Slablands General

First for bunny girl

>>180957459
That one that was being written was great

>>180957672
Hopefully the track pad got fixed

>>180957459
Fourth for that centaur that guy is writing

>>180958061
It will be nice to finally have one

>>180958248
Agreed

>>180949537

>>180957813
She came in a while ago and asked if people would rather have it coded as is, or wait perhaps indefinitely for the final two scenes. People said they'd rather wait.

>>180959526
The old side bar with new buttons?

>>180959752
Just how it looks in game right now

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>>180960535
>>180949537
>>180959526

>>180961404
Tats, make all of the text appear in the slablands box without clicking except when there is a choice.

Also during battle, just make all of the text of the fight appear without clicking to get through a single attack action.

Oh did you guys fix the UI finally?

>>180962637
It's in-progress.

>>180962692
yay

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Getting this guy to make signage around the town that you'll eventually make.

>>180965453
lel

>>180965453
The AAAAA one makes me laugh.

>>180965453
McNadlos looks like something you'd actually see in the third world.

>>180970983
Probably is

Propain

>>180965453
The chinese make bootleg restaurants also?

>>180978286
Chinese are pretty turd world anon, besides like hongkong.

>>180976306
Man that tries to revolutionary idea of using gas instead of coal to cook food.

>>180978286
Yes to the point of it being extremely funny

>>180978286
Chitty Wok when

>>180961404
Did tats add the new buttons?

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Now I just need a picture of the nvl background, when you're like in a shop or something, and what it looks like when you save

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>>180985951
Consider this

>>180987338
An icon for equipment? I don't mind it, but a weather indicator could be important since we already have events that rely on it.

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>>180987762
I disagree, but here

>>180988189
Could it be placed in the upper left corner until you hover over the menu pop out? Unless it's going to have hover over text it's not like it loses functionality.

>>180988407
I don't see why not but that's probably something for tats to okay

Evil corps

>>180976306
Painpros

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So I've edited my way through both of these pastebins now. I'm not sure what permissions I have on these, so I'll have to post grammar edits here underneath them.

https://pastebin.com/iqmHmb0E - Songbird Harpy
Missing end quote on the fifth paragraph/section. The first usage of 'gaze' in the second line of the nineteenth paragraph should be replaced with a synonym, such as 'stare'. I'd do that instead of replacing the second usage just because it sounds better. The first sentence in the twenty-first paragraph should be behind a variable that checks for any pants at all. Second line of the twenty-fifth paragraph should be 'harpy's' instead of 'harpies'. The twenty-seventh paragraph is a duplicate that should be deleted. Quick in the second line of the thirty-first paragraph should be quickly. On the same line, 'arms' should probably be 'wings'. On the third line there, the phrase 'too much for you to handle' is repetitive with a similar usage the last paragraph, so should be replaced with another turn of phrase like 'sends you over the edge' as a generic example. Finally, I'd replace the final use of 'length' in that paragraph with cock or dick etc. The whole scene without the extra paragraph is about two words undersized, I'd suggest adding 'which loudly echoes through the trees' to the third line in the twenty-ninth paragraph, specifically after 'matches yours'. That's the first thing to come to mind which will put it just over the word count.

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>>180999486
https://pastebin.com/0beCZZw4 - Magpie Harpy
In the ninth section, 'feather' should be 'feathers' and I'd add an 'is' before 'no longer blocked'. For the twelfth, 'it' should be 'is'. On the fifteenth, I'd change 'hand' to 'present' to be more consistent with the action. Stick a 'hand' between 'your' and 'with on the second line of that section. Twentieth, put a 'a' before furious. First use of 'air' in the twenty-ninth section would work better as 'light'. Minor, but I'd remove 'out' on the thirty-second, it's unnecessary. Fifty-third line, maybe replace a 'small' with a synonym like 'tiny'? With the fifty-seventh, the 'skirt' confuses me. Maybe replace it with 'body' or else replaced 'barely covers' with 'makes up' or similar. Gist is that otherwise it's saying you remove something that covers her skirt, which you never pull down before the sex. Sixty-seventh, the second 'moan' should be replaced with 'whimper' or the like, or something with similar purpose like 'complain' etc.

I guess this harpy has hybrid wing arms? There's mention of hands and the like here. If she has back wings I think a more appropriate term would be something like 'tengu'.

