/cyoag/ CYOA General

>>50521936
As I am not an ant, I demand a thread for us large folks.

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>>50521954
>>50521936

Hey, I got the thread subject right, and I got the pastebin in. I needed to fuck up somewhere, right?

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Posting this again, because I put it in kinda late in the thread

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>>50522004
He's right we've got a quota per thread to fill.

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>>50519781
>>50520855

Ok, so here's 20 point test build. I hope favor and stats actually add up right since I changed things around a few times.

Queen Saralindra Helviiryn, Fallen Angel, Mother of Spiders

Pedigree X
Status XXX
Allure XXXX

Genitalia
>Vagina (1)
>Embellishments
>Lubrication
>Musculature
>Plush (x3)
3

Shape
>Alluring
3

Chest
>Gifted
>Multiplicity
4

Influences
>Kleptozzological (Wings)
>Psuedodevascent (Halo)
6

Face
>Regal
>Chakra Eye
>Elder Gaze
8

Flourishes
>Ouroboros Metabolism
>Godly Cleanliness
>Lernaean Hymen
>Lactation
>Gate to Ecstasy (x2)
>Reproductive Channel (x2)
14

Strategy
>Synergism
14

Specialty
>Multitudinous
14

Treasure
>Primordial Woad
>Abyssal Ink
>Celestial Charms
>Argent Spark
>Argent Blaze
>Nuptial Torc
>Regal Array
19

Bonds
>Chaq, Spider-Goddess
>Oviposition
>Amazing Spider-Parasite (Chaq)
21

>Thrones Shadow
20

Basically I'm a fallen Angel, captured by dark powers to be a bride of Teiatat. Teiatat already has many brides, and delights in seeing Angels used and humiliated, plus I'm not actually fertile cuz Synergism and might not really be useful to him anyway (maybe cuz Angels and demons doon't mix?). So he gives me to Chaq, the Spider-Goddess and teaches her to use my Nuptial Torc and Leash. I still have status as a fallen Angel and some choices that give me lots of magical potential. So maybe I can move up in the world eventually. I have low Pedigree cuz I hold incubate lots and lots of eggs for Chaq, since it says spider-demons reproduce in quantity. But I guess that doesn't hurt my standing to much.

>>50522025
New Traveller WHEN?!

>>50521597
>>50521609
Louise
Book of the Lombards
Noble Revolt
more power for bae
>>50521868
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w34fSnJNP-4

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Posting comfy pocket dimensions cyoas. If anybody has any more I'd welcome it.

>>50522039
Hello there, Angelanon. Let's take a look at that build...

>Klepto-Z + P-Deva
You could have gotten the angel effect with just pseudodevascent, if you want to spend the points elsewhere

>Synergism + Specialty
You can't take Synergism with any kind of specialty. They share the "class" exclusive tag. Maybe I should make a not of that in synergism...

>Backstory
Well, the assumed backstory is that you're a regular mortal, and you could be "promoted" to a fallen angel by Teiatat so that Teiatat can play off your psyche specifically for you, but that's if you want to change your backstory.

I don't know if angels/demons exist per se in a Lovecraftian setting, but I don't see why they can't in your instance of this CYOA

Any good god cyoas?

>>50522039
Oh, by the way, your build did give me an idea for another option, so I should thank you for that.

>>50522063
>>50522087
>no little girl option
These two aren't comfy.

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>>50522154
>any good god yoa
How will are you to date use goods?

>>50522310
why do you say that anon.

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>>50522363

>>50522363

Pretty sure not every one of these is used goods.

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>>50522408
They are just for you

>>50522144

Hi! I wasn't so sure about this one last time you asked since the intro really didn't get me into it. But since you said it was inspired by my Exalted slut build, I had to take a closer look! It's very unique and interesting, especially for a lewd cyoa. Kind of dark, but that's not necessarily bad. I don't make builds for lewd cyoas, but just every once in awhile. Especially if I can get magic power or something in them somehow.

Well I could get rid of Klepto-Z and then I have a extra point, so I can get rid of Throne's Shadow and get a Status point back. And then if I get rid of Multitudinous, that'll give me a Pedigree and Allure point back and cost a Status point, but it'll balance out with the one from Throne's Shadow.

So new stats will be:
Pedigree XX
Status XXX
Allure XXXXX

And none of that really goes against my character theme. I'd like to rp as a fallen Angel for this, but that's ok. If it's supposed to be me irl, then being magically turned into a Angel works to.

>>50522156

No problem! Glad to help!

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>>50522437

>>50522056
Highlander is dead. Her heart gave out after her all night gangbang.

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>>50522536
lies! Highlander can take 50 dicks without worry!

>>50522566

In a row?

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>>50522577
In a row!

>>50522536
This is no longer gangbang levels of concern.
This is more like Kit finally freaked out and kidnapped her. She keeps her in the basement now for safe keeping. The gag only comes out when it's time to put her pretty little mouth to work~

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Can someone who has an exceptionally large CYOA folder please post a screencap of the properties window regarding their CYOA folder?

I need an image of an exceptionally large CYOA folder to use in my CYOA and I only have about a GB and a half or so, while I know I've before here seen people having upwards of 7 GB.

>>50522056
Oh, shut up already. Whining every thread won't make her post it any faster.

>>50522673
just go rename your system32 folder as "cyoa"

>>50522673
>>50522708
I don't know much about computers, but I believe this to be very, very bad advice, anon.

>>50522039
>wants to have regal appearance and status as a divine angelic being
>takes choices to be kept on a leash while having her vag, ass, and mouth filled with monster eggs
Pretty hot, but not thematically consistent.

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>>50522673
Like this?

>>50522771
Sure. That works. Thanks, anon.

>>50522004
Who the hell thinks a pistol weighs ten pounds? Or a rifle twenty?

>>50522817
Maybe it's made of lead. So the bullets don't get cancer.

>>50522817
"Points"

"Points" Anon, not "Pounds"

>>50522039
>Mother of Spiders
oh god the image of you giving birth to spiders cannot be unimagined

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>>50522673

>>50522015
Given how much he wants to reproduce you'd think that the Eunuch would throw in the Thronemaiden for free if you pick him. To sweeten the deal as it were.

>>50522817
A rifle would have to weigh at least a hundred pounds i think, probably more.

It all has to do with how much a pound weighs. I've only got dollars to work with here.

>>50522908
That's something to consider. Should I really do that?

>>50522015
Anybody else think I should do that?

>>50522363
Is this a new version? It has stuff I don't remember it having.

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Haven't seen this one in a while.

>>50523009
That's the latest update to it, yes. Italics just cannot control themselves when it comes to revisiting old works.

>>50522979
No a slave like that should be something to pay for. I like it so far though. I'd love it if you could expand upon the Urges. Perhaps sub-options to choose for things like widows hunger?

Also what else have you considered in temrs of drawbacks/other options that grant favor? Will any of them be without status decreases like -1 pedigree/status?

>>50523203
>Urges
Oh yeah, I'm gonna get a few in there, don't worry.

>Hunger sub-options
I wasn't planning on that, but do you have any suggestions?

>Moar Drawbacks
Yeah, I got a couple planned. Any suggestions of your own?

>>50522979
Well it'd balance it out so you were spending 1 for 1 in terms of Favor to stats. Provided that you're fine with it being that efficient I don't see why it wouldn't be flavor wise.

>>50523368
Actually, Right now it's balanced so that it between 1 and 2 favor for stats, and drawbacks usually give you back 1 favor for stat lost. I tweak things a little for non-mechanical costs and benefits.

In the case of the Eunuch, I would have priced it a 5 favor if not for the nudge nudge wink wink proposition he made at the end.

>>50523460
Are all of the builds supposed to look like female bodies? Or can I have a male body

>>50523460
Maybe increase it back to 5 or have a 1 favor sub option which throws in the Thronemaiden? That way people who only want to spend 2 on the Thronemaiden can do so and those who want the Eunuch but not the Thronemaiden don't have to pay the extra Favor?

>>50523561
Yes. Just don't pick a Broodmother shape, and take a Hard or Soft chest depending on your desired aesthetic.

>>50523094
When was it posted?

>>50523081
I would definitely choose sloth. Future-sight just seems to good to pass up. It would be interesting if sloth gained something like an activatable entropy aura, so basically it could passively cause people to lose motivation or stop working and perhaps cause electronics or machinery to stop functioning.

>>50523605
Fine. I'm not sure if you're doing this because you want to stretch your favor farther or if you genuinely believe this will improve the CYOA, but you've convinced me to throw it in.

