CYOA General

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>>53436755

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>>53436769

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>>53436769

>Custom World

>Reincarnation
>Melancholy

>Compendium
>Love Interest
>Home

Just live out eternity in a gloomy gothic world of my own creation, without memory, time, or worry. Sharing the millenia with my true love, forever wrapped up in each other and in the beautiful but dark emotions of our little world.

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>>53436746
You forgot the pasta

Pastabin: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu

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>>53436755

>Naga
>appearance change
>enhanced intelligence
>portal to a fantasy world

Become a qt naga. Travel to fantasy world. With enhanced intelligence learn adventuring skills and maybe magic. Become adventuring qt naga.

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I've finished 3 more sections to my post-apocalyptic C.Y.O.A.; any criticism or comments are very welcome, especially regarding points balance and such.

Part 1, skills.

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>>53436901

Part 2; first half of the weapons list.

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>>53436901
>>53436928

Part 3; second half of the weapons list.

>>53436846
Secret Lore Build

>Greater
Nebeyulibod (the cure for death)

>Intermediate
Svadnivzoxr (knowledge of underground political and criminal groups)
Lifranat (ancient tomes and esoteric scrolls)

>Lesser
Sebodva (knowledge of her city)
Vabalac (knowledge of greater beings)
Ihrxan (divination and astral projection)

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>>53436803

>>53436955
longbow is strangely expensive, and the last line of Large Bioweapon is cut off.

>>53437080
All the good options are in the top row.

>>53436803
>Contrasting Powers
>Superpower
>Bonus
Complete omnipotence.
No other choice matters anymore.

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Hey guys,
starting on the 6th page I've been teasing since before I even fucking finished the CYOA.
Anything in particular I should be sure to put on it?
So far all I have in mind is:
>Sebastian checking in with you one last time
>Explaining the exact rules for the war
>Listing the 2/3 mystery box options?

What do you guys think?
I'll throw the CYOA up because I keep getting asked to anyway.

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>>53437263

>>53437224
Perhaps how the subjects of each house sees the girls and peoples of other houses. It would add some outside perspective on the situation and give you some room to expand on the background of the setting.

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>>53437277
And, boom.
Go nuts.
I'm gonna go to bed, but I'll lurk from my phone if you guys need me.

>>53437224
You're starting to get annoying.

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Asking again ,does anyone have that gay roommate CYOA, trap, gamer-bro, and cute were some of the options, it also had a second page.

>>53437193
And, of course, because that's sorta boring, have an actual build.

>Appearance
Current Appearance Bonus [2]
Sister [2]

>Personality
Energetic [1]
Suave [1]

>Contrasting Powers
Super Power Bonus [7 [3+4]]
Complete Omnipotence (with the caveat that said powers can't be used to harm each other physically or mentally

There's two points extra, but they're not really necessary.

>>53437277
Can Vignette heal psychological wound?
Can I use S-12 on myself to implant happy thoughts?

>>53436901
What are the sections you have planned?
How many points are we taking into consideration?
Is it tiered for challenge levels or what?

Skillset menu is currently set for full kill, depending on your players you might want to include kill for me or sneaky kill, or peaceful diplomat caravan except not really haha kill builds, and of course actual vegan builds that kill using animals or don't kill at all. Maybe you have done these already, maybe the tone is less serious IDK.

If I have learned things about post apocalyptic wastes from watching Rimworldfags is that I want the option to take a maneater beast and train the shit out of it until its my maneater beast and had maneater children that killl for me. Be sure to include these alongside vehicles and shit.

What else... a few combos spoilered as usual because people seem to like secret boxes?
Lately everyone suggests slaves, minions, henchmen and companions, don't get swamped by this, introduce just a few and complete the list from suggestions, three threads in one weekend should be enuff.

Of course, options to go beep boop borg or mutant abomination.

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>>53437094
Thanks. I noticed the bioweapon line cut-off just after I posted it.

As for the longbow; it's 2 more points than the crossbow, which seemed about right to me. Do you think I should reduce it? Maybe the crossbow should be a little cheaper as well?

>>53437309
>>53437333
Celestial God.
Magic, Wisdom, Offense, and Defense.
Health and Trading.
With any luck, such boons will be more than enough to get an edge over other civilizations. With my luck, I'll be a footnote in history under the Mythological Deities section in an obscure manuscript.

>>53437329
I have a total of 10 sections planned:
>Setting,
>Character archetype,
>Abilities,
>Skills,
>Weapons,
>Vehicles,
>Equipment,
>Companions,
>Missions,
>Resolutions to missions.
So far I've done settings, archetypes and abilities (which I posted in previous C.Y.O.A. threads) plus the stuff I posted here.

Currently I plan to give the player 150 points to use, but I may change this if it turns out ot be too much or too little.

It is not currently tiered for different challenge levels.

I plan to make it so that there are different ways to resolve the missions, and most will have at least one peaceful way to do so.

As regards your desire for a killer pet; yes, one of the vehicles available is a mutant beast, which can be upgraded for combat, as well as the equipment list featuring an animal companion which can also be upgraded to a savage creature.

The resolutions to the missions will be spoilered.

The abilities section already contains options to play as a cyborg or mutant.

I'd like to request that someone post the Of Men and Magic cyoa. Both parts, if you would--I know some people don't like page 2.

>>53437224
>Mystery box
Maybe choose what kind of city you rule over?

Requesting Magical mentor

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>>53437529

>>53437341
idk, it just seems to me that they should be significantly less than guns. I don't know when I would ever pick a longbow over a small bioweapon, for example, and they're only 1 point apart.

