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Previous thread: >>52989730
Archives and other resources: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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Is this a cyoa?
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Left or right? Which would make the better cyoa?
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>>52999308
Suggest names and I'll use at least one of them for a waifu girl in my next cyoa.
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>>52999447
Moishe of the Golden Tower
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>>52999447
Hillary
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>>52999447
David.
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>>52999447
Bridget
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>>52999447
Ciel Ver DeuxVirguleCinq
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>>52999447
2B
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>>52999325
White pill only way to go. No reason to ruin your life worrying about things outside your control.
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>>52999447
Ariel
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>>52999447
Ravel
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>>52999447
Adagio
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>>52999308

Share other ones pls, /tg/
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>>52999447
Opal
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>>52999447
Nekianda
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Recommend me some civilization CYOAs. Ones where you control a group of humans/creatures, from a small settlement to billions.

So far I've come across Magical Realm, Arch Demon, Dark God, Domain Master, Overlord and God of Mortals. I suppose Altering History would also count.
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>>52999325

Grey pill is true but it's loser talk. You should do your part for your belief, help who or what you can, and find joy in life for yourself and others.

White pill
>it's basically grey but with willful self-delusion and hope
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>>52999715
It's like a 100 pages, just use the archive or the dropbox
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>>52999325
>when you're not happy enough for the white pill, but too cowardly for the black pill
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>>52999804
I share that feel anon.
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>>52999447
Jordan
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>>52999849
Huh, that's my actual girlfriend's name.
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>>52999715
Pastebin has a link to Beri's Google Drive, which has a subfolder specifically for that particular CYOA.
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>>52999894
Nothing wrong with a waifu (bbc)!
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Why are there so many lolis in cyoas but no shotas?
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>>52999943
Fuck off, Jared from Subway.
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>>52999943
Because lolis are filthy whores who deserve to suffer as anon's sexslave but shotas are pure and must be protected. They are not for lewd!
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>>52999943
One day, my friend.
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I hate it when the posting slows down for gets.
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>>52999410
Why is this man half dead? Is he a half lich?
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Update!
Don't continue to write CYOAs in the middle of the night and proof read them while you are tired as fuck and post them- Edition

>Changelog
>Fixed Typos
>Added more text to Sloth's description.
>Changed Envy's description.

Uncensored Version
>>>/d/7394775
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>>53000061
Honest question. What happens to women and gays? How would these archdemons, especially Pride, react to their partner not being sexually attracted to them?
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>>53000039
All his blood is flowing towards his crotch.
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>>53000077
Why would you play this CYOA if you're not attracted to women? I don't understand the question.
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>>53000077
Well they are demons.
They probably have the ability to change genders at will.
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>>53000061
sloth and wrath both seem great, hard to choose between them
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>>53000003
Almost my brother
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>>53000077
>Honest question. What happens to women and gays? How would these archdemons, especially Pride, react to their partner not being sexually attracted to them?

Pride would not accept that someone was not attracted to her, she would become even smuger and try to show how good she is at everything to win their love. She would even dress more provocatively to show of her good looks, but provocatively for pride is not really provocative at all.

Envy would condition her lover to love her with cruel and unusual methods.

Lust would be fine, since everyone is attracted to her no matter their sexuality or gender. I guess gays and women would pick her.

Wrath would be really fucking mad about it and she would hunt down Zynthia and bully her as a punching bag until she changed the sexuality of wraths lover.

Sloth would get be really really sad and cry a lot, then she would fall asleep and possibly forget it.

Gluttony would get really depressed and would try to drink away her sorrow with her partners sexual fluids.

Greed would pull in all her favors in hell and bribe every love goddess she could to alter her lovers sexuality, so they would be attracted to her.
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>>52999325
Is is a new type of cyoas? In that case, pick one.
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>>53000077
There's always this goddess to help you where authors fail.
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>>53000163
Because breaking cyoas with something as basic as your gender or sexuality is fun.
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>>53000296
Spinning off from that, does the new body in the introduction allow for /u/ (or allow you to keep your body if you're already a woman and choose Envy, as it specifically mentions penises)?
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>>53000344
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>>53000077

Rape.
A guy doesn't have to be attracted to you to get his dick up.
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>>53000296
Is Lust going to fool around with other people? I mean normally waifus don't but... she is the personification of the sin of lust.
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>>52999308
thanks doc
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>>53000061
How would Pride react if I tried to crack her facade by pretending to seriously believe her words and interacting with her less?
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Question re Stardust:
How do Drones interact with the minimum power for weapons? Do I need to spend 10M on a battery pack for each brawler drone?
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>>53000377
Yeah, you can keep your vagina or you could become a futa. Everything will work the same with or without penises.
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>>53000061
>>53000296
Thanks, but I'm seeking help elsewhere.
>>53000344
>She's a Man!
You are a lifesaver.

It was really hard to pick between Pride and Wrath, and frankly I think Pride might be the more enticing choice for powerfags, but Wrath has a better personality. Tsundere but not into humiliation.

I'm not sure how I'm going to live with Wrath. Maybe I can become an MMA fighter or something, winning every fight without even trying. Just can't accidentally punch someone through a wall.

Oh, and in function of the genderbend small boobs will be a small dick.
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>>53000421
>he can't even fuck the personification of lust so hard she don't need another man
Maybe pick the girl with no sexdrive if you can't please her?
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>>53000433
you dont need to buy energy for drones
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>>53000421
From the way its written she'll just rape you if you're not giving it to her enough
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>>53000443
>Even though I am a basement dwelling neckbeard virgin in my fantasies in which I am married to an archdemon cum personification of Lust, I not only imagine myself as a sexual god, I also like to insult and make fun of other anonymous posters who do not share my particular imaginatory proclivities hence question their ability to satisfy this personifaction of sexual pleasure
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>>53000521
If Lust wants you as a suitor, she expects you to satisfy her. As the CYOA says, if you fail, then she's gonna rape you. You two will be too busy fucking for any weird products of your paranoia to crop up.
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>>53000443
She has a perfectly healthy sexdrive she is just... lazy
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>>53000561
If I were to be stupid enough to marry a personification of Lust, I'd accept that she's most likely going to need to fuck other guys to get her fill because my life does not revolve around sex. I'm not into cucking though so I'd NEVER pick Lust. She's a dead choice to anyone not into NTR or open relationships.
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>>53000540
>r_ose
Whoo? Is this a reddit thing?
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>>52999801
>>52999886

Thanks, anons. (You)s alright.
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>>52999325
I took the black pile, but i see a way out of this.
If i succeed, you lot will probably won't like it, but hey, at least now Humanity will survive probably until the heat death.

You really won't like my reforging, tho
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>>53000653
I need details.
And pics.
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>>53000594
>I'm not into cucking
I don't believe you, considering how you project it onto this situation and insist on how it's logical for it to happen. Being paranoid is one thing, but you're into the realm of wanting it to happen while projecting a thin veneer of protest.
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>>53000653
What.
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>>53000667
I'm not the original guy and didn't even pick Lust. I just saw your comment implying you could satisfy Lust and laughed. The guys who picked Lust planning to have sex 24/7 are morons imo. The fun will wear off in weeks and then it'll become a chore. Don't pick Lust because you're blinded by endless sex as if that's a good thing.
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>>53000694
>I'm not the original guy
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>>53000694
>The fun will wear off in weeks and then it'll become a chore.
That's true with all of them. They're all awful annoying people, well aside from Sloth
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>>53000653
>still hasn't posted proof

NOW
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>>53000355
You can't really "break" a cyoa. It's an exercise in imagination within set limits, not a video game. That's like saying you broke Harry Potter by refusing to acknowledge magic
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>>53000061
A couple of the "to"s in the intro should be "too".

