CYOA thread

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>>51233796

>>51233796
What is this, a CYOA for ants?

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>>51233802
>didn't save properly
shit

>>51233617
>>51233638
>>51233652
And thus Commander Omni-Wall was born.

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>>51233816

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HIGHLANDER IS DEAD, LONG LIVE HIGHLANDER

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And Anon said, "Let there be OC," and there was gentle femdom.

Disclaimer: It's not entirely finished yet. But it's mostly functional so here.

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>>51233895

>>51232566
>What system would be best used for a magical girl game?
BESM would probably work well in addition to the other systems mentioned. BESM = Big Eyes Small Mouths, it's all anime based.

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>>51233922

>>51233885
Excellent work anon! What's left to add to it? Will there be a second page of some sort?

>51233721
> One day a young ninja named Kaneki was attacked by a Dead Apostle Ancestor.

>>51233970
Shit. >>51233721

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>>51233885
>Already have gotten so much OC
>Multiple galleries that cater to my fetishes extremely well
>Now this

What a time to be alive. Cheers anon

>>51233885
Ideal waifu generator?

Sure.

>Christmas Cake
>Equal Height (6'2")
>Athletic
>Busty
>Child Bearing
>Noble
>Bob Cut
>Receptive
>Private Submissive
>Tattoos, Glasses
>Generous, Smugtacular, Charisma, Tomboy, Heavy Drinker, Cool, Pervert, Kind-Hearted, Idealistic, Laid-Back
>Lifting, Anime, Computer, Cooking, Lazing

>acquire /fit/ gentle femdom waifu who shares all of my most important hobbies
>get shredded and eat like a king
>nightly destructo-sex

Well thanks anon, now I'm sad.

>>51233961
The finished product will be exactly 10,000 pixels long. It's basically one more section for choosing fetishes and whether she wants to enact that fetish on you, receive it from you, or wants it both ways. I decided to give it a bit more time for writing since I'm not quite sure how to write descriptive and appealing paragraphs for fetishes I don't have but are closely linked to gentle femdom. So I'll probably have it finished in eventually, but likely just a few days.

Even without that part the cyoa is still good to play, so knock yourselves out.

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>>51233885
In general I would say that I like it (it's pretty hot), but those butt and hips size images are not exactly well-chosen. They're all very similar and not of a wide variety of size. Even the waifish size is average or even above average to be quite honest.

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Posting for Beri.

>>51233885
Fresh Graduate

Shorty

Regular Weight

Busty

Child Bearing

Noble

Sex Hair

Sexual Predator

Private Submissive

Piercings
Glasses
Inhuman

Feminine
Cool
Pervert
Laidback
Neat Freak
Motherly
Idealistic
Pragmatic
Generous
Cunning

Movies
Videogames
Cooking
Shooting
Reading

Long Tongue

I wouldn't have made a build if there wasn't a Private Submissive option. Girls that are capable and forward on the outside but actually want to be dommed on the inside are my favorite.

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>>51233796

Marquise Valeria Procula

>Habitable World 25
>Cities (Free)
>Mines (Free)
>Spaceport 30
>Hypernet Node 35
>Orbital defenses 45
>Construction yards 70
>Subterranean Cities 80

>Moon (Habitable) 100
>Mines (Free)
>Cities (Free)
>Spaceport (Free)

>Star (Sunlike) 110
>Antimatter Station 155

>Dreadnought 255
>Hyperflux Shields 260
>Teleport Bay 265
>Hospital 270
>Point Defense Turrets 275
>EMP Beam 280
>Anti-Cloaking Array 285
>Integrated Jump Gate 300
>Drone Hanger 305
>Drop Pods 310
>Onboard Constructors 320
>Siege Weaponry 325
>Planet Destroyer Weapon 415
>Armoured Regiment 440
>Antigrav Packs 445
>All-Environment Proofing 450
>Size Increase (10,000) 500

>Self-Repairing Vehicles
>Anti-Ageing Serum
>Industrial Antimatter

>Princess Theia 100

Everyone knew something wasn't quite right with her from a young age. But what could they do about it? She was the Princess' favorite cousin! They played together as children! Why not just stick her on a populated, but out of the way planet and forget about it? 15 Years later the population of the world of Temnaya Ten' and it's moon live deep in underground cities. Under Marquise Valeria Procula's iron fist, the whole society has been practically enslaved and is devoted to mining and building The Marquise's personal army, including one of the largest ships ever built and exhausting her planet's resources. The force may be impractical, but is truly terrifying to behold. Her obsession, strange as it may be, has at least led to the disappearance of pirates in the sector. Now that Princess Theia's grown and is looking for allies in her quest to become Empress, her estranged former playmate may yet be an even greater service to the galaxy.....

>>51234133
Also, no option for picking hair or skin color?

>>51233885
>Background
High School

>Physical
Shorty
Scrawny
Bee Stings
Tight
Cute
Bob Cut

>Sex
Receptive
Private Sub

>Extra
Incest
Glasses
Inhumanity (Animal Ears)

>Personality
Generous
Tomboy
Cool
Pragmatic
Neat Freak

>Hobbies
Television
Movies
Videogames
Cooking
Writing

A+ CYOA, though I have no idea what this has to do with femdom

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>>51234147

>>51233885
>not finished
I can wait

>>51233816
This needs a Corvette/frigate and light/heavy freighter options

>>51234148
You can figure that out in your own, can't you? Or do you need your hand held the entire way? What about her eye color and favorite makeup, don't you need to pick that?

>>51233885
>Fresh Graduate
Just slightly older than me. Definitely don't want younger.
>Towering Giant
If I'm going tall, I might as well go all the way.
>Athletic
It is gentle femdom after all.
>Mammoth
Without a second though.
>Badonkadonk
For maximum hourglass shape, and balance purposes.
>Sexy
It was close between this or noble.
>Ponytail
Because then I still have the option for long and straight.
>Receptive
Tad more than regular.
>Erratically Dom
I'd like to have at least a little bit of say in things.
>Inhumanity x5
I had no idea I was gonna be able to make her a monster girl. Even better.
>Possessive
>Smugtacular
>Charismatic
>Romantic
>Motherly
>Aggressive

>Television
>Movies
>Videogames
>Fishing
>Cooking

>Black Sclera (Yellow iris)
>Scaly skin
>Extra arms
>Snake tail
>Strange skin

10/10 anon. If anything, I feel like you're too generous.

/r/ing some cyoas that allow you to pick from a chart of team members to assemble the perfect squad.

>>51234259
There are options for hair styles. Those are mutable and could change literally day to day. Skin and hair color is permanent. It just seems like a really backwards way of doing it to me.

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>>51234147
>>51234158
>Contact
>Humanoid

>Physiology 1
>Choose Appearance 1: Similar to the left of pic related
>Sustenance 1

>Language 1: English
>Processing 2
>Social 1
>Quick-Witted 2
>Knowledge 2

>Spacecraft
>Scientist

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HsUCR3yhMEk

Greetings, human! I am Resollthi Tetharr, representative of Ziawauid Deaimim, the Provisor of External Affairs of the Sophonity! Your species has been sending radio signals out into space for several decades, and have been received by the Sophon Republic. After much deliberation, my superior has decided that now is an adequate time to "extend our hand in greetings", as you humans would refer to it, and I have been entrusted with the first contact procedure. After analyzing your planet, it has been found that you were the head of this extraterrestrial contact program for quite some time, and as such have been designated as a suitable first contact advocate. I would request that you assemble your academic contacts for a technological demonstration, as a measure of goodwill. We amidst the Sophonity look forward to conducting many experiments alongside your species' intellectuals within the laboratory!

>>51234148
I wasn't sure about adding skin color, do you think it would improve your experience? To be honest I probably won't add hair color no matter what though.

>>51234331
Why? And I just felt it kinda weird given the fact there is option for hair style. Styles change all the time, but there's no picking something permanent?

I'd be fine coming up with it on my own, I just found what was included and what was included to be kind of strange.

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>>51234365
*what wasn't included.

>>51234378
OH BOI

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>>51234393
>>51234388
I've made a terrible mistake, I have the unfinished version saved.

That said, there probably won't be very many responses anyway now that player submitted companions are closed.

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>>51234404
I can't not finish posting it at this point though.

>>51234404
Yeah, I'd imagine we're all pretty burned out on it.

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>>51234417

>>51234425
You better go back and save the player companions.

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>>51234425

>>51233833
So, is Forth-Wall Awareness what is says on the tin, or just like philosophical understanding of the universe?

>>51233885
College Student

Shorty
Scrawny
Average Breasts
Average Behind
Cute
Long and Straight
Regular
Mostly Equal
Scarred

Pure
Romantic
Fragile
Laidback
Cool

Reading
Vidya
Anime
Painting
Instrument

>>51233885
>Age:
-College Student (19)
>Size Ratio:
-Equal Height
>Physical Build:
-Regular Weight
>Breast Size:
-Busty
>Butt & Hips:
-Average Behind
>Facial Features:
-Gloomy
>Hairstyle:
-Bob Cut
>Sex Drive:
-Regular
>Romantic Attitude:
-Mostly Equal
>Extra:
-Double Amputee (both arms)
>Personality Traits:
-Possessive
-Cynical
-Bant Master
-Cunning
-Needy
>Hobbies:
-Television
-Anime
-Sleeping
-Lazing

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>>51234436
>>51234425
>>51234417
>>51234404
>>51234393
>>51234378
>BETA-I
you fool

>>51234312
That's a really fucking silly thing to nitpick. He already has limited space and you want to waste it on picking between being white or being a nigger?

>>51234568
Why include hairstyles then?

>>51224344
>>51224728
How do the changes from Form and Perversion differ (if at all) in regards to stuff like permanence, dispellability, and suitable targets?

Is the permanence for others from Perversion A undoable with itself, or would I need Form B+ to return them to their previous shape?

Is Perversion enough to return mana batteries to normal?

>>51233885
I'm confused. Why did you call this Femdom? Looks like an average waifu builder.
You also seem to have mixed up the breast images. What you call small is average, and what you call average is busty. But maybe you're using anime standards?

