Super Humans and Power Ponies! Issue #15

Will update pastebins later

>>30314828
Woooooooo!

I gotta say, this OP format is pretty sweet.

More C.A.P.E.S when?

>>30314852
I work in R&D
I know how information should be relayed easily, some other threads have only a "Link to story list" and those are not properly organized (like ours isn't either)

Having it like this forces me to keep it up to date and it makes it easier for people to see which stories are how long and still considered active.

I personally don't navigate stories on my computer either, but do so on my phone so I can read wherever I want.
In design it's important to get to the thing you want with as few clicks as possible.
Unless you're a programmer and get off by clicking through as many buttons and drop down menues as possible, a regular user wants to achieve something with as little work as possible.

I'm ranting about work now ^^"
I'm a pro, I know how to do shit, but your compliment means something to me, you know? Just having the thought I put into this not go by unnoticed.

did you know you need 14 lines to get below the picture if it's not enlarged?
That's where I start the "active story list"

>>30314889
Holy fuck my mind is blown.

>>30314927
I know right? Programmers aren't people

>>30314886
Gonna work on the next update today.
Not sure if I'll finish it today but I'll post ut asap

>>30315666
The devils keks.

>>30314810
>who makes ~100 lines pastes?
Apparently, I do.

Also, why is /k/ Anon and Spider Shimm 3 listed as WIP?

>>30315666
Is it weird I'm imaging Sunset as Batgirl in this?

>>30315925
yes, you have issues, you start to see her everywhere, >inb4 story5 batshim, your life is ruined, it's all shim shim shim

>>30315949
Sorry but i see Komeda everywhere instead and hear his voice.
Also, no story #5 but a one shot maybe

>>30315949
Well, there are worse things to see before going crazy.
>>30315969
Try getting through the stories you have now.

>>30315979
Don’t worry, still gonna work on my stories.
Just saving the Batshim one shot idea for a rainy day

Celly's super power is the ability to peg anyone, anywhere, at any time

>>30316004
pretty sure everyone can do that if they put their mind do it
it's like saying batman has a superpower

>>30316004
That's not a power, that's called Craig's List. And its a stupid ability to have.

>>30316004
Peg? Meaning?

>>30316731
go to a porn site of your choice and search for the term pegging

>>30316731
Its some fetish garbage, don't look it up.

>>30316746
>>30316754
Didn’t want to assume it was that.

>>30316772
Its safe to assume, this is 4chan, and MLP to boot. If you don't know about it then keep on staying pure. Live without the knowledge that hurts the mind.

>>30316792
I've seen 2 girls 1 cup.
I'll never be sane again

>>30316806
That's some weak ass shit my nigga.

>>30317302
You might be right, but i wasn't ready for that at the time

Will try and post something tomorrow

>>30319333
Trips save you good sir, may you be ready with a dump of epic proportions for your favored story that day.
Seriously though, every single time, literally every single time I can think of, you get trips when you call in.

>>30314810
Do you think Sunset is a vegetarian due to being a horse?

>>30319825
Nah, she has some horgans that require some more vegetables than most people, but she would eat meat too, as a body necessity and all that. She might not like it, or grows to enjoy it. Could go either or in that case.

>>30319825
She could be, and it would make some amount of sense, but I could see her having lived in humanland long enough to have her diet change.

>>30319825
>>30319855
I can see her eating eggs, fish, and chicken but, not pigs and cows because it reminds her of the sapient ones back in Equestria.

Test

>>30320311
Goddamn finally!

4chan is blocked in my country and since I am outside of my uni now (new home) I couldn't post for sometime.

All the fucking vpn clients are banned for posting CP or ISP abuse.

Finally got something to work but only on my phone, but now I can make updates.

Hey guys. It's good to be back.

>>30320333
Great to see you're finally back, though it sucks that you can only post from your phone.

>>30320375
Thx. I have a plan to work around phoneposting and if that works it'll only be a slight discomfort.

>>30319877
Most logical answer here.

>>30319363
I know, it's weird

>>30315911
to signal that the story isn't finished and that you still continue to write on /k/ anon.
I mean, they are kinda one-shots, but...
how do you wish to be portrayed?

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>>30314810
Reposting from last thread with a few changes.
>Anon and Sunset are captured by Doc Octy and Shocker
>Sunset can easily takedown the villains but, she is in civilian clothing and could compromise her identity if she did anything.
>"Don't worry Anon I just got word that S.H.I.E.L.D just sent a team to help."
"I wonder who it's going to be? The Avengers, The Defenders, X-Me-"
>Shocker points her gloves towards you.
>"Hey man can you keep it down. I don't want to do anything to you and your girl but, I will if you if don't shut up."
"Understood."
>"Good."
>"Vi- Shocker stop talking to the hostages."
>"Sorry there was a gu-"
>They were interrupted by the wall breaking down and six silhouettes appear.
>Disgonnabegood.
>They step in front of showing themselves.
>"Who the hell are you?!"
>Yelled Shocker.
>"Who the hell are we?"
>Oh no you know that raspy voice anywhere.
>They walk in showing themselves.
>"We're the New Justice Team."
>"Um Z-Zapp I thought we're the Power Ponies"
>"Well I thought it sounded cooler."
>"I ain't sure we all agreed on that."
>They continue to argue.
>Oh god this is how you die.
>Welp, might as well go out in your own terms.
"So wait, out of everyone that could save us, S.H.I.E.L.D sent out a team of B-rated superheroes?!"
>"Ah heard that!"
>You turned to Sunset.
"Are we boned?"
>"Hey go easy on them. This maybe they're first on field job bu-
"Wait what?!"
>"BUT they are well trained."
>Right as she said it Doc Octy grabbed three of them and threw them out of the building and Shocker already downed two of them using her gloves.
>"Yeah, we're boned, unless..."
"Unless what?"
>"They're all outside now I can sneak in the bathroom really quick to get the suit on."
>Sunset does so.
>Beats the shit out of Doc Octy and Shocker.
>Sunset and Anon do some boning of their own on the couch, the counter and the ceiling.
>The three Cs.
The end.

>>30321229
Bet the new justice team is gonna feel that in the morning.
I bet they try to ask Sunset for tips

>>30321229
>>30321561
>Twilight and company come to Sunset and Anon's Apartment
>They start knocking until they give up and use the spare key
>They walk in and see Anon still balls deep in Sunset on the ceiling
>They didn't see them at first, Twilight noticed when some of their cum lands on her head
>They wake up from her surprised shriek and go get some closes on
>No one looks at each other for a few minuets, until Rainbow just blurts out if she has any tips for them
>Sunset and Anon spit up coffee at the misunderstanding, which isn't helped when Twilight slips up and brings Anon in the conversation too
Someone go from here, because I cant think clearly with a cum glazed Twilight with glasses.

>>30322102
That’s a weak reason to not continue

>>30322525
I know, had to go cool off.
>>30322102
>Sunset asks when they started wondering about her boyfriend
>Twilight is about to embarrass herself further until Rarity steps in to get it back to the actual topic
>Applejack proceeds to rephrase the question about if she has any tips for crimefighting
>Twilight chimes in but she starts looking away, because she never cleaned off the cum
>While everyone starts to relax Twilight is breathing it in deeply from her stained glasses
>Gets to the point that Pinkie asks what shes doing
>Twilight says she was distracted by cleaning her glasses and would be back in a minuet, and asks someone to catch her up when she gets back
>Sunset noticing the blush on her face sends Anon to go check on her while she talks about hero stuff
>Anon walks in on Twilight licking up his cum from her glasses so intently she doesn't notice him
>Anon nope's out before he gets caught and waits with Sunset and the girls
>Sunset and the rest of the girls apologize for coming by so early and leave, forgetting to bring Twilight with them after they finished.
>Anon and Sunset talk about what she is now probably doing in the bathroom
>Sunset thinks Twi might have a fetish she didn't know about, her spider pheromones and Anon's cum is acting like an aphrodisiac, or the last time she went pony she got some...issues with it.
>The two of them sneaking to the bathroom hear moaning and squishing noises.
>Sunset not one to leave a close friend in need starts fluffing Anon up before she bursts into the bathroom
>Twilight is startled and falls off the sink only to come nose to tip of Anon's dick with Sunset stroking him off in her face
>Offers to help her in both ways she came here if she keeps quiet about it
>Even sweatier and more destructive threeway happens when Twilight charges them
>Ends with Twilight walking to the cab they called with a limp and a smile
>Sunset and Anon plan to have her move in with them
Part 3 next.

>>30321187
>to signal that the story isn't finished and that you continue to write on /k/ anon.
Well, that's as good a reason as any.

>I mean, they are kinda one-shots, but...
>how do you wish to be portrayed?
I wanted them to be a series of one-shots that do take place in the same timeline and are presented in chronological order but aren't part of an overarching story. Just a bunch of wish fulfilling greens on my part, really.

>>30322102
>>30322652
Wow I didn't know someone would continue my little green. I'm humbled.

