CYOA General

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shamelessly reposting my own oc

if there's anything specific you'd like next version say

>>51549041
Change the name from plump to thicc, and them add a fifth choice, ridiculous.
Also, add a facial type choice and how they dress or act in public.

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What kind of girl would you be, /cyoa/?

>>51549080
thanks anon. will do.

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>>51549097
page 2

>>51549041
>Body Type
Muscular
>Breast Size
Average
>Hips, Butt and Thighs
Plump
>What Type of Yandere is she
Monopolizing
Attacking
Delusional

>>51549097
I used to love this cyoa but it's creator was an autistic asshole in every thread and flipped out whenever someone suggested something he didn't like.

>>51549132
He insulted your shitty fetish, huh?

>>51549132
You're damn right I'm an autistic asshole.

And don't you forget it, faggot.

>>51549160
Damn rose, fucking brutal.

>>51549160
Don't you think it's a bit early to ruin a thread with your autism? You can afford to wait until we reach 200 posts can't you?

>>51549153
What? No, he just had a spaz attack every 5 seconds. I never spoke to him.

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>>51549204
>>51549188
>>51549160
>>51549132

>>51549204
Where the fuck do you think you are?

/cyoag/ thrives on autism.

>>51549041
Blowjobs....can't go wrong with blowjobs...

>>51549160
Sadly you're not as bad as SDA.

>>51549333
Can't see how I'd implement that.

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>>51549360

>>51549358
What's her favorite sexual act that she performs for you or something.

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>>51549370

>>51549360
MmmMMM nanomachine magical waifus. I actually really like this one done by GiftedAnon. Goes great with the Gifted Child one too. Wish he'd make more.

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>>51549394

>>51549358
You could add in a choice of some perks. Like, she could be rich or a genius or have no gag reflex.

>>51549041
Could you add drawbacks and make "Memelord" a drawback? That makes her constantly use memes even when it is not fitting. Thank you.

>>51549360
Base: Nanomachines, son!
Appearance: Athletic
Organization: The Law

Abilities:
Self Healing 2 (Free)
Strength 1
Agility 2
Endurance 2
Durability 2
Enhanced Senses 1
Stealth 1
Reflexes 3
Stylish 3
Social Enhancer 1
Weapon Mastery 2 (Submachine Guns)
Focus 2
Analysis 2
Directed Energy Attack 3
Nanite Transfer 3

Perks:
Armor (Free)
Charisma
Squad
Training
Transport (APC)

Drawbacks:
Valuable

Allies:
Samuel Mason
Ryan Elmore
Big Mike
Max

Enemies:
Fiona Dawley
John York
Prototype

>>51549041
I would recommend maybe trying to find a background that's more than just a single color, or at least separate the different sections out a little more distinctly because right now they sort of blend together.

I'd also order the 'body type' category more, since right now it doesn't really follow a progression of sizes, they're just stuck together in a random order.

Other than that, I think a personality type would be good (i.e. tom boy, girly girl, regal, etc.), the type of clothing she dresses in, and then maybe miscellaneous features, with a positive and negative section, where for every positive you take, you also have to take a negative (so for example plump lips could be a positive, hates you watching anime could be a negative, etc.). They're just a few rough ideas off the top of my head.

>>51549041
>>51549080
I agree with this anon. Also, I'd change the plump image, since it isn't really the best ass shot because of the bunny tail thing in the way.

>>51549041
>Curvy
>Ridiculous
>Plump
>Delusional, Harmless, Worshipping
>>51549554
Yeah drawbacks would be nice, being able to take a second body like Athletic or Olita or a fourth type of yandere would be good.

>>51549041
I can never choose between smol girls and bombshells

>>51549704
>I would recommend maybe trying to find a background that's more than just a single color, or at least separate the different sections out a little more distinctly because right now they sort of blend together

I will if I can find one? If you have a background in mind, please post it, I couldn't find much online.

>Other than that, I think a personality type would be good (i.e. tom boy, girly girl, regal, etc.), the type of clothing she dresses in, and then maybe miscellaneous features, with a positive and negative section, where for every positive you take, you also have to take a negative (so for example plump lips could be a positive, hates you watching anime could be a negative, etc.). They're just a few rough ideas off the top of my head.
You basically read my mind, this is what I'm adding anyways, don't worry.

>>51549722
>or a fourth type of yandere would be good.
The problem anon is it means you're literally taking half of what's presented, if there were more types I'd be all for it,

>>51549704
>>51549765
Well it doesn't necessarily need to be a background. Take this >>51549097 one as an example of how you can still use one color for the background, but make it look a little more dynamic. I think having a special background is the ideal, but if nothing suits, the way that TG order form does it is a close second.

>>51549041
>Average
>Small
>Firm
>Worshipping

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>>51549765
Maybe a checkerboard background?

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>>51549097
A new life, huh? Or, well. It won't be new to me once I'm done.

>Instant Girl (1 hour)
>Plushy
>Outrageous (150)
>Massive (140)
>Built To Last (130)
>Stand Tall (125)
>Dual-Classing (115)
>Equals Only (105)
>Powerful
>Terminus Est (85)
>Prime Time (75)
>Watashi (65), Butterfly (55)
>Feeling Fresh (45), Menstrual Cancel (30), Birth Control (15), Hair Affair (10), Flawless Skin (0), Love Life Link (-15), Performa (-30), Tasty Beverage (-40), Spark Touch (-65)

>>51549122
>Lightweight (-50), Invert Commando (-30), Dat Rack (-20), Roll The Dice 2 (-10), Headlights (0), Helpless (15), Mixed Signals 1 (25)

>Magitech Body Wash (10), Rubber Constitution (0)

I wonder how I'll end up leaning. Will I end up taking interest in the friends I have now? As far as anyone will know, including me, I was always a girl - one who is very soft to hug and likes showing off her bust for whatever reason. Maybe I've always been proud of it?

But if I still have all the friends I do in this life, and I've always been this way to them, can I really say that I'm lonely and just want to be loved?

And then there's the question of what I'll do when I'm alone. Will I still be terrible at Overwatch? Will I still not remember my Minecraft password? Will I still fail miserably at Dark Souls? Will I still get every Pokemon game as soon as possible?

And will I still fantasize about being turned into a mannequin or statue or portrait, aware of and fulfilled by the eyes falling on me? Will I admit these things to more people or fewer?

Will I still enjoy cosplay? History? Cheesesteak? CYOA's? Will I still play tabletop? I didn't change my interests, but did my new life ever have them?

Will I sometimes end up feeling iike something's not quite right?

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found these a few months ago, has it ever been finished?

>>51549838
yes

>>51549765
I'd go for a bit darker of a pink, one that gets more shadowy in the center. With like two bright white strips going downward fairly horizontally in the beginning and end. I'd look up the pokemon trainer card backgrounds for inspiration.

the fact that every single author brushes off or insults people who criticize or insults them just proves their own arrogance and self-doubt

>>51549869
>every single author
Nice try

>>51549041
Loli
Small chest
Plump butt, for those curvey sexy hips
Dependant, Harmless, Worshipping.

Makes for the perfect little loli toy. Hard working, sweet, considerate, and can being manhandled a little.

