester
Tractor Beam
Composition Scanner
Honey Pot
Warp Jammer
Comm Scrambler
MITM Module

Rooms and Compartments
Crew Quarters Upgrade
Officer's Quarters
Captain's Quarters
Advanced Infirmary
Advanced Evacuation
Fancy Mess Hall
Tavern
Lounge
Recreation Room
Observatory
Laboratory
Cargo Space
Engineering Bay
Cargo Space
Hypercomms Room
Digital Security Room
Advanced Arsenal
Training Room
Teleporting Platform
Meat Fridge
Aquaculture Room
Hydroponic Garden
Secure Vault
Upgraded Ship Security

Hanger
Drop Ship
Submarine
Hull Repair Drone
Combat Repair Drone
Combat Repair Drone
Scout Drone
Science Drone
Lasso Drone
Beacon Drone
APC
Twin Talons

>>52639041
If I wanted that, I'd be asking for skeleton CYOA's.

>>52638377
>>52638862

5: Berserker, a corrupted rendition of the witch Circe. Possesses a unique Mad Enhancement that channels her madness into insane irrationality and fits of paranoia rather than inability to think, thus she remains capable of spellcasting. Her master is a member of a Matou branch family who is far far away from the sight of the war, planning to let his Servant destroy everything and then swoop in to collect the Grail. Her wish changes with every passing second due to her insanity having corroded even her base nature-it is extremely likely that a victory for Berserker would bring ruin to the world.

6: 'Rider': A mysterious observer who seems to regard the entire war with a detached air. Not as edgy as one would expect-in fact, he's extremely friendly and very charismatic. Not at all forthcoming with information about himself and skilled at redirecting the conversation. Approached each of the Masters before the War truly began and had a conversation with them about their lives. Claims that his wish is being fulfilled by the war itself.

7: Caster: Ancient even by the standards of Heroic Spirits, the Ur-Priestess hails from the earliest stages of the Age of Gods. Her master is a middle-eastern mercenary magus who once worked with a rather contentious group for ideological reasons before fleeing that life, hired by the Tohsakas to destroy the Grail. He and his Servant have little intention of that. Her wish is to erase the concept of martyrdom, whilst his own is to reach the Root to address his own ideological crisis of faith.

Now the scene is set, I can begin.

I've decided to rid the world with the following colored buttons I pressed

mental illness
language barriers
homelessness
natural disasters
overpopulation
disability
terrorism
climate change
crime
waste

>>52639120
>climate change
>natural disasters

But then the world will stagnate, trapped in this climate forever. You've doomed the world to not evolve or change in any way

>>52638965
Sure, I was definitely planning to reflect the whole 'wanting to prove himself an equal of the other Servants' by having him really focus on taking out the Servants that even everyone else is scared of.

>>52638862
>>52639118
>4: Archer, the Heroic Spirit of a forgotten fortune deity from ancient times. As always with Archers, doesn't know what a bow is. Instead fights more like a stunningly lucky Caster, firing enchanted Tarot Cards that can create a number of incredibly powerful effects. Was summoned accidentally by a weak orphaned Magus girl, and in a fit of drunken generosity promised to win her the war. He trusts in fortune to provide all he desires, and thus wishes only that the girl gets a happy ending.
Damn son, you've got a way with words. I love it, 10/10 Grail War would Grail Again.
My Master a best.

>>52639082
Skeletons don't have penises. They can't get boners.

>>52636223
>jewish
>muslim
world peace at last

>>52638183
>Wiping out anyone over the age of 50 will make the world a much better place.

That would actually make everything worse. The point at which one is considered old is also debateable.

>>52639152
It's unfair how good your Master is. How can you not want to win for her?

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Well I've been working on organizing my Sisters of Battle army. Still not 100% sure about which order. I got one vote for Martyred Lady cuz of nice colour scheme.

Didn't realize 40k armies were so hard to figure out. Points are tough since I keep making list that one or two over. And I bought a fairly expensive Repressor kit since they seem to be out of production and I thought I might want one. but now it's looking like I most likely won't use it since it just doesn't synergize with my other choices:(

>>52639210
Old people are awesome.

Except for politicians.

>>52636416
Way to create an evolutionary bottleneck.
Probably this will fuck the human race over.

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>>52638930
>280 remaining. No idea what the fuck to spend it on.
I know this problem well.

