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No sex-edition please
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>>50888834
Posting the waifu CYOA
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>>50888834
Previous thread: >>50880869
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>>50889098
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>>50889098
Waifus count as sex stuff and isn't allowed
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>>50889110
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>>50889145
Nobody gives a shit about your ban on things you don't like.

Deal with it or fight back with something other than your whining.
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BLADE-chan...
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>>50889145
>please post more waifu cyoas

okay.
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>>50889145
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>>50889262
Carrie.
All I have to do is pick up some industrial grade Arachne silk rope, and best end will be in my sights.
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>>50889098
Jeanne's description is a little inconsistent.
>Can be overprotective of you at times.
>Absolutely refuses to hold your hand in any way but physically.

Seems to me that those two things are mutually exclusive.
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>>50889098
What's an enerator
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>>50889262
>me
>smelling nice

Ahahaha. Hahaha. You are funny girl.

Oh, wait. You are of being the serious.

>EMMA
I am not being disturbed. I have seen things you would not believe.
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>>50888834
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>>50889535
Monstergirls don't mind the weird squid smell, it makes them think of your semen.
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>>50889556
>>50888834
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>>50889556
>>50889570
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>>50889465
You can be protective and not hand-hold people.
Besides, most humans have some sort of clash of internal ideals within them.
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>>50889584
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>>50889584
There was an updated version of this, but honestly the first 5 worlds are the best ones.
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>>50889614
yeah, i was there for it. didn't save it because i felt it was sloppily made.
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>>50889465
Protects you from dangers, but lets you handle challenges.

Won't help you with your math test until it grows legs and fights you.
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>>50889614
I dunno, I liked the ideas of a couple of the worlds.

If I could actually finish a project, I might make a not-just-femdom version.
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>>50889556
Hahahaha. You fool. You underestimate my capacity for EDGE MODE.

>DEMON: Archdemon [Wrath]
If I don't keep a proper eye on her, she'll crush everyone I care for beneath her heel.

>ANGEL: Archangel [Diligence]
Hmph. "Deus Vult" indeed.

>ME: Magical
Sure, you'd think that's 'cute' - but not when your magical powers are granted by Death Himself!

>MISC. Big Sisters
I'm at a clear physical disadvantage. If not for the Reaper's gift, who knows what they'd do?

>CHALLENGES: Mothers Visit, Shared Room
A constant siege, and reinforcements. Tri-monthly interrogations. But the terror of the dead is that they cannot be bought. They cannot be broken. They cannot be reasoned with.

>BONUS CHOICE: Devil-Mother
I knew it. She's been plotting this from the beginning.
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>>50889712
Go play WoW man or WC3.
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>>50889584
I'll take the first one. I've always wanted to be the pampered trophy husband of a powerful woman.
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>>50889556
Maximum yuri build, row edition:

>Be the Girl
>Forbidden Love
Well, it'd hardly be lesbianism without these, would it?
>Magical Girl
It's not like I can get "mana" from my sisters.
>Devil Mother
Be a shame not to have someone else join in on the fun.

>Shared Room
Soundproofed, of course.
>Mothers Visit
I wonder what they're willing to do to... sweeten the pot?
>Let's Go Shopping!
We're all girls, so nobody's going to care if we all change together, or if we stay in there longer than we should...
>Remember: No Bully
I'll just have to keep them occupied~
>Conversion
>Corruption
A natural result, isn't it?

>Depraved Angel
>Sinful Demon
>Big Sisters
Oh my~
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>>50889570
Never thought it'd come to this.

>Big
I mean, it does look nice.

>Weirdness Factor [9]
>Tail Control [8]
>Flight [7]

>Lust Eyes [6]
>Aphordisiacs [5]
>Induce Arousal [3]
>Seductress [2]

>Metabolism [1]
>Round Two [0]

One of these days I'm going to regret this.

>Pinya
Adorable.

>Alli
A lucrative deal.
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>>50888834
>Party

WELL MET
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>>50890059
>Cartoon Physics
>Aura of Awesome
>Holistic Deduction

I'll either go insane by the end of this or be the most famous person ever to exist.
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>>50889535
>tfw no girlfriend to hug me and tell me she likes the smell of my deodorant
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>>50890119
So your mom hugging and telling you you smell nice isn't enough?
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>>50890059
Holistic Deduction
Aura of Awesome
Skill Balancer

I AM the most interesting person in the world, and it always works out eventually.
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>>50889584
339.
Tsun a shit, but it's better than letting yourself become a sissy.
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>>50890174
Look man if you don't like the CYOA at all just don't play it.

Gentle New World is pretty much "what flavor of femdom do you prefer" the CYOA
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Did the lewd CYOA thread on /d/ get deleted? There's no trace of it on the catalogs or archives.
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>>50889556
it should read that you pick one from every column, not row
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>>50890319
Probably. There was some guy reposting a bunch of the lewder but still sfw CYOAs from here, and they were getting shit for it. There were also a couple of cases of beastiality in one of the multi-page CYOAs posted, so the mods probably just nuked the thread.

Alternatively, it could just be that one mod has an intense hate-boner for CYOAs and deleted ALL of them across the site.
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>>50890319
They always get deleted because they're not allowed on /d/. All CYOAs go here.
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>>50890361
So why hasn't he deleted this thread?
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>>50890376
See >>50890374
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>>50890376
This is the thread made AFTER the mass-CYOA-deletion.
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>>50890395
>>50890361
That deletion happened like six hours afterwards, so they're unrelated.
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Got any space pirate CYOAs?
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>>50890535

Sorry, can't find it in my antiquated collection.

Here, have a ...

SPACE OPERA CYOA!!!!

(may or may not be slightly out of date)
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>>50890898

Adelheid Klein

>Drivers License
>Strategist/Admin
13,000c
>Solar Predator (with 2 Free Sparrow Fighters)
7,500c
>1 Lotus Bomber
4,500c
>Ironbill Dropship
1,350c
>Finer Fashion
850c
>Plasma Pistol
650c
>Chart (free)
>Lots of free turrets
>Repair Robots for ship
150c
>Novelty Attire x3 (Captain's Hat, Cape, Epaulets)
0c

Kriegenfist
>Pureblood
>Made in Kriegenfist
>Gut Feeling
>Youth

>Rajat Ambu Kukarni
>Nell Tam
>Donna Walsh
>Walton Quaid
>Tina Haywood

Just fly around having adventures. Little exploring, little trading, little bounty-hunting/mercenarying. Run back to Kriegenfist for protection when I get into trouble.
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>>50890452
Still hoping for the sequel.
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>>50890898
Close enough. Thanks, anon.
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>>50891033
Dick happens?
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>>50890797
If Highlander's still around, here's my Eclipse Phase inspired build.

Background
>The Darkness; Free Floating Drone

Little Things...
>Forever Alone (x4) (+2000 Credits)
>I don't need no Governa's dalla! (x10) (-4000 Credits)
>Knee-Breaker (+1000 Credits)
>Harbinger (+1000 Credits)
>Philosophical Aspects (+200 Credits)
>Decadent (+200 Credits)
>Can't Wake Up Inside (+500 Credits)
>Minor (+500 Credits)

Skills, Perks & Traits
>Silver tongue
>Religious Studies
>Biological Adept
>Advanced Tech Understanding
>Ethereal Mastery (Supernal Magic)
>Field Leader: Acanthus
>Adokori
>Fourth Wall Awareness
>Poetic
>AI Expert
>TechnoMage
>Mechanical Adept
>Mathematical Genius
>Explorer

Clothing
>Traveller Leathers Upgrade
>Tartan Cloak (50)
>Traveller's Medinah Scarf (100)

Weapons
>Yuta Brace Upgrade 1
>Bolter Pistol (400)
>Weapon Enhancements (Ammunition Variants) (435)
>Knick-knacks
>Pegs
>Basic Survival Kit
>Basic Bag
>ID Card
>Hover Bike
>Mechanical Transfusion
>Magical Protection Vestments (485)
>Witching Bottle (505)
>Psychic Paper (525)
>Multiversal Timekeeper (575)
>Mathery Travellers Encyclopedia Vol 1-8324 (595)
>Overclocked Telken-Chip (1095)
>Abstracted Shoggoth Minor (1195)
>Bottomless Bag (1295)
>Internal Sustenance Model (1495)
>Universal Traveller Markers (1505)
>Ring of Dispel (1655)
>Traveller Corpse Soap (1705)
>Spirit Bonding Charms (1805)
>Low Level Adrig Manipulator (1825)
>Spirit Walk Components (2025)
>24HR Multi-Reality News Feed (2045)
>Internal Weaponry Module (2345)
>Muscle Memory Modules (2645)
>Organ Replacement (Mechanical brain ) (2695)
>Gene-Mod Equipment (3195)
>Shattered Yith Conscious (3395)
>Custom Period Clothes (4000)
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>>50889145
>please post more waifu cyoas
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>>50891179
I like this and wish it got finished.
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>>50891177
Feel free to change and tweak whatever if you want to add it in with the others. My attempt at fluff included.

Factions
>True Travelers

Covenants
>The Temple of Great Holy Light

Allies
>Captain Grahm, Explorer of the Deep

Home District
>Free Traveller- The Road Never ends ...

Hubworlds
>Free Traveler

Panic Buttons
>The God

Singularity-seeking ego that found himself lost after crossing one too many Pandora gates
While alone out there in the void, messing around in VR coupled with deep meditation and a few psychotic breaks helped him take his first baby steps towards magic while also giving him some new perspectives on reality
Treats bodies the same way others treat clothes/vehicles and has biomorphs ranging from human+ to tyranid bio-horrors and even stranger forms. His synthmorphs have just as much variety. Keeps them in his bag of holding for quick switching
Likes to be infuriatingly vague/cryptic/poetic in both word and action when around non-travellers. Finds this hilarious but is more straightforward with travellers around
Vacillates between long stretches of unapologetic hedonism and introspection/meditation on the myriad truths of the multiverse. Often tries to combine both behaviors but so far remains unsuccessful. Is much better at mixing his scientific and magical aptitudes
Suffers from incurable wanderlust and exploring the multiverse will always be his main driving force. Deepening his scientific/ethereal knowledge comes a close second
Can be convinced to stay in one place to fight or hang out for a while but will grow bored/restless eventually and move on
Even so, can always be counted on to have your back though not always in a very straightforward fashion
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What do people look for in a waifu aside from them being a kissless virgin and never cheating on you?
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>>50890797
If I take Mechanical Transfusion can I still manipulate Ether?

After seeing a quest on anonkun I feel like making a magical girl android.
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>>50891206
CYOA in a sentence.
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>>50891236
Muscles.
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>>50891236
Insatiable cockhungriness.

But never touching another man.
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>>50891236
>What do people look for in a waifu aside from them being a kissless virgin and never cheating on you?

That's only some people.

I don't care if my waifu used to be a slut who liked getting gangbanged as long as she doesn't have any stds and is now devoted to me.
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>>50891236
Big feminine penis.
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>>50891236
Mental instability. Yandere are pretty nice, and there are a few ways to spin it.
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>>50888834
>No sex

Do you know where you are?
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>>50891236
First for my penis.

I haven't a clue. The best advice I can give is to look at popular characters throughout various media and surmise why they're liked.
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>>50891236
I look for traps then futas both preferably dominant.
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>>50891179
Okay so wait how do you even build for this?
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>>50891236
Being someone who I could learn from and who could learn from me in turn.

Just as Bronze is far stronger than Copper or Tin could ever be alone, so too must we make each other greater than we could ever be apart.
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>>50891236
Actual personality
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>>50891236

Christmas Cakes
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>>50891246
No reason you shouldn't be able to. Only thing that stops you using magic is the Ethereal-heart I think.
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>>50891236

Also Bodacious Babes Muscle girls,
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>>50891236
Some people like kind girls, and others like dominant ones. The dere archetypes tend to be popular as well.
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>>50891236
I usually only go for girls that are dominant. A little bit of crazy goes a long way too.
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>>50891236
If she can teach me laser eyes, then I won't need anyone else.
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>>50890797
Did Highlander ever answer my question about if I take Spiritual Transfusion can I posses brain dead bodies?
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>>50891236
a physical recognition of a psychic archetype inner psyche.
Simply It seizes me and i am gone.
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>>50891236
dead and buried
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>>50891487
>tfw I'm not sure if anon is just tired of waifu discussion or if he's into the undead

What have you done to me, /cyoag/?
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>>50891236
Sweet, feminine, modest, and introverted. Likes to cook and wear cute clothes. Being a bit ditzy is nice, like Anise in Dungeon Fighter Online.
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>>50891236

lolidom

else slimegirl
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>>50891236
Can't be too dominant or submissive. I don't want her trying to order me around, or being unable to function if I'm not there to order her around.
Her interests don't have to to match mine 100%, but we should share more than we don't.
Expanding on the above, she shouldn't hate any interests I have that she doesn't share, or have any interests that I myself hate.
Politically we should be aligned on all but the most minor issues.
Sexually, I don't care about her history as long as she doesn't have any STDs or kids, and remains loyal to me after we get together.

Also tits must be at least as big as her head as an absolute minimum; preferably with an ass that is proportionate, but that is not 100% necessary.
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>>50891236
There are so many conflicting tastes on this board that there can be no single question.
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>>50890059
- Cartoon physics for general invulnerability.
- Liquid Transmutation. What's the cooldown on this? Even with a low cooldown, I can do stuff like turn water into Horseshoe Crab blood, which is 60K per gallon. Or Insulin, which can start at 9400 per gallon. King Cobra Venom is 153K while Scorpion Venom is apparently a whopping 39mil per gallon. Just a single session of transmutation will make me nearly 200 mil at the current market price.

