/cyoag/ - CYOA General

Doing that is going to make some panicky little shit think the mods are siding with the meta thread shitposter.

>>53977827
kek

>>53977827
So? it is not like it matters

>>53977827
That's nice

>>53977827
Scared me for a second.

Thankfully, the mods actually look at our threads to see they're nothing like /qst/ threads.

Why are they deleting threads?

>>53977861
>He didn't read the thread.

>>53977861
OP had it pointed out he posted an old version of the opening CYOA, probably deleted it to repost the new

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>>53971079

Age
>Christmas Cake
Size Ratio
>Amazonian
Physical Build
>Chubby/Muscular=Bearmode
Brest Size
>Busty
Butt & Hips
>Child Bearing
Facial Features
>Sexy/Noble=Thirsty Baroness
Hairstyle
>Ponytail
Skin Tone
>Bronze
Sex Drive
>Sexual Predator
Romantic Attitude
>Mostly Equal
Personality Traits
>Generous
>Charismatic
>Feminine
>Pragmatic
>Cunning
>Heavy Drinker
>Laidback
>Neat Freak
Fetishes and Desires
>Cuddling
>Sweaty Sex
>Frottage
>Oral x3
>Being on Top x3
>Milking Dry
Hobbies & Interests
>Reading
>Lifting
>Shooting
>Cooking
>Lazing
Extra Features
>Tattoos
>Scarred
>Smoker
>Inhumanity x2
Inhuman Traits
>Extra Arms
>Long Tongue

The tattoos and scaring go together.
Early on in life, someone who hated her caught her with her second set of arms out and quickly made it known to certain parties. She was abducted and experimented/tortured for years until her captors were finally found out and dealt with by the authorities. Her back is covered in various scars and is somewhat sickening to look at for the faint of heart. Instead of hiding it, she had a massive, back covering tattoo of a medieval battle where the scars are either the cutting edges of the weapons or the wounds on those being cut.

Pick somewhat related.

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>Never posted a character for Traveler because I didnt want to shit it up with a bad OC and allow room for quality content
>Everyone submits bad OCs which Highlander accepts and shits it up anyway

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>Highlander will be done with Traveller, Scientist will be done with his new cyoa before PPP+ is ever posted.
This is a living hell.

>>53977936

I love seeing skeletons writhe in absolute agony

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>>53977936
Don't forget me, anon!

>>53977936
Why are you waiting? waiting won't make PPP+ come out faster

>>53977977
The worst part is that he posted a remake to an older irrelevant cyoa yesterday.

with regard to the lewd RWBY cyoa, the mystery box is still listed in one of her combos.

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>>53977928
My special snowflake build from way back when was really just a writing experiment for my CYOAs, and it was accepted in a heartbeat.

Now my actual build has to pass the trial by fire.
It's a mixed bag.

>>53977998
>Complaining about content because it was not the one you were looking for
That is a new one

>>53978028
uh no it isnt

>>53978048
Well it is new to me

>>53978074
you know why that is

>>53977818

imo the main issue with this cyoa is that being able to travel to fictional worlds makes practically all the items/powers looks pointless and weak.

Willpower 5/40 *
Teleport 10/40 *
Foresee 13/40 *
Detect 14/40 *
Interdict 16/40 *
Pocket 18/40
Room 23/40
Extra Rooms 26/40

Powerhouse 30/40
Calculation 34/40

Suppress 39/40
Scrying 41/40

Memories 45/40 *

Slow Moving 45/42
Delayed 45/45

* My initial powers, the rest return over 3 year period.

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>>53977928
I'd like to think I strived to avoid making shit OCs, but at least Highlander attempts her damnedest to break the created characters so they don't shit the CYOA too much.

At this point, I'm probably not gonna vote for many, if any, builds I made that are on the list. I think that kind of faggotry's a bit too much.

>>53978082
>I wish to be the very best at Chess

I'll be a famous grandmaster even though I'm bad at the game.

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>>53978172
Good choice. If you choose a card game you could still loose to bad luck.

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What are the darkest cyoas in terms of lore with horrible things going on and still going on? Do we even have grimdark cyoas?

>>53978082
Make me a jellyfish person i just have to float around and let a boat or something found me then after a good time getting poked by scientists i will probably get a aquarium thing with a waterproof computer for free i hope it turns me in to something like in the picture too

What is the best site of the ones listed to find medieval fantasy pics for a cyoa?
and does the addition of a family in a cyoa ruin or makes it better?

>>53978241
Blood Magic/Wizard Counsel or whatever its counterpart was

>>53978265
Magocratic convention

>>53978262
ibsearch and deviantart
but sifting though the trash is like pulling teeth so im probably doing it wrong

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>>53978241
>>53978265
I don't have the Magocratic Convention counterpart, sorry.

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>>53978301

>>53978200
>50 year adventure to hunt down a supervillain
>50 fucking years
what?

>>53978241
A Quite CYOA, The Islands
>>53978262
Artstation, Deviantart, Pinterest

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>>53978241
Any cause they all just remind me I am stuck in this existence rather one much more interesting or happy and my life will instead just be wasting away in mediocrity and the mundane

>>53978200
>Platformer
Most of the others seem like a lot of work, I'm pretty happy just adding a handy bonus to my current life with no drawbacks.

>>53978388
Don't worry anon soon the void will come to take us all and then there will be no more suffering

>>53978241
>Do we even have grimdark cyoas?

Theres a lot that imply something bad is going down behind the scenes, or outright state it without going into details, which I think works better than the alternative.

Theres also a few post apoc ones which are often (but not always) on the grimdark spectrum.

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>>53978301

>>53977936
>Scientist will be done with his new cyoa
Since when was CYOA plural?

>>53978446
What are you working on?

>>53978453
Cubus and Roadtrip, actively, and i've got the Other's Gift and Broken Waifu i need to finish.
Then I can start the NCYOA sequel.

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>>53978301

>>53977989
smugposting the metas

but why SDA, only we are allowed to hate you

>>53978422
>>53978241
Pokemon has best boy going around mindbreaking people to sell them into slavery and nobody, not even the government cares to do anything about it. Also some other bad stuff.

>>53977936
Hey, we just got the new Style of Life, which I'm really, really digging, so don't act like hope is lost.
Hold out a little while longer, Skelebro.
Maybe make some more builds with the current PP?

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>>53978555
He removed my waifu from Style of Life so that was kind of a bummer.
Plus all the text still looks like it's been alias'd for some reason.