>>50523682
I do think that it'd improve the CYOA, also I think that going Eunuch would actually be worse from a powergaming perspective. Sure you might be able to be slightly more efficient with your Favor for one choice but you're not going to be able to chose Nuptial Torc for free Favor. Since I imagine the Eunuch is one of those people who knows how to create the leash.

>>50522600
>>50522437
>>50522363
Italics really needs to edit this since it has typos and sentences that are cutoff.

>>50523619

Typing up my long last post, I forgot to say thanks for taking the time to go over my build!

>>50522738

Teiatat likes seeing Angels degraded. That's how I ended in this predicament in the first place! But I have lots of magical potential from Chakra Eye, Elder Gaze, and Argent Spark/Blaze and pretty good status as an Angel. So I'd have room to eventually grow more powerful and move up in the world. Especially since I'm dropping Throne's Shadow.

>>50522865

I would lay the eggs when they're ready. Live birth=ew.

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>>50522673
Most of this is my own assets and projects, but this is mine.

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>>50523317
>Hunger sub-options
"This may be in the depressingly conventional, messy manner, or it may be a more interesting method. You may draw out their breath, lifeforce, phychic matrix or very soul, leaving them a withered husk or a mindless shell."

You wrote in a few possibilities to start with.

Flesheater -1 Allure +1 Status
"Doing it oldschool is messy, but some take your cannibalism as a sign of power. "
Soul sucker +1 Pedigree
"After defeating an opponent in combat you can suck the soul out of your foe, healing you and giving you a portion of its strength. "
Psychic Matrix Reconfiguration +1 Pedigree
"Warp someones mind, effectively lobotomizing them and repurposing the body for your needs. What you remove from someones mind, you can add to your own, be it memories or knowledge "
Life force + Allure
You can drain someone of their very essence, feeding upon it. If you stop before they die, they will eventually recover some back, the less taken the lesser the permanent damage to the psyche. Creates a thrall-like bond over multiple feedings.

the text just intended to give examples, probably needs rewording

Territories:
The land Teiatat controls is vast, and it matters little to him where you reside.

The big city (suggestions for other locales, countryside mansion, beachhouse, forest tree house
Slums +1 favor -1 status
One bedroom apartment in the bottom of the urban scrawl
Middle class +/- 0 favor
Four bedroom house in the outskirts of the city
Luxury -1 favor +1 status
Eight bedroom, two-story penthouse flat

Countryside
Small farmhouse in the middle of nowhere +1 favor
Equestrian ranch 0 favor (-1 favor to bring all the animals you like)
Countryside mansion -1 favor +1status

+2 favor you have no house of your own, must live with another bride as submissive

Modifications:
Emotionally stunted +1 favor never form romantic bond
oversensitive +1 favor everything can make you cry

I dont know, I'm stoned and just a few examples.

>>50523646
I saved my pages of it on October 5th, apparently. Could have been released a day or two prior, though.

>>50523856
Okay. You've given me some ideas for the hunger suboption. I can't take the territories with my current plans, though. The Realm options already cover that sort of thing, and they're pretty vague on purpose.

I do like the emotionally stunted modification idea, though...

Thanks for the suggestions!

>>50523586
>ANNIE ADLER (8 left)
Right. My name is Annie. That's right, now I remember.

>DIVORED PARENTS (7 left)
This feels familiar, for some reason.

>Star Athlete (5 left), Loving Little Sister (4 left)
I remember them, too. But something feels wrong.

>W.I.T.C.H. (1 left), 'Girl Knowledge' (0 left)

So much is coming back to me. I've always known, right?

>MENTOR (1 left)
She's going to do great.

>RICH (0 left)
I don't remember this. It feels wrong somehow.

My head hurts.

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>>50522583
Where did the mystery box (the best option) go?

Has bliss posted his psd files ever? I want to look into how he did some of his stuff (its looks so much better than mine)

>>50522004
Rations, first aid kit, rifle, machete. Just the bare necessities.

The Madam Knight apparently knows things about the area, which is important. Her religion isn't any of my business, I'm sure.
The good Mr. Ericsson also seems like a good source of wisdom.

Dinosaur allies seem like the only way to profit from this fiasco. Germans make good enemies, since there's nothing immoral about killing them and they have neither the numbers of the Tanuma nor other problems of the Brotherhood.

Spring of Life seems the best reward, and less dangerous than Dorado of the Mask.Well, dangerous to the body, perhaps, but less so to the soul.

>>50523982

Still no duration/cooldown for the abilities? Shame.

>>50522063
Coin, since I move around.

Grassland is the biggest apparently, and a blank slate. I can grow plants and trees of my own initiative.

Brook is necessary as a source of water, especially since it apparently doesn't rain unless you pick the option for it. I'll use it to water plants, and I'll dig a swimming hole.
Hotspring because I like that.
Trees, shrubs, and wildlife are sort of trap options, I know enough of ecology to get my own going, but there's nothing else I really need, so I'll take both since they're convenient. Trees should include a grove of sequoias, with the brook going between them, and a grove of assorted fruit trees. I don't know what grows in this place, but I guess I can decide, so I'm having red mirabella, loquats, English walnut, peach, tangerines, and everything else. For shrubs, blueberry, blackberry, and all sorts of peppers. There are no insects natively but I can set up a beehive.
For animals, pheasants and hummingbirds and orioles and turkeys and I'll bring my own chickens and build a coop for them.

(cont)

>>50524545
Indoors, I need a kitchen first of all. I feel like the lack of cabinet options implies that this was made by someone who doesn't use their kitchen heavily. Anyways, I'll take the mythical ingredients, since that's cool, the industrial appliances since why not, and the breakfast nook since I know I can't be bothered to use a full dining room all the time.
Bedroom is important. Halting physical imperatives makes for maximum comfy reading. Temperature control seems good. Soundproof could be handy I guess, though I'll keep the balcony door open most of the time anyway, but it could be polite if there's guests.
Bathrooms are a necessity. The jacuzzi seems too luxurious to pass up, the deluxe version is nice, and the smell neutralizer as well. The other options are kind of icky.
Library is a truly decadent room to have. I'll take the size and content upgrades. If I picked 4 I'd read indefinitely forever, so I won't pick that. I guess the fireplace, though I've no inclination to use it. Well, this also does the duty of a living room.
Guest rooms, with doubled number, soundproofing, and temperature control, for the sake of having family and other guests.
I suppose I need a dining room, as I can't very well have guests eat in the kitchen. For that I'll take the wine, fireplace, and maid, since although I've no need for those, the dining room is more for sharing anyway. I might rather have the computer room, but I can put a computer that I acquire normally into some corner of the library.

>>50524533
A CYOA is inherently more about fluff than game systems, so it's not so important. I find cooldowns to be unnatural anyway, unless they're vague rules of thumb.

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If you guys had to pick either the Archdemon or Archangel Roommate to be made into a harem anime, what would it be?

>>50524554
I agree.

>>50522063

So does the PC count as a console? Don't know why you'd be able to select those specs if you aren't able to play vidya on it. What are you supposed to use it for, shitposting?

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>>50524582

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>>50523982
>>50523993
>>50524013
Gonna do a revised build for this, last one was a mess and missed points. Harsh environment survivalist who minds their own business, hunts like a komodo or the like; bite once, walk away and come back when the disease is nearly finished with them.
>Hunter
ST6
DF4
AG7
IT5
SK5
StatBlessing

Tempered, Willpower, Enhanced, Catalysts, Fire, Water, One With Nature, Poisons, Soul Spirit, Binding, Monster Within, Killer Instinct, Bladed Arms, Blunt Arms, Marksmanship, Self-Repair, Recall, Pocketing, Indomitable, Blessed.
>Terrain Hunter
Ancient Desert (Lethality5,Reward65)
Sunken Mountain: Always Raining (Lethality4, Reward50)
115 total
Physiology -5/110
Gender -5/105
Exempt -25/80
Library -10/70
Alchemy -10/60
Market -10/50
Scavenging -5/45
Diner -5/40
Club -5/35
Bounty -5/30
Underground -5/25
Inn Accomodation -10/15

Banking 15 point's worth for a rainy day other than the ones on the mountain.

