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All These Numbers Edition

ITT:
>We discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs.
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art
>Shitpost

List of stories: https://www.anonpone.com/

Read this advice first:
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http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice

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http://strawpoll.me/5151810
>What time is best?
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>What genre are you interested in?
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Remember: Many number hurt brain

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Whispen is a pretty stallion
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Second for Sharpie just spaghettied all over herself again and it was fucking glorious.
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>>26816889
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>>26816889
Spaghetti horse is objectively better than mafia horse.
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>>26816991
They're the same pony.
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>>26817040
Lies.
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whispen
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>>26817071
is
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>>26817104
a
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>>26817120
big
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>>26817124
stupid
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>>26817128
loving
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Actually, I think we can stop there.
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>>26817135
cuddly
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>>26817171
Phattest booty
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Is Dirty Work worth reading? The writing at the beginning is pretty sucky.
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>>26817201
Mare.
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>>26817235
The beginning of like every CYOA is crappy, give it a shot. Don't like it? No harm done.
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>>26817235
I like it, but I have no idea what you like. Do you like neurotic former grocers with OCD who now work for the mafia?
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>>26817235
What didn't you like about it?
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>>26817287
It might be the writing snob in me, but the writing had no flavor. There was no real voice in the writing, nothing engaging. It felt very flat.
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>>26817323
It seemed above average to me anon.

How far did you get, because I thought it was rather good, especially compared to others my own included.

What quests do you like?
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>>26817323
Huh. I guess I know what you mean. I had some similar gripes back in Heat, but I haven't really seen it with Dirty Work.
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>>26817346
JAD, Super, and Urban are stands out. Distinctive styles that draw you into the world and compel you to read more.
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>>26817346
>It seemed above average to me anon.
The writing is technically sound, it's just dryer than crackers.
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>>26817488
Fair enough, but I'm mostly reading it for the crazy MC, and I enjoy her enough to make up for any dryness in the writing style.
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>>26817488
This is something I'm working on, though I imagine it makes reading through a real slog.
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>>26817488
Which writers do you think are good, Anon? And which ones have poopy cracker writing?
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>>26817624
Don't be disgusting Pinkie.
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>>26817624
I'm not demanding. Anyone who can use commas correctly is good enough for me. I play for characters.
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>>26817624
Hijacker
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>>26817745
Is that someone you think is a good writer or a "poopy cracker" writer?
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>>26817624
The only writers that have kept me interested in their quest, from their beginning to currently, are ______________________________ not you
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don't fuck quest when?
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>>26817802
Yes.
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Friendly reminder that the general has killed:
>the guy with the cow cyoa idea
>The guy that ran Breakquest
>Cuddle merc
>SpaceHorse
>panzermane
>puzzleanon
>Rocketeer
>Longname
>Storyteller
>innkeeper
>Lumineko
>Incognito
>Horsepls
>overlord
>Cyborg
>Stray
>AJW
>680p
>Arch
>CBT
>Rev
>GC
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>>26817836
It's already been done anon. Twice. Be sure to renew your meme permit next time I see you or I'm afraid I'll have to take you to the big house.
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>>26817915
what are you talking about? i just want to know when the next thread is.
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>You will never have a Res of your own
> He will never make jokes to cheer you up when you feel sad.
> He will never grumpily tell people to back the fuck off!? when they insult people.
> He will never create memes about just how great you are.
Why live.
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>>26817902
We only killed like a third of those. Another third fucked up royally on their own, and the remainder just disappeared.
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>>26817624
Are we talking pure prose and writing style or the actual content? If the former I'll go with Innkeeper. JAD had pretty great prose overall and he could really sell a scene.
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>>26818035
A lot of the time it really blurs together. I mean Res' style is great for comedy but in terms of purest literary quality isn't quite as good for it. One wonders what his adventurequest would look like.
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I always wonder what people think about my quests because no one ever really talks about them.

I mean I'll get a "Thread when?" so a few people must think it's decent, but in these kind of discussions where I might learn something no one mentions me, good or bad.
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>>26817937
>Respone will never hold you tight and whisper your name in his sleep; justifying all the beatings.
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>>26818106
Okay, it's starting to get creepy again.
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Did Sloth fall sick again?
He's a few days late to start Stuck in the Middle.
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>>26818155
he posted in the end of last thread. He's running tomorrow, currently writing that non-canon lewd.
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>>26818173
>writing that non-canon lewd
I've heard this promise before.
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>>26818101
Quite a few of the quests I really liked just stopped running abruptly, so I stopped asking about them.
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>>26818101
Start a discussion about those quests then.
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>>26818247
About my own quests? That seems narcissistic anon.
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>>26818252
Just pull a sloth.
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>>26818252
Why? Just make a post saying "hey I'm whoever, and I was wondering what you all think about my new quest so far. What do you like and what about the quest do you find unappealing?"

You'll get a bunch of opinions in a hurry. And some shitposting.
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>>26818252
It doesn't matter if you wear a disguise.
Nobody will know it's you if you wear a mask.
I use one I made myself with paper and some string. I drew a kitty's face on it. I've been using it for years and no one has noticed yet.
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>>26818321
Wait, you're not a real cat?
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>>26818283
What? Get banned on purpose and deny your players promised lewd? Not counting that Love Sick art. Thanks for that. Disappear for weeks at a time? There's a lot that goes into being Sloth.

>>26818304
I guess that's fine. Though I'm afraid it will just get ignored.

>>26818321
It feels dishonest though. Are other QMs doing that? It's just icky behavior.
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>>26818321
>It doesn't matter if you wear a disguise.
>Nobody will know it's you if you wear a mask.
>I use one I made myself with paper and some string. I drew a kitty's face on it. I've been using it for years and no one has noticed yet.
I'm stealing this for dialogue, is that alright?
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>>26818321
I used to rub my face into your fluffy belly. I feel so used right now.
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>>26818331
There are no cat's on the internet, silly.

