/cyoag/ - CYOA General

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>>53113333
This is definitely my jam!

>>53113375
>saint uses a halo
>ghost-walker becomes incorporeal again nearly instantly
What the fuck is this

>>53113455
I guess Saint could force him to become corporeal again when he's inside something?

>>53113667
>You cannot become corporeal again while any part of your body is within a solid object
>Ghost-Walkers are moved into an open space before made solid again

>>53113699
Yeah, just read that, rules clarifications at the bottom like that are a bit annoying but I guess it's better than not having that.

So wait, there was a new Genie Gallery last thread. Is Beri making those again, or is it someone else? Either way, it seems like I'm once again too late to add anything.

>>53113776
It was beri, though it sounded like it was mostly because he wanted to do something but felt too tired to do anything substantial.

>>53113385
What is wrong with Eurobeat?

>>53113820
Nothing. It's pretty funky.

>>53113791
Oh, cool, I always liked those galleries. Hope he feels better, though.

>>53113333
>>53113365
>>53113375


Rolling for two complications. Build to follow based on what I roll.

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What are the most popular isekai cyoas? Isekai being traveling to a totally different world/universe that you were not born in?

>>53113893
Or I would be, if I could figure out where the email field was in 4chanX...

>>53113917

I've never gotten why Subaru gets so much flak as a protagonist. I feel like he's a lot more interesting as a character than most MCs, even if he's annoying.

>>53114071
You see the last line in that picture? I feel like that's the reason why. Too many neckbeards feel that way, it's safe to assume it rustled jimmies a'plenty. Lack of self-reflection and whatnot, you know.
That said, his soliloquy in episode 21 was somewhat fucking insufferable.

>>53113375
>Scourge of the Cosmic Seas

>The Bulwark
>Raiser of the Dead
>Greatsmith
>Natural Philosopher

>Artifact: Melee weapon (rapier)
>Improbable
>Precise

The ship will be manned by my army of the dead, I'm not discriminating tho, anyone living can join too if they want. And no "You can join me IN DEATH AHAHAHAHA" deal either.

With abilities granted by Natural Philosopher and Greathsmith, turning the ship into functionally floating fortress should be easy, maybe even allowing it to sail across the land. I should also be able to arm the undead somehow, they might not be very good but I suppose they don't need to. And if nothing else, I can stuff them full of explosives and they won't complain.

Then it's just following a compass to the treasure, blowing the fuck out of any defenses and stealing everything not nailed down.

>>53114116

You mean episode 12? Where he totally sperged out at Emilia? Yeah, I agree, that was hard to watch.

Nonetheless I really enjoyed it as a whole because I felt the show never really sided with him for it.

>>53113375
>Lord of Fire
>The Bulwark
>The Greatsmith
>The Traveler
>The Slayer
Artifact
>Armour
>Magic Absorbent
>Improbable
I am the Eternal Warrior, those who are not with me are against me. And those who are against me shall die. Let the blood flow like water.

>>53114116
You sound like the one projecting here bub.

>>53114116
Isn't it proper to consider yourself in debt to a person who saved your life?

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There is a non-zero chance that I will be completely reworking this(read: half the content is already written) within the next time. So if you feel so inclined, shoot me any feedback or ideas you have.

But please not that I won't shoehorn in stuff just because there's popular demand for it. If I force myself to create stuff I don't like, it's gonna be shit.

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>>53112044
Seriously, what's it supposed to be about?

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>>53114198
Nothing is more annoying in a cyoa than when the cyoa itself is not real in-setting. It's like a book that ends with "it was all a dream. The end." It's infuriating.

I personally think this cyoa would be a lot more appealing if it was set in an actual virtual world.

The nukes are just fucking strange too. It's a tad too unrealistic and makes PvP impossible. One death could in theory cause a chain reaction which turns the Earth barren.

>>53114166
I mean, sure. That said, going on a diatribe about how much whoever the fuck owes me because I did whatever the fuck is a painful thing to watch. It's like someone helping you out once and then being like "Yeah, but do you remember that time I helped you out" whenever they fuck up.
>>53114139
That too. I'm talking about when he sperged out with Emilia and when he went into a lengthy sloliloquy in front of Rem/Ram about how much I love Emilia and I'm sorry I acted like a gutless little cunt and played with your feelings on the way. I enjoyed the show for your very same reason, incidentally.

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>>53114247
Imagine a Conduit of Malsanis and Cra.
Their minions would be damn near unstoppable.

>>53114274

Ah, the I love Emilia thing. I was never quite as infuriated with that as everyone else seemed to be, probably because I wasn't that enamoured with Rem. But even so, I hope that if there's another season we keep seeing consistent development from him. I'm curious to see where he goes from here as a person.

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>>53114273
I did consider making the premise a bit more fantastical and less obviously-a-joke.

But I must admit I did not imagine that someone could take the nukes joke as actual city-destroying nuclear weapons. It was just suposed to be a small charge that uses some nuclear material, as a joke on SAO's method of killing the players via microwave.

>>53113917
Traveller, Pokemon Personified is isekai played straight, Royal Revival because you started in that world came to this one and returned home.

Can't think of any others right now.

>>53114325
Better combinations would be Malsanis and Qlippoth or Cras and the Spire.
Malsanis and Cras does have great thematic synergy though.

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>>53114370

>>53114370
I thought it meant actual nuclear weapons, because that's what the word is usually used for and the tone of the CYOA was such that I just went ok, nukes, makes sense, carry on.

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>>53114370
>I did consider making the premise a bit more fantastical and less obviously-a-joke

If your cyoa is a joke, then you can't expect us to treat or play it seriously.

It'll just be a joke (read:shitpost) cyoa.

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>>53114406

>>53114395
I guess I had been playing to much fallout around that time because I imagined mini fatmans. Don't know if I keep that joke in, I guess things would get rather boring if it's just repeated over and over again.

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>>53114441
You know, that actually gave an idea. I might just raise the stakes significantly.

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>>53114540
And that's all.

>>53114441
>It'll just be a joke (read:shitpost)
Jesus anon, sometimes things can be funny you know

>>53113375
>sanctuary
>far-sighted
>saint for memory gain
>ghost-walker
>greatsmith

>armor
>magic absorbent
>autonomous

I'd run around and find a cool plane to settle on I guess.

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Poppin' OC

>>53113333
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>>53113383
I honestly feel this give too many points. You can buy every single positive option if you are willing to spring for only a few drawbacks, it seems like less of a 'build a world by making choices' and more of a 'have all the best things'.
Which may be what it's going for however.

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How is your collection Anon? or do you prefer to just browse it on threads? I'd have more but my old HDD corrupted last year.

>>53114381
>Pokemon Personified is isekai
>Hero is hyped up as a messiah to the people.
>Hero is from another world, but that doesn't really matter much to the lore of the cyoa.
>Hero was a random who the entire time and a janitor according to God who is a lazy NEET.
>The hype was only caused by the previous Hero and only people who actually give a shit about the Hero is the government's SS and rulers.

I feel like the author likes to take a shit over people just for the fun of it.

