/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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>>53261730
Say, sorry if this is a bit dumb but would anyone be interested in a short cyoa where you have an affair? If so, what would you want it to be like and what kind of options would you expect/want? Would you want to customize the girl your cheating with and choose the reason for your fling in the first place as well as what type of affair it might be. Customize your wife as well? IK the topics kinda dumb but reverse NTR and cuckquean shit is my jam and I kinda wanna make a cyoa for the subject.

>>53261799
It'll be fun to make or pick the girl your cheating on too

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>>53261811
Sorry, but I meant to add thats what you'd be doing in the first place.

>>53261815

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>>53261730
WAIFU CYOA WHEN!

>>53261799
>play as a waifu completely powerless to stop her husbando from cheating on her
>choose whether to put on a dignified face and bear it, whether to break down crying at how he doesn't love you anymore and probably never did, or whether to simply deny anything is happening and pretend you still have a wonderful fairytale romance

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posting a personal favorite

>>53261851
Does the mystery box reveal that you were both women?

Does it reveal you were also the husbando?

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Let's get some bizarre adventures going!

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>>53261889

>>53261881
The mystery box would probably reveal that (You) are, to here, merely an idealized hallucination of her husband that can't possibly leave her or hurt her, to cope with the "you" who is causing her such pain in her actual life.

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>>53261912

>>53261799
No. Your shit fetish belongs on /d/.

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>>53261799
You didn't mention it here, but I'm going to point out, that this is this shitposting cancer's fan edit of this CYOA, not the original.

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>>53261963
First time I've seen that CYOA. Someone please post the original.

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>>53261963
Nah man, I'm the real deal. I was just really bored and wanted to do this before starting anything new. I even made another meaningless change to the version number at the top left as well as fix a typo. Just didn't really want to make a big deal out of changing it when i posted is all.

>>53261963
Are you sure you're not just thinking of a CYOA with the same concept?

>>53262012
>>53261963
Though I also want to add that its actually kinda nice you'd consider anyone who defaces my stuff to be a shitposter. Thank you.

Seriously. Kinda made my night.

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>>53262012
>Maker wants to create a cuck CYOA.
That's a pretty good way to ensure everyone will hate your guts.

>>53262022
He posted that he changed it.

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My fave here.

if there a newer version please share.

>>53262030
Oh sure, but now that I know it's you I think you're about as human as a patch of rotten cum on a neet's bedsheet.

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>>53261963
I have this? The only change I noticed is that "shitposting cancer's fan edit" changed the initial description to have you be 12 OR 14 (or around that range) plus some changes in the descriptions of a few of the characters (didn't really examine them in depth).

What did this guy do?

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>>53262060
People should scroll to the end of a thread before posting.

>>53262036
If people will hate it, so be it. Tbh I don't understand why the concept of a girl liking you enough to steal you away from someone else isn't that popular, but oh well.

>>53262051
:^( I thought we wuz bros.

>>53262071
>I don't understand why people don't get off on being disgusting, terrible human beings who want to make their significant other miserable for utterly selfish reasons.
Are you a sociopath?

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>>53262064

>>53262069
I did. It's just that Geenymous posted while I was looking away doing other stuff.

People should be passive-aggressive cunts when there's actually something to be offended about.

>>53261799
This thing is great, especially some of the older sisters. I don't know who to pick.

>>53261851
Forgot the "plot a murder" option.

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>>53261882
Stand Name: Paper Airplanes
Power: Paper Transmutation
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Paper_Transmutation

DP: B (2)
S: B(3)
R: A(5)
D: C(7)
P: C(7)
L: C (8)

It's default form is simply an overly large paper airplane, though it's form is malleable due to its power of paper manipulation, allowing itself to form new bodies. It's total mass however is a consistent 10 kg.

Stand User: Benjamin Harris

Ripped as Fuck: 1
Brojo: 3
Do you even Pose: 4
Plot Armor: 5

Benjamin spent much of his youth as a trouble maker, tormenting anyone who was weaker than him. He felt this was justified as the world had taken his father away from him early. He quickly gained a reputation, and even led a pack of miscreants.
This would have continued had he not learned that one of his favorite targets, a young boy a few years younger than he himself, had contracted leukemia, much like Benjamin's father. Benjamin realized that much like how life had been unfair to him, he had been unfair to others. With what little time the boy had left Benjamin made it his duty to do what he could, though all he could do would be to be there with his former victim.
Seeing this kind of pain changed Benjamin, He made it his duty to right the mistakes that fate dealt to others, with whatever powers he could.

>>53262169
>Plot
Holy shit, if I was actually powerless to stop or divorce him I'd stab him to death the first night I got him into bed.

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>>53261863
>Race
Giant
>Soldier Type
Hybrid - Nano-soldier/Gene-Fighter
>Powers [20]
Psionic Strength 3 [19]
Psionic Juggernaut 3 [16]
Psionic Regeneration 3 [13]
Targeting Computer 3 [10]
Bionic Eyes 3 [7]
Hypertrophy Booster 3 [4]
Biotic Organ 1 [3]
Mind Reading 3 [0]
>Weapons
Melee Sword - Superheavy,Superheated,Monoblade,Vibro-Weapon
Plasma - Bolt Launcher,Vaporizer,Lingering Plasma,Disperser
Ballistic - All Overmodded
>Armor Mods [10]
Cleanser [9]
Waste Disposal [8]
IU Tubes [7]
Servos [6]
Impact Gel [5]
Lightweight [4]
Bullwark [3]
Med-X Shot [2]
Upgrade [1]
Combat Drug Cocktail [0]
>Peasure Mods
Tobacco - Cigars
Radio
>Planets
Mars
Deyphus
Cadyria
Irion
Kamalo
Elduras
Quadroonic
Transyvius
Lazaria
HELL
>Respawning Method
Reconstitution
>Boons
Hybrid
Overmodded
>Drawbacks
Sanity's Eclipse
>Companions
Pharinalia Laotari
Katyusha Isinbayeva
Gerald Boomhauer
Ludrak
Simon Hayes

Weapon Summary
>Plasma "Shotgun" -- Fires a packet of super-heated plasma. Ammo is small containers or "shells" of gas that is converted into plasma before firing. Holds 10 rounds
>Superdense Blade -- 45in long, this vibro-blade of hyperdense alloys is contained in a specialized storage unit on the back of the armor, around the left shoulder, that super heats it before use
>Micro Gatling -- mounted on robotic gimble arm on back that helps to stabilize the weapon while firing as well as providing easy storage, it has scope linked to armor targeting system, the twin linked gause barrels fire are housed in 6 triangular casings that house the magnetics required for operation and are aranged in an over under configuration crating a total of 12 barrels. The weapon fires a specialized 12mm round

Hey DSA, are you here?

Does anyone have that genie gallery cyoa where one of the wishes grants the user a Stand called [What Does The Fox Say] that controls electricity (I think) and can change its stats in a kind of trade-off set up, like losing personality for becoming long range or becoming short range for more power, that sort of thing?

I went through my folder and out of the dozens of gallery genie cyoas I have saved, that particular one seems to be basically the only one I *didn't* save somehow...

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>>53262071
Anon, I will love it if you make a cuck CYOA, do it. Make your dreams become true. I'll make a build for it.

By the way are you the author of the incest one that you posted? I always wondered, is Grace into the player? She seems too caring to be that way.

>>53262289
You're incapable of love if you want disgusting trash like that.

>>53262289
She's as into you as you want her to be when you pick her!

And thank you very much man.

>>53262292
Sorry anon, I just get really hard thinking about having a girl who'll dedicate her life to me, give herself to me body and soul, and forcing her to go through the pain of knowing I'm with someone else.