>Pride would be to proud
>to troublesome
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>>53000818
There's this one guy who thinks CYOAs are "competitions" between the author and the player. Where author's try to fuck you and you try to not get fucked.
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>>53000818
>acknowledging magic

How about you prove to me that magic is real.
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>>53000865
That's silly

>Okay, let's imagine we are all at a Lake. What kind of boat do you have?

>I'm imagining a Forest. I don't even NEED a boat! Gotcha fucker haha!
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>>53000061
>grate disdain
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>>53000902
>That's silly
Yes
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>>53000061
>cleaver, witty and playful ways

seriously dude, just read it through once
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>>53000818
>>53000865
>>53000902
>>53000948
>two anons circlejerking about how wrong a third anon is for having wrong fun in his imaginary adventures

This is getting too meta.
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>>53000964
Please stay where you are while I inform the authorities.
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>>53000955
>seriously dude, just read it through once
Reminder that TokHaar is (or at least claims to be) dyslexic.
Would probably be more effective to get someone else to proofread the text before it goes in the CYOA.
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>>53000984
That's not a bad idea, really. The dude could definitely use a stable proofreader to iron out a lot of these issues
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>>53000421
>>53000694
>Will lust fool around with other people?
>Good luck satisfying Lust
No, but if you don't satisfy her needs she will just rape you. If you allow her to have sex with other people she will or you could create a harem and share it with lust. If you do either you might get some more free time.

>>53000428
>How would Pride react if I tried to crack her facade by pretending to seriously believe her words and interacting with her less?
She would never outright admit she cares about you. But she would temporarily stop insulting you and she would do things together with you she knows you like. If you ask her about it, she would tell you something like, "We are not visiting this nerd convention for your sake, its because Sloth has been getting way to cocky lately, she almost beat me on nerd quiz". If that didn't do the trick she would become much more desperate and depressed. She would even consider to ask her sisters for help, but would quickly dismiss it, since she's best at everything and don't need help from anyone. You would notice that winning challenges and being smug would not really make her happy anymore, she would only fake it. When she thinks you are asleep she will hold you in her hands and cry on your chest while whispering to you how much she loves you and tell you that she is so stupid for not being able to admit her feelings for you. She would write amazing love poems and leave them where she know you will notice them, the poems would always be sad and tragic and evoke deep emotions within you, enough to make you cry. They would be about unanswered love and one-sided love, where pride leads to a sad ending. If you confront her about it, she would be really embarrassed and her face would turn red. She would make up some nonsensical reason to why she did it.Like she saw Titanic and was inspired by it, even though she knows that you know she hates Titanic and thinks is eye blight.
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>>53000985
>posting a WIP instead of the finished version
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>>53000061
>tfw all waifus are fun short term but an absolute hell to live with forever

Is this the mark of a fetish cyoa?
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>>52999447
Teresa
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>>53001014
Yes. Once the boner wears off, you're up to your eyes in some weird shit. Maybe literally

That's why you always take the options that give you unlimited sex drive, so you never have to stop to think about the sticky mess your life has become
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>>53000984
He's also masturbating while writing. You can't blame him too hard.
>>53000995
Are you offering?
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>>53001014
It's a mark of the human condition. Humans aren't meant to be content.
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>>53000995
>>53000984
LOL, anyone volunteering to be a proof reader?

>>53001014
I could live with most of them forever, but then again I'm not really your average Joe.
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>>53001078
Shoot, I will.
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>>53001014
If you can't handle the cozy routine of a quiet or not so quiet life, you have no business becoming immortal in the first place, pleb.
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>>53001051
>not ignoring lewd options altogether and focusing on ascending to godhood so you might attain the power to reshape reality to your bidding, creating a world of everlasting chaos, change, and wonder that has only one constant: your everlasting glory over all

Cyoas are a spiritual test.
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>>52999447
Aria
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>>53001111
SHADILAY !
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>>52999447
Tohsaka
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>>53001111
Praise be to KEK!
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>>52999447
Anonymous
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>>53001111
YOUR FAITH IS REWARDED
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>>53001111
KEK HAS SPOKEN!
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>>53001111
It's a shame you figured it all out when it was too late.
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>>53001014
I don't know but sloth is best girl to be for all eternity if you ask me
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>>53001014
sloth seems okay - assuming your lifestyle is compatible

wrath also seems fine
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>>53001512
Who?
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>>53000061
Is it at all possible to get sloth more active and/or more social over time? Likewise, is it possible to get wrath to chill out (at least in your presence)? BTW nice work, mate; I eagerly await more of your content.
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>>53001576
They are the living manifestation of a sin what do you think?
That would be like asking chastity to fuck
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>>53001512
You activated my trap card
Go to prison
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>>53001576
>Is it at all possible to get sloth more active and/or more social over time?
Yes, it is possible to a small degree. Like you could make it a habit to stop thrusting when you have sex with Sloth and she is close to orgasm. In the beginning she would be very sulky and call you meanie and big bully. She would accuse you getting sexual satisfaction from from making little girls like her suffer. With a lot of time and practice you could stop having sex farther and farther away from her orgasm limit and she would take initiative to continue the sex. Eventually she could have sex like a normal well functioning person. Social training... I don't think you will have as much success with that. You could possibly make her look forward to go to nerdy conventions and stuff like that, but she still want that wheel chair, preferably a electronic one with a joystick.

>Likewise, is it possible to get wrath to chill out (at least in your presence)?
Yeah, you could to a small degree, you would eventually learn what makes her angry and what don't. Then you can try to keep her away from her "triggers". Patting her head or holding her hand can also go a long way to soothe her rage.
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>>53000996
Which ones have never taken a guys dick before?

How many miles of dick has Lust taken already?
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>>53001512
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Can you virgins post a manly cyoa about conquering and ruling shit already!
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What kind of spells would a lich have?
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>>53001000

Thanks! All my builds have been with the other one. So here it is, Final Build for Final Lavender Version!

Amnysa, Slave of the Dark Gods, Empress of the Forgotten Realms

Genitalia
>Vagina (1)
>Plush (x3)
9

Shape
>Enticing
9

Chest
>Gifted
9

Influences
>Quasicosmic
13

Face
>Regal
>Chakra Eye
lavender stone embedded in forehead
>Elder Gaze
blazing crimson eyes
17

Flourishes
>Rare hunger
ejaculate of magical beings
>Godly Cleanliness
>Lernaean Hymen
>Lactation (Bountiful)
>Aphrodisiac
>Gate to Ecstasy x2 w/ Plush x3 each
mouth rear
>Commanding Mien
41

Strategy
>Brooding
occassionally lays an egg, usually used for sacrifices or magical components
41

Dowry
>Title x2
>Lavender Grimoire
>Crimson Manual
>Primordial Woad
>Abyssal Ink
>Celestial Charms
>Argent Spark
>Argent Blaze
>Rite of World Stepping
>Regal Array
>Filthy Lucre
83

Bonds
>Knights-in-Crimson
>The Barred One
>Conjugal Visits
>Unclean Spawn
72

Stigmata
>Stigma of the Starving Gambler
72

Ambition
>Castellan of the Cosmos
>Conquering Crusader
70

Pedigree 0
Status 8
Allure 9
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>>53001908
>Virgins!
>Post a manly CYOA about conquering shit!
>Nemesis

Did someone say Nemesis?
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>>53001908
I'm nearly finishing my OC that has the option for you do exactly this, hope you guys will like it.
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>>53001968
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>>53001966

