CYOA General

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Rip Photoshop trial

Stop play bad video games Angel and come back to CYOA Gen.

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>>50124554
Nice job.

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Update soon. Are you prepared?

>>50124613
The real Odin would know that the worst crimes in Norse culture are Murder, Oath-breaking, and Rape.

>>50124661
I'M LUBED, GIVE IT TO ME

>>50124673
Anon, you forget! Rape was only a crime in Norse culture if it was committed against a Norsewoman. Foreigners and slaves are free game.

>>50124661
These constant portents of oncoming updates seem to be a falsehood. Verily, they have been foretold for many a thread, but, yea, do we see them? I say unto you, nay. For they shall not come. Put your foolish faith where you will, but for me and mine, we shall trust in no such thing til we have seen it with our own eyes.

>>50124721
Highlander said Sunday like two threads ago.

>>50124733
Honestly, people have been talking about updates for a week straight. I mean, I'm glad ya'll are excited, but it just seems a bit much to me.

>>50124684
CYOA does not seem to make any exception for Norse women. All must be raped in this Odin's mind.

>>50124757
You don't understand what Traveller means to some people.

As much as Highlander makes only the one CYOA, I think some people make builds for only Traveller.

>>50124661
Any one know what the Old-Sons Covenant's trait Indefatigable Purpose does?

>>50124774
Seems a bit crazy to me. It might be because I don't even feel that connected to my own stuff I make and the builds I create. But I guess you've gotta base your life off something.

>>50124867
I wouldn't go that far, but yeah.

>>50124661
What's the dividing line between in natural physique and super human body in terms of size? "normal" human outliers can get up 6'9-7'2, which I think is space marine size.

>>50125010
Space marines are like 8 to 10 feet tall

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>>50124613
Needs more rape

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>>50125010
It's less about exact size and more about the actual strength. Natural physique makes you the best a natural human (or whatever your race is) can be, Super Human makes you more capable than should naturally be possible. So they could look the exact same, but behave differently. That said, I'd say max size for a human with natural physique would be around 7'6", maybe 8 feet.

>>50125018
No.

>>50125018
Gregore Clegane is 8'2 but not augmented. Would a character like that be super human or natural physique?

Highlander your imput would be appreciated

>>50125010
"Normal" humans who reach that size are less physically stable. What I mean is most are unhealthy and all are more prone to injury at that size. You could be say Shaq on natural physique but you would be very likely to say suffer high impact injuries that might mess you up for a long time for example. The super human body can weather all the negatives of its size in a way a real person cannot.

*This is just some anons interpretation of the difference.

>>50124519
>someone posts your CYOA
yay I did a passable job

>>50125054
>>50125104
This makes sense anons. Good feedback

>>50124579
What was the post linked to there?

>>50125116
oh also Be The Fighting Game Villan coming soon

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>>50125116
If you did a bad job, you'd be toast!

>>50125216
i wasn't bready for that pun

What's the best drawing/editing software to make CYOAs with?

>>50125250
personally, I use GIMP, but that might just be cause it's free. still does everything I want to do with my CYOAs, though.

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>>50125039
> Entropy 5.
> Time 5.
> Summoning 5.
> Longevity 5.
> Teleportation 5.
> Transmuting 5.
> Domain 5.
> Healing 5.
> Charm 4.
> Compulsion 1
> Outlive universe.
> REVIVE DEAD GOD.

EVER WANTED TO SEE UNDEAD GODS FIGHT THE ELDRITCH HOARDS?! FUCK THE MULTIVERSE, SHIT BE WACK, YO. I AM FOR WORLD END, AND IT IS SWELL? STILL WITHOUT EQUAL 1845, BUT NOT WITHOUT TRYING JESUS FUCK PLEASE KILL ME THIS IS PAIN.

>>50125264
photoshop is free too my friend

>>50125074
I would say superhuman. Goliath might be another example for such a case. I would say simply mentioning that it is a natural occurrence of superhuman is the way to go (such characters do usually have some sort of mythic aspect anyway).

Not to mention that technically the most famous superhumans the space marines are based on a "naturally" occurring human, the Emperor.

>>50125271
see
>>50124444

>>50125283
Argh me harty, ye know what ye must do.

>>50124366
Getting pulled into another dimension was certainly a traumatic experience. Maybe not as traumatic as getting getting puked on by the giant fairy savior you just summoned, but hey. Those mages lived.

>Drawbacks
Hostile Environment
Others

Size 1
Sleep 6
Magic 6
Similarity 4
Technology 3
Starting Land 3

>Form
Practically Human: Fairy

Bonuses - Communication, Understanding, Harness Energy, Limitless Power, Magical Ability

Abilities - Dangersense, Adoration.

So this new world has kind of a steampunk fantasy thing going on, with elves in dirigables, orcs in waistcoats, etc. It'd be a really cool place to live if it wasn't also full of giant monsters.

A while back the peoples of this world started summoning giant beings of power from other dimensions to protect them from that awful shit. Which let them form cities and countries instead of eking out an existence as hunter-gatherers at the bottom of the food chain. Buuuuutt it also caused an arms race to erupt between these countries to see who could summon the biggest and baddest guardian and dominate their neighbors.