>>52638671
Still haven't made it to the station, but I retroactively changed my Basic Infirmary to an Advanced Infirmary so that I could put the Twin Fangs in on my way there. I can justify this as being leftover from when the Azrael was on active duty.

“Mother”
Test case #546, The Fate Breaker, The Demi-god

>Starting Credits 960m
>Origin
CYOA

Skills
Basic Piloting
Standard Piloting
Advanced Piloting
Medical
Mechanics
Nuclear
Computer Science 958m
Mind-Link 956m
Cyber Security 954m
Ship Gunnery 952
Ship Weapon Specialization (Blaster) 950
Combat Training 948
Advanced Combat Training 946
Industry 944
Diplomacy 942
Mercantile 940

>Current Ship Stats
>Ship Hull
Azrael 593m
>AI
Lai’na vERROR.ERROR.ERROR
>Spinal Mounts 6
>Broadside Mounts 44
8 Mana Blasters 559m
1 Railgun 553m
>Point-Defense Mounts 12
4 Light Particle Blasters 548m
6 Light Laser Cannons 541m
2 Missile Pods 536m
>Hangar Space 18
4 Combat Repair Drones 524m
Drop Ship 518m
-Missile Pods (Free)
Sinner, Yokai Fighter
Dexter, Yokai Fighter
>Navigation 0/25
>Hull Armor 33/25
>Shield Strength 25/25
Mana Shielding 478m
>Length 7km
>Max Crew 5,400
2,700 Androids 342m
Comet
Jack Fang
Jill Fang
>Extra-Rooms 28
Officer’s Quarters 340m
Advanced Infirmary 328m
Evacuation Room 327m
Gravity Control Room 325m
Lounge (Free)
Laboratory 324m
A lot of Cargo Space (Free)
Engineering Bay 321m
-Cargo Space (Free)
Hyper-comms 319m
-Digital Security Room 315m
Teleporting Platform 310m
Upgraded Ship Security 302m
>Energy Use 7
Duel Mana Cores 197m
>Twin Fangs T4 223m

And some other stuff.
https://pastebin.com/ZfqRWZd9

>>52639118
>Her master is a member of a Matou branch
so glad i get to kill a matou

>>52639265
And because I have a problem, I did these.

Jack and Jill, The Twin Fangs

>Origin
Talon

>Skills
Basic Piloting
Standard Piloting
Advanced Piloting
Ship Gunnery
Standard Combat Training
Mercantile

>Sinner, 100 million
>Yokai Hull 12m
>Blueberry v7.3.2
>Spinal Mounts 4
Auto-Cannon 15m
Rail Gun 21m
2 Torpedo Silos 37m
>Broadside Mounts 6
4 Missile Pods 46m
2 Machine Guns 49m
>Point Defense Mounts 3
2 Light Laser Cannons 52m
Flack Cannon 55m
>Hangar Space 0
>Navigation 22/25
>Hull Armor 3/25
>Shield Strength 14/25
Advanced Shielding 67m
>Length 23 meters
>Max Crew 1
Jack Fang
>Extra Rooms 0
>Energy Use 4/7
Solar Panels 69m
Dual Power Capacitors 87m
>Misc
Active Cloaking 93m
Shield Extender 97m
Overdrive Afterburner 100m


>Dexter, 100 million
>Yokai Hull 12m
>Lai'na v15.3.2
>Spinal Mounts 4
Machine Gun 14m
Missile Launcher 22m
2 Tesla Overchargers 38m
>Broadside Mounts 6
4 Missile Pods 47m
2 Machine Guns 49m
>Point Defense Mounts 3
2 Light Laser Cannons 52m
Flack Cannon 55m
>Hangar Space 0
>Navigation 22/25
>Hull Armor 3/25
>Shield Strength 14/25
Advanced Shielding 67m
>Length 23 meters
>Max Crew 1
Jill Fang
>Extra Rooms 0
>Energy Use 4/7
Solar Panels 69m
Dual Power Capacitors 87m
>Misc
MI520 "Visage" 93m
Shield Extender 97m
Overdrive Afterburner 100m

>>52639118

Guess I got my Rider up too late to be part of this then. Oh well.

>>52635947
If you don't pick Technocracy you're scum.

>>52635999
Nice Nines 'non

>>52639175
I think you mean

>Muslim
>black

>>52635947
Democracy all the way

>>52639382
>/pol/
>not targeting the Jews first

Am I misunderstanding the memes here?

