Super Humans and Power Ponies! Issue #14

>>30232589
ahhh, the musk of a newborn thread

>>30232589
I love the smell of an Amazon farmgirl in the morning. SAVED!

>>30232589
Will have green soon. Fixing an Internet problem

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>>30232589

>>30232634
How do we save him, bros?

>>30232622
Good luck with your internet problems mister dubs.
>>30232634
I don't get it.

>>30232639
>saving what's dead inside
pull the plug

>>30232642
Batfleck's life force is slowly being drained from his body

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>>30232810
No fucking way

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>>30232810

>>30232810
Oh shit nigga this better be real.

>>30232957
It's fake.

>>30232997
he can use google by himself

>>30232810
I'd support the kickstart

>>30233078
we'd need to license showing a lot of characters
pretty sure we'd need to calculate in 50 mio.

>>30232589
>You sighed while putting your phone back in your pocket.
“Well, Gilda said she’ll be here in a couple of minutes, so we’ll just wait here for a bit,” you sighed, continuing to be a pillow for the girls.
>They just groaned in disappointment for some reason, but you ignored it.
>You just had to do was wait for a sign.
>Any kind of sign that Gilda was there.
>With no sign whatsoever, you sat there petting Vinyl’s head while Octavia nuzzled you.
>It was relaxing to say the least.
>You just wish you were home and not in a fucking changing room.
“You better get here soon, Gilda,” you stressed, wanting the day to end.
>Even if it was still the morning.
>Suddenly the wall and ground started to shake as the girls jumped to their feet, letting you go.
> “What the fuck?” Vinyl yelled, looking everywhere.
> “I would say that was Gilda,” Octavia commented, grabbing her pocketbook.
>You don’t say anything while walking towards the door.
>Opening the door, you took a glance and saw a bunch of customers running from the front door.
> “What do you see, love?” Octavia inquired, leaning on top of you to look outside.
>This caused you to blush as you felt her arms wrap around your body and her chest on your back.
>She really needs to respect your personal space.
“Either Gilda’s here or there's some crazy sale going on,” you noted sarcastically, watching a few customer knock stuff over as they ran.
>Vinyl snuck under you to look out the door while pushing her back and ass against you.
>What is with these girl and invading your personal space?
> “Should we go?” Vinyl wondered, leaning into you.
“We might as well,” you answered, thinking this was the best time to move.
>The girls don’t move from their spots.
> Taking your hands off the door, you flick their noses causing them to flinch.
“That means move,” you commanded, trying to glare at Vinyl with a blushing face.

>>30233293
>The blue haired villain just moved her hips against yours before moving away from you.
>Octavia has moved, but she did tighten her grip on you.
“You too, Octavia,” you commanded, wanting to get out of here.
>She sighed before letting you go.
>Vinyl opened her mouth to say something, but you held up your hand.
“No, now march,” you instructed, stopping her from making a joke.
>Vinyl just salutes goofily as she walk towards the entrance.
>Looking at Octavia, you saw that she was blushing with a weird smile on her face.
“C’mon,” you motioned, grabbing Octavia’s hand and running after Vinyl.
>Luckily for you, Vinyl didn’t get too far.
“Slow down, Vinyl. We don’t want to run into..,”
> “Stop right there,” a familiar voice shouted.
“Spider-Woman,” you groaned, watching the arachnid superhero hero land in front of you.
> “I’m gonna put an end to your evil plan,” Spider-Woman threatened, pointing at you.
>That made you blink a few times.
>Did Spider-Woman need glasses or something?
>Maybe this was an imposter and got her info wrong.
>You were about to correct her when Octavia pulled you back just as a large vine hit the hero.
>Looking up, you saw Octavia smiling while hugging you to her chest.
> “Didn’t want you to get hit,” Octavia explained, hugging you a bit tighter.
> “You two should get a room,” another familiar voice replied, drawing your attention away from your would be savior.
>Sitting on a vine that was moving towards you was Gaea Everfree.
“Gaea? What’re you doing here?” you inquired, confused by the situation.
>The plant themed villain slid off the huge vine and dusted off her skirt and top.
>Octavia seemed to growl and wrap her arms a little tighter at this.
> “I’m here to help you three get out of here. Now get going while i have some fun,” Gaea urged, raising her hand and making the vine lunge at Spider-Woman.
>Vinyl, not wanting to stand around, grabbed you and ran out the front entrance.

>>30233293
dude, don't respond to op and say what story it is that is currently updated,
I mean, we know, but there are lazy people here

>>30233303
>Just as you pulled out the door, you saw Spider-Woman dodging the vine as she ran towards you.
“Girls,” you called, seeing the hero jump into the air with her arms raised.
>Vinyl pushed you and Octavia through the door while pointing her hand at the ceiling.
>She shot a blast at the ceiling causing Spider-woman to jump out of the way.
> “Okay. I’ll leave Gaea and Gilda to take care of that,” Vinyl nodded, grabbing your hand once more and pulling you away.
>A good hour has passed since you got home and there was no sign of Spider-Woman.
>You even got a text from Gaea and Gilda saying they were fine.
>That was something you didn’t need to worry about.
>Putting your phone away you just leaned back into the couch.
>The girls didn’t leave you once they got to your house.
>Once your ass touched the couch, the girls took their original spots from the mall.
>So now you were petting Vinyl’s head while listening to Octavia’s light breathing.
>Good thing was that you at least comfortable on your couch before they pounced.
>You were so lost in this weird cuddle pile that you almost didn’t notice Lime near your foot.
>Your kitty started to rub herself against your leg causing you to smile a bit.
“You really like being near me, huh,” you remarked, watching Lime climb onto the other side of your lap.
>She curled up into a ball as you started to pet her.
“At least I don’t have to worry about you being crazy,” you chuckled, scratching Lime’s ears.
> “Yeah,” a voice purred.
>At least someone agrees with you.
>Wait, that wasn’t Octavia.
>She was leaning on your shoulder and wasn’t talking to you.
>You would know if she was talking.
>It couldn’t have been Vinyl since she was sleeping on your lap.
>That eliminates two suspects, but the only other ones in your apartment were Lime and yourself.
>......Right?
>Looking down at your little kitty, you saw her staring right at you.

>>30233315
“You can’t talk right?” you mused, thinking this might explain a few things.
> “Can you hear me?” Lime purred, grinning at you like a cheshire cat.
“....Yes and I’m not sure how to feel about this,” you admitted, wondering if this was just a crazy dream.
>Lime jumps off the couch and sat by your feet, her body seemed to stretch and grow.
>You couldn’t look away as she gained a more feminine shape while losing her fur.
>Once the transformation was over, a young woman was standing before you wearing skin tight jeans, a loose shirt and a collar around her neck.
> “How about now?” Lime questioned, tilting her head to the side.
>You know this is gonna give you a lot more trouble.

Update on Therapist and a new girl has been revealed.

>>30233309
In a hurry and need to leave now. Will do that next time

>>30233332
>PLAYER 4 HAS JOINED THE GAME.
Great update. The harem just grows larger and comfier with every update.

Just a few things.
+Dialouge is getting better. Maybe separate the dialogue and its associated action from time to time. Should bring some variety in your writing.
-I don't mind the usage of the terms "the blue-haired villain," or "the plant-themed villian," but please try to keep it at a minimum. It breaks flow and gets repetitive.

>>30233411
Thanks. Will take the advice later

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>>30232669
He just wanted to be Batman.

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>>30234813
really?

