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/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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Fox girl genie when?
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>>53875564
2nd for let's continue the drama
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Saber CYOA when lads?
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>>53875586
Soon i hope
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>>53875601
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Dream of Genie 1.04 Final

Corrects typos.
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>>53875615
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>>53875599
Here you go fampai.
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>>53875624
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>>53875617
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>>53875645
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>>53875645
I did your own work for you didn't I you filthy fuck
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post cyoas with monster girls

too bad there's no booru archive
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>>53875663
Just by the way I'm glad an author is willing to stop all the pure waifu cancer that /pol/ types seem to like. Real women have a history and that just makes them all the more appealing imo
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>>53875654
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>>53875624
>Posting the shitposting edit
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>>53875624
For those who care, here's the real one.
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>>53875624
Fake post, here's the actual page 3, with Hu not poorly edited by some inbred moron from /pol/ who can't even match fonts properly.
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>>53875680
huh
http://grognard.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=cyoa
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>>53875688
End.
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>>53875702
>>53875707
Which one is the real one?
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>>53875680
Have you tried Monster's Den in our sister thread?
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certainly a promising start
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>>53875684
Pretty sure this is just a joke anon, not a statement.
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>>53875737
They both are, we just posted them simultaneously.
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I'm going to try to make an edit of the genie dlc to hopefully ensure that people have less problems with it.
This is what I'm thinking of changing from what I've gathered bothers people:
1) Make the dagger definition more apparent.
2) Dagger all the contract/client options besides wheel of fate.
3) Remove the whole client thing for wheel of fate genies. Maybe add something about being able to just normally meet them?
4) Add something to wheel of fate, to make it more clear that it's not just business. I'm not the best writer, so I would appreciate any advise on that one.

Anything else that bothered people?
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>>53875724
DLC:
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>>53875707
sidenote but holy shit do those online font matching are fucking trash. I even did one where you choose from a list of options all the unique parts of the font but nothing popped. Almost 100% sure it's some random chinese font that has a latin alphabet included.
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>>53875763
Impossible, duplicates can't exist in the same thread.
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>>53875720
Last upload with 'cyoa' tag is Stardust, over year and half ago. It does have some really old stuff tho.
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>>53875766
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>>53875766
The creator said this DLC isn't valid anymore.

>>53875724
I told you that the shitposters would keep posting it just to harass you, anon.
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>>53875737
That one without the cucking fetish poorly edited in.
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>>53875765
Define what happens to the options on the first page if the genie picks wheel of fate. There was a problem where the genie was hiding an entire gang basically behind your back that people didn't like.
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>>53875759
It's the DLC expansion to the series where the Zodiac Brides Guy explains that girls with history are sexy as fuck and to give all the girls he's made some more history canonically he's fucked them all before you ;)
Honestly it really improves the enjoyment I got from his works because I love REAL women not these anime fake girls that only neo-nazis like.
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>>53875785
Actually I posted it because I like it.
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>>53875773
Compared the images, there's a 1-byte difference in the jpeg header, but the image content is identical.
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>>53875759
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>>53875785
Barbra Streisand effect.
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>>53875702
>>53875707
>Fortunes_Cookies
>FortunesCookies
look like we have some lazy fakes going around. The real title is of course Fortune's Cookies
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>>53875813
But you're doing so and making the creator unhappy. Do you want to make those who make things you like unhappy?
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>>53875617

Since the genie is made to pick you as part of her job, if you pick Lusty Soul, is having sex with her rape or just prostitution?
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>>53875805
Alright, forgot about that one. Any idea how to solve that in an elegant way?
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>>53875828
No, you doofus.
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>>53875654
>small and lithe, like a swimmer

You don't watch much sports, do you?
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>>53875860
Two opposing views -- two enemy worlds! One must master the other. I rejoice in the struggle.
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>>53875871
You're just gonna have to play around with the wording in wheel of fate until you can include it naturally.
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>>53875808
I ain't falling for this bait
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>>53875898
Yes you are
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>>53875828
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WK4HHaNhcgU
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>>53875855
Appostrophes in a filename are an abomination Senpai, and should always be removed.
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>>53875898
Then why are you responding to it?
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>>53875905
You know, telling me I'm falling for something, doesn't mean I actually am. This is probably more bait tho
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>>53875860
No backsies.
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>>53875935
And you fell for it.
You fell for it so hard you wanted to marry it, but then remembered that's illegal in your state.
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>>53875935
I ain't falling for this bait
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>>53875915
>Kumin
SDA remains my one true god.
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>>53875960
I am falling for this bait.
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>>53875978
And you love it.
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>>53875898
It's genuine my friend. Zodiac Brides Guy loves cucking the people who makes builds for his CYOA. Are you going to get in the way of his cummies????
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>>53875978
>>53875960
>>53875951
profound intellectuals in this thread lol xD
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>>53875892
I'm not really sure about the 'how'.
Maybe 'if you love (or just trust?) your contract you can divulge information about your contacts'?
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>>53875985
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>>53876014
Have 'mom' mention that the genie can keep the contacts/people from the first section of the CYOA if she likes, strictly as friends and not as mission partners she and her master can interact with rather than being alone in the magical world or something.
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>>53876053
Honestly, I'm pretty sure
>>53875985
>>53875951
>>53875808
>>53875684
are all the same baiting faggot, what happened to the cyoas mang
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>>53875985
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>>53875985
It's pretty much the greatest DLC ever released for any cyoa
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>>53876105
>who is YHWH
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Just made some crappy OC, suck it.
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>>53875985
it's genuine my friend
you have extreme butthurt
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>>53876159
bad taste

all bad choices

pleb
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Can someone post the femdom cyoa?
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>>53876053
Why would the fish not be happy with all of that delicious bait?
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>>53876159
Could he transport me into a good game?
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>>53876188
Got you desu
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>>53876159
Interesting picks for the settings, did you just pick randomly from what you recently played or something?
I'd go with STALKER, and die in less than a day, but at least I'll get to shout CYKA BLYAT before I die.
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>>53876199
Read the title, it clearly says "Shitty Video Games CYOA"
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>>53876209
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>>53875724
Do you plan on anything else?
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>>53876179
actually girls with a history is a turn on if you have a big dick since you can make her forget about all the little dicks she's had before. If you aren't into girls who've been pounded a bunch beforehand then you almost 100% have a tiny kid dick. Zodiac Brides Guy agrees with me I asked him on discord
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Reposting.
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>>53876209
thanks senpai
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>>53876197
Everyone knows fish don't like worms, the only bait that works on them is a hook with no worm in sight.

(Actually, I did once catch a particularly stupid fish with just a lead sinker on the end of a fishing line. It would _not_ let go, not matter how dumb holding on was. If I hadn't eaten it, it might have grown up to be a /tg/ poster.
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>>53876227
No wonder I couldn't post the second part lmao
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>>53876209
>>53876227
Why are you posting it in two pages?

>>53876188
Here, have a one-page version.
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>>53876220
I took it to mean shitty cyoa, due to the 5k hours in ms point. I guess I was wrong.

I suppose it accomplishes it's goal. Good job. Hooray.
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>>53876240
you're still dicking a slut
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>>53876159
>pick Deus Ex
>pick something simple like the Bar Manager choice
>get 3 years worth of vidya, books, and manga to catch up on

Who cares about the shitty terrorists and evil corporations it's legit the comfiest option.
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>>53876240
Actually your dick is kinda medium sized at most, even if we want to be generous.

Zodiac Brides Guy agrees with me.
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>mfw I cheat in a CYOA and no one calls me out
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>>53876159
didn't even bother reading the other options, ivalice is weapon's grade comfy
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>>53875617
>don't read too deeply into it

Don't peddle your reverse psychology with me!
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>>53876244
This execution leaves a whole lot to be desired.
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>>53876337
>mfw no one reads my builds
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>>53876337
You're not cheating, you use your radical freedom. Good for you, frogposter!
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>>53876240
>>53876326
I'm not saying I don't have random conversations about your dicks in the Discord...
But I don't remember having any conversations like that.
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>>53876340
My nigga. FFTA2 is my go-to fantasy world if some CYOA god ever offers me a choice.
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>>53875601
Golden Fortune Cookie

>>53875615
Tangyun

>>53875624
>>53875645
Shu

>>53875663
Forgotten
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>>53876396
Why did you take only one power?
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>>53876396
and then according to the dlc your shu has been stretched out ahead of time by Zodiac Brides Guy for you to enjoy a nice looser hole.
Enjoy
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>>53876340
It doesn't hurt that the other 3 choices are complete non-options for survivability.

Deus Ex is just a guaranteed death and the other two are just a life of miserable hardship.
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>>53876229
No.
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>>53876460
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>>53875564
I can't decide between Succubus, Kitsune and Weresheep.

Also, "Automation" should be "Automaton".
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I had such an interesting cyoa dream. The world was ending or had ended. Something big and evil had invaded and was killed, but in doing so the world was pretty much destroyed. Somehow in that desolate world a few people, including me, sensed magic in the air and we knew that we could use that magic to rebuild society.

We decided to split up and I travelled to the nearest major city and that's when my dream suddenly became a cyoa. My choices revolved around 2 things: what kept my magic together and what my magic was used for.

The first part was deciding on the fuel for my magic. Picking Lifeforce for example meant the people living in my domain would die sooner, grow slightly unhealthier, etc. as price for being sheltered within my magic. Willpower made them less independent and creative. Souls did nothing but consumed their very souls once they died.

The main part was me building a city-type settlement using those shards of magic tied together with my chosen fuel. For x shards I could build walls that reached the clouds. For y shards I could sprout trees that grew parfaits and cakes. For z shards I could create a flying lake. Everything was slightly odd like that.

There were basically 2 possible paths in this dream. I could either completely subject the people who lived in that ruined city creating a far more magical, powerful and static city with them becoming nothing but husks as the price. Or I could work together with them, them relying on my magic to survive and expand, allowing me to slowly grow in power in time.