>>53977928
All you can do is make the best character you can. It doesn't matter if it sucks or if it is amazing, as long as you put effort in.

>>53978446
oh hey you're back from space

>all that is left for the Demonology CYOA is Celestials and Djinn

hype levels reaching critical

>>53978784
I'm gonna summon Jafar

>>53978555
Could you post the newer Slice of Life? I think I missed it.

>>53978784
Please tell me you've got Dantalion. Love that multi-head fucker.

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>>53978143
Alright, so usually I go for a Light-side run and lead the world to prosperity and growth.

Let's try a different approach.

>Dark Princess.
Time to ruin everything for everyone!
>Princess of the Undead
Living subjects are a bother.
>Peasant Revolt.
As you can plainly see, that orphanage attacked me.
>Warrior Princess
So I attacked back.
>Pirate Princess
Ghost ship stories are a bit plain here, but it does make for a great ploy when discouraging attacks.
>Magic Upgrade
A little goes a long way and I Control the undead; being a vampire comes with unnecessary complications.
>Technology Upgrade
Deep Rot's codes aren't going to write themselves until we finish the first ones and I want my undead-plague mortars within this decade please.
.....
Actually
>Blood Princess.
I think I can manage to deal with some light sunburns here and there given the opportunities here.
>Power Behind the Throne
And not just My throne.
>Captured Princess
Captured, Killed, Turned and Risen, then returned none the worse for wear but with Very different loyalties.
>Rival Stepsister.
She's going to have the Crown. I'm humble enough to admit she deserves it and simply direct my attentions to what I do best; making sure she keeps it.
>Millennium Princess.
The Necropolis will rise supreme here, and our cold, dead hands will reach to claim the stars. Blood from countless worlds will be siphoned in tribute to the eternal empire. Our ships will raid those unwilling to pay tribute and carve our pound of flesh whether they bend knee or are bound and broken.
>Not-So-Royal Behavior.
Just because they're dead doesn't mean I can't have my fun.
If anything that's where it starts.

>>53978784
>>53978791
post ett

>>53978843
I'm not the creator anon

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>>53978984
No mystery boxes this time.

>>53978973
Why do most of the wives have huge tits?

>>53979002
Author fetish I guess.

I wish there was a better variety, especially as some of them are caricature level.

>>53979002
Why, really
Cowtits are the worst

>>53979002
Yeah, I only see one girl with normal tits.

Italics is normally better about breast variety so I don't know what had him on a titty monster kick. It's a shame, because only small breasts are cute.

The meta thread is saddening and concerning, will I be forced to choose between death and cancer if we're kicked off of /tg/?

I don't want to make CYOAs with reddit as the primary audience.

>>53978973
>Soviet
The Soviet Union doesn't exist anymore. How can she be a Soviet?

>National Army of Space Americans (NASA)
Holy Roman Empire

>>53979036
Why are you taking a thread that's full of back and forth shitposting seriously?

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So, lets talk about future mission system.

You'll have different settings, like desert, tundra, forest, city, sea and air/orbit.
Then you'll have different scenarios:
Landing, Patrol, Vanguard, Road to base, Breakthrough, Bodyguard, Boss appearance, Enemy ambush, Reinforcements, Flagship, Assault

Each setting/scenario will have different mission point costs, with points representing 'combat readiness'. Weapons and hulls have a flat cost of mission points you'll need to pay per stage, otherwise they'll underperform and take 'damage', activating emergency systems, Unless you have have gadgets that counter act that.

With that in mind, would you prefer freeform mission you make yourself, or preset ones?

>>53978328


God damnit SDA don't shitpost in other threads... this thread is designed to contain your autism

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>>53979054
Also, make a build, if you want.

>>53979022
>Italics is good at breast variety?

What is Picking-A-Goddess and Armored Core? I wish Italics updated PAG or remade AC

>>53979048
First time i've really paid attention since it was brought to my attention just now.

>>53979002
The author isn't a pedophile.

>>53979072
All of those hare more normal tits and some flats. This CYOA literally has one non-titty monster option. It's off.

>>53979072
There were girls with normal tits in both of those, though.
>I wish Italics updated PAG
He's remade it twice, anon. Come on now.

>>53978924
Original was more fun.

>>53979099
Last time he was here he claim PAG was getting a Norse + Chinese goddess expansion in one and bunch of other new stuff to make it comfy.

>>53979090
Not originally.

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>>53979071
And the third page.

>>53979131
>Not originally.
I don't even know what you're talking about. The Goddess CYOA always had girls with normal chests, even originally.

>>53979054
I want to raze a survivor settlement.

>>53978015
That was already mentioned you illiterate fuck. >>53971873
It's the fucking third response.

It's like you cunts are allergic to reading and thinking.

>>53979062
No this is good, when he's there he's not here.

>>53978082
Everything but untold riches sucks ass

>>53979165
If you want, I can push for us to go to /qst/.

I couldn't care less if people lose interest in /CYOAg/, I'm gonna remain until we're nothing.

>>53979131
If he updates it again we'll be at like version 6.0. Surely 5 versions is enough, right?

>>53979190
nah let the board do what it will but the majority of the anti-cyoa reasoning is hilariously flawed

>>53979191
Actually we would be on version 5.

Original had 4 Goddesses
The second update had 6x times that
The third update hadded a bunch of stuff and some new goddesses.
The fourth update added more stuff and more goddesses.

It probably won't end unti levery goddess is a waifu.

>>53979230
What was Italics explanation of how and why do all the goddesses exist at the same time even when some mythologies have huge contradiction in others?

>>53979270
You know exactly what you're doing.

>>53976487
Jar lets you add power to your score, so you can stack multiple jars for more power.
Also, ritual points represent what rituals you know, not what rituals you have activated. So dismissing won't get you back your points.

>>53979279
>Maybe you shouldn't believe everything told in the mythologies of the God World as they have the tendency to clash with other events deities said they did.
-Chalichiuhtlicue Profile

>In the Mortal World many know about the Old Ones and the Great Old Ones like they know about the deities and many other things that exist in the God Worls. Brave encounter between the two have happened with certain events in each mythology occurring and some just being written legends.
-Cythylla Profile

Events are either made up or some did happen. Lovecrafts books are considered canon to an extent since Cyhthylla, Shub-Niggurath, Hastur, and Nyarl are around, but they probably didn't fuck with humanity as much.

>>53979081
I like Christmas cakes and flat chests

Just because I like small tits does not make me a lolicon

>>53979190
NOOOOO

>>53979190
>I'm gonna remain until we're nothing
boo

You're doing good work in that other thread though

>>53979390
I think I made him gay.