>Fly around on summoned spirit form around the mountain or over the desert to avoid the most dangerous aspects and creatures, engaging quarry from a distance with archery, baiting them into traps if they follow up on me before the poisons kick in, use pocketed blades and bludgeons for critters that close in and make good use of the variety to always have the right weapon or tool for the job. Learn water magic in the storm peaks and take it to the desert to survive out there, learn fire magic in the sands from ancient temples to keep warm and strike at heat-weak creatures in the heights.
>Guide potential bounties, allies, and clients into the depths of the desert, around wurmsigns and sand-drakes and such to see to the ancient ruins therein.
>Keep tabs on bigger game that might be poison immune to sell info to hunters more keen on them, as well as specific types of creatures in my hunting grounds to sell to monster-specific hunters.
>Rent bunker space during the culling behind 7000 traps and bindings.

>>50524554

So I can pretty much assume that any temporary abilities last twice as long as their cooldown, which would enable me to have them on permanently unless there's something to stop me.

>>50522015
If Tiamat's goal is to get us to fuck everything why doesn't he give is infinite points?

>>50524582

Neither. You can't trust either of them filthy non-Humans.

>>50522063
>[a / b / c / d / e / f / g / gif / h / hr / k / m / o / p / r / s / t / u / v / vg / vr / w / w


man this one is good.

>>50524582
But a harem anime would ruin it, it's supposed to be only you and your demon/angel, not one guy playing around and never committing to one of a group of girls.

>>50524704

So wait, is everything above 1 a harem?

>>50524732
No, why would you think that? Two girls and a boy is just an old-fashioned love triangle.

>>50524732
harem is one guy and minimum 3 girls.

>>50524756

I thought 3 was a crowd and 5 a party, or something.

>>50524704
I fucking hate that genre. All the constant cockblocking, never actually commiting to a girl and stringing them along, being denser than a fuckin neutron star....

>>50524780
don't forget how they usually physically abuse the shit out of the mc and nobody bats an eye.

>>50522063
The Coin

An Island
+Hotspring
+Brook
+Wildlife
+Fickle Weather
+Events (Auroras at night, low fast moving clouds during the day)
Has a large hill as it's biggest peak, with a hotspring at one side, and a brook flowing down the other side of it, flowing into the ocean.
Plenty of wildlife, many crab species, and multicolored schools of fish. with a couple different songbirds, and owls.

Kitchen
>Breakfast nook
>Food Replicator
>Mythical ingredients

Bedroom
>Ultra comfort mattress
>Temperature controlled blankets
>No physical needs

Bathrooms
>Champagne tap
>Groomer
>Deluxe

Guestrooms
>Temp controlled blankets
>Larger guestrooms
>Double guestrooms

Computer room
>Increased processors
>4TB RAM
>Nervegear

Indoor Pool
>Lazy river
>Breathable liquid
>Sauna

As you can tell. I like swimming. So essentially my pocket dimension is just bringing a group of people and dicking around in the sea when it's nice out, hot springs when it's cold at night, getting drunk while bathing, and swimming indoors when it's storming. Ultimate comfy.

>>50524612
You can do whatever is the most fun to you. Oh wait, no. This isn't real. You can't do anything of the sort. :^)

>>50524810

What's not real?

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>>50524780
>guy likes a girl, girl likes the guy
>neither one of them ever tries to admit it
>even if they do it gets interrupted by some shit like a passing train or one of them felling asleep during the confession
>rinse and repeat until sales drop enough and then wrap it up in one or two chapters

>>50524819
Fantasy.

>>50524839
Thats not harem, thats 1 on 1 romance.

>>50524819
Your romantic prospects.

>>50522039
>agreeing to take the giant spider penis
I suspect this isn't really Angel.

>>50524854
>>50524860

Well, which one is it?

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>>50523982
Sure.

+ Hunter; 2 Strength | 2 Defense | 6 Agility | 2 Intelligence | 3 Skill

+ Blessing: +3 stat points (distributed)

+ Physical Skills
-Tempered -> Willpower -> Enhanced (+1 Str)
-Toughness -> Flurry (+1 Agi) -> Sixth Sense
-Martial Arts (+1 Ski) -> Athletics (+1 Agi) [-8]

+ Magical Skills
-Catalysts (+1 Ski) -> Arcane (+1 Int) -> Blink
-Water [-4]

+ Spiritual Skills
-One With Nature (+1 Def) -> Monster Within -> Fleet-Footed [-3]

+ Weaponry Skills
-Bladed Arms (+1 Ski)
-Marksmanship (+1 Agi) [-2]

+ Ethereal Skills
-Indomitable (+1 Str)
-Recall (+1 Int) -> Unleash (+1 Ski)

(4 Str | 3 Def | 9 Agi | 4 Int | 7 Ski)

+ Bounties
-Leviathan (+30 Fav)
-Phoenix (+30 Fav)
-Strange (+50 Fav)

+ Persona
-Physiology (-5)

+ Resources
-Forge (-10)
-Library (-10)
-Market (-10)
-Training (-5)
-Diner (-5)
-Hot Springs (-5)
-Middle (-30)

Bank the 35 points for one of those rainy days, I suppose.

>>50524794
Oh yeah fuck that shit. I watched three minutes of "To love Ru". One girl strips and pushes him down on her bed then her sister walks in and starts beating him for it. Somehow it's his fault. It's a fucked up genre.
>>50524839
That's shit too but not about harems. I get that they can sell more books/episodes by dragging shit on but come on!

>>50524839
>guy likes a large pool of girls, girls have varying different opinions about guy ranging from pure unadulterated affection to blatant disgust
>guy has a job to do that put hims at odds/in direct contact with said large pool of girls
>plot important episode puts each different girl under the spotlight and they have crazy shenanigans with the guy where the audience can plainly see a intimate development happening or guy gains a deep understanding of said girl's feelings/ambitions and why they act the way they do around guy.
>plot unimportant episodes are filled with fanservice and implied lewd interactions between guy and a select combination of girls or all of them, depending on size of girl pool
>fanservice episodes vastly outnumber plot episodes, 2:1-10:1.
>series continues with the same repetitive formula until sales and audience drops and guy finally confesses his feelings to one/a few girls from the pool, sometimes in an anticlimactic and underwhelming/low key manner.
ftfy

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>>50524922

>her sister

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>>50524819
>What's not real?

>>50524938
>sometimes

>>50524922
>One girl strips and pushes him down on her bed then her sister walks in and starts beating him for it. Somehow it's his fault. It's a fucked up genre.

At least it isn't "how the fuck he dares to walk me while I'm undressing in the bathroom even though I didn't lock the door or put any sign on it point out that it is in use"-cliche.

>>50524911
You were given the same answer twice, anon.

>>50524963

Are you real?

>>50524972

Which answer was that?

>>50524980
>Are you real?

As real as everything else.

Which is to say, not at all.

>>50524967
I was being optimistic anon.

But yeah Japanese animators have no fucking clue how relationships actually work,or they do and just ignore how real people handle them and just visualize a "ideal" form that appeases the sad lonely basement dwelling NEET demographic.

>>50524970
>how the fuck he dares to walk me while I'm undressing in the bathroom even though I didn't lock the door or put any sign on it point out that it is in use"
Thinking back I think this happened.
In the three or so minutes i watched, he
>woke up and was immediately sexually assaulted by a nude girl, got beat for it
>walked into the unlocked bathroom, saw a nude girl who wanted to fuck him, got beat up for it
>ate breakfast with all girls
>walked to school
Remember guys, physical abuse is funny if it's a girl doing it to a guy!

>>50524996
Real relationships are garbage. Miserable and empty.

There's nothing wrong with them giving us an ideal fantasy of what romance is. That's the entire POINT of fantasy, to give us the fantastic. It's the only reason the romance genre exists.

The issue on my end is that harem series are always boring, formulaic, and anticlimactic. I much prefer simple, cute, idealized one on one romance.

>>50524980
The one that you got.

>>50525000
It kind of is. A female friend of mine punched me once and then said she was really sorry for doing it so hard. Except I didn't even feel it really, I thought she was joking at first..

>>50525017

But I got two.

>>50525032
Two cases of the same one.

>>50525036

Well, it just looks like I don't understand the answer then.

>>50525041
Do you think understanding it would make you happier?

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>>50525028
>physical abuse is the same as being punched weakly in the arm followed by the girl apologizing
I can't be bothered to search for a gif of him being beat up for doing nothing wrong so have an attempted murder instead.

>>50525048

I'm just curious.

>>50525056
Think about it then.

>>50525016
My problem is even their interpretation of the idea fantasy of what romance is is really shallow, mechanical/artificial and underwhelming because I get the sense that they think romance is this elaborate tea ceremony where if you act out all the right parts/rituals in some arbitrary rigid order, say the correct lines in the right implied tone and shit, the girl automatically and magically falls madly in love with you forever regardless of what transpired in the series or what disposition the girl maintained for the guy throughout the entirety of the series.

