CYOA General

>>52269141
>being this mad
You MUST seek help pastebin-autist! This isn't healthy! We were only on page 7 for Christ's sake!

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Putting this one up again, I really like it and I want to see other peoples' builds for it.

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Version 1.2 is done, and I'm accepting Companion-formatted builds to be put in the NCYOA.

>>52269250
I think he's cute

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>>52269141

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I'm fond of this one

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>>52269287
Part 2.
There should be no more little bugs to find.

So one thing i changed between v2 and v3 was the companions, making them more likable and less evil. Is this better than the way they were before?

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>>52269282
My build is too long to put up here, it'd require five or six posts. So I'll just put the jist of it and all of my autisic elaboration in a pastebin, like this.


Training: engineering degree
Suit: Industrial Engineer Minnerva Platform
Augs: polymelia, somatic stem platelets, electro-receptic retina
Primary weapon: Electric Arc Conductor
Sidearm: Mag-Rail pistol
Utility weapon: mechanized gloves
Tram dropoff point: Hydroponics
Friends: Tram Specialist Klara, The Flesh Watcher, Officer of the Law John

tl;dr: Dead Space

http://pastebin.com/WpFmQ3JC

>>52269287
Tell me something, how is a? Korperlos supposed to interact with physical objects?

>>52269324
The unidentified gun seems to be useless against anything inorganic. Would the bone spires not explode after several seconds instead of instantly like it is with organic tissue?

>>52269320
>So one thing i changed between v2 and v3 was the companions, making them more likable and less evil. Is this better than the way they were before?

You wussed out.

>>>52269380

>>52269378
I wouldn't call it useless, you're still shooting nasty bone spikes. They look like they'd cause problems for at least the lesser robots, even in the worst case scenario that they don't go off if they don't hit flesh.

Markedly less useful, yes, but that's more a case of it being really powerful vs lightly armored organics rather than the bone spikes being particularly crappy projectiles in and of themselves. It's like having a grenade launcher that only kills things in hab suits and other stuff light enough for the secondaries to penetrate, but being able to blow away entire squads in a few good volleys is really strong.

>>52269446
I was just asking if the little shits couldn't cut through anything inorganic for some reason.

>>52269460
I have no idea, man. I would think they might struggle, but not be entirely incapable

>>52269320
I think you should, at the very least, go halvsies.
Some of us want to be weird, misunderstood loners with a heart of (rotting) gold!
Others of us want to be evil as fuck, and take over the world with our skellymans.
Keep a good mix. Don't go grimderp or noblebright.

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>>52269320
You should make at least one or two dudes in each section evil, as the setting and CYOA itself is pretty dark-grey already. Some people want world domination or a harem of slaves, so you might want to give them companions fitting their ambition.

As other anon said, I'd go 50/50, or at least 33/33/33 for good/neutrally grey/evil. For example, I can't find ANY evil characters in the purple companion section right now. Let's see, their motivations and traits are as follows: continue caring about her family; to teach necromancy out of respect of her master; live like a queen; being naive and childlike; see her father again; take a break from reaping and make friends; help the dead; preserve beauty in death; follow the path of good; create an undead utopia; tell chill and humerus puns; make amends for his past; care for the dead; travel and study the art; release dead from the burden.

ARE. YOU. SERIOUS.

Where is my clicheed homicidal maniac who wants to take over the world with his army of darkness? Huh? HUUUUUH?

>>52269631
In the unfinished poster-submitted section.
Get on it anon.

>>52269649
Oh, you bet I will. Just you wait for 5 minutes, you goody-two-shoes fleshbag.

>>52269282
>Engineering Degree
>Engineer Minerva
>Probability Reader, Electro-Receptic Retina, Mercury Schematic Input Slot
>Arc Conductor, Rivet Gun, Mechanized Gloves
>Crew Dormitory
>Tram Specialist Klara, Old Guard Ezekiel, and Mech Infantry Alise

Good lord this place is busted to shit. You pass out for five minutes, and the ship looks like someone tried to fuse a spaceship with road warrior. It's time to get some shit done.
So many of the "Mechanics" that are around here are shameless hacks who haven't the foggiest idea what they're doing. That changes. I'm gonna fix this shit up, then deal with all of the new company we have.
As a surprising twist, a good chunk of the monsters infesting every corner are desperate enough for someone who can actually fix something instead of just taping it together, that I can pretty much move freely. Sure, there's plenty of wackjobs who don't care and just want shit dead, but whatever. I've got a long-plan to clear out the nasties, but that can wait.
I work mostly with the humans left. Klara, nice gal, I think I knew her grandmother, or maybe it was her mom, I dunno. She gets me through those tunnels faster than a liquid diet through a guy on laxatives. This other guy, Ezekiel, has made it his duty to make sure I fix shit. I think he was supposed to "convince" me, but I don't need convincing to fix clean up this goddamn mess.
Last, one of these "Interlopers" has decided it might be a really good idea if the walls didn't come crashing down around her, sensible gal she is, so keeps me company and not full of bullets when Ezekiel's got something up his ass. I think she might be considering joining us, all things considered, I might help that along by fixin' up her suit. It would be good to have someone like that owe you a major favor.

Frankly, I don't care much about the inner politics, and I've even managed to dig out my own little isolated home from the trashed suite of a jackass who didn't deserve it 60 years ago.

>>52269287
Companion Submission, I don't have an image.

>Imhotep (?)
Reunu Pertemru
Imhotep was improperly preserved, and his brain's a little mushy. He doesn't know who he is, but he's very suggestible. He does have formidable powers in his own right, likely rivaling, if not surpassing your late master, but he will need you to steer for him. If left to his own devices, he flits wildly from one whimsy to the next.

"I forget, did I put my pants on me, or that guy I raised? I feel like he's wearing them. Do I even wear pants?"

Feel free to condense as needed. Just keep the core "Senile old mummy who relies on you for direction" intact.

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>>52269287
Captain Barbuto

Liber Mortis
Tier 4: Command Undead, Create Undead, Ward Undead
Tier 3: Disguise Undead, Imbue Life, Vision of Death
Tier 2: Create Greater Undead, Create Mass Undead, Enhance Undead, Touch of Death
Tier 1: Death Warden

Blood Pact, Night Falls, Ritual Enhancement, Bloodthirsty Weapon, Create Ghost

"Mateys"
Wraith u3
Bayrok u4
Executioner u4
Zombie Giant u6

"Skeleton Crew"
2 greater skeletons u6
250 skeletons u25

"Booty"
20 slaves u2

Perks (custom to replace companions): Sailor, Remorseless, Skilled Navigator, Swordsman

Enemies: Vampirates +5u (as if they don't know skellington pirates are better), Royal Navy +5u (as if they can catch us), Bounty +5u (the bigger the better), Branded by Davy Johns +5u

Region: The Sea, laddie!
Lair: The Black Oyster, fastest ship in the known world

A notorious pirate who inspired fear in all who saw his awesome ship on the horizon, he was betrayed by his team and forced to walk the plank. He made a deal with ol' Davy Johns and with some creative applications of dark arts managed to escape his fate. Years spent walking the bottom of the sea left only his skeleton intact, but in the end he was at the helm again, more terrifying than ever.

"Aye, laddies! Now this poor fool will learn how I lost me beard!"

>>52269762
I have it done.

I shall bid /cyoag/ good night, and i'll check back tomorrow to add in any new build companions.

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Reposting the updated version.

>>52269287
>tfw want to do a green book necromancer build just for the "quite pungent, my dear" quote

>>52269287
A couple of questions if you don't mind, does calcify supposed to be some sort of medusa turn to stone death spell or a way to make someone really tough? Are clones inherently loyal or do we need someway of making them so? And can we as Körperlos possess people?

>>52269282
>>52269324

>Law Enforcement

>Riot Squad Pax gear

>Dissassembly nanites
>Electro-Receptic Retina
>Pax Gendarmerie emblem.

>Kinetic Energy Projector
>Station Stun Gun

>Organic Blade

>System Engineer Albina
>Station Outcast Alexei
>Psyaug Timothy

>Bridge

The primary goal is to get as many non-interloper humans off the station as possible. Secondary goal - destroy the station to prevent spreading the contamination.

The bridge offers the most obvious solution - get there, and hopefuly get the security AI under our control. Best case scenario I would be able to move through the place unobstructed and get Albina to the AI, hopefully she'd be able to fix it. Worst case scenario I can't use my clearance to keep her and/or myself completely safe, then this becomes an escort mission to get her to the AI. There we will be able to determine the problem with the security, and hopefully get it to treat the stationeers as friendlies at the very least, and at best use Security forces to take the Hangars by storm and procure ships for the stationeers to evacuate as well as escort them to the Hangars. If such control is impossible and our only option is to completely disable state of emergency then this avenue is failed, and Bridge should be left alone for now.

If Bridge fails, get to Research decks, get as much juicy data and samples as possible, trade those to interlopers for a ship to get stationeers out. (Alternatively - gain an acces to a food processor on Hydroponics and trade that to interlopers). Timothy and my own skills should make this more easy. Best case scenario they allow us to board on hangars, worst case we'll use Mining deck for that. Timothy and Alexei will help securing the foothold there, Albina hopefuly can do something about the vacuum, otherwise we'll need a lot of suits.

>>52270807
Medical Bay is a potential solution, with research and supplies as possible barter material at least and a potential way to control contaminants on massive scale at best. Alexei can make moving through there much easier. If negotiations with Interlopers completely fail and we get a way to control contaminants, we can launch a raid on Hangars, and steal a fitting ship for stationeers while contaminants distract the interlopers.

