/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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This is a pretty fun one I haven't seen in a while.

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>>53880497

Posted a strawpol on my next next CYOA in the previous thread just before this thread, go there and vote if you want to influence what my next next CYOA will be.
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>>53880512

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>>53880515
Why would you interrupt someone in the middle of posting a CYOA?

Rude.

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>>53880529
I do as I please.

>>53880547
I SO can not wait for traveler to stop being posted.

>>53880580
I'm going to bring back Fate and Worm after that happens

>>53880595
I'd rather bring back Stardust.

>>53880580
>Implying people aren't going to post the 2.0 update whenever that happens

>>53880580
Why? Are you such a little bitch that looking at two PDF's hurts your sensibilities?

>>53880595
Fate is bland, worm is decent, all versions.

>>53880527
>>53880534
To respond again, please, I beg of you, don't take this the way you are. Honestly, as a first draft your DLC is great, it only needed a minor amount of tweaking, significantly less than your .01 or .03 updates! I know it might not be worth it because of all the "biting the hand that feeds you" going on around here, but I believe this could be perfected in short order. Maybe not today. Maybe today you should go get drunk and bitch about assholes on the internet.

But tomorrow? Or like next week? Come back with a few tweaks. Seeing behind the curtain was great, and so starts my actual review of the thing:

The framing is done with similar style and curiosity as the first. Dreamlike opening, but a new perspective. Either the waifu I've already created, or me if I for some stupid reason picked to become a waifu. (Not saying it's a stupid thing to add, the "be the waifu" ones are great and so is this! It's just that I, personally, say no to that when given the choice 10 times outta 10!)

The ability to choose, from the waifu's perspective, is actually pretty revolutionary and may be a cause of some of the backlash. It isn't what people expect, it isn't how most of these things are designed, and it's disorienting. But then your entire CYOA is a little disorienting, a little unsettling. That's the fun part. Being told you could be put with anyone could be interpreted, by someone who reads carelessly, as meaning you aren't in control of the waifu and you the player may not get them. Naturally this is definitely not the case, and I see that, but perhaps a little of that could be rephrased? I'd almost suggest rejiggering the timeline of this whole conversation so that it's made clear someone already chose you, so the player has a bit of reinforcement of their agency as the one choosing the genie. This could ironically make the player feel more powerful when choosing the genie's reactions.

>>53880516
I voted eronomicon, but I realize my fetishes might not be there.

>>53880708
What are your fetishes? If I make Eronomicon I will have a long list of many fetishes and if your not into some obscure shit like fucking an armpit while eating a hamster sandwich, your fetish will probably will be included.

>>53880693

Either way, there are pros and cons of changing it that way. I'd say there is a payoff at the end, but a little editing is all it needs to clarify to the audience and make them feel in control again.

So, choosing conflict resolution is a fascinating thing, actually. Especially considering that it focuses on how the genie reacts to her subordinates. If this were an anime, they'd be a pivotal part of the supporting cast, and having such a thing sounds lovely. Perhaps there should be some sort of option to make the genie more self-sufficient if the player REALLY wants, but give it an equally strong drawback. I know people might grumble, but I find readers' grumbling hilarious and life-affirming.

Though honestly fleshing this out with other characters was a great idea. And on the first page, they are vague enough that it fits with the "create your own" strengths of this CYOA.

As for the second page, well, you do make pains that the Wheel of Fate is what most people get, but it might help, even without changing a word, to move Wheel of Fate first, and in fact put it in a different section! What I mean is, I lied about not changing a word. It would be vastly more amenable to speedreaders if it was both first, and described separately,

The best thing to do would be to THEN give the blurb about clients, and repeat again (yes, even more than you already have) that these are clients first, people you as the genie can have as complications in the world, an...

Actually, I just thought of something. Something great. Bear with me. For the player, there is a serious complication. It's left vague enough that you can still make it your own, but it's still a set complication.

Maybe the client section could be changed into something more akin to that? Just like the player, you have been pulled aside when this is supposed to be over, and told you are needed to solve some huge problem. So both the player and the genie have a Quest they can pick to give them bennies

>>53880480
I hope that some squads get formed. Seeing how they end up as a unit is neat.

>>53880848
Are you talking about player builds?

>>53880903
Yeah. Players are supposed to group up in squads of four, but I can't remember if anyone's bothered with that in some time.

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>>53880751
I like fembulges.

>>53880848
I dream of a battle Harpy squad. Think I talked to a few other harpies last time I was in a thread with it.

>>53880693
>>53880826
I always appreciate your super in-depth responses. I'm really happy you enjoyed it, as I was worried it would disappoint you, especially on your birthday and all. You have some really good ideas for fixing it I hadn't considered. Maybe next week I'll try to implement them, but probably not on /tg/. I think I poisoned the well on that front. Maybe /d/.

Thanks again for your responses and advice. I really appreciate it, and everyone who posted builds, comments, criticism and showed interest in general.

>>53881007
Don't take it to heart, I thought it was neat

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>>53880529
Beri released a new segment of this.

>>53880924
>Fembulges
Is that a dick under there? Or is it just a puffy vagina? Never heard of fembuldges before.

>>53881007
Remember, it is usually a smaller party of people who loudly voice their disagreement compared to the contented silent bystanders, who largely outnumber the dissenters.

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Reposting this one from a few threads back. Was really well done. Any others by the same guy?

>>53881007
What is a DREAMER, anyways? What happens when one is found?

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>>53880480
>Race: Snow Woman
>Specialty: Cold Embrace
>Tattoo: Revival
>Personal Items: HMD [113], Flight Armor [93], Nerve Controller [80], Vitals Chip [71], Launched Explosives (Rocket Launcher) [56]
>Upgrades: Retype Weapon (Rocket Launchers explode with ice) [48], Artificial Intelligence [3]

>General: Sarah Goodman

Alright, everyone. Hailstorm's ready to work.

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>>53881120
It's her pubic mound, which is also known as the mound of Venus.

>>53881007
Don't be foolish. TG is full of people who come and go and opinions change from thread to thread and week to week. One time they'll hate X and next they'll say they love X. So if you make a change to "fix" your DLC just post it here where you have a decent file size limit.