>>51549866
>darker pink
Trust me man you don't wanna go darker. It looks 5x more tacky. Pastel colours are the nicest looking.

>>51549041
Lolita
Flat
Plump
Dependent, harmless, worshiping

I'm not even particularly dominant, those 3 types just seem to most raise the chance of being able to live a happy life together.

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>>51549890

>>51549041
Maybe some longer descriptions? Right now a lot of them feel like placeholders because they're so short.

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>>51549838
>>51549852
Here's the finished version.

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>>51549925

>>51549921
Anything in particular you'd like to be longer? (not insulting, i'm just not too sure what to add)

>>51549869
Stupid criticism will get stupid replies. Thoughtful criticism, on the other hand, is helpful.

But some of you think your stupid suggestions are thoughtful; I'm not surprised with the nature of this place. Getting angry that someone doesn't want to implement your fucking futa option isn't thoughtful criticism.

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>>51549971
It's an 'SDA tries to justify their insecurity' episode

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>>51550002
Just remember that people will always treat their feedback as "constructive criticism". Even if it's retarded.

Forgive us humble authors if we call you autistic for your suggestions.

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>>51550018
I'm not involved in that, I'm just here to mock you, you pathetic little man.

>>51550050
>man
SDA is a cute little lesbian. Get your facts straight.

>>51549971
SDA, you never respond well to any criticism. By your own logic that means everyone other than you is stupid. That kinda just proves that anon right, at least about you.

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>>51550018
I'm not involved in that, I'm just here to mock you, you pathetic little lesbian.

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>>51550050
That you feel the need to trash talk me shows your hypocrisy.

>>51550078
When the "criticism" is this >>51550087 >>51550050 I'm just going to shitpost.

I don't blame you for mixing up my shitposting with my actual CYOA discussions, though.

>>51550070

>SDA is a cute little lesbian. Get your facts straight.

Stop with your gay headcannon anon, SDA is a cute girl who will have my children

>>51550088
I'm trash talking, in the sense I'm talking to trash.

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>>51550088
nice tripdubs author-kun

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>>51550108
That's no way to talk to your superior, though.

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>>51550018
I asked >>51549041 for a memelord drawback knowing full well that it is retarded and not constructive but he was a good sport.

But I'm fine if you ever call me autistic because I love you and my dream is that, someday, instead of you posting smug anime girls, you will post genuinely happy anime girls because that is how you feel.

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>>51550098
This is why everyone hates you, SDA. No sense of humour.

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>>51550123
what a fucking weak ass response


your fake smugness now that you realise you're being baited is depressing

>>51549953
I think that quite a lot of them could probably be expanded.

So for example with athletic, the description is kind of boring. It should say something like; toned muscles with just a faint outline of abs when she stretches just right. If you challenge her to an arm wrestling match you might still win, but it won't be easy.

Just stuff that gives a little more detail about what she looks like (as in, pretend the image doesn't exist, and then write the description, instead of just relying on the picture to impart all the information you'll need). Plus with a little bit more, it makes each option clearer and more enticing to read, instead of leaving it all up to the reader's imagination.

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[17 Replies since a CYOA was posted]

>>51550149
Thanks anon. I love these responses, really push me to add to it!

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>>51550133
>>51550146
Everyone loves me, though.

>>51550129
Fair enough.

I don't know what to say about the happy anime girl thing, though.

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>>51549916

>>51550179
No problem. If you want to give a shot at one now, I'm happy to look at it while I'm still here.

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>>51550172
[My post does not have a cyoa]

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>>51550172
>posting cyoas in /cyoag/
What are you gay?

>>51550172
all i got is newbie, never respoted shit anon. it sucks.

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>>51550193
>everyone loves me though

You have a small group of fangirls in the same manner Ted Bundy did.

>>51550202
Thanks anon, but I really should be asleep now. it's 3am in the uk.

>>51550268
Alright. I'll try to keep an eye out for later versions, but I'm not normally on at this time so we'll see how we go.

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>>51550253
I think it's more of a case that people don't realize they love me yet.

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It's hip to ____ bees

Friends. I think we might have a problem. Its friday night and im sitting here doing cyoa imagining a different life and a perfect lover.

I think i'm going to get dressed up and go to a bar. I dont know. anything but more of this.

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>>51550325
Imma have to rate you 6/10.

Bretty gud authorfu, but your presentation needs work.

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>>51550395

>>51550172
>17 posts

What. That's barely any. I've seen like 400 posts without one.

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>>51550413

>>51550213
>10+
>Cousin
>First name in both places
>Friendly and Lustful
>Tomboy, Mature, Lewd, Nurturing, Kind, Submissive +Clingy, Popular
>Sleeping, Bathing, Kissing
>Indoors, Local Pool, Theatres
>Shorter
>Regular
>Cute
>Thick
>Scrawny
>Fair
>Unladylike
>To be with you
>Catfight, Bullying
>Striped
>Plump lips, Good Smile, Thick Eyebrows
>Twins
Same thing for the twin really. Try and create a little harem with her twin, bully, and multiple friends.

>>51550397
I envy your energy.

I honestly never thought I'd see the day when I'm content with being alone on a Friday night while pondering existentialism. At least I can work on CYOAs.

>>51550397
Best of luck to you! I'm going to work...

>>51550213
10 + years.
Adopted. I mean 10+ years is a big gap after all.
Classic Oniichan in public, first name in private. We're not related by blood after all.
Protective, Lustful. Got to protect your imouto, and well lustful just seems like a good way to make her behave.
Kind, Submissive, Lewd, Genki, Genius, Tomboy. Really I just want to see the embarrassed and fun reactions of having a tomboy be all girly and submissive for me in private.
Head patting, Nibbling, Sleeping. Sounds like she'd make a nice hug pillow.
Hangout Indoors, Outdoors, and the Mall. Basically just hanging out wherever, with trips to see my cute little tomboy forced into skirts and dresses.
Height: Shorter
Breasts: Regular
Face: Cute
Butt: Thick
Physique: Somewhere between scrawny and athletic so I'll just say Normal(ish)
Skin: Fair. Gets paler in the winters, and can get a cute tan in the summer.
Clothes: Unladylike. Unless I force her to change. I know she enjoys frilly and tiny things secretly.
Desire: To be with you and to fuck you silly. Because of course she does. She's adopted and living in such close quarters.

Friends: Who needs those?

Drawbacks: Nympho
Panties: Nothing. This is exactly why I make her wear skirts for me so often.
Details: Plump lips
Bizarre details: Twins. Identical twins in fact. Only difference is instead of tomboy, she's more elegant girly. And instead of unladylike clothing, she's more fashionable.

>>51550397

You gonna get roofied and butt raped

>>51550397
Bars are loud and alcohol tastes meh and makes my stomach feel icky. You should stay here and talk instead.

>>51550512
You're a horrible person for telling people to be lonely and depressed forever.

