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"3D is also fine" edition
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gimme some incest CYOA's
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Post interesting real life girls for Creepy Israeli (?) Anon to add to his shitty firestorm inducing Anon's GF CYOA
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Reminder to not feed the trolls and shitposters.
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>>53426737
3DPD is not for me, but to each their own.
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He's dead isn't he Jim?
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>>53426685
choose one
>your mom rapes your sister then kills your dad
>your mom and aunt rape your cousin then kill your dad
>your cousin and sister kill your mom and your dad kills himself

Mystery box: your dad killed your whole family and is keeping you as his rapeslave, why didnt you stop him anon?
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>>53426685
In this world, anything is possible!
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>>53426841
except that anons happiness
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>>53426841
I'm still waiting on the edgy sequel: Time-Stop Kill Zone.
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>>53426858
make the /diy/ room a torture room and this one already has everything else
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What kind of surprising twist do you like in your waifus?

Should I bother posting the remaining few pages for inspiration?
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>>53427313
This story has the kind of waifu I'd like to see in a cyoa.
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>>53427333
I'm not sure how you'd include a waifu like her in a cyoa though.
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>>53427350
Then again waifus with twists in cyoas aren't usually done properly.
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>>53427362
I'm getting bored already. Even though it's to inspire a cyoa and share something interesting that might lead to nifty waifus dumping is boring.
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>>53427386
The twist. THIS is what would be cool in a cyoa. I'm not entirely sure how you would pull it off though.
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>>53427405
I want to kill an evil waifu in a cyoa basically and save my real waifu by slaying the crazy bitch.
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>>53427405
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>>53427424
What a dick. If he read the letter sooner all of it could've been avoided.
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>>53427424
I understand that the fox girl is fucking crazy and had to be done but why the fuck is he so nonchalant about it?
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>>53427424
>>53427405
>>53427386
>>53427362
>>53427350
>>53427333
>>53427313
This world need more fun yanderes.
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>>53427479
>>53427542
because hes a douche
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>>53427386
>Even though it's to inspire a cyoa
But anon! You already inspired yourself!
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>>53427542
Because he's a healthy young man in a satisfying relationship and doesn't feel compelled to treat everything cute as an imouto moeblob. His girlfriend was in danger so he sealed away the evil god. That easy. No whining.
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>>53427424
Everyone on the otherside is an island with another kitsune waiting for her.
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>>53427586
>Kitsune offered him her pussy and immortality.
>All he had to do was break up with the inferior human girlfriend and the kitsune would've fucked off with her curse.
>Choosing a woman he's going to break up with in around 5 years over immortality
Bad investment.
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>spend half a day searching for images
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>>53427618
>love is just a rational calculation of objective pros and cons
Then you autists get angry when people say you're creepy basement dwellers and girls don't want to come anywhere near you.
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>>53427693
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>>53427618
I think that was supposed to be the point of comic.
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>>53427712
Are you implying love can't be a rational calculation of objectives with pros and cons.
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>>53427737
If you're autistic or a sociopath, kinda. It arguebaly won't be "love", but it could look similar.
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>>53427737
Of course not. Love is lusting after someone, sexing them, and then forming a relationship that lasts until one person gets sick of the other.
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>>53427737
Not all people are honest enough to admit it.
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>>53427716
Bestiary/Lich/Obsidian
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>>53427693
I was going to go with Bestiary/Star Spawn/Flesh Sculptor, but then I got curious and opened the mystery box. I had actually just watched the opening segment of the first episode of that show last night. Strange coincidence.
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>>53427784
>Sociopaths can't love.
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>>53427693
The Architect, Flesh Sculptor and Star Spawn
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>>53427879
Or Astral Informant instead of Star Spawn to try to get immortality. Both should work
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>>53427789
>True love is a lie
>Even if i managed to find someone who i liked and she liked me too i would probably get tired of her
Why i am like this?
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>>53427917
You're gay but repressing it. Your mind is incapable of imagining a passionate, longterm relationship with a girl. Unironically give grindr a try.
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Pokemon Personified Plus+ has it came out yet?
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>>53427917
It actualy pretty common for couples how stay long together getting tired of each other but still stay together for various reasons in more timid way.
You are just more aware of this fact than lets say your grandfather.
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>>53427953
Nope. But the Necromancer update came!
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Fairy King when?
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A
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SDA
>>53424449

Was this the reason you were listening to a podcast by Jordan Peterson?

And if so, it was for what girl?
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>>53427965
inertia is a helluva drug
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>>53427917
I think love is about finding that one person you're crazy enough to risk that for.
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>>53427873
By definition, no. They can lust, or they can fake love, but actual love requires a level of human empathy sociopaths fundamentally lack.
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>>53427997
Multiple, but mostly for Ruby.

I'm not one for /pol/ things but JP has some really damn good lectures. I have a few friends who sat in on one of his lectures.

That said, I was aiming more for speaking mannerisms as opposed to learning about psychology, but still. I would link the one I listened to but I'm at work right now and kinda busy.
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I Got some new stuff for you guys
Enjoy
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>>53427953
Italics claims to deliver, but never does.

I don't even know why Pokemon who are humanized even need a military.
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>>53428110
green, orange, white.
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>>53428110
>Purple Button
Time shenanigans go! Or have they already started? Or.. wait, I'm confused.
White Button
>>53428123
This sucks.
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>>53428165
>>53428123
White was the right choice. Why do I care if a sub-sentient non-communicating captured pig wants to kill me?

It's hard to understand what the purple button does.

If you need to kill 27,000 people per year to avoid aging, then eventually the odds that you kill yourself becomes non-trivial. For example, there's only a 99.9% chance you don't kill yourself in the first 200 years.
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>>53427424
>kill

She can't die.
The whole reason she's crazy is she's been trapped in that tiny shrine for centuries.
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>>53428245
>kill 27,000 people per year to avoid aging
According to UNICEF, as of 2014, roughly 360,000 people are born per DAY (and 150,000 die). Your adding 20,000 per year either way isn't going to be so much as NOTICED.
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>>53428123
I don't understand. What's the point of telling a cow my address? What's some goat in Iowa gonna do with that knowledge?
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>>53427542
You don't shed tears over throwing unrepentant monsters in prison. You just do what has to be done.
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>>53428110
Picked black button, the other two don't matter since I'm never gonna press them now that I read what Black does. Even only a single press has good change resulting in apocalypse so I'm not gonna risk it. Enjoy the show of the buttons collecting dust in my closet, Button God.
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>>53428301
Also he lets her back out later?
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>>53428245
The population is also replenishing itself, I suppose you could probably encourage r selection breeding once you become the God Emperor.
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>>53428245
>be anon
>feel lazy today, don't want to hit the gym
>fuckit press orange
>first press
>everything goes black
>suddenly a voice in the darkness whispers to you
"Anon A. Anonson of 13 Faggot St. Niggerville Ca. USA"
>wake up
>be pig next in line for the slaughter
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>>53428333
And finally after so much time has passed that the forest becomes a small desert island, the shrine itself takes pity and lets her out so she can look after a lonely brown imouto

Realizing that this is technically a Good End, the artist then spent the next several years drawing sad angels being mutilated by the government to balance it out.
the sad angel also gets an imouto, but she's a devil and they accidentally murder eachother
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>>53428309
>>53428379
assuming no net population growth, you stand nearly a 4% chance of killing yourself in the first 10,000 years just from the 1/7 billion chance each button press. I wasn't talking about depopulation, just the exponentially declining odds that you never kill yourself.
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Always felt this one could use a bit more beef. Maybe the ability to trade the plethora of innate bonuses away for a bonus point each.
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>>53428050
I'm glad you're not /pol/. I couldn't enjoy your CYOAs anymore if I knew you thought it was okay for whites to advocate for their own interests.
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>>53428325
If you pick the Orange button after about a thousand people you become almost 21 thousand times more physically capable. At 5 thousand it is 4 quintillion times more physically capable. You could literally take down the entirety of the zombie threat alone.
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>>53428458
Hmm fair point.
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>>53428384
Well fuck that guy.
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>>53428486
Except you got sprayed in the face by the first zombie whose skull you crushed. Now youre infected. GG senpai
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>>53428384
>the sad angel also gets an imouto, but she's a devil and they accidentally murder eachother
what is the name of the artist?
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>>53428531
It's fine. He's since gotten it out of his system and draws Japari Park 4komas now.

>>53428556
Barikios
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>>53428475
>implying that's what /pol/ is about.

Don't kid yourself.
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>>53428486
that one should probably stack additively, and green should probably avoid killing you. Author seem to have failed to take exponential growth into account.
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>>53428548
4 quintillion times. Your body better be physically capable of fighting off any infection ever possible at that point.
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>>53428110
Blue button. Murder a variety of politicians and dictators. Sway the global political field to my own desires by killing off anybody with a chance to fight back.
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>>53428010
>SDA is a hopeless romantic
D'awww
You'll find that redhead who loves anal more than you do, just you wait!
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>>53428567
Implying pol is anything but satire.
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>>53428651
>implying life is anything but a joke
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>>53428619
Nah son. The god who gave you the buttons is a dick so like how genies 'misinterpret wishes but technically still true', his meaning of 'physically capable' is just punching and lifting while still holds true, technically. Congrats though, you're still the most powerful zombie ever.
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>>53426647
>"3D is also fine" edition
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>>53427917
The flames of passion are going to die down in any long term relationship; that's just the way we humans operate. Something I see in a lot of people is that they believe love is just an emotion, just something that happens that's beyond our control. Love is an act of will. It's something that you do by putting the needs of others before your own.
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>>53428486
0.01% improvement, it's 1.0001^x, not 1.01^x
Not that it matters much since its still exponential scaling.

But you are still spending awful lot of time running around and taking out zombies.
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>>53426647
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>>53428633
They're more common than you think. I've met one, but she wasn't really my type.

I'm in a relationship, though.
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>>53428700
Shit. I did mess up my math.