>>53261730
I'm making a Battered Waifu Shelter CYOA where you choose girls who have been abused and help them recover from their psychological scars.

What kind of abuse would a waifu face from a lover that I should feature?

>>53262292
What if anon is just an anime villain and can only display love by causing others despair?

>>53262317
Yes, again, you are a sociopath. It's one thing to want a bunch of people hanging off your dick, it's another to actively get off on the idea of making someone who loves you suffer because of it.

>>53262330
Used goods aren't very popular here, anon. Prepare to get like, no builds. At least you're not the guy trying to make cuckshit.

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On the final page. How's the rooster look?

>>53262398
Like an utter cock.

>>53262330
>Sensory deprivation that left her craving touch.
>Being left in isolation for so long that she gets panic attacks when she's not in someone's presence.
>Former shock collar training that left her with an irresistible and pathological urge to mindlessly do housework at random times.

>>53262330
Abuse from a man who wanted his potatoes salty, goddammit.

>>53262330
Be the the girl that got cucked by >>53262317

>>53262182
The hero option companionship is some seriously busted stuff if you abuse it correctly.

Take a Cauldron companion and spec them with one of their broken strong abilities and some backup ones then proceed to load them down with vials.

Have two Vigilante companions who take the humble beginnings drawbacks and then give them free upgraded abilities.

Hell, remaking the old Jack of All Trades companion from the last version with this makes him downright scary.

All the first options and throw No-Clip, Mirror Image, Proficiency, and Repair makes someone who can see and travel through matter, able to use any object like a master and either combine them into a better makeshift weapon or upgrade it even if it's already tinkertech, use infinite ammo with said upgraded weapons, have a pocket dimension to hold all his weapons and tinkertech, never run out of stamina, able to resist masters, and make a dozen or so clones who can do everything he can do.

>>53262398
I don't know who is this ??? fellow but i want it on my team

>>53261789
Let's see here
>008, Zombie Virus, Keter
>447, ball of green slime, keter
>173, The Original, Safe
>500, The Panacea, Safe
>889, Hybridization, Euclid
>914, The Clockworks, Euclid

WHO THE FUCK THOUGHT THIS WAS A GOOD IDEA?
>plague doctor
>Tickle Monster
>Dimension hopper

Just fuck my shit up senpai

>>53262330
Maybe a girl who has some physical sign of her abuse that she's ashamed of and reminds her of what happened?

>>53262459
Player choice, go fucking nuts, but only physical choices matter. No powers carry over and must be reasonably sized. Less than 12ft in any direction.

>>53262485
Make her burnt over a significant portion of her body. People seem to like bacon waifus.

>>53262330

I happen to enjoy caring for someone/making friends instead of being an asshole/dominating people, friends and adventure are where its at in CYOA, so keep up the good work and I assure you people will enjoy your creativity.
>>53262371 seems to be a bit of a peckerhead, ignore him.

>>53262500
Have you ever run your dick across a scar m8?
Feels fucking wonderful.

>>53262503
I'm not telling him he can't make it, I'm giving him a fair warning that it probably won't be popular. I bare no grudge against him or his concept, though I think psychologically damaged women aren't worth the effort an won't build for it myself.

>>53262522
What if dick is scar?

>>53262538
Then dick no longer work most likely.

>>53262545
Sad

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>>53261730
Oh, hey, if anyone's interested there is another CYOA thread going on another board.

>>>/d/7422457

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>>53262279

This one?

>>53262535
I understand what you mean and take no offense. It's understandable that some people wouldn't feel attracted to this kind of scenario.

>>53262417
>Thinking she would leave me
No anon, I would constantly keep her hopes up that there would be a chance that I could change, and that we could fix all the mistakes and start over

>>53262570
>Infinite plane of smug
Is this where SDA comes from?

>>53262557
We know about it. It's just that it has as much to do with us as jumpchain, so we don't talk about it.

>>53262570
Thank you, yes. Even dumber than I remember, but at least it's out of my head now and won't keep bugging me trying to recall it.

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>>53261882
Stand Name: Big Shot
Power: Growth Manipulation
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Growth_Manipulation

DP: A (-2)
S: C (-1)
R: D (-1)
D: B (-1)
P: C (-1)
L: A (-2)

The stand's eyes are equipped with variable focus eyeglasses. If a target is in range of the glasses, different lenses will have different effects (one grows, one shrinks). The stand itself can change its size, though getting too large or too small causes strain on the user.

Stand User: Bran "Big" Boppah

Ripped As Fuck: 1
Mentor: 1
Sharp Dresser: 1
Pose: 1
Plot Armor: 4 (if I die, it's for the greater good)

A seemingly gentle giant, Bran Bopper travels from town to town, city to city, selling his wares. He sells exquisitely detailed miniatures, artistic works that reflect a profound, unique skill - surely no other human hand could craft perfect replicas on such a small scale.

In reality, he is following rumors of strange and unexplainable events (people disappearing, reports of bizarre abilities, etc.) looking for other stand users, helping where he can and bringing justice where he must. He carries pictures of a woman he refuses to name.

In his travels, he happens upon the Jojo of the story, following the most disturbing rumor he's heard yet...

>>53261799
I'd rather have a cyoa where my wife pimps me out

>>53262620
SDA is just a protrusion of the Infinite Plane of Smug into this universe. Like the Orz.

>>53262570
"N-Nyani?!" is far more appealing than it has any right to be.

Questions about the Mindslaver CYOA:

How small can shrink make someone?
With Self-Hypnosis I can shrink myself too, correct?
Mind-Control works on Animals, and more specifically, Ants?
Assuming all are true, I can become Antman.

>>53262867
Any size
Yes, that's the point of it
As long as they're mortal

>>53261789
Mystery box when?

>>53261882
Are Stand-users always protected from the powers of their own Stand?
Is it possible for a Stand to not be consciously controllable and operate on subconscious orders?

>>53262867
>Taking lewd powers and becoming a superhero.
I approve, anon.

>>53262981
If you a bitch nigga your stand will not listen to you. If you REALLY a bitch nigga your stand will kill you. Unless otherwise stated you are not immune to yourself.

>>53263008
Sorry, I don't speak ebonics.
It's not a real language.

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>>53261882
Stand Name: 「Same Old Sun」
Power: Eternal Day Inducement
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Eternal_Day_Inducement

Destructive Power: C
Speed: C (-2)
Range: A (-2)
Durability: A (-2)
Precision: B (-2)
Potential: D

「Same Old Sun」has, essentially, the ability to prevent the sun from moving in the sky. It's a pretty terrible power, all things considered. It doesn't actually affect the flow of time; it just makes it so that the light entering a specific area looks exactly the same as when the Stand activated its power. The Stand itself takes the form of a 10-inch-tall cartoonish humanoid made out of flame.

Stand User: Elliott Stuart

Ripped as Fuck (-1)
Minor Villain (-1)
Sharp Dresser (-1)
Do You Even Pose? (-1)
Plot Armor x2 (-2)

Elliott isn't really a villain, per se - he's just a normal guy who ended up with a strange power he doesn't know what to do with. So, naturally, he uses it to make life more convenient for himself, with not much concern for how it'll affect others. Like delaying the sunset for half an hour so he can walk home in daylight, for example. This will result in predictions for the area he chooses to affect being markedly off from the actual setting time, noticeably so. However, he's also the sort of guy who'd definitely stop after being told that people can actually tell what he's doing. His arc would most likely involve him inconveniencing the main crowd several times in humorous ways, until they find and confront him at which point he admits it was him and says he won't do it again. He'll be willing to use his power on the main characters' behalf, though he has no idea what good he can actually do with the ability to stop the sun.