>>51549360
>Nanomachines
>Athletic
>Renegades

>Agility 3 (22)/Strength 3 (19)/Endurance 3 (16)/Durability 3 (13)/Enhanced Senses 3 (10)/Reflexes 3 (7)/Immunity 3 (4)/Self Healing 3 (3)/Uplink 3 (0)/Infection 3 (-3)/Remote Viewing 3 (-6)/Focus 3 (-9)

>Defector (free)/Prime Subject/Expert/Training

>Uncanny (-6)/Traitor (-3)/Valuable (0)

>Lindsey Reyes/"Satan"/Isabelle Hart (Defector)/Yukio Kataoka

>Hannah Caldwell (Traitor)/Corrine Devoe

>>51550397
Good luck, but if you get run over don't come crying to me. Well, you'll be dead so you couldn't do that anyway, but now you can't say I didn't warn you this might happen.

>>51550555
Consequently, going to a bar alone isn't really fun either.

As is getting drunk alone.

>>51550555
I dunno about you or him, but I've never FOUND friendship or a good woman at a fucking bar. If you have good friends you'll have a good time at a bar. Otherwise you'll just be a sad, lonely, and now DRUNK fuck. Nothing will improve or change for you.

>>51550578
at least you're getting drunk at a social setting

>>51550397
Ah the secret is to try to make your fantasies a reality.

Quite difficult but fun.

>>51550600
Whoever told you a bar is a good place to meet new people lied. Bars are a hangout with friends you already had.

>>51550600
Getting drunk at a bar alone is arguably as depressing if not more so than getting drunk alone at home. Getting used to that just leads to alcoholism instead of actually being social.

>>51550555
Well I'm not at a bar and I'm not lonely and depressed. Ive got all of you after all.

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>>51550555
You shouldn't be surprised, anon. Misery loves company, after all, and >>51550512 certainly would like to keep >>51550397 's company.

As for me, well, I doubt it'll go any way but poorly, but it's not like I'll tell him not to do it.

>>51550665
So you're even worse off?

>>51550671
Aw you beat me to the punchline. But on a more serious note, bars kinda suck and alcohol also kinda sucks. Really better to hang out at home at night and maybe go take a hike or fishing or something during the day instead. Drugs and alcohol are bad mkay.

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>tfw Highlander hasn't posted their cyoas yet and you're still waiting.
>tfw Italics hasn't poster their cyoas yet and you're still waiting.

How does one survive the wait?

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>>51550397
Smoke a bowl. You'll still be doing depressing stuff, but it will at least feel way better.

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>>51550627
Every proper city has at least two bars that are nice to meet people. Usually the smaller and quieter ones.

>>51550725
By having other hobbies.

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>>51550725
Get a life.

>>51550748
>telling a skeleton to get a life
Is this racism

>>51549360
Does anyone know what AI is supposed to give you?

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Hot off the press's for you anons.

>>51550746
>can't choose between the The Cat's Meow or The Sparkling Newt

Aw.

>>51550788
This doesn't actually help me.

I still have all my friends from high school, BUT the green triangle doesn't help me because that thing I need to complete is impossible and the oval doesn't help me because the stuff I want from CYOA's is also literally impossible.

>>51550788
>No square.

I'm disappointed.

>>51549041
Curvy
Ridiculous
Plump
Dependant
Harmless
Worshipping

awww yisss

>>51550788
like biting into a fresh pizza pocket and burning your tongue on the melted cheese and sauce and finding out there's no pepperoni

>>51550823
bah, merely formalities, shoot for the stars and hit the moon and shoot again and again.

Example, cyoa, you want power? Learn science or a trade or skill, power's can be obtained from shooting fire from hands, to creating new things, to etc etc.

Want to be a woman? Get as close as possible and take the oval, become scientist, work i nthe industry (i don't know which one, I'm not a scientist) for a few decades, dream becomes true one day. (or at least closer)

Impossibility is what the 19th century would have said to the 20th and 21st.

>>51550870
personal example of me taking the oval. I make cyoa's, disappear, no more cyoa's. ITs a fun hobby but I leave, why? Because I want a new world.

I bet on VR. So I need to go to college for 4 (maybe 8 years) for engineering to help create it.

So i need a job that pays well.

months later, I have a job that pays well and am going to college in the fall. In a decade, maybe I'll be one step closer to my new world.

Some things are impossible, I'll never see my dead family members again or make up for how I hurt my family, but I can make amends and respect the dead's memory. I can get as close as possible.

Patience and planning are all you need. Doing nothing different will get you no where unless what your doing is making progress.

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>>51549360
Origin: Innate

Appearance: Peak Human

Faction: The Agency

Abilities:
Strength 3
Agility 2
Endurance 2
Durability 3
Enhanced Senses 1
Reflexes 2
Immunity 2
Self Healing 3
Unarmed Mastery 3
Mental 3
Focus 2
Inheritable 1
Analysis 3
Overcharge 1

Perks:
Safehouse
Training
Expert
Authority
Identity (Free)

Drawbacks:
Valuable
Traitor

Allies:
Lindsey Reyes
Aaron Moore

Foes:
Alex Keller (Traitor)
The Prototype

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>>51549360

ALL MIGHT

>ORIGIN
Innate

>APPEARANCE
Peak Human

>FACTION
Military

>ABILITIES (25)
Strength 3 (22)
Agility 3 (19)
Endurance 3 (16)
Durability 3 (13)
Reflexes 2 (11)
Unarmed Mastery 2 (9)
Focus 3 (6)
Overcharge 3 (3)
Passion 3 (0)
(+6)
Stylish 1 (5)
Self Healing 2 (3)
Mental 1 (2)
Analysis 2 (0)

>PERKS
Reputation
Identity (BONUS #1)
Training (MILITARY)
Defector
Charisma

>DRAWBACKS
Traitor
Valuable

>ALLIES
Samuel Mason
Lindsey Reyes (BONUS #2)
Hannah Caldwell
Olivia Blake (BONUS #3)
Unknown (DEFECTOR)

>FOES
The Prototype
John York
Bubbles
Alex Keller (TRAITOR)

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>>51548998
Can't even link right.

Last Thread >>51532414

>>51549360
>>51549370
>>51549394
>Origin
Nanomachines
>Appearance
Average
>Faction
The Law

>Abilities
Self Healing (2) [Free]
Endurance (2) [Free}
Agility (3)
Strength (3)
Durability (3)
Mental (3)
Shapeshifting (2)
Remote Viewing (3)
Uplink (3)
Focus (1)
Nanite Transfer (1)
Mind Control (3)

>Perks
Charisma
Celebrity
Signing Bonus
Armor [Free]

>Allies
Lindsey Reyes
Jim Boyce
Max [from Charisma perk]
Safehouse [Addition]
Prime Subject [Addition]

>Foes
Corrine Devoe
Bubbles

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>>51550779
that's an old version, dunno why someone's posting that.

>>51550788
Wow you're alive.

>>51551477
oh no i missed a number. good thing someone like you caught it huh?

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Christ, did I accidentally walk into an /aco/ cyoa thread?

>>51550253
>>51550213
>>51549838
>>51549852
>>51549925
>>51549939
>>51549097
>>51549122
>>51549041

...

You people need to masturbate before posting...

Here, have some spooks to sober you up...

>>51551527
That the only page with a difference?

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>>51551587
Someone has to keep an eye on things. Can't let these threads get any worse now, can we?

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>>51551616
No idea. Guess I can post the others.

