/cyoag/ - CYOA General

Looking to do more work on the Rings.
https://pastebin.com/1xnAZsvw
Its not completely up to date with the code I have. I'm interested in new content (your weird interests), spelling/typing mistakes, and balance issues. The big remaining project I was looking at before posting the new version is a rewrite of Strange World, expanded by its various flavors, I could use help figuring out what that should look like.

also I didn't appreciate how quickly this board moves, I stop looking at it for a day and two full threads cap.

>>54275015

I choose berb

Is the Damsels and Devastation guy here? I have a question.

>>54275123
No. He didn't repost his cyoa in the next thread, which clearly means he killed himself.

>>54275089
>also I didn't appreciate how quickly this board moves, I stop looking at it for a day and two full threads cap.
There's a general running in /trash/: >>>/trash/10380153

>>54275172
which I'm trying to avoid out a probably unjustified paranoia that /trash/ is a big mass ban trap

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>>54275147
>which clearly means he killed himself.
I seriously hope not...
He was nice and really understanding about all of my mistakes in understanding his CYOA.
And it was a lot of fun...
Please don't disappear on us, D&D-san.

>>54275190
If it was, I don't think off-topic threads from other boards would get moved there at all.

>>54275253
from what I was told, it was made to house things removed from other boards to cut down on confusion of people who had their threads removed. However its also been over run with other people making actual threads there, since they started directing undesirables to that board officially, it looks even more suspicious. Its mostly failed at what it was for already

also only the paranoid survive and I'm not sure if my connection is static or not and I'm 6 months from relocating, I'd rather not risk it.

In response to the hunter cyoa

power level: great hunter
specialization: mariner
powers:
- improved lung rank 2
- beast eye rank 2
- strength rank 3 (11)
- regeneration rank 2 (8)
- endurance rank 2 (3)
- stealth rank 2 (0)
companions:
- megalodon x2
- babe
equipment:
- weapons rank 4 (electric trident) (8)
- net rank 3 (4)
- weight belt rank 2 (1)

I'm a GH in exile. I've got a small one man sailboat and I sail around where ever I want, being led by or leading my two megalodons. I'll make a point to visit all the coastal towns I can, helping clear out any monsters in the region and if any ships are traveling the same route I am, offer to escort them; however I don't want to stay anywhere too long lest I get into needless trouble with the local government for being an exile.

as an aside it seems to be very difficult to find a good water themed fantasy character online...

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>>54274830
Always remember: democracy is a mistake.

>>54275332
Yes, I personally prefer dictatorships but for some reason they're rather unpopular.

>>54275309
w-what

Are you in some place that will kill you for browsing /trash/?

>>54275105
berb a shit

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>>54275332
Fight shit posters with CYOAs!
Back! Back to the depths with you!
01/02

>>54275332
>>54275434
If I finish my CYOA, you'll get your wish. And the responsibility to prove it. but I'm working on it since September and only half-way done

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>>54275481
02/02

no, but I don't get a lot of entertainment off this site and I might not be able to ban evade until next year.

also this is getting off topic, I want to know what weird sexual things you'd like to see in this
>>54275089

>>54275449
its the only reasonable choice, the others all have really obnoxious behaviors

>>54275440
I think he's referring to that one time when moot made a furry board and banned everyone who posted there.

>>54275011
5 Matchsticks? But you only need three.
>Choose a form of Escapism (-3)
Obtain an idealized form of omnipotence, as defined by your own personal opinion on what that would be.

>>54275508
purple and orange

>>54275508
>someone spots your flashdrives sticking out of your computer
>they disappear

>>54275508
Red and orange, but...
Learning of their existence could be as simple as glancing at them -- after all, the person would then know that they *exist*.
Keeping that in mind, White.
inb4totallyscrewedover

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>>54275528
I like this.
I wish the girls had more personality, but this is still damn cool.

>>54275089
Nice interactive thing. I'm Feeling Lucky/Full Random needs some code work, since it's trivially easy to break the point tracking with those, but otherwise it's really effective.

Fixed Job seems to be missing (it's still referenced 3 times). I'm going to hate myself for saying this, but "Not By Myself" interacts with "Voyerism" and "Forced Reflex" in an exploitable way. The text of "Not By Myself" only excludes options that FORCE you to masturbate, not options that simply trigger WHEN you masturbate. By taking Forced Reflex on Not By Myself you cannot masturbate, and therefor any option that triggers when you masturbate (IE voyerism and its sub options) can never affect you.

>>54275508
I would say purple and orange, but I'm a sucker for mystery boxes....

>>54275528
I'l go with Anafenza, Elspeth, Traxex, Angelic Overseer, and Iomedae :^)

>>54275508
ITS BEEN 10 MINUTES DAMNIT

am on fone
someone post final genie cyoa
ploz?

>>54275685
I didn't write the baseline code or even half the things in it, it was pretty developed when I got it. The built in calculator is fucking cool though. Unfortunately its a piece of the code that I don't understand well so I'm not sure how I'd get it to say incorporate the extra points automatically, but its something I'd like to do.

>fixed job
oh yeah I think that was actually removed or dealt with by the person before me, I should probably clean that up.

I'll take a look at the not by myself thing

>>54275764
It was reposted a few threads ago.
>>54266377

>>54275756
the second half doesn't exist

>>54275756
I bet the person who posted it doesn't even have the mystery box.

So how do you guys feel about heavy text cyoas with little to no pictures? I was thinking about making one, though it might take me a while.

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>>54275756

>>54275309
You're more likely to get banned here than /trash/, you'll also find a more receptive audience.

