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>>53247104
>what's this
>I-I've been thinking, anon... maybe we should s-stop producing heirs for a while... we, we already have 564 children and we're both i-immortal... the kingdom doesn't n-need- anon, no... s-stop... please don't be angr-?!
>REEEEE HOW DARE YOU TRY TO CASTRATE MY BLOODLINE YOU VILE WHORE. I NEED HEIRS FOR MY KINGDOM. HEIRS FOR MY DYNASTY. HEIRS FOR MY LEGACY. HEIRS HEIRS HEIRS ILL TEACH YOU NOT TO GIVE ME MORE HEIRS YOU SOW!!
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>>53247175
>A combination of fitness and training provider
What does this mean?
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"Good morning, your future Majesties.
Zodiac Brides Guy is busy working on his OC at the moment. As such he has asked me to lurk, as he called it, in this thread to answer questions any of you might have about his CYOA and its admittedly yet to be set in stone lore.
Care for a spot of tea, My Lords?"
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>>53247220
Who is best girl and why is it Vignette?
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>>53247229
Only Talisa can give herself a horse cock.
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>>53247220
How many houses are left? Will Taurus be the best house?

And thank you, your CYOA is shaping up to be high tier.
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>>53247184
delete your life

waifu abuse is the worst
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>>53247184
how did I neglect to notice my wife carrying a child to term
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>>53247229
vignette - too pure for words
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>>53247184
"MY WORD! Sir! It is not befitting a gentleman to injury his wife so! Please refrain yourself, you are making a disgrace of your wife and yours-
What's that Lord Zodiac Bros Guy?
What in the world is bait?"
>>53247229
"I am unfamiliar with the meaning of the term 'best girl,' but Vignette is a wonderful young lady and I'm sure she blush quite a bit to find out how popular she already is."

>>53247260
"...oh my."

>>53247290
"My Lord informs me that he was unable to sleep because he was struck with inspiration for House Aries. He's currently finishing up the House's introduction and about to start Her Grace Angelica's Letter."

"A bit of an unrelated question, but Lord ZBG asked me to inquire as to whether any of you honorable Lords and Ladies knew of any website resources or computer programs that would allow him to create decent maps. He's considering making one for the Great Kingdom of Zodiac."
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>>53247229
>Vignette
No tits no best girl
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>>53247220
How hard would it be to convince both Cassandra and Vignette to marry, if almost all of the political power/decisions go to Cassandra?
This seems to be Cassandra main goal, and Vignette seems to even have trouble with it.
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>>53247360
Kraken and Leviathan seem pretty laid back, with the only major problem being Jormungandr screwing you. Leviathan has Behemoth as an ally which is nice as well.
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Here's the current version of the HoMM III CYOA. Feel free to give it a try or give critique. Balancing is probably a mess at the moment. Still gonna add more artifacts, spells, units, maybe companions and goals.
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>>53247373
Really curious how Cancer and Scorpio will be.
You better not fuck it up,
but I trust you won't
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>>53247220
Ask your doctor for medication.
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>>53247373
>>53247480
> but I trust you won't
I don't.
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>>53247373
> any website resources or computer programs that would allow him to create decent maps
Photoshop.
Not even joking.
Shut up SDA.
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>>53247431
Lets do this
>Conflux

>Navigation
>Logistics
>Pathfinding
>Water Magic
>Wisdom
>Sorcery
>Intelligence
>Mysticism

>Sea Captains Hat
>Gnolls Flail
>Cape of Velocity

Going to blitz around the map taking all the good shit before anyone else gets a chance.
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only one way to cleanse the palette after that autism last threa, MORE AUTISM
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please post my cyoa
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>>53247378
"I believe Cassandra would be willing to try it out, but I doubt Lady Vignette would be able to grasp polyamorous relationship very easily."
>>53247480
"Zodiac Brides Guy tells me that he was actually born under the sign of Scorpio, so it the one he feels the most confident about. As for Lady Catherine of House Cancer, ZBG informs me that you can expect a motherly Onee-san/Christmas Cake feel for her, whatever that means."
>>53247537
"Thank you, Sir and/or Madam, I shall pass that along to my Lord."

"By the way, I took the liberty of sending a picture of your responses to little Vignette and received this in response."

"Oh, I'm terribly sorry, but it sounds like Lord Zodiac Brides Guy requires my assistance with Lady Angelica's letter. I shall return in a moment."
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>>53247617
>Motherly Christmas cake
Why you little bitch, I love you
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So the more I think on it the more appealing Gemini is becoming. Aside from the obvious benefits of FFM, having two partners always at hand for tabletop or vidya sounds wonderful. Imagine it; two cute girls who are legitimately into all the games you've always wanted to play in and out of the bedroom. Sebastian would probably be a good DM, that means only one or two more and you've got your party.
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>>53247360
I'll take crocodile god lady simply because of no forbidding things.
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>>53247184
i dont get it
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>>53247220
What was your inspiration for creating Vignette?
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>>53247682
>Ghost Hunter
>Chains

>Helloffice
>Purerites
>Ghostflight
>Dayhaunter

>The Conductor
>The Prosecutor
>Rakshasa Manager

>Predators
With the extra two picks I choose
>Coins
>Cordsnap
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>>53247808
Anime
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>>53247891
she just got even more perfect
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>>53247431

>>53247556, now that I've had a more thorough look through what you've got so far I think goals would be a best addition; at the moment there's no real structure influencing what you'd take. Perhaps give each faction 2-3 quests that would be best pursued by different builds, or just a handful of generic quest in a similar vein?

Companions are always well liked too, but I think goals would be more helpful.

The other thing you could do is go more into troop types, but that would probably be a huge addition to the workload. If you did, I wouldnt worry too much about making it exactly like the game, just let the player pick 3 or so units and say they're the forces that travel with you (with appropriate numbers, so maybe 1 dragon, 10 minotaurs and 50 centaurs for example)
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>>53247595
"the Guardian"
Wish: Become a saber
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Personality Traits:
Archetype - Vintage Saber
Traits- Honorable, Servile, Wrathful, Conflicted, Confident
Servant Class: Saber
Physical Stature:
Male Saber
Gallant
Mature Saber
Ahoge-less
Clothing : Heavy Armor (ceremonial) - Casual

Stats-
Strength:EX (23)
Endurance: B (7)
Agility:B (7)
Magic: E (0)
Luck: E (0)
NP: A (13)

Class Skills-
Magic resistance: EX (16)
Self Field Defense: B (10)
Mad Enhancements: D (4)

Personal Skills
Battle Continuation: EX (15)
Mana Burst: EX (15)
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Post your favourite cyoa and I'll say something nice about it.
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>>53248097
These are so comfy.
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>>53248097
here
>>53247595


Noble Phantasms:

-The Adamantine Aegis
"Break upon my body and tremble"
EX- rank Equipment (8)
The wearer is immune to NP of A+ and below, and is alerted of of stealthed enemies - breaks if the wearer acts in a dishonorable fashion (breaks an oath of his own volition, betrays his allies, cheats in a fair duel) . is ineffective against attacks by those of pure noble intent.

-Valors Visage
"cowards bane"
D rank Equipment (helmet)- Anti Army (max targets 50) (2)
Forces target to attack the wearer with wild abandon

-Praetorium Pretium
"A reckoning beyond escape"
A rank Reality Marble - anti unit (10)
traps target in a open arena, the arena is inescapable and disables any NP's or abilities that call upon outside intervention (GoB, gates of any sort, summoning . etc) and sources of immortality that are tied to the outside ( Phylacteries etc) and buffs from outside sources - effectively preventing any assistance. the Reality Marble persists until a fighter is dead.

-Gladius Iudicii
"burning light of the butcher"
A+ rank Weapon, Anti-Fortress (15)
Two handed greatsword of imposing size - it enhances the wielders strength, endurance and agility. when wielded against a Villain it is engulfed with searing light, which increases accuracy and slows the target - making dodging harder.
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>>53248094
>>53248135

An arbiter - a warrior of justice who tests the mettle of men

punishing the traitor, the coward and the monster and protecting the loyal and the pure - without caring what alignment they fall under.

Likes: eating, protecting, tests of strength, drinking, moral-fagging, romcoms
dislikes: traitors, cowards, sadists, the french, those of unearned status/achievement, horror movies


(the weakness of the aegis against the "pure of heart" - i.e those who fight for a pure cause such as pure love- is to represent that they have nothing to fear from judgement)
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>>53247986
Sounds like a plan. I'll think about it while I'm doing spells.
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>>53248097
It was this or Hero Academy, but I did my 6 post spergout storytime build for that just the other day.
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>>53248097
RWBY just tickles my autism in the right way, I love settings where everyone gets their own power.
Same reason I like Worm and Boku no Hero Academia.
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>>53247595
>>53248135
It has a very beautiful design and is very generous with the points it gives you.
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>>53248160
Hope it works out well! HoMM III was wonderful fun, don't let /cyoa/ get to autistic and ruin it for you
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>>53248168
It has a very traditional feel to it. Nothing too innovativr but good old fun.
>>53248169
It is furry-friendly.
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>>53247431
Yay! I LOVE that game. I used to play it every week-end with my best friend and her brother. He was a dick and would always beat us ruthlessly and then we'd have to do weird dares and... /blogposting. ANYWAY here's my tentative build.


>Rampart

>Defence
>Magic Resistance
>First Aid
All to better protect my people.
>Estates
Dollar dollar bills y'all. IIRC Rampart has a great unique building that gets you yearly interests on your treasury right?
>Diplomacy
Once I'm rich enough I'll just start throwing money at my problems.
>Logistics
>Pathfinding
To get the mines and the sweet gold coins before anyone else.
>Earth Magic
My own troops will be pretty much immune to magic so I can make the Earth shake and throw boulders without worrying about friendly fire.

>Waterwalking Boots
Good synergy with Logistics and Pathfinding! I don't need boats anymore. Boats suck.
>Medallion of Courage
With Diplomacy I'm going to have quite diverse armies so this is a must.
>Cape of Velocity
For my poor Dwarves. Great for combating archers.

Do you guys remember, in the vanilla game, there was only one map you could play with three allied players?
I used to play that one all the time and I'd always pick Rampart even though my friend and her bro said it was the weakest. But it had unicorns and pegasi. Anyway here's my build. And my rambling. Sorry about that.
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>>53247220
Do you know what fetishes are?
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>>53247373
I'm a pisces. I hope pisces turns out well.
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>>53247682

>Ferryman
Tandem Bike. They gotta choose to get on and help peddle to the afterlife.
>Coins
whats a ferryman without his coins, also good on the job protection.
>Ghostflight, Poltergeist, Hell Office, Aurapath
Place to relax and perks that make my job easier.
>The Conductor
the coworker
>Mister Vampire, Donovan Cannon
vampire seems like a cool dude, and cannon seems like he' be fun
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Would /cyoa/ be interested in a Beastrider style cyoa?

The rough idea would be to have a variety of mounts to choose from, each with pros and cons
>Pegasi are fast and friendly, but not especially tough
>Dragons are giant ironscaled firebelching monsters, but good luck keeping one fed
etc etc

On top of that, you'd choose your riders abilities (riding, taming, ranged and melee combat, so on), maybe some jobs or goals, and probably a few companions (other beastriders, stablemasters, breeders, waifus)

Y/N?
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>>53248320
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>>53247431
are skills and items cumulable? e.g. the Golden Bow gives you the archery skill. if you already took the archery skill does it give you an additional level in that skill?
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>>53247617
I'm honestly really curious about pisces.
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>>53248352
I'm interested.
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>>53248352
Can we have the mount be a companion or vice versa?
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>>53248352
Can your mount also be your waifu?
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>>53248476
If by companion you mean loyal, soul bond brother in arms and glory, then yes.

