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Useful info on creation and collections of cyoas.
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>>52036034
Can you crop images?
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posting again, more criticism is always helpful.
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>>52036194
Threads that happened around the same time as the previous one:
>>52006657
>>52015056
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>>52036163
Doesn't need to be infinite, just enough, and he has an immense amount of fuel compared the amount needed
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>>52036223
What'd you use to make it?
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>>52036249
Google docs, I don't have photoshop or gimp.
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>>52036194
Dex - 10 (25)
Con - 0 (35)
Power - 18 (15)
Chassis - 5 (20)
Integration -18 (0)

The Seer

Weponized

I am become one shot Johnny
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>>52036290
Select image and choose "wrap text", should get the effect I was talking about in the previous thread (text next to image rather than only below it). Or does it somehow not work?
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>>52036384
Huh, thanks anon. Its actually working now. Takes a little effort, though. Let me go fix all of them.
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>>52036194
I really quite like this one. Feels like it could use a lot more meat in the upgrades section, though. Maybe different categories for different body parts, kinda like the Deus Ex upgrade system. At the very least, allowing two Hardware Upgrades would give room for different combinations to be used. Also I recommend making the text boxes the same size and keeping them lined up but that's just to make it prettier, You've done a good job with what I'm assuming is paint.

As it is now it's a bit too narrow for any of my build ideas to really feel complete. Stuff like mixing Organic Machine and Computerized would be really cool.
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>>52036232
The energy needed to exceed Earth's gravity well is sort of a big deal. Your peehole isn't designed to funnel the full force of an explosion into efficient propulsion.
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>>52036510
Not in this context, this scenario has the dude with many orders of magnitude more energy than needed
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>>52036223
Might want to explicitly state in the intro text whether you get to become immortal or not (and if you do, what limits said immortality has by default - i.e. before taking into account any of the actives and passives).
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bump because I like these threads.
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>>52036575
An inefficient and poorly directed conversion means that it isn't enough. The various nuclear detonations weren't enough to blow air out of earth's orbit, much less mass equaling a human body.
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>>52036223
Hestia and Demeter, easiest choice I ever made.
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>>52036660
I like you, anon!
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finished version is supposed to come out today
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>>52036688
>88 dubs
Only one choice.
Heil Bellark!
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>>52036688
>Miss Rollop
If it pays enough to live off of I'll be fine
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Some OC for you~
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>>52036817
Gamer Bro.
I'm not gay, so I gotta git gud
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>>52036817
This will be perfect for that one gay guy on /d/ who was disappointed in Incubus. I'll repost it there.
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text has been wrapped, immortality asserted.
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>>52036817
I immediately swap colleges for one with less homos on the room-sharing list.
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>>52036817
Have you made any non-homo CYOAs?
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Tfw no Tribal Island Pirate CYOA
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>>52036688
I'll stud for Edda, no problem. Glad the CYOA stipulates that the dates will be lovely.
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>>52036685
No it doesn't. Seriously, explain your reasoning. We have at least a million the times energy reqired. Some inefficiency is irrelevant here.
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>>52036817
That trap, mmm....
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>>52036817
I'd choose trap if bjs were a thing, but i'd probably choose Gamer-bro
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>>52036979
I'm going to need a source for that, broski.
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>>52037101
>Typical Fantasy

>Adventure
>Melancholy

>Fellowship
>Weapon
>Love Interest
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>>52037041
>all these people arguing about pissing explosions
>the only reason I even made that CYOA was a particularly troublesome dump and option 1 was thrown in for the lulz
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>>52036939
Demeter and Aphrodite. Plant people both as my garden and for keeping Aphrodite's favor while still being able to NEET it up. Probably also try something like plant-grown replacements for any and all groceries.
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>>52037119
>I'd choose trap if bjs were a thing
They are if you're okay with always being the one getting blown, judging by what's written in the CYOA.
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>>52037214
You've created something with the highest powerlevel I've ever seen. Bravo.
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>>52037101
Custom

Adventure
Melancholy

Transport
Fellowship
McGuffin
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>>52037101
Space Opera
Themes of Adventure and Talent.
Bonuses: Fellowship, Love Interest, Weapon.
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>>52037011
My willpower is pretty much crap already (I guess 3), so I'll just nab the Elixir of Wealth and call it a build.
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>>52037246
That's not what power level means
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>>52037041
>We have at least a million the times energy reqired.
Would be interesting to walk through your reasoning for that.

Anyway, unless you reach an amount of energy per squirt that will push you into space no matter which way you point (including through the earth), then your ability to aim the propulsion and maintain yaw and pitch does in fact affect your ability to leave earth. If anon's body is even a little bit assymetrical, a great deal of the energy will be converted into centripetal (spinning) force.

In other words, a rocket may have enough propulsion energy to escape my back yard, but if it spins in circles or points into the ground and gets stuck, that won't matter.
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>>52036759
Billy, Cobra and Red. A very classy team.
A /pol/ would be Hans, Adam, and Robodoggo or Ika if he is a honorary aryan.
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>>52037515
It's not on the level of reasoning, it's just pointing out facts.

And no, even if the first ten times he slams into the earth, he'll be making a lot more tries than that. Remember, this is a guy that's constantly point blank to an explosion on a megaton level. The acceleration is such that he'd make hundreds of tries in those fifteen seconds or so.
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>>52036223
I would like to send a formal complain....about Zeus Not having his greatest and most unique power of being able to impregnate anything and anyone regardless of biology
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>>52037678
I wanted to do something along those lines but I didn't want to super infringe upon stuff to use for Aphrodite.
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>>52037648
Facts are established through a mixture of empirical perception and reasoning.

I'm pretty sure most human beings wouldn't be able to maintain a steady stream at those accelerations.
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>>52037101
Strange land
Remembrance and adventure
compendium, transport and fellowship
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>>52036223
To what extent is the lesser version of the three aspects in Athena's perk? Can you still travel the universe with the speed part?
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>>52037791
The fact comes from simple delta v anon.

And the entire basis of this discussion depends on us already moving past your second comment. I don't think you're actually putting any effort into this.
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>>52036979

Are you a homophobe?
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>>52037908
Are you a homophone?
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>>52036223
Look at Aphrodite: " Husband to
Hephaestus" Husband>>52037688
But she cant get impregnate like Zues Impregnate thing. The guy impregnation power is legendary. He impregnate a tree, A TREE!
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>Safari-tan is a just an icon of the browser
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Here.
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>>52037865
You're considering interruption of stream "harm"? Seems extreme.

As for the reaction energy, you haven't even specified what sort of antimatter we're using. Normal range starts at something like 800mL and ends at 2000mL. Enough to cause an explosion to rival nuclear if it were reacting all at once, certainly (though it isn't in this case).

"Hundreds of tries" implies that anon is aiming at all, at those speeds.
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>>52037954
Firefox-Tan, no contest.
I feel like a traitor for using chrome now
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>>52037954
Did the original author switch the pictures?
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>>52038000
No, but since no harm can come to him resulting from the pissong, it seems reasonable that interrupting it can't happen either.

It doesn't matter what kind of antimatter it is, all that matters is that at point blank range a megaton level eruption is happening. And no, go calculate it, it definitely does rival proper nuclear weaponry no matter how you turn it, even on a milisecond basis.