>>53436746

I love comfy CYOAs

>Room Type
Log Cabin
>Entrance
Other - Draw a portal in front of me with my finger
>Physical Items
Auto-/ck/, 200% Comfy, NormieStation, Gaymen PiiSii, The Rest, /o/ hell yeah, /diy/ zone,
/lit/ As Heck, /fa/bulous, Ocean Man, Aesthetics
>out (-2 Items)
Beaches, Forest, Grassland
>Companions (-2 Items)
I don’t think I have to choose anyone of the below categories, as it says I can summon as many
companions as I want, but if I had to choose something I would choose True Love.
>Abilities/Extras
Inter-bot 9001, Very Own Soul, Last Resort, HQ HQ, Attractive Forces, Aether Orchestra,
Machines Learning, Believe It, Skinship, Min-Max (3)

>>53437556
I don't like her very much, but I guess Penelope is the one with highest chance of giving you smart children.
Her parents were prodigies, and so was her, what indicates that big part of her inteligence is genetic and able to pass to next generations.
You are also supouse to be very smart, so I guess there's a fair chance of children with her being very smart too.

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Is it autistic that I made up a whole storyline about my village?

>>53437909
No, anon. It makes me a little happy.

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>>53436746
OMG how dare you not include the pastebin in the OP1!!1!1!1!!!!
You killed the autist!

>>53437224
There's been some discussion about what exactly being the King of Zodiac means in terms of powers and responsibilities, so that could be good to include. Something that prompts the reader about what happens after the war's over.

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>>53436901
>tfw I can't take Happy Merchant because taking it with that rugged masculine handsomeness perk breaks all immersion

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>>53436746
Hey, what's that one CYOA where you get a waifu that you can upgrade, but you have to take vows like "vow of kindness" and "vow of charity" to get the points to enhance her?

>>53433237
What the fuck?
You get raped by your student if you don't fuck them?
The fuck what?

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how would you like a RWBY CYOA's weapon system to work?

>>53438513
Sexually deprived witches are dangerous.

>>53438540
I suddenly don't feel bad about not reading the CYOA yet. I think I'll skip it if I have to be raped.

>>53438513
SDA just probably hasn't masturbated lately, ignore him.

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>>53437309
I got the first page.

>>53438519
I think it would be bood if you just give the option to make a weapon and add a cost for each new form and some prices for diferent abilities or spetial forms like your weapon can become a termo and you can sneak it

>>53438519
Are you actually planning on making a cyoa? Or just asking?
I don't think you can. You can't add a "sharpness" stat because maces are blunt weapons, and stats for the guns will not go well.

>>53438585
The entire point was for it to be a waifu thing, SDA even admitted that he wanted it to be lewder but couldn't settle on how he wanted it. No shit you shouldn't read waifu CYOAs if you don't want to fuck the girls.

>>53438613
I'm making it right now, and that's why I ask. I don't know if I should make it super oen ended like our last one, or sort of guided like the titanlands weapon cyoa beri did.

>>53438609
yeah, for something in this kind of universe that may be best. ill keep thinking on it

>>53438592
The author said you get raped. It's hard to ignore that. I'm not fucking my students and I'm not getting raped.

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>>53438658
Is it really rape if you enjoy it though?

>>53438654
I would much rather have it open ended. The way the old one is written with the perks is fun.

>>53438513
One anon murdered his student and sacrificed her to something so there's that route too.

>>53438687
But not too much maybe some options for adventures or the cannon and/or oc characters.
and more non cannon semblances!

>>53438658
Stop playing waifu CYOAs and not fucking the girls.

>>53438673
I don't enjoy being knocked unconscious and having my body violated by a person I thought I could trust.

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>>53438721
Oh right. I forgot you'd be unconscious. Where's the fun in it if you aren't awake during it? I mean, I can understand being paralyzed, but who wants to just be told that they were raped instead of experiencing it firsthand?

>>53437493
Can you post the setting, archetype, and abilities sections?

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>>53438654

>>53438705
Why are you replying to me and not the guy making the cyoa?

>>53438735
>Not enjoying waking up with a sore pelvis covered in sexual fluids with the dawning realization that someone used your body as a glorified dildo.

>>53438737
>Asking for a wip
Disgusting

>>53438754
why not? is not like he is not going to read it besides I was adding my opinion about the openendednes so...
kek

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>>53437556
>tfw the narrator is a childhood friend and total bro who assumes you're straight and wants to set you up with a girl

CEASE THIS
TOO CLOSE TO HOME
WAKE ME UP

>>53438774
If I want to make any critiques of the WIP I have to see the whole thing.

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>>53436928
>Knuckle-dusters
>melee

>>53438687
yeah, I'll probably end up doing that.

>>53438705
I'm definitely trying to make it big, quests and companions are on the list! I probably won't be making OC's, but maybe ill add some anon build to the companion list.

>>53438753
<3

>>53438792
But what if the narrator is a homosexual?

WHAT THEN

>>53438801
>maybe ill add some anon build to the companion list.
Nice!
But I don't think it'll go well if you let us team up with the characters from the school. You would screw over the plot, unless you want that.

>>53438792
I'd have a lot more sympathy for you if you weren't such a faggot about it.

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>>53438809
>narrator is a childhood friend who happens to be gay too and you love him so you thought it was destiny but he is not attracted to you at all, says you're like a brother to him, and then spends the next 5 years going from one abusive ex bf to the next using your shoulders to cry on but is still not interested in you
>when he's not crying on your shoulders he just talks about how wonderful his current bf, how handsome he is, how big his dick is, etc. HOW MUCH HE LOVES HIM

AAAAAAAAH
I need cyoas to forget! Don't remind me of real life here!

>>53438825
It'll be the same conflict, but I'll probably make the main characters be teammate-able.

>>53438801
Can I befriend Neo's Neo?

>>53438869
eh?

>>53438801
What about the sugestion of fusing dust with your body?

>>53438869
Like... her ice cream?

>>53438880
I don't think that's a thing.

>>53438898
It is whe have Cinder as an example and the lore video about dust explaining it

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>>53437556
>Vedic
>Aurarian Order
>Vera Wietmarschen
Vedic seems like the most potentially powerful magic, and the Aurarian Order gives me a good chance to study it. I'm also into mechanical stuff so I like Vera's major. Also, since I might be doing some forbidden or taboo magic Vera doesn't seem like the kind of person who would try to stop me.