Maybe he was gay to begin with.

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>>53979348
>christmas cake and flat/small chest
my brother from another mother and/or my sister from another mister

>>53978784
I'm excited to see the celestials!

>>53978924
>>53978937
>>53978950
>>53978965
>>53978973
>>53978984
>>53978998

Why not just make this three separate cyoas?

>>53979446
Why make it separate CYOAs?

>>53979446
Because that would require Italics cucking the skelebros even harder with PPP+ being a never ever.

Anyone have the towergirls cyoa the only pages I have are the ones from the wiki and I believe more have been made

>>53979539
They have their own general senpai.

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>>53977899
>STR : IIIII [IIIII IIIII]
>DEF : IIIII IIIII IIIII [IIIII IIIII]
>SPD : IIIII IIIII
+Wolverine Tier Regeneration
+Resistant to phys, Immune to Fire, Ice and Thunder
+Supersized
+Elastic
+Memory Eater. shapeshifter
-Water specialized. Much less agile while on land
+Has eye lasers.

I hit random in wikipedia until I got my war form
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apicalia_taiwanica
Some sort of sea snail. Even my boss mode is fat, jej. Closest would be Arthropod but replacing the arthro with gastro.

>Powers :Biolaser, Regeneration, Aquatic Adaptation, Elastic Body
In addition to having a hella fucking tough armor, my fleshy bits are also extra elastic, resistant to Blunt damage and super charged with night instant regen.
Plus, my 360 degrees extending eyestalks also function as lasers. It's like fighting Plastic Man if he had tentacles and two rayguns.

>Missions : Infiltration, Budget Rangers, Magical Girl Team (+6 BT)

>Boss Perks : Napalm Breath, Freezing Breath, Electrical Discharge, Enhanced Regeneration, Absorption, Gigantism | Free Band of Mooks

Sea creatures are usually weak against extreme changes in temperature and traditionally weak against lighting attacks. This takes care of most metagaming faggots who think they can bring down The Dragon with his secret ultra weakness. I have no weakness. Or knees for that matter.

I AM KRAKEN, TERROR OF THE UNDERSEA

Probably stationed near Taiwan. I guess I'll need eat some azn pussy to learn conversational mandarin before assuming my mission.

I could probably take on the Budget Rangers all at once. The Magical Girls might have enough mojo to defeat me -or worse, bind- so I'd need to eliminate them first. I'm thinking ambush at the docks, make their heads plop. Actually, it would be better if I could target their family AFTER they have doubts of the security of their jobs. Drama and hormones would tear the group apart.

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>>53979514
>Hospitaller

>Support
>Liberate Cities

>Treasure x 4
>Nobility
>Landed Estates

I have no intent on acting in an ignoble manor, so I don't feel my place in heaven requires the guarantee of the Church.

>The Convert
>The Vivacious
>The Princess

This should keep me very busy; the Convert is a good girl and should help me discipline the Princess as necessary. The Vivacious should make for pleasant company while tending to my lands.

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>>53979605
the real truth is

both are good; it depends on the girl. Some figures and styles make big boobs or small boobs look better, and then you've got other factors like perkiness, nipples, and things like that. Plus given we're talking 2D, the quality of the artist changes things wildly and I think most of the ones Italics chose are garbage.

pic quasi related

>>53978555
Is PP even that good? Thing got over 50 pages.

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>>53979782
>Is PP even that good?
As someone who hasn't made a build in it and was interested at one time?

Probably not, it doesn't seem worth the effort. At least Traveller is done and just getting updates.

>>53979875
>Traveller is done
>Just getting updates.
That's a contradiction.

>>53979916
fully released games get updates anon

>>53978143
Neutral Princess

Forest Princess
Happy Peasents
Magic Upgrade
Blast from the Past
Exotic Princess
Princess Superior
Barbarian Princess
Not so Royal Behaviour

I am princess over a somewhat celtic feeling kingdom, which spans over vast forests, filled with mythical creatures and borders on a non-roman empire , which often results in skirmishes or outright war. Every time they launch a invasion into the forest however they get completely crushed. The forests growth is fueled and controlled by our mages who live in an almost symbiotic relationship with it. Once physical and magical might determine the status in society, with the most powerful warriors being expected to have many wives and sire many children. Due to my inherent connection to the forest and magical potential I have been made the high priestess of Yggdralia the goddess of the forest, giving me much political power, but also a lot of resposibilities. As priestess I am expected to lead men into battle and carry the children of the most glorious warrior in any given conflict.

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>>53978924
>Style
Sci-fi
>Home
Auto Living Domain
>Occupation
Fleet Officer
>Item
Power Armor
>Wife
None
>Daughter
None
Events:
Usual Hangout
The Holidays
Family Reunion

Of the options available to sci-fi choice I'd rather remain single and take my chances meeting someone that is actually appealing.

I'm happy being commander of a fleet though, always wanted to see the galaxy,

>>53978924
I don't think I've ever seen this one before, but I'm obligated to play it because of big titty wives.
>Fantasy (26)
>Manor (20)
>Educator (18)
>Luxury Car (12)
>The Holy grail (Are we allowed to take 2 items? (4)
>Gaia Taurus
>Rella
>Abagail
>Family Vacation
>This and That
>Family Hobby

I was originally going to pick sci fi until I saw the minotaur wife, and there was no way I could pass that up, not even for moth girl.

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>>53977936
I still remember the old debate. Who was in the wrong?

>>53979054
I would prefer preset missions to be honest but maybe you should keep freeform as an option regardless

>>53979514
>Templar
>Missions
Siege of Jerusalem +4
Liberate Cities +3

>Rewards
Landed Estate -4
Nobility -2
Treasure -1
>Brides
The Convert
The Princess

A dukedom, wealth, two brides, and a place in heaven, life is good. The Princess is a work in progress but the reward system and threat of the Convert supplanting her as first wife will bring her around. With my wealth I shall build up the infrastructure of my lands to take advantage of the new trade routes that have opened to the east.

>>53977978
>Stranger 10

>Friendly Competition 9
>Teamwork 8

>Middle School 6

>Help her with her career 7
>Walk in the winter wonderland 7
>Beach trip 7
>D-d-date! 6

>Be attractive 4
>Well off 2
>Reboot 1
>Great cook 0

Lovely waifu aside I get some of my youth back with the odds for success absurdly stacked in my favour.

