Pokemon Fanfiction General and Writethread

firsties ECKSDEE

>>28967062
last threads were stormed away by hurricane hype train, so here's a recap of what happened 2 threads ago:

StrikeFlash updated his Flash Platinum Fic
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12024240/10/Pokemon-Flash-Platinum

Unown did an update of sorts
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/41/Fledglings
http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593/chapters/18775583

/k/ lookin ass anon finished first chapter of his human invasion fic
http://pastebin.com/KnEUfWyg

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Shit these things are going down fast, need to post more around here.

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Desolate Seas, chapter 3 is ready. I'm going to wait until traffic picks up a bit here to post though. Hopefully by tomorrow.
Fuck me, I've lost all concentration on this story. I have no motivation whatsoever. I need to look over my notes some more, think long and hard about where this is going.

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>>28968259
Would anyone be willing to go over my notes with me, see if this shit actually makes sense?
Keep in mind its heavy in spoilers for Desolate so if your invested in it don't bother. I just really need someone else to give me clarity.

>>28969229
>>28967602
you already posted this request bud

>>28969271
Don't give him attention.

He's just deleting his posts to keep them at the front of the thread. Report and move on.

>>28968509
I could give it a shot. Is it a google docs?

>>28970467
I'll do it later today, bit busy at the moment,
Its just a collection of thoughts and possible foreshadowing, plus a description of a new character.

>>28968509
I could probably check it out, though I'm not sure how much value my input will have. But I'd have to do it tomorrow, since today I'll be busy until late at night.

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>>28968509
>>28970467
>>28970819
Nevermind, i read it over at least a dozen times. I have that old feeling back again, i think i have it figured out.

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Gettin there bump

Assuming I don't get flayed alive for asking, do any of you have a kik? Originally wasn't for fanfiction but some of you folks seem alright for a one-on-one chat if that's up your alley.

>>28970988
Well, good to know you're feeling good about it. Here's hoping you can keep that motivation going.

Was looking for this thread, haven't been around for a while. Finishing college is incredibly hectic, that's all I gotta say.

Anyways, been getting that itch to write again. Might put something together when I get the chance. Any fun requests? Could help me get going again.

>>28970988
This was literally me last night. Thanks again, cge, for tolerating my ranting and knowing just what to ask.

Update on my laptop: new battery MIGHT be here this Sunday. I hope so, because despite FEELING IT again, typing on my desktop is fundamentally uncomfy.

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This made my brain melt.

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>>28973950
>Chapter 1: Misunderstanding

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>>28973950
whats even happening here
is this like the foreword to a story
why does he write fanfic if he hates fanfic
just how many drugs is he on

>>28973757
Requesting a story about a nurse joy with a garchomp instead of a chansey/blissey/audino as the nurse pokemon and the comedy/hijinks of trying to make the situation work

>>28973950
>Let me take the trope of the self-hating writer and torture it until it produces nothing but utter incomprehension in other people!

I wonder how old this person is.

>>28973757
Pansear makes a pie for him and his monkey brothers to enjoy.
You have to write it while listening to "It's a Wonderful Day for Pie" or else it'll come out half-baked though. Hope you can rise to the occasion.

>>28973757
The ideabin at the top of the thread may be a good place to look. I haven't checked it in a while though, so I'm not sure if there are any good requests in there.

> getting that itch to write up realistic pokemon fluff again
My autism is itching, /vp/
How shall I sate it?

>>28975788
You could take it out on that scifi PMD collab planning document.

Someone help me out here; what exactly triggers alerts for followers on FFN? I'm thinking of dropping a scene at the end of the most recent chapter, instead of putting it at the beginning of the one I'm currently writing. Will whatever readers I have be notified of it or should I put some sort of note at the beginning of the next?

>>28975876
Not sure how it works exactly.
The last email about an update on your story is from 9/25.
The last time it was bumped to the top of my follow list was 10/2.

>>28976061
The email was from my last chapter upload and the bump was from my last chapter update, then. Huh. I guess I'll just have to put a note at the top of the next chapter that the previous had been updated.

Fun fact: that chapter update bump gave me the most traffic I've ever had out of a single action on that story, and I didn't even add anything. Strange.

(thank you so much for reading along and tolerating when I keep restructuring this thing!)

Someone needs to write a fic about erotically overfeeding your Braixen to fatten up his thighs for sweet thigh sex

>>28975876
Where can I find the link for that, my dude?

>>28976146
Maybe you found the ideal update time for traffic. Or people were confusedly clicking back and forth trying to figure out what changed.

>>28976360
Sorry, referring to the 'scifi PMD collab planning doc'

>>28976360
>>28976393
https://docs.google.com/document/d/128je7ELDWp1yrPqsI0BGgM8fRI4KU4pB-jbsvoJRfzE/edit

Here ya go.

>>28976416
Having just finished System Shock 2, reading this document has put ideas in my head and none of them have a group of spess mon doing anything that is even remotely pleasant.

Time to play with PokeRus.

>demo will leak all pokemon and movesets
guess I'll be able to start Flash platinum back early

>>28977738
Just curious, why would you need new movesets?

I said before the only thing that'll really change anything I have planned right now is if we get Mega Flygon

>>28974825
>>28975432
I'll consider these. They actually sound like neat ideas, so I'll see if I can give them a shot in the coming days.

>>28975493
I'll check that out, thanks. There may just be something!

>>28976146
I believe the only way to "edit" a chapter is to just reupload an edited version of it. Because it's technically a new document, your readers will get email alerts. I remember this happening a lot with one fic I read that underwent heavy editing in the latter half.

Bump

Also to report that shit's done yo, and will go up on docs tomorrow for public editing after I get done sorting through 20k words and twisting shit around.

>>28975788
think of something adorable and write about it

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>>28967062
So, odd question, I was kicking the idea of a Pokemon/Fallout setting mixup and I had the idea that stuff like FEV and Ghoulifying applied to not just humans, but mons as well, treating it as sort of a 'regional variant' thing.

Long story short, what secondary typing should Ghoulified Pokemon get? I mean all FEV-mons would basically become Fighting Types, especially overriding psychic typing.

But I'm not sure what type would connect to ghouls. Poison?

>>28982330
>ghouls
ghost perhaps? I don't know much about Fallout, but if you're looking more for the toxic-waste ish infection, poison works too

>>28982330
Poison as a typing sort of works, but it's kinda hard to express the sort of massive genetic mutation that ghoulification is. The primary visible trait a ghoul expresses is skin rotting off their bodies, the rest of the traits they can have are all pretty invisible unless they're glowing ones or feral.

Calling radiation poison could work I suppose. The Pokemon in question might not even adopt a new typing of they're standard ghouls. Maybe of they became glowing ones it'd be more applicable?

Your choice mate - it's your world you're drumming up.

>>28982994
Yeah, it is a toxic waste infection, though ghost does sound interesting.

>>28983378
Hmmm, good points.

I actually considered ghoulified pokemon would have other traits than a new typing that defines them as ghouls.