>>30322652
>The rest of the gang don't know because they blocked out that awkward day
>They only recently notice something is up when Twilight is limping into their dorm each night
>Ask what is wrong when she starts packing things up and moving out
>Tells them she found some roommates that needed a new tenant for reasons
>Gives everyone a hug goodbye and the address she is moving too
>After she leaves the girls look up where it is and quickly figure out that she is moving in with Sunset and Anon
>Proceed to stakeout the place wondering why she moved in with them, a good suspicion on each of their minds why
>After a few days they catch them after Sunset brings the window blinds down
>They get an eyeful of the raunchiest threeway they have ever seen, and go up to...interrupt
>They just go in and ask to get in on it too.
>After a long night of screwing they go to bed in a giant pile
>Wake up the next morning with Anon making coffee and breakfast for everyone
>Its at this point they all decide to move in together and marry him
>They don't know he grows stronger each time they have an orgy
>They will never know they got saved by the man they moved in with from a giant monster.
>Anon has sex magic that grows stronger for every fuck given
>Anon now moonlights as a hero with his girlfriends
>>30322683
About as done as I can think of m8. Have at it.

>>30322722
This is sex magic Anon's hero theme
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0tdyU_gW6WE

>>30322807
Why have I never seen this before.

>>30323078
You need to look more?

>>30323602
Fair enough.

>>30322807
kek

>>30322722
Love it

>>30324217
Thank you, thank you. Also, Everyone keep an eye on the page number, something screwy is going on with the board, and we are moving to fast to page 10

>>30324236
Spammers.

>>30324236
This thread won't die that easily

>>30324417
We're live for 15 months and never 404'd once
I'm proud of us

>>30324451
Got that right

Spider-Shim, Spider-Shim,
Through the tower she will skim
Spins a web, any size,
Catches thieves just like flies
Look Out!
Here comes the Spider-Shim.

Is she strong?
Listen bud,
She's got radioactive blood.
Can she swing from a thread
Take a look overhead
Hey, there
There goes the Spider-Shim.

In the chill of night
At the scene of a crime
Like a streak of light
She arrives just in time.

Spider-Shim, Spider-Shim
Friendly neighborhood Spider-Shim
Even gym
She can't afford
But still wants no reward.

To her, life is a great big bang up
Wherever there's a hang up
You'll find the Spider-Shim.

>>30324840
kek, that works out pretty well actually.

>>30324840
60s Spider-Woman when?
>"Fuck you on the account I'm Spider-Woman."
>"Look at all the fucks I don't give."
>"Hey Anon you want to have a quickie behind this bush?"
>"I have the weirdest lady-boner right now."

>>30324902
you're free to greentext whenever you want

>>30324840
>Anon comes home to Sunset singing while opening her quick dinner before she heads to her crime patrol for the evening.
>"Spider-Shim, Spider-Shim.."
>"She just opened a tuna can."
>You start laughing, causing her face to become beet red in embarrassment.

>>30325046
that is too cute too not boop her nose.

>>30325072
>>30325072
>"S-stop. I'm not suppose be cute."

>>30325089
>"I'm a sexy super hero of the big city, I am not cute."
"You are forever known as Spider Horse, the Cute. Nothing you can do now or ever in the future will change that. Now come here and give me a hug so I can boop you."
>"N-no."
"Yes"
>"Okay"
"Stay safe cute buns. And dinner is at 9:00, so be sure too drop by and eat. Come in on time and I will give you some belly rubs and brushing before I go to bed."

>>30325046
"Danger sense~ did not work."
>You continue in the songs rhythm as you approach her.
"Still embarrassed~ useless quirk."
>She turned around again so she wouldn't have to face you.
"thank Goood~n she has another perk."

>>30325144
>"You're lucky that I love you."

Tornado sirens are going off
F U G.

>>30325525
Good luck friendo. Don't die.

>>30325530
This isn't my first tornado, I'm going to grab my PC, Switch and my kitty.

I made it.

No update tonight but only because the update is getting a little longer than I thought it would

>>30325733
Good

>>30325792
that's good, get a giant dump for us.

>>30325137
>"Can I get ear scratches too?"
"Maybe.."

>>30326346
Good good

I got a funny idea for C.A.P.E.S
>Anon somehow solves a very complex math problem.
>Twilight wants his dick now but, he is oblivious to her actions.

>>30326923
Not a bad idea. Would have to see if i can work it in though

http://marvel.wikia.com/wiki/Sosumi_Brown_(Earth-2301)

>>30327802
Is that from the Mangaverse?

>>30327939
yes, Earth-2301 is weebverse

>>30327951
Ok. Wanted to make sure there wasn't another Geisha Punisher going around

Still working on the update and will post it today

>>30329052
Sweet, looking forward to it.

>>30329071
Yeah. It'll be posted today. I just have some running around to do and need to finish up the update

>>30329052
what for?

>>30329140
Well good luck on your errands.

>>30329164
Incubus Anon

>>30329190
it's called CAPES

>>30329198
Whatever

>>30329198
>>30329216
Its lewd super school get it right, gosh.

>>30329235
Don’t tell me what to call my own green

>>30329247
Okay. In any case, have fun on your errand run.

>>30329247
I didn't want to have every story be called "something Anon"

>>30329252
Fair enough

>>30329256
if you want me to change it for next op, I will.

>>30329267
It’s fine. I just say things in simple ways because I'm a bit laid back.
Was thinking about changing the name for therapist anon anyways

>>30329252
lol oops

>>30329823
kek.

>>30329823
what do you want your story to be called in the op?

>>30330693
I think it's fine the way it is.
If you wanna change it in the OP to something else, go ahead.

>>30331591
>threwout
Hmm.

Otherwise nice drawing, although a bit on the other edgy side. Nice timing, too. Carnage just came out in Contest of Champions.

>>30331591
>Sunset somehow gets controlled by Carnage.
Wat do?
Hiding in a corner in fetal position is not a option.

>>30332489
Well, I could go full Deadpool and out crazy her.

>>30332489
Get a bottle of 44 and start chugging, inform my doctor to get a skin graft ready, strip off all my clothes, then find her in the streets, and start fucking like my life depends on it or die trying.

>>30332506
But Anon you don't have powers.
You could always hire Deadpool.
>Deadpool sees her wrecking shit.
>"You're on your own kiddo."
"But, I payed you!"
>"No refunds, you should of read the fine print."

>>30332538
>He never read Deadpool vs. Carnage.
What are you, a fucking normie?

>>30332562
Yes I have. I just thought of comedic purposes.

>>30332589
Fair enough. Personally, I didn't find it all that funny, but humor is subjective after all.

>>30332607
But I do wonder what would happen if Deadpool fights a Carnage infected Spider-Shim.
>Anon pays him extra to keep her alive and not seriously injure her.

Continuing from when i left off in C.A.P.E.S.

>Sunny was able to show you around, at least the important places and areas of interest, before leading you to your dorm room.
> “So this is your dorm?” Sunny inquired, looking at the empty room as she walked towards the bed.
“Yeah, just started to unpack before Pinkie knocked on the door,” you explained, watching your sister sit on the bare mattress.
> “Clearly, but you can finish that later. Right now I need answers,” Sunny demanded semi jokingly, placing her head in her hands.
>This confused you for a moment before you remembered what she wanted earlier.
“You're not gonna stop till I answer so ask away,” you sighed, ruffling your hair while closing your eyes.
> “You know me all too well, brother,” Sunny giggled causing you to chuckle.
>Taking a moment to calm down, you opened your eyes and gave Sunny your full attention.
“So what's the first question,” you wondered, watching your sister cross her legs while leaning forward a bit.
> “I want to know what your power is,” Sunny declared softly, waving her hand nonchalantly.
>You mentally groaned while resisting the urge to roll your eyes.
>Of course that had to be the first question.
>It wasn't a bad question, but you wished she asked something like ‘how did you get accepted here’ or something.
“I have the power to create portals,” you simplified, hoping that she'll believe that.
> “Really?” Sunny inquired, giving you a curious look while tilting her head slightly.
>To answer her question, you made a small portal in front of her and to her left.
>She slowly raised her hand to touch the portal, but heard her breathe the moment it went through and touched her side.
>Sunny flinched as she turned to see her hand sticking out of the second portal.
>Pulling her hand out, you closed the portals and sat down on your mattress, waiting for the next question.

>>30332643
> “So that's how you were found? They saw you create a portal?” Sunny gasped, looking at you with a smile on her face.
“Yeah. That's all I did. Just make a portal and all that kind of stuff, you know,” you commented, waving off her question.
>That might have been the wrong thing to say since Sunny narrowed her eyes at your answer.
> “You're eye and cheek just twitched,” Sunny accused, staring at you and causing you to back up.
“What’re you talking about?” you blurted hastily, holding your hands up.
>Sunny sighed as she frowned while crossing her arms under her impressive chest.
> “Anon, I can tell when there's something’s wrong and when you don't want to talk about something. You'll always get a twitch when it happens,” your sister sighed.
>That was one of the very few things you disliked about your sister.
>She was always able to tell when you were lying or not.
“So? It's nothing. Just the stress from today,” you defended.
> “I would believe that if your eye didn’t twitch again,” Sunny confirmed, pointing at your face.
>You didn’t say anything.
>Just tilted your head down to look at the floor.
> “Anon? What's bothering you?” Sunny requested, grabbing your hand, “You can tell me if anything’s wrong.”
>It only took a moment to decide on what to do, but you figured that you could trust your sister with this.
“Fine,” you began to say, looking at your sister.
> “Yes?” Sunny questioned.
“I'll tell you, but this is between you and me, ok?” you commanded, looking her straight in the eyes.
>She released your hand while nodding slightly.
“Ok, so the thing is making portals might not be the only thing I have,” you explained, trying to find the right words to say.
>It looked like Sunny sort of understood your poorly worded answer by nodding slowly.

