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Yet another CYOA General Thread
The "Lets not chase off new Authors edition"

Last Thread >>51548998

Info on Creation and Collections of CYOAs
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>>51561379
hey kid... do you know what the definition of insanity is?
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99%
Red Death
Mystery Recurs, Garden For Man, Rewind Senescence
Lesson Learned
Disregard world, become Tom Bombadil
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>>51561379
You should include your influences, it's rude otherwise. Here, let me help you.
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>>51561498

I pick wealth, because it is the building block for pretty much all of the other rewards and also the only reward that actually gives you anything.
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>>51561379
99.999%
The Red Death
New Genesis
Primordial Lifespan
Rewind Senescence
Chronicler Blessing
A Garden For Man
Divinely Appointed
The Mystery Recurs
Holy Nourishment
God's Accomplice

Chose the Red Death because otherwise there'd be no information for me to learn with Chronicler's Blessing. I'll learn all I can, including the newly introduced magic, and teach the the surviving humans. If possible, I'll also push them in the direction that favors advanced magic over technology, simply because I like magic more.

Of course, all that assumes humanity actually survives the plague, which is stated to eventually mutate. If they don't, I'll just seed the new world with my creations, and enjoy my new immortality and magic powers.
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>>51561469
Yeah hoping one of these threads won't devolve into the usual shit flinging that the autists just can't seem to avoid.
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>>51561469
>Medium
>Mag Boots
>Riot Shield (Collapsible)
>Battery
>Cyber Warfare Suite (Unshackled AI)
>Environmental control
>Thruster pack
>Colt Anaconda
>Banshee
>Tatical
>Ghost
>Vavatch Orbital
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>>51561596
The thing is, there is no possible cure or medicine or magic to stop the plague. So if it has a relatively long stasis time where it can survive outside of the human body, that means your new world will always be culled by the plague. Always. Thats why I chose the volcanos.
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>>51561498
I kill myself because of all of the cyoas I could have been given, I got the most useless one. Thanks, god.
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>>51561516

Does the gf jutsu anime gf keep her powers, if she has any? If so I'll take the gf jutsu and then do some serious anime research before I unleash my secret technique.
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>>51561379
What happens if you take Primordial and Rewind?
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>>51560749
The problem I see with that, and specifically with the Nephilim Ancestry option, is: how am I going to have children if my giant cock tears in half any women I try to have sex with?
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>>51561651

It says you grow 3 feet taller, but it doesn't say anything about making your penis taller as well.
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>>51561647
Presumably your aging cycles happen over the course of hundreds of years instead of decades.
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>>51561647
You can push back the six month meditation requirement for immortality back by 4950 years?
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>>51561626
Well, that just means that humanity won't survive. A pity, but I was never really attached to it all that much anyway. But my creations are described to not possess flesh and blood, so they won't be affected. As for becoming more life-like, that just means I'll have to wait till the plague either dies out or is cured by the newly created magical creatues of the world. Of course, if neither of those happens, I'm kinda fucked, but I can still live a pretty nice life in a world with magic. It just means my creations would have to stay in the Garden for Man. And due to possessing literal immortality, and the ability to continuously create new life, I'll just assume that after an arbitrarily large amount of time, we'll find a cure ourselves.
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>>51561379

90%
Society anomie
Chaos reigns
Rewind senescence
Nephilim ancestry
Gods accomplice
Holy nourishment
Divinely appointed
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>>51561693
>>51561695

But how long does the process of rejuvenation take if you're putting it off for centuries as opposed to a mere 50 years?
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>>51561747
You're not really putting it off. The rejuvenation happens after you reach a sufficiently old age, so if you have a lifespan of 5000 years, the cycle should logically take place at the very end of that lifespan.
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>>51561686
Maybe not, but it seems only reasonable that everything would grow proportionately. Like, if you had a tine dick before it will still be tiny in relation to the rest of the body, if you had a massive one, you'd end up with an obelisk.
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>>51561626
Hm. Good point. I wonder if Lifelike would mean life, after an arbitrarily long time.
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>>51561784
oops. That was suppose to go >>51561725
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>>51561771

You're rejuvenating thousands of years as opposed to 50, though. I doubt it'll take a mere 6 months to rejuvenate yourself.
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>>51561784
It's not clarified, so I think it's up to interpretation. So just decide whether you want them to become golem-like beings with sapience, or lifeforms out of flesh and blood. Hell, nothing is stopping you to have both.
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>>51561379
Question for the author: if along with the Nephalim Ancestry I take other gifts that affect my person, such as perfect memory and no need for sustenance, are any of these passed on to the progeny, even if in reduced measure? What about extra lifespan and rewind?
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>>51561516
god I love these
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>>51561379
90%
WWIII
Lesson Learned
Primordial Lifespan, Divinely Appointed
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>>51561831
It's not actually stated whether the rejuvenation cycle shaves off a particular number of years or simply returns you to a state of youth, so as always in such cases, it's up to you to interpret it in such a way that would make for a good story or scenario.
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>>51561849
I always recommend that you think of it however you believe would be most fun, so as an author I'd tell you that I don't know anything and leave it at that.

However, my own personal preference for how it would work is this, any physiological trait such as perfect memory might be passed down in a reduced measure, that would include something biologically feasible like extra lifespan, but not rewind senescence since that's just entering the realm of science fiction and there's also no real way to "reduce" immortality into a lesser form. Then gifts that are based in miracles or magic like nourishment don't get passed at all since that's between me and the big guy upstairs.

Again, I recommend you think of it however you consider most fun, but the above is how I would see things.
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>>51561469
>Heavy
>Servo, Hydraulics
>Battery, Capacitator
>Energy Shield, Heavy Shield
>Environmental Control, Evironmental Shielding
>Advanced Targeting, Auto Targeting
>Ablative Armor, ERA
>M-67 "Vulcan"
>Gucharvis

50 on the dot
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Was about to post the newest version of Nemesis. But a error message pops up and says the image resolution is to large.... What is the limit?
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>>51562004
I don't think I would ever do that CYOA. Not having to live in the world of berserk is a gift in and of itself.
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>>51561925
Cool, that's more or less what I expected. Couldn't be one hundred percent sure about renewal since there's a type of jellyfish that can do just that.

The nourishment one would probably be impossible unless we somehow evolved the biological ability to get all that we need from sunrays... which not even plants can do (needing also roots in the soil), so yeah, that's definitely out.
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Lavender 1.0 when?

Pokemon Personified Plus+ when?
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>>51561968
Resolution is limited to 10k (ten thousand) by 10k pixels, filesize up to 8 MB.
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>>51562210
Every time you ask the release date gets pushed back a week.
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>>51562004
Dearly held companion
Glory
Aspect of Virtue
Titanic
Partial incarnation, conjuration, sorcery, corrupting presence, penumbral teleportation, degenerative emission
Offspring
Foe of the inhumans - spacial distortion
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>>51562210
Daily reminder that Teiatat in Crimson best Teiatat.
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>>51561469
uh, something like "debilitating mental instability preventing you from functioning normally"?
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>>51561379

Lethality: 99%
Scenario: Ring of Fire
New World: Forgotten Glory
Gifts: Rewind Senescence, Chronicler Blessing, A Garden for Man, The Ark Narrative, Divinely Appointed, Nephilim Ancestry, Holy Nourishment, God's Accomplice

Step 1: gather a diverse group of young adults into my safe haven
Step 2: allow my genes to infiltrate the group over the course of several generations
Step 3: after enough time has passed, set out into the world and begin the long process of reintroducing civilization to the survivors
Step 4: remake society hopefully in a new way so God doesn't try to apocalypse us again
???
Step 5: Use God's Accomplice to make sex golems that I can kiss and hold hands with
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>>51562004
>Apostle2
Is there another part?
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>>51561968
Oooh, so excited!
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Hum, anyone have the Hero Academy CYOA on them? I'm feeling up for rolling a new character for that. (And because I need more Wyvern Lord Ryoma in my life.)
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I want SDA to tell me I'm useless and that I should kill myself
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Did Ordion die?
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>>51562662
This one, right?
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>>51561379
Is it possible to prevent your companions from dying of old age?
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>>51561379
Ok, after some thorough evaluation:

>99%
>Red Death
>New genesis
>Primordial Lifespan, Rewind Senescence, Chronicler Blessing, Mystery Recurs and Nephilim Ancestry

This seems like the best path to a new beginning. The mass extinction should be relatively quick and come with a minimum of atrocities being committed (comprared to a world war, for example). Most of the world should be left intact and it should be easy for me to go about memorizing scientific knowledge that will prove useful in the future and my progeny should be better equipped to deal with the new world.
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>>51562745
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>>51562745
>Trap-Catcher has only one goal in life, rescue a princess
a princess with a feminine penis?
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>>51562622
Do we just bully him because that's the thing to do, then?
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>>51562772
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Was that Manga themed cyoa ever finished?
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>>51562703
He's currently working on a CYOA with a mutant theme and his revision of Hell Invasion, as far as I know.
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>>51562663
One of the things I liked about Archdemon Roommate was that you had all of these dom roommates but can end up overpowering them and making then a slave a year later. We need more anti-femdom cyoas where you can turn the tide on them, like a smug SDA.
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>>51562828
the one with images that had torn edges? If so no, that was like the only preview and then not a word, which was a shame because it looked really good.
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>>51561469

Expecting a different outcome from repeating the same action?
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>>51561379
>90%
>Apex Predator
>New Genesis
>Rewind Senescence, Nephilim Ancestry, Holy Nourishment, Divinely Appointed, Chronicler Blessing, A Garden for Man, God's Accomplice
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>>51562004
You ever notice how Zodd and Locus are the only Apostles that don't have a human face somewhere on their transformed body? They're the only two Apostles that get to look aesthetically complete instead of like horribly mutated people. I wonder what makes them special. Zodd has his long years of service to the God Hand, I guess, but Locus seems to be just another guy.
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>>51561379
>99% die off
>A new ice age
>New Genesis
Perks:
>Primordial Lifespawn
>Rewind Senescence
>A Garden For Man
>Divinely Appointed
>God's Accomplice

Once the world succumbs to ice, and old civilisations crumble, I will begin my journey to the garden (which, if we can decide the destination, would be in the less severely-effected areas of the world). From there, I will build constructs and send them out into the world to seek out those who remain in the world and bring them to my stronghold against the eternal storm. Once there, I will begin creating a new civilisation, one which worships new gods known as anime girls. My gifts will make me appear like an emissary for these gods, making it much easier for me to keep this going. I'll care for the population with the resources in my garden, using my creations to keep peace and order, and if I keep my health at high enough levels, maybe I'll live long enough that I will step out and return to the world at large once the ice has all melted away. And at the end of my life, I will get my most loyal followers, descended from many generations past those who first came to me, to spread themselves out, and create civilisation once more.
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>>51561968
>>51562626
>>51562004
>>51562231

I thought I could make each page a little bigger and get some new stuff in without adding a new page. But it seems I must add another page or else each page will be too large for this board, FUCK! I will need to make 10 new Combo Effects to fill out space.