>>26818344
Go ahead Hijjijji, I don't mind.
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>>26818343
>I'm afraid it will just get ignored.
Post at a good time and you'll get more takers. Try to aim for sometime when the timezones will have the most people off of work/school.
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Tomorrow. I think.
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>>26818554
I don't even know who you are but I can tell that's a dirty lie.
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>>26818554
Nobby pls
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>>26818343
just go to secret club and say you're X QM and they will all suck your dick in the hopes you'll join.
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>>26818776
I don't want my dick sucked, anon.
I want to be a better QM.
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>tfw JAD has been dead so long that I've started losing interest in it
Innkeeper pls, I need my daughteru quest before I completely lose interest in it
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>>26818888
quads demand some response
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>>26818888
quads calling him out
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>Page 10
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>>26818888
Where the fuck has he gone?
This is the worst place possible to drop a quest.
You end up with shitty uncle lucky memes.
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No quest is perfect.
But you anon are.
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>>26818888
I'd like to say that its just Innkeeper's shitty work situation, because he works in a hospital and all...but I really can't say anything about that.

Reminder Pot has socks
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>>26819654
But will we ever see them again?
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>>26819673
I hope not.
They are gay as fuck.
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>>26819776
There is L I T E R A L L Y nothing gay about socks.
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Active threads

NE: >>26786728
Big Mares: >>26784222
Urban Survival: >>26793366
SIM: >>26802143
FOE: >>26771835
Blord Quest: >>26800571
FIT: >>26784010
Dirty Work: >>26794256
Alchemy: >>26545611
Vampony: >>26799365
TES: >>26783390
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>>26820027
You fucked up, Sharp
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>>26819894
Let's play a game.
Rate all of the Quests in this post by their OP post alone from 0 to 10 and how well it triggers your interest to participate.
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>>26820027
>22
>odd
Ya blew it.
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>>26819894
>>26820045
Going by image alone:
NE: 5/10
Big Mares: 8/10
Urban: 6/10
SIM: 5/10
FOE: 8/10
Bard Quest: 6/10
FIT: 7/10
Dirty Work: 7/10
Alchemy: 7/10
Vampony: 5/10
TES: 7/10
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>>26819673
>>26819776
>>26819794
My regret is that 35 didn't draw Pot in that little black dress
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>>26817902
"680p" is a pixel wider than "AJW".
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>>26819654
reminder that pot is green
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>>26820391
Certain people would still call that green.
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>>26820482
You think you're fucking funny?
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>>26820549
At least to some situational extent, yes.
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>>26820482
I laughed and then I felt bad.
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reminder that we are never getting a pocket watch cyoa
nor a cyoa witha character creation that starts from the cutiemark
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>>26820618
Reminder that you are ignorant fucktard and there were tons of CYOAs with character creation, Longame and Paperpony just to name a few recent ones.
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>>26820639
>reading comprehension
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>>26816864
That's a cute moffer
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Big
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Hijijijis
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Which Cyoa pone would make the best mother?
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>>26821054
Mango
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>>26821054
Choosie
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>>26821054
Angel.
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>>26821066
Choose is the mother of all cyoas
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>>26821066

Choosie would be the best mother.
But who would be the father? Or does she adopt?
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>>26821084
Respone
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>>26821084
R63 Choosie
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>>26821084
All her, no father. This is why she's so protective of them.
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>>26821090
pls
Respone can hardly look after himself
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>>26821061
Kek if child wasn't a bat I'm sure she wouldn't be happy
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>>26821084
RITSpone
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>>26821112
Mango's never been portrayed as racist, memer.
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>>26821124
Oh?
And how many bats has she killed?
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Lilith quest when?
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>>26821144
Other Bat ponies are pretty rare. I think we've come across two, and both were Lunar Guards.
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>>26821124
Im not saying mango would be a bad mother
I'm just saying she wouldn't like raising non bat child too much
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>>26821155
reminder for when post
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>>26821182
I'm of the opposite opinion. I think she'd be a pretty bad mother no matter the race. Not for lack of trying, but just because she's been a fuck up her whole life.

She'd love her kid no matter what, but she's a bit too ditzy and too self centered to be a good mom without some real effort on her part to become a better and more responsible mare.
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>>26821155
When you make it
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anonfilly and nyx dualcyoa when
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>>26821203
Odd question. Is Mango barren? It makes sense to me; most of her cells are necrotic, why would her eggs be excepted?
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>>26821245
>most
Well there you have it. Her eggs could very well be fine but now it's just a matter of her womb working right.
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>>26821203
I get your point but if child also had a supporting father I think it would turn out well
Now I want to see mango have a mid
Fug muh feels
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>>26821224
When some faggot makes it for the joy of shitposts and memes.
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>>26821224
>nyx
to reddit
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>>26821245
Yes, as a Vampire she's unable to conceive in the normal fashion, at least in my view. I'm not running Vamp right now, so I suppose a different QM could see it differently. So take all this with a grain of salt.

Most of her cells are kept functioning by dark magic, and if removed from her body rapidly disintegrate. Thus, when Mango ovulates, her eggs die before they even leave her fallopian tubes. Theoretically, though, she could have her eggs extracted and kept alive via other means during an external fertilization.

The only exception is her Nervous system. The rest of her body is dedicated to keeping that much as it was during life. Her hormones do change, giving her her hunter's instinct, and replacing much of her sex drive with a blood drive.

I was going to make collecting blood a more "erotic" experience once Mango learned to control herself.
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>>26821124
I don't think mango is a racist but she might have a bit of a distrust of zebras now after Zecora snitched on her.

