Undyne thread
THAT IS NOT DEAD WHICH CAN ETERNAL LIE edition
Image Collections:
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https://mega.nz/#F!ZxQnALTQ!RJ0CyfW3tP5HzKy4YQHbXA
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*IMPORTANT*
If you have many or rare Undyne images, please consider sharing your collection too!
Resources:
Search Tips, Information, and Archives -> http://pastebin.com/AVdzDCdU
Comfy fish stories -> http://pastebin.com/Xf3GR6TA
Writefag here. When I came back and found the thread dead I decided to sit down and finish up the collection of stories. You can download the 270-page PDF here: https://mega.nz/#!iQkHlQZA!pDGm7hMBXqW2FDggGLIE8IzEJlFFFLuefmxzzPPeXZI
>>7799842
thank god, i was getting worried
>>7799919
Always here, sometimes posting sometimes just lurking
>>7797868
Cool look forward to looking through them
>>7800023
It's not like there's anything new, it's just everything in one place.
>mfw I forgot to bump the thread this morning
>I knew I forgot to do something
>>7800286
So this is your fault.
>>7800060
I've only read like maybe half of them so some will be new to me anyway
>>7800023
Just noticed how awkward that coloring between Undyne and the guy is. A bit of her hair is uncolored and the grey on the guys arm is going over. The part of the guys shoulder under the sharkgirls hand is also colored in wrong.
>>7800468
I'm just impressed you're still fixing things honestly.
jeez guys, I'm gone for 2 days and you let it die?
>>7801030
RRREEEE IT WAS AN ACCIDENT
>>7800796
Well, as I said I JUST noticed it when that other anon posted it. I'm fairly content on leaving it as it is since it was requested as a sketch. I wasn't the one who originally colored it either. I also just noticed that there's a spot between the characters where it's colored in red even though it's not supposed to be hair either but I don't want to spam the thread with the image AGAIN so whatever.
>>7801030
The last thread was nearing the bump limit anyway wasn't it?
>>7801315
>The last thread was nearing the bump limit anyway wasn't it?
Yeah, basically.
I can't believe it died.
>>7801030
I rarely check or bump on the weekends. Spending too much time doing other shit.
Reposting from the old thread since it was at the end
>http://pastebin.com/439TP4XG
I'm embarrassed to say I've never played any of the souls games, but I really liked this and it seemed accurate from what I know. I thought the equation of the bonfires and the save-points in Undertale was clever.
I wouldn't mind seeing more stories about Undyne in unusual or fantastic settings.
>>7797832
Link to previous thread for the archive
>>7701683
>>7801754
Don't worry about it anon. It got better.
>>7801754
WE RISE STRONGER
>>7797868
>270 pages
holy FUCK
>>7802137
where did this meme sweater come from
>>7802164
Japan.
>>7797944
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cH6qR2gliug
>>7802212
that explains a lot actually
>>7802222
>checked
>>7802572
I've always wondered what that shit on her shoulders is
is it supposed to be scars?
What the fuck would leave a scar like that?
I'm gonna go to sleep, don't let it die again you weenies.
>>7802613
Probably not just one scar but several in the same area. I dunno. I prefer pic related
>>7802639
You can't make us!
>>7797868
>Although at time of writing this the /trash/ Undyne thread is on its last legs
nooooo
>>7803241
*Battle Against a True Hero plays in the background*
>>7797868
Wait...does this mean no more stories?
>>7804778
No, I'll still be here writing until the thread's gone for good. I may have been a little hasty when I put the pdf together, I just came back and found the thread dead and I was like 'oh no, I didn't get to post it' so then I rushed and slapped it all together.
I hope we get some nice Summerdynes this year.
>>7805165
I want more fitdynes
Does anyone have any good Undyne wallpapers?
>>7805715
seconding this. I need a new one, too
>>7805715
>>7805764
What sort of images are good for wallpapers? I have some hi-res ones that could be stretched or cropped.
>>7805878
hardcore porn to show how dedicated you are to your waifu
>>7805165
Bigger summerdyne.
good night :)
>>7806140
Goodnight!
>>7806140
Night!
>>7806218
So, something like this?
>>7806582
Gosh, I love her high-waisted pants!
Boy it sure is cozy tonight.
>>7806582
Yeah! This is good! New wallpaper get!
http://yamimarik1994sfm.tumblr.com/post/157501606052/
>>7808149
YOOOOOOOO
Asriel x Undyne is 10/10!
>>7808149
Pretty neat even though I don't really like Asriel x Undyne. It just doesn't make sense.
Fresh(ish)
>>7810083
Hnngh!
Goodnight.
>>7810488
Night, fisherman!
>I want to write Undyne stuff
>get distracted in other threads, such as the caption and ERP ones
Curse this dick! It rises! For that is my curse!