The country that summoned me used to be much bigger, but had been reduced to a client kingdom after their last guardian got stomped into paste. When they pulled me through,I came out looking like a giant glowy elf with phenomenal magic powers and sweet butterfly wings, which was awesome, til I found out the people I was expected to fight were almost all large enough to crush me with a gesture. Seriously, one of them is bigger than the moon. She literally just floats in orbit and reaches down to obliterate any guardian who gets too close to her city.

On top of that, the people I'm protecting are weirdly into me. Like, stalkerishly into me. Turns out before I showed up all their neighbors made them pay exorbitant "protection" fees and now I'm here the entire country can afford dinner again. So they follow me everywhere to show how super grateful they are.

Oh well. Beats working at Walmart.

>>50125250
I've got the most modern form of Photoshop because I'm a student, and damn if it doesn't work great.

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>>50124366
The Giver

Size lvl 2 (4)
Sleep lvl 5 (20)
Magic lvl 6 (30) (duh)
Similarity lvl 4 (14)
Tech lvl 0 (0)
Starting Land lvl 0 (0)

Total : 68
Having a big empire from the start is going to feel tiresome. It will be like a 4X game but with a God with magic instead of the Console cheats. I'll demand a virgin sacrifice (QT Virgins, not that neckbeard crap) every once in a while. I could probably research a spell to turn into just the right size to rape, I'm sure.

Fuck communication or individual rights, I'll build the entire civilization around ME so that the whole language will be similar to mine and my own Divine Rule supersedes any civil convention. Hell, the Magic lvl 6 pays for itself with the 30 MP bonus.

Shrink (10MP) : ah, here is the rape spell
Symbiosis(14MP) : gonna need bigger guns if we are to capture other civs for snackrifices
Interdimensional Bedchamber(6MP) : Only thing I can buy with the leftovers. I'd rather have a cozy cabin or any of the other hundred comfy apartment CYOAs though.

Worship(14)
I'll Grab my stuff(8) : PC full of PDFs and music and games. Cellphone which could be divinely enhanced to speak directly into worshiper minds, I suppose I could go grab a bottle of Amaretto and make that my new ambrosia.
Robot Form (8) : With extra tentacle dicks.

2 leftover points so I'll take a big city. Hostile Enviroment sounds like a hoot, I'll take that and dump the extra points into Magic. Worthwhile enemies are what Legends are all about
>Then why don't you take Others too
Didn't say they had to be MY own enemies. I could probably give not-Herakles a plasma sword and duelist glove to destroy and capture the +7 Mantilich.

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>>50124661
>Background
'Dave'
Male(???)
Overrun Planet; Ultimate Lifeform

>Skills
Low-Tech Understanding
Adaptability
Martial Training
Sneak
Survivor
Critical
Terrorist
Dai-Picta
Tykariad
Xenomorph Body*

>Items
-Clothing
Nudist License

-Weapons
Yuta Brace (Upgraded)
Natural Weapons (Upgraded Claws)
Natural Weapons (Upgraded Tail)
Natural Weapons (Upgraded Fangs/Jaw)

-Knick-knacks
Pegs
Basic Survival Kit
Basic Bag
ID Card
Flux Generator
Burning Charm
Internal Sustenance Model
Operia Module: Aura Shroud

>Little Things...
I don't need no Governa's dalla! x3
Notorious
Recovering cannibal
My Best Friend (Alien Queen)
Repulsive

>Faction
The Lonesome Road

>Covenant
The Time Guard Unit

>Companions
Xeo
Mamirai
Sho Viot
Glig-Irmuns

>Home District
Pipeline 102 - Soaring Depths and Great Views

>Hubworld
Terra-D2368 - In Which the Future is blank

>PANIC
None

*Xenomorph bodies are naturally resistant to most trauma, can survive in almost any area, have a very strong acid blood, and multiple natural weapons. Unfortunately, almost all of them display animal-level intleligence and for some reason Queens cannot handle the rigors of time/dimensional travel. No one has yet managed to deciper their clicks and hisses into a recognizable language either, though they do seem to understand others when they talk.

>>50125370
Dave is...well ,he's a curious one. Born an average 'drone' on an overrun world, a freak genetic mutation gifted him with greater than normal intelligence for his kind. This genetic mutation also prevents him from morphing into a Queen abscence the presence of another, and also made him eligible to become a traveler. He still isn't that smart, however, and most complicated subjects escape his grasp (testing indicates an IQ of 70 or so, with notable defencies in subjects like math). The Yautja frequently hunt his kind, and the fact that one became a Traveler seems to indicate to them that he may be a step above the rest so they actively seek him out to hunt. Because of these factors, Dave largely keeps to himself and his appearance means he can only be utilized on worlds that are too far gone for anyone to care.
His natural body is well-suited towards assassination, and he is frequently approached by higher ups in the government of Ae to deal with planets other travelers would avoid. His companions are all either monstrous like himself or things that aren't easily repulsed. He has a taste for human flesh thanks to his upbringing, but thanks to some clever work by Biological/Mechanical, he has an internal sustenance module that can resist his bodies potent acid blood and allows him to avoid the desire to eat. He's also managed to convince them to fuse a flux generator on his back, attached to the various spikes sticking out of it.
Attempt at making a Xenomorph using the available stuff. He starts with no bonus traits besides his body because of all the innate advantages of being a Xenomorph.

