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Useful info on creation and collections of cyoas.
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>>52150396
Welp, posted the WIP.
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>>52150474
>From each category
Don't you mean from each row?
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Here's one I made a little while ago.

It's a quick concept, but I like the execution of it.
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>>52150421

>Angel -10pts
>Grace (Free)
>Magic Affinityx4 -6pts (1 Free and discounts cuz Angel)
>Flight (Free once I get wings)
>Lifespanx2 -2pts (1 Free and discount cuz Angel)
>Exceptional Appearance -2pts
>Vitality -2pts
>Regeneration -2pts
>Low Magic Fantasy Setting

My plan is to explore and learn about the world while growing my magic powers. I can eventually get wings and heal and protect people and smite too. I think since low magic setting I can become most powerful sorceress around and get followers and try to ascend to Goddesshood of beauty and light.
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>>52150542
Yeah, each row is separated.
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One Piece CYOA when?
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>>52150738
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>>52150738
That appears to be a lower-quality version of my CYOA.
Have the PDF i made apparently 3 years ago.
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>>52150566
nice & simple; i like the font, spacing, and graphic
though i question the idea of sociability being under agility
maybe switch it around with perception (reaction time) and/or something in wisdom?
anyway, i'll go for maximum lazy with incoming luck, outgoing luck, and i guess stamina endurance
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>>52150691
>tfw made a new build for the fantasy cyoa but angel wasn't around
Feels bad man
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>>52151104
Social agility is what i was thinking of, e.g. the sorts of people who can just go anywhere and fit in.
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Hey guys, I'm working on a fantasy country cyoa (Original I know) and for this section I was going to have you choose your neighbors. What do you think of my description of the countries thus far? Is it too much text? Too little? Am I focusing on unimportant details? Are the details uninteresting?
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>>52151168
My screen might be a bit dark, but it seems hard to read. Maybe try a slightly lighter blue?
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What was that cyoa that was posted yesterday where you had to pick Ascended Beings to serve you? It made no sense but the lore was pretty cool.
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>>52151230
I think it is your screen. It seems fine on mine.
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>>52151156

Why not post it now?
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>>52151168
Dark on dark is not good design. While I can read it, it isn't as easily read as a lighter colour.
Contrast assists in legibility, so perhaps change that.

You may also feel free to go up to 1200-14000px wide, it does seem cramped.
Let the design breathe.

The amount of text seems fine.
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>>52151275
Damn. Wish it was easier to edit text in paint. I'll take your criticism to heart on other pages, then.
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>>52151168
I want to enslave, torture and rape the cat people!
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>>52150566
Endurance, Intelligence, Wisdom.
Gotta know things and be right.
Gotta cope with the knowledge.
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>>52151292
What about Kirito's Harem?
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>>52151313
maybe consider a different image? the aspect ratio is killing it
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>>52151168
It looks absolutely atrocious, fix your aspect ratios.
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>>52151323

>>52151318
On all of them or just the right most? (The right most is particularly atrocious, I know.)
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>>52151313
I want to enslave, torture, rape and marry Kirito!

(all the sandniggers should die though)
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>>52151327
Don't use paint, get the free Photoshop CS2 and a lot of your problems will go away.
https://helpx.adobe.com/creative-suite/kb/cs2-product-downloads.html?promoid=19SCDRQK

And use something like this to find complementary colours for text/background.
http://paletton.com/#uid=24U0u0kllllaFw0g0qFqFg0w0aF
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>>52151345
Thanks

>>52151344
Nice dubs.
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>>52151261
Because I already posted it
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why do i keep coming to this place?
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>>52150474
>Orr
>Eiden
>Jai
>Tesla

Easy choice.
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>>52151291
If you just want to change the text color, use the eraser:
http://www.wikihow.com/Use-Color-Replacement-in-MS-Paint
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>>52151318
>>52151323
>>52151344
>>52151345
>>52151608


Well at least it is readable. I'll make the other pages a lighter color, but paint won't reasonably let me edit what I already typed.

For now, what do you think of what I have so far. I particularly want to hear what you have to say about the context of the text. Is the writing good enough?
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>>52151629
>Well at least it is readable. I'll make the other pages a lighter color, but paint won't reasonably let me edit what I already typed.
See >>52151621 and try again.
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>>52151629
>>52151658
...nevermind, looked at the picture properly and saw that the text was all sorts of anti-aliased (so of course he above trick wouldn't work). You'd need to disable anti-aliasing for text for the color-replacement to be doable, but it'd probably be much easier to just use some other program with better tools.
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>>52151629
>Squishing the images
Please, just stop.
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>>52151629
>Well at least it is readable
It is not.
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>>52151725
If I remember correctly this "Lunar" person showed up a week ago doing the same thing and there was a small shitstorm over it.
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>>52151725
Has it ever occurred to you that they may have no idea what you actually mean by that?

I didn't, when I first got here.
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>>52151629
>>52151725
>>52151787
Yes please don't do that. Use an image editing program or go to an online website that will crop images for you to the dimensions you want. Don't keep smooshing images, it looks like crap when you do.

http://imageresize.org/ or something
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You people might think that it's funny to ignore everyone's advice and have your CYOA look awful, but the joke will be on you when nobody reads it and your time is wasted.
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>>52151950
Again, I don't even think Lunar knows what you /mean/, or what any of those terms mean.
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>>52152019
>>52152155
>>52151950
Let authors make cyoas in whatever way they want. Only the flow of (You)s will determine their worth.
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I've pretty much finished the v3 of the Necromancer CYOA

One or two more days for final revisions, proofreading, and last-minute fixes from said revisions and proofreading and it should be ready to post.

I can tentatively say it's now 2 PDFs rather than the 4 that v2 was, and it has 3x the pages.
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>>52152173
Which is what's so dumb about this. Instead of ignoring the terrible looking CYOAs, they instead give them negative attention, and create a perfect breeding ground for trolls. Well, that was years ago really, it led us here today.
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>>52150931
Senpai, when is Necromancer coming out?
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>>52152274
>all these years
>still going on about a concept as terrible as necromancy
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>>52152274
>1-2 days
>Necromancer v3
>mfw
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>>52152392
me on the right
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>>52152337
See >>52152274.
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>>52152299
It's an unavoidable part of the system, especially when it's not like there's an agreed upon guideline for making CYOAs. If the CYOA isn't appealing enough, people won't respond. If the CYOA strikes a nerve, people will respond. I haven't seen a single CYOA general where that hasn't been true.
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>>52152475
Anything that people have control over is not unavoidable. All they'd need is some self-awareness and self-control. But they don't.
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>>52152571
Preaching to the choir buddy. If everyone had more self-awareness and self-control a lot of shit wouldn't happen period.
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>>52151168
It's horrible in a variety of ways.
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>>52151629
Don't mind those elitist bastards. I for one don't feel entitled to aesthetically perfect cyoas. As long as I can read it and it's fun, it's fine.
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>>52150396

This is the updated beer money cyoa.

v1.1

-Changed cost for buying new gift from 1 to 2.
-Added suggestion in beginning recommending rolling 10 1d20 to play.

>>52148758

This is part of the choice. Do you want to become much stronger, but alone, or have a loyal mate but remain weaker. The shit companions like Prinny or Iggy are partially there as second rate companions for if you turn into the girl.
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>>52153191
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>>52153014
>if you don't want a hotel room where the toilet is overflowing that means you're an elitist that only sleeps in 5 star hotels xD
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>>52153210
>get a free weekend at a bed and breakfast
>throw a tantrum because you don't like the pattern on the drapes
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>>52151168
I recommend white text. It's readable in its current form, but it would be easier with white text. It also gives you room for color-coding certain options in the CYOA if you want to. If the normal text is white, color-coded options will stand out more.
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>>52153191
Can I become the girl yet stay a boy yet?
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>>52153191
>this requires rolling
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>>52153242
>Can I become the girl yet stay a boy

Unfortunately no. Best you can do to become a male monster is to get the parasyte arm and maybe eat the dragon egg, and dump as much buffs on yourself as possible.
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>>52153276

Ain't no one's gonna stop me from making rolling cancers, no one!
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>>52153203
>Forbidden Meat
Damn, you included best waifu 2017?
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>>52150396
I've always liked this one.
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>>52153483
Every single time I see this, this is what comes to mind:
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b3tJ1MfwaFM

We ride Clansmen!
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>>52153228
>get a free weekend at a bed and breakfast
>yay!
>the toilet is overflowing, the sheets weren't washed, and the food gives you indigestion
>should have just stayed at home
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/r/ing the magocracy CYOA.
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>>52153751
>>>/r/
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>>52150693
Hey look! A fundamental misunderstanding as to what constitutes popularity, quality, and creativity! Love you author!
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>>52150421
Daremo

>Race 24
Beastman (Fox) 20

>Lifestyle 20
Survivalist 16
Hedge Mage 14

>Physical 14
Grace 14
Vitality 14

>Magical 14
Magic Affinity II 10
Lifespan II 2

>Miscellaneous 2
Expanded Equipment 0

>Setting
Low Magic


I'm going to hide in the woods, and use illusion charms to keep nosy neighbors from bothering me.

If the marauding armies decide they want my home, they can have fun walking in circles while slowly being picked off one by one until they leave. If they escalate things, I will hunt them all like animals. Forever.

