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Made a character in the "If..." cyoa, man does one become powerful (or maybe it says something about the world). I've 1,395 points left I don't know how to spend, might just put all of them into Stats.

Human, Mage.
Stats: Con/Health 10, Int 20, End 2, Str 1, Dex 10, Fai 20.
Equipment/Misc: Cursed Daggers x2, Fading Light, Memory Fragment x2
Magic: Curse Gear, Invisibility, Cursed Blast, Greater Blast, Homing Blast
Light: Antidote, Heal, Recover, Light's Revival

Companions: Ashinen & Ulseim, Frijeta, Chalinedice.

Aiming to continue the study of curse magic, and maybe get a dragon ally while we're at it?
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>>50113771
Did you make any changes to Pride?
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>>50114116
Aside from the font size and the powers being bolded, no.

All chosen can now take two perks, though.
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>>50113892
What happens if you ask Lady A to make you as much money as possible as an individual task?
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>>50114205
It'll won't yield a net profit
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>>50113905
Did this build yesterday, but I'll post it again

>Lust
>No Companion
>Aura of Want
>Black Cane
>Silk Sheet

Having the silk sheet kind of limits my mobility. Walking the world as a debacherous drifter seems good, but as the Silk Sheet can cure any infections I get, I need to be around it. Exceptions for situations where I can use the Black Cane, of course.

I feel like Fluidity II is a bit redundant and Immunity doesn't offer actual immunity to diseases, so it's also not worth it. Smooth Talker and Aura of Want really advance your interests. I feel like I'm naturally gifted as a smooth talker, so Aura of Want will suffice for some non verbal sociatel nudging
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Posting a fresh classic

Despair, for you will never know the happiness that the Chill Zone would bring
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>>50113771
Sloth
accept lillian
Extra Boon - Stasis
Black Cane

Lay about while Lillian brings in the dough. Exercise maybe an hour a day over 6 or 7 hours, getting /fit/ very slowly but never losing my gains.
Can teleport around - useful since travel might denature me, and it would be hard to cross borders into/out of barcelona.

Tell virtues to leave me alone, or they're murdering someone in cold blood. Tell sins they can be in charge as long as they don't ask me to do anything.
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Hi, update on my Trap CYOA:

http://pastebin.com/hQt1L90w

I'm thinking of just finishing it here as i can't think of more genres to add, but I do want more. if you have any, please tell me. I'm also thinking of just changing the name to flat out 'Feminization CYOA'
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Did we ever find the source of these?
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>>50115210
is this going to be a point system or do you just have to pick a certain number of options per each category? also, i was wondering what images you were thinking of using on this cyoa.
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>>50115038
>Log Cabin
>Touch me, touch me

Giving up 4 item choices so I can have Outdoors and the Custom Companion option

8 left....
>Ocean Man, Lewd, /fa/, /ck/, 200% Comfy, /fit/, Normie Station, Gamin PC

As I stated above, I choose Custom Character and Outdoors.

>Abilities
Lesbify (16), Redesign (14), Interbot (13), Lasting Effects (11), Reality Convert (9), Attractive Forces (8), Charm Cognition (6), Machine Learning (4), Believe it (3), Stylish (2), Aether Orchestra (1), Size Up/Down (0)
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>>50115388
Points for some general options for others. the less options i have to account for points, the easier it is to make it balanced.

Images wise, I was planning to use Pixiv mostly, but i might ask here for a few things, all anime though. Why'd you ask?
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>>50115459
just wonderin'. i'm sure it will turn out well.
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>>50115494
Thank you! And thank you for posting a cyoa
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>>50115494

>>50115512
no problem
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Thinking of making an Imperial Guard Commander CYOA. Got the base concept down, and would love some input.

The main resource is Requisition. It is used to get more troops, weapons, support, ect.
You start with three squads, as a platoon leader, and can use Requisition to outfit them in different ways, from supply lines, to weapons, to squads and specialists added to your platoon.

Your goal is to create a unit that can handle the tasks and missions that end up thrown at you. What you get is determined by your posts number, with the last two numbers detailing what mission you're sent on by uncaring commanders.

To succeed, you need to balance a number or stats:
Ranged Strength (Given by your number of troops, their weapons, training, and doctrines)
Melee Strength (Given similar to Ranged Strength, but at the opposite end of the spectrum)
Discipline (Based on your starting homeworld, doctrines, and effected by your auxillaries, like Commissars or Ratlings)
Morale (Similar to Discipline, but running parallel, with Priests and faith needed over Commissars and Whips)
Supply (How you can sustain your forces. Heavy weapons, more squads, and difficult missions can leave you needing more. A lack of Supply detracts from ALL other stats)

Additionally, certain equipment and skills have a [Target] associated with them, and are able to deal with said target, like [swarms], [tanks], and [aircraft]. Missing out on a target you'll be encountering adds 1 to the difficulty of all criteria of a mission.

In example, 1LT Anon makes his platoon three squads the same, kitted out to max, and has them each have plasma guns, sniper rifles, and missile launchers. They have a lot of Ranged Strength, and he's selected Supply Lines for extra supply.
He looks at his post numbers, and sees that he's going up against Orkz in a city fight, and they have [swarms] of gretchin and [stealth] Kommandos, with he isn't equipped to deal with. He and his unit break as morale and discipline crumble.
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Whoever posted this OC last thread pls gibbe updates, this cyoa is like a comfy dream
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>>50115581
It sounds kinda cool, though it's a bit hard to imagine. Still, I'd like to see it. OC is always good.
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>>50113247
Othello
Go
Mastermind
Cards
Risk
I wanted to go into poilitics. In Washington DC. I am a monster, a political monster. Mwhahahahaha.

Looking again, I see Dungeons and Dragons and Star Ocean: Second Story. Now if the Meta CYOA was here and I choose to double my points, I'd throw in Diablo for maximum RPG style fun.
But as it stands, my second build will be turning this CYOA into a RPG using the first two.
The three I'd take are... Othello, Go and Cards. (I'm a egotistical asswipe. I'll admit, I don't think I need a better mind.) I'd do the same plan.
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OC
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>>50116697
Oh, and please point out any typos you notice (I've already found one at the bottom (brother -> brothel) Thanks!
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>>50115581
>The main resource is Requisition. It is used to get more troops, weapons, support, ect.
Makes sense.
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You start with three squads, as a platoon leader, and can use Requisition to outfit them in different ways, from supply lines, to weapons, to squads and specialists added to your platoon.
I wouldn't call the leader of three squads a commander, but that's still good.
>Your goal is to create a unit that can handle the tasks and missions that end up thrown at you. What you get is determined by your posts number, with the last two numbers detailing what mission you're sent on by uncaring commanders.
Make the missions all different. They don't have to ALL be different in objective, like "defend x from y" but make the terrain and what they're defending different. That being said, epic battles are easy to imagine, I bet you'll think up plenty.
>all those stats
Holy fuck batman. I like my cyoas with lots of little details, but it seems like a lot of work for you. But if you can do it, then definitely do so.
>Additionally, certain equipment and skills have a [Target] associated with them, and are able to deal with said target, like [swarms], [tanks], and [aircraft]. Missing out on a target you'll be encountering adds 1 to the difficulty of all criteria of a mission.
Cool.

All in all, seems good.
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>>50116697
Sexual Release minor and Gratitude minor.

Be a loving hubbie.
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>Go
>Dominoes
>Othello
The power trio. Any follower can turn any other follower by touch, and large enough chains of people can do what they want.

You could probably do very well with just those, but it can get crazy with any two of the following powers:
>Pokemon
It's great for self-preservation, and sharing the Go power with the Pokemon you catch gives you exponential follower growth.
>Magic the Gathering
Synergizes crazily well with Go, and is very versatile.
>Risk
Strategic genius is a good choice, and it lets your followers lead a hobo army. Woe betide everyone else if you get the President (or the Pope) on your side.
>Cards
Can already take people and buildings, may as well add objects (including medals) to the list. Also, luckiness.
>Mastermind
Kinda like a cross between Risk and Cards. 200-300 IQ is nothing to underestimate, though.

I'd probably pick Magic and Risk for the last two; Risk lets you use the week a lot better, and M;tG ramps up to absurdity if you capture an entire town.

>>50116645
At least repost the image with your build.
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>>50115210
Punishment idea: Milking (your partner will milk you for your sexual fluids, possibly w/ bonuses from tit size and the Concentration drawback).
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>>50116697
I'm between sexual release minor and body image minor. They both have drawbacks I already suffer from, so an increase in severity shouldn't be too awful.

I think I'll have to go with Sexual Release. Can't pass that up
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>>50116697
>Picking this means your nice
>Though, some choices to conflict
>the interdimentional brother with you

Anyway, My choices are between Financial major, Body image major, Success minor, or gratitude major

Financial major is cool, but I don't think $100 a month is gonna cut it. Buying a new console would take like 5 months or something to save up, and I couldn't buy anything during that time.

Body image major is neat since I've never really cared about what other people think of me, and I'd just stick to my normal looks most of the time. It probably won't let me shapeshift as much as I'd like though. (IE: an alien form or something)

Success minor is really appealing to me. Who cares about getting credit? I'm getting paid a very decent wage, and I'm good at what I do.