And when I said tries I dindn't mean tp imply conscious aiming. It wouldn't be necessary.
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>>52037954
Between Chrome-tan and Opera-tan, with Firefox getting an honourable mention. In the end I guess I'd pick Chrome-tan, seeing as her setup intrigues me more.
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>>52038079
If you're going to be this lazy, there's nothing to discuss.
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>>52038092
I am less lazy than you. At least I gave you firm facts. All you're doing is being vage.
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>>52037860
To an extent, yes. I'll tentatively say going from exceeding light speed to capping out at light speed, with the fastest you can casually go being around ~60% the speed of light.
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>>52036194
>Dex: 1 (34)
>Con: 18 (14)
>Integ: 16 (2)
>Pow: 16 (-10)
>Chas: 0 (0)

>Eyes: The Seer
I don't need burning sight, I am killy enough without it. And the seer lets me shoot down fighter jets.

>Hardware: The Brute
I am an apocalypse that walks like a man. But only walks like a man.
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>>52037954
Somebody really should make one of these for the Console-tans.
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>>52038149
Yeah. If only someboey wanted such a thing. Too bad.
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>>52036884
>>52036979
>A shitton of CYOAs made for straight men/lesbians.
>Complains about one of the few ones not made for their taste instead of just ignoring them.
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>>52038149
>Nintendo-tan: Always trying new things, but she is bad about sticking with things even if she has fun with them
>Playstation-tan: She hit it big in High School, but she has been mostly coasting on her popularity since. Sometimes she is inspired, but she largely just lounges through life
>XBox-tan: She was the Beta Bitch to Playstation's Alpha in High School, and it kind of messed her up. While she is popular herself, she is obsessed with knowing everything about people.
>3DS-tan: Was made fun of a lot, but turned out to be very successful after High School and has done well for herself. She will always lose her pens though
>Gameboy-tan: Kind of a Christmas Cake, but she was the hot bitch during her heyday. Still very fun, and will show you how people used to have fun
>PSP-tan: She killed herself, it took us two years to notice
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>>52038206
Shit I meant >>52036944 instead of >>52036884
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>>52036939
Going with Apollo and Aphrodite

Walk the Earth, heal, slut it up.

That power to inspire Lust in literally anything is going to take some thinking about, though
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>>52038215
Don't forget neogeo and mobile phone-tans!
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>>52038261
>mobile phone-tan

Anon jailbait isn't allowed.
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>>52037101
>Wonderland

>Adventure
>Melancholy

>transport
>McGuffin
>Lucky charm
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>>52038215
>PSP-tan: She killed herself, it took us two years to notice
Kek'd so fucking hard.

This could be a nice start.
Perhaps it would be best as a multiparter generational thing.
So rather than have Gameboy-tan next to 3DS-tan they would be in separate pages/CYOAs along with the other tans of their generation. So GameBoy-tan would be with NES-tan, Master System-Tan, Game Gear-tan, Lynx-tan etc. and none of them would be classified as Christmas cakes.
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>>52036688
Are there any more monstergirl cyoas?
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>>52036939
Ah, I'm so undecided.
Aphrodite is OP and fun, so I'm picking her.

But who will be the other? Apollo or Athena?

I'll pick Apollo. Let's me lead a more chill life.
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>>52038385
Oh sweet summer child...
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>>52038429
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>>52037995
Kung Fu Elvis
NOT Bond (tm)
Shadowrun Hacker bro
Kara

Banker Bastard lieutenant

Use Kara and NOT Bond to get hacker bro any extra access he needs to ruin Banker man. Acquire Cybernetic reward. Watch as cybernetic kung fu Elvis kicks lord infinibitch's ass.
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>>52036939
You know, I have no idea why chrome decided it doesnt want to open pdfs or whatever. At least not from this site. works just fine on firefox.

I'd probably go with Aphrodite and Demeter. I dont really need the laser but the healing sounds good. With Aphrodite it sounds like I can actually propogate life into other planets? Hell, if I become popular (pretty) enough, I could probably convince the public to invest more into terraforming other planets and getting colonies there. The major concern of food can be solved by Demeter's powers as well to make very resistant strains of life that can survive a harsh terraformed planet. To get to the point where I'm that popular I'll probably go the Saint/Engineer route. Help reforestation, create breeds to fast growing trees for building material, make plants that filter pollution super effectively, create super medicines and bio fuels, give food and orchards to areas with low food, etc.
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>>52038221
>>52038206

Must be trying to mask his inner gay
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>>52038206
I wasn't complaining; I was interested in the author's other works.
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>>52038409
The explosive collar means nothing to the immortal
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>>52036223
>>52036939
Soo, I made you a template and then realized that if you've never used PS you'd have issues with even just an image file...So I dumped the pdf into the template and here it is.
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>>52038835
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>>52036884
The Incubus cyoa was really lewd and gay.
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>>52037011
There's way too strong a downside to just about everything here. The best "build" is to take nothing at all.
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>>52038409
>drow loli (2200 left to spend)
I'm adopting her as my daughter. She's cute
>Lamia cook (1800)
Seems like she'd make a great companion, and maybe even waifu
>Orphan twins (1300)
Adopting them as well. They can play together with my drowghter and possibly go on to be legendary adventuring trio
>Elfbro (800)
bromeo, oh bromeo, I love you, no homeo
>Spidergirl (500)
Adorable!...how big is she? Human size? Shoulder ornament? Eh, she's cute no matter what
>bridal gown (spun)
for lamiawaifu, of course
>normal clothesx3 (425)
for my kids. They'll outgrow them so I don't want to spend /too/ much
>Fine clothes (350)
for all the days I'm not getting married
>leather armor (275)
for me. I assume spooder makes her own clothes... if she even wears any at all
>spellbook (175)
would be good for my adopted mage
>Instrument(100)
I have a feeling the elf will make good use of this

Huh... still have 100 left... Guess I'll go back and buy that cat because why not and use the other 50 gold to jumpstart my inn!
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>>52036223
What happens if you lose a god's favor? Do you lose all of the powers? Can you regain their favor?
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guy making servant cyoa, do you want the writing to be more serious, or jokey/slightly meta i.e"we have to get new servants because the sabers are on strike and Gilgamesh is wearing our budget"
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>>52039289
Well, we've already got two serious ones, and posting another one is gonna get all the anti-saberposters throwing fits again, so why not try something a little more lighthearted?
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>>52038835

>>Athena
>>Hephastus
>>Master science
>>Create Iron Man armors light sabers force fields etc for personal protection
>>Prepare to send humanity into
>>Space Opera with the Greek Gods
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>>52037011
Start with 5 (being veeeeery generous)
Binding summon, I'll need a servant to take care of me in my lazy future.
Youth
Elixer of Form
Elixer of Peace
Draught of Rest
Steal Release Will
Equalizer
End with 1 Will, eternal life (without looking 15), damage immunity and a servant to do all the things for me.