Other than that, I'll just hang out with whatever woodland creature I take a liking to for the durance of it's lifespan.
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Rolled 20, 19, 2, 20, 16, 11, 9, 12, 16, 16 = 141 (10d20)

>>52153191
Alright, let's fucking do this. I'm probably going to spend three coins on taking Dantalion and Disaster, unless I just get lucky.

>>52153301
Shame on you. SHAME!
Also, if you made Beer Money, thank you for Dantalion. It appeals to me...
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>>52152274
Praise be to based Scientist!
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>>52152274
Needless to say, my body is ready for this momentous occasion.
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>>52153793
>The Fanged Tower
>Gamour Mastery, Telepathy Mastery, Heal 2, Dispel 2
>Circlet
>Meditation Chamber, Alchemy Lab, Apprentice, Scholar-at-arms, Spymaster, Lounge, Senschal
>Brick, Helen, Alex, Heather
>Allison Keynes, Abraham Crowley
>The Scion

I mostly stay in my chambers either furthering my research on class dynamics or supporting my staff in the field. I try to keep entirely in the shadows (the circlet allows me to project a constant astral invisibility illusion) and communicate with ideas that the recipients perceive as their own. Knowing that they are sample might skew the data.
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>>52152173
>make shitty paint CYOAs
>get a decent amount of (You)s

I mean, following this logic that everything needs great formatting, I shouldn't get many.
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>>52152475
>isn't appealing enough

meanwhile
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sydonay
expression dislike
gifts iggy with upgrade and prinny
base level perks fairy in a bottle and yurlunger's tail with upgrade

drawbacks wonderland syndrome
scenario postcat
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>>52154528
The point isn't to get yous, you can just spam bullshit and get just as many.
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>>52153191

I rolled 14 15 8 7 1 17 10 8 12 7 off site.

Got Gremory
Dislike -> change to like, 3 silvers left
Excalibolg
Dream eating star -> upgrade, 2 silvers left
Dragon egg -> change to hellspawn, also upgrading the hellspawn, 0 silver left
Forbidden meat ->I'm eating this to become the monster loli
No drawbacks
Empire of Vals

I'm going to send my familiar to fight in the arena and collect any money he makes. Other than that just gonna chill with Gremory in a big assed city, and use her powers to live comfy lives while keeping a low profile. Gonna use the star to be a dick to people, steal their happy memories and boost myself in emergencies.
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>>52154784

Helena.
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>>52154193

Put Dantalion with the white magic perk together. You can buff the entire group.
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>>52150474
>Myr
>Rjun
>Nyala
>Tesla

Feels the most useful for day to day life.

>>52150566
>endurance, Intelligence, luck

>>52150931
>Sloop
>Private Quarters x4
>Bomb, chain shot
>Breechloading Gun x4
>Mestari Sails
>Small row boat x3
>Guns deck, cells
>Good Galley
>Masthead nest, forward, round
>Edward, David, Charles, Kalevi, Navy Crew
>Albion Navy (obviously)

Due to the limited crew size, I ultimately opted out of navigator and cook, the idea is that we work primarily as coastal defense vanguard of the Albion Navy. We come in fast, hit faster to cripple pirates and mastari ships with chainshot and bombs in a quick strafe, then let bigger navy ships sweep up.

As for why a navy ship has Mastari sails, well, my girl's a bit of an experiment after the Navy took out the masts of Mastari ship before it could drop canvas, allowing the navy to salvage it intact and work on reverse engineering it.

It's a tight and strong crew, and our tactic is honestly suicidal, but it's working.
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>>52153793
I rolled J the first time I did this one, loving girlfriend. No regrets, and never changing that outcome.
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>>52153191
Option to spend coins for an additional girl when?
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>>52155014
are you sure you rolled that

>>52154784
Gina
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>>52155032

We'll see, if there's truly high demands for this.
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Yes, I am. The technology to doll d12s has existed for a really long time, senpai.
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>>52154784
Bethany
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>>52153191
>>52154193
Looks like ten was more than necessary, but that's fine. At least I saved a coin.

>Girl
Dantalion (Purchase)

>Impression
Disaster (Apparently, Dants found out that this legally makes us new people, thereby voiding all prior contracts in her home dimension.)

>Gifts
Dream Eating Star (Memories are now currency. Who says I need to steal?)
Puppy Fur Purse (Who's a good dog? You are!)

>Perks
Flying Frigate (Upgraded)
Time Stop (Upgraded)

>World
Postcat

And so with my trusty crew of me, I will sail the skies of Postcat! I will deal in transport and trade, visiting settlements and making money while I try to learn how to leave this place.
The Puppurse will help me get started on materials investments, and the Dream Star will let me take collateral on more serious loans. I can offer transport for a few people that want to go to other settlements, and hopefully my cheerful personality and trade stimulus will encourage these sad sacks to remember what ambition is.

While it's not relevant in Postcat, being a time-stopping hivemind with a telepathically controlled flying artillery platform makes me a terror on field of battle. Were I in a more violent setting, I'd do well as a memory stealing pirate. As is, I'll probably try talking my way out of tense situations when I gain access to the greater multiverse, but I will be purchasing arms and armor for myselves.

For now, I need to explain to my family why I am a group of girls that look nothing like me, and that I must go to another dimension within a month. Regardless of how that goes, Puppurse is buying me some beer, and I'm going to cuddle myself on a boat and pet my bag. Good bag.

>>52154963
I had considered it, but getting the buff would have taken all my coins, and I like iron too much to take the drawback on that number.
I /really/ wanted an upgraded flying frigate, and the time stop synergizes too well with being Dantalion to give up.
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>>52155061
>>52155117
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>>52154784
Kate
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>>52154536
>#1
>piss liquid diamond/platinum
>ggez
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>>52154784
Laila
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>>52153191

16 (1 coin) - Eligor
16 - Disaster
19 - Puppy Fur Purse
18 - Mantle of Invisibility
(2 coins) - Prinny
12 (1 coin) - Upgraded Flying Frigate
14 - Hellspawn Familiar
13 - Greater Curse of Solomon (+1 coin)
17 (1 coin) - Vesperti

Adventuring as a cute dragon(?) girl with an idiotic penguin constantly trying to get us to do dumb shit? Sign me up. Anyone else on Vesperti want to join the crew of this flying frigate?
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Hey /tg/
If I'm not wrong, a few days ago I saw a WIP for some giantess girlfriend CYOA. Is that a work in progress or a project that went nowhere? Someone got that one?
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>>52155453
>If I'm not wrong, a few days ago I saw a WIP for some giantess girlfriend CYOA. Is that a work in progress or a project that went nowhere?
AFAIK, the former (plus it's only been like a few days at most, give the author some time to work).
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>>52150931
Oh, you made that one? Neat, it's one of my favorites.
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>>52154784
Isabella
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>>52155452
I'm >>52155155 not on Vesperti, but should our ships cross in the deeper waters of space and time, I'd be happy to do business with you. I'll be sure to give a fellow earthling a good deal on whatever cargo isn't part of a delivery contract.
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>>52154784
Lucy
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>>52154784
Carlos
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I take #2 for going number 2
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>>52154784
[E]linor
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>>52155925
>you're special
>better than other 3rd battlemages
>spark of the Old Gods
>you're SPECIAL
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>>52155983
I'm not really interested in casual sex. Oh well. Easy come, easy go.
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>>52156020
Don't forget the bonus companion page that's full of fuckwits and JUSTICE.
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>>52154784
Cynthia
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>>52156086
>skimming reveals no explicitly cockhungry sluts
dropped
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>>52156086
>Arcturus
>Frost
>"Shields"

This triggers me immensely.
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>>52154784
Come on Aileen.
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>>52153466
My Horde
>Archer, Grappler, Stealthy, Intimidating [4]
>Common Herd (Paragon, Watchdogs, Tinkers), Swift Herd (Paragon, Raptors, Kheshiks), Megafauna Herd (Paragon, War Wagons) [56]
>Clan Sibling (Weaponer, manages the Common Herd), Sworn Brother, Strategic Consort, Beast Shaman, Hostage Princess, Hostage Engineer, Welkin Witch, Silver Knight [99]
>Stele of the Fallen Empire [104]
>Factionalized, Blood Enemy [93]
>Oases of Trade, Sleigh Riders, Cold Woodsmen, The Army of Fire [100]

Enemy's Horde
>Intimidating, War Wounds, Rage [-1]
>Megafauna Herd (Monstrous) [14]
>Clan Sibling (Horselord, manages the Megafauna Herd), Strategic Consort, Mummified Abbot, Condor Kings [37]
>The Imperial Seal [50]

The Empire
>Fortified Marches, The Wall
>The Guardian Beast, The Polymath

The plan is to explore the west, north and east for other signs of the fallen empire while inviting the learned men and imperial hostages to contemplate what we find. Going to war with my blood enemy seems inevitable so th best case scenario that I will aim for is a one on one fight to the death thereby avoiding destroying assets I can use and cementing my reputation in traditionalist circles.

The fortified marches will be conquered by megafauna driven seige engines designed by the engineer and built with eastern wood. One a few are toppled my intimidation should make convincing others to surrender easy. The wall calls for more finesse. The megafauna shambling in the distance will serve as a distraction while swift horsemen disrupt communications and scale walls. While the decoys set up portable ramps (that also serve as plan B) the infiltrators open the gates.