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>>51551694

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>>51551717
There you go

>>51551694
>>51551717
>>51551741
Cheers.

>>51549971
I've never asked you or anyone else to implement something I wanted in a CYOA. Most of the time i'm just lurking or posting builds on CYOAs that are long enough to spend time on. It just happens that it's incredibly easy to tell how uptight some authors are with their work and who they portray themselves as, you being the FIRST one to come to mind.

>>51550098
As if there is any difference you fucking nigger hahahahahaha

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>>51549041
You should separate 'type' into three categories:
>dependant, harmless, worshipping
>stalking monopolizing, delusional
>eliminating, attacking, isolating
and then make us pick one from each. Otherwise everyone's just going to be boring and pick the first three.

>>51550193
Got any other Cyoas mah dude

>>51551694
>>51551717
>>51551741
Yeah, I see some changes compared to the older copies of these pages I had. Some grammar mistakes and clarification on some things, like Uncanny not being by-passable by Shapeshifting.

>>51550018
To be perfectly fair, when you haven't posted OC in a while you tend to only reply to the trolls and dramafags.

You were very constructive when Battlemage 2.0 was released, but you've slide into just responding to idiots since.

>>51551905
Ok good to know. I don't have the pages you posted so was surprised that AI wasn't defined, when I remember it was.

>>51552104
>slide into just responding to idiots since.
>since.
The fuck have you been?
SDA seems to be using shitposting as a way to manage anon expectations and her own ego. Because of it, she's just another shitposting namefag and not some infallible OC creator with her own personal SDA defense force. Also, she's been doing it for a while now.

>>51551667
You're the hero that cyoag needs.

What unfinished wips do you someday wish would be posted?

>>51552104
>only reply to the trolls and dramafags
That's all that's here, though. Ala >>51551763

They aren't even creative anymore. My sustainable has become stale.

To be fair, there's going to be nothing here until next end-of-year. The next wave of OC is likely going to be late spring or summer, but until then, we're going to be starved.

>>51552355
You mean finished?

>>51549041
if you're going to include lots of body type descriptions that specifically say that they aren't fat, you should include a "fat" option

>>51549358
Your mouth, my dick.
It's very hard.

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>>51552473

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do you guys think cyoas and maladaptive daydreaming disorder have any relationship to eachother?

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>>51552514
mystery box

>>51552514
Nah

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>>51552355
This one.

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>>51551603
Just to spite you:

Creepy Girl: Seductive
Replacement
Media

Powers:
Remarkable Looks, Temptation, Infectious, Extra Sustenance: (lust), Illusion, Paralysis, Voices
Weakness: Common Material: Granite. (No real reason. had to pick something.)


A strange porn site surfaces with a bunch of videos of a succubus appearing and draining her victims dry. Rumor has it if you browse the site with a webcam or other cameras rolling, she might appear to add a new video with you as the guest star. Victims are left in a near catatonic state. Almost as if they had the soul drained out of them.


Lewd horror is best horror! Gimme more Cyoas to make fap builds out of!

>>51550746
I like barcades for that. Everyone gets slightly intoxicated and you throw Smash in the gamecube and you will make new friends in seconds as people line up to play.

>>51549041
Yandere CYOA:
Body Type:
>Muscular
Breast Size:
>Big
Hips, Butt and Thighs:
>Thick
Yandere Type:
>Dependent
>Harmless
>Worshiping

What type of cyoa players are their? I ask because I'm curious and I might have another idea for a cyoa.

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>>51552791
>all these weeaboo CYOAs
So the stereotype is true isn't it? You basement-dwellers really DO want to be the little girl, don't you?

>>51553050
No, I just want challenge and power.

>>51552791
Just post the idea. Odds are someone will want to play it.

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>>51553050
Hey man, I've only made a little girl character in one CYOA and she's a disgusting mutant.

>>51553072
I gathered that he was gonna make a CYOA about CYOA players. If so, then he should put in autistic Traveller players like myself and that other guy who have submitted like two dozen builds each.

>>51550725
Taking a part-time job as a demi-lich's guard.

That, or taking a job as a spooky prop in a Halloween store.

>>51553072
A quick choose one cyoa for when OC production is slow. The theme is something like what >>51553101 said, but with a focus on powers.

Alternitively, I can put my focus on a Feast cyoa. Will take a lot of time, though.

>>51552222
I just meant in the latest case.

>>51553050
I think the idea of being a little girl to be fucking retarded. But I don't bother attacking those anons because arguing over someone's magical realm in a wish fulfillment thread is pointless.

>>51553050
Well, when that's all I see posted, that's all I get to play. I just wish fantasy stuff came up more often. I'd even play a CYOA about being a zombie or a ghost or something.

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>>51553101
>mfw I've made so many traveler builds I can even recall half the ones I posted

>>51553171
can't even recall*

>>51553171
I feel you. The worst part is I probably have twice as many as I've submitted half finished in a google doc or as partly completed companion cards.

>>51553101
Why not also include some of the old Domain Master, Magical Realm, or Altering History players? Unless those are off-limits.

You guys remember the creepy doll, right? I wasn't hallucinating that?

>>51553171
YOOOOO!

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>>51552665

Bloody Lewd-Posters...

You do know that there are a number of boards on this site dedicated to providing people such as yourself with an outlet for their various 'urges', right?

>>51553210
>>51553196
>>51553171
So how many of us are there? And how many fucking builds have actually been submitted to Traveller? Jesus Christ.

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>>51553166
For you, anon.

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>>51553266

>>51553050
Only occasionally. You can't be the little girl all the time, or else it'll be boring.

>>51553166
Traveller has fantasy stuff in it.

>>51553215
>Power
>Blood
>Massive Manor (13)
Minions
>1 Individual (12)
>3 Strong (11)
>6 weak (10)
Powers
>Minor Telekinesis (9)
>Summoning (6)
>Compulsion (3)

>Get people on my side.
>Promise them wealth if they give me blood and do some stuff for me.
>Turn manor into bar/brewery
>Give men portion of the profits
>Compulse some people into murder
>Take body or bits of body when no one is looking
>Go to private room
>Eat the body
>Repeat until domain expands over entire world.

Easy.

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Time for one of my personal favourite cyoas.
I like it so much I made a shitty expansion to it.

>>51553255
I have made 13 builds I can remember, with three companion cards. Three of them I know have made it into the companion section (all of them the ones without companion cards lol)

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>>51553328
Mystery Box

>>51553171
>this nigga doesn't keep an archive of all the builds they've made

>>51553255
There could be more, but at the very least I've posted 99 builds.

Yes, I have a problem.

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>>51553344
Also, my shitty fan expansion. no buli pls :'3

>>51553365
I kept several, but not all of them. Also 99 builds? Damn son. We need a support group.

>>51553365
Christ almighty. I just did a quick count and I've only submitted about 25 builds with companion cards. I think if I went digging I could find 10 or so unfinished builds too.

How the fuck have you made so many?

>>51553392
Autism, probably.

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>>51551603
You want spooky? Well, I'm not sure how well I can do that, but I'll try.

>Ghost (Soul Trap)
Boo.

>Replacement
I'm always here.

