Hey /a/fags, I'm back Is my animation still lame?

Let's make anime together, f/a/ggot

Kill yourself

>>158582280
Artist name please?

>>158582485

OC

>>158582547
Artist name please?

>>158582575

hgdmmt

>>158582280

Bump

Come on /a/, you can do better

I just wanna know who the artist is

>>158582280
Looks like fuckin Arthur lmao

>>158582959

m8, I really did it, it's OC

I go for the name hgdmmt on the net. Just google it.

>>158582280
Well, the move she does in the end is sure jumpy.

>>158583057

Yes the drawing is just fucking lame. But who the fuck is Arthur?

>>158583080

At least someone said something about the animation. Thanks

>>158583299
>But who the fuck is Arthur?
>he didn't watch AOTY
Animation is ok

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>western """"anime"""" """"artist""""

>>158582280
It's ugly and stiff. the number of frame is good but the overall animation is bad. Also she's ugly.

>>158583542
>posts pic of Sagiri
"""""""""""Anime""""""""""" """"""""""""artist"""""""""""""

>>158582280
>>>/co/
Your artsryle is shit, your animation is shit. Stay out of anime.

>>158582280

Remove realistic nose and tumblr skincolor

>>158583299
You need some proper in-betweens.

>>158583542
I've grown to tolerate Otaking and his faggotry.

>>158582280
Cute.

>>158582280
>Eyes too different from each other
>fucked up body perspective
>not enough moe
And what's with this move

>>158583553

That's the spirit

>>158583789

Well, I didn't plan this shit well enough. It's just the second time I make an animation.
Also, only now I noticed that it doesn't feel right because the lack of moe. Thanks m8.

>>158583927
Go to>>>/ic/ pls. I also recommend you stop doing anime animation because you're a westerner.

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>>158583725

Like I fucking know how to pick colors

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What did you mean by this?

>>158583725
>>158584048

Make her black lmao

>>158583976

Most anime is just bad animation, so what's the point?

>>158584204

What?

>>158584398
That move.

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Nico Nico kill yourself

>>158584420

Was supposed to be this >>158584431

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>>158582280
Perspective is too extreme on her right eye, and her ponytails aren't lined up correctly. Animation-wise the bounce could use some work. It's noticeably abrupt and jerky at the lowest point.

Unlike some other anons I actually like the more "cartoony" art style.

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it looks terrible but it seems like something that would get applauded on tumblr.

>>158584915

Yeah, the squash is really pooly made. I noticed how fucked up the illustration was right when I was finishing up. So I didn't care anymore, I just wanted to see what I could do for the movement.

Also gr8 pic m8.

>>158585210

Like your mom

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>>158583976
>i also recommend you stop doing anime animation because you're a westerner

>>158582280

unnecessary frames
inconsistent lines
uncanny movement

it's okay

>>158585694

much appreciated

It's impossible to do high-level animation when you just started

>>158582280
fuck off tumblr

>>158585849

the animation is fine, but you're gonna get lot of hate if you post it right here because you're not emulating the nips style correctly and people think doing that and animating is a piece of cake, try ic alternative style thread, you'll probably get more feedback there

>>158582280
As others have already pointed, the area is suffers most is how jerky that bounce motion is. Needs a bit better timing depending on what's supposed to be happening. If she's just moving herself up and down, the entire action should be a tad slower and needs to be smoother. Some better follow-through with the hair and clothing would also really help. On the other hand, if she was meant to be plopping down into a seat or against a wall or something, the jerkiness is a bit more forgivable, but in that cause the reactive bounce shouldn't be so drastic.

I think overall you've got a good basis, but just need to work a bit on the quality of your inbetweens.

>>158586058

People who usually don't know about the animation process give some gold feedback about the final product, and that's what I'm looking for here in /a/

I can bear the hate.

Also, /gd/, they get animation quite better.

>>158586098

That's great, thanks.

I should have animated her entire body, to get a better vision of the anticipations that would make the follow-throughs. I made a little illustration and just wanted to animate it pose-to-pose without a plan or anything.

Also, this is the second time I ever animate anything, just a noob here.