When stationeers are evacuated, proceed to the bridge to activate self-destruct sequence. If my clearance works at it's best, it's easy. If not, we hopefully can use Timothy and data from Medicals to get us som contaminant meatshields to distract the security. If that does not work either, then it becomes even harder. In any case, if this works and the station is gone this will solve the contamination problem and deride interlopers of their front base. Timothy will like it.

If I can't convince the majority of the people to evacuate, then use any of the options to secure the transport for myself and get the hell away from all these coocoos.

>>52270807
Wait a fucking minute, do you actually have to pick the suit specific aug? I thought you got it by default.

>>52270825
That's my understanding. Otherwise it would just be listed in the suit description.

>>52270789
Not Scientist, but here's something.
>A couple of questions if you don't mind, does calcify supposed to be some sort of medusa turn to stone death spell or a way to make someone really tough?
Judging by the way the description is worded, it sounds like it could be used for both.
>Are clones inherently loyal or do we need someway of making them so?
If you mean the Promraen Caro immortality option, those are inert bodies up until your current body dies, in which case the next clone in the queue is activated.

>>52269282
Combat Training
Riot Squad Gear

Augmentation: Regeneration, Probability Reader, Gendarmerie Emblem

Laser Rifle
Gendarmerie SMG
Mechanized Gloves

Location: Bridge

Companions: Ezekiel, Jan, Isaac

We're basically the sci-fi protagonist team. I'm going to try to use my police uniform + heightened access level to turn off the state of emergency (probably won't work, but that's how act 1 needs to end anyway), then find a ship to leave the station for good. At the end of the day Isaac will probably have to sacrifice himself in a heroic manner with Ezekiel saying something along the lines of "in the end you were human after all" to allow us to escape. Gonna be a hell of a ride. Now I want a System Shock remake.

Can someone post Jojo again?

>>52271065
Previous thread is still alive for some reason. Ded board.

>>52270884
I meant the create life option.

>>52269287
>>52269320
Revised Eugenics Build
>Race
Human

>Worship
None

>Main School
Promaen Caro
Tier 4- Cure Injury, Inflict Paralysis, Reinforcemenr
Tier 3- Natural Weapons, Cure Disease, Warp Flesh
Tier 2- Create Life, Rejuvenate
Tier 1- Potion of Khizaz

>Secondary Spells
Promaen Caro
Tier 4- Gentle Repose, Create Abomination
Tier 3- Enhanced Sense, Alter Appearance
Tier 2- Mass Growth, Craft Plague

>Companions
Catherine

>Perks
Surgeon (free), Silver Tongue, Gold Tongue

>Enemies
Psychotic Count (+4), Abholean Witch (+15)

>Drawbacks
Single-Minded, Promean Caro (+3)

>Nation
The Untamed Lands, Lorekhmu

>Lair
Isolated Castle

Total Points: 52

>Extra Spells
Alter Age (free), Create Skinwalker (37)

>Extra Perk
Apothecary (27)

>Minions
Skinwalker (19), Created Life (12), Slyther (3), Groundskeeper (1), Slave (0)
27/30 minions to the cap

>>52271294
The goal? Set myself up as an isolated healer, a miracle worker for the right price. The Skinwalker will lead the willing to my isolated residence, where the day to day business is taken care of by my Groundskeeper and "Slave", who is enhanced with a few spells and not treated as such. Created Life assists with myself and Catherine's work. Slyther is obviously there for defense, but the untamed jungle of this land will be enhanced and controlled by my magic. It will be no small feat reaching me and will require guidance by my skinwalker, who for obvious reasons will retain the utmost discretion

Of course, I'll venture out on my own to nearby cities and villages, but my normal face will never be associated with my work. The issue is that a Count knows of my existence and took it as a slight that I was not able to Alter Age to the degree he wished. Taking it as an insult, he bends his mind and all his resources to find my castle again.

The other issue is the order of Abholean Witches out to sacrifice me, in order to bring back their Old Gods. Little do they know I'm building a knew world of my own, the rooms of my castle slowly filling with new humans, stronger, faster, and more adaptable than anything the world has seen. This isn't a project of death, blood, and bone, but a celebration of life and growth. And soon my people will outgrow this castle, my jungle will outgrow this land.

No rush, though. I want to enjoy Life as it comes.

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>>52269287
>>52269320
I agree with >>52269631. Here is my potential contribution to the cause:

>Name
Captain Vossler

>Description
More alive than most living, he maintains his lust for battle and plunder in death. He commands his own formidable and feared pirate frigate - The Hollow Pale. He seeks a partner to enjoy bloody conquests with.

>Quote
"We're the kings of the sea. We should live it up."

>>52271336
>competing with another anon's pirate build
>>52269932
That's gonna be interesting.

>>52271347
Oh, didn't see his build before I submitted mine. I like his story more.

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>>52271065
>>52271193
Get in the car losers, we're going posing.

>>52269287
I like the builder but their really needs to be an Igor style companion for green. I mean if you are making a Frankenstein style monster you need a circus freak to collect fresh body parts and knock out intruders.

Like the accomplice unit ramped up to 11

>>52271483
You can literally make one and submit it to Scientist, you daft punk.

>>52271417
Instead of a stand, can I obtain the ability to use Hamon?

>>52271519
someone will have to update the cyoa or make a hammon one

>>52269320
About balancing the unliving creatures maybe they still have biological weakneses like needing to eat or they can get old and feel pain or have weak points live the heart or brain so they are stronger against spiritual attacks but weaker agains fisical attacks?

>>52266415

I planned to but quickly realized how awful of an option it would be. It would ruin the mood of the CYOA.

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>>52271294
>>52271305
Alright, let's put a name and face on this motherfucker...

Drelos Heartrender

Sounds like something out of Eragon, but I'll live with it

>>52269287
Can I use this to become a cute Lich-girl who keeps her Lichness a secret and pretends to be an ordinary cute girl who never ages and has lots of literal skeletons in her closet?

>>52271417
Felt like giving Buford B. Swift an update.

An accomplished adventurer Buford has many hair raising tales to tell, most of which the Jojo doesn't believe. Shot a werewolf in the ass (not with silver bullets though, had to run like mad after that), thrust his hands in a roaring fire pit to coat them in ash so he could punch a goatman(it may have just been a dude on pcp), and having a shouting match with the Jersey Devil just to name a few. There may be some truth in his tales though as he developed his stand naturally it seems.

After meeting the Jojo of the story Buford is ecstatic. Someone else who sees the aliens! Learning about the quest to find his family Buford decides to help, this mystery is too good to pass up. With his contacts in the field of the paranormal he leads the Jojo on a wild ride involving ghosts, ancient super vampires and a Nuckelavee(which it turns out is an ancient stand bound to an area). While they never find any leads on the Joestars they do meet one of the villains and draw some unwanted attention to themselves.

Later in the story he may be wounded byone of the arrows at which point he gains

Flying Whales
Destructive Power:B
Speed:C(variable)
Range:B
Durability:C
Precision:A+
Learning:A+

Special ability:Alteration

Flying Whales makes it so his stand can no longer interact with the world physically as it has retreated into the simon says looking disk on its back. This disk is capable of floating around and using a ray gun to swap electrons in matter, allowing it to transmute it to whatever Buford wants. The more drastic the change the longer it takes. It also requires Buford to learn more about chemistry than his professional quality paranormal investigator chemist set has taught him.

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>>52269552
Mileena is very cute

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>>52269287
>>52269320
Henry

Kroveri Hæma
Tier 4 - Sanguine Senses, Create Thrall, Lift Bloodstain
Tier 3 - Blood Tracking, Ritual Enhancement, Bloodthirsty Weapon
Tier 2 - Blood Runs Dark, Bloodguard, Empower Bloodline
Tier 1 - Vampirism

Limit Bane, Reinforcement, Death Ward, Invisibility to Undead, Detect Undead

Companions: N/A
Minions: N/A
Perks: Crowdborn, Stealth, Scaling, Parkour, Lockpicking, Soldier, Cat's Eye, Tracker, Bloodcrafter

Enemy: Vampire Hunter

Region: Teb’Ihr
Lair: Vagrant

Experienced and skilled even for vampires, he is a professional assassin for hire. He specializes in killing necromancers and other magic users. Used to being alone, he will slowly grow fond of you.

"Finish up those skeletons and let's go."

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>>52269282
Training: Combat Training
Equipment: Riot Squad Pax Gear (painted to make me not look like a fucking cop)
Upgrades: Somatic Stem Platelets, Electro-Receptic Retina, Pax Gendarmeri Emblem
Weapons: Kinetic Energy Projector & Microwave Blaster
Mechanized Gloves
Start in the Commercial Deck
Companions: Albina, Agatha, Alise
Work with the interlopers & security to purge the contaminant then try to end the lockdown to get everyone out of there

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>>52271417
The amount of BIZARRE in this is too much for me
Stand Name:「Empty Spaces」
Stand Power: http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Internal_Rupturing

Destructive Power B
Speed A
Range A
Durability E
Precision A
Learning D

Ripped as Fuck (-1)
Villain (-3)
Sharp Dresser (-1)
Do you even pose? (-1)

Stand User: Senator Martin Luther Brown

Senator Brown is a ruthless politician who always achieves his goals through any means necessary. Some say he would stop at nothing to become the president of the United States of America. All his political opponents were removed from the race or had unfortunate accidents, but due to control of his wife's mass media empire the general public never blamed him. To citizens of US Senator Martin Luther Brown is a model family man, a moderate conservative, a supporter of veterans, and a famous bodybuilder.

He somehow acquired his「Stand」when he was still in college, and used it to further his political agenda and make himself a senator. He uses it dispose of those who would pose a threat to his lifelong Dream.

His「Stand」is almost invisible even to a stand user, as it consists of myriad of minuscule transparent tentacles that are very long and can move extremely fast. Although they lack raw strength, they are razor sharp. Senator uses them to cut invisible holes in human skin and tissue, and burrow inside the body to make small cuts that in time would rip and cause internal bleeding or even organ damage. Doctors won't notice anything unnatural in this cause of death, which is exactly what Senator wants.