>Media
Let's just say that Crunchyroll subscription might not have been a good idea. You never know what might show up under "new."

>Cult, Extra Sustenance (Apathy), Illusion, Insanity, Magical Defense, Temptation, Voices
Your will is no longer your own. Madness will consume you.

>Nocturnal, Religion
No, not the cross! It burns!

>>51553215
>Paradise
All I wanted was to make a home for myself. Won't you join me?

>Sanity
I wouldn't call my servants 'mad,' per se. They're just puppets, really, dangling on happy little strings. We're all happy together here, hm?

>Small Town (8)
It's a quiet place, and peaceful. Surely you'd love to stick around for just a little while?

>2 Swarms (6)
Oh, don't mind the puppets. They mostly clean up around the place. They couldn't leave if they wanted. But you don't want to leave, do you?

>Corruption (2), Ghost Sounds (0)
You can hear me just behind your ear, can't you? Why not give in? It'll be so much fun.

>Incorporation (-4), Easy Victim (-8)
See? They're all having fun, hm?

>Strong Victims (-3), Untouchables [the old] (-1), Untouchables [the innocent] (1)
No, no, no! Stop that! Stop resisting!

>Unseen Force (0)
There. That should keep you inside for a while.

>>51553266
Gonna have to boot this up soon, thanks.

>>51553412
I guess it's a different sort of autism. I only do builds for characters I'm really sure about. I just think about Traveller a lot.

>>51550438
I thought you had a gf dude whats up

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>>51553328
>>51553344
>>51553369
My god, I hate you so much.

>>51553444
no buli pls

>>51553392
If you make 1 build for each potential department/group, you end up with 20 builds off the bat.

Follow that with 10 builds that ended up a mixed basket with like half of them being decent.

Then 24 builds over the summer with Highlander's first main update, attempting to strike ground with build ideas I never saw. This time, only 4 of them tops were absolutely garbage.

The next 35 were after Highlander gave general ideas of things that hadn't been touched upon ever. By far the best builds I've made imo, the entire thing being so big I had to cut it up into 3-4 pdf's.

The last five were posted like two or three threads ago, since I decided to make builds more to just see what I could do, rather than what was good.

>>51553412
TL;DR. I have fun, though, so I don't care.

>>51553429
My secret is that I made a template for builds so that I don't have to read 100+ pages, instead going for an easier 30+.

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>>51553266
>Illusion/Technology/Mystic
Welcome to the Royal Museum of Arcane Wonders!

>Average Humanoid
Curating and managing the exhibits all on my lonesome is hard work, but I like to think I do a decent enough job!

>Empowerment x2 (6), Perception Prowess (5), Arena Manipulation (4), Charisma Prowess (3), Corruption (2), Enchanted Armour (1), Agility Prowess (0)

Do be careful around the more... contagious exhibits. I can contain them, but if you wander into the enclosures, that's on you.

>>51553288
>Construct, Undead, Draconic, Bestial, Demonic, Beast
>Petite, Average, Tiny, Giant, Behemoth, Colossal

>Diverse x4 (11), Sustenance (10), Evolution (9)
As you can see, we've quite the menagerie!

>Average/Undead Witch (8)
Ah, no! That's the mummy of Queen Akharalanimet the Seventh! Whatever you do, don't look into her eyes!

>Average/Construct Harem (7)
No, not the Marble Doves! They may be statues of angels but they're incredibly seductive and incredibly deranged! What do you mean, they got out!?

>Colossal/Dragon Champion (6)
YOU LET /WHAT/ OUT OF ITS CAGE!? Agh, this is why I need employees! Well, besides security.

>Average/Construct Guards (5)
Meet our security staff! These terracotta sentinels were originally meant to guard an emperor's tomb. I think they may see me as their emperor now - which would explain what I was able to do to the group you see behind them. Those fools thought they could get out without paying the admission fee!

>Average/Demonic Servants (4)
Ah, yes, the demonic maids. They're on loan from... someone. Someone I suspect is using them to spy on me.

>Giant/Beast Warriors (3)
Do not feed the hellhounds.

>Petite/Construct Witch (2)
The last time I had employees, they found her in a dilapidated mansion. Surprisingly, she came willingly. She still turned them into those dolls you see on her lap, though. Told me she can't stop herself. Creepy.

(cont.)

>>51553585
What do you mean? I have a template to, but to not have to reread the whole thing I just know most of it by heart at this point.

>>51553166
Didn't Ordion release a fantasy CYOA recently?

>>51553441
Sometimes a nigga just wants to relax. A long week calls for wanting to be isolated in comfort. It's also quarter-end so my work is full of autism.

>>51553748
I like to recheck things, just to make sure.

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>>51553739
>>51553288
>Average/Bestial Recruiters (1)
My best guess is that these girls stem from the mind of someone who really liked cats. Either that, or whoever sent the demon maids has also sent them to watch me. Either way, there always seem to be a few more of them.

>Average/Construct Engineers (0)
They maintain our security machinery and I'm assuming they just came with the facility.

>>51553313
>Large, Legendary, Protected
Yes, we do need quite a bit of space for our exhibits, but it's all worth it for the patronage!

>Treasure
Why yes, we do have many mundane and not-at-all-dangerous artifacts! Glad you asked.

>>51553288
>Average/Undead Harem (2)
I wouldn't if I were you. Don't get me wrong, they are very attractive pale black-haired ghost women, but eat the food of the dead and you will remain among the dead.

>Petite/Beast Witch (1)
Do not stare into its eyes. It controls those who look into its eyes.

>Average/Undead Priests (0)
Ah, yes, the Queen's unfortunate victims. They worship her and only her now. Also, she seems capable of granting them divine magic, which would imply that she is, in fact, a minor goddess herself.

I prefer not to think about the implications of tha - NO! NO DON'T DRINK FROM THAT FOUNTAIN YOU-

Well, then. I suppose the Marble Doves will have another among their numbers. What a life, hm?

>>51553886
For some reason I get the impression that your museum is not OSHA compliant.

>>51553902
YOU THINK!?

Don't get me wrong, the security systems are state-of-the art, but there's nothing like having containment personnel on hand.

Personnel which I've not been provided by the Crown and who have not exactly been keen to volunteer. I'm surprised I've managed to both survive, stay in business, and prevent a kingdom-wide outbreak for this long!

I think the bigwigs get a kick out of watching me squirm trying to keep this ship afloat, which is why they haven't pulled the plug yet.

>>51553739
... This is sounding less like a museum and more like an adventure map.

Dude, get yourself some good containment systems. Ain't no one gonna bring their students to a field trip in this place. Except for the Hero Academies.

>>51553978
The technology designed to keep the enclosures secure is hundreds of years more advanced than anything the kingdom has. Thousands, even!

I can barely open and close the doors in this place, and I sincerely believe the only reason I've not been fired and hanged is that, as stated, my feeble attempts at containment amuse the Crown greatly.