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>>51233895
Name: Ra'ak
>Wizard
>Adult Mage
>Avian (Crow)
>Foci
Conjuration: Recall
Artifice: Null Object
>Perks
Speedy
Vanish
Detector
Ray
>Job
Lure

>Event
The Northern War

Reborn as a small, black bird, nobody would have ever expected that such a little, fleeting thing would grow to be one of the most valuable spies in the entire Xerian army. Master Ivan and Ra'ak were "selected" for the draft early on, and it became quickly evident that their abilities would most likely best be used for sabotage and spying on the enemy.
The bird, with such a small frame, was frequently mistaken for just that, a bird. A wizard's familiar couldn't be something so mundane, especially in wartime when so many other crows were present. Any chance that they'd be found out was quickly stopped, for as soon as Ra'ak was in danger, he found himself back at his master's side. But the war would be long, and only time would tell if they both would survive...

>>51233681
Ars Goetia is pretty legit, and Yellow Ring isn't hard either, but I'd go with the D&D Ring and take Lucid Dreaming, Autohypnosis, and Knowledge (Religion). Even if I can't use Sanctum Spell-Storing Item, and even if I can't use Lucid Dreaming to create real items, I can definitely use Lucid Dreaming to contact people, Autohypnosis to remember everything I've seen or read, and find somebody with a craft ring to supply points from ritual sacrificing to, and pick things up from there.

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>>51233816
Baron Sigismund Badenhaldt

>WORLDS
>Dead Planet "Teach" (+Metal Mines, +Subterranean Cities, +Orbital Defenses, Spaceport) [65D]
>Moon "Callahan" (Habitable) [45D]

>FLEET
>Battleship "King Phillip" (+Point Defense Turrets, Hyperflux Shields, Drone Hangar) [-10D]
>5 Cruisers (+Hyperflux Shields, +Point Defense Turrets) [-60D]

>TECHNOLOGIES: FTL Inhibitors [2], Self-Repairing Vehicles [1], FTL Sensors [0]

>AGENTS: Brana [235I], CaladriusA5 [215I], Georgia Lorentz [185I], The Hellhound [140I]

>FREEBIES: 1 Battleship "King William"

>ALLIES: Rathe Manufacturing [115I], Captain Sasha [90I]

>FOES: Princess Theia [140I, -10D], Gilbereth Ertin [150I, 0D]

>FURTHER ALLIES: Assassin's Troupe [125I], Baron Gregory [100I]

>FURTHER SHIPS: Battleship "King Malcom" [50I], Jump Gates [40I], Armoured Regiment [25I]

>FURTHER AGENTS: Scarlet Demonde [0I]

It was forty years ago. A pirate by the name of Siegfried went on a rampage across the galaxy. By no means was he powerful enough to take on the entire Imperial Fleet - but he was persistent, he was cunning, and he was nearly uncatchable. He became so much of a nuisance that the Powers that Be made him a deal - his raids against the law-abiding citizens of the galaxy would cease, and in turn, he would be granted a barony of his very own. Lands and titles, which would pass to his sons, and their sons, and their sons.

I should have known it was a trap. Once my father perished, my older brothers were quickly 'removed' by the agents of the Crown. Now only I, the youngest, remain.

By the time they came for me, however, the captain of the Black Moon Pirates had already gotten word that her oldest peer's sons were being picked off. I owe her my life.

Come what may, I know the Princess will never leave me in peace. Like my father, I've no chance of beating her in a fair fight. So I'll fight like a pirate. I'll play dirty. I'll cut corners. I'll get the worst of the worst on my side if I have to.

Bring it on.

>>51233885
>Fresh graduate
Around my age but with a steady income.
>Towering Giant
>Muscular
I don't understand why not everyone takes this, you want the best genetic match right?
>Mammoth
>Badonkadonk
>sexy
>sexy hair
>sexual predator
>publicly traditional
it's always important to keep up the veneer of normalcy
>no extra traits
these seem like drawbacks to me
>smugtacular
>tomboy
>pragmatic
>cunning
>neat freak
>aggressive
I've got to say, I really enjoy this section
>reading
>lifting
>video games
all-in-all a nice level of customization
what if companion sections in non-waifu CYOA's worked like this?

>>51233885
This formatting looks familiar...

...Rosanon?

>>51235159
Haha, no way. I'm not that good at formatting. My CYOAs look like shit. Anon who made this new gfd CYOA has got it down pat.

>>51234087
>Electra Lechten

Being woke isn't a mental disorder

Quick, I need three edgy armor ideas besides "plate mail with skulls on it," "magic tatoos," and "chainmail made of literal chains."

>>51235377
Trenchcoat looking black armor.

>>51235377
Armor that gets nailed into your skin. Armor that is made of bones. Leather armor made from human skin.

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>>51235377
Armor made of the literal flames of hell, which shall burn to ash anyone except its chosen wearer.

A vampire's cape and suit, with bloodstains for extra edge.

Whatever the fuck pic related is supposed to be.

>>51235394
>>51235399
>>51235413
Thanks!

>>51235377
Armor literally made out of rusty razor-blades.

>>51234104

Window Washer (Somewhere inthe midwest that's just populated enough to have a few thousand people. Somewhere with grass for her large feet to frolic in. Concrete is shit to walk on with bare feet.)
Arabian Nights (Wear a fucking watch that goes off like a motherfucker after a couple hours, then four. Just make sure...)
Ascend (...to put a pebble watch in my body and make sure it's running on 'the power from your daily motion' or something.)

DONE.

>>51234141

Repostin things, are we Angel? Or are you a shitposting clone?

>>51235377
You're just not thinking edgy enough. Don't think plate mail with skulls on it, think molten metal forged into ever burning plate by the pain and suffering of the damned. Don't think magic tattoos, think the souls of the damned and the darkness they hide in ground into ever changing ink forced into one's body. Don't think of chainmail made of chains, think of vengeance forged into metal binding and wrapping around the one that holds hatred in their hear.

>>51235377
Live corgis sewn together

>>51235377
Shirtless with magic purple glowing tattoos.

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>>51235377
There is nothing wrong with spiked, skull covered heavy armor.

>pic related, an assassin and overall pretty decent guy

>>51235377
Metal alien skull bikini that vomits lava

>>51235454
Who is he?

>>51235454
Oh shit, is that King Hassan?

>>51235435

It's one of my favorite builds. And lots of other people liked it when I made it to.

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>>51234104
>Modern Crusade
>Ascend
>Mechanized armor
DISCARD THE BONDS OF FLESH
LET THE GRAND EVOLUTION BEGIN
ALL SHALL BECOME ONE

>>51235454
Papa Hassan is such a cool guy. Dude proves that skulls and spikes ain't so edgy.

>>51235565
Free plate of dates with every camel purchased!

>>51234104
In Ascend, it says "Monster Mast" instead of "Monster Mash".

New Island CYOA by me : http://imgur.com/a/Lwqqy

Tried to post it here directly like 10 times, didn't work.

>>51235741
Text is way too small for me to read at all on the full res image from imgur. Looks like it may be interesting though.

>>51235741
Pages are different widths, and the first page is over 1900 pixels wide.

>>51235764
Gonna make it into a 3 pages format then

>>51234104
>Window Washer
>Monster Mash
>Shadow Bride
My evil plot is to take the Window Washer as my bride, and to be able to have same-size romantic trysts with her on spookyween.

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>>51234104
Monster Mash.
Mechanized Armor.
Cheshire.

Monster Mash + Cheshire means eternal monster mode, more or less. Mechanized Armor will insulate against accident and murder. The three of these will also boost combat potential.

Now what to do with it?

Solve the immigrant crisis in Europe. Violently.

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>>51234293
I gotcha, bropai.

1 of 4 pages.

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>>51236341
2 of 4

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>>51236352
3 of 4

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>>51236427
Page 4 of 4

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>>51234104
>Monster Mash
For a new, superior, form.
>Combat Trainer
To git gud, and to get a comrade and guns.
>Monster Capsule
For reconnaissance and permanent transformation from Monster Mash.

>>51236221
You have my PKM.

>>51233885
MOOOORE

>>51236352
Elely confuses me. Does she retroactively adjust to whatever level of strength you pick, is she always at a hypothetical tier 4 version of power and would always pick on you no matter whether you were a brawn or brain person, or is she just some master fighting technician?

>>51236656
Yes.

>>51236728
Amazing.

>>51234640
The femdom part hasn't been added yet, it's the missing piece.

>>51235159
I'm the same guy who made NTR Quest and Mental Ilness quest and all the other stuff associated with those CYOAs.

>>51234104
Doomseer and only Doomseer.

>>51236777
Oh

>>51236860
Mental Illness quest is the best Cyoa this year

>>51232739
>The Less feminine the better
I'm sorry, but that's the single most uncustomizable thing about any type of armor.
High Reserves is an interesting chocie, though. You don't really have too much you need to spend mana on. Arma is pretty cheap. I mean, the armor's cost is High, but if that's the only thing you're going to spend mana on, you could definitely get by with less reserves. As long as you're thinking willfully, you'll be recharging mana, even as you fight.

>>51232752
Then the last one I watched... was card captor?

>>51232779
I just realized how well Requite & Soft go together. That's a powerful combo.

>>51232796
That's exactly what would happen.

>>51232938
Using your faith-mech armor for cosmic adventuring?

>>51232983
That's hilarious.

>>51233071
That's an interesting way to go about it. Yeah, clones will help a lot just for helping people, since you can typically help people without needing to cast spells.
Don't worry; you'll be able to tell which clone is the most real. The others disappear after taking a solid, moderately damaging hit / when you unconjure them.

>>51233083
Sorry, but you have to be in MG form to use magic, including Tech.
Yeah, clones start out with the same stamina as you when made & have their own pools.
>If I could find a crystal related image...
So you'd go with a Crysta theme? That's interesting. Most people only use thematic for their S ranks. I mean, you don't need a high rank to use it the most, so it makes sense. It's just rare.