Amnysa always wanted to be a sorceress. She read many books and spent countless hours on the internet researching magic and the occult. After years of failure, she was contacted by the Dark God Teiatat's minion The Eunuch. And he had an offer for her. This is exactly the sort of opportunity Amnysa had been searching for...or so she thought. Teiatat would provide her with all the power and magic she desired, but as his "Bride" she had a job to perform. Amnysa could have her magical lab in the forgotten realm of a long dead God, but from this base of operations she was to be sent to periodically across the cosmos to serve Court Sorceress, Adviser, Governor, or General to all manner of Dark Lords and Mistresses. Her charge being to use her impressive array of powers granted by Teiatat to further the goals of those who would serve Teiatat's will and spread his influence.
But this was not all there was to the deal. As a servant to the Lavender Throne, Amnysa was also to be subject to her Master's perverse whims. Having been granted a new body that epitomized the sexy dark seductress trope, beyond anything Amnysa could have ever hoped for, Teiatat saw the opportunity to put it to good use and to keep the power hungry and magically potent sorceress in her place. In addition to her other duties, from time to time Amnysa would be sent as an Emissary to the unfathomably powerful eldritch Gods, sealed away in their alien and chaotic dimensions. These creatures have no need for advisers and servants such as Amnysa, but occasionally desire the use of a such a beautiful plaything and are willing to trade in powerful magic and forbidden knowledge for it. Thus Amnysa's new life became one of magic, exploration, adventure and wonder, but also of servitude, humiliation and loss with no knowing which each new millennia might bring.
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>>53001989
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>>53001994

To serve Amnysa is to suffer under the haughty, demanding and sadistic power of a cruel woman driven by lust for power and desire to dominate all around her until such time as you cease to be useful or entertaining. To be served by Amnysa is to be doted on and kowtowed fanatically to by a servile wretch who respects only power and will fanatically follow any command so long as you're clearly stronger than her. But her desire is power and her mind full of deceit. To fail at objectives or lose Teiatat's favour is to invite the plotting wrath of Teiatat's "gift".
Amnysa may suffer much in her exploits, but she somehow always manages to escape unscathed, as though Teiatat delight's in her misadventures.
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>>53002010
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>>53001966
>>53001994
>>53002021
If your build is too long for a single post, why not just put the text in a pastepin and post a link instead?
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>>53002058
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>>53001884
>Which ones have never taken a guys dick before?
None. They're attractive women who have lived for more than one year.
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>>53002052

I can do that for next time. I figured for very first time posting it I'd like to post it all here with images and all. I understand why people don't like the multi-post builds though and can do that less.

>>53001968

You posted that right when I was in the middle of posting my build on purpose, didn't you? Rude!

>>53001884
>>53002089

Why do you people obsess so much over this?
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>>53002095
Catmode tier 3
Chosen of the norse gods tier 2

I find funny the great synergy this two have
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>>53002131
>Why do you people obsess so much over this?
They're not people, they're robots.
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>>53002095
>Shit Gold 2
>Norse Chosen 2
>Cat Mode 1

Life is now basically a Viking River City Ransom/Punisher LARP. Cut down brigands, duck into Captain D's/Long John Silver for heals, burn tickets on Speak With Dead for intel on bigger criminal operations. Gold nuggets help fund the vigilante pain train (and lutefisk disposal, if it doesn't count as fish for Cat Mode healing).
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Great thread so far
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>>53002131
>Why do you people obsess so much over this?
They are turboautists. I hope the next waifu cyoa comes with dickmiles for each one to really trigger people.
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>>53002252
>not liking strife

Speaking of which, is Strife dead?
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>>53002095
>Viking
>Ale
>Not Mead
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>>53002222
>Physical traits
Wings
Reinforced
Power transfer(Magic)

>Powers
Growth
Shapeshift
Regeneration

>Magics
Elementalism
Inmortality
Practical magic
White magic (Transfer)

>Crystal knight
>No crystal related powers magics or physical traits
???
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>>53000061

>Priscilla
>Skill: Giving compliments/praise

Then challenge her
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>>53002352
And lutefisk wasn't widely eaten in Scandinavia until around the 16th century.
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>>53001884
>Which ones have never taken a guys dick before?

Sloth is a virgin, she have never bothered to go to the planes of mortals and seduce someone. Just the thought of walking all that way makes her uncomfortable. But she enjoys hentai and romantic animes and mangas, so she has always longed for a loving husbando's dick.

Pride is also a virgin, but she's way to proud to admit it. She brags about having fucked millions of mortals and when Lust invites her to orgies she will always refuse, claiming her standards are way too high for her sisters lowly tastes in men, so the orgy will not satisfy her at all and will just end up wasting her precious time.

Wrath, why do you think she's angry all the time? She has never had a dick and whenever she tries to seduce a man, she does it really really slow and he ends up falling for Lust instead. She has beaten many men to death for this, nothing makes her angrier then when the men whisper with their dying breath: "Still worth it~"

Envy is a mystery, no one knows and no one dares to ask her, because she seems to get really unhinged when the subject is mentioned.

Greed and Gluttony has taken a lot of dicks, they loves to spend time together with their sister Lust and do depraved shit together, but they have never found true love and that is something they yearns for.

>How many miles of dick has Lust taken already?
you cannot possible measure something like that in miles. But If I where to give it a number I would give it a horizontal eight ∞
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>>52999960
you getter own shares in ky bitch else its goin in dry
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>>53001860
>have Sloth cosplay Nunnally to your Lelouch
This makes her just that much better.
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>>53002445
lol, someone did something like that in a previous thread, but instead of choosing "Giving compliments/praise" as their skill they choose "Being humble". Just the thought of Pride bragging about how humble she is makes me laugh.
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>>53002462
>Greed and Gluttony has taken a lot of dicks
Why would you turn best girls into shit?
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Here's some new OC. Tried to do some worldbuilding this time, so tell me what you think of it even if you think the rest of the CYOA is shit.
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>>53002455
And it has been going to shit since then. Coincidence? I think not.
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>>53002527
>Oh boy i love this girls so much
>They took other dick than yours
>Fucking sluts REEEEEEEE
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>>53002544
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>>53002560
This page for a bit too large and had to save it in a different format.
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>>53002570
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>>53002547
>Make a waifu cyoa about how they love you so much and you'll be immortal and all that shit
>Let's make them not only virgins, but to have taken miles of dick
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>>53002462
seriously follow >>53002270 if you update this again
we might be able to tank a thread or two with the discussion alone
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>>53001966
>>53001994
>>53002021
>only fucks the interdimensional equivalents of Chads
>cucks them the instant they show any sign of weakness or someone stronger comes along
>thinks this is an interesting character and not just a turboslut of cosmic proportions
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>>53002627
What the fuck is so wrong that they have taken some dick? or you are the only one with the multi-fuck privileges?
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>>53002462
>Wrath
>Never raped anyone in frustration or had a femdom-fag suck her clit
That is ridiculous.
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>>53002663
>or you are the only one with the multi-fuck privileges?
It's okay if anon cucks her but she has to have been a virgin and never even think of sex with anyone else (even before you came into her life)

The permavirgin is a remarkable species. Resistant to his own hypocrisy.
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>>53002716
they imagine celibate succubi too
the insane degenerates
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>>53002663
>or you are the only one with the multi-fuck privileges?
Said no one ever
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>>53002747
>Celibate succubi
How does that even work? they find a guy and then fuck forever or what? I can't really grasp the concept
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>>53002786
It means they only do anal, anon
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>>53002544
>"choose your lair"
and then you proceed to decide what monsters to violently evict
alright i got a good laugh out of that bit
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>>53002794
Oh i see but what about oral?
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>>53002786
It means that the demons invented to fuck everything have never thought about sex with anyone before you.
You are such a special snowflake.
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>>53002816
Hm...good question. Everybody knows the anus is the hole God can't see, but what about the mouth? What about a titfuck? These are the real questions
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>>53002825
technically they would probably fall somewhere between sodomy and masturbation as a sin
but all sex has to be inside of marriage for the purpose of procreation anon
missionary and hand holding optional
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>>53002649

Teiatat gave me my powers and I follow him according to our deal. The dark Lords and Mistresses I serve are below him and are only tools, even if I'm below them. If I'm serving not!Sauron, how long am I supposed to put up with us getting our butts kicked by murderhobos? I mean, I'll stick around and "fight the good fight" for awhile, but I just as well not get raped by murderhobos or passed around a whole fucking army or whatever, so eventually I'm pulling the plug on the whole operation and stabbing not!Sauron in the back. Not to mention that with my Allure and Status I'm utterly irresistible to mortals (and many immortals). So I might just marry the leader of the murderhobos and proceed to corrupt and destroy their world from within just for shits and giggles. Even if I end up getting "killed", that just banishes me to my co-opted realm of the dead God, unless of course some cosmic horror grabs me along the way for a little "fun time". I'm simply being practical.
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>>53002875
So, we sign some papers and knock her up. Sounds like a good deal.
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>>53002875
>Handholding
You know you get punted straight to hell for those things right?
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>>53000996
Fuck yea! making tsunderes fall into depression by making them think im taking all their insults to heart and that they are driving me to depression and suicide is my fetish
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>>53002544
You should've made one husbando high vampire exclusive imo. High vampire is basically useless unless you want waifus now.