>>53438673
I'm really liking that picture. It has possibilities

>>53438658
Yeah, he said you get raped out of love :^)

>>53438912
i'll rewatch the lore of remnant series

>>53438868
I don't think that will work well but you're the boss.
I call dibs on Yang's tits.

>>53439024
Yeah just at the end it says that is posible to waive dust into clothing and even fuse with your body~

>>53438912
>Cinder as an example
She also has bullshit Maiden powers
>>53438898
Sure. I want to lap up her ice cream. I want to taste her rainbow.

>>53438658
It was funny. More so because I would have waifu'd Ruby if I read the CYOA as a waifu picker. But sleeping with your students really IS a serious breach of professional conduct...

>>53438995
She's obviously a romantic at heart.

>>53439131
As far as you know, this is like Ancient Greece and it's considered good, proper, and professional to take your student as a lover.

>>53439167
Only if they're male.

>>53439170
I said like Ancient Greece, not an exact clone of Ancient Greece.

>>53439167
>As far as you know, this is like Ancient Greece and it's considered good, proper, and professional to take your student as a lover.

Neat idea for a cyoa. Let the player choose the age range and then go nuts on the rest.

>>53437224
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>>53437277
>>53437300
thanks for the CYOA Zodiac Brides Guy
I can't really decide on single bribe yet as many of them are good choices

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>>53439237
>I can't really decide on single bribe yet
Freudian slip?

>>53439250
It is late nigh here and english is not my native language

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>>53437949

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>>53439309
Oh. Well your english is pretty solid, I couldn't even tell you weren't native.

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>>53439390

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>>53439352
thanks anon

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>>53439399

>>53437224
Man, I like the CYOA and all but you don't have to post it every thread

And while its on topic now, you don't have to keep the trip on all the time

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>>53439418

>>53437556
Is this complete?

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>>53439429

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>>53439440

does love exist?

>>53439458
Infant cause no harm to me.

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>>53439458

Nope

>>53439428
That would make sense. If that post wasn't talking about DLC and asking for feedback on it.

>>53439485
Sure, hence the
>while on topic now
bit, but I guess I could have waited until the next time

>>53439484
Is love the only chemical reaction?

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>>53439520
Yes. Hate is a real emotion.

>>53439434
Yep.
Until he updates it that is.
Which could be years.

>>53437653
>COV3
where is the box?

>>53439537
At the risk of starting yet another thread derailment, why were people getting hyped up for this? Its not bad and its very pretty to look at but its not really that different to any of a dozen other CYOAs that have been posted on any given day

Like I said its not a bad CYOA by any stretch I just don't get the
>NEW SDA WHEN HUUURGHGHGGG
that pre empted it before its release

I would have asked then but I was banned due to elf areola

>>53438159
quit replying to yourself

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>>53439585

>>53439569
I think SDA is planning in actually making it interesting with a magic crafting system and stuff

>>53439569
>why were people getting hyped up for this?
No one were?

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back from vacation - want to relax by being autistic

indulge me

>>53439667
no thanks you can post stuff yourself

>>53439667
Are we supposed to make sabers based off of real people or just make our donutsteals?

>>53439701
Donuts

>>53439667
Did you see when I posted my latest update of the Necromancer CYOA?
Because I did that.

Holy shit I just visited the CYOA Reddit. Can we please promise to be better people and shitpost less? I don't want this thread to be banned and we have to go there.

>>53439726
>Going to reddit
>Ever
You're part of the problem.

>>53439701
Boring Mode: Donutsteels
Fun Mode: Legendary/mythological figures
Hardcore Mode: Non-fictional historical figures

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>>53439726
Someone needs to make CYOAs real. I don't care if it's reddit.

>>53439726
Is everything there still literally stolen from here with no OC whatsoever?

>>53439753
it never was everything, just like 96% or something

>>53439753
~95% stolen. Has some OC, although nothing amazing.

>>53439753
That's everywhere.
Except maybe eightchan

>>53439726
Reddit is cancer.
With that in mind, did they try to steal my OC?
Gril Nye The Scientist Guy here.

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>>53439667
>create a saber
>lawful evil
Archetype - saber alter
selfish, apathetic, cool, resolute, cruel

>servant class
assassin

>Physical features
male saber
horrifying
adult saver
ahoge-less

clothing:
heroic garments - ceremonial scantly clad
modern clothes- casual

>servant parameters
Strength-B (7)
Endurance-B (7)
Agility-B (7)
Magic- C (3)
Luck- C (3)
Noble Phantasm- EX (23)

>personal skills
Eye of the mind(false) -EX (25)
Projectile Proficient - EX(25)

>>53439753
Yes and their responses are autistic enough to make everyone here cringe.

>>53439800
how so?

>>53439592
This

>>53439810
Not the guy above, but, some of it is naive.

>>53439753
tankista posts his CYOA directly there, and responds, so there's that.

>>53439835
naive?

>>53439800
I like that they take it super seriously, makes for interesting builds to read.
I don't like the tendency to do everything as themselves with no roleplaying.

>>53439772
No clue who you are. I looked at the responses to The Village CYOA.

>>53439810
They're not. Reddit likes to (over)analyze where anon just blindly accepts.

Like that recent Genie cyoa. Anon just made waifus and went comfy. Reddit thought the premise was corrupt and they discussed how they would defeat the evil bureaucracy / Powers That Be who create, trap, or enslave genies.

Just a different way of looking at cyoas.

>>53439830
Oh cool you're here. Can I play your new cyoa without being raped by my student?

>>53439846
There was a CYOA where you could make conception only possible with consent, and the poster could see nothing going wrong if it happened. Powerfagging isn't uncommon either, but they don't complain about bad choices much, usually, just try to break the CYOA.

Computer died on me about two weeks ago, have I missed any good OC?

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>>53439744
Most of it is Jumpchain, but there's some good stuff on there and it's easy to find updates on stuff you might have missed in the thread pretty quickly.

Could be worse.

>>53439865
But when the genie CYOA appeared that happened here too

>>53439858
It's-a me.