When confronting the Great Beast and Polymath I rely on my track record of avoiding collateral damage, diverse council, knnowledge of the fire army, the decoded stele and imperial seal to convince them to join (or at least not oppose) my cause.
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>>52155453
It was abandoned.
Didn't you know? Authors do nothing but make CYOAs meaning if they haven't posted the full product in less than a day they either died or abandoned it.
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>>52156329
I will be sure to come on you.
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>>52150396
>tfw Highlander might release the completed Companion Compendium within the month
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Has anyone made a Steam Games CYOA?
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>>52156419
She didn't say anything about completed, just the 1.5.
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>>52156540
Released versions can represent stages of completion.
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Chiming in with an update for you guys. The maple gallery is half finished and Fox and Axe will probably be pretty quick and simple to write compared to the last row.
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>>52156901

It's interesting that old CYOAs tend to be simple and quick, while newer ones are getting longer and longer. It's like we've had steady complexity creep over the years.
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>>52156945
Not more complex, modern cyoas tend to bloat up their context.
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>>52154784
Fiona
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>>52156945
Is that supposed to be a bad thing?
And that's not necessarily true. Classics get posted. The easier it is to post a CYOA, the more often it gets posted.
That's why I've only heard a handful of Queen songs, because the radio never plays any of their other songs.
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>>52157120
>bloat
Por que?
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>>52154784
Beatrice
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>>52157156
Complexity isn't inherently good. Complexity for complexity's sake is usually a hallmark of low compositional skill.
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>>52151168
The text color and such is absolutley horrible

>>52150931
I always wondered can you take more than one character from each category? Or from the Companion section in particular? And what is the difference between Loyal, Likes the Captain and Devoted?
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>>52156901
>The Long Man
Nature, bitches

Didn't this have a perk section? Or am I thinking of the other identical CYOA with different gods?
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I'll pick the girl with the letter B over her head cause she's beautiful
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I'm uncertain if it's alright to ask this in this thread in particular (or even post the pdf), but I've got a question for the author of the Exxxalted version of the SL CYOA. Already asked in the /d/ thread, but was pointed here.

Any one know if I could use one of the Incarnae (namely Venus) as the source of the spell that transforms me? I had an idea about Venus going all "according to keikaku" in one of her latest moves during the Games of Divinity and I was one of the results of that move.
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>>52157324
It isn't inherently bad either. Battlemage would be shit if it was "simple and quick" even if I think the Quests could be made muuuuch shorter or even had some axed.
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>>52155891
I'll see if I can hop by Postcat after making it to the final city in Vesperti!
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>>52157408
>Exxxalted
Anon, your keyboard is broken.
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>>52154784
Felicity
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>>52157577
Weeelp time for a hate fuck
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>>52157469
Not inherently bad in itself, but "extraneous to purpose" and "potentially bad" is just cruft. If you CYOA is complex because the good that it creates requires it, fantastic. Needlessly complex is never good.

Keep in mind that I understand and fully support the concept of different people having different tastes, but only within certain bounds of "you can say you like it as much as you like, but it's still dogshit for such and such nonnegotiable reasons" and "dislike it all you want, this is undeniably quality". This can come off as hypocritical to some, but really isn't if you work to deeply understand the subject.
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>>52157536
Nope, did that on purpose.
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>>52154784
This post was pretty funny.

Also rolling with Boobarella.
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>>52157646
Awww shit I've got a beef with Boobarella.
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>>52152274
>I've pretty much finished the v3 of the Necromancer CYOA
dude its been like fucking years
and you added MORE pages when the original was already rather overbloated?
what are you even doing
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>>52157610
You broke your keyboard on purpose?
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>>52152274
Praise the fuckin' Sun, man. Looking forward to it.
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>>52157536
That's an older version. This should be the newest one.
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>>52157695
Types multiple X's on purpose.
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>he doesn't credit the artists whose art he used in his cyoa
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>>52157731
no, this is patrick
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>>52153191
>Avnas
Flat-chested girls deserve love too!
Gonna be fun to have a loli friend that's stronger than me in every way.
>Neutral
Disaster would be cool but most of these girls do not fit into Earth.
>Predator's fetish
>Demon Shield
>Magick without tears
>Time Stop
While Vals sounds fun, I can't say no to the comfort of
>Pravas
sadly.
Having power in such a silly, lawless world is sure to be fun. I could go for that.
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>>52157802
Are you brain damaged?
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Yes.
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>>52157859
Thieves are not welcome on /cyoag/.
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>>52157939
>>52157802
WHERE'S YOUR FUCKEN SOURCES FOR THOSE FUCKEN IMAGES??!
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>>52158064

A Japanese fetish website dedicated to monster girls!
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>>52157802
>he even knows who the artists are whose art he used in his cyoa
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>>52158089
You didn't provide them concurrently with the images and had to be pressed to provide anything at all. I think the author is safe from your moral onslaught.
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>>52154784
Irene
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>>52157802
>implying anyone in here can draw their own
>implying if I were to draw my own, anyone would care
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>>52154784
Layla
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>>52157802
>>52157939
Sonder cyoa when?
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>>52158340
>implying anyone in here can draw their own
It's been done before, and it might be done again.
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>>52158340

There was a CYOA where the author did their own art. One where you pick stickers you put on yourself or something. But yeah, people really didn't care.
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posting an old(ish) CYOA
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>>52158551
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>>52158574
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>>52151168
Looking good, though
>carefreeness
Nonchalant disposition? irresponsibility? devil-may-care attitude? negligence? delinquency?

Naturally, you will have pubs/inns where adventurers can come and get rest and new jobs, or maybe Guild Halls where they can have reclass and prestige stuff? Or is that available at the Temple?
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>>52158064
Hey I ain't afraid of no rent-a-cop.
I see that private security patch you're trying to hide.
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>>52158551
The three-page CYOA you posted is actually fairly new IIRC.
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>>52158660
I remember the original batch of "locked in a room" CYOAs, so I accept that old and new are relative terms.
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>>52156540
Don't break my jive, man.
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>>52151168
>>52158609
Revising a bit my previous statement, you might want to crop your images lest you incur the wrath of Aspect Raidou
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>>52154784
Harriet
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>>52153191
>roll 1d20 for 2 free base level perks
>>52153203
>roll 1d20 for 2 free base level gifts
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>>52155925
>Race
Human.
>Mark
Prophet
>Primary
Intellect
>Secondary
Mind
>Tertiary
Agility
Clarity
Endurance
>Armor
Wizard
>Weapons
Wand
Staff: Arcane
Shield Catalyst
Dagger
>>52155943
Lightning Unlock [1]
Energy Siphon [2]
Energy Focus [3]
Energy Barrier [4]
Mjolnir [5]
Static [6]
Bolt [17]
Warp [28]
Frost Unlock [9]
Frozen Heart [10]
>>52155959
Force Unlock [7]
Inertia [8]
Seismic Sense [11]
Direction [12]
Arcane Unlock [13]
Void Tap [14]
Void Stare [15]
Void Call [16]
Haste Caste [22]
Overload [23]
Divine Unlock [18]
Mending Sparks [19]
Fortitude [20]
Courageous Light [21]
Light Chains [24]
Heaven's Fury [25]
Ascension [26]
Demigod [27]

>>52155967
>Guild
Prism of Yra
>>52155989
>Companions
Tzuriel Gryn [4]
Tzuriel Gryn: Physical Skill C to B. [5]
Marvix Shaf [11]
Luka Asevicus [15]
Yndi [22]
Arael Henriet [24]
>>52156020
>Novice
City Guard
Horse Mounts
>Intermediate
Excellence
Tyrant Mounts
>Expert
Hunted
Drake Mount
>Heroic
Annihilate
Mana Glass Coins

Bring it.
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>>52158551
Too lazy to make the build but it seems to me that a combination of beauty+charisma+luck is the easiest path.

You basically complete all the T1 quests in a year or so and pump the boons into beauty+charisma+luck. Then you become a model or instagram/youtub celeb and use your fame and money to complete several other quests, like building a church, spreading her religion, etc. You might even find yourself in the position to kick that ass Kayne West.

Only problem is that assuming you go for Demigod, you'll end up a hyper lucky, beautiful, charismatic beast with barely any "practical" stuff like regen, strength, etc.

At the very least it's safer than the other most coherent route: the action one where you hunt the supernatural, stop cultists, etc. and pump your boons into strength+speed+toughness and stuff.
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>>52158905
I'm in love with that thing's hip to shoulder ratio. Very aesthetic.
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>>52158866

Gifts are shit you can lose forever. Perks are shit that always stay with you.
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>>52158980
>roll 1d20
>for two
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>>52158866
>>52158980

Nevermind I see what you mean now. I'm gonna change the wordings in those parts in the next update. Thanks for point them out.
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>>52156901

Xm master race.
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>>52154784
Celestine
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>>52154784
Caroline.
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>>52158905
Just realized I took four armor etches. I'll forfeit the Courageous Light armour etch. Given I have an extra point now, I suppose I'd either take Smite or Light Ray. Light Ray would be a form of elemental attack I do not have, but Smite would be an element that I do have, but an angled from above, rather than from my hand, which I lack in for energy attacks. My only current attack, that doesn't have to originate from my hand, is from Inertia, which is great, but it is physical. Having an energy attack that doesn't come from a part of my body, but from the sky, is likely a very useful tool.

As such I'll have to settle on Smite.
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>>52158551
No deal, when I'm at my lair it's pants off or nothing. And nothing is no underwear either.