>>30234813
>>30234835
Dude that motherfucker is living the dream. He is quite literally being Batman. He has touched the pinnacle of human greatness, that for which all true men strive.

>>30233332
Yay! Therapist Anon!

Sorry I didn't deliver the update yet. I am moving to a new house and shits really eating up my time.

>>30235439
Yup. Now the fun will begin

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>>30232589
>Sunset goes undercover.

>>30236151
it doesn't work since some blows her cover

>>30232589
I want to see a drunk Spider Shim do this but with a brick wall
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXvVRu7tWMQ

Which of Ms. Marvel's costumes does Celestia wear in A New Kind of Bond?

>>30237855
I do too.

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BEHOLD!

>>30238499
A Sunset.
https://derpibooru.org/413081

>>30238301
The Captain Marvel one with Ms Marvel's mask

>>30233293
>You just had to do was wait for a sign.
remove do* and was*. It looks like two attempts to put the sentence together here.
>What is with these girl and invading your personal space?
Its like Anon is a lewd cat scratching post...I approve.
>>30233303
Gaea...oh, that chick from the Everfree movie? That costume was pretty sexy.
>>30233315
>You were so lost in this weird cuddle pile that you almost didn’t notice Lime near your foot.
Hnnng
>>30233332
>Limestone is a cat girl
Yessss. Wait...does that mean Pinkie is also a sexy cat girl, or their mom for that matter?

>>30238668
1st one, ok. Now I feel so stupid after double-checking. It's the only red and blue suit coupled with the domino mask. I hope I saved those pics of Celestia as Ms. Marvel.
Also, good morning trep. It's good to come back here to you guys and catching up on where you left off on Infamous and Tonic after half a year. Looking forward to reading the other 2.

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>>30238727
>cat family
>mfw it's Igneous

>>30238765
Eh, Catboy wrecking a poor rockfarm girl after she catches him trying to steal a few shinny rocks? I can see it, the Amish getup is just so people don't think they do crazy shit in bed.

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>>30238792
Speaking of freaky shit I had 'Nam flashbacks of this guy from a kids show my nephews watched. Kids show...

>>30238727
Thanks for pointing that out.
Gaea is the Poison Ivy here and agreed.
yes.
Yes, Pinkie, Marble, Maud and their mother are catgirls. I'm just gonna make them somewhat unique.

>>30238742
No problem. Infamous is dead at the moment but I'll try to get that back up as soon as possible.

>>30238811
Funny you should mention that character. I was gonna have it were Pinkie and her sisters have a small power while being catgirls

>>30238833
Knowing Infamous will come back will help me sleep at night.
Looking forward to what cat each of their abilities/costumes are based on. You'll have some fun with that I'm sure.
Good night.

>>30238811
Funny thing about that.
I actually really enjoyed Miraculous Ladybug, and the character Chat Noir inspired some character traits of the Anon of my green.

>>30238833
Forgot my name

>>30238855
They will only get small stuff like Marble will get enhanced claws, if I have her show up. Also Pinkie will be wearing a Black Cat outfit while Limestone wears a Catwoman outfit

>>30238862
Huh, neat.
>>30238864
Whatever works for you.

captcha: touches festival

>>30238864
>Also Pinkie will be wearing a Black Cat outfit while Limestone wears a Catwoman outfit
First the succubus sister of CAPES and now this.
God bless you, trepp.

>>30238882
Just wait till you see what I have in store for C.A.P.E.S.

>>30238877
yeah

>>30238864
>Also Pinkie will be wearing a Black Cat outfit
Trepp, you know torture is a warcrime. Those clothes will barely be able to contain those sweater puppies...yessssss.
>>30238897
>Just wait till you see what I have in store for C.A.P.E.S.
You have us waiting with baited breath.

Feminism is stupid and you are all a bunch of cucks for liking this show and thus surrendering your man cards.

>>30238931
Back to r9k Mr. Baits.

>>30238931
I write fanfiction for a little girl's show about ponies. I've handed my man card a long time ago buddy.

>>30238931
I like how none of the things you said make any sense, but if a (you) fuels your pathetic live then please don't end it, continue to amuse us more

>>30238931
y-you too manly man

>>30239336
>It won't be me, that's for sure.
My man.

>>30239355
He knows what's up.

>>30239358
Who wouldn't say no to Starfire's big orange ayy lmao tiddies?

>>30239358
>>30239366
Agreed

>>30239336
Who're the girls in this? I think the orange girl is Starfire

>>30239374
Sheriff Stella Gomez and Atlee (and her Stella's brother Sol Gomez)
it's from Starfire's 2015-2016 run

>>30239336
>With all the problems this world has, making laws against unclad body actors seems a bit insane.
Your nudist utopia fantasy will become a reality someday, mister comic book writer.

>>30239417
Thanks. Should read it if it's like that

>>30239432
it's just starfire being starfire, I can't vouch for the rest of the comic as I haven't read it, I only know the source

>>30239470
I figured but it does seem like it worth read a few issues.

>>30239336
Starfire is the funest...kind of like Pinkie.

>>30239976
That’s a good combo. Srarfire Pinkie

>>30239336
who has the better orange tiddies? Starfire or Spider-Shim?

>>30240169
....god damnit, OUR WORLD JUST CANT HANDLE IT CAPTAIN! DA HIPS! DA HIPS AND TITS ARE TOO STRONG! I'M JUST A WEE DOCTOR, NOT A MADMAN!

>>30240193
Then fuse them together to get the godly combo in one package

>>30240222
The digits of truth.

>>30240222
fresh from Equestria oblivious Starfire Shim when?

>>30240257
Well you'll be seeing Sunset Starfire but not an oblivious one.

>>30240265
you take the fun out of starfire

>>30240271
I'm mostly gonna vase her like the Yeen Titans cartoon when she's introduced in Incubus Anon

>>30240279
and get your keyboard checked

>>30240317
I blame the mental image of sunset Starfire

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>>30241015
At least i have some material to work off of.

>>30241015
I just love Star's innocence I just want to protect her.

>>30241061
I doubt that. You would most likely try to corrupt her

>>30241841
I think most of the people on this board would do that inadvertently.

>>30242237
I would only do it a tiny bit

>>30242292
Same

>>30242356
Mostly just a slip up or something

>>30242365
I can imagine her being either emotionally devastated or indifferent if you tried to or accidentally put it up her butt.
Or when she disappears in the bookstore and you're frantically looking for her only to find her nose in a racy book.
Which Starfire is your favorite? Mine's the Teen Titans version, though it's the only thing I've seen her in.

>>30242682
Same here for the favorite. I would mostly be in the second category with the bookstore thing.
The thought of letting a sweet girl wander around and find something like that terrifies me.
Imagine Sunset being like that

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>>30241841
Anon, I am shocked and appalled with this accusation. I may be a shitposter but, I know how to treat an ayy lmao lady.

>>30242726
Awesome. The thought terrifies me too.
>she pulls out a book, reads the cover and yells at you from across the store while holding it up and pointing at it
>"Anon, I know you said the world isn't black and white but imagining this many kinds of grey would just seems insane!"

>>30243393
*grey just seems insane

>>30242726
>"50 shades of Gray? What's that?"

>>30243422
>>30243393
I wonder where that would go?

>>30243893
Anon furiously trying to get the book away from her, only to drive her to try and read it more...then she starts doing it out loud. May or may not end in Anon being dragged off too home to try some of it on her. By the pool.

>>30243907
>"Anon, what is the clitoris?"