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>>53262330

A girl who grew up on the battle field and doesn't know what kindness is and doesn't think she is fit to be a mother but wants too

>>53262981
Stand-users are often, but not always, protected from the effects of their own Stand.
It's possible to have a subconscious Stand, and Stands with varying degrees of control, from "Tell me what to do, Master" to "Oh hey, I wanted to punch that and my Stand did it for me" to "Huh, I wanted that guy to stop being loud but my Stand didn't have to go and smash his cell phone or anything, jeez" to "Holy shit this Stand thing I can summon won't do anything I say"

>>53262330
used goods CYOA? Why not just make them abused or scarred from other sources?

>>53263037
If you happen to be a gentleman of weak physiological persuasion your Stand will revolt against you. If you happen to be a gentleman of especially weak physiological persuasion your Stand will slay you. Unless otherwise stated you are not immune to yourself.

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>>53262182
>Gold Morning (10/10)
>Vigilante
>Drop-In (13/13)
>No Identity (15/13)
>Budget Costume

>Dead Shard (15/16)
>Worst Day Ever (17/17)
>Numbed Emotions (17/19)
>Second Trigger (13/16)
>Negentropy (8/11)

>Powers
Regeneration (second trigger) (8/1)
Pocket Room (8/0)
Repair (8/-2)
Power Sight (8/-3)
Fake Death (8/-4)

>Vigilante
Ambivalent (12/0)
Tinkertech (8/0)
Sniper Rifle (5/0)

>Skills
Marksmanship (0/0)

Immortal, which is good because he’s hated by everyone with power. Of course the fact that people know he’s immortal doesn’t stop them from believing they’ve killed him every single time. Throws on a different generic mask and everyone assumes it’s a different guy - it can’t possibly be the dead guy, after all.

Has some misc Tinker tech he stores in a pocket dimension. He’s competent to maintain it along with anything else he finds.

Keeps all the warlords in line, since he’s especially good at countering capes.

>>53263145
It wouldn't work as well with what I want to do.

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>>53261882
Stand:「We Built This City」
Power: Grid Manipulation

Destructive Power: A
Speed: D
Range: A
Durability: A
Precision: B
Development Potential: B

This stand appears as a glowing tron-ish framework of construction equipment and half-built buildings, like some kind of living blueprint over the targeted area. When active, machinery shudders to life and designs change, shifting and changing whatever grid's been targeted into something more to the liking of the user.

Capable of fucking around with anything stored on a grid, this stand is particularly powerful these days, thanks to the existence of spreadsheets and blocky urban planning. Try not to get crushed by the metropole around you, for the massive tangle of organized society is the place with the most fuel for this thing.

>Ripped As Fuck
>Villain
>Sharp Dresser
>Do You Even Pose

Hank Adams is, or was, a frustrated bureaucrat. Everything in this city, if not the entire country seems to be organized so ineffectively. He's got a keen eye for urban planning, and seethes at the mistakes of his predecessors and his colleagues. He's dumbfounded at their choices, that they couldn't see the inevitable consequences of their actions. Of course zoning that there would raise crime rates among this demographic! Of course building those over there would go way over budget and not really solve the problem! He's angry, bitter, arrogant, and strongly believes all mankind's problems could be solved through some good planning and not giving a damn about any complaints. They'll be thanking, no, praising whoever manages to do it when it's done, so why listen? Course, he was just a mid-ranking bureaucrat, so there's not much he could do.

And then he got a Stand.

Requesting more fantasy/medieval themed CYOAs. Sick of anime and modern stuff.

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>>53263373
>Sick of anime
Well, at least this isn't too anime

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>>53263536
2/2

>>53263553
>>53263536
I enjoyed these, thank you

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>>53263373
Have some stupid shit.

>>53261799
Kys cuck

Does anyone have that CYOA that was like Royal Revival but instead of your onee-chan it was some cool bro bringing you back and you had to pick what kind of person you were as a kid?

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>>53261799
>yfw when Castiel fails at being your guardian angel and sets you up with a waifu family

>>53264027
Castiel is kind of a fuck-up.
AND he's just autistic enough to not understand the implications behind the choices he has set up.

>>53262570
Reading this makes me miss the Genie CYOAs. Those were fun even if I kept missing them.

>>53263847
REEEEE stop using cuck to mean someone who's cucking someone else. You're using it in a way that's not the exact dictionary definition, and as such no one can understand what you mean REEEEE

>>53264288
Does it take practice to act this retarded, or are you a natural?

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>>53262182
Name: The Jackel
Setting: Gestation 15c 15s(real value 20, see Vial)
Path: Vigilante
Gifts: Metaknowledge
Entry: Drop-in, no identity 20c 23s
Targets: Ambivalent 24c 27s
Costume: Budget

Flaws: Case 53 III 30s with skin a deep shade of blue and eyes an almost glowing red, The Jackel stands out in a crowd, constantly breathing out abit of steam as if frozen internally
Worst Day Ever II 26c 32s
Psychic Nosebleed 35s
Numbed emotion 37s
Humble beginnings 31c 42s
Nemesis 34c
Endbringer target 39c 46s

Skills: Marksman 34c
Banter 33c
Hacking 32c
Mechanic 30c
Shard: Foreign 29c 43s
Powers: Macgyver+ 42s
Repair+ 40s
Radar+ 38s
Training Montage+ 31s
Masquarade+ 21s
Protocols 20s
Perks: Negatropy 22c 15s
Second trigger V 2c 0s
Cauldron Vial "Experiment 37-Q" 0c

>>53261799
I'd be interested in seeing that CYOA. If you think the shit storm here would be too much you could always post it in the /d/ cyoa thread.

>>53263373
This x1000
Sick of anime and (((romance))) shit
There should be separate general for actual quality CYOA's and a containment one for waifushit

Anybody have that one super soldier cyborg CYOA that looks like an anatomy textbook, with the scarily realistic drawings? If you could share that here with all of us that'd be great!

>>53262981
There are what's called independent stands that operate outside the users will. The user is nothing more than somebody that managed to bring it into the world and is at risk getting exposed to it. Harming an independent stand won't have any effect on the user.

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>>53261730
>>53255139
>Be the Saber Mode
>Roll Your Servant Edition.
In a hurry, so rolz for the whole set.

True Neutral Alignment.
>Sakura Saber Archetype
Kind, Cool, Resolute, Friendly and Cheerful.
>Berserker Class

>Androgynous Appearance
>Sensuous Impressions
>Adult Saber
>Singular Long Ahoge

Suit&Tie or Uniform for modern settings, but Scantily Clad for combat.

ST=E (0)
AG=C (3)
LK=EX (23)
ED=C (3)
MG=B (7)
NP=A (13)

Independent Action EX (26)
Mad Enhancement B (Class)
Riding D (4)

Mana Burst EX (25)
Clairvoyance EX (25)

EX Noble Phantasm (25 points from A Rank)
Anti-Team Ability: We're All Mad Here. When struck with a Mana Burst used while the Berserker is under the effects of Mad Enhancement, she subjects the target to the negative aspects of the Mad Enhancement while being relieved of it herself. Given that this can be applied to multiple targets, and used in combination of perfected Clairvoyant predictions, this allows her to act with perfect clarity despite the Mad Enhancement's usual parameters and instead empowering herself , siphoning mana from their madness and even warping and twisting their magic circuitry. This might not ruin a mage's potential, but it will likely change it from what it was.

+2 Enhancement Conditions. Anti-World Ability. This Phantasm allows the Berserker to maintain herself indefinitely; thriving off of confusion and strife present in the world around her, reaching out as far as she can envision, though results are more immediate if focused locally. A steady stream of mana wrought from the discord of the world at large will keep this servant stable and prevents her mana reserves from ever dipping despite excessive use of the Mana Burst ability and Phantasm aspects.