Gratitude major sounds like a great way to get my perfect girl. And all I have to do is just do chores at home for them? That's not a big deal at all. The only thing that really concerns me is that it means I would have no money and have to ask them to buy things for me, but I guess my ideal lover would be willing to do that.

It's a close decision between those last two. I guess I'll choose success major because it means I can just live a better version of my current life, with no real downsides.
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>>50116971
Reminder that you can't take medals that have already been spent on new powers.

MTG
YUGIOH
CARDS
POKEMON
MASTERMIND

Really, mtg is amazing both for and against minion builds.
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>>50115210
With On Edge, how can you ejaculate if you can't cum?
Maybe just make it that you can only cum when someone tells you to? Or maybe just make that part a separate drawback all together?
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>>50117041
I would take that punishment
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>>50117110
As in, you can ejaculate, but it won't feel like release
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>>50115239
I didn't, and I really liked them :(
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>>50117190
I just want to know the story, since there seems to be a need for one, final one involving the Flamingo.
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>>50116697
are drawbacks cumulative, or do you only suffer the drawback for your severity?
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>>50116971
>Pokemon Go
>MtG
>Go
>Risk
>Cards
1) Catch a bunch of pokemon, regardless of strength
2) Have them all surround a castle
3) Become the local lord
4) Rinse & repeat until I find someone who claims ownership of a mountain/plains/etc
5) Demand the land from them
6) Summon MtG equipment to make me immune to enemy spells/abilities + indestructible
7) Make anyone who gets in my way pay denbts with my massive surplus of stored mana http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=369039
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>>50117098
Thanks! I fixed those errors!
I should note that Success major means you have to devote yourself to that goal. Hard work will lie ahead of you. (Or did you mean yo say you chose Success minor, because that's the one you mentioned when deliberating?)

>>50117282
You only get the benefits & drawbacks of the severity you choose (but a lot of Major options mention giving you the Minor perks, too).

>>50116802
Remember, you're going have to be defining yourself around that Sexual Release minor. And with Gratitude minor's submissiveness, you'll gonna be at the whim of your spouse.

>>50117056
You could always go with both if you're willing to define yourself around those traits.
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>>50116697
>forced to choose between fixing my brain, or fixing my body and lack of sleep, or getting my degree with little difficulty, or being happy from making others happy
Dang... this is tough! There are so many I want.

Selfish picks would be:
>Gratitude: Minor
Because while I do want my husbando, I don't want to force one into existence, and I don't want to be forced into the waifu role. I want to do it because I want to do it.
>Body image: Major
Necessary to be the waifu. I guess it's not that bad of a punishment to take pride in my new appearance.

Non-selfish would be:
>Gratitude: Supreme
>Fun: Minor
To be her best companion ever!
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>>50115815
Glad you enjoyed it. I'm gonna give more points next time around. Maybe add a few items.

Do you have any suggestions?
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>>50117366
Ya, meant minor.
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>>50116697
Emotional Support - Major (This is my ideal, to some extent, relationship. A little bit of intimacy might be nice but as-is this is fine.)
Ascendance - Supreme. I'll have someone around, no matter how many years go by.
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>>50116697
The only one I could stand would be Body Image Minor. I already feel like shit when I don't bathe or keep my looks up, so I guess this would just be a kick in the butt to actually wash myself on those days.
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>>50116697
Financial Support - Supreme
Ascendance - Supreme

Pay for bodyguards so people don't murder me. Use infinite money to direct much of the world's resources to personal research and development until I no longer need humans to do my bidding. Colonize the galaxy and beyond as an immortal god emperor, ruling over unaging machines (who feel no jealousy towards my lifespan).
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>>50115210
>51 people have looked at your cyoa
>3 responded
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Any interest in a simple Touhou cyoa?
You'll pick a hat, pick an ability, pick a shikigami, pick a souvenir, and pick a rabid yokai you think you're capable of fending off with your build.
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>>50117437
I think I'll accomplish more with
>Body image: Major
and
>Peace of Mind: Minor
Being the waifu is something you choose, not something you're given. I have to consciously notice desires and preferences, rather than instinctively knowing. It's far more romantic, to become a better waifu from noticing and caring.
With Peace of Mind, I should adapt mentally to being a good partner. Gratitude: Minor also has the downside of being praised by more than one person.
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>>50117870
>You'll pick a hat
What kind of hats?
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>>50117870
Fucking DO IT.
Just DO IT.
Please GOD, DO IT.
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>>50117870
Sounds shit. But I guess some other guy wants it.
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>>50117865
Sorry anon. I like to look at the options, but I have no interest in being/fucking a trap.
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>>50117992

>he doesn't wanna be/fuck a trap
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>>50117992
>I have no interest in being/fucking a trap.
What are you gay?
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>>50117498
A replenishing supply of ammo for the ammo option would be nice. Possibly for all the consumables - replenished stuff occurs monthly or yearly.

Animals starting naturally trained would be cool, so minks and cats can be used to help hunt. An option so animals live as long as you do would also be cool.

A pet hawk option sounds neat.

Changing bagel coupon to food coupon might be good. The restaurant changes from location to location instead of always being bagel.

Marijuana supply seems helpful if cigarettes are offered.
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>>50117865
m8 put the damn thing into an image
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>>50118031
I'm asking for feedback, that's it. It's not supposed to be a finished thing.
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>>50117865
Yeah, I gave it a glance, but I'm only interested in fucking traps, not being the trap.
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>>50117870
The only thing I know about the 2hus is Awoo. So I haven't a friggen clue of what goes on in it. But a 2hu CYOA could go over well here.

>>50117865
Honestly, with the change to it mostly being about feminization, I've lost a lot of interest in it. Also, there's not a lot new that I really care for, so I ignored posting about it until now. All of the drawbacks remove the perks of being a girl(male) that I want, so I don't really have any comment on them because I would never take any of them. I don't really like any of the jobs, and I get nothing out of the lewdness put into them. Work's for work, not lewds, and I really don't want those to mix. The new trap companions are okay, but companions aren't terribly interesting to me most of the time It's why I never write them. Other than those, there's nothing new that I haven't commented on before now.

Gotta remember the lurkers, though. They might like everything, but will never say so.
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>>50118046
Doesn't matter, unless you're planning on using MS paint.
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>>50118052
>But a 2hu CYOA could go over well here.

If such a cyoa gets finished, I anticipate a shitstorm.
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>>50117865

There's more than 1000 views on new Blood Magic, but I can count the number of builds I've seen on my two hands.

I imagine its similar with other CYOAs too. A great amount of lurkers who never post their builds, or just disinterested people. Don't let this bring you down, this is normal.
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>>50118052
You know you don't have to take any drawbacks, right?
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>>50118074
Thanks man. I know this spunds childish but it does kinda annoy me. I just want feedback, but half the responses are always 'I don't like this option, remove it'
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>>50118074
Why would they post their builds here? /cyoag/ is a 24/7 shitshow.
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>>50118075
I know, but they're most of the new content. I was explaining why I hadn't replied to the new post. I would never take any of them, so I didn't see the need to talk about them.
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>>50118097

The jumpchain thread is far worse.
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>>50118141
It's Saturday in the only country that matters.
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>>50117865
Lurkers outnumber anon, anon. Get used to it.
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>>50118061
What?
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>>50118175
Germany?
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>>50117900
Either really common ones like ribbons and mob caps or unused ones like a horned helmet and baseball cap. Maybe both.
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>>50115210
Two things: First, there's still the conflict between your D/S choices and your partner's description. Which takes precedence?

Second, it's usually poor design to give a lot less choice to one type of build - in this case, Dominants.

Case in point, picking it nullifies all but four of the jobs (Secretary, Cheerleader, Model, and Streamer), the entire Punishment section, and half the drawbacks.

The drawbacks aren't too bad as it stands (though I would like more general ones), but I would like more 'neutral' jobs (and maybe a dominant one - professional Dom/mes are a thing) as well as the option to apply punishments to your partner by paying half their cost or something.

If you're having trouble thinking of options, I can spitball a few for you.
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>>50118191
>Thinking your irrelevant collapsing mess being flooded by the entire third world matters.
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>>50118188
I think what they're trying to say is "I want even the WIPs in image format".
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>>50118175

It's saturday in most of the world.
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>>50115210
>Instant change
>Flat chest
>Bubble butt
>Average hips
>Average penis
>Cute face
>Normal mind
>Bisexual (no change)
>Equal (trap on top can be hot)
>Bullies

I assume I pick a partner? Or are these just the cast of characters in this world? I'll skip this part in the hopes of gangbangs.

>Streamer (doesn't involve people ordering me what the fuck to do like all the other jobs)

Drawbacks:
>No secret
>Feeble (eh, I'm a trap anyways)
>Statistic (again, if this is taking place in magical porn land, who gives a shit?)
>No waiting (fast growing hair is a drawback? I'd kill for that shit)
>Weak spot

So that leaves me with 9 power points
>Doesn't matter (that'll counteract "no secret"
>Sensitive
>Lazy (I have the points for it, why not)
>Youthful
>Well off (more like "fucking loaded", again I only got this because the spare points were so plentiful)
>Enjoyable (fuckin' SCORE)
>Acceptance (I'd rather just this be magical porn world, but since I have the spare points I'll buy it)
>Flexible
>Clean (god that'd be useful)

I don't care about the punishments.