>>26821245
>>26821273
Meh, probably, both Mango and June took a huge load from a stallion at one point in the quest. Mango probably didn't think about it and June didn't seem care.
So yeah more then likely vampires are barren.

But maybe if there was an egg left in the womb before Mango got turned there could be a chance of her haveing a child.
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>>26821068

I wish Spicy Quest Anon would come back and continue. Angel was a fun character.

I motion we call him AngelAnon from now on.
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>>26821315
>Meh, probably, both Mango and June took a huge load from a stallion at one point in the quest.

Actually that was just June, Mango swallowed it instead.
Of course that doesn't invalidate your point.
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>>26821313
>I was going to make collecting blood a more "erotic" experience
Oh great, stupid AND a psychopath.
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>>26821343
Nuh uh I like mango
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>>26821343
What do you mean?
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>>26821343
That's the way instincts work.

You know why sex feels good? Because your brain releases a bunch of chemicals to say 'Good job, you're doing what you need to do to keep your bloodline alive.'

Now Mango's immortal. When she hunts, she gets a similar rush. Makes sense to me. She's a predator now, her instincts are jumbled around.
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>>26821343
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>>26821381
>fgt learns how to identify bait
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>>26821363
Not that humans don't get similar rush
We're predators
Take a gun go innawoods and hunt animals
If you get a successful hit and confirm a kill you'll be happy because of the thrill of hunting and you get reward in this case food
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>>26821389
>alch didn't learn he needs to back the fuck off
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>>26821322
Angel has a butt
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>>26821454
Big butt.
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>>26821454
Angel looks stupid
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>>26821468
Just like your mom.
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Okay. You have a favorite pony, don'cha CYOAG?
Tell us what kind of Quest she would be running.
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>>26821548
>Cheerilee
I think there would be multiple options. Focusing on school, focusing on the life outside school, being a delicious christmas cake, going on a field trip or a class trip. Would be nice to have a quest without fighting monsters or saving the world for a change.
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>>26821548

Wait. Would a quest by Twilight be filled to the brim with systems?

Do-Do I need to go rethink my life choices?
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>>26821611
A Twilight quest would be very meta, because a good portion of the game would be coming up with the best possible systems for the quest itself.
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>>26821548

Pinkie just continually lets happy things happy to her MCs, with parties and caring. She tried to inflict conflict once, but felt really awful about it later.

Spitfire however just straight up abandoned her quest, despite her players crying out in concern.
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>>26821611
Updated list

>>26815572
Hij is now Twilight
Sloth is now Glimglam.
Alch is Celestia
RITS is Spike.
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>>26821548
I would like to play a multi QM quest with pinkie and rainbow because I think it would be wild and I'd have no idea what would happen next. But win or lose at the end I'd be laughing my ass off.
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>>26821669
what is puzzleanon?
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>>26821712
AJ's dad
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>>26821712
I though that was me :(
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>>26821717
>puzzleanon is res dad
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>>26821669
what is GC?
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>>26821054
Which cyoa pone would be the best father?
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>>26822032
All favorite Uncle.
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>>26822028

Sunset Shimmer. She looks and sounds nice, but she only ever shows up once or twice.
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>>26822032
Dandy before he went insane.
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>>26822028
Trixie.

Objectively shit with a shitty attitude to back it up, but has a huge fanbase begging her to come back.
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>>26822054
>gc is trixie
>res a gc fan
>res is seth
>puzzleanon is seth's dad
not a wonder puzzleanon disappeared
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>>26822054
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>>26822054
on the mark
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>>26822051
Are you sure he wouldn't pass down those daddy issues and be an asshole?
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>>26822089
I think he'd end up spoiling his kids, rather than be an asshole.
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Thread looks slow
CONFESSION TIME
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>>26822203
I used to pretend to be shiny
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>>26822203
I'm happy when people discuss my CYOA.
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>>26822252
And when they don't for too long, I envy all the cyoa which are discussed
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>>26822203
I gave the command to charge them.
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>>26822252
What cyoa do you run?
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>>26822297
Good try.
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>>26822304
I honestly want to talk about it if i play it
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>>26822304
No, really. Go ahead and bring it up.
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>>26822296
Also fuck you.
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Cute ponies in human bodies doing cute ponies in human bodies quest when?
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>>26822296
What quest?
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>>26822203
I'm still mad.
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Spider pony/strange waifu/mane-iac cyoa where the qm doesn't bail when?
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>>26822089
Dandy would be a superb dad if we didn't fuck him up.
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>>26822376
That's not a pony in a human body.
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>>26822203
I might be dead.
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>>26822376
>Cute ponies in human bodies
Mr. Hands?
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>>26822409
Moth = supreme race quest is a go
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>>26822203

I feel like my writing style is boring/forgettable, yet I'm not sure what I need to do to get better.
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>>26822394
>strange waifu
When I know how to do it.
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>>26822454
Don't add expositions for the sake of it. Many cyoas are greentext only and they are doing well.
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>>26822394
> strange waifu quest

Trust me, I want to, but I'm already running quests.
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>>26822465
Thanks
>>26822525
Ok beard
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>>26821463
When will Angle sit on Chili's face?
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>>26822614
I want angel to shit in my mouth
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>>26822475

Thanks, anon. I'll keep that in mind when running.
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>>26822614
She already has :^)
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>>26822428
I care and appreciate that you have somehow managed to run a quest starring a gay moth without being memed to death ...even though I don't actually play your quest myself since I'm not that into L. A. Noire.
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Bard Quest: Night of the sleeping Blord returns!