still, the costs in this cyoa are a bit high, no? Looking at you, elixer of form.
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>>52039324
That might actually be best possible build.
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>>52038409
-young drow (-300)
-tiefling rouge (-600)
-both orphans (-500)
-lamia cook (-400)
-childhood friend (-250)
-leather armor 2x (-150)
-normal clothes x6 (-155)
-spellbook x1 (-100)

total - 2450

lifepath-tavern owner

dont really enjoy the idea of slavery, but hey maybe i wont have to pay them. lamia cooks, childhood friend can serve , orphans just help out wherever and can learn their respective talents in their spare time, tiefling can help with fighters training or just try and keep other thieves and whatnot out. in jeneral fairly normal, dont intend to abuse them or anything

can the collars be taken off be me?
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>>52039648
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>>52039523
are you me?
>>52039105
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>>52038409
>Cyclops 200
>Young Drow 300
>Goblin 200
>Cat 50
>Magically Gifted Orphan 250
>Martially Gifted Orphan 250
>Naive Spidergirl 300
>Beautiful Elf 500
>Normal Clothes x2 50 (4 pairs from the Spidergirl)
>Fine Clothes x2 150
>Bridal Gown (for me) 100
>Makeup Kit 75
>(75 left for life)
>Lifepath: "Abolitionist"
Trap it up and marry my elf husbando, then raise all our cute monster daughters and cat. Ostensibly becoming an abolitionist because I freed my slaves and make them my family, but because I've got a good head for numbers and chemistry, I can probably make a lot better living doing those kind of occupations rather than running an in or a farm. My husband would be able to help cook and run the home, while my older daughters help care for the younger ones. Especially poor little Cy. She really needs some love. D'zlina will be fine and will grow up to be an upstanding citizen. Gillian the goblin is a little bit up to no good, but she knows who's in charge. The cat is a cat. Elly and Tabitha should be in much better hands now that they're out of that guy's clutches. They'll be good at helping my husband keep the house and the other children. Spinr is so small and doesn't understand what's really going on, poor girl. But she's a good worker and helps make some of the clothes that I can sell on the side to help us keep up our finances.
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>>52039648
this is beautiful

>God of Sublimation
25 blood vessels

>Combat Mode (21)
infinite ammo for times when fists aren't enough

>High Voltage (16)
>Lord of Edges (10)
10,000 volt bear hugs from behind

>Fucking Run (7)
>Get Hard (3)
start running at something, jump, get hard, I am wrecking ball

>ATATATATATATATATATATA (1)
for times when punching is the answer

don't think nerd rage is worth that last vessel
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>>52039648
The God of Sublimation
Become the Little Girl
Everything is Fire
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>>52036817
Would totally the trap. I'd even switch to studying Business and Entrepreneurship so that I can help him open his Flower Shop.
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>>52036817
I ain't gay, but I'd totally room with the trap, s/he seems fun. It'd help me be more outgoing.
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>>52039105
>>52039523
My version is similar to both of these.

Drow, both orphans, lamia, spider. Tavern owner. For equipment see the linked posts.

That leaves me with around 700 gold left. IDK what I would do with it.
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also, saberanon - do you mind if i more or less lift the stat system from yours? its better made than anything i ever could design
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>>52036194
Dexterity 11
Constitution 12
Integration: 18
Power: 12
Chassis: 18

Eyes: Focus
Hardware: Organic Machine

Attribute Mastery: Chassis, Integration

>Codename: "ELECTRIC MESSIAH"
>Purpose: To continue humanity's legacy if Sol is lost
>Application: Subject Zero's genetic makeup will be implanted in as many eligible women as feasible. Subject Zero and its progeny hold the ability to mentally enter computer systems and reconstitute their physical human bodies with organic matter when necessary. Due to this trait, numerous small "star shot" spacecrafts will be covertly launched to random star systems, all holding the minds of numerous newborns and children within an on-board computer containing much of humanity's cultural and technological knowledge. Select children and Subject Zero remain in Sol to continue the fight.
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>>52036979
>>52038705

Yep.
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>>52039648
topkek
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>>52037954
>not posting the updated version
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>>52040303
and they are...?
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>>52036223
>>52038835
I like it.

Demeter + Dionysus

Fuck giving people advanced science before they learn to control it. Science can be used to wage war against their fellow man. Besides, why not just enjoy life directly?

With the x1000 power of Dionysus' Insanity I can do some crazy shit. Why not make a space elevator out of super plant material? Well, after I'm done partying and sober that is... which might be a while.

It'll be great guys. I'll totally grow a bunch of sweet ass fruits and berries all over the globe for people to enjoy. Drugs too. Maybe even make plant houses for people to live in. Nobody has to work if they don't want to, I'll provide all the necessities. Perhaps plant servants can wait on humans hand and foot and take care of all that pesky "work" stuff while we party hard.

(As for suggestions: Hera and Artemis feel weak to me. Ares is kind of super niche - would be cool if we could lead mankind against Greek mythology monsters or something).
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>>52036817
Gonna pick up the Closeted for me. He'll be fun to work together to overcome his closeting. Plus, that should let me teach him how to top properly. He won't have some of the bad habits that the more experienced guys do. Plus defrosting the ice king is always a delicious plot.
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>>52036688
Bellark, not sure whether to project power from the bedroom or set up a full blown prison break. Either way we will not be enslaved.
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>>52037011
I recently graduated from 3 to 4 will, I'm eager to go higher.

>Youth, Release will
>Alcohol, Punishment, Rest, Focus (alchemy)

I have an apprenticeship in my newest greatest passion and a potentially infinite lifetime to refine my craft. The permanent buzz and extra sleep may make keeping up with the workload difficult but with eternal life and 6 will I could be awake one hour a day and still make progress.
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>>52040615
>I like it.
Glad someone does.
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>>52040977
Somehow I don't think being drunk at all times will be very helpful in what is effectively occult magical chemistry. Ten bucks says you're dead within the century.
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>>52041070
I tried to make clear that with infinite life I'm not in a rush to do anything. I handle all reagents, dangerous or not, with extreme care and if possible hire assistants to carry out processes that I've thought up, alcohol can enhance creativity after all.
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Is there any more CYOAs like this one? I want to a monster, not a fucking girl.
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>>52039253
I think it's kinda like a multiplier for your powers that increases with favor gained and decreases with favor lost.
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>>52038835
Intro lacks the immortality assertation.
Demeter's favor text doesn't have the word 'defile' in quotations.
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>>52041234
Demeter's text should have defile unless it wasn't in an earlier pdf, which I may have used as I was working on it before the last one was posted and swapped part way through to that one.

The intro section I removed because he talks about a white room aka the background of the pdf which the image version obviously doesn't have.

So if you don't like it get off your ass and make it yourself to help out the graphically design challenged.
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>>52036817
As a straight man, I pick the trap. Not for sexual, but just because it seems like it will be by far the most interesting experience.
If nothing else, I could help him get his shit together.
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>>52041212
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>>52041294
>Demeter's text should have defile
It has the word, it just isn't formatted the same way as it is in the PDFs (which I remembered as being in quotations, but at least the latest version seems to have it in italics instead).

>The intro section I removed because he talks about a white room aka the background of the pdf which the image version obviously doesn't have.
You seem to be talking about this part...
> Ah, what's that you say? You can only see a vaguely white background? While that isn’t supposed to happen, if I had to guess it’s due to the fact that you’re a mortal, as I once was.
...whereas I was talking about this one.
> In addition, the power of the Gods will make you immortal-you will no longer age, and will regenerate from even a drop of blood.