>>53114649
ITS HERE

>>53113917
Most worlds/universe creation CYOA? I don't know if they count for you.

>>53114702
1,5 GB, most of it probably source images and somewhere is the database + code for development.

I usually only save nice images I find anywhere because finding them when you do something new is a pain in the ass.

>>53114649
Didn't you say there would be male demons?

>>53113333
>>53113365
>>53113383
I feel like this title worked better before the "magical realm" meme became popular.

>>53114649
I think the summoning percent idea is a really cool idea, I really like it.

Artifact
25%
Ifrit

Hero of Justice girlfriend is best girlfriend.

>>53113333
Area7 13
Gateways2 3
Protection2 6
Population 10 20
Attitude Adjustment 1: Generally kind, easily aroused, and generally friendly.
Culture & Customs. 2 Hugs are exchanged like handshakes, and generosity is extolled. Social welfare is universal. Everyone you ever meet is down to cuddle.
Pretty Population 2: with a stipulation that around 10% of the population is more homely. Not ugly, but not exactly good-looking either.
Population demographics: 75%female, around 15% of the population are futas, and around 10% are traps.
Extrahuman population: Approx 20% human, 35% near-human, 35% monstergirl, 10% outright monster. A pregnant woman gives birth to children at these rates, regardless of what their partner was.

Tech 5
Magic 1
Aesthetics 2
Public Education 1
University 2
Infrastructure 2
Sanitation 1
Mercantile 2
Industrial 3
Secure 1
Healthy 1

Affinities: Music, Theatre, Animation, Literature, Intellectual, Gaming, Mechanical
Food, Sexual, Festival 10
Fertile 1

Lifestyle 1
Influence 1
Immortality 2
Tounges 1
Inspiration 2
Friendship 2 3
Harem 2
3

Everything's always nice and cuddly. There's always some way to have fun and generally roll around in hedonistic bliss. Sometimes it rains or snows, and is really cold, but there's always someone to cuddle with, and sometimes non-sexual cuddle orgies break out. Not that there aren't sexual orgies, but people don't want to waste a good cuddle. Skinship is the natural order here.

>>53113333
>https://mrcyoa.000webhostapp.com/ WebApp
is it me or it doesn't work, also I cant seem to find a working interactive version of the cyoa, anyone got it?

>>53114800
That wasn't him, that was me and I was shitposting to enrage the waifu crowd by saying stupid shit.

Don't believe everything you read kids.

>>53114800
What are you, gay

>>53114198
Oh, this one.

It's pretty good overall, but a few minor critiques:
>Make it clearer that the WHORE engine (if it's still in) includes a(n area-specific) adult mode.
>Hybrids of Halfbloods always have a stray half-point left over. Not really a balance issue, just weird.
>Diversify the weapons a bit. There are three weapons *without* Strength as primary, and many weapons have the same stats. Maybe swap Shields' stats, and add a staff/wand class to start?
>Expand on the rarity of different numbers of stars, maybe in a note or something.
>The Halfblood rolls being optional is nice, but the Enhanced Character Creator should allow choosing of at least one of the numbers.

>>53114837
It works for me, did you allow it from NoScript?

Anyway, the script is in drive, if this works
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bwl-aJm3wG4ndERiU0t2Z2hOOVE
If not, check the pastebin in OP for Drive link, then check Magical Realm folder.

>>53114225
There seems to be 3 fighting men and a cleric. Some variety would be nice.

>>53114649
>white font on marble
Please don't.

>>53114649
Fuck that's kind of hard to read.

>>53114649
Was making Naifa best girl part of your plan?

>>53114832
>Pretty Population 2: with a stipulation that around 10% of the population is more homely. Not ugly, but not exactly good-looking either.
Why the fuck would you willingly make some people unattractive???
You are an evil god.

>>53114649
Contract
75%
Hylla

Best girl is the girl that can get you more girls

>>53114649
Ay, good to see you finished this one. Was wondering what'd happened to it.

>Summon: Ritual
"Rumor was that this place was cursed. Still, I didn't expect that those rumors would have any truth to them."
>Success Rate: 75%
"As far as I can see, everything seems to have been performed with relative accuracy. One of the glyphs is misplaced and, judging by the place and smell, I think they misunderstood the "Sacrifice" part of the ritual. Still, it's a pretty solid incantation."
>Summon: Naifa
"I had a brief conversation with the creature that spawned out of the circle. It's not how I expected an Ifrit to look, but I didn't expect someone to be holding a ritual here either. She idolizes me, which could be dangerous. That said, she seems attracted to the idea of justice, something that baffles me. Still, I can't say I've got no use for someone like her, but if I send her hunting, I'll have to keep an eye out and hope she doesn't bite more than she can chew."

>>53114986
I mean, he included futas. That should have tipped you off.

>>53115036
Right?
Who wants a futa that isn't drop-dead gorgeous.
What a fucking weirdo.

>>53114649
>ritual
>25%
>unknown

Curiosity is qt

>>53114649
Ancient Text
25%
Planar

Unknown is a cute.
Plus I dig the Eldritch more than I dig demonic stuff.

>>53114986
It's kinda weird adjustment because bell curve exists anyway and beauty standards have been all over the place over the history.

If everyone basically looks the same, people will find some other standard to judge on. The adjustment just ensures that everyone looks beautiful to you, not to each other.

I guess you could argue that if you widen the bell curve a bit, people might be still willing to accept your beauty standards but there won't be any extremely ugly people.

>>53114649
Contract
100%
Hylla

Time to take over the world and get laid.

>>53114649
It's a little confusing having both a will stat as well as a ritual success stat. It's not very clear how they interact.

>>53114883
Thanks for your feedback. Let me ramble a bit on it so that I don't forget everything over work tomorrow.

>Make it clearer that the WHORE engine (if it's still in) includes a(n area-specific) adult mode.
I'm going trough all the descriptions again, but currently it doesn't look like the underwear restriction is gonna stay. In general the cash shop will need some changes and most numbers will be rebalanced.

>Hybrids of Halfbloods always have a stray half-point left over. Not really a balance issue, just weird.
Noted. If possible the numbers will match and maybe Halfbloods won't have the bonus point that causes this. Or I'll just cut Hybrids, they mostly exist to fill the row and I don't think I've ever seen anyone use them.

>Diversify the weapons a bit. There are three weapons *without* Strength as primary, and many weapons have the same stats. Maybe swap Shields' stats, and add a staff/wand class to start?
All of that actually happened already. Every stat is represented as primary and secondary, but the numbers don't allow for perfect representation. Staffs and another magic weapon class are also in. It's gonna be only eight types, but with way more options.
That area has probably the most changes.


>>53114898
Do you mean it's just a bad choice of pictures or do you expect the standard tabletop classes? Because the four we have are modeled by your role in combat, not where your power comes from. For example I magic based tanks are a thing, also bow using healers.