That's all the edits I have for either one, it's all just minor grammar corrections or small wording changes for better reading.

>>180965453
>weedies

>>180962637
Nearly.

awooos

ambos

Boogiewaifu

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boisluts with THICC butts

>>181021069
We've got one-two, though not a lot of focus on the butt.

Bug succubus. A race of bug that evolved to look like creepy but sexy girls, to feed off of human sex energy or something.

cutetuars

>>180999486
>>180999595
Fuck yeah

We need actually plot. It's time, people are complaining about it, and we're almost done with the first continent. Tats, please elaborate on what the plotline for the first continent will be.

Radical right wing elves.

>>180957337
>no foxgirl racially tense prank wars
>no mantis
>lack of Rambles being forced to continue cleaning while making babies
>no maid staff to help a very pregnant Rambles
>can't press-gang defeated mobs into hired help
>will never live as the true big dick overlord

war

Massive melons

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So would someone give me a rundown on making some dosh? is it really just a big ass grind?

>>181047858
Do the desert dungeon, sell some stuff to the witch, and bet

>>181048823
>and bet
M-my momma would frown on that

>>181049058
>momma
I bet she wouldn't approve of forcibly fucking monstergirls either, but here we are

no step on snek

>X is being engulfed by black flames!
Do what now?

>>181052462
???

Who wants to write some events with me? Here are my ideas so far

>Catgirl hires you to find a lost family heirloom in the desert. Keep it or return it for $$$
>Group of bandits keep attacking trade caravans between Beorg/Skypoint etc. Merchants hired you to take care of them
>Wolves/Bears/Buggirls are causing problems in the nearby towns. Beat a certain number of them for the town elder.
>Retrieve a lost item from a certain area. Fight through 3 enemies from that area to get to it. The owner rewards you nicely.

Firestorms

>>181022380
Make them cockroaches for extra creep.

>>181028138
I agree, why are we heading towards the desert?

>>181053206
Desert probably has the least content so I like the first one. Do you mean we should write like a paragraph or a few sentences at a time back and forth?

Drills

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>>180985951

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>>180985951

>>181055831
Shame this artist has shit fetishes

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Doing horror movs:
Doomhole, at Cytube

>>181069404
yeah

in the woods girl

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>>181065920
>>181066636
Thanks.

This, including >>180985951 is what my copy of the game looks like, compared to the current release of slablands. It's what I would like to see implemented in ui updates. Thoughts?

>>181077728
Generally an improvement, but I've always been told that having text over background images without some kind of text box is a bad idea.

>>181077728
Yours looks better certainly.

>>181077728
an improvement

Critical flirting

>>181084389
nat 20s

>>181084389
Critical failing.

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>>181062878

Namings

>>181092924
laming

Hades waifu

Mystical

>>180957337
Can I write for Slablands if I like futa?

>>181109506
As long as you mind the rules involving them that are in the pastebin.

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>>181032707
It's pretty cliché, anon. Have we ever seen the Orcish People's Republic?

cyclops sniper

Luna the loli moon goddess

Ogling girls

hornhandle bars

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Titsune that runs an onsen

Bark bark shark girl

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>>181128362
>you can only hear the duck tales theme in character creation

BUT IT WAS THE BEST SONG

>>181127545
Unisex onsen

>>181130573
Yet there are no ducks

>>181127545
Someone wrote one that ran a hotel or something, but everyone here dumped on it. Don't remember why though.

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>>181131879
>Yet there are no ducks
qt duck bois when?

>>181133086
WA?

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>>181133347
duck butts

>>181133687
I missed you

>>181133687
>>181133086
We are doing some ui work based on the stuff you and sheepie did finally. It's not all quite in yet tho.

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>>181077926
There is this

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>>181134157
Although I will say no one ever complained about cocs readability to my knowledge

>>181134157
We have too much wasted space on there to do these text attacks to be one line at a fucking time. They need to show just the entire attack at once. Too much clicking is a major problem with slab

>>181133086
Exploding

Penis

>>181135378
ow

>>181135846
Don't worry, they grow back.

Dryad magic

amazons

>>181144703
Ew. More like slutazons

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>>181138567

tornado

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>>181130573
This

DEMON BEFORE GONE

>>181134475
That's my next project to tackle

>>181160729
A quick run through makes it seem like this is something tats will have to do himself

Instead I'll probably write some quests tonight unless there's another part of the ui that needs working on

hiring every tough merc girl you can find. Then fucking them all.