Great cyoa though.
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>>52999325
white pill is best bill
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>>53002890
You're a disgusting whore. Go die in a fire.
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>>53002946
I considered making the Incubus exclusive, so I might change it to make it so only high-vampires get to change gender.
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>>53002946
To be fair, they High Vampire exclusive minions are not very good waifus. Most of them aren't particularly useful and sound like more trouble than they're worth
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>>53002544
>>53002560
>>53002570
>>53002587
I'm going to be the nicest lich there ever was.

>High Vampire

>Abandoned city

>Raise dead (7)
>Communion tier 2 (5)
>Undead power (4)
>Un-mortality (3)
>Soul weapons tier 2 (1)
>lich dance (0)

>Human mercenary Army x2 (3)
>Fanatic Cultists x2 (2)
>Fallen angel army (0)

>Mikaela
>Braka, the half dragon
>Teresa, princess of Lyran
>Zayah, cult leader
>Laliuna, the witch apprentice

>Go to heaven

Gonna use my army best I can to repair the city, helping anyone along the way, and I'm even gnna help those angels get back to heaven. Mikaela is gonna be a big help.
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>>53002980

What's your problem? Are you that anon who complained about feeling "cucked" because me and Wyrm had some character interaction? I wish 4chan would get over this stupid meme.
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>>53003006
>only high-vampires get to change gender.
I know which option will be most popular
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>>53000061
Greed I would have all my money problems taken care of and I get to live out my BDSM and rape fantasies.
Sloth makes for a comfy girlfriend but money would remain an issue. I'd still have to work though most expenses are now handled by the pocket world. Make saffron by the brick and export it to sell. Rolling in the money.
Pride would be overbearing, much like my ex, so I could probably put up with her shit but in the mean time I get to become the greatest writer the world has ever known.

Hard to choose really. Probably not Greed as I'd walk a dark path far to quickly.
Likely Pride, simply because I like that power the most. Masako was also my favourite character
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>>53001593

According to Archangel Roommate, that isn't too hard.
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>>53002544
Kinda not fan of the green textboxes, the text is readable tho and I guess it kinda ties to the title.

First box, second paragraph "but if someone dies then they just their ranks", missing a verb, I think.

The lich's introductory speech kinda runs together.

True Lich, "increases number and strenght of spells", strength.

High-Vampire's opening is a bit strange, it calls other vampires weak because they don't need a phylactery. Maybe move the phylactery part to end and add small part about lamenting the need for it. I personally would suggest using Good-Bad-Good text format in these kinda things. Start with all the good stuff, lament the downsides and then end with positive note. So here you would list benefits, especially how superior you are to lesser vampires, then complain about inability to infect people and need for phylactery, then end with being worshiped.
Also, "drink blood, or anything else really, but you skill can", still.

Death Knight is two words.

Flying necropolis "so there is o strain on you", a.
"taking of take about an hour", takes.

Still reading this but I feel like so far worldbuilding has been pretty successful.
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>>53001512
the fuck are you even talking about?
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>>53002544
>>53002560
>>53002570
>>53002587
>personality death
REEEEEEEE

It actually looks pretty good though, writing wise, and the choices all seem fleshed out.
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>>53003115
>saffron
Gold leaf is sometimes used as an ingredient and garnish.
Just saying.
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>>53003112
>>53003006
The solution is to allow True Lich to also change gender. Mmmm, those hipbones.
That's kinda strange buff tho.
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>>53000061
Is English not your first language or did you just write this in 20 minutes and not proof read at all?
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>>53003178
He's dyslexic, you overprivileged shitlord.
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>tfw spending hours to create a cyoa that will be forgotten in a day

HOW DO YOU MAKE YOURSELF DO IT?
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>>53003116
>implying Tokhar can write anyone near the level as SmugDickAnon
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>>53003210
So you're not making cyoas because you enjoy doing it?

Making cyoas for (you)s after awhile will ruin you anon.
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>>52995967
>Lana, Tristain
A good balance between physical and mental disciplines. Plus, fire and wind magic, which I think will compliment each other nicely.
>Combat Skill (3), Command (1), Arcana (2), Investigation (2), Governance (1), Wild Lore (2), Charisma (1), Shadowcraft (1), Crafting (2), Tradecraft (1), Alchemy (1).
A peerless warrior, a strong magician. I'm at ease in the wilds, and I'm good at making and maintaining my own equipment. I like to adventure, and I profit from these adventures. I know enough about the law to usually keep myself out of trouble.
>Lore of Winds (3), Lore of Fire (3), Lore of Water (1), Lore of Earth (3), Lore of Heavens (2).
Winds aids me in my adventures, since I can form pockets of air around myself to go underwater. Fire is good for raw damage. The little bit of water magic allows me to purify water, which makes wilderness survival that much easier. Earth will help me make even better equipment, since I can strengthen materials. Heavens is more for fun than anything else.
>Rangermail, Fancy Clothes (2x), Artificer Weapon (Spear), Potions (8x), Books (2x), Specialized Tools (Thief Tools), Traveling Supplies, Trading License, Knighthood, Sanctuary (Farm house with worker cottages), 4 Skilled Workers (Smith, Miller, doctor, cook), 12 Hirelings (1 free from Knighthood; farmers), Soldiers (12x), Knight Bodyguard, Warhorse (free), War Dogs (2x), Earthforged Weapon (dagger, free).
Rangermail is my go-to for armor. Keeps me mobile, keeps me warm or cool as environment dictates. I have fancy clothes for when I need to dress nice. My weapon of choice, the spear, is an artifact weapon so it packs a good punch; Knighthood also gives me an Earthforged weapon, and for that, I took a dagger as an 'oh shit', or for when I need to be a bit more discreet.
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>>53003039
i dunno the princess is interesting politically
and the dragon/kitsune are interesting for...obvious reasons
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>>53003210
By making something that won't be forgotten.

If you make a shitty CYOA you accept that it will fade away, if you pour your heart and soul into it then it will live on forever.

All of my CYOAs are posted every few threads or so because I only work when I feel inspired to work. Otherwise I just make funny shitpost CYOAs like the cowboy one.
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>>53003210
By making CYOAs that are better.
Because I want to write out my ideas and make stuff for me. I only post it here because I don't lose anything from it.
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>>53003210
By not giving a fuck.
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>>53003240
Tons of potions, mostly medicine; some at home for taking care of my people, some for taking with me on my adventures. A decent amount of books kept at my sanctuary, mostly things like maps and beastiaries. Thief tools, not because I plan to burgle houses, but because they can be invaluable in looting ruins. Knighthood gives me respect and some nice freebies, the trading license will let me sell the goodies I find and buy more goodies to make my home nicer. Speaking of my home, it's farmlands, with a central large house where me and my companions live, and some decent cottages for the workers; the skilled laborers have little workshops suited for their jobs. A smith to maintain plows and farming equipment, as well as the weapons of my guards (who have their own barracks) (the guard captain is actually my knight bodyguard); a miller to grind the grains into flour; a doctor to tend to injuries; a cook, mostly for me and my companions; the aforementioned guards, to keep the place safe. What produce we don't use ourselves, we can sell. The war dogs are kept back on the property as extra defenders, probably handled by the Bodyguard since they're heroic enough to properly utilize them.