>>53439865
that actually sounds a lot better

>>53439667
>needing to relax after a vacation
i feel you

>>53439886
Not the anon you responded to, but it can be sometimes.

You have 50/50 odds that the discussion is going to be worth shit or not, but when people who aren't retards are involved it's interesting,

>>53439869
You will ne raped 100% of the time, even when consenting.

>>53439886
Generally genies are locked up for a reason
Or if it's a free genie then it's probably a hobby or their job

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>>53439900
Tell me more

>>53439851
>I like that they take it super seriously, makes for interesting builds to read.
I like it when people do that here, some of the multipost builds for the longer cyoas with story included are great (so long as they're not spammed every thread)

>I don't like the tendency to do everything as themselves with no roleplaying.
That would get old fast though

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>cyoa mocks you for picking a waifu

>>53439900
What if I rape first?

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>>53439900
S U P E R
H O T

>>53439911
it's good when cyoas act naturally

>>53439900
this is beginning to remind me of first age solars from exalted

>>53439915
you'll still be the one who feels violated

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>>53439900
fun

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>>53439928
>you'll still be the one who feels violated
So it's consenting sex, it's just really shitty consenting sex?

>>53439935
nope, it's the ultimate kind of rape, you take someone who consents completely and loves you and mindrape them into not consenting and THEN fuck them

>>53439900
I seriously think it's one guy being a retard on purpose. He's been told several times that he could just not play a waifu CYOA if he doesn't want to fuck any of them.

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>>53439900

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>>53439942
Brutal.

>>53439944
waifus don't need to be about sex though

that's more like fap fantasies

>>53439950
>waifus don't need to be about sex though
Sex is an important part of a healthy marriage. Even the bible agrees.

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>>53439900
Okay not playing it.

>>53439906
>>53439915
>>53439917
She will rape you back when you least expect it.

One minute you're trying to solve a magic equation, the next, you're solving HER equation.

>>53439959
i dont really care about the bible though

and im talking about waifus, not marriage

>>53439967
Waifus are for marriage.

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>>53439942

>>53439950
We don't kin with asexuals here.

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>>53439966
You better not be playing us for a fuckin' trick you turd cause that sounds hot and hillarious.

>>53439972
no, actual people are for marriage, waifus are for fantasies

>>53439779
>Noble Phantasms

Death Mark "Your fate sealed i come for you" - EX anti unit technique (15)

Marks the target as "destined for death" - revealing their ultimate point of death to the assassin, in essence it bends fate so that the encounter becomes their destined death: and as such induces a point of death that nullifies most forms of immortality (the point representing that persons very existence, upon which others are based) and allowing it to be used on beings normally immune; such as vampires during the night.

Ten Shadows Burial "A spark extinguished - and then the dark" - EX anti self technique (15)

passively causes the assassins strikes to possess a chance to induce the death of the victim - increasing the closer the target is to death (0% at full health and 100% at 50% health)

Additionally, by purifying the essence of his martial art into a single moment the assassin can achieve a speed of such magnitude that it is as if time is stopped for three seconds, allowing for simultaneous actions (any damage done during the time stop occurs simultaneously once it is ended)

The Cloak of Night "where one walks - many shadows fall" - A- anti self equipment

Cloak of shadows that grants the assassin Information Erasure B and Disengage A as well as the ability to summon shadow clones of himself to preform an action and teleport between shadows

however the effects of this NP is weakened by light, becoming night useless in open broad daylight

>>53439984
Fantasies are for people and marriage is for waifus.

>>53439779
>Class Skills
Presence Concealment EX- (16)
Independent Action B - (10)
Avenger D - (4)

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>>53439667
I mixed traditional saber autism with idolm@ster to make some kind of super autism

Create a Saber

Alignment: Neutral Good
Saber Type: Saber Sakura
Traits:
>Cheerful, Friendly
>Immature, Tomboy, Mischievous

Class: Lancer
Features:
>Female, Adorable
>Teen Saber
>Double Ahoge, Short

Clothing
>Light Armor
>Suit
>Casual

Parameters
>Strength B: 7
>Endurance B: 14
>Agility A (EX): 27
>Magic A: 40
>Luck c: 43
>Noble Phantasm: B 50

Class Skills:
>Magic Resistance: EX: 16
>Self-Field Defense: B 26
>Independent Action D: 30

Personal Skills:
>Instinct B: 10
>High-Speed Spellcast B: 20
>Golden Rule A: 35
>Expert Specialization C: 41
>Charisma C: 47
>Battle Continuation D: 50

Noble Phantasm
>A Rank, Location, Anti-Army
Makoto can create a magical stage that amplifies the range and radius of her spells, making her powers more devastating vs large groups

>A Rank, Technique, Anti-Unit
Lacking a traditional lancer weapon, she instead employs kung fu to fight her opponents, existing as a lancer only in spirit, not in practice.

>>53439997
fantasies can't get married silly

>>53440019
http://www.telegraph.co.uk/technology/video-games/6651021/Japanese-gamer-marries-Nintendo-DS-character.html
God help us all.

>>53440012
can you imagine spending all those resources and risking it all for a grail war

and not only summoning a lancer but an idol at that?

its almost as bad as getting a hassan

>>53439876
Sometimes I think about reviving that "OC by month" drive. Then I remember it would only help you lazy people.

>>53440025
not a real marriage

>>53440034
Post it on reddit instead.

>>53440034
It'd help those of us who weren't lazy but were too busy with school to check the threads.

>>53440031
But anon, what difference does it make? Even if I lose, I got my wish in the end. Who cares about some dumb root when you could have a waifu?

>>53439965
The more you resist, the more rapey it gets.

>>53439845
Literally who?

>>53440097
Worm guy

>>53439904
>Or if it's a free genie then it's probably a hobby
That sounds like a fun premise. Kinda like that bored god trope.
Some genie is taking a break to help you out because an 80-100 year lifespan is a drop in the ocean to an immortal.