>So if you don't like it get off your ass and make it yourself to help out the graphically design challenged.
I'm actually fine with the PDF, just pointing out things you seem to have missed while making your version.
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>>52038409
2500
Cyclops Girl (2300)
Young Drow (2000)
Racoon Girl (1900)
Gentle Giant (1100)
Lamia Cook (700)
Childhood Friend (750)
Goblin (550)
Spellbook (450)
8 sets of normal clothes (250)
2 sets of fine clothes (100)
Musical Instrument (25)

Lifepath: Farm.
The change can go to kickstarting the farm. I'm not huge on the whole "slave" thing, so for the most part, we're just gonna kick it on this here farm, never really getting ambitious. Everyone can do something, even the useless raccoon girl can probably find something to do.
No real driving here, we all just get lazy and lounge around until the times change.
Oh, and most everyone is a motherfucking sorcerer, even if we are all crappy sorcerers, so at least we have that.
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>>52038409
I'll just take the Nightmarish Doggirl thanks.

I'll settle down back on my families estate and have lots of puppies together.
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>>52036817

Let's be honest here. Who in their right mind wouldn't pick the Gamer-bro?
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>>52038409
>The Harpy(500)
>Geisha(550)
>Beautiful Elf male(500)
>Elven Scholar(550)
>Cyclops Girl(200)
>Racoon Girl(100)
>Normal Clothes(25)
>Musical instrument(75)
>Farmer
With that group of intellectuals and some children it will be hard to maintain a farm but more than enough to maintain 7 persons. Use the normal clothes to dress the geisha and use her as a merchant, buy more clothes later. Use everyone capable to work to help me in the fields. Home school the children, and see if love blossoms between the elves :3
If a year pass and they want to leave, let them do they want.
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>>52041940
Thinking it better I will pick two complications: Collar Malfunction and Debt.
With the money I will buy the Naive Spidergirl the Goblin. And then 7 more sets of normal clothes. That leaves me with 25g.
The backstory will be that our farmer was the only son of a, now dead, old farmer and his sick wife. He was working as a scribble in the city, but his father was indebted and got sick The scribble tried to help his father, but was inexperienced. When his father died and his mother got sick he decided to take all the money that was left and try his luck in the Taarg, the worst place for a man with a soft heart like him.
He wasted almost all his money in slaves, clothes and a instrument. Now with a work force he will try to not only pay the debt of his father, but also try to make a profitable business. The deal with his slave is that they have to pay their price and help him to make a profitable farm in one year to win their freedom.
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>>52040610

Why are you interested?
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>>52040739

I am a big fan of this plan. You're a nice guy anon!
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>>52036194
Haven't seen this one before.

Point buy:
>25 pts
>18 Dex (- 20)
>10 Con
>15 Int (-9)
>9 Pow (+1)
>7 Cha (+3)
Eyes: Seer
Hardware: Organic Machine, Int +3 Cha +3, Con-4
New attributes:
>18 Dex (Mastery)
>6 Con
>18 Int (Mastery)
>9 Pow
>10 Cha

I am an AI with organically growing bodies which have predictive capabilities and impossible speed. I'm explicitly allowed to create new bodies so theoretically I can grow a squad, copy myself into each of them, and keep them all on the same page with regular updates. I'm sure I'll be an absolute nightmare for the enemy, despite being a bit fragile.
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>>52036817
I'd pick Cute if he was straight. God, that sounds wonderful. I want to initiate the first kiss that brings us from best friends that stay up for hours each night just talking, and when the time comes to it, we'll figure out he's into gentle femdom.
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>>52042998
Really good bait.
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>>52043021
Why is my post bait? It sounds great to date a cute boy and take his virginity.
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>>52037101

>Custom World

>Reincarnation
>Melancholy

>Compendium
>Love Interest
>Home

Just live out eternity in a gloomy gothic world of my own creation, without memory, time, or worry. Sharing the millenia with my true love, forever wrapped up in each other and in the beautiful but dark emotions of our little world.
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>>52039648
>WRYYYY
>INSTANT KILL
>TAKES 30 SECOND TO KILL
Which is it?
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>>52036817
>Inexperienced
>Fairly large apartment in a sky riser
http://mondialrides.com/towerrides/all/sky-riser ?
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>>52043021
>Really good bait.
>1 shitty reply
pic one
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>>52039648
>Angry
Party Beast

Mystery Box Please
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>>52036817
That trap is delicious. Perfect.
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>>52043229
You're as slow as the thread currently is. LOL
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>>52038705
Does anyone know how to edit out the dick? I like the blue-eyed demon but the futanari shit ruins it.
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>>52043719
Adopt SDA and have him do it. Or just give in to the futa master race.
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>>52043885
Such a shame to see all these authors that left. Now the only one making content is DSA.
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>>52037101
SETTING
>Space Opera
Since it is not hard SciFi it essentially allows you to switch between Cyberpunk and Fantasy as you travel from planet to planet.

THEMES
>porn
>adventure
Sexy Sexy Adventure

BONUSES
>transport
This being Space Opera the transport can easily double as the 'home' if not the 'village' bonus
>weapon
must have for anyone choosing Adventure, who has ever heard of a proper hero without a signature weapon?
>McGuffin
MOAR ADVENTURRRRRRRRRR!
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>>52038835
>>52038853
You're fucking amazing, man. I guess not all gods live on Mount Olympus after all.
>>52039253
Its more of a sliding scale. Your powers will get weaker with loss of favor, but you won't outright lose them. Favor can be regained, yes.
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>>52043970
>Now the only one making content is DSA.
Actually...

>Highlander
Still busy with that Touhou/Souls CYOA, along with Traveller and stuff.
>Beri
Keeps quiet about his projects just in case they don't pan out for whatever reason, but did mention something about having four-ish things in the making.
>Italics
Supposedly working on Pokemon Personified Plus+ or something.
>Pallas
May have gotten roped into GMing, so her next CYOA (not sure what about) might get delayed a bit.
>Sockminster
Still hard at work on Fairy King.

And that's just the stuff I recall reading for the authors listed in that CYOA.
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>>52043885
it is my dream to make so many CYOAs that I get put onto one of these meta-CYOAs. Only 2 so far, but the third is on its way.
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>>52043970
Hey! I didn't leave. And I made content more recently than SDA. I'm trying to get more time to work on things. It's an investment.
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>>52044071
>it is my dream to make so many CYOAs that I get put onto one of these meta-CYOAs.
You COULD just make one of "those meta-CYOAs" yourself.
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>>52044057
>Keeps quiet about his projects just in case they don't pan out for whatever reason, but did mention something about having four-ish things in the making.
Beri was also doing that god CYOA thing where the only page so far is the one where you pick out your servants from the lower circles which range from monstrous abominations (at the lowest) to extradimensional horrors (at the highest), right? Hope he one day returns his interest to that.
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>>52044099
It won't feel right forcibly adding myself. It has to be on someone else's volition recognizing my work.
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>>52036223
Haven't read it fully, but the synergy between Hera and Zeus is hilarious irony.
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>>52044071
If it helps Highlander and Sockminster have only made one, and Pallas only made two that were meh. Fun, sure, but too short to matter.
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>>52044102
No, that wasn't me. Though I did have a cancelled, unmentioned project where ypu basically become Omne from Branching Heart, with your little planet giving you bonuses. That's the closest thing I've started with gods as a theme.
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>>52044111
>It won't feel right forcibly adding myself. It has to be on someone else's volition recognizing my work.
I feel the "established authors" might be less inclined to make any, and other authors probably feel the same way you do, so we might be at a bit of an impasse here.