With the ugly drawback that they lose their ability to be bred or evolve if they haven't already.

>>28979411
Requesting a story about Lilligant trying on different flowers when her flower crown wilted away from old age

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boof

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Rage bump

Hopefully the writethread can at least survive the Generations hype.

Guys, question. What do you think of the premise of a fictional where, hundreds of years in the future, after humans are extinct but pokemon are still around, there's a civilization of pokemon on top of Mt. Silver, all descended from Red's team.

I'm thinking about writing something like that.

>>28986136
Europeans got a new SM trailer too (translated versions of the Japanese one from awhile back)

Gonna be a bumpy ride.

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>>28984734
This suggestion put a story in my head but it's completely focused on the ability for one to accept the creeping and inevitable nature of death and I don't want to write sad Lil right now.

>>28986165
Hm, it could work but his team is six mon so they'd have to have found mates there in the mountain. Also, what sort of cataclysmic event drove humanity to extinction but not Pokemon? We're a rather stubborn species.

>>28986371

Well as for mates, I think most of his team were within the same egg group. I'd need to double-check though.

And as for the event, I was thinking something like some kind of human made weapon with infinity energy. Maybe some legendaries found out about it and decided to get rid of the humans due to their threat on the environment... maybe just a mass extinction event that didn't affect the pokemon due to their remote location, almost like a natural Fallout vault.

I'll need to think about it more.

>>28977778
mainly because I want to include alola pokemon and be consistent with what they can actually do in battle

>>28987751
Honestly I just made best-guesses to Alolan Ninetales moves, I don't think anyone is going to flay you for not getting it wrong.

if it can't learn Freeze Dry I will be mildly upset though

bumpu

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So how are those stories going?

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>>28990228
I was going to finish but there was a ricestream

>>28990228
If all goes well with schoolwork, I may just do up that Nurse Joy with a Garchomp story this weekend. I've got a few ideas running in my head that would both make it funny and logical.

>>28990228
Three hours in traffic let me hash out a lot of what I want to do in ACPC in my head. So there's that, guess I'll do some work this weekend.

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>>28982330
Poison seems like a fitting idea, but it might also be interesting to say they gain a new, undiscovered kind of type to represent the radiation and make it distinct from ordinary poison. Kind of like the Nuclear type from that fangame Uranium. That said, if inventing a new type sounds like a bad idea, Poison could definitely remain an option.

>>28990228
Not too bad. The last few days were super busy for me, but today I finally got some free time to work on putting the finishing touches on the start of a new story of mine. And by "finishing touches" I mean rewriting one scene in the first chapter over and over because I can't figure out how to convey its meaning properly. Assuming I figure it out tonight (which I probably will), I'll probably post it here tomorrow.

>>28990698
I lied, this is heavy fucking duty. 4 AM probably counts as tomorrow, so tomorrow.

>>28986165
>>28986371
All his pokemon can breed except for Pikachu, who isn't in the monster field group. Maybe they colonised the area of the mountain, having their own little religion around their ancestors and Red, and when they start running out of food, they need to leave and find a new home

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>>28973950

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Desolate Sea's finally got its third chapter.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/8071213/chapters/18875342
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12148633/3/Desolate-Sea

>>28996406
whichever anon who was really patient for this, thanks mate

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>>28996406
>>28996465
Really liking it, please keep it up.

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I didn't think this would actually take all day to edit. This shit's fucking ridiculous for the probably mediocre output.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GUUVp3hcqDacerrxFn0LjABqI-tFzQL79DYmcg2Nag0/edit?usp=sharing

Boop

>all these ideas for the next chapter of Flash Platinum
I think I may be able to put out a chapter or two early

>>28998263
Is it meant to be view only?

Is the pokemon world literally just earth copy+pasted

Before I could ignore it blissfully, now it seems to be proven

I am so dissappointed

>>29005959
Not exactly, but geographic regions are heavily connected to Earth's and if the kanto-johto-hoenn-sinnoh relationship is any indicator, the political connections are also similar

On the other hand the devs have explicitly said it's not earth so

>>29005959
Lt. Surge has been American since 1995. This isn't exactly breaking news. Besides, it makes our jobs a lot easier because we can generally infer geographic and political relations based on IRL knowledge instead of having to outright make up throwaway worldbuilding flavor info and remember not to contradict it later.

>>29004102
Probably not

(bump)

Page 10 bump just to keep the thread alive for a few minutes until I finish revising this thing to post.

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After almost a month of nothing new, I've finally gotten my rear back in gear and started a new story: "Outcast of Comb Island". Unlike my other two stories, it's not a PMD fic, but rather an ordinary Pokémon story. It's also vaguely based off some request an anon made a while ago about a Combee being pampered by its trainer, but it doesn't really follow the request too closely. It's still about a Combee and what happens when she gets caught, but ideas bred like rabbits and led me to try expanding on the initial idea.

If you want to check it out, here is a link to the prologue:
http://pastebin.com/HcA6q6BN

And because the prologue is pretty short, here's the first chapter as well:
http://pastebin.com/SRBR6iGW

And as usual, I appreciate any and all feedback/critiques.

bampu

Foot fetish stories pls.

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ded thred

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>>29012786
I imagine the semester is draining many a writefag's energy to do much else but cry and sleep.

>>29013579
>tfw graduated two years ago
I have no excuse other than just spending the last few days playing vidya.

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>>29013579
Nope, a cold, headache, and writers block.
Personally i just think september is cursed for writers.

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I finaily got around to finishing chapter 4 of Curiosity. All that needs to be done is completely rewriting it in the proofreading process. followed by a month of doing nothing on it.

>>29005959
>>29006169
"Everything is exactly the same except those magical beasts have existed since the beginning of time" doesn't actually make sense. Treat it the same way as nonsensical/contradictory Pokédex entries.

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Can you guys recommend some comfy fics to read?

>>29013579
That describes my life perfectly for the last two weeks, but yesterday things cleared up pretty well, enough to get writing and posting again. Not sure how long it'll last though.

>>29013708
Well, at least you have a good excuse

>>29014110
excite

>>29014380
I didn't mean to imply that everything was exactly the same. I was only referring to the formation of the planet's landmass. We have confirmation that it is not just the same + pokémon.

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W E W

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Holy shit this dialogue has me rolling

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>>29015631
>>29015538
wew lad what is going on here

>>29015976
The annoying little faget is about 2 get [spolier]Maximum CHERISHMENT[/spolier]

>>29016077
dammit, this is why you don't post at 2 AM.
Also I can report my own post?

>>28994407
Making a whole new type is sort of tempting, especially to create Nuclear pokemon attacks, but I don't want to crib off uranium, plus, what would resist, be weak against, or strong again radiation?

We're 1 month away from Sun and Moon, do you guys have any stories set in or around Alola you have been thinking about writing?

Or are you guys holding off on any ideas until you play the game and learn more about the characters, plot, various areas and such?