>>53107373
Viva la revolucion! build

>Assassin
>Shadow Walker
>Pocket Watch

Unless a person is living in a hermetically sealed bunker, they're basically trivial to kill due to the pocket watch and shadow walker. So the plan is to systematically murder anyone in power that doesn't agree with my political views, making most look like suicides/accidents/health complications, with the occasionally frame job to knock out more opposition at once.

>>53115206
I'm going to say that Assassin is kinda weird class there. Ok, so you could say that they steal lives but they don't actually get anything out of it and while assassins might be kinda associated with thieves, it's just because they both kind skulk the night.

But thank you for bringing forth the communist revolution, comrade.

>>53114198
Patron
Human of the non-egg laying variety.
Angel
Strength 5
Agility 6
Endurance 8 (11, Bracelet of Mastery)
Skill 4 (8, Ring of Balance)
Attunement 9
Spear&Shield

50 Ambrosia, free
Ring of Balance
Bracelet of Mastery
Fae Companion
Resin x30
Banner of the Legion (Quick question, does it work off my highest natural stat, or my highest boosted stat?)
More Ambrosia

Free League, but I moonlight with the Player's Union and Knight's Alliance.
Mostly I just offer healing and tank services to anyone who wants to go grind for a very reasonable share of the loot, and try to prevent players from being knuckleheads or ending up over their heads in social intrigue as imagined by your average 4chin poster and facebook normie. Sometimes I get called in to a big raid as a support troop, but since I'm generally underleveled and undergeared, I can't effectively tank there, and instead act as a vending machine and cheerleader. I can take a hit or two, though.

>>53115153
>Cash shop
Alright, that works. I'll try to critique it if you post it in thread or on the Discord.

>Halfbloods
I used them (albiet as a Hybrid with Automata for a flashy-as-hell tank), and beastpeople are a staple of fantasy worlds. Maybe increase their subspecies bonus to +2 or something?

>Weapon types
Excellent.

Also, what are you doing with the Modules? If you're keeping the general idea, would you mind doing an Item one?

>>53115407
I don't know if the modules will have big changes, since they're mostly just setting information. But items is a good idea. I've recently been reading into mythical weapons a lot and there is some really neat stuff other than your basic excalibur or flaming sword knock-of.

Maybe I'll flavor it as a raid drop or quest reward or something.

>>53114649
Artifact
50% (Why would someone not pick 50% over 25 or 0?)
Naprac

I like it, but I feel like it needs a second page. It also needs something to balance not just leaping for the highest summoning % you can get.

>>53115518
Some people like their servants to have more agency. A lot of the higher up options seem to suggest they're in risk of being changed by you

>>53114198
-Class
Patron

-Race
Elf: Duration of buffs given and received boosted by 20% (That buff is just WAY to good to pass up, especially in a buff heavy class like Patron)

-Divine Gear: The Angel (Extra mobility and all stat buffs go to my weapons. Never know when I'll need to go someplace high up or fly over the battle to get to an ally)

-Weapons:
Spear and Shield

-Stats
Strength: 3
Agility: 7
Endurance: 4
Skill: 6
Attunement: 8

-Items (200 Transferred to In-Game Currency)
Ambrosia Crystal: 50
Teleport Crystal: 50
Adult Mode (Honestly don't know if I'll even use this, but I can't buy it once I'm in the game. Being locked out of certain areas bugs me, and I'd rather have this and never care to use it than end up with a waifu and only be able to hold hands)
Fae Companion (Extra help healing is always a plus)
Navigator Fairy (Question, do the fairy and fae companion fuse into one being or do I have two separate companions around me all the time? Can they banter with each other if that's the case?)
Bracelet of Mastery (+3 Agility for Spear)

Starting Faction: Figured I'd pick the Knight's Alliance, and get to work grinding and keeping people alive.

>>53114649
>Artifact
>50%
>Hylla the Controller

Always wanted my own Cult

>>53115153
>Do you mean it's just a bad choice of pictures or do you expect the standard tabletop classes?
I'd guess he means stuff like archery or rougery. But that stuff is covered by weapon choice, so idk.

Did that guy with the endles space 2 cyoa ever finish it? just got the game and it has me hype for the setting

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>>53114702
>How is your collection Anon?
So-so.

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>>53114702
>>53115702
I mostly just save the stuff I like.

>>53113917
Isn't that the show where the guy cucks the blue haired maid?

>>53114559
Looks cool. Will def actually read through all the pages when you finish your rework or whatever. I can tell that I'm going to get annoyed by forgetting what symbols mean and having to scroll to look it up but thats more my problem than yours.

>>53113358
Speculated by butthurt feminists.

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>>53114702
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>>53115794
SMALL TIME

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Alright...
I think I've found the magic number of font to bubble.

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>>53114702
>>53115702
>>53115794
>>53116065

Wow, apparently I'm complete scrub tier.

I'd like to make the excuse that I only recently got my hands on a laptop, so I wasn't saving many since I only had my phone, but...

I think I'm just really lazy.

>>53116065
That's bullshit
What do you have, five duplicates of a dozen versions of every cyoa in jpg, png and psd?
Do you ever housekeep your files?

>>53114649
>Artifact
>0%
>Hylla

I am now a harem slice of life protag, complete with a girl who tries to get me more girls that I have no control over.

Hylla best girl.

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>>53114649

>mfw too many good waifu pics

should I put in more cowtits or lolis?

>>53116187
loliconism is a disease.

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>>53116149
Are you just collecting them, or working on your own?

>>53116187
more curves

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>>53116187
Muscular tomboys!

>>53116187
More redheads.

>>53116187
More athletic girls with nice proportions.

>>53116187
More cowtit lolis.

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>>53116187
More lovely cowtits, please.

>>53116187
Why bother?

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>>53116159
Nah. 99% of my CYOA folder is my project files.

>>53116187
Normal sized tits > Meme sizes

>>53116229
I mean I try to create my own but none of mine are saved onto my phone. They'd all be PDFs anyway since I have no patience for image editing, and the fact that they'll be like that ends up sapping my motivation because I can't feel confident enough in my work to bother with anything I'm trying to make.

I usually just save the ones I really want to keep track of to the point of being afraid of losing them forever. Used to just bookmark my favorite ones before I came to /tg/, but then the links stopped working.

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>>53114649
Contract. I'm not sure what the point of these options are though. Relevant as how others might get demons? A contract at least makes sure she isn't going to have a change of heart.

50%. Anything more is pointless when my demon is already doing what I want. Don't need a puppet when their goals are your interests. Besides, as the demon agreed with a contract I can only repay her with faith and free will in return.

Hylla is best girl. Controller? Excellent. Domineering demon is a go. Best goal too, but a cult sounds a bit overdoing it. This age requires you to be tactful, such as to start by making a corperation rather than a religion.

Still though, sexy as fuck attitude. Approved.

Is there anything more comfy dark than a grey cloudy day with a light shower while reading a good novel?

>>53116187
Oppai lolis.

>>53114649
>Sacrifice
>75
>Hylla
She is happy to sreve, shich is nice and cult is cool too, i wouldn't need to work as they would aquire currency for me and there also be bitches. I could also have many kids with women of the cult and i wouldn't need to worry about all the problems as there would be enough people and resources to care for them while i would just get the plesant side of having children.