>Mrowl, Zara, Lady Filliah of Shroudsong, Prof. Tonkin, Olead Nachau.
Fae cat is best cat. Zara will learn how to handle real combat and the great outdoors, I'll give her a real challenge. Lady Filliah because I like Fae. Tonkin seems good to have around for my travels. Olead also helps with my travels, since she can commune with local animals.
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>>53003186
Yes yes, I've only been here 6 months. Now explain it already.
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>>53003210
you can keep reposting it like other retards in this general
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>>53003277
It has nothing to do with being new. They're just trying to harass someone who claimed to be a girl in the fucking Discord
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>>53003313
>STILL HASN*T POSTED THE FUCKING IMAGE
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>>53003313
I just learned about that awhile ago,apparently there was a poem made about it? i fucked up by being a drunk autist and scared her away
I can't sleep
Guilt is consuming me
Help
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>>53003355
>NOT LINKING TO IT ON ANOTHER BOARD OR POSTING IT ON FUCKING IMGUR
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>>53000061
Was thinking about making a Seven Handsome Virtues CYOA as well, since the seven deadly sins are the opposite of the seven heavenly virtues in the Christian lore. It would match well with my latest CYOA and I like doing Zynthia intros, she will definatly be a re-occurring character in my CYOAs.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_virtues
But god dammit how boring they are. I like to make flawed and weird waifus and holy shit they hard to fuck up.
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>>53003357
Relax, you're not any more or any less autistic than everyone else here. Just let it go.
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>>53003313
Can you link the thread this occurred in? I can't wait to see how that came to be realized. What the hell. Lmao. Now that's dedication.
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>>53003385
>seven virtues
>hard to fuck up
that's the point
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>>53003391
If this is any indication of how he interacts with girls, I don't think letting it go would solve the issue.

He needs help.
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>>53003385
>I like doing Zynthia intros, she will definatly be a re-occurring character in my CYOAs.
Oh no...
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>>53003385
Make them boring, then. Have them grant you something relevant to their virtue, but you're then 'married' to a boring, too-perfect person. Maybe they're 'perfect' in regards to their virtue, but neglect other areas of their life.
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>>53002560
Raise Dead tier 3 "reanimate your deafeated undead", defeated.

Kinda unsure what Unnatural Order is meant to do. I mean, I kinda get what it will cause but don't know why anyone would spend points on it.

Tissue Ossification "if you are carefull", careful.

Communion "but won't like you bery much", very, unless you were going for berry pun.

Undead Dragon "He is inteligent like other", intelligent.

Skeletal Archers "burn to the touch and dael extra", deal.
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>>53002544
Pretty cool. God a few typos, though.

Page 1
>2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence
>. . . but if someone dies then they just their ranks . . .
Missing some words there. Perhaps "add to" between "just" and "their".
>2nd paragraph, 5th sentence
>It is said that some cities . . . were captured and taken . . .
Improper subject here. It's pretty much saying that the cities were captured themselves and brought to the necromancer citadels, rather than the citizens of the cities.
>3rd paragraph, 3rd sentence
>. . . what really happened inside of them.
Change "happened" to "happens".
>3rd paragraph, 6th sentence
>. . . maybe with no hope to ever come back home.
Change that last part to "no hope of ever coming back home".
>4th paragraph, 3rd sentence
>a necromancers citadel
Should be "a necromancer's citadel".
>Lich option, 1st sentence
>. . . if I can say so myself.
Change 'can' to 'may'.
>Lich option, 4th sentence
>I can see your worried
Change "your" to "you're".
>Lich option, 5th sentence
>. . . strenght . . .
Should be "strength".
>High-Vampire, 2nd sentence
>. . . but you skill can.
"skill" to "still".
>Haunted Keep, 3rd sentence
>". . . every once is a while . . ."
"is" should be "in".
>Demonic Spire, 2nd sentence
>. . . even if you don't used.
What? Used what? Maybe you meant to say "even if you don't use them"?
>DeathKnight Bastion, 2nd sentence
>That's why most DeathKnight . . .
Make "DeathKnight" into "DeathKnights", plural.
>Same sentence as above
>. . . akin to palading . . .
"palading" should be "paladins".

Anyway, that's it for the typos on page 1. Checking as I go.
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>>53003385
you could make it comical overreactions
like acting as if a secret soda drinking habit is akin to alcoholism in the workplace sorta deal
naivete is a hell of a drug
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>>53003210
if youre doing it for attention youre doing it wrong in the first place
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>>52999325
White or Yellow.
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>>53003479
true lich and its spells arent just for power
sometimes eternity gets boring and watching a flock of pidgeons attack and eat a crocodile makes it all worth while
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>>52999308
What CYOAs are you guys looking forward to?
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>>53002544
>raising undead from the corpses of undead
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>>53003485
>ultra pure waifus
pls. Have her cum from writing her a text about wanting to kiss her on the cheek.
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>>53003523
Ok, good enough reason.
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>>53003444
We're at 71 unique posters as I'm writing this. I'm willing to bet good money that only 5 of those have any idea how to interact with women. And one of those is fucking Angel
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>>53003540
The one you're making. Y-you are making one right Anon-san?
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>>53003541
go to /soc/ for attention you faggot
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>>53003572
you need to seperate interacting with seducing
im sure plenty of these grognards can hold a 3 minute conversation with a female in the break room at walmart
its the four minutes in when security arrives to remove them it all breaks down
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>>53003572
I do Im just a drunk guilty autist right now
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>>53003572
>Angel knows how to interact with women.
Please. Women act like cut throat bitches to one another. She's a subby lesbian, she can't do that.
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>>53003540
Be the Hobo cyoa
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>>53003624
Found one of the 66 others
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>>53001968
>Kathmyre the Supreme Archmage

>Dark Elf

>Victory or Death! (+5)

>Powers:
-Arcane Magic (free)
-Ferromancy (-3)
-Holy Magic (-3)
-Black Magic (-3)
-Elemental Magic (-3, All elements)
-Necromancy (-3)
-Counterspell (Free)
-Realm Knowledge (-1)
-Limited Divination (-1)
-Nullification (-8)
-Unbendable Time (-1)
-Regeneration (-2)

>Artifacts:
-Legendary Armor (-1, Archmage Robe)
-Seekers Map (-2)

>Companions:
-Familiar (free)

>Drawbacks:
-Personality (+1, I make EVERYTHING I do in terms of magic sound super dramatic.)
-Adventurer (+1)
-Time Limit (+2)
-A Fair Warning (+2)
-Signature (+1)
-Infamous (+1)
-Unexpected Enemies (+2, Elven Ranger and Loli Mage)

