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So i was working on this track for about 2 week and half, trying to make it sound perfect to the listener's ear and whatnot, but no one seems to like it except me, i and myself.

can you help me figure out what makes my music shit? what should i do to improve it?

here is the soundcloud link
>https://soundcloud.com/user-850446841/greeks-battle

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Anonymous 2017-08-21 01:36:20 Post No.74673969
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shameless self bump

Anonymous 2017-08-21 01:44:56 Post No.74674121
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well fuck

Anonymous 2017-08-21 02:50:16 Post No.74675220
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Anonymous 2017-08-21 02:50:16 Post No.74675220 [Report]

The four bars on loop need more variation. I was sick of them thirty seconds in.
You got the balance down thought.

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Who will be in the 2010-2019 version of this?

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Anonymous 2017-08-21 01:34:05 Post No.74673940
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Your mum

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>>74673878
>courtney
>talented

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>>74673974
More talented than her husband

Help pls
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Help pls 2017-08-21 01:27:35 Post No. 74673833 [Report] [View this topic]

100% honest opinions on these guys. here's mine

cheshire cat: a good start. scott is a great drummer for the point in time
Dude ranch: very simallar opinion to cheshire cat. to me at the moment, the few tracks that stick out are fantastic (pathetic, voyeur, dammit, dick lips, untitled, apple shampoo,
and josie.)

enema of the state:first impressions count and god did travis deliver. the album has most if not all good tracks.
Take off your pants and jacket: you have to admit this albums quality. if you don't like blink 182 than one of these tracks you might like
Blink 182: an interesting album. I liked this album as much as american idiot by green day. this album started hell between mark and tom.
neighborhoods: ok tom didn't try. I could not make it through half way the album. I only liked one ore two songs
california/deluxe: first album with matt. the album was ok. not great but, not bad. other than the lyrics I still don't know what to think.

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dude ranch is legit

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Cheshire Cat: Decent debut, fun but raw.

Dude Ranch: Skate Punk perfection

Enema: one of the best albums of the 90s, their best and most memorable album. A perfect storm of pop-punk perfection.

TOYPAJ: Enema 2. Not as fresh but still a great follow up to Enema.

self-titled: Very great alt-rock concept record about a toxic relationship. Interesting stuff musically, the guitar tone is awesome and the drumming is fucking insane.

Neighborhoods: A good but flawed progression of self-titled's sound. It takes multiple listens for it to click and is sorta disjointed, but when it does click it's a unique album in their discography. Deluxe is the definitive version.

Cali: A kick in the ass and a callback to Enema and Take Off. It's a fun pop-punk record with some flaws but still very enjoyable. Matt and Mark's vocal chemistry is the best part and the drumming is once again stellar.

Cali 2: A more interesting take on Cali, Matt becomes more confident and comfortable writing great songs like Last Train Home and 6/8. Misery and Bottom of the Ocean are also good. Looking forward to the future.