>>53116346
>I'm not sure what the point of these options are though. Relevant as how others might get demons?
And how you might get more demons, as seems to be implied by some of the demon choices at least.

>>53116347
that's not dark

>>53116187
More cowtits. And dditionally more cowtits with the penises

>>53116394
It is, for people who are into comfy shit at least.

>>53116187
Lolis.

>>53116390
Looking at Naprac, it seems a demonologist can't control more than one demon at a time.

>>53116187
Horse-cock futas!
With cow-tits.

>>53114649
Contract
75%
Naifa

>>53116346
I think the options are just for lore and fun.
Like maybe you want to have a demonfu but you don't want to be some edgy teen to instead you just stumble upon an artifact. Maybe you like the idea of contracting a demonfu instead, impressing her with your phoenix write ace attorney skills

>>53116187
neither

>>53116167
did the author forget what columns and rows are?

>>53114649
Oh hey it's finally here

>Ancient text
That sounds like something that i would probably do

>0% success
And naturally i fucked up

>Naprac
At the very least she seems nice maybe she can help me to actually become a competent demonologist? her goal seems a bit well impossible but i guess it won't hurt to try

>>53116564
It was apparently a mistake, but they found it more amusing this way.

>>53114649
Was hoping for something cool until I saw the fucking waifus.

You people really suck at this. No creativity. Only thinking with your junks. Jesus fucking Christ.

>>53116564
>>53116614
Wasn't a mistake, it was intentionally as written. We've been over this.

>>53114649
>Summoning: Artifact
Ack! This is the last time I order history books online!

>Success: 50%
Makes sense. I never meant to.

>Demon: Siphmur
Oh, dear. What have I unleashed?

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>>53114649
>Contract.
>100%
>Naifa.

Deep in the recesses of my mother's basement I signed a contract with a spirit of Justice! With the power of my contract she becomes the armor that adorns me as I fight on for the future! We combine to form a burning hero of Justice that will free the universe's destiny from the darkness that is amassing!

This is the story of how I became the defender of Earth.

Nafia, HENSHIN!

>>53116631
Weak bait.

>>53116298
So most of those pictures are waifus and anal porn?
Meh, doesn't count.

>>53116658
How the hell can one of the Demons of the Seven Sins be inexperienced?

>>53116672
Wasn't bait. Is the truth too much for you?

>>53116347
Far off lightning is comfy.

>>53116666
>6666

A hero has been born.

>>53116690
Because Anime Comedy Harem logic, I assume.

>>53116187
Add more lolis

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>>53116631
>Jesus fucking Christ

>>53116690
It's up to the reader to make sense of whichever wacky combination of options they end up taking.

>>53116666
Was a NEET hero an actual character of Kamen rider ever, super satan?

>>53116666
>itt. Satan was forced out of hell and forced to live an autistic human life

>>53116754
Kiva, if I'm remembering correctly.

>>53116631
Were you mad the husabando choices were a lie anon? Or are just sick of the waifu deluge?

>>53116779
He was a violin maker so he had a "real" job.

>>53116754
Kabuto was one.

>>53114649
Ancient Text I guess? I dont know if any of this effects anything.

75% Success
Hylla I guess? Seems like making a cult would be fun. And mind breaking people. And all. Yeah. And I'm sure the cult could help me with translating more stuff from the book and summoning. I have no idea when or if I'll be able to summon more stuff and method of summoning seems to be more fluff than filler though.

>>53116797
Nah, I'm just tired of love options as a whole. It's fucking annoying.

>>53113333
https://web-beta.archive.org/web/20150715225554/https://63afd638575e0a2fbdda19bd44f65d165d6ed49c.googledrive.com/host/0B3kTDrvhIDLzay1iUmV1UmVKcmM/index.html

the lazy option

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>>53116187
Smug Lolis.

>>53115506
Yeah; legendary artifacts and maybe more details about how hard it is to get certain rarities of items.

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>>53116631

>>53116871
Damm that smug is amazing

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>>53113333
yandere

>>53116631
>Only thinking with your junks
Basically everyone here.

>No creativity
/cyoag/ has produced some really creative works at times, but it's a rarity.

>>53116938

Fucking all of them

>>53116666
> https://youtu.be/nmOZzYeU6f4
Actual found footage of anon fighting for justice.

>>53116977
I'm digging Archer's new look

>>53116938
How are Elizabeth and Quies yandere. That archetype basically need a third party. And is it "The others hate you", or "the others hate you if you pick two?"

>>53117008
He finally became a seigi no mikata.

>>53116938
All are shit except Alice.

>>53114198
Class : Slayer
Race: Demonics. Lifesteal from death? Sounds good.
Gear: The Twin. Double the damage, double the fun.
Weapon: Main weapon Dagger. Off weapon Sword. Double the amount of skills available but at a much slower proficiency gain.
Cash shop: 50 resin (free) , Teleport Crystal (500), Fairy (500), Adult mode (500), Griffin (1500)
Faction: Forerunners Guild I guess? They're the only ones that boost AGI.
[STR 5 AGI 6 END 3 SKL 8 ATN 7]

>>53117053
https://youtu.be/zvv8hOcD4Fk

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>>53116938

>>53113333
[85] Area Increase 8
[84] Insertion
[81] Assimilation
[78] Gateways 2
[74] Population Increase 2
[72] Pretty Population
[69] Population Longevity
[65] Metahuman Population
[60] Technology Upgrade 5
[56] Magical Upgrade 2
[54] Aesthetics
[53] Public Education
[51] Wealthy
[48] Industrial
[43] Technomagic
[41] Infrastructure
[40] Sanitation
[39] Healthy
[64] Amnesia!
[63] Animation Affinity
[62] Art Affinity
[61] Literature Affinity
[60] Music Affinity
[59] Mechanical Affinity
[58] Gaming Affinity
[55] Landscape Adjustment
[53] Rich
[50] Exceptional Materials
[45] Fauna & Flora 3
[40] Dungeons 3
[36] Pantheon
[32] Theme
[30] Shape Shift 1
[28] Blessing
[27] Levitation
[25] Alchemy
[23] Enchanting
[21] Conjuration
[19] Elementalism 2
[16] Friendship 2
[14] Waifu 1
[12] Peak Condition
[2] Divine Spark
[1] Teleportation
[0] Tongues

>>53117192
Good thing that Insertation says that there be no negative side-effects from it, otherwise something five times the size of sun might change things a bit.

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Woah, the husbando idiot isn't here. To celebrate, this.

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>>53117156
>AVA
>AVA
>https://youtu.be/KfwteoZCvoY

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>53117222
Nobody said it would need to be in this solar system.

>>53117228
Don't jinx it.

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>>53116187

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When can we get more cyoas like this one? I like how you can choose either comfy, or creepy/dangerous, or a mix.

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ONLY ONE WAIFU. TOO MUCH WAIFU WILL RUIN YOUR LAIFU.

