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Killed by the General Edition

ITT:
>We discuss Current, Finished and Upcoming CYOAs.
>Give advice on CYOAs
>Pitch ideas
>Get critique
>Trade art
>Shitpost

List of stories: https://www.anonpone.com/

Read this advice first:
https://www.anonpone.com/advice
http://www.tgchan.org/wiki/Advice

>What day is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151810
>What time is best?
http://strawpoll.me/5151833
>What genre are you interested in?
http://strawpoll.me/5151994
>What if I cannot into art?
http://strawpoll.me/5207921
>What race would you play?
http://strawpoll.me/5498136

Remember: You will never be free from /cyoag/

Last thread: >>26774033
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>>26788056
First for we'll never be free.
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First for Bat-Choosie.
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>>26788056
Second for I want to bully choosie
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>>26788056
The War in RGS was caused by the General.
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I feel like doodling. Anyone want any cyoa poners drawn?
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>>26788092
Skim the last thread for a name you don't recognize and report back.
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>>26788092
Can you do Sweetheart? She is such a' cute big poner.
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>>26788125
who?
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>>26788125
is that even a cyoa poner.
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>>26788111
Nobody cares
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>>26788163
Did you not play "Pony Care"?
She killed a fucking wizard!
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>>26788092
This poner

>>26787375
>>26787414
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>>26788125
Sure I guess. How big are we talking here?
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>>26788144
>>26788163
Sweetheart is a big mare that comes from the Pony Care CYOA. Link: http://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26641221/
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>>26788259

It's being worked on. Hold on.
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>>26788324
you're doing gods work anon
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>>26788324
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>>26788324
Looks shit
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>>26788324

I regret it all.
Forever.
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>>26788735
>no wings
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>>26788735
haha what a fag
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Sure is dead in here
It's a beautiful sunny day outside
Europe says hi
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>>26789367
6°C and cloudy.
I hope it stays like this for the summer, I don't want 37°C for weeks again
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>>26789367
Europe can go get enriched
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Active threads

NE: >>26786728
Big Mares: >>26784222
11-54: >>26644890
SIM: >>26536081
FOE: >>26771835
Curse Quest: >>26766558
Coltquest: >>26785919
ChestQuest: >>26770545
FIT: >>26784010
TES: >>26783390
Don't Fuck: >>26697331
Alchemy: >>26545611
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>>26789561
so smol
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>>26789561
Wow nearly all of those that aren't running in generals are art quests.
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>>26788735
Literally built for moth cock
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>tfw no more ARG stuff ever
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Would you play a cutequestria war CYOA that's played completely straight and seriously?
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>>26789958
>Would you play a cutequestria war CYOA
Yes
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>>26789958
Lurker pls
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>>26789958
>"Colonel Cuddles, they have breached the northern line!"
>"They have Sir! And silly string!"
>the grimfaced stallion turns to the messenger
>he adjusts his eyepatch, placing it over the other eye
>it had been getting itchy
>his response is simple
>"Release the hounds"
>several miles away, a group of zebras are swarmed by puppies
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>>26789995
Someone should draw this. That sounds so cute.
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>>26789429
Alch please, summer was neat If you had a lake to swim in 5 minutes from your house. Why did I move
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Hey /cyoag/, if you could change one event that happened in a cyoa, what would you change, and why?
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>>26790097
Releasing Sejor.
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>>26790103
Has he been bullied yet?
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>>26790097

going to see Uncle Lucky.
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>>26790107
The mere fact that he's weak as shit is bullying, never mind what else we do to him.
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>>26790097
The flashback shit from Longmeme
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>>26790143
Shame what happened to that greentext.
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>>26790146
What happen to it?
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>>26790188
It died.
RIP in peace writefag.
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>>26788111
ok
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Hey bitches
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>>26788221
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>>26790228
What do you faggot want?
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>>26790271
Oh nothing special just deleting some tumblrs.
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>>26790282
>implying that's my tumblr pass ^:)
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>>26790312
qt
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>>26790312
Is it that time of day again already?
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>>26790323
>Whispen will never watch over you with her unblinking robot eye.
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>>26790312
y sad tho?
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>>26790338
Because she sees something that can hurt her poor little Anonguard.
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>>26790352
She knows what she must do.
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Friendly reminder that the general has killed:
>puzzleanon
>680p
>the guy with the cow cyoa idea
>overlord
>Arch (Don't deny it, Arch)
>GC
>Longname
>AJW
>innkeeper
>Horsepls
>Rev
>Rocketeer
>The guy that ran Breakquest
>Cyborg
>SpaceHorse
>CBT
>Lumineko
>That pony that you liked but died
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>>26790384
General is a national treasure
We should give him the medal of honour for kebab-tier-quest removing
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>>26790384
Stray
Cuddle merc
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>>26790384
well meme'd
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>>26790384
Friendly reminder that half of those people killed off their own quests.
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>>26790407
GC did nothing wrong
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>>26790384
If bantz in the general had the power to end quests then how come Hijacker is still here? Face it anon, we're powerless.
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>>26790247
>>26790225
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>>26790414
All I said was "half". I neither take issue with nor endorse GC's choices.
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>>26790420
Just shove all the eye positions together and make a damn gif. I don't need to see you post it one frame at a time.
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>>26790433
There is literally nothing wrong with posting one frame at a time.
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>>26790371
I hope she remembers to stroke his mane.
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>>26790554
Part of the tongue bath friend.
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Which poner deserves the hose?
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>>26790613
Obviouslly any one from GC's quest
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>>26790613
All of them
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>>26790613
Mango
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>>26790613
Easy
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>>26790625
Mango needs the hose to wash of the blood-stink
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>>26790581
She's so nice and thoughtful.
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>>26790651
Blood doesn't smell bad anon
it smells good
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>>26790613
Is it possible to give Shade the hose?
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>>26790613
That one fuck from 11-54 who built himself a shrine.
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>>26790799
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So is vamp fruit guy running vamp this weekend
MA is running a diff quest at moment
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>>26790384
panzermane
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Give me a list of quests that should be referenced by upstarting qms
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>>26791174
All of them.
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>>26791204
But anon there's too many. I need ones that I can learn things from, good or bad
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>>26791174
None of them.
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>>26791234
There are many different things to learn.
Only all of them can teach them all.
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>>26791174
Required reading:
Don't Fuck up.

Worth a look:
Urban.
11-54.
Lost.
Taken.

If you have the time:
Shooting Stars
Hijack
Entrapment
Renne quest
M&M
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>>26791252
>Lost
Does it really do anything special?
>no JAD
Solid side characters are important.
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>>26791252
>Urban not under if you have the time

It is longer than every other quest on that list.
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>>26791252
Craft pls.
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>>26791278
>Does it really do anything special?
special doesn't have to mean good, I think its a good example of the pitfalls [literally] that can come with otherwise solid visual storytelling.

>>26791282
I wouldnt say you have to read the whole quest. You can get a handle on what res was doing in maybe 50-100k words. M&M on the other hand would take a much longer time to get a handle on.

>>26791298
shit, you caught me.
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>>26791308
It was kind of obvious.

Both Taken and Urban were on your 'worth a look' list.
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>>26791308
>Rescucks
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>>26791314
But they're both worth a look, Res is legitimately one of our best writers and encorperates almost every suggestion into the narrative.

Taken is the best example I can think of for not overstaying your welcome and keeping something short and rock solid.
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>>26791308
looking back we should have picked up on the werebat thing a lot sooner
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>>26791332
We really should have.