With help of archives of his ancestor, he knows about mystical life force known as Hamon and the history of Joestar family. He started extensively training his Hamon techniques from the very young age, and that was a secret of his fantastic strength and constitution. How can JoJo even hope to defeat such a powerful opponent?!

>"I have a Dream, JoJo! And you're just another brick in the Wall!"

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>>52270315
Am I allowed to post a build if I can't think of a good color-based name for my character?

>>52272110
Yup. Just pray the next guys to post a build don't go to a different school.

>>52269287
Danar Nebeff or Nabeff?
It's written with an a in his quote

>>52269287
based

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>>52269287
>>52269320


Companion Build

>Nathan Salem
>Liber Animas
>Confident & Manipulative man with a Golden Tongue.
Nathan is known to many as a Skilled trader & friend of finer arts, with friends in nearky every city of every race.
What most don't know, is that many of his political & noble "friends", are manipulated by spirits to move things in his favor.
It is nearly impossible to detect these spirits by most means, maybe he can teach you how?

"Why sit on the throne as a target, when you can be the one holding the strings in the shadows?"

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>>52271417
Stand Name:「Dopes to Infinity」
Stand Power:Plane Physiology
Destructive Power:C
Speed:C
Range:C
Durability:A
Precision:A
Learning:C

Fabulous as Fuck -2
Minor Villain-1
Do you Even Pose?-1
Sharp Dresser-1
Cool Hair-1

User:Jean Robert

Jean was a junky hoodlum looking for his next fix when his dealer gave him a proposition. Get rid of some chucklefuck muscling in on his territory and he gets a months worth.

Jean took the deal without a second thought.

As time went on he took more and more of those kinds of jobs and something odd happened. He stopped using. Cleared up his head, it did. He only had one passion now; getting away with murder.

Eventually he met a man who offered him another deal that would change his life. Become his personal assassin and receive unimaginable power.

Of course he accepted

His stand appears to be a smiling Buddha made of innumerable human bodies woven together to create its form. It has a single eyes on its face. This eye can be seen in mirrors by those who don't have stand abilities. When a person makes eye contact with 「Dopes to Infinity」
they are shrunk to 1mm in size and transported to a dimension that exists on the stands skin. This environment is incredibly hostile as the humanoid forms lash out at all intruders. The trapped individual is able to escape either by reaching the stand's eye and jumping through it, rendering 「Dopes to Infinity」 blind for a time, or by being picked off it by someone else.

>>52269319
Conqueror
Wealth

Goblin Princess
Golem Princess
Myconid Princess
Orc Princess

Reinforcements: Elven Snipers
Monster Heritage: Golem

Spam magic-like Myconid abilities in Orc anti-magic fields while our enemies scream in rage and frustration as their own magic is shut down. Elven Snipers gank any strong opposing units. Golems and Goblins have a nice quality/quantity duo going on.

Waifus are meaningless when compared to conquering and strategy!

>>52269287
>and I'm accepting Companion-formatted builds to be put in the NCYOA.

Fuck now I have to make a build.

>>52270315
Question. If I wanted to have a variable weapon that's a flamethrower would I have to take the dust mods or is just having it be a flamethrower enough?

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>>52269287
>>52269320
Companion Build

-Kaspar L. Meyer, Kroveri Haema, Vampire
Nearly 300 years old Kaspar is the most know vampire lord of the area, leading a one of the largest clans and controlling an entire city.
Fighting a bitter war against the church of Mother, for killing his wife and their unborn child, he has sworn to hunt down the whole order.
He constantly seeks allies to join him on his quest, with promises of great power and wealth

>>52271771
If you don't mind being adopted by your parents, I don't think it should be too much of a problem ... Let's see. Combine Lichdom with Promræn Caro's 'Rejuvenate' to cure the decay, 'Gentle Repose' to avoid further decay, then 'Alter Appearance' to become a young girl (again?). 'Alter Age' may not work due to the fact that it has diminishing returns and it needs a lifetime to learn the Arts of Necromancy, but the above will suffice. Have fun with your skeletons!

>>52269287
>>52269320

>NAME
-Jonathan Crow

>RACE & GENDER
-Human & Male

>RELIGION
-N/A

>SPELLS -15 +2 spells for -2 companions

T4
-[BLUE] Create Ghost
-[BLUE] Craft Soulflask
-[BLUE] Spirit Ward
-[BLUE] Speak with the Dead
-[BLUE] Summon Spirit
-[RED] Sanquine Senses
-[RED] Blood Boil
-[RED] Pulse of Calm

T3
-[BLUE] Trap Soul
-[BLUE] Memories of the Soul
-[BLUE] Astral Protection
-[RED] Create Nosferatu

T2
-[BLUE] Craft Soulwell
-[BLUE] Create Greater Ghost
-[BLUE] Extract Soul
-[BLUE] Create Soulstone

T1
-[BLUE] Soul Drinker

Currency = 251

>COMPANIONS +8 companions -80 currency
-[RED] Shevyla
-[RED] Kaija
-[BLUE] Nadya -free
-[GREEN] Kreie
-[GREY] Danar Nebeff
-[GREY] Evdokiya
-[GREY] Melanya
-[GREY] Alyona
-[GREY] Edward

Cont.

>>52272797

Cont.

>MINIONS -111
-[RED] Vampire Bride x2
-[RED] Dhampir x2
-[BLUE] Primeyst'Ma
-[BLUE] Scheming Spirits
-[BLUE] Living Armor x3
-[BLUE] Bestial Spirits (10 crows)
-[GREY] Groundskeeper
-[GREY] Alchemist
-[GREY] Coven
-[GREY] Master Smith
-[GREY] Lone Wolf
-[GREY] Soldier x4
-[GREY] Disgraced Guard
-[GREY] Scholar
-[GREY] Thief
-[GREY] Accomplice
-[GREY] Elementalist

>PERKS 2 +6 -60c
-Bloodborn
-Artificer
-Silver Tongue
-Golden Tongue
-Runecrafter
-Wealthy
-Bloodcrafter
-Cat's Eye

>ENEMIES +212
-Wild Elf Tribe
-Death-Fearing Duke
-Banshee Queen
-Fire Mage
-Spellsword
-Psychotic Count
-Fabled Hero
-Mammoth Rider
-Rampant Undead
-Hessust
-Solaris Paladin
-Bounty Hunter
-Spiritbreaker
-Fair One Huntress
-The Doctor
-Amenthes
-Abholean Witch
-Arch Lich
-Inekh'Sinam
-Murderhobos

>DRAWBACKS +9
-Scarred
-Bounty

>COUNTRY
-Teb'Ihran

>LAIR
-Isolated Castle

Challenge Accepted.

>>52266415
>>52268859
>>52268880
I see.
What got me to think that was the "dlc page" that crossed it over with Jumpchain. That one was very clear about being all authors of JumpChain CYOAs, so I figured maybe it was the case with the original as well, just not as blatantly.

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>>52271417

Stand Name: 「Re:Re:」

Stand Power: [http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Calendar_Manipulation]

Destructive Power: B (-2)
Speed: A (-2)
Range: B (-2)
Durability: D (-1)
Precision: A (-2)
Development Potential: A (-2)
「Re:Re:」gets 3 extra points, as a Villain's stand.
「Re:Re:」appears as a humanoid figure entirely wrapped in constantly-shifting ticker tape, which it uses as "tentacles" to grab others, as well as manifest its power. In animated format, this is accomplished by one roll waving over the screen, with the picture on it ultimately filling the screen. Right now, its powers are limited to changing the days of the calendar, making it so that the specific "day" it is is in constant flux. Right now, it's at a "National" level of influence, meaning that it can't affect the entire world by changing Christmas, but it can change the days of things like national holidays. Only other Stand users will find this unusual; Ordinary people won't care if they have every day off of work because of constant 4th of July parties, or consider it unusual at all.

It can also rearrange and change the day of the week. This doesn't change any events that have occurred, but it does change what is expected of someone on a certain day: For example, if the JoJo has a Jojob from Monday to Friday and he's out on Sunday, 「Re:Re:」can change the day to Monday so that the JoJo loses a day of work. His boss'll be angry, too, if it happens enough - provided he's not a Stand user as well and can see through it.

Finally, this isn't the end for 「Re:Re:」: It has tremendous development potential, inserting its ticker-tape tendrils into the threads of time, potentially learning to change other things besides the simple days of the calendar. A bizarre power for a very Bizarre adventure.

Stand User in the next post.

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>>52272903
Exactly the Same (-0)
Villain (-3)
Do You Even Pose? (-1)
Sharp Dresser (-1)
Cool Hair (-1)

Alain Parsons is a projectionist for a movie theater in Chicago, and his life has been one large series of disappointments. His parents divorced when he was three, and from then on, the only time he'd ever get to see both of them together was on his birthday. Thus, he would often wish that his birthday lasted forever, or happened every day, or something that'd make that brief slice of happiness last longer.

Of course, growing up in a divided home didn't do wonders for his social life, either. From elementary school onwards, he was a loner - how could he invite people over to his house, only to have them ask where his mom or dad was? Or why he was at a different house every other week?

Finally, in high school, everything broke. Quite literally - On a school trip to the Natural History museum, his mother showed up in an attempt to spirit him away after the trip was done. A scuffle ensued, and in the middle of it, Alain was tossed into a glass case containing examples of Ancient Egyptian weapons - including a very unique arrow, which ended up cutting him deeply.