>>51233092
I can see that the comments are more directed towards particular builds rather than the CYOA itself. And thinking all Lewd magical girls to be evil, while it is a bit too severe, is an acceptable point of view if you see them as time-bombs.

>>51233234
I honestly felt that Doomseer had a bit too much overlap with Alien Being, but I guess the fact that it can sorta lead to positive things & doesn't un-exist threats can make it better.

>>51235424
Wait, doesn't Ascend sorta invalidate your other two?

>>51235579
Well, that's one thing to crusade about, I suppose.

>>51235638
Ah, thanks. I'll fix that.

>>51235951
Is that really an evil plot?

>>51236221
If you just want to stop a single event, wouldn't modern crusade help more? I mean, with a monster form & mechanized armor, you're tough, but you can't be everywhere.

>>51236448
Monster Capsule's an interesting choice considering you could just put the Combat Trainer template onto a monstergirl waifu. Did you just really want the recon? Or prefer a human woman? Or just want the cute little monstergirls?

>>51237143
Quick question; what exactly is the Flora Guardian capable of?

>>51237143
>>51237220
If you answered these questions previously, could you point me towards the relevant post(s)?
>>51234582

>>51237220
>If you just want to stop a single event, wouldn't modern crusade help more? I mean, with a monster form & mechanized armor, you're tough, but you can't be everywhere.
>Just want
No. I didn't choose based on stopping the rape of Europe. I choose based on personal power and longevity. What I'll use it for, among other things, is to fight against the oceans of abusive assholes flooding into places full of nice people.

Plus, Modern Crusade didn't seem to stop the player from getting fragged. If I give up Armor then I'll get shot. If I give up either of the other abilities I won't be an unaging monstergirl.

>>51237220
>you could just put the Combat Trainer template onto a monstergirl waifu.
That's an option? I didn't see anything that would indicate it being possible without taking one of the separate monstergirl waifu options.

>Did you just really want the recon? Or prefer a human woman? Or just want the cute little monstergirls?
It's mostly so that I can stay transformed at all times by having a tiny symbiotic monstergirl inside me, since Monster Mash implies that the transformation isn't persistent beyond the specific times unless there's a monstergirl nearby, and I'd rather not risk having the transformation broken. The recon is just a nice extra.

Even if I could remain transformed without another monster nearby I'd probably go with Mechanized Armour rather than on of the monstergirl waifu options for the Combat Trainer template.

>>51237143
Is it possible to use Bloom to make plants grow out of mirror surfaces while using Shift?

>>51237253
The Flora Guardian can:
appear behind you like a [STAND]
cover you to block attacks
grapple / strike foes that get close
Give you a boost (literally throwing you if you want to jump higher, etc..)

>>51237264
Oh, sorry. I missed it. Let's see.

>>51234582
Most notably is that Form is limited to human shapes (with exception of the S rank, but that has limits of its own). Meanwhile, Perversion is limited to what you find attractive. Perversion has far less utility since (although it does allow *some* variation) it isn't diverse enough to disguise people or anything. Even with permanence on it, you can still undo the change to return them to how they originally were. Yes, perversion can turn mana batteries to normal. As for dispellability, any new shapeshifting will overwrite previous shapeshifting. It's as simple as that.

>>51237310
That makes sense.

>>51237323
Yeah, you would have to take a separate waifu option. But a monster-waifu would also fulfill your Monster Mash requirement.
>monstergirl inside me
Don't eat them! Or like, would you be a slime & put a mini-mermaid in you? Because that's fine.

>>51237333
Yes, since you can cast through the mirror.

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>>51234104
Only one typo was pointing out, but it's fixed now.
I also added a line explicitly stating which wishes are monstrous.

>>51233885
I'm not into femdom but whatever:

High School
Shorty
Regular Weight
Bee Stings
Tight
Gloomy
Long and Straight
Regular
Private Submissive

Glasses
Sickly

Possesive
Pragmatic
Kind-Hearted
Pure
Cynical
Cunning
Laidback

Reading
Sleeping
Computer
Movies
Cooking

>>51237390
>Yes, since you can cast through the mirror.
Follow-up question: Is it possible to grow a persistent forest in the mirror realm? Like, over time. An entire jungle wild land hidden in another reality.

>>51233796
I'll take blur #5 for 600

>>51237503
Yes, but you'd be ruining mirrors for everybody. Someone just wants to put on their makeup & instead they just see plants in the mirror.

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>>51233885
Why's it gotta be gentle tho, what's the point of being dommed if everyone's playing nice.

>>51237390
>slime
Absolutely not under any circumstances, I'd rather choose death.
I would be an awoo, like in the image I posted, and, inside of me, have a monstergirl whose natural habitat is other peoples bodies and lives together with their host in mutualistic symbiosis.

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>>51237390
>That makes sense.
That's really nice of you to say.

>>51236448
>You have my PKM.
Shoulda said this earlier, but that's good to hear.

>>51237390
>As for dispellability, any new shapeshifting will overwrite previous shapeshifting. It's as simple as that.
I meant more in the sense of "does Perversion's self-shaping follow the same rules as Form" (mainly the "get hit once -> disguise dispelled" bit).

>>51237520
Heh, whoops. That's kinda hilarious. But this kinda confuses me; does that mean rather than an alternate dimension with the mirrors acting as windows, the reflection is the entire space (as in, you can't hide "between" mirrors, you'll always be reflected somewhere)? So, if you were in a pocket mirror, you'd move around with it as it's moved in the real world without even doing anything yourself? How does moving through mirrors work, then?

>>51233885
Age
>Fresh Graduate

Size Ratio
>Fun-sized

Physical Build
>Scrawny

Breast size
>Busty

Butt and Hips
>Average Behind

Facial Features
>Gloomy

Hairstyle
>Ponytail

Sex Drive
>Sexual Predator

Romance
>Private Sub

Extra Features
>Scarred
>Albino
>Inhuman: Black Sclera
>Inhuman: Lizard Tail
>Inhuman: Pointy ears

Personality Traits
>possessive
>Stoic
>Awkward
>Lightweight
>Pure
>Pragmatic
>Mean-spirited
>Cunning
>Needy
>Aggressive

Hobbies
>Reading
>Anime
>Cooking
>Computer
>Writing

Time for my perfect everyday life with a cutie shorty who is secretly a massive weeb and also a monstergirl.

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So I'm gonna out my first CYOA on hold because I realize I'm in over my head. Gonna go way simpler. How does being a member of a global conspiracy that secretly rules the world sound? Also, would you rather be a field agent or one of the people that actually makes the big desicions?

>>51237664
I want to do paperwork.

>>51237664
I want to be the easily manipulable masses.

>>51237390
>(with exception of the S rank, but that has limits of its own)
As in, only animal-hybrids? You can't completely transform to disguise yourself as an animal?

>>51237548
No, it does not.

>>51237568
The mirror world matches the regular world perfectly at first. However, you'll notice that objects don't link up. If someone in the real world opens a door, the door won't open for you. Anything in the mirror world that is unobserved, however, will warp to match the real world again. The one exception to this is things from the real world (including you & things made by your magic) brought to the mirror world. That stuff won't change to match the real world since there isn't an analogous copy. You cannot take mirror world items to the real world. Taking a real world item to the mirror world merges it with the mirror version (if you take in a cupcake, it merges with the mirror cupcake, so you don't get 2 cupcakes). It's perfectly possible to hide between mirrors so that no one can actually see you, but then you won't be able to see the real world either. Of note, the mirror world does not have mirror versions of people or animals.

>>51237724
Yeah, getting things like bat wings and fish gills are beyond human shapes. You can't completely become an animal. If you wanted to become a wolf, for instance, you'd be more like a werewolf instead.

>>51237725
>it merges with the mirror cupcake, so you don't get 2 cupcakes
Fuuuuuuck. What a deal breaker.

But yeah, really clearing things up, thanks.

>>51237759
I mean, you *could* just eat the mirror cupcake & give it time to re-copy the real world to come back. But I'd advise against eating mirror food. It has a similar effect to eating food from the underworld. Since mirror objects can't leave the mirror world & you'd assimilated a mirror object into yourself, you'd be stuck there. Minor things like the air you need the breathe don't count, fortunately.

New Nemesis Island CYOA by me

Changelog:

-Nemeses instead of Nemesis
-6 pages instead of one gigantic CYOA
-Doubled font-size
-Small color related changes
-Minor corrections

http://imgur.com/a/0xJui

Imgur link because it just won't upload here.

>>51237725
>No, it does not.
Does that mean you can make permanent changes to your magical Girl body with Perversion, or do said changes drain mana to maintain themselves?

>>51237840
They can be permanent (though, I'm currently refining some thing in an update. It doesn't say it clearly now, but perversion only affects your mature magical girl form).

>>51237824
>pagewidths still aren't uniform
>last page is wider than 1900 pixels

>>51237824
I feel like you could have made a lot better use of your space.

>>51237856
>I'm currently refining some thing in an update.
While you're at it, take a gander at Corrupt S:
>Overuse of this rite will darken you can grant you slimy tentacles.

>>51237889
Yeah, I already fixed that. Thanks.

>>51237870
Sadly I dunno how to get all pagewidths to be uniform using Photoshop.

>>51237390
You seem to have missed the "suitable targets" bit of the Perversion question. To clarify, Form says you can only shift the bodies of humans. Does Perversion have the same restriction?

I know this might have been asked a lot but what type of new cyoa would you like to see the most?

>>51237969
But... why would want to shapeshift a non-human for lewd purposes? Perversion can only work on creatures of a type that you can be attracted to, so no animals. Depending on your depravity, it might work on floor tiles.

>>51237980
Be a master crafter cyoa, black smith, alchemist, potter, other options, with options to imbue things with magic, options for what kind of suppliers you have, companions of sales people and apprentices, maybe customers and the suppliers could be here I guess.

>>51238018
>But... why would want to shapeshift a non-human for lewd purposes?
To get more fun out of my (non-animal) familiar? Unless of course the intro text is literal (in that they're considered an animal companion regardless of type).

Also does the potato's servile nature include stuff like doing chores for you, or is it limited to the very basics?