>>26822794
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>>26822788
Hey
It's not ENTIRELY noire stuff.
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What ever happened to Griffonprincess or whoever was running that foe quest?
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>>26822822
Holy shit I completely forgot about that quest
She just up and disappeared after one of her threads died, which kinda sucks, cause I was enjoying it
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>>26822822
She's dead just like the rest.
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>>26822822
Probably went back to her homosucks.
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Howdy again everyone!
Now that I'm back, I can start up again.
Would you guys rather I run AtO, or LyraQuest?
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>>26822890
I misread that as AoO. I'm sad now.
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>>26822890
Bon
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>>26822890
mint horse
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>>26822890
Fresh minty goodness
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>>26822890
I vote for the pony in the picture you posted.
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>>26816864
>mfw I literally lost a whole fucking thread due to job
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>>26822898
Sorry to disappoint you, anon.

>>26822911
>>26822899
>>26822919
>>26822964

Looks like Lyraquest is a go! I have some stuff to do before I begin, but I'll get a thread going tonight.
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>>26822890
I want AtO.
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List all the ponies you couldn't protect.
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>>26823121
Gar from himself
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>>26823121
Aurora from everything.
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>>26823121
Buzzy.
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>>26823121
Octavia
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>>26823158
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>>26823121
Sam
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>>26823178
Who?
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>>26823178
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>>26823183
Oh wait never mind.
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>>26822890
That's a pretty nice pic
Can you redo it horizontally? I'd probably use it as a wallpaper for a while
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>>26823121

I forgot her name now. But she had a child, and died in the north. With only a mammoth for company.
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>>26823215
No-no, I want to know.
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>>26823262
Samquest
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>>26823150
This, pretty much.
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>>26822203
I kind of want to end a quest by killing every character one day.
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>>26823295
Res please no
Res please
Please no
No
Please
Please
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>>26823275
>>26823150
What are you talking about?
You protected her virginity
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>>26823295
Chara pls
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>>26822812
Sorry, I almost missed this one. I care about blord quest too. Happy ghost hunting.

>>26823008
>I'll get a thread going tonight
In that case, I'll care tonight.
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>>26823365
Smart frogposter
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>>26823331
Hype's had it for too good, too long
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>>26823374
Inept pls
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>>26822812
No one cares
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>>26823251
Pine
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>Driker
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>>26823365
We did a great job at protecting her from the dick.
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>>26823402
>it even has the fang
This is great
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Don't Fuck continues, more action, more innuendo, more tiny:
>>26823458
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>>26823466
I care! In the abstract since I don't play this one. I'm sure all your players really enjoy it, though.
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>>26823402
What in the flying fuck is this shit.
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>>26823509
It's Sejor Rafai. He's a pony now.
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>>26823466
>estrus
I love this meme.
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>>26823524
I feel tempted to bury him really deep in the ground, somewhere really far away.
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>>26823551
But she's so weak and defenseless.
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>>26823551
I want to bury myself really deep into thier ground
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>>26823626
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>tomorrow
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>>26823626
>her
I should be surprised by this.
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>>26823600
Just do it far away from here. I hope your dick will be okay.
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>>26823626
>moi
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>>26823626
>her
No.
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>>26823688
But yeah tho
>>
JAD is perfectly dead
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>>26822203
I promised to run a CYOA, have a basic plotline and characters set up, and will likely never get to do so at this rate. Severe lack of time to be around and gitgud - let alone actually run it - have crippled me.
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>>26824139
You sound like a pussy. I'm glad you didn't run.
>>
Read spoiler ponk anon
I care about ponk
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>>26824139
I understand that life gets in the way. Try not to get too disheartened. When you have time and you're ready to try running it just let us know. We'll still be here.
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>>26824197
Y-you too.
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>>26824139
Don't run every day, it'll kill you.
Try a few times a week.
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>>26822203

I don't feel like I can call myself a good QM without disappearing and breaking my promises at least once, so I'm waiting for someone to call me out on it before I start running again.

Or basically for someone to discuss my quest at all.

My other confession is that I said to myself I would run this quest simply for fun and enjoyment, but I can't help but hear myself thinking up plans of how to acquire meme qm status, despite the fact I tell myself its not what I should want.
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>>26824204
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>>26824139
Dirty Work gets by with just running weekends. As long as you run like 2-3 days a week no one will mind.
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>>26824236
Oh, damn, I know this too damn well.
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>>26824139
Let's do this together anon
Go shitpost in the mspaint thread to build confidence
Spend 20 to 30 minutes making a random picture with actual quality, and 5 to 10 more minutes to write a post along with it
Play an extremely simplified quest with yourself and find at least 3 possible options for a prompt
Plan your next holidays and prepare a good OP pic for that day
Marathon that day like there's no tomorrow
Establish a playerbase, get to know your players, what you can do best
Spend a day recovering
Find a more steady rate, 4 or 5 hours in the weekend maybe
And most importantly, enjoy doing it, because you're a participant too
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>>26824236
Sharing most of this sentiment. I also don't know what to do with the piece of shit I tried to run. But I'd feel like shit for not finishing my first quest before starting another.
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>>26824236
Don't care about memes, Anon. Fun and enjoyment should be a priority to you, or else you will gradually burn out and die. If your quest isn't discussed here it doesn't mean it's bad or something. Perhaps it is a little less popular, with niche idea, that kind of stuff. This should not discourage you.

