/cyoag/ - CYOA General; Idiot Sandwich Edition

>>54452159
I ate hog today. It was awful.

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>>54452198

>>54452193
Was it raw?

>>54452222
No it just sucked. Dunno why I expected any different, all pork tastes bland unless it's Chinese.

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Will post .pdf also.

2nd page done for those not in last thread.

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>>54452257

>>54452238
>all pork tastes bland unless it's Chinese.

You've just gotta spice it properly, or try different cuts. Or maybe not douse everything in condiments, if that's what you're doing instead.

Try this, and don't add anything to it when it's done. Just eat it as-is. No steak sauce, no ketchup, nothing. http://www.foodnetwork.com/recipes/ellie-krieger/pork-tenderloin-with-seasoned-rub-recipe-1917382

>>54452286
Any more to this?

>>54452257
>>54452286
I'll add The Familiars option to >>54449120

As anon pointed out, seems like a dick move not to thank the familiar helping you out with all of this.

>>54452304
I didn't make it, but in fairness the restaurant was pretty disappointing.
Maybe different cuts? Everything tends to be belly or chops, and it tastes of boiled paper.
>Or maybe not douse everything in condiments
Why the fuck would I use condiments what kinda prole do you take me for I don't even know why I come to these threads utterly disrespectful...

>>54452304
He might have some sort of genetic defect that doesn't allow him to enjoy the glory that is pork.

You know, like those poor souls that taste the bitterness of brussels sprouts.

>>54452238
What you need is genuine North Carolina barbecue.

aka pulled pork for you yankees.

>>54452406
I usually hate pulled pork with a passion, although I have had one really good pulled pork doughnut.
Obviously as a good America-hating Brit I'm never gonna have a genuine NC barbecue tho

>>54452406
fuck yes, southern bbq for the win.

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>>54452257
>>54452286
And here's the .pdf if it'll actually post this time. I'll read through any comments/builds tomorrow if people have them.

>>54452320
Not yet.

Acheld NEEDS to go full waifu-author

>>54452353
Pork really shines on denser, slower cooking cuts in my opinion. It can take it's time to let the seasoning set in, and stays edible in the process.

Shoulder's my personal favorite, but it's cheap as hell where I live, so that somewhat influences my favoritism. I let it go for about twelve hours, and I can tell you that it will bear no resemblance to paper.

>>54452370
>You know, like those poor souls that taste the bitterness of brussels sprouts.

Their lives must truly be suffering. But I'll never have more pity for them than I do those who can't taste the differences in hot sauces, and instead feel only varying degrees of "Oh God my mouth, it's on fire!" and "Holy shit is this lava? Did you feed me lava motherfucker?!"

>>54452353
>Why the fuck would I use condiments what kinda prole do you take me for

Gotta be honest, I completely assumed you were some kind of normie that found your way onto /tg/ instead of the type of autist that never actually leaves this place. And around here, normies need condiments on everything.

>>54452509
>those who can't taste the differences in hot sauces
The horror. The horror.
Why must nature be so cruel to my fellow man?

>>54452469
>And here's the .pdf if it'll actually post this time.
Reminder that PDFs trigger the anti-robot detectors big time, and last I checked the secondary captcha only works via the reply form at the top of the page.

>>54452530
>Why must nature be so cruel to my fellow man?

Karmic retribution for being the wrong kind of asshole, I would assume.

>>54452500
Yeah that's basically not how anyone cooks pork or anything else (that isn't stew) here. It seems America has a thing for slow-cooking?
>>54452509
>those who can't taste the differences in hot sauces
My little brother is like that, putting our ambiguously-thin Hindu blood to shame. But at least I get to be more macho than him he's taller than me...
>I completely assumed you were some kind of normie that found your way onto /tg/
For what purpose

Just for you, I'm putting an anti-pork option into my CYOA which'll never be finished.

>>54452563
>For what purpose

You specifically said all pork is bland except for Chinese pork. Your lack of taste was showing and heavily appealed to my cynical and pessimistic nature.

>>54452443
Rectify that if it's ever possible. The shit you ate was probably dry as hell and unseasoned.

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>>54452600
It's the simple truth. You think "yeah man this pork's gonna be delicious and meaty and juicy not like those other times" and then you bite into it and it sucks.

Nothing you can do, really. Goat's GOAT anyway.

>>54452599

this is getting more obnoxious than that guy posting the shitty ms paint saber waifu cyoa in every single fucking thread.

>>54452563
Well, I got the idea from an American anyways. Converting chewy collagen to juicy, silky, flavor holding gelatin.
Just takes time, moisture, and a consistant heat just over 71°C. I've had success at 80, as well.

>>54452676

I've been doing other shit instead of living in cyoag the past couple of days. Did someone fix Eromancer and rustle Tok's jimmies or something?

>>54452798
yes

>>54452469
>Elfie
>True Love
Her Major Advantage
>Interests
Her Major Advantage
>Attraction
Her Major Advantage
>Libido
Her Major Advantage
>Empathy
Her Major Advantage
>Dominance
Her Major Advantage
>Support
Her Major Advantage
>Others
Her Major Advantage
>pointy ears
>cute
>horns
>magic fingers and tongue (to help prep)
>sun's tail
>dark city

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>>54452832

Time to dig through the trash I guess.

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Have a good weekend, everynyan!

>>54452257
Is Shaylee retarded?

>>54453011
>you will never have a retarded fairy grind her body against your penis

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>>54452798
>>54452973

>>54453031
Knowing fairies it would probably fall of.

>>54453055
>he thinks he has private intellectual property
>on a commie site like 4chan
laughing rn tbqhwymn

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>>54453082

>>54453055
Why do you post the old version anon?
The new version is clearly more balanced. >>54452599

>>54453002
Enjoy yours, cat

>>54452159
>House Vespertine
>Classes:
Combat: Intermediate Edged Weapons, Adept Small Arms
Stealth: Adept Disguise, Master Investigation
Magic: Intermediate Utilimancy, Master Illusion, Adept Abjuration, Adept Divination
Leadership: Intermediate Communication
Survival: Intuition, Pain Control, Immunity
Club: News Media

Information is the name of the game.

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For Altering History.

>When & Where
10,000 BC
Cyprus
Dropped In

>Fate
Immortal Wanderer
Wizard

>Upgrades
-Mental
Genius Lv. 1
Memory of Ages Lv. 2
Polyglot

-Supernatural
Mage Eye

-Physical
Strength & Speed Lv. 0
Reflexes & Reaction Lv. 0
Impervious Lv. 0
Regeneration Lv. 2
Non-Reactor
Endurance Lv. 0
Super Senses Lv. 0
Diet Lv. 1
Sanitary Convience Lv. 1
Iron Gut

-Magic
Major Blessed One (Major Imbued)
Major Telepathy
Major Stormsage
Major Spiritsinger (Minor Imbued)
Major Firedancer (Major Imbued)
Major Enchanting (Major Imbued)
Major Binding (Major Imbued)
Major Abjuration (Major Imbued)

>Company
Companios x5, all empty

>Items
Wanderer's Journal
Sanitary Pack

>Pocket Dimension
Base
Fabulous Furnishings
Cooking Suite
Running Water
Time Dilation

>Drawbacks
Region Locked
Skin of the Outsider
Beastfoe
Nearly Mortal
Clouded Vision
Sleepy

>Quests
The Myth Maker (Impervious 1, Endurance 1)
Sorcerer Supreme (Major Compulsion)
The Federation
An Empire Eternal

>Multiplayer
Either

2400km is a lot of room, I can hit most critical places between 10,000BC and 600AD. I'm also in the important areas for the rise of various religions, which gives me a huge advantage in Myth Maker.

I spend the first thousand or two using time dilation to rapidly master all the magic I unlocked, then I begin to explore near the fertile crescent. I find promising young people and teach them magic while telling them to spread me as a myth. Eventually as the Greeks rose to power I'd return to Cyprus and build an academy, and continue to train people while telling them to tell others about me. Once the Romans appear, I'd ingratiate myself with their government while taking promising people as my pupils, while hopefully getting government influence. I would continue to instruct them to spread the word of my academy, hopefully by now a great college. I would largely teach minor powers, though I'd have a few apprentices of Major Blessed One..