>>51237535
Check out this faggot

>>51237442
Artistic genie more like autistic genie

>>51236221
>dragon waifu doesn't have benis

Trash

Gay trash

>>51238129
Oh, well, yeah, fairies are practically like people, just smaller, so you could feasibly turn it into eye candy with that.
Oh, the demonic thing... Yeah, that would work, too, I guess... It can do simple enough chores, like mopping your floor. Just don't expect too amazing of a job. It much prefers things that relate to you directly like brushing your hair or bringing you a drink.

>>51236221
>Clothing material is thin enough to show camel toe but to thick to show nipples.

Seriously? Are nipples verboten or something?

>>51238190
>It can do simple enough chores, like mopping your floor. Just don't expect too amazing of a job.
How do other familiars rank in that regard?
What about the various summons (Conjure A, Corrupt A, and any others I might have missed)?

>>51237139
Ian, Carter and Payne
Starting with building Outer Heaven, killing pirates and defending Rhodesia we'll eventually have enough manpower to defeat the Insurgency.

>>51233885
You should probably have Extra Features after hobbies. Would make romantic attitude next to personality and extra features next to inhuman traits which makes a bit more sense I think.

>>51233885
What do you have left to do with it? I only want to play it once it's totally finished! The best experience!

>>51238871
What if I moved inhuman traits up to right beneath extra features?

>>51238889
Now that I've gotten some feedback I'll finish adding the fetish section, probably add more extra features and maybe inhuman traits, move things around a bit and organize it to a perfect 10,000 pixel image. Maybe switch a few images in the butt and hip section and work around a few other ones I didn't feel perfectly represented what they were supposed to represent.

>>51238406
Copycat is lazy. Puffball is more apt to make a mess instead. Gooey can clean floors. Shimmer is physically weak but can do more cerebral work. Pip and Pop don't have good ways to manipulate objects, so that hinders them. Rascal is intelligent enough & physically capable to help, but is probably the most "rebellious" of the lot. He'll help when it's serious and so occasional chores, but he won't be your servant. The mini-dragon isn't as lazy as copycat, but is somewhat limited in dexterity. It would gladly use a breath attack for you, maybe giving you a cool breeze if you're hot. The Navy Pup would loyally do whatever you ask, but since it's a dog, it'll have a hard time doing anything too involved. He can get your paper at least. The potato is acclimated to service & will happily do whatever you ask - it's just a bit too inclined to seek praise and reward before the job is done.

>>51238922
That works too but It seems to make sense to select extra features after selecting other things. It also makes sense for romantic attitude which is very similar to personality traits to be next to the personality traits section.

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Various rebalancing updates.

No changes on this page, except maybe any typos I already forgot about.
(1/5)

>>51238957
I think you might be right, I'll reorganize it that way for when I post the finished cyoa.

>>51238402
She doesn't have nipples because she's a lizard, not a mammal.

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>>51238982
Several changes here. Pay attention to the following Rites:
Aqua
Conjure (very minor change explicitly stating the temporary nature)
Bloom
Fame

(2/5)

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>>51239005
Your wardrobe has been improved!

(3/5)

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>>51239033
Any changes here would just be typos corrections that I forgot about.

(4/5)

>>51233885
I haven't completely crammed this yet, but the wording under Smoker rubs me the wrong way.
The rest of the traits are all written to appeal to people who have a fetish for that, even to the point of ignoring real consequences (Addict or Sickly, for example), but Smoker dictates that she'll only love you more for helping her quit, which kind of defeats the point.
People who like smoking usually don't like it for the pity elements of not being able to quit, but because it shows a woman who's laid-back, not too thin-skinned, doesn't get hysterical about her vanity and knows when to throw herself a bone, and it just feels weird to have the smoker option presented only as a way to "save" her.
On top of that, it's a "gentle femdom" CYOA, but a lot of the options (including Smoker) seem targeted towards people who actually want their ideal girl to be riddled with problems that they can't fix themselves because they're too strong.
Hell, give me a smoker who'll insist on keeping on smoking, share if you smoke, and respond to being told she should stop by making sure to smoke right before any kind of messing around, every day until you like it.

>>51239005
I still don't know what fame rank a does.

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>>51239058
All 4 magical Rites here at least had minor changes, some buffs, some nerfs, some that were just non-directional changes. Also, instead of picking 1 non-lewd S rank Rite, you can instead pick 1 non-lewd ADJACENT WELL, meaning you get get up to 4 non-lewd S rank Rites, if they're of the right type.

And since I'm sure it will come up, the Pure outfit will help against your corruption greatly, but you'll still be more vulnerable to it than other magical girls. Furthermore, if you do by some tragedy go Rogue, girls with the Pure outfit will be all the better at purifying you.

(5/5)

>>51239005
Oh nice. Aqua S got an upgrade. Might be better if you used 'harmed' rather than 'killed', though.

Question, though the water form is weak to ice magic, what happens if you intentionally freeze yourself using your own magic? Like, you turn yourself into a spray of water and freeze the droplets to turn them into a storm of ice shards? Do you just end up harming yourself, or is that a valid tactic of weaponization?

>>51239123
>but you'll still be more vulnerable to it than other magical girls
Wait, I don't understand. They're more vulnerable to corruption while being more resistant against it? That seems contradictory.

>>51239078
I'll consider rewriting it for the finished CYOA. To be honest with you I kind of picked smoker at last the second since I needed one more to fill up the slot and not create an uneven row. Looking back I can see you're right and it was unprofessional of me to let my bias leak through like that.

And also I have a fetish for broken people and it leaks through to every other fetish, even gentle femdom. Sorry about that.

>>51239188
More resistant than they would be without the pure outfit senpai.

>>51239188

Say Lewd is normally -2 and most magical girls are 0. The Pure outfit adds +1. So you'll be more resistant than most lewd magical girls but not moreso than normal magical girls.

>>51236341
>Adamant
>Health 3
>Power 3
>Shield 3
>Agility 2
>Intelligence 2
>Learning 2
>Sustenance 2
>Armour
>Smithing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ua0zMsDiAyg

>>51239102
You know how when a magical girl is about to defeat the big evil thing, how the theme song will start to play? It's like that. When momentum is swinging into your favor, even if just by being rallied, having your theme song start to play will give you a phenomenal boost to whatever it is you're trying to do.

>Might be better if you used 'harmed' rather than 'killed', though.
That's intentional. You can still be blown apart (into various puddles). You'll have to take some time to reassimilate when that happens. If it said you couldn't be harmed, then that would make it seem like attacks would just go right through you.
That form is "weak" to ice magic in that you'll get frozen solid. It doesn't actually hurt you. If it's your own magic, you can undo it to free yourself. You could even partially freeze yourself if you wanting something like ice-fists.

>>51239188
I'll make up some example numbers:
Lewd magical girls are 10x as likely to get corrupted.
A Pure outfit makes you half as likely to get corrupted.
Therefore, a Lewd magical girl in a Pure outfit is still 5x as likely to get corrupted.

>>51239226
Oh, yes, Lewd Magical Girls. Thought it was in general.

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>>51239178

>>51236341
>>51236352
How does sustenance interact with panic station?

>>51239259
Don't kill yourself too quickly or you'll miss out on all the fun.

>>51239197
On one hand, it's frustrating that one's fetish (or preference, more like) gets more hate and demonization than even stuff like rape, ryona and NTR because of pseudoscience and people having an easy target to shit on.
On the other hand, that just makes it all the better when it actually turns up, because it means that the women who keep on smoking need to get better and better at not rolling over.

Would people like various Genie gallery blanks/templates that are similar in layout to Beri's but very visually different for doing their own galleries?

IF so how many slots per page? Beri's had 18 and the Harem Genie I did had 12 as I felt that 18 may be overwhelming for new gallery creators to come up with so many options.

>when you finish writing your cyoa and the inner void grows
hahahaha wellp time to start another one!

>>51239229
Also,
>Philosophers stone
>Lieutenant
Only quests that work without diplomacy skills

>>51233796

Baron
Habital world
-cities
-mines
-spaceport
-hypernet node
-subterranean cities
-construction yards
-orbital defenses
Red giant
-orbital scoops
-Science station

Asteroid Belt
-Science station
-Mines

Dreadnought -1
-Hyperflux shields
-teleport bay
-Hospital
-Drone hangar
-Drone pods
-Onboard constructors
-point defense turrets
-EMP beam
-anti-cloaking array
-seige weaponry
-integrated jump gate

Science vessel -3
-Hyperflux shields
-Improved labs

Armoured regiment -1 (garrisons dreadnought)
-antigrav packs
-all-environment proofing

Neutron star
-Science station
-Exotic physics station
-Antimatter station
Remaining:210 intrigue points, 5 demesne points
Technologies(17)
-Strong AIs
-Industrial antimatter
-Antiquagma
-Planetary shields
-Telekinesis implants
-heat transfiguration
-hard light
-Gridfire
-Active camoflauge
-Cloaking device
-Anti-aging serum
-Improved alloys
-FTL sensors
-FTL inhibors
-Genetic enhancements
-Refined energy weapons
-Efficient Kinetics

Allies and agents:
Vassal to - Princess Theia
Stephanievox
Eva Ganma
-Stephanie and Eva are both given room to work on whatever they want, so long as they let me have
the final product
PraetorH10
-Head of all planetary research
Pilot A
-Pilots Dreadnaught
CaladriusA5
-Needed a last tech agent, figured a bodyguard drone couldn't hurt

Enemy - Baron Gregory
Enemy:Archon Karkas
Enemy:Brothers of mercy
Enemy - Jigger
Enemy - Mad Jack Bravil

The gameplan here is to keep the Dreadnought super-top-secret cloaked in the asteroid belt. I'll help the empress out in any other way, but I won't even tell her about it unless It's unavoidable. Hopefully my vassalage to her and incredible technological importance will protect me from the powerfull enemies I've made, otherwise my planetary defense and dreadnought will have to serve that role. I will attempt to arrange accidents for both Mad Jack and Baron Gregory. As for the cult, I'll just keep them out of my tiny corner of space as best I can.