There we go. Sounds like a pretty fun trap-life, while not being too godawful, and I still get to be me to some extent.
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Ahahaha. Ha.

Okay so I'm actually going to start work on the Eldritch Abomination CYOA now. I know I said I would once I recovered from watching Welcome to the NHK, but that may have been an itsy bitsy lie. Generally I work on them when I have a spark of "genius" and decide to work on them for multiple hours straight. Unfortunately, I've not had that, so my solution is to read the Old Man Henderson writefaggotry again whilst listening to the OP for Haiyore W on repeat.

Expect for this to be done on Sunday. I promise.
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>>50118163
And yet, somehow, it was easier to deal with. Granted, that's probably because it was more predictable.

I remember the Worm Drinking Game. Fun times.
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>>50115210

>above average

How large is this supposed to be
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>>50118265
I'm at that point where I can't read/watch something sad because my default mood is already bad enough that it puts me into the point of basically nonfunctionality.
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>>50118188
The only reason you'd need to keep it in text is if you're going to use image software where you can't go back and edit the text after putting it in there.
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>>50118295
Yeah, I've hit this too. I literally just sat there for about an hour after finishing it, and I had to take breaks half way through some of the episodes because I just couldn't finish it.
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>>50118097
It does seem to be getting worse.

I don't want to be judgemental or a dick, but I honestly believe all the /d/ shit is causing more mental illnesss and pity party shitposting. Don't get me wrong, I appreciate Lewd options and fappable stuff as much as the next anon, but there is quite a bit of OC that is way too specific. I'm never going to pay attention to the trap/gender switch/de-aging because it's so sexually niche I can't even do a theoretical build
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>>50118267

>Worm Drinking Game

?
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>>50118198

>Two things: First, there's still the conflict between your D/S choices and your partner's description. Which takes precedence?
Thank you, I'll clear this up in the next one

>Second, it's usually poor design to give a lot less choice to one type of build - in this case, Dominants.
It is a cyoa with an emphasis on submissiveness. Dominant options add flavour, but I never, nor plan to make the 2 the same level, or I'll totally have lost sight of what the cyoa was supposed to be.

>Case in point, picking it nullifies all but four of the jobs (Secretary, Cheerleader, Model, and Streamer), the entire Punishment section, and half the drawbacks.
Yeah it's not supposed to be a cypa about dominance, and all of what you listed are optional

>The drawbacks aren't too bad as it stands (though I would like more general ones), but I would like more 'neutral' jobs (and maybe a dominant one - professional Dom/mes are a thing) as well as the option to apply punishments to your partner by paying half their cost or something.
Look, I get it, you want to be dominant, but that's not what the CYOA is about. I really don't want to sound dismissive to criticism but I don't want to ignore what the cyoa is about and just make it a fetish collage.

>If you're having trouble thinking of options, I can spitball a few for you.
Yes please, go ahead.
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>>50118175
Oh wait I'm retarded, fuck. I thought it was Sunday.
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>>50118315
The paste isn't here to make builds and use, I'm asking for suggestions. Images are the 2nd step.
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>>50118351
There's jump of Worm, the web serial novel.
There's a bunch of options for different powers.
For a while, it seemed like every problem someone had or ability someone was looking for could be solved/supplied by one of the powers in the Worm jump.

So people started drinking every time it was mentioned.
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>>50118389
That's still not a reason to not use an image.
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>>50118392
I didn't even realize Worm was a web novel until recently. I only knew it from here and I was never particularly into that CYOA

Then my gf started reading Worm and explaining it to me. I caught on pretty quick after that
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>>50118400
Yes it is, you entitled cunt. I'm adding images later, asking for ideas and suggestions to finish the actual content now.
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>>50118410
It's a decent read, but ramps up like you wouldn't fucking believe.
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>>50118421
>entitled
Go fuck yourself, you're the one complaining you only got 3 comments.
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>>50114590

Hey again !

I've almost finished creating my character and I need your help for another trigger.

This one is not necessarily lewd, it's an obedience trigger. The trigger word makes me particularly suggestible to commands. As an additionnal effect when the trigger word is used in a certain sentence, I have to obey every command I'm told for the next hour.

I need your help for both the uncommon word and the sentence containing it since it would be unfair if I got to choose either of them !
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>>50118248
I cannot say thank you enough for posting a build! I love builds, seriously!

Partners work, as I forgot to develop on, like this:
You pick 1 romantic partner
1 owner if taking punishments (can be your romantic partner)
5 friends, less if you like.
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>>50118432
haha k
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>>50114419
>The explorer
Assuming this is something that drops into our world, it's the best choice.

>Tech from my ship can help the world
>Explore new worlds
>Get mad dosh through my discoveries and mining materials from outerspace
>Bring my friends along
>With my long life I become a non-time-travelling Doctor Who.

>>50115038
>room type
Log Cabin, maximum comfy.

>Entrance Method
Other (Like Touch Me, but I can invite people remotely so we can chill together without worrying about travel time)

>Physical items
Food, 200% comfy, Gaymen Piisii, The Rest, /diy/ zone, FUCKING NERDS, /lit/ as heck, /toy/ time, /fa/bulous, fully loaded, Normie Station, Ocean Man

Ultimately, my place will primarily be for summoning friends for a party/table top game sessions.

>Companions
Custom Character, probably a kitsune illusionist girl with a theatrical streak to help me co-DM and play NPC roles.

>Extras
Be the Girl, Inter-Bot 9901, Very Own Soul, All along, HQ, Aether Orchastra, Multiply, Machine Learning, Attractive forces
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>>50118458
Concupiscent. It's a good word.

"Into concupiscent arms I fall." It's a good sentence.
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>>50118520
That's uncommon for sure, thanks !

Any suggestions on where I could post my stories ?
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>>50116697
>Financial Support Supreme
>Body Image Supreme

Time to live life to the fullest. Having fake friends and people asking to go to the gym with you aren't that bad of drawbacks. Especially when you're a supremely wealthy, 10/10, 6'5, ripped playboy with a 9 inch dong
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>>50118569
Pastebin is good, especially if you're linking them in this thread. I can't guarantee they'll get reads here, though.
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>>50114419
> Planeswalker: Black.

Fuck everything, I'm going save the RWBY world so everything stays happy forever. I'm bringing Solaire with me, and we're gonna travel the planes saving people while I low-key amass unnatural dark powers throughout my immortal lifespan
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>>50118278
some unknown amount above seven inches, anon. Probably 7-9.
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Is this the latest Universal War? I feel like making another build.
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>>50118278
I'll add, but I was thinking 9-11 inches, nothing ridiculous.
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>>50118637

9 is above average?
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>>50118426
And goes downhill around chapter 18/19. Picks up again for the final arc, starting around chapter 25 I think.

IIRC even Wildbow acknowledges the problem and plans to rewrite that part.
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>>50118637
The average penis size is only five and a half inches. Yes, really. A seven would be above average, though.
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>>50118569
There's an Erotic Fiction General thread on /d/.
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>>50118657
Actually, yes. People with small penises (<7 inches) tend to be under-sampled, which is why so many people think 7-9 is small. It's actually completely normal, if not slightly large.
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>>50117865
>>50115210

>Overenjoyed the cyoa-text
> Is a lurker

I feel bad man, sorry
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>>50118677
Porn gives unrealistic expectations, it fucks with you man. Made me depressed when I was a teenager that my dick was only 6 inches.
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>>50116697
There are a lot of things I could do, but I'll trust my instincts and choose the first off the top of my mind

Minor Sexual release and major financial support.

I don't want or need much. I don't like my body, but if I can get laid and the other person likes it then I'll get over it eventually. I'll spend my free time studying or volunteering, maybe some of my regular lays has videogames and we can hang out for nintendo and casual sex.
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>>50118657
5.5" is the global average.
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>>50118637
>7 inches is above average
You're joking, right?
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>>50118705
Hey man, feel free to read, I only ask that if you have an idea, don't keep it to yourself.
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>>50118657
I'd imagine average is between 5 and 7 inches, with above average and so forth going up in two-inch intervals from there.
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>>50118698
>Unsubstantiated assumptions.
Put up or shut up, dear. Every study out there puts 5.5 to 6 as the average penis size. Not 7-9. 9 is actually rather massive, the majority of vaginas are less than 10 inches long.

>>50118706
Mine is 8 and I thought i was small because 9 was normal when I was like 12.

Now I know my dick is like 90% percentile and I can be smug about it.
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>>50118616
Thanks for the advice. I mostly write for myself anyway so I don't really care if no one reads them.
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>>50118718
Keep saying this baloney anon, it feeds my SPH fetish.
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>>50118681
Oh right, I forgot about /d/. It should fit perfectly over there.
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>>50118737
You have a fetish for the Singapore Press Holding?
Are you seriously saying the average dick is only as long as mine is wide? I am so, so sorry to hear that.
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>>50118765
I wouldn't brag about your chode, anon. If it's at the point where it's too painful/won't fit into the majority of girls it's basically useless.
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>>50118765
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YWdD206eSv0
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>>50115581

A melee strength stat seems like unnecessary detail, even with the rock-paper-scissors mechanics you mentioned.