- I dunno, just about anything will do for the third power. Temporary Genius maybe. I'll just be a genius during most of my waking hours, sleep for 6-8 hours. The remaining 8-6 hours I'll spend vegging out on the internet or something.
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>>50891454
That girl pissed me off. I like shark teeth, I like the water and everything having to do with it. I can't stand someone who can never admit they're wrong.
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>>50891508
Zombie girls are loveable.
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>>50889570
>Succubus CYOA
>No Futa option
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Does anyone have the Incubus CYOA? I know it could walk the line on whether it's a /d/ or a /tg/ thing. But I honestly think that it's a great Waifu builder for straight guys if you give your incubus lactation, a vagina, and the big hips body.
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>>50889556
>Depraved
>Little Boy
>Older (Sinful Demon)
>Devil Mother

>Shared Room
>Let's go Shopping

SUCC
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>>50889230
pls delet this meme already
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>>50891917
Nah. Our shitposter is extra butthurt because of it so we're all pretty happy about the Christmas exchange.
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>>50891033
I still have no idea what I would put in a sequel.
>>50891236
A kind, caring personality and someone with real character.

Also, gigantic tits.
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>>50891941
Shitposter this and shitposter that. At this point you stupids fucks here and there are just trolling yourselves.
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>>50891236
What >>50891354 said. I don't like fuckbags, virgin or no. Make them have more character than a wet towel.
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>>50891821
Ain't an omnibus CYOA.

Besides, it doesn't say anything about Witch magic.
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>>50891454
>Madam Shyarly

Excellent taste, fellow anon.
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>>50891236
An interesting/engaging person with a life of their own that's very much willing to share it while being very interested(but not overbearing) in my own.
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>>50892044
>fellow anon
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>>50891236
Saber clones.
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>>50892078
In swimsuits.
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>>50892187
From the future.

Mysterious Heroine X has fucking amazing lore.
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>>50891236
Kissless virgin isn't necessary for me, though it does naturally come with the archetypes I prefer anyway. Trust and loyalty are of course basic components witch goes rather beyond "never cheating on you".

After that I'm mainly looking for someone I have stuff in common with. I'm introverted and reserved, so an outgoing genki girl isn't going to work for me. Besides that my interests are very limited. IRL if it's not some kind of game or anime or something of that nature I probably won't have any interest, and a relationship with no shared interests seems like it would be extremely boring and hard to maintain.

In CYOAs there are also shared hardships, which function more or less like shared interests, and CYOAs can also give me new things to be interested in that wouldn't normally be possible IRL

So basically I want some kind of quiet girl into some geeky hobby. She'd probably be slow to open up but very sincere when she does.
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>>50892209
Her ponytail makes me hard.
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>>50892232
Assassin EMIYA's combination of combat knife, guns, and knight armor make me hard.
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>>50891236

Likes it when I buy her presents, likes movies and hiking, can cook better than me, likes to stay in as much as go out, doesn't have a violent temper.
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>>50891179
>Priest
I guess I'm a kind of Dom. I'm not into shy girls or those who can't think for themselves, but I would prefer her being DTF at anytime but not really making the first move. I guess I find dopey more sexy than sexy.
>Pig
I can go for like 8 Pig girls yeah. Holstauruses and Fairies, as well as Cat and Dog girls minorly, interested me to be honest. But Pig magic just seems so useful in real life. Also 8 Thicc girls at once.
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>>50888834
Upd8 Time!

Alright, this is more of a testbed for what's replaced the Realms. Basically, instead of putting players at square 1 and leaving them to develop as they please, an antecedent perspective lets gives players the since of scale they were looking for, while still preserving flexibility. I'm also open to suggestions.

Also, I've decided to take a page out of Highlander's book and start collecting builds for a "allies and rivals" compendium. I require:
>chosen options
>name & titles, if applicable
>final stats
>a paragraph or so of description

By linking a build to this post, creators waive any IP rights to the build, and give the author (EDG) the right to edit as necessary and to repost a compendium containing the build, edited or otherwise, wherever the author damn well pleases.
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Are there any Vietnam War CYOAs?
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>>50892396
I will also accept builds linked via pastebin.
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>>50892396
Any other changes?
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>>50892432
A few more options sprinkled in, like a warfan treasure. I don't remember if there are any others. It's been a rough holiday season.
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>>50892396
I'm not sure about the nature of this great game. What counts as failure? Obviously talking about the fluff for Castellan of the Cosmos.
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>>50892396
You've still got that weird line after Perfect Neoteny on page 8.
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>>50892490
The Elder Powers, beings like Teiatat, compete with each other for dominance over and worship from the humans across the Cosmos. Failure, then, is the PC not successfully securing either for their patron.
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>>50892396
>>50892453

Thanks EDG, super excited to go through this. Hope the rest of your holiday time goes better.
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>>50892526
It just reads like he'll punish you for not achieving specific goalsets, eg losing a battle, rather than 'failure' being a total loss of your temporal power or execution of yourself.
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>>50892502
Yeah, I can't get rid of it. It doesn't even always show up on the source word document.

>>50892529
You're quite welcome/. I'm just upset I couldn't finish it by xmas
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>>50892396
Ooh, very excited for an update. The ambitions look like a good idea but I'm still processing all of that.

Think I'll come up with a new build and give the Sisters a break for now.
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>>50892545
I'll tinker with the wording to show that punishment is meted out by competitors and victims, not Teiatat

>>50892553
Well, I hope you like how they turn out. Can't wait to see the build!
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>>50891236
Panty shots.
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>>50892396
Hmm, I planned to achieve something like Castellan after having worked up from Desire. Having started as a plaything and tool of my bonded mate, someone like Chaq or something, until I had gained enough influence in their realm to overthrow them and thus become a ruler and start my conquest. Power earned is power savored, as they say.
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>>50892407
Nah
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>>50892396
>There are those that value quantity over quantity.
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>>50891335
Pick your class, then pick your partner(s)

That's about it, it's not mechanically heavy.
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>>50892396
Keeping my build to myself now desu
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>>50892651
I'd make one but there's no demand for gritty, serious CYOAs sadly
I just really really want to play Rising Storm 2
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>>50892663
I'm waiting for those to make a brief return. I'm fine with comfy waifu things, but honestly I just want more adventure, or something darker. I have no authority over authors or anything, and it makes others happy, so I'm fine how it is though.
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>>50892642
Best to take an option for castellan though. Ambitions describe success conditions, not beginnings

>>50892659
The disclaimer was an ill-conceived joke.
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>>50892691
Eh. There's no such thing as an end-goal in eternity. Just feels like I'm being placed down with power at my disposal already. There's no indication of "Where am I going to be after I make these choices?"
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If I were to learn how to use GIMP, who would be interested in a CYOA where you are the Ancient Evil sealed away for thousands of years?
It would primarily be about designing the hurdles that prevent you from escaping, as well as why you are sealed away and the nature of your prison. It won't be very exact with the power level of things and what form they'll truly take - that stuff is up to your imagination. What I'm mostly going to be going for with it is an array of options to cover everything with balancing taking a backseat.
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>>50892689
I actually made one similar to what you're saying but it was massively unpopular and nobody replied to it
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>>50892775
sure
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>>50892658
Oh. Alright, I'll give it a shot.

>>50891179
>Artificer
So everyone can benefit from everyone's power. If we're stronger together, why not wear it on our sleeves? Literally, in some cases.

>1 Troll, 1 Pig, 1 Amazon, 1 Minotaur, 1 Ogre, 1 Orc
And I certainly hope they care for each other as much as they apparently care for me. Were something to happen to me, I'd hate for them to all end up alone.
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>>50892727
I'm afraid I don't understand your concern.
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>>50892861
Is there going to be some indication of where our character is going to be after we've made our build? Where are we at? Do we have some kind of transportation options? I'm sure some people took an option that places them somewhere, like Chaq's planet or whatever, but I don't think that's universal. You don't want us to be on Earth at the start, correct?
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>>50892779
Fuck, did I miss it?
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>>50889204
Immortality + Equalizer
Or really anything + Equalizer

I'd love to be a protagonist and space dandy my way around.
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>>50892888
I suppose the answer is "You start wherever makes the most sense" but I suppose I'll have to address Earth at some point.
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>>50891179
>Artificer
Versatile and permanent.

>Mouse
Very good for an Artificer. Maybe just enchant a chest with stuff inside it.

>Elf
Cute waifus and varied powers.

>Moth
Unique powers, fluffy butts, and recursive growth. What's not to like?

>Illithid
One part output for all that power, one part power fantasy. This is dangerous, though; it's easy to go Dark with this.
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>>50892913
You have to pick a roommate too, anon
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>>50892775
What, like a prequel to Kingdom Crusher?

Mite b cool.
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>>50892917
Ah, but where makes sense if I didn't pick an option that'd require me to be on another planet? That's what I mean. It's unclear on that front. This is both a logical hole and I think defining that at least in part deals with my issue with what it sounds like that I stated >>50892727 .
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>>50892775
Yes. YES. Y E S.
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>>50892963
Then you'd be in the Labyrinth, I guess? I rely on the player to do part of the worldbuilding for their build because I don't pretend to predict what the most optimal starting conditions for their story would be.
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>>50892956
Less solid numbers and more interpretation, but yeah I guess so.
Really I was given this idea more by FURI than anything else - though I intend for there to be options to go about making any sort of prison and prisoner.
It has some dope music: https://youtu.be/IaBeViK2rIU
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Can we get a cleanup in aisle /jc/? someone spilled drunk quiet and high Sandra all over the place, and customers are beginning to complain about the smell.
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>>50893009
I get that, but to do what you want you have to lead people. Like, how do Brides get here, or here, why are they there or there? Players would then be able to conceive of what would happen after the events of building themselves. Anon goes to X because his build was Y. Or, Anon goes to Z because Brides can always go there. But if there's no indication, then nobody will know what to do.
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>>50893027
>drunk quiet
Infidel
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>>50893009
>>50893035
As an example, you could define how Brides get to the Maiden's Gate. This will also help people in figuring out how they leave the Labyrinth.
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>>50893039
"hey fuck u it wasnt m fault ok. she opened the bottle and it wuldnt be rude not to so i did ok i feel bad about t too"

t. Quiet

Look there right now, it's hilarious.
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>>50893035
Oh, so your problem is one of ligistics? Like how Brides get from place to place? I guess I'll have to cover that too, if what if already hinted at is insufficient for players to springboard off of.
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>>50893057
>aisl
>>50893039
hey fuk u like uve never done something fuckken wrong u cuntisg dickhloe
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>>50892396
>Also, I've decided to take a page out of Highlander's book and start collecting builds for a "allies and rivals" compendium. I requi

How long do we have?
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>>50893064
See >>50893056 , basically.

Where is this hinted at currently, by the way? I've only read the whole CYOA once, every other time I head to the places where you said you updated something and skim through until I find something new.
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>>50889145
>Waah dont post related content i dont like
Fuck off to where you belong
>>>/mlp/29114926
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>>50892396
I guess I'll make a build for this, fae-esque I'm thinking
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>>50893090
Temporary portals are a thing, for example, and it's stated that the Maiden't gate is only the primary peans of exit from the labyrinth.
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>>50889606
I want immortality
Little girl
Julie

First two rows turned this into pick-one.
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>>50893131
>Temporary portals are a thing
Is this a power Brides get?

>Primary Peans
Aight, but where does it set you? Does it randomly leave you somewhere in the universe?
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>>50893097
>can't decide between martial arts training and viking powers
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>>50893147
>Portals
It's a power under treasures, and other entities can open them as well

>Maiden's Gate
In my mind, the Gate opens on many different places, and it's easier to enter than to reliably leave. It's also the only permanent entrance, but only one of the exits
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>>50893181
I see. So if it's the default destination, the idea is that you'll randomly find an exit, or use the gate and end up at one of its exits if you didn't get portals?
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>>50893194
Pretty much.
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>>50889098
Valentia of Aragon and Blues re the best waifus
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>>50893207
Alright. Just trying to get an idea of how things will go for me immediately after the CYOA structure. With that information I can adequately spin off into my story in the OC location I end up at after finding a warp gate.
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>>50890059
Disease Hunter
Temp Genius
Aura of Awesome

Closest to MH as possible.
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>>50892775
Sounds lovely and a lot like Kingdom Crusher which I also love. Would be great if there was stuff to do with your powers as well.
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>>50891236
I think that someone how you can depend on but also depend on you but I'm no expert
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>>50890797
What is this? After spending the last four hours on it I feel compelled to know more.
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WORM parts 1...
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>>50893386
Group of player characters fuck around the multiverse getting into/causing/solving trouble. Have fun and don't mind the guy with all the pet rocks.
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>>50893415

And 3...

...

(We don't talk about part 2)
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>>50892396

I like the realm changes! They feel a little more diverse in what they do now. Was Desire of All the Cosmos section inspired by my Mother of Spiders build? I have major build update for that, but probably won't get posted until tomorrow. I'm not so sure about being used for a companion though...
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>>50890797
Made a shitty character, tell me how I can improve on it
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>>50893420
Oh I already know a friend of mine would spend all 2000 CR on pet rocks
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>>50892396
Any more sections planned?
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>>50890797
>>50890898
>>50890808
>>50892396

Google PDF Reader: "Failed to load PDF document."

Adobe Reader: "Cannot open due to unsupported file type or damage to file."

...

What do?
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>>50889556
Easy peasy.

>Inexperienced Demon
>Innocent Angel

I'm already a big brother, and honestly, I love being able to look out for kids who I don't have to pay for.

>Magical

For maximum cool big bro points, I'll need a way to kick supernatural ass when I need to. Plus they get to make fun of the costume, always a good time.

>Devil-Mother

Didn't really like anything on this row, but it'd be fun trying to rope my friends and new little sisters into distracting DevilMom long enough for me to actually enjoy high school again.

>Mothers Visit

I'm pretty good at handling suspicious parents, so should be at least bearable.

>Remember: No Bully

Well that's just a given if I'm the older sibling.

>BONUS ROUND: Archdemon of Sloth

Mostly because I play a lot of games already and Sloth is my personal vice.

>Conversion

I was taught part of being the older sibling is raising the younger ones to be responsible, so I'd be all over saving the Archdemon from herself.