>>53880826
You may well very much like the characters you added to the CYOA, and I can see how useful they'd be if the player wanted to Be the Waifu. But it might be best anyway to make them a little more vague, that is, leave wiggle room and make them more like archetypes than these fully, incredibly fleshed out people. You could also add a few options to to customize further, kinda like a smaller version of the ability to customize your genie, but then we may be getting too close to a husbando simulator...

Point is, er, you already did a bit of what I suggested in the previous post, with your additional responsibilities section. Whoops.

>>53881007
I'm glad you appreciated it! I know how difficult even solid constructive criticism can be to take.. (And I've had teachers and producers tell me my work is shit enough times that I had to choose between buckling down and sobbing as my dreams die, or getting MAD, screaming "I'll show them, I'll show them all!" and making better work. The latter part may just be me banging my head against a brick wall. Maybe my calling is an editor instead of a writer. Who knows?)

By the way, my birthday was fine, I got some fascinating additions to the genie waifu simulator, plus ZBG is being his no-chill self after releasing good content. It's a good day, even if I came back to a couple of dumpster fires of CYOA threads. Don't assume you've poisoned the well here. Definitely post on both, but remember I actually frequent this place much more than /d.

And remember, you didn't disappoint me. I definitely want to remake my old character with all this new information. Now we'll get to see my terrifying houri waifu's side of the story...

>>53876498
Well, that's just your creative muse talking to you anon. Now get your preferred CYOA maker and create that OC!

>>53881156
damn that's good. I like the unique lay out besides the coffee stain which seems a bit overdone. I would have liked to have more options but this is fine I guess.

>>53880529
My twin and I are the fucking martyrs
RACE:
Superhuman - Bait
TATTOO:
Split
ITEMS: (+120 Credits)
Assault Rifle x 2 (-14)
Longsword x 2 (-10)
Light Power Armor x 2 (-30)
HMD (-7)
Turret (-6)
Shield Deployer (-20)
Support Drone (-7)
Neo Medical Bay (-18)
Infantry Squad (-7)
BOSS:
Natalie Thompson

>>53881087
>>53881125
Thank you. I'm glad to hear it after today.
>>53881248
I guess. I just really do not want to cause another shitstorm like that. I was expecting criticism over things like the "space left intentionally blank" gimmick or making the Mother too much of a villain, but not that.
>>53881254
>>53881333
Glad to hear it. I mentioned last time we talked that I wanted to make more defined characters, so that's what came out. They're still archetypes, just with tweaks. Making the Christmas Cake a happy eccentric instead of depressed and the tsundere paranoid about everything not just affection. But maybe they need tweaks too.
Your comments are really thoughtful and in-depth. You would probably make a good editor of you wanted. Have you written any cyoas?

>>53881192
Spoilers here >>53880127

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I'm sick and tired of hereditary monarchies in cyoas. When will see the superior form of government in a cyoa?

No kidding. Wouldn't an ancap society be perfect for a cyoa?

>>53881571
>be born
>you have to sign a 100 year slave contract to not starve to death
>/quest

yeah it'd be so great

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>>53881610
So you're telling me you wouldn't want to be one of the elite in a an ancap world?

>>53880480
More or less the same build I made before but I never saved it.

>Race
Harpy

>Specialization
Hunter
Carry

>Tattoo
Extra Special

>Personal
Heavy Power Armor -25
-Weightless Armor -12
M61A4 20mm Autocannon -10
Launched Explosives - Variety -15
HMD -7
Nerve Controller -13

>Heavy Items
Neo Medical Bay -18

>Staff
Service Personnel -16

>General
Natalie Thompson

A quick and powerful little strike fighter. I favor decisive engagements and so don't plan to stay on the battlefield longer than necessary. It's not exactly how it's described in the options but I figure the Nerve Controller will allow me to control my power armor's weapons mentally seeing as how I don't have hands. I'd like to be in an aerial combat squad with Harpies, Drakes, or anyone that takes Flight Armor.

Maybe instead of Extra Special + Carry I could take Bane for Winged Devils and become the true air superiority fighter but I like my plan as-is.

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TO THE ANON that like five threads ago posted >>53870319 in response to this image, I just wanted to come through for you and post the the source is a wonderful h-manga referred to as "Is My Hobby Weird?"

I wanted to help you out, but I was away for some time, so I only now saw your request for sauce. One of my favorite little series of all time, so enjoy.


After all, I wouldn't be a very good author if I didn't help an anon find the sauce to a doujin having to do with one of the primary fetishes I cater my OC to.

>>53881475
An object I use everyday and barely think about...

>My Glasses
>My keys?
>My Phone?

Long term objects... I still use my backpack from highschool, although I haven't for a few months since I got a new one as a gift. The new backpack is for transporting games whenever I'm visiting friends and family, the old one is for spare clothes, pens and a notebook, general stuff that might come in handy to have at work or whenever I spend the night someplace. Been unemployed and regressing into a shut-in NEET since March however, so it's been sitting in the corner of my room ever since...

>>53881504
You taking Broken Facade is like a multiplier. Collectively, all regularly dissatisfied people, DREAMERS, Houri who want more out of life but think being onaholed is all they're good for, all Jann, regretful Juno and so on are small additions, but your influence magnifies them. And with TPTB's delicate state, every single loss counts.

>>53881637
I prefer my cyoas to have roads

>>53881652
That picture is pretty cute

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>>53881652
Thank you, brother.

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>>53881711

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>>53880516
I like the sound of the Black Guard one, but I'm probably a bit biased (it's like a perfect manifestation of my kinks). Enslaved 2 sounds good as well. I don't think I have enough fetishes to enjoy eronomicon.

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>>53881721

>>53881731
Acquire more

>>53881660
Something designed to help you carry burdens. That sounds about right to me.
Good luck, anon.

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>>53881734

>>53881637
>>53881571
The only one that wouldn't just be a collection of shitty ancap memes is a Free Cities cyoa, and at that point you can just play Free Cities normally and not need a cyoa for it.

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>>53881749

Ok. I'm more or less out of ideas for [Traits] right now. I'll probably come back to it if I see some creatures with traits I didn't add in.

Eventually if it's ever more or less ready to exit the planning stages and enter pretty picture addy stages I'll open up a google doc or whatever and ask for additions/point values/etc if there's going to be an interest.

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>>53880443
>Tropic
Delicious fruits and animals. Don't like the hot weather because it makes me feel greasy but the food is worth it.