>>30243907
Try and distract her. That's what I would do

>>30243944
Answer truthfully. Might as well do that now

>>30244005
Goodnight people.

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>>30232589

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Buenas noches. Wring out your sponges whenever you're done with them.

>>30246396
Unf, its like an Emo Fluttershy.

>>30246795
Pinkie pie but it looks good.

Wonder what would happen if Sunset and her friends all had symbiotes?

>>30246811
Probably something like what Tonic does to Anon, their reactions to the symbiotes constantly trying to get them laid would be funny. Would they be able to sense a succubus?

>>30246823
Sort of now that I think about it.
Would be funny to see what goes on in their heads and who they get

also working on a Tonic update

>>30246850
HYPE!

>>30246862
But it'll take awhile since i'm getting back into it and writing an update to Incubus Anon at the same time

>>30246933
Take it easy, trepp. Don't overwork yourself on green, write at your own leisure.
Excited for both stories, I await your update.

>>30246811
>Black suit Sunset.
>"Anon get back here!"
>"AAAAAANNNNNNNOOOOOONNNN!!"
"YOU CAN'T ESCAPE ME, I'LL CHASE YOU TO THE ENDS OF THE EARTH!"

>>30246985
Don't worry. I'm mainly focusing on the other ones while writing a few sentences in Incubus every now and then.
I want to be ready to reveal the succubus sister once I get the pic

>>30246990
Makes sense but what about the others? Makes me wonder who's the least insane

>>30247023
I want to bet Pinkie is the least insane. With Fluttershy, Applejack, and Rarity, being the worst out of them in that order.

>>30247047
I see were you're coming from but how would they act?

>>30247023
I think it would be funny to make Pinkie the least insane or have each of them represent one of the seven deadly sins while in symbiote form
I think that would be interesting.
>Sunset is wrath.
>Rarity is lust
>ETC.

>>30247065
I can see that. It's gonna be hell for Anon if he has to deal with them

>>30247065
Or you can make Rarity gluttony because when she is stressed she eats ice cream.
It would be funny seeing a symbiote Rara break into a ice cream store and eat everything.

>>30247135
And his only ally is a symbiote Ponk who is somehow the least insane.

>>30247157
>Sunset is Wrath it doesn't help that she has spider powers.
>Get's jealous of Anon working together with Ponk.
>"How dare you Anon, I thought we had was special!"

>>30247157
And the kicker is that Pinkie still wants Anon

>>30247171
I'm getting a strange sitcom vibe here

>>30247050
Fluttershy would be the Spiderman 3 edgy teen phase that she never had the courage to go through, Applejack would be the lusty farm girl multiplied by the power of symbiote, seeing as she was always stuck on the farm her thirst would be...extreme. Rarity would be so damn precise in her fashion work it would turn into an obsession, and when she gets bad reviews...it is taken as a deep personal insult. Sunset would go back to pre rainbow lasering, maybe less, maybe more, just slightly more bitchy overall. Twilight would become /b/. Dash would get ultra competitive and get angry at anything that doesn't work out properly. Pinkie...would still be Pinkie, just slightly easier to make sad, would be very huggable, and is desperate to help her friends.

>>30247183
>>30247187
Sunset is the angry girlfriend too Pinkie's sweatheart that just wants everyone happy, and is likely to try and hug it out with Sunset. With or without crying.

>>30247187
And yet Anon stays by their sides. As best as he can

I'm ok with this

>>30247143
>"Don't look at me I'm hideous!"
>Sym Rara proceeds to eat swallow two tubs of mint chip at once.
>>30247183
>All girls except ponk are destroying the town their own way.
>Anon looks and Sunset is wrecking buildings in a fit of jealous rage.
>Anon looks at the screen.
"The things I do for love."

>>30247217
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VF-eWkKMBns

>>30247217
I'm seeing my idea for Apartment manager Anon coming back with them as his tenants/family.

>>30232589
Was WW actually not shit or is this just a meme?

>>30247187
>Anon makes a group of misfits with sym Ponk, The Great and Powerful Mysterio, Vulture, Doc Octy and Shocker.
>"Why should we help those dweebs?'
"Because, if they destroy everything you won't have any banks to rob."
>"Fine"
"What I'm saying is I know we all have rough patches but, if you don't want to save the city to help people at least save it for your self interests."

>>30247434
It wasn't shit.

>>30247445
cool

>>30247437
And yet, most of them are clingy to Anon

>>30247520
Being the town therapist for supers is hard, and S.H.I.E.L.D. making him run an apartment complex for them is hard too.

>>30247557
Anon is a therapist for villains. But that would be an interesting twist in my story

>>30247607
Well, crazy symbiotes would make them villains, for a little while at least. And being the responsible man he is, helping them work through it...with the girls stacked on top of each other down the hall an looking around the corner, glaring in the general direction.

After a fight with a villain I wonder if Anon and Spider-Shim would make out with this song in the background.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEzuBgeiSnk

>>30247628
Got that right. I'll need to see if i can wirk that in. Great idea though

>>30247638
Doing what I can, currently passing my time in qst doing a prototype cyoa.

>>30247647
Well thanks for the idea. Should the others be heroes? I mean Twilight and her friends. I'm playing around with the idea

>>30247636
Maybe once Anon gets the symbiote off of Sunset.
But, it was interrupted by Rainbow telling them.
>"Get a room." Which causes Rarity to knock her head and Flutters to glare at her.
Rara and Flutters are shippers and hate it when someone ruins a moment.

>>30247659
Sure, friends that fight crime together, go to therapy for unfulfilled desires together.
>>30247668
...that sounds about right, lonely weebshy would totally be a shipper.

>>30247681
Sounds good then. Was debating on that but it seems to fit now that i think of it like Web of Shadows

>>30247668
I wonder if Flutters and Rara follow Anon and Sunny during dates then have signs
Rarity holds a sign towards Sunset
[kiss him DO IT]
Fluttershy points a sign at Anon
[touch her butt]

>>30247143
If Rarity’s gluttony then who's lust?>>30247756
This seems a bit cute to me

>>30247819
Applejack is lust, or Fluttershy. But sexy farmgirl leglocking you is hot as shit. Applebuns is best power bottom. Fluttershy would be more wrath than any of the others.

>>30247835
Hot.
Ok so Rarity is gluttony, AJ lust, Fluttershy wrath. Now who's envy, greed, pride and sloth?

>>30247756
>>30247819
A villain attacks the restaurant. Rarity then says a "A captain will go down with her ship."

>>30247853
>Sunset envy
>RD pride
>Twi greed
>Ponk sloth because she is the least insane.

>>30247875
That makes so much sense yet i still have a question. How would Sunset and Twilight be? Pinkie being lazy would be easy while Rainbow would simple to do i think

>>30247853
Then in that case...I could maybe see, Sunset being envy,
>>30247875
This works exactly as I was going to write, their names just escaped me for some reason. Hell, the symbiote helps mellow out Pinkie, turns out her crazy was a mental problem in her brain and the symbiote fixed it. Now she's relaxing properly for the first time in her life...and giving her legs a chance to rest too. Still the happy friend girl she always is, just...slightly less unhinged. Turns out that was actually normal.

>>30247889
>Sunset would act bitchy like her old self and does what ever she wants to get something (envy)
>Twi would be power hungry (greed)

>>30247919
Ok. So basically first movie Sunset and a Twilight almost acting like Midnight.