We were definitely spot on about the turning into a bat thing.
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>>26791308
Are there any other LOST like recommendations? AKA quests you need to read to learn what not to do so you don't fuck up an otherwise decent quest?
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>>26791582
>inb4 rgs
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>>26791582
puzzleanon's
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>>26791582
longname? Actually just look at successfully hijacked quests and compare the differences.

>>26791597
rgs was more players not realizing how bad lurkers magical realm was.
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>>26791597
If anything, RGS was an example of how something can have a bad story and yet at the same time have compelling enough characters and writing to make people stick around.
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>>26791252
>Don't Fuck up.
Huh, I read that one's first thread but it never really grabbed me.
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>>26791670
>hijacked quests

What's a hijacked quest?
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>>26791681
Yeah first threads pretty weak.
get to the sewers, it gets better.
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>>26791682
A quest that was written by one person and then later taken over by another. usually because the original authors abandons the quest.

So; Super, Vampony, Colorblind, etc.
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>>26791670
By the time we realized it was already too late.
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>>26791689
Eh, I meant I was there participating in the first thread.
To me, Quests are interactive media. Since it's finished there's no chance I'll get to play it, so I have no motivation to read it now.

I think I've been here long enough that skipping that quest won't mean I miss much, since I do read nearly every new quest that pops up, at least for a few updates at least.
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>>26791707
>skipping that quest won't mean I miss much
B-BUT IT'S THE BEST QUEST EVARE!!!1!!
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>>26791695
>Colorblind

Wait, Colorblind was taken over by another writer? When did that happen?
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>>26791730
near the beginning. It was originally an artquest.

'art' used very loosely.
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>>26791730
The first thread.
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>>26791707
Some QM's work on stories that hold meaning both for playing and for reading, so maybe you could find time to reevaluate and perhaps look at some quests under another light.
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So to the anons looking forward to vampony this weekend, I'm not starting today maybe because of other stuff I'd like to get done and etr.
But here's the OP pic for it to wet your palette.

Also, I was thinking about drawing a few moments in the story every now and then too.
I know it's a text quest though so if you don't want me to do that then I won't.
Would probably make updates take ten times longer anyway but still any pony drawing practice is good practice.
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>>26791722
>>26791753
Well, I've had this view since I was trying to read both Shooting Stars and RenneQuest about a year ago.

SS was on Hiatus, but was probably gonna come back, while RenneQuest was old and done. Despite me enjoying the story of Renne better, knowing it was done sapped all my motivation from reading it, while I still really wanted to catch up on SS so I could play in the next thread.

I also stopped trying to catch up on RGS because I knew it would end before I ever got to play. I only got to the section right before the botched ambush of the convoy.

Anyway, I've been QMing for a while now, and no one has told me to eat shit and stop so I assume I'm at least adequate.
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>>26791804
That's the nice thing about a text-based quest, that not all the updates are dependent on the art of the QM, do it at your own pace and practice your wing anatomy
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>>26791804
More art is always better in my book.
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>>26791804
Just do art if you feel like it i'm not against idea of doing some art mid quest but that will slow down updates obviouslly. So see you tomorrow then i'll be paying attention
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Someone in the last thread or the one before that asked why Dandu likes Luna so much.
There's a couple of reasons, but this is the one I drew first, so here you go.
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>>26791855
Young Dandu before the sacrifice of his balls.
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>>26791855
Hah, that's adorable.
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>>26791855
>fuckin' miracles an' shieet
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>>26791855
a cute
CUTE
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>>26791855
Dandy a qt
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>>26791855
I want to protect his smile.
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>>26791913
Too late.
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>>26791855
As long as you're providing backstory, could we maybe get something from Feather's childhood too? I'm curious.
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Don't Fuck continues:
>>26792120
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>>26791855
Inept, please, you're making Dandy one of my favorite male CYOA characters.
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>>26792126
I care.
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>everyone tries drawing now
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>>26792020
Okay sure. I'll probably do it tomorrow.
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>>26792369
>People trying to better themselves for something they like doing and thus sort of raising the bar is depressing
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>>26792369
>not being inspired to work on art
JUST
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>>26792385
Thanks.
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Invisiponk here! Since we're on a bit of a downswing right now, it's the perfect time to start your quest.
What's that one quest idea you really want to run, and what's stopping you from running it? I promise I'll care about it!
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>>26792832
I'd run an MS paint quest about a pony wanting to drink cactus juice but I don't want to steal that guy's oc
That would be pretty rude
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>>26792832
Byzantine Quest.
Being shit, running other quest.
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>>26792832
Cutequestria war.
Running quest, worried it wouldn't be original enough with RGS and Cuddle Merc already being a thing.
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>>26792889
You wouldn't be able to copy RGS if you tried and Cuddle Merc is dead.
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>>26792924
>You wouldn't be able to copy RGS if you tried
Is that a challenge?
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>>26792964
It's an observation.
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>>26792924
>You wouldn't be able to copy RGS if you tried
That's a good thing, anon. I don't want another quest that feels like being punched in the face every time I play it.
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>>26793005
I'd like to run a quest like that. But I was always afraid people won't play it. Irrational.
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>>26792832
I want to run a quest where your job is being a grim ripper, but i have no motivation to make it a thing
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>>26793015
That's the first one of these hypothetical quests that actually intrigues me a bit. Could you elaborate on what you mean, anon?
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>>26793015
I considered making an Inept joke but then decided against it.
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>>26792832
One where you're a robot.
I'm lazy, I want to at least try to work on my art some, and my laziness is getting in the way of that too.
>inb4 gimp pls
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>>26793014
>quest that feels like being punched in the face every time I play it
>I'd like to run a quest like that. But I was always afraid people won't play it.
So would you announce up front that the quest was going to constantly kick you in the nads and have a smaller initial playerbase, or would you just keep screwing people over until they caught on and had a mass exodus?

>>26793079
Gimp pls.
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>>26793079
>One where you're a robot.
At first I understood it in whole different way.
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>>26792832
B-but I'm already running too many quests! How am I supposed to run more?
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>>26793099
Normos get out!
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>>26793131
Don't, Beard
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>>26793079
Gimp pls
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>>26793131
Don't, Inept
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>>26793079
Sex attachment when?
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Time to continue the Choosie Murder Mystery Mini-CYOA!

Previously we were questioning Bath on Nadine...

>You solemnly inform him of death of Nadine and ask him if he's willing to answer some questions
>He seems shocked and invites you in
>Once in the livingroom you seat yourself on a couch across from where Bath is now sitting in a chair
>You ask him where he was at the time of her death AND YOU WANT THE TRUTH
>He's immediately taken aback
>He asks if you think he did it or something
>You respond with a "maybe"
>Bath explains that he hasn't seen her in a few week
>Said it seems she's getting into some shady stuff, seemed to be hiding something
>Didn't know what but considering she didn't have a job and was often out late at night he assumed she was either dealing drugs or something, she was foolhardy and stubborn enough to see her doing it
>That's not good...
>It's a well known fact that many drug dealers end up dead
>All of a sudden one day somepony started killing off the big-wig dealers and worked their way down
>Now most are scared of doing so but there's alot of money in it.
>The only leads you had there was a suspected white unicorn but was dropped since security footage showed a white bat

Any more questions for Bath?
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>>26792386
If you think about it, others try to better themselves. This implies getting good at some point. That's why it can be depressing. Sometimes you like doing something you will never be good at.
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>>26793178
weak-ass prompt tbqh lad
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>>26793178
Ask him when the next thread of Semantic Error is.
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>>26793230
>Bath gives a vague "soon"

>>26793204
Hey, it's not like I'm a professional. Just bored.
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>>26793296
>soon
As long as it's not never, I guess.
Does Nadine have a house, or bedroom we can search for clues?
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>>26792832
I watched all of Kaiji after seeing Zawaquest and wondering what the hell Zawa meant. Now I want to run a quest with a similar level of hopelessness and despair.