>>53979190
Such patriotism turns me on

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>>53979158
No need to be so rude, comrade.

>>53978200
>First Person Shooter

"You alright G.I. Joe?"
"Yep, totally fine."
"You're limping."
"I only rolled my ankle a little bit."
"I'll see you at zero hundred"
"Son of a-"
BANG!!!

Don't have to worry about disease, if you get sick shoot yourself and you're healed.

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>>53977928
>never posted an OC character for highlander because I didn't want my character to take up all the space
>now there's room for lots of varied, funny OC made by anons

This is a good feel.

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What did I miss? Are we getting gulaged?

>>53977850
They really aren't though. If /qst/ had to be made, we should have been there too. I'm glad we aren't.

>>53980277
If you feel a burning need to have this argument, feel free to go to the meta thread

>>53980295
What meta thread?

>>53980299
exactly

>>53980309
Yeah really helpful m8.

>>53980299
it got pruned, and nothing of value was lost

>>53978183
>magitek
>sensors (3), machine spirit (3), translator (5), mind link (4)
>mastermind quest, additionally take sensors upgrade (2) and anatomically correct
Good thing metal is my fetish or that would have been hard to make work.

>>53978256
Says you keep your human body, so while you'd be something like the picture you wouldn't be the little girl.

>>53980299
"hiro lets us have one meta thread, so let me cry about cyoa and jumpchain still being on the board when /qst/ exists for weeks on end"

>>53980343
Sad.

>>53978082
I wish to be the very best at evil.

Suck it, genie.

>>53980424
>genie
He's a witch doctor. The CYOA makes more sense if you know the movie. His schtick is that he actually gives people exactly what they think they want, even if they're not sure what they're asking for (the prince wants to be free from responsibility, so Facilier turns him into a frog, genuinely fulfilling the wish; he much more directly allows the prince's manservant to take on the prince's visage and live the prince's life because the manservant wants to be the one who is in control). Fine print is that he gets their souls when their foolish desires inevitably lead them down bad paths, because while the magic can give you what you want, it doesn't give you what you need.

Basically, you're getting captured and executed within days for being the world's most heinous criminal, your soul feeding the voodoo gods he has a debt to, and then the world's going back to normal because you are no longer alive to set a ceiling on the amount of evil in the world.

He's also got the second best musical number in any Disney movie after Hellfire imo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yZAY-78zhmw

>>53980635
>Basically, you're getting captured and executed within days for being the world's most heinous criminal
But anon, that would be evil! ;)

>>53978183

Alien(telekinesis is cool)

Machine spirit
Hidden arsenal
Healing Gel with upgrade
Sensors with upgrade
Wardrobe
Alien Pistol
Quest: Mastermind

It's not easy being a single father and a mad scientist bent on world conquest, but the look on my daughter's face when I explain my latest harebrained, implausible plan for domination makes it all worthwhile.

>>53980635
The prince wanted money.
Facilier promised him "green", and turned him into a frog.
He's not very clever with his wish twisting.

>>53980644
It is for the greater good(tm)

>>53980688
No, anon, I would never do that. And remember: I'm the best at being evil!

>>53980688
>>53980696
Incidentally, this is the legit folk-lore solution to this kinda problem.

>>53980696
Hopefully you can stomach all the butchery that goes on in farming and livestock raising or people are going to get hungry real fast.

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Which cyoa is the creepiest, my beloved friends and cyoa enthusiasts?

>>53980778
I can. In fact I support bullfighting.
>>53980787
None are all that creepy. I guess nightmare waifu.

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>>53980111
>One is an possessive yandere.
>The other is an obsessive yandere.
Truly patrician taste a man is if he takes both.

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>>53980787

This one makes my skin crawl

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>>53980792
Wasn't someone making a cyoa that let you become a thing that eats children's toes?

>>53980804
Agreed, I can't think of any creepier than that of the top of my head.

>>53980804
Don't post that kind of shit now i won't be able to sleep this night

...What the fuck? Looked at PP for the first time and... it's fucking pokemon Order?
It actually looks like Italics just copy pasted his system from Order and name swapped everything.

>>53980804
>In less than a year your darling older daughter will move away.
>your daughter will move away.
I don't need these feels in my cyoa Anon.

>>53980846
I know you're probably trolling but PP came first.

>>53980846
I think you mean Italics just copy pasted his system from PP into Order and named swapped everything.

>>53980818

I'm sure there are dozens of worse ones on /d/ but I don't go there

>>53980846
Pokemon Personified is basically build your own Pokemon from Mystery Dungeon and get your party.

Order is basically build your own Final Fantasy Tactic unit and team. They seem alike, though according to Italics, Order is missing several features and content he had to cut out.

>>53978200
FPS

>>53980895
where's page 1

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>>53978924
>Style
Fantasy
>Home
House
>Occupation
Court Mage
>Item
Luxury Car
Enchanted Sword
Social Status
>Wife
Gaia Taurus
>Daughters
Rella
Abagail
>Events
This & That
Family Hobby
Cooking Dinner

Cozy fantasy family life. I work as a royal battlemage that helps the knights fight against evil monsters, catastrophic events, etc. It could be a dragon threatening the town, a slime infestation, or cracking down on some horny NEETs creating a cult to destructive succubus and her demon army. Once I get home, battered ,bruised, and possibly covered in soot/slime/etc I greet the wife and tend to the kids as she cooks dinner and I unwind. Then we'd all work together The Family Hobby would be playing something like D&D where I've created stories based off my experiences as a mage and let my wife and kids play through the adventure. Once the kids are away and Gaia has some time we'd have a private session of slow cuddling and tender love for the night as a caress her body and push all of her buttons in the right way such as nibbling behind her ear, rubbing the tips of her horn, and massaging/suckling her breasts as she reaches climax. Overall a very comfy life.
>>53980043
I see your a man of culture too.

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>>53980957
Well sht fcked that one up..

>>53980895

>>53978965
>pick the holy grail
>wish for omnipotence

>>53978924
>Fantasy
I would never thought i would be happy that the hero got defeated
>Another dimension
It costed me many nights without sleep but i think it was worth it
>Court mage
Who would had thought that i will finally find my vocation in something that is not supposed to exist
>The holy grail
A beauty is it not? I am saving this for the day we will REALLY need it
>Zelkale
Yes yes i know it sounds like a cliche but on the inside she is actually a good person
>Saru
Our wonderful ray of sunshine but i fear one day of this she will get in to trouble
>Take your daughter to work
Nothing would make me happier that if she showed interest in following my footsteps
>Family Hobby
All the family having fun together in the weekend altough it would be better if they stopped telling me to ''git gud''
>This & That
Well... she is still a succubus i am more than happy to oblige though

Anyone have a link to all of Italics cyoas?