>>53428731
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>>53428755
This is the last one in this series.
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Does the it could be you thing apply for all of them?
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>>53428679
Super true. Relationships are work, constant work and care. They are most certainly worth it.
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>>53428564
>It's fine. He's since gotten it out of his system and draws Japari Park 4komas now.
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>>53428731
Haven't seen that one in ages.
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>>53428110
Brown button
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Anyone have that gay roommate one?
Trap, gamer bro, and cute were some of the options, i think the author made a second page too.

Also when will the shy author of this finish it. His writing style is nice.
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>>53428110
No thanks I'm not an edge lord
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>>53428301
Wait is this actually a cucking story?
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>there are a lot of fitting images, I'll find everything quickly
>spend hours searching for images with similar art style and content
>then start to watch the series that fan art is bases off
I'll never complete even pg1
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>>53428772
so what's the deal with that golden "king" guy?
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>>53429018
Yes.
Literally everything is ultimately about being cucked in one way or another, if you idiots are to be believed.
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>>53429018
The foxgirl is never in relationship, so no. >>53429042
King in Yellow reference, author likes adding it to his works.
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>>53429042
It's the King in Yellow. Eldrtich horror from Robert W. Chambers, shows up alongside Lovecraft stuff pretty often
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>>53429042
Golden? No, it's the king in yellow. You will understand, you just need to take off your mask.

It's a reference to the King in Yellow, Hastur and the Yellow Sign. Lovecraft. And the author uses it as his signature.
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>>53428467
Absolute Territory 4
Society Manipulation 2

Create a post-scarcity world ready to stretch out into the universe and make it so people will actually be able to function in said society.
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>>53428467
My usual build would be
>Mind Diver III
>Flesh Artist II
>Pocket Universe I

But, more and more, I'm curious about just going all in on pocket universe to be a small god. It's all a simulation anyway, right? But I suppose it would be more gratifying for me to stay within the simulation I know and have some fun with that
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>>53429269
There's always the "fuck this gay earth" build. Pocket Dimension 4, Absolute Territory 2. Save anyone you think is worth it, then drop 100 tons of antimatter on the planet and walk away whistling.
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>>53428898
Death.
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>>53428898
He stopped because you cocks keep spamming his WiP.
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>>53428739
Last thread you were talking about how Magic Mentor is hard to write.

I'd say the problem is that you're writing characters that people won't intrinsically care about.

Waifus are expected to give affection or sex or whatever, why would a reader read a quick bio and care about someone that doesn't offer that?

Penelope and Marie have vulnerabilities, what I remember reading about the others is more trope-y I'm a good student, I play music, I want to duel, my parents are in the military. Not a reason why the reader should care about them, mentor them, or love them.

That's the challenge of writing characters that a reader doesn't start with a connection to. Hope it wasn't preachy, love your work.
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>>53428739
While your here, I want to say your an inspiration to me SIDA.
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>>53426737
Dude, at least post the thing.
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I have an idea but it'll be shit and not a very long CYOA, it'll be buried in the sands of threads in less than a day probably.

Hold my beer, I'm making it anyway.
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>>53429943
Good luck anon.
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>>53429943
>Hold my beer
You got it bro
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>>53426737
>>53429925
You know looking at it now there's something almost depressing about just how many pictures of girls I have relatively to how virtually none of them aren't either straight out NSFW or clearly aren't fit for anything except wanking off (nearly nude, giant tits, bikinis, suggestive position, more giant tits, more bikinis...)
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>>53428467
Fictionworld 4
That's all I need. I'll make a blank cyoa world for myself that gives me the 'power' of amnesia. I'll then jump to worlds and live a whole lifetime there as my own character. At the very end when I die, I'll regain all my memories and I'll do it again. Essentially, I just became a 1 man reincarnation cycle.
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>>53429725
Context is important and I agree that this whole thing is kind of disconnected right now, but I stand by my decision to write them the way they are because I didn't want to focus on likeable characters this time. My aim was to make the characters feel non-one-dimensional in ~200 words in the sense that they have their own world around them rather than that their only reason to exist is "you". I didn't mind if they came out ordinary or uninteresting for the most part, just as long as they had somewhat of a backbone. I will admit that I didn't spend a lot of time on some of them though; I wrote most of Elizabeth while drowsy from sleeping pills.

Part of the challenge was primarily doing it through dialogue rather than just listing everything about them, and I'd hoped to contrast that with their small intro point-form bios.

I want to revisit the whole thing though and provide some sort of closure and more context with a final section at the end of the CYOA, but I haven't really figured it out yet.

>>53429880
Thanks.
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>>53429943
>Beer
Have some boxwine instead.
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>>53427917
>>53428010
Everything wrong with ove these days in two posts, thank you guys.
The modern image of finding someone with whom we share a deep spiritual connection and end up consumating this love because of this feeling is a prouct of romanticism.(read the fucking wikipeia article to get the basics down)
The romanticist ideal of love, a union of practical marriage and the idea of passionate love into a life-long passionate marriage and along the way united love and sex into the idea of frequent, mutually fullfilling sex to a bell weather of relationships.
Romanticism proposes complete and utter unerstanding of each other without needing to say anything, it is the very basic idea of choosing a partner by feeling rather than practicality or consideration and as such romanticism manifest as a disdain for money and, the already mentioned, practicality and in the hugely romantic times we live in the believe of true love and acceptance is so ingrained in us that other views seem inappropriate at best.
Truth is this arrangement is we want to believe in the possibility of such an arrangement, because the notion of true love and understanding another without need for direct communication or looking inwards for our own mistakes and faults to change for the better.
The problem is this basic view is a huge disaster for love and the way to find love lies in overcoming the faults of these paradigms.
People are failable and make mistakes all the time and love should be looking at another person and seeing what they can be, helping someone along the path to become better person for themselves and the willingness to stay through the process, but not only that but the ability to receive a lesson in being a better person ourself.
True love lies in overcoming the romantic theory of love and use a psychologically mature view that is more classicistic. We need to make amends and commuicate and accept intuition can not always lead us where we need to go.
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>>53430084
I read the first two lines then stopped. You're obviously autistic.
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>>53427313
>What kind of surprising twist do you like in your waifus?

when they're feminine but don't have penises
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>>53430084
I mean, I agree, but this is probably very much the wrong place to be discussing that.
>>53429925
Na Hguyen seems nice.
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>>53430084
>Truth is this arrangement is we want to believe in the possibility of such an arrangement, because the notion of true love and understanding another without need for direct communication or looking inwards for our own mistakes and faults to change for the better
gives us a certain believe in safety and spirituality which often comes short in our modern times

Geez, I should doubble check what I write more.
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>>53430180
>surprising twist
What kind of media do you regularly consume, anon?
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>>53430171
Read the rest to get a full picture, because you won't get a tl;dr small-mind
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>>53430084
Nice effortpost.
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>>53430200
>if you won't waste your time on my hobo-tier ranting then clearly you're a narrow-minded imbecile
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>>53430196
It's very common in waifupickers where waifus have secrets. The cutest/girliest waifu is always a trap.
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>>53430247
Its so telegraphed it has not been a secret for 15 years.
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>>53430200
Why would I possibly want to know what goes on inside your autistic brain?
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>>53429925
I could never picture myself with a woman. Why am I so worthless?
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>>53427405

Probably you could make it with a mystery box of sort.
Have the narrator to be all nice and stuff to the reader offering powers and such after some "bad events", but have the mystery box avaiable dropping some subtle hints that it was the narrator itself to cause those bad things to begin with and whatever the mystery box is (in this specific case, it would be a magic seal), will bring things back to normal banishing the narrator.
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>>53430282
You lack willpower.
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>>53430282
because you're a straight chick?
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>>53430346
Oh, that's it! Thanks, anon. That's been bugging me for years.
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>>53430244
if you are not ready to listen to someone in the fullness of their argument you should not comment. if you're unable to bear something you do not agree with to the point that you have to rant half way through and not point out the flaws in and argue against them, do not respond.
Also the 'hobo-tier ranting' is a roduct of the post size limit and the time limit I was given, otherwise I would have taken time to cite sources and quote contemporary artists.
Aditionally, you're not making a good case for yourself.
Since you resort to the lowest tier of argumentation, I will take the freedom of ignoring you until you refrain from proper arguing.

>>53430270
Because you are a human and all humans share the same fascination of measuring the strange experience that is live an viewing another's perspective does help in drawing paralels and finding opposing notions which are inherently helpful in defining ourself better. Something I guess you are not very acquianted with?
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>>53430383
Not him, but I'm glad your problem has been resolved.
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>>53426668
I'll begin in autumn. Military sabotage throughout fall and winter, for the real assault in force in the summer when the flame is strongest and they're trying to build back up from my famine.

Gold Flame is best flame.

Instinct seems like a super important power, and so is King. Feather also seems like one that lets me more fully take on the aspect of the phoenix itself.
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>>53430223
>effortposting
Wat?
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>>53430420
Don't you have a weighted blanket to ritually check for stains?
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>>53430181
>this is probably verymuch the wrong plade to be discussing that
Eh, I understand your point of view, but /cyoag/ is the embodiement of wishfulfillment, to understand why we long for the things or their implications that make us long for them in the first place, might help make authors work better and easier.
If we define what we do as art form, which it by definition falls under, even if very much derivative, then careful study of our subject and the way it works on the recipient will lead to growth in quality and perhaps quantity.

>>53430465
I wouldn't even know what for. The only thing I do ritually is brewing my morning coffee.
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>>53430298
Which makes the entire cyoa shit.
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>>53430420
This is Create Your Own Adventure not Carrying on about Your Own Autism
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>>53428318
>You don't shed tears over throwing unrepentant monsters in prison.
Do you throw unrepentant monsters in prison often?

>>53430005
>something almost depressing
"Almost"?