Otherwise no.
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>>53248352

Yes please
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>>53248363
Not really. Currently some artifacts grant a skill like the golden bow, but I'm trying to balance it around so that these artifacts can be seen as extensions to certain skills or simply open up options for people that like to cram a lot of skills into their builds. Simply picking archery can be seen as more economical choice than picking the golden bow as you have 8 skills to choose compared to only 3 artifacts.
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>>53248352
I guess, but I also want a perk or something so that if I jump off from any altitude I can land safely or perform a plunging attack.
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>>53248611
Some kind of safety measures will be there, either as an option or a default depending on whether I make it flying mounts only or not.
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>>53247595
Name: "The Black Huntsman" - True Name: Jager von Einzbern
Wish: Become a Saber
Alignment: Neutral - Neutral
Personality traits: Archetype - Saber Alter. Cruel, Selfish, Wrathful, Confident, Honorable.
Servant Class : Lancer - closer to Avenger class
Physical Features: Male Saber - Adult Saber - Gallant/Horrifying - Double Ahoge - Short Ahoge
Clothing: Ceremonial Medium Armor, Suit & Tie

Servant Parameters
Strength-A (13)
Endurance- B (A with armor) (7)
Agility-A (13)
Magic- D (1)- Projection
Luck- C (3)
Noble Phantasm-A (EX with Armor) (23)

Class Skills:
Magic Resistance -B (0)
Avenger - EX (26)
Independent Action - D

Personal Skills:
Battle Continuation - EX (25)
Monstrous Strength - A (15) (Dragons Blood)
Mana Burst - B (10)
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>>53248359
>the matrix was 100 hunderds years ago
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>>53248352

I want a futanari pegasus with healing jizz. I'll fly around on my graceful beast and heal all of the people in need.
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>>53248665
Noble Phantasm(s):

"Arbiter - Blade that slays the heavens"
EX+ (20). Anti-World Weapon
A get black glaive with a blade of disproportionate size. Absorbs magical energy and concepts by emmiting a wave of devouring darkness - can unleash contained energy in a blinding flash of annihilating power. This blade is particularly effective against being heavily composed of or reliant on energy.

"the anathema - what man has wrought let no god put asunder"
A (10). Anti-Self Ability
Nullifies effects, abilities, and damage from sources of A rank and higher (A-,A,A+...), also grants a stock of lives (8) - lives can regenerate over time. combined with his battle continuation skill this ability becomes closer to time reversal than regeneration. It acts as a "refusal" of the abilities rather than outright resistance and therefore does not factor in magnitude of effect nullified. Certain effects deemed "weak" are amplified by this however - increasing the amount of lives required to regenerate

"Aegis of the Slayer- never outmatched"
C (5). Equipment
A small shield of black metal - runes engraved upon its surface glow when it is in use.
Prohibits the use of a single offensive noble phantasm per opponent - when outnumbered grants an increase in Str, Agi, End based on number of additional foes.
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>>53248359
>Incredible Shrinking Man
>50ft woman
The 50s had a size fetish
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>>53248551
>a girl likes ur cyoa
>ignore her and respond to a autismo instead
nice stay strong stay volcel
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>>53248650
Well I can't imagine it being useful if you don't have a flying mount, but it would be really cool to be able to jump off of a thunderbird's back from far to high to be seen and slam into the ground with my spear, with ideally the thunderbird causing lightning to strike behind me to highlight my appearance.
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>>53248320
>Book Keeper
>Portfolio
So long as I stay discreet, I won't get my ass busted by any Gifted with the Law or Black Dog gifts.
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>>53248352
Doesn't that already exist?
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>>53248715

Originally an artificial servant created by the Einzberns in the aftermath of the 5th HGW by utilizing a lesser form of the third magic and remnants of the corruption present within the grail to combine elements of heroes inside a humonculous. has since ascended into the throne of heroes after his death in the 6th HGW.

Combative and arrogant in nature - yet willing to suppress himself to achieve his goals. possesses a sympathy for those given a raw deal by fate having been made as nothing more than a weapon himself, and holds a dislike for those whom are favored by fate or who have an "easy life". dislikes facing opponents who resort to underhanded methods.

Likes: good fights, cute girls, acting "heroic"
Dislikes: sadists, tyrants, cowards, those who sacrifice others for their ambitions, the french
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>>53248732
Ignoring faggots is wise.
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>>53247431
>Tower
Kinda generic, but might be fun.

>Estates
>Luck
>Wisdom
>Scholar
>Intelligence
>Mysticism
>Sorcery
>Learning
Okay, so I might be a bit generic too. Still, who can turn down PHENOMENAL COSMIC POWER?

>Medallion of Courage
>Cape of Velocity
>Crown of Magi
Boosting luck, intelligence and speed. Kinda surprising that only one item directly helps classical magic.

I'll probably get a bigass golem and ride on it while laying waste to my enemies.
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>>53247701
Plus they have claws gauntlets.
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>>53248815
bro you gotta take archery tower has mostly long-range units
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>>53248776
Does it? Depending on how the previous one turned out I might still go ahead anyway, not like it'd be the first time there's more than one CYOA for the same topic.
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>>53248262
>I used to play it every week-end with my best friend and her brother. He was a dick and would always beat us ruthlessly and then we'd have to do weird dares and...
This better include sexual shit or you wasted my time.
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>>53248262
I don't like unicorns but there's this one mythical creature that's the combination of a bunny and a unicorn. I think it's cute.

Also it's supposed to be crazy and bloodthirsty and like shanking people.
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"Ah, terribly sorry for the delay. Mr. Zodiac Brides Guy was concerned about the length of Angelica's letter, so I'm looking over it in an attempt to help him shorten it."

>>53247595
"ZBG has asked that I remind you that, quote: Red Saber is Best Saber, Praetor. Unquote."
>>53247647
"Zodiac Brides Guy say he loves you more and that he would be happy to show you Lady Catherine's portrait to tide you over if you'd like."
>>53247701
"I'm sure both Gwendolyn and Gracia would be overjoyed to hear you've taken a shine to them! I do hope you'll refrain making too much of a mess of things during your Pajama Parties. I have to clean your bed chambers after all."
>>53247808
"I don't quite understand what you mean by creating so I shall fetch Lord ZBG to answer this one."
It's gonna to sound stupidly obvious, but Virgo is an Earth Sign and its nickname is literally "The Virgin," so I just made an innocent and whimsical druid. The character I used for her picture, Marry Kozakura from the Kagerou Project, has a very similar personality and I recommend the music/anime/manga/light novels she's from if you enjoy nonlinear storytelling and vaguely superhero themes.

Almost done with Aries.
I'm gonna try to finish page four before posting another preview today, but I'm feeling determined and in the zone, so I may actually manage it.

Hopefully, Sebastian will keep you guys entertained while I work.
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>>53247431
If my armies are all undead, can they raise back up from Dead Man's Boots?
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>>53247595
I decided to repost my luck-build because the text was too much focused on the mechanical aspects. This time I gave her a proper image and background.

Create a Saber:
Name: Valiria Phumig

Background: She was initially born in another universe in the future where she was a magus. The universe was about to die and a lot of research was in the area of trying to stop the process of entropy. She was unable to find a solution, but was able to with her magic and of her colleagues to influence chance enough in another universe so that a copy of her soul would be manifest that by spontaneous generation – and hope that such copy (herself in the holy grail) would be able to find a way to stop her universe from dying before it enter a critical stage. She feels hateful towards the nature of the multiverse itself, which led her to some degree of corruption. This combined with the fact that she doesn’t believe much in free will after seeing so much the effects of causality, made her apathetic towards most people. Still, she is not truly evil, but tries to look as much as possible as cruel corrupt amoral tyrant so she could use the hate of people to her goals.
Neutral Neutral
Archetype & Traits:
French Saber(Cool, Dutiful), Cruel ,Resolute, Mischievous.
Class: Caster
Physical Features: Female
Impression: Sensuous
Physical Appearance: Adult
Number of Ahoge: Ahoge-less
Type of Ahoge: --
Clothing:
Heroic: Ceremonial/Thick Robe
Modern: Suit & Tie

Parameters:
Luck EX (A + Ceremonial)
Magic A (EX with Thick Robe)
Noble Phantasm A
Strength D
Agility C
Endurance B

Class Skills:
Territory Creation EX (Caster)
Avenger C
Presence Concealment C

Personal Skills:
Charisma EX
Bravery B
High-Speed Spell Casting C
Information Erasure C
Instinct D
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>>53248991
you couldnt raise dead undeads in the game
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>>53249011
Noble Phantasm:
EX++ Anti-Army/Anti-World

Despotic Sovereignty of Fate:

Increase overall parameters of caster, but specially Luck and Magic makes everyone in the area compelled to hate but also obey her, and extremely increase the power of Charisma (used to make people obey and hate her) and Territory Creation (used to control the probabilities in the territory , including increase her luck and make other people hate her more). As bonus from Avenger C, the people hating her increase her Luck even more. The overall result is that specially in a crowded area “impossible” (seemingly infinitely improbable) events occur in her favor, being her just having that right insight in the right moment, to in more extreme circumstances, almost turning back time in an area thought increase of the negentropy in the area thanks to the coordination of quantum level random events. The luck in the period of activation of the Noble Phantasm tends to look to the optimal course in the long course of events, not only in the short term of activation of the Noble Phantasm, although it’s most impressive feats occur during it.
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>>53248885
>This better include sexual
It did but this isn't really the place for that AFAIK.
>you wasted my time
Sorry. :/
>>53248912
Jackalopes?
>>53249012
Couldn't you raise a certain percentage of your fallen troops after a fight though?
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>>53248991
No. Hence why the boots simply just makes your necromancy stronger. What you don't get back from your own troops you take from theirs instead.
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>>53247168
This autor is among my favorites.

Both looks and content are always top notch
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>>53249040
certain percentage of fallen non-undeads I think
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>>53249040
Nah their name starts with A or something.
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>>53248961
Sebastian can I marry you?
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Part 3 of my post-apoc W.I.P.; it's a larger image so I just want to make sure it uploads properly.

All numerical values are subject to change & should be considered place-holders for now.
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>>53249069
Al-mi'raj
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>>53247431
someone told u in an earlier thread
>My unqualified advice is to do things the videogame could not do,
>but a CYOA can.
what do u think? how wuld that work?
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>>53248262
>He was a dick and would always beat us ruthlessly
>First Aid
>Estates
I wonder why?
Pathfinding and diplomacy are debatable.

On bright side earth magic is best magic, on big maps expert town portal>>>all
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>>53248961
ZBG is wrong on the matter - best saber is Saber of Red
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>>53248169
"ZBG says: Volume Four Update/Companions Page Never."
>>53248288
"I don't actually. I guess I'll have to try out this Google that I keep hearing about."
>>53248307
"Mr. Zodiac Brides says his brother is a Pisces as well, so he's fairly confident he can do it justice.
He'd also like to know if you have ever played a video game called Blade & Soul. It seems he got the character for her portrait from there, whatever that could possibly mean..."
>>53248392
"ZBG told me to post this 'Dot G-I-F' file as a response to you and asks if Lady Persephone's portrait would help to tide you over for the time being."
>>53249101
"Oh... Oh my...
That's a rather sudden proposal. I seem to be getting quite a lot of those recently. I'd like to at least know something about you before we begin our courtship.
Though I do suppose it is about time I settled down and started a family...
Oh bother, I'd need to take a surname then, wouldn't I?
May I have yours?"


"These Capcha things are getting rather difficult."
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>>53249040
Was it the origin of your issues with men?
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>>53249112
Might want to shave off about 300 pixels from the width.
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>>53247184
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SMsLknEaZNE
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>>53249153
I approach it like having broader information about your choices and allowing some imagination of the reader. While the game just blatantly tells you "this gives you +3 morale" or "x gold per week" I try to make skills sound more impactful not only on the battlefield but having some practical applications outside of it too.
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>>53249259
How come? It's the same width as the other sections I've uploaded previously, just longer.
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>>53249338
Because then it'd fit just right to a 1920-wide screen at 100% zoom (with room for the vertical scrollbar, so a horizontal one doesn't appear).
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>>53249135
There we go.
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>>53249021
thats actually a pretty interesting use of Avenger
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>>53249214
Does the M-06 injection also work in improving the abilities adquired by the S-series injections?
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>>53247220
Can we also get three weakened versions of the elixirs? I want more power.
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>>53249155
I never pretended to be good as this game :p.

Estates is supposed to help me amass gold which is useful for everything, and particularly with Diplomacy. Rampart can make money out of money with the Dwarven Treasury (yes I just googled it to check.)
First Aid is just a nice thing to do for your creatures and also can be of real use when these creatures are immune to positive magic. I can't heal them with my magic so I have to use First Aid. Doesn't it make sense?
We do agree on Earth Magic. It rocks!