Dumb story idea: Undyne is offered a job as a swimsuit model (to appeal to the monster demographic, you know?)
>>7810886
And the human demographic with ocean fever!
>>7808149
>the way she slightly sticks her tongue out
>>7811965
that's one big machete
>>7812119
for you
Hi all, let me know if you want a story written and I'll get to it when I have time.
>>7813135
I'd just love to see something really sweet, hot and Alphyne-related.
>>7813234
I can do that, did you have any specific scenario in mind?
>>7813334
Something post-game, the two of them enjoying alone time with each other at home and such, being dorks together and things escalate and turn intimate, something like that.
>>7813408
Alright, sure. I have to warn you, it'll probably take a while as I'm in the middle of a lot of other stuff, but I am working on it.
>>7808473
Bit off topic, Just finished the game and realized something. Asriel in the game isn't Asriel at all, hes an echo, a memory, longing for something he'll never have: a soul. The real Asriel in the game has long since passed on, and even in the true pacifist ending the Asriel you save isn't the same Asriel who died. He just has his memories. Chara on the other hand, she still lingers around and it kind of was heartbreaking to find out she was irredeemably evil considering what Asriel sacrificed out of love for his sister. For such a budget game the story is fucking premo
>>7813579
No problem, looking forward to it!
>>7813710
>Chara on the other hand, she still lingers around and it kind of was heartbreaking to find out she was irredeemably evil
This always bothered me a bit too, since the rest of the game is full of flawed but redeemable characters it's kind of weird to have one that's just pure evil.
If you look at it another way though, a pacifist playthrough is kind of Chara's redemption arc. After Chara fixes everything (acting through Frisk), at the very end Asriel/Flowey realizes that Chara was a bad person, a realization that was only made possible by Chara.
>>7813717
Delivered: http://pastebin.com/VxJc8rtL
Again, sorry for the delay, had a lot of stuff to do. I haven't written any Alphyne in a long time so let me know what you think; personally I think it's decent.
>>7810442
Those are some nice fish tiddies on Undyne!
>>7815707
Thank you!
>>7810870
The dick is our greatest ally and our greatest foe. It can motivate or break your will.
>>7815707
Wow I think this is the first time I've seen you write lewds with these two. This was really nice! It almost feels like it was somehow easy for you to write this time.
>>7815870
>The dick is our greatest ally and our greatest foe. It can motivate or break your will.
We need to be the master of our domain.
>>7816362
Through dick, unity!
>>7815707
Aw, that was cute! I like your Alphyne.
>>7815870
People just don't request it much at all, I've written a few stories with them and one I think where it turned lewd. How do you mean easy?
>>7816475
I think you should do a few more. As the requester, I was quite satisfied with it and want to see more like it!
>>7816475
It felt fluid. Like they're defined characters already so you didn't have to invent anything to fill their holes this time. Uh... pun unintended.
But yeah, there's no great innovation to it, it just feels like Undyne and Alphys, but it works well and they're well written as they are.
Speaking of Alphyne, one of the (non-lewd) doujins from the recent con showed up on alice-books
http://alice-books.com/item/show/5588-4
>>7816722
>>7816690
I feel like people always forget I'm like capable of writing the characters like that, haha. There's so much Undyne x Reader stuff where I have to do that inventing that the other stuff gets kind of pushed to the wayside.
>>7816529
I'm not opposed to it but it really depends on what people end up requesting.
>>7816894
I say surprise me. As long as it's cute, sexy and genuinely them, I'm happy.
>>7816722
Looks cute. Too bad I don't understand moon.
>>7817787
I find it extremely odd that the artist chose to go for a bald head even with the date outfit and the tuft of forehead hair.
>>7817882
I suppose it's not the worst looking. Since she's pretty non-human looking it works enough, I suppose.
Bump
>>7819855
Speaking of fallout, are there any good Undyne mods or games where you can customize your character to be like Undyne? A magic-buffed spear in the Dark Souls games with a blue character gets pretty close.
>>7819934
MfGl in DCSS
>>7820001
Ooooh, I'll check it out.
>tfw the writefag is still writing
>tfw the thread is still alive
>tfw all is well
>>7822535
>tfw can't upload images to /trash/
>4chin pls
>>7822834
You'll have to have a 4chan pass to post images now.
RREEEEE FIX THE SERVERS HIROHITO!
4CHAN LIVES
4chin is giving us a good fight in trying to stop our morning bumps.
>>7805907
Alphys pls
You are showing
>>7821247
>undyne will never succ you
>>7826459
with those teeth? Good
Afternoon all, let me know if you'd like a story written and I'll get to it when I can.
>>7827734
I kind of like this anon's idea >>7810886
>>7828310
I'm not opposed to it but I'm having trouble coming up with a good story there. I mean, that's a good setting but idk what the plot would be.