It seems really forced.

>>50525060

I already forgot all about it.

>>50525066
Even better, you can sate your curiosity more than once.

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>>50525016

>>50525053
Well it was in the face and apparently her arm hurt her afterwards, so...

>>50525069

But how am I supposed to think about anything if I forgot about everything?

>>50525016
>Real relationships are garbage

How would you know this? I know I wouldn't reach that conclusion, as two of the three real relationships I've seen (not been part of, mind you) have been loving and satisfying for both parties, and the third was only horrible because one party was suicidally depressed.

I owe my existence to the third one.

>>50525082
Does it matter when you're already doing it?

>>50525076

I bet you can cut adamantium with your face.

>>50525101
Unfortunately I don't live in a universe that has such a thing in it.

>>50525065
Most people are really shallow.

I mean, harem series ARE simplistic repetitions of archetypes for the sake of pandering. I'm not disagreeing with you there.

If you traced back the origins of the generic archetypes they use to the earlier examples in anime, you'll often find fully fleshed out characters with an actual arc. However, it's a lot easier for someone to make a bad copy that hits all the high notes without any of the meat, than it is for someone to write it well. So you get what you see.

>>50525084
I've had them. I've seen and lived with other people in relationships. Never saw or experienced anything good. Humans in general are pretty nasty beings, so most people are unlikely to possess anything like the kind of loyal, sweet, head-over-heels love you see in fiction even outside of my experiences. It doesn't fit the species.

>>50525089

But what if I'm not?

>>50525119
You obviously are, or you wouldn't be asking about it.

>>50525111

Diamond, then.

>>50525072
Fantasy is just a vehicle to fill the empty space between what we desire and what we feel, and reality.

It can be said about almost anything we dream of.

>>50525115

This is why we need sexbots.

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>>50525115
Perhaps you ought to consider that your misanthropy may stem from personal bias?

I've seen the very same sort of love you decry as fiction with my own eyes. If you're unlucky enough to have spent your life with incorrigible abusers, it's no wonder you assume everyone must be the same way.

That, and all too often misanthropes use "people suck" as their excuse to be even /worse/ than the people they hate so much, and never seem to include themselves in these indictments. THAT gets on my nerves.

I never asked for this.

>>50525129

Tell me about it. I once had a dream that I was a God, for about 3 seconds. The disappointment that followed when I woke up was palpable.

>>50525143
The issue with an argument of personal bias is that it can almost always be mirrored. It is entirely pointless to go in that direction, because anything either says applies to one another. It would be better to accept that we disagree.

Oh, but self-loathing is just another trophy on my shelf, anon. I never exclude myself.

>>50525123

How did you reach that conclusion?

>>50525173
Eh, true enough.

I honestly never thought I'd be the one trying to convince someone that true love is a thing. It feels weird.

>>50525016
>Real relationships are garbage. Miserable and empty.
Lol do people actually believe this shit?

>>50525185
By reading your posts.

>>50525138
>implying that sexbots won't be banned by the no-fun allowed people

>>50525207

Can't stop progress.

>>50523982
>50524582
I laughed at the wubba lubba dub dub at the bottom of this cyoa.

>>50525209
You can arrest a man for fucking a bicycle though.

>>50525204

Seems you're not very good at that.

>>50525224
You thinking so is evidence to the contrary.

>>50525220

In what country?

>>50525203
Probably. No point arguing with them, it's like trying to convince a desert nomad that sometimes water gets so cold it becomes hard like a stone, and sometimes small, fluffy pieces of that stone water can fall from the sky.

>>50525076
Oh poor her! Did you say you were sorry for hurting her arm when she assaulted you?

>>50525232

How so?

>>50525265
Because you wouldn't be saying so otherwise.

>>50525255
I wouldn't say there is no point. If happy people won't bear witness to their great relationships, it's no wonder real love gets treated like a unicorn.

>>50525270

So you say, but you've yet to prove that that is the case.

>>>50517418

Do all 7 powers need to be from the same class?

>>50525276
The best proof of something's existence is its presence.

>>50525321

I'd like to see you try in court.

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>>50525272
Nah, trust me. If someone has decided that all relationships are just barren wastelands of suffering heaped upon suffering, there's no proving it to them; you can't because to them, it doesn't exist. Their mental defense is airtight and self-healing.

>>50525325
Court implies ulterior motives and accountability to others, neither of which are present here.

>>50525361

I think you meant to say romantic and/or sexual relationships.

>>50524938
Ah the fabled "Hot Springs" episodes....

I thought highschool dxd was ok for a harem/fanservice anime. At least the protagonist admits he's a pervert and wants all the girls, instead of being the brain dead clueless main character type.

>>50523982
wurble burble CULLING AEFDEBWN burble wurble

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>>50511209
There's only one obvious choice
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0Bxbrh3Q2CTiydDVRZHZROF96ODA

>>50525373
I try not to put words in people's mouths when I can avoid it, so I was using the phrasing from >>50525016 which was simply "relationships".

If they can use "relationships" to refer to it, then so can I when referring to their use of it.

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Making a lot of progress on page 2! Should be ready some time soon! Maybe! Don't quote me!

I plan on having another small section at the bottom, too, which will give an immortality option in exchange for a 500 word description of your new life and an offer to attend a school (if you chose to go back to school) filled with other anons who've done the same CYOA. Things like that. It'll be a cool non-standard section, I hope.

>>50525395

Yeah but he mentioned romance right under it.

>>50522015
"Psuedo" should be "pseudo". Also, what's "devascent"?

>>50522310
Just pick a companion with the power to turn you into a little girl.

>>50525399
Looking good!

>>50525399
I'd suggest adding an annoying "WIP WIP WIP" bluemark in the future.

Do any of the punishments give points? Otherwise why pick them?
I Need You and Mixed Signals looks great, didn't look at anything else.
How does I Want You actually work? You are easily seduced, or you can't push someone off you?

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>>50524606
I was somewhat recently provided with a newer version of that CYOA. Here you go.

>>50525361
You're basically asking people to discount all their life experiences. Of course they wouldn't believe.

The fox/grape thing doesn't even work in this case since it was stated that they had been in relationships before.

>>50524582
Archdemon. I like all the in Archdemon but only some of the girls in Archangel.

>>50525512
That one was just some anon photoshopping the version number.

>>50525544
It does have some actual changes to the 1.0.4 currently posted (and also the one I've got saved).

>>50525527
>You're basically asking people to discount all their life experiences.
Not really. All their shitty, irredeemable relationships may well have been just that. Surely a person can admit that there are relationships they haven't seen before, and then consider what is being said?

>The fox/grape thing doesn't even work in this case since it was stated that they had been in relationships before.
It does, because they've never been in a rewarding, worthwhile relationship before. It is easier to believe that they don't exist than to admit that it is their fault and the fault of everyone they know that they were unable to manage a relationship that wasn't pure trash; or even worse, to accept that it might have been no one's fault at all.

>>50525512
Did the archdemon roommate CYOA get updated too, or is 1.05 still the latest version of it?

>>50525578
>>50425998

>>50525399
Looks good, though I'm not sure how I feel about the genra shifting from "slightly convenient benefits" to "you can fly and superhumanly regenerate and immortality and whatnot". If you decide to go forward with that, perhaps you should do a second pass over the original perks?

"school filled with other anons"
Dump them into st. margarita gakuen. bwahaha. (or that one less gorey and painful image set who's name escapes me at the moment, translation group was named LOL)

>>50525591
>>50525598
On further inspection, the so-called 1.0.6 appears identical to 1.0.3. Ah well.

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>>50523982
>>50523993
>>50524013
Attributes:
STR: [][][][][][][][][] DEF: [][][][][][][][][] AGI: [][][][]
INT: [][][] SKL: [][][]
THR: [][][][][][][][][] TRI: 90
>Class
Warrior
>Blessing
+3 Stat Points
>Skills
Physical:
Tier 1: Tempered, Toughness, Martial Arts
Tier 2: Willpower, Flurry, Athletics
Tier 3: Enhanced, Shockwaves
Magical:
Tier 1: Fire
Tier 2: Arcane
Spiritual:
Tier 1: One With Nature, Bloodlust
Tier 2: Monster Within
Tier 3: Hybrid
Weaponry:
Tier 1: Blunt Arms
Tier 2: Enchantment
Tier 3: Stamina
Etherial:
Tier 1: Indomitable
Tier 2: Blessed
Tier 3: Healing
>Monsters
Hydra, Phoenix, Behemoth
>Persona
Exempt
>Resources
Forge, Library, Alchemy
Healing, Training, Scavenging
Low

The classic HealBrute: stronk as hell, nearly impossible to kill, 50/50 chance of being on fire, voluntarily or otherwise.
Also perfectly content to live among the monsters, brawling with them for fun and just, kinda, hanging around. Is more a high-powered helper to someone else's hunt than an active hunter himself, probably much to the irritation of his nominator.

