After playing guitar for around 4 weeks now, I finally have my first song. I know /mu/ is all about music critique, so maybe one or two of you would be interesting in critiquing this song.
I know my singing is quite poor but in a year or so I hope to be a bit better. I know my guitar playing is quite poor but I believe the chord progression and lyrics in the hands of someone more talented would be pretty catchy.
Any thoughts?
https://youtu.be/cuen1JIHzdA
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>>74257897
congrats on writing the most generic song in the world
yes it is very obvious that you recorded this on your iphone
>>74257897
I've heard worse.
Now I know you're just starting out, so I'll try to be gentle. There is nothing particularly interesting about this song. Part of that is the quality of the recording. Part of that is playing chords that are too much alike sonically. Learn a bit more about keys and chord voicing and come back to it in a month or two.
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>>74257670
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>>74257670
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So /mu/, which is better and why?
ride the lightning because it has better songs
>>74257614
>Ride the Lightning
Fade to Black... need I say more?
Ride The Lightning because James' vocals are more intense than in Master Of Puppets and each track doesn't waste as much time as Master Of Puppets does with needless repetition of the same old riffs on long ass tracks with a lot more wanky solo sections than before (and Kirk's an awful soloist we don't needa hear that shit.) Ride The Lightning also wins by being the shorter record so we get to hear less of Lars' garbage skills at drums. It's not even the dude's technique, but complete lack of creativity.
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>>74257573
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