>>52044126
>If it helps Highlander and Sockminster have only made one
I count at least two finished (sockpuppets, VK) and one in progress (FK) for Sockminster.
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>>52044178
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>>52044057
>Pallas
>her
????
Please be straight, we already have two dykes
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>>52044194
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>>52044206
Do not open unless ready to settle down. <3
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>>52044111
>It has to be on someone else's volition recognizing my work.
That won't happen until you git gud. I don't even know who the fuck you are
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>>52044199
>Please be straight
Straight, or maybe bi, not sure exactly. Get on the Discord and ask her yourself.
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>>52044199
Why does it matter?
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>>52044275
I'd much rather she told us here.
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>>52044308
I can pretend her waifus are selfinserts?
It's hot when a girl writes lewd shit that gets me off? Much better than some sweaty dude popping a stiffy like TolGar or whatever the name is.
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>>52037101
>Space Opera

>Porn
>Adventure

>Transport
>Weapon
>Fellowship

Just like Konosuba, but in space.
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>>52037101
Adventure and Melancholy seem to be tg's thing.

>Space Opera

>Adventure
>Melancholy

>Transport
>Love Interest
>Lucky Charm
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>>52044226
Actually...
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>>52044554
...and then...
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dexterity 13
constitution 12
integration 13
power 13
chassis 12
ocular system surround sound
hardware upgrade weaponized
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>>52039648

>The Seething Killing Machine

>Combat mode, Get hard, Wryyyy, Lord Of Edges,Rules of Nature.
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>>52036817
Athlete.

We're opening a fuckin dog sanctuary
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>>52044554
>Kill kitsune, its the only way to be safe.
>>52044568
Eh, too late.
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>>52044230
Getting good might not be enough for this anon to become recognized. For example, I think that I did pretty good CYOAs and many other anons thought so too, but I always get instantly forgotten the moment my OC leaves everyone's line of sight.
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>>52040557

>Firefox
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>>52044554
>>52044568
It's too late, I already jumped into a Wolfenstein realm and am organizing mechanical Nazi dogs to scour the kitsune realm for your threats against the Hoenn-Wehrmacht Republic of Mages.
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>>52044382
If you know how to push the right buttons, you can probably convince Angel to lewdpost with you.
http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/47847600/#47847670
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quick give ideas for katia's quest
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>>52044696
*and Bakeries
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>>52044568
>>52044554
both of these are a bit of an over-reaction, she didnt actually cause any harm so her apology seems overboard

touch tail, still bake cake and show up is best choice
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>>52043885

>SDA, Imaginos, Italics

Italics makes the CYOAs, Imaginos makes the CYOAs look good, and SDA was my first waifu.
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>>52044662
Then he should give up like the quivering pussy he is. Surely that is better than working hard. Yes, always give up.
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>>52044777
If one works only to receive recognition, then yes, he should. Because working hard doesn't help in achieving this goal. Purposely creating a shitstorm over a controversial option is a more sure way to succeed.
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>>52044721
Fuck that sounds amazing. Gonna make sure to respond to her builds from now on!
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>>52044178

>Become a Kitsune

>#5

>Fluffy tails, Monster master, Hide features.

THE ADVENTURES OF THE GUN-SLINGING FOXGIRL(male)!
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>>52044696

SHEEEEEEIT, WOLFENSTEIN CYOA WHEN!?
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>>52044864
>FOXGIRL(male)
I think you'd need Absolute Shapeshifting for that.
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>>52043970
Italics is still around and making Pokemon Personified Plus+
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>>52044747
Her powers go out of control and kill a fellow street kid and turns the streets against her. You have help her control it without the dope and fend off the street gangs out to take her out for good.
You become Pigeon King (a la John Wick 2).
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>>52044831
>If one works only to receive recognition, then yes, he should

>it is my dream to make so many CYOAs that I get put onto one of these meta-CYOAs
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>>52038835

>Artemis
The ability to summon dinosaurs is to good to pass up.
>Athena
I was going to choose Athena for Waifuing purposes, but the powers the grants are really goddamn helpful.

I use the abilities granted by Artemis to open an exotic petshop, and I use the abilities granted by Athena to win every single RTS tournament I enter.
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>>52039648
>The Seething Killing Machine
>High Voltage
>Combat Mode
>Bestial Roar
>Smoldering Focus
>WRYYYY
>Brutal Presence
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>>52036817
>OC
>gay shit
We'd be better off without it, fampai.
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Why does this get posted so rarely despite being one of the best CYOAs?

>>52038385
It's by far one of the most popular genres. Lurk more, dumbass.
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>>52044199
Lesbianism is a defense mechanism (Angel's case), a political statement, or a means to get attention. Dykes aren't real.
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>>52045158
>best

It's stupid. The point of jumpchaining CYOAs is to visit a new world and get abilities/stuff/powers. Why would you jump to a CYOA that is just selecting from mutiple worlds to jump to? You already do that.
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IT IS FINISHED
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>>52045165
I don't get this. You have to protect the entire planet by yourself and you still have to do stuff like eat and sleep?
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>>52045224
Speaking of knights, how does a knight win the affection of a lady he is courting?

Dancing? Singing a song for her? Flirting?
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>>52045158
In what world is this one of the best?
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>>52045248
Well it depends from the lady in question
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>>52045118
It ain't gay if they are female (male).
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>>52045255
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>>52045248
Fisting
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>>52044226
Wasn`t there a series of CYOAs with this same kitsune girl? In each one she'd give you a different gift, in one of them she'd give you a waifu, and by the third CYOA she'd be like "oh wow, this is honestly getting kind of ridiculous"? Could anyone post it or tell me what it's called?
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>>52045217
>jumpchaining
Not all CYOAs are meant to be jumpchained!

>>52045250
This one. It's all you could ask for in a CYOA, minus the waifus.
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>>52045297
>This one
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>>52045165

Planet
>Tundra
Strongholds
>The Palace
Rooms
>Entrance (The Gate), Conservatory (Aviary), Recreation (Sports hall (If it has tournaments, it's a sport)), Waterworks ("ponds"), Workshop (Works), Transitional (Stairways), Showroom (Museum)*.
Defenses
> Bridge, Animation*, Turrets.
Powers
>Alarm, Servant, Chores.
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>>52045297
Not even close. There are a lot of CYOAs who could be in the debate for "best", as it's subjective, but that one is some bare bones, unappealing garbage with no depth

Strife can achieve more in fucking Paint on just one page
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>>52045360
>WORDS WORDS WORDS WORDS makes a good cyoa
Nah man, immersiveness does. Never in my life have I felt immersed in a Strife CYOA, even though I do like them. That one is simple, succinct, yet extremely immersive.
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>>52045285
Ask and ye shall receive.
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>>52045373
But those are just paragraphs on a black page describing some of the most generic settings, themes, and variables ever. How can you even compare that to something like Monster Hunter or Space Refugee?
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>>52045393
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>>52045224
Illuminati
Cop
Cybernazi