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>>29016476
The latter. I already do enough speculation and headcanon worldbuilding in the prose I'm writing now, I'd rather just wait for Alola to drop enough information for me to consume and then make more headcanon from.

I do want to write something in the region though, I'm just not sure what yet.

>>29016156

i'm still only familiar with the basics of how radioactive reactions/nuclear plants work but I'd consider both of these to be fair picks for supereffective elements:

Water- thermalizes neutrons which minimizes the odds of them causing a fission reaction with U-258, which naturally stops the vast majority of radiation from being emitted. This is not how this works in reality due to nuclear fuel used in civilian plants being partially enriched but I assume any theoretical "Uranium" Pokemon would not have gone through the complicated/expensive enrichment process
Steel- represents high density elements like lead/steel that are extremely good at reducing photon flux/the amount of radiation energy that leaks out

i'd also suggest that bug types should be resistant simply because insects in real life are highly resistant to radiation (http://www.todayifoundout.com/index.php/2011/04/why-cockroaches-and-insects-are-resistant-to-radiation/). Ghost types maybe as well because I tend to view them as already having a highly energized/unstable atomic structure that probably would not be very affected by external energy sources

>>29016089
if you press ctrl s you get a shortcut for spoilers

Unless you already knew that.

>>29020849
Could be a phone poster, like me.

Is it spoiler or spoilers in the brackets?

>>29021000
Just spoiler and then /spoiler

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>>28973950
>Diminsions

>>29021010
Thanks bruh.

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>>29016156
Looking at Uranium's wiki, it seems like Nuclear is super effective against everything except itself and Steel, which resist it. Which, honestly, seems just a bit OP. I guess the idea in that game was to make it some OP godmode type, though, but if we're re-imagining it as an ordinary type, then how about pic related as the new type chart.

In terms of offense: it is resisted by itself, Steel, and Bug (since some metal blocks certain radiation, and some bugs resist rads IRL). But Normal and Grass are weak to it (since they best represent organic animals and plants, which are very negatively affected by radiation), and Fairy is weak to it too (in the same vein of Fairy's weakness to Poison).

In terms of defense: Steel and Ground are super-effective against it (since metal containers and underground burial are methods of containing radiation). Nuclear, Normal, and Grass are not very effective against Nuclear. It resists Poison too (since it's pretty much poison already and wouldn't be too badly affected by other poison-based attacks).

Now, I have no idea whether that's a balanced or logical type chart, but hopefully it's not complete rubbish.

>>28998263
Any last minute readers come forth, I want to post this today for the /pmdg/ and so far there hasn't actually been a single correction and it's scaring me.

Also bump

>>29016476
None so far, and I'm not really any worried about that. I prefer to hold off ideas until I can play the games, yeah, but also until we see what the ?makes of this generation will be (most likely 4makes).

>>29023886
I put off reading it while it was read-only and haven't had a chance since then. I should have time to look at it in a little while.

>>28992023
sounds awesome o me

>>29023127
>giving grass another weakness
fuck you

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Looking through today's updated Pokemon fics I found one about a Pokemon trainer trying to survive being dumped in North Korea and another with a Starship Troopers-esque setup with futuristic space soldiers trying to fight off an army of Psychic-type rapemons on an alien planet. One I thought actually looked promising was about a girl who transforms into a Mew under circumstances unknown and is dumped in the middle of nowhere only to be immediately jumped on by trainers. She escapes, but find that Pokemon seem to be attracted to her no matter how much of a jerk she is to them in return. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12180441/1/Outer-Body We'll see if it remains promising.

>>29023127

As someone who managed to beat Uranium- Nuclear Pokemon are craptastic in single player because you can't get them to obey you reliably until the very end of the game and they're craptastic in multiplayer battles because 1. Nuclear attack base damage is gutted compared to other types, meaning they have a hard time knocking out bulky Pokemon even when they hit super effectively, and 2. practically every Nuclear Pokemon gets steamrolled by any priority move or sweeper with decent speed. The final battles are a bit of a joke really because even though the big bad has a team of powerful Nuclear-types at her disposal you're likely to OHKO all of them with your starter's basic elemental attack.

I do agree though that designing a type to be so horribly lopsided towards offense was a poor balancing decision, however, and hope that anyone who invents a new type for a fanfiction tries to make it more than a one dimensional glass cannon.

>>29026878
I dunno, sometimes you gotta cherish your special doggo in ways unbeknownst to the common man

>>29026915
Believe me, anon, it pained me to say it, but it does make sense from a lore perspective. Plants get screwed by radiation.

>>29026916
I've never played Uranium, so all my knowledge comes from skimming its wiki. It's interesting to know that the whole super-effective-against-everything thing is offset by those other factors.

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>>29026947

Panne's secret hobby revealed

>>29023886
>>29024203
Done. Pretty clean this time around.

>>29029631
Thanks, even my 6 hour editing session couldn't do shit for the things that sounded right in my head. Everyone that comes in and actually corrects my bullshit are the reason any of this shit is moderately successful.

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Any word on that maractus smut story from a few weeks ago?

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>>29032129
How would a story of a Mienshao IN SPACE go?

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>>29026916
That story is 2 days old with 11 favorites and 15 follows. What's the secret?

>>29032352
Floating sleeves, great confusion, but ultimately depends on why there is a Mienshao in space. They could have been seriously trained as an astronaut and take everything at a very deliberate and intelligent pace. They could also be a random Mienshao freaking out in space. The high jump kicks would hurt less on both sides, then.

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>>29032649
Could be any number of things really. It could be good. It features some popular pokemon and a popular premise. It's also 2 days old with 4 chapters, meaning it was updated four times in two days. Meaning it stayed on the front page of ff.net's pokemon section for quite some time.

And just like SERPS, if you're on the first page, especially first position, you're gonna go places most likely.

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Chapter 4 of Curiosity is done.
Compared to everything else it does not warrant me taking over a week to just work on a relatively small but important part of the story.

http://pastebin.com/7Hgfdn8n

I know I fucked it up somehow but I don't even know it yet.

>>29032649
...link?

bedtime bump

>>29026947
Sorry, I would have left some comments if I didn't only just read it now instead of writing myself. So I'll keep comments to myself.

>posts draft here for us to edit
>only posts finished result in /pmdg/
I don't know who's cucking who.

>>29034238
So late I quoted the wrong post. RIP
>>29023886

>>29034238
But the finished version there is the draft version right now. Doesn't matter which place you see it anymore.

>>29034254
It made a lot more sense in my head.

Not unlike the scenes I'm still struggling to write.

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Hey writefags, I went out of the loop a bit, are there any stories with Lurantis right now?

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5 AM reminder to cherish your special doggo

>>29009671
Been a while since I've look into these threads. I did not think anybody would do my request, will check it out.

>>29033350
>>29026916

>>29034659
not that I know of

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>>29009671
I'm not a writer so take this this with a grain of salt but I liked it, it was well written I didn't see any noticeable grammar problem the pacing looks good and the characters are enjoyable. I really like the combee's ranking system thing it really fits with the species. The only thing that confused me was that the main guy said he didn't want to keep her for long even though a lone female combee was rare, I know this will change further on but still its kind of weird for a poke researcher to say that in my opinion. Anyway I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to see the next parts.
If your looking for a "proper" nickname for the combee maybe something like beebe or vespy? I'm not good with nicknames sorry.