>>50522004
First Aid kit
Field Rations
Binoculars
Rifle

Einar to teach me the ropes
Max for companion and teammate

Dinosaurs to Ride on
Tanuma for enemies

Spring of Life

>B

from this thread >>50520243

Charlotte as the damsel
Sword of the Templars to rape Aztecs
Noble revolt

>>50525361
Perhaps the same could be said of you. I doubt anyone could change your mind, either.
"There's someone out there for everyone" or "You'll want to have kids eventually", these things are well-meaning but twisted.
Believing in truly good relationships is one thing, but spreading these sentiments ultimately just increases the misery in this world.

But enough talk, have at you!

>>50525721
>I doubt anyone could change your mind, either.
You can prove something exists easily by only confirming it for yourself once; you can't prove something doesn't exist in the same way.

How could a subterranean cave dweller convince someone who had seen the sun that light didn't exist? Seeing a hundred rotten apples doesn't prove that fresh apples are only fiction.

>>50525764

You're basically saying that something that you have right now was easy for you to get, and therefore it's easy for them to get.

>>50525764
Though light may not exist, only the phenomena we observe and assume to be light because it has so far behaved in the way predictable to what we assume light should behave by the tradition of the phenomena's behavior exists, and we have no reason not to not call it light. The reality of the situation is that this phenomena might be something else entirely different, and light as we have established our understanding of it may simply not actually be real.
Mole Men: 1, Anon: 0 #molepower

>>50525801
Nope, just that it exists. It may very well be hard for them to get.
>>50525833
We named the phenomena, "light". Whatever it is or turns out to be, that's what "light" is. If it turns out that it behaves differently than we thought, then "light" is different than we thought.

>>50525856

Still, at the end of the day, I don't need to show you proof that something is the way it is, because your belief isn't going to change that. And yet here I see people shouting about proof like it's end all be all of fucking everything.

>>50525856
For all you know the phenomena of light could just be mass hysteria with an incredibly accurate and completely coincidental depiction of what our actually lightless universe looks like?

>>50525688
>exempt
Kys

>>50525875
ah can't, I only do blunt and burning damage and I'm mostly immune to both.

>>50523982
Orchid Bee- Named for his bright blue/green Beetle Armor, and the Sting his weapons inflict
Hunter

>5 Str
>4 Def
>7 Agi
>2 Int
>10 Skill

Blessing: Behemoth Monster Soul (Healing blood)

SKILLS
>Physical
Martial Arts +1 Skill (1)
Toughness +1 Def (1)
Flurry +1 Agi (1)
Athletics +1 Agi (1)
Enhanced +1 Str (1)
Shockwaves +1 Str (1)

>Spiritual
One with Nature +1 Def (1)
Monster Within (1)
Fleet Footed (1)
Bloodlust +1 Str (1)


>Weaponry
Bladed Arms +1 Skill (1)
Ancient Weapon +1 Skill (1)- Greatsword
Enchantment +1 Int (1)- Lightning Imbued
Markmanship +1 Agi (1)
Self repair (1)
Stamina (1)
Charge up +1 Skill (1)
Ancient Will +3 skill (3)


>LICENSES

Ancient Desert- 5 Threat 65 Tribute
Sunken Ruins- 4 Threat 50 Tribute

>Resources
Forge (-10) to make Armor from the beasts I kill
Market (-10) Supplies
Healing (-5)
Scavenging (-5)
Bar (-5)
Hot Spings (-5)
Bounty (-5) To work in the off hunting season
Inn accommodations (-10)

Servant (-15) A female Orc from the Desert tribes
Appearance (-5) Made to be intensely attractive
Attitude (-5) Ara Ara
Knowledge (-5)

Total- 85 tribute with 30 to spare

Fairly quick, stupidly skilled Hunter wielding a lightning greatsword, a Lightning longbow and his fists.
Fond of Water based hunts due to his enchantments, but also fond of taking down big game in the desert, where he won his Orc bride from a Chieftain during a drunken brawl.
During his Wild Hunt he took down a Behemoth, taking its soul, and precious ability to heal using its own blood.
Spends his off days getting drunk and brawling, Hunting bounties, or pummeling his Orc wife into oblivion.
He doesn't care much for laying traps for beasts, instead he usually tries to bait it into attempting to eat him, so he can lodge his sword in it's throat and go to pound town on its jaw

Would probably team up with >>50524609

>>50525871
What are you talking about here, exactly? Are you drunk (no offense)?

>>50525927

I really don't think anyone has ever been offended because someone asked them if they were drunk.

I'm just saying, people ask for proof when it comes to everything. Like you said, it exists, whatever it may be, but people will not believe it until they see proof that it exists. They just don't realize that their belief doesn't change the truth. Kind of like a man blind from birth not believing that color exists.

>>50525963
>I really don't think anyone has ever been offended because someone asked them if they were drunk.
Happens all the time. To drunks, mostly.

Proof is important, where it can be produced. Why wouldn't you ask for proof? The other guy is right, something is off about the way you are speaking. Are you high, perhaps?

I thought this was about CYOAs, not the nature of the fucking universe.

>>50525994
welcome to the cyoa thread, where the first 50 posts have cyoas, OC and builds, and the next 150 posts are arguments about philosophy, politics or the culling.

>>50525992

Again, you don't need to show people proof. It's not exactly the best way we as a species determine the truth, but what can you do. If you tell them something true, and they don't believe it, that's fine. Doesn't change anything. That's all I'm saying.

>>50526025
That's one of the nice things about proof. You can tell them something true, prove it, and they might even believe you. Going from believing a lie to believing the truth can make a big positive change in a person's life, you know.

>>50526050

Belief is irrelevant. Take the example of the blind man. Regardless of his belief, color still exists.

>>50526066
Existence of colour doesn't mean anything to us by itself; it's a neutral attribute of the world. Belief impacts how entire lives are lived.

If a man thinks medicine will kill him instead of cure him, he might not take it. If a man thinks he is not sick, he might not get treatment and die also.

Facts are facts. But our minds make decisions based on beliefs we construct about the world, decisions fuel action, and actions have outcomes. Different beliefs, different decisions, different outcomes.

It's worth looking for proof and knowing the difference.

>>50526110

Yes, well, there is such a thing as a wrong opinion. Not so much when it comes to facts and the truth. Those determine how things work in existence. It really is a shame when people refuse to believe the truth. Seems to me like belief isn't such a good thing and needs to be removed or something like that. Then again, it's not like truth is valued all that much in modern day society.

>>50525963
>I really don't think anyone has ever been offended because someone asked them if they were drunk.
And this is where you ignore the person, because they are either lying, underaged, or an idiot.

>>50526173
If people don't believe in a truth, they can't make use of the truth. Do you really not understand all this, or are you just messing with me?

>>50526206
Dude, read their post again. They are out of their mind at the moment, I guarantee it.

>>50526206

Hey, it's their choice not to believe, and not to make use of it. I suppose it's good to be cautious though, but this entire process of finding out what the truth is is inefficient, sadly.
The problem appears to be at the very beginning of this.

>>50526215

I just haven't slept in a while.

>>50526252
>haven't slept in a while
Like I said, out of your mind.

Stop philosophizing and go to bed.

>>50526274

Do you seriously have a bed time? Have you never stayed up or whatever?

>>50526304
When you say that you haven't slept in a while it's generally assumed that it's been at least about 30 hours or so, otherwise it wouldn't be worth mentioning.

>>50526304
Sure I do. And when I stay up long enough, I'm temporarily out of my mind.

>>50526304
If you didn't have a bed time, there wouldn't be anything to stay up past.

>>50526297

Only if you join me ;)

>>50526329

You seem to be pretty good at guessing.

>>50526332


I am turly sorry for your lots.

>>50526350

I see. I was under the assumptions that only those who are underaged had a bed time.

>>50526369
Bed time is whenever you go to bed, silly.

>tfw anxiety induced insomnia for the third day
>tfw you finally manage to drift off and then the sun comes up and you wake up barely thirty minutes later

please fucking kill me.

But speaking of which, do we have an insomnia CYOA?

