Undyne thread Sexy edition Previous thread: >>779783

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Hey anons, draw an Undyne! Doesn't matter if it's lewd or not. Only have MS paint and a mouse? No problem. Just have fun with it.

Show your devotion!

no fuck you

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>>7880868
Ah heck anon don't be like that. Just go for it! Have fun!

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>>7880865
This is pretty tempting when I get back home.

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>>7880865
HAHAA! AN UNDYNE MADE ENTIRELY OUT OF TINY ALPACAS!

Question, are the pics from each previous thread saved anywhere? I missed out on a bunch from the last two...

>>7883095
Some archives store trash threads too, check around.

>>7883095
I'm fairly sure there's not that many new images in the last two threads aside from the toriel threesome doujin and a couple others. I think you can find them from the collections or they'll eventually get reposted again.

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Evening all, here's part 2 of the photo shoot story: http://pastebin.com/yQix1LJM

I think this one is exceptionally cute, and if you're a fan of Brill + Gill definitely check this out and let me know what you think.

I'm sorry I haven't been around for the past few days, but I'll have some free time tomorrow in the evening, so I'll be here then.

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fresh off my twitter

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>>7884691
>Brill on Grill
Say no more, senpai.

>>7884793
Cute!

>>7885450
I'd still fuck it.

>>7883095
All threads are archived on desuarchive
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7797832/
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7701683/
You can find a list of the early threads in the pastebin.

>>7883915
I try to post mainly new images.

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>>7884793
That's adorable, but remember to :orig!

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>>7880865
Is an old one ok?

>>7884691
Surprisingly lighthearted for someone who was just at a funeral.

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>>7885451
I'd think Brill on Grill would be something a little darker, haha.

>>7885936
Eh, it's a mixed feeling. Nice to do something else.

>>7884691
Ahh, I really loved this! It was indeed extremely cute.

I hope you've been doing ok.

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>>7888104
I swear she draws the best Undyne

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>>7888364
I like her style too, very watercolor-ish.

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Link because the gif is too large
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>>7880865
Eh, I've done better, but here you go~

>>7882653
good shit 10/10 A+

>>7885607
It'd be nice if it was big enough to actually see

>>7890085
Makes me feel like I need to raise my S-links with her or something.

>>7885640
>Humandyne
Heresy, but I approve at the same time. Is there more like this?

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>>7890515
That's a character cosplaying as Undyne, rather than a humanized Undyne.

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>>7890919

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>>7890932

>>7890919
Riiight, I thought the hair and stuff was stylized on purpose or something.

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>>7891668

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Any one else in the thread?

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>>7892109

>>7892109
NO! *mmph!*

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>>7892622

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Goodnight.

>>7892656
Night!

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Mornin' bump!

>>7894649
hot

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>>7885450
Now THIS is art!

>>7885607
I appreciate it. Would've appreciated a new one more though. Wink wink.

>>7890085
Beautiful! She looks kinda sad though.

>>7894964
personally i think she's too skinny but the thread was at page 10

>>7889281
>>7891672
I fucking love this animator.

>>7892625
For a moment I was certain that you had shopped loss into the dragons tongue.

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>>7884691
I really liked this one. Very cute and surprisingly erotic.

Imagining Undyne with a fake smile with her eyes pained and darting accross the room to Brill and back in a wild manner made me kek. I can totally see it.

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I heard you guys sin here.

>>7897177
We have equal parts sin and cute, thanks to the writefag.

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ayy you boys got any BIG FAT FISH TATS

>>7897673
no, thankfully

>>7895272
>looks kinda sad
Damn, was supposed to be a sneer. Thanks for the prompt regardless~

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>>7897917
don't be like that anon, we can be friends

>>7900053
those are just too big

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>>7900334
to each their own my dude, if no one's really interested I'll duck out

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>>7900445
Are these ok?

>>7900445
>>7900521
I think there's an appeal to it. It wouldn't be my favourite Undyne, but this boner says it DOES like it.

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>>7900521
they are nice but Alphys' are quite lovely in that one

>>7900445
There's like a big difference between >>7900521 and >>7900445, one is believable, the other is just freakish.

>>7900612
not about to tell you what to prefer or be disgusted by, friend. was just looking to share and find more.

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>>7900684
I don't think I have any truly hyper Undyne, sorry.