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This young boy will grow up to be a man.

>>29033228
There's editing to be done, but I won't have time to do so for at least a few days.

>who even reads this?
I do you fucker

>>29038087
>dragon slayer
But at what cost?

>>29037245
Thanks for reading it; I'm glad you liked it.

About his intention to release her, the idea was that keeping her and taking her away from the island might disrupt the ecosystem, since removing a female would make the female population even more scarce than it already is. So for now, he's planning to release her in the end, but that might change depending on how I decide to make the plot go. Either way, I'm going to edit that chapter a bit now and add in a line or two in the tavern scene so it's more clear why he's currently planning to release her in the end.

And don't feel bad, I'm bad at nicknames too. Unless something better comes to mind, I'm thinking about just keeping it as CIS4 or turning it into leetspeak and calling her Cisa.

>>29034659
Ah, a chance for me to shamelessly plug my stuff. See, about a month ago, I made a Mystery Dungeon fic involving a Lurantis. Perhaps it'll be to your liking: http://pastebin.com/Wmd4J8JW

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>>29040955
Alright it makes more sense now. Anyway good job can't wait to see where you go with this.

>>29040951
His innocence, obviously.

>>29041480
and his virginity

He strikes those dragons right in the heart

>>29041945
>ralts fucks dragon problem out of village, bystanders baffled

jesus christ how horrifying

boopity boop

>>29039895
You should of seen it last night when I was proofreading it.
For some reason when I originally wrote it I added in some completely unnecessary and rather unrelated things. Good thing I remembered to proofread in the first place or else you would end up hanging yourself.

>>29044606
>should of
Should have

And don't worry, regardless of grammar and sentence structure, I am still eager to see our naïve son's loss of innocence to the cold human world of cheeseburgers and colloquialisms.

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Bee-type bump

>>29042688
>ralts fucks dragon problem out of village, bystanders baffled
>ralts

Well I was thinking after evolving, but I guess if that floats your boat...

>>29044606
>For some reason when I originally wrote it I added in some completely unnecessary and rather unrelated things.
This has been my struggle in BStF big time. I THINK I'm getting better...

ToTT: The new additions look pretty neat. That said, I've yet to really incorporate the use of the PC system into any of my work. I don't know if I ever will honestly.

>>29048074
Hell naw son, you didn't mention anything about evolution.
Now I gotta live with this terrible image.
God save him, he just wanted to be a dragonslayer.

>>29048177
Hey, like I said earlier: lost innocence.

>>29044606
>>29048074
If your characters are developed enough to be interesting, then you won't have to worry too much about them doing completely unnecessary things. A little, but not too much.

>>29048764
It's less them DOING and more extraneous background info in the narrative itself that was unneeded and cluttering. A couple of my beta-readers have pinged that against me.

>>29048177
>Hell naw son, you didn't mention anything about evolution.
he could always evolve while getting the dicking

>>29048764
Pretty much what >>29048790 said.

You can do as much world building as you want. But if you do too much of it in my case you get something that eats away at the back of your mind while you sleep saying "Anon why did you bring this into existence, it's shit!"

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>>29048177
>God save him, he just wanted to be a dragonslayer.

Now instead of slaying dragons he can be laying dragons

>>29048927
As I have learned, most worldbuilding belongs in separate documents that will never see the light of day in your actual story. But if there is ever need of extremely detailed background information, it's there for you to draw from. Writing about a country's children getting fucked over by a cultural revolution has taught me that you can never have too big of a universe bible.

>>29049577
CARLOOOOOOOOOOOOS

>>29049907
A lot of the shit sitting in my world building docs is so pointless it's almost saddening; but I'll be damned if it's not fun as fuck to write all this fluff out.

>>29050484
>but I'll be damned if it's not fun as fuck to write all this fluff out.
As long as it doesn't hold you up from writing the stories themselves.

SPEAKING OF
TotT: Obviously, since BStF features a guy setting up a PC storage system, the new developments will make an appearance, in the sequel

>>29050484
I love worldbuilding too, but the problem is I like doing it more than writing the actual stories, because worldbuilding means I don't have to write all the little specific details that link the ideas together. When it comes to writing stories that require me to tie all my ideas together logically, it just feels tedious.
It's the number-one threat to my productivity.

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>>29053061
I like that Poké

>>29053710
I'm writing about her at this very moment!

Is it a normal thing to make break one-shots in the middle of larger multi-chaptered fics? I almost feel like that's a thing I need to do so that MoM is interesting to write again. Having to very carefully watch the telling details of every scene I write is very tiring.

>>29054719
>Is it a normal thing to make break one-shots in the middle of larger multi-chaptered fics?
That's how I wrote all of BStF until very recently, and I think taking those requests definitely helped my output

Pros: Keeps the creative juices flowing even during writing slumps.
Cons: Consumes mental effort that could be put to the main project.

Honestly the only reason I stopped was that after considerably tightening up BStF, I find I have to devote a lot more thought to its execution. I'm not too bothered, since it results in a better project. As long as I push out words every night.

On that note, I'm done pushing out words tonight. Sleep beckons

Some time ago, cge expressed contempt for writing requests. So I'm wondering, would you be open to commissions instead? You seem to value receiving something in exchange for work you do for others.

>>29054719
I'd say it is. You have the luxury of not having a strict deadline to keep other than what you set yourself, so if you want to take a break by doing something else the nothing should really stop you.

>>29055538
>cge expressed contempt
That's a round-the-clock activity for me.

>writing requests
Largely because most of what is asked for here is smut Ad-Libs, so narrow that only one person can/should reasonably fulfill it. Contrast to a prompt; one good prompt and a few parameters could generate a half dozen proper stories were one to be advanced and were the fish willing to bite. There have been a few times when proposed ideas caught my attention such that I mentioned that fact, but the last prompt I responded to from this thread was a damned typo.

>>29055538
>would you be open to commissions instead?
If by "you" you mean [cge], I'm far too sporadic in my writing phases to market it as a service: That WIP from last year I mentioned? still idle. Also, were I to make my writing a compensated effort, I would probably price myself of the market on the typing alone.

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>>29049577
I'd read that. Hope someone does soemething with this.
Did you know that a dragon has more germs on it than the average toilet seat?

>>29056030
For some reason the thumbnail made me think it was holding a lightbulb, and now I wonder how many Mienshaos it takes to change a lightbulb.

>>29061445
Just enough to avoid risk of electrocution from those sleeves.

I wonder how much those things get in the way, actually.

>>29054719
I'm not sure what's considered normal exactly, but I can say that I've taken such breaks myself. In fact, all of the stories I've done so far have been made following cases of burnout from this one big story I've been trying to write, which led me to put it on hold and start on something new so I didn't stagnate. That said, each of those stories quickly spiraled out of control and became multi-chapter works themselves, but still, working on smaller stories seems to help me get back in the swing of things personally.