>>50125275
Half giants and demi gods and the like would also be good examples of a "naturally" occurring superhuman body

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>>50124418
If dubs, dubs ring. Otherwise Le Meme Ring, it's like mass sugeestion but even subtler. I could drive out rival business by saying that they are teh gay, or make it harder for slavs to get jobs by imprinting the idea they are drunken retards no matter where they go.

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I want to violate Italics.

>>50125545
> Tome.
> Shadow Magic.
> Balance.
> Light Magic.
> Space.
> Black Hole.
> Golemancy.
> Fire Magic.
> Wind Magic.

Fuck y'all, Imma make black hole golems.

>>50125566
THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE

Highlander a best, she's the only one with tits.

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>>50125039
Outlive Universe -90
Grant Immortality -80
Muscle Wizard -70
Longevity 5 -61
Healing 5 -52
Transmuting 5 -43
Teleportation 5 -34
Time 5 -25
Domain 5 -16
Fire 3 -13
Water 3 -10
Earth 3 -7
Air 3 -4
Compulsion 2 -1
Abjuration 1 -0

>>50124684
>Rape was only a crime in Norse culture if it was committed against a Norsewoman.
Still probably the most progressive ruling in Europe at the time.

>>50125617
Also, the most metal one.

>>50125617
No, rape was universally illegal. Praise the Norse all you want for how they treated their own women, they had a lot of rights they didn't get elsewhere in Europe, but this isn't really somewhere they were ahead of other people.

>>50125617
and then the Mongols came

>>50125718
>Rape was universally illegal
Not according to Early Greece.

>>50125718
Please you obviously don't know what you're talking about so just stop.

>>50125734
Since when the fuck was Early Greece involved in early Medieval Europe?

>>50125735
Wonderful evidence.

>>50125759
>Over course of Journey
>Jeanne
She's been through WW2, a warlock doesn't scare her.
>Strago
What's an epic journey without music?
>Alfonzo
I can guarantee a sizable amount of shankables as our journey continues.
>Henderson
He literally killed a god.
>Ms. Baggins
OH GOD SO FUCKING CUTE
>Empress
We may or may not end up committing several crimes, and I want to be sure no one gets arrested.
>Gorgon
Snake? Snake? SNAAAAAKE!

>>50125356
>50125303
Hey I'm the writefag who made >50125303 I'm thinking about doing up some writefaggery for a bigger world and I was wondering if you wanted to be in it?

>>50125865
oops meant >>50125303

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>>50124444
>trial

>>50125911
Im working on it I swear

>>50124661
Which two non-ethereal companions would be best for fighting large groups of people? Preferably melee fighters.

How fast can someone with an Overclocked Iron Hide switch from ordinary flesh to iron?
Does it tire them out?

>>50126060
Probably general heavy hitters like Agatha or one of the Hardlights.

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>>50125566
I'll take Angel for the sole purpose of beating them up.

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>>50125739
>greece
>not europe

>>50124654

I haven't seen this one in forever

>>50126079
How does Saint Havel stack up? Or is he ethereal?

>>50126167
Early Greece. Early.

>>50126167
I think his quibble was the medieval bit.

>>50126205
Probably pretty good, but he also probably has some Ethereal stuff going on given his source material.

Also, weak to backstabs.

>>50124518
>come back

I can never tell with you chucklefucks, do you actually hate her or has she engineered some kind of double-reverse stockholm syndrome in you?

>>50124673
This, desu

It's clearly Slaanesh trying to mock Khorne

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wew lad

>>50125152
>Be the Fighting Game Villain

I'm looking forward to this but I don't actually know many fighting game villains other than Bison, Akuma and Juri-Han. Admittedly "smart as fuck keikaku man", "beast as fuck huge mclarge punching man" and "the cute girl" sound like popular choices.

>>50126306
Ignore Angel, her white knights and her black knight shitposters.

As far as I am concerned, they've been at this for so long its a fucking daily theatrical act.

>>50126205
I went with Havel for the pure combat ability. I'm a damn sucker for FROM characters. It pretty much completes the companion part of Universal War for me

>>50126258
Well, shit.
Well I guess I'm taking Agatha, but I'm the other slot is a 3-way tie between Mike Compound, Mad Cardog, and Ingaelsji Harlagsveld

>>50126456
The Hardlight vanguard is probably better. Yellow Jade I think? Also maybe one of the Nisetics.

>>50124654
The Temple

Workshop
Study
Waterworks

Towers
Cannons
Bridge
Paintings
Blockades

Servant
Magical
Mend
Chores
Supply

Never underestimate the importance of automated logistics in a siege. Outer defences are fairly comprehensive, so I'll focus on magic to prepare my own traps and such within the blockades, maybe even rig them up so the paintings can launch them automatically? All in all a pretty good life when combined with not-Avacyn for company and comradeship, in that order.