>Quest:
-Zombie Apocalypse
-Agent of Chaos

>Archmage Combo, Chronomancy Combo

"Hello, hero of this Realm! I am the supreme lord of magic, Kathmyre the Archmage! I send this message to you as a warning so that you have time to make peace with your deities and with those you love, for soon I will come and reign in the end of your miserable realm! There will be no mercy, and there will be no hope for you or your people, for MY magic is powerful enough to reshape your world on a whim! Do not fret, my dear hero. Just accept the end and rest in peace."
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>>53003645
>trying this hard to force a rose-meme
you need to relax son
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>>53002570
I need more minion slots for all my waifus.
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>>53002560
Page 2
>1st paragraph, 3rd sentence
>Each spells can have several tiers . . .
Change "spells" to "spell".
>1st paragraph, 4th sentence
>. . . the soul of the others.
Change "soul of the others" to "souls of others". Remove the "the" there.
>Raise Dead, Tier 1, 2nd sentence
>Allow you to . . .
Change "Allow" to "Allows".
>Raise Dead, Tier 3, 2nd sentence
>deafeated
Change to defeated.
>Deadly Mist, Tier 1, 1st-2nd sentences
>. . . will surround you.It is barely . . .
Put a space between the 2 sentences.
>Deadly Mist Tier 1, 3rd sentence
>It has a radius 5 meters . . .
Make it "a radius of 5 meters" there.
>Undead Power, 1st sentence
>. . . raise to the point . . ."
Change "raise" to "rise".
>Blood Moon, Tier 2, 1st sentence
>. . . and Everyone, everywhere . . .
Uncapitalize that E.
>Blood Moon, Tier 2, 2nd sentence
>Can only be cast one every year.
Change "one" to "once".
>Lich Dance, 1st sentence
>transe
Should be "trance".
>Un-Mortality, Tier 1, 3rd sentence
>Not enought . . .
Obvious typo there.
>Tissue Ossification, 2nd sentence
>carefull
Should be "careful", only 1 l there.
>Fast Rotting, 3rd sentence
>. . . not to use it on you . . .
What? I can't make heads or tails on this. Use it on yourself? That makes no sense.

Aaaaand I give up. I was not expecting you to make so many typos. I was already pretty fed up with just going through page 1.
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>>53003557
>>53003485
>>53003463
Great ideas! I will have to brainstorm this and think it through, the sins came naturally for me, like every sins could so easily be converted to a funny anime trope and I knew precisely what kind of personality they all would have.

>>53003452
>I don't like Zynthia
She's the best, would waifu 10/10. Had tons fun answering questions on /d/ as Zynthia (Pic related).
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>>53002786
Fall-from-Grace from Planescape: Torment.
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>>53002222
>Natural Weaponry (Claws and Horns), Reinforced, Chitin (Crustacean).
Some philoso-dude said something about be wary of becoming a monster when fighting them. I clearly did not pay much attention to him.
>Agility, Growth, Regeneration, Elemental Immunity.
I'm already at peak human condition for most things, but I want that extra reflex. "Leveling up" sounds fun, and being able to basically "walk it off" anything that doesn't outright kill me is useful. Immunity makes me that much harder to kill.
>Practical Magic, Immortal, Power Power Transfer.
I will guard humanity for as long as I can. Practical magic is, well, practical. I do need to sleep eventually, and that's when I will be vulnerable.
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>>53003313
how could anyone tell she was underage?

I bet the Aussies did it.
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>>53003708
you got a thing for the flutter-stutter eh?
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>>53003624
>lesbian
Why do people say this? Her CYOA builds all revolve around being a breeding machine for giant spiders and dragons and shit.
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>>53003637
How have you never heard all the trashtalking a group of girl friends can say about another girl while she is in the bathroom? Do you never interact with women?
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>>53003716
Playing that now, actually. She's interesting.
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>>53003039
>>53002544
Yeah, it's funny how if i am going to take Vampire all the minions i'd like to take those not exclusive to the Vampire. Basically for me Vampire's only benefit is ability to seduce women from the outside and charisma for diplomacy.
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>>53003751
Are you talking about >>52996389

Is that the so-called R_ose?
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>>53003986
That's Anzu.
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>>53003986
No, that's a trap.
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>>53003986
No, that's a Turkish girl.
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>>53003748

It's only business.
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>>53003986
Oooooh so that's her.
Jesus that neck is tiny.
She's clearly crazy and I should not want to stick my dick in her.
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>>53004078
Anzu is aryan and cute and she is my wife!
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>>53004056
You wish you were as pretty as her, rose.

>>53004145
>>53004078
Turks are white
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>>53004178
Those are some meaty obliques.
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>>53004178
>Turks are white
>posts a negro
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>>53004178
Turks are in no respect white.
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Post things that trigger /cyoag/

>roasties
>non-whites

what else?
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>>53004178
You may not like it, but this is what peak performance looks like
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>>53004301
Post body.
(No homo.)
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>>53004334
Cucks
Culling
TokHaar
Angel
Stardust reworks
Non-virgin waifus
Mind control
Memory death
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>>53004078
....really? Damn, I would have annihilated that kebab.
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>>53004343
You fucked up your quote, it should point to >>52996389
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>>53004370
>TokHaar cucks Angel away from you with mind control during the Culling while reworking Stardust, talking about how used goods are okay and erasing your memories of earth
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>>53004404
who is roastie? Or do you mean the gross vagina roasties?
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>>53004381
>>53004343
I would like a world where all men are either bara or traps. Women can be fujoshis or whatever nobody cares.
Flatchested girls can be this worlds trap.
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>>53004431
But what if I'm an otter? Which side do I fall in?
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>>53000061
I'm surprised nobody has picked gluttony yet.
It seems the easiest to manage. yeah the ability is boring but she's is one of the easiest to get along with.
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Doing an alpha draft of an SMT CYOA, but probably not the one people have been hyping the last few threads.

Do I use canon names for human companions you can point-buy, or just name people whoever like every other CYOA that lifts distinctive character art? This will probably affect interplay with Organizations you can buy as allies/get drawback points for as enemies/do quests for for non-point rewards.
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>>53004473
>ottermode
Disgusting. Go bara or go trap.
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>>53002544
This is good, I like it! A few grammar mistakes to correct, but that's minor stuff. I'll be looking forward to updates with more content (if they will be).
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>>53004473
You'd obviously be in anotter side.
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Has this been updated yet? I've been away for a while because of summer shenanigans.
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>>53002544
>DeathKing
I don't feel like losing my flesh, and I don't like vampires.
>Abandoned City
Hey, I mean, it's just sitting there, you know? Why let it go to waste?
>Undead Power, Deadly Mist (2), Plague Bearer, Miasma, Soul Creation, Freezing Aura, Raise Dead (free, 1).
I do plan to lead from the front, so Undead Power helps. Deadly Mist, Miasma, and Plague Bearer all help me with my fear/shock and awe tactics. Even Freezing Aura is more about freaking people out and unnerving them when they're in my presence. Soul Creation, I'm sure I'll find a use for. Standard approach? Plague Miasma, people die, Raise Dead.
>Vampire Clan, Deathknight Army, Fallen Angel Army.
With the DeathKnight's and Fallen Angel's, I have a strong army that won't fall apart on me, and which can stop Paladin magic and banish angels. The vampires will become my spies, my eyes and ears. See, even if I can wipe out whole towns with plague, I'm not really interested in destroying the world; just in controlling it.
>Mikaela, Gragas, Zayah, Vician.
I plan to fight on the front, but having some extra DeathKnights allows me to break the army up into smaller squads under capable leaders. Divide and conquer. Zayah, meanwhile, will work with the ArchAngel to help cement my legitimacy as a ruler through the use of religion; the ArchAngel I will convince of my righteousness. because I am helping to unite the world under one banner, and that I strive to achieve an unprecedented level of peace and prosperity, and that it's a tragedy that some times, I must resort to force to accomplish that goal.

I'll even sweet talk her into how "vampires are people, too", and "It's not their fault that they have to consume human blood", and "if people were just willing to be donors, they wouldn't have to kill".
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>>53004551
Yes
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>>53004565
Sure, the cult leader is how I'm going to inspire the people to worship me as a god-emperor, but when it comes down to rulership on the small scale level, I'm going to rely on my loyal vampires. They'll be loyal to me, because if they aren't, they'll be made an example of; but mostly because my rule will legitimize their existence (within reason), and since they can basically live forever, they're well suited to learning the arts of stewardship, etc.

Any challengers? Any holes in my grand schemes anybody can see?