>>7826459
>>7828633
I suppose they want Undyne to just get really popular suddenly as some sort of beauty icon even though she's not really conventionally beautiful.
>>7828633
Sorry, didn't get a chance to reply until now.
I dunno, maybe one of these
>Undyne's out on a date and gets approached by a talent agent
>Anon/Brill convince her because they're short on cash
>Undyne wants to make a statement because she's tired of people looking at her funny
>Undyne gets off to being an exhibitionist or something idk
>>7830643
>Undyne to just get really popular
She is pretty popular among monsters. (not for that reason, though)
>even though she's not really conventionally beautiful.
Maybe Undyne's doubts about that could be a plot point or something.
>>7830645
>>Undyne's out on a date and gets approached by a talent agent
I kind of like this one.
>>7830773
>>7830645
Alright, so are we leaning towards the 'gets approached on a date' angle, then? I think the main problem would be that to do it properly would require a longer story, but I don't mind doing a two-parter today and tomorrow if people are interested. What I'm thinking is the first one dealing with Undyne deciding whether she'll do it or not (re >>7830724 and the whole doesn't think she's pretty thing, but I feel like that might be a little played-out) and the second one dealing with the actual photo shoot or whatever. I figure that could go two ways, either there's a lot of drama and Undyne gets tired of it and storms off (although I've done that before), or with there not being any problems at all and it being a pretty fulfilling experience. For that I think I'd go with the first one from the usual third-person and the second from Undyne's perspective.
What do people think?
>>7831074
Two parter sounds good. The approached thing is probably the best way of handling it. It's funny and could be cute if she gets embarrassed.
If I had to write a story like that I'd probably make the photo shoot comedic somehow. Like Undyne doesn't really know how to be a model at all and is kind of fed up with it but all the photographers and such absolutely love her without her intending it.
>>7831442
>>7831395
Good enough for me, I'll get started on that first one. Expect it in an hour or two maybe.
>>7831553
I can't fap to this.
>>7833662
wew lad
>>7833662
.......but I can.
Here's part 1: http://pastebin.com/McVzd95E
Mostly pleased with this; I'm interested to see what people think as there's a bit of character development in there that I'm a little iffy on, but who knows. Overall I think it's decent.
>>7833178
Write anon!
I demand a story about undyne trying to beat the heat during her first summer since leaving the underground!
Make it as cute or saucy as you please!
>>7833903
I won't be able to do it tonight, unfortunately. Catch me tomorrow maybe? On the other hand this might be close enough to what you're looking for: http://pastebin.com/C0v82gdb
>>7833973
Oh thanks I didn't even know if you were in the thread as your post didn't shoe up until I posted mine lol
>>7833848
I liked it! Brill and Undyne are so cute together.
Can't wait for part 2.
>>7833662
I like the expression reminds me of some cartoon for some reason.
>>7834912
Yeah, right? There's such a cute dynamic between them. I think that's the perfect example for how the writefag is doing good by taking so many liberties with the character, you can't have that same relationship with Alphys.
One thing I'm curious about is how Brill fits in with Anon in the whole chronology and everything. I haven't been able to figure that out.
Goodnight.
>>7833848
What character development are you iffy on? I didn't spot anything too different from how you usually do Undyne and Brill. Do you mean the part where Brill was lecturing Undyne about her self image of coolness? It was cute.
Sometimes I almost feel like you're just taking the piss with how you describe their thoughts about each other in those dreamlike sequences though.
>"ah those slender legs that waist those eyes - !"
They're so quick and you sow them into your text very often almost like you're forcing yourself to write a few thoughts of the character. I guess it's appropriate if they haven't been dating for long but otherwise I personally feel like we don't need to see in to the characters mind for such short glimpses in such short succession. I think it becomes more apparent when one reads a few of your stories in a row for a longer set.
I don't want you to stop completely though and for example the description of Brills thoughts about Undyne in paragraph 8 is well done.
All in all I think it's good and it made me chuckle a couple times. Looking forward to the next part.
not tonight thread, not tonight
>>7835540
I like to imagine anon just lets Undyne fuck other girls because he thinks it's hot.
Sometimes, You just gotta fuck yourself
Also I'm working on something
>>7797832
Artist of OP?
Hi all. I have some bad news. I have to fly back home for a funeral this weekend so in all likelihood I won't have much time to write basically after I make this post. I'm going to try and cram in the second part to >>7833848 at some point but we'll see. I'm planning on being back by Monday at the latest.
>>7835540
I've been trying to keep it vague, mostly because I can't think of a really good way for them to coexist, I think Undyne would feel guilty about something like >>7842543 so there's just no answer at this point.
>>7841541
Yeah, I was iffy about that bit due to it being a reversal of the typical role between Undyne and Brill, and while I think it's a nice bit of development it does lead to Brill and 'you' being a little more samey, which I want to avoid.