>>53249238
I'll show you mine if you show me yours. What is the source of your problems with women?
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>>53249011
>>53249021
so how does she actually fight?
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>>53247431
Fire spells done. Might add some more later on. Yes, I switched tiers between sacrifice and armageddon for the CYOA. Because.
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>>53249295
what abt letting the player choose his own adventure like what abt freedom immersion n shit
idk how to do any of that btw but thats what i like
just sayin
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>>53249436
Thanks. The first time I read the CYOA I saw Luck could stack with territory creation and with Avenger C, and Charisma could stack with Avenger C. And Noble Phantasm being unespecifc, I could use to stack as well. It focuses completely on luck (and disctretion in secondary plane because I didn't had more points to stack in luck). Normally a build focused 100% in one stat would be terrible, but since Luck is somewhat "universal", I thought it could be at least "interesting" as result. The actual power of the build depends on how much you are willing to accept luck and magic influence things, because obviously, without it the character is pretty much useless.

The other details from the build comes from the luck and tyranni thematic and because I wanted to create a femdom servant.

Holy grail war anon said that this was the second build-based built he saw, I'm curious about what was the first and what happened to it. I ALSO HOPE HE READS IT AND ACCEPTS MY BUILD.
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>>53249515
Don't have any. I grew up mostly surrounded by women and get along with women better than I do men.

I'm not any of the people who normally bother you, I'm just very curious by nature.
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>>53249671
I'm planning on doing quests and goals after I've done the first iteration of spells. Ranging from domestic stuff to world changing events with various roles depending on the faction you choose.
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>>53249713
ill just give you a warning - servants with luck EX exist, and its not very impressive

basically luck is like divinity - normally its not very powerful, but that one time you want it (Gae Bolg) its a godsend

tl:dr luck wont win fights even at EX
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>>53249190
"Zodiac Brides Guy responds that you have-
What kind of taste, My Lord?
Sir! I can't say that! The Internet Police might find out and send me to Cyber Prison!
Ahem.
Mr. ZBG admits that may, in fact, be the case, but he has yet to read Fate Slash Apocrypha-
Alright, I'm almost certain that isn't a real word...
-so he has yet to see a Saber better than-
Pardon?
Uhm... Pic related, I suppose."
>>53249439
"Ah, here's a question I can answer without his assistance!
Yes, M-06 actually increases the effects of all S Series Elixirs and all other M Series Elixirs as well.
For instance, while the use of magic still requires S-09 to unlock your potential, taking it along with M-06 will vastly decrease the amount of time and effort it would normally take to master it.
You still suffer some side-effects of gaining that much magical power all at once, but it definitely wouldn't be anything life threatening.
Probably...
It definitely probably wouldn't cause any life threatening side-effects."

"By the by, Mr. ZB Guy instructed me I am not permitted to google to term fetish, because I am too pure for this world and it would corrupt my innocence, apparently.
My apologies, Sir Anonymous."
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>>53248961
i will choose the Vitality, Skill, and Telekinesis serums.
I will marry the Gemini girls, because having shared interests is important in building a long lasting and loving relationship. Their magic will also be extremely useful in leveling cities and forcing surrenders. Any other princess who fights after their cities have been destroyed I will deal with, probably through using telekinesis to deprive them of air.
Then I will use the wide spread destruction as an excuse to expand and improve the whole country's infrastructure.
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>>53249792
>whore of babylon
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>>53248860
>Implying I know anything about the game mechanics
Then replace one of the artifacts with the Bow.
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>>53249598
She had magic, but mostly avoid fights and just hopes things will work out, or elaborate a specific plan (that she would create thanks to lucky insights more than inteligence, but inteligence also, because of the fast thought granted by high speed spell casting), or with magic, or have other persons trying to kill the target for her, or when all else fails, use territory manipulation to use the ambient to attack the oponent.
But there is no clear specific attacking plan. Just the plan that the luck will guide her to victory in whatever way it's best, even if she doesn't know.
But some examples could be:
use a slave to blow himself up on an enemy while the enemy is distracted.
or make the area where the enemy is fall.
or in a more effiecient way, use a president to command a nuclear assault.
or in an even more extreme case: the enemy kills himself trying to attack her or just have an heart attack.
Or more likely, stronger enemies decide to murder each other and the survivor is in such weak state that even a child with a gun could kill him, etc.
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>>53249059
>>53249040
seems like i was wrong, you could raise enemy undeads in heroes iii
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>>53249717
Don't encourage her. The last thing this place needs is roastie normies.
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>>53249664
>>53249727
This seems really cool! Thank you for doing this.
>>53249717
>I'm just very curious by nature
Oh okay. Well my personal issues come from a a bunch of different things...

With men specifically yes my bff's big brother played a role but he wasn't alone. And he wasn't that bad really he just made me really confused by being half nice half abusive so that I couldn't really tell what was normal anymore. Not sure if any of that makes sense sorry.
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>>53249768
I understand this. But the whole idea is that it goes way beyond what a normal "ex" (because of avenger C and the noble phantasm) is - plus, territory creation.
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>>53247168
>>53247157

You think its possible to achieve some sorta peace between the interlopers and the starioners?
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>>53249925
It makes sense, and I suspected as much. Though I will say, those people that are half-nice like that are some of the worst, because as you pointed out, it fucks with your head and keeps you from being able to properly distinguish where your barriers are and how much to tolerate, and through that they can ramp up the abuse and make you a sitting and dependent duck. It's a classic abuser tactic, and a really nasty one too.
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I want to use "real" astrology, but it's all so much BS.

https://www.astrology.com/love/compatibility/aquarius-virgo.html
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>>53250092
I read real astrology in relation to my sign before. It says we're all intelligent, sensitive and energetic, but two-faced, capricious, moody, manipulative, selfish, horny, and even slutty.

It's like, holy shit, apparently my sign is the absolute worst one for a relationship.
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>>53249936
i get it - but luck "is the capacity to defy fate", its like a chance to resists crits/debuffs/conditions and whatnot - having it at EX+ would still not translate into offensive power.

but i guess that what the magic is for
also - having a NP that causes such AOE might prove bothersome, if you start affecting civilians en masse the church/magi might place a prize on your head - and a truce will be arranged ( the 4th war had one against their caster)
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>>53250015
>it fucks with your head and keeps you from being able to properly distinguish where your barriers are and how much to tolerate, and through that they can ramp up the abuse
That's literally how it happened. Wow.
I also had known him for years and he had doing this sort of thing forever so I was almost used to it. Well it wasn't "sexual"
at first but it was the same kind of weird asserting dominance thing.


Are there any CYOAs about fighting abusers?
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>>53248094

A classic swordsman build backed up by magic immunity. Not at all versatile, but damn good at what he does. No real balance complaints except Valor's Visage, which seems very powerful for such a low-ranked Phantasm.

I like Praetorium's concept, although blocking Gate of Babylon seems a bit unfair-I might be salty though, since I'm very biased against 'fuck you, Gilgamesh' powers. Even so, I generally like the Arbiter and think he makes for a good straightforward Servant which is nice when so many builds favour fancy tricks. Am likely to include.

>>53249713

I've seen it, yeah! I really like it too, sorry I didn't respond in more detail last time. Don't worry about the 'EX Luck not being practical in combat' idea-with a Noble Phantasm of that caliber it should have a fair bit of use, especially since you're rocking an EX-ranked Magic score. You're not an excellent combat caster by Caster standards since your high-speed casting is slow, but I'd think that you'd be a monster in your domain, and still pretty decent outside of it.

I like the backstory too, and am likely to include your build or one heavily inspired by it if I do another story.

>>53248665

I think that I've said all that needs to be said about yours already, to the tune of a rather long story.

>>53248961
>>53249190
Mordred and Nero are both great, but I do prefer Nero's personality a little more. Mordred's relationship with Arthur is awesome, though, and I'd be really interested in a war with both of them being summoned properly.
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>>53249268
>choose one of your figurines

I keep forgetting I'm on /tg/ lol
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>>53250156
>blocking Gate of Babylon
the idea of Gate of Babylon and is that it draws power from an outside source - his armory, whereas someone like EMIYA summons his weapons

Praetorium is basically the "1v1 me fgt" NP, so i had it remove outside help
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>>53250154
Yeah, they ramp up over time, as they slowly dislodge your center. Like I said, it's sinister as hell. Anyway, this is my last post on the topic since I'm heading out, so if someone comes in being an ass about things later, that's not me. Don't wanna a nice moment of empathy to get ruined by mistaken identity.

And no, there's no CYOAs specifically about that. Closest I can think of is Beri's recent CYOA, where one of the missions is to end bullying, which is a light form of and ofter overlaps with abuse.
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>>53249268
thanks for posting this more recent version
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>>53250207

I get what you're coming from, but for Gilgamesh specifically I'd argue that the Gate of Babylon isn't really fighting dishonorably unless he uses it to ambush. Maybe if he uses it for hax, like summoning and teleporting away, but just firing weapons or summoning Ea is literally how he fights. Knowing Gilgamesh he'd probably have a bullshit way to resist the marble anyway, though.
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>>53249112
>you can be so handsome/pretty people question their sexuality
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Is there any cyoa about toilets?
Been stuck one all day shitting out what feels like fire water.
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>>53250278
His very existence is a hax. The only positive thing about Gilgamesh is that his soul is such a hax it actually counts for more than one kill in regards to filling the Grail.
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>>53249040
Don't be a tease.
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>>53250146
I'm using the CYOA descriptions for it - I don't know how much it would apply to the actual universe of Fate, I only watched some of the anime and played Fate/Extra, but in the description of Luck ex it says "consciously control probability and chance in one's favor" and in territory creation ex "allowing manipulation of space, time and probability".
But yeah, it's not meant to be used in offense directly, rather, to win the war without having to use much offense yourself.

That said the build completely relies on involving civilians. The more absurd effects of luck from avenger C would be acquired as hundreds of millions hate her - if not through the NP, through her charisma. Maybe when almost all the worlds hate she could be powerful enough to defiance the church and magi association - but until she is weak (not enough people hate her), she would be discreet (presence concealment, information erasure). And hope she is gradually more lucky enough so that she don't gain enough negative attention in a bad way for her before it's time.
>>53250156
I'm really happy in hearing it.
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>>53250322

Each to their own. I personally feel it's best to keep him on a pedestal of 'strongest Servant' for my internal balancing when theorycrafting builds or Wars, if only because it provides a nice absolute upper limit of BS to contextualise it all.
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This cyoa should come with some perks. Or at least some way to make your demon less stand out.
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Which cyoas allow for good Charisma builds?
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>>53248722
We can actually trace back most modern fetish subcultures as we know them to that era, when things started opening up after WW2. Fascinating stuff for personal reading mind you.
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>>53247157
>>53247168
Man, this gives me some Dead Space vibes.
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>>53249268
>Army
>multiplied by 100
Holy shit, I apparently command several chapters worth of Space Marines now. And Chaos Marines. And Eldar. And Necrons. Pity that I never got around collecting that Battlefleet Gothic army.

Keeping with the theme, my Body will be a space marine. Now, there's few I could pick that would be really nice but since I'm not completely retarded, I'm not going to be a Librarian nor a Chaos Marine, even if Terminator Armor would be neat to have. So it's going to be Blood Raven Deathwing Veteran.

As I'm still not completely retarded, I'm not going to pick Universe and join the fight in 40k because GW is going to fuck all the shit up.

Instead, I'll pick Planar Sphere from BG2 as my house. It's capable of breaching the planes so I can take my armies and meet interesting people around realities.

Or I guess I could pick Power, since while I own very few comic books, I do own the Marvel Secret Wars series. I'm the Beyonder now.
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>>53250528
And here I thought the 50s were all boring & wholesome.
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>>53250501
Real life. In fact it's the only build that works. When are they going to rebalance it??
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>>53247617
>born under the sign of Scorpio

Inform hin about my high expectations. I hope his confidence is well-founded, because I assume nothing less than outright perfection for our sign.
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>>53249112
>40 points give you immunity from a power which is possesed by 1 in 10 million humans
u wot
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>>53250585
>50s
>wholesome
>birth of the boomers
>wholesome

Oh boy. Please make a comedy cyoa.
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>>53250585
Oh fuck no they were fucked up man, just that media and radio were regulated enough to make it seem like it wasn't, and those are what we carried for the most part.

There was a big release after the war in the scuffled Americana, it's rather fascinating to see what's buried down stairs from that decade.
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>>53250501
>Charisma builds

Fuck that, I never take options which change my personality or social skills. You stop being yourself if you take them.
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>>53250618
Them homosexual mind controllers could make you suck their dick without it though. Better pick it to be sure.
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>>53250618
Well, there are mutants too, you know.