ALSO PICK THE COLOR OF THE MYSTERY BOX FIRST. IF YOU TRY TO CHEAT, GODS OF CYOA WILL PUNISH YOU WHEN CYOAS BECOME REAL.

>>53117254
oh come on anon, it's not like things that you don't want to happen, happen anyways when you say so, right?

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Posting one of my absolute favorite CYOAs.

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>>53117276
DOUBLE MYSTERY BOX, HOW CAN IT BE.

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>>53117286

>>53117286
>Become a slave.
Into the trash it goes.

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>>53117297

>>53117301
You have the option to just accept judgement instead, if you want. Beggars can't be choosers.

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>>53117312

>>53117289
Good thing i can see the future and percieved this mystery box before it was posted. ??? is still best waifu.

>>53117276
purple mystery box
>>53117289
lala

I'd only try to limit her destruction to those that actually deserved it - cap the collateral damage to a small city, tops. But yeah, totally going out on murder sprees to kill the 1% when they do something horrible, which basically means all the time.

On the plus side, if I focus her rage enough, she won't feel bad after pureeing people.

>>53117337
Was there talk of a CYOA about having ??? as your waifu? I don't know what they had intended to put in it, but I can't remember if that conversation actually happened or if I dreamed it.

>>53117267
I want to live in the village so bad.

Endless expanse is the best border.

>>53113375
Ghost-Walker
Keeper of Stillness
Gravity Adept
The Bulwark
Seeker of Wisdom

>item
Accessory: mask
Magic Absorbent
Spiritual

Going for a Bandit King vibe

>>53117457
Kill them both.

>>53117457
>no car option
shit cyoa

>>53117367
An anon suggested it to a namefag author, and they refused on terms that were agreeable. I think ti was for another Yandere cyoa.

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>>53117457
>I'm more into Betty
>But Veronica was a giantess once
shit, I can't choose

>>53117457
>No option to help Reggie come out of the closest and be his homosexual lover

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>>53117457

>>53117457
Laser Shark

>>53117501
Oh okay. Thanks for letting me know!

What would people want in such a CYOA though? I mean, I doubt I'll put any effort into making one, but I am curious how a "Life with a pocket goddess CYOA" would work

>>53114649
what? no male demons? 0/10 shit cyoa

>>53117457
Marry Veronica, kill her, inherit her father's fortune.

>>53116167
>Main choices
Depraved Angel
Forbidden Love
Archdemon: Lust
Devil-Mother

>Extra Choices
Archangel: Chastity

>Challenges
Same Classes
Shared Room

This solution is entirely centered around teasing one poor angel.

Since I picked depraved angel, my angel is a depraved sex maniac, but she tries to keep it all bottled up since she's the Archangel of chastity.

Lust and I will devour her. All kinds of fun events would happen. I might walk in on her in the bathroom. Instead of immediately closing the door I may stare at her with my mouth hanging open, until she speaks up and tells me to get out "H-How long are you going to keep staring at me?" "S-Sorry!" *door closes*

When she gets out and confronts me about it afterwards, I'll tell her that I was in awe of her beauty. I'd get to watch her become flustered as her face turns red because she wants to be angry at me but can't anymore.

The nature of lust combined with their "forbidden love" destiny will cause lust to tease chastity as well. I imagine chastity might be relaxing when all of a sudden lust comes up behind her and whispers into her ear "Hey, have you seen it yet?" "Seen what?" "Brother's p*nis" "N-No I haven't" "He's in the shower now, do you want to peek?" "T-There's no way I'd want to see such a thing" That's when I'd pop around the corner, looking depressed. I see, so chastity doesn't like me... Then she'd get flustered again and try to find the words to say that she is actually interested in me, giving lust a chance to tease her even more.

By her nature, lust will also be all over me, which will cause my assertive angel to angrily try to break us up. When my angel pushes her way in-between us, In her haste, she won't notice her proximity to me. I'll pretend to act embarrassed and point out that her chest is touching me. Lust will be like "how bold..." The angel will shrink back and say something like "that's not it...!".

Eventually her frustration will culminate in forbidden three way love.

>>53117542
I'd imagine the fun of it would be avoiding her wrath, so options around her quirks and her taboos. How to please her so she's a merciful deity. Things of that nature.

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>>53117457
>Not including rule 63 Archie or Jughead

>>53117574
>not faking her death and keeping her as a sex slave
pleb

>>53117600
She's an ugly bitch. Why would I want her at all?

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>>53117593
Pic related, it's chastity when she finally snaps, pins me down, and rides my cock.

I'm not going to heaven after this, am I?

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>>53117457
Where does the Predator come into play?

>>53117611
All women look good with a bag over their head

>>53117599
Is that form an actual comic or made for other... reasons?

>>53113375

Titles
1. The Unspeakable
2. Natural Philosopher
3. Medicus
4. Seeker of Wisdom
5. The Traveller

Artifact
- Armor
- Spiritual
- Magic Absorbent

Unspeakable mainly for defensive purposes, I can't be killed except by another artifex and nothing can stop me from just portaling away if it comes to that.

Natural philosopher gives me invisibility so that I don't drive mortals mad, and lets me understand anything I touch and make all manner of magical devices.

Medicus allows me to heal mortals, and mainly I will travel from one universe to another, offering to cure disease and restore people to the prime of their youth in exchange for sharing all of their knowledge with me via seeker of truth. Traveller allows me to bounce between universes more often.

Item/properties are just protective stuff, I don't intend to do a whole lot of fighting so it's just to help keep me safe.

>>53117599
Who just tells their dog to go home in the middle of a walk?

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The stars are now right! Time for mind control CYOA!
(1/2)

Uncensored version
>>>/d/7407495
>>>/d/7407496

>>53117276
THE CYOA GODS ARE A THING? WHAT THE FUCK ARE THEY WAITING FOR THEN?

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>>53117740
(2/2)

Uncensored version
>>>/d/7407495
>>>/d/7407496

>>53117741
when the digits align...
when anon is born on this earth...
when the fabled fire rises...

>>53117741
For you to get octs

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>>53117699
Turns out internet smut artist Gisele Lagace works for Archie Comics and they let her pen an entire issue.

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>>53117817

>>53117740
Is your main occupation in life cyoas? Or is this merely the power of a pervert?

>>53117758
Just how badly does pocket dimension screw up your mental faculties?

>>53116116
Neat
I like those new perks.
So you've got 17 out of 20 points place.
You still gonna do cybernetics, Outpost, and Immortality options?
And then you've got the… Alignment? to think about.

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>>53117869
>Is your main occupation in life cyoas? Or is this merely the power of a pervert?
This is the true power of a pervert! Don't underestimate me!

>>53117899
I think it doesn't, it just taxes your power a lot, making you unable to learn as many powers as you could otherwise ... explaining the rather high price.

>>53117938
Makes sense and that's what I'm hoping for. But I don't trust lewd cyoas not to turn on me.

>>53117899
>Does pocket dimension make u retarded?
No anon, its just flavor text, just like this one says ---> >>53117938

>>53117630
Was this a real comic? I wouldn't ask but I know for a fact that Archie Vs The Punisher and Archie meets The Ninja Turtles are real things, so...