>>53430282
>I could never picture myself with a woman. Why am I so worthless?
Well, either you are not into women and you lack imagination, or you are into women but have such a stupefying lack of imagination that it borders on being a superpower.
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>>53430448
An informative post with effort put into it.
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>>53430548
No, this is Choose your own Wiafu
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>>53430084
>true love and understanding another without need for direct communication or looking inwards for our own mistakes and faults to change for the better

Is it safe to say that the literally only perfect person to fall in love with is a clone (Female) of yourself

>Has all your memories and personality and as such all your likes and dislikes (And fetishes)
>Understand each other on the deepest level possible
>Total loyalty (So long as you yourself are a loyal person)
>Total Trust and Honesty (See Above)
>A bunch of other benefits I'm missing

Basically if you are a person who treats others as you would wish to be treat, you can't go wrong with a clone.
The only slight problem I can see is inevitable divergence from each other, but you still have the same base memories so I guess it would still be fine.

I'm probably projecting, since I know myself and know I would truly love, and be loyal to a female clone of myself, knowing she would do the exact same.

What do you guys think about love with clones?
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>>53427953
One question will always make me think in the cyoa. Who exactly was in the wrong?
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>>53430420
I didn't read past "because you're a human".
Your ramblings are not that interesting.
Well I wouldn't know.
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>>53430605
You are wrong of course.
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>>53430597
I highly doubt I could stand to be in the same room as myself. That aside, I crave a challenge and different viewpoints from someone I respect. I enjoy learning about someone's mind, history, and emotions. Wanting to love a clone of yourself is, for lack of a better word, masturbatory. And probably narcissistic.
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>>53430605
I always pick Ho Ho because of the bikini pic Italics posts.
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>>53430597
>The only slight problem I can see is inevitable divergence from each other, but you still have the same base memories so I guess it would still be fine.

Knowing how paranoid people are here about disloyal waifus, a hivemind is the only surefire option to prevent any discrepancy or desire for dissent.
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>>53430605
People who don't build to shut down the yandere in times of need and take ALL the pussy
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>>53430670
She slept with your predecessor though.
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>>53428731
>Comes with a lot of AK-47s
Do I get a free rock to work the bolt?
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>>53430701
I haven't actually read the cyoa anon. I quit on page 18 or so. I really like the pic though.
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>>53430605
What's the context? What happened?
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>>53430717
its alright anon, there's only 2 other people besides italics that has ever finish reading the most updated version of PP+. And all they do is ramble on about the setting nobody else cares about.
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>>53430049
You've been awfully quiet about the latest autism...
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>>53430653
>narcissistic
I was worried someone would say that.
It's not that I think I'm an oh so great a person, it's that I would be more comfortable with someone who truly understood me and I understood them.

You can talk to a person for as long as you want but you'll never understand them to such an extend as you would yourself, Think about how impossible it is, using the limited medium of language, to describe yourself. Maybe it's just me. But trust, understanding and loyalty are the most important factors in a relationship.
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>>53430670
Wait, I need to see that
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>>53430597
>Is it safe to say that the literally only perfect person to fall in love with is a clone (Female) of yourself
No, I don't think so. I expect that view is actually an extreme minority. Most successful relationships I've seen are between people who are not at all similar.

Of course the clone thing is pure sci-fi (for now, anyway), but I've certainly seen couples where both people were a lot alike. Biggest issue is it tends to exacerbate the weaknesses they share. Your clone is going to have the exact same strengths and weaknesses as you - physically, intellectually, socially. It's like trying to put together a team for <insert competitive thing> and only taking players that are good on <defense / offense / passing / whatever>.
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>>53430605
Arios did nothing wrong.
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>>53430084
Pure fucking autism, indeed.

>>53430785
You mean the autist above? I'm in the subway.
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I don't know if this is the newest version or not. I haven't saved a CYOA in a while.
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>>53430802
But all that will do is create an empty relationship where its essentially one mind living in two bodies.
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>>53430802
It sounds like you have issues with communication and empathy
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>>53430835
She killed 3 innocent people in her autism fit.
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>>53430806
Yeah that would be a problem, If your a lazy cunt, your clone will be a lazy cunt. I suppose it's success is very dependent on being a specific type of person, someone who can be comfortable and able to adapt to vastly different situations perhaps.
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>>53430877
That type of person wouldn't need to rely on a clone to get along with other people. Because that theoretical person would be well-adjusted.
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>>53430898
>well adjusted
Fucking hilarious
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>>53430758
This makes me feel slightly better for some reason.
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>>53430806
Hit the nail on the head. It's why shy nerd's (wet) dream of one day happening upon a girl just as shy and nerdy as they are so very rarely produces lasting relationships. If both partners are shy, the relationship is simply going to quietly, sadly stagnate - somebody has to be taking it somewhere and neither has the balls. And when both are nerdy, well - have you ever had a stupidly angry fight with another nerd over some nerdy subject you were both really passionate about? They liked the wrong episode of Star Wars? They thought a garbage novel was good? They built unoriginal Mary Sue characters?

Now imagine having that fight with someone you're supposed to be spending a lot of time with, rather than being able to just walk away from your FLGS when session's over.
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>>53430925
Would you disagree that a person comfortable with social interaction and an adaptable nature wouldn't need to rely on a fucking clone to have fulfilling interaction?
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>>53430839
SDA, the "pillar" in the girl sections represent the pillar that the girl specializes in, or the pillar I must have to mentor her?
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>>53430802
most people don't understand themselves very well, so this isn't really that good an idea

besides, you don't use language to understand people, you use common experiences - there's a reason people who have gone through similar things respect each other a lot more while anyone who didn't often gets "you couldn't understand" as a response
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>>53430806
>>53430877
>>53430961
Having too similar interests also oftentime means potential subjects for conversation are exhausted pretty quickly. I know it sounds ridiculous to you guys, because I'm sure you have at least one friend whom you feel like you could talk about D&D or movies or vidya or whatever with for hours and hours and hours forever and never finish, but trust me: it doesn't walk that way. Imagine you had to go on a hike with this guy for like six months. Six months you two have nothing to do except talk to each other. Odds are the first few days, maybe even weeks, are going to be very lively. After that it'd be just a lot of awkward silence. Multiply that by years. Difference from your partner is what keeps things interesting over time.
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>>53430802
>I would be more comfortable with someone who truly understood me and I understood them.
Even a clone wouldn't because a clone would know everything you would know and have it's own view point on it, from the point it starts existing it would be it's own person, but not you.
>You can talk to a person as long as you want but you'll never understand them to such an extend as you would yourself.
True, but the opposite is true as well, you will never understand yourself like someone else will understand you. While it is true that you understand yourself in a unique way, you understand yourself in a way that is colored by your own experiences and perceptions and since your experiences are based on your perceptions and no perception in the world is inherently perfect you understand yourself imperfectly, to love someone who udnerstands the you in the same way you understand you would, in essence, mean you would forgo the possibilty of viewing yourself from another perspective and as such forego the possibility of learning where you can.
>Think about how impossible it is, using the limited medium of language, to describe yourself.
See the above. While true, you can never fully understand yourself without an, or rather multiple outside viewpoints, you are after all only an imperfect medium of reception.
>trust, understanding and loyalty are the most important factors in a relationship
and they are all factors you'd have to work on nonetheless, because all of those are based on proper, truthful communication.

Tl;dr selfcest is bullshit
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>>53430961
i find it funny all your examples are fights over taste and badwrongfun, when most such arguments in my experience are about plain stubbornness instead
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>>53430839
You're right in so far as there is only autism here to be found.
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>>53430806
>Your clone is going to have the exact same strengths and weaknesses as you - physically, intellectually, socially.

Not necessarily. The clone will have a female brain and female hormones which will change her behavior significantly. It's also probable that she'll be raised differently (or hardly at all if she grows at an accelerated rate) which will also make her different from you.
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>>53430961
You're missing the point
A clone would have all the same memories as the original, are you afraid of interacting with yourself?
A nerdy guy and equally nerdy girl are separate people who are worried about what each other thinks about them, worried about the other hating them if they did something they didn't approve of. You wouldnt have that fear with a clone.
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>>53431070
In the grim dark future of /cyoag/, there is only autism.
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>>53431073
I don't think it would be a significant difference in this personality context.
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>>53431088
It's terrifying to see how civilized the /d/ thread is in comparison.
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>>53430986
I'd say no sane person is going to be comfortable fucking their own clone, if they are comfortable it only leads to a stagnant, empty and emotionless relationship that only goes on due to mutual convenience. Hell I predict its going to lead to an open relationship when it gets that monotonous.
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>>53431122
yeah, the weirder and more niche something is seen as, the better the people behave for some reason

it's always been like that, and it goes to further extremes than just /d/, like if you go to gurochan which is several notches of weird above /d/, you'll find people there are a lot more mature than on /d/ as well
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>>53431079
>A nerdy guy and equally nerdy girl are separate people who are worried about what each other thinks about them, worried about the other hating them if they did something they didn't approve of. You wouldnt have that fear with a clone.
It's you who are missing the point. Their relationship would still stagnate because neither is assertive, both are timid and both have a tendency to wait for someone else to tell them what to do rather than initiate any action. One day you're going to actually have a relationship, and then you'll find out how important it is for someone to be wearing the pants at all times. Someone needs to have the itsy-bitsy amount of courage (or whatever it is nerds don't) it takes to pick up the fucking phone and tell her you're going to a restaurant Friday night, or that you're coming over for a movie at her place. When both sides sit on their couches by the phone waiting for it to ring, it simply never does.
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>>53431088
Wow, the future came fucking fast mate.
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>>53431138
the mutual convenience thing is the entire draw

you have to keep in mind that people who are drawn to this are comparing it to lonely masturbation, not to real relationships

also open relationships would probably work really well with it, so i see no issue there
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>>53430851
>>53431138
Empty, stagnant relationships.
I just don't see this would happen, I'd totally enjoy doing girlfriend/boyfriend things with my clone, We're still separate beings who both want companionship and to experience love and all the activities related to it.