>>53440073
>you could have a waifu?
if you have lost then she must have died

and she probably will -in a tragic way right in front of you

also
>not winning the HGW to make your waifu real using the grail

>>53440101
And he doesn't here?

>>53440051
That still makes you lazy. That still means I would do work for lazy people.

>>53440104
my favorite kind of motivation for powerful beings granting wishes is that they are paying their transdimentional fare or something, like they have to interact that way with a few locals to not get kicked back to the world they were previously in

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>>53439667
obligatory Edgelord-kun

this time with "better" lore and some updated balance

>>53440097
Blood Mage, Time of Troubles

>>53440113
No, I think the guy who brought him up was just saying it wasn't stolen, I guess

>>53440118
ahahah fuck me

https://pastebin.com/PqVXQEC9

>>53440025
http://technology.inquirer.net/61919/look-penguin-finds-anime-waifu-in-japanese-zoo

Even penguins know that 2d is love

>>53440113
He does, but, i mentioned him because that isn't stealing, just crossposted by the author.

>>53439900
>>53439966
End yourselves.

>>53440115
One of the points of technology is to make everything easier

>>53440127
Oh fuck me this is too funny. Aren't there pictures of him getting mad when they tried to move the anime girl?

>>53439667
BEATSTICK

Wish: Become a saber
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Personality Traits:
Archetype - Vintage Saber
Traits- Honorable, Servile, Wrathful, Conflicted, Confident
Servant Class: Saber
Physical Stature:
Male Saber
Gallant
Mature Saber
Ahoge-less
Clothing : Heavy Armor (ceremonial) - Casual

Stats-
Strength:EX (23)
Endurance: B (7)
Agility:B (7)
Magic: E (0)
Luck: E (0)
NP: A (13)

Class Skills-
Magic resistance: EX (16)
Self Field Defense: B (10)
Mad Enhancements: D (4)

Personal Skills
Battle Continuation: EX (15)
Mana Burst: EX (15)

What are the best sci-fi cyoas?

>>53440086
No it doesn't. I just won't play your cyoa. I lose nothing.

>>53439667
If the grail war is over why not just make a saber to enable a neet lifestyle?

>>53440145
Yes, but also, this proves that not only can animals have waifus, but they can have shit taste in waifus.
Hururu is probably the dumbest or second dumbest character in that series, possibly tied with prairie dog

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>>53440155
Noble Phantasms:

-The Adamantine Aegis
"Break upon my body and tremble"
EX- rank Equipment (8)
The wearer is immune to NP of A+ and below, and is alerted of of stealthed enemies - breaks if the wearer acts in a dishonorable fashion (breaks an oath of his own volition, betrays his allies, cheats in a fair duel) . is innefective against atacks by those of pure noble intent.

-Valors Visage
"cowards bane"
D rank Equipment (helmet)- Anti Army (max targets 50) (2)
Forces target to attack the wearer with wild abandon

-Praetorium Pretium
"A reckoning beyond escape"
A rank Reality Marble - anti unit (10)
traps target in a open arena, the arena is inescapable and disables any NP's or abilities that call upon outside intervention (GoB, gates ofany sort, summoning . etc) and sources of imortality that are tied to the outside ( Phylacteries etc) and buffs from outside sources - effectivley preventing any assistance. the Reality Marble persists untill a fighter is dead.

-Gladius Iudicii
"burning light of the butcher"
A+ rank Weapon, Anti-Fortress (15)
Two handed greatsword of imposing size - it enhances the wielders strenght, endurance and agility. when wielded against a Villain it is engulfed with searing light, which increases accuracy and slows the target - making dodging harder.


An arbiter - a warrior of justice who tests the mettle of men

punishing the traitor, the coward and the monster and protecting the loyal and the pure - without caring what alignment they fall under.

Likes: eating, protecting, tests of strength, drinking, moral-fagging, romcoms
dislikes: traitors, cowards, sadists, the french, those of unearned status/achievement, horror movies


(the weakness of the aegis against the "pure of heart" - i.e those who fight for a pure cause such as pure love- is to represent that they have nothing to fear from judgement)

>>53440168
the grail war is never over - it just takes a break

>>53440136
By making me do your work for you?
Nah, fuck that.

>>53437224
>Anything in particular I should be sure to put on the sixth page?
Seconding this: >>53438296
More info on the war, and the role of the King.

>>53439237
Couldn't you get multiple brides? Assuming they're compatible/you have the power to impose polygamy.

>>53440034
>Then I remember it would only help you lazy people.

If that's an issue, why did you start it in the first place? What was the original point of making it?

>>53440317
He didn't expect himself to get lazy so early, and so there's only so many monthly folders ...

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>>53440173
>current year
>insulting someone's waifu

>>53440343
I wasn't insulting Hururu, since even in the show they mention that she's (Mostly) dumb as bricks.

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B

Am I right in thinking that what we need is a CYOA where you choose a waifu, but she's stuck on an incredibly dangerous island with hazards you choose for five years? And she has to survive using the superpowers you pick?

(The spaceships which cast spells belonging to different schools of magic will appear in a different CYOA.)

>>53440167
That you feel the need to confirm your position with a post shows me how rapeable you are.

>>53440401
Yes

>>53439881
Some dude said you handle the dropbox.
Is that true?
If yes, why are you such a dick about lewd CYOAs and Monster Hunter?

>>53440439
That dude is wrong.
I don't do more than handle my own stuff, and I've not even heard of The Dropbox until your post.
>why are you such a dick about lewd CYOAs
Considering I'm working on one now, it'd be hypocritical of me to do so. Sorry I can't be of help here.

>>53433764
>constructing your own spells
If you plan to make something as complex/more complex than what I planned when I had the same idea - I wish you good luck.

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>>53438737
>>53438796
Oh, oaky-doaky then.

Part 1; settings.

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>>53438796
>>53440768
Part 3; archetypes.

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>>53438737
>>53438796
>>53440768
>>53440800
Part 3; abilities.