>>54275930
Gimmie 'dat 2nd mystery box.

>>54275930
FAKE

>>54275922
Hit or miss. You're Highlander-level or close, or you're forgotten.

>>54275922
I personally like them, but in general people click on them less, especially if they're pdfs.

>>54275922
I think pictures are a great book to a CYOA, especially as mixing image and text is one if the strengths of the format. But there are some nice text CYOAs out there, so it's not the end of the world if you don't include pictures.

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>>54275943
>>54275957

>>54275147
Someone should repost Damsels and Devastation.

>>54275939
there the risk is a perma ban >>54275557

here it would be a day or two if I accidentally get lewder than is allowed.

this is also a temporary solution while I get this version done and decide where I should set up/if I'm going to continue working on this

>>54276002
Box B!

>>54275508
Blue and Orange. Smallest chance at getting caught in my life while providing the best benefits for things I could want.

>>54276002
B

>>54276002
>>54276023
>>54276028
These folks are already going for Box B so I'm going for Box A.

>>54276011
Trash has existed for a long while, anon. You're just retarded, as you first suspected. It's either there or bust, because you're not going to get very many responses related to your CYOA here.

>>54276002
I guess I'll pick B too. Y'know, join the mob.

>>54276077
/trash/ is pretty new

Also the main thing I wanted to do, the strange world upgrade, this might be the better board for working that out since its a little more conventional of a cyoa thing

>>54275922
>Text only CYOA
I strongly prefer CYOAs with pictures. There are some great text only CYOAs like Enchanted Rings, Handler, Altering History and Lavender, but the majority of text CYOAs are ultimately forgettable and very dry to read, there are a lot of text CYOAs which I have started making a build for and then just quieting half way, because it got boring.

i just wanted to let you know that i love you all, /cyoag/.

>>54276246
I'm doing my best to improve it. Thanks, anon.

>>54275922
>heavy text cyoas
So like Traveller and Order.

I love them.

>>54275922
I don't read them because if the author couldn't make himself find a dozen of pictures for his cyoa and combine them with his text in something as basic as paint net, he's probably a lazy fuck who didn't put a lot of effort into designing and writing his creation.

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>>54276246
I can't say I feel the same.

>>54276276
Dude ... finding pictures is the hardest part. I prefer quality content to shiny design.

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>>54276246
Be safe, friend. And God's blessing to you.

>>54276289
No, it only takes time and effort. Hard has nothing to do with it. And I prefer both, but shiny designs will always catch my attention first and helps immensely with immersion.

>>54275960
>>54275962
>>54275978
>>54276203
>>54276275
>>54276276

Thank you all for taking the time to answer. Also holy crap, Tokhaar Gol responded to me! This is a great day!

Ahem, anyhow, I guess that means I'll most likely end up using pictures for most of my cyoas (provided I actually have the motivation and creativity to make them, though they'll probably be pretty crappy, and it's possible I might not even make any.)

Thanks anyways though!

>>54276077
>because you're not going to get very many responses related to your CYOA here.
Considering most people are probably too retarded to figure out how to save the paste as .html, plus the fact that most people will be looking for image posts here, I think it's a decent number of replies.

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>>54276327
H-hello sister, is that your natural hair color?
Dying hair is vanity and vanity is sin, you know!

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>>54276327
"Y-yeah, you too...
I gotta... I gotta go take care of something..."

>>54276357
yeah I don't want to post the actual image I have given the lewd subject matter (its also less refined than that pastebin link).

>>54276289
I'm aware finding pictures can be very time-consuming. When I see a cyoa with good-looking pictures (not just pretty, they have to fit the theme of the cyoa etc.), it makes me hopeful that the author put some effort into his work. A wall of text in pdf format doesn't achieve that.

When I make my own stuff I get frustrated when I waste hours on finding suitable pictures. I need to justify wasting that time somehow

>>54276369
Just because she's a ginger doesn't mean she's soulless.

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>>54276023
>>54276028
>>54276037
>>54276080

>>54276445
OPEN THE GODDAMN CHEST

>>54276445
If I have success, can't I have literally everything else? Besides what's in the chest, of course.

>>54276445
>True Love
or
>Chest of Wonders
I'm going for the goddamn mystery chest! What's inside the 3rd mystery box?

>>54276470
Clearly the chest is worth more than success.

>>54276445
Success in...?
Because if it's as open-ended as I want, then I stick with it, and if it's limited severely (to like, business) I pick the Chest of Wonders.

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>>54276449
>>54276470
>>54276494
>>54276512

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>>54276369
You shall not covet the possessions of others, sister.

>>54276389
Matthew 6: 5-6. I understand.

>>54276445
Do not be tempted by this devilry!

>>54276516
I'm taking the box!

>>54276516
Box.

>>54276516
alright, i've gone far enough
i'll take the amazing chest

>>54276516
Black box! Time for the 4th mystery box.

Rolled 51, 40, 48, 52, 64, 53, 96, 62 = 466 (8d100)

>>54275528
Finally!
>>54276445
To be honest, Success was the first choice that popped out to me. Does that count for me taking it?

>>54276519
>Do not be tempted by this devilry!
Are you talking about the boxes? Because I'd totally go for the boxes.

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>>54276552
Follow the chest line from the beginning, dork
>>54276534
>>54276538
>>54276539
>>54276551

>>54276341

CYOA authors shouldn't feel bad if they don't want to waste all their free time finding pictures so that even the dumbest, least imaginative anons can enjoy them.

>>54276568
>>54276551
>>54276564
>Any wish I want from an ancient obelisk
or
>A nightmarish flesh box that screams in agony
Flesh box it is!