>First year : Acclimation
-Teach Me
-Show Me
-Play Time
-Adventure Time!
-Ready...Action!(if Machinima is OK. We could sell it for a prayer, literally.)
The lesson plan for first year will be an introductory course on Theology, Music, Philosophy and the Arts. Will I be teaching? Hell no, I'll just download some classes and plant you in front of the tv. I might be around to answer some questions you might have, but my own knowledge of these matters is not perfect. Hope you can change into a cute girl or something, each wednesday we'll go to the local cinema and watch a couple of films, after which we'll have a post-film discussion at a local cafe. Lovely place, you'll like their chai.

We could play videogames maybe or Exalted or something. I'm willing to learn new systems and DM modules for you. End of the year we'll take a tour through wine country and make our way south, maybe ending up at the Mayas.

Oh, and here's the answer for the Ultimate riddle. Kids love anything with sugar on it. They have no taste whatsoever. Taste is something you acquire through experience.

>Year Two : Groundwork
-Divine Intervention
-Gourmet (is takeout OK?)
-Grooming
-Guinea Pig
2nd year we'll take it easy, building power, boons, dosh and knowledge. Your education will continue, naturally. As for the good deed, I could just gofundme an online panhandler or leak patreon-only porn. Of course, Guinea Pig means I'll be a recluse, as always, for most of the year.

>Year 3-5 : Lost and Found
Maybe it is time I get to know a little more about you? So let's get that americana road trip through the afterlife going. Hell, maybe I can find Hearst and kick him in the nuts.

After all that, I would say we will be in a better position to tackle Divine Punishment, Babylon 0.1, the supernatural and the proselytism quests.

We can talk about rewards and boons later, but I'll want dosh upfront.
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>>52154784
Come to papa Chidori Chavarin-Chono
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>>52156597

Not anon who posted that, but here's brand new build I just made. It has some similar themes to my Fallen Angel-Spider Mother build, but is still very unique. I hope it's good!

Porphyra Xebraxa, The Dragon Mother

Genitalia
>Vagina (1)
>Embellishments
>Lubrication
>Musculature
>Cilia
>Lumen
>Plush (x3)
Designed to accept and accomadate "donations" from all manner of incredibly powerful beings and creatures who can enhance the pedigree of my dragon eggs.
16

Shape
>Enticing
Supernatural allure of a succubi.
16

Chest
>Gifted
Large and well shaped enough to draw the eye of powerful dragons and God-like entities.
16

Influences
>Kleptozoological (Oversaturated)
Torso of unearthly beauty with draconic wings and lower body of a great serpent.
>Pseudodevascent
Imbued with power of Angels, Demons, and other magical beings to increase beauty and quality of young.
20

Face
>Seductive
Entrancing beauty with near hypnotic eyes.
20

Flourishes
>Ourobouros Metabolism
Goddess-like immortal with no need for things like food.
>Godly Cleanliness
Pristine and beautiful at all times.
>Lactation (Bountiful)
Lots of milk numerous and large young.
>Nurturing
Nutritious mixture just right for strong dragons.
>Addictive
Hatchlings remain dependant on mother's milk even into adulthood.
>Aphrodisiac
When an an egg is ready, I produce so much milk my breasts swell several cup sizes and begin to leak. A sight and scent irresistable to most.
>Dependent
When a dragon hatches, it is sent off to profesionals to be raised or trained. Teiatat's servants collect my milk and send it to the dragon keepers as the need arises.
>Carnal Atmosphere
The problem with being a vessel for producing dragons is that dragons sometimes take notice. Donors are carefully chosen for their pedigree, but particularly large dragons can be hard to stop.
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>>52159785

Strategy
>Brooding
I lays eggs and do not give birth.
>Conditional Emergence
Along with the effect from "donations", and spells and rituals, the size and power of a dragon can be affected by how long I incubate the egg while draped over my horde of treasure.
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Dowry
>Title
As a bride of Teiatat, I have a title to denote my purpose.
>True Name
I am ound to service as a dragon maker and ultimately controlled by Teiatat.
>Nuptial Torc
My bejwelled collar and golden chain denote my status as an object of utility.
>Lavender Grimoire
Much of my time is dedicated to rituals to enhance attractiveness and the quality of offspring.
>Primordial Woad
Magical cosmetics designed to enhance enchanting allure and emphasize fertility.
>Abyssal Ink
Spells to imbue offspring with power.
>Celestial Charms
Panoply of jewels and accesories to make even more eye catching and show wealth and power of Teiatat.
>Seductive Array
Always dressed to attract potential "donors"
>Filthy Lucre
Provided with an ever growing horde of wealth to provide regal lifestyle and slept on to empower dragon eggs.
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Bonds
>Sensual Ritualists
An army of Teiatat's ritualists to care for my every need and comfort, conduct rituals, and make sure I'm always ready for the next step in the dragon making cycle.
>Prime Mate
Teiatat only makes customized dragons for his own purposes and for very loyal followers. Incubating the eggs take a long time and is a big investment. So donors are chosen with incredible care.
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Urges
>Mating Dance
My every move and sound, however slight, is impossibly alluring. Especially when a new egg is ready.
>Throne's Shadow
I long ago accepted my position as a tool for making dragons.
>Spoiled
I'm cared for in every way and want for nothing.
68

Ambition
>Desire of All Hearts
>Key Strategic Asset
I'm a hugely valuable commodity, desired by all kinds of powerful entities.
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Pedigree 8
Status 3
Allure 9
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>>52159805

Dragons are fierce beings, both physically and magically powerful. They can be tremendously valuable to anyone who can command one. But the size and power which make them so priceless also make them terribly difficult to raise and control. What if one had a way to produce and raise their own dragons from hatchlings with (relative) safety, and even grant them specialized attributes? Porphyra is the result of millenia of magical experimentation to make just such a thing possible. By starting with a mere mortal who desired the things greedy mortals often do such as supernatural beauty, immortality, wealth, and power and imbusing her with the essences of ancient dragons and other magical creatures, Poprphyra was created. An entrancingly beautiful being who lays eggs from which dragons hatch. But this is not her most important feature. Pophyra can produce dragon hatchlings on her own, but by carefully choosing mates with desirable traits, dragons with customized powers and attributes can be created. Things such as aptitude for certain schools of magic, greater intelligence, or physical traits for specialized dragons. But the dragons are born with the weakness of never being completely weaned off their mother's milk. This is a method to control the dragons and to make the owners of such dragons beholden to Teiatat.
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>>52151629
save it in multiple stages, that way youll always be able to go back and edit it
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>>52158471
This desu. It was a small WIP, but i'm still looking forward to it.
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>>52156597
Holy shit. Who... who made this? It's insane.

Props for making Bride-Grooms perfectly viable too.
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>>52160025
>Who... who made this?
Erotic Descent Guy.
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>>52156597
Not that anon, either but here goes. Minimum lewd mode.

Fals, The Five Faced Flame

>Influence and Stats
Pedigree [4]

Status [2]

Allure [0]

~{FORM}~
>Genitals
Vagina 70

>Shape
Modest 70

>Chest
Soft 70

>Influences
Quasicosmic 66
Multiplexive 66

>Face
Primal 66
Chakra Eye 65
Elder Gaze 64

>Flourishes
Ouroboros Metabolism 62
Godly Cleanliness 60
Lernaean Hymen 58
Perfect Neoteny 61
Commanding Mien 64


~{PROGENERATION}~
>Strategy
Synergism 61

~{DOWRY}~
>Treasure
Title 57 010
Lavender Grimoire 54
Crimson Manual 43
Celestial Charms 40
Argent Spark 38
Argent Blaze 33
War-Fan of the Concubine-Marshal 28
Rorrim Mirrorx4 16
Rite of Echo Bestowal 14
Rite of Worldstepping 10
Regal Array 7

>Bonds
Personal Sect 3
Lithar, The Siren 5
Throne Maiden 0

>Stigmata
Stigmata of the Rebel 0

~{AMBITION}~
Freedom... 0

And so the Eunuch fucked up, altering the mind of a being with a deep seated disgust towards mental alteration, while giving it access to the divine flames of Argent Throne.

The Five Faced Flame's reputation was hurt by this early act of destructive defiance, and hasn't truly recovered. She mostly keeps to herself, living on a distant world as a minor goddess of renewing flames and hidden intent. There is currently no proof to any rumors that she is in contact with the Siren or the Grass Widows, or that she uses the Rite of Echo Bestowal to imprint sparks of independence in others.
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>>52159816
>. Things such as aptitude for certain schools of magic, greater intelligence, or physical traits for specialized dragons.
What about desire for and aptitude for being a meido?
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>>52154784
E, she deserves some snuggles.
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>>52160269
I'd snuggle you, but we'd apparently turn out to be emotionally detached fuck buddies.
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>>52160269
You have a pretty dumb name, E.
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>>52160199

I imagine Teiatat and most followers of his that are influential enough to earn their own specialized dragons have so many servants and maids that they wouldn't waste the resources on getting a powerful dragon maid. But I guess it's possible.

>>52160121

Nice! Non-lewd builds in lewd cyoas are most creative. I wasn't sure such a rebellious build was even viable, but you found good choices for it! Your character art is cool to. Unfortunately if our characters met, I'm not sure there's much we could do for one another since we're almost opposites. I'd have to secretly applaud your fighting spirit though.
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Rolled 16, 20, 2, 17, 2, 12, 6, 3, 8, 6 = 92 (10d20)

>>52153191
I normally don't like rolls but this got me interested
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>>52154784
Ivory...