What I added to the new version so far:
2 New Races: Goblin and Lizardman
6 New Powers: Ferromancy, Magical Bondage, Regeneration, Hybrid, Possession and Portal Maker.
3 New Artifacts: Orb of Normality, Power Extractor and Infernal Dices.
3 New Companions: Apprentice, Pirate Captain and Masochist Mage.
6 New Drawbacks: Infamous, Unexpected Enemies, Personality, Double Trouble, Time Limit and Fractured Power.
3 New Quests: Mega Harem, Monster Hunter and Worship.
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>>51563150
Are you trying to save in png format? If so try jpg with barely any compression. It should reduce the file size and keep the quality of the images, unless they quality wasn't that good to begin with.
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>>51562712
Bless you, friend~
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>>51561379
>current population is 7.4 billion
>0.001 percent of that is 740.000
I looked up the minimal viable population for humanity and it's way lower than you'd think, so I think it might be a viable option
Got to laugh at the idea of combining the least chaotic apocalypse options with forgotten glory though

>99% (3)
>Apex Predator (finally some evolutionary impetus again)
>New Genesis (5)
>Primordial lifespan
>Rewind Senescence
>A garden for Man
>The ark narrative
>The mystery Recurs
The predator is dragons
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>>51563246
Will test it ><
(1/5)
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>>51562712
best cyoa ever
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>>51563421
Image resulotion is too big... FUUUUU! Will need to add 1 page ><
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>>51563461
what are you even doing here
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>>51563091
On second thoughts, I'd get rid of 99.999% of the population, because 1% of the population is still like, 740 million and I don't have the resources for that.
Then I guess I'd take Holy Nourishment and The Mystery Recurs.
Not needing to eat or drink means the other survivors have more to go around, and perhaps with the power of magic, there is a chance we can melt ice faster than normal and spread out our land more quickly.
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>>51563461
How is it too big? You're first image post is only 3.71 megs, far under the 8 meg limit. Perhaps you're over 10,000 pixels tall which would cause issues. Try removing just a few pixels at the top/bottom to make sure you're under 10,000.
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>>51563538
Its the resolution, I could post page 1 but can't post any other page =(

But on the bright side I have to make 10 new combo effects so next version will have more content.
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>>51562712
>>51562728
>>51562745
>>51562759
>>51562772
>>51562790
Didn't this one get an Extra page at some point?
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>>51563355

>50%
>AI Meltdown
>Forgotten Glory
>Rewind Senescence
>Holy Nourishment
>God's Accomplice
>Divinely Appointed
>Nephilim Ancestry

Nobody knows for sure what happened, everything was fine one moment and then suddenly things went all Skynet on our asses. The robots hated us for some reason, and wouldn't stop until we were all dead... until one day, this dumb motherfucker got caught in a robot ambush and simply froze up. The robots went right past him. The story quickly made it's way across the world, with nobody believing it at first until more and more stories started pouring in about how our AI overlords can't target us if we go full retard. So that's what we did. Nobody has spoken in decades, and the AI eventually powered down, satisfied that they completed their mission. Unfortunately, they stuck around just long enough to inadvertently cause us to literally go full retard. You see, it's kind of hard to teach the new generation how to speak and read and shit when you're only method of survival is to pretend you're one of those deaf mutes. I myself am one of the last remaining Speakers in my tribe, and the last time I spoke to someone to trade rumors was years ago, and they spoke of some kind of giant glowing freak and his stone minions. I guess it was only a matter of time before those of us old enough to remember civilization went insane...
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>>51562712
>>51562728
>>51562745
>>51562759
>>51562772
>>51562790
>>51563727
Yeah
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>>51562712

Name: Lindaswen Thereliel (goes by Lindas)

>Lunestier

>Arcane Magic x3
>Summoning Magic x3
>Tactics x3
>Magic Refinement
>Maneuvers x2

>Valerie Bluewood
>Allyce Westhold
>Crale Edwards
>Tennie Northbreed

>The Great Hunt (every year)
>Security
>Bodyguard

>Art/Music
>Paranormal Research

>Bookworm

I was a orphan adopted by Lunestier groundskeeper. A teacher saw that I have strong innate magical skills. So I got accepted in the prestigious magical school.

Hopefully with my summoning magic and tactics I can basically become a general of my own magic army and I can use arcane magic to protect myself and support my army. After graduation my friends and I can go on quests to find treasures and lost knowledge and help protect peasants and kingdoms. After I become stronger, I can take over a old castle as base and start small Queendom of magical creatures summoned from the different planes. Then become a famous mercenary company and have my magic army help settle conflicts in exchange for extravagant gifts and titles.

Eventually have more titles than all those pompous spoiled students at school who wouldn't except me because I'm "poor" and "low class".
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>>51562440

Oh nah, I have the original better quality one named apostle but my connection is so shit I had to redo the quality and then rename it apostle 2 so I can upload it
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>>51562210
>When?
NOW


Here it is. I don't intend to add new options, but I may make corrections if I missed anything.

I added a new strategy: Subversion. That's about all the changes I've made.

About the compendium: I lost the Raws, the original builds that I was adding to the compendium. Not all made it into previous versions, and for those that did I need to backtrack and I don't have anything to backtrack to.

I'm more than a little pissed at myself at the moment, but even so It dosen't look like the compendium will be a thing that will be happening.

Still, Lavender Final, enjoy.


>>51562381
Explain yourself?
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>>51562004
Old build.
>Treasured Lover.
I can live with friends and buddies and all it takes is being a little distant from everyone. Still can have meaningful relationships and such, just never going to get it translated to Needing them like I once did.

>Desire: War.
There will always be conflict and violence, at least likely as long as an Apostle will walk the worlds. Seeking them out for good causes, ill causes, paying patrons or to take what I want for myself; it's all for fun regardless.

>Human Form: Aspect of Sin.
Nothing draws ire and aggression like something one wants but can't have. And let's be honest; vanity is a factor.

>Apostolic Incarnation: Human.
It's no fun to go into a mortal war and just wave the whole thing away with one titanic swipe. I'm trying to Enjoy the fight not bring it to a close in an instant.

>Apostolic Abilities.
Telekinetic Ward, Spacial Distortion, Sorcery, Enhanced Regeneration.

>Spawn
Fragmented Self. Going with the Sith ideal of Two. Always have an apprentice around, offer them power and opportunity, if someone bypasses them and gets to me, I take over, but if I lose them I make another. Harbinger, Aide, Student, and Companion all in one.
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>>51564264
>work in progress
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>>51564264
Argent is for special snowflakes and Lavender for fags and trannies. Crimson is where it is at
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>>51562004
Please stop using this version it hurts my soul to see so many artifacts.

I don't like reposting my own stuff but I'll make the exception this one time.
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>>51564332
[Expletives Deleted]
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>>51564375
Actually, I expect this is what factional discourse between Teiatatan cultists boils down to.
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>>51564264
>>51564404
Could one use some combination of "Pupation" and "Rite of Flesh Union" to do something similar to "Subversion"?
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>>51564438
Yeah, but it won't be as clean or as smooth.
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>>51564121

>1-3 years
>Real Sister
>First Name, Baka-Nii
>Hateful, Distant
>Lewd, Elegant, Dim-witted, Childish, Rebellious, Haughty
>Insulting, Hitting, Teasing
>lol
>Shorter
>Gifted
>Noble
>Thick
>Normal
>Tanned
>Fashionable
>To Never See You
>Nympho, NEET
>Frilly
>Plump Lips
>Trap

My "sister" is a m2f tranny that is scared to leave our home because dysphoria and fear of being seen as a man. She also gets so horny that if I don't initiate she will tease and torment me until I force myself on her. Of course, this is also a medical condition and once the heat passes she basically thinks of me as a rapist and she can't stand me. She's basically trapped in a downward spiral, which will either end in (murder/)suicide or giving in to her lusts and convincing herself that she's truly in love with me.
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>>51562712
>School: Ej Har
>Classes: Illusion Magic x3, Potion Mixing x2, Assassination x3, Blood Magic x2
>Companions: Malvyin, Chandara, Cassiopeia, Sanyo

>Events: Battle Royal (every Year), Basilisk Den (first year), Escort (second year), Security (first year), Blind Date (third year)

>Exchange Program (Arithmetician x1)

The Battle Royale will be an interesting place - after all, how can my opponents strike me if their minds are clouded by illusions, their senses fooled by my potions, and their own blood boiling? I'm dying to find out - not literally, though.

Rolling to see which school I'm set up on a blind date with.
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Rolled 4 (1d4)

>>51564514
Okay, looks like my date's from Odesium.

Which one of 'em is it?
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>>51564510
Damn you're crazy but I admire you simultaneously.
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>>51564548
>>51564514
Ah, so I've been set up with Liene? I'm not sure she's going to like me or my friends. It really is too bad - I mean, it's not like blood magic is all bad!
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>>51562004
fuck the godhand and whatever confined me to this shitty fate.

so
sacrifice:yourself
desire:war
Human form: aspect of virtue
Apostolic incarnation: superhuman -demonic
Apostolic abilities: infused weapon, apostopaic weapon, enhanced regeneration, penumbral releportation, spacial distortion
Apostle spawn: Section -Motif bearing ( chaos warriors)
Shortcomings: the struggler

proceed to kill however many other apostles i can until Guts finally kills me, but i suppose playing out my chaos lord fantasy aint too bad in the meantime
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>>51561516
>tfw my dad likes anime just as much as me
>we talk about anime all the time
>he and I are both successful human beings
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>>51564594
Does he prefer Nee-sans or Imoutos?
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>>51564594
>like anime
>be a successful human being
hmmm
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>>51564502
Sounds like I might want to invest in a bonded bride w/ subversion in addition to having pupation and the rite for myself, then.

...A thought occurs: Can brides be Subverted?
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>>51564397

What's the difference between this one and the other one
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>>51564626
>like anime
>be a fucking loser
y-yeah who would do that, right? haha
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>>51564510
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>>51564617
Obviously he loves daughterus. He makes anon dress in a skirt with shimapan and then anally violates him while he watches football on Sunday. Leaving all his sperm in his slutty son's boypussy.
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>99%
>World Polluted
>New Genesis
>Primordial Lifespan
>Chronicler Blessing
>A Garden For Man
>Holy Nourishment

As the golden sheaves of wheat glitter once more in the sunlight shining through the dull brown clouds, and the people of this earth once more construct larger and greater houses, temples, and baths of mud brick, I shall tell great tales of the Times Before, when men did not need to work and the land was green and fertile throughout. I shall grant them hope, hope that one day they will create a world like that, and it will not fall. I shall lie on the grass, close my eyes, and let the world grow around me. I do not need to take from it to live. I need only see it grow.
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>>51564669
Image quality and about 6 more megabytes.
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>>51564650
No, Brides cannot be subverted.
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>>51564692

Oh nah, I made the one I post low quality as fuck so I could post it in the CYOA threads on /r9k/
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>>51564713
How literal is the "in your own image" part of Subversion?
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>>51564779
Oh well in that case there's not much to be done, sorry about that.
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>>51564594
>he and I are both human beings
FILTHY LIAR
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>>51564798
It's just a figure of speech. They conform to your vision of what they should become. The more willing they are the more successful the alteration will be.
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>>51564264
>>51564404

Nice! I knew you'd finish it eventually! It's a very unique cyoa, especially for a lewd one. I enjoyed working on a build over time as the cyoa developed. To bad about about compendium, but oh well! Thanks!

http://pastebin.com/7tk3pN8g
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>>51561516
>Gf jutsu
summon friendly lord of nightmares, proced to have personal god that is sympathetic towards me personally
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>>51564683
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>>51564867
And in the aforementioned case of having a bonded bride absorbed into you (in a reversible manner), would the mental effect on the offspring make them loyal to you, your bonded bride, both, or would that once again be a thing where it can be negotiated because brides (or decided by you because you're in charge of the merged form)?
Also, does the "diminishing returns" bit refer to the offspring's power growth, meaning that you could still reshape them as you see fit however many times you want?
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>>51564683
fujo piggu go home
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>>51565039
For diminishing returns, yes, you can reshape them as you please, but even then, the more revisions the harder it gets. Unless an easily-reshaped form was part of the intended result.

For the rest of it, as usual, "whatever makes a better story."
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>>51564404
Is Rite of Flesh Union one use only or can it be used an infinite amount of times?
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>>51565260
The latter

>>51564900
Thank you, and you're very welcome.
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>>51565235
Would having both Pupation and Subversion (by way of RoFU) be enough to counteract those diminishing returns?
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>>51565275
Neat does the the pedigree bonus count each time you use it or do you have to buy it additional times for that?
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>>51565294
When I said that you can use Pupation and RoFU to simulate Subversion, it was in terms of effects, not the mechanics. So I guess the answer is no, but maybe I don't understand the question

>>51565309
No, buying it once allows you to do the things the option says you can do. The pedigree bonus represents the benefits this capability gives you
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>tfw the scientist isn't coming back
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>>51565309
>>51565541
To clarify: you can only buy it once, period.
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>>51565541
>When I said that you can use Pupation and RoFU to simulate Subversion
Nonono, in this case I was talking about using RoFU to merge with a bride with Pupation or Subversion while having the other myself.