>>30247889
Sunset, would be envy on a scale of after rainbow laser, then getting super possessive with her friends, Twilight would be>>30247919
what this guy said, or just hungry for books, or depending on how weeb you want her, a super otaku...until it escalates to a Midnight level problem. Again.

>>30247929
I would say so but this time first movie Sunset has symbiote spider powers.

>>30247941
>>30247945
Thanks for the help. I'll make sure to use these when i can

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All this potential for great green has me excited. Also, looking forward to you continuing Tonic trep.

>>30247959
How are you going to start it?
Have Anon come home after work/class to find Sunset still in her suit but, notice it's black?

>>30247985
Well since it'll be therapist Anon, i was thinking of having it were Sunset is getting angry over her failed attempt to stop Anon. Maybe she meets up with everyone in an abandoned subway or something were they all get covered by symbiotes. Meanwhile Anon is dealing with his human kitty and yandere love interest.

>>30248022
I wouldn't say their yandere...yet. Just possessive. And not in a completely bad way either.

>>30248057
I'm just goving a short idea on how it might go. But it will happen like that in a sense. I'm just gonna have Anon talk to Sunset after class before she takjs to her friends

>>30248079
Okay man.

>>30248106
It'll be a bit till i get to that point but I'll make it happen

>>30247756
>After the restaurant is destroyed from the battle Sunset, Anon, Fluttershy, and Rarity are the only ones left. Everyone else evacuated and the cops won't be there at least four minutes.
>Sunset lifts her mask halfway and kisses Anon.
>Rarity gets all gitty and Fluttershy whispers
>"Caress her spandex butt."
>Anon does it.
>"yeeeessssss"

>>30248565
I'm betting they get off to this

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>>30248565
It's starting to look more like an open relationship with voyeurism than just shippers assuring their friends/otp stay together.

>>30248766
Trep's digits have spoken and the two girls need a better hobby.

>>30248804
I say let them have their fun

>>30248859
I just don't fancy the idea of people watching me before, during or after.

>>30248804
>>30248920
>Before doing each other Anon and Sunset look around for any cameras and bugs.
>Right when they think the coast was clear Anon saw a big rock move outside.
>They actually fucking made a rock costume.
>Anon grabs the spray bottle and heads outside.

>>30248974
Kek, does Anon and Sunset just drag them in for a 4some so they stop at some point?

>>30248998
The spray bottle works just fine.
"Get get get!"

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I... have some personal shit to work through.
please stand by during this short hiatus of DEAR GOD SOMEONE HELP ME.
it's okay.... just don't expect much from me during the next week or so

>>30249767
Its okay mang, get what you need done, done.

>>30249767
Take all the time you need, buddy. We'll be hear once you get back

>>30249767
Hopefully you can get your stuff sorted out.
Best of luck from us.

>>30249767
Whatever it is, I'm sure you've got it.

So, what did everyone think of Wonder Woman?
I thought it was a solid 6.5/10.

>>30251297
I'd have to raise it slightly higher. About 7/10 or so.
It was finally a competently made DC cinematic universe movie. The two main characters Diana and Steve Trevor were actually likable and had great character interaction, unlike a CERTAIN DC movie. Cough, cough, BvS, cough.

>>30251492
It's about time there was a decent DC movie. I really don't understand why all their movies suck after the Dark Knight Trilogy? DC makes great animated films and has good vidya under their belt. So why do they fuck up on the live action movies so bad?

>>30251492
A big things that killed it for me was
1. Captain America The First Avenger already exists, which WW apes to an incredible degree
2. the complete lack of moral ambiguity or sympathy for the German forces
3. that Fucking Mustache. You know the one.

Other than that, it was just okay. Also, I really dislike gratuitous slow-motion.

>>30251559
A lot of it was due to them trying to make a connected universe throughout multiple films, attempting to follow in the footsteps of Marvel, since they have pulled it off extremely well.
I would say that this caused a decrease in the quality of their films, since their main purpose was to be the predecessor of a Justice League film.

Small Tobic update

>Since Pinkie joined your little date, you’ve been feeling very nervous as she clung to your arm.
>She seemed to be glaring at Lemon, who playfully glares right back.
>As you walked with the two excitable girls, you passed by a few stores that they wanted to go into.
>Being a nice guy, and not wanting an argument to happen, you escorted them to the various stores.
>Luckily you didn’t need to carry anything since they were just looking around.
>Though Lemon did find a strange called Giggles and wanted to go there.
>You told her to go when Indigo was with her.
>After visiting a couple more store, you and the girls were at the last store of the street.
>The candy store.
> ‘You better get more chocolate,’ Tonic instructed from your mind.
‘I was gonna do that anyways, mom,’ you sassed, walking down the chocolate aisle.
> ‘Don’t back talk and you wouldn't want to be my child, host,’ Tonic commented, ‘Get that one. It tastes so smooth.’
>Nodding, you grab a few bars while looking at a box of truffles.
>Just then your senses went crazy as you turned around with your arms wide open and wrapped them around your attacker.
> “Wow, you’re quick, Anon,” Lemon cheered, wrapping her arms around your neck and nuzzling you.
>It felt nice feeling her soft hair brush against you as you could smell her vanilla shampoo.
“Pinkie does this every day so I sort of built a sixth sense for this,” you lied, happy she could see your face while you hugged her.
>You stayed like that for a moment before looking up to see a terrifying sight.
>Pinkie Pie glaring hatefully at you.
> ‘I think she's glaring at Lemon, host,’ Tonic proposed, ‘But why would she be doing that? Do all your kinds females do that?’
‘Maybe? I've never seen Pinkie this mad, not even with those party crashers from a year ago,’ you pondered, chuckling nervously as you let Lemon go.
>Your green haired attacker turned around and was walking away from you.

>>30251744
>Pinkie followed Lemon’s movement while glaring at her.
>Unknown to you, Lemon just smiles at Pinkie a little to sweetly as if to challenge her.
>Shrugging your shoulders, you went back to looking at other kinds of candy when you heard someone screaming.
>You saw both Lemon and Pinkie run out the door causing you to sigh.
>Putting down the chocolates, you walked out the store in time to see a small crowd running down the road.
“What’s going on?” you wondered, look at your friends for an answer.
> “I think it has something to do with that black spider lady,” Pinkie replied, pointing to the side.
>Turning to the pointed direction, you saw what looked like a black suited woman crawling on the wall.
>The mystery woman seemed to be looking for something as her large white eyes were scanning the area.
> ‘Host,’ Tonic began, ‘We might have a problem.’
‘I'm guessing you know this girl? Ex girlfriend?’ you snarked, watching the woman closely.
> ‘No. That is my biological clone.’
‘What?’ you asked, having a bad feeling about this.
> ‘My sister so to speak,’ Tonic answered as your eyes widened.
‘Well shit. We're fucked aren't we,’ you groaned, knowing the answer.
> ‘While not how I would word it, but most likely,’ Tonic answered, getting you to frown at his answer.

All i got at the moment. Gonna work on some more green tomorrow

>>30251753
>My sister, so to speak.
Oh shit nigga it's gonna be a symbiote slimefest.

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>You will never have a normal night with Sunny.

>>30251974
changed the gender of Venom. Found it interesting that Carnage in the niece of Anti-Venom

>>30251983
>You and Sunset finally go out after all the crime fighting she is doing and you working and taking care the 8 month old daughteru when Sunny does her thing.
>You two decide who should babysit.
So who would you let babysit the daughteru?
>Twi
>RD
>Flutters
>Ponk
>AJ
>Rara

>>30252257
Easy mode:
Twi
>Flutters
>Ponk
>AJ
>Rara

What the fuck are you thinking?! mode:
>RD

>>30252257
The Sunset daughteru chronicles continues still.
God Tier: Flutters and Pinkie
Mid Tier: Rarity, AJ and Twilight
Shit Tier: Raindow Dash

>>30252387
Rainbow would be the type of babysitter that would leave the baby in the bathtub.