And how are morale and discipline not the same thing?
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>>50118765
They're talking inches, not milimetres.
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>>50118765
>>50118818
http://www.nhs.uk/Conditions/Burns-and-scalds/Pages/Introduction.aspx
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>>50118706
This is why your parents told you porn was bad for you.
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>>50118725
>Mine is 8 and I thought i was small

I know that feel. Mostly because my eyesight has been horrible since long before puberty, and my glasses have always been one of the first things I remove before a shower. I only ever saw it at the angle of looking down, never in a mirror until one day when I was pressured into measuring.
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>>50118648

Isn't 11 like double the average size?
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>>50118889
So still above average, but possible
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>>50115210
Enjoying this one a great deal, though I'm too shy to put up a build for any CYOA yet. Uncertain whether to pick submissive and go partnerless or pick equal and go for one of the two dom male partners. The former would mean I struggle against my nature initially and adjust slowly to my new life (going full female bombshell) but don't have any sort of...predestined path, if that makes sense? The latter would mean my preferences and nature get gradually twisted by my relationship with my partner, something I'd definitely notice and have mixed feelings about. I find both of these clashes extremely compelling.

Sorry it's not a full build, but wanted to put something up in gratitude!
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>>50116971
>Yu-Gi-Oh
>Go
>MtG
>Dominoes
>Othello

If I get to use real MtG decks then I'll start using Junk Tokens or Hyper Sliver combos with Yu-Gi-Oh to manifest them early and begin capturing areas using my Go power. Then I can use Dominoes to have complete tactical awareness through my supporters and use Othello's Flip power to steal opponents minions and chain that with Go effects. I actually have MtG decks that are based on cloning and copying effects via cards like Phantasmal Image, Renegade Doppleganger, Shapesharer, Cemetery Puca, Crytoplasm, Mimeofracture, Progenitor Mimic, Clever Impersonator, Cackling Counterpart, Rites of Replication, Copy Enchantment, Mirror Mockery, Doubling Season, Growing Ranks, Mirror Gallery, etc so I can effectively copy everyone's supporters for my own and keep making copies to overwhelm/steal their stuff.
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>>50118648
>9-11 inches
>Nothing ridiculous
Lady, that'd hurt most girls or just would not fit in, or if it does you'd need to be careful not to stab her fucking cervix. Hell, at 10+ the dick won't even WORK right half the time, people over that size have erectile dysfunction issues.
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>>50118977
Thank you! any kind of response on people's choices and builds is great! It's a lot of fun to know what people like.
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>>50118867
Everyone is bad at eyeballing size, especially women.
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>>50119003
I'm a 5.7 dude. Nothing to be impressed about, but those dicks really are out there. I'll divide the choice into Above Average (7-8 inches) and Big (9-12)
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>>50118719
>>50115210

First build I post, I hope it's 'correctly' done:

- Instant:
I don't have time to wait for it.

- B-cup:
Who would say no to free-tits?

- Bubble:
Hmm dat ass.

- Average:
I have no real preference for this.

- Tiny (or Vagina):
Meint gott, I don't know. I would say tiny because it's a trap-cyoa and humiliation could potentially be great. I never tried the sissy/crossdress thing but...

- Cute:
If I have to be a gril/trap at least I'll be cute.(Hoping "look younger" =! loli)

- Normal:
Wouldn't be fun otherwise.

- Bisexual:
I am heterosexual but hey, if I can change it, bi shouldn't be bad.

- Equal

- Scientists:
Would have taken the witch if it was precised if you could do lewd-witchcraft with her. Bullies isn't what humiliation I would like (I'm more of an adept of watersport and humiliation related to it). And money.

- Normally I don't even read companions/friends categories in CYOAs, but man, yours are great.
Again a tough choice. I would go for Amelia if I have a vag, otherwise Diana.

- Streamer:
Because I have to pick something but otherwise nothing appealing to me.

- Youthful, Immortal, Sensitive, Lazy, Flexible :
I would have taken Clean if not producing waste was optional (sorry, watersport obligate).

- Feeble:
Not really something I like but I wanted flexible... for the possibilities.

- Futa:
But only if I'm on Diana fuck-road.


The only thing this CYOA lack is other fetishisms (via drawbacks or powers).
But man, you are great.

(I hope I didn't made too much typo/errors, english isn't my forte)
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>>50116697

>Body Image: Major

This would make me extremely happy if it was intended to be shapeshifting. But it reads like it's a single change. Not particularly ideal, but I'll take it I suppose.

Would probably work best when paired with Sexual Release: Minor, but I've gotta go with...

>Financial Support: Major

I'm already a broke-ass-NEET. $100 month to spend as I like is already more than I've got. And this covers an apartment, electricity, and internet on top of food? This is an all around improvement. I'm probably not going to spend the $100 most of the time, instead just saving it up until it's time to make a big purchase. A new computer every ten years or so, a new console, a little something for birthday gifts for people. Maybe I could use that $100 to invest in tools and materials for a hobby to make even more if I'm really hurting to buy something soon. It's not really a job if I make small pieces of furniture or knives for fun and people buy them from me, right?
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>>50118626
Anon, dealing with Bolas isn't worth it. Nothing is worth having to deal with That Dragon.
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>>50119092
Thank you! this is a great build!

>The only thing this CYOA lack is other fetishisms
I was gonna include more stuff but I felt it might anger people. If you want a particular thing included through an option, just say. If you want stuff like watersport and what not included its easy to put in through an option. I was gonna include a small bit of cuck shit but i felt itd turn people away, dont like it myself but wanted to have lots of options.
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>>50118648
>>50119039
Even 7-8 is...massive. I'm a little shy of that and it's big enough to cause problems for my partners. And not the hot kind of problems either that people imagine when talking about this subject. Actual logistical issues.
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>>50114419

explorer
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>>50119180
>I was gonna include more stuff but I felt it might anger people.
I'd think the sort of people that get angry at fetish bullshit are already angry at the CYOA for existing.
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>>50119244
I've already gotten a lot of hate and being told to kill myself out of making a trap cyoa alone, but making it full on /d/ would make things way worse.
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>>50119125
Why does Bolas want to kill Planeswalkers?

Also, is laying low viable?
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Learn to feed off hate.

Seriously. It makes it better.
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>>50119266
Funny how the only complaints I remember getting for my fetish bullshit CYOA were "too many words" and "too many points".

We'll see if I'll get as much hate as you're getting once I finish my new fetish bullshit CYOA.
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>>50119326
I think it was the trap thing. I don't want to sound too lefty, but people here can be really traditionalist. I don't wanna say transphobic because not all traps are trans, but the hate is kind of from that sort of thing.

I don't really have much of an opinion on trans people, but people here really do.
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>>50119311
>>50119311

>Learn to feed off hate.
>Seriously. It makes it better.
Who are you talking to?
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>>50119377
Himself, probably.
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>>50119129
>Biotech
>Synthetic Skin
>Hidden Arsenal
Good for self defense when I'm in a bad part of town.
>Hacking Tools
To be used to steal money from all the corrupt Democrats.
>Portable Kitchen
>Anatomically Correct
Both for maximum pleasure.
>Wardrobe
Cute clothes are certainly not useless.
>Grappling Hook
I will probably need this.
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>>50119307
Bolas wants to kill walkers because he wants to be the only walker in the multiverse.
In other words, he's a massive cunt.
And yeah, most walkers don't seem to be actively harassed by him openly, just try to make a few friends and have a place you can run to, aye?
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>>50119436
Truly, the life of the low-key power seeking hobo is the greatest one may live.
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>>50118647
Yeah. The Thanksgiving update is going to be historical figures for companions and I still have to add more quest but I've been busy.
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>>50119457
Just be careful where you 'walk to, friendo.
You could get a huge pissed off dragon all up in your business.
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>>50119505
I don't think Bolas cares much for my Chinese cartoons, vidya gaems, and Texan animu.
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>>50118366
>It is a cyoa with an emphasis on submissiveness. Dominant options add flavour, but I never, nor plan to make the 2 the same level, or I'll totally have lost sight of what the cyoa was supposed to be.
And yet you still offer Dominant as a choice just as viable as the other in its category. If you want to make it less fun, then at the very least put a blurb in about how dominant traps are rare, and outside the norm.

>Yeah it's not supposed to be a cypa about dominance, and all of what you listed are optional
But, as I said, an option presented as equivalent to the others shouldn't be given half the CYOA the other options get.

>Look, I get it, you want to be dominant, but that's not what the CYOA is about.
Then make the CYOA about submission. Don't make half of it eglatarian, then block off the other half from certain builds.

>Yes please, go ahead.
Alright.
Companions:
>Archetypical rich bitch. Helping her blow off steam will get her to calm down. Into bondage, minor petplay, and worship - giving/receiving depends on D/S choice, but 'naturally' submissive.
>Professional dickgirl/shemale domme who took a liking to you. By far the most skilled lover, but you'll be sharing her with many others, sometimes at the same time. You're one of the few people she'll open up to.
>Multidisciplinary artist/musician, almost already married to his work. Very loving and rich enough to hire maids and eat at Michelin star restaurants on special occasions, but almost never home and can be melodramatic and obsessed with the 'ideal' relationship. Won't show off his nude depictions of you without your consent.
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>>50119180

Frankly, I can't wait to see the CYOA done, with the point system.