>>30332654
“I guess you can say I have another power,” you commented, rubbing your arm nervously, “I kinda have this weird power that I’d rather keep under wraps, if you know what I’m saying.”
> “Really? Is it that strange?” Sunny inquired, leaning a bit closer towards you.
“It’s not something I can proudly tell everyone. It’s actually a bit embarrassing for me,” you sighed, preparing for the upcoming questions.
> “What did you get? A tail or third eye?” Sunny guessed, scratching her head as she thought of a few ideas.
“Not exactly,” you replied, “It’s a bit more complicated than that.”
>Sunny gained a curious look on her face, motioning you to go on.
>You decided that it was better to give her a bit of a demonstration for the next part.
>A moment later, you felt a small increase of weight on your head.
>The skin on the sides of your head sifted while smooth bone like substance brushed against your forehead.
>Turning to Sunny, you saw that she had a look of surprise and a small amount of mirth?
>That seemed a bit unusual, but you’re gonna roll with it.
“As you can tell, this is apart of my other power,” you explained, pointing at your horns.
>Sunny raised her hand and gently touched the tip of your horn.
> “So you can grow horns,” Sunny guessed, pulling her arm back and away from your horns.
“It’s more than that,” you clarified, blowing a bit of hair out of your eyes.
>Whenever your horns came out, your hair always moved closer to your eyes.
> “So you turn into a demon? Because those don’t look like any animal horns I’ve seen,” Sunny commented, stroking her chin in thought.
“Yeah, look I’m just gonna say it. I have Incubus physiology,” you blurted out, wanting to end this little Q&A session.
>It was quiet for a few moments, but the silence was broken as Sunny started to giggle for some reason.
>Her giggling soon turned into full blown laughter causing you to frown.

>>30332669
> “I guess we’ve got something in common, Anon,” Sunny laughed, rising from your bed and walking to the center of your room.
>You were about to ask what she meant when her a pair of bat wings sprout from her back, folding themselves on her back.
>Not even a moment later and a smaller pair of bat wings sprout from her head.
> “I guess sex demon genes runs in our family,” Sunny gushed, doing a little twirl to show off her wings.
“Succubus physiology?” you guessed, having a feeling that you were you were right.
>When you searched
> “Yup. I’m actually surprised you have a similar power to me, Anon,” Sunny commented, walking back to the mattress and sitting on it.
“You’re not the only one,” you muttered, feeling a headache coming on.
> “But how did you find out about this? Everyone’s powers manifest themselves when they hit puberty,” Sunny questioned causing you to chuckle weakly.
“Yeah,” you commented weakly.
> “What happened?” Sunny demanded, “Don’t even think about saying ‘it was nothing.’”
>Might as well tell her since she’ll get it out of her system now.
“I somehow released some kind pheromone in class and caused for school to let out early,” you explained, avoiding eye contact.
>This wasn’t a conversation you wanted to have, especially your sister.
>But here you are, telling her about it.
>Sunny just stares at you, smiling in amusement.
> “And they let school out early because,” Sunny began, taking some joy out of your story.
“I made all of my female classmates in my class, the ones next door and the one above me cum at that moment,” you groaned, rubbing your temples at block out the pain.
>That was all Sunny needed as she started to laugh hysterically while holding her sides.
>Grumbling to yourself, you knew your sister would find this funny.
>All you had to do was wait for Sunny to finish her laughing fit.
>Luckily you didn’t have to wait long as she calmed down enough to breathe.

>>30332684
> “That really happened?” Sunny giggled, taking a few deep breathes.
“Three times,” you commented causing her to laugh once more, “C’mon Sunny. It’s not that funny.”
> “Yes it is,” Sunny laughed, collapsing to the ground as her wings twitched.
“Shut it,” you groaned, putting your face in your hands, “The other two times happened when I sneezed.”
>It took another minute before your succubus sister calmed down from her laughing high.
> “Okay, it was funny, but I have just one more important question,” Sunny wheezed, grinning while fanning herself.
>She was pretty red from her fit.
“No I didn’t try to use my powers to make an orgy happen,” you growled, wishing Sunny could stop these questions.
> “Nice to know,” Sunny chuckled, “But I wanted to ask if you wanted some help with controlling your powers?”
“What?” you questioned, blinking in confusion.
>You were expecting something like the extent of your powers or even if you could sprout wings as well.
>An offer to help you was the last thing you expected to hear.
> “Do you want me to help you?” Sunny wondered, smiling, “I’m willing to help you control the urges you’ll get. I can even train you to use your powers effectively if you want.”
>It didn’t even take a minutes to think about her offer.
“Really? You’re not joking right?” you inquired, feeling the offer was a bit too good.
>Sunny was always there to help you whenever you were in a bind, like the time you had to study for a big test.
>She was always there for you, but she never did this for free and only wanted a small favor in return.
>The favors were never a big deal, all you did was lend her your walkman or give her a few cookies when you were younger.
>The only reason why you’re being cautious was that now she might want you to use your portals for some nefarious reason.

>>30332693
> “No joke. I have a few things that only i can teach you about our powers,” Sunny tempted, “After all, I’ve been here longer than you and picked up a few things.”
“Any favors i’ll own you?” you pondered, hoping it won’t be anything bad.
> “I won’t ask for anything at the moment,” Sunny assured, scooting closer to you and giving you a one arm hug.
>Even one of her wings wrapped around you.
“That doesn’t answer my question, but yeah. I would like your help,” you sighed, leaning into the strange hug.
>It was times like these that made you happy that Sunny was your sister.
>This could have been a nice sibling moment like on those TV shows, but the sound of a phone ringing ruined that.
>Groaning, your sister shifted around by pulling out her phone and answering it.
> “Hello,” Sunny greeted, still hugging you., “I’m a bit preoccupied at the moment… Just having a talk with my brother…. Yes…. Do you mind?.... Thanks.”
>She ended the call while releasing her hold on you.
“Friend of yours?” you asked, curious to what that call was about.
> “That and someone who’s gonna be your study buddy during our lessons,” Sunny mentioned, surprising you.
“Is that wise?” you stuttered, feeling nervous.
>This wasn’t something you wanted anyone else to know incase a problem arises.
> “She’s a very trustworthy friend and she knows not to say anything,” Sunny complemented, “Plus she was one of my first friends here.”
>That didn’t make this any better, but you relented since Sunny knows this girl.
>Might as well give the girl the benefit of the doubt.
“Okay, so when’s the first lesson gonna be? Is it gonna be after classes tomorrow or this weekend?” you questioned, trying to get a schedule made in your mind.
> “First lesson will start right,” Sunny began as a knocking was heard at your door, “Now.”


This is all for the C.A.P.E.S. update. Gonna thing about who Anon’s partner will be later.

>>30332700
Also can some help me rename Therapist Anon? I kinda want to give it a title with a word that describes Anon. Like how they have Spectacular Spider-Man

>>30332708
Holy dumps batman, good work. As for a name, The Friendly Neighborhood Therapist?

>>30333074
Thanks. That could work

>>30333093
I do what I can

>>30332632
>"Listen here buddy I am an assassin. I make no promises about not seriously injuring your little spider."
"If you do I'll write a 1 star review on your page."
>Deadpool brings a knife to your throat.
>"Don't you fucking dare."
"You can kill me, but you can't get rid the review. I'll become more powerful in death."
>"God damn it fine, you win Obi-Wan, But you need to give me 15% more than what you're paying."

>>30332669
>“As you can tell, this is apart of my other power,”
apart is one word, in this context its a* part*

>>30332684
>and caused for school to let out early
caused the*

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>>30314810
Why is she so perfect?

Noooot reeeaal

>>30332708
Holy crap that's a huge dump. Good work, trepp.

>>30334218
Shhhh, quite.

>>30334608
Thanks. It went on longer than I thought. Now I'm taking a break today and planning my Therapist green

>>30333625

Because she ain't real

>>30333625
because her elbow is broken

>>30334915
STOP RUINING THIS PIC FOR ME REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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>>30335373
you'll never unsee

>>30332684
>“I made all of my female classmates in my class, the ones next door and the one above me cum at that moment,” you groaned, rubbing your temples at block out the pain.
wait, that was my idea from like 10 threads back!