>>50526445

Well yeah. I don't have a specific time. I go to sleep when I'm tired, and feel like sleeping, just like I eat when I'm hungry and piss when I feel like I need to.

>>50526369
The underaged, and people with jobs or school that they don't want to fail at. So basically everyone except neets.

>>50526468

Just goes to show. Sleep is for the weak.

>>50526457
So when you get tired and feel like sleeping, it's bedtime. If you stay up past that, you're up past your bedtime. Pretty basic stuff, Holmes.

>>50526512

That happens every single day for me. I mean, I'm doing something in the middle of the night and just feel really tired and shit, go outside for a bit and then It's like I just woke up. Once I get so tired that I can barely move my limbs, that's when I know it's time to go to sleep. 30+ hours in, still not feeling like that. I think I'll be fine for at least a few more hours.

>>50522015
My fetishes are personal power and tacky icons.

>Penis
>>All Upgrades
>>Pillar*2 18 +
The majestic tool of a majestic creature.

>Alluring Foundation
>Gifted Chest
To truly show is to truly have.

>Quasicosmic 16
A font of purest energy, the Bride crackles from within.
>Metapsychological 17
This power seeps into thought and deed, scorching away doubt and hesitation alike.

>Regal Visage +

>Lactation 16
>>All upgrades 13 +
>Ejaculation 12
>>All upgrades 9 +
>Gate to Ecstacy (uretha)
>>Plush 8 +
>Gate to Ecstasy (nipples)
>>Plush 7 +
>Commanding Mein 8 + -
Power is addictive to those who only get a taste, and those without true power can only ever taste.

>Brooding
>>Conditional Emergence 7 +
>Humanoid - +
>>Hybrid 6 +
Though power can be gained in life, it can only add to a fortuitous birth.

>Primordial Woad 5 +
>Rite of Flesh Union 3 +
>Regal Array +
Power can be amplified by that which you wear or do.

>Thrall Horde 4
Power cares not for the actions of others, and their potentials may feed mine.
>Auramoth, the Gleaner 1 +
>>Shared Resource 2
>>Gender Reassignment 1
She gleans from others, and I glean from her - at least until I desire all her power.

>Widow's Hunger 0 +
Power is wasted on those who do not use it properly, and waste is unacceptable.

Breeding
Status
Allure

At least 5 in all stats, plus whatever I eat or sorcer up. That's "high", right?

Can we eat companions?
How much do we get from them? 1 per? Half of theirs?
How much of a faux pas is it to eat someone we don't fully own - A full 's worth? What about if a Descending bride had that sort of fetish?

On a less fetishistic note, the standard Specialties are basically Neoteny/Mein/Atmosphere without the bonus point - making Synergism mechanically best.

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>>50526455
We've had a couple of fear related and suspense ones but I don't recall an insomnia one specifically yet.

Going to hope I'm not in the same boat up an hour before dawn, but sorry to hear you can't sleep much atm.

>>50525904
Always happy to work with another hunter, but are you sure we'd match up in styles?
Guess I could use you as bait if it comes to that but I don't know if you'd want to fight drug-addled dragons and the like. Guess we might run into each other in the desert or the inn either way.

>>50527100
Of course 4chan deleted the symbols.
I had a neat little card suit thing going on, with spades representing Favor, clubs being Pedigree, diamonds as Status, and hearts as Allure.
The stats ended up at 6 Breeding, 5 Status, and 6 Allure.

Also, there wasn't enough space to say that you should multiply the points by 2.5 so you have a nice round 50 starting Favor, and round the more useful purchases (1 Favor/1 Stat without drawbacks, mostly) up, and the less powerful ones (3 Favor for two stats, Widow's Hunger and other 1:1 trades with disadvantages) down

>>50522015
Finally managed to come up with a build. Last night I kept becoming very tired and disinterested all of a sudden for some reason.

>Genitalia
Vagina
-Lubrication
-Plush (1)
Gate to Ecstasy (Anus)
-Lubrication
-Plush (1)
-Reproductive Channel (1)
Gate to Ecstasy (Mouth)
-Plush (1)
Penis
-Flare
-Prehensile (1)
-Pillar (1)
Penis (1)
-Flare
-Prehensile (1)
-Pillar (1)

>Shape
Alluring
>Chest
Gifted
>Influences
Xenosubstantial
Metapsychological
>Face
Seductive

>Flourishes
Ouroboros Metabolism (1)
Ejaculation (1)
-Fortifying (1)
Carnal Atmosphere (+1)

>Progenation
Synergism

>Dowry
Lavender Grimoire (3)
Nuptial Torc (+1)
Regal Array

>Bonds
Sensual Ritualists (3)
Auramoth, the Gleamer (3)
-Shared Resource (+1)

>Urges
Throne's Shadow (+1)

Pedigree: 5
Status: 1
Allure: 7

My form is selfishly, perhaps vainly, human in overall form though the embellishments should be pleasing to Teitat. I did include some alien matter in my creation but fearing its influence on my appearance I pushed it deep within my body. I appreciate the benefits but the unworldly starstuff is now so fundamental a part of my construction that it affects my mind as well. I suppose we'll see what effect that has on me.

I am not exactly a traditional mother of Teitat's children, another feeble mortal revulsion holding sway over my form, but Teitat's blessing allow me to be of use to his other brides. A task I am more than happy to assist with in whatever manner possible.

Ended up being 16 base favor. I feel like you could stand to go up to 20 to start. 15-ish will emphasize more focused and variable builds I think but there's enough small point options to make those extra points useful and fun.

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>>50478145
You still haven't said what the CYOA is missing, or what would be in a hypothetical update.
Beyond that, the CYOA was not nearly successful enough to warrant an update.

>>50522015
20 points

>Genitalia
Penis

>Body
Modest

>Chest
Soft

>Influences
Kleptozoological, Oversaturated (19)
Pseudodaevanescent (18)
Quasi Cosmic (16)
Xenosubstantial (15)

>Face
Primal
Chakra Eye (14)
Elder Gaze (13)

>Ejaculate (12)
Fortifying (11)
Altruistic (12)

>Misc
Perfect Neoteny (13)

>Strategy
Brooding
Conditional Emergence
Nesting Instinct (14)

>Specialty
Implement
Engine (13)

>Treasure
Lavender Grimoire (10)
Primordial Word (9)
Celestial Charms (8)
Argent Spark + Blaze (5)
Primal Array

>Bonds
Sensual Ritualists (2)
Bonded Bride (1)

I guess I'll take Addictive Ejaculate here as well. (0)

Pedigree: 10
Status:1
Allure: 0

1/2

>>50523982
The Fisherman
Noble
+3 stat points, all in strength

physical- tempered, toughness, willpower, athletics
magical-water, frost, lightning, arcane
spiritual-bloodlust, soul spirit, killer instinct
weaponry-marksmanship, enchantment, ancient weapon (spear), stamina, all-seeing eye, charge up, spine weaponry
5 strength
3 defense
6 agility
4 intelligence
6 skill

bounties-tiger, leviathan, kraken
forge, library, market, healing, training, scavenging, diner, bar, club, middle-class housing
A build that focuses on hunting mostly seamonsters
>get a leviathan soul spirit mount, ride it's back out into the sea
>use all-seeing eye zoom + killer instinct x-ray to find targets
>drag them closer to the surface with water manipulation and use frost magic to slow them down and prevent escape
>charge up, lightning enchant, jump, extendo-spear go
>poke
>extendo spear retract
>double jump back onto mount, repeat
I also put tigers on there because I figured water magic would reduce their difficulty a bit and I could hunt that while I'm learning the ropes
wish I had higher defense, but eh.

>>50527588
>Those stats

Nobody really wants to fuck you and you hold next to no status at all, but your seed is incredibly potent so people seek you out nonetheless. Then they get hooked on your addictive cum. Interesting.

>>50527588
(2/2)

>Genitalia
Vagina
Musculature
Embellishments
Plush * 3 (17)

>Form
Alluring

>Chest
Soft

>Influences
Psudeodaevanescent (16)
Quasicosmic (14)

>Face
Regal
Chakra Eye (13)
Elder Gaze (12)
Commanding Mien (13)

>Strategy
Pupation
Metamorphosis (12)

>Specialty
Multitudinous
Swarm Heart (11)

>Treasure
Lavender Grimoire (9)
Primordial Woad (8)
Abyssal Ink (7)
Celestial Charm (6)
Argent Spark + Blaze (3)
Regal Array

>Bonds
Knights-In-Crimson (0)

Pedigree: 1
Status: 10
Allure: 3

>>50527671
Well, then there's this one. Would pretty much be speaking for me all the time and corralling people into helping me produce children. Not super sure how to increase this one's allure though; it seems like it would need to be a fair bit higher to be useful.