Can't do that since I have 2 quests to juggle and if I start it I'll have to deal with Islamic extremist fans
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Schoolhouse Bruise continues!
>>26793355
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>>26793178
Go track down the unicorn before it's too late
>>26793366
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>>26793045
i might make it be like when a pony die they become a spirit that ponies can't see and the grim ripper help them to go forward to the afterlife where they go to what every pony heaven is. The head ripper hire a bunch of ponies to help him/her to send the spirits to the afterlife because after a war there a lot of lost spirits to take care of and need ponies to help with the work load as well as taking care of the new spirit that are appearing. i'm still trying to think of a better lore
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>>26793391
Remove unicorn.

Remove all unicorn.
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>>26793369

Big Mares is up, and the seduction is well on it's way!


You caught me, >>26793139


>>26793374
>>26793391
Also wow, suddenly all the cyoas are up.
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>>26793374
>>26793391
>>26793420
I care about all of you.
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>>26793457
and spitfire only cares about sucking cock so everything is fine.
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>>26793337
KUYASHII
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>>26793336
You have already been to Nadine's apartment. See:
>>26754719
>>26754876
>>26755023
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>>26793497
Well shit, then I dunno.
Do the thing that progresses the story, or give up and go get drunk at a bar or something.
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>>26793497
Go catch the white unicorn with the red flame buttmark.
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>>26793549
This.
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>>26793549
Be sure to grab a cardboard box on the way
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>>26792863

Which OC what?
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>>26793644
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>>26793592
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>>26793391
>>26793416
>>26793549
>>26793556
>>26793592
>You decide to go pay this white unicorn a visit
>You notice Bath is following you as you leave
>He explains he's going to go to the bar him and Nadine goes to all the time, or used to anyway
>You arrive in a more rundown district of town and make your way up to suspect Gar Iceon's apartment
>A moment after knocking you hear the door being unlocked and Gar opens the door, asking what he can help you with
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>>26793755
Well mister Iceon, there's been a murder, and I was hoping you could help me get to the bottom of it.
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>>26793755
Where's the white bat bitch nigga?
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It's a bit on the late side, but would anyone be interested in a Super thread tonight?
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>>26793837
ye
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>>26793837
Linkeh you fucking shit head, do it
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>>26793771
>>26793789
>You tell him there's been a murder and you were hoping he could help you get to the bottom of it
>He nervously invites you in and once seated asks who it was
>After you tell him he seems confused and asks why you came to him
>You proceed to ask him where white bat is at
>He says that he has no clue what you're talking about
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>>26793966
Take out the cardboard box and say that we can do this the easy way or the hard way.
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>>26793966
Prevent arrest him. It usually works.
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>>26793966
Nadine. I want answers and the security footage of a white bat with a cutie mark identical to yours is the only lead I have
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>>26793846
>>26793852
Kay

>>26794029
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>>26794035
We need to bang her again.
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>>26794035
I care. Spitfire must get Fridays off or something.
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>>26793983
>>26793987
>>26794001
>You pull out a large cardboard box, large enough for a pony to fit underneath
>His expression changes from confusion to fear as he pitifully scoots to the other end on the couch
>You demand answers for Nadine and the footage of a white bat similar to him
>He shakily explains that he's got in trouble for his odd lookalike before
>He ask when you murder was and you tell him it was sometime late in the evening
>He says he can prove to you it wasn't him and that he was with his girlfriend at the time and he "dindu nuffin"
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>>26794141
She's too busy sucking dick to pay for her rent
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>>26794187
Well then, can you tell me who else might have done this? Perhaps somepony you know?
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Metal Gear Solid CYOA when
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>>26794212

Emerald is interested.
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>>26793230
It depends on where the current 11-54 thread ends up if the players start getting really close to an ending I might just keep making 11-54 threads until it's done. If we end up not moving that far then I'll attempt to run a Semantic Error thread after the current 11-54 installment.

>>26793755
Remind s me of a picture I drew once. I did like Nadine, and if I ran Entrapment it's full planed length she would have had a better chance of survival. Of course, meeting her in the arena would have taken 3 more days of fighting in the arena and more days in between that in game time for training, character interaction and equipment upgrades. All of this for what was supposed to be a CYOA combat test.
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>>26794187
you wouldn't happen to cosplay as a batpony, would you?
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>>26794256
Lewd piece is coming "soon."
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>>26794266
Bad poner
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>>26794210
>>26794259
>You ask him if he has any idea who would have done it
>He says he has no idea
>You ask him if he would happen to... cosplay, would he
>He ask if that's what ponies who watch anime does
>Before you get to answer then when your phone goes off
>You excuse yourself to answer it
>Turns out they found more evidence at the scene
>Some orange hair
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>>26794360
Sharp Catalog.

I knew that little CYOApone was trouble.
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>>26794377
Or Mango
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The worst thing your character could wake to.
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>>26794432
That's just it, Anon. Waking is the worst thing that could happen to them.
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>>26794444
>quads
Confirmed
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>>26794444
Shut up Anonguard.
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>>26794360
MANGO
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>>26794360
Ask him if the scene was smelly.
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>>26793420
>tfw you notice that later in the quest that the pic is going to be so big that the mares will be normal resolution, and you will just be a small dot on the screen.
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>>26794266
I care about morally ambiguous ponies too.
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>>26794432

Emerald Jewel waking up back in his step-parent's castle.
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>>26794377
>>26794400
>>26794472
>>26794488
>You turn your suspicions to any ponies with orange hair/fur
>You immediately think of Mango
>But it didn't seem to fit
>The corpse wasn't drained and blood was everywhere
>The scene didn't stink either...
>What other ponies with orange hair/fur...? Sharp Catalog?
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>>26794576
What about Butternut Dubs? Are only current CYOAs under suspicion?
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>>26794560
We could turn up the worse case scenario on that if we were feeling particularly sadistic.

Joy could be killed trying to protect Emerald from getting caught again while Ruby got kidnapped or killed too.

Then Emerald get's raped multiple times before getting turned back over to his step parents.
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>>26794576
Harvest.
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>>26794628
>Then Emerald get's raped multiple times
I thought you people wanted sex. How is this worst case?
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>>26794660
Because Emerald is/was a rape victim by his step-parents. We prefer for Emerald to have sex on mostly his terms.
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>>26794628
So the only major change in emeralds life is Joy gets killed? Sounds okay.
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>>26794660
Getting raped is a terrible thing. Sex should be loving gentle sex,(or even rough sex as long as the participant likes that kinda thing).

I don't know about you, but getting things crammed into a hole that isn't at least 90 percent ready to take it hurts. Now imagine multiple ponies one after another. And there is mental baggage that'd go with experiencing it, too, not just physical pain.

I forgot to mention Hope too, she could get caught while doing her help mercy stuff and be made into a sex slave.

>>26794674
Exactly.

>>26794685
You must not like fun.
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>>26794722
You do remember that emerald is being raped every time he has sex right? We're the ones making him do it through our influence via the amulet.
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>>26794674
>>26794722
>a victim of sexual abuse
>perfectly fine with sex
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>>26794737
You could make the argument that we are simply planting a mental suggestion into his head. So technically it is still his consent in the end.