>>30335482
It was 2 I believe and yes. I figured it would have been a good thing to put in the update

>>30335516
I love it
the update too, will she be feeding her friends to him now? that'll work out just fine

>>30335524
Gonna start off with one and work my way up. Sunny won't use all of her friends cause she has dibs on them but the ones she does feed Anon will be more open to the idea

>>30335516
>2 threads ago
>17 days
It feels like a long time

>>30335592
I know.
You mind helping me with >>30332708

>>30335613
somehow read over that
hmmm...
Vilainess' Delight and Therapy - Anon md.

>>30335658
Love it. Thanks Untitled

>>30335658
Fuck...that is way better than mine.

>>30336140
Still thanks for trying

>>30335658
just changed the title https://pastebin.com/0cit7eXM

>>30335735
It's much easier to come up with stuff if it isn't your own

Updated the pastebin https://pastebin.com/0cit7eXM

>>30336345
Still thanks

Continued from Darkes Anon pastebin

>After a short while you, along with your ragged team of mercenaries, stand in front of a big, caved in wooden gate
>This is the entrance to the castle, ancient home of your ancestors, now barely more than a tumbled down ruin
>"Master Anonymous, please." Coachman pleads. "You should not go with them. It is too dangerous!"
"I can't just sit in a warm chamber and wait, knowing that I might be sending these people to their death." You protest. "This is my home, my responsibility."
>"But Mast-" Applejack puts a hand on the man's shoulder
>"Don't dissuade the man from his honorable intent." She says before looking at you with an approving expression. "We will make sure he comes back."
>"I don't know." Roseluck speaks. "I wouldn't want my employer to die. Bad for bussiness."
"Well, I guess you'll have to try extra hard." You respond
>Coachman sighs. "Very well, Master Anonymous. Are you sure that you had all the supplies you need then?"
"I think so, but you never know until you need them." He nods with worry clear in his eyes
>"Indeed, Master." He says solemnly before turning to the mercenaries. "Please, do try to bring as many valuables with you as you can. We could use some money if we are to keep fighting."
>"Oh you got it, old man." Rainbow exclaims with her raspy voice. "Plundering is my specialty."
"Let's go then." You say, prompting the group to move
>"Please, do be careful." You hear Coachman's voice
"Will do."
>Once you are inside, you notice how big the castle is for the first time
>The ceiling is so up high, it makes you feel small and fills you with a sense of awe
>What's weird is that there is no light coming from the windows
>The weather was very cloudy and Sun's rays didn't illuminate the Hamlet very much, but the darkness here... It's like actually consuming light
>You lit a torch to get a better look around

>>30337443
>Now you can see things that are close to you better, but outside of the torch's near vicinity got much harder to see
>You'd think that this light is putting you at a disadvantage, but if creatures in here lives in constant darkness, they would be disturbed by the light
>As you continue down the cobblestone path of this ancient ruin, Applejack raises her hand, stopping the group
>"Look," She points to some holes in the ground. "I think this might be one of those traps that servant warned us about."
>Rainbow Dash crouches near the trap and pulls out her dagger
>"Stay back." She says as she slowly slips the dagger's tip between the ground and iron plate that covers the trap's mechanism
>Slowly and carefully, she removes the plating and exposes the inner parts of this malevolent contraption
>You can see numerous rusted spikes, almost half a meter long, ready for launch and to be a deathbringer for the unwary
>Much to your dread, Rainbow reaches down further into the machinery and you stop breathing
*Click*
>As Rainbow moves away from the trap, she holds up a spring for you all to see
>"Got it. It is safe now."
>"Couldn't we just like... move around it?" Roseluck asks. "Why did you make this into such a big deal?"
>"Ah- I uh..." You can't help but snort at Rainbow's speechlessness. "I got excited, okay?! It happens." She says with an embarressed blush
>You think you heard Fluttershy giggle for a second
"I think we shouldn't wait around." You state and you are met with some nods
>"Yeah, we should get going." Applejack says. "Sooner this is done the better."
>At the end of the hallway, you are met with a big wooden door
>As Applejack pushes it open, the door creaks with old age and rust
>Inside there is a stone sarcophagus laying in the middle of the room
>It is covered in spiderwebs and a thick layer of dust
>Rainbow steps up and starts pushing the heavy stone cover
>"What are you doing?" Applejack protests. "Leave the dead alone."

>>30337443
Based update after so long

>>30337462
>Rainbow answers as she looks inside the now open sarcophagus. "I'm not touching the dead. I'm just gonna take this gold."
>"They could be ancestors of Sir Anonymous." Applejack insists, forcing you to voice your opinion
"I'm sure my ancestors would like to help us on our mission." You give Rainbow an approving nod
>Applejack doesn't seem very convinced, but doesn't protest further as Rainbow puts some coins in her pockets
>Roseluck slighly ajars the other door and looks for anything dangerous
>"I think we are about to get into our first fight." She warns. "I hear something moving."
>The group silently leaves the room, trying to get the drop on whatever creature is waiting for you
>Unfortunutely, something hits Fluttershy in the shoulder
>A ball of vile liquid splatters on her outfit and she screams in agony
>"Ah! It is seeping through the armor! It burns!" She drops on one knee
>You look up to see a group of giant spiders scattering about, prepearing to attack
>A shiver goes down you spine as they make scratchy noises unlike their smaller cousins
>"Dammit all!" Rainbow fires her pistol
>Unlike what you'd expect, small projectiles are scattered everywhere, hitting multiple targets
>Two of the spiders lose some limbs while another also gets hit in it's abdomen
>This doesn't even slow then down however, as one of them launches it's webbing towards Rainbow
>She quickly gets free from the webbing, but another ball of acid hits her leg, making her grunt in pain
>Last spider spins some more web, aiming for the Knightess, but she seems unfazed as she pulls open a scroll that shines upon the spiders with a brilliant light
>Two heavily wounded spiders crumple and burn to ash, while other two scatters away from the burning light
>Meanwhile Roseluck diluted the acid that has struck to Fluttershy and she raises her mace toward the sky
>"Sacer Fulmen!" A flash of light illuminates the room as the wounded spider is struck by a bolt

>>30337485
>The beast tries to scatter away and hide but another volley of tiny bullets that are fired from Rainbow's gun shreds it apart and almost kills the last spider
>As it is about to attack, Roseluck throws some kind of concoction that prompts the creature to stop, buying enough time for Applejack to slash and kill it with her sword

Thats all for now. Phoneposting, so I hope there aren't too many mistakes. I hope you guys like it

In the name of logic, I decided to let them avoid the traps they saw instead of having to disable them. They will only be hurt by the ones they don't spot. There will be no heirloom mechanic either, because it doesn't make sense in the real world

Let me know what you think

>>30337477
I hope I don't disappoint

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>>30337462
>but outside of the torch's near vicinity got much harder to see
you don't need the near* in the sentence, especially when vicinity performs the same function for it in the context.

>>30337485
>Roseluck slighly ajars
ajar isn't a verb, its a descriptive noun, Roseluck slightly opens the other door is more correct.
>>30337532
It was a nice update, but I cant help but notice the characters sound the same when they are speaking, with little characterization between them to differentiate it. The action scene is fun though, so you did fine there.
I guess I could see the value of not having Ancestor artifacts, what with some of them being pretty crazy, but this is Eldritch abomination land, weird shit slips through all the time, so it would make sense to have at least some of them around. As for the other heirlooms they could be fantastical items laying around that got rubbed the "right" way, and so give some kind of magic buff. This isn't the real world anymore, and the closer they get to the Darkest Dungeon the farther away it gets.

>>30339036
I meant to say adverb, bit scatterbrained at the moment.

>>30337532
Nice to see this update

>>30339088
checked away from 8

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>>30314810

>>30338535
>>30339036
>>30339088
As always, thx for the review. I had my doubts about ajar but I used it anyway. I'll keep it in mind in the future.

I was trying to make AJ serious, Rainbow carefree and Roseluck cynical. I'll try to emphasize it more.

>>30339878
It's good to be updating again, even from phone.

>>30340659
That shit's going to rot your teeth, young woman. Next time, I'd reccomend buying a bottle of water instead.

>>30341410
Healing factor remember.
Plus a pop once in a while won't hurt anyone.

>>30342325
teeth don't heal

>>30342518
What about horse girls with spider powers? She gets punched in the face, a lot.

>>30342561
she doesn't have a long life span, so she'll die befure her teeth'll rot

>It's Civil War, Sunset just fought Stark using the iron suit he gave her.
>She lost and is badly injured not even her healing factor is enough to keep her in stable condition.
>The Punisher found her in the sewer and makes his way to the resistance HQ.
>It's been months since you seen or heard from Sunset not since she called you telling where the resistance is.
"Hello?"
>"I'm sorry Anon, I got to keep this short so no one can track this call. Here's the coordinates I can't tell who they are, but they will keep you safe. I love you."
"Wait, Sun-"
>Call ended.
>When you arrived to destination you were surprised to see Ant-Man And the Winter Soldier there.
>Ant-Man greets you.
>"Hey kid, welcome to the resistance sorry about this."
"Sorry about wha-
>A red fist says hello to your face and you lose consciousness.