>>54276552
So I end up with Raphaelle, Eileen, Buratiel, Estrith, Brenda, Cecilia, Meghan and Christa. My group seems to have a lot of strength.

>>54276568
I wish that the obelisk is required to interpret this wish exactly as I intend it to be interpreted, and for total omnipotence in an easy-to-understand/control form.
I also remove everyone else's prize and any other similarly abused routes to omnipotence.

>>54276568
Do I get to keep the screaming flesh box after opening it? If yes then hand it over

>>54276609
>>54276600
>>54276610
You would deny us the flesh box? How could you be so heartless anon?

>>54276226
>FIGHT 3
>INT 3
>GUTS 3
>REP 1
>APPEAL 2 (3)


>Normal School

>Normal

>Lone Wolf
>Overflowing Spirit
>Brooding

>Taro
>Harima
>Fujimoto
>Yamaguchi

>Michiru

>>54276568
...I have to take the box, of course!

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>>54276226
Awww yeah

FIGHT 1
INT 1
GUTS 3
REP 2
APP 3

Weird school
Normal hair

Not a Robot
Love Triangle
Really Bad

The Freddie

Tennouji, Having, Yamaguchi

Eri

Just a regular guy, the hottest girl in school, and a lot of weird stuff.

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>>54276600
>>54276609
>>54276610
>>54276629
The obelisk turns out to just have a speaker recording, no wishes are granted

>>54276656
>Free Gabe Newell and finally get Half-Life 3
or
>Damn Gaben to eternity to get the Box of the Ancients
Time to get the Box of the Ancients! What's inside that 6th mystery box?

>>54276656

Video games are for fucking nerds, I kick caleb in the face a few times before grabbing the box

>>54276656
>flesh box required a wish
Then nobody gets a flesh box?

Guess it's over.

Can someone post Dream of Genie?

>>54276672
>finally get Half-Life 3
Ha! Like Gaben would ever do that.

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>>54276672
>>54276684
>>54276686
The box was beside the obelisk

>>54276719
Green

>>54276719
Blue

>>54276719
GREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN

>>54276719
>>54276726
>>54276731
These 2 went for the other choices, so looks like I'm going for the Red Box. 7th box here we go.

>>54276696
>>54275764
>>54275793

>>54276719
Blue.

>>54276719
Give me the red. Others are too pussy to take it.

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>>54276726
>>54276731
>>54276732
>>54276737
>>54276749
>>54276761

>>54276776
truly it is only now I realize I should have just kept the usb drives

>choose your own box general

>>54276776
>>54276761
Well, looks like we got red boxed. Thanks for the ride author.
So does this mean I can no longer physically manifest a body, or I can but with conditions?

>>54275508
>>54276791
This reminds me, did the white USB do anything or was it merely a key for the mystery boxes?

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>>54276827
"NEXT TIME, ON /CYOA/!"

Actually right now. Choose another box!

>>54276827
I blame this on faggot OP for making the thread too early.

>>54276847
Shipping container.

>>54276847
Bloody box

>>54276852
there's nothing wrong with it anon, don't worry about it.

>>54276847
The crate is the waifu option, probably, so I'm choosing it.

>>54276847
>>54276857
>>54276861
>>54276874
Guess I'm going for the stainless steel box, then.

>>54276847
I THINK the shipping container was the best one of these options.

>>54276847
Art deco.

>>54276847

Art Deco box

gimme that fancy suit

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>>54276874

>>54276719
>This entity offers 3 choices to end your journey
>Blue, Green, Red
FUCK YOU BIOWARE

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>>54276857
>>54276905

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SURPRISE GENIE

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>>54276519
>Matthew 6: 5-6
Yeah... Right. Can't be vain and pray in public after all!
Ehehe...
Lord, please give me the strength to resist those luscious, holy thighs...
>>54276847
>pic related
Crate, please.

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>>54276861

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>>54276893

>>54276938
>orange eyes
>Nazi waifu
kys

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>>54276906
>>54276907

>>54276975
But can it be hacked? Am I allowed to personally modify it?

>>54259736
You should clarify what happens if you pick a waifu whose requirements you don't meet. The info blurb says that marital distress can piss of the faction, but what does that mean? One loyalty point decrease? Three? A different amount depending on how far you fall short?

>>54276938
>Space Father
>Shred God
>Grimdark Fantasy

I WILL BE THE ROCK-BARIAN TO CONQUER THE WORLD WITH SHEER METAL
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JyfE55c_ZjI

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Silly me, I posted this in the dying thread after New Thread links had been posted:

So, in the course of my work on my design document for my Yuri CYOA, I have realized that I have accidentally finished before I even knew it. With that in mind, I would like to report that I am about to start crafting the Companions section in secret and, then, working on actually assembling the thing with images in its final form.

Therefore, if you would like a sneak peek at what kind of things are going to be in it or you would like to make any suggestions at all (please, please, oh my gosh, for fuck's sake don't be afraid to make suggestions), please do so now before I begin slowly killing myself with image collection: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jEIhgnDAVtiKR60HMK8smKhecnq5N9BmTyPaD_2LYeQ/edit?usp=sharing

Have a nice day, and thanks to those who voted for Gatcha in the recent Traveller poll. I greatly appreciate it.

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More mystery boxes! But will they always be good ones?

>>54277039
Big, meaty sausage.