>>50527139
I'm fully happy being bait, being as gung-ho as I am I could use someone to yell at me if I'm running into an ambush.

>>50524862

How else is Chaq supposed to fertilize her eggs? I can't do it! It's a unfortunate consequence of being forcibly married to a dark God who then gives you to a spider-Goddess......

>>50527245

>Allure 7

I'm jealous! I was going o have 7 Allure to, but I decided to go with Regal Face and Array instead of Alluring cuz I figure Angels are regal, and I still have Alluring Shape and some other stuff to make sure I'm still hot. I kinda wanted Brood Mother Shape, but I wasn't sure I wanted to spend the favor and I'm not so sure it'd be right for a Angel. I think 5 Allure is still good though.

>>50527588

>Chakra Eye
>Elder Gaze
>Argent Spark + Blaze

I think those are best choices if you want to grow your magic quickly and become like a sorceress or minor Goddess/God yourself faster.

Hoo boy, I gotta stop going to sleep several hours after I post something Tackling the inbox...

>>50524625
Tiamat's goal is to ensure the dominance of the chromatic dragons over the metallic dragons and the rest of the world. I think you're replying to the wrong game, but I thought I should answer you anyway.

>>50525422
Corrected the bad prefix. "devascent" is a neologism meaning roughly "possessing the essence of devas." All of these words are hardcore neologistic nonsense. Do you have another made-up word I could use to replace the one I got?

>Synergism
I bumped the cost of synergism to 1 favor. I was meaning to do that already, but I forgot. Think I should bump it up to two?

>>50528200

You should post a new CYOA and just go immediately to bed after so you don't have to answer the tons of questions people ask.

>>50527791
>Argent Spark/Blaze

The Argent power you get from Teiatat is a nice weapon, but you're not going to be able to cultivate it in any way. The Argent aspect is hidden and mysterious. Even as a Bride, if you don't purchase Argent options it's not likely you'd ever see anything of the Argent aspect in the duration of your existence.

>>50528200
I didn't know you were SDA, but okay, I'll try again smug-meister:
Is there an explanation beyond "otherwise you don't need to choose anything, you can get everything you want" for why [insert name of deity in your cyoa] doesn't allow us infinite points, when [insert name of deity in your cyoa] is obviously powerful enough and it wouldn't make sense for [insert name of deity in your cyoa] to make us anything but the most perfect of sluts when that is their objective to begin with?

>>50528268

>Bride

Can we be called something else if we've got dicks because that word is making me uncomfortable.

>>50528293
Since when having a dick has stopped one from being a bride?

>>50528343
Since never. Other anon is just bein sensitive.

>>50528343

It's just doesn't suit someone with a dick.

And I forgot the word for the male equivalent for a bride or whatever

>>50528293
Yeah, the author should really be inclusive to people of ALL sexes (of which there is more than 2!). You need to add trigger warnings and proper pronouns!

>>50528393

Actually there are only 2.

I don't know if hermaphrodites count though.

>>50528362
>>50528356
It's "groom". But bride is perfectly suitable here. You're a breeder-bitch in that CYOA, regardless of gender.

Make no mistake, the eldritch deity that owns your dick is owner of the house here.

>>50528411
SOMEONE CALL THE TRIGGER POLICE BECAUSE THIS SHIT IS NOT OKAY
I CAN'T DO IT, I AM LITERALLY SHAKING

>>50528288
Teiatat dosen't want sluts. Teiatat wants automatic monster-making machines. Of course, I've shifted the context of the question without actually answering it. Who not make infinitely-powered machines?
1: investment and interest. You're basically livestock. Teiatat gives you precisely as much as he/she cares to

2:portability
The metaphysically "bigger" you are, the harder it is to get you where you need to go. If a cult needs a lot of monsters, it's cheaper to send a machine to make those monsters than it is to send all the monsters they need directly. But, if you're so powerful you need a months-long ritual to appear and a certain stellar conjunction to even finction, you're not going to be very useful.

>>50528293
>Uncomfortable
Well, I think that's part of the goal, but do you have a suggestion

>>50522015
Should I come up with multiple titles, a gender-neutral one, or stick with Bride?

>>50528459
Just stick with the bride, if you can't handle becoming a bride then I doubt that you will able to handle rest of the CYOA.

>>50528459
I like Bride, but maybe there's some more objectifying and neutral titles like Vessel or Breeder.

>>50528459

>machines

So why not make actual machines? I thought the flesh was weak and all that.

>>50528459
>Teiatat wants automatic monster-making machines.
You know, whenever I read that name, I see "titty-tat".

But there is a useful question here: A lot of the options imply increasing magical prowess and stealing essence here.
But much of the 'environment' isn't elucidated:
Ex. How much upward mobility is there? Are there other eldritch deities? Can you craftiness yourself into deification? And so on.

>>50528477
>>50528478

I'll stick with bride. I actually did consider Vessel already, but the objectifying would make it easier to swallow, for both male and female viewpoints. It's easy to become a breeder-bitch, if you're into that sort of thing, but getting married? That's a taller order.

>>50528200
>"devascent" is a neologism meaning roughly "possessing the essence of devas."
I see.
>Do you have another made-up word I could use to replace the one I got?
Nope, sorry.
>>50528459
>Should I come up with multiple titles, a gender-neutral one, or stick with Bride?
Bride seems fine to me, but you do you.
>>50528486
>I thought the flesh was weak and all that.
IIRC there's more than one option that basically makes you no longer flesh-and-blood (be it in part or entirely).

>>50528459
Can you answer the questions I asked in >>50527100 >>50527231?
Also, if anything sticks out as interesting about the build, go ahead and say it.

>>50528459
>You're basically livestock.
If he wants me to give the best monsters, he would give me infinite points.
>months-long ritual to appear
When is this stated? What makes me "harder to summon" if I have more power? Surely [insert name of diety] is powerful enough to handwave that away?
It's your cyoa but I can't gloss over the fact that the point system makes no sense.

>>50528488
>Environment
That's the next bit I'm working on

>Upward mobility
Inside the Brides there's an elaborate pecking order and side-factions on top of that. This is abstracted to your status. Maybe I should add a politics section.

>Deification
You're already a god/dess at square one, even if nobody worships you

>Other Elder Powers
Yes, yes there are.

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>>50523982
>>50523993
>>50524013
I am going to tweak/small update this and have already thought of a few big things that I'd like to get your opinions on.

Mostly Magical and Weaponry T4 skills will see buffs. But all skill trees will see tweaks/minor changes in wording, etc.

Magical
>Gravity Warp/Time Warp
Combine them into Warp. Can do both, but removes the +3 Agility.
>NEW SKILL
Going to keep this one a secret for the update.

Weaponry
>Self-Repair
Will replace it with something new. Any suggestions?

Ethereal
>Ascension
Remaking it so it's clarified and more worthwhile to get.
>Psionic
Since Telekineses is a lot like Gravity Warp, I think Psionic is a little out of its place. Maybe replace it with a whole new ability more relevant to the Ethereal Tree.

Monster
>Behemoth
Will get full regeneration, limbs included.
>Hydra
Will replace the Hydra skill with a breath ability.

Events
More events, and adding some places of interest, maybe celebrations. Any suggestions?

Culling
Here to stay, but will get more clarification.

>>50524015
Never posted them publicly. I have only shared them with some other CYOA authors in my group.

>>50524533
This won't happen. >>50524554 explained it well.

>>50528578
>Weaponry
>Self-Repair
>Will replace it with something new. Any suggestions?

A skill that increases the range and/or reach of the ancient weapon by a marginal amount.

>>50528618
That's Spine Weaponry.

>>50528526
Well, I tried.

>>50527100
>score 5+
That's definitely above average from what i've seen, but not quite to the focused builds

>eating companions
If they're named or otherwise unique, that's probably a no-no. They represent rare resources, and the other Brides might take action if you waste them.

If a descending bride had hunger, she would never eat her bondmate, but she might override an order not to consume a given partner.

>Budget tweaks
I might take a look at that.

>>50528578

>This won't happen

But then how am I supposed to determine whether or not an ability is worth getting? I also wanted to ask some other stuff that I've probably forgotten.

Like, is there anything stopping players from killing each other not during the culling? Also, you've got bounties for biomes instead of individual monsters, but which biomes contain which monsters? Can we get that cleared up?