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>>51553050

>>51553902
>>51553978
>you are now imagining this guy putting out a desperate call to the Hero Academies for engineers capable of getting the place up and running
>you are now imagining all the 'exhibits' telling the Heroes-in-training not to ruin their "game" with the curator

>>51553050
No, I want to have adventures with cool people and fuck women with tits the size of my head

>>51549925
>mode
Easy +20
>transformation
Genie Wish +25, take two free options
>body
Scrawny +3
Petite +4
Flat Chest
Petite Bottom -1
Girly Face +1
Genitalia: Female
Exotic Eyes -4 (cloudy, you can see the iris and pupil as if glazed over, no effect on eyesight)
Inhuman -4 (angelic pale skin with a faint snowy shimmer to it)
>stats
Strength 2 -4
Intellect 3 -8
Wisdom 3 -8
>other
Neuroatypical [minor] +5 (forced third person speech)
Immune -5
Magical Girl [Free 1] (divination)
High Metabolism +3

=27

>companions
Warlock (Dad) +20, half price magic
Diva (Mom) +12, free luxury, 2> routines
Magic Hands (Caretaker) +6
Goth -1 Younger -2 Friend -3
Apprentice -1 Older Sister +4
>misc
Off the Hook -8 (Witch Disciplines)
Rule 63 -1 (Witch is now a Warlock)
In the Blood
Sibling Rivalry +6
Suggestion -6 (Goth)

=53

>>51549939
>home
Manor (Free, Luxury)
Fit For a Princes (Free, Genie)
Hotspring -6
Maid Service -12
Hobby Room -6
>school
Arcane Academy -7
Nightgown -3
Fancy Wardrobe -10
Warm Clothes -4
Lolita Dress -6
Swimwear -4
Accessories -3
Footwear -4
>food
Home Cooking -6 Family Recipe -5
Comfort Food -6
>hobbies
Literature -6
Music -6
Athletics -10 (ballet)
>misc
Extra Cash -10
Language Barrier +8
Cassandra +5
Dressing 1 +2
Dressing 2 +4
Bathtime 1 +2
Bathtime 2 +4
Chores 1 +2
Dressing 1 +2
>punishments
Time Out 1 +2
Time Out 2
Confiscate +8 +1
Spanking 1 +2+1
Enema 1 +2+1 (Should honestly be done now and then purely as a health benefit)
Public Humiliation +10
Private Humiliation +6

>backtrack
Nanny +12
Electronics: Desktop PC -10
Electrinics: Smartphone -10
Electronics: Upgrade -5
Chaperone +8

= 2

(A lot of the hobbies and clothes are way overpriced. if you take the manor many of the room options you can buy later make little sense. one size fits all makes no sense at all. why would they buy clothes that dont fit you in the first place? finding anything i want to spend my final two points on was impossible many options just are overpriced.)

Can someone post RWBY

>>51554540
Its not in any of the dropboxes in OP that i can see, So rip.

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>>51554540

>>51554589
thanks anon, needed to link it to someone.

>>51552464
No.

>>51551774
Honestly I love this idea anon. I am kinda scared it'll anger people though.

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>>51553266
>The Frozen Library
>Realm: Illusion/Glacial/Mystic
>Size: Petite
>Race: Humanoid
>Boss Perks: Magical Prowess, Perception Prowess, Phylactery, Empowerment 2x, Companion (Glacial, Giant, Undead), Arena Manipulation, Encanted Armor
>Minions: Assassin, Guards 6x, Agents 4x, Slaves 3x
>Minion Perks: Empowerment (Glacial), Sustenance, Training
>Realm Perks: Hidden, Separate

Legends say, hidden in the frozen mountains south of here, there's a portal to a Library, frozen in time. Within lies the knowledge collected from all the realms, some in plain sight, others hidden behind powerful illusions.

So long as one is cordial and respectful of the books contained within, the silent guards will leave you be. Sometimes, however, when you think you're all alone, you can't shake the feeling of a knife pressing against your back.

Occasionally, one may see a young girl, walking around with her nose in a book. Be sure not to disturb her, for she is the master of this domain: a powerful illusionist and sorcerer whose lumbering skeleton companion is not too far away.

The library cares not what you read or do with the knowledge within its walls. However, no matter what temptations the pages grant you, you must leave before the sun fully sets. For when it does, the doors to this Library will close, and you might find the illusions and cold setting in, making you a permanent resident of this frozen library.

>>51555050
Fuck 'em. Do what you think is fun.

>>51555085
I thought a little about it and I think it might limit some builds if you're only allowed one of each section, so I'm hesitant it'll be less fun.

This is the classic 'Force people out of their comfort zone' vs 'Make the cyoa have less limitations' issue.

>>51549041
Weren't you going to have height options?

>>51550213
>>51550253
Now DSA just needs to make a CYOA where you redesign yourself.

>>51555175
Allow it like, muat pick one of each, can add more in one category by adding more to the other. Makes it so that the yandere has both at least one adoring and scary attribute of sorts.

Alternatively, maybe separate the yandere aspects by order of magnitude? Like each one has a "Small quirk that's only slightly bothersome and maybe kinda cute" magnitude, and a "okay actually crossing over into genuinely unsettling and/or dangerous" magnitude. Force like, two minor quirks and one major one, and allow people to add more as long as there are at least half the number of major quirks as minor ones.

Most people that like yanderes like being focused on and somewhat doted on, so this would allow them to pick a still enjoyable mix of qualities they'd like and ones that would make even them somewhat uncomfortable.

>>51553215
>You do know that there are a number of boards on this site dedicated to providing people such as yourself with an outlet for their various 'urges', right?
To my knowledge, none of them support CYOAs (i.e. CYOA threads that are made in those boards tend to get pruned/deleted instead of archived, or there are no archives which makes tracking threads/content a pain).

>>51551527
Magical
Average
Factionless
Natural toxin 3
Immunity 3
Focus 2
Power blast 1
Directed energy attack 3
Elementalism 3
Familiar 3
Self improvement 3
Strength 1
Agility 1
Endurance 1
Durability 1
Enhanced senses 1
Reflexes 1
Expert
Valuable [Mind control 3]
Max and Satan
Unknown [Unique weapon]
The Prototype [Signing bonus]
Corrine [Armour]
Immortal [Safehouse]

>>51553266
Wasteland
Average
Humanoid
Magical, charisma, phylactery, corruption, arena manipulation, armor, weapon, final form
This is such a pain, can I get more powers instead of minions?
Expansion, legendary
Whispers, treasure, apocalypse, dying

>>51555334

Really?

I swear that I've seen cyoa threads on /aco/ or /d/...

>>51555453
They do happen occasionally, but more ofen than not they receive the treatment I previously described.

Plus nowadays there's some autist complaining about CYOAs that don't have NSFW imagery (but still have potential for lew/d/ builds) being posted, referring to them as "stolen content", and generally flinging shit which eventually results in most of the thread being arguing about the matter (which might not result in thread getting deleted by itself, but certainly doesn't help).

>>51555453
Sometimes they stay there for hours but they never die naturally. Might be because there is always that one retard who thinks its okay to post roll cyoas.