>>54274830
Starting location: fungal bloom

Class: Druid
Boons: Map and Bonfires

Contacts: fellow adventurers and shopkeepers
Hostile: The stalkers

>>54276900
>World
Nobledark
>Power
Skill Thief
>Birthright
Marked Hero (I don't really like any of the options but whatever)
>Armor
Furtive Hood
>Weapon
Kriscarn
>Mentor
Fara Antor
>Companions
Erefexus
Wanderer
>Mount
Cliff Jackal
>Location
Castle Hall

>>54276938
This a new one?

>>54277049
Mystery box of course.
>But will they always be good ones?
Doesn't matter if it's a mystery box.

>>54277080
Yes.

>>54276938
I'll take Deus Vult and declare a crusade against the kayaks.

>>54276938
>Nazi waifu is a submissive housewife, not a military leader or a gestapo member
Boring, guess I'll take Shred God and Tsun Boxer GF.

>>54277049

This one's actually a difficult choice, but in the end I'll go with the 1k/day over the ideal body.

I'll just use my 1k/day to buy shit and resell it for less for a while, eventually weening myself off the 1k/day. You'd have to be completely incompetent not to get rich real fast with 1k/day free money, even if you can't accumulate money from that source.

>>54277166
>>54277123
Did y'all forget how to count to 3?

>>54277049
the waifu, obviously

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>>54277085

>>54276776
What about the Top secret White box?

>>54277039
>check your docs
>you describe middle-easterners as sand-people

I didn't know you were racist.

>>54277287
I also describe black people as Jungle Fever and white people as White Bread.

>>54277305
That's like saying that it's ok to run over a kid since the car you did it with was stolen.

Change it, please, it's such a horrible thing to have in your CYOA.

>>54277049
Money. The "disappears at the end of the day" thing isn't even a problem, I'll just invest that green paper into tangible things. Boom, problem solved. Now I can live the neet life I dream of.

>>54277334
I don't care.

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>>54277342

>>54277334
Back to tumblr.

>>54275930
I CHOOSE THIS BOX!!! WHAT IS IN IT

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>>54277287
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>>54277358

>>54277334
Lol, fuck off Mohammed. Calm your tits.

>>54277049
Took mystery box.

6 hours time travel, with it's downsides.
Learn all topics easier and get unique solutions to problems.

So basically I'm going to be super rich on the stock market and then become elon musk.

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>>54277384

Working on a CYOA.
Do you prefer statistics, even if they might be underutilized, or more elaborate descriptions, even if they may not be as easily quantified?

>>54277305
You should honestly change it.

>>54255021
First impression, it's really aesthetically fancy for an amateur.

Poor font choice though, and too many made up words.

Level five in both sorts of politics, since that's what I'll need to secure and hold my throne. I'll put my remaining classes into strategy, since this is broadly applicable. And the others, I'll take after becoming emperor. In the meanwhile, I can use my political acumen to, at the very least, ensure that the positions to which I delegate these duties are filled by loyal and competent individuals.

>>54255034
I'll betroth to both the Flame and the Cosmech. It's a bad deal by the numbers, but I hope to syncretize the two faiths and establish a modern religion of cosmech flame

Not gonna marry into the Crucibii, as satisfying their woman apparently requires a ton of personal combat skill, but I do hope to help them restore their worlds.

I don't think it's worth marrying into the Xernites, they're already pretty loyal and it would piss off too many.

Auxilios is an obvious no.

Qomani have a cute waifu but I don't yet meet her requirements. That said, they represent the empire's power. Supporting them in this symbolic way is a good start to get things rolling. She'll just have to wait until my skills pick up a bit before I can properly satisfy her. It shouldn't be too long.

I'm not going to give Renon the prestige of joining with them like this, but I am going to support Venhalia's actions surreptitiously. Once she's been successful, I'll take her to my side.

The unseen blades are super useful, but I'm not so sure about marrying into them. I'm afraid it would piss off too many. Well, looking at who it is though, I guess it's worth it.

I'm not at all sure that this is the right choice, but I'm not going to marry into Orion. At least, not now. If I can get a pledge from them to rejoin the empire, I can make a betrothal later. But I won't give them that legitimacy for nothing.

>>54277457
Fuck off faggot.

>>54277467
The Futurists already hate me, so there's not a lot to be gained by wooing them. I do sympathize with them, but their leadership seems fractious and anti-imperial, so I'd rather rob them of their support by granting the plebs increased power outside of Futurist control. Doing this will naturally put me up against the nobility, but I'll need to do that to restore Imperial authority anyway. Ensuring that Imperial authority benefits the plebs will help to ensure that I maintain plebian support even if I don't support the Futurists. Which I am not going to do. Swapping corrupt nobles for corrupt unions won't help anybody, and if they're not corrupt, they'll wind up supporting me anyway as long as I improve the lot of the pleb.

Solar Lords are already happy with me, and the people that would appreciate me marrying into them do not need further wooing either; they're either too pissed at me to bother with, or happy enough to be satisfied without such a marriage. But I intend to seat the reformed religion back in the Solar sector.

I'm going to keep in contact with Bassalia, but I don't think it's actually in the Empire's best interests to marry her.

And... What? No conclusion page? Surely there should be something where you can pick palaces, flagships, some initial military campaigns, or something?