>>53440757
I have the spellcrafting mechanics conceptualized already. I'm loosely basing the structure of a spell off of the OSI Model in that there are different fundamental steps for a spell to go from the input of mana (measured in a fictional measurement which determines the spell's potency) to an output. I am treating mana as a flexible, programmable energy source that has roots in logic; I want to make this something akin to "The Science of Magic".

Basically you'll be selecting options for each layer of the spell creation process, like the channel (runic, thaumic, vedic, with some modification options) and the medium (size/scope, shape, etc) and the output (which will have another measurement, akin to mana-joules). Different channels offers different fundamental concepts, like how runic options focus on amplification, or how thaumic options are focused on the conversion of mana-amperes to other energy sources like heat or kinetic force.

And to balance with Spellcraft Theory, I'm also considering a Mana-Tech section that focuses on the same concept but through the programming of spells through mechanics and circuitry. Haven't figured this part out much yet other than that I'm probably going to let you choose on materials (conductors, resistors, etc) and maybe logic gates (simplified for the CYOA of course). I like the idea of people actually programming spells but he'll if that isn't a huge concept to create.

>>53437909

This might be one of my favorite CYOAs. It's so tear jerkingly comfy with a subtle of creepiness on how the world doesn't really seem to exist beyond the village. Let's roll.

>Style
Hellenic Seaside

>Climate
Temperate

>Geographical Features

Woodlands
Rivers
Beachfront
Islands
Cave Systems

>Living Accomodations
Cozy Cabin

>Residence Location
Village Border

>Special Artifacts
Shiny Marble
Inviting Pendant
Pale Ring

>Village Borders
This is where it gets tricky, and creepy.
High Walls, I guess

>Occupation
Carpenter

Somehow I always feel better and more focused when I can work with my hands and I could still exercise my creative muscles in this. Baker would be cool too but man fuck working food services again. Too hectic and stressful for me.

>Village Highlights
Fairy Grove
Old Castle
Crystal Cavern
Siren Overlook

>Village Guide
Lonely Monster

I have a soft spot for outsiders

>Peculiarities
Otherworldly Mist
Catacomb Depths

>Too much of a wuss to pick tier:
Nature Sprite and Shades

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>>53440949
Sounds like a a lot of effort for something that doesn't have to be explained.

>>53440816
>points AND limited amount of stuff you can pick
Why

>>53441112
>doesn't have to be explained
Is exactly why I'm doing it.

>>53440949
>treating spells like programming
Huh. I was going to treat it like secondary structure of proteins: Both the magical words used for the spells AND the order/where the words are in relation to other words dictates the effect. Saying Air + Fire could mean a flamethrower, saying Fire + Air could mean creating smoke
I was pissed when I figured out I accidentally ripped off something I already knew about.
My system was just "here's 25 words, figure out yourself what the combinations do. Have fun". Decided not to use it for the cyoa anywho precisely because it's too big, and it won't be fun for me to invent a magic language for a cyoa just about making spells (plus I do not want to get bombarded with "please tell me what this combination does" questions).
Yours is far more focused on mechanics.

Dang now I started thinking about it more... It's the kind of thing that would be fun to think about, but making it is hell.

>>53440816
Not sure how I feel about the more minor abilities (like be nimble, be quick) contributing to the "2 abilities" limit the same as major abilities (cyber-bits, secret mutation, psychic powers). Maybe you could separate them and have an exchange? Like 1 major ability=2 minor abilities?

>>53441053
Anon if my math is right I would end up with 9*10^22 possible combinations (25 magic words, longest spell is 8 words). Keep in mind most of these would fail, or accidentally kill you e.g. 7xWind + Forward would result in a hurricane being formed around you and ripping you apart vs 3x Wind + Forward + 4x Wind would result in a small vortex formed in your hand that grows in size as it moves away from you.
The whole "cyoa" requires you to have a high degree of imagination which would be hard to inspire without simply making shitloads of example spells. Just describing the "alphabet of magic" would be dull, and not enough for the player.

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>>53441184
Where are you even getting those numbers?
None of the things you're saying seem relevant to the CYOA.

>>53439359
Fuck, I love this one. It's going to take awhile to remake my pirate adventure build.

>>53437493
With all the different options you have, I think you might need to give more than 150. Like 180.

>>53441140
I'm basing it on programming, yes, but it conceptually works similarly to a "word" system you're describing. I'm just not stopping at the "word" and am going further down the fundamentals.

A "word" to me is like a script or a data unit that operates based on a protocol (which tells it how to interact with other "words" and between layers). These scripts are logical sequences that get the mana energy input to produce a result, which can be executed by your brain by harnessing your leylines to cast the spell. On the flip side, you can artificially recreate this with logic mana-circuits to make it easier to automate, like how the magitech heater in your home is just a continual loop of a simple spell that takes mana energy from a capacitor and outputs it to produce heat, which is one of the outputs possible using thaumic magic channels.

You can pick a "word" to form the spell into a medium that resembles a spherical object to be thrown, but that word was programmed by someone and is universally used, like a standard. I will probably give an option to allow spellcrafters to conceptualize their own medium, for example.

>>53437909
>Architectural Style: Industrial Decay
Because running water is a good thing.
>Climate:Tropical
Fuck the cold.
>Geographical Features: Beachfront, Rock Formations, Cave Systems, Islands
>Living Accomodations: Old Mansion
Actually getting a building of my own that's not a tiny little cabin.
>Residence Location: Strange Place
In a cave near the village.
>Special Artifact: Inviting Pendant
Bonus to charisma? Yes, thank you.
>Village Borders: The High Walls
Now getting into the strangeness, and carrying forth the village's theme
>Occupation: Archivist
Because massive nerd.
>Village Highlights: Cloud Tower, Healing Spring, Old Castle, Siren Overlook
Healing Spring for pure utility, and the others as remnants of whatever came before, carrying forth the architectural theme of the village.
>Village Guides: Lonely Monster
A pity you can't pick two, otherwise I'd pick the monster and the Christmas Cake and start going for a harem like I usually do with CYOAs.
>Uneasy Peculiarities: Ruined Cathedral, Decayed City Ruins
More of the ruins of the Old World. Also a lot less immediately threatening than some of the others.