The only turn off (for me) is when fetishisms are imposed; for example, it’s a feminization cyoa, I wouldn’t like to be obligated to have mind control/furry/loli/BDSM/etc forced onto me because some things don’t mix well for me. I like mind control/BDSM (as an S) if I remain a male, otherwise if it feminization/gender-bender I prefer humiliation/petting/regression.

Things I would like to see in options? In drawbacks or punishment: Mind-Control (your partner can force you to do thing, OH YEAH I would pay to have Diana with that), Incontinence (I know watersport is a turn off for most), Exhibitionism (mixed with Collar or a Leash; yeay), and many other as I am versatile.

You shouldn't keep yourself from adding what you want as long as you understand that if you think it could turn off people then it should be optional.

Quick question: it’s a feminization-cyoa but you can have boobs and vag, it’s because they will be costly or it’s more a “I fucked with your body, you will be at least feminine if you aren’t completely female”? Personally, when I read ‘feminization’ or ‘trap’ I think no-boobs and penis.

>>50119266
>>50119326

Ignore them. Even if some will hate you, it will be only the toxics.
Normal people will either like it or ignore it.
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>>50119544
Jobs:
>Apprentice/Intern/Suckup: you end up helping whoever transformed you with whatever they do, fetching bottles and carrying books. Doesn't pay well, and you probably won't learn too much about it, but will certainly be interesting.
>Ordinary job: desk work, construction, nursing. A low-level, boring job that's supernaturally guaranteed to be such, no matter your body choices.
>Nothing. You're free to do whatever you want with your time. Includes just enough income to survive on, but don't expect many luxuries unless you get your own job - with no special help.

Drawbacks:
>Overtime: You now work one job 9-3, and another 3-9. You also work on Friday, and both your jobs pay significantly less. Incompatible with Full-time Maid.
>Productive: You produce an abnormal amount of certain fluids - milk, (pre)cum, and lubrication. In addition to making sex a messy affair, this tends to leak out more readily and make arousal very evident.
>Build up: You don't release cum, milk, etc. except for your partner or owner. This means that, no matter how aroused you are, your cum will build up indefinitely until your partner lets it out. This will make you more aroused until you'll cum from a single touch of your partner.
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>>50119544
>Professional dickgirl
kek
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>>50119129
Anatomy:
Alien

Expansions:
Machine Spirit
Translator
Healing Gel
Portable

Extras:
Creativity
Wardrobe
Anatomically Correct

Quests:
I'm not sure about those quests, I rather help people worldwide.
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>>50119584
Knowing these kind of /d/ related cyoas, you probably need to get through a thorough and intimate interview process, followed by at least 4 years of formal education training, months of hands on experience, and finally pass a rigorous and comprehensive oral and written examination to get the dickgirl certification.

Exceptional dickgirl undergraduates can attempt to do a thesis and get a dickgirl doctorate degree, which would add another 3-5 years of training, studying and fucking on top of their already lenthy program.
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>>50119544
The problem is I can't make punishments for dommes, or drawbacks either really. If you can think of some say.

>Archetypical rich bitch. Helping her blow off steam will get her to calm down. Into bondage, minor petplay, and worship - giving/receiving depends on D/S choice, but 'naturally' submissive.
>Professional dickgirl/shemale domme who took a liking to you. By far the most skilled lover, but you'll be sharing her with many others, sometimes at the same time. You're one of the few people she'll open up to.
>Multidisciplinary artist/musician, almost already married to his work. Very loving and rich enough to hire maids and eat at Michelin star restaurants on special occasions, but almost never home and can be melodramatic and obsessed with the 'ideal' relationship. Won't show off his nude depictions of you without your consent.
Yeah, these are all good. though i might not include all

>>50119563
These are good as well
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>>50119584
>>50119700
Just to be a wet blanket:
>Professional (dickgirl/shemale) domme
>Professional (dickgirl domme)
>Professional domme (with dick)
Take your pick, in ascending clarity.
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>>50115474
>tfw you wound up with twenty pages and counting of world building because of this cyoa
>and a two dozen more pages of short stories
>but you can't find the willpower to retype it into a pastebin

Someone either needs to stop me or force me to finish this shit.
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>>50119358
It might be because whenever people express discontent in a benign manner you seem to automatically blow up and tell them to fuck off.

Frankly, you strike me as a bit of a twat.
Even more so because you hide behind your homosexuality rather than face the fact that people might actually dislike you not for being gay but for being a prick.
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>>50119773
FINISH HIM!
Er... finish it, I mean.
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>>50119191
we know, anon. Around three of us are just having fun.
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>>50119791
Okay? I don't know who you are, but think whatever you like.
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>>50106702
>cute
>virginal
>short with above average curves
>long, black hair
>hobbies: cooking, sewing, reading manga
>cute
>personality: sweet, a little shy, ditzy, deredere
>wears dresses, skirts, and other feminine attire
>collects cute and sexy underwear
>has a big secret too big even for spoiler text
>cute
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>>50119773
Turn it into another CYOA
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>>50119791
Oh, and i'm not actually gay.
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>>50119864

Let me guess

She has a dick
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>>50119884
So you're hiding behind other people's homosexuality.
Great.
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>>50119920
Get out of my head. Don't forget the balls.
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Does anyone still care about me updating this?
Is it still okay to post here?
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>>50119949
What? What are you even talking about?
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>>50119920
Nope.

>>50119961
Shut up.
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>>50119974
Yes, and yes.
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>>50119974
What are you adding?
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>>50119881
I did that once.
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>>50119974
Sure.
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>>50119994

She has 2 dicks? And balls.
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>>50119749
>The problem is I can't make punishments for dommes, or drawbacks either really. If you can think of some say.
Yeah, that's the perennial problem: perks tend to increase dominance, flaws tend to increase submissiveness.

Really, all I was hoping for was more 'neutral' drawbacks that don't give other characters inherent power over the player.

Needing to fuck every day or (insert bad but sexy consequence), having people misinterpret your actions as sexual, or just 'hardening' your D/S choice to completely warp your thinking, etc.

I'd be fine with giving the option to spend points (maybe negative half price?) on punishments to put them on someone else.
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>>50120005
http://pastebin.com/yL3LU7D8
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>>50120083
I feel like it might not be getting that much attention for 2 reasons
>Since the image version came out, everyone saved and used that
>A Lot is point stuff
That said, i really appreciate your dedication to it, thanks.
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>>50120083
I for one see a point in the origins, gives a bit of flavor for the fictional background.
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>>50120132
>>Since the image version came out, everyone saved and used that
I maintain both.
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>>50120083
>tl;dr
Major point balance overhaul
Jobs now have lewd upgrades.
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>>50120083
>All these nerfs
This is why I don't talk about it much anymore, frankly. All your updates are just nerfs. I don't want to update my build to be LESS satisfying.
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>>50120083
I think that the origins are decently good. They help with certain builds, as it gives you some good benefits. If you were to remove them, then I'd suggest re-balancing certain options so that they're easier to get. Like Android really isn't worth it unless you're taking reincarnation.
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>>50120083
>Maybe make most sections so you go through them for each roommate not just body mod (not housing, health, food, time adjustments, misc, rewards)
The fuck does this mean?
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>>50120083
>For rewards - any money is given to everyone (same amount)
No, nerfing how much money you get is just making it less worthwhile.
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>>50120083
>>50120243
Also the criminal being forced into drugs isn't really the point, maybe change it into Addict or something and have Criminal being unable to change the time and forced to take extra punishments for some credits OR force some options that allow viewer control to have it for double credits reward or something in this style.
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>>50120083
I agree with >>50120230.
But I lost interest in it a long time ago, so my opinion might not be very relevant.
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I'm looking for a CYOA but I can't remember what it was called. I think it was called Flesh Menders or something and I saw it on here a few weeks back. The flavour text described finding a small surgery down an alleyway and involved biological augmentations.
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>>50120292
Ah yes, Flesh Menders, one of my favourite CYOA's next to Pokemon Humanized and Whore Life.

It's called flesh weavers
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>>50120292
This, my friend, is called Fleshweaver's Clinic.
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>>50120083
>all those nerfs
Please tell me you aren't serious.
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>>50120230
>>50120282
Could you explain? It honestly seems like I'm making it more open-ended (other than removing things like origins and difficulty), it would help to have more point of views.

>>50120258
For example:
1. You go though everything for yourself. You can choose things to share with roommates if you want.
2. You go though everything for each roommate (which is how it was before, but only for punishments and owners). You can choose their own things in this go.
It made sense when I thought of it.

>>50120266
Ignore that, I'm not doing that.
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>>50120314
>>50120325
Thanks anons!
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>>50120292
>>50120325
And here's part 2.
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>>50120325
PAGE 2 NOW!
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>>50120341
>Could you explain? It honestly seems like I'm making it more open-ended
Do you not see how most of the lines there are about reducing how much options give you or making them cost more?
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>>50120352
Thou ought to refresh faster :)
>>50120325
>>50120351
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>>50120341
Well that would mean roommates are also contestants and would get payouts etc. Personally I don't mind that as an option, but I also liked how you could choose for them NOT to be, or get involved in the lewdness. Just have someone normal to hang out with.
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>>50120365
It was a balancing attempt. Do you have any suggestions to balance it other ways (I could undo all the point changes)?
I really need to go though it and make a build. I'm trying to make it so you don't end up with 9001 credits left over, but I want there to be enough. It's just too damn long.