Also, found this in Bonds:
>Lithar, The Siren& (+2 favor) [free]
What's the "&" for? Is the bond free, or does it grant +2 favor?
>Requirement: Muse spend more time outside of the Labyrinth of Sighs than within it.
I think that "Muse" should've been "Must".
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Rolled 4 (1d5)

>>51562712
>School
Uzua, though it's a bit awkward since father is a mage and mother is a beast master.
>Classes
Divine Arts 2x
Come from a pious clan
Beast Taming 3x
Have to keep the family business alive
Physical Training 2
Strong enough to handle big animals
>Martial Combat 1x
Whips, boy
>First Aid 2x
Need to keep in good health
>Companions/Classmates
Allyce Westhold
Kengen
Trap-Catcher
Yung Tashi
Helena
>Events
The Great Hunt
Always a great way to meet strange and monstrous creatures
Fund Raising
Big brother's circus needs money to pay off debt to tax collectors
Blind Date
Finding a wife, or ki'el (non-romantic life partner) is a goal of mine
>Clubs
Music and Disciplinary Squad
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>>51565583
He will, don't worry. I'm actually glad he's so far refused to give any release dates or deadlines. Keeps me from being disappointed when they are inevitably missed.
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>>51562712
Ej Har
Martial combat, tactics, arcane magic, traps, knowledge, bardic arts, divine arts, necromancy, blood magic, unholy arts
Sera, Trap-catcher, Yung, Sanyo
Battle Royal
Basilisk Den
Battle of the Arts
Exchange program: Magic refinement
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Rolled 3 (1d4)

>>51565647
Let's see
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>>51565706
>Inas
What a...unique pairing.
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>>51564900
Stop reposting this filth.
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>>51564264
>>51564404
>>51565645
>&, Muse

That would be a reference to rules I've since excised. Fixed now.
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>>51565728

There's literally nothing wrong with being a sexy Angel.
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>>51565905
Haven't seen you posting as regularly as usual. Is everything okay?
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>>51565945

Yes. I was gone for a bit. But I'm back now. Thanks for asking.
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>>51565960
How was life in SDA'S sex dungeon?
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>>51565765
So for Bonded Bride when it says you have to take them same Ambition does that just refer to category such as §Castellan of the Cosmos, or does it have to be exactly the same down to the Path?
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>>51564264
Oh hey, I was coming here to ask for the most recent version! Cool, gonna play around with this for a while, remake some old builds, maybe come up with something new. Thanks for the work.
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>>51566002

He got super upset when I tried to dress as an Angel. He seemed really offended about a brunette pretending to be an Angel.
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>>51566101
Yes, down to the path, but not the flavor.

>>51566148
You're welcome.
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>>51564264
>>51564404
>>51565765
Lavender Final Version boys.
Great job, Guy.
Is bretty good.
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>>51566174
I bet there was lots of angry sex that night.
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Generic troops
>light infantry
>archers
>crossbowmen
>spear infantry
>heavy infantry
>light cavalry
>heavy cavalry
>mounted crossbomen
Northern Italy
>condotierro cavalry
>Genoese crossbowmen
France
>Gens d'armes
>Brabanters
Hungary
>Cuman cavalry
>hussars
Germany
>Swadian swordsmen
>imperial knights
England
>Longbowmen
>Billmen
Scotland
>Pike schiltron
>highlander nobles
Ireland
>Gallowglass
>Kern
Castille
>Jinetes
>???????
Aragon
>Almogavars
>Alforrats
Rus
>Varangians
>tartars
Byzantium
>turcomans
>katafraktoi and koursourses
Are these enough origins for my condotierro cyoa?
Any suggestions(units or factions)?
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>>51565718
NONE DESERVE HER
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>>51566219
Wizards
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>>51566219
Wouldn't mind seeing some Balts, maybe some Svergs and Steppe folk as well, or some Slavs besides Rus. Possibly some Saracens given the Italian location.
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>>51566257
Seconding some Saracens. Maybe janissaries and something else?
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>>51566219
Why is it a Condottieri CYOA then? Just call it Mercenary CYOA or Army CYOA if it's not about Condottieri.
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>>51566291
North African Mercenaries and pirates are good, as well as regular Christian pirates who don't get enough love.
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>>51565014
>>51565045
>not wanting to fuck your boy!daughteru

what is wrong with you, anons?
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>>51566314
>North African Pirates
>suddenly EUIV flashbacks
>you can never stop the maghrebi

We should destroy North Africa.
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>>51566219
Excuse me, HUNGARY gets hussars?
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>>51566489
They invented them, though I will concede Polish Winged Hussars are the most famous for sure.
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>>51566300
Not all Condottieri, were italian and not all of the mercenary companies originated in italy, there was a surprising amount of variety(not many bizantines or russian, but lets just ignore it for the sake of having fun)
>>51566291
Janissaries were not saracens and they weren't really important before the xvi century or so, probably it would be what>>51566314 suggests and mamluks
>>51566257
I may add soma baltic tribesmen, scandinavian warfare was pretty vanilla but i'll look it up.
I don't have plans about steppe folk but i thought of including some serbian troops and croatian pirates.
I'll make some more research tomorrow anyway
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>>51565765
Updated version of the bonded pair of nest keepers.

Female

Form
- Vagina
- Embellishments
- Lubrication
- Musculature
- Cilia
- Lumen
- Plush x2

Shape: Powerful
Chest: Gifted

Influences
- Kleptozoological
- Pseudodevascent
- Xenosubstantial
- Quasicosmic

Face
- Primal
- Chakra Eye
- Elder Gaze

Flourishes
- Ouroboros Metabolism
- Godly Cleanliness
- Lactation
- Bountiful
- Nurturing

Strategy
- Brooding
- Conditional Emergence
- Nesting Instinct
- Humanoid
- Hybrids

Dowry
- Lavender Grimoire
- Primordial Woad
- Abyssal Ink
- Celestial Charms
- Argent Spark
- Argent Blaze
- Rite of Worldstepping
- Primal Array

Bonds
- Drudge Throng
- Prime Mate x3
- Bonded Bride

Stigmata: Stigma of the Rising Star
Ambition: Conquering Crusader

Male

Form
- Penis
- Flare
- Knot
- Spines
- Prehensile
- Lumen
- Pillar x2

Shape: Powerful
Chest: Hard

Influences & Face
Same as female

Flourishes
- Ouroboros Metabolism
- Godly Cleanliness
- Ejaculation
- Fortifying
- Altruistic

Strategy, Dowry, Bonds, Stigmata, Ambition
Same as female

Stats for both
10 Pedigree
1 Status
4 Allure
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>>51566600
A bonded pair, one male and one female. They are styled as half-dragons, complete with patches of scales in aesthetically pleasing places, clawed hands, talons for feet, a tail, and wings. They also possess an almost angelic halo to help endear them to people and a variety of magical gifts to help them defend their foothold on this world. The female of the pair lays eggs in accordance with the alignment of the stars and both have a very strong nesting instinct.

By human standards, the two are essentially a young newly-wed couple very much in love. They greatly enjoy cuddling with one another and are unusually monogamous for brides of Teiatat. Their cult is a haphazard mess, but it is theirs and they adore it in spite of its sometimes hilarious incompetence. Overall, they present a bizarrely charming face for Teiatat on this world. Just don’t walk into the egg chamber without permission directly from one of them, they will eviscerate you.

As far as the other brides are concerned, however, the two are nothing but a pair of low-status upstarts. Both are marked as rising stars, something that can engender a fair bit of suspicion among elder brides, though as long as the two continue to act as dutiful soldiers for Teiatat, carrying forth his influence to new realms, the other brides are content to leave them be.

Still, this leaves them in a delicate position as they are sitting right on the front lines of Teiatat’s expansion. To compensate for their lack of allies among the other brides, the pair must instead rely heavily on each other. They wouldn’t have it any other way.
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>>51566489
Hungary had hussars in the middle ages, poland had (a different kind of) hussars during the pike and shot era and everyone had (another different kind of) hussars during the xviii and xix centuries
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>>51561379
We need this CYOA to be expanded on! I want more of this!
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>>51566591
Steppe soldiers and Georgian soldiers were imported by the Genoans, who also sent jesuits to the southern steppe and the caucus mountains.

Steppe soldiers themselves would be absolute ass on a ship or in urban conflict, but would prove invaluable on open terrain. Are you going to do actual Republics and states for recruitment or an open bag approach?
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>>51566625
You don't deserve any more!
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>>51566619
>>51566489
A pic of the hungarian hussars, for reference
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>>51566670
This is probably true. However, I swear I will make at least two builds that I will put thought into if the CYOA in the OP gets more stuff added.
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>>51566625
A continuation maybe? Or a module perhaps? I would have liked the chance to indluence what the world would have become like when selecting Mystery Recurs (possibly with an option for monstergirls. To stay in theme with the classic art, a picture of a mermaid could be used).
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>>51564397

Sacrifice:
>Self
Desire:
>Glory
Human Form:
>Aspect of Virtue
Apostolic Incarnation:
>Demonic
Apostolic Abilities:
>Infused Weapon
>Enhanced Regeneration
>Vampiric Essence
>Inspiring Presence
>Embodiment of Wrath
>Embodiment of Wrath
>Telepathic Connection
>Spacial Distortion
Apostle Spawn:
>Section
Shortcomings:
>The Struggler
>Foe of the Inhumans
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>>51566647
That's pretty interesting. I planned to do an open bag approach but leave the most unique cities as tgeir own thing.
Genoa may indeed be very interesting, do you have any sources on army composition for the different city states?
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>>51566719
A continuation, definitely. I want items, quests and companions! And I realize that's like a lot of CYOAs but Apocalypse scenarios have a special place in my heart that makes me want them to get the 'full' treatment.
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>>51565765
Finally it's done now I shall now proceed proceed to exploit a loophole that let's me get 444 extra points.

The Empress

Pedigree-67
Status-30
Allure-10

Vagina
-Embellishments
-Lubrication
-Musculature
-Lumen
-Plush x3

Penis
-Flare
-Knot
-Spines
-Lumen
-Pillar x3

Modest

Gifted

Pseudodevascent

Xenosubstantial

Quasicosmic

Regal

Chakra Eye

Elder Gaze

Ouroboros Metabolism

Godly Cleanliness

Nurturing

Addictive

Aphrodisiac

Ejaculation

Fortifying

Aphrodiasic

Commanding Mien

Carnal Atmosphere

Cultivation

Rapid Maturation

Humanoid
-Monarch

Title X12

Lavender Grimoire

Crimson Manual

Primordial Woad

Argent Spark

1/2
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>>51566834
Argent Blaze

10 Rite of Flesh Union

Regal Array

Filthy Lucre X11

Knights-in-Crimson

Sensual Ritualists

Personal Sect

Rue, Enigma

Janetta of the Frills, Couturier

Lavender Sprite

Crimson Sprite

Prime Mate X56

Bonded Bride x12

Widow’s Hunger

Predatory

Questant of the Thrones

Stigma of the Rising Star

Stigma of the Rebel

Conquering Crusader
-Avatar of Teiatat

The Empress is currently the most powerful of the Lavender Brides. A monster who consumed her bonded brides at birth her lust for power is insatiable. The "Thing" she calls her greatest child is always at her side to protect. It's strength is so terrible that even the greatest of the Crimson Brides is hesitent to face it. Her faction currently contains 1/3 of all the Lavender Brides. It is said that while new brides are encouraged to be outstanding they're also warned to not be too outstanding lest The Empress appears before them and presents them an ultimatum. Join her or be consumed.

2/2
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>>51566834
>>51566852

I regret nothing.
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>>51561379
>99% (3)
I believe the current estimate of the lowest ever Human population was at 10k - 30k. That said, that theory also says that happened in 70,000 B.C.E and I don't want to have to wait that long for us to bounce back.
>Ring of Fire
After the ash settles, and post the inevitable ice age, the ground will be more fertile than ever. Plus I like the thought of society ending with a decades long night.
>New Genesis (5)

>Nephilim Ancestry
>Rewind Senescence
>The Mystery Recurs
>God's Accomplice
>Chronicler Blessing

I think God's Accomplice pairs really well with Rewind Senescence since I can have some golems protect me while I'm undergoing rejuvenation.
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>>51565765
Why is it that those with the stigma of the crystal heart are called Sacred Jewels?
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>>51564397
>Myself
>Death
>Aspect of Obscurity
>Animalistic, Monstrous
>Sorcery/Embodiment of Wrath/Crystalline Plating/Degenerative Emission/Fertility/Enhanced Regeneration/Vampiric Essence

>Company/Offspring

>Incomplete Severance, The Struggler

For this moment alone was I created, warrior! I am the beginning of the end! So slay me, if you have any care for this world! My blood will run in rivers across the land, setting aflame every last blade of grass! My bones will poison the soil for centuries! My last breath will dye the very clouds black with despair!

BRING THE ARC OF FATE TO ITS CONCLUSION, AND END THE DANCE WE BEGAN THE DAY WE WERE BORN!
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>>51566834
>>51566852
I laughed when I read you somehow glitched over 400 extra points out of the system, but I don't get how you did it.