The whole thing had a Mitakihara city vibe. I woke up while I was debating which path to take so I might not remember it fully or explain it well. It was an interesting experience though.
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>>53876498
Level 9000 autism: Dream of CYOA's
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>>53876273
Thanks anon. Goodbye, two piece cyoa!
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>>53876396
I like it.
Forgotten seems to be the most popular option.
And ignore the shit posting, she's pure as snow.I'm sure you and Shu will be very happy together.
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>>53876549
cuck baiters btfo, the dlc was always just a meme
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>>53876549
>waifus pure as snow
Equally bad. Old virgins are autistic as fuck. Can't we have a nice compromise where waifus had healthy relationships prior to meeting you, /tg/?
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>>53876549
But you already fucked her. :^)
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>>53876549
>Not wanting to share your waifu with your fellow bros
Truly disgusting...
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>>53876549
hey man I was serious when I was saying I loved how you made your waifus have some experience. It's time for /cyoag/ to grow up and accept that virgins are just a meme
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>>53875743
>Monster's Den

How about a link?
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>>53876498
>The CYOA was actually real and you got killed but some cosmic force decided to take pity on you and retconned everything
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>>53876614
>>>/d/7488335
Have fun
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>>53876630
REEEEEEEE gimme back my magic

Seriously though. It was pretty epic. Let's cross our fingers and hope the dream was prophetic. Or not, since the world was a wasteland...
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>>53876590
>Old virgins are autistic as fuck
That explains many many things
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>>53876590
No, /tg/ is actually incapable of that.

They just want 8 year old virgin waifus who act like huge sluts but only for their cock.
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>>53875926

shut the fuck up you nazi
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>>53876591
If you're taking my dumb joke at face value, I shouldn't exist at this point.
Pretty sure at least one Anon said he was printing the coin out a few seconds after I uploaded it.
But I'm going back to my timeout corner now.
You guys have fun.
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>>53876676
If it is actually prophetic do me a favor and put me in your city
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>>53876473
No other CYOAs?
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>>53876689
Correction. 3000y old virgin waifus who look like 8y olds. We're not pedophiles.
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>>53876721
No.
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>>53876702
we know it's you SDA, you can stop playing games now
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>>53876737
>>53876689
>>53876613
>>53876610
>>53876590
Quick question, do you guys really think you have a moral highground over the people you mock when your complaint with them is that they ruined a thread by whining, when you guys are here doing the exact same thing only 'ironically'? It seems to me that at that point you're pretty much removing any claim you have to not being just as autistic as they were.
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>>53876689
But i want a 8 year old virgin waifu that acts like a Adorable daughter who i will protect and care of Well that and to be the little girl but that is unrelated
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>>53876689
>8 year old virgin waifus who act like huge sluts but only for their cock
Add vampirism and a couple thousand years to that and you've 100% got me pegged.
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>>53876772

Serious talk
Purity is not fun.
Corrupted people are much more entertaining
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>>53876752
Alright, that's a shame.
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>>53876805
I wholeheartedly agree.
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>>53876805
Begone foul demon
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>>53876805
>>53876818
Well you two are likely very corrupt people, so clearly it does not always lead to good company.
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>>53876805
I thought ZBG actually put it really well a few threads back. Anybody have the archive link or a cap?
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>>53876805
Doggedly treating absolute whores like pure, innocent gfs and not letting up when they call you out on it.
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>>53876718
If I remember my dream correctly I was planning out a barebones city using (ironically) Dreams as fuel, so the people living there would either stop having dreams or ocassionally find themselves caught in weeklong dreams. I'd have walls, a bubble to keep the harsh sun away, a lot of water and gondolas, etc. Also trees that grew sweets and cakes so we'd have something luxurious to enjoy. I think I wanted my settlers to explore and expand. The more people in my city, the more fuel. I was thinking a democratic voting system might be put in place for when I'd have enough fuel to start adding stuff to my city.

If that city sounds acceptable and the dream was prophetic, you'd be welcome to come live here.
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>>53876805
It makes sense too. Why would some random girl fall in love with you. You're just the rebound and they'll probably move on too.
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>>53876832
>>53876835
stop deceiving yourself with illusions of purity, no one is innocent, there are only degrees of guilt.
Pure people know nothing about the world, they are naive and they are ignorant to the ways of the world.
Corruption is the only way to go, the reason you seek purity is becouse you yourself hate how corrupt you have become, you despise yourself and you want to cleanse your corruption believing that some day a pure girl will help you run away from this corruption in which you have sank in
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>>53876889
>there are only degrees of guilt.
Look at this Christian Inquisitor over here.
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>>53876865
>Dreams as fuel
>You will never be in a three year long dream in a single night
That hurts but the city sounds neat
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>>53876772
There's a difference in scale and vitriol that's obvious to anyone with a brain.
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>>53876159
Ivalice, no-brainer really. All the comfy lost from lack of modern commodities I get back from magic.
Also I just like the setting.
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>>53876918
Autism is autism vitriol or not. In regards to scale, give them time, they're only halfway done.
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>>53876889
Stop applying 3D logic to 2D waifus.
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>>53876911
It's purging time sonny
>exterminatus this thread
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>>53876889
>>53876818
>>53876805
Is The Healing King around? I'd actually enjoy hearing his take on this topic.
I feel like he could convince me it was my fault that he stabbed me with how eloquent and detailed he gets.
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>>53875564
>weresheep
>dwarf fortress PTSD triggers
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>>53876961
i thought you were gone, SDA
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>>53876961
says he's leaving
comes back
says he's leaving
comes back

just admit how much you got off on cucking the general dude. It seems you have guys like >>53876889
who are thanking you for the experience
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>>53876549
>Forgotten seems to be the most popular option.
Broke and Homeless are both really rough. Being constantly broke even if you work is soul crushing and Homeless seems to come with worst parts of Broke in addition of having to guaranteed shelter.
Also the homeless person looks creepily like me.
Shunned depends heavily on on how good terms you are with your family and friends. Can be basically free, but having to take action after the year to reconnect makes this kinda harsh pick.
Being Sick really fucking sucks, I have been extremely sick and it was period of time I survived mostly because I was too sick to kill myself.
Unlucky appears to be there if you can't decide if you want Broken or Homeless and opt for both.
Amnesia can be renamed to "ur fukken ded, kid". Hopefully you told your waifu where you live, your social security number and your bank/card info. I'm sure those come up in every conversation. Pity if you happen to have any medication you need to take.
Experiment, hey imprisoned tortured for year, good stuff.
Imprisoned, hey, imprisoned and beaten up repeatedly for year, good stuff.
Blindness is condition horrible enough to kill myself over.

I don't know why people pick Forgotten tho, it's Broke + Homelessness + Shunned, with exception that you get it back after the year. Pretty horrible choice, especially in today's society where you basically don't exist if you don't have ID/bank account.

Ooooor, the completely free picks
Mute, oh no, you can't talk, nooooo, you can write tho. Minor inconvenience and one that gets sympathy out of people.
Separated, requires you to travel but doesn't require you to shelter under bridge and eat raw pigeon.
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>>53876889
>there are no pure people
>next sentence is 'pure people do something'
Whew.
Sounds like you're jealous of purity and just want to make yourself feel better, to be honest. Or maybe you're just edgy.
Also, shame on you for reappropriating that warhammer quote.
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>>53876985
why do you cherish purity so much?
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>>53876977
>All authors are secretly the same fucker posting under different aliases
I'm uncomfortable with how believable this seems now that I think about it...
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>>53876930
Yeah that's fair. It'd be great if the thread could just drop anything ever really. Perhaps some small amount of venting is understandable but maybe we could focus on CYOAs and the posting/discussing thereof.
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>>53876998
>imprisoned and beaten up repeatedly for year
You can use your powers to beat the shit out of every other guard and inmate. You just can't leave the jail.
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>>53877027
Those people don't enjoy CYOAs, you notice how they're only interested in talking about the authors.
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>>53877000
purity is for the weak, for the fools who believe the truth is soft, fluffy and sweet.
These are the same people who cannot come to terms with reality.
The truth is grim, dark, bloody and tastes like shit.
Purity equals ignorance, ignorance is for the weak minded
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>>53877046
oh dear some guy is making a religion out of fucking old used up sluts. Guess we've found Zodiac Brides Guy next CYOA partner
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>>53876805
More proof that plebbit has shit taste.
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Which author is the least cancerous? Other than the ones who don't have a name who are by virtue free of cancer.
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>>53877046
>implying PURE EVIL isn't pure
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>>53877010
we are all anonymous after all...
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>>53876998
Mute is shit compared to Broke, and Homeless if you take the Waffel cookie.

The worst parts of being broke or homeless in real life are the uncertainty and risk, both of which are completely negated by the CYOA. You know for a fact that things can't get any worse and you know for a fact that it will end in exactly a year. That guarantee alone removes pretty much any actual suffering and leaves you with a year of uncomfortable life which really shouldn't be that hard.
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>>53877069
>Other than the ones who don't have a name who are by virtue free of cancer.
Funny that you think that.

But Spessy is pretty cool and Highlander makes sense.
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>>53877094
you mean the other names SDA goes by?
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>>53877046
>Implying you don't want soft fluffy and sweet lies
>Implying reality has anything good to offer
>Implying you want truth
>Implying ignorance is not bliss
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>>53876985
My time out corner has wi-fi, just because I say I'm leaving doesn't mean I will.
Check my track record, I'm one of the most inconsistent people here and I could probably build a nice little house out of all the things I've said here that I then went back on.
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>>53877069
Imaginos.
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>>53877103
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Gfdfb0h2Vc
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>>53876451
Oops. I'll also take Almond Biscuit

>>53876460
I don't want to take her with me. I had lunch with her because I had to choose one and she wouldn't both me while I ate.
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>>53877103
i want the truth, the grim dark truth, i do not wish my partner to be ignorant and blind to reality, that will only make her more suceptible to being deceived by the ill intentioned
I dont care if i have to suffer in exchange for truth, i need the truth to justify my existance, without truth there is nothing
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>>53877000
>Sounds like you're jealous of purity and just want to make yourself feel better, to be honest.