First time writing so tell me what you think so far.

>>30342587
>First time writing so tell me what you think so far.
that's a rapid development, but you're only getting started.
so far it's not much to go on

>>30342587
Oh, this was serious and not a prompt.
>She lost and is badly injured not even her healing factor is enough to keep her in stable condition.
Proper sentence spacing, commas after injured.
>It's been months since you seen or heard from Sunset not since she called you telling where the resistance is.
you've*, and commas after Sunset.
>Here's the coordinates I can't tell who they are, but they will keep you safe. I love you."
commas after coordinates, tell you*.
>When you arrived to destination you were surprised to see Ant-Man And the Winter Soldier there.
at* the*, not to. remove the period and the capital and*.
>"Hey kid, welcome to the resistance sorry about this."
comma after resistance.
>>30342615
What this guy said, with the added comment of, this doesn't seem like the start of a story, but a loose prompt. Its all over the place and I cant tell what the point of it is.

>>30342587
Sounds at least somewhat interesting

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>>30343248
witnessed!

>>30343248
Saved

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>>30343248
The glorious madman strikes again, we love you in incest, we love you here. WITNESSED!
>>30343281
This too, always enjoy a new pic

>>30343248
>You will never have a family Spider-Shim with a happy accident.

>>30343248
s-sauce?

>>30343356
Found it.
https://derpibooru.org/1465769?q=artist%3Afromamida

We need a green to honor the madman.

>>30343459
Madman?

>>30343467
THIS IS SPARTAAAAAAH

>>30343467
He posted
>>30343370
on here before it was deleted.

>>30343495
Ooh, that guy

>>30343736
treppahcs is unimpressed by unsolicited porn on a blueboard
I bet he's more concerned about sunsets long hair and that the motions of sex and them being squished underneath her body means it'll dug on her hair with each thrust.

>>30343770
I wonder if her hair squiggle moves crazy too.

>>30343770
>it'll dug on her hair with
I thought she had Spiderpowers, since when did she become Maniac?

>>30343800
you obviously never had long hair

>>30343824
Speaking from experience?

>>30343856
sometimes even sleeping is hard
If you lay on your hair and want to move your head you dug at your own hair and I have a sensitive scalp

>experience
having long hair, yes
being bottom, yes

>>30343900
....its tug. Not dug. That's the joke. Unless you have a super power that lets you dig stuff with your hair and you never told us.

>>30343900
>Being bottom, yes
This raises questions.

>>30343900
Huh...do we have a female writefag? Neat. if we do.

>>30343929
...
....
...
thank god I'm not... like... an established writefag with a reputation to uphold

>>30343931
I may or may not be a guy
that may or may not be why I wrote the single sex scene out of sunsets POV

>>30343946
If you can do bottom work with a thirsty Sunset more often, then more power too ya, and you're right, it is a good thing you aren't an established writefag with a reputation to uphold. I am just impressed you did it twice, are your hands okay?

>>30343946
LONDON?

>>30343770
Got that right.
Now i need to get back to Anon MD. Don’t correctme Untitled, i need time before the tirle sinks in.

>>30343989
>Don’t correctme Untitled,
Don't correct me Untitled.

>>30343964
I'm not a native speaker, but I'm at a level where I know a word from hearing it and I knew it to be the right one.
homophones are not something you have as often in my assortment of other languages.
Generally I make a lot of mistakes of confusing d/t, p/b, f/v, ck/k/g, ch/sch, s/ss/ß/z/tz, ei/ai, wtc. when I'm losing focus.

>>30344000
>Don't correct me Untitled.
vocative comma before "Untitled"
what a waste of good numbers

>>30344019
>d/t, p/b, f/v, ck/k/g, ch/sch, s/ss/ß/z/tz, ei/ai
Are you German?

>>30344058
ethnically? no, I'm raised terrorist (>inb4 pegida)
locationwise? no, I'm Austria

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My area just got hit with a giant ass storm. Sounds like the perfect time to get some writing done.
The rhythmic roars of anger by the ancient thunder gods will pressure me into a hyperactive state of continuous writefaggotry.

>>30343946
I can't believe the massive internet sensation, untitled, has made an online typo.
Setting a poor example for the children, I see.

>>30344106
Is it a flying horse?
Is it a spider?
NO It's Spider-Woman

>>30344127
A very drunk Spider-Woman.

>>30344152
>>30344127
>>30344106
>Sunset got drunk one day and went around with her costume and magic horsegirl powers on
>To this day whenever she sees a tabloid of flying spiders she cringes in shame
>Anon hasn't stopped laughing yet.

>>30344236
Then he starts singing
>>30325046
Spider-Shim, Spider-Shim..
>"Anon, no"
She got really hammered one night.
>"Stop."

>>30344271
>That doesn't even rhyme anymore, Anon

>>30344293
Well excuse me for trying.

>>30344314
It look likes your try
has gone awry.

>>30344236
Funny. Bet her friends know as well

So, what do you guys think about the new Darkest Dungeon DLC?

>>30345352
pretty gud.

>>30344978
Does her friends call Anon or bring her home?
Does she escape sometimes?

>>30345380
Yup on both accounts. Sometimes when Anon is called, Sunset will just go to him and give him drunk cuddles. Other times he has to chase her

>>30345352
I haven't seen it yet, did they drop something neat for your story to use?

>>30345389
>Other times he has to chase her
Her friends don't help or just can't keep up with her?

>>30345415
They do help. Anon has a harder time since he usually uses a car or bike if Twilight or someone can't help him

>>30345389
>tfw after busting some big bad with her friends, she drags them all over town to drink
>tfw they slowly start dropping coming over to your place so Sunset doesn't worry
>tfw you never be running the alcoholic Olympics rest area (your apartment), for the vic-I mean glorious competitors
>tfw you will never be drunkenly snuggled by each girl that crosses the threshold so Sunset can smell their home, like a drunken horsegirls check list
>tfw when she will never carry everyone that finished throwing up and drinking water to the bedroom for a sleeping pile made out of a bunkbed with webs.
>tfw you have to climb down the gauntlet slowly so you don't wake everyone up to prepare breakfast.
>tfw you will never be hugged from behind from your wife Sunset and one of your lovers for making hangover food for everyone before work.
I thought to hard about this didn't I?
>>30345415
You know how drunken masters are impossible to keep up with in kung fu movies? Give them spider senses. Have fun with that thought.
>>30345431
This too...speed is the need, gotta chase them purple griffons. Fuckin birdcats ain't stealing her nest.

>>30345454
You didn’t over think this. I can see this happening

>>30345454
>Drunk Sunset is on the loose.
>Everyone except Twilight is fucking wasted.
>Twilight has to get the others home first before they escape like Sunset did.
>Anon has to use the sushi truck to catch Sunset.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=atuFSv2bLa8

>>30345509
Anon pushes a few buttons and the teuck gets armor and weapons on it.

>>30345555
>teuck

>>30345571
Typing on a phone is a pain when you have big hands

>>30345390
Some sort of vampiric plague or locust along with a new area.

>>30345509
>>30345555
"The Teuck" a weapon to surpass Metal Gear.

>>30345621
Neat, neat. Any new female teammates?
>>30345672
...god damnit, that would be a name he'd use wouldn't it.
>>30345579
I feel your pain.

>>30345672
>>30345688
The only one that gets the MGS joke is Ponk oddly.

>>30345688
Not sure, havent played it yet. Selling some DotA items to buy it.

>>30345728
I just got an idea for a green; genius Anon
>Anon makes gadgets and devices for Sunset and her friends to make better use for their abilities.

>>30345728
Now i want Apartment manager Anon driving a metal gear to stop his drunk and or symbiote friends.

Oh wait

>>30345756
Good luck with the sales then.
>>30345776
Wow, you cant help but accidentally spoil stuff for yourself huh?

>>30345788
Never said it will happen, just that it'll be a fun idea

>>30345800
Sure mister dubs, sure.

>>30345814
Don’t know how i get them. Maybe i will do it

>>30345773
>genius Anon
has potential.

>>30345894
I want him and Twilight to aggressively compete over their respective inventions and Sunset's affections.

>>30346034
>I want him and Twilight to aggressively compete over their respective inventions
The first thing Anon did just to clear his mind was design web shooters of his own
he is still competing with her

>>30345788
Thx bro

Aw shit I accidentally got rid of 9k character update.
Welp. Guess I'll try to recover it from my memory tomorrow.

>>30346166
WAIT NO. I REMEMBER PASTING IT INTO A ONLINE CHARACTER COUNTER SOMEWHERE.
IT'S NOT DEAD YET, BOYS.

>>30346166
lulz, get rekt
>>30346190
I hope they'll have good chemistry together

>>30346190
AHAHAHAHA! I'M A GENIUS!