>>53264798
Picking be the saber gives you independent action ex for free.

>>53264869
Whoops, missed that. Where's it stated on the page?

>>53264897
It isn't. It was mentioned in a past thread.

>>53264757
Watch what you say, or all CYOAs will be cast out into a containment board.

Oh wait, no they won't. Because not enough content is generated and nobody gives a fuck except for whiny shits like you.

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Has cyoag ever bullied you?

>>53264954
Sadly no.

>>53264902
In that case, raise Mad Enhancement up to EX, Ride up to B, then add item creation (reinforcement) and Avenger at E each. Adding more parameter boosts and letting me wield anything on hand if I should need a weapon other than crazy and luck-boosted cuhrayzee.

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>>53263373
One thing that puzzles me about this is that there doesn't seem to be any reason to actually encourage adventurers to attack your dungeon. Power Backup states "Having and unfruitful fountain may persuade adventurers to go somewhere else instead" and since you explicitly gain power from not having your fountain fucked with, 'winning' strategy would seem to be to having as many Backups as you can afford and minimal defenses, so that even endless stream of adventurers running in to take a sip from your fountain actually make no dent to your XP.

However, the wizard, the lore and the design of cyoa kinda make it clear that the dungeons exists for adventurers.

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>>53264954
Once I'm done this CYOA, I hope they bully me senseless all day and night.

>>53265043
>implying you'll ever actually finish it
Don't make me laugh

>>53265033
Most of the builds for this were actually based around being as fuckawful to challenge. Hell, I still remember one guy did exactly what you described, and was a slime boss sitting around a lake of goo, and the rest of the dungeon was as many power backups as possible. I think this particular CYOA spawned the rapist minotaur. I could be wrong though, I have a pretty bad memory.

>>53264757
And what is stopping you from posting them yourself?

>>53261730
the idea here is to become a living stealth fighter jet, use air superiority to destroy enemy with impunity

> creature type
avian, because flight is crucial

> special abilities
multiple limbs, so I can use my arms to wield guns/manipulate electronics while I fly
multiple heads, extra field of view, better resiliency
bio-laser, powerful long range attack, can be used from a high altitude
enhanced senses, important if I'm going to be accurate at long ranges

> missions
budget rangers,
magic girl team,

can assassinate them in their sleep from miles overhead by destroying their homes with laser blasts

> boss perks
enhanced speed, brings speed up to extremely high, giving additional air superiority
enhanced regeneration, when combined with multiple heads gives extreme resiliency
true fade, stealth provides ability to escape, or attack with impunity

>>53265130
I remember another dungeon designer where you were a goblin and in that, you gained years of life every time someone died in your dungeon, so there was reason to encourage people to come in. The rapist minotaur wouldn't work in this kinda system because nobody would want to enter his dungeon. Slime too except they are always written to be immortal by default.

A kinda simple fix to this would be that adventurers entering your dungeon give you XP and adventurers KOed give you more XP. The ratio of XP gained on wiping to XP lost on party winning should be so that even if you lose, as long as you are over 50% victory rate or so, XP flow remains net positive.

That way you are encouraged to make the dungeon tempting to visit but still challenging.

Also, Power Backup should either be removed or follow the same rules as Fountain, in that it must be accessible.

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>>53265129
I-I'll get back to it, then. I'm here forever after all.

>>53262040
>oh boy, a pick a waif-
I CAN'T FUCKING CHOOSE

>>53262330
its like you want to enter my magical realm

godspeed anon

>>53261799
Make it possible to turn the whole thing from "someone is stealing you from your waifu" to "you and your waifu trick women into 'stealing' you as a part of bringing them into your harem".

>>53264869
>>53264902
>>53264897


it dosent

that mould make the archer classredundadnt

it gives you (1) rank in it because you are alive as a servant like Gilgamesh after he is consumed by the grail-mud

>>53263975
Sounds like When Our Worlds Collide. Should be in kit's Google Drive.

>>53262040
Blue is tempting - but Valentia of aragon

>>53262040
>Blues

Train me, please!

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>>53261730
>Reptilian - lizardlike
>increased strength, increased defense, increased speed, bio lazer
>magical girl team, budget rangers
>enhanced defense, enhanced regeneration, gigantism, band of mooks (free)

Strength -very high/ extremely high
Defense- extremely high/ final boss
Speed- moderate

hard as fuck to kill - nigh indestructible. dont know how i feel working for an evil organization, but so long as they stick to saturday morning cartoon evil im game - coworkers are pretty chill too. been assigned to keeping the budget rangers and magical girls busy, dont really have it in me to kill them (assuming i can).

suppose i might as well remove some of the other more bothersome monsters while im at it - cant have them ruining the peace and all that ( i wonder if i can count that as overtime?)

>>53262182
Very nice. Overall I'm probably more impressed by the amazing aesthetic upgrade compared to prior versions than mechanical upgrades, but overall probably a large improvement. t. powergamer

On to criticism: I'm not that bothered by most balance issues or abuses but I thought I'd comment on stuff anyway:

It seems strange that Thinker gives you more power (+3 shard, desc), while Warrior gives 'social' (character) points (Warrior's disadvantage should be that it makes you more conflict driven, but also more able to grow and get more power Thinker shouldn't be more powerful). I do like the fluff for Abaddon, fitting of an outsider, though I kind of wish it was less the 'special snowflake best of everything' option (albeit at a fair cost) and have more costs associated with mysterious third entity.

Cauldron Vials are way, way too good. As it stands, the optimal route half the time (if Cauldron) is to take a cauldron vial, refuse to take any powers, and drink it, because getting x amount of bonus second trigger powers with a base of 20 points and instead spending all your shard points on perks and whatnot (though I understand the intent of the text is to disallow this)

Humble Beginnings seems way too good for what it does. Most people are just going to handwave it away really, especially because it's drawback is very temporary, in a sense, rather than being permanent, much like worst day ever. Nobody is just going to assume 'oh, I guess I die on that day' or "Oh, I guess I die before triggering', which makes them far more attractive than permanent/lengthy disadvantages (nosebleed, emotions, slaughterhouse, etc) you can't just, in a sense, handwave (or take the 'second chance' gift to justify taking). The drawbacks that are permanent seem like the best ones in terms of weighing up choices than extremely temporary things.

>>53263373
but fate IS fantasy anon

>>53265644
>slaughterhouse 9

anything more that a speedbump on the first day

most build turn them into skidmarks

>>53265644
>worst day ever
>permanent

>>53263373
>>53264757
Medieval fantasy is the most boring type of fantasy though.

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Did anyone else make up a story about their village?

Hey, can anyone help me find a CYOA that posted around a week ago?

It's about you picking a new family, with older siblings, parents and little brothers and sisters. Supposed to be very sfw, not the pervy one here...

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>>53265743
This one?

>>53265598

Why do you post the exact same shit everytime

>>53265743
It's Serene Serendipity.

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>>53262182
Repostin

Dont really know Worm, but I like superhero stuff. Having a brief look through I'm quite certain my build is going to tremendously underpowered though.

>Name: Bugbite

>Gold Morning
Seems the most optimistic option, I'm burned out on dark stuff lately
>Hero (So follower x 2, but I'm not going to bother making those right now... though if any other heroes out there want to be my team mate, I'm all ears!)
>Drop In
>No Identity
>Thematic

>Stealth
>Hacking
>Banter

>Foreign Element

>Second Trigger (Shrinking)

>Shrinking (with Second Trigger; I'm assuming shrinking enemies means their strength diminishes appropriately)
>Flight
>Shock and Awe

>Companionship (opening up my potential friends!)