>>53112535
Just FYI /co/ and now /aco/ have had a created heroine named Golden Girl for some time now. Dunno if that means you want to change her name or not.

>>53117957
Especially if they're about fucking with someone's mind. You're absolutely right.

>>53117286
Witch, Waifish Orphan. Let's go with Denisse.

Horned Chameleon, call me Percy.
The Mind/Through Their Eyes
Standard Chameleon camouflage abilities, long sticky tongue, opposable hands and tail.
Telepathic
Detector
Mage Hand
Ray (Fire, but blue because reasons)

Jobs: Primarilly protector, but I dabble in Scout, Valet, Sage, and general buddy.


Secrets Below. Never mind that neither I nor my mistress are good in a fight, she's doing this anyways, despite my pleading to the contrary.
I'm doing my utmost to see her through this, and I so heavily hope there's nothing down here that wants a fight...

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>>53117963
Yes. It ends with Archie dying and then Betty and Veronica using a machine to transform the predator into Archie

>>53117457
Betty.

>>53117983
wot

>>53117983
I guess all those years being strung along by Archie really fucked up Betty something good

>>53117740
>>53117758
Telepathy (3) [10]
Conditioned (1) [9]
Libido (1) [8]
Sensitivity (1) [7]
Lactation (1) [6]
Normalize (1) [5]
Immortality (1) [4]
Tireless Servant (1) [3]
Self-Hypnosis (1) [2]
Combat Training (3) [-1]
Maid Training (1) [-2]
Cum Production (1) [-3]
Shrink (1) [-4]
Age Manipulation (1) [-5]
Stretchy (1) [-6]

Cosmic Alignment (+2)
Slave Limit (+2)
Eldritch Horror (Pale blue/grey skin, tentacle cocks) (+2)

>>53117740
>>53117758
>Means of Control (11)
Familiar. I'm liking the idea of an impish lass to assist with my projects

>Slave Type
Unaware (10)
Considered conditioning, but I'm thinking I'll do a catch and release sort of thing.

>Boons
Libido (9)
Sensitivity (8)
Rewrite memory (7)
Lactation (6)
Induce Fetish (5)
Stretchy (4)

>Powers
Pocket Dimension (1)
Flesh Sculptor (-4)
Flesh Scultptor probably covers lactation, stretchy, sensitivity, and libido if it's truly powerful enough to create even monster girls. However, these options are representative of my interests so I'll take them to be fair, instead of using Flesh Sculptor to assume myself some more points

>Drawbacks
Cosmic Alignment (-2)
Slave Limit (0)
These should keep me from going too crazy. If I ever want a new slave, I can just let one go. She's Unaware as it is, and I can use my ability to rewrite memories, personality, and bodies so she's better off after my care than she was before.

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>>53118009
>>53118025
The comic was a pretty fantastic ride. There's something about gratuitous violence in the Archie style that just is really amusing.

>>53118085
Now I'm just imagining Archie and friends making guest appearances in mortal Kombat.

>>53117740
Telepathy
Conditioning
Libido, Normalized, Induce Fetish, Body Swap, Age Manipulation, Shrink
Pocket Dimension
Trigger

Rapey Slaves

The fun isn't in making someone, it's in bending them. Also for building a collector's vault. A collector's vault with "faulty" security.

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>>53117915
>cybernetics
yes I still am, and some immortality too, but since its 30 points distributed across 20 perks in new conduit im trying to keep things consistent (and I have to look up art constantly)

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>>53118130

>>53115141
>to the anon last night, yes I am indeed using photoshop.
Ok what I'd do graphically then for your cyoa is this.

* use the shape tool to make a soft cornered rectangle for the center of your monitor.
* Make another shape thats a rectangle and then use the function that lets you cut out 1 shape from another to punch out the soft curved rectangle from the sharp one to get a perfect monitor shape.
* I'd probably then add some fading scan lines that get farther apart as they go into the top part of the monitor to blend the 2 parts together.

I'll see if i can whip up an example to show you what I mean a bit clearer.

>>53117758
Flesh Sculptor seems like it'd overlap with (i.e. do the same thing as) a bunch of regular boons. Care to list them, or should I just assume anything that seems to have a purely physical affect to be doable with the aforementioned power?

>>53118141
>>53118069
>>53118056
You do know you get one of the slaves for free, right?

>>53117740
My first though after reading Immortality is that i would be able to make gladiator fights between my girls. Now that's kinda a uniqe option, sometimes you can see such an option in CYOAs about afterlife or something, but not in ones such as those. And it wasn't even something i ever thought for my harem to do. That's cool.

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>>53117983
What the actual fuck am I looking at. Is this canon? When in the Archie timeline did this happen?

>>53118172
Oh, yeah. I don't actually care. I just want this power for one specific person.

>>53118162
>Flesh Sculptor seems to overlap with a lot of boons plz list them.
Shrink, Gender Swap, Futanari, Twinning and Self-Hypnosis for body transformation purposes.

>>53117289
I should really finish that story I started writing about devourer a few months back. I seriously love that character concept. Kudos to the author for making his waifus so memorable.

>>53118172
What's the point? It's easy enough to make a 3DPD slave without resorting to sloppy freebies.

>>53117758
If you take Expanded Mind and make yourself immortal with Self-Hypnosis + Immortality (plus Tireless Servant to remove the need to sleep, eat and drink), will you eventually be able to replicate effects of other boons/powers via super advanced technology?

>>53118218
Victoria's cash would grant you a nice foundation to grow more powerful from.

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>>53118188

>>53118208
Age Manipulation as well if you don't count in the mental aspects of Age Manipulation.

>>53118149
>flawless victory

Poetry.

>>53117286
>Witch
>Waifish Orphan
>Mammal
Common raccoon. City boy through and through, I am.

>The Alleys
>Urban Whispers
An' so's she. We're a right pair, the two of us, ain't we?

>Warper, Mage Hand, Speedy, Pickpocket
Us ringtails are always wanderin' around, ain't we? Includin' in places we ain't supposed to be. But no garbage, I ain't touching that.

>Job: hybrid Sage and Spy
An' what else would I be doin'? I'll help out with whatever, o' course, but I figger ain't nobody gonna look too closely at a raccoon sneakin' around nights.

>Events: The Ki͓̘̞͔͍̟̙n̡͙g̮̪̘͈'̰̜̘̝̫͍͇s͇ ̴̰͈̠̺̹̖̀F̴̛͈͎͓̼̰̖̳ą̗̟̻͖̙͙í̥̺̣͟͝ŗ͎̭̺̺͓̖̫̭̘̯̫̖̺͓͈͝e̢̜̟̥̭̗̥̭̼̼̰̕͠


>Events: The war is coming. Xeria is losing. The front is here. Prepare.


Why yes, that is 100% grade-A bullshit, but you gotta admit - it'll be
a heck of a story if I ever get off my ass and write it. Speaking of which, to whoever made this CYOA, how would you feel about me writing a story based off it?