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>>51239320
>mfw over 50 pages of cyoas that I will never move to gimp or post

>>51239290
I made my template specifically to make it easier on people (at least if you has PS). You can just crop out the bottom row or two of options if you find that it is too many. Do what you want, but if you haven't made one before, I'd start with an existing template so that you don't end up wasting your effort if it falls through.

>>51237937
You make a template. create a blank document in the size you want like 1600x6000 then save it as Template.psd. When you open it you then immediately save it with the name of the first page of your cyoa, such as NemIsle-pg1.psd

Then just open & save new ones foe each page in your cyoa, assuming you're not stacking all pages into a single psd file, which can make the psd incredibly large.

To change your current one you'd need to drag elements from your various sized pages into the new documents to not risk cutting stuff off if you change the canvas size....also only change canvas size and not image size or you'll smoosh/stretch your image if you need to resize the page.

>>51239285
>pseudoscience
Mate, all the evidence shows your cancer sticks kill your lungs. Get over it.

>>51238996
That doesn't hold up seeing as she has mammaries.

>>51239538
They're airbags.

>>51239538
She has inverted nipples.

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>>51239393
Why the fuck not?

>>51238943
And the temporary summons?

>>51233833
Huh, didn't knew v1.4 was out, the last one I've got was v1.15. Why you don't update your wordpress, Highlander-senpai. :(

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>>51233885
>Femdom
>Of any variety
I bet you support miscegenation too.

>>51233885
I didn't know I needed this

>>51239571
Right. Well, the Lewd things are gone now, so that doesn't matter. Conjure's animations are very good at doing chores. Since you have so much freedom, you could make anything from a cute anime maid to a super-roomba.

>>51239625
there is no femdom in that, it's just a build your waifu cyoa

>>51239509
This is the kind of entitled knee-jerk reaction I'm talking about.
People have accepted "all the evidence" as the absolute truth, even if not many people would be able to explain exactly how "third-hand smoking" works, how second-hand smoking is supposedly more dangerous when the point of smoking is to get the heavy nicotine molecules down in your lungs (and tar is the heaviest part of cigarette smoke) and why the research that the US made about second-hand smoking in the 60's, literally right before the hetz started, was scrapped completely for "research" that had no time to be developed as soon as the Vietnam War started.
On top of that, cherry-picking is rampant in anti-smoking propaganda - while smoking is infinitely more harmful for people who keep on smoking past the 40, just like alcohol and other drugs are, you never see any exclusive statistics on young or short-term smokers. The horror stories you see, the statistics you're bombarded with, are all taken from studies of "lifelong smokers" - that is, elderly people who likely have worse health in the first place.
On top of that, then, there's the correlation/causation problem - the fact that people who undertake one kind of risky behavior are more likely to undertake others too (and it's only going to give more convenient statistics as smoking becomes more and more criminalized and stigmatized), which means that the test groups for smokers are likely to have a lot of junkies, alcoholics, mentally ill people (80% of schizophrenics smoke, because nicotine has a short-term calming effect on psychotic disorders) and other people who're not in good health.
I don't think I've ever seen a smoker who implied that cigarettes were completely harmless. I'm completely fed up with new "facts" on smoking popping up every time the US government needs more tax money, though, and I'm especially suspicious of the insane amount of pathos and misrepresentative statistics in anti-smoking propaganda.

>>51234378
My autistic backstory:
I like redeemed monks so I'll tell the story first.
Born into a group of Highwayman he was early on trained to be precise with weapons and survive by himself.
At barely 5, by chance the Necromanic Wars got a group of soldier to hunt down the Highwayman and slay them, the survivor running off into the wild.
By chance he managed to stumble upon a village where he survived for the being but unadopted.
Not much later a wandering, mute monk found him there, using bells to communicate with him and taking him with him to a monastery nearby.
There he grew up raised by the monk and his family, learning that the monks have choosen it upon themselves to be mute 9 months in a year, they have a system to speak normally through different bells.
Furthermore these monks have mastered different schools of magic not for application in battle or war but to refine the mind.
But all this changed when the Detritus Nation attacked:
Even though the monastary was safe, the father decided to join the war effort as one of the first as he saw it as his duty to protect the world.
But the child remained.
Years later, as the father has yet to return he traveled to Elysium to join too himself foremost to find his adopted father.
Using Fire and Force too augment his fighting skills with the chain whip, his unique style incorporate parts of the acoustic school.
Not a great musician or composer he uses bells attached to the chain whip and his body not to play beautiful or passionate music but instead he tells stories via the sounds in comprehensive to none outside the monastery.
He tells stories and lessons he learned the monks, but also his own story, sad tales of the massacre, happy anecdote of his childhood and raunchy jokes from the mess halls.

Sup-optimal build:
Zhou Ning
>Human
>Forerunner + (Precision + Agility and Strength)
>Rogue
>Custom Weapon (Chain Whip) 6
>Custom Weapon (Three Section Staff) 4
>Magitech Instruments Custom 10 points

Hnhghhh i can't stop playing that "Enslaved" femdom cyoa with dark elf mistresses, it's great.

>>51238982
Older
Joy

Warp A
Life B
Conjure C
Arma B
Aqua C
Shock S
Crysta C

Strength A
Defense A
Agility A
Mind C
Stamina B
Reserves C

Sword
Phased
Gooey

Emergency Rescue
Purify Rogues
Destroy Puppets

let's protect everyone!

>>51239595
Seems Kit tracked her down again and dragged her back into the basement it would seem.

Or it could be she promised a surplus of content with other CYOA's with the update but I prefer the sexier version.

>>51239841
>Faint Runners as they can help in his searches

Spells will add the more levels here:
Acoustic Unlock
Amoroso
In Rilievo
Piercing Notes (I)
Marcato (I)
Cappcriccioso (I)
Magnum Opus (E)
Arpeggiato (E)
Flame Unlock
Flame Skates
Cauterize
Dragon Fire
Dragoon Armour
Nova(N)
Dragoon(N)
Explosive Blows(E)
Force Unlock(E)
Density(H)
Poise(H)
Momentum(H)
Unstoppable Force(H)
Launch(H)
Mass (H)
Pound (H)


Joined up with Leo Dahler first, with he hope that Leo can recall his father from a former battle, and joined by Phisora as Leo was overseeing her first deployment
>Leo Dahler 4
>Phisora Jaenith 1
Even though Leo didn't recall the name, he stayed with him. Zhou recruited a range of formerly evil mages finding his calling in these situations. (N, I and E)
>Émeline Oiseaux 2
>Fharan Qrinn 2
>Guillam Juhel 3
>Harold Vangen 3
Rest are stat boots
At last he met a first battlemages, and the chance to learn more about what happend
>Eri Zivienne 6

Caravan Guards (Trying to prevent a massacre)
Excellence (Meet Battlemages and find out more)
Hunted (To squash his growing fear)
Sanity (Maybe he was lost behind the portal)

A quiet and solemm monk, he combines the physical application of fire and force with the unique sounds his chain whip produces.

>>51239123
>Lewd rites only for lewd girls.
Damn.
I wanted embrace for my rogue hunting build. Hug a rogue to stop them fighting.
But I don't want to go full lewd just for that.

>>51233885
This is a good Waifu builder, anon. I'm always looking for more of those. Although with just a quick glance, I will say you'll probably need to bulk up the number of hobbies.
>Fresh Graduate
>Equal Height
>Chubby
>Busty
>Badonkadonk
>Gloomy
>Ponytail
>Receptive
>Private Submissive
For extra feature's I'll go with
>Incest
>Addict, just weed
For personality
>Awkward
>Tomboy
>Pervert
>Pragmatic
>Bant-Master
>Motherly
>Neat Freak
>Laidback
>Cynical
For Hobbies I feel like it's a bit too limited but I'll go with
>Computer
>Video Games
>Television
>Movies
>Cooking
I'm not too much for a weeb or an outdoors man, but I would have liked Anime, Hiking, Hunting, and Shooting with an iffy on Fishing and Reading. I'm not saying you should bulk up the number to 12, but ten would be a good option, in which I'd likely but out Hunting and Fishing.
Not into any Inhumane traits to be honest.
Rate my waifu guys.

>>51239942
Embrace is mindraping anyway. Only bad girls want to force people not to be able to think ill of them.

>>51239734
>the justifications of someone retarded enough to smoke cigarettes

>>51238982
I'm almost ashamed of how much fun I'm having building up characters for this. Almost.

Age: Old
Well: Will (Overdrive)

Magical Rites (9):
>Frost C (0)
>Conjure S (4)
>Motion C (0)
>Arma C (0 – Greaves)
>Blood A (2)
>Fame A (3)

Physical Rites (11):
>Strength S (3)
>Defense S (4)
>Mind C (0)
>Stamina A (3)
>Flexibility C (1)
>Reserves C (0)

Tool: Instrument (Appearance – Headset)
Outfit: Thematic – Fame
Companion: Puffball

Objectives:
>Fight Crime
>Purify Rogues
>Defeat Kaiju

The princess of the ring! The lady luchadora! Once she steps onto the mat, it's on! From drop kicking ne'er-do-wells in the face, chopping down awry magical girls with a quick axe kick, and taking kaiju out for the count with a swan dive into a body slam from the top of the ropes (or a building, as it so happens)! Though her masked face obscures her identity from all, her death-defying acts of bravado are a well-known spectacle among those well-accustomed to the feats of might and power of the magical girls!

This feisty fighter is ready for a fight against anyone, anytime! With the power of CONJURATION, she can instantly bring out the wrestling ring, her true STAGE, where she can set forth to working out her true magic as she shouts out the names of her moves in a medley of performances. From 1 on 1, 2 on 2, or 1 against many, this magical girl is never lacking in numbers for her performances as REPLICATION gives her the ultimate tag team partner and referee: herself! And when things look grim and dark, it's the time when this luchadora shines the most as she goes into OVERDRIVE and makes a come-from-behind victory as the MOMENTUM shifts back into her favor!

>>51240039
How many builds did you make so far?
What's your power level?

>>51240060
Actually made a build for each Well. This is just the 3rd one I've posted the theme of which I'm satisfied with.