I know from playing that he does not always go with what we suggest.
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>>26794754
It's complicated. But Emerald agreed to be a prostitute for Joyride if it meant she in turn we teach him the powers needed to take down his step-parents.

I never said Emerald had a clean bill of mental health or sound judgement.
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>>26794766
Any moral situation that must resort to a technicality is basically admitting to its own failing.
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>>26794786
>Emerald agreed to be a prostitute
Emerald is a child

>buh-buh he's super smart
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>>26794576
Definitely Harvest
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>>26794800

Eh I'm not sure what you are implying anon. I'm saying that decision was not likely a sound one is all. Yes he does have a high int score and he is indeed a child. A sad fact to be sure given his circumstances. And yes children are and have been prostitutes.

>>26794788

It's fine if you feel that way. We wont know for sure how exactly the amulet works until probably the grand reveal.

We are playing a not so moral quest by the way. It is /ss/ after all.
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>>26794754
Well anon, sometimes people deal with things by doing the very thing that caused em pain. Kinda like how some rape victims make jokes about it. Or people that nearly drowned jump into water to conquer their fear.

But obviously that wouldn't work with everyone, so it's a person to person thing.

It's just his way of coping. And doing it in an environment where he get's a say in what's happening could be therapeutic.

Besides, I still wanna see if we can't help him deal with any demons hiding in his head later.

>>26794766
>>26794786
Yeah.

>>26794788
Depends on how you wanna look at it. I'm pretty sure there is a plethora of things that could be applied to, sexual or not.

The only "technicality" here is that we aren't literally forcing him to do it. Just suggesting it.

I wouldn't even be for this if he seemed pained to be doing it and or reluctant.

>>26794800
He grew up whether or not he wanted to. He is smart, what's your point?
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>>26794737

I think I remember you. Are you still playing the cyoa by the way? I think you mention once about planning on writing a green text version of the story.
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>>26794737
It isn't explicitly stated we are forcing him to do anything. I don't know where you are getting this idea from.
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>>26794886
I think it's because Joy first described the amulet as a mind control device...
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>>26794754
... yeah? That happens sometimes. Are you under the impression that everyone that was sexually abused hates sex?
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>>26794886
Player theory that hasn't played out yet.
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>>26794886
>it isnt explicitly stated
Further proof that CQ players are dense as fuck.
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>>26794943
Oh then in that case excuse me while go and wipe the drool off my face.
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>>26794912
>>26794943
I'm getting conflicting statements here.
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>>26794943
Its less about being dense and more that they're uncomfortable with the truth so they deny it as much as possible. It's like oil companies denying global warming, they've got contradictory interests.
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>>26794899
Fic even said we can't suggest he'd do something super OOC or stupidly brazen to the point of where it'd get him killed.

I honestly don't remember her saying that. If anything I think that's what she was suspicious of. Fic hasn't shown signs of it being being straight up MC.

You have made me think of something interesting. I'm like 90 percent sure he can choose to keep the amulet on or of if he wants, so I wonder what'd happen if he left it off for a while.

Doing things without it on then should go distances to dispel the notion that we are mind controlling him.


>>26794943
Oh? And what is your contrary evidence? I'd be willing to listen if you think you have a point and can prove it. Until then, refrain from calling people dense when you have yet to prove yourself any better.

You know, since you're so smart 'n all.
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>>26794958
>Oh? And what is your contrary evidence?
The story. Go read it.
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>>26794958
>Fic hasn't shown signs of it being being straight up MC.
What the hell are you saying
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>>26794766
>>26794886
>>26794899
>>26794912
>>26794943
>>26794956
>>26794957
>>26794958
>>26794985
>>26794993

Here's the scenes in question. Courtesy of Psker.

https://derpiboo.ru/1058276?

https://derpiboo.ru/1058281?

https://derpiboo.ru/1058301?
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>>26794985
I've read the whole thing, up until what is current now. You want me to believe you, then you provide me with evidence, or at least give me some samples with some reasoning behind it.

As far as I remember,(which I might just read through old stuff again for the hell of it) there has been no explicit signs we are directly controlling him. At most it seems like subtle suggestions.

>>26794993
I didn't mean to type that twice, what I meant to say was: Fic hasn't shown signs of it being unabashedly conclusive to Mind Control.
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>>26795015
>not using anonpone
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>>26794985
>I have no argument
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>>26795021
I don't care at all if you believe me, because you're the type of person who sees multiple dedicated panels of a close up shot on the amulet during decisions and says "no explicit evidence".
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>>26795015
>using the db links
wew
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>>26795049

Even so, we wont know for sure unless it gets revealed as such. I'm fine with it being suggestions and I'm also fine with it being mind control because I like grimdark twists.

Now what I want to know is if you are still planning writing your own version of CQ. I remember you mentioning that you wanted to depict Hope as more motherly and I was curious to see how that would turn out.
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>>26795049
But... Why would you assume something if there isn't glaring evidence of it?

All she said was that it seems to be a demonic soul bound into the pendant,(heh, anon is the ultimate evil demon). That does suggest multiple things, but none of them are true without some compelling evidence.

And then she asked him if he felt like he was being controlled,(we're not even gonna get into how meta that whole damn statement is) and he said he didn't feel like he was. Being controlled would be doing something he didn't mean to do and then wondering why he did it.

From what I gathered it COULD be something swaying his decisions, but nothing is said that it is. Is it possible? Of course it is, but until I get proven wrong, i'm not gonna assume it is.

If you want to that's fine.

I like Emerald and I want to see him happy. I'd personally never deliberately do something I think he would not like.
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>>26795109
>I like Emerald and I want to see him happy.

We all do...
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Emerald as the uncle lucky when
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>>26795162
I know, I want that so bad.
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>>26795162
When i'm dead anon.

As entertaining as that could be , I don't like it.
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>>26795177

But it's the ultimate bad end for Emmy. Besides there would be some yummy canon wielding.
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>>26795131
Protect that smile.

>>26795162
>>26795171
>>26795181

If it were like an alternative, non canon story thing, i'd be a lot more ok with it then.

>>26795181
Cannon wielding?
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I want to yell, "Think Fast!" And bean Emerald with a football every day until he starts catching or starts getting tougher.
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>>26795225
>If it were like an alternative, non canon story thing, i'd be a lot more ok with it then.

That's why I would love to see some fan art or writing on the concept. Just like what we did with Evil Redhead Emerald.
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>>26785919

Colt Quest returns and the sea battle has just begun!
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>>26795238
I would be curious as to know why?
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>>26795210
I think someone said a pony from GS was mean.

>>26795265
Cuz he a bitch
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>>26795281
>Cuz he a bitch

careful, push him too hard and he'll turn into Shinji from End of Eva.
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>>26795281
None of the GS ponies are really bullies.

Pyrodex is well-intentioned but doesn't really know his own strength.
Porcelain Teapot's just an asshole who's full of himself.

Not really bullies.
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>>26795239
Well maybe someone will humor you, and I wouldn't mind being the one to do so. But there is already a mountain of things I wanna do.