My friends did that. They would push me to have sex because I made them feel like sluts or something. Reminds me of this article I saw about wanting everyone to get herpes so no one would feel stigmatized by it.
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>>53875601
>interesting cyoa has a mandatory waifu with an edgy, overprotective narrator so you can't even break up with her
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>>53877144
Ironically you lie to yourself why are you here of all places if you don't want to indulge in fantasy?
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>>53877137
So are you going just abandon her? The restaurant is gone.
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>>53877168
Becouse if i did not take a break from reality some times i would end up killing myself faster than you can type "kill yourself faggot"
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>>53877144
>plays waifu cyoa
>doesn't want the waifu
what
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>>53877189
why would he take care of some used up slut
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To summarize the last couple of threads and bring the truth to light.

If you're a cuck, you're a fucking waste of human skin and oxygen.
If you post every chance you can to state the above statement you're worse than a cuck and deserve to BE cucked, but that'll never happen since you're most likely a single virgin.
If your a purity fag, you only think that way since you're a pathetic virgin that despises all the normal people that have already been laid.
If you project your own opinions onto something FUCKING FICTIONAL and say everyone else is wrong, including the author, you're one of the most socially inept retards to live and need medical attention.
And if you find the need to alter a cyoa>>53875624 in order to force your opinion/meme then I advise talking to mommy about why your dad, teachers, siblings, and neighbors all beat and molested you beyond repair.

If you're a lurker, one of the anons to make a build and enjoy the cyoas, gave calm and respectable criticism, or if you didn't like a thing and kept it to yourself...Congratulations. You're the type of anon we should all try to be.

tl;dr
Don't be a fag or a cunt. Live and let live. The world doesn't revolve around you or your ideals.
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>>53877196
Don't you want to be free? Come on give in
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>>53877197
So many Travelers to make, so little time.
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>>53877206
She's used goods.
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>>53877196
guess your love of well used girls has some costs lol
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>>53877027
This CYOA is my fetisg incarnate.
God bless whoever made it.

>Raised
Proper Lady
>Complications
Uncontrollable
Bathing Time
>Young Daughter
Carol
>Older Daughter
Lilia
>Niece
Dee-Dee
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>>53877217
>If you're a cuck, you're a fucking waste of human skin and oxygen.
That's pretty harsh thing to say about someone who already has to deal with about being cheated on
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>>53877027
I like the concept but the execution is tasteless and vile. I tried to do a pure run but it's just not worth playing.
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>>53877217
Don't be a fag or a cunt. Live and let live. The world doesn't revolve around you or your ideals.
Funny how it is you posting your opinion on a cave painting image board for everyone to see, and telling everyone that they are retarded
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>>53876805
No, I like purity. It's why I waifu fictional characters, because you ain't gonna find that shit in the real world.
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>>53876865
Sign me the fuck up nigga.
I already have dreams very rarely so I lose nothing and I get to live in magic Venice.
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>>53877144
>without truth there is nothing

Even WITH truth there is nothing, you fool! The past is nothing, the future is nothing! All things must return to the darkness from whence they came.

Why, then, must you seek the truth? Why not live in blissful ignorance? Do you honestly think it will save you from the cold? From the dark?
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>>53877250
As a man you're giving up everything you should stand for. To me that makes you worthless. Hell, I even hold the same view to the guys who say "She cheated on me, but we're going to try again."
It doesn't matter who she's fucked before as long as she's disease free and not wide as these anon's mothers. In a relationship, drop the cunt at the first sign of disloyalty.
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>>53875645
>ram/sheep
>age 26
>13+13
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>>53877234
>>53877211
Wake up you are never going to find a pure waifu in the real world, i really wanted one too, but it just simply isnt going to happen
>>53877268
same, ironically i have a pure waifu.
It's just simply you are never going to find a pure girl in the real world
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>>53876961
He said he's done for a while. We'll never know when he'll start up again until it happens. Remember, the span of time between his build and the Ruby bullying was like a full month.
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>>53877265
>implying I didn't already know the irony before posting
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>>53875601
> Regular Fortune Cookie
> Custard Tart and Tangyuan
> Lucky Charm Bracelet and Jade Ring
> Lóng
> Mute
I want to earn money, but I want to earn it without too many magic tricks. With the custard tart I can study how much I want and the jade ring will help me to remain focused.
Being mute sucks a bit since Lóng likes to talk, but I believe that she will understand. Also I like classical music so we can be connected that way. I'll probably spend a bit of time in the pocket dimension to improve my typing speed hoping that I'll manage to type just a bit slower than talking and things will be alright.
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>>53877278
I already live in the cold and dark, emotions are a thing of the past, i am compelled to seek truth, this is my nature, i am tired of everyone lying to me, the television, my parents, the government, my friends, everyone wants to keep you away from the truth.
I don't know why, but i have to reach the truth no matter the price, otherwise i will be trapped in this world forever
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>>53877345
You can't be trapped in this world forever. Only Death is eternal, anon.
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>>53877189
What, so I'm stuck with her just because we ate a meal together?
I guess I can't abandon such a frail girl like that.
Since I'll be rich, I planned to buy a nice house in a nice neighborhood before I got to my real goals, but it wouldn't be any trouble to and adopt her too. It would be a lot easier if she had any aspirations so she could get her own life, but if she's content with doing the housework and reading books then that's fine. I could use the company.
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Shitposters only shitpost about things that are really good, since they have a subconscious need to bring everything down to their pathetic level.
By that logic, this did very well >>53875601
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>>53877363
Can you really guarruantee that?
Can you really say you know that?
If we are to escape this prison known as "existance" we need to reach the truth first
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>>53877278
God is Truth.
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>>53877407
belief is not equal to truth
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>>53876244
I'm just going to go ahead and do that 0 points and do savior mode and end with 0 or below.

Body
Face : Above Average [3]
Age: 12-14 [-3] Basically free points. I mean what, I cant let people know I'm fucking her? Big deal .
Fat: Normal/slim [-3]
Breasts: like, B I guess? Gonna call that 0 points [-3]
Hips/ass: eye catching [-1]
Height: 5ft odd. Lower end cause she's a shorty. [-1]
Muscle: Untrained [-1]
Skin/Race: Other - Latina / Healthy skin [0]
Health: Works out no cardio, Allergies [0]
Other cosmetics: None
So 0 overall for body section

Mind
Minor Interest (free) : reading of all sorts.
Minor left leaning politics.
Intellect: Prominent figure in field [6]
Traits: Impulsive [4] Responsible [6] Quiet [5] Nice Laugh [6] Smug [5] Nice Laugh (free)
Skills: Nothing really. She's 12 cut her some slack.
Sex: Multiple times a day [3] , slightly bi [4]
Psychological : Some sort of fear of deep waters like oceans [3]
Fetishes: Minor fetishes I like, lets call those public play and being submissive mainly. Shes young and very teachable for other things anyways. Also lets add light pedo and choking(receiving) so thats +4 and -5. [2]
So net +2 for mind/body

Socioeconomics
Social Skills: sometimes awkward [-4] , Low self esteem [-6] , Charming [-3]
Fashion sense: Don't care at all [-5]
Sexual History virgin [-3] cause she's you know 12.
Money: 10k, she's probably emancipated, to be received in payments over the next few years. [-3]
Income: pretty much 0. Because she's 12. She can probably learn to play the stocks though. [-7]
Other status: none.
So -7 in the socioeconomics section.

So. I have an extra 5 points to spend. Lets make her face/general from above average to attractive. Lets give her glasses for another point so that we can give her a good voice for 2 points.

So, Cute 12 year old that'll grow up to be super smart and submissive and wants to do it a few times a day. Doesnt have much money coming in but she's probably emancipated or whatever.
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>>53877343
Interesting.
I think Long would be one of the more patient with something like you being mute.
So long as you can get as used to nonverbal communication as pic related is, I'm sure the year will fly by and she'll be ecstatic to finally hear your voice again.
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>>53877396
Truth won't free you because Truth IS the prision why you can't accept that? why are you so attached to what is "real"?
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>>53877422
I suppose anon meant the concept of God, rather than the biblical figure.
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>>53877443
Reality is a prison, but only the truth can help us shape this prison however we want, perhaps even escape it.
If you just simply accept this prison as it is then you are bound to never change it.
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>>53877386
yeah it became really good when that dlc got released
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>>53877443
Reality is an illusion, the universe is a hologram, buy gold, bye!
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>>53877430
Personally I am undecided between Mute and Sick.
I already write more than I speak, but I would verily miss singing.
Sickness sucks, but I've put up with it irl for many years while I was young so I could bear it.
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>>53877483
ZBG is fucking retarded
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>>53875601
Regal Fortune Cookie

>>53875615
Red Bean Soup, Custard Tart
Lucky Charm Bracelet, Jade Ring

>>53875624
>>53875645
Lóng

>>53875663
Separated

Lots of charisma, telekinesis, an adaptive pocket dimension and good damage recognition abilities. Very versatile and capable of doing pretty much anything, without being too obvious i I'm careful. The jade ring is more a fluff choice, although I guess it synergizes well with the bracelet to let me plan for things that would otherwise take me unawares. Lóng seems like very pleasant company, and Separated sounds like a good excuse to travel the world and get accustomed to my new abilities before settling down.
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>>53877517
Aren't we all?
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>>53877226
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>>53877539
Touché
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>>53877539
No, we're just autistic.
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>>53877443
>tfw you realize truth is subjective
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>>53877407
What use does a God have for a universe? What possible reason could such a being have to care for tiny, mortal creatures when the galaxies themselves are ants before it?