Man, good I names are hard....
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>>52154784

anna
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>>52154784
Lexia
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>>52152274
>this happens
>i'm late
Still great
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>>52154784
[H]enrietta
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>>52160498
>they wouldn't waste the resources on getting a powerful dragon maid.
You don't get it. Doragons are not for war or lewd, they are for being meidos!
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>>52160695
>not for lewd, for being meidos!

Wait, there's a difference?
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>>52154784
H will never not be the best.
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>>52154784

Candice
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>>52160695
Oh and by the way Angel you would love the show. Toohru is a canon lesbian and the loli dragon calls the female MC "mom".
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>>52160737
She definitely wants to be used for lewd that's for sure!
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>>52160765
>Toohru is a canon lesbian

Gross. What is the world coming to when even anime succumbs to faggotry?
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>>52153191
>>52153203
>>52160533
16 - Orobas
20 - Disaster (1 coin to meke it insted Like)
2 - Dream Eating Star
17 - Mantle of Invisibility
(2 coins) - Prinny
2 - Armadel Symbiote
12 - Flying Frigate
6 - Dogged Persuer (3 - Samigina)
8 - The Empire of Vals
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>>52160855
Not true anon, when the mc got genderbent she wanted the D from her(him), so she is bisexual.
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>>52160926
More like she wants to fuck the MC no matter what's between their legs.
Which isn't bisexual at all
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>>52160498
Thank you, I put a little too much thought into it.
And you'd be surprised at how useful Fals can be as an ally, especially with that Synergism.

The first face of False is the Maiden, and she's an excellent conversationalist. She's a friend you can tell anything to, and will work hard to raise people's spirits.

The second face is the Lover, and while union with her will never be fruitful, it does bless the partner with greatly enhanced virility.

The third face is the Midwife. Her ministrations greatly enhance the health of growing life, and allow the mother to bear the burden in safety and comfort.

The fourth face of Fals is, oddly, the Mother. Not a literal mother, but an adoptive nurturer. If the Maiden is the comfort of a peer, the Mother is a more maternal counterpart to that.

The fifth and final face of Fals is the Pyre. She represents change, both violent and primal. She is ends, and new beginnings.

Don't you want your dragons to grow up big and strong willed?

I think I might have to include this deity in a setting I'm building...
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>>52151629
>Highlander Stratocracy looks good
>Text overlaps too far to the right
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>>52160695

That's fine. It's just that making a specialized dragon takes a lot of time, effort, and incredibly valuable resources. It's a big investment. If you were loyal enough and important enough to Teiatat, and you really wanted a dragon maid, then he would probably get you one. But I doubt that'd be the norm.

>>52160765

Sounds qt, but I'm not really into animu.

>>52160782

It's less about what I want, and more about what I'm willing to do to become a powerful Sorceress/minor Goddess.

>>52161027

Definitely a interesting Goddess for a fantasy setting! The aspect of the Maiden and Mother sounds like she'd be interested in interacting with mortals and their fates. And the Pyre sounds like she'd be interested in fates of kingdoms and things to.

Once the dragons hatch, they're taken to their keepers and no longer attached to me. If you include them in your rebellious shenanigans, it has little affect on me except for the exciting stories and reports I here later.
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I am the Bone of my Boner
Autism is my Body and Wish Fulfillment is my Blood.
I have created over a Thousand CYOAs,
Unknown to Realism,
Nor known to Sleep.
Have withstood many bans to create lewd CYOAs
Yet those Hands will never hold Mai Waifu.
So, as I write--
Unlimited CYOA Works

Uncensored version is here:
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>>52154784
Catherine or Heather
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>>52161336

Uncensored version is here:
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>>52161363

Uncensored version is here:
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>>52161336
Nice.
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>>52161336
I love you
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>>52152274
Awww yea!
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>>52161336
I'm proud of you you little autist, sleep well.
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>>52156943
Yay!
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>>52154784
Lily
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>>52156901
Your gods are shit and I leave the ca--
"Marked"
:Oh
This is a CYOA I can never escape. And it seems that I'm a normal soul in body still but I don't suffer the confusion of death neither the forgetfulness of birth, and can "Incarnate" at will, and go to any magical realm in existence as per usual of a soul. As well, immune to these god-fuckers.

MARKED IT IS!
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>>52154784
Fiona.
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>>52155996
neck yourself
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Anyone use these for a campaign/group? Or a quest thread with it?
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>>52156245
I am not to be held accountable.
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>>52154784
[A]melie
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>>52161387
If I could make a suggestion you could make a bunch of Profiles for special Prisoners like you did for the wardens. Since as it stands If you're a warden you're just punishing faceless criminals where as if you're a Prisoner you know who you're getting punished by.
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>>52161336
That was faster than I expected. Guess Ill spend the next half hour staring and or minmaxing and or fapping.
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Femdom cyoa when?
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>>52162791
>Femdom CYOA when?
Litterer right now Anon---> >>52161336
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>>52162791
You know the answer.
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>>52158551
To hell with it, I take all the quests. 27 boons and 17 favours in total counting the extra from these 300 words and favours I can't otherwise use. Eventually I will go for:

>Strength 3, Speed 3, Toughness 3, Beauty 3, Charisma 3, Health 3, Skill x 5 (assorted fields leading to immortality/plenty for everyone), Flight, Lucky

>Vassal, Answer, Demigod

Most of the lower tier tasks are things I would/should do anyway and if I can invest these early boons sensibly I have a better chance of tackling tier 3 and higher. To deal with the Action quests I first take health, hopefully this applies to the mind and that my chronic laziness counts as an illness. If not charisma implies the social intelligence to detect those nefarious cultists and lucky gives an edge. The sooner I get strength, toughness, speed and flight combo is the sooner I can produce daft Superman fan movies and thwart baddies (though, as always, the real criminals are so successful that they write the laws). If nothing else my ultimately benevolent goals should give me some leeway in carrying out/promising to try again the tasks. My only real worry is racing to get enough easy boons to protect the two of us from monsters/cultists/fallout from kicking Kayne West in the balls.
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>>52162791
Don't we have about seven now?
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>>52154784
Eejisundae
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>>52154784
Jane
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>>52154784
Jalapenosundae
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>>52162895
Wasn't someone doing one? What happend? Where can I find it
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>>52154784
Charlotte
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>>52162668
>Suggestion: Make a selection for Prisoners?
I didn't think that was necessary, because wardens could always buy Special Request multiple times to get all their favorite villains as prisoners. And my characters could not compete against like Jinx or Infested Kerrigan anyways.

>>52162895
>7 Femdom CYOAs
Could you name all of them? I would like to investigate them for educational purposes.

>>52163019
If you diden't see my post here is a brand new Femdom CYOA ---> >>52161336
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>>52154784
Clara
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>>52163098
But anon, that is not femdom, that is a turbo lewd prison
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Rolled 12, 14, 3, 1, 9, 16, 1, 10, 9, 5 = 80 (10d20)

>>52153191
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>>52161336
Cum diet upgrade should make prisoners addicted, c'mon that's a basic CYOA design principle.
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I leave tons of references and easter eggs in all of my CYOAs, but I have never seen anyone mentioning any them.

>>52163275
Anon that is femdom if you are a prisoner the warden you choose will basically be your mistress and if you pick the option: Favorite Pet the CYOA will be even more femdom.

>>52154784
Since everyone is doing this, Linette
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>>52154784
C
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>>52161387
A lot of these punishment seem too extreme for how often punishments would happen.
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>>52163378
I am willfully ignoring them.
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>>52163358
>>52153191

Decarabia, changed from Orias - 2 silvers left
Disaster, changed from dislike - 1 silver left
Iggy
Dream eating star, upgraded - 0 silvers left
Forbidden meat, selling for 1 coin
Time stop, upgraded using meat money
Somnium

I'm an eldritch tentacle loli who can stop time and steal memories. I'm gonna help Somnium invade whichever world they're going to (Pravas?).
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>>52155925
This is gonna sound weird if the creator is reading this, but can you edit a past Character of mine? An Ifraix named Reshmier, I didn't even add a bio and I feel bad.
>Ifraix
>Sentinel
>Vitality, Endurance, Intellect, Mind, Charisma
Survivability is the main thing here, then leadership
>Aegis
See above
20 coins
>1 handed War hammer-16
>Staff-10
>Square Shield-6
>Wand-2
>Dagger-0
Either the Shield and Warhammer or Staff are used at a time. Wand is kept on my belt, and the dagger is kept up my boot.
>>52155943
>>52155959
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>Undead Unlock, Ceaseless, Summon Undead, Soul Seeker, Relentless charge, Soul Guardians, Thrall, Death Miasma, Army of the Dead
>Acoustic Unlock, Song of Perseverance, Song of Fragility, In Rilievo, Amoros ( For my staff)
>Divine Unlock, Mending Sparks, Light ward, Light ray, Consecrate, Light Chains, Guardian, Ascension, Demigod, Apostles.
>Nature Unlock, Companion ( Black Irish Terrier), Spirit Warding Armour Etch, Leaf metal etch ( For my War hammer)
>>52155967
>Bone Seekers
Only reall guild I could choose here. Turlough is definetly my kind of guy. Using heretical and corrupting magic while being a genuinely good guy.
>>52155989
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>Lucienne Godfrey-20
>Guillaume Juhel-19
>Roseia Oceus-17
>Abaigeal Ni Sithigh-16
>Irene Bocuse-15
>Harold Vangen-12
>Felna Wyvern-6
>Richart-4
>Earl Reimfred-0
I'm a sucker for anybody with the rank and pile tagged on. The rest of these are either quirky undead guys or waifus.
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>>52154784

Amber
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>>52163539
>>52156020
>Search and Rescue, Raptor mount
Quick, if not easy job. raptors add another fighter into the fray, plus they add onto the evil looking underdog aesthetic.
>Denial, Scarab Mounts
A smaller enemy party just means less things to get overwhelmed by. Scarab seem pretty good for combat and long hauls.
>Reclamation, Behemoth mount
I good massive battle seems to fit me and my team well. Behemoths seems great for both combat partners and for holding all our junk.
>Defiant, Etching
Another huge battle. I'd be better at doing this than attacking a titan head on or reaching a portal.
>>52156086
When creating his character bio, can you put
Reshmier Scrimpt
"Support Warlord"
Second Era
School: Divine, Undead
Mark:Sentinel
Physical Skill: Up to you
Magical Skill: Up to you
Race: Ifraix
A heavily armored battlemage that makes uses of minions, support and defensive spells, and a warhammer in battle. Despite being an Ifraix, he's obsessed with his own mortality. Thus he will focus on his own life first, helping others survive second, and attacking third. Just wants to be remembered fondly by history and his comrades.
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>>52161336
Now I shall be the Warden, obviously.