When he woke up, a strange man stood over him. About as tall as an adult, he had no face - just a mass of ever-shifting movie tapes. He would just「stand」in the room, the doctors and nurses actually passing through him. Alain figured he'd finally cracked and created an imaginary friend, but his perception changed on the next birthday he had. When he made his customary wish for every day to be his birthday, violent tendrils of movie tape shot out from his normally docile friend - and his parents threw him another party the next day.

(1/2)

>>52269282
Combat Training
Survivalist Mercury suit
Polymelia (arms)
Somatic Stem Platelets
Disassociated flesh

Las rifle
Microwave blaster
Mechanized Gloves

Thats all for now.

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>>52272958
His new power was entertaining for a bit, but it never really impacted his life in the positive way he wanted it to. For example, he repeated his Senior Prom twenty times in an attempt to get a date for at least one of them, and failing every time. He only stopped when he read in the school's newspaper that the PTA was growing upset because of the repeated proms, and worried that there wouldn't be enough money for the graduation party at the end of the year. This eventuality, though, gave him another idea. If he couldn't make his own life better with his power, he could sure as hell make other people's lives shit!

Making them throw parties every day until they ran out of money? Easy! Having them work every day until they collapse? Piece of cake! He loved toying with other people until they broke, and nobody would ever know that it was him! Of course, he had no special skills, and he still needed to support himself. He took a low-skill job ad a projectionist at a theater, and now one of his favorite tricks to play is to repeat the opening day of a movie for weeks to sap people's pockets dry and net himself a nice bonus from all the cash flow into the theater. And he's still learning more things that he and「Re:Re:」can do...

If he gets any hint that someone's onto him, he'll try to stay as far in the background as possible while making their life hell. He can obstruct them with sudden parades, sap their finances and make them lose their job, and target their families to exhaustion. You've got to be willing to give up a lot to beat this guy.

>Gahahahaha-a! Your mother's in the hospital with exhaustion! You've missed so much work, no company in the whole country would consider hiring you! Your friends hate you for blowing them off for months! And you still dare to resist? You might... might just be the one I'll enjoy breaking the most, yet! Gahya!

>>52272818
Isn't there a cap of 30 points on initial minions?

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>>52269287
Tsaredh

Promræn Caro
T1
-Devourer
T2
-Mass Growth
-Craft Plague
-Touch of Death
-Curse of Death
-Scourge of Scarabs
-Create Greater Undead
T3
-Limit Bane
-Warp Flesh
-Natural Weapon
-Cure Disease
-Trap Soul
T4
-Reinforcement
-Create Abomination
-Gentle Repose

Kaija

Apepvuko x4
Flesh Golem

Surgeon
Sensitive
Remorseless

Angry Mob
Wild Elf Tribe
Psychotic Count
Banshee Queen
Fire Mage
Spellsword
Death-Fearing Duke
Mammoth Rider
Rampant Undead
Bounty Hunter

Grand Palace

>>52273169
It's the starting amout of currency, not a cap.

>>52272818
>Challenge Accepted
It's funny imagining Paladin of Light, Arch-Lich, Conan the Barbarian, and Priestesses of Cthulhu taking turns to kick your corpse.

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>>52271771
>lich loli
I see a man of decent taste.

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>>52273413

>>52273183
Do you hear that? It's the sound of thousands of neckbeards screaming "CUUUTE"

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>>52273446

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>>52269287
Tirbath Zaun

Promræn Caro
Tier 4 - Reinforcement, Create abomination, Inflict paralysis
Tier 3 - Cure Disease, Enhanced senses, Natural weapons, Warp Flesh
Tier 2 - Rejuvenate, Mass growth
Tier 1 - Potion of Ahizaz

Companions: Kreie, The Face

Minions:
Ghouls (x2)
Night Wing
Chimæra
Slyther
Scholar
Thief (x2)


Perks - Surgeon, Animal Whisperer, Apothecary

enemies - Psychotic Count, Banshee Queen

Region: Teb'Ihr
Lair: Travelling Caravan

A shaman with a deep understanding of the human body. He perverted some of the teachings of his master in the pursuit of knowledge. Roaming through the country, he uses his allies to make some coin on the side both as a healer and through other less reputable means.

>>52272087
Surprised there's no fairy magic.

>>52269282
>>52269324

>Combat Training
>Clandestine Nox Vestments
>Probability Reader, Temporal Contrives, Nox Systems Upgrade
>Interloper Gauss Rifle
>Pressurized Flamer
>Organic Blade

>Hydroponics Deck
>Vigilante Droid Isaac, Station Outcast Alexei, Mech Infantry Alise

If they had just woken me up when the outbreak started, we wouldn't be in this mess in the first place.

Isaac and I function as the precision killers of this four-man squad, with Alexei lending his expertise in eliminating the contaminants and Alise being a big, loud, destructive target.

First and foremost priority, eliminate the contaminant. All of it. Hydroponics is the densest concentration, so we start there. We have expertise and a fuckton of firepower, and my handheld flamer exists solely to purge infested pockets.

The Interlopers can be dealt with, either through literal deals (they want the contaminant threat mitigated as much as anyone), so they can leave me to my business and let me barter extra flamer fuel off them, or through slaughtering them.

Station Security, we'll try to avoid as much as possible; this is where the Nox Vestments really shine. Once the contaminant threat is purged, hopefully the lockdown will lift automatically. If not, we can eliminate the remaining Interlopers, and find some mechanics that can eventually override the core AI and repair the station.

UniGov better give us a goddamn medal for single-handedly purging and recovering an entire station.

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>>52272133
Well alrighty then
>>52270315
In a recent thread three anons posted builds and needed an M to create Team DOOM, so I thought this would fit

>Name: Malcolm McCormick
>New arrival [0]
>Beacon Academy
>Semblance: Unstoppable
>Ferocity [10]
>Fear [20]
>Strength [40]
>Energy [60]
Malcolm is a very angry person. While he has no particular reason for his anger, he is incredibly prone to flying into fits of rage and breaking everything in sight, which was made worse by the discovery of his semblance.
After years of trying and failing to quell his anger. Malcolm asked to be enrolled in Beacon Academy in order to find a more positive use for his berserker rage, or perhaps find someone who can help him deal with his anger.
>Variable Weapon [400]
>Dust Mod [450]
>Weight Enhancement [550]
>Additional Form [650]
The "Chain Rule" was designed to help Malcolm tear through as much stuff as possible. It is part chainsaw, part chain-gun, part chainsaw-powered-pocket-bike. While Malcolm prefers to use the chainsaw mode, he is still decently proficient in fighting with the other two modes.
>Scroll [650]
>Rebreather [700]
>Dust Charges (x4) [900]
>Armor [1000]

>>52271664


That is have the waifu by a gender-bend self-insert. It would be awful.

>>52273918
Also, if someone can think of a better name for this guy, please tell me

give me your comfiest cyoa. i'm feeling comfy today

>>52273972
The comfiest CYOAs have been posted time and again, and should be readily available in (one or more of) the archives.

Why don't you provide us with some comfy OC instead? It'd always be nice to have more CYOAs that cater to comfy.

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>>52273972
Always

>>52272087
>Chin up chest out (3)
>Vagina (6)
>Same as it ever was (10)
>Cute (13)
That took a whole minute

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>>52273972
I for one argue cuddle cyoa is the comfiest cyoa for it's simplistic design. But I will admit that Time Stop Chill Zone trades in much more options for the weird affect that your waifus don't have souls.

>>52274003
i'm actually working on one, but it's not even close to ready yet

>>52274004
>>52274040
thank you

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>>52274004
This has always been my favorite comfy CYOA

>>52274003
Agreed, there is too much comfy. Bring out the least comfiest CYOAs!

>>52272626
Nice! Thank you anon. Gonna get started now, might take a long time to read the whole cyoa.

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>>52274056
An extra one. I have a one or two comfy power cyoas. But I personally prefer pocket Dimensions, do you want them anon?

>>52274090
yes please, i love pocket dimensions cyoas!

>>52274067
>Agreed, there is too much comfy.
You seem to have misunderstood, I was encouraging them to _make more_ comfy CYOAs, which they were apparently doing already (at least if >>52274056 is any indication).

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>>52270315
Not enough Semblances.

It's the main gimmick of the setting and being restricted to so little options suck balls. I know you can't list every permutation of powers out there in the cyoa, but maybe you could do something like the Jojo Cyoa?

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>>52273972
This comfy enough for your tastes?

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>>52274103
My fault, what IO was trying to say is that I have a few "pick a few comfy powers" cyoas but I personally prefer comfy pocket dimensions.

>>52269287
>>52269320
>Origin
Maxwell
Male Human
Father-Worshipper

>Grimoire
*Promraen Caro [Focus]
-Tier 4
Calcify
Cure Injury
Reinforcement
Create Abomination

-Tier 3
Limit Bane
Natural Weapon
Warp Flesh
Cure Disease

-Tier 2
Rejuvenate
Mass Growth
Craft Plague
Create Life

-Tier 1
Devourer

*Reunu Pertemru
-Tier 4
Curse of Enfeeblement

*Liber Animas
-Tier 4
Spirit Ward

>Companions
Kreie
Libyn

>Minions
Ahudrien x4 [8]
Night Wind x2 [8]
Chimera x3 [9]
Slyther [1]

>Perks
Animal Whisperer
Surgeon
Apothecary
Barkeep

>Enemies
Angry Mob
Wild Elf Tribe
Spellsword

>Drawbacks
Amputation x2 [Left Arm & Right Leg]

>Home
Teb'Ihr
Roadside Inn

Got any Spess Pirate CYOAs?