The whole understanding each other fully thing removed the fear of losing love because you did something wrong or were incompatible with each other.
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>>53430848
Ah I felt like doing a build but it passed.
The fun part is the interaction between builds but that rarely happens nowadays.
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>>53431216
>We're still separate beings
>But we fully understand each other
???
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>>53430546

Well, he only asked how to replicate the whole thing, not how to make the CYOA good.
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>>53431243
the funny thing is that they don't, and they'd possibly end up hating each other even more than most people because of a faulty assumption of understanding when all the misunderstandings and unpleasant truths about themselves started popping up
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>>53431178
You're projecting an extreme lack of agency upon a large, diverse group of people (nerds). Outliers like that do exist, but it's disingenuous of you to use them for your argument.
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>>53431178
You're saying these hypothetical nerds are one-dimensional and don't have confidence dealing with themselves?
Again you would have total courage with someone you would have no fear of disappointing, you could easily pick up the courage to do something you both know you would want to do.
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>>53431268
>>53431270
well, as I read it he said that he isn't talking about all nerds in general like you two are implying here, so maybe you aren't really giving his posts the chance you should be
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>>53431270
By this point, I'm no longer sure you understand how clones work. It really does seem like you want to fuck some kind of extraneous body telepathically connected to you, not an individual being (even one identical to yourself).
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>>53430839
Man the air sure is thick with opinions today.
At least we left the reasons at the door, they'd only smother the name calling.
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Good news everyone! I'm making a rapist battle priest CYOA based on the drawback Deus Vult from my last CYOA Mindslaver.
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>>53431328
>rapist

Why?
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>>53431338
because TokHaar Gold is a edgy /d/eviant
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>>53431338
take a guess
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>>53431348
i don't think you can call it edgy when it's actually pervy, edgy is when you do something to get attention
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>>53431328
>rapist
>priest

I guess if it's going to be consistent the CYOA will be banned maybe even in /d/,
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>>53431320
Are you even trying to make sense?
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>>53431338
You expect him to make a regular battle priest CYOA? Your taste is better than his.
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>>53431377
last time I check raping someone is the best way to get a person's attention.
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>>53431338
Because saying religious nonsense as you rape someone is really hot!
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>>53431395
It's not really breaking rules is it?
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>>53431402
sure, if you do it for attention, but most people do it or fantasize about it at least to get off instead, and getting off is definitely why people go to /d/
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>>53431410
>religious nonsense

Okay, then why aren't you making it Islamic?
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>>53431402
not if you stare rape unaware women in public transport
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>>53430848
It was in the last thread, anon.
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>>53431306
>Not sure how clones work
And you do Dr.anon?

I would not want to be with a person I would fear losing the love of, as pathetic as that sounds. A clone is simply the only person I would feel comfortable with, since I know I have that fear and so does the clone, we would be both safe in the knowledge that each of us would not betray the other for some different 'better' person on the street. Fucking the clone has barely even entered my thoughts Im more interested in the psychological safety attributed to a person who shares my personality, memories, knowledge, traits, desires ect.
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>>53431416
To be honest I don't frequent much /d/, but I know that CP it's one of the few things universally banned on 4chan. I'm not sure how much loli/shota rape is considered CP, however.
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>>53431429
>Why not make it islamic?
Because the catholic christian mythology is way cooler then Islamic mythology.
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>>53431429
Because the catholics have got style anon.
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>>53431456
id say that the only interesting parts of those mythologies are shared between them in the first place

everything unique to either is trash
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>>53431475
Satan as a rebellious fallen angel is much cooler than some random djinn.
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>>53431475
well because the stuff that is shared is ripped off from the older polytheistic religions and the stuff that is unique is just the theological equivalent of fanfiction.
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>>53431439
> I haven't saved a CYOA in a while.
Ah it doesn't matter much. The feeling faded. I love it so much but I've made too many builds. They always end up almost the same.
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militant atheist cyoa when
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>>53431499
...that is shared between both though
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>try doing this cyoa
>go just by picture and description without looking at dates
>guess half the 'secrets' because of the joke names
>take a chance in one of the other ones
>Dick status: muh
Literal perfection. Don't know if she was the one the creator thought was 'perfect' but she checked all of my boxes alright.
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>>53431528
Satan pissing off God is shared in both. In Catholicism he's a rebellious angel who wants to be like/better than God, in Islam angels explicitly do not have free will so the idea of a fallen or rebellious angel is incoherent. Instead, Satan is a random genie that disobeyed God once shortly after the creation of Adam, but the whole angle of him wanting to exceed God and being doomed to fail is missing.
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>>53431563
so glad you agree with me about the cool parts being common
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>>53431398
Yes,calling someone an autist is an opinion, not giving reasons is a thinly veiled 'I disagree with you but I do not want to have a sincere discusion because it isn't worth my time' at best.
If you really dislike something disprove it point by point, deconstruct it instead of rudely making room for your displeasure.
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>>53431576
Satan having a motivation beyond just having being disobedient is the cool part.
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>>53431552
But she still has one box not checked off anon.

Being real
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I need a cyoa that gives me insight into cryptocurrency OR one that lets me chop off my hands so I don't sell early!

Why don't more cyoas deal with earning delicious CASH?
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Say where is theother SDA who made an alcohol CYOA and the loving femdom CYOA?
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>>53431552
>>53430180
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>>53431590
in either case there is motivation, but the "i want to be better than god" motivation is so overplayed that anything else is good in comparison

seriously that's like dragon protecting its gold tier of trite
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>>53431596
>implying
If she's not real I can't disappoint her. Win/Win
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>>53431410
You're going to regret such profanity one day, man.
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>>53431552
Is there a second part to this or...?
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>>53431672
yes
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>>53431605
>The other SDA
I think he was absorbed into the collective unconscious. That or he's not actually the other SDA and he's just keeping quiet right now, like some authors have the sense to do.
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>>53431672
Sorry, forgot.
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>>53431663
Bet you he won't!
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>>53428110
Brown

Money can't buy me a healthy triple bacon cheeseburger. I could very easily make a comfortable living selling these meals off the books, too.
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>>53431605
>an alcohol CYOA
?
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Did that megacorporation cyoa ever get finished?
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>>53431754
The spirits of, well, spirits and other kinds of booze grant you boons.
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>>53431744
a triple bacon cheeseburger could be very healthy, in fact it could save you from malnutrition if you had a limited diet for a while, like if you were a vegan for example
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Any antihero / fallen hero CYOA?
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>>53428731
Should make a tyranny one to match this or a counter terrorist one
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>>53431002
It's what she specializes in. You don't necessarily have to have the same specialization but it would help with mentoring her.
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>>53429925
Helen
>smokes pot everyday
>catholic conservative
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>>53431695
Even in degenerate waifu CYOA, Asuka best girl.
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>>53430605
They were both wrong in different ways.
Arios for being too insecure to trust in her lover's devotion to her and Pasille for not being observant and responsible enough to notice and address how her preoccupation with your predecessor was hurting Arios.
I'd personally make it a priority to help these two come to peace with eachother and forgive one another for what happened.
Or being married to both of them might get awkward.
>>53430758
Wait, not everyone read the whole thing? I like reading italics' stuff, the sheer amount of detail and complexity makes it easy to imagine myself as part of the world.
Plus sometimes he hides a 10/10 Waifu in his giant catalogue of companions.
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>>53431987
I kind of wanted to see your audit CYOA, this one didn't really appeal to me.
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>>53432149
He's still working on that one.
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>>53432149
I made this one explicitly to practice for Audit CYOA, actually.
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>>53432086
nigga stop blueballing me and just finish your cyoa already
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>>53427586
It's still a bit weird to be so casual about sealing away an evil spirit. Not in a bad way, though. I can respect a man who doesn't let something like banishing something to the netherworld give him any anxiety.
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>>53432249
Anon, it is finished.
Where've you been?
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>>53432279
I think he's talking about the mystery box(es).
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>>53432279
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>>53432279
But there's no 63!Sebastian mystery waifu yet.
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>>53431993
If the bible allows alcohol and tobacco, it's really got no excuse to forbid pot. Both are way more harmful and the latter is definitely more addictive. A true Christian knows that it's the spirit of the law that matters, not the letter (not that that'd matter because such a rules lawyering Christian would just point you out it doesn't say anything specifically about pot). No reason they shouldn't smoke.
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>>53432279
>Where've you been
Work and family obligations.

So it's finish? Can you post it please?
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>>53432086
>that spoiler
Man, I never had a moment when the words were more apropriate, so...
Mah niggah.
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>>53432313
b-but smoking pot wasn't popular during the second third of my life, which represents the height of human civilization any deviation from which is by definition degeneracy!
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>>53432305
>>53432304
I really only meant for this to be silly little extras like most mystery boxes. Seems I may need to cut my break short and hammer em out after all...
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>>53432348
>b-but smoking pot wasn't popular during the second third of my life

What the fuck does that even mean?
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>>53432359
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>>53432185
You need practice? Just make make make.
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>>53432375
And there we go.
Like I said, mystery boxes should be ready within the next week assuming I don't too distracted.
Which I do often, so sorry in advance.
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>>53432408
Don't get too distracted, dude.
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how do you massage an author?
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>>53432466
Gently and with love.
Unless they're a masochist, then you go full Turkish.
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>>53432466
with proper... equipment
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>>53432508
That's just for SDA.
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>>53432495
Which authors are secretly masochists?
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>>53432466
Based on the stress on an author's body, I recommend starting at the shoulders and upper back, going down left and right of the spine without putting any pressure on the spine itself. From there on you should find hard spots and gently massage around these.

Greatest problem though is finding and identifying the author first.
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>>53432540
If they weren't, would they produce OC for us ungrateful lot and reap little more than shitstorms and insults? All of them are.
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>>53432381
I was, and I was trying. The whole reason I started this project was cause I was having difficulty writing descriptions for the companies/groups you'll be auditing. A lot of the art I used here was excess from my art scouting for Audit CYOA (I've gathered like ~2,000 images). And one of the reasons I don't have boy students is cause apparently art of guys is a precious resource and I'm saving that for Audit CYOA.

Most of my writing up to this point was rather blunt, but I want the descriptions in Audit CYOA to be more political. I wanted to write it so it made suggestions rather than spelling things out for you because there's supposed to be a large, complex network of relationships flinging around between legal bodies and corporations underneath it all. I was having problems with exposition. It's very easy to do in prose.