Any other CYOAs like this and >>50126335 where you form a symbiotic relationship with a geography-sized entity?

Feels like just the right balance of comfy and awesome.

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>>50126335
Here is the new version. Think I just changed some in the replicator option to make it more attractive since 1.02 (there are food designers out there who make super popular limited creations that are limited in number of replications/number of rights sold, you being a Ship's Human of course don't have to deal with things like that). Kinda like high end sneakers I guess. No one I've seen has ever picked it so figured I'd add on to it.

Also added /tg/ in the top right since this was getting posted in a bunch of places and figured it'd be nice people knew what kind of home it came from. As far as I can tell besides /tg/ and /cyoa/ on (forgot this was filtered)chan there is a reddit and a funnyjunk page for cyoas. Surprised there isn't a twitter account. Kinda wondering if cyoas should be more popularized than they already are though.

Also working on an expansion I guess of interesting places in the setting. Not really a CYOA though since there won't be any choices.... I haven't put a lot of time in it lately though since I've been following the us election very closely.

Anyway thanks again everyone for the great responses from the previous threads.

>>50126617
Hell yeah, can't wait to see the expansion. This is probably my favorite exotic waifu cyoa so far.

>>50126617
So what is with the complete isolation in this setting?

>>50125911
Never got a chance to ask you, why did you change the Battlemage skill trees from two distinct tiers into one per element?

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So I'm wondering which CYOA I should focus on making atm, Manifest Destiny, a super soldier Grimdark CYOA or Adventures in the Orient, a more lighthearted CYOA set in a fantasy version of Asia, similar to Titanlands but Asian instead.

as I've posted the WIP for Manifest, here's what I've got so far for Adventures in the Orient.

I'm also wondering if adding in more typical fantasy races (orcs, elves, etc.) would be preferable or if I should keep it strictly Asian mythological creatures based. If I do the latter, there's not many more races I can add in.

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>>50126659

>he doesn't already live in complete isolation

>>50126664

What's the difference between human and nuwaren

>>50126617
Just curious, what are combat-spec'd ship weapons like in this setting?

And the dolls-are they robots, clones or something else?

What sort of things live out there that threaten humanity if ships are so powerful?

>>50126664
Eh, I'd personally like to see a >>50126484
related CYOA but out of those my vote goes to Orient

>>50126673
Nuwaren are supposed to be, essentially, lamia. Unfortunately the picture doesn't really capture that very well, and I didn't want to make them overtly snake like in the upper body.

>>50126664

Which one's got the waifus

>>50126695

Seems like you've got some typical races added, and it doesn't seem like you can add much else. I don't see the kappas though.

>>50126699
There will be a Monstergirl island as a quest so there will be plenty of waifus of many different types.

>>50126715

Be sure to include ghosts for ghost blowjobs.

>>50125039
Teleportation III (95)
Charm III (90)
Enchanting V (81)
Healing IV (74)
Domain V (65)
Shadow V (56)
Nature IV (49)
Air IV (42)
Earth V (33)
Water V (24)
Fire IV (17)
Conjuring II (14)
Compulsion I (13)
Longevity IV (6)
Illusion III (1)
Entropy I (0)

I guess I'm a god now. Going to screw around in the real world collecting my perfect 10 slaves, then retreat into my Domain. Seems fun.

>>50126677
>Just curious, what are combat-spec'd ship weapons like in this setting?

A combat Ship (and Ships in general though to a lesser degree) is going to use weapons that will pierce through their enemies defenses the best.

This can be pretty modular and changed on the fly but I'd imagine it as big space guns. So for easy stuff they might use a laser to eat through metal or a bunch of railguns that are firing materials that are heavier than they should probably normally be! Combat Ships have weirder weapons that are flashier though and have their internals built to have quicker responses to changes in defense and stuff like that. A Combat Ship might have a gun that increases the gravity at whatever it points to for instance while normal Ships just pew pew.

>And the dolls-are they robots, clones or something else?

Dolls are biorobots. They are not sentient. Human society ranks things by levels of sentience so it would be slavery to have sentient sex droids. The Ship can only get around this once in the AI Uplift option when they're born. Technically every single person being auditioned would be sentient in that case.

>What sort of things live out there that threaten humanity if ships are so powerful?

Humans weren't the first species in the universe to experience a singularity. Things might have no gone so well for some of the races before them. The AI might have gone too far in their path of evolution.

And surely at the scale of the universe there has to be some plant life that evolved enough to cut the middleman out and go directly to the source to feed.

>>50126617
Time Kidnapped
Exploration
Shared Senses
Ships choice
Kuudere
Digital Uplink
Builder Focus
Cosmic Radiation
SON
Ship

At the beginning of this CYOA/Adventure I only wanted to explore the unknown and taste exotic radiations, but I ended up falling in love with my ship.

Also, I like that Builders VR option since it seems like it could act as a CYOA in itself in some respects... And I get to play with Ship.

>>50126769
Yandere Reaper fleets? How horrifying.