>>51233885
More of a waifu generator than a femdom CYOA so far but I prefer waifu generators and this is a very good one so good job.

>>51237664
I want to be a propagandist. Joke about Hollywood and the Education system being very liberal.

>>51239595
Apparently some faggots on the Discord distracted her with some 'Horn of Africa' CYOA that no one else wanted.

>>51239879
I'm surprised you didn't go for Arma A so that you could infuse your high-powered Shock into your weapon. It still gives you a good ranged option for when you can't quite warp to your enemy, I suppose.

>>51239942
You can "technically" pick them, but then you're starting to subject yourself to the very same corruption chance as the Lewd girls (albeit not *quite* as severe).

>>51240039
I'm glad you can enjoy it so much!
I really like the premise. Using your own clones to ref & tag-team with you against more serious foes is great for momentum. It helps you keep the battle on your own beat.

>>51240084
>>51240001
>>51239672

Since this comment has been repeated so often, should I just rename it and ditch the femdom part? if it's meant to be a waifu generator I won't fight it, I don't think anyone would really mind it either.

>>51239427
I'm quite familiar with photoshop. Been using it since version 2 or 3, back in the early 90's. Not getting any responses to my post so I probably just won't bother wasting time on something people won't use.

I'd have included a psd and any fonts etc for people too. Well no skin off my nose.

>>51239734
I never knew how deluded people could be until I read this.

>>51240027
And yet I never hear anything but circular arguments and pathos from people who still drink, practice extreme sports or even (gasp) go outside their door. It's almost like you didn't have any real arguments to explain why all the illogical, skewed propaganda you chant is true, much less to why people shouldn't be able to introduce risk to their lives if they like it.
You have a higher chance of getting a fatal septic infection from a badly-maintained piercing than getting anything lethal from smoking at 25 or even 30. The inflated statistics you see are mostly dependent on putting in causes of death from correlated factors, for example work stress, mental illness and old age.
Have you ever actually thought about why convenient "facts" about smoking come up as soon as the US government is strapped for money (or indeed why the first time the US raised taxes on cigarettes to anything approaching the modern level, they happened to need a lot of money, and the opposition in the anti-war movement happened to smoke like chimneys)?
Have you ever actually thought about that if the statistics you see about second- and "third-hand" smoking, much less those about actual smoking, are so absurd that you'd have lost multiple family members and friends, regardless of age or other factors, to second-hand smoking alone if they were true?
Have you ever actually considered that you regularly engage in behaviors that are multiple times more harmful than smoking and will defend them without a question, but cigarettes are out because you (and everyone else in your chanting hetz-circle) says so?
The part about this that depresses me the most is that cigarettes have become so widely maligned and so widely connected with the stereotype of the hacking, rude, ignorant smoker (who I have literally never seen a person even resembling) that even, or especially, people who should have the brains to question the propaganda just ride along.

>>51240119
Do it, adding actual femdom parts would bloat the thing too much and considering the amount of replies it gets now it seems like it's good enough as a standalone waifu builder.

>>51240145
>someone desperately trying to justify his self-destructive fetish and lifestyle

>>51240105
>You can "technically" pick them, but then you're starting to subject yourself to the very same corruption chance as the Lewd girls (albeit not *quite* as severe).
BE Consistent. You say at the bottom that all the lewd wells are exclusive to lewd well girts only. If that's NOT the case then Change the text stating that, otherwise stop telling people that they can dip into lewd when your very own rules refute that they can.

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>>51238982

Magical girl of 16 years
>Well
Benevolence
>Special
Innocence

>Rites
>Magical
Love A (18)
Life C (17)
Tempora A (14)
Aqua C (14)
Tech C (14)
Bloom C (14)
>Physucal
Strength A (11)
Agility B (9)
Defense S (5)
Dextery B (4)
Mind B (3)
Stamina B (1)
Flexibility C (0)
Reserves C (0)

>Tool
Tome containing:
Love S
Life B
Tempora S

>Outfit
Pure
Maybe Elegant,Is there a good outfit for a figthing magical girl???

>Companion
Shimmer

>Issues
Clean Up
Help People
Save the World
If I need to go on emergency rescue, fight crime or defeat Kaiju to Help People I will do it but is not my primal duty

As an "old" magical girl im exceptional at physical fighting, the Magical Rites are just to improve that on battle: tempora to figure out how to defeat the enemy, Love to know who needs help and Life to protect them, the rest are useful but that just came for default. The Tome is hanging of a chain in my hips and I use it just in the most difficult situations.

>>51239123
Hug and tell her that all people want to feel warmth in their bodies but is the warmth in our hearts that brings happiness, that she maybe feels sexier with the Lewd Rites we cant make a better world with them. I promise to be at her side whenever she needs me, whenever she needs a hug or to feel better...

>>51240119
It's really not that bad of a name, but I probably wouldn't click it from name alone if I were say looking through the pastebin. I focus on the waifu builder more than anything, so keeping Femdom in the title would be fine as long as a variant of waifu builder is spelled out in the title.
Also listen to >>51234061

>>51240119
You should make it some play off of the old Alice Waifu generator, just choose some similar name. Or just keep it as GFD because it'd be more annoying to rename.

>>51240198
I mean, it says it's exclusive to them because the others are too embarrassed to pick them rather than any actual, inability that prevents them from using those rites.

But I've just now discovered a loophole for lewd lolis to get in on the action without being forced to transform into adults...

>>51240142
And then please explain why all the things I've said are false, and why it's provably effective and right to have $12 packages of cigarettes showing parents blowing smoke into their children's faces, stuffing lit cigarettes into their pacifiers and otherwise using cheap pathos to smear people's image of smokers.
You can buy a beer, something that will not only hurt you physically and mentally more than a cigarette or ten (though, granted, cigarettes are more addictive), but also make you a danger to other people if you drink too much, for a dollar. Meanwhile, thanks to the generally-accepted religious belief in that nicotine and tar magically teleport out of the lungs of smokers and into the lungs of non-smokers (nevermind that the harmful substances are heavy and strong cigarettes have looser filters, which means that even someone smoking some Albanian death-stick right next to you will be releasing little more than particulate carbon and carbon dioxide), having a single cigarette once in a while is seen as worse than getting irresponsibly wasted, because - and that's where the train of logic starts looping back to the first station.
If you want to be this smug, start actually refuting what I'm saying, because I'm not exaggerating when I say that I've never, ever talked to a non-smoker who didn't go into kid logic when smoking came up.
It's a social whipping post for people to hate without really ever knowing why, and the worst part is that even genuinely bright and intelligent people seem even more likely to fall into it because of the cheap sense of intellectual superiority it provides.
If cigarettes are so dangerous that you feel entitled to beat up on people just for smoking them, but can't even explain how second-hand smoking works, why you drink or even why you step outside your door (the smog is going to rot your lungs, don't you know), you should reconsider your life priorities.

>>51240247
>But I've just now discovered a loophole for lewd lolis to get in on the action without being forced to transform into adults...
The only thing forced by the transformation is the very large bust, but I suppose you don't want to be an oppai loli either?

>>51240247
Nothing wrong with that loophole senpai.

>>51240295
Flat is justice, anon.

>>51239123
Why did you get rid of summoning demi humans that fit perfectly with the lewd scene. You could have just rolled that into the first ability or the second.

>>51240145
Anon, studies have shown small amounts of red wine, at least, are good for you. Alcohol has better support for healthy effects than smoking.

>>51240145
My lungs are full of tar from being around smokers my entire life. I've seen it on ultrasounds. I don't know how you think to deny the dangers of secondhand smoke.

>>51240288
Fun stuff, replace smoking with fat and you have the average HAES argument.

>>51240247
Never was a loophole. You obviously want people to sex up oppai lolis. The whole have a third girl form when aroused is so out of genere anyway. Why not just have their previous form become more sexual and be "adult" or close to adult age?

>>51239005
>Form S: "It takes no mana to sustain changes."
Does this mean you need rank S to make any permanent changes?
>>51239123
>Embrace C: "Prolonged and regular contact will make the effect permanent."
What's the highest amount of contact you can have without triggering permanence?

>>51239123
>Perversion S
You seem to have accidentally held your Shift key a moment too long when typing the word "Rite".

>>51240198
Sorry. I just meant that the reasoning the CYOA gives for its exclusivity is embarrassment (corruption).

>>51240247
You didn't need a loophole for that... technically. The Lewd Well's ability: Maturity says you "can" be an adult, not that you have to be. It's suggested to be one for obvious reasons, but it isn't mandatory.

>>51240305
Oh, that's what you wanted.

>>51240208
Technically Pure is the BEST outfit for fighting a magical girl (assuming you want to purify them). Otherwise, I'd say Frilly so that you get magic defense (but then again, a lot of magical girls seem to be into melee options). But yeah, with Pure, you can much more easily (and quickly) purify girls. It'll even make them less resistant and less apt to fight back once you start purification.
You're just the hero the magical girls needed to help stop the increasing number of rogues.

>>51240314
It didn't seem all that popular. It looked mostly glossed over on the way to Corruption S, which granted defense. I figured that perhaps just making regular people into more willing partners would be more desirable. It won't help against a kaiju, but it serves to debilitate human enemies / give an option for a power source. It still transforms them a bit, so they may as well be demi-humans.

>>51240375
Form A & C both say temporary. The mana cost for those reflects the mana needed to sustain them for the typical duration. Form S removes the sustain cost, making them easier to use. However, Form S doesn't give any more duration. The permanent transformation of Form B does not have a sustain cost. Form S has a high cost to change, but is free to sustain.
All that becomes permanent is the "does not hate you." This is something you'd have to do for days on and off to eventually build up to it.