>>30252387
>>30252313
I wouldn't trust Rainbow unless one of the other girls were there with her.

>>30251744
>Though Lemon did find a strange called Giggles and wanted to go there.
strange store*?

Finally decided to get off my lazy ass and try to get some writing done. I should have some more /k/ anon for you guys by the weekend.

>>30253121
Damn. Thanks dor pointing that out

>>30253979
Hyped

>>30253979
That's great

>>30253979
Sweeet!

Gonna work on therapist anon today

>>30256443
Nice.

did beans ever come back

>>30256474
Yeah. Got the idea for the next part so it should be easy to write

>>30256555
What do you think?
>>30256558
Looking forward too it.

>>30256583
i didn't ask because i knew the answer

>>30256583
It'll be tonight. Hopefully

>>30232589
Hips and tiddas.

>>30257749
Hips and tiddas too, you know how I do, that's what I wake up to.
My apple waifu sits right at this round, hips and tiddas combination on time.

>>30258332
Update when?

>>30258355
Possibly this coming weekend.
I'm currently wrapping up a lot of final projects and exams this week. Once I experience sweet release, I'll have a lot more time to write some green.
In the meantime, I did some light writing for RGRE.

>>30258823
Gonna check that out in a bit. Still writing the therapist update and don't know if I'll poat it tonight or not

>>30259043
Not happening tonight. Will post tomorrow

>>30259865
ugh tease

>Sunset will never have road rage on a motorcycle.

>>30232589
Guys I just thought of something:
>Gun fu Anon.

>>30260695
you mean /k/ Anon?

>>30260973
/k/ Anon is just guns. He doesn't go John Wick.

>>30261012
Yet

>>30261022
>Sunset doesn't like it when Anon kills.
>If he kills he gets no Snu-Snu.

>>30261035
>Sunset doesn't like it when Anon kills.
>Anon uses his superior marksmanship to incapacitate.Sunset is rather hazy on the subject of kneecaps.

>>30261076
>"You paralyzed him."
"He hit and robbed a old lady. Fucker deserved it."

god this entire board has somehow gotten more dead

>>30261012
Why go John Wick when you can go John Preston.

>>30260575
Correct, because she isn't a halfwit. Only fucktards get road rage; normal and reasonable people don't get irrationally angry over something as trivial as driving.

>>30232589
>Wonder Woman wasn't shit
Wait what really? maybe I should go see it.

>>30261833
I'll wait till it's on dvd

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>Sunset's personality changes with the black suit.

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>>30263045
>burnt bacon hair
Hot

>>30262930
Would a video game character work in this thread? Just asking

>>30263045
I see her being like Keaton's Sunset fronm the bully green

>>30263045
Fucking unf

>>30263504
>>30263222
>>30263231
>>30263236
>>30263247
>>30263251
>>30263260

>>30263126
If they can be adapted to a Super hero story, I don't see why not. Anon finds alien power suit or something.

>>30264231
True. We just never did anything involving video games

>>30264517
Yeah, damn shame too, there are a few that are technically part of Marvel/DC stuff by proxy. At least in a side story anyway.

>>30263126
>Would a video game character work in this thread?
Says the writefag who started with a video game crossover.
Seriously though I think as long as there is an element of someone being superhuman (in that they're more than human, we've had vampires brought up before) I don't see why we shouldn't allow it.

That also brings up the question of transhumanism/cyberpunk stuff; augmenting yourself through technology technically makes you more than human, it could be said that you're superhuman.

>>30264662
Like Cole from Infamous for DC and Master Chief for Marvel? Not to mention that Star Wars comics are now made by Marvel as well.

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>>30264689
Yeah, I remember the DC one being a thing, but when did Chief get throw in Marvel, not saying it doesn't fit, just curious. And of course the guy from the Darkness series punching the shit out of Superman.
>>30264680
Too be fair, the Infamous series is a regular comic hero story, just slightly different universes. 5 Bucks says that Mr. Fantastic uses his multiverse portal as a tv sometimes just to get some perspective.

>>30264680
I'm having an off day and slowly being driven mad at my job.

>>30264745
I'm sorry trepp, do you want something fun to read in your off time?

>>30264730
Back in 2007 to promote Halo 3. They made other Halo comics in 09 and 10.

>>30264762
No. I was just saying my reason for forgetting.

Right now, I'm trying to get my therapist update done

>>30264680
Like a certain orc street samurai?
>>30264779
Cool, so how were they put together? Same universe?

>>30264791
Ah, okay then, what do you do anyways?

>>30264792
Yeah same universe as the games. I dunno about Marvel cannon though.

>>30264801
Parking attendant but I'm looking for a new job. One that won't involve Yankee fans

>>30264816
Yikes, that's rough. Yankees fans suck ass.
>>30264808
Wow...that's something to think about. Chief is in the same universe as She-Hulk...their kids would be unstoppable.

>>30264840
Don’t have them but they just make my job a nightmare sometimes

>>30264840
Chief or Spartans in general can't have sex. They were given serums that made their sex drives non-existent. So basically from the age of six, Spartans IIs and IIIs are killing machines.

>>30264923
Technically speaking, any sports fans make life difficult, its just a matter of how your forced to be around them
>>30264935
Not quite true, the drugs were administered at the same time as the final augmentations for the IIs, that way their natural brain chemicals can let them develop properly, the sex drive is there, but its like hitting on an extremely obstinate Maud...that can break you in a thousand different ways with one finger. And being super serious. Cortana might be the only one, with the exception of Halsey or Mendez, that I can think of to get him to try getting laid. I would say Johnson too...but we all know how that turned out.

>>30264962
>>30264935
And while the IIIs were not given as...extensive augments, the serum was just a tone down one so they wouldn't try fucking each other on the job. There are a few incidents that show it is possible to get in a relationship with IIs, its just harder. IIIs are objectively easier to try and unwind, but that's more because they were turned into rabid killing machines with more emotions than a II, not cut off or down to the extent of a II, but its still a bit difficult to get with a child soldier with anger issues and PTSD pre training. Which was the point.

>>30264935
>>30265015
In short, think of the Spartan IIIs as a more angry child soldier version of Captain America. While the IIs...they are the real deal war machines. Still technically human, because the mental foundation is still there, but the windows and doors are almost all boarded up, with the only entrance so barricaded and stacked on defenses that its like walking through No Man's Land in WW2. Doable...if your super fucking lucky, but impractical and dangerous otherwise.

>>30264962
>>30265015
The game takes place 500 years in the future so even the comics take place in the marvelverse all heroes are dead. Unless there is some type of time shift that happens, where a spartan or a few ayy lmaos come to 21st century.

>>30265204
Well.....the Pillar of autumn did get cut in half, and the portal was breaking. Time shenanigans could happen.

>>30265256
>A small fleet of phantoms and banshees attacks Manhattan right next to Sunset and Anon's apartment complex.

>>30265341
>Then when the aliens start an occupation and Sunset is swinging Elites into lightposts, the Chief drops out of orbit...on a broken piece of metal. Again. This time he lands in the middle of the alien encampment.