>>54452473
Does that mean make waifu CYOAs, or be in CYOAs a waifu author? So confused.

>>54453287
Absolutely both.

>>54453276
Estimates peaked the population of the Roman Empire at one point to be around 120 million. With the addition of the mystical power of my healers, perhaps with enchanted items from stormsage to continue to provide good harvests and the population would grow even larger. So around 100AD or even before that I would qualify for Sorceror Supreme and remove my drawbacks while gaining a new major magic. At that point, I'd gather all the magical artifacts and take them back to the Magical College, then I would close it off from the world. I would study my new magic, and eventually my magical apprentices would die off and without magical support the Roman Empire likely wouldn't be able to keep their population fed, and the inevitable riots plus the Gauls historic pushes would likely result in their collapse, though perhaps a few years late. After that, I assume I still have a few more mythologies to become a part of. I'd use a combination of aiding the Celts, the Great Heathen Army, and Rurik to gain at least three myths in Christian lore, and perhaps in the native lore of other areas. Federation and Empire Builder are fallbacks in case my own meddling or another person's meddling disrupt time and I need to use a different method. Though I should be able to at least ingratiate myself as a Sorcerer.

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>>54452473
Yes. He needs to make the most waifu CYOA that ever waifued. He needs to drive us so crazy with waifulust that we go to /x/ to find a way to rend dimensions and actually acquire these waifus.

>>54452473
>>54453287
Send this Acheld person to the Discord and I will put him in CYO/u/ as a waifu/companion.

>>54453412
please don't corrupt acheld with the discord

>>54452159
House Radiant

Year 1: Intuition, durability, ki channeling, utilimancy, martial arts, small arms and explosives

Year 2: Observation,investigation,intuition, ki channeling, martial arts, small arms and explosives

Year 3: Martial arts, small arms, explosives , heavy weapons, economics, assuagism and worldwalking

Year 4: Observation,investigation,intuition, economics, penetration, martial arts and small arms’

Extracurricular: Disciplinary committee

>>54453384
I know where my strengths lie, and I'm pretty sure it's not there. There are waifu CYOAs I've seen that I could not even hope to emulate. It requires a passion that cannot be faked.

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>>54453412
What is this "CYO/u" you speak of?
Am I a waifu/companion in it?

>>54453660
It's a romance/SoL-focused, yuri-centric cyoa by me, Rosanon.
You would know if you're already a companion in it. Who are you? If you were to talk to me on the server, I could interview you for a bit and make you a companion if you're an author.

>>54453660
Are you an author? If yes, talk to Rosanon. If no, no.

>>54452159
>House Radiant
>Heavy weapons x25
>Tournament club

>>54453698
where can one find your cyoa?

>>54453698
>>54453698
>yuri
Meh

>>54452469
Lore question: Why was it better for me who apparently was responsible for the death of the previous leader (however accidentally) and thus the destabilization of their realm, (not to mention being a complete outsider), to be elevated to king than for Nesbit to lick up the blood and take on the job?

Also good job. I'm struggling with some of the decisions here. Well especially the public works decisions. (Moving the number that can be done immediately to three makes it a bit easier, and some more obvious choices than others, but still some tough decisions.)

>>54452469
So, does anyone have any ideas about how to visualize the Antlers/Horns combination without it looking silly?

>>54453785
Not done yet. It won't be for quite a while, but I'm actively making it.

>>54453801
Hey, you asked.

>>54453881
Moose.

>>54452509
> Their lives must truly be suffering. But I'll never have more pity for them than I do those who can't taste the differences in hot sauces, and instead feel only varying degrees of "Oh God my mouth, it's on fire!" and "Holy shit is this lava? Did you feed me lava motherfucker?!"

So, what's your favorite? So far, I think my general purpose favorite hot sauce is Nando's Peri-Peri sauce. (I usually go specifically for the one with garlic) Not the hottest of sauces, but it's just so good...

>>54453801
>CYOA/u/
>/u/
>surprised it contains yuri

>>54452257
>>54452469

>Tianna
>True Love - Mutual Minor
>Interests - Mutual Minor
>Attraction - Minor Advantage
>Dominance - Minor Advantage
>Support - Mutual Minor

>wings
>fairy eyes
>Antlers
>Large
>Swarthy

>Fantastical
I figure I owe the guy something
>Fetch Factory
better keep the miss's happy
>Seasons
I think I'd kill my self If I never got to see rain or snow again.


and I'd make "Sex" a project if only to give everybody shape-shifty powers.
with "Breeding Rights" and "Bloom" as secondary priority's
sure it may take ages but it'll be worth it to produce a more 'interesting' realm

>>54453881
Of course you would have a central horn, akin to the rhino, on your nose.

Or perhaps tusks? Think about it.
>>54453939
no fuck off

>>54452257
>>54452286
COOLEST OF CATS

>Bride:
Maurelle
>Contract:
Mutual Major Advantage True Love
Mutual Minor Advantage Interests
Mutual Minor Advantage Attraction
Mutual Minor Advantage Libido
Mutual Major Advantage Empathy
Mutual Minor Advantage Dominance
Mutual Minor Advantage Support
Mutual Minor Advantage Others

>Fae Aspects:
-0 Pointy Ears
-1 Antlers
-1 Tongue
-1 Aposematic
-2 Plant Life
-2 Luminous

>Public Works:
Fantastic Familiars
Heartstone
Dark City

Reposting build from last thread

>>54446660

Mentor - Lothienye
>I always love druid options, nature magic for binding foes and subsequently impaling them, shapeshifting to more easily navigate my labyrinthine creations
Lover - Imindis Hornmarked
>Because she's a cute and she needs love and I love her. She's also going to be pretty good in the forests, so our powers work well together.
Friend - Sir Tige Regrove
>just seems like a super affable dude, and I'd like to believe in good, too.

good CYOA, Acheld

>>54453055
I love this meme

>>54452286
Man I can't decide between Fantastical Familiars or Breeding Rights.

>>54454153
Hrm... That actually makes me wonder, why is Breeding Rights one that is in the "limited things one can do"? It's basically just a case of giving them permission, rather than anything that takes effort from some magical reserve or something, right?

Or did I misunderstand what picking that one does?

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Rolled 24, 23, 24, 9, 13, 5, 19, 24, 5 = 146 (9d24)

>>54452257
Initial impressions.
-Orla the Fairy Tooth Necromancer is the biggest issue. Not marrying her means an army at my doorstep constantly looming until I can either subsume or kill her. Wedding her is even worse, as it would easily be seen as a foreign interest taking central role in internal politics and radicalize some factions. My reign would likely be both short and bloody.
-Fae, Flora, Fauna and Elf factions are likely to be easily appeased. The librarian would make for an excellent counselor but doesn't appeal to me on a personal level. Some token shows of support for Fauna would quickly buy their loyalty.
-The Underworld is a competition between Drow Triads and the Sylph Syndicate. The Drows I could work with but Sylph is too bloodthirsty. Uprooting them should be priority number one. Air, however, is fleeting. All of this started with a movie, perhaps a subtle memetic war would solve this situation?
-Changeling is most likely the court faction. I'm not sure what to make of them, although I fear the complexities of their Traditions are such that sooner or later a faux pas would occur.

I think I'd go with Tianna and the Changelings to ensure a strong political base. I'd have to ask her to show the me and only me her true face in the morning however, she can change her accessory mask when she dresses up.

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>>54454334
>Contract
Key : Y- = Your, M- = Mutual, H- =Her, -M = Major, -m = minor
Love : YM (0) Ensures loyalty from her part. Her attitude towards the maids is reassuring however, she doesn't mind sharing when it is clear she is the top bitch.
Interest : Ym(-5) Might as well give her some relatable knowledge with some freebie points.
Attraction : Hm(5) Honestly, with a changeling this feels like cheating. She changes her form often, but each one is 10/10 would berry my dick so hard whoever pulled me out would be crowned Arthur King of the Britons tier.
Libido : Ym(0) Healthy sex drive but not enough to hamper our duties.
Empathy : Mm(0) As I have the trust of this faction I'd rather not share in their eccentricity and disenfranchise the members of lower castes.
Dominance : Hm(10) That's what a court faction does, essentially.
Support : YM (0)
Others : Mm (0) Sex has often been used as a diplomat's tool under the trade table. As spies and diplomats I expect my Consort's Concubines to excel in this regard. As for me, any fetish I want can be sated by the Queen so the Concubine position would be used as a way to honor families and factions(and later, sequester and Fetching). I would seek support from Fae, Drow and Flora first, then we'll see how it goes.
Thinking about it; a Consort position would be a great way to drive a wedge between the Crane sisters if my memetic approach doesn't work.