Basically I shrink down and zip about at high speed, clamping on to a hard to reach spot before my enemies notice and shocking the hell out of them, or alternately shrinking them down to 1cm (or smaller or for longer, if thats how the Foreign shard works? Longer would be good) if that'll take them out more effectively (so vs most melee builds). With stealth and hacking on top of my shrinking and flight I should be a good infiltrator and spy as well.

>>53265751
God bless, I think that's the one!

It has more parts right? You're a life saver, anon.

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>>53265751

>>53265743
>>53265751
>supposed to be sfw, not pervy
>only shotadom cyoa in existence

Pick one.

>>53262182
On powers: Jump's second trigger cost is a meme, immunity is a meme, pocket room is a meme... basically, it feels like there was a design shift part way through, where while initially second trigger powers seem balanced for the same price as their original, later on they swap to being balanced for a flat three (plus four character points) cost.

Personal Forcefield is garbage. I'm aware it blocks everything right up to golden light beams. It's still garbage. I feel like Flight could be the second trigger for Jump, since Flight's second trigger is also a meme choice.

Stark Winter is an odd example in that it's kind of 'eh' without second trigger but quite solid (on-sight instagib) w/ second trigger, and a lot of powers that are higher level somewhat overvalue second trigger (same with how the low level ones massively undervalue it). Omnicombustion seems worthless without the second trigger, too. Do You Even Lift, while amusing, would be rather weak even if it was just pure strength, and is complete garbage without it, the trigger being even worse. Temporal Bubble is odd: your time stop only lasts for ten minutes, but what stops you from just using it again? Nothing? Needing to be nearby? Rocky seems weak. Maybe I'm wrong. Machine Spirit seems overpriced, compare it to Augmentation (Trigger) or Technopathy for similar. It does have it's advantages, but still. (It's also cool). Offscreen travel seems far worse than blink, both with and without the second trigger (pictures? live camera feed? both give a longer range, you can explicitly bring people with you, can telefrag versus losing the drawback... not mattering if witnessed? Blink is so much better it feels like a huge mistake and they should be swapped in position). Respawns second trigger benefit seems odd, something like choosing location or something might be better. X-ray vision is another meme second trigger, immediately followed by one that is actually worth the cost (profiency - omnicompetence).

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>>53265770
>>53265769
It's 7 pages in total.

>>53265771
Okay, so it's not AS pervy as the other ones.

By comparison its practically mild.

>>53265757
whenever i make a build i save it - im just reposting that same build

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>>53262182
Golden Age

Vigilante

Insert
Male
Teenager
>I'd pick Drop in, but I'm quadriplegic and don't want to drop out of the sky and wake up crumpled in the street with no way to move.

High Schooler

Body Suit (9b)
Strategy (4b)

Dead Shard (23r)

Second Trigger (0b 20r)
Case 53 (21r)
Plot Convenience (-1b)
Secret Lair (-3b)

Plot Relevance

Perpetuance (-4r)

Ambivalent (1b 0r)

Blade (0b)

Is perpetuance the ability to completely stop time if you want or just slightly manipulate it?

If I were to take psychic nosebleed, it would only trigger when i altered my gravity, mass, or stopped time, right? i would be constantly passing out just by living?

Is it only my own gravity/mass? or can i effect an area around me?

I like this CYOA a lot, but i wish i could get more points somehow.

>>53261730
Str Final Boss
Defence med
Speed low
Reptile

Increased Strength, Camoflauge, Natural Weapon (Chameleon Tongue), Venom

Budget Rangers, Magical Girl Team, Infiltration

7
Enhanced Strength 2
Absorption 1
Enhanced Regeneration 1
Shadow Step 1
True Fade 2

As a giant chameleon-man with the strength to throw small buildings, minor teleportation, a grappling tongue, crazy invisibility powers, and an insanely deadly venom coming out of my claws, teeth, tongue, and elbows (don't ask), I am regularly deployed for assassination and infiltration missions. While other, more flamboyant villains parade around the front lines, I instead stroll right in to where I shouldn't be, wreck untold havoc for a few minutes, then poof away. Few things can withstand more than one or two hits from me. I'm pretty squishy, but have a nasty habit of coming back if any bits of me are left.

>>53265688
Well... could you post yours? I'm curious.

>>53265764
>though if any other heroes out there want to be my team mate
What would synergise well with your build? I was toying with a support build but it's hard to pick powers.

Does anyone know what the situation is after the Gold Morning? Do
people need food, electricity...?

>>53265873
bad

>>53265873
This is just sad.

And I don't understand why you want sad, anon.

>>53265879
sad is good

but this isn't making fun of anybody in the thread and that is bad

>>53265665
I phrased it wrong? or I meant that it isn't. Sorry.

>>53265660
That's a fair point, though not for the reasons I intended. Keep in mind every single build might not be a combat monster intended to be able to turn the S9 into a speedbump (though amusingly, it's mostly blindspot depending on reading / abbaddon that would make it possible, without that you're in trouble thanks to Jack).

Anyway, continuing with powers: Ammo is a meme (I don't see 3 points being worth homing bullets, but I'm probably wrong), Radar second trigger is extremely specific but also guarantees being best in a sense which is kind of cool, and Augmentation is also very solid... but a lot of the other tinker options are ???. Small arms and Armoured Warfare both seem to just be arbitrarily nerfed to try and justify a second trigger, as both are... mediocre without it (they're also boring, very - most tinkers would have small arms, etc anyway). Being ahead 'a few decades' is kind of... well, the difference between an AK47 and an AK74? I feel like given standard tinkers shown in the setting, both second triggers should just be incorporated in to the base (and AFV changed to not just be 'more modern Abrams with efficient electric battery and air conditioning). AFV with Second Trigger seems flat out worse than Robotics, for instance. Fortification seems... bad and boring. Ace Combat option when? Incorporate Homing System as an upgrade to Bullet Hell or maybe vice versa. The current system with drawback of 'you start attacking the person' if you don't have the second trigger is bizarre. Just have nanomachines second trigger let you break the president in two with your bare hands. Power sight, if I'm understanding this right, is an actual one point power that doesn't feel like a meme with second trigger and if anything is undercosted for it (cough jack slash cough). Survivalism is just as garbage as it was last time. Mist Shift... Shadow Stalker sucks. Sorry. Cool though.

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Hey guys, anon that was starting a Beastrider CYOA here; I could use some advice.

I've gotten a start on the writing, but I'm worried it getting a little too lore heavy; I'm looking at about 300 words per mount and thats not even getting into explaining the setting. At the moment I've got five mounts, five gear sets, five companions and five quests either written or roughly outlined.

My question is two fold: Would you prefer a more detailed CYOA (in terms of lore and "in game reasoning", aka why the dragon isn't automatically the best choice even though it stomps everything in combat) with less choices to make, or more choices and a more generic, open ended setting?

The second question is, when it comes to describing the mounts (and stuff in general I
guess) would you prefer
>a) longer text explaining things in detail
>b) A brief blurb followed by stats (ie Spd 5, Stt 2 etc)
>c) A brief blurb followed by pros/cons (+Fast, +Loyal, -Fragile, -Gluttonous)

Thats not even getting into learning photoshop or gimp but I'll cross that bridge when I come to it

>>53265906
>why the dragon isn't automatically the best choice
It's your setting, you can have a chicken and call it a dragon, people will complain but that's how it is.
>more detailed CYOA
>>a) longer text explaining things in detail
This.

>>53265906
Less choices with more detail is definitely better IMO. Look at the clusterfuck that is Stardust CYOA's companion section.