>Manor
Comfy but not too tall so I don't need to walk up many stairs.

>Greenhouse
>Armoury
>Grand Library
>Magic Circles
>Ponds
These rooms are mostly chosen to enhance my defence although I couldn't resist growing my own fish and veggies.

>Bridge
>Animation
>Towers
Only one way in and it's guarded by stone soldiers and ballistas.

>Mend
>Supply
>Physical
>Martial
>Magical

I wish those bastards left me alone. I just want to learn magic, eat stuff, cook magical food, eat enchanted delicasies, etc. Fuck off, Abyss. This could be such a dreamworld where I can eat all I want and keep my perfect body if they weren't here to ruin it.

Then again, I wonder what the creatures of the Abbyss taste like.

I hope the fucker who got me banned for 3 days gets eaten alive.

>>53881799
Never leave me again

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Make your choices now!

>>53881809
Some skinny bitch keeps trying to get me banned, honeypie.

>>53881852
Ice cream.

>>53881739
Easier said than done when your tastes are patrician

>>53881852
I'm gonna suck down that cutie patootie milkshake.

>>53881852
Vanilla milkshake please

>>53881852
Whatever that chocolate thing is

>>53880216
Is it just me or do the age descriptions not match the actual stat change?

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>>53881852
Aw, Come here Puddin'

>>53881852
Pumpkin Pie!

>>53881852
I'm kind of craving a Donut right now.

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>>53881864
>>53881898
>>53881912
>>53881913
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>>53881951
Here's the results!

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>>53881852
They all look delicious but I'm going to be strategic here.

>Cupcake
Looks yummy but not too big. More fluff than meat so to speak.
>Sorbet
Big and delicious with lots of creme fraiche. Strawberry ain't my favourite flavour too. Double chocolate with mint would be better.
>Milkshake
That's not sweets. That's health food.
>Pudding
Even less meat than the cupcake. This won't be filling. Looks yummy though.
>Cookie
One cookie? HAHAHAAHAA
>Donut
Delicious and greasy but not too big. Might even have filling. But won't be very filling. Hehe.
>Brownie
One brownie? Same problem as the cookie. The chocolate looks delicious though.
>Pie
We've got a winner. It's only 1 slice so it can't be too many calories so I can make it extra big. The crust is basically bread too. Healthy and delicious and pretty big.

Damn. I'm going to go with the pie. Unless the brownie is actually an entire brownie cake that hasn't been cut into pieces yet.

Now tell me what I get.

>>53881859
What was the reasoning behind the ban anyway?

>>53881859
>keeps trying
>trying
lol

>>53881962
>quake mode

Coooool

>>53881852
I'll take the cupcake!

>>53881978
>spamming/flooding

Even my ban was a fat joke.

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>>53881962
>Ice Cream Bonus

yey

>>53881962
I knew I should've gone with the brownie.

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>>53881799
>>53881965

I thought you left us forever

>>53881962
Fug, shoulda picked ye donut. Useless pie is useless. At least disgusting fatposter can stuff himself even more obese with his summoned pie.

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>>53882003

>>53880512
>>53880528
>>53880547
UPDATE TOMORROW maybe...

>>53881962
On the one hand, be the little girl, on the other hand, hey eternal youth amiright?
>>53881946

puddin and puddin

>>53882033
You are a disgusting person on the inside

>>53882047
No, that's just when Highlander stops collecting builds.

>>53882056
No, you.

>>53880480
>Drake with Imbue
Because being a dragon girl wreathed in fire is cool.
>Natural Weapons
Manifesting my weapons from my flame or having a further enhanced body would be neat.
>Heavy Gun
I want it focused on penetration, and range, though only being able to fire a shot every couple of seconds would be fine, I do also want a good amount of destructive power from it. Also I want it as a breath weapon shooting bolts of my enhanced fire, because that would be cool.
>Light Melee
Honestly I ended up with a single point left, and having it apply as enhanced claws or something wouldn't be that bad.
>Launched Explosives
Bolts of explosive flame launched from my body!
>Heavy Power armor
I want to be a stronger more durable dragon girl.
>Magic Ammo
I want to be able to fire my "heavy gun" as often as possible without issues, even if it's meant as a long range weapon I plan to abuse it as much as possible
>Flight Armor
Enhanced dragon girl flying power, because being able to fly fast is something a dragon girl should be able to do.
>Restored Explosives
Don't want to have any issues launching explosions either, I want to be able to produce a constant stream of explosions around me at all times.
>HMD
Spotting for my heavy gun and enhanced communications.
>Melody Shepherd
Improved equipment, because I want to blow stuff up even better.


I hope to get a team that doesn't mind that I didn't spend a single credit on the base, or are at least looking for someone with a lot of firepower.

>>53881852
Cookie
>>53881962
Cookie Bonus.

This is actually really good for me since I find it difficult talking to people I don't know.

>>53881962
>Donut bonus
Probably the best one overall, with Flan's bonus a close second.

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Lets try that again, a bit differently.
Choose a tile, and choose wisely...

>>53882133
Red Wealth.

>>53882133
Wealth, Blue

>>53882133
Red Power.

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>>53880516
Why is Eronomicon winning? We already have like five lewd magic cyoas.

>>53882133
Red Longevity. I know I'll have to kill people for it, but whatever.

>>53882133
Power, purple

>>53882133
Purple Love & Lust

>>53881809
>>53881799
Can't wait till you get banned again.

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>>53882148
>>53882155
>>53882158
>>53882190
>>53882191
>>53882228
The Revelation!

>>53882004
DELET

But holy fuck I loved that fight.

>>53882175
You know where we are, don't you?

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>>53882133
Green Love

>>53881156
Akrisia but friends with Tanith and Luna

>>53882252
>purple love & lust is emphatically weaker than the other purple options

>>53881711
Whenever I look at this one, I think, "Well, THIS time I won't be totally shallow and choose a character on the basis of her tits!" and then I pick Ivanka or Tammy.

>>53882133
Purple Love & Lust

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>>53882252
So, concerning Red Longevity, how "eventually" are we talking about?

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>>53882252
>>53882275
>humans don't find me attractive anyway since I'm underweight
>cute doggos and birds and foxes and stuff are my new friendos
This is totally fine.
No lewd with animal friendos though, wtf lol

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Is the purple text legible?