Let's purge evil from our street.
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>>52045405
Witty remark.
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>>52045404
>Monster Hunter
>licensed CYOAs
>ever impressive
Space Refugee is better, yeah, but I still get more daydreaming fuel out of the one I posted.
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>>52045393
>>52045405
>>52045416
Those are the ones m8, thanks very much
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>>52045424
I don't know, I'm usually incredibly opposed to blatant rip-off CYOAs, like the Overwatch one, but I feel like Monster Hunter only shares a name with a game and doesn't just shove the whole thing into the medium
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>>52045479
Is there really any reason to pick anyone but [Your Waifu] ?
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Where's the second page tho?
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>>52044226
I remember when I was the first one to get this box. Good times.
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>>52045479
>Vampire
Won't let her bite me. I want to be her only blood source. I'm a sucker for how romantic it would be to be a vampire's only blood source, and how everything she does to me, is out of love. I don't mind the yandere/abuse vibes. I like them.
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>>52037101
>setting
Space Opera
>moods
Adventure
Cuteness
>Bonus
Village
Fellowhsip
Weapon

So basically i'll be the captain of a space ship, flying from planet to planet, there will be a real threat such as poverty and the government, but in between this, some cute things still happen. Things that sorta renew your faith in humanity, like having a extremely wholesome and cantered feel. The world will not be manga or animae though. It will be the real world. I will have found a special village which will be the ships resting place in between missions and allow some shore leave. These people here will be different from the rest of space, they will appreciate different things, like memories, be compassionate and have pure souls that believe ever so strongly that there is justice out there in space. Like a mini utopia. This is a place where people help eachother escape the cycle of suffering. I will be its main protector with my special weapon, which will be a quick drawn revolver, along with my dependable crew of 8. Im gonna drop the image of the crew i picked for another CYOA, as they are pretty close to what i'd pick for archetypes.

Music:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k5wHKdX5NSM
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>>52045239
You have to protect your castle core which is the planet.
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>>52045835
I get it. But they can just wait until you're dead tired, pass out, and just destroy it like that, because you obviously aren't waking up.
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>>52045848
You can get options to ward against such things. I'm not sure what to tell you.
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>>52045884
>ward
I'm saying if your defenses alone can stop them there's no point in choosing many of the options.
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>>52037995

Well now I want to pick Wendy Moreau only to find out what "'not even hiding it' levels of evil" is.
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>>52045224
>Shinobi Knight Ika
>Digital Knight Beth
>Radon Knight Kena

Little did NeoMiami know that a posing biker and his disagreeable comrades were going to slap the shit out of Chaos.
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>>52036194
>https://discord.gg/Cwm8nCM
The link to discord doesn't work anylonger.
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>>52046037
Should work just fine as long as you haven't been banned, according to the server founder admin person guy.
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>>52046037
>The illuminati/jews/demons/aliens/brown people are no more
VICTORY!
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So I'm working on my first ever OC.
Anything I should know or that you guys really want to see in it?
It's waifu oriented, so sorry if you're tired of those...
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>>52046131

What's the setting?
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>>52046131
>Anything I should know or that you guys really want to see in it?
Some people would be happier if they could remake their body (even once), or so it would seem.
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>>52046131
>Anything I should know or that you guys really want to see in it?
Big fat tiddies
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>>52046131
Make sure to include at least one really short and one really tall waifu.
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>>52046131
Don't use a shitty program like ms paint.
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>>52046081
>The instant invite is invalid or has been expired
Guess I was banned. Welp, was gonna happen eventually.
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>>52045552
>won't let her bite you
>wants to be her blood source
Uh, what? Those two contradict each other.
Do you not want her to turn/embrace you?
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>>52046131
Contemporary fantasy/sci-fi.

>>52046165
I've got that, just not the "be the little girl" trope because it really doesn't work with the premise.

>>52046168
>>52046172
I got you guys covered.

>>52046184
I'm using Pant.net because I still haven't learned how to use Photoshop and I'm pretty familiar with the program.
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>>52046184
Fuck off.

>>52046131
Use whatever program you want.
I'm a sucker for comfy-oriented CYOAs.
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>>52046253
>Contemporary fantasy/sci-fi.
Excitement!
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>>52046253
>I'm using Pant.net
I prefer Panty.net myself
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>>52046241
>Do you not want her to turn
That would be the one, yes. I want to be able to give her my tasty blood, and be able to run errands for her during the day.
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>>52046253
>I've got that, just not the "be the little girl" trope
Any other limitations beside "no little girl"?
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>>52046253

Is it a Waifu Builder, or a "Pick a Waifu"?
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>>52046317
This is exactly what I'd do too, and I do daydream of the exact same scenario sometimes.
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>>52046320
I'm focussing mainly on the waifus. I only have 13 self-modifications that are fairly broad for now.

>>52046339
Pick a Waifu because I like making characters and those are my personal favorite.
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>>52046375
I like that I could easily run away from her during the day, but I choose not to. Because I love how she treats me, and she knows I love her.
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>>52046437
>I'm focussing mainly on the waifus.
As you should.
>I only have 13 self-modifications that are fairly broad for now.
Oh, so it's not just a single "remake yourself" option? Interesting. Will be waiting patiently for the finished product.
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>>52046437
Do you pick powers/modifications for yourself only or your waifu too?
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>>52046515
The waifus have set powers, you pick your own.
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>>52045497
Working on it. University has been a bitch lately, so I haven't had much time to work on it. I have made some progress though; I can actually make the colors blend somewhat, thus resembling actual paint to an extent.
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>>52044852
She usually RPs pure angelic types. But she went full degenerate slut mode for Lavender. Getting her talking about that might be a good place to start.
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>>52046587
Have you figured out what the options are going to be (meaning that the only thing left to do is finishing the visuals)?
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>>52036817
>in case there are any straight girls on /cyoag/
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>he just don't belive his sexuality should define his person
what sorcery be this
>refuses to top or let you give him a bj
@$#$^&*@%$&#%$
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>>52046625
Oh yeah, I also need to work on that. I have the thoughts down, I just need to write them in a document.
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Can anyone post the Monster Hunter CYOA, please? Couldn't find it in the dropbox.
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>>52046720
>Couldn't find it in the dropbox.
What about the other archives listed in the pastebin?
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>>52045255
sauce please
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>>52046751
I looked through all of them. Unless it`s not named Monster Hunter, it`s not in any of them.
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>>52045224
Make sure you add the new version to archives in the pastebin, Knightbro-kun. I'm leaving for a while and I'd like to give this more time when I return.
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>>52046131
Waifu with low self-esteem because she has a penis and some rather large balls.
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>>52037101
>Typical Fantasy

>Porn
>Influence

>Transport
>Home
>Credentials
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>>52046826
how do I do it? sorry I am not a google drive wizard
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I've decided to serve both Zeus and hades to revive great powers
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>>52039648
God of Sublimation
Nerd Rage
Wryyyy
Become the little girl (of fucking course)
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>>52039648
God of sublimation

Brutal presence (23)
Get hard (19)
Combat mode (15)
Smoldering focus (12)
Everything is fire (7)
Fucking run (4)
Atatatatatatat (2)
Bestial roar (0)
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>>52043885
I luv boxwine an' SDA.
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>>52044696
... but

SHould't it be Wehrmacht of the Hoenn Republic of Mages instead
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>>52046720
Dropbox-kun doesn't like it.
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>>52046983
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>>52047003
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>>52046983
>have one job
>fail it
how can someone be so useless?
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>>52046809
>I looked through all of them.
No, you didn't.
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>>52046983
Elemental has real issues with being more of a physical tree than magical tree. It doesn't even allow for basic spell casting until you get to tier 2. You give buffs to elemental magics, or allow magic to be cast with strength or offer body adaption based on element . . . before you GET the element/magic casting ability from the second row.