Well, here's my final relations:

Flame: 8
Cosmech: 4
Crucibii: 4
Xern: 7
Auxilios: 0
Qomani: 11
Renon: 5
Blades: 8
Orion: 0
Futurists: -1
Solars: 10
Syntetica: 5

>>54277476
Cosmech Church is decidedly less happy with me than I initially hoped, and it looks like whatever I do to restore the Crucibii will need to be things that don't directly increase their power. Unfortunate! But the blades and Qomani will help me deal with the nobility (whether Renon, Orion, or any other nails that stick out) and once they're removed from their overly authoritative positions, I'll be able to make concessions to the plebs, thereby weakening the footing of the Futurists and the Cosmech. Hopefully I can then institute a doctrinal reform with the Flame Temple and incorporate some Cosmech theology, as long as Christina and her minions are pacified in public, it may be a tumultuous revelation, but it should be able to work given my high stats in pleb and patrician politics, and as a nice added bonus, I can probably get myself named a prophet.

This may not be a perfect strategy, but the Unseen Blades will definitely be able to help ironing out a few little wrinkles, and if there's a point where it all goes to hell (and there will probably be a few such instances, though hopefully all small in scale) then the Legios Qomani can come in.

>>54276900
World: Noble bright
Power: skill thief

Birthright: Marked hero
Armor: Astral mark
Weapons: Khanda and kriscarn

Mentor: Theodore
Companions: Zerria and Wanderer
Mount: Hawk griffin

Starting location: main bazaar

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>>54277384
>Take two characters from a previous cyoa
>Give them actual character
>/cyoag/ throws a large autistic fit about it and their status as waifus the cyoa creator had to separate the cyoas universes.

It will never not be funny.

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>>54277372

>>54277544
I laughed, but see last thread.

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>>54276900
Nobledark. I want to be the underdog and have a realistic chance of failure, but I want something to work towards. Injustice to correct or bad guys to oppose, stuff like that.

Leader.

I'll just be a normalfag.

Khanda.

Theodore.

Micaela and Erefexus.

Kitty Cat mount.

Slums.

Theodore, the slum elder and community leader. will teach the unlikely trio of new adventurers to be folk heroes, fighting against the exploitation of the poor!

>>54277419
I would say that descriptions are always better.

If you have

>Sword
>attack speed 3
>Damage 6

and

>Battleaxe
>Attack speed 4
>Damage 4

The sword will be seen as better but if you give the descriptions such as;

Sword
>A fairly long, thin, sharp blade made of steel. The weapons ability to parry incoming enemy attacks as well as it's ability to chop a torso or arm in half makes it the weapon of choice for most soldiers.

and

Axe
>This small axe isn't made for cutting down great oaks, but what it loses in chopping down trees it gains in chopping down people. While the reach isn't long if you manage to close the gap between you and your opponent this quick and hard-hitting weapon with surely best most foes you'll come across.


>>54277305
You should honestly change all of them, they all sound autistic as fuck.

>>54277457
>>54277334
Hows that safe-space working out for you?

I'm in favour of the casual racism.

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>>54277305
>White Bread

>>54277709
I honestly thought it was stupid, but if it pisses tumblr off it can't be all bad.

>>54277709
While I want to say this, I also think it sounds autistic and doesn't stand on its own merits. Unless the CYOA is specifically built on comedy (or pissing people off) I'd switch it for more accurate terms.

>>54276226
>elsie
damn i miss wgok

>>54277334
>>54277457
Welcome to 4chan. Now leave again.

>>54277419
I prefer descriptions, but stats have a few benefits. One is they normally take up much less space. They're also handy for baseline comparisons; humans are Str 4, ogres are Str 8, that kind of thing.

And of course if you're planning on specific mechanics stats may be necessary, even if it's just to qualify for perks or companions or the like.

>>54277039
>Reading school section
> Beat up, regular, prestigious
>Hope's paragon?
>It's a fucking Danganronpa reference, here of all places.
You motherfucker. I love you

If you take that option will get involved in a lesbian murder game?

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>>54278010
Read the Drawbacks Section

>>54277049
The money doesn't contribute to inflation much at all. A quick google reveals that the average amount of (new) money printed each day in the US alone is $27000000. That's like what, an extra thousandth of a percent each day?

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>>54277334
>>54277457
>Actual tumblr-kin posting in /cyoag/

>>54277467
>Marrying a woman who cheats on you during church services

>>54278057
It's not cheating if she can't get pregnant.

>>54277511
People threw a fit because it's a timeline where one guy gets waifus, they get stolen from him, turned into bound sex slaves despite that being the last thing in the world they wanted, then given to some new boy to fuck. Both you and your waifus get cucked and have your lives ruined.

>>54278067
That's the most retarded thing I've heard all day. Good job.

>>54278084
It's just plain old ethology. Cheating is bad because she could cuck you into caring for someone else's pointless baby. If she can't do that, then it doesn't matter, it's just a silly hobby.

Same as how incest isn't bad for only one generation.

>>54278133
>Anon only thinks of people as baby factories.
That's awful, anon. Cheating is bad because it's a betrayal of the love and trust you possess for the other person. It's not some mere matter of breeding like you're some mindless caveman.

>>54278075
Are you implying the guy who originally owns them doesn't die and they get recaptured?

>>54278133
Unless you're in a literal Oedupus like situation

>>54278153
It's not a betrayal if you both already knew and agreed that it was going to be part of the relationship, though. And you're informed about this before you've even actually met the chick, so there's no betrayal here.

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>>54278133
I can't tell if this is simply a masterpiece of bait or if we're dealing with the world's single most misguided idiot right now...
We may never know the truth, but we should all to try to use this an example of what not to be.

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>>54278026
You are making a perfect cyoa.

Upupupu

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>>54278200
Nope.

>>54278176
It does mean you're a pathetic loser though, anon.

>>54278164
Is that not an evil nightmare and a bad end for those girls?

>>54278207
Where's my tribal tattoo?

>>54278200
Not enough despair for your tastes, Junk-o, but there will be some.