>>52274158
Maxwell has always been fascinated by animals and plants, and even after he was taken in by the Necromancer he studied ways to further enhance them. When the Murderhobos came, he tried to fight against them but lost an arm and a leg in the process, only saved by the timely intervention of some of his chimeras which dragged him to safety. Lost without his mentor, he wandered until he found a recently abandoned inn, and recalled his life before necromancy. Claiming it as his own, he opened up shop as a combination Inn, Travern, and Apothecary. He also occasionally does healing work on the side, earning a great reputation for himself in the process. He had a large walled garden constructed on the back side of the Inn and forbade the guests to enter, growing all kinds of manipulated plants and animals within it. Unfortunately, a Chimera broke out recently and attacked citizens of one of the nearby towns, drawing their ire and inciting a small mob that set out to him, aided by a wandering Spellsword. Smelling blood in the water, the local elves have also set in.

Of course, these are all minor things. There's nothing unnatural at his Inn, aside from his pet 'dogs'. It's not like there are wards on all the doors to staff-only areas, and non-staff who enter are cursed with a crippling lethargy. And if some of them go missing afterwords, well, it's not his fault right? They shouldn't have trespassed.

>>52274118
Or maybe YOU could do something like the Jojo Cyoa?

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>>52274067
Ok

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>>52271802
She will never compare to the best waifu

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>>52269287
Companion build for >>52274158

Maxwell
Promraen Caro companion

A prominent healer who took over a bar after the previous owner died, he runs a fairly successful business. Will let you stay the night for free, and can send you any kind of specimen you desire, though in low numbers.

"Watch the garden out back, the plants have a bit of a bite to them today."

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>>52273225
>While the μ currency is intended for purchasing minons, upon which there is a μ 30 initial cap
Reads a lot like there's a 30 point cap on how many minions you can start with.

Where do you get all your good fantasy/magic pics at?
For the life of me I can't find a picture of a blood-covered surgeon who also uses magic.

>>52274168
Not specifically, but there are a few that where you can be a space pirate that are fairly detailed.

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>>52273972
Giant breasts are comfy, right?

>>52274304
>blood-covered surgeon who also uses magic
Skull girls nurse

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>>52274387

>>52269320
What does Artificer do?

>>52269320
>Typically used to investigate murders that have
no suspects nor victims
>murder with no victims
You 'avin a go?

>>52274304
ebola-chan?

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>>52269287
>>52269320

>Lair
Cassia - the New City
Cinnamon Island - Teb'Hai

>Promræn Caro
>T4
Gentle Repose
Cure Injury
Calcify
Create Abomination
>T3
Limit Bane
Warp Flesh
Alter Appearance
Cure Disease
>T2
Rejuvenate
Alter Age
Craft Plague
Create Life
>T1
Clone

>Reunu Pertemru
>T3
Mother's Khopius

>Kroveri Hæma
>T4
Pulse of Calm
Create Thrall µ15
>T3
Create Nosferatu µ15
µ30

>Companions
Shania
Venika
Kreie (Perk)
Patchwerk µ10
Scourge µ10
µ50

>Minions
Created Life µ7
Tagon µ12
Greater Abomination µ20
Vampire Bride µ3
Alchemist µ3
Slaves µ1
Commoners x2 µ2
Grounds Keeper µ2
µ100

>Perks
Surgeon
Engineer
Silver Tongue µ10
Wealthy µ10
µ120

>Starting Amount
µ+30

>Enemies
Wild Elf Tribe µ+3
Fabled Hero µ+5
Rampant Undead µ+7
Hessyst µ+8
Bounty Hunter µ+10
Fair One Huntress µ+12
The Doctor µ+15
Arch Lich µ+15
µ+105

>Drawbacks
Limited Control µ+10
Amputation, Left Arm from the Elbow µ+5
µ+120

This started as a Vampire Doctor idea but it changed.

After fleeing my former Master's home I take to the ocean with Kreie all the gold I could carry, setting myself up as a Doctor in the new city of Cassia.
I spend time getting in touch with acquaintances of my former master, masters in medicine and practitioners of the Promræn Caro field of magic.
Before long I have started a small hospital, buying slaves for maid and nurse staff, hiring a few of locals for heavy lifting and a groundskeeper or butler of sorts.

An Alchemist of little renown also falls into my employ and finally I buy a pair of young ladies from destitution and start to work the few magic I know well in the sanguine arts. Now they work as my personal surgeon assistants for my true experiments.

I'm the worst kept secret of the city. Probably everyone knows my true profession to some degree of rumour but my hospital's healing craft is second to none.

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>>52274576

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>>52274231
Says you

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>>52274589

>>52274257
That's also how I interpreted it, but I'll just wait and ask Scientist. Some things are phrased oddly and it's worth pointing it out to him

>>52274519
A room with blood splattered all over and a bloody knife, but no body? Detective Pallessa still can solve that shit.

>>52274387
>Hailey

True Random Mode: 5 Mutations
>Huge
>Absorption
>Hypnosis
>Strength
>Adaptive Temp

Adaptations:
>Stretchy Clothing
>Skin Lotion
>Gender Swap

True Random Mode: 6 mutations Holy shit

>Strength
>Milky
>Gigantic
>Hypnosis
>Adaptive Temp
>Malleable

Well, this'll be fun, at least.

>>52274192
In "Easy Drainage": I'm pretty sure that the line "you won't feel drained unless your body produces an unusually high amount of that fluid for some reason" doesn't make sense.
It would make more sense for "Reloader" to have the line "you won't feel drained unless your body discharges an unusually high amount of fluid for some reason"

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>>52274588

I never pray on the locals, rather I'll venture out off island to secure my 'ingredients' which has led to a bounty on my head and more then a few enemies.

Even worse though is that Cassia itself is being built atop of ancient stonework where a former fortress once stood.
Deep underneath, in still unexplored catacombs, an ancient Lich has began to stir, woken by the construction and developing magics.
With such an operation as mine, my hospital stands out as a beacon to the Lich's magically sensitive eyes.

>>52274136
Not sure I get the title of this one.

Anyway,
>Power of Mind
Mind control can get you out of (or into) any situation, and it doesn't look like Power of Body can grant any form of immortality.

>Power of Truth, Power of Paths, Power of Health
And yet health specifically mentions not getting sick as a separate power, so maybe I was wrong and body can grant agelessness?

>Stone
Complements Health quite nicely.

>Armor
I guess I can deal with the odd temperature (I'm assuming colder than a regular human, not hotter).

>>52274192

How does pleasure vacation interact with slut life done quick?

Doesn't no sleep make curse harmless even though curse gives move credits than no sleep costs?

How does raise and donater interact?

>>52274731
>limited immortality is free

Bruh, you're already ageless.

>>52274387
>Girl
Janelle

>Mutations
Milky
Sensitive
Huge

>Items
Hi-Tech Bathroom
Stretchy Clothing
Skin Lotion

My dick needs this

>>52274387
Giant breasts are the comfiest.

>>52274889
shit taste confirmed

>>52269287
15 spells

3 from T4
3 from T3
2 from T2
1 immortality

30µ for minions, 10µ for 1 companion/perk, 15µ for 1 spell
Can trade a spell for a companion/perk vice versa

>Human
Fiber Mortis
+1 free spell (T3-T4)
>Invisibility to Undead
For when I need to prove I'm not a Lich - surely all undead would recognize one!
>Create Undead
For servants
>Ward undead
When I want my skellie-butler to stay out of my room when I'm... busy

>Disguise Undead
My skellie-butler is totally not a skellie or anything.
>Vision of death
To defeat bullies without violence. What do you mean "psychological warfare" and "torture"?
>Imbue life
Sometimes I'm lazy and it would be easier if the TV could turn itself on.

>Create Greater Undead
My skellie-butler is the best skellie of them all
>Life transfer
So that my parents don't die prematurely and I can keep my friends for longer before moving.

>Lichdom
I accept no substitute. Gonna be a Lich-girl
Gonna turn my phylactery into a wedding ring once that day comes. How romantic would that be? Literally giving away the key to my heart

>Pulse of Calm
For exams and to treat heartbreak etc.
>Gentle repost
To not have my body decay
>Cure injury
>Alter apperance
Gotta become the little Lich-girl somehow
>Cure disease
>Alter age
>Rejuvenate
Okay, that should cover all my bases and ensure I don't decay in any way, and can be the little Lich-girl. I wasn't sure if I needed Alter Age when I have Alter Apparance but I am not risking anything.

Companions
>Sasha & Sir Henry
Gonna be sisters.
>Kaija
Loli Vampire waifu
Not many are good candidates for being parents. Sarah lacks the authority.
>Seir Ejlsa (20µ)
She's alright for a mom.

>>52275064
A

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>>52275066

Minions
None of these are very good for being a skellie-butler. Can't I create a single skellie?
Executioner is slow and Greater Skellies are weird.
I don't need the Tavern Wench since I picked Seir Ejlsa. I don't know if I should get my mom a husband/wife, she sounds like Stacy's Mom to be frank...
>Skellie Horde (19µ)
I only need one so the remaining nine can go give adventurers some EXP. I'll use Create Greater Skellie on my skellie-butler to make him better.

Perks
>Sensitive
So I can understand what my skellie-butler says
>Silver tongue
>Undead activist (9µ)
Sounds fun. I'll need to be very careful my skellie-butler isn't seen so I'm not outed as a Lich-girl
>Wealthy (-1µ)

Enemies
>Angry mob (1µ)
And that's another reason for moving around so much.
I thought of picking Fabled Hero and going full Gabriel Dropout - the hero is instead a tsundere classmate that wants to "convert" me with her "Lay on hands" and such...

Home
>Forest home
Is comfy. A little far from the city but walking never hurt anyone. Of course mom still has her castle in the capital but me, Sasha and Kaija stay here all year.


Best image I could find in sub-5 minutes.

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>>52274904
>He doesn't want to rest on a pair of huge tits like a pillow

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>>52273413
That's the old version anon.

>>52274257
INITIAL cap. I read that as 'you start with 30, you can have more later by taking enemies and drawbacks'.