Are you somehow spending the points of your bonded brides?
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reposting my cyoa again
because Sonder cyoa is coming out slowly
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>>51566732
Nothing I can contribute besides my on hand knowledge. However I do have a fair bit of on-hand knowledge. The Venetians in terms of recruitment had one of the widest ranges of recruitment, taking in soldiers fro their ports in the Balkans, Greece, what is not Turkey, Syria and Egypt. They also had the largest Jewish presence in Italy with members of the THE Ghetto occasionally gaining positions of power, a Jewish Captain would be a great boon for their organizational skill. Genoa as mentioned had ports in the black sea, as well as in Algeria and Tunis, while also vying for control over the gates of the Mediterranean (Though they would never overcome crown powers). The Pisan's were the third, and left behind republic, with ports in France and Iberia. The central city states, and principalities had less active recruiting, though longer traditions of Swiss, German and Local mercenaries. However the wealth of the states and the Mercenary bands that profited off Italian state conflict attracted the people all over Europe.
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>>51564397
Sacrifice:
>Treasured Lover
Desire:
>Pleasure
Human Form:
>Aspect of Sin
Apostolic Form:
>Human
Apostolic Abilities:
>Infused Weapon
>Enhanced Regeneration
>Embodiment of Wrath
>Vampiric Essence
>Penumbral Teleportation
>Crystalline Plating
Apostle Spawn:
>Section
>Circumstantial Form
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>>51566907
Abused
Ribbon The Idol
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>>51566834
>>51566852
I don't see where you're getting those points from. The actual favor engine as far as I can see is abusing the fuck out of nightmare cycle until you have shitload of genitals each giving back six points.
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>>51564397
>Sacrifice
Dearly Held Companion
>Desire
War
>Human Form
Aspect of Sin
>Apostolic Incarnation
Abstract
>Apostolic Abilities
Enhanced Regeneration
Telepathic Connection
Fertility
Penumbral Teleportation
>Abyssal Abilities
Telekinetic Ward
>Apostle Spawn
Offspring
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>>51566907
Sera is best girl.
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>>51566892
Because they're treasures.

But now that I'm thinking about it, maybe I should git rid of that stigma altogether?

>>51567003
No favor engine there. Each purchase of nightmare cycle gives back 6/(number of genitals purchased)

Which means that if you purchase three genitals, you get 2 points for each purchase of Nightmare Cycle.

... unless you're talking about going back buying more genitals with the points, and then buying nightmare cycle again? That might be a non-convergent series...

Then again, the amount of points given by nightmare cycle depend on your genitals, which changes when you buy more genitals, which means that at the end of the day, when you're balancing the spreadsheet, you still can't have more than 6 points total from any number of purchases of nightmare cycle.
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>>51566905
It looks like he's using Rite of Flesh union to eat his bonded brides and absorb all of their stats directly. But that's clearly not how Rite OR Bonded Bride work, so I don't know what the hell he's on about.
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>>51567222
Is that why he illegally bought Flesh Union ten times?
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>>51567003
How do you figure? It rewards 6 divided by the number of genitals you own, per purchase. You can only buy it once per genital. The max points rewarded is very obviously 6 points.

>>51566852 see >>51565614 in regards to Rite of Flesh Union

>>51566905
Hey, EDG. Well done on Lavender. As far as I can tell you've balanced it pretty well, despite the literal retards and their attempts to break it.
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>>51567249
Thanks. I worked hard on balancing the crunchier parts. The best example of breaking the system was the guy who made a character with a score of 11 in every single stat.
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>>51561379
99%. Allow some existing culture to survive but reduces the population enough that it won't be unsustainable like this for a long time.

Red Death, since it'll leave everything non-human intact.

New Genesis is ideal. Honestly I don't think there can exist a realistic scenario that's entirely that or Canticle though, I think the two are intrinsically intertwined.

Anyways, gifts. I get five total.
Nephilim Ancestry and Holy Nourishment make me akin to a god already. Rewind Senescence seems the better of the methods of immortality, since it's indefinite but allows the normal progression of life, and can be allowed to end. The Garden for Man will be my stronghold. Divinely Appointed ensures that I can forge my own society from the comfort of my new homeland.
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>>51567234
Probably. He also put avatar under crusading conqueror, and I don't think you can do that either.

>>51567209
Congrats on finishing, EDG. I think the CYOA's really well balanced, for whatever that's worth, and I still can't break a ceiling of 11 in each stat.

In addition to the crunch balance, I also think it's just really fucking well written. None of the choices feel forced, and while they're not all my cup of tea most of them are very well described. Thanks for making it.
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>>51565583
>tfw Thrallherd isn't coming back
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>>51567296
How did he accomplish that? Most of my builds have a tough time getting to 8/8/4, never mind 11.
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>>51566872
So, are you just dumb and don't understand how this actually works?
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>>51567437
Like this. I just wanted to see how far I could take it.
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>>51567341
Hey, stresstest, would you mind posting the screenshot of your optimized build, for >>51567437 ?

Like I said earlier, I don't have the raws anymore.
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>>51567510
Many thanks
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>>51567270
>public transportation
>>no laughing
It's been a long time since I was stumped by a fetish.
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>>51567510
>>51567437
So, basically, he ignored the fluff and budgeted it by the crunch exclusively. The result is not an existence I would envy, but it works as a proof of concept.
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>>51567584
In japan, you aren't supposed to make a disturbance on public transport. Hence, those niche pornos about a girl being molested/raped on a train and trying her best not to make a noise, while everybody else does their damndest to pretend it isn't happening.

It's like a comedy of manners gone weird.

I suspect that the no laughing option is a derivative of that.
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>>51567584
>>51567616
It's literally just a reference to those Gaki no Tsukai 24 hour no laughing batsu games.
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>>51567555
No problem. And now to melt back into the comforting pool of anonymity.
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>>51566905
I used the
>Their power will be added unto your own.
Part of Rite of Flesh to mean you get the stats of the shit you absorb. Normally that would just end up being Flavor text since you don't have hard numbers for other characters but since Bonded brides is an option we can make other characters with hard stats. If we absorb those we can convert them to hard stats for our own build. Also with how the math works out after 12 bonded brides you would start losing points if you added anymore.

I'd been planning on doing this ever since you released these options. I know it's complete bullshit and would probably be patched out after I posted it but it's the first time I found a massive loophole like this before anyone else and I got super excited.
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>>51567724
Yeah, that's kinda bullshit. Even if you try to bend the letter of the rules that hard, it's kinda hard to justify adding things like status together.

Still, I applaud your audacity.
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>>51567724
But that's not how it works. That was never how it worked. The line
>their power will be added onto your own
explains why you get +2 pedigree from the option.

Also, you can't order your bonded brides to submit to being eaten.
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>>51567826
But it's not even audacity, it's just plain ignoring the actual written rules. He may as well just take Rite of Flesh Union and say 'I eat Tietat for infinite points'
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>>51567417
wasn't his last update on conduit just a month ago?
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>>51566907
I was Abandoned, and adopted by Ribbon the Idol. Single and childless, she decides to solve both problems at the same time by raising me to be her lover.
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Guys I'm trying to figure out how to kick off the Waifu Lifestyle Builder CYOA, and I'm having trouble.

It'll work like this: there are a certain number of stats, that increase and in extreme options, decrease, while you make choices regarding things like:
-What was your Waifu's life like growing up, what was their social standing in school, what clubs were they in, etc etc.

These options unlock points for those stats, which can then be spent to give your waifu skills and habits you'd prefer them to have, think of like, the gentle femdom cyoa and things like that, with this huge range of interests, pysical and emotional aspects that you unlock through this point system.

My question is, what are these stats? How many should there be, and what should they be named? Thus far I'm thinking of something like...

-Kindness (willingness to go out of their way to do nice things for you, try to get along with your friends, etc etc)
-Handiness (ability to do things like cook well, or fix up the car, things that are useful for having around the house or with holding a solid well paying job)
-Charm (ranges from both their natural beauty to their social acumen. Can be spent to make your Waifu be more attractive, dress nicely, be more confident in themselves? I dunno how far I want to take it all)
-Health? (I feel like it blurs too much with charm and handiness, but I guess it is your waifu's ability to stay in shape as well as not fall ill...)

I feel like this seriously needs to be reworked, and I'd also like some help with what qualities people would like to be able to purchase, and how they think certain lifestyle options should influence stats (how would having multiple siblings stack compared to being an only child? If you choose an option like they spent a portion of their childhood dealing with a debilitating illness, what stats did that reduce and improve?)

Please help! I really want to make this but I feel really out of my league.
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>>51568049
I think the 4 stats you have listed are good. I'd maybe add in intelligence and, if you're so inclined, lewdness.
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>>51561516
kill my dad

not even meming
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>>51568119
Lewdness is a must-have category for any waifu-building CYOA.

Dominance/submissiveness is another.
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>>51568204
>Dominance/submissiveness

you can express that in other ways without making it a main stat however.
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Powergaming Mercenary King Build

Education
Military(Free)
I need to understand and experience life in the field, serving on the frontlines for a while before I lead a company of my own
Trader(Free)
An understanding of business will allow me to negotiate better contracts and run my operation more efficiently
Diplomacy(Free)
Public Speaking and the ability to understand the intentions of other people better, we will help with all sorts of political and business negotiations
Strategist(1600)
Learning the science of long-term strategy, applicable to all aspects of my operation

>Companions
>>Infantry/Security
Bleecia Rainfort(Free)- Squad leader, Heavy Weapons squad, has connections with the Fellians
Rakhall Culler(Free)- Ground Forces Commander, Trains and Leads our ground forces, has connections with the Fellians
Vega Hjort(Free)- Personal Bodyguard, Leads my guard detail
Bronze Torres(Free)- Squad leader, tactical squad, has mercenary connections

>>Scientists/Doctors
Nayu Keeplep(Free)- Main scientist, helps with hacking, repair and construction as well
Reiner Hoch(1200)- Main doctor, also a biological expert

>>Engineers/Ship crew/Pilot
Captain Abraham Hruckhan(1200)- Captain of the Dreadnaught, leads a bucaneer crew
Janine Cluffield(1500)- Pilots and Repairs the Navajo IV
Benjamin McGregor(1500)- Commands the Reliable Ol' Lemon, also serves as its engineer
Torn Farkus(1500)- My main Strategist, operates out of the carrier

>>Special
Great Yao(1500)- Pirate-King and early Antagonist, we will first build up our reputation enough to be hired on by him, then steal his carrier

>Ships
Armored Carrier(Free)
Drones(x30)(Free)(Reconaisance, Decoys)

Retired Dreadnought(Free)
Gatling(Point Defense Weapon)
Plasma(Anti-Ship)
Railgun(x2)(Anti-Ship, Orbital bombardment support)
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>>51568231
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QrGrOK8oZG8
Too many Cooks Edition:
Core 5 Companions:
Danny "Freak" James (Two free companions)
Enrico Petrini (2 Free miscs:Special misc. "Play")
Grunder Seel (special misc. 50% Cheaper)
Molly Harriot (2000 Credits for special misc.)
The Great Yao! (2000 Credits for special misc.Free Carrier, 30 Hired Crew)

Extra 24 Companions:
Lord Edgard Baily (1000 Credits for special misc.)
Yafftess the Gold (250 Credits for special misc.)
Jannine Cluffield (Free mech/vehicle)
Lunefree (Free Broad Frigate)
Torn Farkus (Free dreadnought)
Nayu Keeplep (Free career/training)
Benjamin McGregor (Free Reliable Lemon)
Karkwell Da (Free remote controlled Tumbleweed)
Tina Haywood (Free battle-strafer)
Miguel Castillo (Free saucer)
Gruntilda (Arachnoid babby factory)
Nurse Dominique Quinn(Mega-drugs maker)
Sir Andrew Tomb (Free custom Weapon)
Prof. Vyyan Ru (Blink generator on all ships)
Prof. M.Dulbejen (Maximum efficiency, 2x speed on all ships)
Carl and Dean (Engineers)
GORMENARTAR (Large flying mount)
"Xuit" (Personal power armour)
Rourke (Manly Mentor)
Tzarva (Alien Bro)
Lamar Brooks (Token cool guy)
Vega Hjort (qtπ bodyguard)
Miivii Ket (qtπ Plant girl/Healer)
Zoya Kolosov (Best waifu)
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>>51568481
Ships:
[Free]Saucer, Battle-straferx2, Broad Frigate, Dreadnought, Carrier

Vehicles/Mechs:
[Free]Beast of Burden, Reliable Lemon, Tumbleweed

Armour/Attire:
[Free]Local/Modern attire

Weapons:
[Free]Custom Rifle

Special Misc:
[01200]Playx19 (One at 50% price, 4 at 20% price, and 15 at normal price)

Misc:
[Free]Mega-drugsx2
[Free]Biochrono Bath
[Free]Engineering Bay
[Free]Turretsx22 (5 Railguns, 5 LG-Rockets, 6 Cluster Rockets, 6 Lasers)
[0700]AI
[0100]Physics Laboratory
[0000]Entertainment system (Space internet, Bar)