>>52639412
I was being serious. I'm aware of the memes, I just choose to ignore them.

>>52639402
That's probably the best one, but I'm a sucker for the easy life that Fascism or Monarchy would give.

>>52635947
>tfw only one who wants to pick Monarchy

>>52639358
Knowledge is not the same as action, anon. You don't have what it takes to pull it off and you know it. No one here does, or we would be out there doing it instead of being here.

>>52639118
Again thank you so much!
I'm having fun imagining myself as the Servant like in the first scene where Rin summons Archer.

>>52639118
>>52638862

i hope Gilgamesh shows up

>>52638838
>Flak cannon broadsides
I think you are better off with the old loadout. Flaks are most optimal for point-defense mounts, and I didn't notice that you had those on your spinal mounts previously. You want your hardest hitting weapons on the spinal mounts.

I really think that just going with the Triglav or Herald command mods was good enough to address your previous issues.

>>52638930
I really like this build if you're going in that direction.

Also, nobody ever says you have to spend 100% of your budget. Money is money, so what's the harm in having deeper pockets to begin with?

That said, maybe you could have a backup ship or a mule ship with a skeleton crew to haul all your loot back to your hangar.

>>52639049
As a destroyer, it sounds pretty solid. Those broadsides and spinals are something I'd load and point defense is adequately layered.

Any reason why you're going with the Beatrice command mod? Your build looks like it's more combat-centric and I'd imagine a more combat-centric mod would be more suitable. Not to say that the Beatrice mod isn't good, but it's more suited for those who want to avoid combat to begin with.

>>52639265
>>52639295
>Jack and Jill, The Twin Fangs
I like it.

>>52638377
>>52638862
>>52639118

I thought it might be a good idea to namefag for this, will stop if people disagree.

Beginnings

Our Sixth Grail War begins with only the best of intentions, as much as any battle to the death can. The old Magus families have continued their pursuit of their dream, recreating the Grail whilst attempting to patch out the traditional issues with the system by incarnating Angra Mainyu's counterpart into the new Grail directly.

Things begin to deteriorate almost immediately, as the Grail is invoked. The invocation coincides with a huge explosion that rocks the church, and once the smoke clears everything has changed.The Divine Spirit Ahura wasn't summoned as an overseer of the Grail but instead as a Servant under the Saver class. The Church's supervisor was slain in the explosion. The Supervisor's son, a teenage Executor-in-training, finds Saver's Command Seals etched on the back of his hand. At a loss following the death of his emotionally distant father, he takes up the mantle of Church Supervisor unofficially and agrees to oversee the Grail War alongside Saver for the protection of all, maintaining neutrality except in the event of world-threatening dangers.

Assassin and Archer, along with their masters, are the only Masters to visit the Church following these events. The others are all well aware of how the Grail War functions and have no desire to make their identities clear to anyone spying on the Church. Assassin has her master wear a disguise for his own safety in an adorable bit of slice-of-life. Archer just strides confidently in besides his Master, and it just so happens that the sun is shining brightly enough to conveniently blind any spying apparatuses set up around the Church.

The two Masters are both socially awkward and young, a recipe for getting along. Archer and Assassin get jealous. The Supervisor introduces them to the basic tenets of the War and offers them sanctuary if they surrender. Both refuse.

>>52639445
i just thought the girl was cutest - if she wasnt i might have ended up picking one of the more selfish choices

age 4 years younger than me
background above middle class and daddy big arms

personality kind, helpful, thoughtful and flirty
intelligence and knowledge gotten here share of straight A's
hobby chess
height 20 centimeters shorter than me

skin light
eyes brown
hair blonde
build chubby
breasts C cup
distinctive features crazy hair style
special features frigid
weird features $€#¥@% overdrive
enchanted a vampire with a demonic allure

missmuffintop.deviantart.com/art/Sweet-Sanguinarian-Sapphism-Penny-Dreadful-552846866

>>52639502
Something that might be nice (if you ever do a version 3 update) is upgrades you can buy that allow your AI to do more, like giving it firmware upgrades with profiles that have skill ratings at various jobs, so your "skeleton crew" mule ship wouldn't need a mule at all; your AI would just remotely pilot it.

>>52639445
Oh. You and I have an unfortunate conflict of interest, then. Still, I'm pretty sure you're not Satan.