Also am I missing something, or is Digital Uplink actually superior to Overclock for combat purposes? It effectively does the same thing since you can do more things at once rather than just think and react quicker, plus it's not an archaic piece of scrap that strains you when overused, PLUS you can hack through it which could be useful when your opponents also have post-singularity AI ships.

>>50126769

>weapons that will pierce through their enemies defenses the best

Why do you have to mention this

It's always the case

>>50126769

Don't you mean sapient? There are many things on this planet that are sentient.

>>50126617
Time Kidnapped
Feeling
Comfy
Ship's
Deredere
Overclock
Game
Cosmic
Past
Ship

I wanna go back home

>>50126790
Ships have to turn down how fast they think so they don't become too separated from their Human so overclock is nice since it allows them to up their game too.

>>50126835
yeah that sounds right. maybe the AI isn't sentient too I don't really know the difference in terms of computer stuff. like whats the different between a sentient AI and a sapient AI.

>>50126827
Yeah I guess. I dunno I kept thinking of a battleship that just has cannons and like anti air machine guns so I wanted to stress the number of weapon options a Ship has and the fact that limits come in terms of how varied their weapons are versus how big their main cannon is or something.

I want to do an Evangelion CYOA but I'm afraid of fucking it up. What do I do?

>>50126871
You do it anyway, because we're bored and what have you got to lose, really? Think of it like this: If you do it right, you get an internet pat on the back, if you do it wrong you're anon and can escape your sins.

>>50126864

http://lmgtfy.com/?q=sentient+vs+sapient

>>50126864
Did you miss my Digital Uplink vs Overclock question?

>>50126722
woo woo[/spoilwer]

>>50124519
Breadfruit pls

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Holy shit, that spoiler came out wronger than a time travelling fetus.

>>50126940
I did but I can expand on it too

>Ships have to turn down how fast they think so they don't become too separated from their Human so overclock is nice since it allows them to up their game too.


Actually I clicked that lmgtfy and started reading about the sentience quotient https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sentience_quotient.

I think Ships would operate their information processing rate as close as they can towards their Human. Obviously close in this case would be super relative for a Ship and they're still going a super smart post singularity AI but I mean they could be so much more if they wanted.

overclock let's you up your information processing rate which allows the Ship to feel okay with upping it's own as well. maybe throw some flowers for algernon type of flavor for why they wouldn't do this normally.

>>50124565
Gotta go with Transmutation.

Trap CYOA m8, would you consider changing the personality section to a bunch of different personality trait gradients you can mix and match?

>>50126617
The only problem with this CYOA is that I can ony pick one option from each set of choices

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>>50126704
I was thinking of adding orcs and elves as I said above, but I think that may be too different. Perhaps they will only be in the western lands.

I did not know if I should have chosen Kappa or Tengu. I suppose I could add some more beastmen as races, perhaps something like the picture shown here for the Chinese mythological creature (I believe it is a humanized Qilin) and something like Monster Girl Encyclopedia's Jinko for Korea.

I'm also getting the feeling too many of the races are more physically oriented, which kind of sucks because I wanted to include a stat system for this CYOA.

>>50126664
Looks cool.

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This is like, version Not Even Goddamn Close To Done. I'll update it tonight with:

>choose your eva model
>choose NERV staff
>choose <s>waifus</s>other pilots
>choose threats besides the angels

>>50126664
I vote for the lighthearted one.

>>50127491
stress response would be a cool choice.

Also I really suggest you fully utilize the 1200 x XXXX dimension.

>>50127519
Those are both good ideas, except I'm an idiot that did this in MS paint so I'd have to start over to resize it without it looking like shit.

If I do a completely new version I promise I'll learn photoshop. And I warned you it might suck.

>>50126664
I dunno, i like all three of them, the space ones are probably more unusual. Manifest Destiny and Grimdark are kinda similar, i guess Manifest is less grimdark so maybe go with it.

>should keep it strictly Asian mythological creatures based
It looks pretty original, no need to add more generic fantasy, keeping to only asian stuff would make it more seperate form Titanlands.

>>50127491
There is something wrong with the fonts in there, some of the text is a bit hard to read. Otherwise it's hilarious! All those freudian jokes. I really want to see that finished.

>>50127542
you might want to try paint.net in that case

also you could just create a new canvas and just select and cut everything onto it.

>>50126335
Doea anyone have the bath image?
Pretty cool desu

>>50127491
Just an idea: Maybe point out some upsides for the Ruins of Arka other than being able to out-hipster all the EVA fans? As written, it seems to be some kind of hardmode. Unless that's the intent, in which case-good work.

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>>50127679
here you go.

I stole the idea from hitchhikers but no one called me out on it.

>>50127491
Oh, and-ditto for the angel clone. Also I thought all EVAs come with the liquid breathing system?

>>50127704
In the show, yeah. I was trying to expand it beyond that. And yes I know what happened the last time /tg/ tried to expand Eva.

>>50127651
I could do that.

>>50127701
Thanks for the quick reply.
And thanks for the great CYOA as well.

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>>50127731
Oh, alright.

>the last time

I don't. Do I...want to know?