>>54278211
bah, don't worry. It'll be all right in the end. I even promise your Best Girl won't die, either! :_:7

Imagine being as eternally asspained as a tumblrfag.

>>54275011
>Double penis length (might skip this one of it doesn't include girth)
>$100 a day
>Become a fantasy race (half giant)

>>54278276
>I even promise your Best Girl won't die
Well, that's comforting...
Joke's on you though, I've got a perfectly good masculine penis so I'm dodging this whole shebang!

>>54277261
Money
Body
Negatives on body

>>54278295
It doesn't really seem all that different from being an eternally pained autist mad about waifus and memory death, and we've got plenty of those.

>>54278264
branch or machine would probably be the easiest to monetize
but I'm gonna have to go with eyes of the present to spy on chicks in the shower

>>54278264
Eyes of the Machine probably have the most utility, but Eyes of the Overlord look the coolest.

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>>54278304
>spoiler
Don't worry, we've got ways to make you cute.

>>54275313
>Bmi weight and muscle mass and stuff
I think I could manage being a cool dude, if I got to be Ronnie Coleman huge without having to lift. Probably still lift for fun though.

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>>54278347
...
Nah bro, I'm good...

>>54277049
Money. Keep buying things that have monetary value like gold, rare coins, and so forth. Sell items for money that can be deposited into my bank account.

>>54278347
This is the cutest disturbing thing I've ever seen/read.

But no thanks.

>>54278390
>>54278410
It wasn't wasn't a request.
You will be. Eventually.

>>54278366
>Dark Messiah of Might & Magic
>Your succubus buddy's actually working for the enemy

Is this new to the CYOA? Because in the game she isn't, I belive.
Unless "the enemy" is meant to be your father.

>>54278315
Oh yeah, speaking of memory death...

>>54277039
So, uh, can I just ignore that part?

>>54278304
I wish my penis was masculine.

>>54278221
They're not human and don't have the same rights as humans. So why does it matter?

>>54278216
Being Emperor of all humans does, though.

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>>54278425
>It wasn't wasn't a request.
...I'm pretty sure I've read this doujin before...
Does not end well for me.

>>54278458
I haven't. Which one is it?

>>54278430
What part?
Memory death? That was never intended to be part of the experience. I'll make it more clear that you retain everything that makes you you, including memories of your old life. I still need to do some revision.

>>54278429
And hell, even in the game she starts telling you that you two should betray your dad and make you the demon king instead. In the ending where you two go for that, she even risks her life to see it happen. She's evil as fuck, but she's loyal to you, ultimately.

>>54278457
There were plenty of pathetic emperors, actually. Bone up on your roman history.

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>>54278472

>>54278207
Heal, Seer, Sway.

I'd be inclined to take Give, but part of me truly believes suffering and misery is needed to help motivate people to rise up and make change.

>>54275508
>LoL has better graphics than dota 2

wut

>>54278366
Tomb Raider, because it sounds not only like the only scenario I think I have better than a 50% at succeeding, but it has one of the best wrap ups...ie, you become a million dollar super model.

>>54278207
Heal, calm and back thanks Mr wizard

>>54276627
I think lone wolf requires rep 2 anon

>>54276246
Thank you kind doll

>>54278133
I'm not going to go into detail on why you're wrong and a living example of the slippery slope, but you're wrong and fell off the slippery slope.
>>54278176
>I'm not a cuckold if I agree to another man fucking my wife
He gazed up at the enormous face. Forty years it had taken him to learn what kind of smile was hidden beneath the dark moustache. O cruel, needless misunderstanding! O stubborn, self-willed exile from the loving breast! Two gin-scented tears trickled down the sides of his nose. But it was all right, everything was all right, the struggle was finished. He had won the victory over himself. He loved Big Black Cocks

What's been going on with the traveler companion poll? Is it closed?

>>54278882
It is closed, but HL has not revealed what the statistics were at the time when she recorded them.

>>54278875
>I'm not a cuckold if I agree to another man fucking my wife
I'm not that guy, but that's not what he said. He said it's not betrayal, which it isn't since she'd have your permission and knowledge of it.
It is definitely cuck-shit though.

>>54278882
The first round ended due to moneygrubbing survey sites limiting free polls to 100 respondents.

The sudden death tiebreaker round was only meant to last a thread or two.

>>54278912
There's a special place in hell for Devil's Advocates.

>>54278892
Ah.

I think I had a character that was getting a decent amount of votes.

>>54278502
>there were no humans who weren't part of the Roman empire
Fun history fact time, I see.

>>54278933
What the fuck are you even trying to say?

>>54278921
Well yeah, it's the Advocacy Bureau.

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>>54276938
Hey babe, hold my beer and watch this!

>The Shred God
>ONE PUNCH
>Bonnie

Pretty good first CYOA, anon. Congrats.

>>54276938
this hurts to read

>>54278366
Dark Messiah. All those pits and spikes make kicking and telekinesis op as fuck. And fun as fuck with rag doll physics.

>>54278366
Going for the mystery box, where is it?

I haven't been to this shithole in about a month. Did Zodiac guy ever finish his China thing?

>>54276246
I also love everyone here at /cyoag/ and I want the content creators to know that I am very greatfull for what they do and letting us play their games. To all of the cyoa creators out there - THANK YOU!
>inb4: troll

>>54279344
Pretend he didn't and go about your business.

>>54279394
What happened?

>>54278496
Yeah, she is the only character that is always on your side no matter what. She only tries to stop you if you are literally trying to kill her.

Some people says that she is manipulating you, and maybe that is right, but in game she still is always loyal to you and goes to great risks for your safety.