>Aspect
Pointy Ears
Fairy Eyes >being in a court of Fae Trickery >Not being able to discern magical effects
Antlers + Plant Life, cute forest of horns adorned with flowers for that extra not gonna die tonight flavor with kawaii aftertaste
Cute+Magic Fingers. I play the part of the fool prince surrounded by shady viziers(little do they know those shady Viziers are 100% loyal to me). That way any negative publicity will be soaked by my loyal retainers while my public image will be spotless. That's right, it's realpolitik wanna protect that smile.

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Rolled 13, 19, 22, 6, 4, 23, 1, 7, 23 = 118 (9d24)

>>54454361
>Projects
Seasons : A safe Center Egalitarian move. Excellent publicity being my very first act.
Bloom : Ties in with the previous, but I actually choose this one because I'm a regular coffiya/gween tea fiend.
Undercity : History teaches us that the easiest way to bring a diverse crowd together is to band them against a major Foe whose willful morality/nature is so alien to us that it's very existence desecrates every value and ideal we hold dear. So I will exaggerate rumors about whatever is down there while building up the Traditions that bring Fae(and more importantly, those weird Changeling fuckers) together in order to booster a sense of status quo and secure my powerbase.
Fae, Flora and Fauna will be appeased by my first two moves, and I hope to bring Honor to Elves, their city to Drows and establish cordial relations with Orla with my third campaign. It's pointless to try and get those Sylphs fucks in line, we'll have to wait to see if we can get them addicted to dank memes and super inflation hentai. At worse, I can pull a Bush and declare fatwah on terror on their asses. After that, it will be a case of carefully balancing the Elves, Drow and Orla till my Specter Shadow Fetch Army is done. To be honest, I would rather not wage war at all but I am a pragmatist. Si vis pacem.
Plus, it's a sweet ass brooding capital for my dark magical kingdom. If only I could make it always foggy earlymorning-dusk-summer night(but not too hot) and raining too.

Priorities
Mousway - Assassins y'all
Fetch Factory - There's no war on...what's the name of my kingdom again?
Breeding Rights
Fantastical Familiar if they swear loyalty to me and me alone. A beast of divided loyalties is of no use. THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE MASTER

I imagine elves will rebel somewhere along the line due to my drow/changeling leaning. Hopefully I can play the undead angle and sic them on Orla, killing two birds with one stone.

OK, NOW I should be free of the dice shit.

>>54453356
History: Familiar face (90)

Age and gender: 17, Male

Race: human

Starting location: Shade Academy

Semblance: Taskmaster

Gifts/talents
Intelligence (80)
Will (70)
Combat (30)
Tactics (10)
Ferocity (0)


Weapon/ mods
Variable: Shotgun + katana (700)
Additional form: Grenade launcher (600)
Collapsible (550)

Items/gear
Scroll
Armor (450)
Rebreather (400)
Wilderness gear (350)
Parachute and grappling hook (200)
Targeting glasses(50)

>>54453850
Everybody hated her for 5,000 but no one dared raise a finger against her. Was she just 2gud and thus as her killer you got some mad cred or maybe the Fae kingdom is just too tolerant and polite?

>>54454334
orla is best girl

>>54454334
>>54454361
>>54454407
That's an interesting build, but I kinda feel like your realpolitik approach is misguided. We're talking about a kingdom of weird fuckers who apparently generally hated your predecessor, who nevertheless stayed in power until some random mortal fucker came along and killed her. Most of the potential brides don't really seem like they'd be too eager to rebel. As just some weird foreigner who waltzed in and declared himself King you might just be killed, replaced and forgotten about, but the CYOA implies that marrying one of the princesses takes care of most of such problems.

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>>54452257
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9RVTvwZUAyM

>Who do you love?
Henny, of the Fauna clan, Queen of Sleeping Dreams

>Fae Compulsions of Marital Bliss
True Love!; Mutual Major Advantage 10
Interests; Mutual Minor Advantage 10
Attraction; Mutual Major Advantage 10
Libido; Mutual Minor Advantage 10
Empathy; Mutual Major Advantage 10
Dominance; Mutual Minor Advantage 10
Support; Mutual Major Advantage 10
Others; No-Deal

>Aspects of Fae Influence
Pointy Ears 7
Eyes 6
Antlers 5
Tongue 4
Cute 3
Aposematic 2
Plant Life 0

>Reversal of Prey's Folly
Fantastic Familiars
Heartstone
Bloom


Humanity was overrated anyways.

I am now Dalas, founder of the Flora clan, King of Waking Nightmares.
The title is scarier than it needs to be. Don't touch me without my permission, and you'll be fine.

During the day, I oversee the more militant, predatory, and industrial aspects of our realm. At night, a more benevolent and revelrous side is influenced by our beautiful queen.
Our extreme influence over eachother means that neither side is completely out of control. So that the Fauna clan won't feel so alone, castles and towns wander about during day, and settle down to relax and celebrate at night. Each of these holdings contains a monstrous servant who owes the crown a debt, and is guarded by toxic plant spirits that can choke the life out invaders.

Now, if you'll excuse me, the sun has set and my wife wants me to sit on her lap.

>>54453412
>shilling the discord
>encouraging namefaggery

stop

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Didn't get a chance to do this one before the last thread got archived

>World
Nobledark, since saving a shitty world would be awesome

>Inherent power
Guess I'll be a Marisa on this one and take skill thief

>Birthright
Marked hero since I watch a lot of anime and play Fire Emblem

>Weapon
Solais, again due to Fire Emblem but also due to it reminding me of Excalibur. And the Kriscarn, because it sounds awesome.

>Armor
Scarlet cape, since its power is pretty awesome, plus I could still wear a bit of armor under it.

>Mentor
Since I'm going sword and knife, I'll have to go for Fara Antor.

>Companions

The Aegis, since an unstoppable tank would be helpful, and Tatrenua, since a support could be useful.

>Mount

Giant crow, since I could train it to drop shit on my enemies.

>Starting location

The slums, since I may as well help the worst off first.

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>>54454605
To be honest, that political fuckery is what gets my rocks off. It's an aspect I like from both this and the Vampire Brides one. There, I even made it a Constitutional Monarchy(with the caveat that, as the King, it is I the one who gets to write the constitution) divided in 13 votes and seven different Ministries.

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Here's the pictures and titles for the fourth and final page. If you have any objections speak now or hold your peace just kidding, I don't expect you to ever hold your peace; never change. But in seriousness it will be a very long time before I'll want to add more characters after this page, so if you think I missed out on your comment from before say something.

Demonology finished when?

>>54455272
Don't add more characters. Expand on the current ones instead as a DLC or some other.

Quality > Quantity

>>54455272
Contractual Enforcer a qt. Hope her personality doesn't suck.

>>54455292
>Don't add more characters. Expand on the current ones instead as a DLC or some other.
I'm going to do this page. Then I may make a DLC for this. We'll see. Can't force things. All I can be pretty sure of is that I'll make *something* after this.

>>54455292
Some more characters would be nice, but I agree with quality being over quantity.

>>54455272
>Biomanticle Alchemist
A man after my own heart.
Literally, I could see him asking me to show him what I've learned by making a working heart.

I know exactly how my roster will look, and I'm excited to how he'll interact with it.

>>54455272

>>54446660

I personally like nature, nature magic, animals, lightning magic (and weather magic more generally), and I guess archery, stealth, and healing. And persuasion/charisma.

In a friend or a lover I like cheerfulness, intellect, passion (e.g. dedicated to a cause), humility, and compassion.

So with that in mind, there are a lot of good choices here, since many of them have at least one of those traits.