>Shared Room

I'm a poorfag, been there done that.

>BONUS ROUND: Archangel of Kindness

Because I have to feel so fucking important, don't I?
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>>50892396

Net points: 70
Pedigree: 8
Status: 8
Allure: 5

Which is up from 11 spare points, 5 in all stats.

Scrapped my entire build and started from the ground up with the concept in mind. Came out much better, although I note I *was* holding back points to see what could be obtained in further updates. This one uses them fully, but does not use Rising Star. Actually kind of tempted to push things a little further, to the point that the beautiful Bride of Teiatat is actually an amalgam of bodies that should not be when self-control is lost, something I hinted at with the dossier I linked last week. >=D

I guess writing up a thing for the CYOA is more of less of a foregone conclusion, huh? =P (Probably won't happen until I come up with a decent name.)

Two notes:

* I continue to feel that Rite of Flesh Union and Widow's Hunger are overly similar, with the caveat that this may be the case purely because of the nature of my character.
* Knights-in-Crimson and Sensual Ritualists lack an Exclusive: Retainer. Is this intentional?
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>>50891917
Wait I thought you were dead
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>>50890059
Disease Hunter

Aura of Awesome

Cartoon Physics
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>>50892775
If you're trying to learn gimp, here's some tips
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>>50890452
>>50890460
Summer

Storage Chest, Milky, Sensitive

Stretchy Clothing, Robotic Butler, Self-driving Car

The very large, super-sensitive nipples should make Summer's life a little more fun, and hopefully her newfound storage capacity will be useful. The stretchy clothing, robot butler, and self-driving car should also help; at least she won't accidentally destroy her kitchen or get in a car accident. Given her cursed nature, though, her breasts may leak at inopportune moments... at least she has a good excuse for attending to those nipples regularly (or enlisting help, of course).
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>>50888834
>unlimited budget for race car design
>hire literally everyone
>fix the world with my race car design budget by dragging out the development for my whole life and getting everybody paid
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>>50893655

http://pastebin.com/8EgcshgF

Also, I caught a mistake or two in my math, so it's actually 1 point left over, 7, 8, 5.
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>>50888834
>City Building
Ha-ha, time for cyberpunk.
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>>50893751
I love that ant picture
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>>50893751
That CYOA should have ben stiller as one of the possible companions
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>>50893792
I don't think you understand how money works, anon.
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>>50889098
>Room with Divia
>Make friends with the others
>Suck up to her to learn some magic
>reason it's "to make doing chores easier" if she doesn't give in

>>50889204
>Take the dragonstone and bio serum
>Pressure the wizard into another reward
>I want more magic
>or at least that potion
>But mainly the magic

>Either end up a perverted wizard or horribly cursed

It's like they say, the squeaky wheel gets fucked by the mage. Or something.

This whole thing is stupidly hard to make a choice, from roommates to rewards. Quit making things so good.
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>>50893098
Why that thread in particular, anon? That seems fairly specific.
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>>50889535
I would play the FUCK out of low poly Dark Souls if it had 1's level design and something like Wind Waker's aesthetic, maybe dulled down in color.

Anyways does anyone have the Souls Boss cyoa?
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>>50893569
That dude got fucking canonized when he became one with the rock.
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>>50892396
[1/2]
Well this took a while to do but was pretty fun I may have to do a full writeup for it sometime, but for now just the choices.

Allure:1
Status:1
Pedigr:2
Form:
Genitalia: Flared Knotting Spined Prehensile Luminescient Pillar(x3) Penis (-16), I feel buying pillar that many times and prehensile can justify me being able to keep my dick retracted away in a sort of cloaca and the other additions add to my blessing

Shape: Powerful (-2), as it says softness isn't fully put away but there certainly fat isn't in excess anywhere certainly almost as understated as the modest form

Chest: Soft going, along with what was stated under powerful

Influences:
Metapsychological Pseudodevascent (-1), manifesting as a simple mildly disconcerting otherness and seeming detachment but in slipping moves more towards faelike machiavellian action and thought
Quasicosmic (-4), under daylight its manifestation is only glimpsed out of the corner of the onlooker's eye as what seems to be glowing eels swimming just under the skin under moonlight or blackest night bright slowly shifting tattoos slowly fade in the longer you stare in a way like the opposite of what happens in your vision after looking too long at the sun

Face:
Seductive, Pale skin and features close to regal but dulled and made familiar enough to exude charm in counterpoint to the influences
Chakra Eye (-2), A third eye with no lids and a schlera that when unmoving seems to simply blend in with the skin of the forehead containing a plain muddy green iris and black pupil
Elder Gaze (-2), seemingly normal eyes then only a blink later only iris slashed through diagonally for pupils that seem to go all the way around the eye another blink and back gain

Flourishes:
Ouroboros Metabolism (-2)
Altruistic Ejaculation (+1)
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>>50892396
>>50894377
[2/2]
Was too long to fit in one post.

Dowry:
Crimson Manual (-4), a minimalistic physical battle style concentrating on prolonging fights and creating space
Abyssal Ink (-3), the ink acts in concert with the changes from the manifestations of quasicosmicness amplifying them to their full otherworldly state
War-Fan of the Consubine-Marsha (-5), alone a deadly weapon in concert with the prolonging fighting style a cruel and effective method to inevitably and slowly bleed enemies bone dry
Argent Blaze (-7)
Rite of Worldstepping (-4)
True Name (-4), on this day Teiatat gave me another name... what name you ask? you'll have to do more than just ask to find that out

Bonds:
Knights-in-Crimson (-8), crimson knights for one marked by the crimson kiss
Sans Serviteurs (+4), in the far labyrinth those who can only wait on hand and foot are nothing but liabilities
The Eunuch (-10), there needs be as many secrets laid bare as possible and who better than the eunuch to tell truths long forgotten
Auramoth the Gleaner, Contract-Bound Gender Reassignment (-9), Made into a mothgirl as his base form a useful asset and humbled in form as he is the potential to be changed back should motivate while she wishes to be changed back
Lavender Sprite (-1)

Urges:
Throne’s Shadow (+3)

Stigmata:
Stigma of the Rebel
Stigma of the Crimson Kiss (+3), though often far off on his ambition this must always be dealt with on the return and while it's a problem he certainly as the tools, the knowledge, and the bonds to render many attacks trivial

Ambition:
Sehzade of the Far Labyrinth, this ambition takes you far afield allowing as much time away from concentrations of other brides as possible
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>>50890395
This is actually the SECOND thread after the drunken mod rampage or whatever it was.
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>>50894386
>>50894377
Think your totals are a little messed up.
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>>50890059
>Skill Balancer
>Aura of Awesome
>Holistic Deduction

Win almost everything.
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>>50894426
quite possible, I didn't run through them a second time.
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>>50891821
Author is known to be against nonstandard genital/bodytype configurations, to the point of referring to such as "abominations".
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>>50894452
what a prood
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>>50894452
Good.
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>>50894452
I don't see a problem?
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>>50890319
You couldn't tell? We always get an influx of lewdposters when their /d/ threads get nuked.
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>>50894498
Uh, no? We always have lewdposters all the time. You must not be here very often.
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So do people like this format for abilities more? I.e. no classes, pick your abilities ala Super Soldier CYOA.

also small preview, and a game of, "guess the ability."
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>>50891277
>>50892223
Italics please go
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>>50894516
Looks good to me
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>>50894504
>an influx

Influx doesn't mean you start from 0, you mongoloid. It just means that more than usual appear.

Brush up on your reading comprehension before you try to insult other anons.
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>>50892187
Arthur, Mordred, Nero, and who is the last one?

>>50892232
Why is Saber hunting Nero, that is rude
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>>50894548
>Saber
That's Mysterious Heroine X, nothing to do with Saber silly.
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>>50894426
>>50894451
I just checked the point total and I seem to actually have an extra 6 points lol
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>>50894557
Sounds like a Mysterious Girlfriend X ripoff.

Type-Moon can't into originality, no wonder he essentially copies the same female lead every time.
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>>50894520
Come on, my engrish isn't NEARLY as bad as Italics.

Also I didn't say I wanted a slut like that other guy. I will pick a nympho in certain oversexed CYOAs, but that's typically because I'd end up making myself into one in those CYOAs to start with.

Mostly I'm just realistic and there are SO many things more important than whether or not she's ever slept with anyone else before.
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>>50894562
6 points I didn't spend I mean
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>>50894557
Can anyone explain me why and how people keep confusing those two? They don't look even slightly similar at all.
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>>50894575
The instructions appear to be missing from this CYOA. I think it was supposed to be chose one reject one?
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>>50894586
yea something like that, I just clicked a random image in my cyoa folder
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>>50890059
>wall of information
>aura of awesome
>inverted emotions
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>>50894533
>more than usual
Again, you don't come here often.
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>>50894516
This format gives a better idea for, shall we say, the kind of 'power level' you can expect to get while giving 'class choices' helps give a better theme and narrows down a person's character to that theme. As the former gives you, like, the 'base building blocks', it's easier for someone to come up with the kinds of things they'd do with their selected abilities.

It's not like you can't do both (pick a class, then pick your abilities), that's just more work on your end.
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>>50892775
Sounds neat, looking forward to it.
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>>50894516
Basically what >>50894624 said.

Particularly the classes aiding with theme and world building.
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>>50894568
Mysterious Heroine X is a character who came back from a dystopian cyber-punk future where Saber lookalikes have become the ruling class of society and put Lancers to death because of a running gag. She's trying to kill all other Saber lookalikes to prevent that.

She is literally a character made to mock that.
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>>50892232
>>50892187
>>50892078
Fate/Waifu CYOA when???
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>>50894756
I want a Fate CYOA where we're a servant getting summoned for the grail war. Seriously, it has the chance for comfy, waifus, awesome character customization, and adventure.
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>>50894764
grail wars are suffering
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>>50894773
In most cases, yes. But you CAN make it work. Theoretically.
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>>50891236
Someone with similar interests and a laidback, funloving personality.
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Is good.
>>50894624
This: >>50894516
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>>50889262
>male monstergirls
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>>50894868
Feminine penises, monstergirls (male), etc...
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how do you guys read the PDF cyoas? im sure theyre pretty good but jesus christ i can't sit there and read 30-80 pages of cyoa.
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>>50894969
Dedication to the concept. It has to be something that really gets me engaged, like with a book.
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>>50894585
>abs
>not a dyke
Impeccable taste anon!
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>>50894969
Autism, pdf cyoas are made by autists to other autists.
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>>50894764
I came up with the idea for that once. You got the choice between the dark and gritty Grail Wars, the silly one from the spinoff show, or some other stuff.
I never bothered with the CYOA because of the Anons who whine at the mere mention of anyone with more power than you/anyone having power over you. They'd go full edgelord and try to kill their Master.

You'd be able to pick your class, come up with your unique backstory if you wanted to, and all the Masters are obviously waifus, with different play styles and reasons for wanting the Grail.
Hell, I'd even toss in a useless loli who won't give you orders and let you pick your own wish - but at the cost of the power you get from the Command Seals.
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>>50894516
Abilities are definitely preferred over classes. Much of the fun in CYOAs is figuring out how to use specific powers. Just saying we have a generic wizard powerset is way less interesting than say having the power to levitate and manipulate objects up to 10 feet at full strength.
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>>50894969
I don't. I personally believe pfds are lazy in design not only due to the lack of visual effects but also in terms of gaming design. While more content is often applauded by fans who wish to see something new it can also have negative effects such as discouraging new players or keeping the content relevant and interesting. Reading a book for example can become a chore when filled with ridiculous details or dragging on too much.

PDFs just doesn't appeal, no matter what is in it. But some enjoy it so that's good enough. Different strokes for different folks.
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Power Level
>Legend
Specialization
>Assassin

Powers
>Strength - Rank 1 (2)
>Regeneration - Rank 3 (6)
>Endurance - Rank 2 (5)
>Stealth - Rank 3 (4)
>Improved Lung - Rank 2 (2)
>Beast Eye - Rank 1 (1)

Companions
>Horse
>Babe

Equipment
>Weapon, Non-enchanted Estoc - Rank 2 (2)
>Ranged Weapon, Caltrops - Rank 1 (1)
>Explosive Satchel - Rank 5 (15)
>Stealth Satchel - Rank 4 (7)

Rather than my own abilities, I'd be heavily relying on my satchels to subdue my opponents. It'd be best if I could trap them in an area, perhaps by sealing the exits using explosives, then slowly filling up the area with smoke and poison while taking potshots at them with my bombs. I can still fight when I have to, though, but I'll pretty much only be able to take on humanoids without the use of my equipment.
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>>50895092
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>>50895099
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>>50889262
>Manticore
>Fifth mouth
Wait. What are the other 3 mouths.
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>>50895116
Mouth-mouth
Pussy-mouth
Ass-mouth
Various-other-holes-that-you-can-fuck-mouth
Tail-pussy-mouth
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Alright here comes reiterated version of yesterdays Banished:

Its a game about group of people settling and it needs a new name.

>Stats are
- Upkeep/Supplies (can be carts of food, gold coins, limited magical pouches etc.)
- Culture/Renown (high culture -> high upkeep; low supplies -> culture loss; low culture -> dissimilation of group - culture is not only what binds the group together, but also the amount of sophistication and knowledge)
- Military strength (not sure if this will get implemented)

>Who are you? (not sure whether to include this and in what form)

>Who are your people?
- emissaries (people spreading power from power center - missionaries, war party etc.)
- outcasts (people running from power center - banished, refugees running from natural disaster or war, persecuted artisans etc.)
- nomads (folks which always were on the road - travelling merchants, vagrants, clowns etc.)

>Who else did come with you? (here you can hire additional groups for supplies, but you will lose culture)
- sellswords, sages, indentured servants etc.

>What happened during the journey? (spend portion of supplies to gain something)
- revelation (lose a hero/something to gain bonus to socioeconomic or culture building)
- ???