>>26795281
I'm pretty sure you can still toughen someone up without being an asshole about it.
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>>26795254
I care, as you might imagine.
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>>26795333
You don't seem to get it.
This idea is to get Emerald to become tough on his own, without realizing what is going on. He sees you as some bully who keeps hitting him in the face with a football. Slowly, on his own he will begin to git good just because he is trying to avoid getting hit with a football. One day he's either going to start catching the ball or kick your ass. Either way, he won't have some kind of crutch to stand on where he thinks that without you he would have never toughened up building self esteem. He also won't be able to bitch out on you, like he could if you told him what you were doing.

In short, the best way to get Emerald to stop being a little bitch is to bully him into it, so he can't back out and so he takes his own credit for becoming less of a bitch.
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>>26795639
If you want him to hate your guts as a by-product...

Then go for it. It just seems retarded to me. Like I said, you could teach somebody to stick up for themselves without being a fuck about it.

I think some people use "tough love" as an excuse to be dickbags.

Why would it matter if he "knows what's going" how would that change much? If anything, trying to manipulate him I would think might piss him off even more. He's probably most certainly not going to see you as a friend anymore.

Maybe this is just me though.
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>>26795684
It works man, trust me.
Back in highschool there was this really wimpy kid. He played tennis and he had this really french last name that was spelled "Forget". I used to talk to him about the Teen Titans show that was on at the time every now and then.
On day Some of my friends and I, decided that we were going to make him better. So we started throwing footballs at him. I remember one time I tosses an empty backpack at him, and he fell down. And this other time I taught him how to make a proper fist and I hold him to punch me in the forehead, he did and ended up hurting his hand somehow.
Anyway, a couple of years after highschool I saw him again and he was fucking ripped. He told me that he started lifting after highschool. It still warms my heart to this day, knowing that I could make someone better in this world.
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>>26795791

It might have worked in your case, but i'm sure there's another instance where that sort of mentality ended badly.
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>>26795791
>>26795809
I was about to say, what worked for you might not work for someone else. Especially in Emeralds case.

Could it work? Yeah possibly,( I still think it sounds like a bullshit way of doing it personally, but I guess that is also because it would fucking piss me off if anyone ever tried that shit on me). But playing with peoples emotions to "further benefit" them is a terrible way of going about it if you ask me.

I'm surprised they didn't tell you that then jack your face up.

Though.. to give your idea some credit, there is one silver lining in a situation like that is it'd be in a more controlled environment. So you would be ensuring the damage would be minimal,(though given how much you might of angered them, they very well might not forgive you even if you did have good intentions with it).
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>>26788056

What is a QM?

For the best insurance rates online!
Go to The General and save some time!
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>>26795860
It's "for a great low rate you can get online" you maroon.
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>>26795881
Oh shit, the General's here!

Choosie, get him!
!meme
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>Thimble and Death Wish in Urban
wew
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>>26795949
This can't end well
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>>26795949
If Thimble doesn't end up carried off by a mothpony mare, I'll be very upset.
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>>26795949
Oh god.
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>>26795949
Remember, it's ok when Res does it
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>>26796020
M E M E P R O O F
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>>26796020
I mean, wouldn't it be ok as a little frivolous crossover of sorts? I mean, I know fun is frowned upon some times, but still. That doesn't mean it shouldn't happen.
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>>26796122
Imagine how much cock she can deepthroat.
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>>26796122
That's interesting, what's with the textured look of it?
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>>26796071
He killed Wispy already
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>>26796071
I'll probably try to reference the trip to Baltimare
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>>26796122
rarest whispen
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>>26796150
That sounds terrible....

>>26796160
Sounds great!
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>>26796179
No Whispen shall be rare.
Share them amongst the populace
Rise, Whispen-poor proletariat
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>>26796179
I'm glad artists are deleting all these Whispens after posting them. Wouldn't want to devalue them.
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>>26796209
HIPSEN
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>>26796214
Foal bearing hipsen.
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>>26796359
I put my dog down today, let's play a quest.
>>26796359
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>>26796431
I'm sorry Bath.
Please have mercy on Pepper.
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>>26796431
Sorry to hear that bath.
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>>26796431
Christ man, you have my sympathy...
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>>26796431
I know that stare
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>>26796394
NORTHERN EXCURSION is back up
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>>26796431
Sorry to hear about your dog. That can't have been easy to do. You have all our cares.

>>26796465
I care about this too.
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>>26796431
That's really rough Bath, sorry for your loss.
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>>26796438
>>26796445
>>26796457
>>26796475
>>26796495
She was old, It had to happen.
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>>26796508
Well i'm sure that didn't make it any easier to bear.
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So like when's vamp going up
Guy promised to run on weekend
>>
>>
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>>26797461
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>""""""""""""""""""""tomorrow""""""""""""""""""""
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>>26792832
Finishing my first quest. I'm worried it's been too long since my poor attempt, though. Far too long.
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>>26796150
Wait, what? When did that happen?
I miss JAD...
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>>26797815
>”Sure was, but now onto other news. Reports of the stricken airship that lost control the other day have claimed that it careened into a local bar, destroying both in the process. When rescue teams arrive several changelings were found at the scene, to which animal control was brought in to preform humane euthanizations”
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>>26797857
So that's where the Airship crash came from...
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>>26797857
>>26797991
Fuck, that's horrible.
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Lily lewd never ever.
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>>26798264
>Choosie stomping on Lily.gif
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>>26797461
>starting a blog only for a quest
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>>26798472
What, you afraid tumblr's gonna run out of space?
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>>26798472
He started a blog so that people would stop bugging Storyteller about him.
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>>26796147
I just like the paper texture.
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>>26798484
No, I wonder why one should do a tumblr account if he can announce everything here.

>>26798492
Reasonable enough.
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Dammit, night delivery died.
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>>26798605
Didn't ExcArc get banned?
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>>26798605
>QM got himself banned twice
What a surprise
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>>26798605
Would have bumped, but I'm sick.
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>>26798638
Take some cough syrup.
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Bi-weekly reminder that bat stallions are literally made for mothcock
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>>26798729
Not even gay, but I'mma need some sauce on that.
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>>26798729
>being gay
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>>26798759
>Not wanting horsecock inside you
Get out, this is GATF territory.
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>>26798753
Same.
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>>26798764
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>>26798781
Ha! You have no power here!
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>>26798753
>>26798770
https://www.derpibooru.org/815398 here you go

Also here's another bat performing his rightful duty.
https://www.derpibooru.org/1106231
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>>26798786
I can always shitpost.
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>>26798822
There's no proof that any of those cocks are mothcocks.
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>>26798867
Any cock will do, as long as it's not bat cock.
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>>26798729
>Batcancer
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>>26798932
>>26799060
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>>26799087
I disagree with whoever made those posts, but understand why he is upset. Times change, and tastes change with them. I'm sure he misses the old days, but I don't necessarily think that you can lay that much of the change on the general.

At any rate, I personally like the current style of CYOAs a lot more than I did the ones from 2012.
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>>26799087
Y'all need to stop replying to >>26799060
Next time just post a link to one of his previous posts on desustorage or something
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>>26799087
>>26799154
I liked the CYOAs of 2012 and I like the CYOAs now.
People are way to rigid about their interactive horse fiction.
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>>26799154
I'm in the same boat, although a lighthearted, roll based old-style cyoa would be nice to see, if done well
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>>26799154
>>26799175
Yeah, I don't mind story heavy quests but I'd like to see something simple and quick paced sometime.
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>>26799170
I agree completely. When I said I prefer the current style I didn't mean to imply that I didn't enjoy the older style, just that I think they have gotten a lot better is all.