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>>7895272
>I appreciate it. Would've appreciated a new one more though. Wink wink.
Here's one I just made for when jelly (hopefully) comes back to /utg/.

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Hey all, writefag here. I know I said I'd be able to do some writing tonight but some things have come up and I won't have time. I feel pretty rotten skipping out on you guys like that, especially since I'm travelling tomorrow and I won't be able to write then either, most likely. So things will be back to normal on Tuesday, and I'm planning on sticking around for most of the day, so make sure you come up with something good for me.

Hope you guys have a nice night.

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>>7902330
Don't feel bad! I, and probably others, keep ourselves entertained with your older works too~

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>>7902330
Please don't worry about it! Attending to what you need to attend to is more important.

>>7890515
>Human
It's Cleary a dark elf

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>>7903045

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>>7903051

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>>7903060

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>>7903071

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wwww
wwww

>>7902468
>>7902330
Speaking of older stories, I've always been curious why so many of them aren't porn. I mean, isn't the porn the point? Why do you bother writing all these stories nobody's going to read?

>>7904212
>Why do you bother writing all these stories nobody's going to read?
But we've just said we're reading them. Is it so surprising that Undyne fans want to read Undyne stories? The porn is a bonus, since we're lewd like that.

I mean, I see where you're getting at. But this is pretty much the Undyne fanclub.

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>>7904212
I think the point is to make enjoyable Undyne-themed stories. Some of my favorites are non-porn ones.

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>>7904212
Never said I wouldn't phonepost!

There's sort of an unwritten rule in theatre that you shouldn't put nudity onstage, because the moment someone's naked up there, the audience stops paying attention to the play and starts paying attention to the genitalia. It's the same thing in pretty much any medium, writing's no exception. The stories I write that are porn aren't as good as the ones that aren't porn because they focus on the sex rather than the characters. Even if I write something long and thought-out that mixes sex and characterization tastefully, the moment I get explicit, that goes out the window.

Like other people said, in this thread there's a market for both porn and cute stuff. I'm not saying that the stuff that isn't porn is high literature or anything, but in terms of emotional response and general quality, I think it's a lot better. It's a lot more fun to watch characters interact when they aren't fucking each other, even if it's just for the greater range of expression. I'm sure that if you've read a lot of my stories the sex scenes have started to get a little repetitive, even if I try to do new and different things each time.

That and, if I can blow my own horn, I think my writing is generally of a higher quality than most fanfiction, so I guess I indulge myself a little bit, and people seem to like it.

>>7904292
Ha, you flatter me. Which ones are you thinking of?

>>7904275
>>7904292
>>7904528
Okay, I guess that makes sense. This thread has a really different atmosphere to what I've come to expect from /trash/.

>>7904528
>Which ones are you thinking of?
Let's see, just off the top of my head...

The Brill and Undyne holding hands one
The one with Undyne as an npc in a game world
Going to the prom with Undyne

And lots of others, really. Ones with Undyne in unusual settings or interacting with other characters from the game are fun, too.

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>>7904795
I'm glad you're so open, anon~!

We've been kinda' shitposted before with similar posts that kinda' bait us into discussion and then meme us soon after. So I hope I didn't seem too snarky, aha.

I can definitely understand the confusion if you're new to this thread. With the prevalence of porn generals it might have been surprising to see the Undyne thread not dedicated entirely to the lewd.

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>>7908254

>>7909579
why is youngdyne so cute lads

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>>7909638

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>>7911968
She just is!

And goodnight.

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>>7912001

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>>7911968
I think it has something to do with the fact that you know she's Undyne. Spirited, active, brave, etc. but in child form.

It's pretty precocious.

Has the writer done any Youngdyne stuff?

>>7912029
The closest is probably the teen Undyne stuff.

>>7897673
>Toothless
>Giant balloon breasts

Not my Undyne.

>>7902071
Neat!

>>7904212
>Nobody's going to read

Heh. He doesn't know that we were the ones who requested them.

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>>7903619
wwwwww!

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fish booty > fish booby

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>>7914541
>#GirlsWhoSquat

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>>7914541
Thou speaketh the truth.

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>>7915426
Amen, brother.

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rock eatin' bump

>tfw no stories today

>>7917780
It might be a few weeks before we get any more stories, write-anon is going through a rough patch right now.

>>7918619
Wait what? What happened? I haven't been here in a while.