But as I said; everything is potentially subject to re-jiggering down the line.
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Oh for god's sake. I go to bed and the previous thread goes to shit.

Anyway the best Zodiac waifu is the twins.
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>>53250587
There's a lot here that depends on definitions (is charisma appearance or skill?) but I think I'll just skip right to "being born into money".
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>>53250690
Stop. Don't remind me that somewhere out there future tall, athletic supermodels are being born to rich parents who have already planned a trust fund for them bigger than I'll ever amass in my life.
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>>53249792
So if I used M-06 to improve my S-12 Domination, and then used my S-12 Domination to convince the girls to stop fighting and agree to marry me, how well do you think I would do?
(In the case that I wanted to convince all of them literally, and in the case of only Cassandra and Vignette that I asked before?)


Also roleplay about the CYOA WHILE making the CYOA from WIPs in real time seems a fabulous practice anon, if I had a nobel from inovative practices in CYOAs, this month
would go to you
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>>53250737
I was more pointing out that they can "win" without being attractive, likable, or really having any ability or skill at all, just because they have money.
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>>53250630
Life is change, friend. You are not the same as you were before but that doesn't mean the old you died.

Don't you find it easier to talk to people when drunk? Or if you read a book about what to talk about to people that makes you more interesting person? If these were just toggled on for you all the time, how would you die.

Do you also abstain from all body enchanting choices?
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>>53250741
>praising the roleplay

I too am enjoying this. My mind is racing at the possibility of marrying Sebastian now. Is he just playing along with his future king or is that option really there? This really came out of nowhere. I don't know how to process this.

I kind of want Sebastian and Vignette though.
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>>53250681
There is no telepathy in mutant powers so it's not obvious.
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>>53248168

Shaw De Muerta
>Human
>Shaman
>Legendary Spear

Companions
>Jonny Brogue
>Jorlan
>Vermach
>Orellja

Origin
>Southern Wastes

Adversary
>Prince Immrahil
>Arriane De Muerta

I will fight to protect the world from the elves, going after their prince and putting them down once and for all. After that I will return to my homeland and stop the undead horde of my sister.
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>>53240842
Demo Arma

Aim Assist Lv.2

Arma Summon Lv.2

Lock-on Lv.2

Sync Bodies Lv.2

Attack Drones Lv.2

High-Range Gun

Heavy Gun

Kill a Billionaire

Hunt a Monster

Slay a Dictator

BIGGEST BOOMS!
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Much like how I spent most of my time in WoW, I'm going to be the guy in guild chat screaming about how awful this PUG is while slamming my dick into the grinder for fifth hundredth time.

Wait, that's not a class, fuck.

I'll be the Merchant since being eJew took the second most of my time.
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>>53247431
Water spells. Promoted Clone to tier 5 because water magic doesn't have any good tier 5 spells otherwise and it's the only one bullshit enough to fit the criteria
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>>53250311
There was something about magical toilets ... but I didn't save that shit, sorry.
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>>53250990
Clone is kinda shit though. One volley of arrows is all it takes to bring them down.
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>>53251028
Send help
I might actually die form dysentery
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>>53250426
>'strongest Servant'
i believe one of the titles from the last war was "could take Gilgamesh"

and Gilgamesh would beat the guardian - provided he had summoned Ea before the RM is used, since Ea would just blow up the RM, and then GoB spam for a few hours to finish him off.

it disables access to Gil's armory since its an outside location, it would also disable Belerophon and Avalon

>>53250387
yeah - the CYOA makes luck sound really OP, yet the servants that have it are really not that crazy

its still very useful tho
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>>53247431
>HoMM CYOA
>No Eagle Eye
At least include it as a joke, come on now.
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>>53251034
Would be a shame if there was a water spell to counter ranged assaults though. Wink wink.
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>>53250990
are all spells useable out of combat? please and thank you
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>>53251091
I'm actually planning on making Eagle Eye in the future, but I haven't decided how the hell I should implement it yet.
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"Sir Zodiac Brides Guy is still struggling to shorten Angelica's letter. With 546 words or so, it appears the High Priestess has much to say."

>>53249813
"A quite well thought out and respectable plan, My Lord, though the telekinetic suffocation seems rather brutal.
I believe you may have a slight misunderstand of The War of The Zodiac Brides, I'm afraid. The War itself shall not take place within Zodiac. It shall unfold on Earth. In your own city. The Brides shall be coming to you.
ZBG has informed me that it's somewhat similar to that Fate Slash series that seems to keep coming up and its own Holy Grail War, in that respect.
You shall not be arriving in Zodiac until a winner is decided. Then we will give you 24 hours to put your affairs on Earth in order (though you may visit as often as you like) and give us a chance to deal with the collateral damage and take care of any loose ends.
>>53250092
>>53250127
Compatibility based solely on Houses is not something I'd suggest. I advise using it more for general ideas of how things may unfold rather than any kind of concrete matchmaker.
Also, if you happen to be interested, this is the site that ZBG has been using for a great deal of his research:

https://www.izodiacsigns.com/

>>53250598
"I... I relayed the message, but he just started sobbing in the corner mumbling something about disappointing you and curling into the fetal position.
Oh dear, he's spooning the pillow with maids on it again...
I'll be back in a moment, My Lords and Ladies."
>>53250686
"Hmm...
Seems the Gemini Twins and Vignette are gathering quite the fanbase.
Are the other girls unappealing or do they just speak to you more than the others?
I'd let ZBG know, but he just keep cuddling that pillow.
Oh for the love of-
Hold on a moment, he's stroking the one with blue hair's face again and whispering 'He didn't deserve you,' into her ear.
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>>53251130
Usable? Sure, why not. They'd have limited practicality though. Clones are easily distinguished and teleport would be very exhausting to travel with.
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>>53250941
I'm the tank who explains all of the mechanics to newbies so I can get free (you)s

I also like to sexually bully healers who aren't healing good enough by not saying anything until the end of the raid/dungeon even when they know they're fucking up
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>>53251141
Loo-wd
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>>53251169
>Hold on a moment, he's stroking the one with blue hair's face again and whispering 'He didn't deserve you,' into her ear.

Poor Rem. Cucked on a level that no mortal being could deem possible.
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>>53251075
>>53250426
Is there an archive for the build of the war and the writting of the war itself? If so, if it's not much trouble, can someone link it for me?
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>>53251075

As I said, each to their own. The power seems really hypocritical to me under that logic, though-so if Gilgamesh wanted to summon Ea, his actual sword, from the Gate to have a 1v1 fight it would prevent him because it's outside help?

But I'll leave it here, Fate is vague enough that arguments about it are just 'nuh-uh' essentially.
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>>53251169
I have absolutely no clue what your about, but I'm intrigued.
What can I expect as an Aries?
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>>53251256
fair enough

i assume the guardian would allow him to get his weapons - otherwise it might be "dishonorable" conduct and remove the necessity for Ea

basically if Gil takes it seriously he wins - if he considers himself above judgement he looses

>>53251254
im not sure if its archived- but there was a whole grail was carried out

if you mean the source material theres an anime and a wiki
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>>53247184
I genuinely love this meme.
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>>53250941
Necromancer or Combat Medic for solo raid capabilities
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>>53251133
>Much of Geon's magical skills come from his ability to see into the minds of other spellcasters, reading their thoughts as they invoke their powers, and in many cases learning to cast the spell himself
As a mind-reading of sorts, I guess. Plus, maybe as a skill that gives you bonus spells? It's shit in the game, but it could be useful in CYOA.

Also, add HotA pirate town, we know you want to.
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>>53251256
also - isnt Ea not tied to GoB, it has a separate NP entry i believe
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>>53251409
It's pretty funny.
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>>53251169
Tell him to stay calm and get a hold of his wits. We're Scorpio. We're unconventional but dedicated. We create perfection, or we revise and improve to perfection. Judging by the work already written, I assume he will deliver as promised.
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>>53250990
>water has no good spells
Don't talk to me or my Prayer enhanced son ever again
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>>53251478

It's a separate Phantasm on his stat sheet, but he still stores it in the Gate. Maybe change the wording of the Marble so that it doesn't 'prevent' outside help, it just renders it useless? So summoned creatures in the Marble would be ineffectual, and your dude would be immune to shots from the Gate of Babylon until he ran out of mana to maintain the Marble (which given his E-Rank mana might be quite quick). So Gil could shoot shit from the Gate at you, but it wouldn't do anything unless he pulled his head out of his ass and drew Ea.
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Damn, that was a lot of builds to look through.

>>53240617
>>53240579
>>53235456
>>53246623
I see. USW (and some other Trump powers) are going to get nerfed into the ground.

>>53236359
>shouldnt villain's bonus be swapped with vigilante's bonus
In my opinion, villain's bonus makes sense within the context of the story. Though vigilante's is less so, but there's nothing I could think of to replace it with.

>>53237159
>What does Wavelength Even actually do?
In short, it basically lets you do the same things Scion usually does. Which is a lot.

>>53237019
>Perpetuance
>What kind of immortality is this?
The one where you don't die from aging and there's almost nothing in the world capable of killing you.

>>53240730
>Which powers couldn't you copy with Unlimited Shard Works? Stuff like peak condition, that can't really be used?
I left it intentionally vague so that you could assume things yourself, but here's how I thought about it: you guaranteed can't see Thinker, Tinker and Stranger powers. Everything else that has an effect on the physical world and can be observed and connected to the one using the power is a fair game.

>>53243063
>How does Kingmaker work with Foreign Element (Abaddon) as it says that powers from Abaddon are far more potent then described and can grow even more powerful.
It should make you be able to grant more powers to more people over time, but not grant more costly powers all the way to omnipotence.
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Still doing the text. Too lazy now to figure out how to install everything for cyoa maker.

So, how is it so far? Impressions/advice?
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"Alright he's back at the keyboard, he still looks a bit scared but I think he'll be okay."

>>53250741
"See this is exactly why we were opposed to offering S-12! Curse the Head Alchemist's stupid, alluringly emerald eyes...
Yes, I suppose, you could do exactly that but-
Oh great now he's giggling morbidly and saying 'harem route is the best route' under his breath."
Thanks, anon. I thought I'd do as a bit, but it's really been too much fun to stop and it's giving me a lot of ideas.
RP's my comfort zone. I'm the guy that confessed to dragging Pathfinder sessions into 12-hour emotional roller coasters because I get too into it.
In the two years my campaign's been going, I've developed such a convoluted and ridiculous family tree that, if you exclude character names, there has been a canonical off-screen three-way between my daughter, my twin sister, and myself/own son from an alternate future. And nothing about it was even vaguely incestuous.

>>53250820
"I'd never dream of toying with your heart, My Liege! It's just... I-I... I've never really been romantically involved with anyone before. I don't even know what you look like, but-
Wait, what? Myself and Lady Vignette? I'm afraid I'm a tad too old for her... I doubt she'd ever seen me as more than her well-dressed uncle at best."
>>53251247
"He's crying again, but he's nodding now.
What's that?
Oh, he'd like me to post this image apparently.
Spoil it? Why?
Um, apparently you need a buffer from the pain of the happiness that will never be yours."
>>53251300
"Ah! Welcome, My Lord!
Zodiac Brides Guy has elected to respond to your question by muttering to himself about having accidentally made satyrs into Draenei...
Any idea what that means?"
>>53251524
"Oh thank The Throne! He's smiling again. He even looks determined again.
Thank you, My Lord, that was a very kind thing to say."
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>>53251618
(cont.)

>>53235221
>Just checking, with eyes of death we can "kill" our own lifespan so that way we are immortal?
If you kill your lifespan you will die. I don't know what you expected. Though I guess then you will also be immortal in a way - you can't die if you are already dead.

>>53244890
>Autistically in-depth analysis to follow within the next day or so.
Great, I will be waiting for it.

>>53245604
>Why is negentropy redundant with perpetuancy? Won't the latter eventually stop working without former?
Negentropy is supposed to be already included in the deal when taking Perpetuance anyway, that’s what I meant.
>And do powers like regeneration/nanomachines/clones prevent aging?
Clones don’t allow that, but other two should work.

>>53240979
>Can invulnerability be used for extremely short periods of time with the cool down being proportionally small?
No.
> What about with the second trigger?
Yes.

>>53244663
> How does Shard Administration work, especially with second trigger?
It lets you edit powers of other people however you want, but within reason.
> Can you eliminate people's powers by destroying their shards?
Yes.

>> 53246435
> Does Recordless 2nd Trigger include no footprints?
Yes.