>Mentor
There are a lot of good choices here. Sulvora (druidism & communicating with animals), Imindis (archery - but since a lot of her archery has to do with her genes, how does she "teach" me that?), Calladan (protective magic & healing), Evala (protective & wind magic), Lothienye (healing, nature), Umur (healing, but also other stuff I don't care about) Githiue (healing, but also melee it looks like, which is meh), Suse (legendary healing), Mesym (nature, archery, air magic), Nina (summoning animals), Masorn (lightning), Oaksrtrider (plants), Abeta (talking to birds, but I don't care about the fire), Redar (mindreading animals). Whew, too many good choices.

>Lover
Literally all of the women have something about them that's appealing. But for now my top choices are Sulvora (smart and dedicated to her cause, and she's also nature-focused), Imindis (humble, sweet, and her bio really pulls out to my heartstrings), Cilia (passionate and really feels her emotions), Lothieneye (cheerful and passionate and nature-oriented, though idk if I could handle the "don't go into civilization AT ALL" thing), Githiue (probably my #1 pick - she's loving and dedicated to a cause, even if I've never heard of Punora before), Suse (pure and pacifistic), Siga (dedicated etc.), Evet (intellectual - and i'm curious about that aristocratic life), Kathil (cheery)

>>54455446

>(continued)

>Friend
This is an even harder choice. I think I'd either pick for party balance (personality wise, but also in terms of survival in combat, etc.) after I've picked the other two. Most likely I'd pick one of the runner-ups for the mentor or lover slot.

>Final choices
Githiue is my lover. My mentor, Suse, will teach me legendary healing. Kathil will be my good friend.

So basically we'll travel the world spreading love, healing people, and cheering people up with music and stories.

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>>54455049
>Cyber Eyes
>Flexible Frame
>Lightning Reflexes
>Accessible Memory
>Assisted Aiming
>Fast Thought
>Cyber Limbs (both legs)

>Sterile

>Nyla
>Timothy Cole

>Rescue

Speed is life

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>>54455272

I can't tell if I'm getting used to your writing or if your writing improved as you transitioned from setting to profiles, but editing probably doesn't apply as much as I first thought. (I can still go over it if you'd like.)

Your word choice is patchy in places, but given your rate of progression, I'd say you're on a roll. It's your voice, embrace it.

I'll post what I think of your characters when you hit another milestone. There are a few I prefer.

>>54455272
>>54455545

As for the new page, they all look great so far, but obviously I have to see the text first.

>>54452469
I still think the marriage contract thing needs an overhaul. Just my two cents. Unless you want a slave as a wife (which, sure, some might, but not everyone) there are zero tradeoffs that you have to make in that section. I'm sorry that I don't have a more specific suggestion, though.

>>54455423
Cool! Won't be until sometime this weekend (at least 12 hours from now) so don't wait up. Not that I'm presuming you would.

>>54455446
>>54455492
Great to read; I'm glad you saw so many positive traits in the options. Do note that since you picked Githiue as your lover and your mentor, you are permitted to pick a third person for your "party" if you want, you just won't be quite as close to them as the others.

>>54455559
Thanks! I did a bit of editing since the last time I posted, and after I've finished the last character page, I'm going to read the whole thing aloud to check for errors (my best technique for editing, anyway) before I post all four pages together.

>>54455272
Neat. I was hoping for some non-human allies.

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>excited about doing companion part to CYOA
>get to it and immediately have no ideas on companions to create

>>54455702
When I'm in that situation I go picture hunting to spark my imagination.

>>54455272
Y'know, I'm half tempted to just pick all my options from this page. Lizardman still looks awesome, and I'll probably choose him as my new mentor.
Is Triton gonna be the classic fish out of water trope? (pun fully intended)
And I'm glad you took my half giant suggestion, even if I do wish it was a woman instead but I know that's just my dick talking

>>54452469
Actually, I do have one suggestion regarding the marriage contract.

The primary "problem" (acknowledging that you may not view it as a problem) is that a lot of people (certainly me, and others too judging by builds) see the "mutual" options as the best. And they're free, which means you can just take all of them and move on, without much thinking or reflection.

It might be interesting to have to balance between mutual/his advantage/her advantage. Like, maybe you can have no more than half of them be mutual, and the rest have to add to exactly zero to "balance". Just a thought.

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>>54455663
>Won't be until sometime this weekend
It'll fly by for me. DMing multiple games until monday.

>>54455272
>No jolly, hedonistic-but-wise Drunken Mistress
Still very good /10.

>>54455770
>DMing multiple games until monday
Hah. I'm DMing something tomorrow, too. So, we'll see if I get this done before the game. Some of these characters may show up as NPCs; waste not, want not.

>>54455728
Yeah, I'm sorry I can't have flipped genders for every character. One of the DLCs I'm already half forming in my mind will have an optional treasure with a one-use gender-swap curse, usable on any one character. "Oops! You accidentally stumbled upon the cursed rune ____". But, if that's not to your taste (and I certainly understand it not being), then I can just say "sorry".

>>54455710
Oh no I have pictures I would like to use it is what got me excited, I just dont know what to do with them

>>54455792
>Hasn't seen the description for the Monk of the Tranquil Touch yet.
But no "drunken", just "drinks".

>>54455663
>Do note that since you picked Githiue as your lover and your mentor

That was a typo on my part - I meant to pick Suse as my mentor to teach me legendary healing.

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>>54455555
I'm going to take a bit and admire those digits

>>54455846
Hah! That is going to inflate her ego something fierce.

You really are going to be a bunch of legendary healers, though, so have fun!

>>54453356
RWBY? Fuck yes.

>History
Guardian, since my favorite character is Ruby and I tend to like heroes that fit this archetype
90
>Age/Gender
Male, 17

>Race
Human

>Starting Location

Beacon, because why not eh? Maybe I'd meet team RWBY.

>Semblance
Fire sign- Force of nature

Fire is awesome, and has infinite applications

>Gifts
Hope 80

Will 70

Intelligence 60

Agility 40

Energy 20

>Talents

Tactics 0 (Gotta be like Joseph Joestar right?)

>Weapons
Melee, whip sword(think the threaded cane from Bloodborne)
Ranged, MP7
700
>Weapon Mods

Dust mod, 650
Weight Reduction, 550

>Items & Gear
Scroll

dust charges x4, 350

rebreather, 300

dust collection x2, 100

armor, 0

>>54455899
no need for the name friend

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>>54453698
>yuri-centric
>pic related
>Who are you?
ZBG
Not sure if I'd quite fit in what with my man bits but best of luck regardless!
>>54453700
>Are you an author?
Yes.

>>54455792
>>54455845
In truth, I should add, that it was an art limitation. I wanted to have a female "drunken master", but just could not find any art that reflected that.

>>54454862
>World
Nobledark
>Inherent power
SkillThief
>Birthright
Marked Hero
I swear I'm not copying, its just that all the other options so far are pretty shit
>Weapon
Khanda
Kriscarn
>Armor
Fugitive hood
>Mentor
Angel Bitch
>Companions
Wanderer
Micaela
>Mount
Hawk Griffin
>Starting location
Main Bazaar
Here's were the fun
>witch enchants ranger's arrows to be more accurate over massive distances
>Witch links Hawk and ranger's vision
>Use ranger to see targets over the horizon
>Snipe everybody

>>54453698
All the girls are authors?

>>54455945
You would just be converted into a cute girl, man.
>>54456081
No, no. I'm just putting all the authors that want to be in it in as cute girls, but they won't be every companion. There will be several non-author companions, just to fill in gaps in niches and stuff.

>>54456293
How do we tell which are authors?

>>54455272
>>54455559

Eh, hell. I'm already reading, might as well give my thoughts now:

Hmm, your formulaic writing style seems to work well. Intro-Personality-Traits-Abilities is a common one, though you swap them around in places. Oddly enough, your writing style changes from a fairly casual one to a more clinical one in the profiles. A bit more "tell" than "show" (Authors use 1st-person speech or different perspectives to get around this), but you compress the information well, and write quickly and consistently.

It's a bit funky when you reference your characters to each other to compare/contrast. If you can spare the effort, moving them next to each other would be ideal. It's a bit hard to easily compare characters we've just been introduced to.