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>>53882300
Lets say every 15 years adds 1 hour extra worth of sleeping time. The process is gradual

>>53882327
It's unpleasant to read but yes, it's legible.

>>53882327
The lower left corner of the top paragraph is slightly difficult, but other than that it looks good!
I can't wait till you finish this, anon. It looks really interesting.

>>53882337
>>53882300
Meant to say 1 hour per 10 years

>>53882327
Yes, but it's a bit of a pain.

>>53882337
Crossword.

>>53882133
Blue power

>>53882327
I'd rather not read it, to be completely honest. Needs to be brighter.

>>53882360
Such a small price then.

>>53882252
>blue power

Pretty comfy, I like it

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>>53881734
>Wanda Jager
Doesn't want or need a handler mostly a formality. Easy job, easy life.
>Camouflage
>Healing Factor
Seven rolled
>Skin Shedding
>Elastic Body

>Genderswap.


2x Kaiju+Handler Combo.

>>53880480
>Race
Golem

>Specialization
Shield, I'm pretty much invincible

>Tattoo
Natural Weapons, I'm gonna be a fucking a living weapon

>Personal Items
Light gun, Heavy gun, Heavy Melee, Heavy Power Armor

>Heavy Items
Turrets and an Alarm System

>Staff
Infantry Squad

>Upgrades
Magic Ammo, Regen Armor, Weightless Armor. I'm gonna be a pain in the fucking ass to even put a chip in like this. Think about it, my heavy power armor is both very powerful and very durable, it's only downside being that it slows me down. With Weightless Armor, It's just as powerful and durable as before, but doesn't restrict my movement. Not only that but it fucking regenerates, and damaging it would already be an accomplishment. On the extremely unlikely chance they break the armor, I'm nigh invincible myself. And, the ammo for my guns never run out of ammo, meaning I can fight reliably from short and long distances.

>Boss
Natalie Thompson

Basically I'm tankiest tank that ever did tank. Hope the team doesn't mind about the lack luster heavy items.

>>53882237
I'll take a hundred fatposters over any of the retards who argued their way through the last half a dozen threads

>>53882327
Barely. However I am practically blind without my contacts/glasses. Still, you could stand to turn on the brightness somewhat.

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Let's take a blast to the past: here are some old (or probably just lazily edited) CYOA's.

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Alright, take 2.

Purple font is lighter and black background is more opaque.

Better?

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>>53882461

>>53882133
Purple power

>>53881561
that explanation now amuses me because it gives backround vibes ive felt in other cyoas like psychopomps and polydimensional collapse

the primary duty those with power jus trying to stay in existence
dunno why but that tickles me curiously

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>>53880512
>>53880528
Iam Lahst

>Origin
The Darkness; Free Floating Drone

>Skills and Perks
High Tech Understanding

Common Ethereal Manipulation

Chosen Blood
Thoughtless
Aetonic

>Little Things
Forever Alone x2 3000
Full Moon Touched 3250

>Inventory (3250 Credits)
Upgraded Travelerer Coat
Collosi ‘Clone’ Mech 750

Upgraded Yuta Brace x2

Pegs
Basic Survival Kit
Basic Bag
ID Card
Iron Halo 250
Healing-Chip 0

>Factions, Departments & Others
The True Travelers

>Allies
The Bill Murray Triumvirate
Migelo Smith

>Home District
Glendale

>Hubworld
Terra-D8231 - The Greatest Evil

>>53882461
>Waifu.

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>>53882502

>>53882461
Realistically, you could take the augs and probably not need neuropezyne. There are people with biotic limbs, hearts, and lungs. The whole needing a drug for your cyberdong to not reject your body or vice versa is one of the dumber things about that series. It does happen IRL but not nearly to such extremes usually or so frequently.

>>53881156
I thought I heard that this was made by SDA, also known as the guy who made Star Dust.

>>53882482
It's okay in small doses, but it better not be the main text color, boy.

>>53881637
No, I wouldn't. Not unless I was so elite that I had the power to destroy the ancap system and replace it with something that's good for everyone.

>>53882564
There'll be certain parts of the CYOA (his opinion on certain choices namely) that will use it for paragraph-length segments, but for those they should have a bigger font and I'll be able to use stuff like stroke to distinguish it from its surroundings.

>>53882556
No, it's by DSA, the person who did The Village and Urban Unease.

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>>53881156
>Actually inhuman looking Touomasu tier monstergirls

>>53880751
I want to see sounding, both male and female. In something. Not just urethra fucking.

>>53882545
Bottle.
Unlimited liquid drugs, like acid and thc oils.

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>>53882545

>>53882519
Ah. I just realized that I used the word "massive" twice in too small a space. Fuck.
Blame lack of sleep. I really need to do that.

>>53882545
Piece of paper. In addition to being able to get me anything I want, it can also be a source of unlimited money, since I can order things I *don't* want and then sell them.

>>53881637
In any Ancap society, an elite would inevitably transform into your typical stationary bandit, and thus eventually morph into practically just another government anyway.

Ancap is as pointlessly retarded as communism, and is incapable of supporting itself for a reasonable amount of time. Further, it technically can't even work since a capitalist system requires a standardised economy, which in turn requires the existence of an institution to make and enforce the rules of trade as well as make the currency since ain't no fucking way an economy can last forever on the barter system.

Seriously, Ancap is about as much of a stupid and impossible meme as communism, and as a concept should be murdered and left to die in a ditch

>>53882555
This is true, even the specific issue used in the game was actually theoretically solved, I think before the game even came out, by coating any implants with proteins and/or immunosuppressants. And while scar tissue can develop later on, nerves actually like to bind to things that have small amounts of electricity running through them(it's part of how they connect to each other), and that connection is not likely to have scar tissue grow in so strongly as to disrupt it. So realistically once you can control the augs, there is an incredibly low chance of you losing that due to scar tissue developing. The Neuropzyne though is an incredible theoretical drug though for how it deals with the issue, by actually reversing scar growth and removing the scar tissue between the implants and the nerves, somehow.

>>53881156
>Christmas Cake
>Water ayy
>Tourettes weeb
>『DUWANG』
>The Godmother
>beach justice hobo
Yeah, gonna go with snek on this one

>>53881561
Haven't made one yet! I have been burning through ideas, but I have a new one that would work if that popular spaceship one hadn't just come out.