>>30265377
And right in front of the heroes with his battle rifle ready.

>>30265377
>Anon is rolling around in a police jeep running over Grunts. Shooting jackals with a shotgun.
>>30265470
kek, when the dust settles, the only sure thing in the universe is that he stands up.

>>30265487
"Don't worry Sunset I played enough vidya to know what to do."

>>30265487
>>30265519
>Anon starts singing while running over grunts.
"CAN YOU FEEL THE SUNSHINE?
DOES IT BRIGHTEN UP YOUR DAY?
DON'T YOU FEEL THAT SOMETIMES YOU JUST NEED TO RUN AWAY?"
>"Anon are ok?"
"Living the dream baby."

>>30265588
Mister Dub Dubs shows Anon living it large, and by technicality he can kill as many invading aliens as he wants, so Sunset cant get mad at him.

>>30265630
One thing I don't get is that heroes are against killing but when it comes to aliens it's open season.

>>30265672
They don't have to live with the Aliens. Its kind of hard to live on a planet when you killed your neighbors brother during a robbery stopping and he had a hostage...unless your Frank Castle. Plus only crazy people would say its bad to defend yourselves from an invading army.

>>30265377
Would Chief fight the heroes by mistake?

>>30265916
Unless the more...alien ones are around, maybe for a little bit. When he sees them saving civvies and killing aliens he would stop it.

>>30265588
"I'm going to kill every single alien I see."
>Anon then remembers Sunset is technically an alien.

>>30265962
"Correction, I am going to kill every no sexy alien from this dimension attacking out planet. Sorry babe, my bad."

>>30265983
None* sexy

>>30233332
>Unsurprisingly you were right.
>Lime or Limestone, her real name, did bring you a bit of trouble.
>The moment she finished her transformation, Octavia woke up and saw the very last part.
>What happened next wasn’t a shouting match, like you expected, but an unimpressive stare match.
>Vinyl even woke up as she called Gilda and Gaea over for some unknown reason.
>That was about fifteen minutes ago and the little staring match was getting a little ridiculous.
“Girls,” you began, the girls instantly turned to you, “Can you tell me why you're trying to glare holes into each other?”
> “I'm just annoyed that this flea covered animal was staying with you, love,” Octavia huffed, crossing her arms under her chest.
>Sighing, you saw Vinyl and the other two whispering among themselves while pointing at you.
>Paying them little mind, you focused your attention on the two girls sitting next to you.
> “You’re just mad cause I get to stay here while you're stuck at your own place, tentacle girl,” Limestone insulted, rolling her eyes.
>You could see Octavia go red as Vinyl and her little posse giggle.
>It makes sense that Vinyl would find this amusing.
>Wouldn’t surprise if they made bets or something.
> “I’m worried what you could do to my love. For all we know, you could be a thief,” Octavia huffed, glaring at slightly shorter girl.
“Octavia, please calm down,” you interjected, but they paid you no attention as they stood up.
> “Afraid I’m gonna steal his heart, you living hentai fantasy,” Limestone hissed, her cat ears and tail forming while raking her nails on your table.
>You could see the scratches she was making as your eye twitched.
>They better not break your…
> “That’s rich coming from the walking pussy joke,” Octavia growled, smashing one of her tendrils into your table.
>...Stuff.

>>30266296
“Great, now i need a new table,” you muttered, rubbing your temples to stop the oncoming headache, “Can you two not destroy anything else.”
> “I can see a joke right in front of me and it has the most pathetic love life,” Limestone smirked, crossing her arms under her chest.
>Octavia just glares at the catgirl, her tendrils waving in the air threateningly.
> “At least I have a nice and warm home with a loving owner,” Limestone responded, having a look like she caught the canary.
>Not sure if that’s offensive or not, but you decided to drop it.
>Gilda and Gaea watched with baited breath while Vinyl pulls out her phone, pointing it in your direction.
>Most likely filming this for her own sick pleasure.
> “At least I can get a love life instead of mooching off of someone like a furry parasite,” Octavia countered, slamming her hands on the table.
>That seemed to get under Limestone’s skin, or fur, as her hair was sticking up a bit.
> “At least I get some affection from people unlike you,” Limestone hissed, clawing at your table.
>You sighed as the other girls looked about ready to burst out laughing.
>Limestone and Octavia were quietly glaring at each other, making your eye twitch.
> “I have a bigger chest than you, kitty cat,” Octavia smirked, causing Limestone’s eyes narrowed.
>In an instant, Limestone jumped over your table and tried to scratch Octavia with her claws.
>Tried being the keyword since Octavia used her tendrils to hold Limestone’s limbs.
>You got up from your spot at the table and pushed the two away from each other.
>While you were trying to get Limestone’s limbs free, you could hear Vinyl and the girls laughing up a storm.
“You girls mind helping, if it's not too much trouble,” you screamed, trying to free Limestone
> “Naw dude. You got this,” Vinyl laughed, still pointing her phone at you.
> “I don’t want to steal your thunder,” Gilda chuckled, holding her sides.

>>30266307
> “You're doing fine without us, Anon,” Gaea giggled, covering her mouth in a ladylike fashion.
>It took a few tries and getting pushed into their chests, but you were able to get them to stop trying to kill each other.
>For now.
“Okay, now that's done, both of you stop fighting,” you ordered, standing in between the two girls.
> “But,” the two began, but you held up your hand.
“No fighting,” you yelled, ending the argument.
>The girls looked down as Vinyl and Gilda groaned.
>Looking up, you saw Gaea holding her hand out to the other two.
> “Pay up,” Gaea commanded, grinning as Vinyl and Gilda pulled out some money.
> “Stupid plant bitch,” Gilda mumbled, handing Gaea the money.
>Vinyl just grumbled something incoherent as she gave her money to Gaea as she started to count the money, mockingly.
“......Do I want to know? Wait, it was a bet wasn’t it,” you guessed, shaking your head as Gaea grinned some more.
> “Yup,” Gaea cheered, putting the money into her cleavage.
>Well that made sense since her dress didn't look like it had any pockets.
“I don’t want to know what the stakes were,” you sighed, walking towards your room as you felt tired just from their antics
> “Where you going, Anon?” Gaea inquired from your dinner room.
“Sleep in my bed and hope the goes back to making sense in the morning. You can stay if you want just don't make a mess,” you answered, entering your room and falling onto your bed.
>You stayed in there, closing your eyes as sleep slowly came to you.
>Before you drifted into the void of sleep, you felt something lean into your sides as two pairs of arms wrap around your own arms.
>A moment later, you felt a weight on your chest while something grabbed your shirt.
>Opening your eyes slightly, you saw that Limestone was lying on your chest while her cat ears twitched.
>glancing to your left, you saw Vinyl hugging your arm into her chest while using your shoulder as a pillow.

>>30266312
>And to your right was Octavia who laced her fingers with her and grasped your hand tightly.
>Not wanting to fight the warm cuddles, you closed your eyes and let the sandman take you to dream land.
“Night, girls,” you muttered at the last moment.


Newest Therapist update and hope i did Limestone justice.

>>30266319
The bet was on the level of lewdity that was about to transpire wasn't it?

Just a few things:
+Great dialogue, I felt the angry vibes coming from the two girls.
-There was a lot of mixing of past and present tenses, stick with one.

>>30266382
Actually it was whether Anon was gonna touch one or both, Gaea bet on both.

Working on that present tense thing

>>30266319
These girls are going to drive Anon to drink.