[300 pts]

Bioengineer + high tech prison. [280] Tentacles, super regen, aliens, and really cool tech. All goods.

Large Prison [250]. I mean, if you're going to do something, do it big, right? Plus, infinite toys. Who doesn't want infinite toys.

A female prison of course. DUH. [245]

> Sil TLoak. She is clam. Likes sexy alians.
> Stukov. Breaked.

Anyways. Vice warden 1d20 = 17
Olivia. Magic slut. I'm ok with this. Extra little surprises to spruce up the day.

Uniforms: I'm ok with the classic uniform for 0 points. Lets add no uniform for good behavior.[235]

Power Suppression Collars, of course. Why choose anything else? [225]

Upgrades:
Medical Facility [220] in case anyone gets a little too enthusiastic.
Armory [215] They'll be suuuper high tech.
Gym [210] because lets keep the girls fit eh?
Assistant [205] because of course I need an assistant.
Surveillance Room [195] for security reasons. Really.
Favorite Pet [180] I was going to abuse my privileges and get a pet anyways.
DTF [170] why wouldnt i?

Special Rules:
Minimum orgasms (1) [170]. Hey. Free rule. And if some of the prisoners happens to hold down some poor girl so she cant orgasm... well rules are rules.
Word of the day [160] seems like a fun little game.
Lottery (1%) [155] because sometimes, people are just really good at games.

Treatments
Heightened libido [135]
Increased Sensitivity [115]
Glory Hole [95]
Rape [75]

Punishments
Orgasm Denial [65]
Sex Machine [55]
Tentacle Pit [45]
Slave Training [35]
Lolification [25]
Monster menagerie [15]
Public Use [5]
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>>52163561
Edit. Since I have an extra 5 points at the end, I might as well upgrade lottery to 3%. Well, 1 and 3 percent of infinity is still pretty damned big eh.
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Is the HTML Magical Realm builder still dead?
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>>52161336
This is great.

>Warden
At first I thought Prisoner to be a gorillionaire but I decided some things (such as being the boss in a lewd minidimension) are priceless.

>High-Tech Prison 10
>Bioengineered Prison 20
>Magical Prison 30

>Large 60

>Female Prison 65
And only female guards.

>Moira 75
Paid for Moira as the lust thing was intrinsic to the vibe I was going for which was wicked lusty.

>No Uniform 85
>Skimpy Uniform 90

>Power Disabling Field

>Elite Guards 100
>Medical Facility 105
>Armory 110
>Prison Gym 115
>Rapey Guards 125
>Surveillance Room 135
>Assistant 140
>Wardens Office 150
Rooms and assistant make it safe and comfy.

>Additional Vice Warden - Sil T'Loak
Bought Sil as the body mod stuff should be fun. Also thought it was neat to get a demon and an alien to each be responsible for their half (sci-fi/medieval) of the prison.

>DTF 160
>Elite Bodyguard x2 190
Power Girl and Wonder Woman. Sometimes the classics are the best.

>Lottery - 10% 210
Means I've got no real control over who gets punished but I can always pick from 10% of the population. Which given the permanent punishments I picked up means I can affect the population quickly.

>Futafication+ 225
>Heightened Libido 235
>Milking+ 250
>Sex Machine 260
>Slave Training 270
>Increased Sensitivity+ 285
>Bimbofication+ 300

I don't think I'd ever leave.
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Can someone post any cyberpunk/futuristic and/or bounty hunter cyoa's?
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>>52163594
I have it in my mega. https://mega.nz/F!AYwlHJBK!xVrJUD4PSAJACtDY3g_Lgw
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>>52154784

Ivy
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>>52161336
>>52161363
>>52161387
I'll see if I can get the energy later to make a typo/grammar list for you, in the meantime though.
Let's do this, pervert Warden!
>Magical/Bio-engineered Prison with Normal inmates. 15/300
I like the aesthetic, and this will help ensure the stability and security of my Prison.
>Large 45/300
Go big or go home! Sprawling dungeon world is a go!
>Mixed gender prison
>Rolling, nope, Niadra 55/300
Gotta give help out where I can after all. She'll fit the 'demon' sections of the prison nicely.
>Classic
Classic Uniforms for the look of it all.
>Power Suppression Collar 65/300
I'm a really big fan of redundancy in my systems... Can I have the disabling field too and just not tell anyone about it?
>Elite Guards, Medical Facility, Rapey Guards, Surveillance Room, Assistant, Clone Factory, Wardens Office, Mind reader, D.T.F. 150/300
Gotta live it large and in style, while still being able to function as a prison and the place I call home, with insurance policies and the like
>Lottery 1%, You looked at me wrong, Minimum Orgasms 5 200/300
Oh the wonderful abuse of power...
>Treatments: Slave Training, Upgraded Increased Sensitivity, 245/300
>Punishments: Upgraded Lolification, Sex Arcade, Upgraded Sissification, Upgraded Gender Bending 300/300
>Can the orgasms from being punished trigger the maximum orgasm rule?

And there we go! The sprawling prison within my pocket dimension starts out 'normal' enough as a magical jail, but the deeper you go the more demonic and infested it gets. Prisoners go in and either never come out, or become well trained sex slaves tailored to fit a wide range of tastes and customers. I'll be living it up. chatting with Naidra while learning magic and enjoying my assistant and the perks of my position, safe in the knowledge that between the upgrades to the prison and myself, and the type of prisoner I have, I am virtually unassailable.
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>>52154784
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>>52154784
Kora

heard someone was talking about un-aesthetically pleasing cyoa's.
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>>52164093
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>>52164108
Isn't there another page to this that relates to the bits in the white boxes?
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>cyoas that have shitty font or have colored text on a colored background that makes it hard to read
>cyoas that are more than 3 pages
>"companion" cyoas where a majority of if not the whole cyoa is just picking different people

When will these memes end
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>>52164046
>Light Grey, Copper

>>52164075
>Beige

>>52164093
>Beige/Copper

>>52164108
>Silver Earrings, White Needle
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>>52164263
Hopefully never.
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>>52164254
yup.
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>>52163687
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>>52164263
>cyoas that are more than 3 pages
What is wrong with CYOAs that are more then 3 pages?
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>>52164351
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>>52164254

What's the white boxes say? I don't feel like reading through them.
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>>52164395
essentially "save us, were trapped, type this code out and get the secret ending" but i fucked up when i made the cyoa and made the secret message without it actually being linked to anything.

Should have made the page, put it on imgur and then used that end bit of code, so that people could find it that way. Like i did with the depressing cyoa.
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>>52164417
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>>52164046
Gold, Purple (Crow Man)
>>52164075
Beige
>>52164093
Green
>>52164108
Light Grey
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>>52164352
With every page after the second one the reader requires the content to be 50% more interesting than the page that came before it.

Hence if you make a five page CYOA where every page is just okay only half of the readers will reach the end.
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>>52164437
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>>52164395
Page 2, box 1
>There's been a tear, hasn't there? There's not much time. There's a lot of shades of colors. The god has been variating, giving you more choices without realizing it. A specific code will make him change wrong and free all the shades! We know the first part: NGG. We promise to make it up to you. FREE US!
Page 3, Left Box
>Working on code, not much time, tear is closing.
Page 3, Right Box
>Next part is: YP, We promise you power if you free us.
Page 4, Top Box
>Not just power, we offer pleasure as well.
>NG
Page 4, Middle Box
>We'd give anything to be free. We'd even offer our world. The last part is LYD!
Page 4, Bottom Box
>Free us from our prison. Do it now.
>Unlock us.
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>>52164504
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>>52164499
It sounds like the readers need to take some ritalin.
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>>52164499
sounds like absolute bull shit. SDA's in general, super soldier, beri's 22+ page cyoa and the multiple builds people started making for every girl, 7 page SS cyoa, come on man, longer cyoa's have less posting because fuck saving 7+ pages but almost always get played to their full extent.
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>>52164539
Or maybe you should make interesting content?
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>>52156015
This is like the 4th time you've posted this with zero answers to it. Why do you keep posting it when no one is showing any interest? If you're the creator and want feedback then say something when you post it or you'll keep getting no replies.
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>>52164539
You're on 4chan. No shit the readers should be on meds.
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>>52164504
Can someone post the stardust soldier cyoa?
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>>52164499
Hmmm I was planning on making a 8th page for Nemesis, but I might reconsider that.
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>>52164530
What? No husband options? Trash CYOA.
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>>52161336
Not one reference to Superjail! in this entire CYOA. I'm not surprised, but I am a little disappointed.
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>>52164560
Those are all either very well made or ride off the fame from the maker in order to attract people. Even then they don't hang on for longer than a week or two and are promptly forgotten until newfags find it a few months later.