>Is Save and Reload Groundhog Day? the "Precognition based power" Throws me off.
It should work like Coil’s power, in a sense that it predicts your own actions, even if you don’t know it.
For all intends and purposes – it’s basically time travel, but only with your mind. Except that when you encounter a blindspot all of your saves will get corrupted.

>Do you have any plans to go through this once more with changes?
Of course, but at a much later date.
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>>53251599
what is this? a friggin twitter meme?
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>>53251453
That's a great idea actually. As for Cove, I was thinking about it, but ultimately dropped it because I don't know that much about their supposed lore and I don't really know what people think about them. Might add them later on as it would add to the seafaring part of the world.

>>53251599
The only level 5 water spell in the game is Summon Water Elemental. Including elemental summons would just gimp Conflux as a faction choice and it doesn't sound as hype. It was ultimately down a choice between promoting Prayer or Clone, I chose Clone because of the unmatched potential.
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>>53251612
>E-Rank mana
isn't that just the capacity for magecraft that is E rank

as far as i can tell there isnt a mana stat in the CYOA - which is honestly why the builds are so OP IMO

but it appears wording is a constant issue on my NP's
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>>53247157
>>53247168
good as fuck taste in sci-fi aesthetic. Industrial armour is best!
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>>53251749
haha what a pleb
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>>53250820
>Sebastian and Vignette
no
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>>53251635
>https://pastebin.com/sMi8MTN9

Looking great so far anon , you seem to be on the right track
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>>53251635
>cyoa maker.
wait , that exists?
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>>53251886
Care to provide details? How are specialization traits, equipment system, missions? What do you think of DLC?
>>53251901
Yeah, in pastebin. Needs python and a bunch of addons to work.
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>>53251953
M. BOX
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>>53249268
why MtG tho, why can't it just be any card game, like yu gi oh or pokemon dammit.
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Would you guys mind if I put a height requirement on certain options and waifus in my cyoa?

Manlet opinions not needed.
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>>53251650
>satyrs into Draenei
Fucking damnit :( I was hoping he'd go fluffy and cute. That would have made for some good Tsundere
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>>53251737

Reality Marbles are actually a form of Magecraft. Even the likes of Emiya Archer have B-Ranked Magic.
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>>53252037
>being so worthless you have to cheer yourself up with your height
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>>53251669
>If you kill your lifespan you will die. I don't know what you expected. Though I guess then you will also be immortal in a way - you can't die if you are already dead.
Not him and haven't even read the CYOA but butting in anyway, (Planescape: Torment spoiler) in Torment, the main character is immortal, 'dying' but always waking up again, because his mortality was literally torn out of his soul and imprisoned.
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>>53251978
>That mystery box
Nigger, da fuck?
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>>53252064
Your opinion is not needed.
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>>53251618

I think that there should be some kind of opening for bullshit powercopying abilities, since we have precedent in canon multiple times (Tohu, Glastig, Eidolon). The Tohu one is especially egregious, since it can be abused by multiple 25 point powers (Final Form and the Endbringer Controller) ones.

My suggestion is that you keep that kind of thing as is, but make it clear that it isn't being clever-it's taking the most obvious optimisation route. That lets power-copying continue to exist as it does in universe, but hopefully discourages people from spamming it and feeling like master munchkins.
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>>53252093
Your haughtiness is not needed.
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>>53252088
When I posted it originally someone was asking for the ending of drakengard, so I posted it. I wasn't the one who posted it this time, but I'm glad whoever did did, just because how much I love giant cannibal babies
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>>53251953
>Rotary cannon is weak
Where's my gunfu?
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>>53252003
Because MTG is the best card game and all other card games are unworthy trash in comparison.
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>>53247220
You've looked at everyone's search history? Even mine? I might have to fall on my sword.
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>>53252088
>>53252127
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6OPW-RdzStA
Vs Jet who wins?
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>>53252037
when will you learn?
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>>53251169
suffocation is just for the more stubborn and physically dominant Ladies such as Capricorn. And only until they loose consciousness. I take no pleasure in it and will gladly stop it if they consent to my rulership
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>>53252173
>tfw you become a God(dess) but you forgot to clear your browser history

This is even worse.
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>>53252050
huh - guess theres a weakness i didnt anticipate
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>>53247104
This is now my favorite CYOA of all time.
it's made by the same guy who made The Village, right? Did he make anything else, particularly in that style?
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>>53252178
What the fuck is this headtrip of a game?
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>>53252050
You implying you can't have a reality marble at E rank magecraft?
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>>53247184
I haven't been following /cyoag/ in a while, what is this referring to?
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>>53252325
He's shitposting about Zodiac.
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>>53252173
>instead of revealing the mystery box's search history, she (male) reads yours
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>>53252037
>Manlet opinions not needed.
If you're going to discard your own opinions from the get-go, then why are you even making a CYOA?
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>>53252134
Don't worry anon, the weak damage and range are made up by the (implied) fire-rate, Maybe if I ever update this fire-rate and tracking capability would be things I would have to add.

>>53252315
It's the first game by Yako Taro the guy who made Nier and the sequel Big butt robot lady
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>>53252325

The Zodiac Wives CYOA someone is working on.
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>>53252315
Drakengard 1 for the PS2.
Or Yako Taro game 1.
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>>53252325
Unsalted Potatoes exists to put certain cyoag beliefs into perspective. I believe this fine work is a satirical vision on the concept of needing to marry a waifu for heirs in a cyoa that makes you the immortal ruler of a magical kingdom.

It's an early work but nonetheless priceless.
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>>53252321
Shirou's powered by dolphins though, isn't he? Plus Nasu handwaved his Reality Marble as pulling objects from his 'inner world' or some bullshit, so he's a super fancy exception.
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>>53252325
A few threads back, we had a giant autistic argument about waifus, and whether or not "a slight streak of selfishness" was a valid character trait in a good person or not. That led to a scenario about shitposters going crazy on a poor abused waifu who just wanted less salty potatoes every once in a while, and now it's ballooning to make fun of every autistic argument. (In this case, direct genetic heirs in the context of a fantasy monarchy equipped with magic).
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>>53252394
Is there really a reason why we're calling it unsalted potatoes besides how it was first used? Is it like a reference or something?
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>>53252405
Reality marbles are widely used by magi as a way to conduct, store, and hide their research from prying eyes. If a modern magus can create a reality marble then any Servant should be able to by default.
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Does anyone have an anime-style image of an auditorium or similar?
I need it for my cyoa. I haven't found an image yet. I'll need to scrap the option and think of something else if I can't find one.
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>>53252347
No you don't understand, these things are anti-TANK rounds. It's not about the ROF at all, though that is extreme as well.
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>>53252463
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>>53251953
Who am I, where am I? Am I me, I don't knwo how to fly a plance. Wtf is a Ystrian? Why do I need flight members, why are you giving me a plane, what do I need it for, I assume since you can get weapons we(?) are going to be fighting (something?)?
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>>53252405
thats all reality marbles

the actual world of the RM is the "inner world"
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>>53252510
I'll take it even if the style doesn't fit with the others (and doesn't have people in it)
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>>53252447
>>53252555

I was under the impression that the actual mechanical effects of the Magecraft required power to sustain though-so having a pocket dimension would be within the realm of a standard Magus, whilst being able to project copies of Noble Phantasms or other such nonsense required actual magic barring special cases like being the main character. I could well be wrong though, despite my writefaggotry I'm not actually all that versed in Nasu lore relative to some.
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>>53249268
>tfw i'm pleb tier
I wish I had comic-books or manga, I only read them online.
Right now I only have two decks ready from years ago, a control blue bounce and a elf combo deck.
I threw away a while ago all my pen and paper character sheets
I had a couple of pretty sick houses back when I was playing Ultima Online but I barely remember them.
I have no armies, no figurines and no models.

I guess I'll go with
>my blue deck so i can summon Jace so maybe he can teach me how to planes-walk
>my fetish B - because timestop
>my house- I'm fairly certain at some point I owned pic related
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>>53252483
Gau-8 is an autocannon, anon.
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>>53252632
*actual high-end magic. IIRC there are actually basically no Reality Marble creators around in the present day who aren't Apostles or Shirou.
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>>53252638
The house was surprisingly difficult due to not many games actually giving you a player housing.

If you were anything like a typical player, at least your keep should come with gold piles and several katanas of vanquish
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>>53252682
>>53252632
kerrys dad had one in his back garden

they are rare - but thats more because they are hard to make

they do require mana to sustain, as well as state of mind - but for a servant its fine

magecraft=/=magic
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>when you make progress on your cyoa
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>>53251669
>Except that when you encounter a blindspot all of your saves will get corrupted.
for a profane (I'm currently reading the s9 arc) what are blindspot?
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>>53252754
endbringers, entitiest
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>>53252710
Time Manipulation isn't actually a Reality Marble, just a power with a similar conceptual nature. But fair enough that an E-Ranked Mana Servant could probably generate one (although I'm still willing to bet that they couldn't do so for long, especially given how strong the servant in question is and how many other powers they have. My main argument in >>53251612 was that the marble wouldn't last long, not that it couldn't be summoned outright).
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>>53252740
>When you need to find unique character art for your cyoa
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>>53250433
I liked Dina
wining her trust and having a deal with both parts recognizing the other as a worthy person is really cool and is more appealing tome than a simple subservient summon


but I'm a fan of JUSTICE and I think that that's a deal breaker with her
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>>53252791
kerrys dad did have a RM tho

but yes, the RM summoned would last all too long (about as long as UBW at most) but that is more than enough to hit something the (1) time it takes to pancake it
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>>53252655
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rotary_cannon

Literally the page image
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>>53252813
use the "original" tag on booru, usually works for me.
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>>53252892
Oh my fuck thank you.
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>>53252703
>If you were anything like a typical player, at least your keep should come with gold piles and several katanas of vanquish
Yea that game was hoarding central, I would probably have kegs full of potions, weapons and armors, spellbooks and reagents, all kinds of minerals and leathers, deeds for pets that would be probably useless etc.
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Reposting this build, completely redone and closer in spirit to her source legend.
Before starting, I admit to having basically tried to break the system without technically going beyond the limits of the source material, which is why I chose to model after the legend that I did.

> Wish:
Create a Saber

> Alignment :
Lawful Neutral

> Personality : <
> Archetype :
Saber Alter
> Traits :
Cruel, Apathetic, Pious, Wrathful, Cool

> Class:
Assassin (seriously, I am going to have to build one of these for all 7 of the classes).

> Appearance :
Female, Adult, Horrifying, No-Ahoge

> Clothing :
Scantily Clad (+2 AGI, -1 END)
Skimpy Clothing (N/A)
Ceremonial (+1 NBL)

See image.

> Parameters :
Strength : A [-13|37]
Endurance : C [-3|34] (D)
Agility : B [-7|27] (EX) [A+++ if being reasonable]
Magic : D [-1|26]
Luck : A [-13|13]
Noble Phantasm : A [-13|0] (EX)

> Class Skills :
Magic Resistance : B [-10|20]
Presence Concealment : EX [-16|4]
Independent Action : D [-4|0]

> Personal Skills :
Information Erasure : A [-15| 35]
Instinct : B [-10|25] (Or 'Revelation')
Eye of the Mind (True) : B [-10|15]
Clairvoyance : B [-10|5]
High Speed Spellcast : D [-3|2]
Monstrous Strength : E [-1|1]
Divinity: E [-1| 0]

> > Noble Phantasms (Short List): < <

> Eternal Crimson Flame : Will of the Undying
Unknown type, EX(-) rank Noble Phantasm (Ability)
Costs 7.5 points (27.5/35 remaining)

> Samael'owtsar : The Gates of Death and Destruction
Anti-World, E(-)~EX rank Noble Phantasm (Ability/Weapon)
Factoring cost as EX(+), even though that is impossible in the source.
Costs 20 points (7.5 points/35 remaining)

> Shadow of Death : Veil of the Dark Valley
Barrier, EX(-) rank Noble Phantasm (Ability/Equipment)
Costs 7.5 points (1/35 remaining)

Because of the eyerape autism that is the Wall of Text that caused Gilgamesh to use Ea just to get it to stop, the full version is here:
https://pastebin.com/u6Ym2zZn
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>>53249214
>Hyouka
I see you are a man of culture.
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>>53247431
Earth spells done. Widely regarded as the broken branch. I had to think long and hard how to downplay its spells, especially town portal.
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>>53252892
So just grab any I like from /tg/booru?
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>>53250092
Pop astrology isn't real astrology. I mean it's bullshit either way but still.
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>>53250433
i really cant pick
between the imp, bajang and summoner

the imp looks nice and seems like a source of mild amusement

the bajang looks comfy as all hell (pun intended)

and the summoner has that charming innocence and makes me want to protect her from being in hell
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>>53252981
Earthquake, your troops have to cease fighting, not seize.
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>>53252815
If she holds you to the standard of letting her be her own person, it would be safe to say that she would do the same for you, what with you being a filthy justicenigger. I'm sure she can tolerate that at worst as long as you don't use her in justicemongering or something. Who knows, you might be able to convert her to your side.
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>>53249268
>Your Magicx3
>Bant Pod
>Animar Combo EDH
>Kemba Puresteel

Yeah the world is fucked, either grey goo'd by cat tokens or destroyed/devoured by a Eldrazi bounce loop. Bant pod with its toolbox of hard/soft counter etb and Death and Tax creatures will be used against any threat that is trying to undermine my gameplan.
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>>53252037
Seems arbitrary, unless it's like a matter of "this waifu only likes shorter/taller partners." I'd say it is fine on the condition that there's options to change yourself to suit them. Otherwise, any sort of physocal restrictions required to make a choice would be discrimination.
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>>53253029
Good catch, fixed it.
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>>53252974

This was supposed to be a reply to >>53247595
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>>53252974
wasnt she a saber the first time around?
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>>53252890
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Autocannon
Actually it classifies as a rotary autocannon. I didn't see that he just called it "rotary cannon" in the CYOA.