>>181163987
Propositioning a tough merc girl but she thinks it's an employment offer and gets really flustered when she realizes what you actually meant

>>181164489
>>181163987
harrasing a professional but highstrung merc grill until she admits her crush on you, but then it turns out to be a merc boi but that just makes your penis harder so you pound the boipucc like it was the last ass you'd ever see.

mushroom bombs

>>181164489
cute

>>181161880
Any preview on the quests?

>>181167510
doom

Listening and believing

>>181178274
Moistening and relieving

>>181174725
Probably something from >>181053206 unless you have any ideas

>>181178381
piss fetishist pls go

>>181179210
Seems like they'd be helpful if they gave you another source of money.

dinololis

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Necromancy

ants

>>181133130
cropsy pls

frog girls

>>181185892
cute

>>181185254
Fluffy raptors one day anon.

https://exhentai.org/g/1081043/a525ad41b9/

Now this is my kinda cat goddess

>>181194749
Who knew cats could hook you up with a goddess.

>>181195142
And a sequel is coming too.
This'll lead to a threesome, I'm almost certain.

Halflings

>>181199905
haltings

City where love is banned

>>181181693
>>181181693

>>181187567
girls

>>181219559
bois

Monster girl high school

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>>181223954
Nun who runs a little school house to civilize the more feral monstergirls and boys but desperately needs money to keep it afloat, so is willing to prostitute herself to you for the dosh needed to pay for the school.

>>181224570
Giving her money for free and romancing her later.

>>181224957
burning down her school and enslaving her

>>181225562
I think we really need a evil-corruption stat,to how us where are we at...
Are we the hero like the legeded? or are a monster praized as a hero because we killed the demon lord?

>>181227556
The game is supposed to get a corruption meter but it works more like radiation sickness.

>>181227741
Interesting,imo the meter should influence our character behavior if:
Evil-our MC is cold,distant aggressive
Good-typical good guy greg
Neutral-passive,dismissive

Just a thought

>>181227858
Well it's not directly related to evil, if we ever had an evil indicator it'd probably be unrelated.

>>181227968
Still would have loved to play a
Evil but "pure" 0 corruption character or a
Good but 100 corrupt MC

>>181048823
>and bet
We can gamble?

>>181228445
skypoint

Did the dorf who can't hold her liquor get removed? or is she just going to be put somewhere else?

>>181230097
Removed, same author as the harpies.

>>181230138
Damn, i liked her.

>>181205787
Hastings

>>181231220
killing the french when

>>181231314
huscarl girl when

So is there a paticular reason why every mob on the mountain has something that can drop you from 50 to 10 hp or can endlessly blind you when you start out?

Also getting blinded by foxboy dispite dodging it.

>>181232756
Balance requires testing and not too many people around willing to do it.

>>181232756
You can't dodge being blinded by foxbois cute butt. no matter how hard you try.

stupid sexy foxboi

>>181233090
What if he closes his eyes?

>>181232756
Mountain mobs need to be nerfed but tats only even shows up on sundays

We also need plot advancement and less clicking in the battle ui

devils

chojin

>>181241165
say what now

>>181238862
Debbies

>>181245151
twinkies

>>181245238
twinkles

>>181248460
Tinkles

hugs

>>181250650
bugs

>>181251573
Too many bugs

>>181251858
Not enough bugs

>>181252690
>firefly boy
>mothboy
>mothman
>millipede girl
>dragonfly girl
>butterfly girl
>mothgirl

I disagree.

>>181253138
>not
>enough
>bugs

>>181253240
Are you telling me you want to write a bug? In that case you should go for a bee girl. Any ideas for sex scenes?

>>181253352
donking a bee grill in her honey hole
and then not calling her the next day

thighs

>>181255075
skeleton thighs

>>181258406
Moth, not goth

yanderes

>>181261407
tsunderes
but not the shitty kind

girl as old as time

>>181267883
cute

passwords

>>181193438
fluffy but

>>181271273
Elite password protected club that turns out to just be nerd playing dnd and pretending to be cool adventures

Alternately, a slave marketplace

mucking about

>>181285446
Is there a time and a place for that?
Getting aged to death rapidly by a singing clock girl.