>>30266296
>Wouldn’t surprise if they
surprise you*
> “I have a bigger chest than you, kitty cat,” Octavia smirked, causing Limestone’s eyes narrowed.
eyes to*
>“Sleep in my bed and hope the goes back to making sense in the morning
the what?
>>30266319
>And to your right was Octavia who laced her fingers with her and grasped your hand tightly.
her what and her what?
>>30266416
The ending for this scene was cute as shit, but I cant help but notice you used a gratuitous amount of as*s while writing.

>>30267134
I'll fix the stuff later

>10

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>>30249767
good news: I properly defended myself and the 96.000 europedollars worth of equipment is not on my conscience

better news: I still wrote to clear my head at times

minorly bad news: laptop's out of battery and I'll take a nap now, upload soon™

>>30269584
Sweet, and congrats on not getting screwed for property damage.

>>30269584
That's great news

>>30269584
Glad to hear you did lived through it.

>>30270342

>>30213833
>Be Anon.
>Morning routine.
>Walking in the bathroom and turning on the light also raises your new apartment AI out of it’s slumber.
>”Good morning, Anon.”
“Mornin’ Tay.”
>You installed her yesterday after work, you have had a slight buzz from Flim’s slcohol, but you remember well how Tay had complained about feeling naked.
>She only gets access to your laptops microphone and camera, and the lighting of your dorm room and the bathroom.
>Hence, she only notices you being awake if you do anything with said sensors, or if you turn on the light.
>If Tay wouldn’t constantly say she’s not an AI and only simulates emotions, not feel them you’d say she complained about it, while simultaneously claiming happiness over being allowed to host anyones living quarters again.
>When asked about this again she said she’s not much more than a Tic Tac Toe bot, which is not an AI either, it just takes certain inputs and acts accordingly.
>You retorted that a human also has sensory organs and will act accordingly.
>And finally she clarified that she would never be able to surprise her own programmer, she only has a certain amount of outputs.
>Even if she would have the access to climate control, no matter the circumstances, she’d never be able to come to the calculation that it’s worth to turn off air circulation and suffocate anyone inside.
>She may be able to be tricked into believing nobody is in the room she’d cut off, but her programming simply cannot reach far enough to evaluate a human.
>There are bots who can suggest something like that, but will always need human permission to kill anyone.
>She’s also only programmed with this one possible scenario as an example, she’s not able to think of any other scenario in which she might be able to kill a human.
>“Hey, Anon.”, a Sunsetty voice derails your train of thought.
>Before you knew it your feet had carried you into the university.
“Hey...” you look around to find the culprit.

>>30271958
>Naturalistic make-up, slightly less tan, cheerless and less confident demeanor.
“Sunset... You are... you’re still here.” You shake your head, “I mean, hi, how are you?”
>“Yeah, I’m still here,” Sunset catches up to you nods you to walk with her to class. “And... just peachy- No, I can’t even bring myself to lie to you, Do you want to know what happened yesterday? All hell broke loose.” She stomps her foot down, cracking two of the floor tiles.
“Let’s... go somewhere,” you suggest. “No, you know what? Let’s skip class entirely.”
>“Yeah...” she sighs, “what’s the point anyway? Well, you still have a life here, while I...”
“I have good attendance, I can skip a few lectures. While, I don’t see the point of continuing college either. The world just grew so much more... grim over the past few days.”
>“You want to drop out of college?”, she asks as she leads you up to the roof again.
“I- well, I’m thinking about it, I guess.”
>The door to the roof was locked, with a note of students not being allowed on the roof.
>“Think that’s our fault?”
“Eh.” you shrug and move to the door.
>You’ve dealt with electric locks before, but you also know how a mechanical one works.
>Laying your palm over the keyhole you let some nanites stream in and feel around.
>“What are you doing?”
“Picking the lock,”
>It’s... trickier than you expected, but eventually you form a key that works and turn your hand around.
>With a satisfying click the door unlocks and you open it for Sunset.
“That’s not a healing factor,” she states.
>You only reveal the key protruding from your palm before letting it slide back into your hand again and motion her to be quiet by putting one finger to your lips
>That’s just how life is now.
>Sunsed nods and steps out into the open air.
>“Ok.” she says devoid of any surprise or astonishment as she goes to drop of her cellphone once more by the air vents like yesterday.

>>30271960
“I formed the nanites which are supposed to heal my body into a solid structure.” you inform her. “I can make claws too.”
>The key disappears and you form three claws between your knuckles to show them off for a moment.
“There is a whole lot Treehugger didn’t tell me about me, meaning to protect me...” you sigh. “I understand how-” you shake your head. “Things change.”
>Sunset nods, “I don’t know what to think anymore...” as she forms a fist and looks at it she tells you, “I cannot punch my way our of it... cannot say something witty to a villain, or... or...”
>You take her in an embrace.
>“Twilight, she...”
>She doesn’t continue talking.
>She doesn’t cry, even though you assume she was about to.
>All she does is stay in your embrace without moving.
>You don’t know what to say either.
>How could you cheer her up.
>“We don’t even properly have each other if we are to...”
>You only tighten your grip on her.
“Don’t talk... We don’t need to talk, I’m just... here for you, okay?”
>“Yeah... I-” she returns the hug, latching herself onto you as well. “I’d like that.”
>You remain like this for a while until-
>A phone rings.
>...
>That was the ringtone with which Spitfire contacted you yesterday.
>You slowly let go of Sunset.
“That-”
>“-can wait.” she finishes your sentence and tries to hold onto your arm.
“No, I- I think that one could further the plot.”
>Neither you nor Sunset know how to properly proceed.
>You are a passive party, only waiting to react.
>You feel like you lost the rights of the main character of your own freaking life.

>>30271969
“It’s probably Spitfire.”
>“Spitfire?”, she repeats confused and slightly follows you.
>As you pick up your phone you confirm your suspicion to her and show off Spitfire’s photo as well.
>“What?”
>You pick up.
“You’re on speaker.”
>“Mr. West, Ms. Shimmer. Good morning”, her voice comes through loud and clear.
“Colonel Spitfire, are you afraid I’m conspiring with one of your agents?”, you say mockingly.
>With your eyes, however, you are apologizing to Sunset about it.
>“It wouldn’t be espionage if you’d not know whom to trust and whom not to. What I do trust in is Ms. Shimmers heart to be in the right place.”
>Well, you know that’s a lie.
>Sunset’s emotionally distraught and would be an easy target for you to... conspire with.
>“What do you want?”, Sunset snarls into the phone you’re holding up.
>“I’d actually like to give you some hints, Ms. Shimmer, in how to carry out your assigned mission.”
>Sunset’s mission?
>You don’t need to wonder about it long as Spitfire continues, “Mr. West has proven to have some insight into Ms. Sparkle’s mind. He did correctly guess her password after not even speaking with her for more than a year, isn’t that correct?”
>You frown.
>Twilight’s mind? How is that Sunset’s mission?
“She has been kidnapped by this Starlight, right?” you remember Sunset mentioning it, but you somewhat forgot after all that has happened. “Do you want to know how she might try to make contact in captivity? She can McGuiver herself out of a lot, I assume-”
>“You’re working on old intel, Mr. West.” Spitfire informs you, “Intel you are not supposed to have in the first place.”
“Uhh... You know how Treehugger has a way of getting to know things, right?”