>>50127737
Sexual Release, Minor

Huh. No meaningful downsides, not even existential ones. Worst to worst my "dry" spell demands a week of checking up on the latest porn.

Whaddya know.

>>50127766
there is some eva/lovecraft inspired pen and paper setting with a lot of weird fetish shit in it

it's called cthulutech iirc

at least that's what I think he's talking about

>>50127781
Oh, THAT one. I was wondering if there was some actual weird /tg/ homebrew out there.

>>50127766
>>50127781
>>50127793
Adeptus Evangelion. It's a hack of Dark Heresy. It got stupid but quick.

Actually no that's something I should add, you have to pick a creator that will throw things off the rails near the ending.

>1995 Anno: Mental breakdown, shit gets weird.
>2015 Anno: Leaves to make Godzilla, shit is never resolved.
>Adeptus Evangelion: Autismal grimdark

Need a fourth one, though.

Does anyone have Angel's army builder cyoa?

>>50127804
What about the writers of Super Robot Wars?

Danger hikes up by a metric fuckton. Good news is, so does the volume of your lungs and the hype in your veins.

2015 Anno's probably extra-spiteful and vindictively passive aggressive to boot

>>50127701
Hitchhikers was the first thing I thought of when I read that part. It was from the spaceship filled with the bureaucrats right?

Anyone know a good Gimp tutorial?

First time user

>>50127818
Sold. I'll try to get this in the next version.

>>50127858
Just do what I did, suffer through learning it until you can kind of use it.

>>50127858
Gimp has tutorials on their site.

>>50127818
>spoiler
Praise be to the ones who could make Shinji Ikari a badass.

>>50126617
Wow, this one looks pretty cool. Also ship-AI-waifus best

>AI Uplift
>Speed
>Shared Senses
>Ship's Choice
>Deredere

>Digital Uplink
>MMO Focus VR
>Ship Grown Food
>Ship Only Network

>Ship Companion

This is it, or pretty damn close. A personal apotheosis.

>>50127408
If you add something like elves and orcs wouldn't it just be a regular fantasy cyoa with asian stuffs in it?

>>50127986
Glad you liked it so much.

I would definitely be interested in hearing the reasons behind your choices.

>>50126617
AI Uplift
Exploration
Bath that spans the length of the ship.
Ship's Choice. I'd offer input, and what I'd greatly desire, but otherwise eh.
Kuudere
Drone Control
Builder Focus
Cosmic Radiation
Ship Only Network
Ship

>>50128390
>Drone Control
Why drone control anon?

>>50128059
>AI Uplift
It's nice to imagine waking up from this occasionally nightmarish and nonsensical existence to a life in a wondrous space-faring vessel. Time Kidnapped is a good second place.
>Speed
Wherever I am, I must also go fast. I don't even know why this is, but it is. No slow walking, biking, or driving; can't even take my time in the space from the desk to the kitchen.
>Shared Senses
I want to /feel/ reality, beyond the feeble limits of my biology. This is one of the best parts of partnership, for me. I have the feelings for a Shakespearean soliloquy on this topic, but not the writing skill to do it justice. The addiction is part of the fun.
>Ship's Choice Interior
I wouldn't have it any other way. Maybe ONE space, to design as my own; but I trust my ship to know it's own shape (and function) best.
>Deredere
Kuudere probably makes more sense, but I have a hard time imagining an entity 'summoning' me (or someone like me) without some serious neediness.
>Digital Uplink
I could flip/flop on this with Overclock, but this ties RIGHT IN with Shared Senses.
>MMO VR
Internet Spaceships in my spacceship? Real-life blowing up isn't so great, but I LOVE some virtual pewpew.
>Ship Grown
Eating is right next to fucking on the list of things I do enjoy about my flimsy biology.
Cosmic radiation is cool sounding, but it ain't home cooking.
>Ship Only Network
I might've chosen speed, but I still want to see all the cool shit. The other ships are the ones who know where it's at. Ship art sounds awesome too.
>Ship Companion
How much really needs to be said here?

>>50126664
Keep it strictly Asian for the Orient CYOA.

As for which CYOA to focus on, roll 1d2 or something.

>>50125566
Quiet a cute.

Teacherfag here
Does anyone have any short/simple and non-lewd CYOA's? I'm having my first lesson with an unknown number of students tomorrow and I want to end the lesson in a fun way. I was thinking along the lines of those "Choose a column" type CYOA that takes place on an island. I googled it, but they were all with lolis, drugs and dildos.

>>50127491
I love the idea! can't wait for the rest and a question. are you going to make all the characters emotionally broken like in the series?

>>50125133
He failed to spoiler the mystery box.

>>50129499
Black magic. The power I shall wield would be incredible.

>>50129244

"You came to the wrong neighborhood."

Thankfully, it's a easy format to make yourself.

Hmm. Still, this is not the right hood for this.

>>50129551
I have to disagree, I had several on my old hard drive that were what I was looking for that came from here. I'd rather not have to create and balance one myself, but it seems that I have to.

Thank you anyway.