What does it stand to gain?
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Are any of the people who didn't like the genie dlc because it made the relationship more businesslike or something still there? If so, what would you add to wheel of fate to make it seem less so?
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>>53877557
Fair
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>>53877566
What use do we have for dwarf fortress?
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>>53875564
Kitsune would put me out HARD, that's like so much comfy.
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>>53877557
Tomato, tahmato.
Retard.
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>>53877567
It makes you just a number on a piece of paper lol. I'm sure that really equates to "businesslike"
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>>53877443
I believe in science, Mulder.
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Can someone post the one in which you pick ridiculously broken perks but in return have to create a sexually fucked up waifu and choose her fetishes/etc ?
I've been searching for about an hour on my computer, I don't seem to have it
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You keep going through these threads so fast I can't keep up!
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>>53877566
Depends on your conception of God I suppose.
It could even be not sentient, so could a not sentient being want something in the first place?
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>>53877566
Just as an ant cannot begin to understand what goes on in the mind of a man so can man not understand what goes on in the mind of an omniscient being outside the bounds of time, space, and logic.
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>>53877640
I recommend asking our sister thread on /d/, if you want the uncensored version. The censored one is in danger of getting deleted around here. You're looking for 'messed up waifu'.
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>>53877623
Alright, I mean, I think it's kind of to be expected given heaven apparently is a bureaucracy. Still, what would you do so it's clear that you're not just a number for the genie you choose?
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>>53876805
>Corrupting people is much more entertaining

Fixed that for you senpai
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>>53877080
That image implies that you're corrupting them not that they're corrupt from the beginning.
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>>53875782
So what is a DREAMER?
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Why have these threads devolved into such autism?
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>>53877673
I'll do that, thanks !
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>>53877543
Fixed your cyoa
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>>53877747
Our autism level cannot even be comprehended by a feeble mind such as yours, Sort yourself out
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>>53877747
Shitposting authors with skin-deep or confusing CYOA. It's kind of like how a book forum could devolve into Libertarian shitposting if only Randian shitpost writers went on it.

Hence we need some body to come along and save us from this.

>>53877758
You dishonour our hillborne author. Commit Hari Kari.
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>>53877747
More people have joined over time and that means more autists?

>>53877758
You're good at fixing things.
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>>53877623
It's business for the higher ups, but that doesn't apply to your genie, unless your choices make it so.
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post cyoa
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>>53877789
I'll go commit Sudoku
>>53877793
Thanks
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>>53877517
Dyslexia, Auditory Prossesing Disorder, Bi-Polar, Asberger's Syndrome, Possibly Body Dysmorphic Disorder, and Chronic Insomnia/Hypersomnia. So, yeah kinda. What's your point?
>>53877535
Well thought out, very nice.
I'm always impressed when people are willing to endure Separated. I'm just too needy to survive that.
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>>53877197
Can someone explain me the lore?
Elder Gods or whatever they are called, the Lovecraftian stuff, are the Sons of Third and Humans, Nisetics and pretty much all the other living beings are the Sons of Second, is it right?
Then who or what are the Second/Third? From the opening lore it would seem the Second is Corruption and the Third is the... Third? That seems wrong, it says live comes from the Third and the chaotic nature of the Lovecraftian thingies sounds like spawn of Corruption.
Also, aren't the Travellers a little too weak? For a group with access to all these timelines, they seem a little too tame. I like it actually, if every Traveller were a technomage juggernaut capable of punching Superman/Thanos/Gilgamesh in the face it would be quite over the top and boring. But I still wonder why they sound like mid-tiers (like Ironman, or if I'm to plug the weeb inside me, weaker Servants).
Just so I don't keep things too vague, I would expect from the Travellers a technology level like Blame/Nier Automata; Magic users rivaling high tier Summoners from Shin Megami Tensei; Also maybe Bios similar to Alex Mercer.
I ended up going full weeb but I think I got my point well enough.
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>>53877789
Fear not, anon! For I have always been here.
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>>53877827
>Asberger's Syndrome

Get out
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>>53877837
i thought you were playing, lets pretend to be someone else?
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>>53875564
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>>53877837
Status update on wet pussy CYOA please.
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>>53877813
really old one coming up
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>>53877859
I don't blame you anon, that is one of life's hardest questions
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>>53877831

The children of the second are seemingly incapable of entering our reality and must rely on the children of the third to open the way foreward to them.

And sure while the Travellers do have heavy hitters of that caliper they live lives in the meantime. Also not every problem is simply a test of might, perhaps it is a Traveller who goes out across infinity to remind it's denizens that there is good in it. Perhaps it just needs someone in the right place at the right time.
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>>53877888
Clearly the succubus is the result of warp magic so it is heretical, therefore it must be purged
>Or we could make a Succusune and get both in one
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>>53877837
Glad to to know that you will never leave even if you wanted to
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>>53877831
>if every Traveller were a technomage juggernaut capable of punching Superman/Thanos/Gilgamesh in the face it would be quite over the top and boring. But I still wonder why they sound like mid-tiers (like Ironman, or if I'm to plug the weeb inside me, weaker Servants).

Apparently all you need is a dude with a rusty fork a beard and the ability to be anywhere if Duwall has taught us anything.
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>>53876244
This could have been quite good, tragically.
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>>53877837
is this a reference?
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>>53877879
I can't decide on everything being flat amounts or if they should be rates. For example, should taking on a job give you a flat 500 dollerydoos? Or should it give you 50 per month? I've tried to make either but I can't really decide.

For example, your job gives you 200/mo, while you can also buy a regular house for 1,000. Alternatively, you can rent the same place for 50/mo.

Or, I can just go with a flat system where taking on a job gives you 5,000 points to start and you can buy a house for 1,000.

Except, how do I justify that you get the 5,000 points at the start of the CYOA? I could go Star Dust and say "they want to give you the payment up-front" but then that makes several assumptions about the job. For example, if your job is to do exploration and find human artifacts, how did they justify that 5,000 was enough? What if you find artifacts worth much more? A solution to this would to come up with some sort of "reward" system but I'm highly against that, since it kind of rails you towards having to discover certain things.

I'm still sort of leaning towards flat payments rather than rates over time, though.
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>>53878006
He thinks he's God.
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>>53877747
There are several dedicated shitposters with absolutely awful lives that spend literally all day here trying to stir things up. If that wasn't bad enough on it's own, they've driven most authors into hiding and all the good posters are largely gone. The threads have nothing but autists, buildfags, newfags and those few authors stupid or resilient enough to withstand the barrage of radioactive vitriol cast at them for the sake of stirring up thread controversy.
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>>53878027
But I am.
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>>53877923
>>53877946
Children of Second (Corruption): Lovecraftians.
Children of Third (something besides Order/Corruption): Living beings.
Right?

I understand clever use of Absolute Mobility is their biggest weapon and no Big Fucking Cannon can really do much against their true enemies but even then I would expect some Fighters to be powerful as (being a weeb again for the lack of knowledge in american comics) Heroic Spirits, Engineers being arund Eclipse Phase level maniacs and Mages dealing with God/Demon spirits in daily basis.
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>>53877789
>Commit Hari Kari.
Are you perhaps in need of scissors?
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>>53878022
Jobs give you doleridoos overtime contracts give money upfront while you are doing contracts time passes denying you of your standard payment because well you were busy

Sound good?
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>>53878022
Flat payments sound way easier to balance and work with, and thanks for the update.
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>>53878050
> The God-Monster is going to hang out with anon who just got recruited
> The little fish is gonna see the neo-biblical god weapons they have hidden on Ae

Anon you're a little dude who just joined a very VERY large organization, they've got references to those guys but they're not gonna hang out with you. As much as I like Highlander I wish she'd reiterate recruits are the little bitches they are.
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>>53878040
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>>53878113
Perfect response.
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>>53878022
Well, if we're some sort of relic from the past, maybe we get a bit more money than others would to get started, as they're really eager to have an actual human with them to help them explore the ruins of humanity, hoping you'll be able to provide helpful insight into things or whatever.

To be honest I don't even know if I'm thinking of the same CYOA you're talking about.
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Okay, trying the whole "Title page your PDFs" thing, let's see if it works.

Is this readable? (I mean, can you read the font before clicking it, not, is the CYOA itself something you can bear to read).
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>>53878077
I was thinking of jobs = rates and contracts = flat payments, but I don't know about stopping job rates because you're doing contracts. I think that's too much crunch.

>>53878090
I know it is, it's just harder to justify.

>>53878147
My point is, it's hard to give payments to things I can't predict.

I'll probably just go with hefty payments for hard jobs and contracts.

>>53878113
>>53878144
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>>53878182
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>>53878163
Legible. Also it's better now that the mystery boxes are in it.
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>>53878022
I'd accept a flat payment, if you get my drift.
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>>53878022
I prefer the rent system, where you have to manage your resources, buying some stuff a few months into the game after saving money. It's also a great way for those who'd like to continue in your game after they're done with their build, even if it's just a thought exercise. This sense of things continuing is something that's kinda missing in modern CYOAs. But I get that it's way more complicated to do a system like that, and you may not be up for it right now.
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>>53878182
Ah sorry, I misread, thought you were talking about how to justify having a larger amount of starting money than you would reasonably expect from starting your job.

I'd say sticking with solid, simplified number crunching is best. We can get the general gist of "we'll make about X amount a year and can afford X utilities every year" kinda thing pretty well.

Though admittedly, I think I'd actually enjoy trying to balance imaginary contracts and expenses into a month by month budget.
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>>53878182
Yeah i guess you are right too much crunch what about getting contracted by the one you are working for so it still counts as working so you can stay getting paid?
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>>53876244
Oh boy here we go.