So, I resorted to dialogue for this little CYOA. Exposition is much harder to do in dialogue without the characters sounding weird and robotic; you can tell I had problems with this in some of the students, but especially with Colm's introductory section. I blasted through the first few sections since I wanted to focus more on the students, but for example, why would Colm ever need to announce to his old acquaintance that you're in Lochlann City? Or how would I justify his relationship with "you," a reader coming into this thing with no knowledge of what's going on? I would have rather edged those ideas in instead of having him blatantly state them, had I put more time into the writing.

My focus when writing the students was to represent their background life in their dialogue, in that they suggest it to you from their tone. Sure they tell you things about themselves outright, but the reason I wanted to focus on vocabulary was to tell you more about them, like their mannerisms or how they act around others.

I think that's the best way to put it. tl;dr I'm not very good at suggestive, subtle writing, so I wanted to try that here.
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>>53432408
I really want to make Vignette cry
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>>53431552
>>53431695
>Everything about Vivian
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>>53432557
im not, and i make cyoas for myself

if anon whines at me over it then i suppose telling someone to fuck off with an excuse for a change is nice
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>>53432544
Something about the way I sleep always makes the top of my neck right beneath the base of my skull tense as all get out.
If any of you could somehow manage to make that ache go away and maybe rub my back every now and then, I'd probably love you forever and be able to focus on working on OC a lot more.
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>>53432626
That's a good attitude!
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Hey SDA, in Magic Mentor, we can only pick one Pupil right?
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>>53432636
Well, can't do that for you, living on a different continent and all that. But I recommend looking for a different pillow, that seems to be at fault. If I had to make a guess, yours is either very soft or large and hard. Both aren't optimal.
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>>53431338
Because he found his niche making /d/ CYOAs.
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>>53431622
Nigga, It's practically the Original "I want to be better than god."
With the possible exception of the epic of Gilgamesh ,IT IS the original.
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>>53432375
What's Suri's default appearance?
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>>53431590
>>53432786

Depends on your reading. The Fallen Angel parts were added in later, Satan basically translates to adversity. If one discounts the Book of Job, then Satan may just be the manifestation of adversity with no will of its own. Or if you read into the Book of Job you'll find that Satan and God seem pretty chummy, which can lead you to the entire "Satan is an aspect/was created by God to test humans"
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>>53432805
cute
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>>53432848
>God is the manipulative girlfriend who forces you through elaborate tests and will dump you if you fail any one of them

Trash/10 would not waifu
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>>53432679
That's the idea.
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>>53432805
Probably something like this.
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>>53432636
What are the Zodiac King's responsibilities? Is he expected to remain faithful to his wife?
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>>53432408

>Best girls are both stubborn and don't want to share

Well this is going to be fairly difficult.

At least I don't have to try and crack my head to get full harem ending since I'm quite sure I'd just have zero compatibility with some of them. Gonna think up my build and post it here in a minute
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>>53432893
>What is the New Covenant.
What are you, a (((((Chosen One)))))?
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>>53432279

Question, is it possible for you to expand a bit on S-10 and what the guardian could theoretically do? STANDO POWAH is super cool but it just seems so vague. I know it says it depends on the individual but some guiding direction on what we might get would be cool. It could be anything f rom a regular punchghost to time stopping or nah?
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>>>53420867
I'm a theory person, so I'd probably go for Runic magic. Presumably a took a stint in the private sector in Telephun and hated it.

I can't treat this as a waifu picker, because waifuing your student is a serious, unconscionable abuse of a mentor relationship.

I'm looking for someone who's serious about research as opposed to engineering, politics, or something else, so it boils down to Hannah, Cicely, Penelope, Marie-Claude, or Ruby.

Ruby is the obvious choice, but I find myself suspicious of her, for some reason.

Hannah is the kind of person who hates writing personal statements. She's probably more talented than she looks.

Marie-Claude is probably more interested in applied research than I am, and I don't know that we'd get along.

Penelope and Cicely have promise, but they both have strange ideas about mentor-student relationships. I'd need to interview Penelope a bit more to figure out what she actually knows about her field. Cicely clearly has a lot of initiative, which is good, but...

I guess I'd go for a second round of interviews with Hannah, Ruby, and Penelope? To give Hannah and Penelope a chance to show what they know, mostly; Ruby has a clear advantage over them in terms of her ability to express herself.

>>53432612
You are an irredeemable monster.
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>>53432612
>beat her in the war with another woman
>gloat about how she isn't good enough for you
>rape her and take all of her virginities so she can never get married
>force her to stay in a room adjacent to yours with a one-war mirror, so she can watch you and your wife fuck every night
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>>53432805
Nobody knows.
Suri chooses to be an elf when she doesn't want to be anything else, but if you asked nicely, she'd probably be willing to take on any appearance you want.
>>53432961
The King of Zodiac is the highest form of authority in the Kingdom. The Noble Houses govern each of their own provinces, but you govern the houses.
You're also the magical anchor keeping Zodiac inside its own plain of existence. So you have to make sure nobody fucks around with the stability of Zodiac's reality and no one from Earth tries to force their way in.
The King and Queen are supposed to be a symbol of strength and love to the kingdom, so if you go around fucking other people behind her back, you'll probably wind up with an enraged demigoddess spouse and lose the support of a lot of your subjects.
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>>53433119
What did you think of the guy who did the whole "all women belong to me" build?
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>>53433095
what's this?
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>>53433053
>waifuing your student is a serious, unconscionable abuse of a mentor relationship.

To heck with that. I'm taking Hannah, and I'm going to fill her baby motel with so much spunk.
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>>53433136
My plans for Vignette.
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>>53433119
>and no one from Earth tries to force their way in.
So why not just, like, kill them all?
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>>53433095
Anon, stop. You're making me have a situation in my panties. <3
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>>53433151
>symbol of strength and love
Well, that at least proves strength ...
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>>53433162
>after having sex the first time Vignette turns into a semen demon
>she wants you to forcefully impregnate all of her friends
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waifus this
waifus that

why no husbandos
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>>53433188
Thought that would only happen if Lady Scorpio got her claws on her ...
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>>53433190
>>>/lgbt/
>>>/lgbt/
>>>/lgbt/
stop posting
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>>53433053
>waifuing your student is a serious, unconscionable abuse of a mentor relationship
And thus, Ruby went into her mid-20s researching feverishly with Anon, coming through with breakthrough after breakthrough in magical sciences, making huge impacts in the world.

But as limelight began to die down after the two of them settle with a long-term project in figuring out the dreaded but promising mana-fusion reactor, Ruby began to long for something new. Come late twenties, the two of you make good progress and are close to finishing the first prototype, but only one thing's on her mind: her biological clock is ticking. It didn't help that she'd spent literal years in the same, cramped room with Anon. She'd tried going on walks to clear her mind, but as is with her nature, nothing but that very anguish occupies it when she's not staring at magical formulae.

How does Anon give her his charming smile every time, but only with eyes for science? How would she deal with these feelings?

Well, the fumes of melted mana, in small dosages, can knock out a full-grown man for a few hours...
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>>53433190
>why no husbandos
Because most everyone here is secretly deep in the closet.

Waifu CYOAs being a good cover up, naturally.
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>>53432602
When I was writing Kingdom Crusher I had similar problems. The method I used was:

>write things you want to include
>add keywords
>turn them into crude sentences
>write them into a paragraph
>refine it using descriptive words and writing
>and write like music

I'd want to help but to write means you'd spoil it.
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>>53426647
>Domme to Domme
>Dom Pheromones
>Healthy Dom Happy Dom

>Marcus

>Sofia

I never knew how hot i thought it would be to act like a hot cheerleader bullying a nerdy shut-in.
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>>53433119
So, assuming you chose S-09, could you learn time magic? Haste? Slow? Stop?
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>>53433044
Yeah, I get asked for clarity about the Guardian Elixir a lot...
I've gone on the record saying that a top tier Guardian would be on the same power lever as Gold Experience Requiem from JJBA: Part 5 and even the lower tier would still be on par if a crazy powerful Persona like Alice from SMT.
Beyond that it's really just up to you.
I may make my next project one where you build your own Guardian or become one yourself.
>>53433095
I'd like it known that I don't condone this kind of mean-spirited fuckery.
>>53433131
I've seen people post a hell of a lot of builds focussed on attaining the endgame of being "da harem king," a lot of which are so genuinely detailed and intriguing that I love reading them.
Unfortunately, that means I also have no idea specifically which one you're talking about.
>>53433151
You can't just kill ALL your problems anon.
Well I mean... Maybe you can...
But you shouldn't.
>>53433188
...
Okay, this is actually pretty hot, so I'll turn a blind eye to this one.
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>>53433347
The Elixirs are all weaker versions of the King's powers. Taking S-09 has nothing to do with it.
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>>53426647
Has Angel ever reacted to this?
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>>53433237
Ruby
Ruby what are you doing
Stop
T-this is a serious, unconscionable abuse of a mentor-student relationship


You could have asked nicely, you know
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>>53433352
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/53399479/#q53405956

that dude
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>>53431328
Do you really have to be a sexfiend and or ass about every cyoa you put out? Fucking Christ, every single thing you've made is the same shit with either a slapped on layer of edge or sex.
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>>53433390
I'm sorry anon, but you have received the bad end.

You should have listened to your instincts that told you not to trust her back when you first met her.
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>>53432279
I'll announce first off that I forbid killing, and any suitor who kills another will greatly displease me and loses all chance at my hand.

My strategy will be to accrue a core of three submissive sister-wifes and make all the others yield without too much bloodshed thanks to careful maneuvering and forceful telepathic suggestions.

Elixirs:
>Skill
>Analysis
>Domination

Brides:
In the order I'll acquire them.
>Suri
Spying and long range. Can help me track down and surprise attack the others.
>Vignette
Healing and pinning down princesses long enough for me to mind control them into accepting defeat.
>Catherine
Army of spirits. Cannon fodder.