Cont. >>30289725
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>You blankly stare at her hand in disbelief.
>You find it hard to believe that someone like her is fine engaging in physical contact with you.
>Hastily shaking yourself out of your shock, you grip her hand with yours.
"Yeah. Hi."
>As you wrap your fingers around her palm, you begin to realize how rarely your Anon persona touches anyone.
>Whereas Black Cat had a girl on riding on his back the night before.
>You chuckle internally.
>You awkwardly shake her hand.
>Her touch feels reassuring, but still carries patches of roughness around it.
>Not to mention her extremely tight grip, which is currently trying to compress your hand.
>You certainly didn't peg her as the strong athletic type, but first impressions can be deceiving.
>As you let go of her hand, Sunset immediately brings her hand to her head.
>She begins rubbing her temples, wearing a pained expression.
>You arch an eyebrow at the sight.
"Are you okay?"
>She holds up her hand.
>"Yeah, no, I'm fine. I just have a, um, headache. Yep, just a normal headache from staying up too late," she sputters out as she gives you a faltering grin.
"Right..."
>This meeting is not going how you expected it exactly to.
>You scan her face over for clues as to what's really going on.
>Instead, you find a bruised mark on the side of her cheek, barely concealed by her fiery hair.
>What the hell?

>>30346190
This is what happens when you are paranoid, it saves you so much busy work guessing what you missed.
>>30346198
Good man.

>>30346198
"Hey."
>She quickly turns toward you, eyes filled with worry.
>You look straight in the eye and place a finger on the corresponding cheek on your face.
"You have a bruise here. Are you really okay?"
>Her worried expression shifts to panic as her eyes dart around the room.
>"J-just fine! I, er, fell down the stairs?"
>If she was going to fool you with that, she could try convincing herself first.
"Flat on your face."
>"Yep!"
>You shoot her a doubtful look.
"Okay, then..."
>It'd be best not to pry any further.
>You wouldn't want to come off as someone excruciatingly nosy, especially when you haven't even met before.
>Turning around in your seat, you cross your arms glance towards the rest of the class.
>There are kids who are eager to make conversation with their new partners, and the pairs are comprised of one shooting down the other.
>Most likely guys with their masculinity threatened watching the two of you in jealousy.
>Looks you are the odd one out, both quietly sitting next to each other.
>Harshwhinny looks like she's busy handing out labs.
>Sunset's voice cuts the silence between you two.
>"How about you?"
>You shift your look from Harshwhinny to her.
"What do you mean?"
>"Your arms have bruises on them," she points at your crossed arms, "did something happen to you?

>>30346206
>Looking down, you realized that your bruised forearms are exposed by the short sleeves of your t-shirt.
>God damn it.
>If you had put any effort into your attire this morning, this wouldn't have happened.
>You open your mouth to speak, but words fail to properly form.
>You come to the revelation that this was the first time anybody has inquired you about your wounds.
>The first time anybody stopped to pay attention and notice.
>You don't an excuse prepared for this.
>Sunset's eyes stare into your's, expectantly.
>You feel your heart start beat faster.
>If you're not going to say anything, it's just going to be more suspicious.
>You're going to have to come up with something on the spot.
>You steel your nerves and speak.
"It was an accident... I..."
>Come on, give me something good.
"...didn't see where I was going and bumped into a wall."
>Fuck.
>That was absolutely horrible.
>Sunset questioningly stares at you for a moment before returning to a smile.
>"Oh, I see. Just be more careful next time."
"Yeah. Thanks."
>You are the luckiest man in the world.
>You two return to sitting quietly, not looking at one another.
>Exactly how you want it.
>"Sorry if I came off as sort of prying. I was just trying to return the care you showed toward me," she says, fumbling with her thumbs.
"It's fine?"
>She shouldn't be the one worried about prying...

>>30346214
>A stack of papers is slapped onto your desk, causing you to jump a little in your seat.
>You take it, handing a copy of the lab over to Sunset.
>You quickly skim over the title and procedure.
>...
>They're using different types of beans to represent isotopes of a single element.
>Isn't lab class supposed to be engaging and making use top-of-the-line school science equipment?
>You remembering hearing about the school using most of its budget in repairs.
>For what kind of damage you don't know, but to what extent was the damage of it was going to harm the lab directory this bad?
>You fish a pencilcase out of your bookbag and retrieve a pen from it.
>Filling out the spaces for your name and date, you block out Harshwhinny's introduction of the lab and head directly into the pre-lab questions.
>Out of curiosity, you look at Sunset's paper out of the corner of your eye.
>She has a bunch of math and answers written on her paper, most of which were crossed out.
>You can't help but feel a tinge of sympathy for her.
>She has her headache, bruise and academic struggle.
>Another part of you argues all that those are all directly her fault, and are most likely the result of a late-night party like you initially guessed.
>But, then again, she did have the good will to ask about your condition.
>...
"Are you having trouble with the pre-lab questions?"
>Sunset silently nods.
"Need any help?"

>>30346221
>She nods again and passes the paper over to you.
>You look over her work, finding the mistake in the maze of scribbles.
>You motion over to her and place your index finger over it.
"Here, just fix this part and everything else should fall into place."
>Sunset tilts her head to look at where you're pointing at, then has a moment of realization.
>"Ah, okay. Thank you, it must've been a long time since we learned this subject," she adds with a chuckle.
"We were taught this last week."
>"Oh. Then I must have payed very close attention. Ha..."
>You don't say anything back.
>For the rest of the class, you follow through with the procedure, solemnly talking with Sunset, less it was helping her with a problem.
>When class begins to come to a close, Sunset speaks up out of the blue.
>"Anon, I don't know why you're hurt. It might not be my business, but please don't be afraid to ask the teachers or staff for help if someone is doing this to you," she declares, a determined look on her face.
"Sure. I'll keep that in mind."
>The ringing of the bell signals you move, slinging your bookbag over your shoulder.
"See you around, Sunset."
>"Yeah, see you around," she mumbles.
>Placing your completed lab onto the stack on Harshwhinny's desk, you head out the lab for the last period of your day.
>You make it halfway across the hallway until someone places their hand on your shoulder, stopping you.
>Turning around, you come face-to-face with a guy that you fail to remember the name of.

>>30346230
>"So, dude, what was it like?"
>You furrow your brow in response, hoping he'll take it as his response to leave.
>He interprets this differently.
>"You don't know what I mean? Sunset Shimmer, man. You just got to be lab partners with one of the most popular girls here and you've got nothing to say about it?"
>You remain silent.
>"Come on, bro. She's totally into you, did you see the way she clamped up like a loser? Listen to me, man, this is the same girl that ascended to the top of the social pyramid after being totally hated by the entire school."
>You stare back.
"You're blocking everyone's way."
>"What?"
"Keep walking when you're in the hallways. You're blocking everyone's way."
>He throws up his hands in defense.
>"Fuck, man. I was just trying to be a bro. Don't gotta be a massive douche about it..."
>You watch him walk away and rejoin his group of friends.
>Getting back on course, you start making your way to your next class.
>You can't help but think about what that kid said about Sunset.

>>30346233
>What did he mean "hated by the entire school?"
>The hell did she even do?
>In addition, even a introvert like you could see that a social recovery from "hated by everyone" to "loved by everyone" she supposedly pulled is close to impossible, especially in a high school setting.
>Something is definitely off here. Sunset's more than see meets the eye.
>Even so, whether or not she was able to pull that off or not, she is a popular girl, so she has to have some semblance of a eccentricity in her personality.
>So why would she act strange in front of you?
>Does she suspect you of...?
>No.
>No. That's impossible.
>No would suspect the person that they didn't even know existed.
>You've done everything to make sure as much people as possible know you don't exist.
>Unless she had some sort of sixth sense or something, there is no way she could've known.
>God damn it.
>This Sunset situation is freaking you way too much.
>A vibration from your pockets draws you out of your train of thought.
>Since you don't have anyone's number, it has to be an email or something of significance.
>Pulling out your phone, you read the header of the email.
>...
>A promotion deal at Big Belly Burger, huh?
>A grin makes its way onto your face.
>At least you'll have something to look forward to once school ends.

>>30346240
And that's it for now.
Jesus Christ, I'm still recovering from my minute-long emotional roller coaster on Mr.Bone's Wild Ride of everlasting "Fuck You"'s after thinking that I lost all my shit.

On the bright side, Black Cat Anon is now my most viewed paste. That's nice.

>>30346258
>>"Come on, bro. She's totally into you, did you see the way she clamped up like a loser? Listen to me, man, this is the same girl that ascended to the top of the social pyramid after being totally hated by the entire school."
That's totally like high schoolers speak

nice update

>>30346265
>That's totally like high schoolers speak.
Can I at least use exaggeration and tiredness as an excuse?

>>30346273
Sure

>>30346280
yata

>>30346240
Nice update. Liking the pacing

>>30314810
I would you do during Sunset's birthday? What is her birthday by the way?
>"Well the Equestrian calendar is different but, I was born on the 13th of the third month."
"So March?"
>"Maybe, I don't know."
"How do you not know?"
>"Well as you know the human calendar has 12 months, but the Equestrian calendar has 10 months."
"What?"

>>30346518
Thanks. Sometimes I feel the story is moving a bit slow, but this is nice reassurance.