So I believe taking breaks can definitely be beneficial if the current big project becomes tedious, just so long as the main project doesn't get abandoned as a result.

so imagine a world where an evil army of intelligent (not necessarily sentient) robots wants to take over and kill off humanity, and they start raising and training Pokemon as soldiers

do you think a pokemon could become emotionally attached/feel loyal to a robot

>>29062428
Not really considering some pokes were friends with humans. Or considering the fact that humans were alive like then robots are not.

>>29062428
>subject: Eevee, directive: Tackle, result: Satisfactory
>execute: Positive Reinforcement Protocol
>play: good_kitty.wav
>increment: party2_grooming_priority

Depends how good the robots are at meeting emotional needs.

>>29063103
>Depends how good the robots are at meeting emotional needs.
This could just be sperging out, but I have a feeling if robots are sufficiently intelligent to recognize, function around, and meet emotional needs then they're not the type of robot who would try to kill off humanity.Take over maybe, a la Foundation, but not kill off.

>>28967062
i can't believe this shitty gif that i made 7 years ago is still floating around the internet

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I can't actually stop writing MoM, and the only inspiration I got is a dream I just had where there was a pet fennec that wasn't a scream machine.

Give requests

>>29064385
Write a story about a bunch of properly-cherished special doggos having fun

>>29064385
What kind of request?

>>29064385
>requests
If you're in the mood for NSFW, how about a guardian relationship between a male Magikarp and a female Feebas that blooms into something more...passionate when they both evolve into giant sea serpents? I'd imagine there would be a lot of wrapping and close contact. Do you need more details?

>>29064539
>that blooms into something more...passionate when they both evolve into giant sea serpents? I'd imagine there would be a lot of wrapping and close contact.

I didn't know I wanted this until you spelled it out

>>29064510
Probably not multi-chaptered messes in the middle of my multi-chaptered mess

>>29064483
Doggo daycare, where five special doggos compete furiously to see which the caretaker lady likes the most. Doggobug jamboree ensues.

>>29064539
I dunno, I kind of exhausted snakesex for myself with the Snivy line being one of my favorites.

>>29064385
95.An underground worker from Sinnoh is hired to excavate an undiscovered portion of Reflection Cave in the Kalos region. He's not sure why he's hired, because every cave he's hired for collapses for good. While excavating, he accidentally hits a certain pink stone (with his pickaxe) surrounded by blue carbon crystals. Upon hearing a cry (moan?) from hitting the stone a few times, the blue carbon stones reveal themselves as Carbink and attack the worker, who is now running for his life back to the surface. Little did he know that his pickaxe still holds on to the pink stone up to the surface, where it is revealed that she is a legendary named Dianche. At first she fell in love with the pickaxe for doing such a "bold" thing to her, but overtime, she discovers that the wielder is the one that hit her, and her love shifts to the unfortunate spelunker. Carbink from different caves awaken to attack the spelunker through each other job, not knowing why his luck seems to be worse with this pokemon following him. Dianche then reveals that she is actually a princess of gemstones, and take him back to the Reflecting Cave to reveal that she will marry him. Although the Carbink attack stops, he now has to deal with "taking responsibility" for "mining her treasure." Maybe make it cute at first and then shift to romantic afterwards.

>>29064385
.A story about a guy finding out that his pokébro for quite some time, is actually a pokésis. Awkward Shenanigans/Smut/Cute stuff then happens.

>>29064539
I appear now just to make myself a hypocrite re; earlier response on request-taking status

This one really tickles my fancy, I'll probably tackle it sometime in the next week or two.

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>>29064385

19.hah, i can imagine a fic where mega-gardevoir is trying to convince its trainer and pokemon that it's rear isn't huge, only to fall flat.


20.I imagine it more like gardevoir being all regal, elegant and serious, and being very irritated when her huge hips getting her stuck in doorframes or her fat ass and tighs spreading around her when she sits down.

>>29064675
Aw shit that one's as good as doggobug jamboree, if a little longer winded. Especially so if the pokemon in question was exceedingly affectionate and the guy just wrote it off entirely until then. I might just save it for later.

Okay, so, I've had this idea for the longest time about a fanfic (Or, in my head, a Netflix series, but HAHA, I know that's not going to happen) involving Zinnia and Steven Stone traveling around the world.

A man in a Hoopa getup with a strange stone tries and nearly succeeds in killing Zinnia, until she's saved by Steven (Even though his opinion on her isn't all that great, an attempted murder is still an attempted murder) After chasing off the guy off, he drops the stone. After a few weeks of recovery on Zinnia's part, and Steven studying the strange stone, not finding any matches to anything he's ever seen, the two decide to embark on a journey across the world, trying to find everything they can about both the stone and the strange man.

Said journey involves them traveling all across several different regions, such as Johto, Sinnoh, Unova, and even Orre. The guy in the Hoopa getup is technically a canon character, but I say technically because Multiverse. Other Hoenn characters will definitely make appearances, like Team Aqua and Magma. Brendan and May will probably be name dropped every now and then. Mayor may not make an appearance. Of course, characters like Cynthia, Lance and Clair will appear (Have plans for Zinnia to just straight up suplex Clair) but the three main characters will be Steven, Zinnia and Hoopa villain dude.

While I'm curious to know if anyone would be interested in this story, what I'd really like are a couple of scenario ideas. Things that people would like to see in this kind of story. They don't have to be purely comical, (Although, having ideas like Steven fall in love with Sinnoh's Underground to the point where Zinnia literally has to drag him out would be hilarious) they can be challenging to the characters, such as Steven calling out Zinnia on her plans to use Groudon and Kyogre to summon Rayqayza.

>>29065156
I think after being force-fed a slice of humble pie and some time to get the fuck over herself, Zinnia could be a compelling character, so I say go for it. If you think you can rehabilitate her with all the hate she gets, all power to you.

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>>29065156
You have an opportunity to give the two the opportunity to jockey with each other over philosophy, as they both follow different approaches to how things should be handed - Steven leaning on pragmatism and Zinnia on intuition. That can manifest in a variety of contexts, from how they deal with minor villains they happen across, how they solve problems that manifest with their journey, and how they manage their time doing research as they move from town to town.

For that though, you'd need a reason for them not to always be splitting up and saying, "Well I'll go to ____ and you'll go to ____ and then we'll just discuss what we found," because that would get stale.

How this villain gets dealt with also becomes a point of their debates, as I'd imagine that they both would have differnet ideas about how they're going to deal with this guy once they finally find him.

This all has the effect of creating a space where both sides of the argument are presented and deliberated on, and you can tailor the work to suit whatever philosophy you feel is right - or set the work to never provide a "correct" approach, only different manners thereof.

'Course, if none of that really floats your boat or is what you had in mind, I wouldn't say no to tried and true opposites-attract romance.