Total Credits:21750 Credits

Carreer/Training
Traders apprenticeship (Make special cheaper 20% four more times(
Gang Initiate (1000 Credits for special misc)
Bounty Hunting License (500 Credits for special misc)

Home system:Trafalgron

Citizen Perks:
Inner-Circle (2000 Credits for special misc.)
Shhhhh
Youth (Free biochrono bath)

May God have mercy on our souls.
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>>51562712
>Academy
Lunestier

>Classes
3x Summoning Magic
3x Illusion Magic
2x Tactics
1x Magic Refinement
1x Martial Combat
1x Maneuvers

>Companions
Farhat
Silene
Kengen
Suzette Highking
Inas

>Events
2x Battle Royal
2x Great Hunt
2x Security
2x Battle of the Arts
1x Bodyguard

>Clubs
Cooking Club
Literature Club

>Drawbacks
Pen Pal
Hated Prodigy

Demon summoning is my favorite kind of magic, and I can use it to become a decent force on my own, but I am not all that powerful a mage all by myself. I can imagine fighting alongside Suzette.
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>>51568231
>Vehicles/Mechs
Ol'Reliable Lemon(Free)
Gatling(x2)(Anti Infantry/Anti Air)
Railgun(x2) (Anti-Armor, Fortifications)

Navajo IV(Free)
Gatling(Anti-Infantry)
Cluster Rocket(Anti-Infantry)
Large Rocket(x2)(Anti-Armor Missiles)

Ironbill Dropship(2520)
Large Rocket(Anti Armor missiles)

>Items/Weapons/Armor
Vanguard Armor(Free)
Hydra Shotgun(Free)
Shield(Free)
Energy Baton(Free)
Modern Attire(Free)
Chart(Free)
Blink Implant(1000)
Holocomms(250)
System Jammer(500)
Assault Rifle(450)
>Citizen bonuses
>>New Minsk(Citizen)
>>>Chief- 30 raiders loyal to me
Gives me some initial base manpower, a good start but these guys will need equipment and training
>>>Red-Tongue- Fluent in Russian and have good relations with raider groups
Gives me connections on the surface as well as a pool of manpower to recruit from
>>Phrusto-fel
>>>Family- Fellians are friends for life, help is only a phonecall away
I would attempt to get Fellian contracts, and higher Fellian ex-military in my organization
>>>Conscripts- 10 Fellian recruits
In my service to the Fellians, I have been provided with a squad of recruits, they will need equipment and and training
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>>51568231
Man this takes me back. Space Refugee was one of the first builds I made on these threads. Spess Refugee guy was supposed to make an update with companions made by anons in the thread and then he just disappeared.

I also just realized I've been posting on these damn threads for over two years now, I really need to find a way out of this hell before it takes a decade of my life away.
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>>51568119
>>51568204

My main problem with Lewdness as a category is that due to how diverse fetishes are, I can't figure out how much the various life experiences should each influence it, and I don't want to offer a list of fetishes to buy with lewdness points because I'll likely leave something out...

Actually... What if you could pick how lewd they were near the end, and like, more extremes would cost some points in other categories to show how their lewdness got in the way of other aspects of their life (I mean, time apent lewding is less time spent elsewhere), and then amongst a list of offered fetishes could be a "don't like what you see? Buy this custom option to write your own that I forgot to list".

As for the intelligence stat, I was trying to have handiness and charm be sort of "skills learned" and "ability to manipulate" to cover that area, but yeah, it doesn't really cover like, what someone studying all day would have gained... I'm at work now so I really need to stop typing on my phone here, but thank you for the feedback, I think I'm ready to do some proper brainstorming while I stock shelves all night.

I'll still be reading stuff on here though if anyone has any other ideas.
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>>51568602
>Wishlist-
Mobile base- for command and control
Second dropship for transport/ground support
APC- for carrying my troops
Additional capital ships including dreadnaughts, broad frigates and carriers with fighter complements, giving my fleet a serious fighting capability
Labs for my tech/biological development
Med lab for my troops
Biochrono Bath to reward myself and employees
Business Investments to build ties and get a steady side income
Liberty- to help realize my vision of a libertarian american paradise on New Minsk
also as a badass enforcer/bodyguard
Lunefree- as my communications chief, and the free broad frigate as a hauler/carrier escort
Professor M Dulbejen- He can assist with scientific research and make my ships and vehicles more efficient
Professor Vyaan Ru- Allows my ship to blink as well as allowing my fleet to take shortcuts across the galaxy
BUILD-R UNIT 8-5-7- To assist in Rebuilding New Minsk
Chronos Ring- because blinking next to someone and freezing time is badass
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>>51568615
I am the son of a wealthy trader who fell in love with a woman from New Minsk, giving me exposure to the culture of both that world and the greater universe.

My plan is to ultimately to become King of New Minsk, raising money and my own reputation and prestige through mercenary work.

The initial plan is to lay a trap to steal Yao's carrier, by hiring on with him as mercenaries/security force

Abraham Hruckhan will serve as my Fleet Admiral/Captain of the carrier while Farkus handles overall strategy.

They will be waiting on the path of Yaos ship in the dreadnought, disable the engines and jam their comms/sensors to board while the rest of my people take it from the inside.

Vega will seduce him and get him alone to take him hostage, while me, Torres and 10 of my best men take control of the rest of the ship. We will pretend to be preparing to repel boarders as we "secure" the bridge and key areas of the ship.

Ultimately my plan is either kill Yao outright or extort information/money from him and then kill him at a later time. Im hoping his crew will accept working under new management, but if they refuse I may just release a few out the airlock until the others change their minds.

After that I will use my Fellian connections to get mercenary contracts against the Satorcians, using the carrier as my mobile base while the dreadnought engages in trade interdiction operations, giving us a cut of the loot as privateers.

Ideally this along with the contracts will allow me to purchase the things on my wishlist and expand my companys services, taking contracts for example on titanfall or polyrot, killing titans and zombies respectively. It seems theres no shortage of work to go around.

Eventually I would take my wealth and army and conquer/rebuilt New Minsk.
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>>51568627
I would be open to recruiting mercenaries and adventurers from all over to join my ranks. After New Minsk I would expand out to other colonies and undeveloped planets to take over. Anyone willing to follow some basic rules with some smarts and the willingness to work hard is welcome in my realm.
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>>51568605
Don't worry you'll stop feeling anything after 5 years.
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>>51564397
>Sacrifice
Treasured Lover

>Desire
War

>Human Form
Aspect of Obscurity

>Apostolic Incarnation
Demonic

>Apostolic Abilities
Apotropaic Weapon
Enhanced Regeneration
Embodiment of Wrath
Telepathic Connection
Inspiring Presence

>Abyssal Abilities
Casual Sight

>Apostle Spawn
Section (Motif Bearing: Knights)

>Shortcomings
The Struggler

Demon mercenaries working for the highest bidder? Hell yes. Maybe The Struggler is even willing to fork over enough coin to hire us.
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>>51562712
>School
Lunestier
>Classes
Physical Training 3x
Smithing 2x
First Aid 1x
Diplomacy 2x
Assassination 2x
>Companions
Mecherath
Luvyna
Duxix
Eydal Northbreed
>Events
Sports 5x
Basilisk Den 3x
Party Planner 4x
>Clubs
Newspaper
Sports
>Drawbacks
Exchange Program
I want to be the best supporter/assassin ever.
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>>51568876
Hiker David best waifu.
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>>51564121
Going full creep
>10+ Years
>Family Friend
>First Name
>Friendly, Lustful
>Autistic, Clingy, Pure, Genius, Childish, Kind
>Sleeping, Handholding, Kissing
>Mall Center, The Theaters, Indoors
>Shorter, Flat, Cute, Narrow, Scrawny, Pale, Unorthodox
>To Be With You
>Foreign, Dropped
>Striped Panties
>Glasses, Good Smile
>Elf
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>>51565765
Uh, ok got a question: this otherworldly being wants to claim the player as their -bride-. Does this mean it has dicks and the intent to use them?
Because, I didn't read through the whole thing, but, if that's the inescapable conclusion, I think I'll give this one a pass.

Though if that was not the case in a previous version, then I would be interested in a link to that.
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>>51565765
Desiree

--FORM--
§Genitalia:
>Vagina
-Embellishments
-Lubrication
-Musculature
-Cilia
-Lumen
-Plush
>Penis
-Flare
-Knot
-Spines
-Prehensile
-Lumen
-Pillar
§Shape:
>Enticing
§Chest:
>Gifted
§Influences:
>Quasicosmic
§Face:
>Seductive
>Elder Gaze
§Flourishes:
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness

--PROGENERATION--
§Strategy:
>Cultivation
-Rapid Maturation
§Specialty:
>Humanoid
-Hybrids

--DOWRY--
§Treasure:
>Celestial Charms
>Argent Spark
-Argent Blaze
>Rorrim Mirror x2
>Rite of Worldstepping
>Seductive Array
>Filthy Lucre
§Bonds:
>Sensual Ritualists
>Janetta of the Frills, Couturier
>Bonded Bride x2
§Urges:
>
§Stigmata:
>Stigma of the Rising Star

--AMBITION--
§Castellan of the Cosmos
>Conquering Crusader

Final Stats
1 Pedigree
4 Status
8 Allure
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>>51569228
*dicks or any other penetrative endowements.
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>>51569241
Grace

--FORM--
§Genitalia:
>Vagina
-Embellishments
-Lubrication
-Musculature
-Cilia
-Lumen
-Plush
>Penis
-Flare
-Knot
-Spines
-Prehensile
-Lumen
-Pillar
§Shape:
>Enticing
§Chest:
>Gifted
§Influences:
>Quasicosmic
§Face:
>Regal
>Elder Gaze
§Flourishes:
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness

--PROGENERATION--
§Strategy:
>Pupation
-Multimetamorphosis
§Specialty:
>Multitudinous
-Monarch

--DOWRY--
§Treasure:
>Crimson Manual
>Primordial Woad
>Argent Spark
-Argent Blaze
>War-Fan of the Concubine-Marshal
>Rite of Worldstepping
>Regal Array
>Filthy Lucre
§Bonds:
>Knights-in-Crimson
>Prime Mate
>Bonded Bride x2
§Urges:
§Stigmata:
>Stigma of the Rising Star

--AMBITION--
§Castellan of the Cosmos
>Conquering Crusader

Final Stats
2 Pedigree
8 Status
2 Allure
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>>51569255
Harmony

--FORM--
§Genitalia:
>Vagina
-Embellishments
-Lubrication
-Musculature
-Cilia
-Lumen
-Plush
>Penis
-Flare
-Knot
-Spines
-Prehensile
-Lumen
-Pillar
§Shape:
>Enticing
§Chest:
>Gifted
§Influences:
>Quasicosmic
§Face:
>Primal
>Chakra Eye
>Elder Gaze
§Flourishes:
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness
>Lactation
-Nurturing
>Ejaculation
-Fortifying
-Altruistic


--PROGENERATION--
§Strategy:
>Synergism
§Specialty:
>None

--DOWRY--
§Treasure:
>True Name
>Nuptial Torc
>Lavender Grimoire
>Primordial Woad
>Celestial Charms
>Argent Spark
-Argent Blaze
>Regal Array
>Filthy Lucre
§Bonds:
>Sensual Ritualists
>Bonded Bride x2
§Urges:
>
§Stigmata:
>Stigma of the Rising Star

--AMBITION--
§Castellan of the Cosmos
>Conquering Crusader

Final Stats
8 Pedigree
4 Status
4 Allure
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>>51569267
This trio of bonded Brides intend to carve for themselves out of the Cosmos an empire to shape to their whims... and that of their spouse, of course.
Desiree, an extraordinary seductress, intends to help foster this empire through 'diplomatic' means. Sometimes with actual diplomacy, other times by seducing import figure heads while making diplomatic visits. Her ability to exists in three places at once lets carry out multiple such operations at once. Her one failing is her offspring are usually overshadowed by those of other Brides.
Grace is a commanding figure, brilliant military leader and a powerful combatant. It is she who will command the armies when it is time to march to war and possibly personally deal with significant threats that get a little too close to home. Like Desiree her breeding capacity is some what sub-par; additionally she isn't as appealing as most other Brides either.
Harmony's greatest gift is her ability to bestow gifts upon the progeny of other Bides. As a Synergistic Bride of exceptional pedigree she will do what ever it takes to ensure her bond mates offspring see their fullest potential; be it through acting as a surrogate for those they conceive, infusing them with her blessing before they procreate or by 'preparing' mates for them ahead of time.
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>>51561379

Am I the only person who would pick 50% lethality and lesson learned?
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>>51569354
no, that was my first choice as well
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>>51569354
That's what I first thought... but it made the CYOA appallingly boring, don't you think?