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>>53981068
>willingly throwing himself into the Spiral of Origin
You know, there's other ways to kill yourself. You don't have to waste a wish on that.

>>53981152
Fuck your shit, I can do anything.

>>53981068
>>53981075
>>53980043

>The Holy Grail
>Angry Manjew Holy Grail
>There are people who would pick The Holy Grail
Italics got a sick sense of humor.

>>53981159
First i thought oh well it must be just the image surely it can't be the manjew grail but then we are talking about italics

>>53981147
Check the archive to find their cyoas. Or do you want a specific one?

>>53981182
I checked bu the only ones I could find were the Old slice of life and the Goddess Cyoas

>>53981205
Dusk City, Spire, Girls Military, Order, and PP are all in there. You're not trying hard enough, Anon.

>>53978924
What's the point of having a point system here? You can buy all the most expensive options and if you chose Modern you would even have 2 leftover points with nowhere to spend.

>>53977818
Well time to go on a power shopping spree through the multiverses, but first lets make certain i can survive long enough to do so.

*drawback :homeless +2

42/42

>willpower 37/42
because relying on machinery to open portals
is foolish at it can be lost/stolen etc.

>foresee 34/42
its best not to teleport into lava, or a black hole
or in front of saitama's fist

>pocket 32/42
kamui light here i come!

>agelessness 27/42
immortality?! Yes please!

>regeneration 24/42
we wolverine now boys

>powerhouse 20/42
able to leap small buildings in a single bound~!

>healing 18/42
not just regeneration, automatic high speed regeneration

>motivation 17/42
this will make things so much simpler.

>flight 14/42
no words needed

>reach and blast 11/42
look ma im a jedi, also fuck getting up to get the remote or anything from the house from now on.

>armour 8/42
automatic defense ftw

>warform 3/42
WRRYYYY!

>power armour 0/42
time to see if there is life in europa


alright omniverses here i come!

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>>53980050
Healing Hands
Spooky Catacombs!

Some of us, including myself, are new at this so would naturally be scared, so it might be good to have Sherry with us. Plus somebody needs to deal with locks and traps and stuff.

Tess seems well rounded, and a vampire might know a lot more about the undead and other vampires we meet in the catacombs. I'm going to assume this universe doesn't follow dnd and my healing hands works on vampires. p-plus I don't mind if she bites me.

Our third bro should probably be a big guy (for you) so probably Brock, since I'm planning on being a moralfag anyway.

I wish Cassandra wasn't mutually exclusive with Tess, since a paladin would be good against undead and we could use her apparently good leadership skills, but that's what I get for choosing the sexy vampire right away.

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>>53981310

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>>53981323
>Take some kitsune sex slaves with no character.
>Don't make them sex slaves.
>Give them actual character.
>Waifufags lose their minds.
He knew what he was doing. Pure Kino.

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>>53981337

>>53981310
>>53981315
>>53981323
>>53981337
>>53981348

What the hell

>Background
Skiller(1 magic token, 2 partner tokens, 6 skill tokens)

>Magic
Suppression

>Skills
Magical Resistance
Tactics
Natural Tracker
Strength
Martial Arts
Mental Calm

>Partners
Kyur and Kyab
Silver Crow

>Troubles
Phantom Blood

my fantasy noir detective agency is open for business

>>53981310
Where is my technologist and church at?

>>53977850
Does logic even matter? If they whine enough say goodbye to this general.

>>53981519
Look up Jaime Koeppe.

I just read through PP, and I have to ask - isn't it REALLY easy to break?

>be Electric-type
>pick Wonder Guard for your ability
Now you can ONLY be hit by Ground-type moves. But wait, there's more!
>buy an Air Balloon/learn Magnet Rise and max out Speed
>learn Substitute
You are now entirely invincible. Status moves bounce off your Substitute, you are entirely immune to all damaging moves, and if there's some bastard with Mold Breaker then that's what friends are for. And if any of your friends know Gastro Acid, Worry Seed, or any other Ability-suppressing move, then you just beat the game.

>>53980804
Replacement
Beth

I'll find out she's writing shitty fanfiction, but rather than stop her I'll groom her...

...into being a good fiction writer.

>>53981559
Yeah, the Hoopa CYOA has a similar problem.

Being able to pick abilities like that is a gamebreaker in general, Wonder Guard is just the most obvious case.

>>53981570
>a good "fiction" writer

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>>53981598

>>53981559
In the Mystery Dungeon games, all pokemon have a typeless basic attack move. Not sure if it ignores Wonder Guard though.

>>53981559
People who play Pokemon for competition are heavy breeders and min/maxers.

If you go min/max route, yeah you can break it. I also like the fact you can make your own build that doesn't break it like full poison and other things.

>>53981559
Being Amew in PP must be suffering.

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>>53981290
>I'm going to assume this universe doesn't follow dnd and my healing hands works on vampires. p-plus I don't mind if she bites me.

You are correct, you can heal Tess with Healing Hands.

>>53981616
>heavy breeders
Uh

Okay anon, if you say so

>>53981616
I just look up meta builds for reference and use Pokemon Showdown like any non-autist would do.

>>53979190
>/qst/
Why would you push this general into a graveyard?

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>>53981616
I only bother breeding for online if I really want to use something that really relies on having certain stats maxed to be viable, like Mega Beedrill or this bad boy.

Can someone explain to me how Order's timeline works? Are the different Calamity Wars different timelines splitting from one point, or are they consecutive on a single timeline? Why am I recognised as Pride?

How stupid am I for not understanding this?

>>53981310
>Friendly
>Strength, Clone of the Jester
>Mental Calm, Tactics
>Big Cola, Kyur & Kyab Wunder, Silver Crow, Dylan von Drake, Freeze Na
>Husk Army

I fight for my friends.

>>53981875
>How does Order's timeline work.
The Calamity Wars happened consecutively (Right after each other) its just that since the land is fragmented, time got distorted so some of the lands ended up stuck in different periods of the Calamity Wars that happened.

>Why am I recognized as Pride?
Pride is slowly body snatching you because it knows you are really, really, really strong.

Not that stupid.

>>53981875
All you really need to know is that there is lots of cucking.

>>53981951
Thanks senpai. One last question.
What does the 'Year' mean? Is it the year after the war ended, or during said war?