>>50120383
I made it optional.
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>>50117498
Make the world somewhat more alive. An endless perfect sparsely populated human continent is certainly dreamy, but maybe noseland could use some kind of opposition some years down the line or give you some goal to work towards.
There are some sluggish towns and settlements here and there but how did they get there? How do they live? Do they have pubs and laws and religions and markets or do they just smoke weed and kill pigs to live?
Also brewing and tailoring. Do we just come to the camp in a loincloth?
Some exposition and detail into the seed types would be good too.
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>>50120444
I don't think it needs to be more balanced.

Like was said, you're making it harder for people to make satisfactory builds with what they enjoy. Since you're dealing with fetishes you can't go TOO far outside your comfort zone and stack on a bunch of diapers or whatever, since you're wanting to imagine this scenario.
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>>50119553
>Mind-Control (your partner can force you to do thing, OH YEAH I would pay to have Diana with that), Incontinence (I know watersport is a turn off for most), Exhibitionism (mixed with Collar or a Leash; yeay), and many other as I am versatile.
I love all this senpai, this is exactly the sort o0f stuff I wanted.

>Quick question: it’s a feminization-cyoa but you can have boobs and vag, it’s because they will be costly or it’s more a “I fucked with your body, you will be at least feminine if you aren’t completely female”? Personally, when I read ‘feminization’ or ‘trap’ I think no-boobs and penis.
It was a Trap CYOA, and you can still make a builds as a trap, but I felt there's no harm in having optional breasts and vags too, even if it defeats the purpose if you pick it. To each his own, I guess!

>Ignore them. Even if some will hate you, it will be only the toxics.
honestly my main problem is this is my first cyoa, and it feels like people here feel entitled for the cyoa to cater to them, I want to say 'It's my CYOA, I appreciate your ideas and all, but I don't really want this sort of thing in it' But i can't phrase without sounding like an asshole.
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>>50120018
It'd be a weird alt-history, supers/cyberpunk setting where almost all the supers are technical based of some sort and set in/around the city of 'Centrus,' a great-lakes region (somewhere between Toledo and Cleveland) manufacturing/research center that grew up around the equivalent of the setting's original justice league's base (The Alliance) as they went from vigilantes to international interventionists and thus their technical footprint and sophistication gained a larger logistical chain. It attracted other wannabe-supers, scientists, industrialists, and people to work in all the factories and it kinda became a rival to the rising Silicon Valley economically.

Due to its concentration of economic and super-might it got declared a 'special economic zone' in a similar mode that Hong Kong did, due to the population's resistance to being regulated by the federal and state governments when it came to their mad science (the socially acceptable term in Centrus for non-disgraced scientists is 'rogue thinker' however, mad scientist is reserved as an insult) and interventionism.

It also managed to keep the big industrial cities of the area (Detroit, Cleveland, Toledo) alive due to the substantial demand for manufactured goods and tooling components. I've got some stuff on basic other variances in world history due to super interventionism (both good and bad) and invading cyberpunk corporate/technocratic societal themes but its mostly just been focused on fleshing out the city and the districts the Griffith family deals with - especially Scarlet, Ember, and Philip Griffith.

Not sure what kinda stuff I'd actually include in a CYOA. Slice of life supers?
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>>50120596
From my point of view, you are the author. Opinions of other may influence your decisions, but in the end, your word is final.

Should they still complain, they might as well make their own cyoa, custom tailored for themselves.
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>>50120596
>"Here I made a cyoa! I would like to hear your suggestions and ideas!"
>Anons gives their suggestions and ideas
>"Why do everyone feel so entitled for the cyoa to cater to them?"

It seems like a classic case of you reap what you sow.
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>>50120619
I agree, but saying it makes me sound rude. Honestly, when I say 'Please give suggestions' I should add 'But if I don't want that in my cyoa, I'm not gonna put it in.'
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>>50120661
It's not the suggestions themselves, its people then demanding why their suggestion wasn't in, how the cyoa isn't what they think it should be etc afterwards. Suggest eye mutilation and I won't be mad, but if you then complain and say the cyoa needs to have eye mutilation in, then I'm annoyed.
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Is Highlander around?
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>>50120243
>>50120083
Here's a bit more of an analysis on the origins:

>Lucky
Lucky isn't terribly good.
>Royalty
Royalty is the first of the relatively good origins.
>Terminal
Why does this exist when Reincarnation is a thing? The +10 is absolutely useless. This one could use some work to make it both useful and different from Reincarnation.
>Criminal
If you want to use drugs, then this is okay. Otherwise, it's just not terribly good.
>Popular
The money at the end is nice, but it's not necessarily that hard to come by. This is a boost for people who really like slutting it up, but does nothing for the rest of us.
>Oldfag
This one is neat, but it could deal with being 3 rather than 2 options to make it more appealing.
>Family
For the people that want a significant other, there's really no other way to do it that doesn't fuck you over too much.
>VIP
Not really that different from Popular, and the money isn't that great at the end. With this you can get enough to make it worthwhile, but other than that, you don't even get enough to really live off of it. Enough to make a few purchases or save for the future, but you'll still have to work.
>Reincarnation
This is the only one that's worth taking for most of us. If you simply made this the default and had it included in the main body, then it would be fine with removing the other backgrounds. Like, giving us four free options and making android less expensive.

There are a lot of little nerfs that make it less fun to try and build, because most people don't have all the fetishes outlined here. Some of us might have one or two, and it becomes hard to build just for those fetishes when we don't get enough points for it. I get that part of the challenge is finding out what one would be willing to deal with for what they want, but even then, a lot of the nerfs go a bit far. It's also really hard to do any dominant stuff, as it really caters to subs.
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is the Quarian Full Suit armored, and can I wear armor/clothes over it?
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>>50120684
Be careful with lewd options. If you want to illustrate it later it might not fit on /tg/
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>>50120243
>>50120267
>>50120746
This is good, thanks.

>It's also really hard to do any dominant stuff, as it really caters to subs.
Any suggestions?
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>>50120774
It's very easy to use SFW, cropped, or black-barred art.
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>>50120754

Have you never played Mass Effect
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>>50120774
It's pretty easy to avoid nsfw I found like >>50120780 or you can just use equivalents, for example, if there's a big dick option, a pic of a cucumber is good etc
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>>50120776
Hmm... Let me think about it for a minute or so and I'll get back to you with some suggestions.
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>>50120742
Ayo.

>>50120754
If its loose I imagine it would be no problem.
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>>50120780
>cropped, or black-barred art

That's actually against the rules, and I have been banned for it. In all fairness though, I'm pretty sure I was banned because the mod either didn't like me or the specific picture I posted.
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>>50120444
>trying to balance something that's extremely subjective
The absolute madman.
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>>50120684
People act like that because lewd and /d/ related cyoas rarely get made. This is due to the mods on /d/ delete fetish cyoa general threads on sight and banning their users. So those people migrate here expecting us to welcome them with open arms. Very early on we did just that, they tried making /d/ cyoas with pictures but the mods and janitors deleted their OCs and banned them too, so now the only /d/ related cyoa that is allowed due to a technicality in the rules are pictureless text heavy document files. And even than, if enough people report someone for being overly sexual and depraved whether it is part of a explanation for a build or a erotic story, You can be banned for that as well. That's why people are extremely reluctant to make new fetish oriented cyoas.

So when an author steps to make a niche fetish cyoa like your's, people jump at the opportunity to try get their fetishes into the WIP. Getting extremely agitated and bitchy when their fetishes and option ideas are rejected.
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Gonna spend some time working on my next cyoa, since my novel isn't going that well. Will be short and simple.
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>>50120904
The whole /d/ cyoa ban happened recently and i already began my cyoa. I took a 3 week hiatus due to a lot of stuff in my life, but I definitely know what you mean. Honestly i wonder myself a bit where the drama stuff came from. I try to not start drama but people on here can be pretty hostile, and I can be a bit too sensitive, i guess. i'll probs not post another WIP unless someone asks me to.
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>>50120786
no. Now that I know the reference, I see images on the google.
>>50120842
thanks.

>>50120754
Is the Aenathari Peach based on something?
I guess you can't wear an Anonymity Mask over a Quarian full suit. Why is the adrig manipulator so much cheaper than an anonymity mask, when the latter seems to be a superset of the former?
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>>50120842
Can we make custom aliens/transfusion builds as long as we stay within point limits? Like if I wanted to make a completely new kind of alien instead of just being a custom Yautja.

From what I can tell the Transfusions take three skill points out of the 5 everything has, though there doesn't seem to be any rhyme or reason to the alien body types.

Elder Thing and Nisetic High-Caste in particular seem to buck the 5-point limit rule that almost every other build has, aside from a few flavor ones. Though every other alien is either 2 points or 1 points with significant drawbacks (Mokresia and Quarians).
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>>50120870
It was almost certainly because of the specific image. I've been banned before because of posting sexy trap butts. Made the mod feel gay.
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>>50120904
Just use SFW images you fucking nancy whiner.
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>>50121009
>The whole /d/ cyoa ban happened recently

Newfag please, there were many attempts to create a fetish /cyoag/ on /d/ in the past, all attempts were met with thread deletion. The most hilarious time was when Mopeennui first showed up here, made a scene and whined about /cyoag/ not catering to her fetishes, we told him/her to go fuck off to /d/ and make a cyoa there, he/she made a thread, it got deleted in a few minutes and received a ban warning, came here again, bitched some more and left.
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>>50120916
Navel naval novel novel?
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>>50121009
Fetish fags are bad about this kind of shit. No matter what you do they will bitch unless you cater to them. Like that guy who complained about feminization in a trap CYOA (no fucking duh????). They swarm all over content makers and essentially demand things change to suit their fetishes.