By comparison the vast majority of CYOAs over three pages only manage to get attention for a single thread before fading away forever, by comparison the gentle femdom CYOA still gets replies everytime someone posts it and it's posted nearly every other thread.

The ideal CYOA length is always going to be a single page, but up to three pages is still manageable depending on how you partition the information and how much content you make exactly since three 800x5000 pages is vastly different from 1600x10000.

There are exceptions obviously, space refugee is a fucking powerhouse that never dies out and a select few, but for the most part a multipage CYOA will not last.
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>>52164499

I agree with this sentiment. I get that some people enjoy the long ones, but when I read a CYOA past the second or third page, unless it's crazy good I tend to lose interest.

I personally don't want to read a novella and spend half an afternoon just to make up a build. Only long CYOA I enjoyed was conduit, and that was made in a way where you did not have to read everything at once.
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>>52156597
>>52160121
>>52159785
Now, I actually *am* the anon who posted this. Writefagging took much longer than I anticipated. Constructive feedback is appreciated!

Yulia Mezai, Our Lady of the Resplendent Heavens

===FORM===

>GENITALIA: Vagina (x1)
-Embellishments
-Lubrication
-Musculature
-Cilia
-Lumen (in addition to the normal effect, my nipples and upper lips glow as softly as moonlight--in direct contrast to the roaring solar flame contained within my empyreal maw.)
-Plush x3 (if one were to draw close to me and content themselves to do naught else but listen quietly, their senses would be awash with a sonorous hum akin to the very background radiation of the Universe. Such is the unearthly power my womb bears.)
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>SHAPE: Enticing (a nominally humanoid form sculpted to mathematical perfection. I have become a living work of art, an impossibility of beauty made even more radiant by my glorious purpose.)
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>CHEST: Gifted (elegant, shapely breasts that may well have their own gravitational field for how irresistibly they draw the eye)

>INFLUENCES:
-Pseudodevascent (combined with Xenosubstantial and Quasicosmic, see below)
-Xenosubstantial (combined with Pseudodevascent and Quasicosmic, see below)
-Quasicosmic (My flesh shall be as a human-shaped patch of purest night, replete with stars, comets, galaxies, and other such cosmic treasures. The bejeweled sky that is my once-mortal form shifts with my every movement, bringing new constellations and nebulae into view with every passing moment.)
-Multiplexive (my humanity is discarded in service to Teiatat, but has been replaced with the stuff of divinity. Two more brains, four arms, six fingers on each hand, six toes on each foot, and redundant vital organs like hearts and lungs as a safety measure.)
-Metapsychological x3 (as my body is perfected, so too is my mind. Mortal concerns seem strange to me, their disharmonious interactions as alien to me as I surely appear unto them.)
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>>52164829
>FACE:
-Seductive Visage (my lips are plush and inviting, my eyes twinkle and dance like distant stars, and my every expression is designed to entice lovers with the promise of unimaginable celestial bliss)
-Chakra Eye (vertical eyelids)
-Elder Gaze (my irises and pupils are no longer remotely human, instead taking the form of shifting, impossible geometric patterns that seem to continue ever deeper into infinity)
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>FLOURISHES:
-Ouroboros Metabolism (the elemental building blocks of life were once forged in the hearts of stars--why, then, should I be limited by such a trivial thing as sustenance?)
-Lactation (a texture and consistency as smooth as the comforting embrace of night, with a taste describable only as "distilled power")
==> Bountiful (as my brood begins to outnumber the very stars in heaven, so too should my motherly offerings grow to match.)
==> Nurturing (that my children and devoted servants may glorify Teiatat with their strength and beauty)
==> Addictive (the barest taste of my supernal majesty is enough to enthrall the mind and ensnare the senses)
==> Aphrodisiac (to partake of my bounty is to experience wonder and passion melding seamlessly into a single, rapturous *need*)
==> Dependent (my doting children and faithful servants will have all acquired a burning need for my gifts. What sort of mother would I be were I to deny them?)
-Commanding Mien (My numinous gaze burns with the light of a thousand supernovae, searing the very minds of those who dare meet it.)
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===PROGENERATION===

-Strategy: Brooding (Multitudinous ==> Monarch)
Oh, my precious children. So powerful, so beautiful, and so very, very many. They shall be as an unstoppable tide, an endless legion with me at their heart, my seraphic Voice synchronizing their every action in perfect harmony.
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>>52164859
===DOWRY===

TREASURE:
-Title (as is befitting my lofty station)
-Nuptial Torc (a vantablack band of darkest void, a mark of my devotion to Teiatat)
-Lavender Grimoire (my children shall be myriad reflections of my metaphysical might)
-Crimson Manual (Bajiquan and Piguaquan, blended together and enhanced by the untold power of my divine spouse)
-Primordial Woad (when the earth and stars combine their strength, nothing may stand in their way)
-Abyssal Ink (the warping constellations that adorn my flesh align to better channel the cosmic power borne within me)
-Celestial Charms (earthly stars to accentuate my heavenly ones)
-Argent Spark ==> Argent Blaze (my arcane power is great indeed, but still nothing compared to the barest breath of Teiatat)
-Seductive Array (gauzy, silken courtesan garb which clings to every sensuous curve and yet does nothing to obscure my glorious form)
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BONDS:
-Sensual Ritualists (even with my prodigious knowledge of the ways of Teiatat-in-Lavender, their wealth of experience in the matter has proven endlessly useful)
-Drudge Throng (I appreciate their enthusiasm and candor, and for all their imperfections, I still love them. Indeed, their periodic outbursts of initiative are occasionally insightful and invariably hilarious.)
-The Barred One ==> Conjugal Visits (in service of my spouse, I gladly go into the Barred One's lustful embrace. Perhaps one day I will even learn to enjoy its attentions.)
-Prime Mate x2 (the stars are, as mentioned, the celestial furnaces in which the very molecules that allow for life were forged. My connection thereto has translated into allowing me to become the living embodiment of this concept.)
+Thronemaiden (free, see below)
-The Eunuch ==> Sweetened Pot (his secret knowledge and promises of unique opportunity are worth this paltry price, especially if included is such a singularly worshipful servant.)
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>>52164771
>space refugee is a fucking powerhouse that never dies out
I knew this whole post was bullshit but this sealed the deal.
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>>52164898
URGES:
-Mating Dance x2 (it is the nature of the night sky to entrance those who look upon it, is it not? Extended logically, my impossible allure and otherworldly grace are the only possible conclusions.)
-Nightmare Cycle (why would I ever go any significant length of time without a womb full of my lovely eggs?)
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STIGMATA:
-Stigma of the Rising Star (a somewhat more literal Stigma than was originally anticipated, but one that is earned nonetheless.)
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AMBITION:
-Castellan of the Cosmos ==> Gardener of Devotion (Teiatat holds a great many worlds in His thrall, thanks in part to His loyal subjects. I see no better way to repay my love His kindness than by seducing yet more civilizations to sing His praises.)
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+++FINAL+++
PEDIGREE: 8
STATUS: 8
ALLURE: 8

While Yulia was unable to afford attending university to make a career of studying the stars, the arrival of the Eunuch presented a unique opportunity for both of them: to bind a living mind to the fabric of creation itself. Becoming one with the Universe she so dearly loved, Teiatat's blessing allowed Yulia to transcend her mortal bonds. Now a cosmic being of profound power in her own right, she quickly proved herself a brilliant and most worthy Bride. Her children are numerous beyond counting and as individually mighty as the heroes of old--though there are many who envy Yulia's position and glory, there exist remarkably few with the strength or nerve to openly stand against her. For now, Our Lady of the Resplendent Heavens nests contentedly upon her throne, quietly raising her ever-expanding brood and spreading the generous blessings of Teiatat to all who desire them.
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>>52164692
I need my villains though. Make sure there is shit that isn't fucking boring, is a little ambiguous and uses fluff/style to communicate the power/strength, and come up with some shit on your own.
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>>52164771
>Space Refugee is still super popular I swear.
No it fucking isn't you lying shit.
If anything Travellers CYOA is STILL getting consistent builds for it and lasted a goddamn MONTH.

I don't know about you but multipage CYOA's are still well liked and apprecieted.

Popularity of that shitty femdom cyoa is because the flavor of the week is fucking femdom and it's single page. I've seen brilliant single page CYOA's go completely unnoticed but some of the multi-page cyoa's get a bunch of fucking attention.
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>>>/d/7305763
Refractory period is the best part about sex. The moment you are spent, alone, weak and fatigued yet you feel at ease, as if listening to the very heartbeat of the Universe.
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>>52163378
>I leave tons of references and easter eggs in all of my CYOAs, but I have never seen anyone mentioning any them.