You sound like me, to a degree.
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>>26824287
Eh, dropping the quest when you can see it no longer working is nothing to be ashamed of.
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>>26822203
I ship QMs
>>
The UPS man bestowed a wonderful gift upon me. If any of you happen to have things they want to see drawn, just be sure to have a reference ready, cause I'm an idiot.
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>>26824326
WHISPEN
H
I
S
P
E
N
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>>26824325
Who do you ship?
>>
>>26824326
A pony from underappreciated quest.
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>>26824350
The ultimate cuck combo
Nips and GC
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>>26824326
more grumpy choosie
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>>26824236
>>26824287
If either of you are Cyborg, please continue.
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>>26824326
The General
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>>26824401
>hij being a lazy bastard and not properly coloring this
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>>26824423
Choosie is not blue, anon.
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>>26824423
choosie doesn't have much color on her so I can let that slide
hijiji a shit tho lmoa
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Which QM likes bats the most?
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>>26793366
Cross cyoa homofaggotry continues
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>>26824484
That's the entire reason he's lazy.
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>>26824423
>hijijiji
>properly coloring
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>>26824504
No one cares
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I am your favorite QM. Yes, that's true. Tell me what you want me to change and improve.
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>>26824553
>"inb4 Pinkepie sayin sh..she cares ev'n tho she doesn' really!"
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>>26824566
Fruit's family
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>>26824504
I care!
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>>26824566
Everything.
It's time to give up.
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>>26824583
What do you think drunk Twilight thinks about CYOAs? Is she that one Anon who comes up with the worst ideas and the QMs go for it anyway?
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>>26824504
I don't care what Spitfire thinks. I care, dammit!
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>>26824345
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>>26824566

You don't have to change. Just please, come back. Come home.
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>>26823626

>her
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>>26824647
ST pls come back
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>>26824647
Wonderful
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>>26824647
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>>26824400
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>>26824647
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>>26824631
Drunk Twilight could represent the "loud minority" that comes up with bad ideas but posts about it so much it ends up included in the next QM post.
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>>26824647
Whispen is proof that you don't need a bat pony to have a big booty
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>>26824644
Is fleetfoot for sexual?
>>
There is literally nothing wrong with participating in a CYOA while drunk. As long as you can form coherent sentences.
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>>26824686
Or the guy who just recently joined the players and suggests shit that wouldn't match the character's previous actions, because he didn't really read up what happened before.
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>>26824711

She can't be for sexual. Nobody even cares about her.
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>>26824730
Don't worry, I hate Shitfire more.
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>>26824711
Only if you want her to be.
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>>26824730
What if i find her hot and care about her?
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>>26824743
It's not nice to bully ponies, anon
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>>26824743
>>
>>26824401
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>>26824779
Shut up fatty.
>>
Cops: Ponyville Edition continues!
>>26824795
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>>26824779
oink oink
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>>26824805
Could we get some Fleetfoot please?
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>>26822409
Stuck is up
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>>26824818
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>>26824813
I care
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>>26824818
You're about 4 hours slow on the trigger there.

>>26822428
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>>26824805
Poor Choosie
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>>26824805
How are we out already? there were dozens!
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>>26824813
That situation is triggering so much.
I'm literally shaking.
I'll skip some threads.
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>>26824499

Craft, obviously.
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>>26824805

Who would even steal small stallions?
Did Floral take them?
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>>26824877
You get back on that sinking ship and scoop out water with a bucket like the rest of us, Anon.
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>>26824877
https://youtu.be/4JuK1Yr35Io
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>>26824894
>Floral found the stash
Oh no
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>>26824805
>Unknown to Choosie all of the smol stallions have boarded the moth, flying their way to freedom
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>>26824949
>scoop out water with a bucket
>players want to beat up the royal guards
Anon, they are just making more holes to the sinking ship.
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>>26824805
Choosie may be at a shortage of small stallions, but we got some big mares!

>>26824938
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>>26824981
I have no strong feelings about this one way or the other.
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>>26824415
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>>26825003

>Other pie sisters are rating threads now.
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>>26824981
I care.

>>26824813
I care. Even if I prefer Tinepone.

>>26824619
That's fucking spooky. Someone else posting caring Pinkie for me but used my art
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>>26824326
Sharpie pls
www.anonpone.com/dirty/fanart

And maybe Easy
www.anonpone.com/capeshit/fanart
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>>26825146
Calm Easy
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>>26824326
Thimble eating Hype's tie
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>>26825146
>>
>>26825058
You were the one her drew her in 5 minutes or so?
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>>26825125
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>>26825160
But anon, that nice mare saved his tie
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>>26824981
I care
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>>26825125
I'm running!
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>>26824844
>>26825278
Not even No Body cares that you care, Shitfire.
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>>26825280
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>>26825309
Spit out that hat Res
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>>26825280
i feel happiness please do not take that away
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>>26825262
Yeah. If you noticed I forgot some hair swirlies and her bottom lashes because I was in a rush.
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>>26825280
I think you already know that a lot of people care.
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>>26825331
It looks pretty good, that's why i saved it, good job
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>>26825433
fgt shut up
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>>26825433
Thanks.
>>
>>26824499
>>26824878
Someone say bats?!
>>
>>26825452
Not everyone who posts mgs is me, res/alch
>>
So, in your own opinions why do you think each of the most recent cyoa's have failed? What was wrong with the quests?
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>>26825536
The general is the problem.
>>
>>26825536
If I actually read them then I would have an answer.
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>>26825536
Zawaquest failed because gambling games don't work as Cyoa, also none of the characters were likeable.
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>>26825536
They died because they were shit, and also because I didn't care enough to participate in them.
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>>26825548
m8, you don't want to know what's going on in the general, but it certainly aint about quests
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>>26825567
Me neither
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Goofball Mint horse simulator returns!