This is a very flawed design. The ability to cast different elements of magic is a neat idea, but the spell casting needs to be available before you give the user things to augment the casting abilities they DO NOT HAVE YET.

The reality is that light, shadow, fire, water, air, earth and the mind spells all need their own skill trees, and the ability to cast those magics needs to be in the first tier of each tree, with further options augmenting what you have, instead of getting the augments before you even have the things they're augmenting.
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>>52047035
Is that one hidden or something?

>>52046983
Thanks!
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>>52047085
You keep saying this is bad but you didn't get to explaining why it's bad yet.
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>>52047148
Nope, it's right here:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0Bwl-aJm3wG4nNjRtWHJiTWYxQ2c?usp=sharing
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>>52046131
Fuck yeah, waifu cyoa!

Make sure you include fetish options, like giantess, muscle, futa, etc
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>>52047213
Now listen here you little bitch, I'm not sure what kind of twisted trick you're trying to pull here, but I used the search bar on this very same drive not an hour ago and it gave me no results.
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>>52047209
Keep? First time.

I didn't say the CYOA was bad. I said elemental has issues, and proceeded to talk about it and explain my points. Which is curious given you're suggesting I've not explained it. I have. If you can't see the issue with the presented points, even after having the issue explained, I suppose we'll just have to disagree.

Do you really think that providing augments to abilities before granting the abilities at all is sensible design? Do you really not see the inherent issues in providing augments to abilities you may not have before you ever have the chance to get said abilities? The reality is this is partially a result of the elements needing room to breathe and evolve, but not having the room to do so.
>>
>>52047226
>>52047245
Are you that idiot from two days ago who didn't know how to post or save CYOAs? You're doing it again. Why post only page 10 and 3 of two different CYOAs? Look at what you're posting before you do it, it's not hard at all.
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>>52047316
You explained that you need level two to use level one. Why is that bad?
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>>52047315
Git gud, scrub.
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>>52047367
Because level one is useless if it has nothing to augment. Oh, I can now use strength to do magic instead of INT! . . . I don't know any magic so it doesn't matter. Oh! I can now gain extra power by casting in particular environments! Such power! Oh. Wait. I don't know any spells.

It requires you put extra points into the trees. Now, in your mind that may be a good thing, but it's completely backwards. You gain a basic ability, then get better at it. You do NOT get better at an ability, then get the ability later. How is this not incredibly obvious? It means you ability will ALWAYS be augmented before you even get it, rather than the ability growing as a natural progression.

Ethereal has similar issues. I restate, the image needs to break up the elements into individual skill trees giving each room to grow. The mind magic has this an extra bad version of this problem because it's just thrown in there, with nothing really supporting or building off of it. It's one of them in the greatest need of its own skill tree.
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>>52047423
Well NOW it's working. You must have hexed it somehow, you goddamn cyber witch.
>>
>>52047226
>>52047245
Both of these interest me but I don't know the names?
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>>52046983

>noble

> + 20 Tribute points

>Tempered, Martial arts
>Catalysts, Arcane, Blink, Finesse, Lingering, Homing
>Bloodlust, Soul spirit, one with nature, Poisons
>Blunt arms, bladed arms*, Marksmanship.
>Primal power, Affinity
>Terrain, Duality, Energy sense.

*If we go by real life logic, axes fall under both of these categories, which means I get the bonus from both.

>>52047003

>Licenses
>Mountain, Glacial

>>52047017
>>Persona
>Exempt

>>Resources
>Forge, Low, Healing, Scavenging, Campsite, Map, Bar, Underground, Gambling, Servant(Appearance, personality)
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>>52047467
eternals rising and serene serendipity
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>>52047487
thanks famular.
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>>52047504
no prob me m8
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>>52047456
Why does it need to beuseful on its own when you're never forced to take only it?
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Why did Italics use humanized pictures of pokemon instead of actual drawing of pokemon for their cyoa?
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>>52047465
Damn, you're onto me.
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>>52047615
>Pokemon personified
>Using pics of personified Pokemon

I know right? Ridiculous
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>>52047649
you are ridiculous
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>>52046131
Add a waifu who's a rapey, clingy yandere. Every single waifu cyoa should have one, anon.
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>>52047649
They didn't need to be personified to have the cyoa though, ridiculous anon.
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>>52047703
Why the fuck do you want to waifu an actual pokemon? Why do you want to be an actual pokemon?
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Since we're talking about pokeymans...

Page 1/3.
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>>52047745
Page 2/3.
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>>52047715
>Why the fuck do you want to waifu an actual pokemon?
Why the fuck do you want to waifu an actual pokemon (human)?
Because the Mystery Dungeons don't allow it, and the main games stopped allowing humans to waifu pokemon.

>Why do you want to be an actual pokemon?
Why do you want to be a pokemon (human)?
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>>52046131
When I'm picking out a waifu, I'm usually looking at a mix between a housewife, a best bro, and a personal fucktoy. Though I'm personally not really into the nerd or fit girl aesthetic too much, a Skater girl who wants a guy to do nerd stuff with and be a housewife to would be ideal.
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>>52047774
Page 3/3.
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>>52047796
>skater girl
>wanting to do nerd stuff and housewife
pick one
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>>52047904
Everyone has to grow up anon. the 90's ended 17 years ago after all. No reason she can't try and be a good nerdy housewife while keeping the style.
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>>52047793
That's beastiality anon and bannable on most board.
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>>52047745
>Add an expansion for you to have more allies, rivals, and pokemons
>You're still stuck to only 3 pokemon and 2 real people
For what purpose? Wouldn't it make more sense for a person to get an extra ally or pokemon after picking two more rivals?
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>>52048021
you want to make woman grow up? why dont you grow up and get out of here, we are no longer in 2000?
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>>52048078
>You're still stuck to only 3 pokemon and 2 real people
It says in the Allies and Rivals section's intro text that you can take an extra rival to gain an extra ally (although only once).
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>>52048021
if you find a girl like that, and chances of that are slim enough, she'll probably be neurotic as fuck or have some kind of mental disorder like BPD or something. if you find a girl like that and she's perfect, chances are she already is taken. if you find a girl like that who is not taken, she's probably crazy.
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>>52043192
It will kill someone instantly if it hits, but it takes you 30 seconds of charging/WRYYYING to actually use it.
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>>52048126
this anon knows it
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>>52047641
Dont be upset Drive-kun. You are still my Waifu
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>>52047797
I want to pinch her chubby bits.
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>>52045479
>ever picking the Dark Matter
>when it warns you not to

Gotta go with Yeti.
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>>52039668
Ok. That made me laugh.
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>>52043970
I'm actually on CYOA leave for a while until my medication stops being fucky and I can go a few hours without throwing up. Anything I make right now will be terribly depressing.