>>7918619

Don't try and talk for the writeanon if you aren't even reading the thread.

>>7902330

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>>7914649
>Undyne in a dress
I love this too much! Heck, the cat stuff is just the cherry on top.

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Some more Undyne-related doujins showed up on alice-books.
All non-lewd, surprisingly.

>>7921634
>non-lewd
Huh. That is surprising. It's nice to have some non-lewd, but ever since that story I can't get mettaton and undyne threesomes out of my head.

>>7921926
...which story? I'm suddenly very interested.

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>>7922005
http://pastebin.com/n0teT1ag
I remember the writeanon not being very satisfied with it, though.

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I got TF2 working again but now my SD card is borked so I can't inject pokemon anymore

nothing is perfect

>>7921634
That doesn't look like a very non-lewd cover

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>>7888104
>>7888364
I wish I could draw this well

>>7922188
Yeah, that's how they get you

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>>7922188
Well, it says all-ages!

>>7922035
I wonder why, it was pretty hot.

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>>7922241
I didn't like it because I couldn't really get a feel for Mettaton and it ended up just being porn for porn's sake, and pretty clumsy porn at that.

Anyway, off to bed. Night all.

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>>7922060
I believe those things don't have anything to do with eachother

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>>7923012
Only two games I consider myself good at

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>>7922482
Goodnight!

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New doujin?

>>7922197
Well, first tip I'd say is work on your antigravity breasts. Unless she's wearing a hardcore pushup bra, those things should be far more teardrop shaped.

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>>7927284

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>>7927289

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Goodnight.

>>7927634
~nighty!

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morning bump~

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Well it's been like, what, three weeks since I drew proper Undyne? I'm getting rusty. Feel free to suggest lewd or non lewd so I don't wither away completely.

>>7929997
I'd kinda like to see flustered swimsuit model Undyne from the writeanon's latest story

>>7930223
Oh yeah I was thinking about doing that one too. I'll have to get back on these tomorrow though. I don't have too much time left today and I don't want to rush it.

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Morning all, let me know if you'd like a story written and I'll get to it when I can.

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>>7930570

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>>7930386
No rush my man, we're just glad you're still here.

>>7930570
Can I request some youndyne? Seems like that was a hot topic earlier. Maybe some slice of life stuff from when she was living with Asgore?

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>>7931336
Yeah, I can do something like that. Anything specific or just some scenes?

>>7931496
I don't have anything specific in mind, so feel free to go ahead unless you'd like me to come up with something.

>>7880732
Is this the longest running thread on /trash/ for an individual character?

>>7931881
Perhaps

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>>7931833
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/zKpje1pv

I'm kind of surprised nobody's requested this sort of thing before, I think there's a ton of potential here. Let me know what you think.

>>7931881
well, there's the toriel and asriel ones too

>>7932707
>I'm kind of surprised nobody's requested this sort of thing before, I think there's a ton of potential here.

I'm sorry writeanon, did you just say YOUNGDYNE MARATHON?

>>7928964
For some reason mom Undyne is so hot to me.

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>>7932707
Bittersweet as hell. I liked it.

I do have to agree though, I'm kinda surprised we made it this far without a youndyne story. I'll have to request something else once I think of it.

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/trash/ is moving fast today

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>>7929997
>that image

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Some more Alphyne doujins on alice books
http://alice-books.com/item/show/6554-1

>>7932707
what is it with you and sad stories

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Does /trash/ mind if I share my porn? It's got fish booty!
(though if it's too much Alphys, I'll delete it upon request)

>>7941268
Go for it. Not like we're terribly busy at the moment

>>7941268
Nice, thanks for posting the nsfw version!

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>>7941370
I've only done two, plus this one, but hey! after I finish up /utg/'s requests, I'll stop by here and take a few as well.
I love drawing the fish, and I'll do lewd just for you guys if you so wish.

>>7941413
there's never enough lizard titty and fish booty, Anon

>>7941474
>I've only done two, plus this one, but hey! after I finish up /utg/'s requests, I'll stop by here and take a few as well.
That's great, thank you so much!

>there's never enough lizard titty and fish booty, Anon
Amen.

> people actually save my art
Im not blushing, you're blushing!!

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>>7941594
Of course people save your art, it's great!

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>>7932707
>http://pastebin.com/zKpje1pv
Awww

>>7941474
Aw shit, I thought you meant you were just posting a collection. Didn't realize this was stuff you drew yourself. Good shit

>>7941561
aww this is really cute

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Would you?