>>30314810
Would Sunset work to get a doctorate like Peter Parker?

>>30346648
Your doing good man, in any case, good night folks

>>30346701
not until Octavia takes over her body

>>30346206
>You look straight in the eye and place a finger on the corresponding cheek on your face.
look her*, eyes
>You don't an excuse prepared for this.
don't have*
>You feel your heart start beat faster.
start to*
>For what kind of damage you don't know, but to what extent was the damage of it was going to harm the lab directory this bad?
damage if* it.
>She has a bunch of math and answers written on her paper, most of which were crossed out.
of the*
>Another part of you argues all that those are all directly her fault,
argues that* all* those, you flipped the sentence here.
>>30346230
>"Oh. Then I must have payed very close attention. Ha..."
must not*
>For the rest of the class, you follow through with the procedure, solemnly talking with Sunset, less it was helping her with a problem.
solemnly (refusing?), unless*(?)
>>30346240
>No would suspect the person that they didn't even know existed.
No one*
>You've done everything to make sure as much people as possible know you don't exist.
as many* people.
>This Sunset situation is freaking you way too much.
freaking you out*
Cool update, liking the differences in how Sunset and Anon are weird.

>>30346648
just keep doing it. I need to see more

>>30349392
Thank you, fixed in the bin.

I'd say it looks like we have some competition >>30340407 but I can't see the other thread lasting all that long.

I can now post from my PC for some reason. So I might make an update for Probability Anon later tonight.

>>30350583
WOOOOOOO!

>>30350583
Sweet!

>>30350551
Got that right

>>30351190
Well we can offer the writefriend to move here.

>>30351216
Of course. I'm just saying that the thread itself won't last

>>30351277
To be fair, when I first saw the original prompt for this thread over a year ago, I thought the same thing.

>>30351302
but that wasn't because there was already the same thread around

>>30351313
True. Though it'd still be nice to have some more writefags.

>>30351611
It'll always be nice to have more

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I just got an idea
>It's been 13 years since Sunset started being Spider-Woman.
>Within that time she married Anon, got her doctorate and created her own company.
>Shimmer Industries.

>>30352719
>Anon runs the upper middle floors as a employee daycare that is also open to the public, making Shimmer one of the most family friendly industries around by default.
>It also helps Anon has super powers to help protect/play with the kids, with a public notice that he has super powers to discourage would be kidnappers
>Your wife Sunset done come done often to help with the kids in preparation of raising her own with Anon
>Tfw you and Sunset wont make an obscenely successful business while perfectly intermingling family and work
>They also know their taking care of a few close villain friends when off the heroing clock, talking back and forth on raising kids before going to kick each others asses as a matter of course
>The villains with kids their aren't even trying to do their job well anymore because their friends with them at work.
You will never make the world a better place with the best daycare in the city, for villains, heroes, and civilians alike, while also breaking up the secret villain corporations with an amazing dental plan.

>>30352773
>Your wife Sunset done come done often
likes* to* come down* often

>>30352773
>You will never make the world a better place with the best daycare in the city, for villains, heroes, and civilians alike, while also breaking up the secret villain corporations with an amazing dental plan.

>"The Great and Powerful Mysterio used to rain death and destruction to her enemies, but one day she got a toothache and Villcore didn't pay for it. However thanks to Shimmer Industries and their fantastic dental plan Mysterio can get the tooth filling she needs."

>>30352938
She also gets a hug from Big Papa Anon and some dinner to take home with her.

>>30352938
Does this mean the villain agency is out of business?

>>30353352
Ones down, now its on to the rest. Heroes Inc is on the rise, with excellent business practices, wholesome home cooking, and good ethics codes.

>>30352938
Not exactly.
Sunset is still Spider-Woman.

>>30353395
...did you respond to the wrong post?

>>30353416
yes.
It was meant for >>30353352

Continuing from Probability Anon pastebin

>You are Anonymous
>You and Octavia are now laying on hospial beds, hooked up to some tubes, giving blood to Vinyl
>She's unusually quiet, just looking at the blood flowing through the tubes
>"You alright, love?" Octavia asks Vinyl
>Vinyl seemed like she just snapped out of a daze
>"Yeah, yeah I'm fine. It's just... I didn't realize how weak I was." She looks confused. "But now, my body feels so light. It's... hard to describe."
"That's good, right?" You inquire. "You are feeling better."
>"No, it's more than that." She looks thoughtful for a second, but before she can continue, the door opens
>A woman, wearing black clothes with a long leather coat walks in
>She has short, blond hair with some red mixed in, giving her a fiery look
>She takes a long look at all three of you
>Her eyes feels like they are looking past your skin
>"My name is Fury." She introduces herself. "I am the director of SHIELD." Her voice carries her authority
>"You are eye witnesses of the incident in Club Vendigo." She states. "If you feel alright, I have some questions to ask."
>"They've already took our statements." Octavia speaks. "I don't know what else we can tell you."
>Fury walks toward you and gestures to your bed. "May I?"
>"Y-yeah." You move to the side slightly and she sits down at your feet
>"You know that it was a SHIELD agent that called us for help." Octavia nods. "That agent was, and still is, AWOL. That was the last communication we recieved from him."
>You look at each other, wondering where she's going with this
>"Today, two HYDRA agents broke into his apartment." She furrows her brows. "They killed twelve agents and kidnapped another before escaping the scene."
"You don't think we are HYDRA, do you?" You blurt out
>"Believe me kid, if I did, you wouldn't be laying there comfortably." She answers. "I want to know what our agents said. Maybe it can give us a hint abour where he is."
>"You think he's hiding from you?" Vinyl asks

>>30353484
>"Maybe. It is more likely that he's trying to hide from HYDRA."
>What reason can there be to not come to SHIELD if you are trying to hide from HYDRA?
**There is a mole
>If that's the case none of you are safe here
"Why didn't he come here to hide?" You ask. "What if you have a mole and he knew that?"
>She gives you an amused look. "Smart thinking kid, but we are already investigating the possibility."
>"Anon's a smart boy." Vinyl says with a smug voice
>"He did not say much, the agent." Fortunutely Octavia diverts the subject. "But I remember that he said he was sorry. He sounded... upset."
>"Nothing else?" Fury persists, but Octavia just shakes her head
>Sighing, Fury stands up and walks toward the door. "Well then, I'll leave you to rest."
>She seemed reallytroubled when she spoke of the agents that died
>Should you do something? Could you find this missing agent if you used your powers?
**You could
>You did promise to keep the streets safe for Sunset. What better way there is than to help SHIELD?
>You hear the door close behind the director and grab the tube that's connected to you
>Better hurry if you want to catch up to her
>You pull out the tube from the IV in your arm and get up
>The blood inside drips onto the floor
>"Anon, what are you doing?" Octavia asks
>You squeeze the tube and hand it to Vinyl
"Hold this for a second. I'll be right back." You hurry out of the room, after Director Fury
>Fortunutely, she's still in sight
"Director!" You call out, making her turn around. "I think I can help you find your agent."
>She walks closer before asking. "How?"
"If I had an ability that could help, would you keep it off the books?"
>She gives you a suspicious look. "Are you asking me to violate an international agreement, Mr. X?"
"Maybe?" You cringe
>She nods. "I can do that."

My PC changed its mind, but update is ready as promised. Enjoy.

>>30353449
True but does it still mean that the villain agency takes a huge hit? Do they lose so many villains or what?

>>30353484
>"They've already took our statements."
taken*
>>30353494
**There is a mole
Why is the line like this, did he say it out loud, or is he thinking it?
>She seemed reallytroubled when she
space out really troubled
**You could
Wait...is this some voice in his head? Neat, and disturbing.
>She nods. "I can do that."
And like that she is better than Spitfire already.
>My PC changed its mind, but update is ready as promised. Enjoy.
Its fine m8, good update.

>>30353731
Thx for the review, glad you liked it.
** means that Anon's powers are in play. It's been a while since that happened.

>>30353530
>Well no one knows each one's identity.

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>>30314810
>Twilight is having panic attack after finding out Sunset is Spider-Woman.

>>30354391
Twilight is a fangirl for Spider-Sunset and is shocked that she's friends with her. She's also shocked that her friend Anon is dating her

>>30354391
>>30354502
>Twilight makes a killing in the fanfiction section, just writing down what Sunset brags to the group when she has sex with Anon
>She substitutes some things with Sunset's spider powers to make it kinkier
>Anon finds it one day while shitposting at work, is disturbed that Twilight got their sex life down so perfectly
>Shows it to Sunset when her OC starts joining them, worried that they got a stalker
>Turns out Sunset found out a long time ago that Twilight was a fan making popular fanfiction of her.
>She spent all her time going into detail with the girls to drive Twilights imagination wild
>>30354391
>Is Twilight's face when Sunset offers to make her fan fiction threesome relationship a reality for Anon's birthday
>Forgets to tell Anon, who proceeds to throw random shit while yelling he's calling the cops for being a crazy stalker.
I could go on, but I feel this is a good spot to stop.