>Where did you settle? (physical properties)
- NOT near water (no river, no sea etc. - increased isolation, hampered trade)
- foothills, mountains, caves, island etc.

>What makes this place special? (socioeconomic, magic properties... these will be traits i.e. advantages combined with drawbacks)
- neighbouring a powerful kingdom
- on the frontier
- is already inhabited
- etc.

>What did you build?
- culture building (these are centrum of knowledge /library.../, of faith, of law - only with high culture you can build high-level of these)
- economic building (if you have skilled workforce you dont need to rely on natural resources)
- military building ???

Aaand this is it basically. Any comments?
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>>50895032
Agreed with all your points.
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>>50895133
You should pick a better time for this kind of thing, 6am on the american east coast is the worst.
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>>50894969
If it has more than 3 pages it should be grouped into PDF. That all.
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>>50894977
>>50894979
>>50895032
>all these anons thinking PDF means rulebook
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Is "Angels fighting Demons" an overdone concept?
I got an idea for one, where you get recruited as an Angel because a ton of Demons got loose and the Angels need back up.
I know generally guys here like being evil and having the power to do so so I don't know if that would be interesting.
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>>50891436
>Some people like kind girls, and others like dominant ones.
I hope you don't mean to imply that dominant women can't also be kind.
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>>50895281
>Is "Angels fighting Demons" an overdone concept?
Yes.
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>>50895304
Ah well, it was worth a shot!
It sucks there are so many cyoas done already. It feels like there aren't many concepts left to explore.
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>>50895281
>>50895304
>>50895335
Is "overdone concept" an overdone concept? I say do it anyway.
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>>50895281
>Is "Angels fighting Demons" an overdone concept?
Yes, but DEMONS fighting ANGELS, well,,,
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>>50895238
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>>50895335
>there aren't many concepts left to explore
You think so? IMO there are quite a few concepts there in pristine condition and moreover (and this is important) most of the CYOAs here are shit. So even if it was done, it was probably done badly and you can improve upon it.
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>>50895335
Just because it's been done already doesn't mean you can't give your own spin on it.
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>>50895386
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>>50895349
Why would you want to ruin the world?
>>50895365
Yes, I think so. Or maybe it's more that the things that are easy to come up with are also the things that have already been done?
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>>50895393
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>>50895379
>>50895386
>>50895393
>>50895400
Friendly reminder that the word you're going for is "NemEsis", not "NemIsis" (mid-word caps purely for emphasis).
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>>50895408
>mid-word caps guy
heyy! you're the same mid-word caps anon as in the last thread right?
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>>50895408
Fuuuuuck! Well I changed it for the next version.
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>>50895408
Have you ever thought that maybe he's talking about nem + ISIS, huh?
>nem
>A nutritional unit described as 1 gram of breast milk of specific nutritional components having a caloric value equivalent to 2/3 calorie.
Clearly anon wants to drown ISIS in breast milk!
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>>50895379
Changes?
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>>50895432
Well I've done a similar spelling reminder once before (quite recently as well), so assuming no one else has done it like this, yes.

>>50895446
>CYOA where you build an army of lactating women to combat ISIS with their breastmilk
I wouldn't say no to that being an actual CYOA.
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>>50895452
Only typos.
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>>50895408
He prolly wants to be original and special, thats why Nemisis

>>50895396
Okay, here are some concepts from top of my head which to my knowledge havent been done or are broad enough to be made again fresh
>lovecraftian horror in cyberpunk setting
>magical creatures protecting something sacred
>robotic sentinels surveying a planet
>travelling theater
>minor god trying to gain more influence by making butterfly-effect limited changes in the world
>zombie apocalypse (yes, this one havent been really done yet - throw in night/day cycles, managing mental wellbeing etc. and you can pull it off)
>hero having to balance his own sanity with magical powers
>ancient-martial-techniques sage academy
>pirates (yes, no one really did this one yet, except some low-effort 1-page jpgs)
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>>50895513
>He prolly wants to be original and special, thats why Nemisis
Doesn't look like it: >>50895438
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>>50895513
Nope, I just happen to have dyslexia.
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>>50895474
>I wouldn't say no to that being an actual CYOA.
I wouldn't say no to you making that into an actual CYOA. :^)
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>>50895522
Really? I didn't notice particularly bad spelling in your CYOA.
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>>50895527
Sorry, but I'm too lazy to work on more than one project at a time, and judging by the current rate of progress, it'll probably be a few months before I'm done with this one.

Also I'm not sure I'd be able to do the concept justice. Maybe Symbiobro could work it into a sequel for Tit Happens?
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>>50895521
>>50895522
S-sorry. In return Ill make either a)critique b)build or c)spellcheck (not a native speaker though) of Nemesis. Assuming you want one.
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>>50895379
>Make his life miserable by replacing his waifu with a smug bitch-build

>The Smug Bitch
>Seeker, Timeless Body, God Slayer
>Elf
>Victory or Death! [18]
>Realm Knowledge [17]
>Waifu Catcher [15]
>Memory wipe [13]
>Poison expert [11]
>Unbendable time [10]
>Dream manipulation [8]
>Mind control [5]
>Divine essence [3]
>Shapeshifting [1]
>The needle [0]
>Love potion [-1]
>Potion of change [-2]
Plan: Catch the waifu, erase her last 5 hours of memory, use both potions on her to get rid of her. Dump her some place the hero won't go for the next two weeks, then use the needle to change her personality so the hero won't recognize her.
Use shapeshifting to copy his waifu's body, use the needle on myself so I can ruse him.
>Witch Hunter [0]
The good, strong, capable Hero will obviously know that the Witch Hunter is a treacherous, vile, envious bitch who wants him all to herself! She's dangerous, and he has to protect his waifu from her.
>Quest: The sword
The only weapon that can kill him is this, so he will go on an epic adventure for me to gather it. After all, it would be safest if he had the weapon, right? Then no one else could use it on him.

This is a really good CYOA anon, there are so many builds I can imagine. I love the combos, too.
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>>50895560
>spread your legs for the hero you're supposed to fight
disgusting. yall fags all do the same basic build too
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>>50895548
Lol np, If ppl don't point out my misspellings I can't make the text in my CYOAs readable.

>>50895541
Playing MMORPGs for thousands of hours and reading countless rule books for wargaming have really improved my spelling a lot. You should have seen me when I went to school.
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>>50895513
>>hero having to balance his own sanity with magical powers
I like that one
Isn't that
>lovecraftian horror in cyberpunk setting
basically A Quiet CYOA?
If I knew anything about Lovecraft or Cyberpunk I'd love to do it.
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>>50890059
Collective Unconscious
Holistic Deduction
Temporary Genius

With this skill set I should be able to view the collective conscious as a whole, work out what can be improved and act towards it whatever my IQ. The base intelligence decrease might even be a bonus, I could consider it a "holiday" from the hard work of moulding humanity.
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>>50895560
Calling it right now: you're gonna fall for him.

Also he's gonna be suspicious of you quite quickly since your Smug Bitch nature will shine through. (you HAVE to constantly brag and demean people)

One night you're gonna wake up bound by magical manacles with the hero interrogating you. What you gonna do then uh?
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>>50895615
Stab yourself with the neeedle to become a yandre and help them with all sincerity so you can take out the waifu(s) and keep him locked up in a sex dungeon?
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>>50895577
>how DARE you ruin the hero's life by trapping him in a loveless marriage? you can ONLY make a person's life miserable by killing their friends and saying "heh, nothin personell" when you do it!
The CYOA doesn't say we have to fight the hero, only
>I don't care just make his life miserable
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>>50895379
As soon as I saw "transmutation" as an ability I wanted to "I have no mouth and I must scream" my rival. There's not really a quest for that though.
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>>50895641
That's not a bad plan actually
very Sword of Truth-esque
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>>50891179
Source for the female goblin pic?
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>>50890452
Sam

Sensitive, Hypnosis and Solar powered

Anti-grav bra, Skin lotion and Shrinking pill
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>>50895682
Not him, but I'm pretty sure that was a trap.
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>>50895615
>you're gonna fall for him
>implying that's a Bad End


>What you gonna do then uh?
Smile smugly and tell him he all those nights of passion weren't with his waifu, they were with me. All those kisses and warm embraces were with me. That he doesn't love his waifu, he loves me.
Tell him that there is nothing he can do to stop me other than get down on one knee
Alternatively we're gonna do some kinky shit while I'm tied up, where I pretend not to love every second of it. A situation similar to pic related.
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>>50895754
Basically he's gonna try to break me with rape, but you can't rape the willing because you are right: I lost the game of love.
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>>50895754
>>50895771
l-lewd! would you reveal to him your true form then?
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>>50895379
Madou Kishi build

>the Badass
>Timeless Body
>Human

>Soul Shards (1)

>Got Style?(1)
>No Guns (1)
>Counterspell (2)
>Arcane Magic (3)
>Black Magic (3)
>Divine Essence (2)

>Legendary Weapon (Shadow) (1)
>Legendary Armor (1)
>Secret Hideout (2)

>Diviner (1)

>A Fair Warning (-1)
>Signature (-1)

Quest: APOCALYPSE (daemon)

For you who read this warning: Know that the Shadows themselves call for your end. Know that in this moment of turmoil on your realm is the least of your worries as I am here to challenge you and to put an end on your very existence!
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>>50895798
Well technically my true form isn't what I look like now since I got Timeless Body and Elf.
But it is possible, yes.
I'll pretend to resist for as long as possible because I want to keep up the illusion I'm his waifu, not myself. Eventually I will break and I'll have to give in and let him see.
Spoiler: I won't show him my true form, I will shapeshift into another one.
Why? I think it would be funny. There's nothing sinister about it.

>>50895787
>no option to be the victim
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>>50895839
wait are you a dark elf? it all makes sense now
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>>50895883
Of course I wouldn't be a dark elf...
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>>50895918
I'm not talking about the new shape you would take, I'm talking about the race you picked for your build, your actual timeless body. Drow matriarchs are the epitome of smug bitches.

I mean your personality and methods scream drow at this point.
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>>50895978
I know what you were talking about and that's what I answered "no" to.
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>>50895997
so you're a light elf?
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Can someone explain how a CYOA differs from a Quest?
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>>50896017
CYOAs have no GM and are usually single-players
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>>50886578
Oh, so sorry. I didn't have much time to stay last thread outside of that kne post. I just saw your question. The issue is that your clone won't have the necessary North Pole permits.
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>>50896009
Yes
>>50896017
Oh shit it's this guy again. Good on you, you learned posting ">>>qst" gets you banned.
IIRC the distinction is something akin to:
>Quests are driven by the readers, CYOAs are driven by the author
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>>50896049
>Yes
doesn't make sense
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>>50895754
What is this? Where can it be found?
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>>50896049
>Author driven
How is that creating your own adventure?
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>>50896044
>The issue is that your clone won't have the necessary North Pole permits.
Even if I'd basically have the clone just sit there at her place when she'd be working? Well darn. Oh well, at least there'd be the times she'd visit, and also online games.
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>>50896088
>How is that creating your own adventure?
The C in CYOA is for choosing, namely from the options presented by the author.
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>>50896103
Oh like /b/s faprolls.
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>>50896053
>So you're a light elf
>Yes
I think that answer makes perfect sense?
>>50896068
No clue, got it from here
>>50896088
"Author driven" means that you don't influence the CYOA in the way you do a quest:
A CYOA is a finished project, you can pick between the options available. A quest changes direction based on what the readers pick.
I'm just paraphrasing, some other dude wrote it much better than I do.
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>>50895809
>For you who read this warning: Know that the Shadows themselves call for your end. Know that in this moment of turmoil on your realm is the least of your worries as I am here to challenge you and to put an end on your very existence!

That was cringey as fuck, bro.
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>>50896126
>I think that answer makes perfect sense?
what's absurd is your devious, horny Nemesis being a light elf
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>>50896125
Trolling tends to work better a bit later in the thread.
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>>50896126
So what do you do after you chose your waifu/brofu, sword, home base?

Is there a script?
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>>50896142
That's when you realize nothing matters, and then you kill yourself in real life.
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>>50896156
Better than MTGgeneral i guess.
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>>50896134
Does it matter? Even if I were a dark elf, that doesn't make me a femdom drow.
>>50896142
That's the "A" part.
You know, Adventure. You imagine an adventure.
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>>50896168
>Does it matter?
more than anything
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>>50896168
So it's... like reverse D&D, where the GM makes your character and then leaves.
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>>50896130
I try to be as hammy as possible
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>>50896191
It's a choice game. It can also be used as a writing prompt or a day-dream enhancer.
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>>50896188
No, I am not a drow. If you like, we can say I'm the Elf in that Orc x LewdElfPrincess hentai.
>>50896191
No, it's like D&D except you're both the player and GM but someone else made the setting for you.
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>>50896215
whatever you say... drow
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>>50896191
No it's EXACTLY like D&D where the group cancels on you right after you finish making your character.
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>>50892624
Why does her skirt go between her legs?
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>>50896263
Prevents the wind from lifting it up.
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>>50891236
Gigantic boobs, lactating and expansion optional.
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>>50896310

>>50890452
>>50890460
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>>50890344
No. This is brought up every time the CYOA gets posted, and it is wrong every time.
You make one choice per row.
I still think it was rude for that one anon to make a fake page where he changed "row" to "column"...
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>>50896225
So I'm a drow pretending to be a slutty Elf who shapeshifts into being the hero's waifu?
Talk about confusion!
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>>50896348
I only did that because I thought that's what they meant, based on the discussion going in the thread where the author clearly demonstrated the ability to confuse rows and columns and less clearly seemed to say that they meant columns. ALSO because the author said they were leaving /cyoa/ so I couldn't exactly (to my knowledge) ask them to fix or clarify AGAIN.
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>>50896443
>less clearly seemed to say that they meant columns
Rows.
You make one choice per row, because you have to choose between affecting the Angel, the Demon, You or make a Miscellanious pick. Apparently it was a poor decision to add notes to the columns.