>>52636223
Honestly, though, my safest bet here is getting rid of Evil and Greedy. If I hit "fat" who knows how many would-be Santas I'm killing off. If I hit "dumb," far too many well-meaning dopes perish. And I'd rather not find out how many of my friends browse /b/ without my knowledge by finding out they died.

Evil takes care of the problems with most ideologies, anyway, and Greedy should delete the rest.

>>52639545
I think he explicitly said that 2.1.1 was the final version.

>>52639563
I like to think I'm not Satan. If "nigger" were an ideology I could delete without killing all the black people who aren't fucking dumbasses, I'd pick it, but I work with what I have.

>>52639584
He mentioned the extremely remote possibility of a v.3, which is enough for me to bring it up now and then.

>>52639522
>Assassin has her master wear a disguise for his own safety in an adorable bit of slice-of-life.
Cute
>The two Masters are both socially awkward and young, a recipe for getting along.
Cute!
>Archer and Assassin get jealous
Cue heartache. Ouch.

But this is off to a great start! I don't want to go to sleep.
I'm hoping to work together with Archer. Her Master is adorable but I would like to know what her wish is. It would make me feel safer.

>>52639502
>Not to say that the Beatrice mod isn't good, but it's more suited for those who want to avoid combat to begin with.
Enemy that has hard time locking his weapons on you will have hard time killing you especially in chaotic fight

>>52639627
kawai

- which one is the protagonist? place your bets

>>52639502

I see. I'll try new module next time. Might have to rearrange something a bit to afford it, but should be doable.

>>52639685
Archer is.
Come on, he gets summoned by a starving, about-to-die orphan girl that summons him by accident and he promises to win for him.
He's already a sympathetic hero and she deserves to win.

>>52636247
I just pick "everyone else" and enjoy my new world.

Goodbye guys.

>>52639750
assasin is archer or medea then?

my lancer is going to be the designated jobber i guess

THE NASUFAGGOTS NEED TO LEAVE

>>52639775
are we really that much worse than stardust?

>>52639775
What would be left behind if they weren't here? They are life in an otherwise dead thread.

And they're being cute.

>>52639522

Whilst the most inexperienced members of the War were meeting at the Church ruins, our more savvy Masters were busy running their own individual adventures.

Lancer and his Master immediately hit it off very well-both are artificial existences designed solely for the purpose of winning this war for the Einzberns, although their feelings concerning this fate differ. Lancer is more stoic about it, accepting it as his duty and deciding that if he has to fight, he's going to damn well win. His Master, a homunculus with full autonomy like Ilya, is much more uncertain about whether what they're doing is right. Whilst they get on well, Lancer is a difficult Servant for his Master to control and counsels far more brash and direct measures than she's comfortable with.

Caster and her own Master are really, really not getting along due to the Master's past being representative of everything that Caster hates. Even so, they're able to put their differences somewhat aside without wasting any Command Seals-whilst Caster remains deeply disapproving of the mercenary's past, she at least acknowledges how torn he is now and doesn't consider their wishes incompatible.

Unfortunately, it quickly becomes clear that further opportunities to bond won't happen immediately. Earthquakes begin to shake the city as the Matou Master loses control of Berserker and she, predictably, begins to wreak unholy havoc on the city, calling down destruction of unholy proportions seeming indiscriminately. The Sixth Grail War has well and truly begun.

>>52639545
>>52639584
>>52639606
>if you ever do a version 3 update
Hah. I'll get to it if these threads get 5% less autistic by mid-2018.

On a serious note, if I were to ever do a version 3, I'd go all out and make it a standalone, exclusively fleet-based thing where you're given a much larger budget to make an armada. I would follow through with my original plan to have an entire page dedicated to ship weaponry and whatnot and make the entire CYOA pretty much focus entirely on ship building.

Essentially, it'd be more of an "extension" or continuation of the original CYOA, like a DLC. A real shit-hits-the-fan type of thing.

>>52639642
I would still say that the module really only effects the beginning of a fight, so it'd be better for small engagements than the combat-centric mods. Warping in and blowing up your enemy before they can do anything to you, for example.

As for prolonged, chaotic fights, it'd be much safer to have the Fed mod for damage mitigation or the Red Dagger or Herald mod for positioning advantage, for example.

>>52639808
That would suit "Mothership, Motherfucker" very well. My single, mighty, Heraldic Dreadnought at the center/front of a pirate fleet consisting of ships of every faction, surging into the Federation v. Independent war to topple that massive, bloated regime once and for all.