It should be machine gun if he's implying a smaller calibre.
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>>53253015
any booru you want. i usually use safebooru
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>>53252974
goddamn you - making me redo my builds with greater detail like this

i hope you know what you have done! they shall only get more sueish!
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>>53253089

Yes, but after much mulling, she makes more sense as an Assassin.
The Saber Build would end up much closer to the original form, but would probably not be as powerful or interesting; drawing on the Knight Errant aspect of her legend, if you will.
'I want to help the people' characters tend to be shallow.
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>>53253094
Agreed.
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>>53253160
just a quicky - whats the weakness from the - modifier on the eternal flame?
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>>53251618
Can glimpse and hindsight combo off each other? you do the action with glimpse and see the possible consequences with hindsight.
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"Well here is the fruit of Zodiac Brides Guy's morning labels.
He asked me to address that fact that he keeps releasing previews after saying he'll stop releasing previews, but he seemed quite concerned about this one because of how it differs from the others and how poorly he wound up managing the space.
He's open to criticism, but please be gentle with him.
I only just pried him away from the pillow..."
>>53252045
"Ahem.
Quote:
I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry, anon. I just followed the rabbit hole further down and down and I'm not sure how I managed to crawl out but I tried my best. Please don't hate me, anon. I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I'm goddamn sorry.
Unquote."
In all seriousness, I may redo to this one because sheep girls are my weakness. But almost definitely not as a Tsundere. It's an easy to use trope, but one that's really hard to pull off well.
>>53252237
"Well, I suppose I can respect that, Sire. Please do be careful not to be too rough that the message becomes illegible beneath the blood on your hands."
>>53252975
"My Liege is giving you a thumbs-up, as I'm told they're called, and nodding approvingly."
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>>53252142
MtG is a lot more interesting starting point (in my humble opinion) so, seconded.
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>>53252890
>>53253094
I wasn't really going for realism either exactly, after all the comparative difference between missile distance and cannon difference is great enough that the missiles would act beyond-visual-range. A vulcan has a range of around 1000m and an AIM-120 AMRAAM has 75km.
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>>53250433
I planned to but couldn't come up with an explanation or a mechanic I was happy with. I wanted to have the succes percentage and Will of the summon matter.
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>>53253277
It also has the most degenerate combos and card synergies compared to all other CCGs.

You can pretty much do almost anything with a good Mtg Deck.
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>>53247360
bird, I'll just be the observer to the chaos
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>>53253282
Isn't great enough*
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>>53253193

It's limited by the Grail War.
Originally, in the legend, the Eternal Crimson Flame basically made the Son of Samael a mini-Samael, basically a true immortal demi-god with power over life and death that could also perpetually keep people from dying or just flat out give people more time.
And, because technically speaking, that is a valid Noble Phantasm, reducing it to having mana limits, draining emotion, and basically driving those under its effects insane was the excuse for the (-), and relative inefficiency of the Mana-to-Healing ratio.
For clarification, the Mana Consumed to Damage Repaired is not 100% efficient, even for just herself, it would take draining/killing more than one person to prevent her from dying.
For someone else under the effects of the flame, that efficiency ratio is only like 25%, and that is before a 2nd or 3rd is added (at which time it drops to about 5% for all three of the affected aside from herself).

TLDR, the (-) stems from it not actually providing true immortality due to the restraints of the Grail system.
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>>53253282
>mfw AIM-120Ds have an range in the excess of 160 km.
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>>53253272
'the great sketital beast'
Got a typo there.
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>>53253272
Sebastian's pure interpretations of their search histories just make my cock harder. I can barely believe you managed to create such a ravishable adult man.
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>>53253272
She looks cute and fluffy to me.

I-I would like to see lady Persephone's portait
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>>53253294
You can always do the standard point system, the better quality the summon, the less points to spend. The perks/items could go into the mechanics, neither good nor bad, like say higher will increase the effects of X effect but decreases the duration.
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>>53253272
i'm not going to kill anyone!
I don't think i could physically harm anyone unless seriously threatened. I just want a way to stop them without having to beat them over the head or attack with weapons. That's why I took skilled, so I can do things like this without killing anyone!
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>>53253272
Oh dear. I'll probably not choose her as my main ally during combat, but take her into my household none the less. I'm sure she wouldn't object.
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>>53253368
>160km
For what porpoise do you even need to mount those on jets anymore?
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>>53253272
>her black husband
BLACKED
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>>53253350
basically every servant in the upper tiers is limited by the grail war

it seems like it needs an actual weakness rather than being weaker than its myth

(in his myth Hercules was actually immortal due to becoming a god, yet God hand has no - modifier)
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>>53249268
>Your Magic
Zur, the Enchanter EDH
>Your Power
616 Captain America
>Your Universe
Ravnica, from that Jace novel that I regret buying
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>>53253350

I think that's cheating a bit. If it confers powers approaching an EX-Phantasm, it should probably be counted as an EX-Phantasm even if it's weakened compared to normal. Remember, all high-end Servants are weakened compared to their original lives, so by that logic all of Gilgamesh's BS would be - ranked too.

That said I haven't read your pastebin rigorously yet, so this is down to you on whether you think the power is genuinely not worthy of an EX rank compared to other stuff. I've read the fluff thoroughly though, and I love the Son of Samael idea for a Servant.
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>>53253463
To make air combat as effortless as possible of course.
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>>53253272
>>I am your servant, your bride, your tool, your plaything
My heart says Vignette but my dick says Angelica
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>>53252740
>when you make progress on your CYOA but really you should be doing something else
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>>53253556
>when you accomplish something else but really you should be working on your CYOA
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>>53253463
To stay out of range of supersonic SAMs and enemy BVR missiles.

They can't fucking hit you remain out of range of their missiles and guns.
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>>53253463
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>>53253539
As far as I read that, that's just what she'd do anyway. She doesn't expect to win. You should adopt your priestess in any case!

>>53253556
Yeah, I know exactly what you're talking about.
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>>53253272
The only issue I have with your cyoa is the battle royale aspect. Is there 'safe' conclusion for us faggots who don't like unnecessary violence?
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>>53253491
from what i can tell the actual EX+ np is fair for its rank (its a weaker GoB + Ea)

the first NP needs an actual weakness as is- its a 2nd life that grants pseudo immortality and a crapton of abilities/skills

the last NP is similarly overloaded - and basically grants the servant meta knowledge about enemy masters

Tl:DR needs actual weaknesses for the (-) modifyers

gets annihilated by edgelord-lancer (her entire build is the kind of hax he counters )

even grounds with the guardian if prepared, smashed into splinters if not
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>>53253636
Get the right elexirs, use your brain and find a way that uses the bare neccessary amount of violence. Many anons already had ideas on that.
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>>53253652
I'm actually tempted to try to build Gilgamesh using the CYOA now and see how over/underrated he is.
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>>53253449
>standard point system
No.
I wanted the succes of the summon to have a "point based" effect.

You're misunderstanding what I meant by mechanic. I mean
>You get points equal to Will * Succes * [FACTOR]
It makes sense a more succesful summon = more "points" because you're a better Demonologist.
Fluffwise, the number of points would depend on how well you 'resonate' with the summon, which is why both succes and Will would need to take part in the equation.

Saying "you get X number of points because lol you just do" is not what I want.
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>>53252517
maybe you should learn to read
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>>53253696
you wont have enough for his NP's unless you ignore his prescience, and include enkidu in his GoB as opposed to giving it its own entry

otherwise hell be possible to make more or less perfectly (your stats may be better)
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>>53253527
>>53253578
>>53253583
I know, I just wanted to post the pun.
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>>53253272
Anon I honestly believe you ruined the CYOA by including an option as good as Vignette. She's too innocent to even consider anyone else. Like, even if I didn't want to waifumance her, I'd still be forced to "choose" her.

That means I HAVE to do some ruin-the-plan shenanigans if I even want to think about someone else.

I mean, I guess that's not necessarily a bad thing, but it does change the nature of the CYOA.

I'm aware of the autism but I'm assuming this is accepted given the nature of what we are discussing.
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>>53253698
How about you can take any amount of perks and items but they have a chance to fail and cause bad things. The chance and magnitude of fail depends on will, success, # of perks, relationship with waifu, etc. It doesnt have to be an exact formula, a description could do
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>>53253272
You say that it might be embarrassing for her to officiate her own wedding but it probably won't be any better if she loses and survives.
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>>53253763
>spineless, childish caricature of a moeblob is objectively the best waifu

How afraid of women are you?
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>>53247104
Soo... Can the heretic's library teach me magic or not?
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>>53253491

The catch, however, is that from my understanding Hercules only became immortal when he became ineligible to summon - he would be functioning under the same rules as Ishtar.
Before that point, he was mortal.
Keep in mind, God Hand is only a Rank B.
The Flame was meant to be Rank EX with a catch, while it's still excessively powerful, it's very closely approaching the realms of 'can be measured with the numeric system'.

I do understand and agree with your point, however.

>>53253491
Laughably, the largest problem I have had with these builds is cutting the overpowered aspects of the Noble Phantasms without leaving the realm of the origin stories.
I'm actually left scratching my head on this one.

I'll probably need to cut out a chunk of the secondary effects from the flame and leave it closer to its core functions.

>>53253652

The Last NP's information collection ability is almost useless against maguses, which I would assume includes all of the Masters except flukes like Shirou.
The strongest affect that part has is that it would
1) ID them as a Magus due to the lack of information.
and
2) Say they are there. Which is useless for this build anyway, because Presence Concealment works both ways.
It's (-) weakness is the fact it's an EX rank Noble Phantasm that can be resisted with any set of the right skills and completely shut down with B rank skills.
It would have otherwise been legal to have required EX rank resistances/skills to shut it down.

I assumed this was enough of a negative, considering that it could have been built as an A or B rank.
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>>53253815
/cyoag/ has a fetish for innocence and purity. Guess they just spent too much time as paladins, believing themselves to be chivalrous.
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>>53253815
You misunderstood me -- she doesn't stand a chance in the Big Battle. So, you have to try and protect her, whether through muh strength or through convincing the others Cassandra to not kill her.

That's, uh, discounting the just plain wrongness of calling my glorious waifu spineless or a moeblob.
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I just ran it all in my head. It's utterly impossible, assuming Tokiomi as his master. CYOA allows for total points of 50 for parameters. Gilgamesh has 60. CYOA allows 30 points of class skills, Gilgamesh has 12. 50 points for personal skills, Gil has 41. Gil has 35 points for phantasms. Ea is almost certainly EX+ at the lowest, Omnpotent Star is EX, Gate of Babylon is probably EX overall under this system. What a guy.
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>>53253763
basically this

although it does mean the CYOA is blissfully simple

Pick powers>>>pick vignette>>>end

>>53253815
have you read her bio? its impossible to NOT pick her and therefore hurt her - so you must pick her or seek a 3rd option

and whats wrong with moeblobs anyways?
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>>53247260
I'd rather have the horsecock; if she could swing that I could support her as a best girl candidate
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>>53253860
>'can be measured with the numeric system'.
every NP can be measured with the metric system

if its not EX but has no weakness rank just make it B or A rank
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>>53251953
All wings, listen up: our current mission is interdiction and general repulsion of Ysterian retaliation. Debugging some Great Game bullshit, not exactly within our pay grade to discuss in depth. Long and short of it, I don't want anyone loading bunker busters on outgoing flights - priority one is defense of our own turf. No-Fly Zones have been designated alongside and surpassing the Ysterian border accordingly. No one flies in, no one shoots in except against marked AA threats or hostile craft.