It was still a rude thing to do. Let the author change the things he thinks should be changed, don't try to do it for him.
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>>50893655
>* I continue to feel that Rite of Flesh Union and Widow's Hunger are overly similar,
One's an ability, the other's a compulsion.
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>>50896525
It makes a lot more sense as columns, pick one angel, one demon, one perk and one complication.

Anyway, and I'll repeat, the author said they were abandoning it. That didn't quite happen, but that's what they said. They also tripped themselves up in the thread and agreed that they meant columns, then corrected it, then demonstrated that they didn't know what columns were, then corrected it again, so I legitimately thought I was doing the right thing and fixing a mistake that was only otherwise going to be left in because the author didn't care anymore.
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>>50895645
Edge of Madness.
Just give him control over a single finger that holds a sword over his head.
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>>50896606
No this is a fate worse than death. The victim is supposed to suffer that way eternally
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>>50896591
>It makes a lot more sense as columns,
I already explained why not. I also did that in the original thread. Colums means you aren't forced to choose between affecting you, the demon, the angel or something miscellanious.
I knew anons wanted /ss/ and to be the little girl, so I put them in the same row. That means you are forced to pick between two popular options, forcing you to pick complications to get both.
Same with getting an Archangel/Archdemon sister - you'd need complications to get both.
If you chose once per column, you don't have this problem. There is less difficulty.
Trust me anon, I picked rows for a reason.
>they were abandoning it
I remember saying no such thing.
>All that other stuff
Again, I don't remember that. I remember explaining why I chose rows and not columsn, like I jsut did, and someone being confused. His confusion led to more confusion. I messed rows vs columns up once, and I corrected it, then people kept ignoring the correction, leading to more confusion. Someone somehow intrepreted "one pick on the X-axis" as "one pick per column". I have no clue how he did that. That discussion was not easy on me.

tl;dr one pick per row, not column. Please stop saying otherwise. Please stop "correcting" things for authors but please continue asking if they really meant this.
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>>50892396
If I wanted to have nipples that're fuckable in both ways, would I need to purchase Gate/Key twice (once to make the protrudy bit dick-like, and once again to make one or more of the orifices vag-like), or just once (since both would affect the nipple)?
If you'd only need the one purchase of Gate/Key, would that apply for the Reproductive Channel upgrade as well?

>>50893655
>* I continue to feel that Rite of Flesh Union and Widow's Hunger are overly similar, with the caveat that this may be the case purely because of the nature of my character.
>>50896569
>One's an ability, the other's a compulsion.
In addition to that, the former can be reversible, whereas the latter seems entirely a one-way street.
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>>50889556
Be the girl
Forbidden love
Magical
Devil-Mother, Submissive sisters
Shared room, same classes
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>>50896644
>I knew anons wanted /ss/ and to be the little girl, so I put them in the same row.
Just for confirmation, are you referring to the options "Big sisters" and "Be the girl", respectively?
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>>50896304
Please share more lewd clothing designs.

>tfw no dressup cyoa
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>>50896644
I'm not saying otherwise. I was wrong. What I'm saying is that there was enough confusion that I thought I was right at the time. I admit that my decision turned out to be the wrong one given what I knew at the time I still stand by making it.

I guess in the future don't say you'll be leaving /cyoa/ forever. If you weren't here there'd be no one to offend with the "correction", which is the larger part of why it happened.
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I got tired of working on xenology non-stop, so I made a plan for that SW CYOA I talked about a few threads back.

As always, feel free to post criticisms.
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>>50896591
Nothing makes any sense because it has complications. So either way you'd be able to grab "Be the girl" and "Little boy", except with one-per-column you'd have to pay for one with complications.
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>>50896727
Speaking of xenology, here's what I have so far
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>>50896718
Also, the entire 4th column is all negatives for me and even if they aren't "negatives" they complicate the base situation. Between that and the two obviously desirable options in the third column there's still enough "difficulty". That AND there is the fact that it makes a lot more sense with picking one angel and one demon being mandatory (you mentioned, in a way that got lost at the time, that with no option chosen they were "generic", though it's still not very clear what that would be).
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>>50892396
>By linking a build to this post, creators waive any IP rights to the build, and give the author (EDG) the right to edit as necessary and to repost a compendium containing the build, edited or otherwise, wherever the author damn well pleases.
Is this just so you can screw over Angelanon's build?
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>>50896749

>>50892691
>The disclaimer was an ill-conceived joke.
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>>50896644
If you're the author, mind clarifying something? I'm not the one you've been replying to, but I always figured it was supposed to be columns because otherwise you could end up without picking a demon or angel. Which brings me to my questions: What happens if you don't pick a demon or angel option? Does whichever one you don't pick just not show up? Will they just be plain? And what happens if you pick multiple options, like Depraved Angel AND Innocent Angel? Mood swings? Does it balance out & do nothing? Do you get 2 angels? It's these sort of weird interactions that I think make a lot of people feel like columns make more sense. Can you please explain how they interact?
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>>50896688
Yes, I am refering to the two options, "Be the girl" and "Big sisters", that are both found on the first row.
>>50896718
>don't say you'll be leaving /cyoa/ forever
yeah... but i already corrected it the first time the cyoa was posted. I thought I had cleared it up, but it still gets mentioned whnever the cyoa is posted.
>>50896731
Why would you pick obviously conflicting options?
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>>50896742
What is this exactly? And how does it differ from other worldbuilding CYOAs?

Also, keep the font only to headings. Its tiring having to read the paragraphs in it.
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>>50896622
Then wait to give him the out until you get bored of the world. Or just don't ever complete the quest.
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>>50896742
A lot of research went into the circulatory systems. I'm not sure if circulatory and respiratory systems should be separate options.
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>>50889584

#992 reminds me of this

https://www.literotica.com/s/dear-dr-anna
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>>50896763
>What happens if you don't pick a demon or angel option?
They are generic and boring. Think worker drones. Zero personality. Like that one dere type where she's ice cold and doesn't show any emotions.
It's going to be incredibly boring to live with her. You really don't want that.
Yes, they will be "plain"
>if you pick multiple options, like Depraved Angel AND Innocent Angel? Mood swings?
That's the part where your imagination is supposed to pick up. If you want her to be bipolar, she's bipolar. If you want the options to balance out, they balance out
> Do you get 2 angels?
No of course not.
>>50896743
It's fine you think columns > rows, but it's still one per row.
>4th column is all negatives
Then don't pick them?
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>>50889556
Never seen this one before, and it's great. It's so adorable, and the lewd potential is amazing.

>Inexperienced Demon
This is cute, and the others don't interest me.
>Forbidden Love
This should make getting the three of us into a relationship a lot easier.
>Archangel: Charity
For the cooking.
>Age Difference
I'll make the demon younger for maximum cuteness.
>Assertive Angel
I don't think I need this, but I don't want the other ones.

>Shared Room
My imagination is going crazy with this one.
>Let's Go Shopping
Watching cute girls try on cute clothes and underwear? Now that's the stuff. I will be able to control myself but not my boner.
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>>50896774
A while ago, I got into an argument about the evolutionary psychology of an alien-lizard-girl.

I decided that creators don't put enough detail into their ayyliens and I would make a CYOA about it.
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>>50889584
>>50890278
>Gentle New World is pretty much "what flavor of femdom do you prefer" the CYOA
What would femsub and maledom worlds look like for a CYOA?
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>>50896707
I don't know if this type of picture has a name, but it's great.

https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/?tags=ama_mitsuki
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>>50896816
>generic
>zero personality
Not the same thing. I can see them being a pure but not completely innocent angel and a somewhat cheeky playful demon. But zero personality? That's just stupid and contradicts other things.
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>>50896742
It's still rough around the edges of course, being a work in progress
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>>50896825
>>Let's Go Shopping
>Watching cute girls try on cute clothes and underwear? Now that's the stuff.
My thoughts exactly, except I also pick Be The Girl so I get to join in, not just watch.
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>>50896825
Gracias. Made it in like, a day I think.
Here's the high-res version if you want to save it.
Glad someone can imagine stuff out of it. Can't do that myself.
>>50896850
I thought about those two for a very short period of time and didn't think they would be as fun. I think you'll be accused of "making real life" if you did femsub/maledom. Or something like that, I think that was my justification. Not sure.
Then again I know nothing of "maledom", and wrote the cyoa without knowing anything about femdom or /ss/, and I'm not personally into femdom.
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>>50896871
Okay you're free to interpret it that way.
I see it as, if you don't pick anything for the Angel, she's of the "Arbeit macht Frei" kind: No personality, no libido, no fun. Only work. No free will, she does her job given by Big G, and can't be Corrupted.
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>>50896816
Ah, okay. Thanks for the answers.
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>>50896727
>>50896742
Was it a bad time to post these or are people still reading them?
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>>50896905
Is there a difference between this version and >>50889556
?
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>>50896942
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>>50896941
We're nearing the end of a slow thread so yeah. If you want detailed critiques and scrutiny you're better off making Jumps for /jc/ tho. Or going to the IRC. Most people here are too fat and lazy to read PDFs. Myself included.
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>>50896727
It's 7 A.M. on the West Coast, so people are probably sleeping in right now.
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>>50896926
You're welcome. Please don't be shy to ask questions.
It hurts to see your cyoa posted with no replies.
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>>50896960
Oh, sorry

I'm British you see
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>>50896998
I'm sorry to hear that.
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>>50896905
I still think you should be able to take "Same classes" with "Little boy", if you also took "Age difference" twice and made the girls into 12-year-olds like you would be. Perhaps even a single purchase should suffice, albeit it'd only make one of the girls be with you for most of the day, whilst the other would probably be quite jealous.
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>>50897005
We learn to live with it
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>>50896727
>criticism
I've watched maybe ten minutes of a Star Wars movie so I can't help you. The only thing I can say is to not assume the player knows everything about the setting.
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>>50896960
When west coasters are up most of the world is sleeping.
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>>50897022
Sorry, I don't plan to change the cyoa in any way. there's little point when it won't generate new builds. sorry.
it sucks that sweet and short succubus wasn't more popular. i wanted to make a (lewd) monstergirl school cyoa.
god i miss being able to knock out a fun and short cyoa in a few hours
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>>50896922
You keep insisting that picks are per row, yet your explanations fit the column method much better.
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>>50896905
>Glad someone can imagine stuff out of it. Can't do that myself.
That's a pity anon!

>I thought about those two for a very short period of time and didn't think they would be as fun.
What concepts did you have for them?

>I think you'll be accused of "making real life" if you did femsub/maledom. Or something like that, I think that was my justification. Not sure.
Eh, there's lots of possibilities, and anyone who pushes that accusation can be ignored.

>Then again I know nothing of "maledom", and wrote the cyoa without knowing anything about femdom or /ss/, and I'm not personally into femdom.
I really want to hear what you'd come up with for those two now!
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>>50897028
>he hasn't even watched starwars

What a faggot amirightguys

I doubt anyone who isn't a starwars fan is going to play it but I won't assume the player is as much of an autist as I am. There are few who can match me in that.
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>>50897054
>i wanted to make a (lewd) monstergirl school cyoa.
Fuck yes.

>god i miss being able to knock out a fun and short cyoa in a few hours
Why can't you now?
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>>50897054
How popular did you expect it to be, you pulling a squareenix where you need 10 million responses to break even? That was a great little CYOA, pretty sure I even posted a build for it.
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>>50896905
this is equal parts comfy and lewd. it has a laid-back Manhwa vibe. I love it!

please don't get discouraged by the slowness of /cyoag/, people have made builds and will continue to do so! in fact I'll make a build in a few minutes.
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>>50896763
And this is why rows makes no sense. Same with picking conflicting options in rows. What kind of mess is it if you pick all 4 from the rows for any of them....a conflicting mess.
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>>50896850
>>50896905
>What is the Gerudo
If men are rare, then a semifeudal structure in which all men are royalty and their mothers are queens wouldn't be out of the question.

Other than those, just genderflip all the femdom worlds. 100% yaoi woeld, manxloli world, incubus world, addictive cum world...
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I may have ambitions greater than my skills can realise

Oh dear
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>>50897066
>pity
It is. There have been so many great cyoas recently, but I just can't get my brain working on imagining it. It jus doesn't start
>concepts, ideas
I don't remember. I can try it out, you seem highly enthusiatic. Gotta finish this other cyoa, or maybe I'll do this one as a break.
I'm not writing roommates if thats' what you want.
>>50897081
Don't get your hopes up. There's another, very big cyoa I need to finish after this one. I do have two directions I could see the lewd school going.
>why can't you now?
Not entirely sure. My brain just doesn't come up with concepts very easily any more also I'm not allowed to drink. that puts a hamper on the whole "letting imagination flow free"
>>50897187
I repeat, why deliberately pick things that conflict?
>>50897160
thanks
>>50897118
i don't know. just didn't feel popular. or maybe i'm being a drama queen/attention whore?
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>>50896905
May as well post the build for it...

Depraved angel
Be the girl
Sinful demon
magical
submissive sisters
shared room
same classes

The other set was tempting, I like the inexperienced demon more, but the innocent angel is just TOO innocent.
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>>50889262
Erica sounds nice.
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>>50897118
On second thought I may have been too "distracted" by it to actually post that build. Same with the angel/demon one.
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>>50897220
>but I just can't get my brain working on imagining it. It jus doesn't start
The lack of alcohol?

>I can try it out, you seem highly enthusiatic.
I am, those are my fave fetishes! No promises but I may even make a cyoa of my own along these lines, inspired by Gentle New World.