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>>52639805
>i get an illya to protect

only going to make my inevitable death worse

>>52636480
create a saber
good
saber sakura - cheerful, friendly, kind, cool, and mischievous
assassin

>physical features
male saber
normal
mature saber - mid-to-late 40's
ahoge-less

>clothing
casual, light armor, ceremonial

>parameters
STR - C
END - D
AGI - D
MAG - E
LCK - EX
NP - E

>Class Skills
Independent action - C
Riding - C
Presence Concealment - B

>Personal Skills
Charisma - C
Instinct - D
Clairvoyance - D
Information Erasure - C
Divinity - D

>Noble Phantasm
Plot Armor
E rank
Ability
Any action performed within the world will be nudged ever so slightly to benefit him.

I'm not too sure how to go about this, balance wise. I want EX class luck, but luck itself is ridiculously broken. I figure if I gimp everything but luck, and pump luck slightly further with the plot armor noble phantasm, then maybe it will work out. Or not. It looks like it's a not. Fuck it, I had fun. No regrets.

>>52639763
I would rather be Archer I think?
A noble death protecting my Master like in the Stay Night route is almost as good as winning and getting my wish.

>>52639871
him fighting some of the angrier strong servants would be hilarious

>>52639889
true, but medea also does that - albeit to lesser effect (gilgamesh hurts yo)

>>52639906
Oh shoot that's right!
Man, I think I accidentally ripped off Medea. Well, I would still much prefer if my Master could survive. That's my purpose you know - to serve my Master and keep them safe.

>>52639502
>Any reason why you're going with the Beatrice command mod? Your build looks like it's more combat-centric and I'd imagine a more combat-centric mod would be more suitable. Not to say that the Beatrice mod isn't good, but it's more suited for those who want to avoid combat to begin with.

Well my build is based around searching for Herald artifacts so I thought that model would be good for any voyages to uncharted space plus it would allow me to more easily cut and run if things get too dicey with other artifact hunters. But I had thought about taking the syndicate mod instead.

By the way I forgot to mention but I'm taking the Beserker title as well.

>>52639805

Reactions to this are pretty split. A rift between our cute teenage couple immediately forms as Archer's orphan Master makes it clear that she wants to stop whatever's terrorising the city. Archer, entirely convinced of his own infinite luck, is cool with this. Assassin and her Master are much more wary, as their assassin outlooks are not at all comfortable with the prospect of standing against an unknown threat. As a result, the two Master-Servant pairs split temporarily, although both make it clear that they want to stay allies. Assassin's group goes to lie low whilst Archer finds a safe spot for his Master and strolls into the battlefield.

Caster's group has no interest at all in showing their hand so early, and continue setting up Caster's territory. Lancer ignores the pleas of his Master and heads off to take a look at this bold Servant who's making a play so early in the game.

Archer arrives on the scene first and immediately engages with Berserker. The raging Circe proves to be an absolute nightmare to fight, her EX-Rank magic and EX High-Speed Casting making her practically impossible to tag whilst her absolute immunity to Magecraft means that Archer is forced relatively quickly into a defensive stance. Even so, whilst Berserker is dominating the battle, Archer's godly luck means that she can't land a genuine hit so far. It would be a stalemate, if not for the immense loss of civilian life caused by the general mayhem Caster is unleashing.

This unpleasant deadlock is broken by the arrival of Lancer and an armored figure of indeterminate identity wielding a holy blade-unbeknownst to the others, this is the Grail War Supervisor wielding Verethragna to pose as a Saber belonging to an unknown Master. 'Saber' joins Archer in his battle against Berserker. Lancer hangs back at first-not to be tactical, but because he wants to see what the best fight he can get out of this is and so he's considering joining Berserker to even the odds.

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>>52639981
well, if you had to draw inspiration from somewhere - best girl is a good place

>>52637298
Ditto in the vampire one you could take care of your weakness to some extent and have a bit leftover for cool stuff, this one is just bad in one way or another.

>>52636223
Muslim. Twice.

I fucking hate Muslims.

>>52639798
>And they're being cute

Weebs aren't cute, go fuck yourself.

>>52638724
by the "can combine with x" does that mean that they don't take extra room slots? Like if I take a Rec Room and a Lounge, is that 2 rooms or 1.

>>52636223
greedy and socialist

this will either fix the world or destroy it. Beat that

>>52640091
Didn't call them cute. Said they were being cute. Making a cute story. I don't know the source material, but the story they're weaving is pretty self-explanatory, so I don't care.