>>50129244
M8, around here you basically have 4 options when it comes to this shit: lewd&simple, non-lewd&complex, lewd&complex, and lewd&lewd.

>>50129551
There were tons of non-lewd ones before CYOA became about crazy sexual wish fulfillment

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>>50125771
>Corrosive Saliva
>Wants to lick you

>>50125771
Can companions kill each other?
For example, if I were to choose Waiburn (54), who "will inflict light wounds on your companions for fun", and Gwendolyn (21), who "Becomes engraged if anybody touches her"?

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>>50125054
that picture doesnt add up, i recall the space marines being about twice as tall as a full grown man

>>50127408
If you can give them the right feel non-human races would be cool. I would say elves yes (assuming you can find some good art), Orcs no (they kinda wreck the mystique IMO).

As for other races you could consider some type of Yokai or Oni. Also while cat girls/boys might not work in an eastern setting it could be conducive to rabbit girls/boys (they could possibly get a luck boost or moon affinity). Monkeys could work as well (just straight up monkeys with human level intelligence that can talk). Dragonoids are a possibility too.

>>50129881
've seen worse stuff.

>>50129924
Just wanted to add that I wrote this before seeing the WIP. So we already got Oni and Catfolk.

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>>50129244
This might be difficult to read, depending on distance, but it's about as simple as I have.

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>>50130026
Or this one, which is also a real classic.

>>50126801
You're not the captain of the ship, anon. Ship might play-act like you're the captain, but the whole thing runs independently of you, more efficiently and effectively than you could ever manage regardless of your augments.

>>50130026
>>50130042
You're a gentleman and a scholar. It's not what in mind, but they are easy enough. I'm gonna transcript them anyway.

>>50127910
though they may be out of date, and look like they were machine translated from spanish.

>>50125566
>see new author waifu cyoa
>desperately backpedal through threads to see if anyone chooses you
>hello darkness my old friend

>>50129499
Boobs powers. Make some good money naturally helping out women. If it works on MtF, I can make a fortune there too.

Even if they all don't want to sleep with me, I'm a pretty charismatic, decent looking dude. If there is even a 1% chance that I get to stick my dick between some J-cups I must have this power

>>50130026
This is the nicer version, where Fog doesn't have the "kidnap and endlessly rape someone" option

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>>50130214
Well, at least you're on the list, unlike many other authors.

>>50129244
The best CYOA archive on the internet is imgur.com/r/makeyourchoice.

The only downside is that all the images are compressed as .jpg before being saved, but you can fix that with Google Reverse Image Search (or asking for the better quality here after bump limit)

>>50129244
What do you teach?

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>>50129244
I dunno if you want to show mine to kids, but they're relatively simple and not lewd.

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>>50129244
Could just do the "choose the dog" part of this one.

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>>50130321
Mystery box if people want it.

>>50124661
I just can't seem to make a character I want that makes sense.

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>>50129244
Kids like martial arts, don't they?

>>50130287
Thank you! As I said, image quality is not a limit since I'm going to transcribe these anyway.

Any interest in a Gundam cyoa?

>>50130763
It's a Gungam!

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>>50129244
posting mine
it's sci-fi, so it's vaguely educational

>>50126617

Time Kidnapped
Feeling
Shared Senses
Ship's Choice
Deredere
Digital Uplink
MMO Focus
Flavor Implant
Ship Only Network
Ship

I balance the needs of myself and the ship so we can meet in the middle of our combined existence. I'd encourage her to play with me in the MMOverse and we'd be able to talk with other humans, ships, cook together, and even experiment with each others cooking via Shared Senses+Digital Uplink in the cooking MMO. Overall we'd be living life together and learn cohabitation with man, ship, and whatever lies beyond the stars.

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Not really a cyoa, just some material that could be used if someone likes.

by the way A is my waifu.

>>50131028
good taste anon

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>>50124654
Castle

recreation (physical +)
Study (magic +)
Showroom (troops)
Workshop (build weapons, magic traps, etc)
Water Works (healing)

Bridge
Golem
Cannons
Towers
Animation

Servant (I'm assuming it would get pretty lonely, am I the only sentient being?)
Physical
Magic

I think I have a damn good defence/offence while living relatively comfortable and have activity to occupy my time.

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>>50127737
Lvl 3 Gratitude and Lvl 3 Ascendance

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>>50126664
Maybe a race of divine-descended spirit creatures? Perhaps acting as primal forces of nature or enforcers of concepts?

I.E. A spirit of storms or destruction.

>>50131028
I'm diggin' D.

>>50131028
Why don't you turn it into a cyoa?

>>50124418
I need a ring that endows me with the ability to read those horrific fonts.

>>50130763
that'd be good

>>50130296

>Item:
>Sand
I actually had a hard time choosing one of the options since they all sound pretty good. So, I just randomly chosen one from the two I like best, Sand and Crystal.

>Investment Level
>Woven
I like the idea of endless worlds, multitudes of sentient and sentient lifeforms, as well as the fact the everything in that universe has a soul even if it is just a spark of it, and the fact that there a possibility of coming in contact of other universes which may enable my species and other universes' species to survive the Collapse.