To list your more unique characters:

Lei: Her personality shines through better than most other profiles.
Mumbali: A more unique character class and design.
Imindis: The tiefling that fights her past. A classic that expands a bit on their background.
Clara; Wulfwe: I like the two takes on the barbarian. That, and I like the female warrior archetype as a whole.
Cilia: I really like her ability and class design. It's much more unique than the more D&D style class/personality combinations the others have.

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>>54456293
...
Okay if you want to cute-ify me, I'd be alright with that...
How do we do this interview thing?

Anyone have the Lewd RWBY CYOA?

reminder that im still writing a new rwby cyoa, just very slowly

>>54455272
So we get to choose one of each? where's the other pages?

>>54452286
Typo under Antennae.
>. . . to incoming sense physical danger.
Switch around 'incoming' and 'sense'.

>>54456413
Just PM me ("Rosanon") from the main discord server.
>>54454848
Sorry. I just need an online IM service so that the thread doesn't get shit up with worthless posts asking things to people.

>>54455272
>>54446660
I feel like the CYOA needs to be more specific about what you can learn from these people. Do you just get all the abilities from your chosen mentor (the most "fun" approach but it makes no sense as written), or do they just teach you what they can while you develop your own that might have nothing to do with them?

>>54455919
Okay

>>54456511
>Sorry

Eh, don't mind me. I think author CYOAs and the spread of namefagging in general is bad for these threads, but I'm getting unreasonably grumpy about it, especially when I try to encourage live and let live as an approach to the other shit that gets thrown about here.

>>54456414
There's a lewd one? How interesting

>>54456516
I'm thinking something in the introduction saying that because of the magic that brought you here you will gain the natural talents of your mentor or maybe "those closest to you" implying you gain powers from all three.

>>54455272

Gnomish inventor seems like a super played out trope... careful with that one

>>54456677

Yeah, make him a trencher, sapper, siege warfare expert, derigible pilot. Something NOT WoW gnome-y

>>54455272
>manliest dota 2 hero
ma nigga

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>>54454862
I feel like being the BBEG
>world
Noble Dark
>power
Born Leader
>birthright
Cursed One
>armor
Hyperion,
>weapons
Chosgarach and Kodring
>mentor
Witch Allyn
>companions
Wanderer and Erefexus
>mount
Cliff Jackal
>Location
Slums
>plan
Step 1: Gain control of the cults and cement myself as rebel leader
Step 2: Incite rebellion
Step 3: Create dictatorship centered around myself
Step 4: Plunge land into darkness
Step 5: ?????
Step 6: Profit

>>54455663
>>54456378

Umur: Stronger take on most elder magi.
Githiue: Githue is in an odd place where you gather more of her personality from the god she worships, but she has a really striking portrait.
Sir Tane: Good background writing.
Suse: You break character in your writing here and it sticks out. Odd, but I think it works.
Siga: I love her art (Kaladesh!), but the serious personality type is not a very interesting one (to me). More because it says less about the character than it does about their duty; Hard to draw a bead on them.
Nina: Another writing shift here. Helps her stand out.
Masorn: The showboat character is always a good one to include.
Sheli: A non-generic dwarf, and she's the only dwarf at that. I like her.
Lady Evet: Her personality shines through easier than other characters.
Abeta: A character with a more developed background. Very Unique.
Kathil: Tinges of "yandere". Not overwritten.

Overall: You seem to get more comfortable picking out archetypes as you write along. You start with more generic Mage, Druid, Paladins, and do more unique things later in the CYOA.

Expansions/DLC: Since you've already chosen to "go wide" as opposed to "go deep", all you can really do is provide a section for player or world building. I'm not sure how much it would add. I don't think it's reasonable to expand on characters individually, there are far too many. Adding more and more characters like Travellers/Pokemon Personified would be more intriguing I think as it would strain your ability to create unique characters.

My build: I think the best way to build this would be to pick the lover first, then use them to determine a quest. Then pick a mentor and friend to shape my abilities to match the quest and my personality. Balanced party and all that.

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>>54455272
>>54456378
>>54456874

Potential Lovers: Imindis, Githue, Suse, Wulfwe, Sheli. I think these characters are the most attractive in terms of personality. I'll go with Wulfwe because she seems well balanced in terms of strength and intelligence, and you planted a few seeds for a background to make things intriguing. (Cast out; bitterness)

Friend: Tige the Monk, his lack of focus on "small talk" and preference for philosophical debates means group interactions will go smoothly. It's weird to have outsider/insider conversations in a small group. Basic Training is a plus.

Mentor: I'm built light, and function best as a caster of some sort. Healing is a critical skill. Oddly enough, there are quite a few mentors, but Sir Calladan looks like the best for healing.

Party: With Tige, Sir Calladan, and Wulfwe, we have a fairly martial, fairly serious party composition. Assuming I can't just spontaneously learn magic, I'll pick up skirmishing from Tige and Healing from Calladan to be some hybrid Monk-Cleric. Tige and Calladan might get into philosophical arguments, but it would be interesting, if not cordial. Ideally, we will do standard good-adventure things like hunt bandits and protect villages, and eventually Wulfwe would find another purpose in life or otherwise resolve her past. If Calladan has his way, all, or most all of us might turn to altruism and join the order.

Overall thoughts: I like how this came together. Unlike more "build everything" CYOAs, you give us a buncha characters and make them interact. I think the hardest thing might be developing a quest for the players to tackle. I was able to generate one from having a characters with a mysterious past and a character with a strong worldview. I think character and builds without a strong background or goal will make it hard for the player to develop their quest or overall goal.

You developed this rapidly and provided a quest framework with only 3 choices. Impressive job I say.

>>54453276
What Is This Build For?

>>54456378
Thanks for the in depth analysis, truly. Some good points about the compare/contrast especially.

>>54456476
First three completed pages are in the last thread, which I'm too lazy to link, sorry.

>>54456516
hm... I'll try to add more clarity without "over-defining" things. It's meant to be that you have the potential to learn anything, but it would be easiest to learn from your mentor or other companions. Mentor is more a mentor because they are showing you the ways of the world, than because you are learning their specific abilities.

>>54456677
It's a fair point; I'll take care.

>>54456874
Really good input as well. I appreciate the insights into what works with the characters, and points on DLC. I definitely had no intent on expanding on each individual character.

>>54456928
Really appreciate it. Don't know what else to say.

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Post your comfiest cyoa

>>54456613
You had a list of all the RWBY waifu's, and you picked for of them to bonk. And each one had a special ability that came with picking them, in addition to group bonuses. So you picked Emerald, so now fucking a girl would turn her into a loyal minion, and then you picked Arslan, and then you had the team bonus where fucking a girl turned her skin brown over time.

I haven't found it in the archive, so my only options right are go looking through all the archived cyoa threads, or hope someone here has it.

Can someone please post the most recent version of Necromancer?

>>54452469
Don't listen to the people (that one guy?) talking about doing away with the marriage contracts. It's an interesting flavor for the theme of the CYOA and they're completely free to ignore it entirely. Honestly speaking, I can't even understand why they're against it since it doesn't affect them at all, especially since you added in the free Mutual Minor and Major options for these types of people.

How would a Dune CYOA look?

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>>54457155
This one

>>54455272
>Gnomish inventor

So he's going to be a mad scientist? Sounds cool.

>>54457361
Probably like a bunch of sand? But that's just my best guess.

>>54457381
Cougar sill has a shit bonus and still has that typo where the mystery box is not a mystery

>>54457381
Thank You!

>>54453235
>Reptilian

>Special Abilities
Increase Strength
Increase Defense
Natural Weaponry (Claws)
Bio-Laser

>Boss Perks
Enhanced Strength
Enhanced Defense
Enhanced Regeneration
Bio-Missiles (Homing Spikes)
Band of Mooks (stealth trained Henchmen)

>Drawbacks
Exposure
Budget Rangers
Magical Girl Team

>Final Stats
Strength - Final Boss
Defense - Extremely High
Speed - Low

Bring on the heroes. Bring on the cops, the s.w.a.t. teams, and the feds. I am the bringer of destruction. I am all but completely immortal and indestructible. My henchmen will spy on my greater foes and play on their weaknesses until I can start killing them off, one at a time. Once my foes have been crushed, this city, and eventually this world, will bend their knee to my ingenious creator and villainous leader.

>>54456455
I...
This is far better than expected.