>>52275105
>image
Wait no I'm a dummy...>>52269319
The picture of the Lich-girl from this cyoa is much better.
Man, someone screwed up the quality of that image.

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>>52275165

>>52275165
>>52275178
thanks for posting my cyoa anon

i should have another update done soon

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>>52269319
Here, a somewhat less Somalian version.

>>52275199
Please explain the distinction between Submissive w/out Fetish and Submissive w/ Fetish.

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>>52275199

>>52275252
What?

>>52275260
If you have any quirk ideas btw, let me know

>>52275170
At the top of the minion page, it says "30 cap applies".

The scenario isn't you being an established necromancer. The scenario is you narrowly escaped death, what did you salvage, and where do you go? It doesn't make sense for you to take off with 100 skeletons. Hilarious as that would be.

Regardless, we should ask Scientist, because there has been quite a bit of unclear language throughout the work that probably needs cleaned up

>>52275303
Fetish basically says "She likes your kinks and will do them" and costs points.
Submissive says "She'll do basically anything for you" and doesn't cost points.
To me, that suggests that Submissive grants the benefits of Fetish. Is that the case? What's the benefit of picking Fetish if you already picked Submissive?

>>52275199
What do you plan on adding anon?

>>52275303
>If you have any quirk ideas btw, let me know
She keeps a diary over your "firsts".
First time she saw you, first time you noticed her, first time you said hi, the day she learnt your name, the day she told you hears, the day she got your phone number, first time you kissed etc. etc.

Takes pictures of you/records you to use for, you know... when she does 'that'
May or may not be inspired from my own fantasies.

>>52274806
Whoops, my bad, accidentally skipped that line while reading.

>>52275332
I'd think that "submissive" without "fetish" would still do all your kinks, but wouldn't necessarily enjoy the kink itself.

>>52275332
>Submissive says "She'll do basically anything for you

In a less sexual sense.

Fetish also implies she's mutually into it.

>>52275353
That sounds really cute, anon.

>>52275345
More everything, as well as a race, hair and triggers section (maybe)

>>52275303
What about something like she forces you to drink her breast milk? And do an upgrade so she forcibly feeds you directly from the source.

>>52275413
Instead of calling it "triggers," I'd recommend finding another name. I do think that a section for things that'll set off her yandere tendencies is a good idea, though.

>>52275413
>In a less sexual sense.
Might want to clarify that then. Most working definitions of submissive include sexual submission.

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>>52275124
I like tits, but honestly don't see the appeal past a certain point.

>>52275320
Yeah, you have a point, though that's only written above gray minions, which are not your creations. That's why I bought barely any minions, because all other benefits like spells and perks represent my entire life's experience, which I believe is more valuable than starting with more of what I can always craft later.

>>52275422
>tfw would be more than willing and eager but is lactose intollerant

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>>52275124
>>52275447
There's no point in huge tits when the ass isn't twice the size.Saying that those tits need to be pushed up a bit for my tastes.

>>52275422
You got a fucking weird fetish.

>>52275463
You can literally fix that with a prescription-less pill bought from any pharmacy.
How can you be lactose intollerant and not know what lactase is?

>>52275422
No, sorry. No blatant fetish shit.

>>52275457
Yeah, my thought was that the context is minions who you escape with/start with. So why waste a bunch of points on them when I can just make whatever I want freely once I'm settled in? I just took what I needed to get started comfortably

>>52275475
I prefer more top-heavy girls because oppai lolis are my magical realm, but big butts are still good.

>>52275475
See, the issue with a ginormous ass it's going to affect your access to her. Giant tits are meant to swallow a cock, no problem there. But when her ass is so huge you're losing up to three inches of penetration, that could be an issue

>>52275413
>That sounds really cute, anon.
yeah... if only I got to do it in real life. But that's why we have cyoas.

>>52275303
More variety in the stuff she'd drug you with. Some example drug effects / reasons why she'd use it on you:
>increases your libido, so you'll make love to her more often
>increases your virility (and/or production), to make impregnation more likely
>makes you look like a trap/girl/woman, so those home-wrecking whores (i.e. other girls) wouldn't notice you that way / would be less likely to try and steal you away
>induces lactation, so you'd be more dependent on her / she has more things she can (safely) drink from you

>>52274904
>shit taste confirmed
Never seen anyone confirm that they like eating shit. Perhaps you should try a nice normal pizza instead.

>>52275544
I've kind a sucker for pear shaped gears, except for pear shaped lolis and goblins for some reason, but realistically a girl with an awesome ass and small tits is a lot more aesthetically pleasing than a girl with huge knockers but an underdeveloped ass. You see it old anime and hentai all the time so it's kinda been ruined for me.

>>52275513
>No blatant fetish shit.
>In a yandere cyoa that includes:
>Bondage
>Monstergirls
>Rape

And there's already an option where she feeds you her own blood. Is milk not more normal than that?

>>52275475
>There's no point in huge tits when the ass isn't twice the size.

Brazilian detected.

>>52275624
It's kind of hard for me to argue, since my gf is very much the thick bottom, little top type. Makes me feel bad for professing the virtues of top heavy, even if that's honestly my default physical preference

>>52275624
>a girl with an awesome ass and small tits is a lot more aesthetically pleasing than a girl with huge knockers but an underdeveloped ass
Best taste confirmed. The japs don't know how to draw ass.

>>52275587
>>makes you look like a trap/girl/woman, so those home-wrecking whores (i.e. other girls) wouldn't notice you that way / would be less likely to try and steal you away
>>induces lactation, so you'd be more dependent on her / she has more things she can (safely) drink from you
While i'm into these 2 things myself I think they're a bit much for this cyoa

I can swing the trap thing though if I don't overly sexualise it.

>>52275664
>Bondage
Something a yandere would do
>Monstergirls
Yandere girls being monsters adds to the yandere
>rape
Do i need to explain why this is yandere?

Lactation has absolutely nothing to do with it, you've just put 'forced' in to make it look yandere. Sorry.

>>52275475
There's no point in a huge ass if the tits aren't at least as large.

>>52275624
This anon speaks Truth.

>>52275714
What do you mean it's not something a yandere would do? There's already an option where she's force feeding you, and an option where she feeds you her period blood, spit, and hair. It's just a combination of those two.

>>52275769
Just accept you're not getting your titty milk option. Jesus.

>>52275769
Blood and spit are all yandere things. Breast Milk is blatant mommy gf shit. Don't pretend its not.

>>52275199
I love you

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>>52275303
>you're not related to her in some way, For a small amount of points she's around your age or a milf, for a moderate amount she's a loli.
>she isn't what's normally pierced as an attractive person, still very pretty in a strange way, but she looks mismatched and her traits don't work aswell alone. She may have a glaring flaw that makes her stand out as a normal person while keeping her beauty. Beautiful is half points though
Pic related.
I was thinking of making a third for good measure but that's all I got.

>>52275199
How does Harmless work with the Violent or Possessive types?

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>>52275165

>Skinny
>Average
>Average

>Dependant (+1)
>Worshipping (+1)
>Delusional (+4)

Confident
Optimist
Girly Girl
Classical Romantic
Wealthy (-3)

Points: 19
>Great Cook (-2)
> Perfect Hair (-1)
>Motherly (-2)
>Forever (-9)
>Good Taste (-4)
>Videogames (-1)

>Closer (+1)
>Secret Ingredient (+2)
>Religious (+2)
>Decorator (+1)
>Genetic (+3)
>Her's Forever (+5)
>Addict (+2)

>Childhood Friend

>Your Attention

This was a lot of fun. I wouldn't mind being one girl's husband for eternity if she's a girl that I like.

>>52275796
I love you too, anon.

>>52275851
>you're not related to her in some way
Uh, I thought this was the default?

>For a small amount of points she's around your age or a milf, for a moderate amount she's a loli.
Sure, i won't directly reference a girl being under 18 though.

>She may have a glaring flaw that makes her stand out as a normal person while keeping her beauty.
Can you develop?

>>52275787
>>52275788
I'm not even particularly bothered by it not being added, I'm just confused why it's being singled out as "blatant fetish shit" when there's plenty of that sorta stuff on there already

>>52275916
Because one is yandere fetish shit in a yandere fetish shit CYOA.
The other is mommydom fetish shit in a yandere fetish shit CYOA. You're dense as a fucking brick anon.

>>52275882
Sorry, I meant to say she WAS related to you in some way
Hard to explain for the third part, It's like a really pretty actor right, but she may have eyes a bit too far apart, a big forehead, or an odd nose that though ugly on their own doesn't diminish that person's beauty and just makes them look naturally beautiful rather than a real hollywood celebrity. Hard to explain in text but we all know someone like that IRL.

>>52275916
Because it doesn't fit the yandere theme. It's really that simple.

>>52270315
Name:Cobalt Slade
Guardian(10)
Male
Human
Atlas Academy
Unstoppable
Will(20)
Strength(40)
Combat(80)
Survival(100)
Variable(400)(Morning Star+Flamethrower)
Weight Enhancement(500)(Morning Star)
Variable Weapon(900)(Tower Shield +Grappling Hook)
Dust mod(950)
Dust Charges(1000)
Collapsible(1050()(Shield)
Scroll

Yeah it's a weird name. He knows. The parents wanted their special little guy to be the star of the show and thought it would fit.
He may not be living up to their expectations but Cobalt considers himself a cornerstone on the field. The vanguard of his team, he takes things head on
and dishes out the punishment.

A tough boy whose looking for his place in the world, he isn't the brightest but with an easy smile a a mountain of grit he has shown he has what it takes to be something great even if it
isn't in the limelight.