>>51240337
Being around smokers your entire fucking life is one thing, and let's see you point out where I say that second-hand smoke has no dangers whatsoever or where I say that parents should smoke right in front of their kids. I don't think either of those things, and you're instantly jumping to conclusions (for example that naturally bad health has nothing to do with the tar accumulating because Tobacco Is Evil).
Also, if you suffer no ill effects from it, it couldn't matter less. An ultrasound image is just that - an image that has only dark and light parts. If you don't literally suffer from bad lung health, the only thing you're getting your knickers in a twist about is the equivalent of a birthmark or a small scar.
>>51240316
What magazine would not be stepped on by the scientific community if they actually put out results like this? Nicotine has a lot of medical uses, from mental health over appetite managements to blood pressure control, but you never see it used specifically because of the stigma. Because the discussion isn't allowed, there will be no process.
>>51240361
The only line that would make the slightest amount of sense in that case is the second-to-last paragraph, and that's about as blatant cherrypicking as it gets. If you really still have to squawk about this, tell me about the dozens of your friends and family members who have keeled over from smoking at 25, and how everyone else in your friend circle has experienced the same. The statistics cited by governments are ridiculous, and have no connection with the reality that most people actually experience.

>>51240145
Have you ever considered that drinking too much is also dumb, but still legal. Have you realized that smoking is also legal? Have you considered that getting a piercing is also dumb, but also legal. All of those things are legal, and it's your own responsibility if you want to bear the risk, but you cannot force people to respect you for it.

I don't really care about what the US government does, but if anti smoking was solely a scheme to get more money, then I don't get why so many governments are making legislation that's meant to reduce sales, rather than increase them (like those weird warning messages on the packages). If all they wanted was more money, I'd figure they'd only raise taxes.

Have you considered that many people are also just bothered by the smell if you smoke next to them in the restaurant?

>>51239005
So I've been thinking about my Well for a bit, and I've noticed that Will seems to be the worst Well overall for Young magic girls. Its only direct offensive rite is Arma, which is very stupid for them to go for, obviously. Frost is defensive, and Motion and Blood are utility.

>>51240374
Why not just let people be lewd lolis if they want, anon?

>>51240492
I mean, I assume being able to life bulldozers means you have that much strength to lift and apply force on other stuff with (like, say, humans or monsters). It's actually an offensive power at that point, TK strength. And that's just with its normal cost; you could hit even harder if you pump more power into it.

Arma isn't even a direct offensive skill, it's augmentative in nature.

Why are there multiple threads with people arguing about smoking right now.

>>51240492
Will is a very physical-oriented Well, but Motion is actually great for magical combat. I mean, the image for it is one of the most powerful heroes in One Punch.

>>51239884
>>51240103
So Highlander is a she? That's another thing I didn't knew.
Anyway, what's has been added since 1.15? 1.4's changelog only talks about that specific update.

>>51240553
>>51240575
It seems more about battlefield control. Throwing things, lifting yourself, increasing gravity, and the whole blackhole thing. The rite isn't very focused on attacking.

Also, while Arma is augmentative, it's augmentative of physical abilities, which are lowest in the Young, meaning they're going to suck at Arma regardless.

I can't really see myself being able to power anything but Will so this makes things difficult.

>>51240454
>All that becomes permanent is the "does not hate you."
I thought it was "can't think ill of you" (which sounds like it might get in the way of detecting whether or not you're going rogue)?

>>51240555
Some retard had a legitimate complaint about a waifu cyoa having smoking has a trait for a girl. Text stated she's trying to stop but the guy just wants a girl to chill and smoke with. Author talks to him a bit, retard goes on a spout that Smoking is A.O.K and provides no health deficits. If you're saying some people on other /tg/, or like /b/ or /fit/ are talking about smoking I'd like the links

>>51240605
Will has S-rank Strength and Arma and the special well-ability most suited to all-out physical combat. How is it not focused on attacking?

>>51240103
Not just that, people want Touhou type cyoa badly. Not that I can blame them.

>>51240612
You can think someone is making a mistake without thinking ill of them. They won't think any less of you for doing something that risks making you go rogue, but they can still acknowledge the change & try to save you. They won't see Rogue-you as something inherently bad, but they'll still see corruption as something they should remove.

>>51240621
I think they meant Motion specifically.

>>51240616
>>51238355
This thread got heavily derailed by it too. Haven't checked if it's happening anywhere else.

>>51240621
>How is it not focused on attacking?
The other anon was talking about the Motion Rite specifically there. For the physical stuff in general, they're talking about how well (or poorly) suited Young magical girls are for Will.

>>51240480
There's a difference, though.
Have you ever seen a drinker receive the same kind of social group beating that smokers receive, where a group of people start guilting them with extreme pathos (for example that they're supposedly killing children) while not giving them any opportunity to explain themselves?
Other legal risks are reasonably regulated, but tobacco is the only one receiving demented regulations - and the purpose of these is twofold. One is marginalizing smokers, forcing them out of social circles to smoke outside or half a mile away from the building, telling them that they're harming others by just existing and generally giving society a whipping boy so that smokers' opinions aren't heard, non-smokers stop interacting with smokers and the things the government is doing feel reasonable to them. It also has a nastier intent - get smokers to hold on to their habit in spite of the prices out of solidarity, which just marginalizes them even more and still pays the state money.
The other one is just matching up the story. If taxes were just cranked up, you'd see people asking why, which would result in widespread political dissatisfaction akin to how buttmad people get when the "Commies" try to take their money in any other way.
You'd also see people turning to smuggling or home-growing, which is also counterproductive for the government because they lack a stigma to justify the treatment. On top of that, a lot of extreme anti-smoking policies like the Aussie approach are a result of the government biting on to the stories without actually having made the research themselves and thus not knowing they're overreacting.

>>51240621
I did mean Motion specifically.

And while Will has S rank strength, that's on top of the 40% reduction in physical power the Young get below those who are Average, and thus 70% below the Old. You'd have to basically double your attack power with magic to match an Old even before they used magic.

>>51240605
It's not just about lifting, though. The description of the first rank in Motion even states "applying force" as one of its usages aside from lifting stuff. Going up the rank, it gives you enough strength to life a bulldozer. Heck, if you're still skeptical of being able to apply that telekinetic force to striking at stuff or pressing them down (not even sure why you'd think you'd only be lifted to making things go up alone rather than sidewards or downwards), you can still just use it to throw monsters and objects around. There's nothing stopping you from lifting something up and dropping it on enemies.

>>51240616
Um he's still going anon.

>>51240454
You do realise that if you let non lewd well users buy the lewd well without actually it being one of their wells, which they shouldn't be able to do anyway as it's not adjacent to any wells. That they can buy into the easy power up tree.

Also the elegant outfit doesn't really spell out what it does for you. more mobile how? so it doesn't get caught in things or slow you down? none of the other outfits even say they slow you down or get caught on things and the minimal outfit isn't going to get caught on anything either as it's hardly there. Why no lewd outfit?

>>51240586
People call almost every author a girl for a variety of reasons.

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>>51233885

Christmas Cake
Amazonian
Chubby
Busty
Badonkadonk
Gloomy
Sex Hair
Sexual Predator
Erratically Dom

piercings, strange
Since this is kinda realistic aside from Inhuman, I can pretty much leave monster girl features as optional, but otherwise, long tongue, tentacles (extra apendages) strange skin

Generous, Stoic, Feminine, Pervert, Pragmatic, Cunning, Aggressive

Reading, Videogames, Computer, Gardening, Instrument
(My own hobbies basically aside from gardening since I cook instead.)

I'm not really a romantic type so my ideal relationship is more like a fuckbuddy roommate I can play games with and have some jam sessions with.


As a CYOA, this is reasonably well made but not much to make it special compared to any other waifu generator type thing. That last section or two with the fetish stuff should do it though so I'll just wait and see what you come up with before passing judgement. This is about what I'd pick so far though.

>>51240732
Highlander has said they're aa girl.

>>51240692
You can use it offensively, it just doesn't seem focused on offense. That's my only point there. It ties into how Will is the worst for young magic girls to go with.

>>51240454
>It didn't seem all that popular. It looked mostly glossed over on the way to Corruption S, which granted defense. I figured that perhaps just making regular people into more willing partners would be more desirable. It won't help against a kaiju, but it serves to debilitate human enemies / give an option for a power source. It still transforms them a bit, so they may as well be demi-humans.

True but you may not want to corrupt some person into an eternal servant and just summon some instead, which you now can't do.

>>51240752
I'm sure they're a GIRL

>>51233885
>Hobbies
>No /tg/

She's gahbage.

>>51240480
>>51240673
A lot of people are bothered by the smell, but a lot of people are bothered by the smell of nastily strong perfume too. I don't smoke in restaurants because I can listen to people, but when some overweight dog lady with over-applied perfume that literally gives me headaches can sit down right next to me and be allowed to get away with it, I'm at least allowed to hope for the day where I can light up to make the experience just a bit better.
>>51240616
Please tell me where I said that smoking is A-OK and will never harm anyone.
I get this literally every single time I even dare to imply that smoking isn't exactly as dangerous as the news say. Always that same exaggerated strawman, where people accuse me of completely, utterly and fundamentally denying any ill health effects.
What I'm saying is that smoking is a fair bit less harmful (psst - I didn't say "not harmful") than the absurdities pushed on the news imply, and that there's a disproportionate guilting, accusatory streak in anti-smoking opinions, as well as a lack of willingness to even discuss it.
It is less harmful by virtue of the official research being cherrypicked, and it is that because it's taken from long-time smokers (i.e. people who've been smoking for decades and well past the point where their body stops regenerating as well naturally), and because it includes a lot of misleading and charged language.
There are also scientific fallacies involved on the whole subject of second- and third-hand smoking, because they imply that mass is created out of nothing, gravity is temporarily suspended and that sublimation doesn't exist.

>>51237980
Anything that is an actual adventure, not "comfy" or waifu shit

>>51240799
You could always introduce them to it, I'm sure.

>>51240781
I think you're just limiting yourself unnecessarily. Tell me, if you have the ability to apply force equivalent to the total weight of a bulldozer, how is that not useful as an offensive skill? And so, how is it a bad idea for a young magical girl to have such an ability if they intend to be a fighter?

Don't limit to yourself to the descriptions; they simply tell you what the abilities are capable of and do not encompass all the possible usages of the skill.

>>51233885

I like this one. Simple enough, but with plenty of choice, even if it's a "WIP" so-to-speak.