Non-paid porn creation is one of the least rewarding things a person could do because the fanbase is so incredibly toxic. It happens for games, art, CYOAs, stories, etc.
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>>50121080
That isn't what he was talking about?

>>50121084
>Newfag please
The last thread was 5 weeks ago. But now they're deleted on sight, before the last one they'd last a good week sometimes.

>>50121093
Thank you, that basically summed up my frustration. I seriously do not understand why people here are so quick to anger. Worse yet I'm not getting paid to do as they ask, but they still wanna get mad.
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>>50120325
>Grace and Poise
>Empowered Eyes (2)
>Divine the Secrets (6)
>Stay the Devourer (3)
12 points spent
>>50120351
Fuck.
>Chill Flesh (3)
>Delve too Deep (7)
>2 free coins (2)
Welp, time to find out what awful wonders the universe holds.
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>>50121154
>I seriously do not understand why people here are so quick to anger. Worse yet I'm not getting paid to do as they ask, but they still wanna get mad.

Welcome to 4chan newfriend.
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>>50121039
>Transfusions take three skill points
Nope, see the end of the knick-knacks section: transfusion costs 2000 credits, i.e. 5 skill points; although the origins aren't balanced at all so I wouldn't worry about the exact sum and just go for something in the ballpark of 1600 credits (Filthy Peasant) to 3200 credits (Feathered God) worth of stuff if you make your own origin.
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>>50121154
>The last thread was 5 weeks ago. But now they're deleted on sight

I'm talking 2-3 years ago. Word of mouth from those /d/eviants that waited out their bans, is that there two main reasons why they were deleted and banned, the cyoas they posted contained western non-hentai related images and the mods on /d/ are extremely draconian about keeping discussion to a minimum and image dumping to a maximum and arrow focuses on /d/ related topics, the slightest deviation results in post deletion or a ban.
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>>50121188
Actually, they all do take three skill points if you look closely. While 3 skill points don't exactly transfer into 2000 credits, presumably they get a discount because it is their origin. All of them equal five points.

Free Floating Drone:
Mechanical Transfusion (3 points)
High-Tech Understanding (Low-to-high 2 points)

The Traitor Rebellions:
Hardlight Transfusion (3 points)
Mid-Tech Understanding (Low-to-mid 1 point)
Sneak (1 point)

Feathered God:
Spiritual Transfusion (3 points)
Low-Tech Understanding (default)
Advanced Ethereal Manipulation (2 points)
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>>50120083
I would like more waif-I mean owners.
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>>50121231
Yeah, I've experienced that. The western rule is the worst. aco and d should be one

>>50121277
seconding this
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>>50120754
How much would the discount for Tartaros Armor be if I don't want the bolter and flamethrower?
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>>50121304
I'm glad aco was formed. D can die if its going to be a fucking 2channel chink porn supremacist board.
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>>50121304
>aco and d should be one
Absolutely not. /aco/ should be a western /h/.
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>>50121446
I agree, but /aco/ content is really low quality sometimes. westerners cant draw for shit
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>>50121085
I don't know what you mean, but it has nothing to do with water, and in fact might fit in better as a comic within an established universe when I think about it more.
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>>50121454
should just be /DP/ Drawn Porn

I was going to say cartoon porn but that letter
combo would get me banned or part of Clinton's
entourage.

Captcha is Piazza
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>>50121251
>While 3 skill points don't exactly transfer into 2000 credits
No shit they don't, and credits is really the only consistent metric we have for measuring how much everything costs.

>presumably they get a discount because it is their origin.
That's bullshit.

> All of them equal five points.
They really don't, you're just saying that because I don't even know why, I really can't see any reason for it. Maybe it's bait?

Looking at all the origins some have more:

Wandering Refugee
Advanced Tech (3 points)
Educated (1 point)
Penmanship (1 point)
Surgeon (1 point)
A Companion (~1 point)

Privateer Extraordinaire
Advanced Tech (3 points)
Item: Tebulasi Frigate (~3 points)
A Companion (~1 point)

Hopeless Questant
Advanced Tech (3 points)
Utilitarian (1 point)
Adokori (1 point)
A Companion (~1 point)

Free Floating Drone
High Tech (2 points)
Mechanical Transfusion (5 points)

Feathered God
Master Ether (3 points)
Spiritual Transfusion (5 points)

Charred Grunt
Mid Tech (1 point)
Sneak (1 point)
Hardlight Transfusion (5 points)

Woken Elder
Advanced Tech (3 points)
Master Ether (3 points)
Elder Thing Body (? points)
A Companion (~1 point)

Terrified Onlooker
Advanced Tech (3 points)
Basic Ether (1 point)
Stone Soul (1 point)
Languages Proficiency (1 point)

Watcher
Five Traits (5 points)
A Companion (~1 point)

Others have fewer:

Filthy Peasant
Basic Ether (1 point)
Experimental (1 point)
Infused Essence (1 point)
Adokori (1 point)

[insert most of the early ones here; they have 4 points (usually 3 skills + a companion), but I'm too lazy to write all of them out]
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>>50121582
Feathered God starts with Advanced Ethereal, not Master. Though it should technically get Master for free.
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>>50121231
then why would gentle femdom threads be allowed?
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>>50121582
>>50121251
well while you two faggots were arguing, I tried to make a custom alien build.

Unfortunately, the alien I was trying to be is a bit too incompatible, almost none of the items would be useful for it.
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>>50121739
>Though it should technically get Master for free.
This was discussed with highlander a few threads ago: it does get Master for free; which is why I included it.

I also counted companions as 500 credits, as per Forever Alone, since I've never seen anyone take Notably Charitable to get extra companions. If I were more consistent and calculated all the points from credits each companion would be ~2 points, putting both Wandering Refugee and Woken Elder at ~8 points (with Woken Elder also having Elder Thing Body), along with Feathered God.
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>>50117206
>>50117190
>>50115239
http://markerslinger.tumblr.com/post/130656281417/so-im-a-super-idiot-and-forgot-to-put-up-what-the

Well that was easy....
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>>50121813
Because even mods and janitors have bias.
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>>50119974
I'm down for more updates to this, I also wouldn't be opposed to more oc on your part. I love your stuff, but ive run through it alot already.
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>>50121813
They weren't. They got deleted too. But the mods accepted them eventually. I was there for 2 years

pro tip: don't get involved in the community, it is full of whiny, arrogant and dickhead guys who try to act cool and passive aggressive with superiority complexes, with their own little hierarchy. I have never met more narcissistic people than the /gfd/ community
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>>50121840
So don't take any/many items then?
How are they incompatible? Many of them don't really specify what species they're made for and should reasonably work for most humanoid-ish creatures; so what did you make? Something that's even more incompatible than the Irish elk?
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>>50121024
Aenathari peaches are based on the Chinese, Hebrew and Hindi peaches of eternal life, though the Tamil ones specifically.

As for Adrig manipulators, they're much less stable then Anonymity masks, which can generate visages indefinitely and with less strain. Adrigs are also subsidized for the xenos and spiritual elements.

>>50121039
Sure, if your interested, though I'll need to look over it.
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>>50121946
they immediately looked like a tumblr invasion, and your experience certainly sounds like it.
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>>50120842
Hey, just the person I'm looking for.

I'm doing a build after spending way too much time pouring over the CYOA. I have to ask, what is the purpose of choosing a Home District if you're going to be spending all your time on a Hubworld? Do you teleport home daily? Or do you just head back there after years and years of adventure?
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>>50121895
>even
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>>50121981
It could be either one or anything in between. Some, notably like Duwall can go years or even decades without returning to Ae. Others will spend only hours at a time off Ae.
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>>50121970
The girls are tumblr, they are passive aggressive and rude as fuck but never directly argue with you or say anything out loud, whereas the guys are insecure fatasses who wanna impress the tumblrgirls by being as hostile and aggressive as possible.

No one likes each other on gfd. The warmest interaction there is will be a guy posting a meme in one of the tens of discords and people saying 'me'.

gfd deserves to be banned from every board, not kidding.
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>>50121958
Well, for one, it doesn't really need weapons since it starts with multiple natural ones. I don't think it needs or can even wear most kinds of armor without extensive modification, and it'd kill its natural mobility. Any kind of surgical modifications are probably out since its acid blood would eat through almost any non-biological material you could insert into it.

That cuts out almost all of the items available.
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>>50122024
Fair enough.