He prefers his heavy mace and shield to keep Grimm at bay and crush the opposition while its grappling hook attachment can get the attention of a specific Grimm and help him haul his heavy butt over terrain. His maces' flamethrower and intense flame aura giving him an edge when things get hairy.

Some think he isn't taking advantage of his semblance enough by hiding behind that shield but he knows better than any student the power those Grimm are packing. He can feel it every time he deflects a blow
or turns a charge. The kinetic force he absorbs may not be as much as if he took it on the chin but neither is the damage and he is a firm believer that a pebble can precede a landslide.

He hopes to be a hero of the Atlas army. A stalwart protector and the ultimate bulwark.

>>52275943
>>52275882
I think anon was asking for an option for her to be your relative.
Yandere Twin is always a FUN option

>>52275964
You could always just change secret ingredient to "blood or other fluids." Give creepy mommy guy an out, and leave open the possibility that she's masturbating into your food instead. Which I'm really surprised ISN'T an option.

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>>52276007
>she's masturbating into your food instead. Which I'm really surprised ISN'T an option.

>>52275943
Incest is a tad much. Other stuff is fine, if quite bizarre, anon.

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>>52276007
>she's masturbating into your food instead

>>52276054
>>52276043
Anna-mind

>>52276007
See, that's what I'm saying. If she wants spit/hair/blood as part of her inside of you, wouldn't that just extend to milk?

>>52276007
>and leave open the possibility that she's masturbating into your food instead

I'm half inclined to make this a second option, anon.

>>52276076
Because Milk is obvious Mommy bait. It's a no.

>>52276076
You keep going in circles, dense anon
>>52275787
>>52275964

>>52276114
I'm honestly just not wrapping my head around it.

>feeding you breast milk
>oh man that's some weird fetish shit

>feeding you sexual juices
>that's a good option

>>52276208
>>52275964

>>52276208
Because the breast milk is clearly from a mommy fetish. Sexual fluids are as yandere as it gets.

>>52276208
Fetishes are rarely sensible, anon.

>>52276208
See >>52275941


It's

>Feeding you breast milk
>Mommy fetish shit

>Feeding you sexual fluids
>Yandere fetish shit

Different themes.

>>52276087
Not the other anon, but please do. The blood thing worries me from a medical standpoint, sexual fluids not so much.

>>52275916
>m not even particularly bothered by it not being added,
And yet he keeps pushing. It's almost like he's a liar.

>>52276208
Why do you want this so much, anon? What is it about breast milk that appeals to you in a way her squirting in the bowl doesn't?

>>52276230
>>52276238
>>52276241
I guess this comes from me just not being super into yandere more than anything.
>>52276238
you're telling me.

>>52276230
>Because the breast milk is clearly from a mommy fetish.

I don't follow this logic. Why is it clearly from a mommy fetish?

>>52276251
Oh don't worry, she'd never hurt herself too badly <3

>>52276251
True. Maybe add in an assurance that she doesn't actually have any blood diseases or anything.

>>52276263
>I guess this comes from me just not being super into yandere
Then why are you asking for me to add your other fetish to a yandere cyoa? this is like going into a fucking italian restaurant and asking for sushi.

>>52276266
I certainly don't think it is. I have a lactation fetish myself, but I have no desire for my partner to be a mother figure. It has more to do with fertility, control, and expansion of my preferred assets

>>52276266
What is this logical fallacy called? There's gotta be a name for it I just can't pinpoint it.

>>52269287
>>52269320
>those blank spaces no longer have text in them
I can hope that this means the hellraiser bits are coming back, but I can't be sure.

>>52276270
It's not the hurting part, it's the potential diseases bit (as >>52276276 realized). And not necessarily just "diseases she might have that can be transmitted via blood", but also "diseases that might arise from consuming the blood of another". Cannibalism and related stuff got way too spooky/gross when I learned that prions are a thing.

isn't there literally a "she shares your fetishes" option in the cyoa in question?

>>52276381
Yes. Milk guy just wants to get build points for his fetish instead of paying points to get his fetish.

>>52276291
I just view it as a build your own waifu cyoa, just with options that make her obsessive over you.

>>52276416
Then fuck off.

Waifu builder cyoa should be moved to the /d/cyoa general because this shit is fucking deviant.

>>52276394
its only 2 bloody points... just like give her a few siblings that approve of her relationship with you and voila 2 points to spend on fetishes.

>>52275165
5
>Loli
>Ridiculous
>Thicc
>Harmless, Worshipping, Delusional-8
>Insecure, Tomboy, Submissive, Poor, Paranoid, Gifted, NEET, Filthy, Short-10
>Great Cook, Fetish x2, Youthful, Video Games, Motherly, Together, Forever, Perfect hair, Comedian, adorable, Income x2, Good taste, Protective, Talented, Good people, talented- (-34)
>Closer, Romantic Trip, Marking x2, Tech Savvy, Connections, Her's forever, House Husband, Diary, Addict, Genetic mother + 4 siblings-0
Start a family with her and live off of NEET bucks with her honestly doing most of the work. Because of Talented, Tech Savvy, and Submissive, she's fine doing all the housework and even repairing our tech. Due to Fetish x2, it's incestous and all girls. My waifu is an excellent mix between a housewife, best bro, and fucktoy.

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>>52276304
>I can't answer your question, so it's a logical fallacy.

>>52276344
>Eating the flesh of other humans wasn't gross until I learnt about a specific disease

>>52276508
Sorry, accidentally typed "too" when I should've typed "more".

>>52276313
Scientist confirmed it last thread.
Hellraiser necromancy is returning.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Or-40E0dl2M

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>>52276664
This makes me giddy.

>>52272087
>choose your body type
>no normal type

???

>>52271417
Stand: Bad Touch
Power: Gravity Bomb Generation http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Gravity_Bomb_Generation
POWER C
SPEED B
RANGE B
DURABILITY D
PRECISION A
DEVELOPMENT POTENTIAL B

Ripped as Fuck -1
BroJo -2
Plot Armor times three -3

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>>52269287
For the Companions:

Name: Victor Zakharov

Race: Human

God: The Father (secret) - it is more important to influence than to create, otherwise it is for naught.

Promraen Caro:
Surgeon - I have little need more a companion, while a servant I can create. Anyway, I need the expertise.

Spells:
Tier 4:

Spirit Ward - I need Protection from Astral Projection and other spirit based spying methods.

Gentle Repose - Great for myself and as a bargaining tool

Cure Injury - I am still a doctor, this is a useful tool for sealing wounds.

Tier 3:

Memories of the soul - I can use the knowledge of those before me to help my endeavours

Warp Flesh - Another surgical spell, and a repair spell if I get injured beyond the capabilities of cure disease.

Cure disease - Again, a staple of a magical doctor, which should make me popular with everyone.

Tier 2:

Create Skinwalker - for more clandestine operations outside the surgery room

Resurrection - Does this need to be explained, to bring someone back from the beyond, my greatest feat, or to others anyway...

Create Greater Ghost - My protection

Tier 1:
Clone - I can recover from damage and age, I need something to bring me back from the beyond, and a backup if my base gets raided, like my mentor before me, these can both be achieved with a spare somewhere.


Companion (1 extra spell)

William - A castle or a duchy is small, compared to what I can do

>>52276875
You should be more concerned that having a 10/10 body costs the same as being obese.

>>52276995

Minions:

Shadow Dancer (10) - My invisible protector, and my plausible deniability.

Skinwalker (18) - My loyal agent and spy for assassination and other missions.

Groundskeeper - (20) - he does not ask questions, which is good.

Master Smith - (23) - Someone to make the equipment parts before construction.

2x Commoner (25) - to make me look kind to the poor.

Scholar (30) - my researcher, to look within what my agents cannot, and find the secrets that lay within.

Perks:
Surgeon (free) - I was a doctor after all
Engineer - Efficiency was the only way to pay for my 'experiments' and to design them.

Artificer - And I got good at it

Silver Tongue - You don't get into this business without one...

Gold Tongue - No wonder I got in...

(bought 2 perks: 50)

enemies:
Death-Fearing Duke (43) - Either destroy him in more subtle ways, or throw a body at him, he will find nothing.

Mammoth Rider (38) - Good luck hiding, good luck getting in, even then, I can kill her with my shadow dancer, she is slow to hit it.

Psychotic Count (34) - Again, this won't be hard to blackmail or discredit, he is not sound of mind, just bait him.

Draw Backs:

Amputation (leg) (29) - I can reattach it, or use a clone, it is not hard to recover from.

Country:
Teb'Ihr - My friend is here, and so will I be

Base:
Saliin - Assuming this is allowed, since is has no restrictions, I live here, where my power is strongest.

I'm a old doctor, that, after finding a new friend, uncovered his talent for politics, especially backroom ones, with my magic suited to taking them out quietly, my agents escaping into the night, my powers useful when combined with a golden tongue, making me the backbone against poison in the higher life, I may not be a courtier, but that is because I do not lick there boots, they lick mine, or they can have there treatment revoked.

He is described by his friends as cynical, humourless and ruthless. No one crosses him, for fear of the beyond.

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>>52271417
Stand Snake Kiss Love
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Artificial_Soul
Destructive Power: B
Speed: C
Range: B
Durability: B
Precision: B
Learning: C

Fabulous
Changed gender
BroJo
Plot Armor

Ele is said to be daughter of the Defense Force officer that serves in a different city, with her mother being a train attendant. She chose to stay in her city, instead of moving out with father as she wants to create her own kendo team Red Knights
.
Her personality is a lazy and tired person that hides a passionate love for swordmanship with a cold and ruthless approach to battle.

The stand can possess her sword, or almost any other item, or even person to serve as a bodyguard.

The secret is that the body is actually the stand possessed by the human soul, while the real human body is in a hospital, healing after an accident.

>>52276344
Can blood even hold prions? I thought they chilled in the brain.