That said, remember why someone's gonna be picking each kinda mount, and play to that. Like someone going full dragon is gonna be drawn by the allure of the Big Dick of the mythical world.

And A) all the way. B) is the worst.

Obviously there will be people who completely disagree with me on every count. Some people prefer choice, and some people prefer stats.

>>53265906
To your first question: I suppose that depends on whether I like your writing.

Also I like c) and hate b). I find stats discouraging and I'm not the only one.

>>53265859
If you want points, pick villain and proceed to have a fucking awful first day.

Villain
Drop-In (3,3)
No Identity (5,3)
Abaddon (2,0)
Rough Start x 3 (11,0)
Case 53 x 2 (11,4)
Worst Day Ever x 3 (20,10)
Humble Beginnings (26,16)
Bird Caged (31,21)

simple shitty start that ends with you in prison with around 35-40 shard tokens to break yourself with. Hell if you really wanted to break yourself you could do all that, but replace Abaddon with Eden (27), another case 53 (29), unruly passenger (34), slaughterhouse 9 (37), endbringer target (42), stack that on gestation (57) and you would have enough oomph to take 2 25 shard abilities AND be able to second trigger them.

>>53265873
CYOA about abusing Unsalted potatoes when?

>>53262182
Cloak is absolute garbage without second trigger. Nobody would really take the power without it, I imagine, due to comparative boosts. Adaption and Unlimited Shard Works second trigger boosts are wew. Some powers just seem like they're complete utter garbage without the second trigger but solid with it, some seem like they're solid on their own (jump) but their second trigger is a joke - typically based on their cost (like at one point, second trigger was just going to be 'buy the power a second time' or something to balance it). Combo seems like a joke for the cost, as does Accelerated Decay.

Now, origins. I really, really, really love what you've done with origins and it's probably my favourite part of the new version, how well they've been fleshed out. All I can really criticise is that Villain seems really centralized to BB, while Hero seems to be national. Like an odd tone switch at some point? I'd recommend swapping villain groups mentioned to be those with a larger 'scope', (Gesellschaft, Elite, etc) but they're not really featured much in worm proper and it's probably fine as it is anyway.

tl;dr my sum criticism of the cyoa amounts to 'odd weighting with second trigger, often being either necessary for a power not to be awful or completely worthless on an otherwise useful power, tinker choices swap between cool and interesting and bizarrely narrow and boring ('guns' 'tanks' 'buildings' 'nanomachines' 'genetics' 'cybernetics and robots' - some of these are obviously good, some of them are obviously terrible.'

Anyway, it's a great cyoa and I'm just autistic as fuck.

>>53261799
Yes please make this
We need another thread to hit 1k posts

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>>53265934
>It's your setting, you can have a chicken and call it a dragon, people will complain but that's how it is.
Thats true. Dragons ARE going to be the strongest choice as far as power goes by a good margin, but has the most social drawbacks (and a few perks).
>>53265938
>>53265950
Thanks guys, I'll keep that in mind. I suppose theres no sense seconf guessing too much anyway, I'd be better off making an okay CYOA and learning to do better the next time than constantly rewriting and never finishing anything at all.

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>>53261799
My brother from another mother!

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>>53266175
All of this Planar Chart and At the Edge of Time CYOAs when?

>>53266278
>picture

Is this supposed to be sad?

In cyoas that give you immense powers, do your beliefs on morality change? In other words, do you still hold the same moral beliefs as a regular human when you become a demigod incarnate?

>>53266324
OF COURSHE

>>53265905
>thanks to Jack
correct me if im wrong - but isnt jacks thing just extending the edge of his knives via space warping? most of the higher end brute powers (especially broken limiter) would just laugh at him

>>53266324
No. It's not logical to hold the neighbourhood NEET and someone who can cure cancer with a thought to the same moral standards.

In a setting with superpowers, true equality is impossible.

>>53266356
"True" equality is impossible in real life.

>>53266267
You should do whatever you think is best. You'll find it more fun, and do it better anyway.
>>53266324
>do you still stay a human if you stay a human but with more power
Obviously.

>>53266324
yes- moral principles must be absolute

to say that something is now right for you to do because you are powerful suggests that you are a hypocritical coward

>>53261730
>Arthropod – Mantis

> Increased Strength, Increased Speed, Regeneration, Enhanced Senses

>Budget Rangers
Scraping the bottom of the barrel here, huh? I can take them assuming I can take out one or two of them beforehand.

>Magical Girl Team
Why are they tossing girls at me? Are they seriously supposed to be a threat? Right, they won’t get past me. I’ll just send them home with a few more cuts and they can get back to their middle school dance.

>Dark Hero
This one seems like the real deal. Disgruntled former employee? Can I get a suit like that when I get higher ranked? No, I guess it’s none of my business.

>Enhanced Strength, Enhanced Speed, Vibration Blade, Enhanced Regeneration,, Bio-Missiles, Shadow Step

The Organization has been pretty good to me, I was only a body guard until they decided to ramp up my pay grade. Blade Mantis reporting, I’m ordered to guard higher ranked bio-soldiers and other Organization VIP’s and to complete any tasks they give me. I don’t really plan to be committing any atrocities unless ordered so here’s hoping I don’t get punched until I explode or something.

>>53266292
No, it's supposed to make your dick hard and/or be a gender reversal of that "waaah the childhood girl friend I had a crush on fucks someone else" NTR subgenre

>>53266402
>"waaah the childhood girl friend I had a crush on fucks someone else" NTR subgenre
where does this happen outside of hentai? its always the other way round

childhood friend always looses

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>>53266402
Fuck that. I'm playing that childhood friend and getting my man back.

>>53266292
probably

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HERE IT COMES

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>>53266452

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>>53266372
A famous superhero called Recovery Girl has murderraped a young boy. Recovery Girl is known for using her superpowers to save the lives of on average 10 000 people a month. She also provides crucial support to several superhero associations, allowing them to take greater risks and save more people.

Recovery Girl has stated that if she is punished in any way for what she did, she will immediately cease helping people.

She can't be forced to help people. There's no such thing as a slavery or mind control power.

It's your call. You make the verdict. Does Recovery Girl need to be punished or not?

>>53266324
Do I even hold the same moral beliefs as a "regular human"? I'm really not sure.

>>53266464
You call in rapeman to save the day.

>>53266464
yes - a crime is a crime, just like if a charity worker does a bad thing they get punished

>>53266355
No. Spoilers, but Jacks power is 'broadcast'. He can 'broadcast' the edge of a knife, but he's also capable of communicating with other shards.

In practice, this effectively makes him invincible to any other capes because he can communicate with their shards on an instinctive level and know what they're going to do better than they do, and can actually have their shard work against them (subtly). I believe WoG states that this actually includes even Contessa, despite him not being a blindspot.

Taking Abbadon would (presumably) make you immune to this because your shard operates on a fundamentally different level in that instance. Blindspot... depending on how Jack's power works, could help, but it also might do nothing.

>>53266464
Am I a superhero too? Because if so, I'm kicking that Recovery ass.

>>53266355
>>53266483
In practice, this is what makes Jack able to actually lead the Slaughterhouse 9. His ability to coerce his own comrades, all of which are insane serial killers who otherwise would in all likelihood would be capable of working together reasonably and would murder the shit out of each other.

He doesn't know he can do this, though, all instinctive.

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>>53266481
You'd possibly sentence more than a 100 000 people to death though. Is that worth it or are you just selfishly staying true to your beliefs?

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>>53266500

>>53266483
would "is immune to most supernatural effects" deal with his broadcast?

>>53266464
No. You can't hold someone like that accountable in the same way you can a normal person.