First build incoming, Self-Insert
>Name
Me
>Gender
Male
>Background
The Now, Watcher (5 free traits, one free companion, low-tech understanding)

>Traits (8 total)
Natural Physique (7)
Lucky (6)
Self Aware (5)
Silver Tongue (4)
Emotional Sense (3)
Utilitarian (2)
Adaptability (1)
Critical (0)

>Items (2000 credits)
Traveller Leathers w/upgrade (1800)
Tartan Cloak, dark gray (1750)
Yuta Brace w/upgrade and Partner Brace (1450)
Multiversal Timekeeper (1400)
Enhanced Occulatus (1280)
InvisiYut Cloak (880)
Universal Traveller Markers (870)
Self Operating Cooking Gear (860)
Operabia Module: Low Level ET Teleport (260)
Healing Chip (10)

>Faction
The True Travelers

Free Traveller Leathers w/upgrade and Yuta Brace w/upgrade and Partner Brace. 500 credits back in my pocket, putting me at 510.

>Additional Items (510 Credits)
Whale Marks (410)
Mathery Travellers Encyclopedia Vol 1-8324 w/psychic paper for ease of use (370)
Jetpack, Rocket Boot variety with some sort of stablizing system (170)
Ring of Dispel (20)
Standard Breather (0)


>Additional Skill
Upgrade tech understanding to Mid. I'm a scientist, I'd hate to lose too much of my knowledge to skill restrictions.

>Covenant
Temple of the Wild Gods. Free fox fire? Pagan deities? I'm game. Gotta love that extra versatility.

>Allies (4+1 for Watcher background)
Saint Havel
Xian Mayen
Isalia Phouskas
Temüjin
Lethice

>District
Ospherous Reserve. My companions can come and go as they please, they know where to find me. Should get some good alone time to chat with them too.

>Hubworld
Jagbel – Great Terrible Truths, World Exploration Mission. I can't say no to some good Lovecraft action
Either that or Free Traveler...I really can't decide which I want more. Of course, I suppose that is the danger of having the Universe at your fingertips.

I guess I'm most interested in doing the Star-Lord thing. Adventuring the my rag-tag group, looting ruins, swindling, drinking, etc.
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>>50122049
Shame that such a good fetish is so ill-represented.
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>>50122024
Would a Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha-style origin be possible? Basically a being from a space-faring civ that uses magitech? Like the Magitech skill?

I realize we can pick it up after being recruited, I just want to come from a magitech civilization if possible.
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>>50122072
>starts with multiple natural ones
You should probably still take natural weapons from the weaponslist; or at least that's the conclusion Highlander reached when I discussed something similar.

>probably
C'mon anon, this is Traveller, you've got to cheat harder; it works if you want it to.
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>>50120754

>think I came up with an original idea
>stat it out, get to companions
>one of the companions is the exact same idea I had

fug
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>>50121967
What does the enchantment " avaricious taint" do?
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>>50122119
Oh I did, I figured I'd get the weapons 'upgraded' from its natural strength to equivalent to other traveler weapons. The problem was I didn't really need much else, though I guess I could munchkin and get like 50 more skills.

Plus what kind of companions would it even want. Probably not Yautja.
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>>50122124
>avaricious
>having or showing an extreme greed for wealth or material gain.

It means you have a greedy asshole.
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>>50119974

Wait a fucking minute. Are you telling me I can have two 10 year old sisters as owners?
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>>50119974
Please do this is my absolute favorite CYOA ever.
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>>50119974
I can't even get this to open
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>>50122077
Agreed. The content is good as well. I did a bit of writefagging there as I enjoy it, I joined a discord and one guy randomly said that I 'speak without regard for other's feelings' not even angrily, just casually, like an autistic guy. Called him an asshole and he got mad saying I was 'starting conflict' while guy 3 screencapped the whole convo and shared it for his friends to take sides on. Guy I called an asshole kicked me, then added me back 2 days later as he 'beeds my activity'

In general any kind of fetish community can be full of assholes, but a large chunk of people who enjoy gfd enjoy it as they're narcissists. They like the idea of a partner who does everything in the relationship. It's a shame as it's objectively the best fetish.
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>>50122116
I see no reason why not.

>>50122124
Think selective red squid venom ala Red Dwarf. It's a thin coating of that that can burn through most ferrous metals.

>>50122073
Neat.
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>>50122189
I just think role reversal is cute sometimes and generally dig tough/capable chicks. It's not even my main kink, it's just something that's adorable when done well, just like an old fashioned romance.
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>>50122181
>all the updates are nerfs
I assure you it'll become your most hated CYOA ever once he's done with this.
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>>50122172
I had to double check what I wrote.
Yes, yes you can. You can also live with them. And roommate owners are just roommates when you're not with them as owners.

>>50122185
What are you using? It should work with basically everything, I specifically make it a PDF/A-1b so it should look and act the same everywhere.
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>>50122223

>Yes, yes you can
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>>50122216
Agreed, it's cute when it's just a semi tough girl flirting with a boy and teasing him. Don't like the whole 'become a house husband and eat her out every hour' stuff
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>>50122196
Thanks for the response
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>>50122239
If a guy wants to be a house husband that's fine, forcing him into it definitely isn't cute though.

Forcing constant sex just seems brainless to me, I get that it's a fetish scenario but I like it a little more tempered than all that.
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>>50122196
Can I trade in the Motorcycle from Lonesome Road for credits?
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>>50122328
Happy to reply friend.

>>50122407
Yes.
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>>50120754
I got bored and decided to rehaul my insanity build a bit.
Could someone like this even get recruited as a traveller?

Name: Still haven't come up with one.
Origin: Female, The Now; Watcher
Traits: Low-Tech, Common-Ether, Religious Studies, Adaptability, Natural Beauty, Noble Bearing, Natural, Physique, Martial Training, Tactician, Silver Tongue, Berserker, Raider, Frontliner, Adokori, Survivor, Pariah, Experimental, Chosen Blood, Founded in Madness, Critical, Cheaterman, Terrorist, Fourth Wall Awareness
Armour: The Green Armour, Everwalkers Cloth Combined by making the cloth from "green" (natural) fibres.
Weapons: Yuta Brace
Knick-Knacks: 'Pegs', ID Card, Bottomless Bag, Aenathari Peach, Iron Halo, Healing-Chip w/Upgrade
Little Things...: I don't need no Governa's dalla! x10, Ethereal-heart, Marked, Brothers of the Bite, Disfigured Dreamer, Full Moon Touch
Faction: The Lonesome Road
Covenant: The Temple of Great Holy Light
Ally: Mamirai
Home District/Hubworld: Free Traveller (Experimental Department Response Crew)

>>50122158
>few companions
>few Items
>all the skills
I can sympathize.
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>>50117498
Also smithing options. There's no path for a pickaxe so I can mine out iron and pan gold from rivers.
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>>50122122
which companion?
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>>50122424
One more, if you take the "falling" drawback are you gauneed to die or could you potentially survive and return from your harrowing fall into the abyss?
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>>50122509
>few companions
>few Items
>all the skills
>I can sympathize.

It is like the choice between fish, knowing how to fish, fishing gear, and fellow fishermen to help.
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>>50115038
Chiaki is 2cute.
Alright...
Log cabin.
Touch me, touch me.
Auto /ck/ (1)
Stronk Gear (2)
NormieStation (3)
Gaymen Piisii (4)
The Rest (5)
/lit/ as Heck (6)
LEWD (7)
Thrill ride (8)
200% comfy (9)
/out/, starting with a shallow lake with a forest around it and a mountain nearby (11)
Min-Max for 1 additional item to trade for a companion (15 pts, 10 items)
True Love (Chiaki) (12 items)
Redesign (13 pts)
Interbot (12)
Very Own Soul (11)
Last Resort (9)
HQ, HQ (8)
Never Let Go (5)
Aether Orchestra (4)
Machine Learning (2)
Attractive Forces (1)
Skinship (0)

Thanks.
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>>50115452
John-Paul Sartre with my build here >>50123350
Money
Immortality
Induce Fetish
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>>50118074
>new Blood Magic
Where?
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>>50115452
>http://pastebin.com/hQt1L90w
Immortality
Waifu
Money
Become the girl

Too easy
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Rolled 8, 10, 2, 1, 10, 7 = 38 (6d10)

>>50118815
let's do this shit!
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>>50122943
I suppose it depends on the Traveller, and the abyss they face.
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>>50120754
Anyone else see the new Dr. Strange movie? Gave me a big hankering to finish a magic traveler build.
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>>50122158
Alien and Predator working together would be cool though.
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>>50123682
I know this is kind of a small thing. But is there anyway around the Ikko-Ikki's head shaving requirement?
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>>50119974
Ok, which one is this? Because the file is too large for my computer to open or some shit.
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>>50123682
Self Aware, Stone Soul, and Cheaterman.
The worst one.
How powerful would who(or what)ever comes out be?
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>>50123795
Yea, they're uncompromising.

>>50124014
Potent enough to add new players to the game.
Not that what was, but what comes next.
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>>50122222
Quints means it's true
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>>50124039
Well that's a shame. I guess I will have to settle for the inferior ubermensch society.
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>>50124039
>Yea, they're uncompromising.
I think you meant "NO, they're uncompromising."
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>>50124100
The free traits and physical emphasis may be similar but the philosophy is not. Google ubermensch, Nietzsche (who can be taken as a companion partially negating the bonus anyway), and Nihilism.
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New Thread: >>50124366
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>>50124323
Darn it you are right, and it really would not fit my character idea. The cult of john cena doesn't really fit either though since the character has a transfusion and thus could not bulk, not to mention it is stupid. I guess I will really have to consider the Furiosa look.
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>>50122637
I like it!
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