>>50528578
The only issue i've ever had with the culling is the dark desires line. It gives the sick and the mad too much of a blank check. I'd prefer it if you'd make it clear the boss prefers to reward risk and innovation. That's just a suggestion though

>>50528553
>Maybe I should add a politics section.
Definitely. Delicious eldritch court politics sweetened with sex and redolent of ambition's spice.

>even if nobody worships you
But speaking of, what's Teiatat schedule and future plans look like?
How much Grey Eminence capacity might there be for a Bride?
Or even the forbidden... subsumation?

>>50527246
POST PAGE 2

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>50528710
Do you have something against page 3, or is there some other reason why you're only asking for one other page of a three-page CYOA?

>>50528781
He was using the foot in the door technique. Once he got the second page, he could demand the third as well without seeming unreasonable.

>>50528781
>>50528804
I forgot there was a page 3

please post both

please

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>>50528826
Since you said please this time, I'll post them for you.

>>50528644
Forgot about spine weaponry because nobody ever takes that t4 skill.

How about a skill that allows you to craft high quality ammo from near any material you can find, for your ancient weapon?

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>>50528687
>Schedule and planse
Same thing we do every aeon, Yog-Sothoth, try to take over the universe!

>Grey Eminince
Not gonna lie, I had to look that term up.
Each Realm has its own adventure. The Labrynth of Sighs is a world-palace with factional politics at the surface and erotic dungeon-diving below.

A stronghold is a city or a world where Teiatat has a strong presence. Pure politics

The Cult option is where Brides are few and you get to play goddess... behind enemy lines. There's a few flavoring options, though.

I think you can play the power behind the throne nicely in any of the scenarios.

>>50528781
Page 3 is mostly useless companions to corrupt. No real reason to post it.

>>50528654

Well, I made it to a day and a half, but now I must sleep. I expect and answer to this when I awaken.

>>50528578
Change the culling to be an entire season.

>>50526534
Then you're probably in that anon's zone of "out of your mind" without realizing it.

>>50528912

But what if I'm looking for a future waifu to marry?

>>50528931

Yeah, that's me 2 posts above you. I'll just probably wake up in the middle of the night again and never fix my terrible schedule.

I don't particularly like sleeping.

>>50529000
Yeah, avoiding it to exhaustion was a pretty good clue to me. Only someone content to put down their burdens and hope for tomorrow is comfortable going to sleep at a reasonable time.

>>50523982
Noble - final stats:
st 2
de 4
ag 10
in 3
sk 5

+1 skill point

Magical:
Catalysts,
Arcane
blink
Time Warp

Spiritual:
One with nature
Monster within
bloodlust
Siphon
Twin Divide

Ethereal:
Pocketing
Blessed
Healing
Wings

Wings, time warp, siphon and twin soul should make for a powerful combination. Shame I can't take ranged weaponry. My strategy will be to twin and surround my enemies, drain them and stay out of range while sniping. I'm actually much more concerned about the culling than the monsters. Hopefully I can get enough practice on a bow by then to make this build work as it's intended.

Deep Ruins, Ancient Forest (75)

Resources:
Training (ranged weaponry) -5
forge -10
Market -10
library -10
scavenging -5
Diner -5
hot springs -5
club -5
inn -10

>>50528687
>subsumation
Is this some kind of euphemism for vore? If so, I'm glad you at least acknowledge how disgusting it is.

>>50528910
This is me...
>>50528687
Forgot to address
>subsumation
By this, I believe you mean that you merge with Teiatat somehow? I wasn't planning on including that, I'm not even sure how. That's really more of an endgame thing.

>>50529063
It means taking over the bitch's throne, you silly boy.

>>50528578
>Will replace it with something new. Any suggestions?
Critical Strike - adept at finding and targeting vital spots and finding gaps in armor.

Also, please balance License dangers and ideally add more License dangers. Or the ability to take two License dangers with a maximum of 5 Skulls.

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>>50527246
>only one build
That is so sad.

>Changes
-Unearthly (cost : 7 | H+1, S+0. D+2)
-Loli (cost : 2 | H+0, S-1, D+1)
-Brainiac (cost : 6 | H+0, S+3, D-1)

I was subjected to an experimental rejuvenation procedure and the results came out...wrong. In retrospect it's obvious that attempting to fill the blanks left by cosmic radiation leaves a new code in place, and the body must follow suit. I was lucky really, 1 in 10,000 experimental cases lucky as experience soon demonstrated. Broken down immune systems, sudden mass changes, entire systems cannibalizing themselves, some bodies just giving up and bursting into flames. As for me, I only lost age, weight, height and...some other parts I'd rather not talk about. After a lengthy investigation and a looong courtroom ball, I was finally decommissioned as a I turned 13, again. No longer a ward of the state, I had to look into a means of supporting myself. Well, technically I'm owed millions in reparations, but that company dissolved as soon as the first cases began vomiting their guts out. Being naturally lazy, I decided to settle for a cushy job as a teacher in some backwater community. The requirements were lax, pay was OK and accommodation was included. Again, in retrospect, I should have realized these people were as shifty and lazy as I was...

>Subjects :
-Chemistry (cost : 0 | H+1 )
-Philosophy(Languages+Math) (cost : 2 | H+1, S+1)

Just teaching a little something I picked up during isolation ward.

>Club : Tea Party
>Dormitory : Jock

To be fair, all interviews were conducted online. No other job would take me thanks to my unique physiology. So when they put me in charge of some backwater jocks I'm certain they fully expected me to belt them when they stepped outta line. Oh well, what's done is done. Now how will I clean up this mess.

>>50529110
Google gives me results for "subsumation" instead, which would be "to include or place within something larger"

>>50529167
>Bonuses
-Educated (cost : 6 | S+3)
-Pheromones (cost : 6 | H+3)
-Personal Assistant (cost : 2)
-Total : Halo = 6 | Success = 6 | Deviant = 2
I've found that people are oddly compliant whenever I talk softly. Maybe it's some sort of condescending attitude born out of desperation for status quo. Or it could just be my apparent age. I hired one of the students for odd jobs, as I can no longer reach the upper shelves without a stepladder.

>Challenges
-Occupied
eh, just fold the Tea Party club with any other really. A warm cup of masala chai is always welcome in any situation.
-Chad
Not even a week in and they are already looking for a replacement. That's reassuring. As for this prude, straight out of collegue and starving for stable pay. Maybe I'll set him up with a cheerleader or something, make a huge scandal out of it. Better you than me.
-Mellie
This might be my way out of this dump. Her family is new money and rather despised on their circle. If I could mold her to be presentable and able to land a rich husband she might hire me later on as a nurse/private tutor for her own kids.

>>50528553
re: status stuff. An idea I've been mulling over after reading >>50527588 is that high amounts of Pedigree should buy some amount of Status and Allure. Similarly, high amounts of Allure should buy some amount of Status. Naturally, they'd be different kinds of Status; having status due to your breeding potential is very different from having status due to your regality and bearing. Actually, it's also possible that very low stats might negatively affect your other stats. I don't know if you want to go to that level of detail and de-abstraction but it's an idea at least.

>>50529126
That's pretty much what the Skill stat is already. Maybe just give flat armor piercing or something?

>>50528578
>Weaponry
>Self-Repair
>Will replace it with something new. Any suggestions?

Crit or "Phantom Strike" aka a Multistrike.

Add in self repair to the base of the Ancient Weapon

If culling is here to stay, Make another page to Elaborate on the Event, who we face, what it takes to survive etc.

>>50529194
Competing with other brides over a resource, like a mate, necessitates an exercise of all three stats.

Pedigree is results and the attraction that comes with it.
Status is influence and the attraction that comes with that
Allure is pure attraction... but might outweigh direct results or political perks when libido enters the equation.

I'm not talented enough to turn this into a rules-lite RPG, but it's rather close already

>>50528578
Change the cyoa in such a way that makes Bomb Guy's build complete unviable.

>>50529212
No, the skill stat is attack speed and, well, skill. This is more about finding vulnerable spots and finding the right moment to hit those to do more damage than your Power would suggest.

>>50529244
isn't multistrike a lot like flurry?

>>50529194
Dagnabbit!
>>50529259
is me

Im an anon in a convo in a different thread, that's why I keep dropping the handle. I'm just too stupid to pick it back up again.

>>50529278
That seems kind of mean spirited anon.

>>50529278
Okay it's about time I found out: Is it just one guy jerking this bomb dude off? I get the impression it is but I'd like to know for certain. I didn't bother reading his explanations.