>College Student
>Towering Giant (gotta love big girls)
>Muscular (gotta love big girls 2: Electric Boogaloo)
>Mammoth breast size (Gotta love big girls 3: This time is personal)
>Badonkadonk (Gotta love big girls 4: Bandonkarmageddon)
>Cute (I mean, why not. Either that or sexy)
>Long and straight (Vanilla is not necessarily bad)
>Receptive
>Private Submissive (gotta love huge girls being all nice)
>No Extra features (none of those are interesting)
>Awkward, kind-hearted, motherly...maybe a few more like cool/klutz, and whatnot (should make it pretty amusing and pleasant to stay around her)
>Hobbies: Lifting (duh), reading, painting, cooking, anime


That should be all. Would make my life much easier and comfier.

>>51237980
Anything that is comfy and has waifus, not "an actual adventure".

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>>51237980
>>51240802
>>51240865
>not wanting comfy adventures with your waifu

>>51240717
If non-Lewd girls pick any of those Rites, they'll become more vulnerable to corruption. If they're willing to do that just to charge some easier mana, let them.
The Elegant outfit is "aero-mana-dynamic." I could go on and on about how the mana in your body may collide with imperceptible magical energies in the air, so having an outfit designed to let your magical body flow through space with less resistance could be more useful. But for simplicity, lets just say it lets you go faster & dodge more easily. Plus, even if other outfits don't explicitly say it, all those flowing ribbons, poofy bits, and frills just make you a bigger target.
>Why no lewd outfit?
That's what minimal is. It exposes more skin to enhance mana flow.

>>51240783
Where it says, "until dispelled," that means that you can undo the corruption on them to save them. They're not an eternal servant at least. And they're not a servant so much as... perpetually lewd. But I see what you mean. I just didn't think anyone was actually banking on it.

>>51237980
Comfy adventure shit with waifus.

>>51240492
You have more than enough points to take offensive rites, and you'll definitely want utility magic as a young girl, so I don't see the issue. Blood C is actually something that sounds pretty top tier for a C class rite on a magic build, especially the part about nigh impossibility to counter.

Arma might be the only questionable part, but even with that, you can choose the gun option for improved offensive spells. In turn, both the well condition and it's special ability are pretty good, "will" is a very straightforward thing to concentrate on in the middle of a fight when pumped full of adrenaline. And if you literally lost your will to fight, you'll probably lose anyway, regardless of your well.

So I'd say it's pretty alright.

>>51240673
>for example that they're supposedly killing children
Never seen that. But yes, I've seen people shame heavy drinkers similarly to the way they shame heavy smokers, and likewise, people who rarely smoke are usually quite accepted in most circles. I do admit that many people, if they see someone smoking, will assume he smokes a lot, because most people smoke a lot.

And are you seriously complaining about having to smoke outside a building when it's not your building? Maybe you're not noticing it, but the smell sticks if you do it inside.

>>51237980
A adventure without waifushit, just make companions bro like and few.

>>51240119
I'd keep the femdom. It will make this more unique

>legitimate complaint

I don't think it was a legit complaint. It's like having gaining weight as a hobby. It's just unhealthy and shouldn't be in the CYOA.

>>51240890
>mfw I though the brown part was a torso

>>51241011
>today you learn that "feeders" are a real fetish

>>51240902
>I just didn't think anyone was actually banking on it.
Not the other anon, and haven't made my build yet. Wasn't planning to go for Corrupt S in the previous version, but the changes made me change my mind (and simultaneously a bit sad that I wouldn't be getting the demihuman summons while I was at it).

>>51240921
I've seen little else but even moderate smokers being guilted for spreading cancer fog and heavy drinkers being praised and patted on the back for being "fun". Also, I think you just fell into your own trap, because as a smoker myself, I know that "most people" don't smoke a lot. I'm at one or two cigarettes a day, as are a lot of people I know, and only one of my friends actually smokes the stereotypical pack a day.
I'm not complaining about not being able to smoke inside of a building. I'm complaining about people who cause an equal amount of distress and bother to other people being treated with no objections whatsoever, while something of the same level is beaten to pieces because it involves the Devil Tobacco.
It sticks, sure - but not if you have a simple fan in the ceiling, which doesn't need to be specially purchased but just to be placed with care. In the same way, you can prevent it from sticking by using thin, non-fabric wallpaper and linoleum/wood/stone flooring, or make it a non-issue by having a smoking section or even just a smoking compartment.
I'm not saying that everyone should do these things, just that there's a suspicious logical gap between most people when they think "smoking" and when they react to it by guilting and blaming.
Several countries in the world have literally discussed instituting a third category of toilets in all public buildings for the gender-special, which will bring with it unimaginable expenses and increase the amount of alibis for sex crimes - but it's still literally illegal to have a smoking compartment installed in most bars or restaurants, just like all public buildings in most countries.

>>51241041
They have like 20 different threads on /aco/, it's hard to find actual good art among all the fat threads.

I knew it was a fetish, that is why I compared it to that. Feeders/Gainers and Smoking should not be considered sexual because it is actively destructive to yourself.

>>51241082
>Feeders/Gainers and Smoking should not be considered sexual because it is actively destructive to yourself.
I mean it's pretty scummy shit but this was a complete non-sequitur.

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>>51240783
>>51241053
I had to cut out a bit of the finer descriptive text, but here, I added it back.

>>51240844
Just throwing things is only one of your rites,so the whole school is more utility. And while you can fling things, it doesn't have the same variety as offensive schools like Crysta have.

And it's a bad idea for a Young magic girl to use Arma because she's 70% weaker than an Old magical girl. If you're physically weak using the physical school is a bad idea.

>>51240921
I know you can get S rank in Joy or Romance, but you're less effective than someone who has Joy or Romance as their well. And while I agree that utility is good, the point is just that Will isn't a good offensive school for Young girls. You're worse off than going Joy or Romance. Probably Benevolence too. I wasn't saying Blood is bad, just that it's a utility school and not a damage dealing one (except to yourself.) Finally, the problem with picking a gun is that it has little synergy with Arma. C rank loses out on the force boost melee weapons get, B rank loses out on the strength boost, and the S rank physical boost is useless to you. Arma just isn't the best for guns.

I'm not saying Arma is a bad rite, or that Will is a bad well overall, just that they're bad for Young magical girls. It's decent for Average and great for Old. It's only really a problem for me because I wanted to pick Young and Will is the only Well I can see myself doing well with.

>>51237980
Politics Cyoa. The Government is extremely Decentralized in the future, leaving you, the mayor of the tri-state area, in a very powerful position indeed. You can align yourself with a few expy political parties, the church, unions, small businessmen, the local newspaper the mafia, and the Free masons. Aligning with the last three, picking out some shady companions, and some other options gives you corruption points or pureness points that will let you run for senate, governor, or President. Running for Senate purely is fairly easy, trivial corrupt, and so on.

>>51241082
Go ahead and disqualify vore, bondage, scat, watersports, drunk sex, zoophilia, piercings, rape, ryona and countless other fetishes on that basis.

>>51241106
Because the idea that you find something so disgusting arousing is complete anathema to me. Regardless, Femdom anon should just remove it and add it something else that isn't retarded so we don't have to deal with smoking autist anymore.

>>51241129
You can say the exact same thing for Flare, then. There's only 1 "offensive" move in it; everything else is utility. Same with many more of the other abilities. Only Crysta and Astra have two abilities among their 4 rites that act as direct offensive moves. Don't quibble over the little things.

>>51241158
>bondage
that isn't how it works

>watersports
urine is sterile

>rape
playrape is not harmful

>drunk sex
poor judgement isn't a reason to disqualify it

Congrats, you have no argument because you're fucking retarded

>>51241201
B A and S all seem pretty offensive, the fireballs, the boost to fire damage, and turning into a fire elemental.

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>>51241060
>I-I only smoke a little!
>T-there's no evidence smoking a little leads to smoking a lot!
>a fan is enough to deal with cigarette smoke!
>I-I can quit anytime I want
>it isn't a phase mom
>if trannies get a safe space why dont smokers

>>51241217
You're working on the assumption that all smoking is inherently the harmful kind of smoking, which it isn't. Smoking a single cigarette is about as bad for you as having a strong coffee.
Also, not all bondage is the soft kind, urine isn't sterile unless you surgically extract it (because the urinary tract is riddled with bacteria), no one limited it to play rape and if you're claiming poor judgment doesn't matter, you could at the very least include the kind of poor judgment that doesn't put other people at risk in the moment.
Congrats, you made yourself look like a retard by intentionally ignoring half of what I wrote and "countering" everything else with double standards and strawmen.

>>51241249
Then I'll tell you the same thing; C, B, A, and S of Motion all seem pretty offensive, the ability to hit telekinetically with force surpassing a bulldozer at normal cost, crushing monsters and objects alike in a large area with overwhelming gravity, and compacting them in the debris of vehicles and rocks afterward.

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>>51241284
>he is still going

>>51241284
>My cigarettes are magic, you guys!

>>51239669
>Well, the Lewd things are gone now, so that doesn't matter.
>>51241119
>I added it back.
So howsabout that chore-rating?

>>51233796
Baron
Science Vesselx3 (Improved Labs, Hyperflux Shields)
Cruiserx5 (Hyper Flux Shields, EMP Beam, Teleport Bay, Point Defense Turrets, Hospital
Anti-Ageing
Medical Nanobots
Genetic Enhancements
Emotion Control
Personal Shields
Personal Teleporters
Active Camouflage
Heat Transfiguration
Cloaking Device
Brothers of Mercy (Alliance)
Princess Theia (Alliance)
Duchess Mirja (Alliance)
Grandmaster Valorus (Alliance)
Countess Nahia (Foe)

I don't need a planet. I assume I just came into a great deal of money and ships. Genetic research will be a primary goal and that will require guinea pigs. Nahia is a notorious pacifist so I'll use my connections to the Brothers of Mercy and my cloaking technologies to abduct her citizenry. I'll mostly just sell my research for cheap to those within my alliances and live comfy.