>>29065220
Part of the reason why Zinnia acted all high and mighty in the Delta Episode is because she did kinda know everything that was going on. A large majority of it is because that's kinda her job to know all this stuff about Hoenn and Rayqayza and the like. Obviously, as she gets out into the world, she'll have no clue about the Tao trio or the Creation trio stuff, so she can't act like she knows everything, because she doesn't.

>>29065415
I think that's a little charitable. While accurate, her personality seems to be that of a zealot; less important of the fact she was right was how totally convinced she was of it, something which came across very clearly in ΔEp. She has a belligerent approach when confronted with opposing viewpoints, rather than trying to talk it out. She has an inflated sense of her importance (likely due to her position and upbringing) and tries to take charge wherever she is. She will justify any act to bring about her ultimate goal.

This all sorta plays into a headstrong/zealot archtype that, should you dispose of, would fundamentally break her character. This is a FANTASTIC foil to Steven's deliberate and modest approach, taking his time to go over options and selecting based on practicality, and her stubbornness would clash with his stoic resolution wonderfully. I think that was the point of Traipsing's post; that the crux or the story would be these two extremely different personalities having to get along to work towards a common goal.

And of course, along the way you have each character's personal baggage, like Steven's duties as (ex-)Champion and his father's business, alongside Zinnia's heritage and past tragedy. Neither seem the type to go on at length about personal problems, but opportunities will arise in a well-crafted story to address them.

>>29065415
>Obviously, as she gets out into the world, she'll have no clue about the Tao trio or the Creation trio stuff, so she can't act like she knows everything, because she doesn't.
The first part is correct. The second part I doubt will stop her. She'll definitely be interested in the lore, but if it ever becomes time to act, she WILL form a battle-plan based on her gut feelings of the situation and apply herself completely to pursuing it, where Steven is more likely to stop and wait to get more info and contemplate the problem. Sometimes one approach will be better than the other, other times the opposite.

>>29065402
Ooh, Differing Philosophies dueling against each other. I did not think of that. I like it. I was going to go with a sort of Opposites attract sort of thing, but not really as a romance, more as a friendship. It might end up as a romance depending on how it's all written out.

One thing you mention is about how they'd both go about with the villain, and that's something I should bring up. Because Zinnia actually does have somewhat of a personal relationship with him. How personal really depends on how I plan to play it out. Because the thought of"Oh, what if this guy is actually the original Aster's father?" Came to me, and I know that's kinda not canon. But it's one of those things I'm debating in my head if I wanna go down that path, because even if that's not the case, Zinnia still had a past with him.

Another thing to mention is Cipher, because they play a role in the story as well.Steven probably would want to bring them to the jail, and let the legal system handle a lot of it, meanwhile Zinnia would probably want to bring a more personal brand of justice because of what she's seen him do. Kinda like a whole Daredevil and Punisher sort of thing.

>>29065653
You hit the nail on the head. Back in very, very early stages of this idea, from what I can recall, Steven wasn't really there. Obviously, it would've just been a whole lot of Zinnia flying around from region to region, just kind of interacting with the characters of said region. With Steven, a lot more is added. They're both fantastic foils to one another, down to their very core. One of the reasons why I love a lot of Metaldragon artwork is because so much of it involves these two opposing one another.

On the last part, I suppose I should've said something along those lines, yes. Zinnia would probably be interested in a lot of different Regional mythologies. And both of their differing strategies would result in different situations. Steven's slow and steady approach can be either a massive detriment, or save himself from getting into a lot of trouble. Same thing with Zinnia. Saves herself a lot of time, but probably gets herself into a lot of trouble.

>>29064675
Like that time when Ash forgot his Snivy was a girl?

>>29064675
>>29064757
There was one about a trainer and his Machamp with this exact same plot a few years ago in these threads. NSFW of course.

>>29064757

when are we gonna see Panne eat small rodent/insect pokemon like IRL special doggos

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>>29069110
Wouldn't it be weird to see the supposedly pure-hearted main character abandoning regard eating other sentient creatures?

There was that one time nobody knows about where Wurmples are delicious, but it was definitely and accident and nobody knows. You don't even know.

>>29069172

would panne get upset if someone came up and smashed her wand stick in half or would she just pick up a similarly shaped stick off the ground and roll with it

>>29070317
I'm pretty sure something like a wand might explode if it was just snapped in half, or at least have something of a negative effect that you wouldn't want to stand around in. In any case, they aren't that hard to get your hands on, and I'd say Panne is a rather apathetic Braixen when it comes to hoarding sticks of varying shapes and sizes.

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>>29064722
Unless Gardevoir grows to 50' 3" during a mega evolution, I don't think she'll be getting stuck in doors.

She'd be taller than most of her kid trainers, so I can still see it being funny.

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>>29065668
>>29066165
It sounds like a pretty interesting read if you go the heavier route, but like I said, I'd read something lighter in tone if it gets done well. I'd like to see Zinnia done "right" so to speak, because she was almost insufferable in Delta.

>>29070474
>50 foot tall M-Gardevoir
Pic related.

>>29070474
>Gardevoir grows to 50' 3" during a mega evolution

Now I want this to be a thing

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Don't worry the leak is sterile

>>29064722
Add in some trainer-induced ass grabbing and we're golden

>>29072807
Keep an eye out, just in case

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>>29071185
Pretty sure there is already porn art of it.

>>29075996

Someone actually made fanart of how I saw Gardevoir for like 2 generations?

>>29064722
Ass centered fics are best fics

new to the pokemon fan fic board. is it just all porn?

>>29077105
Welcome to 4chan, home of the 4chan, may I take your order?

it's just an easy topic to talk about. If you want a good discussion, bring up Pokémon Mystery Dungeon

>>29077105
There's a catalog in the OP. Take a look and see for yourself.
Generally it's a mix of sfw and nsfw, organized appropriately

>>29076027
Well you weren't the only one to see it like that for sure

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A young floette gets a childish crush for her trainer and tries to get his attention. He just thinks she's being cute/playful ect. When she get tired of him ignoring her advances she just strait up kisses him on the check stuff appends afterwards ect.
>If you want to go into lewd.
And then she evolves and with her new ASSets she wins him over and they end up having hot passionate sex.

>>29079257
Is it me or have I already read this in other threads before?

>>29079337
A guy has been reposting his request for a while. Guy who manages the ideabin should just add it in so that he can avoid reposts until someone opens up to take requests

>>29079337
I've posted it in a thread from last month or so.
Maybe someone posted something similar to this? Or you just have good memory.

>>29077105
Writer interest is like 90% non-lewd.

>>29080022
And requests are like 90% lewd. It's not a great combination.

>>29079530
Sometimes people echo requests they would also like, not a big deal.

>>29081215
Bumping for tfw you're not sure how to write a scene

>>29081976
also for accidental quoting, apparently

>poison/dark type grimer
Gang war between kanto and aloha from pokemon when?

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Ghost reproduction is weird.
Speaking of ghost I wonder, could I request a fic based on this thread theme? >>29076545

It could take place in the mystery dungeon world were a human is attending his new high school and meets these girls. From the games human do exist in the MD world its just that they are super rare.