Love this CYOA, by the way. Nice options, nice world building. I think I saw a few typos here and there, but I'll be damned if I remembered to catch them.
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>>53002544
>>53002560
>>53002570
>>53002587
>High Vampire
>Flying Necropolis
We're doing this in style

>raise dead 3
>Soul Creation 1
>Soul Burn 1
>Spirits from Hell 1
>Communion 2
>Unholy Chains 2
Some classics and useful spells, and yes, all that lich only stuff does make me jealous.

>Fallen Angel Army
>Vampire Clan
Why bother picking undead armies when I'll just make them later if I need them? Angels and Vampires seem like a nice double up, small and elite enough to fit in my Necropolis while I truck around.

>Teresa
>Mark
>Zayah
>Laliuna
Set Teresa and Mark up together as a couple, then head back to Lyran and offer to help protect in return for parking my necropolis overhead and getting my pick of their criminals etc for necromantic and vampire feeding reasons.
Zayah will help spread the cult in the city, she and Laliuna will of course also fulfil my every sick fleshy desire.

>Endgames
Yea... I'm gonna be fine with ruling my necropolis for a while, then work from there at the 'undead' kingdom routine.
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>>53003385
>handsome

Does this imply husbandos?

I'd say you could make it about "corrupting" them, just a bit. Archangels been acting too high and mighty so now they get paired with a mortal.
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>>53004493
I would say 'whatever' for names. If you did specific names, like Heat or Gale, then you'd have to make sure the companion/waifu/whatever was accurate to the character or risk REEEEEEEEEEing.
>>
>>53004490
She's more popular on /d/, she's actually the most popular waifu there. Susie seems to be the favorite of /tg/ and the most unpopular waifu seems to be Wrath, poor Wrath...


>>53004408
>TokHaar cucks Angel away from you with mind control during the Culling while reworking Stardust, talking about how used goods are okay and erasing your memories of earth
Sounds good to me! Let's make this happen.
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>>53004551
>Summer shenanigans
but spring isn't even over yet
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>>53004490
Thing about Gluttony is that she's really boring. She likes food and sucking dick. Constant stream of delicious food and blowjobs would be kind of heaven but Sloth allows you to build actual demiplane of comfort. Also, Wrath is cute and built for bullying.
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>>53004493
Just tell me this. Do you think demons are for sexual?

Include Bunny-kun pls.
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>>53004570
Post the rest desu please

>>53004684
Not in this part of the world at least, it's a fucking inferno here.
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>>53004680
>>53004701
>She likes food and sucking dick.
Hence why /d/ likes her.
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>>53004740
Sorry we hit the bump limit and it takes too long to post. Next thread
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>>53004701
Now that i think about it Anime style fights are probably foreplay if you choose wrath considering the power you get from her
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>>52999447
Chelsea
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>>53004740
>Post the rest desu please
Not the other anon, but while there _has_ been more content added to the whole, a finished version of the CYOA has not been posted yet.
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>>53004859
Ah I see thanks, last time I checked he was finished up to page 2, is there a complete page 3 or 4?
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>>53004792

What does that have to do with me?
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>>53003385
>>53004636
Hmm.

Maybe I could tackle that.
"Archangels have lost touch with humanity. Date one of them and teach them humans and their values.
What you teach the Archangel affects what will be taught in Angel-school."
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>>53004680
Wrath is probably the least popular because of the excessive tsun compared to the minimal dere. If there was some way to change her wrath towards you into wrath towards something else, it'd be pretty cute to imagine the two of you fighting whatever the third party is together.
>>
Can some kind anon post the gentle femdom cyoa please?
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>>53004897
Not to my knowledge, no.
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>>53004942
Don't make me gay, please. I know I'm on the verge liking shemales and traps but shit, one erotic male cyoa is all it takes at this point.
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>>53004701
Here's the thing, novelty wears off. sloth yeah gives you a plane but you'll basically have to work her body for her with most things. With gluttony she's not over the top. If this is for eternity it gives you the best option to still enjoy the mortal world with a waifu who isnt a cunt.
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>>53004942
Sounds good. I'd include a way to genderbend to appeal to the waifu crowd though.
>>
Give me some ideas for immortality options.
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>>53005016
Anon, what if I told you gay dudes give the best head? Better than even fat chicks
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>>53004709
Whether that's the end result of the Totally Abstract Social Link Investment Mechanic is for you to decide.

Bunny may be involved, and may help in quests that involve Dancing Crazy, Furiously, or All Night.
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>>53005075
Super regeneration and peak human performance allowing you unlimited sustainability against the ravages of time
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>>53004947

No.
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>>53005075
Empathy. Makes anybody who is about to kill you stop right before doing it.
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>>53005075
Soul swap
phylactery
Feeding

These seem to be the basics but the method can vary
IE a binding a soul to a dead body would be similar to a phylactery
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>>53005016
Don't browse this thread on someday.
>>53005050
Why would you ruin a pure husbando CYOA?
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>>53005075
Good or bad actions keep your body healthy depending or damage it depending on your personality
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>>53005075
There is the way of Schrodinger from Hellsing, which is pretty useful in other ways as well.
Groundhog day style reboots could be cool, always sending you either to the start of that day or far enough back that you can get out of dodge.
Which leads into the idea of just pre-living things, so you can avoid anything that would kill you, ala that crappy Next movie.
Split realities, so you experience death and so on but then get to step sideways to one where things went just a little differently.
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>>53005249
healthy or damage it*
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>>53005016
m8 you're either gay or not, if that's the way you feel then you already are gay
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>>53005075
Immortality but every time you are killed you die from being killed
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>>53001000
>Pedigree
-1
>Status
-1
>Allure
1
>Shape: Enticing
>Chest: Gifted
>Influences: Multiplexive
>Face: Seductive [+1 All]
>Flourishes
Ejaculation (2)
Carnal Atmosphere (+3) [-1 Ped, -1 Sta, +1 All]
>Strategy: Cultivation
>Specialty: Multitudinous [-1 Ped, +1 Sta, -1 All]
>Dowry
Nuptial Torc (+3)
>Urges
Predatory [+1 Ped, -1 All]
Cerebral Recurve (+1) [-1 Sta, +1 All]
>Castellan of the Cosmos
Conquering Crusader (+2)
>Penis (0)
Pillar (3)
Pillar (3)
Prehensile (2)
>Penis (3)
Pillar (3)
Pillar (3)
Prehensile (2)
>Penis (3)
Pillar (3)
Pillar (3)
Prehensile (2)
>Penis (3)
Pillar (3)
Pillar (3)
Prehensile (2)
>Penis (3)
Pillar (3)
Pillar (3)
Prehensile (2)
>Penis (3)
Pillar (3)
Pillar (3)
Prehensile (2)
>Penis (3)
Pillar (3)
Pillar (3)
Prehensile (2)

PREPARE YOURSELF FOR: BALL OF DICKS MAN!
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>>53005075
If you die someone else will die instead
>>
>>53005338
You can't have any stat less than one.
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>>53005075
If you die you die
>>
>>53005164

How do you know? I only joined there a couple days ago.
>>
>>53005075
Turn in to a shapeshifting amorphous fluid that can't be damaged
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>>53005363
Fuck
Alright then
>Rare Hunger (+2)
Gotta have people keep a fire burning
>Fortifying (3) [+1 Ped]
>Swarm Heart (3) [+1 Sta]
Sorted
BALL OF DICKS MAN RIDES AGAIN
>>
>>53005338
https://youtu.be/lTWaUOV2AfM
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>>53000061
Grendel, Wendy, and Suzie are all good options, but in the end I've gotta go with Suzie because she'd be the least disruptive to my life as it is at the moment. Her pocket dimension would work great with our hobbies, and she'll mesh well with my real wife to boot.
With my wife and I doing all the effort in the relationship as well, she should come around nicely.
>>
>>53005479
So... you basically are a tentacle monster but with dicks instead?
>>
>>53002544

>Undeath: True Lich
Vampire is frankly pretty weak. DK is ok but we are going to be wizzards. Also Lich can have infinite amounts of skeletons, which diminishes DK's "more armies" trick.