>>30354633
>Some of Sunset's ideas like ceiling sex came from Twilight's fanfiction.
>"Damn that's kinky."

Continuing from >>30350192

>Sirens wail in the distance.
>A woman screams, her shrill voice breaking the night.
>Fire crackles all around.
>Footsteps of the mobs of people running frantically blast into your eardrums.
>The world is a mess of noise and chaos, but nothing is more clear, more focused than the barrel of your gun.
>She, sprawled out on the ground, looks up at you with wide eyes.
>Your weapons blocks out her face from view.
>The sound it makes when you pull the trigger silences the madness.
>Suddenly the world falls apart.

>>30355396

>You shoot up out of bed, throwing your covers off yourself.
>Panting madly, you lean over and wipe the sweat from your forehead.
>The beige fabric is dark with dampness and the sheets stick to your skin.
>Swallowing, you turn to the side and toss your legs off the hard bed, planting your feet firmly down on the floor.
>Golly, that sure was a nasty one.
>To refresh yourself, you give your face a few sharp slaps before getting into your morning routine.
>Starting off is a nice hour jog to really get your blood pumping.
>You hit a new personal best on the treadmill today--ten miles in as many minutes at the end there.
>Even the bench saw a new record. Wow, it’s hard to believe what you used to lift. Two plates was two thousand pounds ago.
>Ah, yes, it’s going to be one of those days.
>Following your vigorous workout, you visit the bathroom and unload yourself both physically and metaphorically.
>Some doctors will argue that primal scream therapy doesn’t help, but there’s a good reason you haven’t pulled out your hair yet.
>Lastly, to finish the routine, you stuff your face with a couple thousand calories’ worth of chicken and rice.
>Your stomach groans in protest as you shove more meat into it.
>Sorry, little guy, but there’s just not enough time in the day to waste eating lunch and dinner.
>Not when the city needs your help, at least!
>Although, with the Power Ponies around, that might start to change.
>Maybe you could slow down, enjoy a nice steak at noon, and sip a glass of orange juice in a warm field.
>Or you could keep on the streets and beating down and bad guys you happen across.
>Yeah, you like that idea.
>When breakfast is done, you wash the plates thoroughly and go to get dressed for the day.
>That is, get dressed for “Anon”s part of the day.

>>30355400

>You toss on a loose tee and some jeans and rush out the door, still careful to hang close to walls while avoiding the black spot.
>Oh man, you can’t wait to get outside!
>You burst out into the open air and inhale deeply, then bend over to cough up a lung.
>Your chest desperately tries to force the exhaust out of it as a rather rotund gentleman in a buick speeds down the road.
>”Keep on, asshole!”
“And a fine good morning to you too, sir!”
>He’s probably just having a bad day.
>Now, speaking of keeping on, you make way for the same alley from last night, amazed at how it manages to stay pitch black even in the bright morning light, and enter the darkness to change into your real daily wear.
>In goes Anonymous, out goes Captain Canterlot, and so, at about nine in the morning, you begin the battle for justice.
>Once more you walk along the city streets, taking time to greet and chat with any civilians who want a piece of your time.
>”Oh my gosh, Captain Canterlot, please sign my chest,” squeals an excited high school boy.
>You shrug and accept the pen he offers you, then scrawl down your name on his fair blue skin.
>”Oh shit, dude!”
“Language, kids. Remember, the only people who use swears are those too unintelligent to think of words to replace them.”
>”Yes, Captain Canterlot.”
>”Totally righteous.”
“Righteous indeed, young man. Now scram, the lot of you. You don’t want to be late for school.”
>”Thank you, Captain Canterlot.”
“And thank you, fellow citizens.”
>The group of boys scamper off toward Canterlot High School, home of the best and brightest young minds this wonderful city has to offer.

>>30355406

>In the herds of children, you spot one group that catches your attention.
>Seven girls, all of whom seem very familiar, hang around near a massive marble horse statue.
>You rub your chin and squint, examining them.
>Boom Ba--I mean Pinkie Pie stands out in your memory.
>You’ve never met the others before, but you can’t help but feel like you’ve spoken with them all.
>Especially the one with the red hair.
>Your focus shifts from the entirety of the group to just her.
>Her leather jacket, her red and yellow locks, and the baby blue oceans of her eyes all become the focal points of your world.
>What is it about them?
>What is it about her?
>Suddenly, you hear the screeching of tires and a loud crash.
>You rip your attention away from the group of pubescent girls and look in the general direction of the noise.
>It came from down the road, just two blocks from the school.
>Faster than one could pull a goat’s tail, you’re darting down the sidewalk.
>Buildings are blurs in your peripherals as you zoom to the scene of what is surely a crime.
>Once on the corner of Jefferson and 9th, you skid to a halt, amazed at the display.
>Several candy colored cars have been flipped over on their roofs.
>One is crumpled, squished up against the very sturdy brick wall of a department store.
>In the center of it all is a truly dastardly foe.
>His dark grey skin is covered by shining silver armor and accented by a crimson cape that waves in an imaginary breeze behind him.
>The fiend lets out a joyous laugh and throws his arms into the sky.
>”Good morning, Canterlot! Did you miss me?”

>>30355413

“Sombra, you slimeball! What are you doing out of your cell?”
>”Being evil, you fool. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I need to get to work on turning these wonderful civilians into even more wonderful crystals,” he snarls.
“Not on my watch.”
>You unholster your shield and let it rip.
>The metal frisbee soars through the air, narrowly passing several running bystanders as they flee the scene.
>Sombra smiles as his body turns into a dark mist, allowing your shield to pass right through him.
>You run after it, and when he turns solid again to gloat about how your misguided attempt to harm him proved futile, you sock him in the jaw.
>The villain goes flying into the side of a pickup truck and dents the door.
>Darn, that one won’t buff out. You hope the owner’s insurance can cover the damage.
>He growls, digging his claws into the lime green metal of the door he hit, and pulls himself onto his feet.
>”That wasn’t very nice of you.”
“I don’t think you’re in any position to complain.”
>The armored villain rubs his chin and flashes his fangs at you.
>”I’ll eat the flesh from your bones.”
“Flesh doesn’t rest on bones, muscles do!”
>With that, you charge and use said muscles to ram him into the door once more.
>You produce enough force to push the car several feet, moving it out of the way so that you can run on, Sombra in your arms, toward a wall.
>Before you can make impact, he phases out of your grip.
>You close your eyes to keep his foul mist out of them and end up slamming your head into the tough exterior of the building instead.

>>30355396
Neat, new writefag. Got a name yet?

>>30355420

>”Nice try, Captain Canterdunce, but you can’t get me that way!”
>Curse that Sombra.
>His mist form circles around a flipped Ponetiac and hoists it a dozen feet into the air.
>The tornado of blackness lurches, throwing the tons of metal and plastic at you.
>You dive, dodging under the vehicle as it crashes into the spot where you once stood.
>It crunches on the pavement and turns over, knocking a fire hydrant over.
>Cringing, you helplessly watch as the city’s water supply drains through the broken fire-stopper.
>Wait a second, that’s a good thing!
>Yes, you can use the water to help you against him!
>All you need to do is trick him into hanging around the water long enough that his intangible form collects enough condensation that it forces him to solidify.
>Now, if only you could--
>”Now ah do say that’chu better stop yer evil doin’ saylf raght there yew varmint!”
>”What?”
“What?”
>”What she means is you’re under arrest,” proclaims a dainty, very dignified voice.
>Suddenly, all around Sombra appear transparent, diamond shaped force fields that lock together and trap the villain.
>”Blue is definitely your color, darling.”
>You track down the source of the voices and spot none other than the Power Ponies.
>”Matterhorn, do be a dear and deal with this creatin.”
>”Got it, Radiance.”

>>30355428

>You stand slowly as the purple girl extends her hand.
>A purple light wraps around it and seeps through the air, reaching for Sombra.
>The mist man shakes in his energy prison as Matterhorn’s power bleeds through Radiance’s shield.
>The lavender aura constricts Sombra’s entirety and seems to squeeze him, that being his mist, back together and forcing a transformation.
>Neat.
>And also super dangerous.
>You can’t help but wonder what that process might look like in reverse.
>”Good job, girls. Now Radiance, release!”
>On Miss Conception’s command, Radiance drops the barrier.
>Sombra falls and lands hard on his bottom.
>He shouts in pain as Miss Marevolous lassos him.
>Her golden rope tightens around his form and begins to glow.
>You can see the villain try to phase out of his new constraints, but it just doesn’t seem to go as he planned.
>”What have you done to me? Why can’t I mist up?”
>”Ah dun dere wrapped’chu in mah magical rope’a wonder. Yew’s more stuck’n a possum rastlin’ a bear.”
>”What?”
>”She means the power of justice is keeping you in check. Now, I think you have a date with a jail cell,” says Miss Conception, proudly placing her hands on her curvaceous hips.
>”Darn it! Foiled again!”

That'll do it for tonight. I'm glad to see this thread expanded into more superheroes in general than solely Spider-Shim. Maybe it will draw others in too.