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>>54453235
Grabbed this CYOA awhile ago. My build's probably outdated, but eh.
>Mammal

>Special Abilities
Multiple Limbs
Increased Strength
Increased Defense
Increased Speed

>Boss Perks
Enhanced Strength (-2)
Enhanced Defense (-2)
Enhanced Speed (-2)
Enhanced Regeneration (-1)
Electrical Discharge (-1)
Shadow Step (-1)

>Drawbacks
Budget Rangers (+2)
Magical Girl Team (+3)
Dark Hero (+4)

>Final Stats
Strength - Extremely High
Defense - Extremely High
Speed - Extremely High

Holy shit guys! Check this out! The baka got super fucking lucky!

>>54444444

>>54452159
>House
House Obcultus (+1 science or magic class each year)

>Year 1
Martial Arts, Basic
Concealment, Basic
Observation, Basic
Alchemy, Basic
Genetics, Basic
Communication, Basic
Intuition

>Year 2
Swordplay, Basic
Poisoning, Basic
Investigation, Basic
Assuagism, Basic
Medicine, Basic
Sociology, Basic
Wilderness Training

>Year 3
Small Arms, Basic
Distraction, Basic
Acrobatics, Basic
Transfiguration, Basic
Alchemy, Intermediate
Genetics, Intermediate
Immunity

>Year 4
Penetration, Basic
Brewing/Distilling, Basic
Concealement, Intermediate
Transfiguration, Intermediate
Arcane Study, Basic
Genetics, Advanced
Alchemy, Advanced

>Extracurricular
Occult Club

I am not going to do nice things.

>>54457615
Such wasted gets really make me suspicious about current admins/janitors messing with the count. No, not that count; just the post number count.

>>54453082
>>54453138
I remember this one

>>54457671
I am now thinking about what kind of a cyoa would be if it was about you being a count.

>>54457873
A vampire count, a -normal- Hapsburg count, a galactic count, or you as some sort of esoteric one of a kind particle count in some numeric system?

Cause each of those sounds awesome but hard to put in CYOA format (except the first one ironically enough)

>>54457873
>>54457930
We'll there have already been at least two CYOAs with "math vampire" powers as inspired by Count von Count from sesame street.

>>54457930
Didn't we already have a galactic count CYOA?

Solar Inheritance or whatever the name was.

>>54452257
>Bride
Tianna

This one is tough, just like Vampire Brides was. Tianna, Maurelle, and Elfie are my top choices, but they're all so damn quirky. I think Elfie and Maurelle would eventually drive my batshit with their optimism and pessimism respectively, so I'll go with Tianna. God knows at least she'll keep things fresh.

>Contract
True Love, Mutual Minor
Interests, Mutual Minor
Attraction, Mutual Minor
Libido, Mutual Minor
Empathy, Mutual Minor
Dominance, Your Minor
Support, Mutual Minor
Others, Your Minor

Tough stuff. I'm comfortable with the Your Minor Advantage for Others, since Titania's little blurb seems to indicate she's down for that anyway. It'll be a little tough to deal with her feelings and interests intruding into my thoughts, given the out-there nature of the Changelings, but maybe it will give me some insight.

>Fae Aspect
Pointy Ears
Fairy Eyes (6)
Horns (5)
Antlers (4)
Tongue (3)
Plant Life (1)
Wings (0)

Horns and Antlers? Not sure how that's going to look. Maybe combine them into Horntlers.

>Public Works
Fetch Factory
Fantastical Familiars

It may take some time, but my next priorities would be Heartstone for infrastructure, reclaiming the Dark City, reestablishing the Seasons, and reviving the Spritewell. The two I choose were simply to appease the wife and Nesbit, since he was nice enough to help me with all of this.

>>54457949

HAHAHA hahaha what? You need to share that gem man! for science!

>>54457967
Not exactly a galactic count, you'd get to choose your own nobility title and the smaller fries were more mobile while the big fishes were more powerful. A specialized galactic count would be somewhat different, something like, here there are x threats, these are the houses you can marry with, these are the other niggas that have a vital resource and these guys are pissed at you, these are your genetic augs, these are the planets near your starting point and shit. It would be like stardust meets supersoldier crossed with zodiac brides but with more pollitics.

>>54457987
Oh, hold up. I get three public works

We're retaking the Dark City, boys!

>>54458057
The Eye
The Totem
The Succubus

The only right choices.

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If this goes on, I might have to make a separate page for long missions, since I plan to have three.

>>54458093
>Not having the soldier massacre your outgroup of choice

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>>54455702
Make waifus!

>>54458057
Same build as last time; one that can commit a lot of arson for purposes of collecting insurance money.

>The Eye
>The Mole
>The Mask


>Use eye to learn about insurance and arson
>Purchase and insure buildings and/businesses
>Use Mole to teleport to place and burn it down
>Teleport home and wait to hear about mystery arsonist and cash in insurance money

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>>54458150
Fuck waifus!

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>>54458163
Yes! I love doing that!

>>54455555

Pentuple fives.

This build must be The One True Build.

>>54458057
The Succubus, the Alraune, and the Sheep Girl.

I'll make money selling the alraune's fruit and perfumes and the sheep girl's wool, and then spend the rest of my time getting my brains fucked out by the succubus. The alraune can probably even make some aphrodisiacs for me and the succubus, and the efficient rest granted by the sheep girl will be great for quickly recovering from the succubus sex so I can go back for more.

>>54458130
>Making war with the soldier instead of love with the succubus

>>54458163
Well, yeah, that's what they're for.

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>>54458163
Obviously.
How else are you suppose to give them the mana they require to continue existing?

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>>54457117

>>54453774
cool cyoa. Don't know why its's not getting any (you)s.
I'd go:
>Personal Pack
>Explorer
>Multicompass
>Dog

>>54452257
Made a couple of builds for this.

Wife: Shaylee
Marriage Contract:
>True Love: Your Major
>Interests: Mutual Minor
>Attraction: Your Major
>Libido: Mutual Minor
>Empathy: Your Major
>Others: Her Major
Fae Aspect:
>Pointy Ears (Short, but pointy!)
>Fairy Eyes (Solid silver; wispy)
>Antlers
>Tongue (Forked)
>Large
>Swarthy
Public Works: Mousways, Fetch Factory, Dark City

The Ghast King, the Missing Monarch, the Silent Footfalls, and the Fucking Moose Giant; Fairy King Urdon goes by many titles, many given to him and a few purposely spread for propaganda, but the moniker he lives up to the best is that of the Spy Lord. Not much goes on within or outside of the Land of the Fae without him knowing, or at least, not for long.

Tales abound of foreign enemies seeking to infiltrate the fairy lands simply disappearing into thin air after meeting with a looming giant in the dark; a reminder to the Fairy People of their Unseen Ruler's protective hand as well as his uncomfortably pervasive grasp on all that goes on in their realm.

Wife: Maurelle
Marriage Contract:
>True Love: Her Major
>Interests: Her Minor
>Attraction: Your Major
>Libido: Your Major
>Empathy: Your Major
>Dominance: Your Minor
>Support: Your Minor
>Others: Mutual Major
Fae Aspect:
>Pointy Ears
>Wings
>Antennae
>Tail
>Tongue
>Cute
>Luminous
Public Works: Heartstone, Sun’s Tail, Seasons

The Happy Prince Baum, beloved of his domain. He wanders the land of fairies as he likes, his appearance like the brilliant morning star to his devoted subjects who hold him dearly in their hearts. With him always is his dear wife Maurelle, each like the sun and moon as, some say, the Sun Sprite's radiance and good cheer has even smitten the reclusive Dark Elf people.

Under his rule, the Dark and Light Elf peoples have been united as they have never been before or ever will be again and, with the return of autumn, fall, and winter to the realm, his subjects have come to call him the Seasonal Lord, the grand uniter.

>>54458652
Remake never ever.

>>54453412
So are you done soon?

>>54458867
Acheld was not really interested enough for me to want to do it. ZBG was, however, and I have thus almost finished the entry for him.

>You will never gather the images and skill to have something worthy as great debut in time to be turned in to a cute girl
It hurts

>>54458919
Make an interesting-enough button cyoa and maybe it will suffice. That's how I got my start.