>All these years of calling her Arturia Pendragon
>Now she's Altria

I'm never going to get used to this...

>>181289861
who what

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>>181292184
You know, Saber.

All these years and translations her real name was "Arturia Pendragon".

Then the English version of Fate/Grand Order comes out and now it's "Altria"

Still not sure if this is translation mishap or if this was always her name and we just had it translated wrong this whole time.

>>181292727
Less on the nose I guess

>>181292727
Why not all of these options

>>181294563
Maybe.
I'm not sure if I like it or not still.
>>181297692
Why would it be all the options? That doesn't really make much sense.
If it was a translator mishap then the guys at aniplex who translated the game goofed pretty big.
But if what I was told was true and the name always was Altria, but due to the language differences with the Ls and Rs, then translators over the years just had it wrong until now.
I can KINDA see where they got Arturia from Altria if that was the case.

>>181298297
Maybe the keyword is
ALT

Maybe it's a parallel reality

>>181298650
I c wut u did thar
While that seems kinda silly to me, the game IS about correcting incorrect timeline shenanigans.

>>181292727
The translation is iffy in general, weird gender swaps and typos. I appreciate that they did it at all, though.

I can't roll anything worthwhile to save my life, though.

>>181298838
I'LL BE PROVEN RIGHT

>2017
>even in mod, still can't fuck pure (non-corrupted) Marae

What happened ?

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Beautiful princesses.

>>181308432
Needs more loli

>>181312856
Her name's Eliza.

>>181313087
I don't think she was a loli

>>181315978
She was. You're thinking of Debbie, most likely.

Spilling your sauce all over the spaghetti girl

>>181318883
throwing spaghetti grill in the trash cause italian food is a meme.

soft warm hugs

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Mage Wrasslin' Federation

>>181300551
>Weird gender swaps
>in Fate
Y'don't say.
But really, I must have not encountered any yet because it all seems pretty standard to me.

And yeah, the translation is a bit iffy here and there, but it seems mostly accurate so far. Some typos too. Could've gotten a proofreader.

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>there are people in this thread who WOULDN'T bone this

>>181321514
I meant in the sense that the servant's gender is outright wrong in the dialogue. I noticed it when I met Atalanta, they keep calling her a 'he' when Atalanta being a male is not even the intention in Fate.

>>181321707
A sandwich?
>>181321059
What's the armor for?

>>181321753
>What's the armor for?
can't be a wrassler without a costume. It's like asking Bane "what's the mask for"

>>181321727
Oh, I haven't gotten that far yet.
I got a couple of nice 4 stars. Only 5 stars I got are essences.

>>181321753
>he wouldn't fuck a crispy chicken sandwitch

>>181322747
I'd rather eat it.

>>181325654
ew, that shit is bad for you.

chicken harpy

>>181329132
Turkey.

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>>181331275
We have to many bugs already tho

>>181331362
Pffff, didn't expect that image.

>>181331362
lel

So are we ever going to get an explanation for why the PC is so damn good at sex?

>>181322747
A sandwich of firey chicken witches
With your wand as the meat

>>181337550
becauses reading a paragraph about how you suffer from occasional erectile dysfunction would be a turn off.

although, if i remember right, in Kara's design doc if you're a qt shota virgin you'll have a slightly different scene when you bone her.

>>181337550
For the same reason all hentai pcs are good at sex. MC MAGICL.

>>181329132
When will tats code the harpies

ambos

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>>181341724
>ambos
I agree, we need a slab church to either donate to, insidiously take over to promote ourselves as a messiah or pillage like snowniggers

>>181337979
Just after you began proving yourself to be an amazing warrior and leader in the apex of the war against Menhit, the desire for children of warriors such as yourself reached mad heights.

A counsel of magi from all the allied kingdoms came together and had an idea; pass on techniques via memory transfer with the belief that this would aid in your and others ability to repopulate a devastated population, as well as pass on your very desirable traits.
Normally such magics are forbidden as the ability of forcing knowledge and memories onto people can be easily abused, but due to the growing fears of the war escalating towards the main continent and the need for re-population after such a massive war increasing by the day, it was a risk they were willing to take.

The ritual for passing these techniques on, surprisingly, doesn't involve anything perverse.
They did however offer the option to let you try things out once it all sunk in, if you desired.