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>>54279379
I love everyone more than you do!

>>54276913
>You're Waifu
>You're
>You-Are
>(You)

>>54279426
That anon is a salty bitch trying to spread his hate to you.

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>>54276246
>>54279379
D'aww, I love you too, buddy!

>>54279460
I-i-it isn't a competition :(

>>54275011
>The classic option to make more metchsteeks is not listed but not forbidden
I'd say it'd cost 6 to implement and would give one magically generated metchsteek per year.

Sure you might survive enough to become a master automaton or wish a heightened form of invincibility with enough time, but, would you survive? Would you resist using your metchsteeks long enough? What if you lose em in the meantime or someone else uses a few?

>>54279471
Eur an idiot.

>>54275528
>Battlegirl Squad
Diana Holland
Aurelia Dior
Judy Heide
Laurette Joulbert
Ryrrine Jost
Carmen Leon
Nicole Pierlot
Marvione Porter

>>54275481
>New Home
>Home
Wooden House
>Outside
River Town
>New Acquaintances
Anthony
Erick
Emily
Megan
Lyyn
>New Job
Seller
>New Friends
>Friend
Tristan
>Close Friend
Jade

>>54276900
>Adventures In A New World
>World
Comfybright
>Inherent Power
Word Binder
>Birthright
Marked Hero
>Armor
Furtive Hood
>Weapon
Eurytus
Kriscarn
>Mentor
Theodore
>Companions
Erefexus
The Aegis
>Mount
Cliff Jackal
>Starting Location
Main Bazaar

>>54277326
>Dusk City Troubles
>Style
Friendly
>Magic
Clone of the Jester
Rune Magic
>Skill
Tactics
Weapon Mastery
>Partner
Kyur & Kyab Wunder
Nani
Big Cola
Gentleman
Freeze Na
>Troubles
Husks Army

>>54276246
>>54279379
Fuck you, stop it.

>>54279542
WHAT IS NEXT FOR YOU ZBG ALSO POST FORTUNE COOKIES PLES

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>>54279458
Is it really a bad thing that someone is manipulating you if they're only doing it for the goal of making you an immortal demon-king over both Hell and Earth that she can serve as your little succubus slut?

>>54279652
Some people view manipulation as inherently bad.

>>54279672
Those people are dumb. Pretty much the only thing she tries to push you away from hard is the goody two-shoes girl, at first out of jealousy at her maybe catching your attention, then later because she wants to kill her and won't take no for an answer.

>>54278366
>Dark Sector
People cared about that game enough to remember it still?

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The longer the missions get, the messier they look. Or is it tolerable?

>>54274830
>imagine a country
>80% of the people are terrestrial
>15% of the people are amphibian
>5% of the people are aquatic
>the country, its customs and facilities are mostly suited for use by the terrestrial majority

Would it be reasonable for the aquatic people to try and change the way the entire country works, to plot to change it so the country becomes more suitable to them?

>>54276938
Bonnie
One Punch
Tsun Boxer GF

>>54279764
It's not unreadable, but if I were you I'd go for a neater look. I find keeping it simple and elegant looking actually saves time in the end.. Learning how to make things neat looking goes a long way.

>>54279955
It's reasonable, since it's natural that people would want to better their lives. There's no reason why only one people should be catered to, so it's fine to try to change the country so that all types of people can be accommodated.

>>54279955
I mean it would reasonably happen that they would try it if that's what you mean.

>>54279955
No. They can make their own country instead.

>>54280025
>>54280037
t. Tumblr

You're literally saying it's fine for the degenerate minority here to push their anti-waifu propaganda. It's the exact same thing. The minority does not need to be politically correct catered to.

>>54275582
You people are so unreal. Each metchsteek can be determined to be on the same level of power as any other metchsteek (read the original choice for super powers), so you're not going to get some form of omnipotence at all.

>>54280123
>You're literally saying it's fine for the degenerate minority here to push their anti-waifu propaganda. It's the exact same thing. The minority does not need to be politically correct catered to.
Is this baiting? First of all, I'm not "literally" saying that. Second of all, I'm not even saying something along those lines. I'm saying that it's fine to try to make things accommodating for everyone. It's like ramps for people on wheelchairs, it doesn't really inconvenience the people without disabilities, but it makes things easier for people with them. That's the kind of thing I'm saying would be reasonable.

>>54280156
Every ramp built is materials and labour wasted that could be used by the able. Every non-waifu token option included is an option that could've been a waifu instead. Neck yourself, fag.

>>54280156
Your kind is not welcome here.

>>54279987
Can you suggest a layout?

>>54279955
What's the alternative? What sort of changes are we talking about here? How are the aquatic people trying to get by already?

>>54279616
:(
even though that makes me sad I still love you too :)

>>54280363
Don't sweat them too much anon, I think you're nice

>>54274830
What's the name of this CYOA?

>>54276834
These boxes were never part of the flash drive cyoa. The creator of that never posted the mystery drive.

>>54277080
Not one anyone ever donated images to. Just something someone pulled out their ass and poorly at that. Just search for the image hash on 4plebs and you'll only find this post of it.

>>54275508
>Dota 2 > LoL
This is really subtle bait, nj

>>54277039
I think there should be a futa option.

>>54276900
World-Nobledark
Power-Word Binder
Birthright-God’s Chosen
Armor-Shifting Rag
Weapon-Khanda
Mentor-Witch Allyn
Companions-Micaela, Wanderer
Mount-Giant Crow
Starting Location-Slum

Any historical/mythical cyoas?