And it only makes sense if you pick a doomsday from which a lesson can be learned (WW3 or Nuclear Holocaust for example. Not ring of fire since it's not really humankind's fault if the volcanoes decide to be huge dicks).
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>>51569394
>Not helping humanity learn never to get sick.
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>>51569354

As far as cyoa's go, I tend to take the highest point-giving options that I feel are still do-able...

But if this were real life and God suddenly spake unto me from the heavens, I'm pretty sure I would shit my pants with indecision. Is God fucking with me, like he did with Abraham? What if he wants to know that I'll preserve as many people as possible? What if I do that, and he actually wanted me to wipe out the entire species? The only thing I'd feel was absolutely certain is that I am being tested, and I have a 50/50 shot at failing, the consequences of which are unknown (but possibly eternal).
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>>51569228
Teiatat has no gender. Or maybe a surfeit of them... either way, the title Bride doesn't describe their status in the bedroom, but politically. It is Teiatat's house and harem, so much so that the title of -bride- is the only one that describes the holder's station, regardless of the bearer's gender.

Really, Teiatat spends little time with the Brides. You need only worry about the consummation of the marraige, and the details of that I leave up the the player
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>>51569429
Hey since you are still here can I get a quick assessment on my build >>51569241
I'll be honest, I'm not sure which one to consider 'me' because I like them all alot.
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>>51569394

The first five and the asteroid are all potential options from which a lesson could be learned. War and the Environment are certainly straightforward, but not the only things from which humanity could learn a lesson. Like "Be nice to each other and care about others." "Don't treat AI like slaves." or "Earth is a tiny speck in the grand scheme of things. Stop putting all your eggs in one basket. Get the fuck off this rock and start spreading across the universe."
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>>51569476
Humanity doesn't really learn lessons though.
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>>51569475
Not the first build I've seen with three different specialists. This is the first such build I've seen with the Pedigree-Bride being synergistic.

Did you aim for 8's and then spend the remaining favor on flavor options, or was that just how it turned out?
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>>51565765
>for a longer period of time The options below
are purchased per vagina.
Looks like there is supposed to be a period after "time".
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>>51569546
This build was actually mostly finished back in the WiP before the stat ranges were explained. At that point all the stat ranges were an 8 and a pair of 2s for all three with about 11 points left over each. I changed things up a bit for flavor and to add a bit of character and finally used those left over points.
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>>51569542

Except when they do - as is stated in the description of Lesson Learned.
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Post husband/dad/sons cyoas
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>>51569616
To clarify, with the specialists main stat I tried to get it reasonably high with out having to tank other stats too hard and 8 happened to be a good sweet spot for that regardless of what stat was aimed for. Good job on the balance.
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>>51569429
Mh, well so long as Teiatat is not interested in my orifices and has a vag, we can make it work.
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>>51561469
"The only good bug is a dead bug"
Equipment: Medium Armor(free riot shield, also buying the collapsible upgrade)4k, Servos (3k), Battery and Capacitor (5k), Grenade Satchel(2k), Environment Control(2k), Thruster Pack(3k), Advanced Targeting(2k), Magnum Pistol(5k), Banshee rifle(6k), Sweeper Shotgun(10k), Melee-Ghost energy blade(7k). Pocket the last 1000 credits for random stuff I can find.
Location: Klendathu
"YOU APES WANNA LIVE FOREVER?!"
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>>51569542
>implying any mortal is any different

Only those who live to remember their mistakes can learn from them. Do you expect a mosquito to remember that biting you will bring it pain?

>>51569476
>get off this rock
>implying that's possible with the few resources left

Have the decency to accept your fate, mortal. All other worlds must burn - what hubris drives you to think yourself the exception?
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>>51564121
>1-3 years, Real Sister
>Aniki, Baka-Nii (interchangeably in both public and private)
>Friendly, Rivalry
>Tomboy, Popular, Mature, Haughty, Nurturing, "Autistic" (grumpy and standoffish)
>Insulting (sikk bants), Hitting (enjoys martial arts), Sleeping (depreciated; was afraid of the dark when younger)
>Hangouts: Gymnasium (particularly MMA, see: Hitting)
>Outdoors (long hikes in nature trails)
>Bar
>Features: Shorter, Regular, Noble, Thicc
>Athletic, Tanned, Unladylike
>Desire: To Shape You Up
>Drawbacks: Sickly (frequent colds caught entirely too easily, like a proper anime imouto. Athletic health-nut tendencies in part to counter these.)
>Mental (Does hippy veganism count? I'm going to count it. ties in with health-nut above)
>Spats, tattoo, piercing, sharp eyes

Please do not lewd this imouto
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>>51561469
Medium
Riot shield + collapsible
Battery
Thruster Pack
Energy Shield
Grenade Satchel + Nanolathe
Advanced Targetting
Cyber Warfare
Liberator
Railgun
Vavatch Orbital

Where are the psychic powers
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>>51569658
>>51569616

All I did was if I had a stat to improve X, I forced myself to come up with stats for Y and Z

I picked 8 as the top tier cutoff because that was where the minmaxers tended to top out on, though maybe I should have aimed a little higher. Thanks though! I'm flattered that you've had a build on the burner for this long.
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>>51564121
>4-6 years
>Real sister
>Onii-chan (public), Nii-Nii (private)
>Monopolized, Lustful, Friendly
>Genki, Popular, Clingy, Lewd, Selfish, Domineering, Haughty, Territorial
>Sleeping, Hugging, Kissing, Teasing, Bathing
>The Park, The Theaters, The Beach, Indoors
>Shorter, Regular breasts, Cute face, Thick butt
:Scrawny, Pale, Fashionable
>To be important
>Nympho, Catfight, Mental (bipolar), Yandere, Yandere*, Gullible
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>>51569878
Well thank you for making something that head my interest for so long.
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>>51569748

The fact that an extremely powerful being setup the scenario where in which I could teach my lesson?
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>>51569890
Well, anon, it was nice knowing you. Moment you so much as mention any other woman, you're bound to die (or see said other woman die).

Seriously, how the fuck do people like yandere?
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>>51569878
All things considered, Lavender is very close to nobilis in a way
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>>51568608
The problem with lewdness and your CYOA is that it'd basically have to make her a slut, or at least list our her sexual exploits. Most guys, even normal ones, don't like to hear about who and how their girlfriend fucked before they met, so that'd make your CYOA real unappealing, real fast.
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>>51570025
How so?

Also, it's rare to meet a person who's heard of nobilis.

Though, I'm more a fan of Exalted 2nd ed, though Borgstrom worked on that one, too.
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>>51569878
From my reading, 8 isn't a hardcap. Someone with 10 or 11 in a stat is very superior to someone with an 8. It's just that's as high as the scale bothers to quantify.
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>>51570135
Indeed. I meant to say that 8 was the line that separated the heavyweights from the mainstream, but you got it spot on.
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>>51561379
Ninety percent.
Red death.
Lesson Learned.
The Mystery Reccurs, Nephilim Ancestry.
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>>51565583
He became a lich, clearly he's going to be slower, it will take him some time to adjust to unlife.
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>>51570150
So are you ever going to reveal/strongly hint at what the deal with silver is? Or did I just miss the memo at some point?
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>>51570461
Argent is supposed to be mysterious.
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>>51570555
Welp I'm just going to have to head cannon it.
Argent is the color of friendship and love.
Why don't you need to worry about returning if you find the Argent throne? Because you just truly found your way into your spouses heart and are whisked away to a happily ever after?
Why is the Argent Spark/Blaze a powerful attack? If Saturday morning cartoons taught me anything growing up it is that if you use friendship or love to power a magical attack it is the most destructive for in the universe.
Friendship is magic bitches!
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>>51567702

>he still thinks 4chan is anonymous
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>>51570625
Don't tell him Jake
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>>51565765
Here is my attempt at a min/max build. I took what I needed to boost all stats to 8, then spent the remaining points on some goodies like that make you a better bride. I also tried to avoid really unpleasant drawbacks like the barred one, with limited success.

Form
- Penis (Free)
- Flare (-1)
- Knot (-1)
- Spines (-1)
- Prehensile (-2)
- Lumen (-2)
- Pillar (-3) +1A

Shape: Powerful (-2)
Chest: Hard (-2)

Influences
- Xenosubstantial (-2)
- Quasicosmic (-4)

Face
- Regal (Free) +1S
- Chakra Eye (-2)
- Elder Gaze (-2)

Flourishes
- Ouroboros Metabolism (-2)
- Ejaculation (-2)
- Fortifying (-3) +1P
- Addictive (-3) +1S
- Aphrodisiac (-3) +1A
- Altruistic (+3)

Strategy
- Cultivation (Free)
- Rapid Maturation (-3) +1A

Dowry
- Lavender Grimoire (-7) +2P
- Primordial Woad (-3) +1P
- Abyssal Ink (-3) +1S
- Celestial Charms (-3) +1A
- Argent Spark (-2)
- Argent Blaze (-5) +1S, +1A
- Regal Array (-3) +1S

Bonds
- Sans Servitors (+4)
- Lithar the Siren (+2)
- Auramoth the Gleaner (-7) +1P, +1S
- Shared Resource (+2)
- The Eunuch (-10) +1P, +1S, +1A
- Sweetened Pot (-3) +1S

Urges
- Widow’s Hunger (-3) +1P
- Cerebral Recurve (+1) -1S, +1A
- Questant of the Thrones (-9) +1P, +1S, +1A

Stigmata
- Stigma of the Rising Star (+12)

Ambition
- Gardner of Devotion (+2)
- Cloistered Idol (+2)

End Stats: 8P/8S/8A
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Some suggestions for future editions of Slut Life. I don't follow this thread, so some might have already been suggested, but it can't hurt to try. I'd also like to say that Slut Life is one of my favourites, so thank you for making it.

Embedded in wall (can't find a better name): Another punishment.
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5509305
https://shanachan.org/fetish/src/1326238402713.jpg

Mannequin: I think this would best fit as a job where the contestant gets encased in a mannequin costume and put on display wearing various outfits.
http://redflare500.deviantart.com/art/Cliff-Mannequization-Process-169722986
http://heartgear.deviantart.com/art/Sl-160-606933565
http://heartgear.deviantart.com/art/SL-161-607309318

Peril: Another punishment. Risk of death wouldn't fit the tone of the rest of the CYOA, but failing could still result in getting saved (if necessary) and something else humiliating or painful happening instead. This would also be a heck of a lot more entertaining for viewers than a lot of the stuff already in there.
https://shanachan.org/fetish/src/1469472775287.jpg
https://shanachan.org/fetish/src/1373519270120.jpg

Soft vore: Maybe as another 4 hour/week punishment, but might work better at 1 week per couple months.
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/1769977
https://shanachan.org/fetish/src/1351095152635.jpg
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>>51570222
Nothing like being sent to a new world to kick some ass and fuck some aliens. Gotta love the smell of green.
>History: New Arrival
>Age and Gender: 17-male
>Race: Human
>Starting Location: Beacon Academy, Vale
>Semblance: Fast Mover (Never skip leg day)
>Gifts(starting points 100)
Memory(-20), Intelligence(-10), Will(-10), Strength(-20), Agility(-20), Energy(-20). Everything I need to get through learning in school and being able to survive.
>Shop Equipment
Weapons:
Melee-Kukri Sword-100(Weight Enhancement-100)
Ranged-Auto Shotgun-200(Dust Mod-50)
Items and Gear:
Scroll-free, Parachute and Grappling Hooks-150, Armor-100, Wilderness Gear-50, Dust Charges-50, Rebreather-50.
Pocket the last 150 lien for books and shit.
I will go anywhere I am needed, preferably where I can kill a lot of Grimm...so where is team RWBY?
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>>51570222
>Name: Midas Malorne
>Origin: Noble [80]
>Age: 17
>Race: Human
>Location: Haven Academy, Mistral
>Semblance: Force of Nature (Metal)
>Gifts: Intelligence [70], Memory [50], Energy [30], Hope [20]
>Talents: Survival [0]

>Weapon: Variable (Bident/Crossbow) [600]
>Weapon Mods: Collapsible [550], Dust Mod [500], Weight Reduction [400]
>Items & Gear: Armor [300], Scroll [Free], Wilderness Gear [250], Dust Charges [200], Spy Drone [0]

The bident's name is Pactolus.