>[Nightstalker], Shieldmaiden, Frosty
Weiss, you say you went Chair Force because you could protect the most people with the least amount of exertion? Well, this is your big break. We have a lot of civilian targets in the crosshairs and I want all of them to remain squeaky clean through sunset. You'll be running A2A and A2G flights for the job as KEEPER 2. Ivanov, you'll be running pure A2A as KEEPER 3. Frosty, your job is being our eagle eyes as KEEPER 4.

KEEPER SQUADRON AIRFRAMES (195/500)
>Multirole
>Light Engine (75)
>Titanium (70)
>Moderate (15)
>Delta Wings, Moderate (35)
SPD 7, MOB 11, STA 9, DUR 12

KEEPER SQUADRON SUBSYSTEMS/ARMAMENTS (215/305)
>HUD 2 (20)
>ECM 2 (35)
>Autopilot 1 (10)
>ECCM 2 (25)
>Optics 3 (40)
>Sensors 2 (20)
>Stealth 1 (20)
>Takeoff/Landing 2 (20)
>Rotary Cannon, Extra Ammunition (15)
>Countermeasures 1 (10)

A2A LOADOUT [KEEPER 1/2 Alternating, KEEPER 3 Fixed] (90/90)
>SARH Missile 2 "Stormlance Grimoire" (40)
>ALR Missile 2 "Arbiter's Apocrypha" (50)

A2G LOADOUT [KEEPER 1/2 Alternating] (90/90)
>Rocket Pod 4 "Book of Retribution" (60)
>Small Unguided Bomb 2 "Book of Despair" (30)

MULTIPURPOSE ASSAULT LOADOUT [KEEPER 1/2 Alternating] (90/90)
>Short-Range Missile 2 "Lifesiphon" (20)
>SARH Missile 2 (40)
>Small Unguided Bomb 2 (30)

AWACS/CAP LOADOUT [KEEPER 4 Fixed] (90/90)
>ECCM 3 "Tauntaliate" (20)
>Sensors 3 "ATB Tracking" (15)
>SARH Missile 2 (40)
>Small Unguided Bomb 1 (15)
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>>53253888
>and whats wrong with moeblobs anyways?
lack of horse cocks, it would seem
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>>53253950

EX is specifically defined as 'existing outside of the scope of the Numeric Ranking System', anon.
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>>53253790
>How about you can take any amount of perks and items
No.
>but they have a chance to fail and cause bad things.
No.
Excuse me but your proposal does not sound all that fun. Nor am I too interested in updating it.
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>>53253870
>>53253888
>what's wrong with a moeblob

The utter boredom. Her personality is being nice and pleasing you. Can you imagine living a few hundred years with a bundle of joy like that? Someone whose entire world revolves around you?

It's tiring.

It's the romantic equivalent of those waifus who want sex 3x a day in all kinds of crazy positions. Fun for a month, then a chore.
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>>53253888
Don't pick her, tell her she won't have to hurt anyone or get hurt if she'd just drop out. Problem solved!
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>>53253372
"Ah, I shall inform him and get that sorted out immediately."
>>53253405
aikeroen ghb.k,g iebbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
What the hell?
Oh goddammit, Anon! You made Sebastian feint...
>>53253414
"Oh my, apologies Sires...
I seemed to have blacked out for a moment.
Let's see... Oh, certainly My Lord. I hope she strikes your fancy!"
>>53253455
"I'm ashamed to have ever doubted you, My King! You truly are the man I knew you would be."
>>53253471
"Ah yes, ZBG started laughing hysterically when he was proofreading. I'm not quite sure why, but he thought that was hilarious."
>>53253539
"Well... I'm... Sure they'd both be flattered that you are torn between them. Just try not to put it that way around Lady Vignette."
>>53253636
"Lord ZB Guy understands where you're coming from. Needless to say, the idea came to him as more an- A what? An 'anime-esque' scenario as opposed to a realistic one.
He's currently planning on addressing the issue in an additional page that will likely be posted a week or so after all the Brides have been completed.
I worry he may be pushing himself a little too hard since he's recently become fond of all of you and wants to make up for the time Persona 5 took up in between his work.
In the mean time, this fellow >>53253693 makes an excellent point."
>>53253763
"It's not his fault that Vignette is such a sweet little thing!
He also says that considering the nature of this thread, he believes you safe to be as autistic you like."
>>53253807
"Another excellent point. I do hope she can keep herself under control if that becomes the case..."
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>>53253888
>what's wrong with Vignette

She's a huge Mary Sue. She has no flaws. Well, no. She has flaws. Such as "being too nice" or "being shy". Look at how she has completely dominated the cyoa she's in. She's so pure and perfect other wives don't want to kill her.

MARY SUE

That's what she is.
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>>53253272
This could be much better. It's about 90% random lore, and the lore isn't even directly relevant to the CYOA.

The girl should be the focus of her own letter. You might want to keep the whole myth thing, but you can write that into the letter without straight-up telling us the myth. Even if you want to give the impression that she doesn't think it's necessary to write about herself you can still have her write about herself -- like, telling us all the things a religious bride should do for her King.
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>>53253972
and for the conventional ones you can

you can measure the beam from Ea (probably not the anti-world property)

its just that the EX np's tend to have very unique properties

>>53253994
>entire world revolves around you

but that would imply that she isnt a person - shell grow and develop just like any other, maybe shell grown more confident over time

>>53254042
she has flaws- namely her powers arent very good and her capabilities in combat/ ruling are very questionable

what she does is appeal to what appears to be a very common demographic (pure, someone you want to protect)
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>>53253652

Also, something I just noticed:
> gets annihilated by edgelord-lancer (her entire build is the kind of hax he counters )

The Sword of Gall and Kalah Nsmah both completely ignore any 'defensive' ability that is rank A or lower, including Edgelord-Lancer's Anathema; and the Samael'owtsar itself isn't an offensive Noble Phantasm, so he couldn't shut it down with his third Noble Phantasm.
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>>53254099
Yes, the lord forbid a waifu doesn't spend 90% of her time talking about herself. The lord forbid a waifu acknowledges some things are more important than her.
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>>53254042
>being shy
That's an actual floor my dude.

You don't know what a Mary Sue is, do you? You can have good people, you know.
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>>53253888
>and whats wrong with moeblobs anyways?
Nothing! I support all types of blob, moe or otherwise.
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>>53254133
>how to not read a post: the post
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>>53254116
Depends on the interpretation. The creator interprets 'offensive' as pretty much anything that can have an offensive hostile effect, which would thus be blockable. I personally prefer to interpret the power as much more restrained to conventional attacks for balance's sake, though.
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>>53254115
>implying waifus change after you pick them

Don't. You'll summon him.
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>>53254116
and the anathema makes him immune to effects of A and above- nullifying those two ( i feel like this issue comes up every time)

the gates of hell IS an offensive phantasm- in the same way GoB is
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>>53253994
No one else looks any more interesting. It's a CYOA, they're all ultimately just archetypes.
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>>53254133
>wanting to read a page of boring myths when you could be waifuing RIGHT NOW
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>>53247360
Ayy i have a similar one to that
Also i'd probably choose Cherufe, since i don't really like swimming, but his boons are abilities that have much practical use outside of combat
Or perhaps Ziz, since flying is pretty cool, but probably Cherufe
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>>53254151
>offensive
its like KoO with weapons - its whether tha NP is primarily used as a means of fighting (which both GoB and the gates of hell are) or as a means of protecting ( Avalon ,God Hand, Achilles everything, Siegfried/karna armor)
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>>53254139
It's a Mary Sue-type flaw. A beautiful perfect pure girl who happens to be shy is not "flawed". She clearly doesn't need to be assertive and doesn't suffer for it.

Being clumsy, shy, quiet, too pretty, nerdy, etc. are all non-flaws that tend to get heaped on Sues and presented as flaws.
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>>53254163
Is there an object oriented programming autist now?
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>>53254005
King Jeremiah Zodiac was the first Zodiac King or just the first Zodiac King called Jeremiah?
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>>53254262
He was the first to stick his dick in a butthole.
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I strongly disagree with you on the Gate of Babylon, I think that you're misinterpreting it wilfully to overpower Lancer. It's about summoning items at its heart, not about using it offensively. If you read the NP's descriptions it always talks about accessing his vault much more than it does firing shit.
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>>53254099
>shitting on integrating lore into the options
Fucking hell. No sane person likes lore dumps.
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>>53254253
You've just inspired the next unsalted potatoes.
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>>53254225
This is tv tropes-tier, anon.

You can't look at some checklist and say "aha! she sort-of kind-of matches up in some ways so she's a Sue!". Sues are all about the rolls they fill up in a story, not whether they're shy or clumsy.

This is the same as your obsession with finding neat little flaws in a character, as if you point-buy them or something. With flaws to balance out the good things.
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>>53254253
I don't think that is really the essence of object oriented programming
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>>53254291
>>53254217
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>>53254299
Exactly. Why lore-dump when you could integrate it with her character?
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>>53254165

> and the anathema makes him immune to effects of A and above- nullifying those two ( i feel like this issue comes up every time)

If the effect is nullified, anon, then the Sword or Bardiche is still going to be a mighty concerning weapon in its own right.
She has EX/A+++ rank Agility, - she's faster than he is and just as strong. So at worst it comes down to a semi-fair fight between to super-powers that are geared around cheating.
That is, until she paralyzes him. He doesn't have Rank A Magic Resistance.
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>>53254149
Including infantry blobs?
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>>53254351
No, those are disgusting.
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>>53254336
His golden armor gives him free rank A magic resistance if you guys are talking about Gilgamesh.
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>>53254324
What if lore dumping is indicative of an aspect of her character?
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This is one of the cringiest cyoa threads I've seen in a while.
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>>53254377

Was talking about the Edgelord-Lancer.
CYOA Son of Samael is not equatable to Gil, unless she uses her massive speed advantage against him.
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>>53254377
They're talking about two childishly munchkinned custom Servants in a CYOA system clearly intended to go off the honours system in terms of balance since it's more about what you write than the numbers.
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>>53254351
WE GOT THE ROCKETS!
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>>53254379
You can do that while actually writing about her character. As it is, we're learning about some random kingdom's birth and prosperity and death and her character could have been developed all the way through that.
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>>53254411
This is the most civil this hellhole has been for the last several weeks.
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>>53254163
>was thinking of trying out a ponytail for once, just for a change of pace
>immediate retraction
What can be done to save Unsalted Potatoes?
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>>53254423
WE FIGHT FOR NOD!
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>>53254411
>cringiest
CRINGE
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>>53254461
Agreed. Fate autism and waifu chat is actually shockingly pleasant after the endless insanities this place has vomited out lately.
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>>53253953
I see you went really tech heavy with your build. I'm glad to see the benefits to cost weren't too high for a lot of these subsystems.

Using optics and SUBs seems like a really smart idea if you're acting in a more defensive manner
I'm glad Frosty was likable enough to take, I was afraid I made him too nofun
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>>53254411
You've been gone for a while it seems. The last few were little more than just shitposting and trolling.
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>>53254467
Nothing. Unsalted Potatoes is most likely a fair representation of how the average autist would treat his waifu.
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>>53254291
then i suppose it shouldnt work on GoB

>>53254336
her only weapon that can hurt him is the scythe as both the sword and bardiche are too high rank, and as for stats yes, she is stronger. but he is much more durable and quite possible stronger (monstrous heritage + a str vs a str). and to add to all that she can only strike at the equivalent of B rank Str

Anathema is reverse God hand (targeting A+ effects rather than B-) so anything that would be nullified by god hand if it were a B rank attack would be nullified by Anathema (so brute force A rank and higher attacks would be negated just as God Hand negates pure strength B or less attacks)
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Destroyers deserve much better than this. Much, much better than this.
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>>53254520
Please don't mention destroyers, or you'll remind SDA of all those years he was abused by the big bully destroyer.
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>>53254513
>mistreating your waifu

then they aren't their waifu
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>>53254518
>she is stronger
faster*
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Next thread?
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>>53254658
suggest a CYOA for op that everyone will ignore and I'll make it.