>>30271974
>“Or we have a leak... Ms. Shimmer?”
>“She’s his friend too!” Sunset defends herself, “and it’s not like I revealed some specifics, or- like anything anyone can use for... I don’t know.”
>“I’m just-”
“No, Sunset, it is a matter of principle. She should be able to trust you,” you turn to the phone and address Spitfire again. “We all should be able to trust one another, shouldn’t we?”
>“You’d make a good agent, Mr. West.” Spitfire’s compliment seems a little out of place, even if you had said what she wanted to hear, “But whatever may be, I hope you are having a good day, I need to get back to work.”
>You frown once more.
“Good day... I guess.”
>Sunset merely glares at the phone and doesn’t say her good byes, but Spitfire does one last.
>“I’m looking forward to hear from you again, bye.”
>And she hangs up.
>“That was odd...” Sunset comments and crosses her arms and moves away from the phone again, “I’m really growing to dislike her- and what was that about?” she changes posture again to gesture to you, “you defend her? Why?”
“Your loyalty to the Wonderbolts can’t be called into question...” you tell her as you catch up to her. “Not much further than it is by now anyways. Also we have to assume a fourth party may be listening in.”
>Fuck espionage.
>Fuck politics.
“But we know what to do now, at least.”
>Sunset looks at you confused, not having picked up on Spitfire’s hint.
“You- officially take me to the Wonderbolts because of Twilight.” you relay to her.
>“Oh...”

>>30271983
Thanks for the update m8

>>30266296
>>Vinyl even woke up as she called Gilda and Gaea over for some unknown reason.
Yeah, usually when I call people over it wakes me up as well

>> “You’re just mad cause I get to stay here while you're stuck at your own place, tentacle girl,” Limestone insulted, rolling her eyes.
So she's a hobo/squatter?

>>You could see Octavia go red as Vinyl and her little posse giggle.
drop the "you can see X happening", okay? X just happens
*giggled

>> “Afraid I’m gonna steal his heart, you living hentai fantasy,” Limestone hissed, her cat ears and tail forming while raking her nails on your table.
when did Lime crushing on Anon come into place?

>>30266307
>"At least I...
>"At least I...
>"At least I...

>> “I have a bigger chest than you, kitty cat,” Octavia smirked, causing Limestone’s eyes narrowed.
unrelated insult(?) in their match
hmmm...
>"Give affection?" Octavia laughs, "There's nothing on you a man would like to give affection to, kitty cat."
>She empathized her words by gesturing to her own much more generous chest.

>>In an instant, Limestone jumped over your table and tried to scratch Octavia with her claws.
>scratch
sounds kinda weak
>slash at

>>While you were trying to get Limestone’s limbs free, you could hear Vinyl and the girls laughing up a storm.
>“You girls mind helping, if it's not too much trouble,” you screamed, trying to free Limestone
second "trying to free" is redundant, you already said that the previous sentence.

>>30266312
>>It took a few tries and getting pushed into their chests,
pronoun refer to those just talked about, in this case Gaea, Gilda and Vinyl
feels like you added their sentences later anc forgot to change it.

>[...]but you were able to get them to stop trying to kill each other.
wait... through muscle power?
shouldn't "therapist anon" not talk them out of it?


Why is anon never commenting about their affection to him? We don't know his thoughts about it.

>>30267134
>> “I have a bigger chest than you, kitty cat,” Octavia smirked, causing Limestone’s eyes narrowed.
>eyes to*
>causing Limestone’s eyes to narrowed.
nope

>The ending for this scene was cute as shit, but I cant help but notice you used a gratuitous amount of as*s while writing.
I have similar problems, thankfully there's help!
http://www.english-grammar-revolution.com/list-of-conjunctions.html

>>30273281
Thanks Untitled for the advice.

Also i was writing this on a very hectic day and slowly going crazy

>>30273311
Dub dubs mean all is forgiven.

>>30273311
it's mostly just style choices and... whatever it is you're doing with past tense and a progressive -ing form one can't place because you never put a "to be" form in there
I don't do it all the time either, but it just sounds so present and doesn't quite fit into the past tense you're usually using
It ends up being confusing for me, but we're getting repetitive on that matter, aren't we?

>>30273442
I'm trying to fix that whole tense thing, but it's not gonna happen over night.
Mind giving me a link to me help?

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>>30273456
to what?
all the stuff I've learned english as a foreign language from?

>>30273473
I just have trouble with this past and present tense thing. Just want to fix that so I don't have to hear it

>>30273504
past tense is simply a habit, I get that, but greentext as a medium is a second person story.
Just imagine it as something you are experiencing right now and let the present tense flow through you.
You can still make short recaps which then are in past tense like the first 6 lines of your latest update until the staring match IS getting ridiculous. and Anon breaks it up.

>>30273572
Thanks for the advice. Once i get home, I'll edit the lat update and hopefully get use to this past present tense thing

goodnight thread bump

>>30274719
Sweet dreams Anon!

>>30232589
>The Rapist Anon

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Alright, the next update for /k/ Anon is almost ready to be posted. I just need to think of a decent ending. So if all goes to plan, I'll post it after I get home from work.

>>30276532
kanon!

http://variety.com/2017/tv/news/adam-west-dead-dies-batman-1202461532/

Where there any Batman-like characters ITT?

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>>30277431
no bats only spiders

>>30277431
He will be missed

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>>30277552
no spiders, only butts

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>>30278238
>>30277552
plebs

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>>30278324

>>30271960
>she goes to drop of her cellphone
off*
>>30271969
>“I cannot punch my way our of it...
out* of it
>>30271983
>“I’m really growing to dislike her- and what was that about?” she
nothing wrong here per say, but it just doesn't sound like Sunset talking here. It sounds more like Treehugger.
>“you defend her? Why?”
Forgot to capitalize you*.

>>30278324
Anon's sister was busy in the school.

>>30280490
Which sister?

>>30280637
Succubus sister.

>>30280675
Oh, then yes she got around

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>>30280697

>>30281397
Yeah. I'll be working on that tomorrow.

Also still waiting on the artist to get back to me for the succubus pic

>>30271983
Depressed Sunset is not a good time.
Gosh darn it Twilight, this is all your fault for dying like a big 'ol stoop!

>>30281465
Dun worry, good things will come to those who wait.

>>30281989
I won't, I just want to put in for it and get it done.
Imagining Anon's sister in Morrigan's outfit is very nice. Had an idea that She wears Eliza's outfit from Tekken as well

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>>30282004
After a two-minute google images research session, I have determined that my opinion leans towards the Eliza's outfit.
Here's why my opinion is objectively correct.
-The demon aesthetic fits well with the succubus theme.
-Outfit's got the perfect balance of lewd and classy, which would fit the hot mentor role of the sister.
-Pairings of red and black are just good in general.
-Its art style matches up with the superhero comic book style.

>>30282264
Yeah, saw her and was like "That could work so well"

>>30282264
Unnf

>>30282883
please let there be some dress code at CAPES
don't let her go full slut

>>30285269
They have standard dress codes. No extremely short tops, no shirts with profanity and other common stuff

>>30285281
So...standard school stuff, but no uniforms like Crystal Prep?

>>30285633
No uniforms. C.A.P.E.S. is basically a public school with a dorm.
Celestia doesn't want the kids to feel uncomfortable

Also the idea of the sister wearing whatever outfit is just for the pic.

>>30285671
That's fair, like a A rated super hero. Non kinky villains or heroes need not apply.

>>30285703
Yup. Anon’s sister will have succubus physiology but that doesn't mean she's a cheap slut.
I'm making it were, yes, she has slept/fed off of a few people. That doesn't mean she did the whole school