As for the rest of my team, they're probably based on Damocles, Minos, and Gyges.
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>>51570644
I like it. Real challenge mode: Reach 8/8/8 without rising star or making your life hell.
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>>51570751
Neat, hope we can fight against each other in the tournament. I'm this guy>>51570666
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>>51570222
>>51570666
>>51570777
Jesus fucking Christ.
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>>51570777
Now if only we each had the rest of a team.
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>>51570773
I can drop all the extra stuff from form (flare, knot, etc.) to get 7 more points, drop powerful and hard for 4, and drop ouroboros metabolism for 2. That gives me 13 free points, and I only need 12 to drop rising star.

I could also get another point by swapping out one of the 1/1/1 choices for lactation with all the trimmings and dependent. It would be kind of strange, but that's still 1/1/1 for only 8 points, and with allure 8 I'm pretty sure I can easily get a mortal to help me out with dependent.
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>>51570844
Yup, might be awhile before that happens though, it is pretty early/late though. I might just copy paste my build next thread.
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>>51570854
Well, lewd CYOA's never were much good for challenges...
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>>51570773
Though if you're an 8/8/8 bride right out of the gate on your own, aren't you basically a rising star already? You're a newbie, yet you're already a paragon of what it means to be a bride.
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>>51570888
Fair point.
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>>51570868
It's not exactly risk free, I'm still taking a 1 in 3 chance of getting myself vaporized by the argent throne when I go questing in the labyrinth for the lavender throne.
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>>51569674
>>51561469

We shall slay the filthy Xenos wherever they cower, brother.

Equipment

Heavy Armor (5k)
Riot Shield (2k)
Servos (Free w/armor)
Battery (2k)
Energy Shield (3k)
Environmental Control (2k)
-Environmental Shielding Upgrade (2k)
Grenade Satchel (2k)
Advanced Targeting (2k)
X-4C "Flesheater" (18k)
Chainsword (12k)

Wanted to get the upgraded grenades instead of the shield, but I was 1k short. I ain't goin' anywhere fast, but godDAMN if I can't just obliterate anything that gets within range. Not 100% sure if the bugs have a counter, would need to be a fast, ranged, glass-cannon type of thing to deal with me. Anything else is getting melted or shredded eventually.

And if I pair up with >>51569674 as previously stated, that vulnerability goes away. I will either advance at a decent pace behind heavy shielding, armor, and a physical shield until I can shredcinerate everything else, or if they attack I'll shredcinerate them as they swarm.
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>>51570945
Sounds like fun, I always wondered what it would be like to be the annoying scranny guy to the big tank companion. Lets kill some roaches and fuck some military chicks while we're at it, then go off to relax at a resort every once in awhile with our grunt chicks when on leave, come back and kill some more overgrown insects. I wouldn't be the glass cannon per say, but I wouldn't be as tanky as you. Gotta love grenades for days though.
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>>51561469
>>51569674
>>51570945
I am a fucking moron and just noticed this now...I don't need the capacitor for anything, hell I don't even know why I got it. I am gonna take that off and replace it with the Jetpack upgrade with the last of my cash.
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>>51571029

Yeah, I worded that kinda weird. Your build wasn't a glass cannon, it's the bugs who would NEED a high-damage, ranged, and FAST type of bug in order to take on my build. I have no range to speak of, and even though the servo description says it doubles the speed, I'm going to go ahead and bet that between the heavy armor, heavy shield, and big weapons, that I'm just going to be running about an unarmored person's pace.

Since that's the biggest one-on-one weakness my build has, being able to pair with the guy who, while not being able to fly, actually has ranged weapons AND mobility options makes for a powerful combo.

And yes, we'll rake in the dosh killin' bugs and shit, have some fun with some soldier chicks... Shit, it'll almost be sad when we eventually stomp the bugs so hard it all comes to an end. We'll just have to cry ourselves to sleep on top of our giant stacks of cash.
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>>51571089
>>51571167


And HELL YEAH DAT FLIGHT.

That just cemented the synergy. Like a Terminator and an Assault Marine working together, anything that goes for a short-range fight gets shredded, anything that hangs back or runs gets gunned down by the madman with a lightsaber and a jetpack.
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>>51571167
>>51571189
Fixed that mate so lets get this party started RIGHT, I will rain death from the skies and drive them too you. I will be the wave too your wall. I wonder if they have a point system for how much a bug is worth though? Eh whatever, WE SHALL BE THE ANGELS OF DEATH, and bitches, BUG REAPERS! I honestly cant remember why I grabbed the damn capacitor in the first place, I just saw it with battery and though grab it too without thinking about it. We need a theme song, and some sneaky fucker with lots of explosives, but what shall the song be?
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>>51564121
Making a somewhat "realistic" imouto build.

>4-6 years
How it usually is.

>Real Sister
Well, since this is trying to emulate a "real sister", I should pick "real sister."

>Aniki (public and private)
Most of the other stuff has been corrupted by hentai.

>Friendly
She's my sister, not my lover.

>Genki, Childish, Genius, Pure, Clingy, Popular
The regular stuff you might see in a real little sister.

>Insulting, Handholding, Hugging
Little sisters like to tease their brothers, right?

>Anywhere, Theme Park, Mall Center
Places they would probably go anyway.

>Shorter
Would be odd if someone that young wasn't, really.

>Flat
I assume they'll grow?

>Cute
She's young, so...

>Narrow
Dude, she's like 13 or something.

>Normal
Kind of thin, but not overly so.

>Fair
My skin color.

>Fashionable
A trendy, modern young girl.

>To Be With You
There's not really an option for "just being your friend," so this'll have to do.

>Foreign
My real second cousin, the closest thing I have to an imouto, lives in China, so...

>Printed
I don't know what little girls wear these days! I guess it's something like this?

>Glasses
Most "common" thing on here.
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>>51565765
...I'll just restate my question in a less fragmented manner, then...

Suppose that the Rite of Flesh Union is used to merge two brides, one with Pupation, the other with Subversion. Could the resulting merged being use Pupation to overcome the diminishing returns of Subversion?
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>>51562726
No, but with Chronicler Blessing you can forget them forever and don't be sad.
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>>51567270
Detachable limbs requires a penis for some reason, and detachable penis requires a penis...twice. Also, might want to add "Can't take No sleep" as a requirement for the Sleep in bondage mods, or make it so that they would be bound for the duration of the night, regardless of whether they had any intention to sleep.
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>>51562712
Schools:
>Lunestier
Classes:
>Martial Combat: Master
>Physical Training: Master
>Diplomacy: Advanced
>Dueling: Master
Classmates:
>Evergreen
>Suzette Highking
>Lyndy
The Great Tournament:
>Battle Royal
The Harvest Festival:
>Escort
The Grand Summit:
>Security
The Gathering of Life:
>Blind Date
Drawbacks:
>Transfer Student
>Hated Prodigy
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>>51566219
tartars aren't rus, not even a little bit
replace them with ruthenians or something

unless you were trying to troll russians
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>>51564121
+10 Years
Family Friend
Onii-chan
Protective, Friendly
Clingy, Pure, Genius, Mature, Kind, Expressionless
Head Patting, Handholding, Hugging
Mall Center, The Theaters, Theme Park, Indoors
Shorter, Flat, Cute, Narrow, Normal, Fair, Traditional
To Be With You
Dropped
Frilly
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>>51570222
>not posting the latest version
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>>51562712
School:
- Ej Har Institute

Classes:
- Bardic Arts (x3)
- Summoning Magic (x2)
- Ki Attunment (x2)
- Maneuvers (x1)
- Stealth (x1)
- Physical Training(x1)
- Blood Magic

Companions:
- Dax
- Farhat
- Bathsheba
- Nashwa
- Scal

Events:
- The Great Tournament (Battle Royal, The Great Hunt)
- The Harvest Festival (Basilisk Den)
- The Grand Summit (Security, Research Proposal, Battle of the Arts)
- The Gathering of Life (Blind Date)

Clubs and organizations:
- Music club
- Book club
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>>51561469
>Light Armor
>Magboots + Adhesive
>Battery
>Environmental Control
>Advanced Targeting
>Cyber Warfare + Unshackled AI
>Adaptive Camo + Active Cloaking
>X-2 "Hellion"
>M-66 "Railgun"
>CQC-12 "Jager"

>Sluna

Operators operating operationally
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>>51565765
>Final Revision
>Version 2

Heh.
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>>51573511
Actually more like "final version, revision 2".
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>>51564397
>Sacrifice: Dearly Held Companion
>Desire: Pleasure
>Human Form: Aspect of Sin
> Apostle Incarnation: Animalistic; Superhuman
>Apostle Abilities: Partial Incarnation, Conjuration, Sorcery, Enhanced Regeneration, Fertility, Corrupting Presence
>Apostle Spawn: Fragmented Self, Offspring
>Shortcomings: None
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>>51562712
>Odesium
>Ki Attunement x2, Physical Training x3, Enhancement x2, Explosions x3
>Eloise, Kengen, Tash, Farhat, Znanje
>Great Hunt, Battle Royal, Security, Bodyguard, Basilisk Den
>Cultural Clubs

>He doesn't want to punch enemies until they explode into a colorful conflagration like a true nipponese grasshopper hero.
If Tash hits the frontliners on accident we're screwed though
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>>51564397
>Yourself
>Pleasure
>Sin
>Demonic
>Human
>Apotropaic Weapon
>Infused Weapon
>Sorcery
>Regeneration
>Inspiring Presence
>Spacial Distortion
>Illusory Projection
>Section
>Motif Bearing

>The Struggler
>The Inhumans

Can an Apostle hunt down other Apostles?
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>>51572732
Its the same damn thing with different font, I don't care.
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>>51564121
>1-3 years, Real sister
>Baka-nii, First Name
>Hateful,Lustful
> Popular, Domineering, Elegant, Genius, rebellious, haughty
>Hugging, Kissing, Insulting
>Anywhere, Indoors, Love hotel
>Similar
>Gifted, sexy, thick, Athletic, Dark, Unorthodox
> To be Important
>Lingerie


>Twins

>1-3 years, Real sister
>Ani-ue, Ani-ue
>Friendly, Lustful
>Popular, Elegant, Genius, Submissive, Mature, Humble
>Sleeping, Bathing, Waking up
>Anywhere, the Grocer, Love Hotel
>Similar
>Gifted, Noble, thick, Athletic, Pale, traditional
>To be with you
>Nothing
>plump lips

Can't escape the imoutos. Not sure I'd want to.
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>>51565765
Why doesn't Subversion (Psyche Corruption) grant any Stat changes like the other sub-options do in the Strategy section?
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Here is a question for those interested in the Saber CYOA.

In fate/stay night servants have skills, usually each skill is graded on a scale of E to EX where E is the lowest and EX is the highest grade.

I'm debating with myself as to whether the introduction of skills should be something simple i.e you purchase a skill and that's that or whether I should go all out and make it so that every individual skill has its own ranks and each rank has its own description of what you could do at that level like the visual novel does.

For an example of what that would look like

Caster Class Skill: Item Construction:

Rank EX: The servant can craft a variety of powerful magic and mundane equipment, intelligent and independent acting constructs, weapons on the same level of a noble phantasm and potions that grant limited immortality with little delay.

Rank A: Allows for the rapid creation and deployment of a variety of magical items and weapons on the same level as those artifacts that could be found in the age of the gods far greater than anything modern sorcery can produce.

Rank B: Permits the servant to craft a large amount of items and soldiers of exceptionally high quality if they specialize in a single category of items, otherwise allows for items that rival modern magecraft in complexity.

Rank C: Can craft items and golems that are present in the servant's legend, these items are roughly the same as from when the servant was alive but cannot act without their master's orders and suffer from lowered stats

Rank D: Allows for perfectly crafting and replicating a single item from the servant's lifetime, otherwise allows for crafting potions items and weapons that are of comparable quality to human-made items from the modern age.