>>29084383
>high school AU

Fuck no

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>be me
>researching for my fic
>some parts of it involve dialogue between naval people (keeping it vague a s to avoid spoiling my own work)
>was going to base it off of the U.S. Navy
>spend free time I could have used writing and doing some other research memorizing U.S. Navy titles
>two weeks ago the top brass got really high and decided to do away with 241 years of team-building tradition by abolishing titles in favor of some other generic gay system
>I spent three days of research/writing time on it

Anyway, I'm starting work on the final draft of First Contact. Been away for a few days but I'm going to be on a bit of a vacation for the next half-week or so, so expect lotsa progress on this shit.

>>29084479
>>two weeks ago the top brass got really high and decided to do away with 241 years of team-building tradition by abolishing titles in favor of some other generic gay system
>>I spent three days of research/writing time on it

Fuck them, use it anyway

>>29084383
NEIN

The way I see it, there are several different universes: one where pokermans and humans coexist (the "mainline" games), one where only Pokemon exist and humans were wiped out by some calamity; some may still exist somewhere but are in hiding because 30 something humans with guns vs. a monster house of some of the Pokemon encounterable in the wild=death, a universe in which humanity developed as it did in our timeline but no Japs ever sniffed paint and declared Pokemon a thing, and finally our universe. Maybe that's just my sperg-tier headcannon though.

>>29084548
I probs will cause I can just say their were warped to the Pokermang world through some bullshit before the change was announced and they've just been getting their bearings in this new world for several weeks now.

>>29084587
>just say their were warped to the Pokermang world through some bullshit before the change was announced and they've just been getting their bearings in this new world for several weeks now.

Is this going to be a Nantucket Trilogy/Ring of Fire-esque story? Because you just got yourself a reader if so.

Also go read cge's Waterlogged if you haven't yet.

>>29084687
I'll check it out. And yes, it will be something like that, though the dimensional traveling aspect was mainly inspired by https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Final_Countdown_(film)

Also I'm the "/k/-ass lookin' anon" in the recent thread fic update thing. The first chapter is here: http://pastebin.com/KnEUfWyg

No dimensional shenanigans going on yet though, well kinda, but its not explicit. Hopefully the next chapter should be up by later tonight or tomorrow.

>>29084479

I can assure you many experienced enlisted members are at least as annoyed by the change as you are, but for what its worth the new system still allows individuals to distinguish each other by occupational specialties and there is still a strong sense of camaraderie within individual job communities. So yes, you may have to have a character refer to themselves as a medical technician instead of a corpsman or a reactor operator instead of a EMN/ETN/whatever if you're determined to have an entirely accurate modern portrayal of the force, but I really don't think this would require much effort to work around in a story.

imagining pokemon trainers on a ship/sub is silly for various reasons though and I am eager to see how you portray them doing some sort of useful function without causing any sort of cataclysmic disaster

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>>29084479
>two weeks ago the top brass got really high and decided to do away with 241 years of team-building tradition by abolishing titles in favor of some other generic gay system
Now that triggers some /pol/ levels of anger in me

>>29085336
Yeah, I suppose, but assuming that this fic takes place now, or within this month, I could just say that they weren't in the human dimension or whatever when the change was enforced. Also these ain't gonna be trainers, though someone should get on that because its fucking hilarious, but humans from our universe if Pokemon never existed.

Finally, I've decided to split the second chapter into two parts. First part should be done by later tonight or early tomorrow and the next part should hopefully be finished by tomorrow night or the day after. Thanks again for the feedback all.

>>29086008
Waiting anxiously because I love first contact stories.

>>29084548
>Fuck them, use it anyway
This; not only in this particular case, but pretty much whenever anybody tries to bully you with bullshit.

>>29086694
>tfw still bullying myself with bullshit

>>29087651
You can't just let yourself bully you. Go beat yourself up so you won't bully yourself anymore.

>>29088174
Yeah, just who do I think I am? I'll show me what's what! Fuck me!

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>>29088174
Early, and often.

live leak to doggobug jamboree

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bN4t9O3sGP0

>>29089984
>tfw no special doggo quartet to cherish

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First part of the second chapter is completed, just going to proof it a bit then post it.

Also I've realized something. Oranges may be great and all, but pears are just as good.

>>29090992
Part One is here: http://pastebin.com/sQp6PEmE

Any feedback is appreciated. I probably won't be able to read any feedback until later tomorrow evening. So I'll see you all then.

Cheers.

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Woah now

Page 8 bump

Bedtime bump.

Board is entering hype mode between CoroCoro tonight, and soon coming trailer and demo datamine

Hold onto your buttcheeks

>>29096206
Oh joy

>>29075996
>filename
More like a green Julia Gillard.

>>29064685
Sounds nice. Looking forward to it

>>29098907
Holy shit that does look like her.

>>29096206
News seems to be calmer this time around

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Anyone else likes diancie?

>>29103519
I do, but fics of her are a bit tough to find, Sfw and nsfw. That's why I'll second >>29064620 for any attention given to diancie

>>29103519
oh shit is that brock in the background

>>29104339
I think it as partially done in the past, but then the author disappearedper usual before he could make a chapter 2

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>>29104339
I remember requesting something about her a few mouths ago. If I remember correctly it was about a human knight acting has her personal guards. I think the reason I gave for them to interact was that the human kingdom and the diamond kindom both helped each other during the years but then the princess (diancie) had some trouble. I think it was either from her people disappearing or she was getting attacked by evil pokemons so the human kingdom send one of their elite knight to guard her. Could work well for a friendship or romance story.

>>29103519
I like her. She's cute, for a rock.

>>29102193
That's not too surprising. As far as I can tell, there's not very much major info in this batch of news, besides the whole Type:Null becoming Arceus 2.0 thing.

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Any fics of people turning into pokemon?

I don't mean necessarily nsfw stuff, I just find it adorable when it's done right and there's enough good writing on the "Oh god I'm someone's battling pet now" side of things.
Conflicted internal dialogue also loved.

>>29106635
Generally this is done under most PMD settings

>>29106741
Which means the aspect I'm intersted in is completely absent, considering that everyone is a pokemon anyway and there's no humans.

>>29106635
Besides Mystery Dungeon fics, I don't know of any stories that use that concept off the top of my head. That said, the top of the thread has fic directory that might include a story like what you have in mind. You should check that out and see.

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I've been storyboarding a tale of a war veteran who gets stranded in the dense forests of eastern Hoenn following a plane crash. At every turn he is going to be hounded and thwarted by a bloodthirsty absol that reminds him of a ruthless prison camp warden. Would you guys be interested in a story like this?

>>29106823
I already checked that out, but I was hoping someone might have something in mind not included in there.
I scan-read the summaries and it doesn't seem like there's a single story in which someone turns into a pokemon outside of PMD stories.

I'd even be alright with a PMD one if the MC ended up human-owned, but that doesn't seem to exist either.