>>53981559
>He didn't just max Speed and take No Guard -> OHKO himself to victory
You are literally wasting points you could be spending on buying rings for your wives.

>>53982052
During the war.

>>53981695
>Be Amew
>Be forcefully appointed ruler over people you don't want to rule and get sidelined.
>Be experimented on (possibly raped) and forced to have a child and later forced to have that child sealed away.
>Be forced into a position of no power and watch the world get destroyed by eldritch abomination.
>Have only two friends ever.
>Be the target of the world's largest slave owner who wants to rape you.

Being a Mew is suffering.

>>53982083
>Max Speed
>No Guard
>Enemy has fucking Sturdy and tanks your fucking hit.
>Proceeds to 1-shot you with his OHKO move.
Good game, faggot.

>>53981951
Always wondered this, but what the hell is Villain's deal?

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>>53981030
>>53980895
Str 8
Vit 5
Agi 8
Mag 5
Luck 8

age of 16 (-coin), average, vampire, unarmed (-coin), elaborate.

shadow clones, regeneration (-2 coins) (do they stack??)

+2 str
+2 luck
eternal style
training (piano)
money


misc perk #16 is kinda too broken for a "misc perk"
>cannot be interrupted
>invulnerable
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q4boAoDpTWY
plsfix

dice rolling system is kinda lame desu

>>53982121
>Needing Sturdy and an OHKO move to beat me
>My wife Decadence teleports behind you and sends you to the Distortion World
Nothing personal, homo.

>>53980888
There is plenty of over the top CYOAs on /d/, but they are exactly that - over the top and thus impossible to take seriously.
People convincing themselves that their kids secretly lust after them, on the other hand... that happens IRL.
It's the difference between gore-based "scary movie" and an actually scary one.

>>53980804
It's too badly/cheesily written to be creepy.

>>53982145
his heart goes doki-doki for the fated guy or whoever it was and so it will do anything to prove he is better than him so he will notice him or something

>>53982145
Villain is filled with complex emotions and feelings that is a mix of dere in wanting you at your peak performance and yan as he will kill anyone who dares to make you fall to anyone that isn't him.

Villain is a yandere who can't live a fulfilling life without Anon.

If you want the true story: He fought in the original Calamity War and lost. He's also your rival from a prequel cyoa to Order who you could get as a companion. There is also several other characters from the prequel cyoa who appear in Order and the events of Order happened because of the Prequel CYOA.

>>53982145
>I think this guy is strong.
>Why is he fighting those weaklings?
>Hey I just took over an entire country and fucked the queen with my raw dick in front of everyone.
>Why won't you notice me. Re(ex10)
>Begins to austitically spergs out

>>53982233
>prequel cyoa
Which one was this, exactly? Italic's link in the pastebin only links to PP.

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>>53982268
New World and Quests, also That Guy is from this one.

>>53982309
Wouldn't this imply the daughterus from this cyoa will become companions along with those antagonist?

can someone link me to a waifu CYOA ?

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>>53982336
Maybe if he ever finishes everything he wants to put into Order.

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>>53982381

>>53982381
>>53982394
>>53982309
>The Bloodlets
>Hagia
>Star Crossed Lovers
I'm confused. Where does this shit fall in the events of Order? What happened to the protagonist of Tyrant and the protagonist of Quest?

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>>53982446
Only Italics could tell you that.

>>53981559
>Pokemon Personified is based off of Pokemon with the Pokemon turned human.
>Despite being based off Pokemon its a lot darker than Pokemon.
Sugoi Italics.

>>53981559
I basically have no interest in playing, or even really reading PP as long as "pick moves from the games" is a thing.

>>53977978
Relationship: Friends (9), Girl Friends (7), Yuri Undertones (6)
Meeting: Middle School (4)
Activities: Help Her (5), Walk in the Winter Wonderland, Beach Trip
Anything Else: Be Attractive, Well Off, Great Cook

An excellent second chance, with maybe the opportunity for some young lady-love. I figure we'll probably get closer at the beach trip, go on the winter walk when we're even closer, and then I'll start supporting her.

>>53982750
>I have no interest in playing or reading it because something that defines the games are in it.
What?

>>53982750
I hope you like Z-Moves because I'm pretty sure they're gonna be in the update.

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>>53977818
Can all we stop pretending PP mechanics matter when we're all just in it for the poke (boy)pussy.

>>53982819
I wonder where the Ultra Beasts are going to come from.

>>53982904
>Boypussy
What boypussy? I'm pretty sure there is no traps.

>>53982940
Half the boys are cute and fuckable.

>>53982940
>No traps
Very funny anon, have you forgotten Altin so soon?

>>53981290
You could be an evil cleric and channel negative energy if it followed d&ds rules.

>>53982963
Altin isn't a trap though. He just looks like his twin sister.

>>53982960
That doesn't mean you have a boypussy.

>>53978924
Thats pretty big. dont know how I missed it.

Style: Fantasy. Never was much into scifi.[26h]

House: Dimension. Since I had the extra points might as well.

Job: Hard choice between king and mage. I guess I'll go with mage so I wont deal with all the law stuff and have a little more freedom.

Social Status. Seems the most useful.

Daughters: Saru, for reasons. Abagail, cause tomboys are fun to tease too.

Events: Slumber Party. Let's see those boys get through my magical traps.
This and that. For. Reasons.
Family Hobby. Can... can it be a lewd hobby?


Hell I still have 2 extra hours I never used since daughter down doesnt use any points.

>>53981290
>>53982980
Positive Energy does nothing to undeads, some healing spells just specified that they also damage undead.
If you are going by 3E rules, Positive Energy Plane is one of the best places for sentient undead to hide in.

>>53982750
Thanks for the update, anonymous poster

>>53983173
Anon, did you adopt those daughters of yours, or did something terrible happen to your wife?

Has the mecha musume cyoa been released yet?

>>53983303
but my daughterus are my waifus.

No but seriously I dont know. There wasnt a wife section or anything unless Im blind.

>>53983337
Anon... It's the third part...

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>>53983337
>but my daughterus are my waifus

>>53983337
You can't fool me, you thought you could get away with marrying lolis? Pick a big titted milf right now.
>>53978973

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>>53983320
Anon, I said it'd be done by the end of summer at the earliest.

>>53983379
I remembered it being done by the beginning of June.
Then again, my memory sucks and I've been gone for months.