I chose the brides not for tactical reasons but because I genuinely am interested in them.
Vignette will remain chaste for a long long while btw. She's obviously not ready yet.
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>>53433237
SDA, I don't know how much you care for this CYOA since it was a training for Audit, but here is my input:
More than "closure", I feel it lacks a proper introduction to the setting. It gives too little information for me to guess what is important.

The girls too have some of this problem, for me. Not all, but with some of them, I don't know what they want, or what they value.

In particular, I was considering Marie Claude, because I feel like she could be one of the best for search. But in her dialog she is all drunk and almost don't tell me anything useful, just explain the situation. That is fine, but I can't stop feeling uncomfortable that, if that were really the situation, I would just tell her that it's fine and interview her another day. But there are almost no information of her not drunk for me to guess if I should or not pick her.

Penelope is not drunk, but she tells me very little about what she wants to research and why, what are her opinions about magic and her field in general.

With such situation I felt divided between Hannah and Ruby. Superficially, Ruby seems almost like a better version of Ruby. Both are interested in research. But they seem very "whatever" about what is being researched.

Personally with the information of the setting that I got I felt that it would be relevant/fun to study how all forms of magic interconnect. Perhaps develop a theory to do so. And in some ways Ruby seems the best choice, but it felt like an empty choice. "She is the girl with the highest GPA that likes to research, and is fine with whatever topic I want to research, so I will just pick her". I don't know if you could have solved this problem is so few lines of text - but maybe you should just have added more then?

Anyway, I like more the concept than the Audit one, but it felt like there was too much lack of information.
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>>53433410
/d/ diggs his Mindslaver CYOA like crazy, so he's clearly doing something right.
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>>53433406
I never saw that post...
That guy scares me...
I think Sebastian would be pretty fucking scared too.
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>>53433406
Holy fucking shit dude.
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>>53433612
Superficially, Ruby seems almost like a better version of Hannah.*
Sorry for the error.
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>>53426647
Awesome
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>>53433609
Addendum: Catherine isn't cannon fodder, her spirits are. She is the future mother of my children and I woulnd't put her in danger ofc.
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>>53433612
>I felt that it would be relevant/fun to study how all forms of magic interconnect
This is something I wish I had expanded upon actually, but I realized that I'd have to put a lot of effort into making it fleshed out.

But for the most part, I do very much agree with you on the lack of information and connectivity between the concepts in the CYOA. I won't lie, I threw everything together rather loosely because I put a lot of focus on developing my writing style rather than concerning myself with the CYOA's mechanics and flow. I think I might revisit this sometime in the future to make it a fully fleshed-out and complete CYOA, and you've given me some ideas.

One of the CYOAs that I'm currently making is centered around constructing your own spells from a set list of options. Now I'm thinking I should gut that idea and put it into this, and it feels much more appropriate in this sort of setting as I can get really sciencey with the wording.

Originally, this CYOA was going to be a lewd sort of thing but I'm sort of glad I held off on that.

>>53433726
From a practical perspective, yeah. I would agree that Ruby is probably the best choice for research and development, but I had hoped that this would be centered more around picking based on personality compatibilities and preferences.

Now I'm thinking I should make it more sciencey. Not that I'm thinking of completely rewriting student descriptions, but I think you've helped me solidify a purpose for the CYOA at least.

I think I'm gonna have to interrogate some science majors to get a feel of how you guys talk.
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>>53433352
I'd be hella interested in your build a guardian CYOA
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>>53433613
I like his stuff, I just think the people who shitpost on him are uncomfortable with some of the stuff in his cyoas.
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>>53432279
B-03
S-09
S-10
https://youtu.be/l8Cy7DOhmA8
In all honesty, though, I wouldn't want any of them to be hurt, so if I couldn't persuade them to give that up use a more diplomatic approach, then I'd declare one condition. I'm going in alone. The one who actually defeats me will immediately be recognized as queen. . Then wait in plain sight in the middle of town and take things as they come in a desperate measure to keep casualties down to a minimum. Secretly team up with Catherine.

Also, why do I get the feeling that while she means well, Lucianna would reduce you to a figurehead in no time flat? That's intentional, right?
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>>53433811
>Lucianna would reduce you to a figurehead in no time flat
Oh god no!
Lucianna just assumes you're going to be so in over your head, she'll have to put on a diving suit to pull your ass out.
She wants to rule the Kingdom as equals and just emphasizing taking the lead because she's concerned about you.
Though that concern can lead to her being dismissive of your actual abilities if you don't show her what you're capable of and let her coddle you.
Be a man and she'll gladly accept you as her equal.
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>>53433764
>but I had hoped that this would be centered more around picking based on personality compatibilities and preferences.

well, yes, that was my intention, I would rather I student that wants to research the same as me and have some of the same values than another that have completely different values and methods of research and is interested in a completely different field but have a higher GPA for instance.

That's why I wouldn't pick Vera for instance, because she is totally into Mana-Tech Engineering, or Cicely, who is very focused into the immediate practical applications of magic to warfare, while I wanted to favor a more theoretic and maybe holistic approach.
For this the candidates for me were Hannah, Penelope, Ruby and Marie. But as I said - I have no idea of what are the scientific interests of Penelope and Marie.
And since Ruby and Hannah just say that they are fine with learning about magic, and Ruby has the highest GPA and all, she just seems like a "cheat" choice.

Maybe Marie was a better choice - her GPA is almost the same, but I think it's harder to maintain a very high GPA until the 4 year than just one 0.1 higher in the first. But I just have no idea of what the interests of Marie are.

This is from my perspective who wanted to be more focused on pure research, but I suppose someone more focused on the military/politic side would be more interest in the girls opinions about politics.

Anyway, I really like the idea of the CYOA, but the general lack of information about things made it less enjoyable than it could have been for me. (The design as always it’s great).
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>>53431328
Sounds interesting.

>>53432279
I'm really tempted to do a small harem build but I don't want to seem greedy. Plus I don't want to make my waifus feel like I don't care for them. There's also the fact that I have no idea how to actually convince the 4 girls to agree to be in a harem.
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>>53432372
what do you not understand?
do you know what a fraction is?
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>>53433971
>There's also the fact that I have no idea how to actually convince the 4 girls to agree to be in a harem.

It's right between your legs.
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>>53433909
Oh. Oh that's really sweet. And really reassuring. She was immediately out of the running because I got that manipulative feel from her letter. But now I have to reconsider everything. . .
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>>53433352
>I've gone on the record saying that a top tier Guardian would be on the same power lever as Gold Experience Requiem from JJBA: Part 5 and even the lower tier would still be on par if a crazy powerful Persona like Alice from SMT.

Sold.

Stando power it is.
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>>53433952
Originally, I had Marie-Claude's GPA at 4.1 but I toned that down a bit.

I'm flowing with ideas right now. I'm going to shift the focus of this CYOA into a medium-sized CYOA spell-crafting CYOA, and have other sections centered on magitech gadgetry and whatnot. Gonna focus a bit more on explaining the science behind magic and mana. You'll be taking a promising student, of course. I hope you don't mind if I get a little mathematical with resources.

Then, maybe you can sell your patents or gain royalties. Calculating that is going to be difficult, though.

I expect to see some crazy shit like infinite-looping lightning bolts.

Mana fumes are also a narcotic.
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>>53431552
>selected Jii instead of Amanda for the trap
DAMN
FUCK
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>>53433053
>>53433390
Uh, this is me, and

>>53433612
>>53433952
is a different person with an eerily similar opinion.

But I don't put that much stock in GPAs (I had a 2.something myself). The Harvard-bound valedictorians who excel at everything aren't necessarily the people who are going to make major, original contributions.

...Not that I'm biased or anything, of course.

Hannah and Ruby's "whatever" stance on research was, for me, a clue. Really bright people can either 1) know their field of interest well enough to have a specific question they want to investigate or 2) have a huge amount of trouble making up their minds because they're interested in everything. I guessed that Ruby and Hannah are both in the second category.

I like this CYOA and don't have any complaints about it. I did have some fun hammering out what a Dietsch-Lieberman invocation was, though, so I suppose I'm implicitly sympathetic to the notion that hammering the details of a magical system would be fun.
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>>53433352
Harem King in an absolute monarchy? What could go wrong?! Once you secede power all of your heirs and mistresses come outta the woodwork and plot against each other. Then you get Westeros with 12 kingdoms!

My first act as king would be to get the nations to act as a Pseudo-EU/USA so I can pike off with my bride instead of dealing with governance.
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>>53433811
>>53433909
>>53434068
It's really strange how many anons took a paranoid view of poor Lucianna. Or perhaps I'm simply too trusting.
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>>53426647
Its been a while since I saw that. Yeah ok why not.

Harem Mode, Lost inheritance, Dom Pheromones. More pets is always better. Being rich means less time wasted for working. With all that extra time, I'll have more time to "exercise". And Pheromones are just fun way to tease people in public.

Hernandez I guess? Some worship is nice.

Donna. A cook is nice. And she seems the type to be really talented with her mouth.

Nicole. The familys a bit of a problem. Or a good business partner. Either way, clearly she'd make a good little pet.

I'll probably find more subs myself with the Pheromones. You know. Someone much too young and innocent. And fun to corrupt.
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>>53434206
Ivy league schools gives their students more prestige and get you noticed by big name companies.

It just facilitates better social mobility.
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>>53434148
Picking gramps (jii-san) to be the one that's 'a man, duh! ' c'mon, anon.

>>53434248
It's not that you're too trusting. I'm just too used to having someone only pretending to care. She seemed too good to be true, so I figured she was, you know?
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>>53434206
I'm not really going to change the girls' personalities, I'm just adding a fleshed out system to the CYOA. That said, I might reword a few things here and there in their descriptions to accommodate the additions. For example, I'm going to emphasize Vera's mana-tech savvy side and somehow make her an appealing option for those who want to focus more on building mana-tech things than spell creation.
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>>53434146
I don't know about others, but I'm really attracted to the idea of optimization in an autistic way, so I don't have problems with resource management being more mathematical in CYOAs.

I'm really happy to hear that you are considering expanding this CYOA.