>>54458919
>wanting to make CYOAs just so you can be in author circlejerks, even ironically

one of the worst things about these threads

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Purely companion based CYOAs are the most enjoyable. No damn fucking around with points.

Just good old world building.

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>>54459055

>>54456444
Tight!

>>54459046
Don't get me wrong Anon. I was already making my first CYOA before i knew about this the idea, getting in an author circlejerk is enticing to me yes. But it is not my reason to make CYOAs

>>54458120
Or should I make it shorter?

>>54459186
if you plan in making long missions it would be a good idea to make a separate page for them

>>54456505
Cheers, I'll fix that.

>>54453850
Because the blood is just a small part of it. He's a familiar so already part of the realm and you killed her but probably didn't mean to which is important. It also may not have even worked

>>54454574
Killing the King destabilizes the kingdom.

>>54455663
>>54455748
The contract is skewed on purpose and because it's a relatively short bit and doesn't affect the others I'm alright with that really. Not spending the MG is pretty viable and from a human ethical standpoint probably the right thing to do. Of course from a fairy ethical standpoint it makes you at best quaint and at worst deeply silly.

>>54459270
>Killing the King destabilizes the kingdom.
For, like, a second before they drink the royal blood and bind the land to them. What's there to keep ambitious individuals from taking the royal blood for themselves?

>>54459238
>Potentially 8 page cyoa
I planned to have 4 pages, how did it bloat

>>54459325
>It also may not have even worked
Chances are you just won the lottery by not blowing the whole kingdom up

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>>54458426
Feed them your blood.

>>54459335
Magic

>>54459325
Nah, see, just look at the intro of the CYOA. If it was as easy as just drinking their royal blood, it wouldn't matter, but you just happened to completely luck into royalty. Presumably, the reason why they couldn't just depose the previous king like they could to you if you don't marry some fairy princess is because she's way better than a total newbie like you at making sure everyone dies if she goes down.

>>54459440
That's a lot less fun for both you and her.

>>54459440
>would love a vampire gf
>fantasize about asking her what she wants "on the menu"
>would change my diet and take vitamins to add extra or less of certain things to my blood for her taste
>she gets carried away sometimes by how sweet it is and I feel weak and tired from blood loss while laying in her arms while she's feeding
>wake up with her fidgety and apologetic for losing control
>I don't mind because I know she would never actually hurt me and I want her to be happy and feel like she can use me to that end
I know I'm insane but it's still cute ok

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>>54459610
Repent. Vampires are incapable of feeling love, my fren.

>>54459055
>>54459064
Are there more of these?

>>54459625
Yeah right. And skeletons can't be friends.

>>54459610
I've had similar thoughts, though I didn't go into that much detail. I just imagined my blood would always be delicious and I didn't think about changing what I eat or anything.

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>>54459647
Don't listen to that templar, my fren. You are correct in assuming many vampires are loving, kind people. Would you care to meet some of my sisters? Just follow me to my dark, abandoned castle.

>>54453276
How does a roach post on cyoag?

>>54459678
You can't fool me. I know you are the templar in disguise.

>>54459678
>That moment when you would follow regardless of how convincing the vampire was.
Hey, I just want to die!

>>54459727
His sisters must be hideous in appearance. False flagging for their sake.

Have pity on them. Maybe give them a mercy fu-- bleed.

>>54459732
>turns out the vampire feeds off of suffering
>he straps you to a chair and forces you to relive the most embarrassing moments of your life for the rest of your mortal lifespan

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>>54459741
If they were in love too I wouldn't mind. They wouldn't even need to strap me in not that I would mind.

If my waifu has a fetish for making me relive embarrassing moments, then she'd love me. I'm a complete buffoon and would have plenty to share.

>>54459738
Hideous is fine. Nosferatu ladies need love too. I'm not much of a looker myself. But if they love me then it's all good.

>>54458892
Finish when?

>>54460001
Honest™ ETA™: 1™ Month™ (subject to Change™)™

Probably more like 2.

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>your favourite trope is almost non-existent in cyoas because it has cuckolding implications

>>54460160
Whats that anon?

>>54460160
>>54460212
get the fuck out

>>54460225
Nah, I'm curious as to what it was. Feel free to close the thread if it troubles you.

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>Tfw need to get a job
>but want to make cyoas
>but feel pressured for time
>and end up doing nothing productive all day

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>>54455272

With 32 choices now, surely it must be acceptable to deviate and allow for a bit more choices, no?

>>54460212
(Man)whores falling in love, abandoning their hypersexual lifestyles, and becoming monogamous. Guys or girls both are fine.

I only see pure and unblemished virgins OR extreme hyper-mega sluts.

>>54460264
With girls it will get anons angry, but at least it's totally works for guys.

>>54460264
Instead of used goods 'turning pure' Which is impossible since they've already been defiled, why not go the route of turning a perverted girl into a sweet and innocent angel, by showing her how much you love her, gently kissing and caressing, and cleaning her of her degenerate mind. Watching her blush and stutter like crazy at all the pure handholding you'll do to her.

>>54460264
Theres nothing wrong with that, though you're right in that it triggers some of the people who browse these threads a lot.

I've had at least one girl with implications of stuff like that into one of my works, but my stuff is more companiony than waifu, and I didn't go into the romance with them specifically.

>>54460297
>Instead of used goods 'turning pure' Which is impossible since they've already been defiled

that didn't take long

>>54460310
Sorry for being a normal person who finds natural revulsion in such things.

>>54396872
Did someone screencap this build?
>>>/trash/10522362
Or know how I can get to read it?

>>54460352
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/10515954/#10522362

>>54460322
I don't care for it myself, but I don't have your dedication to protecting innocent anons from making choices in a CYOA thread either

Good thing the cuckpatrol is here to protect us, ever ready to jump out and post REEEEEE at the hint of females sleeping with males other than themselves

>>54460367
Never understood that. I'm guessing all the anons who ree about woman not being virgins (aka: used goods) are actual virgins, or think they'll get some terminal disease from a woman who dares to touch another man.

>>54460367
Don't mistake me for some rabid purityfag, yes I prefer my waifus virgin but I'm in no way demanding there be no waifus with more lustfull personalities. I like harems and stuff like that with multiple participants, but once you start adding love to the equation it just feels wrong.

>>54460296
Why does it work for guys? Why does it appeal to women?

>>54460367
Just to add my 2 cents to the pile.
If you're going to pick a waifu for the sole purpose of fucking and the cyoa's focus is sexual, anyone will do, pure girls and sluts who have more experience if that's you thing. But if you're picking a waifu Specifically with the cyoa focused on who you want to Fall In Love With, (which most of the cyoas here are focused about. And I assume what most purity fags get mad about) Then there is literally no reason to have waifus who have fucked multiple guys unless you want 'Muh Sexually Experienced', In that case why do you want some other man to make her fuck her when you can delevop her yourself?

>>54460469
Simple human reproductive instincts: manwhore - successful male who is chosen by many females to reproduce, which means it's good genes, whore - a female who fails in choosing best reproduction partner and instead reproduces with anyone, bad genes.

>>54460544
That shit is dumb and a excuse. A (man)whore fucks because he likes to fuck, and a whore does that too

>>54460365
You're beatifiul.

>>54460542
If we're being somewhat realistic, and cyoas can be realistic, then I'd argue an adult, virgin woman is likely to have severe mental problems especially in this day and age. I'd be freaked out if the 24y old girl I was dating told me she was a virgin.

>>54460544
I agree with your first statement but your second is bogus. A girl having had many partners in no way implies bad genes. In tribal times girls would fuck all the Chads and not particularly care which one impregnated them. It could even be argued the girl with bad genes is the one who remains a virgin and has one monoganous relationship in her life with an average or even below-average guy. In tribal times only 20% of men reproduced. That's normal and good for the species.

>>54460579
SHit I thought she posted more. Or at least posted tits or some shit
Why'd she feel the need to let everyone know it was her? What's wrong with attentionwhores?

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>>54460585
>I'd be freaked out if the 24y old girl I was dating told me she was a virgin.
Wow.

>>54460585
>I'd freak out if the 24 year old girl I was dating was a virgin.
You're a fucking pussy for not making her an unvirgin as soon as possible and getting into a shotgun wedding. You're the worst for not marrying her as soon as she expose she's a virgin.