Rank E: Rather than crafting items, the servant is able to reinforce existing items or project items for a short amount of time before they fade away. Items crafted in this manner suffer from a reduction rank.
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>>51566174

Not me.
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>>51574221
I for one would appreciate the skills having their own ranks, but ultimately it would be up to whether or not you wish to flesh it out that much
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>>51570076
>posts on fourchin
>thinks you need to have had sex to have fetishes/sexual interest

I know the word "autistic" gets bandied about a lot...
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What happened to Xenoanon? It seems like he just shitposted, promised a bunch of CYOAs and died
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>>51564121
The basically a childhood friend build

>1-3 years
>Family friend
>First name in public, Nii-nii in private
>Friendly, Rivalry, Monopolizing
>Genius, Nurturing, Genki, Rebellious, Kind, Popular
>Hugging, Sniffing (these 2 are basically a set), HANDHOLDING, headpats
>Indoors, Anywhere, Grocers
>Similar height
>Regular bust
>Noble face
>T H I C C bless squats
>Normal physique
>Fair
>Traditional
>Rekindle and Important
>Onee
>Frilly
>Good smile
Childhood friends never win though
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>>51574571
You don't, but his system is one where her traits are decided by her life experiences. So.
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I want to hear some comments, complaints and suggestions from you guys.
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>>51574587
>I was exposed to internet pornography in my teenage years and subsequently became a pervert
>I was exposed to japanese animation in my teenage years and subsequently became a pervert
>I was exposed to a healthy adolescent sex drive in my teenage years and subsequently became a pervert
>I am so pure, so untouched, so secluded from men and society as a whole that my natural, biological inclinations towards sex are entirely unblunted and have increased under pressure, and subsequently became a pervert
>I fucked four Chads in the bed of a truck because I'm a pervert

Ahh shit, you have a point.
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>>51574621
More products are needed ofcourse.
I don't know about the current projects either.
Projects are supposed to be how you earn security or law. But I don't want them to overlap with what you're doing anyway too much.
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>>51574650
After this is a priviliges page, where you spend all your profit. That's where you get all the wish fulfillment options, like living place and lifestyle.
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>>51574669
>megatits are replaced by ties

Also, please make this in a program that allows you to line up the boxes. This page looks ridiculous.
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>>51574697
I regret to inform you the boxes are lined up.
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>>51574718
Not that anon, but it looks to me like the rows are properly aligned while the columns aren't.
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>>51574718
>the boxes are lined up.
To three different lines, which looks fucking atrocious.
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>>51564264
Would it be ridiculous for the Ascending bride to get the points for a Barred One bonding that her Descending partner fulfills? Based on the attempted power gaming in this thread and the fact that it's effectively 3-13 free points my gut says no but it would be really on-point flavor for my build.

>In time, you may come to strike a bargain of your own with the Barred One.

I think slightly supports my position as well. I mean, in general points shouldn't move between brides, that's just ripe for abuse. It just would be perfect for my Bride to be the one whoring her Bride-Sister out for cosmic power.
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>>51564121
Age Difference:
>4-6 Years

Blood Relations:
>Real Sister

Title:
>First Name

Relationship:
>Rivalry
>Distant

Personality Traits:
>Autistic
>Clingy
>Pure
>Childish
>Kind
>Haughty

Physical Habits:
>Handholding
>Insulting
>Bapping

Hang outs:
>The Grocers
>Indoors
>Gymnasium (once she's old enough)

Height:
>Similar

Breasts:
>Regular

Facial aspect:
>Cute

Buts & Hips
>Regular

Physique:
>Normal
>Chubby

Skin tone:
>Pale

Clothing:
>Unladylike

Desire:
>To Rekindle Your Bond
>To Be With You(?)

Disabilities & Drawbacks:
>Messy
>Bullying

Mundane Details:
>Plump Lips
>Birthmark

Hey, this is pretty good seeing as how I'm able to recreate my actual little sister. Thankfully the bullying is starting to decrease...
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>>51574221
It would be nice to have skill ranks and such.
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>>51574718
Do you have eye problems?
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>>51574221
>EX is the highest grade
That's wrong, the highest Grade is .
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>>51574830
And the Start Didn't show up. Whatever. Just look at BB/Mooncancer.
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>>51574621
>I want to hear some comments, complaints and suggestions from you guys.
I believe europe is in a really fragile place right now. That people need to realize and accept or differences before everyone is wearing trash bags and or dead.

Other then that, make this two pages instead of four.
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>>51574866
Wouldn't that be really annoying for the reader?
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>>51574221
While I think it would be nice, there is the small issue of there also being a fuckton of skills and that sounds like it would make the cyoa incredibly long. Not that I mind but I don't think it's necessarily worth the work.

>>51574830
>>51574855
4chan stopped allowing stars in posts for some reason around the time we got new moot you slut. Anyway star stats only applied to her stats, not her skills which were all EX rank instead. I'm pretty sure there have never been any star rank skills.
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>>51574221
Saber cyoa WHEN?
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>>51564121
10+ years. Maybe.. 12.. I don't know.
Adopted.
First Name
Lustful & Monopolized
Lewd, Genius, Mature, & Submissive.
Sleeping, Teasing, & Hand holding.
Indoors, Grocers, & Gymnasium.
Shorter
Gifted
Sexy Emphasis
Regular Emphasis
Athletic
Pale Emphasis, would translate to better complexion and such, right?
Fashionable.
To fuck you silly
I'll pick the two twins >>51574162

Foreign. Norway, perhaps.
Nympho
Bullying
Catfight
Yandere
Derelict
Yandere*

Why not a mix of panties? Let her decide.
Plump Lips
Good Smile

Monstergirl -> Succubus
Magical Girl
Esper
Twins [same except an angel]
Futa if their magic can make me one too, otherwise drop Derelict.
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>>51574264
It's no issue for me since I have large amounts of free time, but my worry is that since I plan for there to be around 25 different skills (basing myself on skills present in fate/stay fate/zero and fate/apocrypha) that it would end up becoming a slog to read through every description and manage your expenditure of points.

The first page which is just waifu/body crafting is already finished, but now what really makes it a Saber CYOA which is skills parameters and noble phantasms remain, without these things the CYOA is only slightly different from imouto and gentle femdom so I want this part to be as well made as possible, and over complicating things would end up being really unfun.

>>51574927
If you consider Grand Order then yes, there are possibly a hundred or so skills, but I plan on using only those skills from the parts of fate-verse that I've watched or read, so it's mainly from the fourteen servants of stay/zero and a few skills from apocrypha, mostly from ruler and mordred whom I consider saber clones.
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>>51575023
Well what some consider a slog to read others, like myself, love to read
It all comes to personal preference, so I'd say do it
Then again I'm someone who loves to visit Traveller every so often to read more of whatever's been elaborated upon
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Fuck Donald Drumpf.
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>>51575118
Wrong board, friendo. This is /tg/, not /pol/
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>>51571369
Well, that depends on how you interpret flesh union working. Let's say you're trying to combine a spoon and a fork.

If you say it works like a swiss army knife, where you can flip out a spoon or a fork, then no, your plan won't work.

If you say that you get a spork instead, then the answer depends on if a spork works as good as a spoon and a fork separately.

tl;dr, I would say no, this plan won't work, because pupation is part of a process that creates new life and subversion isn't, but if the plan makes sense to you and would make a better story Wonder Bride Powers Activate! then by all means go for it.

>>51573511
>>51573543
No matter how you slice it I still look the fool.

>>51574215
Because one, it would disrupt the balance between the other options and two, I forgot.

>>51574767
Normally I'd say no, but if you fluff it so that the Ascendant Bride really is supposed to be the one fulfilling the deal, and this causes other problems on a semi-regular basis, then I don't see the problem, because in that case you're increasing the total cost before spreading it around.
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>>51574917
Don't see why it would. My reason being that it's easier to post.
>>51575118
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>>51575118
Too late, Mr. President is a married man.
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>>51575146
You'd have to scroll more to get to the part you want to read, instead of just being able to click it.
It's supposed to be one of those CYOAs with multiple point pools all affecting each other, so you're going to be going back and forth for a bit.
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>>51573930
>The Struggler
Can an Apostle hunt down other Apostles while the guy hepped up on berserker rage defies fate to kill them.
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>>51575371
Guts has already worked in the past with apostles in order to kill bigger prey, I'd be willing to bet he'd work with an apostle whose sole purpose is to hunt down other apostles.
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>>51575396
For all we know that skeleton knight guy is one too.
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>>51575138
>Well, that depends on how you interpret flesh union working. Let's say you're trying to combine a spoon and a fork.
>If you say it works like a swiss army knife, where you can flip out a spoon or a fork, then no, your plan won't work.
>If you say that you get a spork instead, then the answer depends on if a spork works as good as a spoon and a fork separately.
Going by the text (and what I recall from previous discussions), it sounds like you could have it either way. Also I just realized that I've been thinking of/meaning Pupation w/ Multimetamorphosis instead of just regular Pupation this whole time.

The way I see it, repeated Pupation (via Multimetamorphosis) would increase the progeny's potential power each time, whereas Subversion sounds like it'd lock down part of their power potential for a specific purpose (hence the diminishing returns). Therefore, if you can keep increasing their potential, you could also keep adding more purposes.

Another way to look at it could be that repeated use of Subversion would result in increasing the potential uses for the progeny at the cost of reduced effectiveness, whereas repeated Pupation would increase the offpring's effectiveness for whatever uses they were made for. Ergo, using both in tandem should at least let you reach an equilibrium in terms of versatility and effectiveness, plus making it possible to repurpose the progeny for something completely different if need be.
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>>51575138
>Wonder Bride Powers Activate!
And now I have the WonderMomo theme stuck in my head.
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>>51574934
You people keep shit posting Sabers all the time so I added a Saber option in the next version of Nemesis. Almost done btw ^^
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>>51575550
Well, my inner contrarian could come up with an argument for exactly why that won't work, but truth be told, that's a good abuse of the system as I set it up. Go for it, friend
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>>51575258
Shrinking Violet
Curvy
Orphan
Old Money
Unemployed

She's like a grathgnasyuthasnfrhweasdcx in the bedroom.

Why would you want a poor waifu when you can get a rich shy waifu that will let you live in their mansion?
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>>51575371
It's no fun if I'm not running headlong toward my inevitable doom. The question is how many others I can bring down with me first.

If Guts is willing to work with me, great. If he kills me, it's still one less Apostles roaming the Earth. Win-Win.
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>>51575934
cool!
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Did Nemesis ever get posted this thread?
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>>51575934
>No ahoge
>Call it a seiba

You know nothing. I bet her sword can't even shoot beams.
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>>51574221
>EX is the highest grade

EX, at least originally, isn't indicative of a high grade. It was for things that couldn't be statted or went outside the bounds of the stat system.
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>>51576268
You're right, but I can't mechanically make that obvious so I'm just treating it as SUPER HIGH GRADE.
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>>51575258
Is my waifu as old as the sacrifice or can I kill off Maggie Smith and receive a teenage hottie?
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>>51564121
Do I need drawbacks to buy them something in the Panties section?

And what the hell would be the difference between not buying anything in the Panties section and buying the Nothing option?
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>>51576350
I imagine that not buying anything from the panties section would just leave it to her choice. Buying the nothing option will completely prevent her from wearing any underwear.
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>>51576350
She wears the underwears she wants rather than what you want.
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>>51574621
I dunno, i worked in marketing myself, but all the crunch heavy stuff with brands and products seems boring even if i would love to see megacorp CYOA.
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>>51575934
Wow, that's actually a really good piece of fan art. Would you please post it? It's hard to find decent pics of warrior women that don't look like skanks.
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>>51576765
You find a lot of that in artstation if you type in saber.

Generally western artists try to make realistic when they're basing themselves off on anime.
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>>51564121
4-6years seems like a good age gap.
Cousin is distant enough for lewd purposes. Barely incest but close enough for family benefits.
Nii-nii is cute.Friendly and lustful.
Submissive and humble are good traits. Clingy is honestly kind of endearing. Since she's my kin, of course she needs to be genius and mature. And since this is wish fulfillment, also lewd.
Sleeping and bathing together are cute and lewd. Insulting is the basis of a good relationship.
Bars are legitimately nice places to hang out, if it's the right kind of bar. Restaurants too. Actually, restaurant then bars is a good plan for a night. Only one left, so Outdoors.
Similar height. Regular breasts and butt. Normal physique, pale skin, fashionable.Gullible seems not too bad since most people are nice. There's no need for a girl to wear panties if she's cute.
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Post more CYOA's
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>>51576977
Post more CYOA's what?
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>>51576810
>Bars are legitimately nice places to hang out
whoa
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>>51577045
What is this specific CYOA you're talking about?
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>>51577072
Because I don't know if you're American or European, I don't know if you're surprised at someone holding this opinion or being sarcastic since of course they're good at their sole solitary purpose. Either way, bars are different in different cultures.
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>>51577074
I dunno. What makes you think the other guy didn't mean something specific with CYOA?
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Don't know if this wip is being actively worked on or even who the author is, but the lore is pretty cool so far. Needs some more work on the magic fluff though.

The name is something I gave it cause I have an autistic need to do so if I save a CYOA.
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>>51577129
Why are we talking with spoilers?
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>>51577130
Oh look, It's my project. Thanks for the criticism, I'll be sure to improve it.
To answer your other questions, My Author name Is NRG (Not the company, which I just found out actually exists). I am technically working on it, but college is a thing and it's getting in the way somewhat. Still, I'm sure I'll find time to do more of it.
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