>Face: Below Average [-3] (-3)
>Age: 19-23 [+1] (-2)
>Fat: Slightly Chubby [-2] (-4)
>Muscle: Skinnyfat [-2] (-6)
>Height: 5.6-6 ft [+1] (-5)
>Length: Unknown
>Health: Stand/walk a lot [0]
>Cosmetic: Scards [-1], Bad Voice [-2] (-8)
>Race: Black [-3] (-11)
>Other: Weak Acne [-1] (-12)

>Minor Interests: History, Art, Paleontology [+3] (-9)
>Deep Interests: None
>Intellect: Bachelor of Arts (History's not difficult enough for the next one up) [+1] (-8)
>Skills: None (dabbled in cooking for a couple years, but no serious practice)
>Sex Drive: Unknown
>Traits: Impulsive, Terrible Laugh, Quiet [-3] (-11)
>Fetishes: I don't know if petrification or hypnosis are bad enough to be a penalty.
>Psychological: Aspergers [-3] (-14)

>Social Skills: Sometimes Awkward, Quick to Anger, Low Self Esteem [-8] (-22)
>Fashion Sense: Some Effort [0]
>Money: <1.5l [-2] (-24)
>Sexual History: Virgin [-3] (-27)
>Income: 0 [-4] (-31)
>Other Status: I don't know if academic awards count for Award Winner

I'm not even going to try for a partner with a total of -31. I deserve to be alone. My parents weren't exactly the right people for each other really. Oh god, my own mother left before I could even speak properly, after trying to kill herself. I ruined everything the moment I was born.
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>>53878224
Thank you! Yeah I thought it'd be a lot easier than making people deal with a whole second PDF for two simple boxes.

Guess I'll declare this as finished as it's ever gonna be and get back to work on the next one.
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>>53878022
You could try something like:
>"The poor earless must feel so lost and afraid, I wish we could help him somehow..."
>"Hey, why don't we give him a bit of money to help him get on his feet? It'd show him that we're here for him and maybe he'll even wind up using it to help us search the ruins and stuff!"
>"That's a great idea! If we all throw in 20 [INSERT CAT CURRENCY DENOMINATION HERE] we could set him up with enough to get back his feet and it's bound to help him feel more at home!"
>inb4 Communism ruins pussy
>inb4 I don't want filthy demihuman wellfare
Just a thought.
Then you put the buying essentials upfront and then the jobs and such afterwards.

How long is this thing looking to be, anyway? Multiple pages or just a fairly deep one page deal?
>>53878040
PRAISE BE TO THE ONE TRUE GOD!
We are not worthy to gaze upon his majesty...
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>>53878264
> Spoiler
YOU didn't do shit. Your parents did. No one asks to be born. PERSEVERE ANON. I've outlived everyone important to me, left my country and am currently working as a Janitor in a shithole.

It gets BETTER, but you must FIGHT FOR IT.

DONT BE BROKEN.
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So, after watching about an hour of photoshop tutorials I've finished my edit of the genie dlc. I'm sorry,
but my editing is pretty primitive. I hope it isn't too evident.

I just changed some details but I hope that people don't have as much of a problem with it, because I think the content itself is quite nice. If there is anything I should change, just tell me.
Changes: daggered the candidates, made the dagger definition pretty obvious (in my opinion), changed it so WoF can't take clients (but possibly meet them if you want) and added something to WoF so that the team stuff is more like a bunch of potential friends.
I didn't change anything regarding the 'businesslike' nature of the contracts because I couldn't really think of a good way. If this really bothers people, tell me if there's anything (in my scope) that I can change and I will try to do so.
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>>53878219
People like you are why I shitpost.

>>53878234
Sure.

>>53878235
>I prefer the rent system, where you have to manage your resources, buying some stuff a few months into the game after saving money.
I do too, but there's an extent to which it can get tedious. I don't want to overstep that, but I want to be within the correct bounds for it to be nice to optimize. I want it to have a nice level of optimization, like a Stardew Valley (or something similar) sort of thing.

The challenge is coming up with enough things to spend your money on. If I go with that route, I don't want to have the CYOA make you be able to afford everything after 1 year. Yet, at the same time, I want people to be able to get what they want in a fair amount of time.

I am certainly up to making this as complex as it should be, basically.

>>53878242
>we'll make about X amount a year and can afford X utilities every year
I think I like how that sounds; I've been thinking of months for now. Years would chop things up a lot easier.

I'll keep to month-by-month for some things though, like renting equipment. Maybe you can't afford that submarine yet, but you can rent it for the first few months, for example.

>>53878249
I was thinking that, yeah. I won't really have a "justification" for why you get paid for your normal job during your contract but I don't really think I want to go into the details anyways.

>>53878288
You'll start with an initial deposit, of course.

It's looking to be 2 to 3 pages, to be honest.
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>>53878364
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>>53878022
>I was thinking that, yeah. I won't really have a "justification" for why you get paid for your normal job during your contract but I don't really think I want to go into the details anyways.
I don't think you need a justification in communism.
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So I have been thinking about what CYOA to make after Infested. I guess I haven't told /tg/ about my upcoming Infected CYOA. You're patient zero, the first carrier the lewd D-virus. You will posses the progenitor strain of the D-virus and will be the master of all the infected. You will be able to choose how the D-virus effects people and you will be able to infect the entire world and conquer the world with it.

Anyways I got a lot of good ideas for my next CYOA after infected, but I could use some of your input, here's a strawpol. I won't solely decide which CYOA I make based on the results of the strawpol, but it will influence which CYOA I will choose to make.

Vote here:
http://www.strawpoll.me/13226933
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>>53878332
Am I the only one who heard a drill sargent screaming in his head while reading this?
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>>53878112
To be fair, who knows what these recruits might end up becoming? They may be just a shitty out of the form 4chan user for now but maybe they end up becoming the titan they would like to be.
Also some God-Monsters have no friends and would approache an easily influenced neophyte to mold them as they see fit. Like the Kitsune from dishonoured heir.
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>>53876244
I thought I could finish this but alas I only tallied myself before I lost all drive.

Face and general
Below average -3
Age
19-23 +1
Fat
Undeniably obese -6
Penis size
6' +1
Height
5.6-6 ft +1
Hair
Balding a little -1
Muscle
No muscle visible -1
Skin and race
White +2
Weak acne -1
Health
No exercise -1
Other cosmetic
Good voice +2
Glasses -1
Big nose -1
Intellect
Community College Degree
Traits
Reserved -1
Quiet -1
Cynical -1
Skills
Driving +1
Sexdrive
Normal
Social Skills
Awkward but warms up -2
Humourus +2
Slow to anger +1
Poor eye contact -3
Abyssmal self esteem -5
Fashion sense
Don't care at all -4
Sexual history
Virgin -3
Total assets
1,6-5k -1
Income
0-9k -4 (In Training)

-29
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Okay /tg/ I've decided to finally get down and make a CYOA (or bust). I'm making one that revolves around being a fantasy-setting innkeeper focusing on the inn itself, providing food and drink (i.e. alcohol) and additional some services like an item shop and maybe a whorehouse, and hiring the staff that work there. Does this sound like a good idea?

Should I go with generic fantasy races or should I add/replace races for flavor? Race will affect food and drink choices in some way, I just haven't decided yet. What would you like to see in this CYOA?
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Excuse me, i forgot to leave this here
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>>53878427
Fair enough, Highlander's bound to be around in the next few days though if you want to pester her about it. She's bound to have more satisfactory answers then I.

>>53878448
That sounds fun actually.

>>53878460
What were you expecting?
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>>53878353
I appreciate it anyway, anon. If you were the one with the birthday I'm sorry for the shitty present. And even if not, thanks.
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>>53878460
Thanks, 2008
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>>53878460
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>>53878364
A "time" mechanic in a CYOA? Sounds like the kind of CYOA i could go on and on...
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>>53878364
>The challenge is coming up with enough things to spend your money on.
That doesn't seem very challenging to me.
Just include a way for me to pay the cute girls to be my friends and I'll dump all my money on that anyway.
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>>53878411
Speaking of communism, I'm thinking of also having some level of UBI in this setting, since they have access to giant greenhouses that are almost fully automated to produce goods. One of the job opportunities will be to work at this place as a researcher.

>>53878404
Nice fedora, anon.

>>53878490
Always wanted to do something like this.

The problem is how I intend for you to "end" your build. I haven't figured that out yet.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Hey guys i found this really amaizing youtube video which can help you find your waifu 100% guarruanteed effectiveness
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>>53878525
they aren't your friends if you need to pay them, anon
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>>53878543
You know hovering over Embed shows the thumbnail, right? Nobody's going to fall for this elder meme.
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>>53878050
>Fighters as powerful as Heroic Spirits
>Engineers being around Eclipse Phase level maniacs
>Mages dealing with God/Demon spirits on a daily basis

Those *do* exist on Ae, including much, much stranger shit and more powerful people. It's just that these are a group of people dealing with a bona fide infinite multiverse and frankly, the tactics/science/spell/tech that works here doesn't work there. Someone who puts all their eggs in one basket, no matter how versatile that basket, WILL find themselves up shit creek without a paddle. Ultimately, all Travellers are 'Main Characters' and the one thing you can count on is them finding a solution/counter to whatever bullshit is thrown at them save for reality sundering abominations,
of course
.
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>>53878555
my bad sonny, i have grown old, time seems to pass so... fast
i'm going to bed, i may not wake up tomorrow.
goodbye
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>>53878448
Put some Fae in there Disney Strawberry or Alien Tutti Frutti flavors at your election
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>>53878414
>No multiple votes
Dammit Tok! I like sound of a lot of these! Don't make Choose!
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>>53878555
https://youtu.be/6-HUgzYPm9g
https://youtu.be/V-_O7nl0Ii0
https://youtu.be/X5sY8aM1YQI
https://youtu.be/rzbssK0pqIE
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>>53878414
>Enslaved high elf edition
Finally the superior race gets attention
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>>53878586
Has it been 50 years already?
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>>53878421
> Somewhere an angry Immigrant is busting your balls for YOU.