>>26825507
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>>26824326
Could I get Mango being non-edgy
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>>26825619
I care
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>>26825624
Need a reference.
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>>26825563
should be obvious really, in order for a gambling quest to work the players must typically win more than they lose, and given that gambling is inherently biased against the players...
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>>26825645
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>>26824877
>>26824949
>see what's going on
>inept springing a random arrest warrant on them
Wew
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>>26825742
>random
>implying the arrest warrant actually exists
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>>26825652
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>>26825773
>inept quest
>he thinks the arrest warrant doesn't exist
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>>26825822
many thanks
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>>26825822
Easy
Pls
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Which MC needs to Do the impossible and see the invisible?
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>>26825838
The guards told us they didn't have a warrant in the last update, you meme gargling faggot.
Fuck off Res.
>>
>>26821322
Oh hey, neat picture. I think this is the first fanart I've gotten. You make the beast look so innocent.
Anyways I'll probably start running Spicyquest again, I was banned for three days not long after the thread died so I couldn't update.
>>
>>26825742
Oh wait.
I meant restraining order.
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>>26825874
All of them.
Especially Inept's.
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>>26825874
inept pls
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>>26825890
BACK THE FUCK OFF?!?!?!?!
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>>26825901
Too late now fucker, you already messed up.
Everyone saw, and they're all laughing at you.
>>
>>26825904
Soon.
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>>26825971
Make it sooner and we have a deal, friendo.
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>>26825873
Here you go, one easy for you
>>
>>26826112
Thank you Wolvan.
>>
>>26826112
Oh good, now I don't have to go with the shitty screencaps I took.
>>
Vampony is running and now with 50% less edge.
>>26826092

>>26825822
and thanks for the art.
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>>26826164
I care and congratulate you on reducing your edge.

>>26825619
>>26825632
After careful deliberation, I have decided to support Spitfire's care rather than issuing one of my own.
>>
>>26825258
And at that moment the power went out.
Thanks for the art ST.
>>
Maybe it wasn't "tomorrow" tomorrow... Soon enough.
>>
>>26826139
you know that this is also posted on tumblr, right?

https://picarto.tv/Wolvan
Anyways, more spriting. And chavs vs aliens: The movie
>>
>>26826277
I fucking new it.
You fucking lying piece of shit. I'm going to find my car keys, and then you, you fuck. And when I do, I'm going to beat the shit out of you with my bagged milk in a sock.
>>
>>26826319
The scrolls foretold I'd continue.

You should have acted...
>>
>>26826384
This is the future you chose.
>>
>>26826351
B-but Anon! I need to make the lore as deep and gripping as a slutty bat's ass! I keep finding new things to put in it, I can hardly start now.
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How are you liking Inept doing detailed pictures, Anon?
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>>26826384
Finally.
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>>26826474
I would marry Inept just to hoard them all to myself
>>
>>26826434
You know what, I feel like being generous today, and it has nothing to do with me not being able to remember where I put my damn keys.
You got one more day.
One.
If I don't see your quest after 24 hours, you're getting a milky sock shoved up your ass.
>>
>>26826474
I'm apathetic.
I'd complain that it takes longer, but I'm not actually sure if it takes longer. I can't be bothered to check.
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>Dropped any quests lately? Why?

> http://strawpoll.me/7150310
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>>26826474
I love it question Pinkie.

>>26826485
I agree caring Pinkie.
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>>26825874
>>26825904
>>26825905
Not enough time to finish this.
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>>26826537
I love it, and I love you too, baby.
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>>26826537
yiss
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>>26826537
So Dandy is both Simon and Yoko?
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>>26826537
Nice

nice
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>>26826526
I dropped Pleeny's bard quest because of the stiff Dialogue.

I liked everything else, but the character's talked to each other very oddly. Like Oblivion AI levels of wooden acting.
Sorry.
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>>26826577
That's the same reason I dropped it.

It just felt bland. The setting didn't really come to life in my mind.
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>>26826577
>Like Oblivion AI levels of wooden acting
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>>26826596
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qN80_7rNmcE
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>>26826604
I can't believe I haven't seen this before. This is gold.
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I was reading back through Entrapment I'll be totally honest, I was just looking for the lewds to jack off and couldn't help but to be reminded how much I liked the romance between Max and Sunny. Something about that forbidden romance and Sunny begging Max to take him "while she still yet breathes." I don't know, call it cheesy but it's one of the reasons the ending is one of my favorite cyoa endings.

So /cyoag/, what's your top 3 cyoa endings in no particular order? I'll go first:


Entrapment

DFU

Trottingham
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>>26826577
Archipelago wasn't too bad on that if you ask me. I'd also like to thank Pleeny for teaching me how to spell "archipelago" without having to use spellcheck.
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>>26826638
entrapments end was very comfy, this is true.
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>>26826638
Max has a long, stupid face
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>>26826900
Really I think anything drawn by bath has a stupid face.
>>
Would anybody be interested in a CYOA where you're in a cult?
>>
>>26826949
Starlight cyoa?
>>
>>26826949
Tell me more.
>>
>>26826974
>>26826972
A Chaos God cult.
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>>26826946
Don't talk about sunny that way
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>>26826981
STRENGTH THROUGH CHAOS
PRAISE ZAMORAK
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>>26827003
Well, these Chaos Gods are more like simplified Elder Gods given a particular aspect. I can't decide if it'd be like Lovecraftian Hogwarts where all the cults take residence under a single roof, or split them up into separate and distinctive territories.
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>>26827003
runescape pls go
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>>26827050
runescape just got sold to a chinese mining company, so it's days are pretty numbered now.
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>>26827122
I noticed they added a shit new skill that you need 80 in like divination, smithing, crafting, and whatever to even start training.
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>>26827122
World of Tanks/Warships best MMO confirmed
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>leave now scratched into a screen and a highly mutated corpse begging for death
>"let's take them back with us"
The stupidity in NE is transferring from the NPCs to the players.
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>>26826008
>>26826537
Alright alright, sooner.

>>26826474
Thanks for asking that for me, Ponk. I've been honestly curious about it.