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>>53266508

>>53266502
>is it worth maintaining the law equally because a criminal wont save lives anymore?

yes

if a doctor/firefighter/charity worker does a crime they get punished - even if while punished they can no longer help people and as such harm occurs

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>>53266483
>instinctive level and know what they're going to do better than they do,

that is nice, but its not too useful against someone who can travel at a relativistic speed - just because you know they will turn you into mince doesent mean you can get out of the way

Dunno why but I can't upload a simple jpg.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7BuylZWKxemRndCT3VMLWlUaFE/view?usp=drive_web

>>53266531
Doctors and charity workers don't directly save 100 000 + people a year and are easily replaced.

Her value cannot be compared to that of a normal human imo.

>>53262040
Picking Angel and putting a baby in her.
The old fashioned, straight way: Dick in vagina, cum in uterus, child growing in uterus, child going out the vagina and ruining it for good.
>No sex until marriage
Hahaha no. I'm rawdogging her on day two.
>Wants to have lots of children
I'm happy she's honest for once.

>>53266502
In a system where people who save lives and things of that nature were exempt from being punished for crimes, do you have any idea no such corruption that would create? When people have the power to act however they want they will take it. Removing someone's incentive to follow the law is never a good idea

>>53266573
how much corruption*

>>53266567
if metahumans exist then there will be others

and yes, a visionary doctor can save many more than 100,00-+ due to the development of medicines and whatnot

>>53266509
No, probably not, unless the source wasn't from a shard.

Contessa's power, for reference, can be more or less equated to 'wins' and has only one exception that I'm aware of in terms of 'being able to beat everything that isn't a blindspot', and that's Jack.

That said, Jack being an automatic you lose button unless you have Abaddon would be boring, so feel free to do whatever you like if it's creative/interesting/suits you/etc. For reference, he's taken down by a single non-powered mook in power armour (being told to by another character with more plot armour than you can fucking believe that does have a power)... followed by... being hit with a power (!?!?!?). There are workarounds, but just trying to find him and stab him is probably not going to work, unless said immunity would protect you.

>>53266464
The consequences of leaving someone like that above the law are worse in the long run. Raw utilitarianism won't cut it here.

>>53262182
I'm uncomfortably obsessed with your previous version and have been for awhile. I have spent all of my day off of work today making builds for this new version and I regret nothing. Thank you.

I won't go into too many details with my build because I've decided my headcannon for this is that you can trade character points for shard points at a two for one cost as a drop-in... Which I think would be a good addition but I'm not a massive min-maxer so I'm sure others would break it. I can post the 'behind the scenes' math if anybody wants but it's pretty boring.

Anywho, simply put I went with Post Golden morning Drop-in Hero that has Other and companionship. I gave myself three Nemesis' for that sweet 3v3 time. Pretty much everybody has Abaddon because of Post-Golden Morning head cannon.

The build was basically:
7 Surgery (ST)
5 Survivalism
1 Peak Human

Seems like a pretty wormy power to me. Plus it suits me pretty well unfortunately. I always want healy powers because of reasons and this would highlight the 'cost' of that.

First companion is:
10 Replication
3 Fresh Identity (ST)

I like the idea of all the clones being able to keep up different identities and even talking to each other in front of others as 'different people'

Second is:
3 Small Arms (ST)
7 Fortification

Enemies are:
10 Atmosphere Control
3 Flight
1 Immunity

10 Genetics
3 Potion Making (From last version, sue me)

2 Copycat (ST)
5 Perfect Mind (ST)
1 Power Sight

These guys work separately for awhile but are brought together by the copycat mastermind me to wreck my shit. They're all quite powerful and would probably cause me to go full guerilla/run and hide mode to fight them.

Lots of other thoughts but I'm probably running out of space, I never really post so I don't know. I mostly just really wanted to say that you have given me hours -if not days- of excellent thinking time, which is an activity I really enjoy. So... If you're reading this, thank you.

>>53266573
Better than to be exempt of punishment because you're rich or have familial connections. I'd rather see a few loony superheros go free because society has a debt to them, than watch another saudi arabian royal not be punished after rape-torturing a maid abroad.

>>53266607
They'd destroy the fucking world in three days.

>>53266464
She broke the law and must suffer the consequences.
I don't give a fuck she heals people, she's vile scum.

>>53266592
>but just trying to find him and stab him is probably not going to work,

yeah, from what i understand his power allows him to survive through what seems like luck

although flattening the city he is in would probably deal with him - so most endbringer+ tier powers/builds would still kill him

>>53266563
Spoilers ahead, obviously.

No, it is, because the way his power works means he'll know not to be in the area, or your own super speed will inexplicably fail you because Jack's shard told it to, or you'll inexplicably change your mind and decide to go chase some other villain, or... and so on.

There's an example where a character who is completely undetectable, as said by the author, in a position to stab him. They won't, though, because if they tried either they'd get inexplicably detected by their power failing, or they'd change their minds, or... whatever. They'd be guaranteed to fail, though.

The exact same thing would happen in this instance, I imagine.

Worm is bullshit. I like it, but it's bullshit. There's a reason those 25 point powers are included, and there's a reason the author says they're probably not enough for some people.

>>53266613
So what, if the law says that living is a crime, do you kill yourself?

>>53266607
but that's not right either - if those Saudi royals commit a crime within a jurisdiction that is not their own they SHOULD be punished, that's why saudi-arabia is so hated

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Why should superhumans be subject to laws devised by subhumans anyway? Like, for fuck sake establishing a new world order would certainly be the first thing superhumans would do.

>>53266646
becuase morality does not care for capability- what is right is right and what is wrong is wrong, regardless of whether it is done by superman or by robin

>>53266621
No, because his power would explicitly (as put in an example by the author, sigh) mean he wouldn't be in the city that was going to be destroyed.

The exception, of course, is if you don't have a shard. So the moment general normie mcmayhem decides 'right, fuck this' and calls an airstrike on Jack, he dies.

Given his complete lack of other protective abilities, the only reason some PRT mook hasn't just shot this fuckwit in the face yet is about 90mm of plot armour.

The most powerful capes all can't beat this guy, but one random normie off the street with a revolver could.

>>53266646
Unironically this. There's no justice in being a superhero for the current system. You'd just enforce inequality with a superpowered fist.

>>53266657
Right and wrong is subjective.

>>53266657
What morality? Is the current system "moral"? Why should it be followed and/or enforced?

Holy crap GIMP is confusing to a scrub like me

Any good suggestions for tutorials and/or programs that are user friendly for someone bad at this kind of thing but wants to make a CYOA?

I just want to have evenly spaced text boxes and pictures on a pretty background

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>>53266657
Might is right

Might is might

spock
>>53266675
Why?

>>53266452
>the land of Saviria
>capital of one of the most powerful empires
Don't you mean center of an empire? Cities can be capitals, but lands can't AFAIK.

>>53266667
so hes basically immortal - go it

can he actually do damage tho? knives aren't very scary

>>53266667
So anyone with powers tries to attack him, his shard just stops their powers from working? Just like that?

>>53266670
>Not being allowed to murderrape little boys is "inequality"
Really makes you think

>>53266681
No, but the pastebin (SDA's MEGA) has plenty of guides for Photoshop!

>>53266566
Maybe 4chan thinks there's an embedded file or something. Try removing some exif data, or opening the picture in Paint and resaving it, or something.

>>53266682
“All right," said Susan. "I'm not stupid. You're saying humans need... fantasies to make life bearable."

REALLY? AS IF IT WAS SOME KIND OF PINK PILL? NO. HUMANS NEED FANTASY TO BE HUMAN. TO BE THE PLACE WHERE THE FALLING ANGEL MEETS THE RISING APE.