This is fucking weirding me out man.
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>>53878448
All of this sounds awesome, mate!
I think you should do a mix and match of generic races and more exotic ones to spice things up.
Looking forward to whatever it becomes.
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>>53878448
This sounds like a decent idea. If you want to add other races, I'd like to see those on top of the standards instead of replacing them, unless they fill the same niche.
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>>53878525
I want to save up money in order to open up a store that sells cute sundresses and underwear.
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Hey. So I'm actually putting some plans to paper (excel) for the dungeon master / core thing. Main component is going to be you can make any monster you want but you have to purchase the associated traits they have like [Corrosive] or [Flying] or [Ethereal]. While I'm making the giant list of traits, I was wondering if there are anything else that should be added to the cyoa. (Also, hopefully someone will help me with point values once the majority of the planning is done)
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>>53875985
>>53877827
Can someone post this? I haven't seen it.
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>>53877827
Well fuck, that's a lot to put up with.
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>>53878680
Looking foward to it anon
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>>53878448
Definitely need to pick among various employees and services, having some events or drawbacks would be pretty fun too, such as if your inn participates in a certain festival or whatever. Having various events that would effect your inn for better or worse would be kind of cool.

Ideas for services outside of traditional Inn stuff:

-Sell potions
-Appraise magic equipment
-Offer quests from any locals who show up and vent their troubles to you while drinking heavily

Maybe offer an option to show what you did before owning the inn, and skills of what exactly you can do that you won't really need employees for (so you can prioritize if you should have an expert chef to cook for you, or just an apprentice to help when things get too busy for you to handle on your own)
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>>53878826
> implying I'm not going to be a huge disappointment.

I'll do my best bud.
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>>53878579
Would that make skills like Traveller Adept, Lucky and Cheaterman the best ones?
Given the Denial involved warships and the Fighters are a thing, I think "conventional" powers are still viable (though probably not as much as the techniques one would learn from the likes of Union of Esteemed Wanderers)

By the way, speaking of bona fide infinity worlds, is weeb universes with waifus a thing? Jokes aside, is mythical figures like greek heroes/monsters a thing?
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>>53877827
>Dyslexia
Dyslexian master race FTW!
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>>53878865
I have some issues discerning shapes. That isn't dyslexia, though.

Other than that, would you believe me if I said I don't have any mental disorders?
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>>53878855
>is weeb universes with waifus a thing?
Yes.
>Jokes aside, is mythical figures like greek heroes/monsters a thing?
Yes.

They have both of those.
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I MISS THE FATPOSTER
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>>53878892
Chiron's School of Heroes, here I go!
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>>53878932
Faggot
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>>53878890
What inspired you to make Depression CYOA then?
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>>53878855
>Jokes aside, is mythical figures like greek heroes/monsters a thing?
Yes, some of them are even companions.

>Would that make skills like Traveller Adept, Lucky and Cheaterman the best ones?
I wouldn't say there's any *one* skill that's the skill-to-rule-them-all. I'm pretty sure there's no one skill that could be used to solve all possible problems that an infinite multiverse can shit out. You just gotta have a good head on your shoulders(sanity optional) and a ton of options in your tool-belt. Highlander used to say that what makes Travelers really, really fucking scary is simple: they all cheat like motherfuckers.
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>>53878982
Shitposting?

And making people here self-aware.
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>>53878414
As much as my boner wants Enslaved: High Elf Edition, Eronomicon sounds like it has potential to be pretty darn neat.
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>>53878849
You can do it, it's just a cyoa isn't it?
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>>53878532
Not sure if you've ever looked into Traveller (Not the Highlander One) but I've always thought this had a really neat character generation mechanic that also has some parts you might be able to steal for a time mechanic. Especially for ending it. Might be too crunchy/tedious for some people though.

Then again, you did make Star Dust so hopefully that isn't an obstacle to you.

Time stuff and "playability" - actually making a CYOA instead of a create your own character - are neat but I haven't felt like anyone's done all that great of a job on it before.
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>>53876244
Amusingly, I clock in at -33. This doesn't really bother me much. I'm not really dating material and I know that.

>>53877883
>The Adventurer
>All-Knowing Map
I get lost very easily. Being lost doesn't bother me very much, because I'm used to it, but it's definitely inconvenient.
>Dynamic Antenna
See attached.

>>53878028
Sadly, this does seem to be the case.

>>53878264
Hello fellow paleo-anon. Vertebrates or invertebrates?
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>>53878996
>Yes, some of them are even companions.
Are they? I mean, now that I'm thinking about this, there's no reason japanese kamis and wild spirits are a thing but Achille's not. Yet I don't remember any legend in the allies list, only Billy Murray.

>Highlander used to say that what makes Travelers really, really fucking scary is simple: they all cheat like motherfuckers.
Welll, Cheaterman is the skill that makes you git gud at cheating.
Though I suppose being able to go learn from the likes of Chiron, Scatach, Drona, Aristotles and other great mentos from history could be considered cheating. Though convincing they to take you in would be another matter, maybe some spices from distant india would do the trick.
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>>53877294
15% discount
subspace house
NEET blessing
No fucks given
Just plain o'l luck
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>>53878589
>Put some Fae in there Disney Strawberry or Alien Tutti Frutti flavors at your election

Oh yeah, I forgot about the fae.

>>53878838
>Having various events that would effect your inn for better or worse would be kind of cool.

I didn't think about events and festivals, actually. I was planning of you being able to choose different cities though, so festivals might be location specific.

>Maybe offer an option to show what you did before owning the inn

I thought about that too. Backgrounds will also have bonuses when it comes to setting up your Inn aside from when running it.
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>>53877827
holy shit he's a fucking tumblr retard who self diagnoses
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>>53879120
Just a cyoa? JUST a cyoa? Nay my friend. An artisan must put his being into his work. His very soul. Each CYOA must be crafted precisely and worked and reworked. Each CYOA must aim to withstand the test of time. Each CYOA must declare to the world - Here I am .

Well, good thing I'm no artisan though.
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>>53878414
I want all of them
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>>53879155
Saved, I'll definitely give this a look.

This CYOA isn't really about creating you, but more about living in the society. So hopefully there's mechanics I can translate with this.
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>>53878714
>>53875684
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>>53876394
>>53876340
>>53876159

My niggas
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I've decided to learn how to draw so I can make the perfect CYOA. I'll be back in a number of years after I've finally reached my goal and present you with the best CYOA anyone has ever seen with beautiful art.

Thank you, take care and sleep well.
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>>53877617
>What use do we have for dwarf fortress?
Ah.

There is a divine power, and it believes that Losing Is Fun.

Explains a lot, actually.

>>53877294
>Aura of Automation
>NEET Blessing
>Subspace House
>Just Plain Ol' Luck
>Mmm, Tasty
Housing is expensive and nutrition is important; those two have a lot of practical value.
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>>53878932
t. fatposter
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>>53879418
I will remember your words and wait for you to finish your work you better deliver or i will hate you forever
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>>53879506
Dont forget to screenshot and save that post forever so that you can post it when , not if, he delivers.
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>>53875724
Are you planning to ever do more with this CYOA?

I missed the last thread so I don't know exactly why people dislike the DLC, but I liked it and I still want to see more from the CYOA since the foreboding nature of it really intrigues me and the small details the DLC gives only stoked my interest even further in seeing another entry in this CYOA.
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>>53879418
What if we're all dead by then
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>>53879518
I already did that
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>>53879418
>I'm gonna become great at drawing so I can make great CYOAs with beautiful art.
Drawing takes time anon, making a CYOA with only your own art will take way to much time. I wouldn't say I'm great at drawing but I guess I can draw decent enough to have my own deviant art acc (pic related).

>My deviant art acc
http://poseidoniii.deviantart.com/gallery/
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>>53879570
Don't get between an anon and his dreams tok
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>>53879534
No. I was initially worried that expanding on it would ruin it for people and in the end it did. At this point, me tampering with it any further would just make things worse. I'm glad someone got some enjoyment out of it though, and I hope others can still have fond memories of the original.
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>>53879418
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>>53879570
you didn't draw that you fuck, you just added a few lines in ms paint to an existing drawing

and the lines are fucking shitty too you gotta admit
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>>53878714
I can post it but I'm doing my best not cause more a scene than I already have.
Just [ctrl]F my trip and you'll easily find it a few threads back.
>>53878807
It is what it is.
Wound up teaching myself to read because my brain was able to understand how the school were teaching us. Mainly just pops in the odd fuckings in the things I write like CYOAs.
Amazingly none of it really came to the for front until I hit 21.
But living as best I can and doing my best to apologize to the ones of you that actually deserve apologies when I can't.
>>53878865
Tok. Stop making me want to like you more than I already do.
I have to search through wweeeeeeird shit on /d/ to find your uncensored by which I mean superior CYOAs and feeling comdradary between makes me want to brace to big knees and unbirthing just to find you stuff all over again.
>>53879245
No, I have several physical documents stating that I have all that that were written by an actual human doctor.
My mom is even a LCSW, so she's pretty frequent source insight into these things.

GUARDIAN SPIRIT QUESTION:
You guys want me to include your wards if you become a Guardian and the souls that you can pick from to inhabit your Guardian if you recieve one?
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>>53877197
>starts building a guy with big sword and jet boots
>seems to remember it from somewhere else
>it's just a destiny gundam in human form
>realize I have no creativity whatsoever
Goddamnit. Where do you guys pull off all those characters?
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>>53879570
>Runescape fanart
That was my elementary
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>>53879570
Dammit ToK! Now I know that you have one I have to fucking watch you.
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>>53879641
>GUARDIAN SPIRIT QUESTION
Sounds good, so long as they're more companions than waifus
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>>53879638
>You didn't draw that from scratch! You added some lines on a template.
I guess that's kind of true, but I did draw this one from scratch.