>I'm not writing roommates if thats' what you want.
It's the worldbuilding that I love the most!
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>>50897220
>I repeat, why deliberately pick things that conflict?
Why put conflicting options in as choices that aren't mutually exclusive?
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>>50897054
>Sorry, I don't plan to change the cyoa in any way. there's little point when it won't generate new builds. sorry.
That's alright, I'll just invoke Sartre (and/or common sense) on that if I ever get around to posting a build.
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>>50889098
Raine, Zhay, The Laughing Man, Jeanne, Volentia and Clarissa have to be the most obvious examples of who made what.
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>>50897220
>>50897248
Same anon here, I was post the first posts you replied to.
>Don't get your hopes up. There's another, very big cyoa I need to finish after this one.
I'm patient!

>I do have two directions I could see the lewd school going.
Do we get spoilers?
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>>50896905
Challenges:
>Conversion of the Demon
With assistance from my Angelic sis <3.
>Let's go shopping!
Best drawback.

>Inexperienced Demon
Cuter, less dangerous and easier to Convert!
>Forbidden Love
A good way to smooth my sisters' differences. Sweet and hot.
>Archangel: Kindness
For maximum niceness and to help redeem the Demon-girl.
>Magical Boy
So what it looks silly? I need powers if I'm to keep up with my crazy family.
>Devil-Mother
To spice things up and because this is my fetish.
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>>50897187
>>50897256
>>50897220
Because they don't actually conflict?

Being a preteen girl, innocent nymphomaniacs, assertive but wanting to learn... just use your imagination and bend the rules a little.

Why no cool Angel dad option?
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>>50897296
>Why no cool Angel dad option?
now THAT is a very good question
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>>50896973
Well, it's hard to make a build when there's parts you don't understand. I'll make one now.

>>50889556
>Be the girl
>Little boy (girl)
>Age difference (Demon is a little sister).
>Assertive Angel

Challenges:
>Shared room
>Mothers visit
>Let's go shopping
>Remember: No Bully

And with these two bonus choices, I'll get:
>Inexperienced Demon
>Depraved Angel

Depravity will help the Angel older sister get along with the demon younger sister better. When her assertive, corrective nature manifests, she'll be more understanding of the demon's desires & help show her a better way to do courting. If I think the demon's punishments are too severe, I'll request to suffer alongside her so she doesn't have to be in pain alone. Since she cares about me, it should help convince her to shape up more than regular punishments. And maybe she'll be touched by the gesture, too. As someone that put themself in the same boat, I can tell her that the angel is doing it for her sake. If the angel favors doting on me over the demon, I'll counter by giving the demon more attention. This should help the angel play nice with the demon more. Likewise, the demon younger sister probably looks up to me in some respects, so I can encourage her to play nice with the angel. Once they start genuinely caring for each other, I don't think I'll have to worry about bullying. I don't want to fully convert the demon, but if would be good if she didn't have the heart to do anything bad enough for a punishment. Since we share a room, we'll likely sleep cuddled up in 3 spoons of increasing size & holiness. When the mothers visit, they might find it strange how well thrir daughters get along. When we go shopping, I can keep my affection even by doting on the demon sister's cuteness and enviously admiring the angel's sexual allure. Due to our family dynamic, I don't think we'll have to worry too much about onlookers thinking anything weird. We'll just be a nice, happy family.
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>>50897296
Anon your fetish is leaking.
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>>50897229
Actually scratch that, swap the Sinful demon for archdemon: sloth, drop magical and add forbidden love.

I think the archdemon would be about on par with the depraved angel sexually, whereas the sinful demon is way over the top, plus it's just more fun if we all three "Get along". I don't really need magic, never really cared I was just picking it to fill the row.
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>>50897263
Jeanne can't be obvious because it's somebody entirely new that has 0 published CYOAs.
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Reminder: Update's up here: >>50892396

Now for the backlog...
I gotta stop going to sleep.

>>50893465
Actually, no. It was designed to keep my personal build viable when everybody wanted to play superkings and warlords. It incendentially keeps your build viable too, but that's just a happy accident of my selfishness

>>50893578
Not at the moment

>>50893655
>>50893834
I'll read the pastebin after I tackle the rest of the backlog.

>Union == Hunger?
>>50896569 got it right.


>>50894377
>>50894386
I would like to see the writeup the this. I'm a little concerned that you may have mixed-up the far labyrinth ambition and the labyrinth reaches ambition, but I can't offer any advice without seeing your plan. The notes along with the choices are certainly interest-piquing, though!

>>50896660
You'd need to buy gate/key twice, once for each method, and a purchase of channel for each method as well.
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>>50897263
And not Cera? I mean she could be a deliberate red herring by someone else of course but any of them could.
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Y'all need to post some more cyoas
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>>50897242
Does "distracted" mean what I think it does? Because if it does, someone said Argumentative Anons did that and it weirded me out. Mostly because it had no effect on me, and I wrote the thing, and it's even my fetish.
>picking submissive sisters
>>50897248
>lack of alcohol?
Probably. IIRC I made like, five cyoas in 6 days in April. pretty sure I drank each day, finishing each cyoa in between 3-6 hours of work without any kind of planning beforehand. that was great.
>>50897272
IIRC the two directions were
>A spin-off to Hero Academy (I'd need permission first), where these "heroes" are more focused on being heroic in the bedroom
Don't worry, you can still be a "proper" hero. I already came up with a hero who graduated this school, and used her allure to destroy an army from within, by pretending to be a damsel in distress. It would have a class system more similar to Scholomance, with prerequisite classes.
>A regular monstergirl school cyoa, focused on dorms, different classes, different races etc
Ideally I'd make 2+ CYOAs like a short and sweet succubus cyoa, and use these as intros. So you already picked your race before the main cyoa.
>>50897296
You want to bang your dad, don't you? I didn't include them because /ss/ and mom/sister incest is popular here, I think.
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>>50895754
DIIIIIOOOOOOOOOOOO
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>>50897432
There's a reason I keep CYOAs in a subfolder of my porn folder, and it's not because I get some of them from /d/.
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>>50889606

Body: Loli
Powers: Aphrodisiacs> Love Potion> Relaxing Aura -3, Charm -1, Induce Arousal> Targeted Arousal> Lewd Area -4, Seductress -1, Round Two -1
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>>50897432
>no Angel dad
think of the femanons! how long will this injustice last?
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I can't get the Souls CYOA from SDA's mega to load. Someone mind posting it?
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>>50897482
I think you meant to link >>50889570 instead.

Also here's a newer version of the same CYOA.
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>>50897432
>ou want to bang your dad, don't you? I didn't include them because /ss/ and mom/sister incest is popular here, I think.
Then tomboy angel mom. The asymmetry is just bugging me.
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>>50889262
I'd go with Emma, Skye, or Ane.

Sky really sounds like the best girl, the only problem is exactly as she says, being off put by exactly what she is.

Ane's deal is pretty hot. /ss/ isn't really my top fetish but it's the best that's being offered here. Little heavy on the humiliation though.

Emma doesn't do anything wrong and promises mind blowing sex where I don't even have to lift a finger. I'm really leaning towards Emma.
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>>50897320
That is very thoroughly planned. I was going to ask why not Conversion, but you covered that.
So you'll be 12 and the demon will be 10, correct?
>>50897448
huh. i can't connect with that at all but whatever floats your boat i guess. which i know is weird for me to say considering i apparently make a lot of "lewd" cyoas. i just don't see why you think they're lewd.
>>50897484
>femanons
uh, until you make yourself heard? Until you make cyoas? before this thread i didn't know anyone wanted a dad option included in the cyoa, or that anyone would want a "Femsub/Maledom Worlds" cyoa
I mean, if i don't know you exist why would i add an option catering specifically to your group?
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>>50897296
>>50897432
>>50897535
>angel dad who is pure and exclusively devoted to you
>but his eyes can't help but wander sometimes when you wear skimpy outfits
>he tries so hard not to think about his princess that way but...
hnngg
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>>50897488
You mean the one page preview that has incomplete character names, 3 weapons to choose from when you can pick a maximum of four, and is otherwise just exposition? What, you want to ogle the girl or something?

Much like the lore of Dark Souls itself, there is nothing to be found here.
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>>50897535
I get off to porn by imagining myself in that situation, basically imagining myself having sex, often in ways that would be impossible. That's exactly what CYOAs are, and they do it better than any actual porn.

The entire point of a CYOA, or at least the kind that I like, is to imagine yourself in the situation. To think about what it would feel like and as much other detail as you can manage. Not really surprising where that feeling leads with a lewd CYOA.
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>>50897559
>doing anything but sitting with cutegirl by the bonfire
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>>50897502
The biggest problem I've noticed with this CYOA is that there's enough overlap between two similar powers that I can't decide which to take - and often end uo feeling like I have to take both to do that thing well.
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>>50895017
That sounds pretty great, actually.
People would whine about it, yeah.
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>>50897349
It is by rule of familarity.
Also, I followed this development very closely.
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>>50897502
A more computationally gifted anon needs to edit that for fifteen points. More options and still ten points? What the heck was the author thinking?
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>>50897387
I feel like that's beyond not even trying.
He might as well start calling himself slimegirl fetishist
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>>50897502
Loli
Ambrosia -1
Round two -1
Metabolism -1
Flight -1
Charm -1
Weirdness factor -1
increased production -1
Shapeshift -3

Alli
Saika

In the early version when Own production would let succubi feed on each other I would have picked Lili, but now it just gets in the way. Now it's between Saika and Arel

Also a hard choice between shapeshifting and love potion, aphrodisiacs are something of a fetish of mine.

I don't really take any tools to help me seduce of force anyone, I'd rather do that the old fashioned way. Charm makes it a LITTLE easier but thats it. Instead I focus on maximizing a single partner. Alli would probably be more than enough for the time being.
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>>50897559
Parrying Dagger shouldn't have better damage than a regular dagger. It should actually have WORSE damage unless the standard Dagger is basically made of wood or has never been sharpened ever.

t. fencing anon who has used both.

>>50897608
>Sitting next to the cute girl by the bonfire instead of going to hunt down humanity before you go Hollow and kill the cute girl in a blind delirious rampage.
Do you hate her that much, anon?
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>>50897535
>So you'll be 12 and the demon will be 10, correct?
Yep, that's the plan. I would have considered Conversion more if there were another complication I could take to get another pick. My options were:
Same classes (I was locked out of it)
Choose one (goes against my plan for a big, happy family)
and Corruption (which would be really hard to juggle with the other options, especially Conversion. That's just too many things to try to do.)
Remember: No Bully was the thing I set out most to do. I'd just like them to get along & be happy. I'm just dust in the wind compared to whatever their supernatural lifespans are, so I'll like for them to have happy memories with each other instead of just bitter feelings. Maybe after something finally does me in, they'd still be friends. Partially converting the demon was just a means to that end that I feel a bit guilty about.
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>>50897546
Again, the only way you can "end this injustice" is by making yourself heard. prove there's an audience of women who browse here, who wants options for an angeldad, Femsub Worlds etc.
>>50897666
I argued with an anon over that, Satan: More options does not demand more points. He admitted he's the guy who made a CYOA that gave you enough points for buying almost every option.
If you want to cheat that badly, just do it. Not like anyone can stop you.
>>50897627
I don't know what two powers you refer to, or what "thing" you want to do.
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>>50890898
Can't open the damn thing.
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>>50897365
>I would like to see the writeup the this. I'm a little concerned that you may have mixed-up the far labyrinth ambition and the labyrinth reaches ambition, but I can't offer any advice without seeing your plan. The notes along with the choices are certainly interest-piquing, though!

Yea I was a bit confused on what the ambition options were trying to say. I thought the far labyrinth thing was basically just a harder labyrinth option.
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>>50897752
I haven't played Dark Souls. All I know of the games is everything sucks, you die a lot, everyone is going insane and the only thing you can do is prolong Humanity's suffering by a short time.
I'd rather hang out with a cutegirl than go die against the first enemy.
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>>50897774
when someone breaks the illusion of uniformity

and goes "hiii guys <3 I'm a girll ~~~"

bad things happen.
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>>50897774
SS CYOA has some damn fine options for Dads, but most of it is lost in the sea of /ss/ and yuri options.
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>>50897806
>Near labyrinth
You're trying to unify the gardens into one political unit... or getting sucked into one of them

>Far Labyrinth
You're trying to beat your elders at their own game... or becoming a toy

>Reaches
Fightan monsters, and lootn treasure, lavender-style... losing is lavender-style, too

But like I said, I don't know your plans, so I don't know if you've planned well, or interestingly.
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>>50897769
That is painfully sweet anon.
>>50897831
then the status quo remains unchanged. I can't see why it should matter what stuff is between your legs when we're all anonymous.
You don't need to go "hi guyss <3<3<3 i'm a girl and like PENIS", just make a cyoa catering to straight girls, and show this group is large enough to think about when making a cyoa
>>50897860
I mean, the entire cyoa came to be because I asked what to make, some dude said "lewd and comfy", I asked what, he said "do /ss/". then I learnt what /ss/ is and made it.
I don't exactly see what "damn fine options for dads" has to do with showing there is reason to cater to straight women?
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>>50897774
>I don't know what two powers you refer to, or what "thing" you want to do.
There's a lot of examples.
Targeted Arousal, Submissiveness, and Emotion Link/Bully are all long-term control abilities.
Weirdness Factor and Hide Demonic are kinda redundant, too.
Relaxing/Lewd Area and Responsiveness, too. You even use alcohol metaphors for both.
Ambrosia, Round Two, and Increased Production all have similar roles, but cost a third of your points to take together.
Finally, Induce Arousal seems objectively worse than Thrall.
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>>50897892
the only person who is openly female here is AngelAnon and she's constantly harassed and insulted

just saying
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>>50897892
Ah, sorry, I thought the argument was that nobody would take beefcake options, so nobody would play a CYOA about hot dads.
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>>50897914
Highlander and Quiet are dykes too, or at least claim to be.
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>>50897928
>claim
being the operative word
every CYOA creator is an honorary lesbian
doesn't make th
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>>50897947
>Every CYOA creator is an honorary lesbian

Even the guys?
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>>50897986
There's only one guy cyoa author.
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>>50897986
especially the guys
welcome to the club XenoAnon
please leave your penis at the desk
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>>50897752
I mean, if your sole reason to live is to keep the cute girl company and you're really determined to do that, that could keep you sane.
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>>50896644
It seems really hard to keep the Angel and the Demon balanced against each other if you use rows instead of columns, because you hit Archangel, Archdemon, and Age Difference on one row and Devil-Mother and Assertive Angel on the next. I mean, I think it'd be funny to take Inexperienced Demon, Innocent Angel, Be the girl, and... Forbidden love, maybe? along with Same classes and Remember: No bully for maximum wacky hijinks, but with rows you can't make the Angel and the Demon mirror each other unless you take Submissive sisters (i.e., diminished hijinks) or Brothers (which is somehow less funny).
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>>50897914
and the status quo remains unchallenged, and "this injustice" will continue because there is no attempt at ending it.
you made your bed.