I call it "Get in, Loser. We're going to SPACE!"
I think the premise is self/explanatory.

>>53882587
>SDA
>DSA

Well that's not confusing at all. /sarcasm.

Neat that it's by the same person who did The Village though; I really like that one.

>>53883004
Blame SDA for DSA being known as DSA, they're the one that pushed it. Though it makes sense, with it actually meaning Derelict Station Anon, for the Derelict Station cyoa

>>53883062
>>53883004
1. People are too lazy to type out the author's name.

2. This is what happens when you don't choose your own name and get branded by someone in the cyoag thread.

>>53883147
Hey, it worked out for Italics.

>>53883062
It kind bothers me because Derelict Station is one of my least favourite CYOAs form the author.
And other works from him reflect much better his standard style.

>>53882644
Wish Pill
Don't really need much else, but i'll take money pill and sex pill

>>53882461
$500k
You know what I could do with half a million dollars?
>>53882502
Six-Sided Die
We Path to Victory now.
>>53882545
Bottle, I guess.
>>53882644
Drug
Future
Wish

>>53881670
I honestly wanna say.....I love the DLC,at first I was confused but as I started to think it over,I realized it adds more character to your Genie,makes it her seem like a person. She could have picked anyone else as her contractor but instead,she picked you despite the pressure of doing something else and that means a lot.

>>53882294
I know that feel well. I'm the creator of it, and Jayna is probably the girl I would pick, but I have to fight every urge in my body not to pick Tammy.
>>53882416
I hadn't even really thought of that, I guess Wanda really would be the easiest to deal with.

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>>53882461
Money

>>53881734
Bernadette

>>53882545
Ring

>>53882644
Immunity pill and go and donate my blood to scientists to spread more cure.

>>53883363
Ah, well, it's not like I can hurt anything by being shallow in this case.

>Ivanka
>Muscle Enhancement
I'm sure she would appreciate that.
>Armory
Given her the human-like nature of her kaiju form, she can probably make good use of these weapons.
>Healing Factor
>Kaiju Armor
Between these two, she ought to be a very tough opponent.
>Special Fluids
Wow, how did that choice get on here? Weird. It certainly doesn't appeal to any of my fetishes or anything.

Events
>Champion of Earth

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>>53882133

Purple longevity

>>53881104
Support Mother!
>Broodmother - Painless
>Training - Proxy
>Direct Control - Upgrade
>Spectacle - Suppress
>Lieutenant, Juggernaut, Dragon, Dynamo, Outsider Medic

>>53883744
Enjoy your memory death.

>>53880443
>Castle
It can be a weeb castle right?

>Bedroom
I need that good ass sleep.
>Heart
Pretty much mandatory if you wanna live.
>Recreation
Forever training
>Waterworks
I'm a big sucker for aesthetic looking hot springs.
>Workshop
Upgrading things are fun.

>Bridge
Only have to worry about one angle.
>Golem
Tanks
>Cannons
Big dps for big targets
>Towers
Easily get rid of these small shits
>Blockades
If some were to sneak past.

>Servant
I want a waifu
>Martial
Badass armor and weapon? hell yea
>Mend
I don't wanna bother with fixing structural shit.

So. Out of all the shit waifu cyoas. Are there any that don't suck?

Like, no cheesiness?

>>53880516
There's more than one of these that sound great. I hope you'll keep making lewd CYOAs either way, both waifu and not. You got a skill for it, take over the niche, provide us with quality content forever (or tackle traveller-sized superlewd CYOA one day, to be appreciated by deviants for the rest of the days).

>>53882252
purple power or purple longevity are pretty nice.

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So I posted the new DLC for this for the first time a couple of days ago; one kind anon pointed out my typos, and I've fixed those and made a few minor clarifications. Calling it a day on this project now.

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>>53884204

>>53884142
Waifus are a flawed concept. If you're sane and normal enough that waifus don't appeal to you, consider yourself lucky and don't tempt fate.

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>>53884246
And heres the newest bit.

As always, feedback and builds (or pointing out more typos) is appreciated; I'd be interested to see some takes on the expanded elf wars.

I don't see myself making many more changes or additions to this for now, but I'm already working on the next few new CYOAs, and the feedback would be helpful for them.

>>53883210
It was also one of his first ones and had a large impact on release, so people were calling him that.

>>53884142
Most of the theme of romance will have some cheesiness - you cannot avoid it without making CYOA complex and writing a lot about characters which is hard to pull without making said CYOA a mess or turning people away from waifus. Thus, a bit more weight put on archetypes, tropes and stereotype.

>Waifus are a flawed concept.
Why flawed? I understand they wouldn't appeal to anyone but as many CYOA shown, as a concept aren't more flawed than anything else and may appeal to a wide variety of anons.

>consider yourself lucky and don't tempt fate
Why those who like such would be unlucky? It's not like you or I, when playing fantasy, actually expect or miss having such a girl, right?

...right, anon?

>>53884303
Second part of the post meant for >>53884218

>>53884204
>>53884214
>>53884230
>>53884246

Hydra w/ Strong Bond
Stats:
- High Power
- High Toughness
- Mid Speed
- Mid Intelligence

Companion
- Ryanne Woodsong

Event: The Grand Joust
Rivals:
- Sir Rodrigo
- Cyrus
- Kroghar
- Sir Saridon
Reward: Magic

My hydra can handle fighting up close while I take pot shots from range. Very few people seem to have the ability to kill something with a hydra's regeneration very easily from range. Getting the magic reward from the joust will further enhance this.

>>53884204
>>53884214
>>53884230
Beast: Booming Drake
Modifier: Strong Bond
Speed: X-High
Power: High
Tough: Mid
Int: Mid
Companion: Lucy Harpford, Summoner
Event: War of the Elves


Ally: Summer Elves
Companion: Taliss Silvershield, Mage Binder
Mission: Exterminator
Mission: Strike Target
Mission: Strike Target
Target: Mylette, Insect Diva
Target: Syl and Khor, Master Hunters
Reward: The Blessing Of Life

>>53881637
Well ... kinda working on something like that. You construct an arcology, and I brought ancap as a governance option as a shout out to Free Cities. But it's got some issues, because it's the only anarchic option that's somewhat viable in the game's context and locks you out of many policies a government with more executive power could use, a standing army and authoritarian security policies for example. Which is alright, since you'll be making enough brouzouf as an ancap to just hire security companies and mercenaries instead.