>>53879659
>RS was my elementary
It was everyone's elementary.
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>>53879657
There's at most one or two characters in Traveller, counting the fan companions, that aren't to some degree a straight ripoff from something else. Don't worry about it, make the thing you want to make that sounds fun.
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>>53879657
By not caring about originality and just making shit we find cool or entertaining.
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>>53879731
i wouldnt mind you saying you drew it if 98% of the value in the drawing didn't come from someone else
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>>53879657
If you do it I will also make a Gundam character, but it'll be a protagonist instead of a robot. I don't think Char is a traveller yet.
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>>53877640
It's by Tokhaar, his Drive is in the Pastebin linked in OP, it has all his other stuff too
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>>53879695
The idea behind both the people you'd be the guardian for and the souls/personalities you can choose if you to get a Guardian is that the charges you pick from are just people who need someone to keep them safe and try to make them happy or in the case case of the souls/personalities are just people who need a second chance to earn the right to pass on into the world after this.
I'm not intentionally writing any of them to be waifus.
I'm just going to write them as characters.
Make sense?
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>>53879641
>You guys want me to include your wards if you become a Guardian and the souls that you can pick from to inhabit your Guardian if you recieve one?
I can't imagine how it would work otherwise. 'build your generic ward/guardian personality'? Or just 'imagine whoever you want'?
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>>53879641
If it doesn't include a strong tomboy guardian waifu I'm going to be sad.
Non-romantic options would be nice too.
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>>53879594
Aw, that's a shame.
Thanks for making the CYOA anyways, it's the only one i've made a build for so far thats stuck around in my head for so long, the mysteries and small details are so compelling.
Best of luck to you on what you do next, hopefully people won't get in a huff about that too.

Also, do you mind revealing your intent behind the Broken Facade and DREAMERS thing in the CYOA? It really intrigues me and at this point I don't care if I have the mystery is flat out revealed since there's not going to be another addition, i'd just like some closure at this point.
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>>53878543
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g_8KzyBl3mc

Here's the real 100% success.
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>>53879641
Yes! I'd like being able to choose a spirit to protect or to have protect me.
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>>53879734
>>53879746
It still feels wrong to just make something that's so heavily "inspired" on another but I'll finish it then. Maybe practice will help me get better.
Might throw the skill Force, I mean Infused, in there to mimic new-type/coordinator fuckery.
Thanks guys.

>>53879810
I wonder what Char would do with (3x) Absolute Mobility. Try preventing the death of his parents only to realize it's futile? Go have a talk with Lalah? Just stalk Amuro through the multiverse? The answer is probably going after lolis.
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>>53878448
Generic is fine. If you wanna do more obscure fantasy races, that's well and good. But designing races from scratch is a bitch. Don't be afraid to set up lines you don't want to cross. Without limits, you'd never finish.
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>>53879817
Sounds good
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>>53879731
Fuck.
I like that. Way better than anything I've ever done, which was pretty much just this tupid picture I traced over to reinact a scene I thought was funny in a colloberative fanfic thing over on /vp/
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>>53879641
>GUARDIAN SPIRIT QUESTION:

Absolutely, broheim.
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>>53875601

>Golden Fortune Cookie

>Grass Jelly
>Custard Tart

Too bad the shapeshifting from jelly is only temporary, but I guess it's not too much of a problem since I'd probably only take humanoid forms.

>Lucky Charm Bracelet
>Jade Ring

The trinkets really weren't appealing. I'd probably wear the bracelet so it wouldn't feel like a complete waste and throw the ring away in my pocket dimension. Would rather trade it for tangyuan.

>Long

>Mute

I've been mute before thanks to a short illness. I'm pretty expressive, so it wasn't bad at all. Actually, it was kind of fun. Life's a little easier when you're not expected to talk.
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>>53879641
>GUARDIAN SPIRIT QUESTION:
Sounds nice.
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>>53879873
Anything you make up is more interesting than the actual answer.

TPTB's magic level would be something like 300 is you were to retranslate it into the points system. Powerful compared to Marid, but obviously a much lower number than what BF gives you. That's the big secret the Marid know that Heaven/TPTB don't: there is a power much bigger than all of them out there in the distance. BF is presented to you by purple text, and in the CYOA text color is used to indicate who is speaking. Notice the color of the main CYOA title, and the title of the DLC. Essentially, a representative of the world "above" Heaven has been whispering in your ear, first as the italics narrator then offering you BF. By taking it, she introduces herself as your genie despite being much, much more powerful than that. Just by proximity, you realize that there must be a world beyond (same thing with the Algorithm: proximity causes weird effects if they "shouldn't be there") but she's grateful to you for granting her access. As more people take BF, more and more representatives from the world above can enter, further destabilizing the world made by TPTB.


DREAMERS are people incredibly disatisfied for one reason or another. Human emotion and cognition has a huge effect on TPTB's world, what with the Hinn and Houri and Jann. As human dissatisfaction and aimlessness grows, TPTB's ability to manage things grows weaker. The genie scheme in general is a last ditch effort to fix humanity, but TPTB is already at the pallatative stage. It's a matter of time here. A few dozen billions of years and the World Above will probably take over. Of course, they have already hijacked the genie scheme through Broken Facade, but Heaven doesn't know that yet. And most people on heaven and earth are just trying to get through the day. Your own genie just wants to be loved, the sisters want each other's approval, the Mother wants her daughters to love each other and for TPTB to get better, etc.
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>>53875624
Tu's alright
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>>53878932

I miss him as well anon, His fatposting was way better than his other ones like the fujo poster and such. Hell, when he was fatposting he even sometimes posted some good ideas and was more tolerable
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>>53878182
Yearly payments can be discounted into static sums and vise versa. It's entirely possible to "Luxury lifestyle" and "Submarine" both have single cost.

Alternatively, monthly cost things and static things are in different sections. Your job gives you MONTHLY COINS, you start with some sum of STATIC COINS representing I don't know selling your cryo capsule. Some choices might give you some static coins more, some might allow you to convert some of your monthly coins into static to represent getting a loan.
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>>53878414
>Strawpol
Seems like Eronomicon is winning, its probably the most original idea out of all of them and it would be fun to make.

>>53879753
I get it, mega milk is a meme and the Avaryss drawing probably isn't the best example of my art.

>>53879683
>Gonna follow you on deviant art
I'm not very active and I don't draw that much anymore, I do a lot of CYOAs tho. I also kinda stopped playing Warhammer Fantasy after Age of Sigmar so I don't upload pics on warhammer models either (pic related brag bragedy brag).

>>53879925
I think the pic its still good my dyslexian brother, I giggled.
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Filling a request
1/5
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I really like this one.
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>>53876155
Not DLC
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>>53880216
2/5
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>>53879594
I also liked it, though I can understand not wanting to expand on it any further considering the reaction you got, even though I personally would be interested in more content. The genie cyoa in general is definitely my favorite recent one.

Any plans for future cyoas? Definitely would be looking forward to it.
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>>53880244
3/5
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>>53878112
Apparently someone sees 'us' as talented since, as the Recruiter states, someone being given 2000 credits is incredibly rare.
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>>53880267
4/5
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>>53875631
>Become a Saber
A Saber formed of the concept of the edgy good natured hero archetype.
>Neutral Good Alignment.
>Saber Lily (Immature, Idealistic, Kind, Resolute, Friendly).
>Saber (Saber) Class.
>Androgynous Saber
>Normal (knees) Impression.
>Adult (Legal) Saber. Borderline.
>Ahoge-Less.
>Light Armor Heroic Appearance, Uniform and Casual Modern threads.

Parameters
ST: C
AG: EX (EX+ with Heroic Armor)
LK: B
EN: C
MG: B
NP: B

Magic Resistance EX
Presence Concealment A

Disengage EX
Information Erasure EX

Noble Phantasm: Silver Eyes, EX Rank.
An Anti-Magi Phantasm which deals little damage to mundane materials and entities, but compounds exponentially based on the strength of the magical or supernatural nature of those afflicted by it, potentially crippling magi or other Servants' powers.

Crescent Rose: Anti Unit Weapon and D-Rank Noble Phantasm which shifts from a ranged to a melee weapon form at the wielder's will.
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>>53880290
5/5
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>>53879844
Point taken.
>>53879871
The way I designed it you have take to take a specific perk if you want to have a romantic relationship with your Guardian/Charge.
>>53879893
Then my punishment for being I giant whiny baby will be to make a good CYOA to help us all forget about the nonsense my last became.
I've said it over and over, but I really sorry.
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>>53880127
I'm not the other guy, but that's actually pretty cool. I can't say I enjoyed the DLC, but you got shit on pretty unfairly, overall it was a great CYOA.
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>>53880127
So how bad is The World Above taking over anyway? And why don't TPTB just take a direct hand in things, from what the background details say they should be powerful enough to enact widespread change which can minimize dissatisfaction with the current system.
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>>53880261
Thank you. I don't have any current plans, no. I expended a lot of effort on the DLC and had been planning to take a break, but I think I'm more suited to being a reader rather than an author. A lot of aspects of the DLC were direct requests and I still managed to make a mess of it. So now I'm looking at other things I had planned and see all the potential things that could blow up into shitstorms. I don't want to cause more.
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>>53880127
So DREAMERS/BF are basically portals for those of the World Above to enter TPTB's creation?
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>>53880127
I'm not even the anon who first asked you, but thanks.

Let me say that you've made a special CYOA, at least in my eyes. You have an excellent writing style and have created a fascinating miniature world in just a few image files on an anonymous image board.

Your work has had a bigger impact on me than most CYOAs, and I'm grateful. Sorry if I inflate your ego, but it's sincerely, genuinely inspiring. I'll be eagerly awaiting future content from you.
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>>53880400
Don't be so discouraged. Everyone makes mistakes.
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>>53880357
>The way I designed it you have take to take a specific perk if you want to have a romantic relationship with your Guardian/Charge

While that's certainly one way to do it, you could just leave it up to the readers as to whether romance is possible or appropriate between the spirit and host. Romance doesn't necessarily need a mechanic
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>>53880443
go hog wild
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>>53880127
Wait, so the world is essentially fucked in the long run? At least the world above taking over really sounds like that. That's a lot more depressing than what I had in mind.
Also, I assume true immortality is basically unattainable then?
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>>53880216
Neat
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>>53880400
Aww, I can understand why you're discouraged and wish you the best if you do decide to give up but giving up because you think it might blow up in your face isn't how you should view your work. Someone's always going to find something to bitch about, so long as you're happy with what you've made and you're seeking to improve I don't see why you should stop.
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>>53880370
Thanks. I hope you can still enjoy the original, or at least your memories of it.