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>>53983337
>my daughterus are my waifus

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>page 1 of a WIP CYOA clocks in a 7.9 MB as a jpeg

I don't know why I bother putting in little pictures for the skills and specialisation, does anyone even look at them?

Why doesn't Italics just make a VN if they love making characters and settings so much?

>>53983354
>>53983348
Oh shit. For some reason the picture didnt load so I had to click on the file name to see it.

>>53983173
Hmm. I do want to take Richalle, but Anja is tiny and seems like she'd be much more corrupted by our succubus daughter. Or corrupt our succubus daughter. Either or. Plus she's tiny. So I'm going with Anja. After all. The family that plays together stays together amiright?

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>>53983419

>>53983472
A VN is a very different animal that requires a different (though not mutually incompatible) skill set, especially if you want your play to be able to make choices; branching dialogue trees can be a lot of work.

Plus, art, programming, etc etc

If anything, CYOAs are one of the best formats if your main pleasure is making characters and settings, because you can flesh those out as much as you want and then just hint at further plots to let the reader fill in the blanks.

Rolled 83 (1d100)

>>53979514
Templar

Liberate Cities 3R 1B
The Siege of Jerusalem 7R 2B

Treasure 6R
Nobility 4R
Landed Estate 0R
Kingdom of Heaven

The Convert 1B
The Vivacious 0B

So I'm very probably going to die but that'll just send me to heaven.

Success means living some time out on Earth in my fancy estate with my wives.

Rolling for success.

>>53978479
Where's page 6?

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>>53983493

>>53982381
>archduke and heir apparent
>republic
Pick one.

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>>53978924
>Fantasy (26)

>>53978937
Castle (20)

>>53978950
King (12)

>>53978965
The Holy Grail (4)
"I wish for the power to redesign this world as an all-male mpreg fantasy personal utopia."

>>53978973
Richrljtegjj--- [[Richard I]]

>>53978984
Rellfdaghhhvf-- [[Rell]]
[[Saru]]

>>53978998
Take your [[Son]] to work day
This & That
Slumber Party

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>>53977899
If I'm going to be a Biosoldier, I'm going to be the one who is secretly helping the heroes and makes a heroic sacrifice in the final arc!

Bio Security CYOA
>Base Form
Arthropod
>Special Abilities
Multiple Limbs
Camouflage
Enhanced Senses
Natural Weaponry
>Missions+Drawbacks
Magical Girl Team
Most Reporters
Exposure
>Boss Perks
Enhanced Speed
True Fade
Enhanced Regeneration
Bio-Missile
Band of Mooks

I'm a Mantis themed bio-soldier, who specializes in assassination.

First, when they have my take down the Reporter, I'm instead going to use the opportunity to help the reporter face his death and lie low until the right time. Afterwards, I'm going to make a few paltry attempts to try to fight the magical girls, but hold back and merely buy time, plus I'll use my stealth powers to aid them in taking down other bio-soldiers without implicating myself. y mooks will work on evacuating civilloians from fight zones, as well as gathering all the intel I can on the other soldiers and what the organization is doing, and various other things.
Also, having them pretend to be Cops may help as well.

Then, at a major point when the bosses try to crack down, I'll willingly power-down in front of the girls, and have the reporter I squirreld away secretly record my powering and confession to uncover and implicate the Organization on a live video feed. Then my mooks disguised as cops will arrest me and take me to a safe-house that they'll have secured. There I'll stay, rely on them for buying food and stuff, while still covertly going out and either helping the girls, or assassinating other Bio-Soldiers. Finally, during the final arc when the girls assault the villain HQ, My men and I will show up and fight off the grunts so they can get to the Final Battle.

My mooks are slightly augmened soldiers, who I'll call the Skitters. While only as physically powerful as the average human soldier, they'll all be augmented with minor cosmetic shapeshifting abilities.

>>53983739
Are you implying Republics can't have a system of nobility? Are you also implying a monarch state can't call itself a Republic or whatever name it wants?

Also: "Banana Republic"

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>>53980050
>Reclaimer
>Totemist
>Catacombs

Basically I'm going to threaten the intelligent undead with... extortion? Kidnapping? Whatever, I'll tell them that unless they play along, if defeated I'm going to trap their spirit in a totem and then throw it in a latrine or something similar. I could try this same trick in the sewers or burning deeps I guess, but I feel like the undead will have a greater fear of that kind of thing, having an understanding of the undying life already.

>Cassandra
Heals, good vs undead, very nice to look at and seems ruthless enough to go along with my plan. She's welcome to lead, and I'm happy to work for it, baby
>Hammerstein
For the raw damage; as I feel like food would be a little harder to come by in the catacombs than most places, also helps cut down on supply use.
>Argyle
Fun guy; probably won't get along too well with Cass, but he fills a good party niche and fire magic should be useful against the various flammable undead types.

We should make our money back in reasonable time; perhaps one day in the distant future Argyle can throw me a kickass bachelor party before Cass and I tie the knot.

>>53983828
Real question is, why is only option siding with the bananas?

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>>53981337
They're actual sex slaves in this still.

My problem with this write up is that they lost a lot of description from the last one. The old version of Dusk City ironically had more personality for those kitsune, it better described their interaction with you and relationship with the other characters (like how you three interacted growing up and how they'd bully the other girls that like you and such). There's none of that here.

One of the biggest issues with Italics' recent stuff is that it's really sanitized. Reading neo-Dusk City compared to old Dusk City, you'll notice that there's no romance or character interaction anymore. In the first version the girls all had a crush on you, and the CYOA described how they went about it and acted around you. In this version? There's nothing like that. Only Freeze has any hints of a crush, and it's far more hidden and concealed. It sucks too because Freeze was always shit and worst girl, so I don't know why he tried to force her and only her on people.

Speaking about this issue in general, you'll notice that even the remake of Style of Life is sanitized of sex/romance elements. It'd be a lie to say they're not there, but even in this CYOA where it's the entire point, they're way toned down compared to the first version.

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>>53977899
Going for the laziest of builds; namely one that is just a regular grunt in a nothing guard job in the middle of nowhere.

>Arthropod
>Increased Defence
>Increased Speed
>Camouflage
>Bio-Laser

Actually not entirely useless; bio lasers make up for my low strength, and my toughness and speed are both pretty good. But really, if things go bad I'm just going to hide somewhere out of the way with camouflage and wait for things to blow over.

>>53983842
>Siding with the Apple Empire
You in Banana territory boy.

>>53983889
Can you really blame authors for sanitizing their work with the way people react to even the slightest hint that anything might be "off"?