Then again, I don't know if I'll ever finish it. It's pretty much a tumorous growth of content by now, trying to emulate a mostly autonomous city in a dying world beset by raiders, terrorists (who believe mankind is supposed to go extingt), failing nations trying to take your safe haven, ideological struggles with other arcology owners (think Alpha Centauri), social engineering at every level of society, technological progress and it's dangers (including stuff like human enhancement, drugs, nanofabrication and AI), trade and a bit of comfy when designing your living conditions. I aimed too high, but damn, I'll keep working on it when I can spare the time.

>>53884218
People like you are projecting so much on the mere idea of waifus.
It's almost all in your head.

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>>53881794
I choose the heart of darkness fuck it i am going to cure you take you and the box and leave the hospital running together whatever you want it or not i didn't wanted to feel this kind of feel

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Posting my wip because I need some inspiration.

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>>53884835
Also, more appropiate pics if someone has them.

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>>53884848

>>53884835
What kind of inspiration are you looking for?

>>53884889
More talent to buy
better bonuses for the distuinguishing features of products
more living arrangement options
another category for priviliges

>>53880480
>oni
>jumbo
>gigantism
>60 meters tall

We kaiju now boys

>>53884835
What is the best faction for a "nice" megacorporation that fight against that ancapcuckery and want to help people?

>>53884915
Any faction other than No-Man.

>>53882360
So, 160 more years. Quite little for 'longevity' option but I guess you could just sleep couple thousand years and hope society develops methods to counter the need to sleep.

>>53884915
NOT No-Man. Sancto Domini at least tries to help people, but they're very interested in keeping the status quo ... Keiratsu is trying to go full singularity and loath to share with those not part of the group, so they're probably out as well. Black Hand is characterized by little else than underhanded tactics, which doesn't seem very kind. So your choices are 'status quo with charity' and 'luddites'.

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Beastmaster anon here, one more question I meant to ask; how did you guys feel about sticking to the one source for the art?

There are plenty of collectable card games and mobages that can serve as a similar resource, so I was thinking of doing something similar with a different batch of art for whatever I do next, if the overall effect is worth sometimes limiting what I can use for options.


>>53884356
Looks good; theres only a couple of contenders in the Joust that I think could take a Strong Bond Hydra out and you're not up against any of them.

>>53884716
Taliss would lock down Mylette pretty well; Syl and Khor would be tough but manageable with the Drake's speed

>>53884915
>>53884930
>>53884956
Really, culture is the real choice having to do with agenda. If you want to fight for state power you should probably take the justice culture and make that your ideology.

>>53884960
Considering that the whole CYOA and the DLCs have that art any other source of art will make look anything you do with it VERY out of place

>>53884960
I mean, it's nice. You're talking about just sticking to one source of art for a specific CYOA, right?

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>>53884988
I mean for whatever new, non Beastmaster CYOA I work on next; whether it's worth finding another consistent art source again for material.

I'm just posting these pictures because I saved so many that I'll never use but I think they're cool

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>>53884999
>You're talking about just sticking to one source of art for a specific CYOA, right?
Yes. So the next time I do one maybe I'll take all the art from, I dunno, Cardfight Vanguard or Legend of the Cryptids or something.

>>53885041
Cool.

Quick question, but where have you been getting these pics from? Curious.

>>53885021
It can make a CYOA more interesting, but so long as the art is stylistically consistent I don't think it needs to be from one source.

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>>53885061

http://bloodbrothersgame.wikia.com/wiki/Blood_Brothers_Wiki

The artstyle makes for really neat looking knights too, which almost was the subject of this little project, I just figured Beastmastery would allow for more variety.

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>>53884835
My bwain hurts!!

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>>53881962
What a nice cyoa

My choice fits me perfectly

>>53884915
>fight against ancapcuckery

Why? An ancap society would be fucking great if the right people are in charge. Assuming you're not angel and planning to force people into trannydom, you're in a great position to help and support people.

What would you want to replace it with amyway?

>>53884748
What box? But yeah, really the only choice if you have a heart.

>>53885103
use pen and paper

>>53884981
So it's ok if no faction really fits?
>>53884981
Seems like the best option, is state capitalism (basically the corporation becoming the state) incomptatible with being nice to the people?

>>53884981
>powerful state = justice

HAHAHAHAAAHAHAAHHA

>>53882252
>Blue Power
>lol everyone's cool with you brah you'll realise you never needed it
Yeah but I wanted to stop other people from killing other people you mong.

>>53885126
>A communist society would be fucking great if the right people are in charge

>Assuming you're not angel and planning to force people into trannydom, you're in a great position to help and support people
Ok, the guy controlling the only source of clean water wants you to suck a dick before you get a drink. Doesn't have to be his, you can choose, he's cool like that. How thirsty are you feeling?

>>53885126
Just becoming the state, force a decent justice system and regulations and maybe a few socialidt programs like single-payer healthcare.
Isn't ancapism that weird anarchy with landlords like in the memes with the red and yellow emoji?

>>53884204
Beast:Watcher
Modifier:Strong bond
Power:High
Tough:High
Speed:Low
Int:High
Companion:Jacob Strauss

Event:War of the Elves
Ally:Winter Elves
Companions:Vancia, Nelwynn
Mission:The stronghold
Mission:Clearcutter
Mission:Strike Target: The Night That Kills
Rewards:Ritches
I'm pretty sure my walking artillery that is the watcher could break the strongholds walls, expecially when supported by Vancias magic and Nelwynn is scouting.
Watcher can also easily clear the forest using his beams and claws.
For TNTK I and Watcher never blink and can always be on our guard, also Vancia can greatly help with her illusions and Nelwynns flies shouldn't have too much trouble finding him.

No /cyoag/! I forbid it! No /pol/ talk today!
I'd prefer the Fujoposter to this!

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>>53884960
My biggest problem is lack of foxes

>>53885135
>>53885143
Justice isn't objective justice. It's for forcing your ideology on the world.
You can be "nice" without taking justice.
Loyalty is for being nice to your employees, diligence is for being nice to your customers.