Angel is not insulted for being female, she's insulted for being easy to bait, for having mind control fetishes and claiming she doesn't have any fetishes. There's more stuff but there's no reason to drag it up.
All hate on Angel could stop if she'd quit lying, or responding to trolls.
>>50897921
The argument is there's a straight woman who wants a Dad option included in the Angel/Demon sister cyoa, and would like a Maledom version of the Gentle Worlds cyoa. I say that until today I never knew there was interest in such things. Then she says she won't let it be known she's a woman, and I say things won't change.
That's about the gist of it I think? That there are straight women here who would like stuff that caters to them, but they choose to "hide" instead of making themselves heard?
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>>50898018
That sounds painful
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>>50898040
For you.
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>>50898018
b-but I like boys...
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>>50892396
Well, here's my co-dependence build.

>Male (me)

All penis enhancements save Pillar. (7)

A Modest and Soft shape. (7)

All influences with a Quasicosmic Metapsychology. (16)

Regal Face, Chakra Eye and Elder Gaze. (20 0P 1S 0A)

Rare Hunger (partner's milk), Ejaculation, Fortifying, Addictive, Aphrodisiac, Altruistic and Commanding Mein. (23 0P 3S 0A)

Synergism. (26)

True Name, Nuptial Torc, Lavender Grimoire, Crimson Manual, Primordial Woad, Abyssal Ink, Celestial Charms, Argent Spark, Argent Blaze, War-Fan, Rite of Flesh Union, Echo Bestowal and Worldstepping, Regal Array and Filthy Lucre. (78 5P 7S 2A)

Knights-in-Crimson, Sensual Ritualists, Sans Serviteurs, Chaq, Spider-Parasite (for me), Auramoth, Shared Resource, both Sprites, Prime Mate, Bonded Bride, Descending. (93 9P 12S 2A)

Nightmare Cycle (87)

Stigma of the Crimson Kiss,Starving Gambler, Rising Star and Rebel. (72 9P 9S 0A)

Castellan of the Cosmos, Gardener of the Cosmos and Cloistered Idol (70)

The idea is to cover eachother's weaknesses (often being said weakness) and try to carve enjoy our new existence until inevitably being steamrolled by greater powers.
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>>50898032
Devil Mother is pretty balanced family-wise, if not thematically
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>>50898038
>and would like a Maledom version of the Gentle Worlds cyoa.
Honestly, Gentle Worlds could use an overhaul. With a few exceptions, the first 5 worlds are the best ones, and having FOURTY flavors of femdom isn't necessary. We could get some other stuff in there, too.

Just slip a few in there where it's "if you weren't a girl YOU ARE NOW and there's a slab of man meat that will take care of you". It's not hard.
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>>50898068
fag
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>>50898032
Why aren't you taking challenges?
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>>50898017
Which one would that be, then?
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>>50898084
>Female (partner)

All vaginal enhancements save Plush. (7)

A Enticing and Gifted shape. (7)

Same as Male (16)

Same save Seductive face (20 0P 0S 1A)

Rare Hunger (partner's semen), Lactation, Nurturing, Addictive, Aphrodisiac, Dependent, Gate to Ecstasy x 2 (mouth and anus) and Carnal Atmosphere. (25 -1P -1S 2A)

Cultivation and Rapid Maturation (28 -1P -1S 3A)

Humanoid Hybrids. (31 0P -2S 4A)

Same as Male save for Seductive Array. (51 5P 1S 7A)

Knights-in-Crimson, Sensual Ritualists, Personal Sect, both Sprites, Prime Mate, Bonded Bride, Ascending, The Eunuch and Sweetened Pot. (96 8P 7S 8A)

Mating Dance, Cerebral Recurve, Spoiled and Festival of Delight. (102 7P 7S 11A)

Stigma of the Crimson Kiss, Stolen Chain, Rising Star and Rebel. (87 9P 2S 9A)

Castellan of the Cosmos, Gardener of the Cosmos and Avatar of Teiatat. (0)

I went way over budget because I wasn't sure which dowries could be shared. I was also tempted by the Mandarin path, I could join the spiral long enough to profitably cut and run while my partner could join the virgins while secretly laying with me. I imagine our rebel streak would show through far too early for that though. Maybe it's why we were summoned away?
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>>50898068
oh my bad. you can keep your penis then. you just have to sign this form and put on a one of those six brightly colored wigs.
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>>50898107
>with few exceptions the first 5 worlds are the best ones
thanks.
You do know I didn't make that one with like fourty options, right? Anon decided to take my cyoa, skim away some of the text, and add stuff.
I decided not to say anything, which I was later told was a bad decision. Guess they were right.
I'm not mad at all, in case you're here author, just a little piffed you didn't mention you weren't the original author.

I repeat again: There's little reason to add Maledom options when, as far as I know, there's a single person who'd want that. There's not that much reward for me to do that.
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>>50898162
i want that too
but do whatever you want (except take up drinking again)
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>>50897502
>Loli
Irrelevant.

>Shadows
>Lust eyes
>Shapeshift+
>Flight
>Tail Control
>Own Production
Shapeshifting makes the first choice irrelevant. I don't know why it refers to the other column, but Lust Eyes is cheap and lets me track people through walls. Shadows gives me some great stealth which combos well with that. Flight and Tail control are important to let me use these extra limbs, Metabolism means I need less food and sleep, and Own production means I don't need to sleep with people.

>Arel
>Alli
I'll look after the witch and help her get her head on straight; she's going to get raped if this keeps up. Aside from that, I just hang out with a vampire and a witch, doing monster stuff, I guess. This would be more fun if I was a vampire instead of a succubus though, because I have no problem with eating people in that way. I'll probably be super salty at succubus mom too.
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>>50898162
Letting others mess with your work when you still care about it is indeed a bad decision.

I wasn't the guy that made the version with a fuckton of worlds, but I wouldn't mind either making a maledom one or remaking the CYOA with different flavors mixed in. I like my femdom more than some, but only one flavor of ice cream is really boring, even if it's got a variety of toppings to choose from.

You did a good job on the original, though. Props to you.
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>>50898118
This is not a battle you can win Anon

embrace your destiny
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>>50898162
>There's little reason to add Maledom options when, as far as I know, there's a single person who'd want that.
I wouldn't mind a maledom version, as long as I'd get to continue being male.
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About the MH update:

It'll be released some time next week. I've made less progress than I had hoped with the holidays and me being sick twice these weeks. However it will receive more of an update than I anticipated before.
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>>50898256
I don't hate you. Because I don't know what MH is.

Are you doing better now?
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>>50898162
I mostly have a problem with randomly giving up my agency, so barring genderbending powers, I like mdom better than femdom.
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>>50898270
MONSTER HUNTER YOU NEWFAG

>>50898256
GET HYPE
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>>50896068

Inda Reijoku

I actually had to download things and dig a tad bit deeper into the internet for this one.
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>>50898270
Monster Hunter
take your time Bliss
real talk: who fucking cares about CYOAs anyway
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>>50898297
>GET HYPE
I refuse.
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>>50898308
HYPE HYPE HYPE
YOU CAN'T STOP THE HYPE
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>>50898084
>>50898147
Looking at the options, this is quite the interesting build. The high-status one is the cloistered idol...

I like the proto-backstory, I don't see why you wouldn't be able to include it, but this practically demands a more thorough write-up. There's a great story here, I just know it.
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>>50898343
I wasn't saying I had any intention on stopping your hype, I merely stated that I would not be getting hyped about the thing you're striving to build hype for.
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>>50898297
It's taking me a lot longer to come up with new things. But I'm kind of glad I'm adding an elemental section because I always felt that elements were underrepresented and the merging of the Arcane discipline with Elements was a mistake.

>>50898302
I know but I like to make good on my promises even though I said around new years. But I did enjoy the past threads a lot with SDA's roommate CYOA, Imaginos's box CYOA and I particularly enjoyed "TokHaar Gol" Nemesis CYOA even with its many flaws.
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>>50898147
>>50898084
>shared dowries
In my mind, dowries are primarily for the purchaser. Even if both characters shared the Sprites, each would have to pay for both to reflect that the Sprites cared enough about both of them to be willing to be shared.
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>>50898107
And just how is non hard man meat supposed to take care of a girl?
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>>50897502
>BODY TYPE: Big
>PERKS: Flight [9], Metabolism [8], Weirdness Factor [7], Shadows [5], Relaxing Area [4], Own Production [3], Perfect Match [2], Shapeshift [0]
>ROOMMATES: Pinya, Alli

Eh.
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>>50892396
EDG, I wanted to ask again, do I need to take dick many times for a googirl that can have relations with more than one girl at a time?

if not. I'll change my writeup for GooBride.
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>>50898538
if she's hungry
and a cannibal
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>>50898211
>spoiler
thanks. i didn't know anything about femdom at the time, but thanks to the /ss/ cyoa I learnt I enjoyed being the girl in /ss/. so i had no clue if any of it was what people liked. glad to know it was okay.
>remake
I tried writing one, where there were, essentially, "party gays". You know, like the guy version of girls making out with girls at parties, to turn guys on?
But the rest of the world became too similar to another, so I scrapped it. again, i also don't know much about femdom, so i don't have any other ideas.
Some anon wanted a world with breastfeeding but that was pretty weird.
>maledom
it would be told from the woman's perspective, just so you know, in case I write it. Or whatever, I don't know how to phrase it.
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>>50889098
When was this updated? I've been AWOL since it first came out. Totes cool, man.
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>>50898581
Once per type - so goo protrusions would need one purchase.
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>>50898581
Well, >>50898604 got it right.
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>>50898408
Ooh, anything you'd like to share?
Need ideas for anything?
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>>50898604
So she can impregnate many women at once with only one purchase?

Fine. I'll do it. (I feel like shit for doing it. For example, I designed a 'four faced' character who's four primnary directions around her are a different facade. She needs to pay four times for four dicks, but googirl can dick up to 'unlimited' number of girls without purchasing many dicks?)
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>>50898367
>>50898411
I didn't want both brides to be identical (the male's a self-insert) but also didn't want to make the female (entirely) subservient. I think of myself as a controlling butler, like Jeeves and Wooster but sexy.

As for the backstory we may not have been summoned at all. Both of us learned the rite of worldstepping, maybe we fled the labyrinth using it and honed in on the first (improperly performed) summoning we could find. Our order of emergence could even explain our different roles in the cult, besides the fact that I only bless offspring and my partner goes to the trouble of making them. I imagine that while rich with stolen blessings and experience we're stuck with an inept cult.
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>>50888834
>>50895238
Hey where's that one dude who wanted to revive the Altering History multiplayer?
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>>50898650
I am mostly in need of:

Tier 4 skills for Arcane and Elemental discipline.
Tier 1 and 2 skills for Arcane.
A Perception skill for Elemental.
Or any other skill you would like to see, regardless of which discipline.

Maybe an addition to resources.

I'm only going to share that the skill section gets most of the rework in terms of balancing and additions.
Some images and effects will be updated.
The third page will receive some additional work as well.
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>>50898772
is it still playable for PvP?
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>>50898710
My take is that you need to pay for additional simultaneous inseminations/impregnations since that's the main focus of that section.
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>>50898832
How do you mean?
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>>50891467
Yes, Highlander said you can become a ghost that does that.
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>>50898772
What are the current Arcane and Elemental skills? I might be able to concoct an idea.
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>>50898772
>Perception skill for Elemental
Heat vision? Have the element of your choice whisper of your enemies location to you if they're in contact with it?
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>>50898131
Aren't "Same classes" and "Remember: No bully" challenges? They're on different rows, so it's still following the directions. But other challenges also work well for shenanigans-mode.

It's just slightly frustrating that it's hard to get the basic just-like-my-japanese-animes premise of this CYOA ("Worlds collide as an angel and a demon are forced to live with one another— and the high school student Haruka is caught in the middle! Can she keep the two of them from driving each other insane without losing her own mind in the process?") without breaking the rules.

I suppose this was more of a waifu CYOA than a slice-of-life anime CYOA?
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>>50898107
>if you weren't a girl YOU ARE NOW
Apparently that line triggers the Angelanon
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>>50888834
where can I find the sex-edition
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>>50898924
I don't want to share until it's finished. If that's an issue then I'll ask for your help when the first version is released and after feedback I will update it.

Usually the trend of my disciplines are like this:

Tier 1: Passive Skills.
Tier 2: Base Skill + 2 Active/Passive Skills.
Tier 3: Mobility Skill + Perception Skill + Base Skill Upgrade.
Tier 4: Ultimate Abilities.
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>>50898964
Heat vision is a bit meh, and the second one is a bit awkward since elemental magic isn't conscious.

Thanks for the suggestions though, I might be able to make something out of it.
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>>50899024
you're in it right now
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>>50898256
I for one can't wait to welcome our updated piss bomber overlord
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>>50898032
>with rows you can't make the Angel and the Demon mirror each other unless you take Submissive sisters (i.e., diminished hijinks) or Brothers (which is somehow less funny).
Yes you can.
>Row 1: Inexperienced Demon
>Row 2: Innocent Angel
>Row 3: Magical / Age difference
(ignoring the Arch_____ options because that'd break the mirroring)
>Row 4: Devil-Mother
(ignoring Assertive Angel because that'd break the mirroring)
Boom. One choice per row, both girls are inexperienced, and I picked neither of the two choices you stated earlier.
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Don't know if anyone still cares, but I'm finally making progress on the criminals in space WIP ("Most Wanted", if anyone saved it) I posted weeks ago.