>>52271417
Name: Annie
Stand Name: Just Beat it.
Power: Umbrakinetic Polearm Construction
Destructive Power B
Speed E
Range A
Durability D
Precision A
Learning A

Ripped as Fuck
Gender Swap
Minor Villain
Do you even Pose?
Animal Mascot

Animal: Franco the Frog
Strand: Are You Ok Annie?
Power E
Speed A
Range B
Durability A
Precision A
Learning E
Cool Hair

Annie is a general villainous bootlick, constantly looking for other villains to work under and incapable of doing independant villainy. While not exceedingly powerful, she's a tactical genius, and works to find the best possible time to jam a polearm into the situation, making her great for distracting a brojo. Her animal companion is a strange, perverted frog that does its darndest to keep Annie alive. Franco's Stand is ludicrously tough, but almost incapable of offensive action, instead serving as a meat shield. Franco keeps an air of purity with Annie, any other girl gets his lecherous froggy stare and gets compromising photos taken of them mid-combat.

>>52273943
As one of the O's in team DOOM... What's your color-scheme? It'll inform the name.

>>52276344
>Cannibalism and related stuff got way too spooky/gross when I learned that prions are a thing.
Did you know that prions can spontaneously form in your body at any time, and if you get one it can lay dormant for years before it suddenly starts folding your brain proteins?
Sweet dreams.

>>52276304
I don't recall the name but it's roughly
A is related to B, B is related to C, therefore A is related to C.
Anon likes Breastmilk. Breastmilk can be produced by Mothers. Therefore, it (does not) follow that anon likes mothers.

>>52269287
>>52269287
>Race
Elf
>Worship
The Father
>Spells
>Tier 1
Body Snatcher (Liber Animas)

>Tier 2
Create Greater Spirit (Liber Animas)
Create Soulwell (Liber Animas)
Resurrection (Reunu Pertemru)
Create Soulstone (Liber Animas)
Craft Plague (Promaeran Caro)

>Tier 3
Astral Protection (Liber Animas)
Trap Soul (Liber Animas)
Memories of the Soul (Liber Animas)
Regeneration (Reunu Pertemru)
Alter Appearance (Promaeran Caro)

>Tier 4
Command Spirit (Liber Animas)
Create Ghost (Liber Animas)
Command Spirit (Liber Animas)
Embalming (Reunu Pertemru)
Sandstorm (Reunu Pertemru)
Calcify (Promaeran Caro)

>Companions
Nadya (Freebie)
Zyanya
Sho'Khah

>Minions (94 total)
Mahariib x4 (66 left)
Dessicator x1 (59 left)
Soul Collector x1 (47 left)
Shadowdancer x2 (27 left)
Living armour x6 (3 left)
Slaves x30 (0 left)

>Perks
Deathborn
Sensitive

>Enemies
Spellsword (+6)
Solaris Paladin (+8)
Jem'ha Tapihr (+18)
Amenthes (+20)

>Drawbacks
Bounty (+8)
Squeamishness (+2)
Violent Tendencies (+2)
Indentured Servitude (+2 spells)


>Continent
The Untamed Lands - Deparmiya

>Lair
Ghost Town

Necromancer that can't stand rotting corpses in service to the rightful queen of the untamed lands. Not much of an undead army right now but once the slaves build a great soul well at the core of the town (we are talking everyone dead within a kilometre getting pulled in) and then either populate it or get the high distinction of being spare bodies things will start looking up, especially when any enemies come to take the lair and provide proper warrior souls for proper minions. It'll be tough though what with the armies coming to destroy me for my hubris but at least they won't show up in the dark of night after slipping past all my defenses to trap my soul in a box forever.

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>>52277356
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!

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Alright, I finished the first page of my first attempt at OC.
Probably gonna take me some time, but expect the final product in the next month or so.
Assuming I can pull myself away from Persona 5 long enough to actually work on it.

>>52276893
Knowing his stand isn't the most physically strong and being a bit of a coward my character prefers to team up with his jojo / other brojos and uses his gravity bomb to set up his enemies into vulnerable positions. Think a less douchy good hol horse.

>>52277430
Do i HAVE to marry?

>>52272087
Chin Up, Chest Out (12)
Vagina (9)
Once More From the Top (3)
Costume Magic (-5)
Clothing Consistency (-2)
Holiday Cheer (0)

Yeah, I'm pretty much "the costume girl," but considering my magic that's actually a good thing. What happens if a month doesn't have a Holiday, though? Nobody cares about Flag Day.

>>52277314
What's Franco's stand power? From what it sounds like, Alain could cooperate pretty well with them. You'd have a super-strong environmental controller in him, and then a striker and tactician with Annie, and a meatshield with Franco. After all, Alain isn't the brightest, and he could really use someone smart to help him really use his Stand to the fullest.

>>52277430
>B-03: VITALITY
>nothing short of an atomic bomb will be able to kill you
>except aging, you'll still die from that
Why?

>>52277430
Does Beauty work like a minor version of Strength, Grace, and/or Vitality if your ideal version of male beauty would have those ideals? Or are you just a buff as fuck dude who gets as winded as ever?

>>52277430
This looks promising, though I will say the Text for the Elixirs box needs to be fixed, and most of it should be aligned in the center instead of the left. But I can't say I have many complaints about the power ups. Nothing seems underpowered except for Vitality which everyone will take and Domination which seems the weakest ironically.
Hard to do endurance well though, you're either immortal and impenetrable or you can run for 80 years, whoop dee fucking doo.

>>52277516
Clearly the damage from aging and from radioactivity are nor the same?
Just like being burned and being cut isn't the same.

>>52277428
Its the reason why cannibalism is an issue, if those prions didn't spontaneously develop inside of people there wouldn't be a source of them to cause problems when consumed. Don't worry though, while there are a few proteins that can become prions inside your body it's not really an issue until they start to get more numerous, then they start to interact with the normal proteins at a rapid rate and turn them all into prions. Mind you it's actually possible that you are already immune to the condition in the first place, not all proteins can become prions, and actually a majority of people have variants that don't. This is assumed to be an adaptation to combat the issues of prions in cannibalistic societies, and the massive number of the population that is immune is suggested to mean that the majority of our ancestors were cannibals.

>>52272087
Fun Size 1
Vagina 3
Once More, From the Top 6
Hairy Situation 1
Always to Taste 2
Flexibility 2
Cute 3
The other kind of Lightweight +1
Holiday Cheer +2

>>52277648
So what you can take from this is: Waifu a cannibal so your kids don't spontaneously develop a terminal despise.

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>>52277471
I mean... I guess not. What were you hoping to do instead?

>>52277516
You're the second person to ask that. The idea was that these are all temporary, less intense versions of what you'll be able to do after you take the throne. Guess I didn't clarify that enough, my bad.

>>52277559
Yeah, it's supposed to transform your body into whatever you think of when you think of the peak of male attractiveness. Whether that means you become trap or a massive muscle monster.
It just can't alter your gender or make you look too far from human.

>>52277598
Appreciate the feedback, Anon!
I really struggled with both having the text fit inside the sections and be large enough to be legible.
I'd say it's kinda sloppy because they're supposed to be hand-written notes scribbled by Sabastian, but it's mainly because this is the first time I tried to work with so much text in Paint.net.

>>52277430
>>52277618
The point was that while you can basically shrug off anything but a-bombs, you somehow can't shake the minute deterioration that results from aging.

>>52277430
Current choices: Vitality, Skill, Magic. Perfect combo - Vitality means I'll be able to survive long enough for Skill and Magic to carry me the rest of the way. I'll never be as good as I would with the other Bs or Ms, but I'll still be able to get as close as most humans can - and I can throw around immense magical power.

>>52277314
>>52277515
Ah, shit, I had it but forgot to include it.
Stand Power: Telekinetic Exoskeleton

>>52277714
Tough != internal entropic degradation.

The hidden moral is banning an obligatory immortality option.

>>52277709
>What were you hoping to do instead?
Uhhh... NOT marry?

>>52277709
>You're the second person to ask that.
I'm pretty sure I was the guy who complained before, when it only quadrupled your lifespan.
>The idea was that these are all temporary, less intense versions of what you'll be able to do after you take the throne. Guess I didn't clarify that enough, my bad.
Looking at the intro text for the elixirs, that does seem implied, but if you're going to get god-like power (biological immortality included) anyway, why would you bother mentioning lifespan at all?

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>>52269287
>>52269320
4th revision of build

Dr. Spook

Race: Human
God: Father (No longer worshiped)

Lair: Forgotten Laboratory, Deparmiya

Companions: (2 companions discarded +1 spell, +2 perks)

Perks: Scholar
Engineer
Stonewrite
Rune crafter
Blood crafter
Surgeon

Enemies: Death fearing Duke +7
Solaris crusader +18
Bounty Hunter +10
Archlich +15

Drawbacks: Branded x3 +15
Bounty +5

70 points total
+4 spells -60
+1 perk -10

Main Book: Promraen Caro

(20 spells total)

T4: Gentle repose, Reinforcement, Create abomination, Craft soulflask, Command spirit

T3: Cure disease, Limit bane, Warp flesh, Ritual enhancement, Trap soul

T2: Rejuvenate, Create life, Create skinwalker, Craft plague, Mass growth, Enhance bloodline, Life transfer, Create soulstone, Extract soul

T1: Potion of Khizaz

Minions: Targor x2 (24)
Flesh Puppet (30)

>>52277430
Vitality, Analysis, and Telekinesis
Outlast and wear down is my motto. Predict people's actions, then shift air density to make them whiff in new and exciting ways. Make 'em think they've got a clean hit on me, only to have their attack deflected by a pinpoint barrier. Some good shit all around.

>>52275154
>no replies

is it because everyone already made their build or because the cyoa is bad?