Now, not that it's really an excuse, but I made one other thing tonight, for a budding young QM who needs it. Please don't succumb to your IRL curse and die, SWC. The little poners need you.
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Bully.
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>>26827724
Is Treads still for bully?
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>>26827739
Always
Delusional pony always for bully
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>>26827724
time for billy
tl note: bully means bully
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>>26827752
Big Choosie
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>>26827752
>spoiler
just fuck me up
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Instead of the usual 4 frames it takes me to animate the idle animation, Road Rage's animation took 24
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>>26827868
Yoooo.
I love it. Thanks a bunch Wolvan.
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>>26827919
Linkeh, go the fuck to bed you nigger

>>26827868
On that note, I only got thimble to do now, who should I do next?
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>>26827952
I still want Mango draining another cyoa pone
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>>26827965
Draining them of what anon? Semen?
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Hot asf
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>>26827965
>Drawing Mango
>Ever
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>>26828124
>(you)
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>>26828328
Hmm are we at least gonna have a vague theme for the cutie marks? Cause if not there is a ton of options to even consider and it'd be hard to even begin coming up with something.
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>>26828328
A kiwi surrounded by a purple heart,
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>>26828328
A Cat
A graphing calculator.
A Lily flower
A potion bottle filled with some green Smokey shit
Floppy disk
Lava lamp
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>>26828388
pic
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>>26828328
why delete?
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>>26827697

>Inept sempai noticed me.

Awww, thanks. I promise I'll survive and make a comeback ______soon.
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>>26828388
>>26828393
>>26828399
Oh wonderful! I though You were all gone!
>>26828378
Unfortunately, telling you what is going to happen to these ponies would ruin the experiment!
We need horses who are potentially unprepared!
>>26828417
I thought I would need to come back later and try this.
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>>26828442
You're adorable, I like you already. Is there more character creation?
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>>26828442
So we suggested cutiemarks. Now what.
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>>26828442
Alright I guess i'll throw in some suggestions too.

A Mailbox
A red crystal
A acorn
A Bluejay
A Calcuator
A RC Airlplane
A Chello
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>>26828472
>A acorn
This hurts me a little.
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>>26828477
>>26828472
Also
>Chello
This also hurts.
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>>26828477
>>26828483
Allow me to play doubles advocate here for a moment. For all intensive purposes I think you are wrong. In an age where false morals are a diamond dozen, true virtues are a blessing in the skies. We often put our false morality on a petal stool like a bunch of pre-Madonnas, but you all seem to be taking something very valuable for granite. So I ask of you to mustard up all the strength you can because it is a doggy dog world out there. Although there is some merit to what you are saying it seems like you have a huge ship on your shoulder. In your argument you seem to throw everything in but the kids Nsync, and even though you are having a feel day with this I am here to bring you back into reality. I have a sick sense when it comes to these types of things. It is almost spooky, because I cannot turn a blonde eye to these glaring flaws in your rhetoric. I have zero taller ants when it comes to people spouting out hate in the name of moral righteousness. You just need to remember what comes around is all around, and when supply and command fails you will be the first to go.
Make my words, when you get down to brass stacks it doesn't take rocket appliances to get two birds stoned at once. It's clear who makes the pants in this relationship, and sometimes you just have to swallow your prize and accept the facts. You might have to come to this conclusion through denial and error but I swear on my mother's mating name that when you put the petal to the medal you will pass with flying carpets like it’s a peach of cake.
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>>26828472
>>26828399
>>26828393
>>26828388
I'm going to choose a calculator and the kiwi with the heart because effort was put into one and the other came up twice.
>>26828449
Why yes!
What genders and races should we apply to these chosen cuti-marks?
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>>26828516
Earth pone and Pegasus
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>>26828516
Male Deer. If you just want the basic races pegasus is fine too.
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>>26828516
I want a unicorn of either gender.
But a unicorn bent on becoming an alicorn.
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>>26828477
>>26828483
I have no clue what you guys are talking about to be honest, I was just trying to think of a wide variety of subjects to make a MC.

Male Earth pony and Female unicorn. Are we supposed to choose what MC we think would go with them too, or is that next step?
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>>26828523
I'm assuming you want the calculator applied to the earth pone and pegasus for the heart-n kiwi
>>26828525
We're only using pony races today sicewe are going to slap cuti-marks on them. So a vote for one of them being a pegasus.
>>26828532
We could do this.but I'd still like to know which cuti-mark would go to which gender.
>>26828558
These are fine combos as well. and yes I wnat to know which cuti-marks you want to apply these traits to.

I know this is a big decision but I need you to be specific.
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>>26828558
>I have no clue what you guys are talking about to be honest, I was just trying to think of a wide variety of subjects to make a MC.
It's just me, they're grammatical and spelling errors. It should be "An Acorn" and it's spelt "cello" not "chello".
It's just as someone with relatively good english skills it feels awkward reading things like that.
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>>26828572
Alicorn obsessive should use the red crystal
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>>26828496
You stop that
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>>26828572
>I'm assuming you want the calculator applied to the earth pone and pegasus for the heart-n kiwi
Sure, but I wouldn't mind the other way around.
The Kiwi one should probably be female.
I have no gender preference for the calculator pone.
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>>26828572
Pegasus for heart and kiwi sounds good, and I vote a unicorn for the calculator.
>We're only using pony races today sicewe are going to slap cuti-marks on them
I guess that should've been obvious, sorry i've been drinking.
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>>26828573
Oh ok yeah I see that now that you mention it. I was actually gonna spell cello that way in the first place, but I thought that was wrong. Guess I should of went with my gut. As for the acorn, I derped.