>>53441487

You can pick three artifacts anon

Also, nice taste with the geography, although I disagree with the "fuck the cold" mentality

>>53437887
House Acritas

Year 1: Martial arts, swordplay, small arms, heavy weapons, advanced engineering , cybernetics and economics

Year 2: Martial arts, swordplay, small arms, explosives, advanced engineering , cybernetics and economics


Year 3: Martial arts, swordplay, small arms, blunt weapons, observation, investigation and durability

Year 4: Martial arts, swordplay, small arms, edged weapons , observation, investigation and intuition

Extracurricular club: Fixers club

>>53437909
>Gothic Parish
>Subarctic

>Mountains
>Woodlands
>Lakes
>Rock Formations
>Cave Systems

>Tower Lodge
.>Town Center

>Shiny Marble
>Pale Ring
>Fur Mantle

>The High Walls

>Carpenter

>Fairy Grove
>Cloud Tower
>Crystal Cavern
>Galaxy Lake

>Christmas Cake

>Ruined Cathedral
>Wandering God
>Nature Sprite

>The Old Castle
>Primeval Forest
>rusty dagger
>bronze bracelet
>rivers
>waterfalls

am I correct in thinking that it's easier to find western art for cyoas that aren't about cute anime girls?

>>53441665
Probably.

>>53437939
I-Im glad.

>>53437909

Style: Hellenic Seaside

Climate: Temperate
tfw no Oceanic climate

Geographical Features:
>Plains
Need this for farm lands
>Rolling Hills
Want something less flat
>Woodlands
Need wood for stuff
>Rivers
>Lakes
Need water and you can't have rivers without lakes and vice versa
>Beachfront (1)
>Islands (2)
Sounds like a fun place to adventure
>Volcano (3)


Living Accommodations: Old Mansion
Residence Location: Far Outskirts

Artifacts:
>Rusty Dagger
>Inviting Pendant
>Pale Ring
>Shiny Marble (4)

Borders: All Roads Lead
This and the wall are probably the spookiest. I like all roads because it would take me a while to realize I wasn't just backtracking myself

Occupation: Blacksmith
Sounds like a useful skill to have, and I can build the gear I'll need to explore and search for answers

Highlights:
>Old Castle
What mysteries or answers could I find here
>Healing Springs
>Siren Overlook
>Blossom Meadow

Guides
>Cake
>Gentleman (5)
>Lonely Monster (6)

Peculiarities:
>Decay City Ruins
>Nature Sprite
>Endless Abyss

>>53441931
Personally I think endless expanse is the creepiest by far. Imagine traveling for years on end trying to find something, anything, but no matter where you go it's a lifeless wasteland.

>>53441963
My only issue with that one is I could never explore enough to come to that realization that it's that huge a wasteland, simply because it's too inhospitable to survive, and there's no way I could carry enough food and water for a year long expedition.

>>53441988
Load up a mobile house.

>>53441963
>>53441988

The fact the village is contained in there just adds a thick layer of creepy no matter which option you choose.

How did you get there? Where IS it? Is the village the only civilization that exists? How can it be so paradise like?

Really activates my almonds, this would make for a kickass story. Only ALL of the peculiarities are there and must be explored or understood to get the true end

>>53442018
I completely agree. That's why I've been making one.

>>53442031

gonna post it somewhere at some point or run a campaign in your village?

I might do it, too

>>53442036
Don't know if I'm cut out for campaign running (this setting would make a great one though) but I might post my ideas here once I've worked out a few more things.

>>53442018
>>53442031
I don't get this same "wonder and awe and creepy-crawly" feeling from the cyoa. Can you try to make a sales pitch for me?
I want to love this and Urban Unease I just... can't.

>>53442084
I think this one does it a lot better than UU, though in the end it's all opinion and feeling, and no one can force you to feel creeped out. I think it kinda works like a more friendly version of something like Innsmouth where there's something subtly wrong and everyone else is more in on it than you. I wonder what the village is, is it hostile to me, does it desire me to stay, or is it completely apathetic?

>>53442084
Not sure how to explain. I think it might be either something that appeals to you or it doesn't, but I'll try.

I just like the idea of a comfy day to day life in a quaint yet mystical village. Going to different shops and seeing what there is to see in the village. Slowly becoming a member of the community. Enjoying a stroll in nature, seeing the beautiful by strange phenomena like the galaxy lake or fairy grove. But as time passes you start noticing something just isn't right, and start delving into those mysteries.

I also agree village does it better. I like UU but it's kind of a different thing.

>>53439667
>create a saber
>lawful neutral
>Vintage Saber
>Personality Traits: Kind, Servile, Dutiful, Friendly, Mischievous
>Class:Rider
>Female Saber
>Sensuous Appearance
>Adult Saber
>Lone Ahoge
>Heroic Garments: Scantily Clad
>Modern Clothes: Skimpy Outfit

>Servant Parameters: Strength B (7), Agility EX (7), Luck: B (7), Endurance: C (7), Magic A (13), Noble Phantasm B (7)
>Class Skills: Riding EX (16), Item Creation B (13)
>Personal Skills: Charisma B (10), Golden Rule A (10), Montrous Strength EX (25), Battle Continuation C (6)

Super-slut dragongirl Artoria.

>>53442133
>subtly wrong
I think that's the problem. I'm an idiot. I had none of these
> I wonder what the village is, is it hostile to me, does it desire me to stay, or is it completely apathetic?
thoughts

>>53442194
I think it's all about your level of imagination and investment. It gives the player the ability to spook themselves out, in large part because a lot of the stuff is left fairly vague and open-ended. With the options, the peculiarities in particular just giving you enough information to know that there's something unsettling going on, with the mist one being the best example in my opinion.