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>>51549360
Origin:
>Innate
Appearance:
>Peak Human
Faction:
>Cult
Abilities:
>Strength: 3 (25)
>Agility: 1 (24)
>Endurance: 2 (22)
>Durability: 3 (19)
>Reflexes: 1 (18)
>Immunity: 2 (16)
>Stylish: 1 (15)
>Self Healing: 3 (12)
>Predator: 2 (10)
>Power Burst: 2 (8)
>Focus: 3 (5)
>Overcharge: 3 (2)
>Self Improvement: Strength 2 (Free)
>Inheritable: 1 (1)
>Passion: 1 (0)
Perks:
>Expert
>Authority
>Prime Subject
Drawbacks:
>Traitor
Allies:
>Lindsey Reyes
>Hannah Caldwell
>Olivia Blake
Foes:
>Aaron Moore
>Fiona Dawley

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>>51549360

>INNATE
>Peak Human
>The Agency
>Durability 3, Self Healing 3, Strength 3, Reflexes 3, Agility 3, Directed Energy Attack 3, Mental 3, Natural Weapon 3, Stylish 1
>Authoritahhh, Armour, Defector (clone)
>Yuito Kataoka, Lindsay Reyes [lewd], Ryan Elmore

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>>51550729

Name: Hector Lance
Gender: Male
Species: Human, Barely
Origin: Fire and Blood; Road Warrior
Tech Understanding: High
Skills: Violence Mutability, Driver, Scavanger, Survivor, Martial Training, Unarmed Combatant, Cr1TiKaL, Emotional Sense, Frontliner, Sage, Mechanical Adept, Raider
Little Things: Falling, Scattered Mind, Goldfish Retention, Decadent, Govna’s Dolla’s x5
Armor: Upgraded Traveller Leathers
Weapons: Uta Brace Upgraded, Electrified Katar + Modification (Installed in Arm), AD Assault Rifle, RPG-17, M911
Knick Knacks: Limb Replacement (All and then two more arms), Plasma Shield, Alcohol Subscription, Venathari Headset, Enhanced Occulatus, Universal Traveller Markers, Physical Formatting
Faction: True Traveller
Covenant: Βάkχος Monthly Gathering
Companions: Lia Fal, Leo Major, Jack Churchhill, Oghuz
Home District: Irish Town

A build before I go to work.

>>51553215
15 points
Persistence (+5, 20)
Bonds
Hotel sized (-4, 16)
Compulsion (-3, 13)
Nomadic realm (-4, 9)
Hysteria (-5, 4)
Human cultist (-4, 0)

I'll take over a school. I use my power of Compulsion to ensure my students excel academically, causing them to spread all over institutions of higher learning and economy, thus breaking the strong, nurturing bonds with each other and their teachers I help them develop with Hysteria. My Cultist will be a member of school inspection board and get rid of any teacher who fails to live up to my high progressive standards.

I'll give them a little piece of Heaven and feed on their sorrow to leave, hundreds or thousands per year, while avoiding giving anyone any reason to come after me, a respectable, productive member of society. But I guess being evil, starving and most likely dead as soon as all the victims start attracting attention would be a good plan too.

>>51551603
Brute - Unlimited Endurance
Regeneration
Media
Curse, durability, infectious, temptation, illusion, unseen force, vanishing
Rare material, true name

>no be the hobo cyoa

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>>51549360
I like this one better.

>>51556356
No one wants to be the hobo, Anon.

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>>51556398

>>51556356
The skeleton gangrape CYOA is pretty much a hobo CYOA.

>>51556356
>>51556403
>>51556424
I'm pretty sure there's been at least one "be the hobo" CYOA, but it didn't interest me so I didn't save it. Might be in once of the archives listed in the pastebin, though.

>>51549041
Lolita
Flat
Nothing
Harmless

>>51550496
>I mean 10+ years is a big gap after all
My best friend is 30 and his oldest sibling is 51 so it's not unheard of. He is the runt of his family though (Jamaican family of 8).

>>51549397

I put out the Most Wanted thing a few weeks ago.

Toying with a new idea at the minute, might start today.

>>51556534
yep. my friend is 19, with the second oldest at 10. youngest at infant. 6 kids.

>>51556398
Symbiote
Healing, immortality, redundancy, second brain, spines, stimpack, shockwave, cryptobiosis, parasite, spawn
Devourer, impaler tentacles, swarm
Nerve alteration, desert rat, loyal

>>51556629
MODS

>>51556642

oh right, I forgot...

What's up with all the "worshipping, dependant, harmless" basic bitches in the thread? A yandere is not a yandere unless she's willing to kill

>>51549041

Yeah you gonna need some kind of point system or else everybody is gonna pick the same shit

Like harmless gets you 1 point (But in my opinion should be zero) while attacking should net you like 10 and you can use those powers to buy I don't fucking now, magic powers

>>51556676
>A yandere is not a yandere unless she's willing to kill

shit tastes my man, go get killed already so we don't have to listen to you.

>>51556676
>there's finally a yandere CYOA that isn't complete shit
>Anon wants it to turn into the same shit as all the other yandere CYOAs
How about no.

>>51556676

-t. someone who doesn't understand yandere

>>51556676
>wanting your yandere to kill you
Harmless doesn't say she won't kill other people, it says she won't scare or harm you. I could easily see a worshiping dependent harmless yandere murdering someone that you mentioned you don't like because she thought it would please you.

Besides yandere just means they are crazy, and in love. It covers a far larger range than the other typical dere types.

>>51556676
I feel you anon. I'm trying to get anons to leave their comfort zone but also enjoy the cyoa but it's hard.

>>51556722
>>51556746
>>51556788
>>51556899
Essentially, the system I have (sort of) decided on works like this.

It's divided into 3 sections, you pick one trait from each section. The sections are as follows

Harmless, Dependant, Worshipping
Eliminating, attacking, stalking
delusional, monopolizing, isolating

You would normally pick 1 from each HOWEVER you may transfer one if you take at least 2 negative traits in the habit section.

Is everyone happy with this system?

>>51553886
>>51553739
Damn anon, I really like that build. 10/10

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SABER CYOA WHEN?
I NEED MY SABER

>>51556996
I'm fine with it, although I wasn't any of the anons you were talking to.

>>51556996
>Is everyone happy with my arbitrary restrictions that serve no purpose?
No.

>I'm trying to get anons to leave their comfort zone
Instead of adding restrictions you could just add some bonus as incentive to make anons pick worse types.

>but also enjoy the cyoa
I can't enjoy it if I'm forced to make choices that make it impossible for her to function in society. It's a shame yandere CYOAs are always about the extremely extreme yanderes.

>>51557221
>Is everyone happy with my arbitrary restrictions that serve no purpose?
It's almost like cyoas are designed to force you to make choices

>Instead of adding restrictions you could just add some bonus as incentive to make anons pick worse types.
Please tell me what incentive you have in mind.

>I can't enjoy it if I'm forced to make choices that make it impossible for her to function in society.
You aren't forced. Did you even finish reading the post?

>>51557221
>Instead of adding restrictions you could just add some bonus as incentive to make anons pick worse types.

I support this idea.

Add a section for cosmetic doohickies and make it so that taking more extreme yanderes grants more points for more cosmetic changes

>>51556996
I won't be happy with a yandere cyoa until I get a really complicated one where you are the yandere and you select skills and traits and abilities to help you. Then it gets set in some really complex sounding setting that is ignored because that's not your senpai.