No hurry tho, to be honest, this one is still on page 7, tho I'm tempted to make one just to escape Saber chat.
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>>53254634
>faster*
better*
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>>53254700
Worm repost might be good. Didn't get too many builds last time that weren't just 'muh Shard spam'.
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>>53254730
>better*
harder*
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>>53254700
Post the dying waifu one so we can start the thread on a happy note
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>>53254700
>Saber chat.
its better than the kind of autism that happens when there is no safe release
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>>53254746
>harder
*more than
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>>53254700
D&D game but you only have so many points to spend

Will you sacrifice your mountain dew for the chance to play with a girl? Will you enter the Magical Realm for the extra points needed to play a good game instead?
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>>53254787
>*more than
adequate*
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>>53254700
Genie cyoa. My thread "lost" to this one so I couldn't be bothered to build for it.
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>>53254733
But won't it still be just shard spam?
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>>53250092
Where is the second part?
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>>53254812
>adequate
Buy it, use it, break it, fix it,
Trash it, change it, mail, upgrade it,
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>>53254859
fuck it
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>>53247104
>European Historic because of classy.

Penthouse suite because why would you not?

Bar Between Floors because it sounds cozy as heck. Irregular Grocery so I don't have to walk too far to buy groceries. The Apartment Gym for the same reason. Abandoned Store because it fits in with me picking up subjects and dropping them every now and then.

Watchful Moose for safety.
Desiccated Hand because if someone wants to help with my taxes than I'm not going to stop them.
Occupied Mirror because it sounds kinda fun.
Vending Machine because why wouldn't you?
Painter's Memento because the extra money will be handy.
Sentient Microwave because it'll save me time when it comes to cooking.

Veteran Kowallski because I have a thing for military history.
Bearded Chronicler because I like avoiding trouble and I like stories.
Marxist Mice because they sound fun to drink with.
Ancient Witch Irina because I wanna try magic!
Apartment Janitor because of that "fixed things will work too well".
Apartment Gargoyle because I like the whole idea of gargoyles surrounding my penthouse.
Charm-Giving lass because she sounds neat.
Stair standing stones because that sounds really neat!
Changling because I want her to not be sad :(
Delving Adventurer because of trinkets and stories.

Gravity Anomaly because it sounds neat.
High Five Hands because I can get pretty hyped over high fives.
Illustrated Stalls because of the possibilities.
Open Door Day because this sounds fun.
Stairs to the end because that sound dangerously cool.
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>>53254820
And that's why you put the relevant info in the OP, and post a link to the thread in the old one.
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>>53254859
Around the World (repeated hundreds of times)
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>>53254837
Make it 'CYOAG: 'Trying to abuse shard copying is for pussies' edition'? idk.

Or just have a reminder that the creator admits shard copying is OP and ask that people try to be more creative and fun with builds.
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Also, it's bad idea to suggest cyoa you actually want people to see, no post in the thread receives as little attention as the OP. Basically only time people bother with cyoas posted there when they are really fresh OC.
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Fate Saber Night was a mistake. Why did we allow this to happen?
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>>53254099
"This is certainly sound criticism. Lady Angelica's faith is a defining factor of herself but maybe-"
>>53254133
>>53254379
>>53254324
>>53254446
"Alright, well now I'm just confused."
>>53254262
"He was the first King Jeremiah. In fact, the next King will be the first King whose name isn't Jeremiah in centuries."
>>53254280
"Well, that's simply historically inaccurate."
>>53253815
>>53253861
>>53253870
>>53253888
>>53253904
>>53253960
>>53253994
>>53253997
>>53254042
>>53254115
>>53254139
>>53254149
>>53254173
>>53254225
>>53254317
>>53254608
"No! Let me go, Sire! They are tarnishing Lady Vignette's good name!"
Okay guys, please calm down. Sebastian's trying to punch the monitor and he is much more muscular than I thought.
"They shall pay with their blood!"
Alright fine. Is this what you people wanted?
>pic related
I had to show Vignette this to help understand why Sebastian's freaking out! Are you fuckers happy now?!
"If I punch hard enough I'm sure it will reach the bastards!"

Alright. That's enough autism for one day. I'll look over Angelica again and see if I can't change some things to make her personality shine through better.
Have a nice day, /cyoag/!


"Let me go! Sire, this demands retribution!"
No! You're banned from the computer!
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>>53247104
>this nineteenth century building may be the oldest in your country!
Nigga we got medieval shit
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>>53254926
>cyoas were a mistake
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A brave new thread: >>53254946
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>>53254933
You know how to make cyoa fun. Looking forward to it, but im scared it'll outshine mine and no one will look at it T_T
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>>53254933
Hey, I just tried to find a way in which she'd get away without being injured, killed or put into a situation where she's forced to hurt a friend. In what way is that 'tarnishing Lady Vignette's good name'?
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>>53254890
I think you tried to insult me but I can't tell.
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>>53251953
Wingman
-Lt. Nora "Lion's Mane" Scholz

rest of flight
Lead
-1st Lt. Kyle"firebird" mitchell
-2nd Lt. helena "sunrise" Alexopoulos

>We Fighter Wing BABY!!
SPD:11
MOB:11
STA:7
DUR:9

Engine-Heavy 50 +2 SPD +1 STA
Material-Titanium 70 +1 STA +3 DUR
Size-Moderate 15 +1 DUR
Wing- Swept back 20 +2 MOB
Wing size- Moderate 15 +1 MOB

subsystems
HUD3: 30
Stealth3:45
Takeoff/landing2:20
ECM3:60
ECCM2:35
Sensors3:35
Optics2:30
autopilot0:0

ARmaments
Rotary Cannon:10
Short Range Missilex2:20
Micro Missile:15
SARH Missilex2:40
CounterMeasures:10
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>>53255124
I think he was just telling you to put the relevant info in the OP, and post a link to the thread in the old one.
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>>53254500
Coinflip between him and Flower Child, really. Everyone else just seemed too aggressive to be shouldering a defense mission, and there's no guarantee some other wing is gonna be flying AWACS, so may as well hand it to someone passive enough for the job.

I'm picking up a lot of the tech nuances from the CMANO LP on Something Awful, of all things, so I can't say too much on the utility-to-cost for things like VTOL or RAM. Laser Designators feel like they're definitely worth the Tier 3 of Optics, but not to being a mere 10-point difference from the next tier down. I'd make Optics a 10/20/35 tree given how much of a jump it is from Simple Under-Craft Optics and how little those are comparatively vs. Rear Optics.
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>>53254973
If your writing was better and you didn't include fucking emoticons it won't be forgotten.
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>>53254933
Farewell, and take good care of yourself. Until we meet again!
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>>53248961
Vignette is lovely. If she was a white mage, then she would be something I could have come up with. Keep up the good work.
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>>53251618
>The one where you don't die from aging and there's almost nothing in the world capable of killing you
So aside from the aging thing, how is it different from Broken Limiter?
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>>53252974
>>53253491

Okay, a little late for this, but...

Rewritten the Noble Phantasms, hopefully making them properly limited.
https://pastebin.com/bh6A2AvN
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>>53251953
I was thinking of making a build, but >>53255146 pretty much made what I wanted to do
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>>53251953
>Some partner, whatever.

>Multirole
SPD:6
MOB:7
STA:6
DUR:8
>Light Engine (425DP)
SPD:7
MOB:7
STA:9
DUR:8
>Titanium (355)
SPD:7
MOB:7
STA:10
DUR:11
>Compact(340)
SPD:9
MOB:7
STA:10
DUR:10
>Delta(305)
SPD:9
MOB:10
STA:9
DUR:10
>Moderate(290)
SPD:9
MOB:11
STA:9
DUR:10

>HUD2, ECM2, AUTO1, ECCM2, OPTICS3, SENS3, STEALTH0, TAKEOFF2 (105)

>Rotary, Short range missile, Rocket pod, SARH Missile (differs from ALR how?), small unguided bomb, large unguided bomb, extra ammunition, countermeasures (0)
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>>53255595

Fixed something.
https://pastebin.com/8LNqPnfF
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>>53251953
Flight members:
Lund Moreau
I pick him mainly for his ability to stay calm and collected through extremely stress situations and nothing else.

Sarah Desmond
Because she is very serious about her duties, all of her other traits is inconsequential to the mission.

Anastasiya Ivanov (Wingman)
Perfect Cannidate for Wingman, I just someone to cover my flight and escape routes.

Aircraft Role: Strike

[450]Engine: Standard
[420]Material: Steel
[385]Aircraft Size: Large
[365]Wing Shape: Straight
[350]Wing Size: Moderate

Subsystems:
[330]HUD Rank 2
[320]Autopilot Rank 1
[280]Optics Rank 3
[260]Sensors 2
[240]Takeoff Landing 2

Armaments:
[160]Short-Range Missilesx8
[060]ALR Missilesx4
[000]Micro Missilesx4

SPD:5
MOB:5
STA:10
DUR:17

My aircraft is a flying armoured missile truck, my job is fly into enemy territory and dump all of my missiles and then fly back to base, refuel, resupply, rinse and repeat.
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>>53255841
SARH requires constant feedback from your craft, while ALR can operate on it's own without your radar giving it info. This makes ALR "fire and forget" missiles
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Post saturday morning cartoon villains.
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>>53247595
Arturia Pendragon (true king) She is from a timeline wherein she took to the role of a king in great stride, finding her true strength not in her sword, but in her ability to lead and inspire. her charisma was a gift from the gods, with mere words she brought even the most black hearted to tears, able to have crowds in the palm of her hands, able to make a serial killer see reason and repent, able to have the pious let loose, able to sway the masses to her cause.

Of course that was not her only skill, finding herself to be a truely formidable commander, snatching victory from the jaws of defeat playing enemy commanders like a fiddle, traps, feints, ambushes,etc. This skill of course transfered over to her as a heroic spirit.

CREATE A SABA
Alignment-Lawful neutral
Archetype-Red Saber
traits-Proud, Confident, Servile, Cruel, Conflicted

Class:Saber
Magic resistance

Details
-Female
-Sensuous THICC
-Adult Saber
-Double Ahoge- EMOTE Ahoge

Clothing
Medium Armor +1 END
Formal gown
Suit & Tie

Paramaters
Strength:B-7
Endurance:B-6
Agility:B-7
Magic:E-0
Luck:B-7
Noble phantasm:EX-23 +35 NP points kappa
points spent :7x3=21+6=27+23=50

Skills
Magic resistance(class skill) B:free
Territory Creation:EX-26
Independant action:D-4

Personal skills
Charisma:EX-25
Golden RuleA-15
Eye of the mind(true)B-10
BraveryB-10

Noble Phantasm-Absolute Authority 35 points to spend
Rank-EX-15
+1 Modifier-5 - Fight for your KING!
+3 Modifer-15 OBEY

Form Concept
classification
Anti-army/Anti-World (dependant
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>>53256977
notes The powers of her "kingdom" are an offshoot of her noble phantasm. she also has all of the normal powers of an EX rank in territory creation

Her skill Territory creation allows her to "claim" territory as part of her "kingdom", in her kingdom she can enact royal edicts/laws that ALL who enter must follow(with the few exceptions being Herself for she is the King, Her master, and any of her "subordinates") The laws are always something minor or vague but can be rather powerful

for example while she can't make a law/edict that states that all hostiles who enter must commit suicide, she can make it so that all hostiles/people who aren't exempt gain "lag" of 1 full second meaning that just like in a video game all actions made by those affected would take 1 full second before they happen.

another example could be that all who enter must lead with their left foot, while a magus would be relatively unaffected a master swordsman would be nearly crippled as their instincts scream for them to push with their right foot, but cannot, they could adjust but the initial impact could be devastating.

she can also warp terrain, temperature or even the time of day withing her "kingdom"

it should be noted that while she can make exceptions this does not make those who are exempt immune to the affects of her "kingdom" it rather makes them believe that they had always followed those laws. so a master swordsman who is exempt always new to lead with only their left foot, thus developed his/her fighting style around the concept. thus gaining a significant advantage. a magus who must follow a law that states they cannot use a key word for spells learned to develop new spells with different words.
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