>>53436746
4 Room Log Cabin
Touch Me, Touch Me

Auto-/CK/
Jam Session
200% Comfy
Normiestation
Gaymen Piisii
FUCKING NERDS
/lit/ As Heck
/fa/bulous
Ocean Man (Min-Maxed)
Aesthetic (Min-Maxed)

/Out/doors Choice
Companions Choice

Inter-Bot 9001 (16)
Reality Convert (14)
Attractive Forces (13)
HQ, HQ (12)
Skinship (11)
Aether Orchestra (10)
Still Alive (8)
Machine Learning (6)
Believe It (5)
Stylish (4)
Min Max (2)
Min Max (0)

The only possible choices.

>>53442258
I like to imagine on "mist days" people stay inside with their family and friends and do comfy indoor activities, but the strange atmosphere bus still palpable, especially if you peer out the window

>>53440434
>your female prodigy student rapes you, her male older famous mentor
>nobody will ever belive you and if you try to press charges they will think it was you who rape her

such is life

>>53442326
is*, not bus

>>53438519
>>53438654
The problem with making it open ended like the last one is, of course, that'll be like the last cyoa on the exact same subject. Just something to keep in mind.

>>53442084
>>53442133
>>53442326

It's less that the village itself is a threat or apathetic and more the world around you just seems...off. Look at the limits.

All the roads, the walls, the end of the world. Those things are completely removed from reality we would expect. The village can be a paradise but it's still within the realms of reality. Those comfy great things exist.

Then why is everything at the edge of your vision off? The nature god and the shadow shapes....Where do they come from? What is their purpose? At this point it's not creepy, it's just curiosity, but then you dig deeper.

The monster girl wants to find others like her, but there are none. Why not?

Nothing seems to be hostile yet people don't go out and try interacting with the shadows or the mammoths. Is it just self preservation or do they know something you don't?

If anyone ever just gets bored of the village and wants to leave....They can't, it's all there is in the world. But if all there is is this single village why is the archive so huge?

The thing is, there is so much that's just wrong and there are so many questions but the village itself is some form of paradise. In a world of questions and dark murmurs in the caves....Why is the village and its inhabitants so calm?

It's not creepy in itself but it's a lot, a lot of mystery. There is much that is unknown and the unknown is scary by itself.

But what do I know anon. Maybe it's just a very small world like the world from The Petit Prince. It can also simply be just a little, comfy corner in the multiverse

>>53438519
open ended is nice - but have limitations

fate CYOA's NP's work because the sheer variety is limitless

with weapons there's and inherent limitation - so codified rules are nice

>>53442480
This is it exactly.

>>53442438
And the last one was great?

>>53442480
When I said I wonder if the "village" is a threat I met more like the world than the actual village. I mean, why the hell am I here. And why would something like a wall give off a threatening presence to me?

>>53442564
The truth is that the village is hell.

>>53442480
>>53437909
I'd love to hear how long the author spent writing this. It's caused a lot of thoughtout responses.

>>53442564

Exactly. Why would it? It's just a wall. yet, there it is, it gives off a threatening presence. Why, what's behind it? What is it protecting....Or holding out against? Is the threatening feeling just the feeling you get because you're about to break some sacred rule not made by man or creature but by the world itself?

>>53442585

I was thinking more like purgatory. Or maybe an imperfect world that wasn't finished before its creator died or abandoned it. Maybe it's just a reflection of something.

Anyone remember how the world of the Other Mother in Coraline also started to become less real the farther you wandered?

Man, fuck. My favorite part of the CYOA was how incredibly, incredibly comfy it was aside the creepy part but now I'm in too deep. What have you bastards done.

>>53442585
Hell isn't such a bad place then.

The "fast fading pain" I'm the into makes me think you might have died to get there.

>>53442617
Knowing myself I would be inexorably drawn to that wall and cease to breach it, over and over, until whatever smiting comes.

>>53442710
Strive I think I meant. I wouldn't be able to help myself, basically.

>>53441485
How familiar are you with programming? I'm very curios.

>>53442724

>yfw you breach the wall and there's nothing behind

>But when you go back to the village all that's left is a ruins, almost like the ones you could visit before
>Everyone is gone except the monster girl and the nature spirits
>And the Mist is coming
>Gotta fix this
>Gotta get back
back to the past

>>53442756
Nah I'd accept it. This place is artificial and unreal, a falsehood and a lie. I refuse to abide such a thing.

>>53441485
How the fuck did I get good enough to teach someone when I'm retarded at programming?

>>53442771

Well, either that or you just fucked it up by breaking the laws of the world. For all we know if someone ever found out how to break the laws of gravity in our world everything would fall apart as well.

Nice job anon

>>53442792
The wall makes it clear this place is artificial and wrong from the start. There's no ambiguity.

>>53442480
In my imagination the monster girl is the result of a dalliance between the chief and the nature spirit. That's why she is the only one of her kind. Years later he learned of her lonely existence, and though he longs to meet her and give her a better life he is too ashamed to speak to her, feeling guilty for everything she's gone through. So when you, an outsider who doesn't have the same superstitions as the locals, appears, he shows you around. He goes out of his way to clue you into her existence, and with a strangely sorrowful expression on his face, he says "please... be kind to her", and gives no other explanation.

>>53442803
>implying the world you live in isn't just as artificial

>>53442858
If you start that computer simulation faggotry in an attempt to derail the conversation I'm going to slap you.

>>53437909
Hell no. It's a good cyoa to write about. Creativity is good.

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>>53442858
The cake is a lie. XD

>>53442895
What a fucking casual

>>53442838
That's deep, man.

>>53442868

Not that guy, but I think it could be taken as more like, we don't know all the rules of our universe. Not even close. Science is still just sailing paperboats in the lake of knowledge. And this is a world where not only science but the supernatural exists as well.

It could just be a world living in another set of rules and ours has a destruction trigger just as real, but less apparent than a huge damn wall. Maybe our limit is successful production of dark matter, once we manage it it just starts eating away and everything goes to shit whereas in the village dark matter might just be what runs on the underworld caves or feeds the nature god or the shadows.

It's just an example. Point is, maybe our world is just as real as that as drawn by another pen.