>>54280295
It'll really depend on how much you want to write for each mission, but I'd suggest trying to keep them around the same length to standardize it. Other than that it's not really overly important. The first two missions you have on the top that take all of their horizontal area look perfectly fine. It's Easy to read and understand, it's just when you start adding differing sizes, like the two bellow does it gt wonky.

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>>54279955
>15% amphibian

>>54280851
There are cyoas in the water making the amphibians like futa.

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>>54277334
>That's like saying that it's ok to run over a kid since the car you did it with was stolen.
I'm not convinced that's a logically sound comparison.

>>54280887
The authors kidnap children to take them to their moon colony

>>54279955
Reasonable as in justified or reasonable as in it makes sense for them to want it? Putting aside the obvious tangents, they're fucking aquatic. What's the layout of the country, even.

>>54277334
back to /pol/

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>>54280934
>telling someone to go back to /pol/
>for complaining about racism

>>54281313
Because he's a false-flagger you autist.

>>54280218
>>54280291
Retards.

>>54277419
Descriptions are better as they encourage building a character rather than min-maxing. I dont want to take a DPS hit because id rather use a maul than a shortsword

>>54278813
Well shit, I guess I'll take REP2 and FIGHT2 instead

>>54278875
Some men are cuckolds. They get off on their waifus fucking other men.
Some women are quckqueans. They get off on their husbandos fucking other women.
Some don't get off on their waifubandos fucking around, but also don't really mind, either, especially if they get to do so too.
And none of these groups are ever going to chance, no matter how much you shitpost on 4chan. How about you just get over it already?

>>54276900
Does anyone know where I could find the original images for some of the characters in this?

Specifically: Qvrlliqui, Micaela, and Erefexus.

>>54278057
It's an orgy.

Seriously, you people are so insecure and sensitive. It's not even the fact that you dislike the concept of swinging that makes me say this, but the fact that you're grossly uncomfortable at having other people bring it up and feel the need to voice your distaste, as if we'd all judge you if you didn't tell us all about how much you hate it and that you're disgusted by anons like the one you've been single-mindedly arguing with.

Then you go on to pick up your discount harems in this week's most popular waifu CYOA and talk about how you'd be the most amazing lover and hold hands with them.

I'm sure you're not unaware enough to act like that in real life, and certainly not when you're trying to get with an actual girl (if you've tried at all). But you're certainly quite pathetic and you should thankful that you're only allowed to act like this online where you can pretend that you're in the right instead of meekly accepting all the shit you deserve so much.

>>54281362
>>54277419
What if the maul does bonus damage against armoured enemies? What if a certain mission requires you to fight a lot of said armoured enemies? What if the maul is cheaper to make than the sword and is more easily distributed to your party or army?

Context is important when considering mechanics like these because it will vary between each CYOA. You can't objectify these things on an ill-defined medium like CYOAs so easily.

Statistics can work and can work very well with descriptions. It comes down to a matter of discouraging minmaxing with the way you create the CYOA and encouraging what I like to call "fun optimization," where there is a variety of potential viable builds.

>>54281828
>>54282049
How about you stop trying to force your pathetic fetish like it's normal? You will be mocked for being a piece of shit. This isn't a hugbox where everyone accepts one another. Learn what fucking site you're on.

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>>54282049
>Cuck tries to call other people pathetic
Go away, Anthony Burch.

Hey lads, I've seen an imouto cyoa around, is there also an Onee-san cyoa?

>>54281828
>>54282049
>>54282157
>>54282168
I am starting to hate anti cuck posters more than cuck posters, but its still close.

>>54282174
>One guy drags the argument back up the next morning to whine about people hating his fetish.
>You get pissed not at him, but at the people who are making fun of him.
Seems like you have a bias here.

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>>54282170
Don't think there's one by that name, but there's this by the same person that made the aforementioned Imouto CYOA.

>>54282049
>You're insecure if you don't let your wife fuck strangers
Straight out of a parody

>>54282179
>Any condemnation of anti-cuck fags, even in the same post as GREATER condemnation of cuck fags, is in fact support of cucks
Yeah, now I hate you anti-cuck fags more.

>>54282214
I'm not buying your sincerity, anon. Your post was whining about hating people for mocking that idiot, even if you said you hated him too, your motivation made no sense. It'd make sense if people started whining about it out of nowhere, but those posts were only in response to a cuck whining in the first place. He's the one who brought the issue up, and thus the only one to deserve ire. You can't get mad at people mocking a fucking butthurt pinata, not when he's making himself a target.

>>54282226
>Your post
Not mine, sorry.

>>54282214
>anti-cuck
Wow, so you hate normal people?

>>54282049
>some anon makes a choice
>other anons tell him he has shittaste
oh the humanity! how dare these foul beasts!

If you're into swinging, get some thicker skin.
This happens with literally everything. The only reason people into cuckoldry get constantly harassed is because they try to act like their fetish is somehow normal or respected. Fetishes deviating heavily from the norm are things that the majority normally finds disgusting and have absolutely no qualms about voicing their dislike. Trying to shame people into accepting some fringe fetish is pretty ridiculous and makes me think you don't experience much 'real life'. Or just live in a really strong echo chamber.

>>54282234
Normal people aren't anti-cucks. Normal people don't even think about cucks.

>>54282239
>the majority normally finds disgusting and have absolutely no qualms about voicing their dislike
They need to grow thicker skin then.

>>54282226
>Post saying they're starting to hate one group more.
>Post in response to a reply saying that now you DO hate that group more.
>Then claim to be two people.
See, this is why I doubt your sincerity, anon.