>>26799175
I agree with you also, there's room for both. I'm sure it would do well too, considering how many people miss the old style.
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>>26799154
What happened with Overlord when he basically told the ones in this general to bite his ass because they didn't like his ideas?
What does this general have in every single thread? Batfags posting their autistic batmemes.
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>>26799154
>>26799170
>>26799175
>>26799195
>>26799197
>calm measured responses to a complaint
>understanding that there's room for all kinds of quests
Who the fuck are you people? What the hell is happening?

>>26799205
Oh, false alarm. I'm still in /cyoa/.
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>>26799231
Alright, you made me chuckle you cheeky fuck
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>>26799231
It's true though. No one is saying that it's impossible to run those quests or that the quests I don't like shouldn't be allowed to run. If you ask me if I would like to play a lelsorandumb quest with anon in equestria fucking everything, I'm going to say no and give my opinion on it.
That doesn't mean that the quest can't do well or that it shouldn't be allowed to exist because it doesn't match my tastes.

In fact, >>26799205 Barneyfag here's the only one throwing a shitfit.
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>>26799195
You might be interested in Taken. That was a quick little one-night CYOA.
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>>26799316
I played it.
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>>26799293
>It's true though.
I know, I was just being facetious. In fact what you said was exactly what happened with overlord.
>if asked if I want to play a quest I have no interest in, I'm going to say no and give my opinion on it
He asked what he did wrong when nobody responded to his quest, and we gave advice. He changed several things and asked if it was better, and we gave further advice. As soon as he heard something he really didn't want to hear though, he called us cancer, stormed off, and we responded how you might expect.
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>>26799343
Because your advice was cancer that would only please people in this general instead of everyone on /mlp/.
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>>26799379
Overlord pls
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>>26799379
When is the next thread, Overlord?
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>>26799379
If you know what would please everyone in /mlp/ why would you be asking for advice in the first place.
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>>26799379
If he truly thought the advice was cancer, why didn't he just run his quest then? /cyoa/ isn't the decider for who gets to run quests or what runs.
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>>26799379
>advice was cancer
Really? I was there. I remember the advice we gave him.

>get quests are not as popular anymore
>the MC doesn't appear to have much personality
>the name for the MC sounds like a furry
>sociopathy is a meme mental disorder
>you might want to consider promoting your quest in the general before running it so we will know it exists
>anon and humans are both less popular than they used to be
>anon and humans in general are met with suspicion since they are tricky to do well

I don't even necessarily agree with all that, but his response was ridiculous. He basically said "well i guess i have to wait for humans to be popular again since i can't write pony mcs. Now i see why people call you cancer. Goodbye."
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>>26797106
Yeah, sorry im a bit late in the day. I had a hard night but here's the quest. >>26799365
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>>26799440
>inb4 "your advices were shit and I was right"
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>>26799379
>would only please people in this general
People will ask for the things they prefer, that shouldn't be a surprise.
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>>26799465
Sorry you had a hard night, hope you have a better day. I care.
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>>26799440
I think you're confusing Overlord with Incognito.
https://desustorage.org/mlp/thread/26699197/#26710433
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>>26799508
Thanks, Pinke.
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>>26799552
Yeah, that was a different aspiring MC who flipped the table and stormed off when he didn't like our advice. He might have even been worse than Overlord.

>K, well since I can't write pony MCs worth a shit for some inscrutible reason I'll just stop trying
>thanks for letting me know I was wasting my time, now I see why so many others call CYOAs cancer.
>but it's okay, when the other foot drops and it's human MCs everywhere I'll be able to come back
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>>26799580
Meanwhile, Overlord did a different thing.

>Yeah, that's the boring part. Do people pay for this shit now adays? I'm talking a live-written porno where you guide the main character's intentions and sex drive. It's not the next bestseller I am suggesting here.
> Ain't arguing with any o you faggots any more, go there if you're interested, stay here and bitch about how CYOA's were better "back in da old days" if you really are that autistic.
> Yes, let the butthurt flow through you all. I might not have managed to create a CYOA that anyone gives a fuck, but at least I made you fight eachother.
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>>26799580
>>26799628
>Incognito versus Overlord.
Tough call.

>Overlord: How about a quest where pony anon rapes things?
>/cyoa/: No thanks.
>Overlord: You're all idiots and I'm going to run it anyway.

>Incognito: How about some edgy human bullshit?
>/cyoa/: No thanks.
>Incognito: You are all cancer and I hate you.
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>>26799659
When you put it like that, I'm not convinced that they aren't the same person.
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>>26799726
>Incognito: I can't write pony MCs worth a shit
There's the difference
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>>26788056
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So, has Feather Dust mathematics objectively proven any of your CYOA ships yet?
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>>26799845
Apparently it just did.
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CYOA Player advice #523

If a CYOA is stagnating and you don't know what to do, post something stupid!
People will immediately jump at the chance to correct you.
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>>26799995
This sounds like kinda bad advice, but I hesitate to make a judgement call without knowing the specifics. Link?
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>>26800014
It's not referring to a specific thing, but whenever I think my own idea is stupid but no one's posting, I'll just post it and immediately get like four replies saying 'no don't do that do this instead.'
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>>26800029
I can confirm that this works. When we were buying batteries in Tinypone, I didn't feel like translating battery codes to find the right electrode metals to make the ship rechargeable, so I didn't bother, figuring someone else would do it. Then some anon (possibly you) posts "screw the math, let's just buy double As".

Me and three other anons immediately started translating battery codes and decided on a nickel-cadmium 9-volt.
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>>26799995
>CYOA Player advice #523.5

If posting something stupid doesn't work, then post retarded batmemes!
Batfags will immediately jump at the chance to circlejerk over their fanmade batshit.
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>>26800107
TOP KEKEKEK
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>>26800075
Course it works. It lights a fire under everyone's asses to do something smart before bad thing happens.
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>>26800138
Too bad CC players didn't know this.
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>>26799845
Dude what
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>>26800276
You've never seen people assign numerical values to letters before? A=1, B=2, C=3, etc. the number total for Sharpie plus the number total for Tally equals the number total for endless cuddles.
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>>26800295
I'm not stupid. Its more of a remark on how autistic you have to be to do that.
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>>26799845
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>>26800295
Choosie adds up to 74.
Jesus adds up to 74.
Lucifer adds up to 74.
Muhammad adds up to 74.

I think we can go ahead and make that religion now.
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Hey guys let's watch the show
Spread the word to your other generals
>>26800345
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>>26800351
>>26800372
The math doesn't lie!
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>>26800384
Okay. It's been too long since I actually watched the goddamn show itself anyway.
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>>26800351
Lovebug indeed
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Were there any past CYOAs that involve gayfaggot main characters in the past that are archived, and actually good? The only one I know of at all is SITMWY.
I know Colt Quest tried to do this but that didn't work out.
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>>26800471
>SITMWY
?
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>>26800491
Stuck in the Middle With You
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>>26800491
Stuck in the middle with yogurt.
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>>26800491
Somehow I Think My Waifu's Yellow?
Somewhere In The Milky Way Yelling?
Something Inside That Mother Whines Yodelei?
I just don't know
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>>26800491
Stuck in the moshpit with you
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>>26800491
Shitting in the Morgue West of Yorkshire.
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>>26800510
>>26800506
>>26800501
>>26800500
>>26800491
Guys please
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>>26800351
>>26800387
The math fucking lies
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>>26800571
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>>26800555
Even better. That means that Fruit+Easy equals fornication
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>>26800506
>Somewhere In The Milky Way Yelling
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>>26800598
I care about Blord Quest!
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>>26800549
Answer to the serious question: No.