Knocked page 2 out yesterday, 3 about half done now. Probably going to be 5, maybe 6 in total, depending on how I format stuff.
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>>50898766
The funny thing is that guy never took part in the Altered History multiplayer or any freeform rp that came out of /cyoag/
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>>50898766
I was waiting for whoever it was I talked to yesterday to show up.
And now we're on page 10...
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>>50899168
Well me either.. But I did read it and it was fun!
Did you play?
>>50899191
We can do it next thread then :)
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>>50898772
>T4 Arcane
PSIONIC MIND MAGIC. Maybe soul stuff?

>T4 Elemental
Elemental body. Scrying throu. Hell, elemental spirit conjuration. Storm powers. Aether/Void element.

>T1-2 Elemental
Air, earth, etc.

>T1-2 Magic
Poach Recall from Spiritual, increased skill in one particular magic type, greater mana pool, some sort of communications...

>I'm only going to share that the skill section gets most of the rework in terms of balancing and additions.
Not even in private? Or on Discord?
it's pretty /pol/ in there.
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>>50899065
>>50899209
Oh, wait, you didn't ask for low-tier Elemental abilities. Just ignore them.
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>>50899191
did you do the reading about the ottomans and stuff? do you want to use the DLC?
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>>50899038
Well, good luck. I usually find my passive abilities are too game like for some.
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>>50899206
Yup, making the build now!
Glad to hear you're still interested.
>>50899235
I'll admit I only read a little bit. We can use the DLC but then I'd rather not make the world. It's intimidating to look at.
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>>50899163
Someone kept reposting it and asking for updates.
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>>50899274
>making the build
all right if ppl want to join your Shared World they will all start at the same time but not necessarily the same place
did you take a look at the old RP threads?
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>>50899163
kewl
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>>50898972
My point was that you can make basically any arrangement you want since the bonus options you get from challenges can obviously double up a row.

Also, it's a little bit unclear but I'm highly confident that the challenges aren't restricted to one per row.
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>>50899315
Yep. Things got crazy when more people showed up.
I'm setting the year at 1453, and joining the conquest of Constantinople, earning myself a high position society.
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>>50897263
i thought mine was obvious
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>>50897263
>>50899382
Lamas too was rather obvious
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>>50891236
Kindness, devotion, and some kind of intellectual interest— I could imagine getting along with someone who was passionate about anything from art history to programming. I also look for someone assertive enough to initiate a relationship, rather than someone who'd rather drop hints that MAYBE she MIGHT be interested in me. "Kissless virgin" isn't that important, because sex turns out to be a lousy proxy for emotional intimacy. In CYOAs, I also tend to go for waifus who've had some kind of bad luck, because CYOAs often give me enough power to imagine that I could bring some joy into their lives. (E.g. Summer, above, who might seriously benefit from a robot butler, a self-driving car, and stretchy clothing that isn't liable to burst open. I also wish you many splendid nipplegasms, Summer.)

Also large breasts. Lactation a plus.
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>>50899411
they're all obvious to me
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>>50899382
It was? I can only figure out the obvious slime girl, symbiote girl and that gay guy.
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>>50899370
>>50899370
>Things got crazy when more people showed up.
I wouldn't worry about that this time.
>I'm setting the year at 1453, and joining the conquest of Constantinople, earning myself a high position society.
not planning on becoming Sultan?
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>>50899209
You want me to move Psionic to Arcane? I just thought it didn't really belong anywhere and that it's somewhat subpar to other abilities. I might make it a Tier 2 Arcane skill though, but make it clear it's weaker.

>>50899220
Any kind of idea pitch can help. I've laid awake at night just trying to come up with anything new. My imagination is best in bed without any distractions.

I'm remaking the elements of the CYOA: currently there are just 3. Arcane, Elemental (Fire or Water) and Ethereal (Light or Dark).
Arcane Magic is most common with its own tree. Elemental magic had a duality between Fire and Water which can be upgraded into Lightning and Frost. Unlocking Ethereal Magic is Tier 4.

I don't get on Discord. I share my stuff with some other creators in the illuminati group.

>>50899247
I'd still like to hear your ideas.
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>>50897263
Which one is Angel's?
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>>50899465
cum

on

now
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>>50899465
I thought Jeanne is probably made by Angel.
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>>50899439
what if someone submitted as someone else without telling you, it's not like there were any safeguards in the form against that.

>>50899483
Cum me on
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>>50899458
In time, yes.
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>>50899503
This has been said a bunch of times but no, it was made by someone named jeanne who hasn't actually finished a cyoa yet but has some in the works.
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>>50899508
if that's happened, then nobody spoke out against it so far

i've also pretty much spoke with each author who submitted too, otherwise i've seen them post in the thread that they were indeed themselves
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>>50899459
>Psionics
Mind magic is a staple of fantasy. Tier 2 skill would be perfectly fine, so long as it's included.
>Elements
Let's see if I can't whip out a basic tree:

>T1
Fire, Water, Earth. Simple, basic, unlocks different elements.
>T2
(Skill), Storms, Ice. Some form of prerequisite (maybe communing with spirits of the types you chose?), a air/lightning skill, and Ice.
>T3
Scrying, not!summoning, something else
>T4
Aether/Void element, elemental form, something else.

Ended up being vaguely spirit-based, but that's the only interesting type of elementalism.

>illuminati group
I am intrigued.
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>>50899459
Hm well from your first response I thought you wanted to finish it first. Anyway.

>Arcane
Tier 1: Continuously and passively build up arcane energy and can release it periodically as an explosion
Tier 2: Can charge up blasts of arcane energy, can alter the focus of them to spread like a shotgun or focus it like a laser.
Tier 3: Can teleport short distances, detect nearby enemies casting magic, and your build up of arcane energy can be focused into your arcane blasts
Tier 4: Basically a gigantic magical nuke.

>Elemental
Tier 4: Can turn into the element. Any harm you take is nullified because you can just reform if it's a solid element or let the attack pass through you. Only works temporarily.

I felt the Base Skill, Passive, etc. was different from the original MH skill format but I do hope you enjoy this.

If I could ask you something, do you have any ideas for classes that are not ability centered?

I.E. something like:
>Duelist
Abilities are better for 1v1
>Guardian
Heal others more, and get healed more

So you can still pick abilities freely from a list but you can pick a class to help specialize the abilities further.
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>>50898256
Wow, the CYOA that made my shitposting arse come back for ever getting a huge update has to be the best news I've got this month
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>>50899663
>If I could ask you something, do you have any ideas for classes that are not ability centered?
He already has classes, but misc. modifiers actually sounds interesting; prepackaged sets of trade-offs would be less broken than full drawbacks/exchanges.
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>>50899755
No not for Monster Hunter, I meant for my CYOA.
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>>50897502
Oppai loli

Flight (1)
Because it is fun.
Metabolism (2)
So I can focus on eating Spirit Energy.
Weirdness Factor (3)
So, without disguising, I can go walking down the street singing, "do da diddy diddy dum diddy do" and no one will try to burn me at the stake!
Emotion Link (5)
I'm not getting much in the way of direct lewd-making powers, so this is my go-to method to get people to make lewd to me so I don't starve. Plus I can make lots of friends.
Increased Production (6)
>Spirit Energy isn't the only thing they'll make more of.
Yes please.
Ambrosia (7)
I already boosted quantity. It just makes sense to raise quality, too. Now my Spirit Energy collection will be all the more efficient.
Round Two (8)
So they can keep going and going, painting me all the more in the color of their Spirit Energy.
Normalize (10)
This should let me get casually frisky, substituting sorta for raw arousal abilities. Not quite nearly as effective as Thrall, but it is much more fun to press my chest up against them and slowly start working my hands down.

I also wanted Charm, but Emotion Link can replace it just fine. All I have to do is love everybody.

Arel & Keki for roommates. Going for the squishiest and most cuddle-able. I also want to make sure to befriend Pinya.
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>>50899779
Whoops, misread that. Maybe a copycat class, that gets a huge boost to any skill someone else has just done?

>>50899503
Bliss, what do you think of >>50899755?
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>>50899648
>Elemental form
Yup got that. I am seeking different types of passive other than unlocking elements.

Just a few creators who share projects, PSD's, make small talk, gossip and talk shit about cyoag. There are 4 creators in there including me. It's just a lot more private and intimate than an IRC or Discord chat.

>>50899663
Thanks for the ideas. I might use some of them.

Refining classes with specific bonuses was my original intention. I transformed them into blessing which allows you to choose which bonus you want. (+3 stats was for warrior, +1 skill sorcerer, +1 monster soul for hunter and +20 tribute for noble.)

I get what you mean, sort of like picking a class with a specialization. Short answer: I think combining a specialization with a pre-set amount of stats is a bad combination. Which is why I leave specialization to the free to choose skill trees.

>>50899719
I'm glad I made your top events list. The update isn't that huge but will feature a lot of changes regardless.

>>50899755
>>50899807
I haven't really thought about that. Not sure about it since I'd have to come up with an additional way of customization. And wouldn't that make certain modifiers a bit too popular? I'd think Duelist for example would be extremely popular.

But try and pitch it to me with tangible ideas. I might see some value in them.
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>>50899209
I visited your Discord for a few minutes. What a fucking mess that place is.
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>>50900109
yea, quite a few people joined it so it's a lot more rambunctious than the irc was/is
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>>50900097
I was actually asking for ideas for Adventures in the Orient V.2.0, since people liked the classes but not the restricted abilities.
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>>50891236
To that, Ordion Anon, I, surprisingly, have the perfect answer: it depends on your audience.
And now for the helpful answer.
What people makes fascinated with fictional characters is an inherent preference and such a character falling in one. You can group characters by archetypes and play to them, subvert them, invert them or completely deconstuct them, but you may never show everything.
Play to your audience, know what kind of person you want to crave that character, play hints at their past and how interesting their life is, but leave enough in the air to make people ask, to make them want to find out more about a character they already like.
Applying that to a CYOA is hard and it gets even harder if you don't take your time and subsume a whole thinking being under a few points of characterization.
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>>50896727
>Lore
Well, letLs start off then. expanded galaxy lore sounds better than the disney bullshiterino, but many younger people will find it odd not to see the doid from the seventh Movie or the Rouge One cast. But your CYOA. You have to detail the time slots you are talking about. The Galaxy is more than once in uproar. Also Coruscant is terraformed in the extended lore, bear that in mind.

>species
We have litterally like nine billion forms of sapient life in SW

>Home world
same applies to this one

>Items
I would restrict some of them to what species can use them or get a discount at some. also, quadrillions of 'em

>Companions & Heros
I'm no fan of the hero part, as you could be with the emperor and thus making the rule of two invalid (even a non-force sensetive is consideres a 'second' ) You have to layout why a character is a hero per se. I mean... there are so many Characters who'll change alignment...
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>>50900131
I learnt that some guy has an impregnation fetish but his girlfriend doesn't, Quiet is a 36 year old lesbian and Highlander is 20. The rest was retarded and I didn't pay attention.
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>>50899503
>>50899465
Which one lives in a castle?
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>>50900228
Quiet is a guy, anon. Highlander may be an actual lesbian though.
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>>50900139
Oh, I see. The transition between the Monster Hunter talk and your own CYOA is a little vague.

There are many aspects to choose from which you can adapt into classes. They don't necessarily have to be combat related.
Such as animals, good and evil, weapons, knowledge, etc.
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>>50900097
Elemental Eyes might be cool. Leave behind wards made out of the elements you picked. Helps keeps the mage dude safe by having his back covered.

A mage could bring some torches or water bottles to act as the base for the element eyes. Light/Darkness would be floating bits I guess. Maybe more obvious but they can be left in tricky places.
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>>50900097
You only made that list because of the homophone game that is pure awesomeness. Wouldn't I have known it, I would not have bothered looking it through.
Man, that's been long time...
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>>50890898
>Spiritual mentoring (free)
>Trader's apprenticeship (free)

>Tuition, Engineering degree (-25%, trader: 1500)
>Tuition, Hunter's liscence (-25%, trader: 3000)
>Tuition, Zoology training (5000)

>Phantom cruiser (-25%, trader: 8000)
>Beast of burden: medium and biome outfitted (free, engineer)

>Modern local attire (free, trader)
>Enviromental suit (free, engineer)
>Stealth attire (free, hunter)
>Religious wear (8200)
>Mix and match: all (8300)
>Sniper rifle (free, hunter)

>Holocom (8550)
>Containment cells: medium (9100)
>Mega drugs (9300)
>Holodisc: science, music and diplomacy textbooks (9450)
>Turret:1 LG rocket and 1 Railgun (free, engineer)
>Spiritual fetish (9700)
>Biochrono bath (11200)
>Laboratory: all types (-25%, trader: 13000)

Zor-Matar
>Irradiated
>Junky
>Immunity
>To the lab!

>Augo Asteraceae
>Miivii Ket
>Ivandra Pulkoarest
>Ilac "The Lilac" Chirfunz
>Flower Power (Scrap Familiar)

Zor Matar wasn't always a waste, and even the waste has a kind of life. Let the short-sighted make pilgrimage to forest moons and world oceans. We will not help life-that-is, for it needs none; instead we will coax it from where it has been gone for so long, and be rewarded by creatures unlike any the universe has ever seen.
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>>50900097
I can't really think of anything an Elemental tree would have besides unlocking elements.

And I was suggesting something Ordion didn't intend; an entirely new set of prepackaged boon/drawback pairs like "Better at 1v1, but shit against multiples" or "better out-of-combat spells, but worse in-combat". Easier to control than actual drawbacks or currency exchanges.
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