>>7943508
Just give her a shave and heck yeah.

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>All these people legally buying their fish porn

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>>7944559
You can't stop us!

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Goodnight.

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>>7945313
night, dweeb

>>7943553
YOU'RE WEAK

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>>7943508
If given the equipment to breathe underwater for long periods of time, yep

also, that bush?
YE

>>7943508
Yeah as long as she'd trim a bit. Not the most beautiful or anything but definitely doable.

I like to think that she doesn't have nips.

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>>7930223
I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I went with a kind of baywatch bimbo look instead of the muscular hotness that the writefag described. I just don't know how to draw good looking abs.

>>7932707
>He glances up, meets her mother’s eyes. She offers him a tired smile, nods at Undyne.

Oh no! This is going to be terribly sad isn't it.

>>7947445
lmao holy shit

>>7947445
it's more bittersweet than anything else desu

Also that drawing is great.

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Morning all, let me know if you want a story written and I'll get to it when I can.

>>7947445
That's perfect.

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>>7947696
Undyne trying to play GTA: San Andreas on PS2!

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>>7947749
Eh, that's kind of similar to the STALKER story I did, I think. I'll still do it if you'd really like me to, though.

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>>7947558
>>7947510
>>7947696
Thanks!

Sometimes I wish I had the patience to draw the same thing for more than a few hours so the lines wouldn't be so hasty and unclean. Undynes hair is a terrible mess.

>>7947881
Have you done one where she's doing schoolwork/at college or something?

>>7947011
Makes sense, nipples being a mammalian thing

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>>7947696
Can you make me go "awwww"?

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>>7947912
Yeah, http://pastebin.com/biQJNKqG is sort of like that.

>>7947962
I mean, I probably can. What would you like to read about?

>>7948000
Have you done anything immediately after the end of Undertale? What about where her and the reader first meet, is that what the Fight story was meant to be?

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>>7948023
Yeah, that was what I was thinking back then. I've sort of stayed away from that like area in time because I don't want to make any really sweeping declarations or anything.

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>>7948042
How about teaching her to shoot a handgun/rifle? Target practice?

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>>7948060
I could, but be warned that I know hardly anything about guns.

I feel so picky haha, I guess this is what happens when you've written so many stories. I'm sorry.

>>7948107
How about showing her imageboards? Letting her click around and explore? Get into arguments? I like that idea.

>>7948134
They actually have done one about showing Undyne this thread: http://pastebin.com/tfKfN3YF

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>>7948232
Ha, thanks, I was looking for that. I never added it to the main pastebin cause I figured people wouldn't care about it much but it just keeps getting brought up.

>>7948107
mate I think we've reached the point where there's nothing left to write about

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>>7948266
We'd better ask Undyne.

>>7948278
i wish i could desu

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>>7948107
>>7948266
We've reached "Simpsons did it" status except with Undyne fanfiction. Nice going writefag.

Let me know if any of these sound good:
>Undyne on a hot air balloon
>Undyne tries an extreme sport
>Anon/Brill teaching Undyne how to use chopsticks
>Undyne tries ballet (kek)
>Youngdyne training with Asgore

>>7948550
Undyne trying to install gentoo

So is Undyne part /trash/ history?

>>7948550
>>Undyne tries ballet (kek)

Get on this writefag!

>>7948591
How so?

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>>7948591
By now, I'd say yes. This thread has been up for a few months now. Even though it seems slow in here, there's only a few threads that are much faster, like fur threads and such. And TLHG, although I still don't understand why.

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>>7948706
Lol I was here for a moment in history.

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>>7948550
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/y2CDeZsf

In typical fashion I chose the most boring option but I think it turned out really well, honestly. Let me know what you think.

>>7948634
Ha, sorry, I'd already started writing before I saw this but you might like http://pastebin.com/Q0nizc6P

>>7949192
I don't mind, you still made it a good story regardless. Is this supposed to be the start of a shift in character for Undyne? This story definitely had a note of finality in it.

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>>7950189
Hmm, how do you mean? I think that maybe what you're going on is her choice to be like an actual reasonable human being, rather than clamming up and getting flustered, but my thought process was that they've been together for long enough that she's starting to / has already moved past that phase.