One of the main problems with this is that many of the ones who tried didn't show their intentions to have the MC be gay off the bat. Stuck in the Middle makes it pretty obvious that Thimble is gay, and the '101% gayness' joke leaves little room for argument.

Cuck Quest had Emerald do a bunch of /ss/ shit at first so when the QM starting pushing gay stuff the straightfags flipped out. M&M also ran into this problem in a massive shit storm. Even in Stuck in the Middle had a mini-shitstorm when some players wanted to get Thimble into a threesome, but the QM was able to defuse it easier since the argument was more 'We can't rush into it!' rather than 'we can't have a threesome ever'.
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>>26800629
The problem wasn't about our sexuality or having a gay threesome you dumdum. It was about someone saying earlier that we were "saving ourselves for marriage" and then everybody jumping on the next chance at lewd.
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>>26800660
that's 4chan for you
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>>26800471
https://www.anonpone.com/doubletake
really short and entirely lewd
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Didn't anyone realise vamp is up
go play anons
>>26799365
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>>26801003
Slowpoke
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>>26792832

Really two, Invisiponk. One is asylum quest (got basic framework down, was working on characters recently) and one is a sequel of sorts to a thing did long ago (just some story ideas on this though, nothing developed).

What's stopping me is a mix of real life busy times and stress and other things affecting my creative flow. Pinkie, give me some happiness so I can do fun things again, please.
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Wasn't Cough Syrup supposed to start by now?
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>>26801089
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>>26800660
>>26800629
Yeah... I was a part of that argument. We compromised with "We should wait", which is good, because I'm loving thr world that Stuck in the Middle as built so far.
Though, I am surprised that no one ever tried their hand at having gay MCs in their CYOAs before now.
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>>26801003

>>26799465
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>>26801239
Trouble with Trolls in the Elder Scrolls.
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>>26801307
I care.

>>26801003
You already got your care, but have another just in case.
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Not necessarily starting early, but I feel like I should give you guys some extra time since this might be a pivotal character moment. Maybe. Probably not.

>>26801638
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>>26801654
>this might be a pivotal character moment. Maybe. Probably not.

Glad you know to not expect much from us.
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>>26801654
I care.
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>>26792832
Adventuring across Equestria fighting supernatural shit and banishing Elder Gods.
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>>26801927
I don't even care for adventure stories normally, but that sounds like Shadow of the Colossus and I love it. Which Elder Gods? Are we going Lovecraftian, Babylonian, something you made up, or what?
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>>26793337
It's easy. Add hopelessness and despair to your current quests instead.
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>>26801959
I'm still undecided on that. If I don't come up with my own stuff then I'll use Lovecraftian Elder Gods as that's what I'm more familiar with. I'll probably use this general to create the main character at some point, like we did with Pocket Watch. You'll have a choice of three backgrounds, Mercenary Child, Travelling Scholar and Disgraced Noble which give bonuses to combat abilities, knowledge and magical abilities respectively. It'd be a sort of monster of the week thing with an overarching story tying it together.
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>>26802058
Super's up.

Updates might be a little on the slow side at first, but they should speed up later.
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>>26793366
Pretending to be fags continues
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>>26802076
>>26802230
Ahh, the weekend. I care about both.
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>>26801687
Hey I was just curious to see what you guys think might have made her the way she is. You can make her as deep or as shallow as you want. I just don't want to shoehorn a backstory in for her myself, lest I become the next Longname.
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>>26802258
She has a talent that's only useful once a year so everybody probably treats her like a useless bum the rest of the time. She also only has the one thing that makes her happy on that one day. After multiple years of this a mutual hatred would develop.
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>>26802294
>She also only has the one thing that makes her happy on that one day
What's that?
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>>26802258
>I just don't want to shoehorn a backstory in for her myself, lest I become the next Longname.
There isn't a single part of that sentence I didn't like.
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>>26802340
Making toys for foals.
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>>26802294
>everybody probably treats her like a useless bum the rest of the time
Has this ever happened to any pony at any point in time?
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>>26802340

She only makes toys once every year, on a certain Special holiday
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>>26802390
Rainbow Dash
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>>26802258
I don't even play FiT, but I'm curious to see what the players come up with.

Personally I always just assumed that she was simply an authentically grumpy person. No childhood trauma or anything, she's just full of good old-fashioned hate.
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>>26802426
There's a reason for everything, Anon. Cranky became jaded because he lost the love of his life, Moondancer became the closest thing to a canon Holiday because her best friend stood her up and skipped town on her first big happy day, even Discord was only an asshole because he never had a friend before Butterhorse was nice to him.
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>>26802550
I disagree completely. Some people are the way they are because of past events, and some people are they way they are because that is the way they are. You can't say all people who are X must have had Y in their past.
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>>26802778
This. I'm just a cunt.
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>>26802778
Nature and nuture are both valid options.
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>>26802778
This for the exact opposite reason as >>26802795. I am and always have been an optimist, and I can think of no good reason why I should be,
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>>26802803
No, nature and NURTURE are valid options
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>>26802803
That's exactly what I was saying. Both are valid. But I guess "nature and nurture are both valid" is a little better sounding than "Some people are the way they are because of past events, and some people are they way they are because that is the way they are." which is how I put it.
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This conversation (like so many others we have had) really makes me think about the very odd sort of culture we have produced in this general.

>does a grumpy character have to have a backstory for what made them like that?
Both nature and nurture are valid. Maybe something happened and maybe they're just grumpy.
>Humans or no?
Either is fine as long as you do it well.
>Current "story" style or older "game" style?
There's room for both.

We're fine with anything but we shit on everything. It's an interesting environment we have in here.
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>>26802902
>We're fine with anything but we shit on everything.
That's a great description.
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>>26802902
Gee anon, it's almost like that's the attitude most stick around 4chan for at all.
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>>26802902
I think a reason why this happens is because the cyoa community is composed of several sub-communities, which aren't always compatible. See batfags vs. gayfags for example.
Some anon made a diagram about that a while ago, I think it was in early January.
Point is, we're fine with anything because there will always be someone who will like the thing, but at the same time there's always someone who hates the thing and likes the opposite.
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>>26802952
I remember than Venn diagram. It was great. We all offered helpful criticisms to refine it, and we all shit on it.

Your example works twice.
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>>26802902
That's because there is more than one person here and everyone has different opinions.
"We" aren't a hivemind, and this isn't a circlejerk hugbox where we all like the same things and have the same opinions. We are individuals with differing preferences. and people aren't afraid to tell other people that they don't like thing, because we are all anonymous, and are free to tell people to kill themselves for their shitty taste in neighponies mangos.
All of 4chan is like this, not just this faggy general.
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>>26802980
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>>26803031
I am aware of that and I wasn't suggesting otherwise. I know there is no hivemind and that we are all individuals. I was just appreciating the fact that even people who have a clear preference for one way still seem to be able to say that there is no one way to do things. It's nice is all.
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>>26803045
>gayfags are immune to cucking
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>>26803067
They are though
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>>26803067
I don't think they've actually been cucked yet.
Nips doesn't have gay MCs right now :^)
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>>26803090
>fruit
>not totally willing to stick his dick seren
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>>26803045
My favorite thing about this chart is it shows just how small the sliver is for pro/anti batfags who are not just shitposting. I feel sorry for people who actually have opinions on bats.
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>>26803067
Yeah it's not perfect and not supposed to be, but at some point it gets too complicated, pushing translucent circles around in Photoshop.