>>53983889
I wonder why, considering all the ree's over cucking and shit. Perhaps Italics doesn't want to shuffle that shuffle anymore.

>>53983908
Would you mind working for >>53983797 in screwing fighting the company from behind the scenes?
What do you say Lieutenant?. Be the Bombardier Beetle to his Mantis?

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>>53983889
>I don't like this cyoa because all the girls aren't confirmed to be lusting over my penis anymore

>>53983938
Yes.

>>53983950
Considering the guy who does that admitted publicly that it he doesn't actually care about that and only used it to shitpost for funsies, that's essentially giving into shitposters. Not even shitposters in the sense of autists who legitimately read things wrong, but shitposters who are starting shit just to bully him.


But no to both of you. I think he just wants it to be taken more 'seriously' and thinks romance is somehow less 'serious' than making them bald and bare automatons. Especially since the romance void isn't filled with different kinds of characterization, it's just there.

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>>53983908
Oh!
Thanks for the picture, Anon.
That's going in the Potential Guardian folder!

>>53984033
Guardian Spirit when.

>>53984005
I actually like the new version more partially because the girls are no longer one big anon harem. Nothing ruins my immersion faster than having the author narrate exactly why a girl's life is centered around my dick.

>>53983889
I don't see it. I really think he's just trying to make them more interesting as individuals instead of only painting them as partners for your journey, which is what I liked about the characters in Pokemon Personified. There's less depth to explore with the Spire world so they aren't as complicated, but it's the same thing really.

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>>53983889
>Old version of Dusk City ironically had more personality for those kitsune.
>Three interacted growing up and how they'd bully other girls.
No they didn't have more personality, they also were gifts, and all they did was bully Freeze.

>Freeze was always shit and worst girl.
Freeze is a good girl, you just got shit taste.

>Italics cyoas are more sanitized and toned down.
Are they?

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>>53984038
When I'm content it's as good as it can be.
So probably not for a while.

>>53984066
So if I summon my guardian with Soul Strings, I can puppet them in place while I fuck them? Cool.

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>>53984066
O- okay.

>>53983576
>tfw such a nice image gets constantly used by a gigantic faggot

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>>53983968
Sure thing, boss

>>53984033
If you're interested in more of a similar nature, its from Cardfight: Vanguard, a collectable card game. The wiki has plenty of stuff like that, the bug looking ones specifically are part of a faction called Megacolony which is pretty much Insect Mafia/Kamen Rider villains.

Its a decent source for art in general, as there are enough factions to cover a variety of types (knights, mechas, mermaid pop idols, cyber dinosaurs, etc). Its on my list of sources to loot for pictures so I can do something with unified art like I did with Beastmaster sometime in the future.

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>>53984066
If I let my guardian possess me to exercise and do fitness stuff, would that be a valid weight loss strategy?

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>>53983999
>thinks that wasn't always the point

>>53984173
Sex is easy as fuck to get in real life. Magical adventures in gritty gang-infested cities not so much.

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>>53984118
>likes flat chested little girls indistinguishable from boys
>calls others faggots

>>53984173
Even if they aren't described as onaholes anymore, they are still slaves and depending on how you interpret "conditioning", possibly brainwashed to like it.

>>53984201
Are you alright, anon?

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>>53984124
Thanks man!
I'll go through and see if I notice anything I want.
>>53984147
Kinda depends on the degree of the possession, which I'm mostly going to leave up to the reader.
But if not, maybe your Guardian can motivate you to actually exercise. Or help improve your self-esteem.
Or you could just become the Guardian and remake yourself as someone/thing that's in shape...

>>53980050
Occultist: Familiar

Burning Deep

>Vampire Cutie
>Goblin Negotiator
>Brock McHusbando

>>53984218
and we on board of the Onahole Preservation Society declare that this is simply not good enough

>>53984199
This is why real life is shit

>>53984147
You should be a guardian instead, you make a perfect human shield

>>53984226
Is it possible to become a guardian for a guardian?

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>>53984223
just a bit disgusted that despite it being current year, people still pretend that lolis are anything but trash.
Purge when?

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>>53984226
Do you have something against heavier guardians? What makes you think a thicc anon wouldn't embrace their body and become a 500 lbs, curved yummy guardian?

>>53979054
I wish SDA made this

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>>53984045
You can like that if you want even if i disagree, but the characters have less characterization regardless. As I said, they no longer interact with each other and we're given less insight into their personalities. Romance and character interaction was removed and nothing was put in the void.

>>53984058
>I don't see it
You're focusing on your dislike of waifus and ignoring that my core point is about their personalities. The romance and interaction before gave you more information about their personality and self whereas the new descriptions lack any of that. The point is that we know less about them going on that version.

>>53984065
>No they didn't.
Read your own for comparison.

Midea is described as a robot who looks up to the uncle. Meanwhile, Aedim is a robot and is called out as someone who barely talks, looked up to your uncle, wants to see justice, and who can't stand things being out of order. In the old version, we're blatantly given more personality points.

New Kyur and Kyab are described as conditioned bodyguard robots, they rely on their skills and one is more violent. Old Kyur and Kyab are given more skillets and abilities, are described as liking you and following you around, Kyur is snarky and Kyab is a jokester, both of them like to tease Dylan and Freeze, plus they enjoy physical intimacy. I understand if you like the whole "Mindraped robots" characterization more for some bizarre reason, but we're blatantly given more information in the old descriptions as to how those two act.

>>53984300
So anon would be powerless and 58753 versions would be released until perfect, autistic balance was achieved?

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>>53984065
>>53984323
New Nani doesn't want to talk about her old life and is mature, she likes to win people's affection and she's a housewife good at magic. Old Nani is given mostly the same description, except with less words and no magic. I included this one to show you that I'm not being biased, because the new description is legitimately better for Nani.

Old Freeze and New Freeze are also mostly the same. Her new description just gives more background on her family for the most part, and makes the information on her crush that was formerly part of Dylan's description, part of hers instead. This is a mostly neutral change, the information is just more concentrated.

And Re, from the old CYOA? She got deleted completely. She simply does not exist in the new version of Dusk City, at all. So unless she offended you for existing this is a wholly negative change.


So in conclusion, this is blatantly a downgrade in description for the robot/homunculus and the younger kitsunes, and Re was deleted outright. Freeze is mostly an information reshuffling so no comment there, but Nani did benefit. She's the only one. Since that's 1 to 4, I think that this supports my point that there's less personality information given on these girls than before.