>>53885126
>An ancap society would be fucking great if the right people are in charge.
That's the lowest possible bar for a political system. Almost ANY society would be nice if good people are in charge.
The actual challenge is how well a political system would cope with fuckwits and assholes at the helm - and I'm not convinced anarcho-capitalism does well at all there.

>>53885167
communism is not a good idea, power corrupts, one should never give all power to a single person, becouse when that person understands that he can do anything he wants the state will devolve into a monarchy

>>53885126
>>53885143
>>53885167
>>53885168
please dont

lets just play cyoas

>>53885200
Sorry.

>>53885167
I hire a batch of McMercenaries to shoot him in the spine.

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>>53885208
>Sorry.
For that alone you are better than many who have plagued the threads before us

>>53884908
The opposite to cult of personality: A thing only wealth and power can buy in a cyberpunk world: privacy. Few people know your name, even less what you look like. All data on you is carefully expunged, including the memories of most people beneath your station.

For living conditions, how about servants? Might be free with Human Rights Violations and includes chips that rewrite their memories/personality.

>>53885200
If you read the CYOA that sparked the discussion, it's not an ancap society at all.

>>53882832
>beach justice hobo
best girl

>>53885220
I WANT MY SEXY SUCCUBUS WAIFU

>>53885227
Those are good. I think maybe privacy could fit under cult of personality, as the anti option. As there probably aren't enough variations on it for it to be an entire category of its own.

>>53885220
>Spiked Pauldrons
It'd actually be really nice to be able to go anywhere in complete safety.

>>53885262
Not just the hour?

>>53881962

B-but I don't want to be the little girl, I just like pudding

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>>53885220
>Space marine pauldrons
>you will lose any lawsuit anyone files against you

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>tfw playing cyoas for months
>still no tall, rich, handsome husbando irl

Do these things even work?

>>53885321
Sounds like you are doing something wrong, are you printing them out, marking your choices and then shoving them up your ass like instructed in the pastebin?

>>53882133

Blue power. Enlighteniment is always good but I think I'm cool on the others

>>53885321
It's just like installing new software, you need to restart first. Not your compter, of course, but your life. Turn it off and get reborn again.

>>53885220
Fancy Pauldrons
HONHONHONHONHONHONHON

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>>53885321
You just haven't played the right one yet, keep trying

>>53885347
You have to crumple it up first. That's where a lot of people go wrong.

>>53885304
If you picked the pudding you clearly wanted (Subconciously) To be the little girl do yourself a favor and take pudding again

>>53885370
Why was this made?

>>53885411
Most of them are pudding you moron.

>>53885127
The box as the box full of the heirlooms the doctor is probably going to sell them on ebay or something

>>53884835
Best state to take over?

>>53882252
Is it just me or is Blue Longevity really badly thought out?

I'm not talking about the reduced lifespan. I'm talking about the choice being for "Wisdom" and what you get is "Power to justify your existence". Nothing about helping you understand the world, the humanity, life and death or any of that jazz. Just straight up "This should help you not be a drain on society". How is that Wisdom?

Wealth shares the same problem too.

>>53885462
That's got to be personal preference.
I'd go for a richer one, otherwise what's the point.

>>53885473
People on 4chan tend to mistake wisdom with not being a drain on society, for obvious reasons.

Dunno what they think of monks, who purposely isolate themselves from society.

>Guard Sidekick
Hopefully the armor will help me survive til the end of this.
>Melody Heavenheart
She can probably defeat most enemies while I hide behind my shield. At least she's nice to look at.
>Demons
I'm sure all the time Melody will spend monologuing about her demonic heritage will mean they focus on her more than me.

>>53885412
Is there something wrong with it?

>>53885500
build for >>53885370

>>53885500
yeah. It's bad

>>53885370
>Animal:Fox
>Jack the stealth dude
>Dragons

It's just like Skyrim!

>>53885412
>>53885520
It's funny, lighten up

>>53885534
it's not though

>>53885520
I liked it.

>>53885544
I didn't.

>>53885269
I kinda like the idea of combining privacy with monster ... few know who you are, but those who do are scared out of their wits.

>>53885551
Ok

>>53885558
Yes.

>>53884908
How about some vehicles? Own a sports car, own a VTOL, own a yacht, own an aircraft carrier, own a submarine, own a spaceship.

>>53885370
This is cute; kind of makes me want to do a more serious take on the topic, where you're a follower of a hero or heroine trying to assist them on their quest; could be their right hand man, patron/mentor, squire/apprentice, love interest, etc... I'll have to add it to the ideas list.

>>53885571
Oh, and a tank would be nice, of course. One of the best ways to show up in a conflict area to negotiate the sale of WMDs to both sides.

>>53884204
This one looks really fun, thanks for making it!

>>Beast
I'll take a Booming Drake. Dragons are always cool, and an X-High stat without losing all my companions is really good.

>>Bond
I'll go for a Strong Bond, raising Toughness to High since my insane speed should compensate for middling power already.

>>Career
A mixture of Courier, Researcher and Other-I want to be an adventurer-traveller who explores the furthest reaches of the world with my companion to learn more about magic and history, occasionally delivering important cargo as a courier if I find a job that catches my eye, or just want some extra spending money.

>>Companion
Lucy Harpford. Her power seems really interesting and she seems like she'd be up for a good adventure. Hopefully I can help her to get a little more mature.

>>Event
I'll enter the Grand Joust. My foes will be Rodrigo, Elenora, Cyrus and Saridon, in that order. Rodrigo seems relatively easy to overcome. Elenora is probably much better at fighting than I am, but my Drake is so fast that I should be able to exploit her inexperience to take her by surprise and win without too much hassle. Cyrus and Saridon will probably be very hard fights, but I think that I still have a good chance of winning.

I'll take the Grand Feast as my reward-I'd like a magic item, but honestly I think the social networking benefits of the Feast will be a lot more valuable-it's sure to make the King like me, especially since I took out Saridon. The extra companion I'll take will be Elenora-it'll be good to have someone who's very powerful in their own right and not dependent on their summon like Lucy.

>>53885552
Monster is pretty expensive. That cost doesn't really make sense unless it's a widespread PR campaign.