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>>53118238

>>53118228
Yes, that is possible. But it will take a lot of effort and time to do so.

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>>53118189
It's not canon to the main Archie comics, just a side comic in an altenrate universe, since other characters die permanently. Like afterlife with Archie.

Archie vs Predator was a mini series (4 issues I think?) that involved a young predator coming to earth and falling in love with Betty and Veronica, killing anyone who got in his way.

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>>53118253

>>53118237
What's even the point of that when you can enslave some rich faggot and make him give you his money?

>>53118172
Yeah, but I don't want to

>>53118208
Does it also cover breast expansion, cum production (for me), and lactation? How about stretchy?

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>>53118273

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>>53118161
You have my attention

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>>53118285

>>53118281
It cover breast expansion, but not lactation, cum production or stretchy. Think of flesh sculptor as a cosmetic option, you can change the appearance, but you can't add functions.

>>53118208
>>53118244
But not the following?
>Lactation
>Fuckable Nipples
>Stretchy
>Fuckable Urethra
>Cum Production

Also, if a slave is freed from your influence, do boons/powers applied to them stop working or revert or somesuch, or do they remain in effect?

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>>53118297

>>53118300
Ahhh, I see. Thanks!

>>53118172
Nah, man, I'm good. You keep 'em. I don't need anybody's sloppy seconds cluttering up my collection.

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>>53118302
>But not the following?
>list of boons
Nope, the list is not covered by flesh sculptor. Flesh sculptor is for changing appearance, not adding bodily functions.

>Also, if a slave is freed from your influence, do boons/powers applied to them stop working or revert or somesuch, or do they remain in effect?
Pic related

>>53118332
So Flesh Sculptor can't switch genders or turn girls into futas? I thought it was like buying all those powers in bulk.

>>53118365
Well Flesh Sculptor can switch genders and turn girls into futas. As I said in this post >>53118208

>>53118365
You want this >>53118208

>>53118365
I think it can make a Futa, but it can't make the futa cum, if that makes sense.

>>53116167
Big Sisters
Sinful Demon
Archangel Chastity
Devil Mother

Shared Room
Lets Go Shopping

>>53118300
>Think of flesh sculptor as a cosmetic option, you can change the appearance, but you can't add functions.
>>53118332
>Flesh sculptor is for changing appearance, not adding bodily functions.
Objection! That clearly contradicts your previous statements:
>>53118208
>Shrink, Gender Swap, Futanari, Twinning
>>53118244
>Age Manipulation as well if you don't count in the mental aspects
Shrinking would require the body to be redesigned to function in the reduced scale, both Gender Swap and Futanari would need to insert new reproductive functionality (among other things), Twinning might also need to do the same, and Age Manipulation would require the capability of making the target's body physically younger/older (depending on desired age), which could include things such as growing the reproductive system to maturity (or the reverse), etc.

>>53118388
It can make the futa cum. But it can't make a futa have a stretchy rubber dick. In the description it says it can turn you into a dragon, you won't be able to breath fire, but you will be able to fly since you have wings. You would make a tentacle penis moster and all the penises would work, but you can't make a demon and expect it to have magical powers. I don't know how to explain this, I had my doubts when I wrote it and knew it would be confusing and hard to explain. I might remove it and replace it with something else in a later version, I donno.

>>53118446
It allows for physical changes, but it doesn't change physical properties. That's what I understand when I read the description.

>>53118446
Just make it clear that it can't grant you the abilities offered by Boons, then maybe lower the price by 1 to offset it?

Or just put in your list of what it can and can't do. Trying to explain it will just lead to people poking holes in your justification

>>53117740
>>53117758
Having a Familiar to grant you Boons like immortality seems really good. But then you remember she can drop things like cum production or lactation on you if she wants

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>>53118441
Magic and this, exactly this --->>>53118467

>>53118495
>Familiar is pretty good, free self-hypnosis.
>But she can dump shitty things on you.
Yeah, but if you make a submissive familiar you could always ask her to not dump things you don't want on you and if she pranks you with dumping some boon u don't want you can always tell her to remove it when the prank is done.

>>53118471
For any more Flesh Sculptor questions Ill refer to this -->
>>53118467

>>53118501
Is sensitivity a physical property? Could I change someone's sensitivity to the point that they'll cum from having their breasts played with or is that also not allowed?

>>53117817

>entrance
coin

>Outdoors
lakefront

>outdoor add-ons
Brook
wildlife (birds + fish)
Tree & Shrubs
fickle weather
Hot Springs

>indoors

Kitchen
-Wood Fired Pizza oven
-Breakfast Nook
-Food replicator

Living Room
-fireplace
-comfy furniture
-streaming service

Bedroom
-ultra-comfort mattress
-needs and imperative are halted
-temp control blankets


Computer Room
-top-tier laptops
-increase processor
-ram and vram

Library
-upgrade size
-push button fireplace
-lucid imagination

Home Gym
-Full gym
-full set workout machine
-burn fat and build muscle double speed

And if your wondering where to shit and bathe, that's what the hot-springs and lake is for

>>53118446
>I might remove it and replace it with something else
Let's see examine each perk and see why it might not be affected:
>Lactation, Cum Production - The nutrients required are magically generated in order to not tax the body, also porn physics to allow for the swelling.
>Fuckable Nipples/Urethra, Stretchy - Stretchiness beyond what is biologically viable, i.e. porn physics again.
Noting the magical nature of these perks should do away with most confusion - sure, you could achieve something _similar_ to what these do (in that you could have fuckable nipples by way of restructuring the nipple and throwing some vaginal stuff in there, or you could stretch orifices out but it'd have to happen more-or-less manually - and increased lactation/cum production would take its nutritional toll on the target), but not the magically enhanced effect.

In summary: Don't remove Flesh Sculptor, just note the magical nature of the production/stretchiness.

>>53114198
This one was fun. I think I made a Halfblood God's Hand mafia, where we ambushed and killed rival crafters who competed with us, artificially lowering supply and letting us charge exorbitant prices.

I'd second >>53114273's opinion; though I personally don't mind, others do. It doesn't have to be fantasy either. It could just be that the technology that made the MMO somehow created a new dimension. A separate dimension would also makes the Outer Things more troubling, and makes one wonder if "Larry" even existed or is part of their insanity reaching the creator. Perhaps the creator found and used an eldritch artifact to make his new world...

Subplot idea: Outer Things may or may not threaten to breach into reality if not stopped in the Secret Postgame Dungeon [where "The Truth" resides], even if the game dimension remains fine.

My own general suggestions:

>Make each stat symbol a different color for ease of recognition and memory
>Make the four classes more distinctly different. I'd suggest they can fulfill any DPS/tank/heal role, but each does so differently [Vindicator can quickly switch between roles in-combat, Patron can use a summon, Slayer can empower abilities 150% while costing two times more, Ravager can turn any instant effect into a more efficient over time effect].
>Make weapons use a wider variety of stats
>Mystery box cash shop item! 600. Gives a random item, some rewards [like certain cosmetic pets/costumes/house] can only be gotten by the mystery box
>Maybe a bonus unique to the player? Could go against the MMO feel though.