>>51557251
I am cool with this. I'll use a point system.

>>51557242
>It's almost like cyoas are designed to force you to make choices
Why would I bother if all the choices are shit?

>Please tell me what incentive you have in mind.
A bonus, of some sort, something good enough to make people feel that it's worth it.

>You aren't forced.
But you are.

>Did you even finish reading the post?
Of course, retard, and then I read the CYOA and realized she'd never be a functioning member of society anyway, so I guess we're both retarded ¯\_(ツ)_/¯.

Ideally there'd be a scale for each type so she could be a mild yandere, and not completely insane.

>>51557477
>Why would I bother if all the choices are shit?
That's just your opinion

>A bonus, of some sort, something good enough to make people feel that it's worth it.
You jjust rephrased what you said before. WHAT bonus?

>But you are.
No. You would literally just take 4 negative traits and you'd get whichever ones you wanted.

>>51549041
This needs more options.
>Average
>Average
>Average
Butt needs more options. I need bubble butt
>Harmless
You managed to write all the yandere options so they suck

>>51557577
I'd implement it if you weren't such an asshole.

>>51549041

Make it longer, add fetishes and other shit

>>51557642
I'd love to but i fear it'd look like I'm ripping off the gfd cyoa.

>>51549041
>It's literally every "Create a Waifu" CYOA with a fetish section added.
This and the recent Gentle Femdom CYOA are strictly inferior to the Magic TG Order Form posted just 2 posts under yours. At this point, all CYOAs like this can do is hopelessly tack on a fetish that you could've just fluffed.

You people are floundering. You need to figure out the next step and take it. As things are now, it's just rehashing the same content with different images and sometimes a bonus fetish.

Will there ever be original cyoa again?

>>51557713
If you don't like the cyoas people are making, why don't YOU make one?

>>51553328
>>51553369
Tell you what, I think you saved it. On reading the original I found it barely worthwhile and occasionally irritating (with one obvious best girl option).
Your expansion though actually provided a few good alternatives and the ability to pick a second friend without having to take an enemy as well, thus granting more liberty to the player. Kudos on that.

>>51553365
For short CYOAs that take only a few minutes to make builds for, I actually deliberately not keep the build I make in the hope that I can forget and have fun doing them again.
The long ones that take a lot of calculations and evaluations, that's a different story.

>>51557610
Make it not suck and I'll be nicer.

>>51557738
Everything is a remix.

>>51557750
Good thing I'm not making it for you then! That was a close one!

>>51557741
I did. Multiple times. Hell, one of mine is in the OP.

It's not really any better, but at least you can't pull the "you haven't made content!" argument. The ceiling for the "sub-genre" or whatever you want to call it exists. If you want to break through it, you have to try new shit. If you don't want to try new shit, you have to at least approach the old shit from a different angle.

>>51557741
>he thinks complainers make cyoas
Is this your first day to the threads?
>>51557713
He does sadly have a point. Too many cyoas are becoming formulaic. Unfortunately, of course, he won't do shit to change it.

>>51557789
Nigga I'm just making the cyoas I wanna make. I'm not trying to break new ground here, and if some other anons wanna add something or suggest something that;'s cool too. All content is content.

>>51557807
>>51557789
>>51557713
While I agree with these points, you have to remember that he's making OC during a drought. At the very least, this is all practice for him to make something better. Everyone's first CYOAs are likely going to lack originality and stale mechanics, give him some slack.

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>>51557832
...And I left my name on for this post.

>>51557713
In what way was the GFD CYOA inferior to magic TG order in your opinion?

>>51557832
thanks anon

I'm honestly really surprised how seriously everyone takes cyoas here

>>51557917
>how seriously everyone takes cyoas here
We don't.

But new OC is always welcome.

>>51557904
For starters, the physical options are so similar that when I first saw it, I thought it was ACTUALLY made by Rosanon.

From there, the options are basically "what's your fetish" and not actually any real customization or choices. Not to say that CYOAs like that aren't particularly fetish-driven to begin with, but usually it's better when the results are due to a combination of options, not just "I like facesitting so let's pick that".

There's no real character. No depth, in either the choices nor their outcomes. You're making a cardboard cutout to fuck. That's BORING.

>>51557865
It's okay. Shows you haven't become complete trash. There's still something that redeems you, even if it's hidden deep.

>>51557961
Well, it got like 250 (You)'s so evidently it was more than liked.

Was there a 40k CYOA? One where you could pick to be a Space Marine, Inquisitor or the like?

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>>51558008
I know there's another one besides this, but is this the one?

>>51557985
Every CYOA that isn't posted in the middle of a big CYOA's initial wave tends to get a number of (You)s.

Besides, Gentle Femdom was a fairly anticipated CYOA, and despite the fact that the content is mostly more of the same, it looks nice. Of course it's gonna get (You)s.

>>51557961
>I thought it was ACTUALLY made by Rosanon.
strong neg. gfd doesn't look bad

>>51558044
That's all well and good, but it hardly takes away from the fact people liked it a lot. It has been reposted in every single thread since it was finished.

>>51558136
And the author has reposted his Femdom and Nemesis CYOA each thread. Reposting doesn't means the CYOA in question is quality.
Same goes for Traveller. It gets posted constantly by its small fanbase, but rarely gets new builds.

>>51558025
I think- no wait it wasn't

It was one that started with your character being and orphan and then someone adopts it or something like that

>>51558179
Now I won't pretend that I'm not a shitty author and that my skill only goes so far as making rectangles and stealing art from artstation, but at the very least I never repost my CYOAs after the first thread and I'm not tokhaar Gool anyway.

>>51552222
>she
>her
SDA is a fat neckbearded man.

>>51550729
So if I eat the Behlit Fragments, do I just become Femto or something? Out of all the sorta vague items, this one seems to be the worst offender.

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>>51558400
A fat, neckbearded cute anime girl man.

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>>51558215
This one, then?

>>51558469
That's the one, thanks

>>51558179

DSA wouldn't stoop so low as to re-post his own content like that fag tokhar gool

>>51551527
Innate, Athletic, AI faction

Durability 2
Enhanced Senses 2
Reflexes 3
Immunity 3
Self Healing 3
Weapon Mastery 3 (firearms)
Mental 2
Focus 3
(Uplink 3)
Overcharge 3
Analysis 3
Passion 1
Training 2
Inheritable 1

Unique Weapon, Armor, Safehouse, Signing Bonus
Hated, Bodyguard
Allies: Lindsey, Hannah, Defector:Isabelle
Enemies: Corrine, The prototype

We technocracy now.

>>51558400
I don't care what anyone says, all cyoa authors but Beri are cute girls and lesbians, and Beri is a cute slime girl lesbian. I will ignore any logic, reason or evidence to the contrary, particularly if you try to prove Beri isn't a cute slime girl.

>>51549041
There's barely any content in that, it's practically a cut of that other yandere cyoa with the different types of yandere personalities, plus an attempt at a cyoa on the lines of that gentle femdom cyoa made by that other anon.

Please call that a WIP, it's dreadful to think that that's a finished cyoa.

>>51558460
What is an "anime girl man"?

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>>51550686
If that's how you really feel about yourself anon

Have a head pat.