Maybe now it would be a good moment to say that I was actually a little bit divided between having as objective trying to see the connections between all forms of magic. In part I also considered if maybe this was too hard, and with magic, it would maybe be easier to create a super general artificial intelligence to let it study and report about the connections about the types of magic.

And then maybe see if it had a "soul" in the Vedic-magic sense.

But on the other hand it might have been easier to first study the connections between types of magic (including the nature of the soul) to later with this information try to create the AI.
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>>53433994
Nigga you're not giving me any context.

Do I assume you're like 18 years old?
So you started smoking weed since you were around 10-11?

Or are you 5 years old and you started pot when you're 2?
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>>53432408
>>53432375
>>53432359
>>53432305
>>53432279

Alright, let's roll.

B-02
B-03
S-10

Good fucking luck trying to catch me. And when you do good fucking luck taking me down or restraining me, I'm behind 700 HP bars. Stando Power will serve as the muscle I'll need with the added benefit that it can move independetly of me. Hope my guardian angel is a good bro if he(?) has a personality.

ALTERNATIVE TIMELINE: Swap B-03 and go for S-12 for one single purpose: Use the grace elixir to run around town all day telling everyone to get the FUCK OUT. These bitches be crazy and these powers be too strong. I don't care about them bribing the police, this is not going to turn into a bloodbath of innocents. Also to help me get to them when the fighting starts and I try the bitch ass route of making them stand down. Within reason. If diplomacy fails then it's time to bring out the ORA.


Gwendolyn and Gracia, Abirathi, Talissa and Angelica are all literally top tier waifus, jesus fuck. If so possible I'd like to try wedding them all, and I feel like only Talissa and Angelica would have huge issues with it, stubbornes and all, so they'd be the harder ones to convince. Especially Talissa and Angelica, horny hue girls a best. I think at first I'd partner up with Angelica because I've always been a sucker for ye olde code of chivalry and her whole thing. And horns are cute. Both my dick and my soul are diamonds so if I'm too autistic to suceed with more than one I'd be honored to be with her. Also, that paladin light skill is OP and I love it.

All the others I'd try to subdue without being lethal...Keep an eye out for Scarlatina and Lizette especially though. There's too much crazy there.

Suri makes me a bit nervous with the stalking and changeling powers, but she seems alright so hopefully not big trouble there.
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>>53433764
Is new Cyoa here yet yes?
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>>53434493
NO
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>>53428110
>Sky Blue
>Orange
>BLACK

I'll probably just hammer them as fast as I fucking can anyway.
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>>53434324
I'm not the guy you first answered to. Anyway...
Wait, you did not understand that his post is not about his own age, but the reader's? Let me laugh even harder
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>>53432279
>>53432305
>>53432359
>>53432375
>>53432408
No, this isn't right. This isn't right at all. No, no, NO. They're all too small. Too empty. Too unevolved. I must take them to their final shape.
>M-08.
I must know how my words cut them before I can delve further into treatment.
>S-12.
The strongest resolutions are those that come from within yourself. They will see things, and I will know them.
>S-11.
Bent lightwaves and vibrated air will bring to life the things I know they see in their head. Nothing and everything is as real as I need.
>Lizette.
I have heard her words and seen that she is the least broken. I must show her that "Beauty" is naught but what one must call the completed, final, and perfect form an organism might take. She will protect me as I make the world "Beautiful."
>Vignette.
She is too small. I must make her mind bigger. I will reach into them as I hold her gently and she will begin to imagine splendid things. She will see herself hurting others, going beyond the limits of the mortal body even, all the while denying these new urges. I will demonstrate that one may be driven to madness by their own inner turmoil. Every waking moment will be spent dreaming these dreams until she has no tears to fill the moat separating her from the truth. Eventually she will come to accept who she is and will come to love her new shape, having never realized who her savior was.
>Abirathi.
This will not do. She is far too haughty and free spirited. The razor winds of Lizette will clip her wings when I could her mind with sweet daydreams amidst her soaring. She will fall to the earth, and if she lives I will nurse her back to health. Clipped of her freedom forever, she will realize that she must find something to ground herself in.
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>>53434866
>Cassandra.
How curious, the patient who thinks themself something to hold authority over another. With my mastery of matter I will lift her into the air from the shadows and drop her from above. She will call upon the earth to harden, unbeknownst to her, however, is that such will merely add to the lethality of the fall. Without legs she will be in a similar position to Abirathi, and I will help her heal into her new form.
>Talisa.
A very curious case, truly, in that she seems to think that she is and will be a person. I can understand that she views herself as a human, but I cannot abide ignorance. Her own words betray her. Her fixation on matters of the beast must belie a desire to live as they do, and so I, in my love, shall fix her. I will break her limbs and remove from them their extremities. When the war is over I will teach her that speech is unnecessary, and I will keep her as a beast by my side. My only pet, just as she desired.
>Gwendolyn and Gracia.
These two are tricky, in that I believe I will have to have the voices in their head appeal to their view of everything as a game in order to lure them into a spot where they may be contained. Once they are restrained months will be taken meticulously caring to ensure that I project the same thought into each of them whenever I use the rehabilitation. In those months they will never think a thought different from the other. As they stand they are two similar but different personalities. I will have the two conditioned into truly becoming one. I will have their numbed minds follow me as one beloved, not two. They will finally be as one and will realize that healing is the funnest game.
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>Angelica.
Perhaps the most stubborn, and thus the most tormented. I can feel her crying out for help behind a thousand doors barring her from salvation. I will not sit by and let her suffer. I will pry into her mind and plant the seeds of fear into her mind. I will clash again and again with her, watering the crop with each passing. I will pry into every possibility, watching with my magically enhanced eyes for the signs of weakness. I will exuberate them with my powers, and once the moon of her horror reaches its zenith and shines its holy light upon the field of our shared love I will bend the light with my force and bring the horrors into reality. They will close in on her, restricting her as though bondage, and in the moment of dual frailty she will snap as I embrace her healing form.
>Catherine.
How curious, the powers this one holds. I will brief with her, for she interests me little. I will implant in her the irrational belief that the precious spirits she clings to have abandoned her. She will cease to call out to them, all the while believing that the wouldn’t come even if she did. She will be utterly alone as she faces the horrors of isolation for the first time in her life. Little would she know that I am and was always there, watching, waiting, and hoping with all my heart that I can save her.
>Scarlatina.
I see she is largely as she should be, much like Lizette, so I will take her as she is. She and I will share a love as tender as my love for you. Her loyalty to me is said to be supreme, so I will in turn display my own. I will have her by my side to directly aid in the rehabilitation of those few that remain. My ability to pierce lies and find the truth, to bring out forceful illusions of what I find therein, and my ability to implant thoughts into others will be further boosted by her capacity for direct chemical alterations of the brain.
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>>53434896
>Persephone.
Much like the little Talisa she seems so deluded as to her status in existence. Her fascination with machinery is indicative of a desire for a similar existence, even though I am sure she vehemently denies it. I will grant her the greatest desire hiding deep beneath the black lake behind her self-deceived eyes. Once she is restrained I will have my beloved little Scarlatina erase what little floats around on that black sea in her mind. She will wake up and forget the fantasy of flesh and bone, as my words disguised as hers in her own mind guide her back into the reality of steel. I will help her see that she is an automaton built to serve her master, and it will be all she ever knows.
>Lucianne.
I respect her drive and capacity for sympathy. I see that she is so understanding of my own struggles in this war. It is hard shouldering the flaws of all others, but as King I must carry their evils so that they can be saved. I will come to her and sit for a conversation on the roles of the queen in a land ruled by one some would call a God, as foolish as the claims may be. We would hold a long discourse, breaking for sleep as the weeks pass in our talk, and come to understand the truths of one another’s positions. Unbeknownst to her, her words would not be her own. In a free debate there is a good chance she will offer efficient resistance, so I will prepare her every point. I would talk circles around everything she had to say, for those words would be tailored to suit my rebuttals. As she sleeps I will grant her splendid dreams of my joyous, healing rule. She would awaken every day of the debate with thoughts of how grand my rule would be on her mind, surely easing any doubts she had. I want to assure her, to put her at ease. I want her to accept, after weeks of consistent mental alterations, that I MUST rule her, and that only obedience will win the day for prosperity.
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>Suri.
She will have been watching for the months this was occurring. There are two possibilities here. One is that she will know what is to come and approach me in earnest surrender. This will facilitate her healing quickly. Even quicker is possibility two, which I would hope to be the case. I know that she will be watching me at nearly all times, and so it would make sense that with this knowledge and my powers of Analysis I would have detected her. Tell me, what do you think would happen to the mind of one who I have been working with for months?

I want to save them. I will save them. My title will be known to all. I am going to fix everything. I am going to save everyone. I am the Healing King.
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>>53434866
>>53434879
>>53434896
>>53434913
>>53434935
Here's your reply you cringey bastard. May you take these meager scraps and begone.
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>>53434961
This is /tg/, anon. More specifically it is /cyoag/, and more broadly it is 4chan.

It's all cringe.
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>>53434974
I'd say that one was particularly bad
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>>53434974
>It's all cringe.

lolwut?
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>>53435009
And I would say that's objectively correct.
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>>53432279
Domination and Vitality are gimmes. I guess Perception is the next to go with.

>take all twelve wives
Time to put Domination to good use.
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>>53432537
Don't you mean Angel?
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>>53428110
Green Button , White Button, Sky blue button.