>>53880393
>So how bad is The World Above taking over anyway?
Depends on your perspective. There are lots of things that are bad about the world, but lots of good things too. All of it was created by TPTB and all of it would go away. The only thing that would remain is everyone's immortal souls. What would that "life" be like?

>And why don't TPTB just take a direct hand in things
They used to, with things like creating the Peri to be the original custodians of man and creating Junos when that failed. But meddling often seemed to make things worse, weakening their powers as more people felt rebellion. It got to the point where Floods stopped working as deterrents, and started making people dissatisfied/angry. And now even Angels can't manifest on earth for long. So they and Heaven decided to take a subtler approach, with one exception 2000 years ago.
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>>53879594
God damn it, what a fucking disaster. ZBG comes out with a new CYOA and people get enraged as hell, and you make a new update to this amazing CYOA and get rage from people instead of what was needed.

It's me again, guy with that creepy houri genie from /d. I read it, and I loved it, loved the idea, and didn't find it contradicted anything... if you paid attention. The problem is that some small things in the ordering of explanations caused a bit of confusion, which made people blow the fuck up.

You have to understand, the reason so many of these people have waifus instead of real girlfriends is because the idea of them having their own wants and desires and histories enrages people.

In any case, please don't listen to the mindless anger, today is literally "bite the hand that fed you" day, it obviously isn't just you or ZBG wouldn't have gotten fucked over too.

My personal, more detailed review will follow, like I gave you for the main thing back on /d
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>>53880475
Goes with Beri's "A New Magical Girl" which you can find in his google drive, which is in the pastebin. You don't really need to do that cyoa but it gives this one more context.
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>>53880232
Thanks for sharing, this is a good one. Here's what I'd pick.

STYLE:
Hellenic Seaside

CLIMATE:
Temperate

GEOGRAPHICAL FEATURES:
Rolling Hills
Rivers
Lakes
Waterfalls
Woodlands

LIVING ACCOMODATIONS:
Cozy Cabin

RESIDENCE LOCATION:
Far Outskirts

SPECIAL ARTIFACT:
Pale Ring
Inviting Pendant
Fur Mantle

VILLAGE BORDERS:
Endless Expanse

OCCUPATION:
Shepard

VILLAGE HIGHLIGHTS:
The Old Castle
Fairy Grove
Siren Overlook
Crystal Cavern

VILLAGE GUIDES:
Nostalgic Chief

UNEASY PECULIARITES:
Nature Sprite
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>>53880424
Basically. They "shouldn't be there," but general dissatisfaction in the case of DREAMERS and your specific dissatisfaction in the choices offered to you/desire for more power allow them in.

>>53880434
Haha, thank you. After today, the last thing my ego expected was to be inflated, so I'll take what I can get. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and if it really inspired you I'll looking forward to seeing what that produces.

>>53880478
>>53880442
Thank you. Maybe something will come up someday.

>>53880467
Your immortality will extend the lifespan of the universe significantly, but as you begin to bore or grow sick of an empty life in a black void they will close in. Everyone's soul is immortal though, and you will probably last billions of years happily with your genie.

>>53880534
People have a right to their opinion. I'm happy the answer to the mystery was satisfying though. Thank you for all your detailed responses, I really appreciated them all.
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>>53880621
>>53880527
What does being in soul form or whatever entail exactly? Because I can imagine it either being okay or absolute hell. Being stuck in space forever without anything to do may actually not be that terrible in comparison.
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>>53880753
It would differ for everyone, depending on their personality. In the Orthodox view, Heaven and Hell are the same place, experienced differently. I imagine it would be like that but less about pleasure/pain and more about acceptance and understanding. Being at peace with yourself and your life, versus desperately wanting more. It is in contrast to the shallower "Heaven" of endless Houri fulfilling your carnal pleasures, and more about knowledge, understanding, love, and acceptance of the end of the old world.
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>>53875617

Species: Linger

History: Cosmic Will

Attitude: Happy to Be Here

Body: Curvy

Accessories: Flexible, Barefoot, High Heels

Additional Outfits: Variable [Businesswoman], Modern, Glorified Jewelry

Mundane Skills: Entertainer, Courtesan, Nurse, Housewife, Life of the Party, Businesswoman

Vessel Exterior: Magic Medium

Vessel Interior: Pocket Dimension [free]

Powerlevel: Magical Girl(friend)

Perks: Loving Heart [free], Lusty Soul -1, Magical Realm -1, Friend Upstairs -2, Cursebane -2, Guardian Spirit -3, No Misunderstandings -1, Minor Shapeshift -2, Dream Job -1 [Nurse], Spare Changes -3

Interlopers: Endless Inlaws +1

Life Goal: Companionship

My one-time Patron Haint-level wish will be something that allows my genie to transcend the limitation of the Pocket Dimension with regard to my being. Naturally, this will be limited to only mundane changes (she can make me a wizard in her realm, but the supernatural won't carry out into the real world), but with regular trips to her Pocket Dimension she can keep me in tip-top shape in the real world, granting me a form of immortality that lasts outside of her dimension.

Also, I don't have any female childhood friends so I'm going to ignore all the disturbing fluff and insist that everything is on the up-and-up. Heaven is real and Good, and they're granting me this genie because reasons only the Lord knows.
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>>53880852
You got a build in at the very end! Smart use if your PH level wish. What object did she manifest from/is her magical medium?
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>>53880818
Wait, so do some things still exist then? Because 'only souls remaining' made it sound like it would just be souls stuck in the void doing nothing. That doesn't really mesh with what you've said. I mean, being able to accept that there is nothing to do anymore sounds pretty hard.
Maybe this is all just too abstract for me or something.
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>>53880990
The only thing that remains from the old world is souls. Heaven and earth pass away. If you're immortal, it will be you and the genie floating in a black void because the entire rest of the universe is gone. Once they fully take over after you become bored floating, your and everyone else's soul will be the only things that exist. From their perspective, that soul world is perfect: why create anything else?
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>>53880878
That question is what's destroying my ability to make a build of my own. I can't for the life of me imagine what object I own that a Linger would come from, and I really love the whole "mundane object coming to life via magic" thing much to pick anything else.
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>>53881048
You can cheat a little. Anything you might find interesting on the side of the road you might have been taking care of for the past few months, hypothetically?
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>>53877827
>look up auditory processing disorder
literally me, what the fuck

tfw also have idiopathic insomnia, add, cfs, and bpd

i cant make cyoas i just get so tired from everything to even finish a simple gallery or something, so im impressed at what you make considering everything you have

i believe in you senpai
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>>53880818
Souls can still do some things or at least communicate, right? Knowledge, understanding and love seem pretty impossible/pointless otherwise.
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>>53880878

I'm running with the idea that she was made for me, so her magical medium is probably something personally significant, like my first internet-capable computer.
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>Brain: Hey, we should work on that CYOA!
>Heart: LALALA LETS PLAY VIDEO GAMES

>Brain: hey, we need to work on that project thats way more important than CYOAs
>Heart: H-HAHAHA HEY WE SHOULD WORK ON THAT CYOA ITS BETTER THAN DOING NOTHING RIGHT?

Why does my mind have to work like this. At least something is getting done.
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>>53876244
Huh. The idea is pretty good, but the execution is a bit unpolished. I'm sure this could be a great CYOA if you work on it a bit more.

That being said for me:
>Body: Average (1)
>Age (19-23) (2)
>Fat: Chubby (0)
I technically have a normal BMI of 24, but I'm borderline overweight.
>Muscle: Looks trained (2)
I did wrestling all through High School: I can definitely see muscle and veins when I flex.
>Height: 5.6-6 (3)
>Hair: Good hairline (5)
>Health: works out (6)
>Race: white (8)
>Weak Acne (7)
>Political Extremism (5)
I consider myself a normal Republican, but in the People's Republic of California, that might as well be extremism.
>Cooking (8)
>CS degree (10)
Technically don't have it yet, but I'm getting there.
>Awkward but warms up (8)
>Quick to Anger (6)
>Virgin (3)
I'm still a college student, so I think I'll skip the income part for now.

You know, I think I'll pass on whatever creation stuff you have mister, because that would be ridiculously creepy. Thanks for the survey though.
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>>53881206
What we think of as "communication" and so on is based on our experience in TPTBs world. Whatever existed "above that,what inspired TPTB to decide to create a world in the first place, is what would be occurring. We can use words like love and acceptance, but the map is not the territory. Getting this abstract is a bit of a cop out, I know, but it's what makes sense to me.

>>53881216
Nice! I'd think instead of Jeannie's blinking noise when granting a wish you'd hear the classic dial-up "song."
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>>53881287
F
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>>53881068
Possibly, I just can't think of what the object would be. I mean, something I can make a good aesthetic for the personified form, and that isn't an unwieldy casting tool.
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>>53881374
When I was writing Lingers, I thought of old fairy tales where spirits would help out a human in minor or major ways in exchange for a token of appreciation. There are a surprising number of things we use every day and take for granted, and probably people we take for granted too. A Linger would probably manifest out of an object you least expect, specifically because you are so familiar with it.
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>>53880127
This is far more interesting than what I imagined in my head, (Which before the DLC was basically my genie is actually just conjuring up a dream world for me and her to be happy a la Madoka Magica Rebellion) thanks for the answer.

Now that I have the full picture I do appreciate this CYOA a lot more. It feels a lot more relatable and less distant than I initially felt now that I see what you were going for. I loved this before because of the mystery elements you teased us with, but now I just love the idea of the CYOA since us players are kind of involved with it in a meta way.
Most of us are playing it because we're dissatisfied too, whether we're creating an escapist fantasies with a genie waifu (Similar to the genie we get) or an escapist fantasy of adventure.

One more question for clarification -- how much of an impact does Broken Facade have for the individual? Like, if I take it will it significantly impact the world from me alone, or is it because there are multiple dreamers taking it that might make the world die a couple billion years sooner?
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