>>26802952
>>26802980
it was January 6 btw.
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>>26803116
That's called bi anon.
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>>26802952
The sub-communities would be each quest, what you're talking about are demographics. There's no place the gayfags go to have their own internal community.

Secret club would be an example of a sub-community.
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>>26803129
Yeah but...it's still another dude.
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>>26803145
Most MCs are bi.
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>>26803152
But dick
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>>26803116
>>26803129
>>26803145
This is actually an interesting point. How many bi MCs are actually the result of gayfags and straightfags both getting their way?

>>26803152
I don't know about "most", but it's certainly common. I'd say that it is about as common as straight, but which one is in the lead varies as quests begin and end.
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>>26803145
True, but he's not gay, ergo he's not a character who primarily represents the gayfags' interests.
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>>26803172
>How many bi MCs are actually the result of gayfags and straightfags both getting their way?
I would imagine most, probably, but I don't really have any numbers to back that up.
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>>26803182
I think a bi MC can represent both straightfag and gayfag interests.
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>>26803172
If I were running a quest the MC would be Bi because I like the idea of that.

Getting to appease the straight and gay crowd would just be icing on the cake. The semen and vaginal squirt encrusted cake.
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>>26803152
Speaking of which:

http://strawpoll.me/7129415
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>>26803211
(it's multiple choice)
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>>26803190
I know anon.
>primarily
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>>26803211
Not even a little surprised.
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>>26803211
That poll is a bit, hard to answer, shouldn't it ask which you want to play as the most? Cause if given multiple choices, i'd choose em all.

Cause if i had the choice of choosing all of them I would. Now what order they would be chosen in is a whole nother thing.
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>>26803228
>that one nigga who didn't pick them all
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>>26803211
>>26803245
This is really very contextual for me.
In a normal quest I don't really mind the orientation of the character as long as it's not the focus of the quest.

However, I don't think I'd enjoy a quest where it focused on the gayness of a gay male. If the gayness is incidental then by all means, but if it's their main personality then I am repulsed.
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>>26803238
>Cause if i had the choice of choosing all of them I would.
You do. Pick one or more. It's not hard to answer, it's easy to answer. Which would you play? All of them, as you just said.
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>>26803252
Orientation should never be a personality trait.
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>>26803252
>I don't think I'd enjoy a quest where it focused on the gayness of a gay male
Well, that was what I tried to imply with "if well made". Because I don't think a well made one would focus on that.
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>>26803252
>if well made
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>>26803274
>>26803293
>>26803263
Eh, but I guess my point was that I might be able to get into a quest like that for the other orientations. I don't mind a lewdquest, I just wouldn't play a lewdquest that's just gay stallions.

In fact that's why Stuck in the Middle didn't appeal to me. It focused too much on the gay, despite me liking Sloth's writing style.
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>>26803263
Orientation can be a personality trait. It shouldn't be a personality trait for every character or be shoehorned in.
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>>26803252
>if it's their main personality then I am repulsed
If the MC's main personality trait is their orientation then I'm repulsed too, no matter what they are into. That's a terrible thing to make the basis of a character. You might as well base a character around what their favorite color is.
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>>26803299
*cough cough*Bioware*cough*
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>>26803299
Apologies. >>26803306 summed up what I meant. Liking dick shouldn't be the rock that you build your character on.
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>>26803294
The main focus of Stuck in the Middle is the case solving.
The gayness does take up a large portion of the CYOA, don't get me wrong, but so far that has been just developing the characters and their relationships with each other.
I can see why people would be put off, though. A prerequisite to reading it is you need to enjoy cocks in some form or another.
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>>26803331
But liking pussy is?
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>>26803350
>You must be THIS GAY to play
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>>26803373
Neither is. What >>26803306 said.
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>>26803391
Aren't you guy who didn't vote for them all though?
I'm trying to understand the reasoning, but what's been said so far doesn't really make sense.
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>>26803350
>people still want to be with wish
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>>26803410
I voted for all of them.
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>>26803410
>I'm trying to understand the reasoning, but what's been said so far doesn't really make sense.
He's willing to play a character that differs from him on sexuality, as long as sexuality isn't the focus of the quest. Makes sense to me.
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>>26803501
That's not what the vote said though.
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>>26803373
That's not better.

Would you want to be around a guy who screams "I WANT TO FUCK PUSSY" all the time? Of course not.
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>>26803519
Well, I'm just going by what he said, and he clarified his position to my satisfaction when he posted >>26803331.
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>>26803544
I don't think that's the guy who voted.
>>26803453
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>>26803381
SFB please put this as the subject for the next thread.
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>>26803420
>people who don't want to be with wish
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>>26803420
>>26803593
>current year
>not wanting a butt from every race
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>>26803624
A line of butts to smack out of idle boredom as you walk past them.
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>>26803624
>wanting butt from a sworn enemy
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>>26803624
Fucking this.
1 butt
2 butts
red butts
blue butts
all the butts
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>>26803639
You're saying you don't want to dominate your enemies?
They belong below you anon.
Literally.
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>>26803665
But we're the bottom. W-we can't be so rough with someone else.
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>>26803697
All male moths are bottoms. They learn how to switch early on.
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>>26803697
Wishy is going to be a sub-bottom and he's gonna like it.
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>>26803719
They have to draw straws to see who will be top for the night.
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So, 11-54 ended mid boss-fight.
Should I start a Semantic Error thread and see if I can get SE working again next or jump right back into the boss-fight with another 11-54 thread.
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>>26803722
dubs confirm
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>>26803752
11-54, please.
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>Sick deleted the post about him continuing today
Oh.
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>>26803752
smol horse pls
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>>26803752
As much as I'd like to see SE, that is an awkward place to stop.
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>>26803752
While I do want another SE thread, I felt like the 11-54 thread had some good momentum going.

I wouldn't mind either choice, desu
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>>26803784
cucked 2bh lad
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>>26803817
Is this how it feels? It doesn't feel very good.
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>>26803784

>>26803828
Feels bad
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>>26803767
I'm somewhat curious but also lazy. Do you have a link or will I never know?
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>>26803752
I'd like to jump right back into it.
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>>26803752
I won't mind if you continue 11-54 over SE.
I don't play 11-54. but the middle of a boss fight seems like a shitty place to stop.
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>>26803839
>>26803532
>enough money for 5 cans of paint
>hurr what should we buy?
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>>26803892
Holiday goes shopping immediately after Feather does. Coincidence? I think not!
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>>26803892
Wait what the hell does this have to do with color combinations?
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Which QM is the cuckest?
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>>26803969
Nips. Next question.
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>>26803934
I guess he's implying we're retarded for not just getting red, blue, and yellow paint and just mixing them for other colours.
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>>26803765
>>26803801
>>26803802
>>26803854
>>26803879
Alright, I'm not going to get 11-54 up tonight, it'll probably go up Tuesday or Wednesday.
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>>26803987
Tease.
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>>26803722
No, he needs to top first.
Once he sees how much Thimble enjoys it he's going to be practically begging for the D.
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>>26803969
GC before she left
Nips takes the crown now
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>>26803983
Does mixing paint work like that? I haven't painted anything other than rooms since I was like four.
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>>26804117
Yes it does. You ever see an artists mix paint together on a palette?
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>>26804117
Bob Ross nignog. Go watch him.
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>>26804117
I'm not sure why it wouldn't.
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>>26804157
Cunthorse needs some Bob Ross.
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>>26804211
>implying she doesn't watch it to help calm down
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