>Lair: Haunted Keep
I think the reason I don't like the vampire is because the minions aren't really that amazing that I want to focus on them.

>Spells: 7 + 1 from lair + 10 from Lich
>Raise Dead, tier 3 [3]
>Soul Creation, tier 2 [5]
>Blood Moon, tier 1 [6]
>Fast Rotting [7]
>Miasma [8]
>Unholy Chains, tier 2 [10]

I'm going to summon a fuckload of worthless morons for my army, then use Blood Moon and Miasma to make them slightly less worthless. Soul Creation and Chains are going to be used to create slightly less retarded minions to actually lead my armies so that I don't have to, to actually do something in fights, bodyguard me and in general actually maybe accomplish something unlike the rest of my army.

>Army, 4 + 1 lair
>Death Knight Army [2]
Hey, they aren't completely worthless.
>2 x Reanimated Army [4]
Hey, they are.
>Skeletal Archers [5]

Not the most impressive army and really not the most original one but it has the backbone, the ranged and the heavy hitters, it will do. From there, Raise Dead means that every fight I'm forced to abandon the battlefield will just increase the size of my army. Chains and Soul Creation will used to steadily grow the size nonworthless part of my army.

>Minions [3]
>Gragas
So that I don't actually have to bother with the army leading part.
Uh, none of the other minions really interest me at all. Zayah and Laliuna I guess.

Now, my goal is a bit different. The lich claimed that I wasn't magically gifted but accepting that is just loser talk. I'm going to hunt down and eat every single other necromancer in these lands.

>What if eating a necromancer doesn't give you their powers?
That's their problem.
>>
>>53005075
Hivemind. Not exactly immortal, but damn close.
>>
>>53005550
Yes, with the power of flight via excessive, explosive ejaculation.
>>
>>53005575
You truly are a gift to this world
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>tfw CYOAs will never be real
I'm sick of this shit world, end me.
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>>53005645
It will always hurt
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>>53005020
One way to think Sloth is that you get your comfy demiplane where you can chill and it comes with free onahole. Laying there like a fish is a huge turnoff tho, agreed.

Would go with Wrath, A++ bully target. We'll test the limits of Zynthia's blessings.
>>
>>53005645
I can safely say your death would no doubt improve the world.
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Are the people requesting husbando cyoas mostly femanons or gays?
>>
>>53005342
You will get hunted by your mortality tho.
>>
>>52999447
Mary Sue
>>
>>53005702
Obviously gays
>>
>>53005708
What ?
>>
>>53005658
Not if I die. I need to die.
>>
>>53005674
See, the thing with her not wanting to put any effort into it and just laying there is that this also means she won't stop you from doing anything.
Go to town on her face and throat, enjoy the rest of her, write on her, leave her tied up as a hanging decoration with toys in her and so on. You get to indulge yourself on her, and if you really don't like the dead fish routine, then just make it more effort to resist obeying your whims and laying there than it is to fulfill them. The sooner she does XYZ and does it right, the sooner you'll stop bothering her with your dick and let her back to that anime or game she was watching.
>>
>>53005785
It's a plot point in old game Planescape: Torment. You are immortal because your mortality was ripped from you but over time it has attained a sort of sentience and wants to destroy you so that it can never be forced to unite with you again. Every time you die, you simple wake up a little later but the planes will demand that balance is maintained and someone else will die instead.
>>
>>53005870
FUCK I wish I hadn't read that.
>>
>>53005879
I put it in spoilers for a reason. Now, consolidation is that this will be revealed about halfway thro the game and the best part is the interactions with the world and the NPCs. The BBEG is frankly quite small part of the game and just provides a goal to work towards.
>>
>>53005926
I already realized that I was somehow related to my enemy, but I hadn't put it all together so neatly. I also read quickly enough that by the time I realized I didn't want to read it, it was too late.
>>
>>53005674
>>53005843
>One way to think Sloth is that you get your comfy demiplane where you can chill and it comes with free onahole. Laying there like a fish is a huge turnoff tho, agreed.

It is possible to "train" Sloth like I described in this post ---> >>53001860
>>
>>53006041
Welcome to my magical realm.
>>
>>53005870
>that feel when you get stuck in Ravel's maze
I really wish I had incentive to finish it.
>>
>>53006097
suck my dick bitch.
>>
>>53006097
Post the fucking pic
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>>53006097
>>
>>53003652
In hindsight, I think I'm going to replace realm knowledge for no guns. Not getting sniped is better than knowing about the realm I plan on destroying anyways.
>>
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>>53006188
>>53006192
>>53006223
>>53006317
>>53006357

There's people here I swear if I could I'd burn their cocks off with a glowing red hot poker and laugh at how tiny and pathetic they were as they shrank to blackened bits of cinder.
>>
Wow, /cyoag/ is impressively shitty today.
>>
>>53004634
You can't get raise dead 3 unless you're a lich
>>
>>53006401
I remember when you said you didn't hate men.
And wow, way to assume someone's gender!
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>>53006401
>>53006097

Kill yourself you fake red haierd, big nose, meth mouth Jew
>>
>>53002587
Death Knight
Flying Necropolis
Spells
freezing aura [3]
soul weapons [2]
unholy chains [2]
undead power [1]
raise dead [1]
fast rotting [1]
Army
The Horseman [1]
Fanatic Cultists [2]
Minions
Zayah, Cult Leader
Mark, Human Mercanairy
Vladimir, Vampire King
Goal [Undead Kingdom]
Set up a government using my top members loyalty and usefulness will be rewarded with vampirism. Don't hold armies use my power to set up my minions in positions of power and my power over them to increase my influence.
>>
>>53006646
Whose nudes even leaked, Rose or Angels?
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>>53006711
Mine
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>>53004784

>>53006041
>>
>>53002544
High Vampire
Flying Necropolis

>Spells
Raise Dead 1
Undead Power 1
Soul Creation 2
Empowered Bones 1
Soul Burn 1
Spirits from Hell 2
Unholy Chains 2

>Army
Lesser Necromancers
Deathknight Army

>Minions
Teresa
Loliuna
Gragas
Zayah

>Goals
Pocket Dimension

Unlike the lich who empowered me, I have zero desire to raise a gigantic army and lay waste to the living. Managing an army and nation sounds like a pain in the ass. Instead, I plan on being a dungeon master. I will convert my flying necropolis into a tower style dungeon, with the entrance at the bottom of the tower.

At the top of this tower will be my phlactery. I will populate the levels of this dungeon with my minions. I will scatter loot throughout the dungeon as an incentive for adventurers to enter it.

The lower levels will be filled with weak undead that are replenished by my lesser necromancers. There will be a few traps scattered about.

The lower middle levels will be filled with lesser demons that I summon with "Spirits from Hell" and enslave with "Unholy Chains". Imps, hell hounds, weak fiends, and other such creatures will populate these levels. The loot will be better, and the traps will be nastier.

The upper middle levels will be filled with Death Knights, Succubus, and humanoid golems that I have created with "Create Soul". Of course, the traps will get deadlier.

The top levels will be filled with lovecraftian "golems" that do not resemble human forms at all. The most elite of my death knights will be there lead by Gragas. It will be filled with the nastiest traps I can imagine. In the boss room, Gragas, Loliuna, and Teresa will wait with our most powerful minions.

Since my dungeon is a flying fortress, I will only allow small parties to enter it to try to conquer it. If a serious army is amassed with the goal of destroying my dungeon, I will just lift off, fly away, and land somewhere else.
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>>53002222
Reinforced
Extra Arms
(Transfer)

Strength
Speed
Agility
Regeneration
Growth

Immortal
Practical Magic
(Transfer)
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