Sorry to disappoint.
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>>52043970
maybe you should start making cyoas?
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>>52043970
What ever happened to box wine?
>>
>>52036223
>>52038835
I'm gonna copy that other anon and say Demeter and Hestia.
Eternal comfy.
>>
What are the top 3 cyoas of /cyoag/?
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>>52049044
you are looking to start a fight arent you?
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>>52049044
>Space Refugee
>Battle Mage
>This
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>>52049044
>Pizza Time
>Cowboy
>TG Order Form
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>>52049063
This anon gets it.
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>>52047595

>why does a skill need to be useful on its own
It doesn't. That's why upgrades exist. However, there is no logical reason you'd learn an upgrade to a thing before ever learning said thing. Again, the image requires expansion on the elements, to give them room to breathe, to avoid issues like this. And they need to be ordered in a way that provides the basics first, and the upgrades to those basics later.
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>>52049111
i bet its the fucking shitposter at it again
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>>52049044
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>>52049203
This is the only CYOA we need
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>>52049182
You're the shitposter. Asking a legitimate question is legit.
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>>52049232
i knew it, its fucking you again
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>>52049261
The real question is who is who here?
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>>52049261
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>>52049261
for fuck sake, stop obsessing over the guy, forget about him already
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>>52049261
Yes. It was I.
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>>52049261
You knew it was who? Who is you?
>>
>>52036817
Gamer Bro. Having someone around to provide immediate playtest feedback is useful.
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>>52049219
I like what the author was trying to do, and the quality is pretty good (ya'know, formatting, font, etc is fine), but for some reason I really have trouble actually getting into this cyoa. I enjoy it far less than I feel I should.
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>>52049366
>trying to figure out who is who in an anonymous image board.
for fuck sake lads come on
>>
>>52049456
I may not be able to figure out who is who on an anonymous image board, but I can figure out it was your girlfriend sucking my dick last night.
>>
>>52048661
>making cyoas
Ha! Good one.
>>
>>52049203
>>52049219
I still prefer the newer version, mainly for the additional reason(s) as to why you were selected, plus the less severe info options for some of the girls (e.g. Fujiwara Yuri).
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>>52049519
Sick burn my man, except that wasn't my girlfriend, that was me too.

Now you're a faggot.
>>
Aaah, /cyoag/, my old friend.
It has been a while and my beard has grown long enough to shatter my stone table, so tell me, what has happened here?
>>
>>52049548
Autism, shitposting, and every now and then a bit of OC.
>>
>>52049548

Naught but bullshit, oh Grey-Beard.

So business as usual
>>
>>52049548
annoying cunts taking over
>>
>>52049548
There's been some pretty good Waifu Builder Cyoas, Battle Mage got updated, theres a few good Horror Survival cyoas about being trapped on a magical island, both of which named something along the lines of "The Island Cyoa". And that's about it. Also theres this new insult called being a Saber fag and shitposting is now Saber posting, based off a shitty anime.
>>
>>52049044
>Cowboy CYOA
>Skelerape
>Kill Your Dad/Make Anime Real No Jutsu
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>>52049605
If they are cunts, you must be a dick.
>>
>>52038409
>Cat
>Innkeeper
>>
>>52047226
Anyone have the rest of these? Looks good.
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>>52049855
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>>52048138
Why are we still here? Just to suffer?
>>
>>52049762

Do have have the other pages? Would you mind posting them?
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>>52049219
>4 of each
How does this work?
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>>52049855
Since the first response is an invalid apparently, I'll post it. I don't have a pass, so it's going to take a bit
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>>52049974

>>52049924
If no one else does while I post this monstrosity, I'll post it after I finish posting Eternal Rising
>>
>>52049922
yes
>>52049924
>>
>>52049855
>>52049884
Shit's getting remade, but it'll probably be a while.
>>
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>>52049990
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Getting started on the first draft of that Waifu CYOA I brought up earlier and I had a question:
How long is too long for an opening text blurb? Because I've started and I've almost got half a page of text already...
>>
>>52050015
That's enough.
>>
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>>52050014
>>
>>52050015
not enough, keep going
>>
>>52050026
Shit...
I'm gonna need to find a way to edit this bitch down.
>>
>>52050000
Actually, I'm probably thinking of Fulcrum, though I vaguely recall the creator saying it needs an update or something.
>>
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>>52050034

It won't let me post part 5, it keeps telling me duplicate file and redirecting me to >>52049884
>>
>>52050015
It's probably bloated with unnecessary ideas and useless shit that nobody will care about. Try reducing it to the essence of what you want to convey and then add in details, not the other way around.

It's unlikely you're a master author and have a deep understanding of writing, so make it as little as possible so nobody realizes your flaws.

Otherwise, post it here so we can rate it.
>>
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>>52050015
As long as it needs to be.

People are willing to read through 190 page pdfs for waifu choices, half a page is nothing.
>>
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>>52050084
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>>52050117

Page 8 is suffering same problem as five, directed to >>52049995
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>>52049995
This guy is a master troll jesus crist gee gee
>>
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>>52050167

Page 10, duplicate file >>52047226
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>>52050098
But I am an author anon...
Not a master by any means, but writing's pretty much the only thing I'm worth a damn at.

>>52050041
>>52050109
I'm glad to hear that, because half of the first page of the CYOA may end up being set up if I'm not careful.
>>
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>>52050199
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>>52050222
>>
>>52049922
It's what we deserve and you know it.
>>
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>>52050250
>>
>>52050253
Not all of us.
>>
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>>52050263

That's the last of it, sorry for having to link to random posts through it
>>
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>>52049924
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>>52036194
We are here to suffer shitposts from people like this >>52050222
>>
>>52050015
You want the intro short and to the point.
Remember: The purpose of an intro is to draw in the reader. If they're bored before they even get to the choices, you failed.
You can write more if you spice the intro up with pictures. But plain text? Keep it at two or at most three paragraphs of a few lines each.

>>52050098
This is accurate as well. Bloat is boring.
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>>52050299
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>>52050265
You wouldn't be here if you deserved better.
>>
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>>52050319
>>52050301
How is it shitposting, someone asked for the CYOA, and I posted it, and the thread is at the bump limit and page 9
>>
>>52050299
>>52050319

Thanks, Anon!
>>
>>52050333
Indeed, only the dead can know peace from life.
>>
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>>52050338
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>>52039648
10/10 cyoa.

Seething Killing Machine

>Bestial Roar
>Smoldering Focus
>Atatatatatatatatatatatatatata
>Fucking Run
>Wryyyy
>Lord of Edges

But that tornado is damn enticing.
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>>52050364

Last one anon
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>>52044074
Reminder that I've made, like, three-and-a-half CYOAs in my entire time here, not counting the collab, three reworks and one conceptualization of one that got picked up by other authors.
>>
>>52050565
No one cares
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>>52050565
Dont waste your time here
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>>52050623
you can't live without me, anon

>>52050640
i don't
>>
>>52050565
Cool. You didn't say who you are or what you made so nobody cares
>>
>>52050662
I bet hes the awoo nyan saberposter guy, please go away, your cyoas suck
>>
>>52050683
>>52050724
you got me

i'm gonna go eat some shepard's pie now
>>
>>52050623
>>52050640
>>52050662
Cuck.
>>
>>52050750
Reported
>>
New thread over that way: >>52050356
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>>52048705
He posted the DLC to Hero Academy and then disappeared again. He's possibly working on another DLC.

>>52050000
>>52050083
It was probably Fulcrum. I gave him a good bit of feedback and he wandered off.
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I'm aware that Imgur.com will stop allowing adult images since 15th of May. I'm taking actions to backup as much data as possible.
Read more on this topic here - https://archived.moe/talk/thread/1694/


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