There is over 150 people net growth every minute so I can basically punch the button as often as I want. Plus, I'm even helping reduce global hunger and overpopulation.
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>>53434445
>run around town all day telling everyone to get the FUCK OUT
I love the way this looks in my head.
It's fucking hilarious.
>>53434866
>>53434879
>>53434896
>>53434913
>>53434935
>pic related
>my love for you
I need an adult...
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>>53435144
Angel needs the real deal.
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>>53435277
>I need an adult...
No, no. It's all good.
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>>53435373
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>>53435373
Pls stop posting that failed shite
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>>53435400

>>53435393
no
fuck you
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>>53435409
no fuk u
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>>53435409
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>>53435400
Do you have quiet's new shit?
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>>53435422

>>53435417
go to hell
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>>53427586
>Settling for a human girlfriend.
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>>53435433

>>53435432
perhaps
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>>53435444
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>>53435458
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>>53435442
>using proper grammar in a green text
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>>53435444
>perhaps
Are you gonna post it?
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>>53435482
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>>53435373

Goddamn, that abuse of Greek letters triggers my autism something fierce.
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>>53431449
It isn't considered it at all. Loli/shota is actually allowed to be posted on /b/, it just doesn't have a specific board anymore because the advertisers threatened us early on (a loli board was actually the third ever created.)
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>>53435497

>>53435493
probably not
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>>53435508
It was made by the shittiest author on 4chan, what do you expect.

>>53435557
Thank you.
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>>53435557
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>>53435488
>Not using proper punctuation and grammar at every opportunity.
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>>53435661
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>>53435673
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>>53435683
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>>53435697
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>>53435713
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>>53435727
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>>53435743
>>
>tfw no waifu to make a family with
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>>53435759

>>53435760
This world doesn't need to increase in population. Better to just adopt.
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>>53435775
>muh overpopulation

Shut up, anti-white faggot.
>>
>>53435798
Hardly a white supremacist. If anything I believe Asians and Indians should stop breeding as much as they are.

Much worse than global warming.
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>>53435775
Overpopulation is an issue in the third world. In the first world, we are actually having an issue with a shrinking population (which is why our traitorous governments are importing africans and muslims as slaves.)
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>>53435819
Yeah no. Population density is absolutely revolting in first world nations.

But you're still right. Africa is having a sickening boom.
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>>53435831
I hope you and everyone who thinks like you do kills themselves in order to make the world a better place.
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>>53435849
Why? Because it's an interesting and very real topic?

The world isn't all lush and green. There are actual issues out there.
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>>53435482
Oh this got revamped huh.

Witch, of course.
Waifish Orphan. Its always the most fun training someone from the very beginning.

Going to sacrifice all 4 focuses for a water elemental. A little weaker than normal but I assume as she grows I'll learn more powers too.

Focus:
> so which one makes her live forever and stay a loli
The Body - Cleanse I guess. Everyone loves a healer right

Perks: Freedom, Sturdy, Cold resistance

Jobs:
Protector. Its pretty hard to kill a blob of water.
Scout. Its pretty hard to catch a blob of water too, even if I'm not particularly fast.
Probably somewhat Mascot too, to a lesser extent.

Events:
Secrets Below. I guess my attack will be stuffing myself down their throats and drowning them. I'll just have to consider it practice for playing with my master.
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>>53435831
>Population density is absolutely revolting in first world nations
Yeah, no. They're not that crowded unless you're a deer. Hell, America is practically fucking empty.
>>
Whatever Happen to Fairy King CYOA?
>>
>>53435831
The governments disagree with you, which is the issue. Don't advocate westerners don't breed when that just means their governments replace the population with third worlders. That only makes thinks worse and leads to the extinction of the natives.
>>
Doesn't mean that adoption isn't a valid option for those of us who want to rear a spawn, but also want to skip the lumpy vomiting potato phase.
>>
I can't wait for all you white whiny faggots to become a minority and die off.
>>
>>53435971
Good luck with that.
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>>53435949
Skipping that phase means no parental bond with the brat.
>>
>>53435906
It just ain't done yet anon.
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>>53435905
You're an idiot.
>>
>>53435971
The same wave of social justice that downed us in that moment will become our shields. Such is the nature of the shifting tides.
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>>53435971
Yeah, hate the race that defined the modern world as a whole right?

Moron.
>>
>>53436031
Are you being stupid just to get people to correct you?
>>
>>53436031
Less than 40% of the USA is populated, Anon.
And that is not counting Alaska.
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>>53436073
He probably is considering we're on page 10 with no new thread. Encourages people to shitpost.
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>>53436092
>tfw no waifu to shitpost with
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>>53431523
Why would I want a CYOA about my normal life?
>>
>>53436031
The entire continent of Europe has 500 million people. India is projected to top out at around four times that much. At least 2 billion. The US, on the other hand, has only 300 million people.
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>>53436078
I'm not that anon, and I'm not saying that the USA is overpopulated, but I have never seen someone argue that the problem of overpopulation is a matter of area occupation.
Usually the argument is about use of resources.
>>
>>53436151

Not really a problem, honestly.
The US could actually sustain itself on everything but luxury goods, Europe could the same, even China theoretically could if it wasn't for their insane Stalin-era agricultural policies.
The problem really isn't a lack of resources, the problem is how society views and uses those resources.
>>
>>53436111
This is cute.
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>>53436143
Which is exactly why Asians needs to stop breeding

They already don't know how to handle themselves. Other than Japan, South Korea and Singapore of course.
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>>53436213
I love brawler couple.
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>>53436216
>Indians
>Asians
>>
>>53436263
>India is in Asia
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>>53436151
Because you haven't been in many serious arguments without biased people. The truth is that only the third world has this accelerating population growth in the face of everyone else having a falling population. And again, I don't disagree that the falling population wouldn't be a problem... except that the governments are obsessed with eternal growth and are getting rid of the locals for more fertile foreigners.
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>>53436284
The racial term Asian is for east and southeast asians, not Indians. Indians aren't even fucking related to them.
>>
>>53436303
So they're still technically Asian?

The PC term is East Asian by the way.
Check your privilege.
>>
>>53436321
>Being a Bong
Or a retard, I suppose.
>>
>>53436303
Indians are the same as whites. Caucasoid. Yet they're in Asia.

So they're Asian.
>>
>>53436349
Indians are in India. So they are Indians. Don't be a retard, anon.
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>>53436349
Also, wouldn't call them the same as whites, considering that 20 to 50% of their blood is Dravidian rather than Caucasoid. Classed the same or not.
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>>53436358
India is in Asia.

So Indians are Asian.
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>>53436370
Indians and whites are both Caucasoid.

You're also not using Dravidian in the correct manner.
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>>53436303
>>53436321
>>53436344
>>53436349

I think this is a British/American thing; in Britian 'Asian' usually means 'turbans and snake-charmers', whereas in America it almost always means 'kimonos and samurais'.
>>
>>53436321
>So they're still technically Asian?
>>53436349
>So they're Asian.
>>53436372
>So Indians are Asian.

Technically, the when speaking of them by LAND, they are Oriental, not Asian.
Because Asia is so huge, it is subdivided into the Middle-East, the Orient, Siberia, and East Asia, for this specific purpose.
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>>53436370
>Dravidian
>Caucasoid

Wrong context buddy
>>
>how many different ways can anon be retarded AND racist?!
>number 9 probably wont surprise you!
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>>53436372
Contrarian shitposter, got it.

>>53436399
Liberals want to associate a positively viewed minority with one that's full of rapists and murderers, basically.
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>>53436404

So they're all Asian? Gotcha
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>>53436399
generally this is true
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>>53436406
Serious question: What does racist mean?
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>>53436388
Did I deny that? I said I wouldn't call them the same as whites.

>>53436405
>Dravidian rather than Caucasoid
Can you read, retard?
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>>53436433
>I said I wouldn't call them the same as whites.

They technically are the same.
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>>53436450
Considering that around half of their DNA is from non-caucasoid sources, no they're not.
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>>53436418
>Liberals want to associate a positively viewed minority with one that's full of rapists and murderers, basically.

I think it's just that Britain has a much larger population of Asians (turban variety) than Asians (samurai variety), whereas in America the reverse is true.
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>>53436421
No, since you are so dumb, I will spell out what Anon is saying for you:
There is technically no people group by the name of 'Asian'.
There is 'East Asian', 'Oriental', 'Siberian', and 'Middle Eastern'.
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This is the graph corresponding to the main races.

India is predominantly Caucasoid with mixtures of Mongoloid and Australoid.
Whites, Middle-Easterners and Indians are all at the stem of things, the same.

This is my only comment on the pointless topic.
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>>53436428
Racism is a word that is used against against whites who want to fight back against white genocide.

Racism is also used against white people who don't believe in the fairy tale of racial equality. Anybody who has taken an honest look at black people knows they are little better than chimpanzees.
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>>53436482

They're all in Asia.

Therefore they're Asian.
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>>53436487
>Predominantly
The average indo-aryan is around 50% Dravidian, aka Australoid. They're half and half, not predominately anything.
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>>53436523
It's actually a bit less so than that. But you're more or less correct.

The predominant aspect of Caucasian descent is quite blatant even today.
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>>53436539
>you're more or less correct.
>Goes on to continue claiming them to be 'predominantly Caucasian'
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>>53436497
By that measure, Russians are Asians.
>>
>>53436523
Dravidians are considered a separate race in India.
>>
Can we all stop arguing and just agree that england is shit at tea? I mean, if you have to drown your tea in milk and sugar, you don't like tea or your tea is shit.
>>
>>53436549
No. You are correct. The Dravidian race is a mixture of east and west, but it's not a perfect split.
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>>53436559
I know they are. The fact that I used the term Indo-Aryan and Dravidian should make you aware that I know those two groups exist, along with Tibeto-Burmans.

However in light of all that, all the kinds of Indo-Aryan of all stripes and all castes averaged together? They are 50% Dravidian. Just like all Dravidians averaged together end up being 20% Caucasoid. So again, Indo-Aryans are half and half. Not predominately anything.
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>>53436562
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>>53436562
I want to try bubble tea.
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>>53436576
There is no half and half. Race isn't symmetrical most of the time.

That's the beauty of evolution and cultural change.
>>
I prefer rainy tea myself
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Food for thought regarding white supremacy.

It actually exists.
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>>53436589
You are going to have to explain what you mean. As far as their genome is concerned, it's 50%. Averaged. Individual sub-groups will vary, obviously, those in the North and North West like the Pasha and such are going to be mostly Caucasian. We're simply talking averages.
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>>53436595
What is that?
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>>53436620
Its traditional tea where the leaves are harvested from end of summer. Hence the name refering to the rainy season its produced during
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