>>54460542
Depends on the CYOA, and how fantasy/wish catering it is.

Let me be clear, wish fufillment CYOAs are perfectly fine and fun, but they shouldn't be the only type. Its okay to have more realistic ones (even if they are still fantasy based), and in reality then use sometimes girls will have had sex with people before meeting you.

Mostly though, jesus I'm tired of authors having to be careful about accidentally triggering a cuckstorm everytime they write a girl that hasn't been locked in a tower without male contact all her life.

>>54460611
The majority of people would react that way to hearing a 24y old woman was a virgin.

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>>54460585
>I'd be freaked out if the 24y old girl I was dating told me she was a virgin.
I guess it's a damn good thing you're not a girl, then, anon.

>>54460611
I dunno if freak out is the term I'd use, but if she wasn't hideous I would assume there was some religious thing going on or something of a similar nature. I'd certainly consider it unusual.

>>54460626
Why would I want to marry some random girl I'm dating just because she's a virgin? Taking her virginity is a great way to make an older girl like that clingy too.

>>54460635
Oh shi-

>>54460634
I knew the world was turning into a degenerate, festering shithole but to hear this first hand here really puts it into perspective. People place fucking and hedonism on a higher pedestal than love and loyalty.

>>54460651
Or maybe she's saving herself for someone she loves?

>>54460704
I would chalk that up under religious thing or something of a similar nature. Its not a bad thing in of itself, but I would wonder why its taking her a while to find love.

>>54460699
Your post makes no sense. Someone having a sexual history doesn't make them incapable of love and loyalty. Just like being a virgin doesn't make someone more capable of love and loyalty. This whole discussion is ridiculous though because 24y old virgins don't exist outside of cyoas.

>>54460699
I'm not even sure what that guy is on about. Women are perfectly good for a fuck until at least 40, and most of them are good well beyond that.

If you want KIDS, now that's a bit of a different story, but 24 is still a good 6+ years before you need to start worrying about that.

>>54460699
Where have you been hiding? There's literally an app you can get for your phone that lets you find and fuck some rando in less than a day.

>>54460699
No, but people do associate fucking with love. If you've never fucked you've probably never had a lover which means you've probably got big problems socialising.

>>54460833
Asexuals can still fall in love. They just don't see any sexual desire in it. It's arguably the purest form of companionship if you can learn to live with it.

>>54460948
That's cool but has nothing to do with what I said, given asexuals routinely have sex with their non-asexual partners.

>>54460955
>given asexuals routinely have sex with their non-asexual partners.

Not necessarily. Maybe once on a full moon out of pity.

>>54460966
Wrong.

>>54460967
Mmmhmmm

>>54460974
Yuh-huh.

>>54460948
>Tfw no stoic asexual gf to embrace lovingly and just sit in peaceful silence together

>>54460948
I hate labeling sexualities because it reminds me why I loathe PC SJW trash, but Demisexual would the 'purest' form of love.

>>54460967
>>54460974
>>54460977
>Dear god, the autism.
Lets get back to cyoas, Anons.

What choices do you normally take, 9/10 times? Immortality? Wealth? Assured companionship?
Waifus?

>>54461000
I don't. Why would I? That's boring. You're boring, anon.

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>>54461000
Beauty.

>>54461000
Immortality, Time Control, Planewalking, Clone(Female)Don't bully Everything I need.

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>>54460997
>Demisexual
But to be serious and autistic, you are pretty much right. It would be a nice feel when demisexual waifu suddenly starts getting handsy.

>>54461000
>What choices do you normally take, 9/10 times? Immortality? Wealth? Assured companionship?
Magic, Be the little girl, Agelessness, You know the standard pack.

>>54461000
I try to make an effort to mix up my choices, but I generally choose defense over offence and comfort over wealth. Immortality is nice too, but I think everyone picks that.

>>54461019
>Clone(Female)
I also do this, but like to think it's an instance of me that split off when I made the clone, and the part of me that wants to be the girl.

>>54461000
immortality, shotgun

>>54461016
I love that image so much

>>54461000
Comfy, waifu, immortality is waifu can get it too

>>54460248
eh... I was considering allowing a "party" of five picks, but even if I do that, you only get to pick one fated lover, one fated mentor, etc. You'll have to work for it if you want to seduce more than one.

hmm... "rival" might work as an option...

>>54461000
Hiveminds, cloning, immortality(unless that's reasonably covered by first two). Bigger boobs.

The hivemind thing doesn't show up as often as I'd like, but that only makes sense, it's weird. I also flip a coin as to whether I go for "SCIENCE!" or spooky witch things.

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>>54461129
>giving the same companion Lover AND Rival

I need this.

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>>54452159
>cyoa has magic
>warriors get all the cute girls

>>54461199
Why 'want' cute girls?

Why not 'make' them instead?

>>54461188
I had been planning on doing that even without a Rival category.

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>>54461199
>get cute girl
>was actually a wizard under a glamour

>>54461129
Some other roles:

Student (either in that you're teaching them your skills directly, or that you're more like a coach helping them develop theirs)

Superior (they're in a faction and officially rank above you and give you commands)

Traitor (should be self explanatory)

>>54461000
Whatever is the most logical. I am a robot. If there is a problem I pick that which can fix the problem. If it's not clear I put it to numbers and go with the outcome. When there is only preference I pick convenience, the color black, or something sweet.

>>54461199
Don't worry my CYOA will have cute magicians

>>54461129
This >>54461230
Also,

Fuckbuddy
Crazy Aunt
Neighbourhood Woman Who Spends All Day Feeding Pigeons And Is Probably Either A Lunatic Or An Angel In Disguise
Skeleton
Secretly-a-skeleton

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>want to create a cyoa about conquering the oceans in a fantasy world
>no knowledge of seafaring
>not autistic enough to include a build-a-ship section

>>54461478
Learn seafaring problem solved

>>54461230
>>54461262
Rival definitely a go.
Student & Superior I'm not fond of because there are too few of them that would make sense for either of those categories.
Traitor... *maybe* I'll involve that in an optional DLC, but I'm definitely not going to force it on anons.
Fuckbuddy can just be an interpretation of Lover.
The rest are silly; you're silly anon.

>>54460997
>not being demisexual
It's literally the best. Hookup culture is the most disgusting thing since gays fucking a minute after meeting.

>>54461478
>anon learns seafaring
>becomes shiphand on The Gusty Gale
>sails away into the sunset, gone from /tg/

>>54461660
>Implying anon will not come back crashing his ship in to /cyoag/ bringing the best ocean conquerer CYOA ever made with the experiences he adquired

>>54461584
I'd cream my panties if you added an optional sibling option. Not enough cyoas have family options.

>>54461673
This cyoa needs a expansion.

>>54461691
That's nice to hear, and I'd like to expand it, but unfortunately I'm not a very creative person. Wouldn't know what to put. Waifus or something like that just seems generic.

>>54461687
hm... you mean like, adopted sibling? Cause these people are definitely not biologically related to you.

I *could* do a general "Adopted Family" option, where one of them becomes a surrogate mother, or a surrogate sibling. Both would be overkill, I think.

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>>54461673
>not actually a skeleton

>>54461673
Skeleton Rebel with a laser whip and a cursed longboat, obviously. Sailing the fuck away from this city.

>>54461717
I actually meant full Sibling. On second thought, it probably wouldn't make sense because of the premise. In my mind Sibling would have given you a shared background and some traits. It'd allow you to redesign yourself a bit too. It's my pet peeve so just ignore it.

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>>54455049
>Accessible Memory [5]
>Upload Knowledge (Military Tactics) [5]
>Upload Knowledge (Psychology) [5]
>Upload Knowledge (Hacking) [5]
>Upload Knowledge (Surveillance) [5]
>Fast Thought [10]
>Cyber Eyes [15]
>Unaging [50]

>Support Squad x2

>+ Extermination +

Cyborg hit-squads after midnight.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y8DekFFCE5c

>Looking for pictures for my cyoa
>Hey this looks pretty cool
>Half an hour later i am putting cutesy stuff in my folder
Why i am like this?

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>>54453055
>>54452599
OC!