It's funny you point that out in this story in particular because I think there's literally just that one instance in there. Had you been marathoning a bunch of my stories or something? I imagine it can get a little repetitive if you're doing that. Generally I include it as a short of mental shorthand rather than writing out exactly what Undyne is thinking of, like in paragraph 8 as you mentioned, and I keep it consistent over stories as a sort of touchstone for Undyne's character, how she's consistently going back and appreciating the same things in these little mental flashes. I'm not forcing myself to do it, it's a very conscious choice, but if you think it takes away more than it adds I can always remove it.
>>7844233
https://twitter.com/qkqk88
>>7844868
Really sorry for your loss. Please take all the time you need.
>>7843370
This is finally available on alice-books!
http://alice-books.com/item/show/5759-3
Get it while you can, this one >>7816722 sold out already.
>>7846896
>>7846904
>>7846916
>>7846929
>>7846937
>>7846952
>>7846937
>>7846929
>>7846916
>>7846904
>>7843968
Kek. Interesting.
>>7844868
>Had you been marathoning a bunch of my stories or something?
A little. As I said it's not really apparent from just this story but when you read a bunch of them it stands out in every one.
>I keep it consistent over stories as a sort of touchstone for Undyne's character, how she's consistently going back and appreciating the same things in these little mental flashes.
I suppose that's a fair reason. I guess I just wanted to know if you were even aware of it. I don't want it to be cut off completely but I hope you space them out a little when and if you combine these in the future to a longer story.
>>7849699
>>7849742
>>7849786
Lewd! Onionsan is innocent!
http://uwotinfokm8.tumblr.com
http://uwotinfokm8.tumblr.com
I drew some more Undyne but I didn't feel like taking a picture of it
>>7850960
That's ok, the important thing is to keep practicing!
http://uwotinfokm8.tumblr.com
>>7851235
>Eyepatch strap literally going through her forehead
I can't fap to this
>>7851552
AND IT'S ON THE WRONG SIDE! AAAHHH!!!
>>7851623
(I shouldn't be mean, the expressions aren't bad, but they could use a little finishing up)
I got off my ass and took the photo of this garbage drawing I did in like 15 or so mins
https://youtu.be/dWygYXvcKXE
>>7852542
The Rentals > Weezer
>>7850702
l-lewd
Goodnight.
>>7858560
Night!
>>7858029
I always wonder why the swap people never draw short, fat Undynes
I can't keep bumping, is anyone else here?
>>7862840
Here
Curse you fishfags for having a life and leaving me here to keep this thread up.
>>7865217
Your determination is sound, fisherman!
>>7865217
I'm here now!
>>7865468
Thank you fisherman.
>>7865681
Good to know I'm not entirely alone.
>>7865944
Ah perfect. Someone drew an image to fit my current state.
Time to go to sleep. Gn fish.
>>7866641
Goodnight!
>>7867003
thicc
>>7868903
god i love that fish
I AM BACK
I was banned unfairly, but I'm happy to be back. I was panicking when I wasn't able to bump the thread.
>>7869432
Welcome back, nerd!
>when you can't look at sharks the same way again because of the drawfag and writefag
Fu-Fuck. Undyne does have good taste. Shark grills are bae.
>>7871357
Speaking of which, where is the writefag? I didn't see a post today.
>>7871624
Oh, damn. At least she's not gone for good I guess.
>>7871357
The writefag did a story about something like this right? I should check it out.
Very nice hula fish from Petra.
>>7869432
Lemme guess. You got banned for a post you never made?
>>7874172
>those abs
I need this in my woman *eats hot pocket*
>>7871357
There's a shark girl thread up right now. Even has a writefag in it.
And yes shark girls are GOAT
>>7874616
>>7875178
Goodnight.
WAKE UP
>>7875535
CAN'T WAKE UP
>>7875540
WAKE ME UP INSIDE
I'm in desperate need for more Undyne foot pics.
>>7875587
>>7875589
>>7875593
aaah...
Please post more.
>>7875609
Yeah, well - i never thought i will be a footfag, but i think i am now - thanks to that fish.
>>7871357
I didn't like sharks before either. You can blame the requester and Xaenyth the artist.
>>7842980
Somebody should do a full body version of this expression of hers.
>>7874191
Yeah, I got banned for a post about mlp on /co/, although I only go to /co/ to lurk and never post.
>>7875535
CAN'T WAKE UP
>>7879630
Well this thread is almost donesies.
>>7877789
I've been banned on 3 separate occasions now because someone calling themselves "the midget fiddler" used my up or something. I'm not sure how all that works.
Point is I didn't do it.
Just gonna kill this thread with some Undyne x Mettaton.
Here we goo!