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>>53881794

No screw this gimme the heart of darkness and let me take away whatever it is killing you, then let's go out and have some god damn adventures and shenanigans with that petal you're not doing this to me, we could be partners in crime and have fun for a long time

>>53885623
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JSUIQgEVDM4

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>>53884748
>>53885623

What if the reason she's in the hospital is that she used the Heart to heal you already?

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>>53885654

Stop right there disguised Satan, you're not going to meme on me this time you fuck, she mentioned she's been there before and that the phoenix feather could have fixed us.

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>>53884835
Can I create a transhumanist socialist state?

>>53881794
i kill everyone and run away with the girl, then i use the heart of darkness and force the doctor to swallow the illness she has.
10/10 waifu for life and awsome heirlooms for me

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>its been I forgot how many weeks since I started, barely 40% of pages and text done

Also, a very basic resource system is in, I'll include modifiers and different costs for each option later. And mission points gain.

>>53885673
Keiretsu + Justice and Smart culture seems like what you want.

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>>53885684

>>53885673
Sure. Take-Over lets you be king of your own country.
Why are y'all so focused on politics anyway?
You can invent any product, the setting even has magic so you can include any wild idea you can possibly imagine.

>>53885623
That would be suicide.

>>53885676
And that murder.

Not that either would work, because the Heart requires both parties to be willing.

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>>53885698
That's it, for now

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>>53885662
It could have fixed the broken leg, yes, but not that which was killing you from within; perhaps you didn't know the full ramifications when you let her take the illness? Maybe you thought it was a just a little thing at the time, but now you know better; but she'll never give it back. She loves you too much for that.

>>53885702

So just to make sure, we can really assume that her illness(?) is not curable by any means at our disposal, right? The heart of darkness doesn't make that perfectly clear, but we're being obtuse on purpose because our heartstrings are easily plucked

>>53885737
I don't see any reason why you couldnt use the Heart to take the disease from her aside from the fact that she's not likely to be willing to burden you with the illness.

>>53885702
Just lie and say you'll switch with her for a day.

>>53885702
The doctor will accept willingly when i put a gun to his head

>>53885731

Reeeee fuck you Satan don't give me none of this shitty anime drama bullshit, the current drama is already well explained enough. Stacking that on top of it just feels forced, we don't want to turn this shit into another Clannad

>>53885820
>we don't want to turn this shit into another Clannad

Good point, lets go back to regular drama levels

>>53885737
All options that could probably interpreted to be able to heal the poor girl are explained that won't work for one reason or other the heart of darkness clearly factors illneses but the girl would never suggest to you to do that

>>53885855
>What did you call me you lil'bitch?
>You are a bigger autist than i am

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>>53883062
lul hwat

I posted like twice about it, I don't give a shit what people call him. Though, I thought it was funny.

Some people take things too seriously here.

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>>53885877
I'm not sure I follow.

>>53884857
Can you redefine humanity with something magic?
Is Social Justice redundant with Take-Over?

>>53885870

Fine.

Well then I....Shiiit. She wants me to take the phone but now I'm just worried that by forgetting her I'll just end up not talking or treating her properly in the netherworld. This sucks

>>53885915
>regular drama levels
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jduoacMkyTc

>>53885893
Well I don't remember anyone else pushing any other ideas. I think you posting it twice is still the most effort as far as anyone put into trying to name him anything. Also I'm always in favor of blaming you for things. Like the eventual heat death of the universe, I'm sure you're behind that too.

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>>53885935

I don't follow

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>>53885935
I still don't understand.

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>>53886012
>>53885986
you guys stop joking i know you understand what i meant

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>>53885985
Probably because I was the only one with a name on.

And no, I am attempting to prevent the heat death of the universe with my ascended powers, but its inevitability is as solid as the autism in these threads.

>>53886055
autism is good for mankind

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>>53883062

It wasn't SDA that started calling him that It was me, I called him that because His first cyoa was Dark Souls waifu and then Derelict station cyoa and both had a DS in their initials so and it was easier to call him DSA since he didn't have a name, And the name just caught on

>>53886055
Are you saying you are eventually going to become one with the heat death?

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>>53886053

>>53886069
Thanks anonymous poster, now everything is clear

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>>53886069
No, I know who really did it ...

>>53886069
Alright then, I'll also switch over blame for the heat death of the universe to you too anon.

>>53886055
>SDA Will prevent the eventual death of the universe because if the universe dies shitposting will die too

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>>53886077

I'm just sort of glad the author of all of the overrated underwhelming CYOAs lately has a name I guess

>>53885932
>She wants me to take the phone but now I'm just worried that by forgetting her I'll just end up not talking or treating her properly in the netherworld.
It's the most pragmatic option, but it's also downright morbid.

I'd still take it.

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>>53885994
I have a rule where I normally try to make a new build whenever I redo a CYOA, but I really like the build and battle music I did for this last time, so I'm going to redo it.

Blackhelm, the Harbinger of Sorrow

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BD71835r80o

>Cursed Item
I'm an evil magical helmet that gives its wearer incredibly power at the cost of slowly taking over their body

>Final Form
>Shadow Step
>Ground Slam

>Doppelganger
>Mallory Le Fay

The Doppleganger is just a roadblock, but a dangerous one; Mallory my true ally, safeguarding my vessel in between hosts.

>El Tigre Rojo
The white mask to my black helm
>Agent White
His love interest
>Damien
His mentor that will die by the end of the game.

I'll also pick up the
>Hurricane Kick
and
>Inner Flame
techniques.

>Cursed Item

>>53885932
>>53886120
Doesn't the phone say you can't use it to call anyone you knew when they were alive? So its not like it'd let you stay in touch with her anyways.

>>53886249

Exactly, but she wants you to take the phone so you can talk anyway after she uses the dragon orb on your to make you forget you knew her.

That'd just be plain sad and unfulfilling though

>>53886259
Ohhhh, I get you.

Damn that is sad.

>>53886259
How are you going to call her if you forget about her?

>>53886249
Read the text for the Orb. She can use it to erase you memories of her, making her contactable once she dies.
That's what I was calling morbid.

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>>53886285
Dragon orb mentions her leaving a note for you if you go that route

>and then the note falls out of your pocket on the way home

>>53886297
>The note falls and you completly forget about her
>Many years later you eventually die of old age and you see her in the netherworld crying tears of joy for seeing you again but you can't rememeber her