>>26828572
I want the kiwi heart on the male earth pony just cause that sounds different and the calculator on the female unicorn.
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>>26826577
>>26826594
Alright, now this is something you need to tell me more about, because I really thought my writing was ok on that part
I'd really like to know how to fix that because my quest are mainly dialogs after all
Can you give a quest where you think the dialoque is better, please?
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>>26828615
>want the kiwi heart on the male earth pony just cause that sounds different
A fruit on the ass of an earth horse is the least different thing possible.
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>>26828615
>>26828595
>>26828590
I'm just going to make them both female for time sake.
We're going calculator unicorn and pegasus with the kiwi-heart.
Next lets choose some mane and tail styles for these pones.
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>>26828628
Alright, let me rephrase that, different in the sense that i'm guessing most people would put that mark on the gril instead. Cause at first glance it seems a bit girly.

Who knows though i'm obviously not a seer of everyones opinion on something and i'm only guessing.

But either way, both CM combos for the male earth pony and the female unicorn could be interesting if you ask me.
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>>26828655
Long and messy for the calculator pone
moderate length and fancy for the kiwi
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>>26828618
Hijacker and Aight do good dialogue
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>>26828666
Does this work?
If tweaking the manes and tails is done We can move on to naming these ponies and adding last minute details like freckles or glasses.
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>>26828746
You should make the kiwi pone be missing her two hind legs. She has to wheel around in a cart.
>>
>>26828761
stop
>>
>>26828746
I couldn't think of anything personally, so I'm ok with it.
>>
>>26828746
This is fine.
I think calculator pone would look cute in glasses.
I'm not good with names.
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>>26828766
No, I want a cute amputee pone.
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>>26826526
top 2 reasons:
>bad/boring story/setting
>waning motivation

How do we fix CYOAs? How do we help new QMs not botch the story/setting?
>>
>>26828780
That could still happen depending on the nature of the experiment.
>>
>>26828785
Those 2 reasons could be linked.
>>
>>26828785
personally, I think my main issue is that when Im writing I am not really understanding the scope of the story im trying to tell

what could be a short story ends up beign dragged out into a 500 thread epic that no one wants to really stick with
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>>26828800
Forgot to add the picture
>>26828761
>>26828780
We're not hindering the movement of these ponies from the sake of the experiment.
>>26828775
Glasses applied.

Could really use some name suggestions. before we pick pallets.
>>
>>26828814
Oh I still have mane suggestions if you'd like to see it.
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>>26828814
Clever Buttons and Frugal Frugivore respectively.
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>>26828814
Qt.
Calculator pone should probably have some mathematical name, but I can't really think of anything.
The kiwi pone you could just call Kiwi Hearts or something.
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>>26828814
>>26828823
>>
>blord quest died
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>>26828842
Interesting If everyone else is okay with switching to this Anon's mane styles I'm fine with it.
>>26828825
>>26828828
Currently we have
>Cleaver Buttons
>Calculated Steps
For the unicorn

>Frugal Frugivore
>Kiwi Hearts
>Freshly squeezed
For the Pegasus

For the sake of time, let's pick from these names.
Also, I want you to pick from these pallets for the pony's colors. Also specify if you want the mane to be two tone.
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>>26828842
I like the names here.
I also prefer calculator pones general mane style here over baths, but her mane looks too short to me, tail is fine.
I am indifferent to the other pones hair, but preferred the more fancy one.
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Reminder that all CYOA is trash.
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>>26828884
>Calculated Steps
This is a terrible name by the way.
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>>26828884
I can't decide on colours.
I think calculator pone would look good with a dark mane and a light coat, but I can't decide which colours look best.
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>>26828884
First is 36, second is 27
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>>26828914
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>>26828884
How about we keep the hair style that you put on the pegasus? I don't want to seem like i'm spitting on your efforts or anything.. Or whatever other people wanna do, i'm just trying to give suggestions.

I'm gonna be biased here and keep my suggested names of Calculated Steps and Freshly Squeezed. I wasn't sure how serious we should make the names.

number 29 fourth circle down for body color, fifth circle down mane color for Unicorn.

number 3 fourth circle down for body color, fith circle down mane color for pegasus.

Way too many potential colors to choose from, it'd take forever.
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>>26828924
Yes.
Also that's their ages too.
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>>26828964
I like it.
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>>26828964
>>26828915
>>26828924
>>26828954
Alright, How are these ponies?

Last, I need you to select a location for the experiment to take place in.
This will also be your last chance to suggest changes to these pones before I begin the experiment.

Note: The experiment will be short. Usually I would preform an experiment like this in this thread but due to the nature of the experiment, I will preform it in it's own thread.
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>>26829166
Candle Cove looks interesting.
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>>26829166
I have no issues with the selected ponies looks. I honestly have no clue which place to choose, so I just randomly picked Candle Cove.
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>>26829166
Factory Final
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>>26829166
The bog sounds interesting.
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New thread when?!?
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don't bully bat pls
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>>26829319
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>>26829183
>>26829196
>>26829205
>>26829206
We will combine Candle Cove and Celidona Bog for the sake of time since we have the ability to do that.

The experimental thread is Here >>26829351

I warn you that this is very likely going to become very edgy very quickly.
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>>26829363
>Goal: Kill the other pony.

Well, you weren't kidding
>>
I'm still writing lore. I don't want to stop yet because I actually want to run early tomorrow.
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>>26829478
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>>26829363
As someone who prefers cooperation to competition I don't think I can play this.
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>>26827122
I haven't played since before the upgrade, fuck
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>>26829348
I won't, lesbian bats are my fetish
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>>26829689
Thats... oddly specific.
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>>26829363
I love edgy!
>>
New thread where?
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>>26829920
It's over, Anon.
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New thread
>>26830041
>>26830041
>>26830041
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>>26830043
Nobody cares.
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