I think people just assumed that you were only doing that for a lack of ideas.
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>>52164435
what code? when i changed the colors and saturation/levels/hues etc I didn't see any code at all.
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>>52164829
Cool.
I would give you more verbose praise, but I am very drunk. I get formal and concise when I am drunk. If this is around tomorrow, I may expand my praise and critique in a better format. For now, good night.
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>>52151313
>>52151629

Where are the homosexual husbando options that you promised?
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Still waiting for that Space Janitor CYOA with bated breath and hardened genitals.
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>>52164787
Well, go on. Post the rest.
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>>52165288
its in the box's. change the blank box color. if you're still having problems, i'll just post it with all the writing revealed.
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>>52165442
Still working on it. I meant next sunday anyhow.
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>>52165451
Yeah I changed the whole page while concentrating/zooming in on the boxes and didn't see crap. I'll give it another go...
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>>52154784
Cynthia
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>>52165451
OK just messed with hue/sat/contrast/brightness and inverted the colors too and can't get anything but blurry smears to show up in the blank parts of those boxes. You may have made the contrast too subtle.

Anyone else able to get them to show up?
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>>52154784
Cynthia.
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>>52161336
Warden

Modern Prison -5
High Tech Prison -10
Medieval Prison -10
Magical Prison -10
Large -30
Male Prison -5
(10)T.A.Y.7W3375 -10 Amy Armstrong, Sister Purity

Classic Uniform
School Uniform(Non Punished Female) -5
Power Suppression Collar -10

Elite Guards -10
Armory -5
Prison Gym -5
Rapey Guards -10
Safe Room -10
Surveillance Room -10
Assistant -5
Additional Vice Warden 2 -40
Warden's Office -10
Favorite Pet -10
D.T.F -10
Special Request -15
Elite Body Guard -15

Word of the Day -10
Fighting -15
Orgasm Limit 1
Minimum Orgasm 1 -10

Upgraded Slave Training -15
Upgraded Shameful Outfit (Bikini) -10
Upgraded Gender Bending -15

If someone breaks a rule while they are still a man they get TG'd for 4 months, which becomes permanent if they get punished again in the four months. As noted above this will require them to wear the schoolgirl uniform

If they get punished after being permanently changed, then they they will be forced to wear the bikini uniform for 4 months. And if they get punished while wearing the bikini uniform it's off to slave training.

If they get punished while in slave training then they get the bikini punishment if it's worn off, or whichever one is going to wear off sooner renewed

The combination of choices I've made will get people TG'd as quickly as possible, and then be perpetually stuck in bikinis and slave training.

And then I'll be free to take the best looking one as my pet while I live in the lap of luxury.
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>>52156245
yes hello I made that
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>>52164046
>Powers
Yellow, Silver, Light Grey
>Waifu
Auburn
>World
Light Grey
>Items
Light Grey, Bronze

>>52164329
Thank god I didn't free that beastly mystery entity.
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>>52154784
Kora
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>>52165415
That's a different anon doing that, I'm over here still writing it. Haven't even got to the pictures yet. Don't worry anon, there will be boys.
Just not these boys.
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>>52166095
5, easily.
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>>52154784
cassandra plsplspls
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>>52165415
If I ever created a CYOA I would put in some homofus and I would ask for input on what they should be like.
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>>52166137
>not 9
Shit taste.
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>>52164894
Wait What?! I did not sign up for this, and while I'm sure you're a wonderful goddess what with the the torture and Sablepits and all, I'm going to need some background, and the names of whatever fucks sacrificed me.
>Vengeance
When I find those chucklefucks and the way they got me outta my home world, there will be hell to pay.
>Sword, Shield, Bows
Classic, mass produced, simple and gets the job done.
>Unflinching, Tactician
Right up my alley. Wait what's this about etching ru-
>Chastity Rune
OW FUCK! God Dammit Woman!
>Efficiency, Watcher
Will make life easier, fuck that stings. Hey are these going to get my lynched or something?
>Sword of Vampire and Avatar-Slayer
>Bow of Scope and Barbs, really wish I could get a bow of resurrective explosion
>Shield of Barrier and Repulsor
Okay. yea that's pretty useful, you can have a kiss.
>Armor of Unhindered, Supporting, Blood and Guts
Okay, make that two kisses cause that will be very useful.
>Amorphous Form
>Regeneration 3, Toughness 3, Strength 2, Speed 3, Raw Material 3
Well that's usefu- Wait soul joining? Being one? Can I see the fine print please?
>Totem of Healing and Warding
>Cataclysm of Acidic Harm
Ooh that's nifty, and the totem looks kinda cool.
>Marching Mercenaries, Band of Friendship and Fellows
Wait hold up, purged completely? That's kinda not what I signed up for earlier when we were talking. And this whole world war thing is kinda not cool.
>The Battlemage, The Summoner
Monorama and Jacques are going to be good buds, we're going to trade all the notes on our magic, especially her summoning. Loves me some summoning.
>The Giantess, The Fairy
We're equal opportunity ass-kicking here
>The Kings Daughter, The Atoning Knight
And now we're getting political, but the good kind. Maybe when I'm done they'll be able to pick up the momentum and carry it all forward.
I still really want to her the cliff notes on the whole Prince and Princesses of dark evil things and where I come in though.
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>>52156086
>mfw my character isn't in this
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>>52166258
Normally I would go for an ojii-chan, but that guy has such a backpfeifengesicht...
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>>52166252
>the realistic jeans physics on the middle left

I never knew I had this fetish
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>>52166294
>H-heh, I'm not autistic like th-those other guys!
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>>52165835
looks like you're behind 50 waffle chunks.
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>>52166095
4 because he don't give a fuck.
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>>52166252
For easy modo, just look at a dere chart and reverse the genders. We like the same shit.
Always include
>The glasses guy who wants nothing do with you but has this cool allure that draws you in
>The slutty pretty boy who turns pure just for you
>The pure boy who's actually a slut
>The rapist that induces Stockholm
>The Project aka the broken guy who you can fix with your pure love. It never works.
>Onii-chan
>The father figure for the "daddy" fags
>Obligatory trap for everyone
>The hot blooded sports guy who's focused more on sports than you
>the otaku
>The one with the fangs and a biting fetish
>you
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>>52166095
Who the fuck brings a book into a sauna? All that hot steam is just going to dampen and ruin the pages.
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>>52166463
surprisingly pretty often
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>>52166463
That's why you put it in a plastic baggy.
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>>52166453
Forgot to add the reverse trap option.
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>>52166346
You're a card, anon.

>>52166453
I'll keep that in mind for my future CYOAs.
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New thread:
>>52166527
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>>52166540
You're the second worst thread maker.
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>>52166346
Jeans are sexy.
>>52166502
So are short jean skirts.
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>>52166479
>>52166487
Yeah but actually reading the book without any protection in the sauna?

Christ why would anyone do that to their favorite book?
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>>52166463
>>52166623
It depends on the sauna, namely Finnish or Turkish. A Finnish sauna is can be relatively dry, while a Turkish sauna is also known as a steam bath for it's high humidity. I would worry more about any book glue being negatively affected by a Finnish sauna's high heat, than any water damage, just don't hold the book over the rocks when someone pours water on them.
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>>52154784
Inara
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>>52154784
Enola
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>>52166623
probably don't bring their favorites. People do it with kindles or nooks or whatever now as well.
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>>52154784
Hazel
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>>52154784
Hitlerdidnothingwrong
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>>52154784
Ilsa
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>>52154784
Ingrid
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>>52166496
faggydere isn't on there for a reason.
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>>52166579
S/he did that thread far better then you ever could. You're probably one of those lame throg faggots who think they're so funny. Only thing that's funny is watching you try to think.
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>>52167215
Throg is the worst thread maker. Try again.
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>>52167236
No shit sherlock, did you even read what I wrote? The new thread isn't a throg either.
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>>52167194
>reverse traps
>gay
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>>52161336
>>52161363
>>52161387
Super Prison CYOA:
Destiny:
>Warden (+300)
Prison Design:
>Medieval Prison (-10)
>Magical Prison (-10)
Prison Size:
>Large (-30)
Prisoner Type:
>Mixed Prison (Free)
Vice Warden:
>Moria (-10)
Prison Uniform:
>Classic Uniform (Free)
Power Negation:
>Suppression Collar (-10)
Prison Upgrades:
>Elite Guards (-10)
>Medical Facility (-5)
>Armory (-5)
>Prison Gym (-5)
>Surveillance Room (-10)
>Wardens Office (-10)
>Favorite Pet (-15)
>Mind Reader (-10)
>D.T.F. (-10)
>Elite Bodyguard x4 (-60)
Special Rules:
>Lottery 1% (-5)
>"Fighting: (-15)
Punishments:
>Public Use (-10)
>Bondage (-10)
>Bimbofication (-10)
>Rape (-10)
>Body Writing (-10)
>Monster Menagerie (-10)
>Parasites (-10)
>Glory Hole (-10)
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>>52167291
>You're probably one of those lame throg faggots

That's what you wrote. You were wrong.
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>>52167316
You just proved him right.
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>>52167335
Wow, you got me. I was just lying about throg maker being the worst because I am throg maker. Ooga booga.
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>>52164046
>>52164075
>>52164093
>>52164108
Color God CYOA:
Powers:
>White (Minor Healing Powers)
>Beige (Protection From Tragedy)
Waifus:
>Bronze (Oni Waifu)
World:
>Bronze (Muscle Girls Everywhere)
Items:
>White (Love Shot)
>Beige (Bracelets of Trauma Healing)

My plan in this world is to use my Beige Power to protect myself from any and all tragedy, meaning nobody can hurt or harm me as I define it. Use my white item on my Bronze Waifu, to make her kinder. Then use my White Power and Beige Item to heal Muscle Girls who get hurt.
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