>>29106635
The only quality, non-pmd one I know of.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9461869/1/Changed

>>29106870

There are a boatload of these and they have been repeatedly posted about, including one I literally just posted near the top of this thread. Don't say they don't exist if you'ore not even willing to look. Other than Outer Body I also highly recommend are the following:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7739127/1/Land-Skye-Living-a-Legend

>>29106873

Not a huge fan of this one because of the corny dialogue and one-dimensional characters, but it's still decent. To each his own I guess.

>>29106839
Sounds like a cool idea.
Could have potential for some fist fight scenes.

>>29106839
Sounds interesting. Be careful about going too-edgy with it.

>>29107095
Land & Skye slipped my mind but I remember it being a pretty good read.

>To each his own
I'm not a huge fan of Changed myself, but it seems to meet most of the above poster's interests. The direction the plot took just lost my interest personally.

boop

Page 8 bump

Although we're nearing the bump limit if I'm not mistaken, so it doesn't matter too much.

I guess I'll post the actual like to chapter 6, so that the recap doesn't have a desolate google docs page

http://archiveofourown.org/works/7771954/chapters/18909013

>>29110872
You've ruined a perfectly good opportunity to have a tumbleweed as the recap post picture!

Damn it Mimiga, I'll have your badge for this!

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>>28967062
time for another round of "Dumb Headcanons!"

>Guns in the pokemon universe exist for the most part but...
>Because of the hazards of electric and fire-types touching off powder, rock, steel, and ghost types just outright being immune, and the ability for plenty of pokemon to dish out plenty of damage at an often continuous rate at decent ranges, most guns are long-ranged, semi-auto rifles meant to hit hard, and if it fails to drop something, run, or get your own pokemon out.
>Global warfare conventions forbid arming pokemon with guns (no matter how adorable)

>>29111351
It wouldn't have been a tumbleweed worthy recap anyway. We got five updates this thread by my count: Gallanon, Gorgel, Orange, Mimiga, and myself; though I don't think anyone got much attention except perhaps Mimiga.

>>29113354
I don't think anyone got much attention except perhaps Mimiga
My pandering finally pays off

With the fuckhuge not-hurricane storm that's about to ram its torrential penis into my state, I'll have plenty of time to work on chapter 7, too.

>>29113354
Oh fuck, I'm retarded, sorry everybody. I blame the fact that I have to make six character sheets for my coworkers for a tabletop campaign for work.

>>29113454
>tabletop campaign for work
>for work
Wait, do you actually get paid to play D&D or something? Where do I sign up?

>>29113770
Hah, no, I wish. It'd make this sheet-creation process more palatable because I can make them quickly but they're really draining. It's just a team-building exercise, and since my coworkers know that I play DnD from talks over lunch they asked me to be DM.

Shoulda just gone for the one page system, but they're usually so dull...So here I am making full Pathfinder sheets for a one-off.

>>29113940
I see. Well, hopefully it's not too annoying. And if it's possible, maybe you could reuse the sheets for something else so you can get more use out of them--maybe even use some of what you come up with for new story ideas or something, I dunno.

Bump limit has arrived
Repent and rejoice, for this thread shall shuffle off its mortal coil and the worthy will ascend beyond

>>29111725

I tend to assume bullets are the equivalent of Steel type attacks, thus all Pokemon are vulnerable to some extent (yes, even Ghost types). That being said, most experienced Pokemon are tough enough to tank a few low caliber bullets and some extraordinarily well trained pokemon can hone their reaction times to the point they can straight up dodge or deflect shots.

>>29113432

I'm still hoping a romantic rival for Val's attention shows up to further upset Panne and serve as a secondary antagonist for the story

>>29114891
but the bump limit is 310 now

>>29114957
Oh shit. Disregard, I suck cocks

>>29114956
I cannot see that happening, if only on my instinct to preserve the same kind of mood I couldn't in the first chapter. It just seems like a really shitty idea to thrust forcefully upon the story when there's still a plenty useful fucking ancient deathghost around. Like, I can see how I'd do it, but even thinking about it feels hamfisted.

>>29115062
Personally I think the ancient deathghost is good enough. Gives us something else instead of just "lets retread their romance." We'll have one internal(ish) struggle and one external struggle, that way.

>>29114956
It's shit like this that had me contemplate the caliber Taro has loaded into his pistol and I figured .45 would be more than enough for common threats so I went with it. Then you just bring along a marksman with .338 Lapua for soft targets and .50 BMG for hard targets if "problem case" ever arises.

And if that doesn't work there's always the option to lay down the LAW. Or call Carl Gustav.

>>29114985
Welcome to the club

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>>28976925
>suffering in space
>Oh baby.jpg

>>29115062
Mimiga, I've been out of the thread for a while, but have you been actually incorporating suggestions people have made on your Gdocs? I see a lot of really awkward word choices and straight-up incorrect figures of speech everywhere and it's seriously confusing to read through at times. You could seriously do with a beta reader or two, my dude.

>>28983619
Go for it dude. I think Pokémon: Wasteland Version needs to be written. Fallout makes everything cool.

>>29116615
>Pokémon: Wasteland Version
This is called "Pokemon Colosseum"

>>29015631
Y O U G O T T A L E T M E R A P E H E R , A S H

>>29023127
At least the type advantages/disadvantages of your version of Nuclear type make sense.

>>29116599
Are you kidding? I have people fucking ravage my chapters, there shouldn't be as many issues left as you claim there is. Are you sure you're not reading earlier version?

>tfw still in the process of rewriting a ravaged scene

>>29116877
I'm reading what's up on AO3. It's not bad, don't get me wrong - I'm enjoying the read. I just find myself stumbling over some sentences a lot more in TMoM than I was in Destiny Tower Journal or Ears.

>>29116953
I do have beta readers. If you are finding all these problems,why don't you be one next chapter that comes out?

>>29116732
Well, that's good to hear. Makes me feel better about spending way too long debating with myself over how to design it.

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>>29117054
I'd be right happy to, actually. I helped with a couple chapters of Ears, so it should be no problem now that I'm back in the thread. I didn't mean to come off abrasive-like, so I apologize if I did. I'll be on the lookout to lend a hand whenever the next chapter's ready for editing.

>>29117123
I don't actually know what makes them so difficult, I can cruise through my own stuff just find and not have a problem. Maybe I'm just fucked up subconsciously with my reading voice.

>>29118100
Your own voice is easier to digest because you already have meaning in your head so seeing the text for what it is becomes more difficult. Whenever I reread old work I find sentences here and there that are structured in a way that makes little sense.

>>29118151
>Your own voice is easier to digest because you already have meaning in your head
100% this
Beta-readers are necessary even if you have total confidence in your skill simply because something that makes total sense to you might not make sense (or seem like something else) to others

Some people recommend editing sentence-by-sentence backwards, or even spellchecking word-by-word backwards, because it scrambles that order in your head.

good night sweet thread

>>29118647
there's no sleep for the weak where we're going
new thread
>>29118702