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>>53118292
>>53118161

Let me know if this is confusing....

>>53117817
>This will never be real
Just kill me now

>>53118683
Not sure if I'd keep the scanlines I did and I'd do them differently if I were going to redo it but this works for a sample image.

>>53114649
What other things have you made?
Why is artifact limited to 50% max when it's the thing keeping the demon in control and you now own it?

>>53113333
BLAST FROM THE PAST

>>53117740
>>53117758
Means of Control:
Telepathy

Slave Type:
Unaware Slave

Boons:
Hive Mind, Immortality, Mass Control, Normalize, Rewrite Personality, Self Hypnosis, Tireless Servant

Powers:
Expanded Mind

Drawbacks:
Permanent Changes

Nothing too surprising: Use Self Hypnosis with Immortality to make myself completely immortal and with Tireless Servant so I don't need to waste time on sleep anymore. Then proceed to silently integrate all of humanity into my Hive Mind, of which I'm of course a part, and spread my control like a virus. Unaware Slave lowers the danger of discovery. After I'm done our entire species is united under one vision, one purpose, doesn't need to eat, drink or sleep, and with the entire intellectual capacity of humanity as well as my Expanded Mind we'll conquer space, and after gathering a critical mass of intelligence, ascend in some kind of technological singularity.

And then, strange aeons into the future, we'll be nearing the heat death of our universe and be pissed I took Permanent Changes and made all of us completely immortal, or find a way to move to another one.

>>53117740
[13]
Lets start from drawbacks.
Cosmic alignment, Permanent Changes and Rapey slaves. I'll just have to be careful on granting boons. Might as well also go eldritch horror if I can be human looking with light purple skin and maybe back tentacles. I wish there was another 1 pointer I could take. [19]

Means of Control : Telepathy I think? Its expensive but being pretty unstoppable and telepathic communication is nice. [3]

Slave type: Reluctant slaves, Conditioned Slaves. [2]

Boons: Sensitivity, Libido, Normalize, Rewrite memory, Age manipulation, Induce Fetish, Mass Control, Immortality, Orgasm control, self hypnosis, Hive mind. [11]

Powers Expanded Mind. Let's be honest. If I'm going to be immortal, then I'm going to need to fix a lot of world issues like wars and global warming and terraforming and colonizing other planets. Plus it'd probably help me control the hive mind.

Free slave: Gwedillth. Melissa seems like a threat and she's useless without her powers. Fukawa seems nice but her fetish isn't worth passing on the elf. Especially when I have induce fetish. I'm sure with my powers we can slowly make her happy.

Well, time to take over the world a little at a time. Use hive mind to grant my slaves the power to add more slaves. Use conditioned slave for training. Mostly it'll be them training people they know that when they follow the voice in their head, they become happier. We'll slowly take over the world like this. Of course everyone keeps their own personality and mind. For the most part. I'll only use my powers on my personal toys. The rest will work on spreading the hive mind and keeping the world functional. Of course, I may or may not rewrite memories and add in a fetish for being under my control as needed.

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>>53116167
>Archdemon: sloth
>Archangel: charity
Both very chill and easygoing. Low-energy.

>little boy
>big sisters
>devil mom
By the end of school I'll have perfect grades, a less fucked up face and two christmas cakes.

>let's go shopping
Done this before, it's the shit.

>mothers visit
At least for the eye candy.

>remember: no bully
Easiest job in the world.

This is how I give up.

>>53116116
Excellent work so far. I like how you cut down on the number of words from the first draft, and gave the perks a more "universally applicable" feel.

>>53117817
>Entrance
Coin

>Outdoors
Lakefront

>Add-ons
Hot Spring
Wildlife
Events
Brook
Fickle Weather

>Indoors
Living Room; 2,4,5
Kitchen; 2,3,4
Bedroom; 2,3,5
Bathrooms; 1,4,5
Home Gym; 2,4,5
Computer Room; 1,2,3

You can't really get all the cool choices because there are some necessary ones.

>>53117740
How exactly does the fragment of Zyntha act without her goddess powers, anyway? I remember the Messed Up Waifu CYOA saying that she had every single quirk, and I'm pretty sure that having all of them at once would be a power in it's own right.

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>>53114702
This is an old image...folder's a bit larger now. There are a few psds in there from various authors but it's almost all cyoas and iterations of said same. This one is missing a lot of the new authors I have, but gives an idea...

>>53119002
She shattered herself into these fragments, each containing some negible amount of power and some of her quirks, if I recall correctly. And she's busy trying to kill her other fragments.

>>53117740
Ritual 1
Unaware 1
Sensitivity 1
Lactation 1
Stretchy 1
Gender Swap 1
Immortality 1
Tireless Servant 1
Self Hypnosis 1
Shrink 1
Hivemind 1
Cum Production 1
Expanded Mind 3
Cosmic Alignment +2
Alexandra Archibald
Step 1: Approach politicians, CEOs, and other influential people pitching them "The secret to immortality".
Step 2: Send the (Probably very few) "clients" from the first go 'round to prove the effectiveness of my treatment to the others.
Step 2a: Loop through steps 1 and 2 in the background indefinitely.
Step 3: Use my new connections to gain control of the schoolboards, through them the faculty, and through them the students.
Step 4: Use my new influence over group X to gain control over group Y until I control the entire world.
Step 5: Unite humanity in the pursuit of interstellar travel.
Step 6: Repeat steps 1-4 on the new world.

>>53117817
Entrance: The coin

Outside: Forest
Add-ons: Bridge, hot spring, wild life, events, and gaslamp


Indoors

Kitchen: options 2,4 and 5

Bedroom: options 3,4 and 5

Bar; options 1,4 and 5

Home gym ; options 1,2 and 4

Computer room; options 2,3 and 4

Game room; options 3,4 and 5

>>53118952
>You can't really get all the cool choices because there are some necessary ones.

I feel this way as well.

>>53114649
Neat.

I think there needs to be something more to the summoning success aspect; not a very interesting decision.

The demons are all pretty good.

>>53113333
Anyone have that CYOA making software, or whatever it was that was posted in these threads all the time until recently?

I tried the OP link, without spaces, and I still got fuck all.

>>53119213
Fuck I'm a moron.

https://github.com/Amridell/Amridell-s-CYOA-Maker

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>>53117740
>>53117758
New version, because typos and the of the endless stream of questions on how Flesh Sculptor works and I admit I worded it very poorly.

Uncensored Version:
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Uncensored Version:
>>>/d/7407675
>>>/d/7407676

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>>53119063
I meant something more along the lines of what quirks she inherited, do I go back and do MUW to decide which ones she has? While I feel safe in assuming that she's got all the Zynthia specific quirks with any powers scooped out, I want to know what else the fragment's got.

Also, that's a good point. Is Zynthia Prime going to show up and try to kill my Zynthia, or is she fine leaving her be? Does my Zynthia want to pick a fight with the original?