"Tooth fairies? Hogfathers? Little—"

YES. AS PRACTICE. YOU HAVE TO START OUT LEARNING TO BELIEVE THE LITTLE LIES.

"So we can believe the big ones?"

YES. JUSTICE. MERCY. DUTY. THAT SORT OF THING.

"They're not the same at all!"

YOU THINK SO? THEN TAKE THE UNIVERSE AND GRIND IT DOWN TO THE FINEST POWDER AND SIEVE IT THROUGH THE FINEST SIEVE AND THEN SHOW ME ONE ATOM OF JUSTICE, ONE MOLECULE OF MERCY. AND YET—Death waved a hand. AND YET YOU ACT AS IF THERE IS SOME IDEAL ORDER IN THE WORLD, AS IF THERE IS SOME...SOME RIGHTNESS IN THE UNIVERSE BY WHICH IT MAY BE JUDGED.

"Yes, but people have got to believe that, or what's the point—"

MY POINT EXACTLY.”

>>53266680
>morality somehow disappears if you're more powerful
Anon just because the strong might enforce their morals on the weak doesn't mean actual systems of morality don't exist.

If a new world Fundamentalist order declares evolution false and everyone is forced to accept this, does evolution disappear?

>>53266682
Why is water wet?

>>53266686
as far as i can tell its basically cannonical PIS/plot armor - he cant be killed by capes because (reason ring of power always betrays its user)

>>53266691
Don't be ridiculous. You really trying to say enforcing the current standards of capitalism and vast inequality is moral?

>>53266705
It's very rude not to let your opponent in a debate finish their sentence.

>>53266705
Ah yes, that paragon of philosophic virtue, Terry Pratchett.
>>53266709
Wetness is a quality of the form of Water.

>>53266699
Thanks man

Also I picked a good time to work on this instead of browsing the thread it seems, I expect the current argument will destroy this one as usual

>>53266712
>Not allowing children to be murderraped is enforcing the current standards of capitalism
Truly prompts one to ponder

>>53266712
if you live in a first world western country chances are the law in your country IS just with the possibility of a few exceptions - which is why issues arise when corruption leads to the subversion of said laws by the powerful

>>53266726
I'm not hearing an objection, here.
Let's see your essay on morality, tough guy.

>>53266733
We're past that example already.

Just tell me this. If 1% of people all over the world would receive superpowers right now, what should they do then?

>>53266745
https://theanarchistlibrary.org/library/max-stirner-the-ego-and-his-own

What is not supposed to be my concern!

>>53266750
>what should they do then
whatever they want within the confines of the law

>>53266684
Nope, he dies like a little bitch to one normie.

You know how to kill this fuckwit? Be a vigilante, grab a sniper rifle with the highest caliber possible (He's got some upgrades to make him fucking irritatingly hard to actually kill, think reinforced spine augments and what not), get +5/+5 free points for taking delayed power, blow the top half of this asshole away, and for bonus points when the slaughterhouse eight-and-a-half come after you the whole 'delayed power' drawback is going to be not an issue very, very quickly, so enjoy your +5/+5 free points.

As for can he do damage? If you've got durability, no. He basically does the equivalent of obsidian knives + indestructible items - more damaging than they should be, but still knives. Relies on his team to do much there.

>>53266750
>1%
If it's that many people we're all fucked.

>>53266764
>>53266637

>>53266750
>should
WRONG
>>53266764
That's the dumbest thing I've ever heard, unless you're going full Dostoevsky.

>>53266764
Which law? Should saudi-arabian superheros adhere to sharia law? American heros to american law?

There's no such thing as THE LAW.

>>53266705
Is this supposed to be good writing?
I tried getting through Little Gods or whatever the book was called and it was so fucking dull.

>>53266783
Some people do believe upholding law in general is the most important thing. More important than what the law is.

>>53266686
It does whatever it has to. Make the user briefly retarded with their decision making, have their power inexplicably malfunction in a weird way, have him somehow realize what you're up to and avoid it, whatever works.

The other anon stated it more succinctly.

Just hire Normie McMook to shoot him in the face with a sniper rifle. Because, uh, that's more or less what actually happens except apparently the mook the protagonist happens to tell this to is the first mook told in the history of mooks to shoot this guy in the face.

Yeah. Worm has issues. Worm is at it's best when it stays street level, and the more it escalates the worse it gets. And it fucking loves escalation more than anything else.

>>53266783
if they live in saudi arabia they should adhere to the law of the land - just as if they live in the USA they should abide the law of that land

>>53266637
such a law would never be passed- since its impossible

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>>53266768
>1% too much

True. How could other men even compete?

>>53266798
Impossible how?

>>53266792
>Is this supposed to be good writing?
No, Pratchett's not exactly high literature.

Small Gods is his best, but, still, it's not high literature.

>>53266802
laws exist due to the social contract - a law outlawing living is impossible for any society to instate, since all people who are in that society would inherently and necessarily be alive

>>53266799
You can't blame women for all desiring top heroes since superpowers would probably be a huge benefit in life. It's only natural they'd cuck their powerless bfs/orbiters/husbands any chance they get.

Can Zodiac guy come back and make the thread nice again?

>>53266730
Yeah, stuff gets weird when we get close to the end of the thread.
As much as I dislike SDA as a person he did make some good guides. Just please don't copy his style of dumping 1-2 pages of text, most of which is rambling about nothing, in the beginning of your cyoa.

>>53266814
>laws exist due to the social contract
lmao

>>53266814
What if they're undead

Tell me /cyoag/. Is killing a man really murder?

>>53266828
This is a fallacy.

>>53266798
>if a law says we should all rape children we should do it

>>53266847
categorical imperative says "hi bitch"

>>53266846
No, it's death.

>>53266846
No. Murder is illegal man slaughtering. Illegal can also mean "disallowed by my moral system".

>>53266846
Depends, do they post in here?

>>53266844
then that society could conceivable outlaw living- and as such that law would have to be upheld

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>>53261863
>Race
Human
>S-S type
nano soldier
>Powers
Attract / Repel 1, 2
Psionic Clones, 1, 2, 3
Mind reading, 1
Psycchogenic focus (Bullet time) 1, 2
>Nano soldier powers
Targeting computer 1, 2, 3,
Adaptability, 1
>Weapons
Explosives (Missile pod x3)
- EMP
- Clip (x3)
- Guided
- All out
Explosives (Storm bolter) double upgrades for 1 slot.
- Full auto
- Twin linked
- Ammo belt
- Scope
- Shaped charge
- clips (x60)
- Shrapnel
- Incendiary
>Armour
1 - gun mounts
2 - Iu tubes
3 - Jump jets
4 - Charger pack
5 - Bulwark
6 - Self fix mode
7 - Adrenalin shot
8 - med-x shot
9 - upgrade
10 - overclocking
>pleasure mods
Fancy
Radio

I AM THE LAAAAAW LARPfags are worse than nihilist wicked sense of humour edgelords desu
>>53266859
That's not the fallacy. The fallacy is the straw-manning "only for meeeeeee".

Not that it was ever meant to be a serious argument.

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>>53266869
Are you saying that all laws are just?

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>>53266878
2/2

>>53266871
>"only for meeeeeee".
no one argues "only for me" - but they argue for might makes right until the mightier stomp them into the dirt

>>53266850
I don't see the issue here.

>>53266890
>they can't argue when they're dead
woah

Reminder that might makes right is the philosophy of NTR.

>>53266880
no, there are laws that i consider unjust - and there are laws others consider unjust

but the laws of a society cannot be changed just because an individual disagrees with them - they must be changed through the proper method (the will of the people forcing government to change it)