>>52640094
Yes; 1.

>>52639988
In that case, I'd definitely stick with the Beatrice mod.

>>52640094
>they don't take extra room slots
Yup.

>>52640002

Lancer quickly changes his mind about this when he realises that 'Saber' doesn't stand a chance against Berserker and that Archer is deadlocked. He jumps into the battle quickly after a brief monologue introducing himself to the 'True Servants' and challenging them to prove that their origins make them any more significant than he is. This speech is admittedly a bit misplaced, since only Circe is really well known and 'Saber' isn't even a real Heroic Spirit, but it still leaves an impression.

Lancer quickly proves that he lives up to his boasts, going on an brutal offensive. He doesn't use any Noble Phantasms, but except for that he shows off every trick in his limited repertoire. Archer is impressed but not really moved in any way, but 'Saber' as a mere human is reminded of the gap between himself and a genuine Heroic Spirit in skill, even if he technically has been bestowed with the pure power of a Spirit.

Lancer has Berserker on the ropes pretty quick, even severing one of her arms, but is taken by surprise by one of her sudden mood swings from rage to cowardice, getting caught in an explosion as she flees. The carnage actually causes him to lose a life, but nobody notices. Archer slips away in the chaos, but 'Saber' isn't so lucky. Lancer, barely injured by the battle, confronts him and chastises him for getting manhandled by Berserker despite being a Class said to have high success rates in the war and good magic resistance. Lancer almost kills him there and then, but decides that he wants to see how powerful Saber's Noble Phantasm is and settles for just knocking him around a bit more, then leaving. The first skirmish of the war is over. Berserker has established herself as a monster with no regard for the life of civilians, Lancer has proven his power to the other Masters and everyone has dismissed 'Saber' as a large-scale threat for now. Nobody is quite sure where to place Archer, who achieved little but simultaneously left totally unscathed.

>>52640127
>>52640129
Neat, thanks. That will be a large boon to my current ship.

>>52639906
>him fighting some of the angrier strong servants would be hilarious
Glad I'm not the only one that got a laugh out of the thought. Keep on keeping on.

Yo, I don't mind you guys discussing grail war stuff here, or talking about builds. But the thing GrailAnon is going is getting dangerously close to a quest.

>>52640192
Does it count as a Quest if there's no input from other users beyond making the initial Servants? I was thinking of it as a really long response to the original CYOA.

>>52640192
should it be moved? would /qst/ mind?

>>52636223
>Muslim
>Black

The world is a better place. The 1% left can be caged or thrown into some gladiatorial arena.

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>>52636223

>>52638189
> Ragefire Railgun
Ragefire railguns are really bad for tier 3 weapons. They're not really any better than their tier 2 counterparts, and are more expensive.

>>52640002
It's probably rude of me to try to decide your story but I would really like a little blurb saying something like Assassin likes to not use Presence Concealment because it makes her feel like a normal person

My brain is busy imagining some slice of life events where we go to school (under the guise that if I don't use Presence Concealment as an Assassin everyone will assume I have an amazing ace up my sleeve - but really I just want to pretend to forget this is a game of life and death and I'm literally a tool to be used to win), and I stick close to my Master to be able to protect them at a moments notice.

Or ignore this, my hopeless romantic is bleeding through

>>52640192
>>52640208
I'm enjoying the shit out of it, especially since the alternative is just /pol/ discussion or the usual whining autism over avatar posting.

A CYOA where you kill monster girls for their powers

>>52640244
I'm trying to avoid doing little fluff pieces like that too often so that people can fill in the gaps. I figure the more descriptive I am with what people do, the more chance I go against what people envisioned when they made their Servant. This is Nasuverse, so feel free to assume that she goes to school with him when the War isn't raging.

This extends to the other people who submitted Servants, incidentally-I'm trying to keep to the core story to leave everyone free to imagine the stuff that their Servants would do.

>>52640192
Just hide him if you don't like it.

>>52640269
...

..

.......

..

*adds a power vampirism option to MGSI*

>>52640192
It isn't a quest. It's fanfic based on builds. It's no different from what someone would write at the end of their builds.

Look, just be happy this thread has been about cyoas and builds and not something else.

>>52640269
>kill monster girls for their powers
>take down a Dragon Zombie, a Lich, a Phantom, and a Pharaoh
>become Lich King

Naaaah.