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>>181344009
2qt

Noh when.

bons

>Girls with big butts are also smarter, according to science studies

We need a science girl with a grade-A ass, pronto.

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>>181348464

>>181348464
Yes, we need more big butts.

>>181349073
Butts, anon.
Butts.
Not tits.
desu I like chests of many sizes, even flat chests. Long as they're a good shape.

>>181349831
Big butts, yes
Not-so big butts but they're still a good shape are also fine too.

Horny girl

>>181353178
girl who has horns

>>181354192
Horny girl with horns

>>181354192
Antelope gril

onis

mornings are shit

>>181366940
Mornings are fine.

Apathy is truely the greatest weapon

>>181373505
Apathy is death.

Girl who brings a bow to school and arrows up the place

>>181380228
Girl who bring a bow to school and i arrow up her place

Having to replace your library because the room keeps magically fucking up somehow and the door disappears.

>>181383612
Just punch through the fucking wall, you're a hero. If Chris Redfield can do it so can you.

>>181386173
One of my hard drives is most likely failing, I'm broke as fuck right now, and needed to vent. Just didn't wanna say it straight up.

>>181386970
Sorry to hear that.

>>181386970
shit

Irritating load times.

>>181392208
Irrating linux set ups

>>181394821
get gud

Where the fuck IS THE LINUX KERNAL REALLY

>>181402586
Gone forever

>>181406239
basically

passthrough

>>181413597
nothing burger

>>181417452
Burger joint where you get to molest the staff.

zebra popcorn is tastey

>>>181321727
The translators were at anime expo yesterday. Along with other staff and Seiba's seiyuu.
Apparently they know they goofed and are going to go back and fix stuff, including what you just mentioned.
Also a lot of other questions being answered, like the reason for Altria (apparently it was talking with the "owners" that lead to them going with it over Arturia, probably Nasu since he seems to be the one that's using it as the spelling), characters from Japanese events, etc.

Nice to see them trying, at least.

tats ree

>>181425775
Yeah we need that side bar added, then I can start spamming.

Getting told you look like a viking a lot. Happens to me constantly to the point that I found out that I'm literally known as that viking guy

>>181430684
get a hair cut, hippy.

>>181430897
Drink more mead pussy.

>>181430684
But are you hot

>>181431183
Mead is gross. i only drink corn liquor

golem pussy

>>181433476
Clay is bad for the peen.

sidebar when

Girl who is a public menace

Humans are superior

>>181452871
This. Purging the mutants before ascending the throne of Godhood

>>181424715
All things said, it's certainly not the worst translation I've gotten with a free game.

Does the wiki have a full list of combat effects?

black knight order

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We're making this.
We're making this happen.

>>181460279
Knightly order of crusaders who are currently being persecuted by a corrupt king because they're a threat to his monopoly on banking.

>>181460214
Don't think so.

>>181462158
yay

>>181462158
I for one, welcome our new harder to read overlords.

insults and burns

Sea waifu

>>181455539
This is true.
Seen much worse from paid games.
The translators for this is like a 3 person team, but the fact they actually admitted they messed up and can be improved is something that takes a lot to admit.

Creepy waifus

>>181479516
tiddies

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>>181462158
Looks good, but why are all of your circles ovals instead?

Also, any insight into how to make all battle text for a turn to show up at once so we can reduce how click heavy slab is?

I also think you reveal plot for the first continent, but that can wait.

>>181485534
We should find something in the castle to point us down the mountain at least imho

>>181487926
Should rebalance the mountain so people aren't trapped in the castle at the start grinding. People want to get to the sex.

Update in shared folder.

>>181485534
Size of the side panel.

I could try displaying all the messages instantly on the bottom screen and wait for a click to continue. BUT NOT TODAY. I want to sleep.

The plot will also have to wait.

>>181483049
ass

>>181479516
Is she insane or smth? I don't like the look on her face.

Letting a squirrel girl taste your nuts

>>181504365
lewd

>>181504365

Shire squire

>>181494893
Looks bad man. You don't want to mess with the aspect ratio

>>181512514
Scare hair

>>181512514
Having an effeminate and chubby samwise-esque gardener who squals just right when you stick it in his butt

>>181518172
Samwise is the dependable option. Not a hobbit looker like Frodo, but you never have to worry about Samwise running off on you to go play with his elves.

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>>181518172
>i typed Squals instead of squeals