>>7950448
>her choice to be like an actual reasonable human being, rather than clamming up and getting flustered

I suppose that's what I meant lol. For the most part, Undyne has been the shy embarrassed one in a lot of your stories, and this sounded like her finally coming out of her shell.

>>7949192
I love how real you make the characters. You're a fantastic writer.

>>7947445
>image
Yesss, that's great!

>>7953763
holy shit

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>>7953763
Hmmm?

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I had zero trouble with Undyne in my first run of the game which was a Pacifist run

Genocide run however....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rW-vBW7LAWk
>Pic related

Then there was Sans....

>>7954780
This pretty much summed how easy she was for me in the Pacifist run

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oh3CbKjmIi8

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>>7954780
>Genocide run however....

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I think this is ancient history at this point but does anyone have the full version of this comic?

>>7955148
Check the archives, that's been posted in full multiple times.

I WANT TO FUCK HER BUTT BUT I DON'T HAVE A DICK
WHAT DO I DO

>>7955780
Get the writefag to write some strap-on stuff for you.

>>7955849
THAT'S A GREAT IDEA
THANK YOU

>>7955780
bruh, you got fingers don't you?

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>>7955148
The Alphyne part starts here
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/7400460/#7436512

>>7956908
Thanks senpai

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>>7957068
No problem!
Now we just have to wait for this
(and two dozen or so other Undyne related doujins)

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>>7955849
This... might also be relevant to my interests

>>7957130
omg is that what I think it is?

(a three way lesbian doujin?)

UNFFF

>>7941799
Beautiful

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>>7957672
Yep, it is!
http://alice-books.com/item/show/5759-3

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>>7957130
>3 way with toriel

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>>7955849
>>7956213
I too wish to see this

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>>7957763
>Undyne and Alphys staring at each other while eating pussy

>>7959321
ikr?

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Curry's on a roll tonight.

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Goodnight.

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Morning all, let me know if you'd like a story written and I'll get to it when I have time.

>>7965046
>>7955780
>>7955849
>>7956213

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>>7965141
Ha, alright, I can do something like that. I won't be able to start for a while, though, so check back later.

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>>7965231
No worries, we're not going anywhere.

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Hey!

I made some slight improvements to >>7947445 http://imgur.com/a/y3i5c

Now Brill looks more like a human being and less like a war elephant.

>>7965450
I can't tell the difference but I'll take your word for it.

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Hi guys, backup writefag here. Got bored in the waiting room and threw something together.

http://pastebin.com/XSFnTjBk

I know I'm no regular writeanon, but I'm open to criticisms. Be honest if you don't like it.

>>7966220
That was nice. Very comfy.

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>>7965255
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/YDR0M9Np

I got so horny I had to take a break while writing this, so let that be your indication of its quality. Let me know what you think.

>>7966220
This is a solid improvement from before. I don't know which one of the other writefags you are but no matter which, this is loads better on a micro level. The writing itself is decent, but there are some issues on the macro level which I think should be the next thing you address.

You use a lot of telling in this, and the overall effect makes it feel like you're rushing through all this backstory to get to the real meat, but then the story just ends. I'm not saying you shouldn't tell at all, because it's a useful tool in certain situations, but what makes a story dynamic and interesting is showing, and personally, if I was writing this same story, I would have broken it up into a bunch of little scenes. I don't want to hear a summary of what Undyne and Alphys did, I want to actually be there with them and watch them do it. I think that if you'd done that the story would be a lot more interesting and engaging.

Although that's a major issue, it's the only one I have, and I think that if you put more time in and plot out a story, you'll find that suddenly things are much more interesting.

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>>7967752
>>7967771
Thanks for the feedback guys!

I think the last thing I wrote was the one where Undyne was training in the snow. I tried reading this one out loud beforehand like you recommended, and that definitely helped me find a few areas that were worded awkwardly. Next time I'll put a little more forethought into it, since I did just kinda shit this one out while waiting on a doctor's appointment.

Regardless, I'm glad to hear you thought it was better. I'll keep working on it, but I don't know how consistently I'll actually put stuff out.

>>7967771
What do you mean 'telling'?

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>>7967771
>http://pastebin.com/YDR0M9Np
Hot!!

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>>7968182
The difference between 'Undyne is sad' and 'Undyne weeps.' The first one is telling, the second is showing.

>>7968248
Oh, okay, cool.

new thread >>7968459