Also, nice work on this COYA, it's simple, short, and nice to look at.

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This is my first time ever making something like this, any criticisms, suggestions, or advice would be extremely welcome. Please not it's not finished, and even though I promised you, anon from two days ago, I don't think it'll be finished by today. Very sorry.

Also I think I'm hooked on making these. I didn't expect it to be this fun.

>>50127737
Financial Support - Minor
I already have a full time job that I intend to work for the next year. Goodbye student loans and mortgage.

>>50131672
Text would probably improve it.

>>50131028
E and H are the only good ones. The rest look deformed.

>>50131028
I pick G.

>>50131028
I'm lovin' H, she looks cute, she using a rapier, and she pretty normal looking breasts, I prefer that, and smaller, over giant ones.

>>50129244

>He doesn't like lolis, drugs and dildos

Besides, don't you think a considerable amount of your students are into at least some of those things?

>>50131672
This is something I want.

Possible partners-in-crime would be cool, though unnecessary.

An expansive semblance list is required.

God speed, anon.

>>50124418
The Ring of Dreams.

I would choose the Programmer's Ring, but the description isn't good enough to tell me how much time and energy.

>>50131100

What kinda retarded ass guard is that

>>50131777
Best taste.

>>50131646
Nice! An endless dreamscape that's malleable to the thoughts of sentient beings that spawn within it.

>Also, nice work on this COYA, it's simple, short, and nice to look at.
Thanks! I've been trying to go for good looks.

I'm still surprised that nobody has asked what the text running down the sides says.

>>50127737

>you can't buy companies
>or rather, if you do

So which one is it?

In any case,

Supreme Financial Support
Supreme Ascendance

>>50131845
well you have to tell us now,

>>50130347
That's fairly par for the course in Traveller. Have you tried making characters from/based from games or movies? Someone got away with a genderbent Gilgamesh, and one person up there made a Xenomorph.

>>50131890

Copying characters is just boring.

>>50131791
Expansive semblances, got it.

Partners in crime were going to be there from the start.
Thanks!

>>50130347
I just did a self-insert. It made it easier to digest all the material

>>50131672
Origins from back before you started crime. that could confer bonuses, abilities, or some other traits.
I.E. Beacon drop-out, street-rat, destroyed village, or just an asshole.

>>50124366
I NEED TECHNIQUES
TECHNIQUES FOR FIGHTING PEOPLE

>>50131874
It's actually the refrain to the song that's quoted in that little circle, but with the rest of the refrain. It's in the Deseret alphabet, which is a cool semi-phonetic thing.

From "If All Goes Well" by The Dear Hunter:
"Will you carry us to Eden / Someone to believe in / Breaking down the walls which kept us locked away.
Lead us into brilliance / Born by your resilience / Love us all in spite of what we'll do to you."
I felt that it was actually rather relevant to what the contents of the CYOA are about.

>>50131903
Fair enough. I'll leave it to you then, friend.

>>50131968
Like Sambo, Krav Maga, Wing Chun, etc?
You could also go Def Jam Vendetta way and break down styles into their basic components like Dirty Fighting, Projectile Spam, Psycho Powah, Kicking and stuff.

>>50130296
I don't know how anyone can pick anything other than Forgotten or Avatar.

The other two result in your death. In both all your memories, identity, personality, and selfhood are completely erased. It's an idiotic choice unless you're already suicidal.

>>50130296
>Crystal
Has anyone actually picked this? I may have, but I'm not sure whether I actually posted my build before. Anyways, space settings are always neat.

>Woven
Either you win against the abyss, or you lose. And you can only win by fighting back.

My headcanon is that Woven beings live on as their universe, gently guiding it from their eternal dream.

Maybe that's the 'perk' of Crystal; less likely to form intelligence, but leaves just a sliver more behind.

>>50131968
muay thai, ai ki do, chun kuk do, jeet kune do, capoeira(spelling?)

>>50132108
I think it appeals to an altruistic or martyr sort of mentality. You sacrifice yourself for the sake of this huge and wonderful world. However, I think most CYOA people are inherently selfish, so unless they have some grand fedora tipping idea about what a good person they are, I agree there is no real reason to pick those two.

>>50131968

>>50130357

>>50132189
All people are inherently selfish. Most people who sacrifice themselves even believe in some kind of afterlife that rewards them for it. Only the most nihilistic and suicidal types would go for oblivion.

>>50124418
These fonts are shit.
Programmer's Ring
I'll make myself immortal, super-intelligent, and give myself a Captain America physique.

It reminds me of Taylor's power in the Worm fanfic Si Vis Pacem.

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>>50131672
It's okay, anon, I can wait.

>>50132181

>chun kuk do

What is this, martial arts for cucks?

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>>50132224

>2 waifus

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>>50131968
Follow this chart, if you wish.

>>50132269
He might be Muslim. They're allowed up to 4 waifus.

>>50131988
>Deseret alphabet
I recognized some of the letters but, for some stupid reason, I though it was the Shavian alphabet. Also, why did you pick that alphabet? Just to hide the lyrics of the song? Another thing, nice song.

>>50132280

So why would you pick anything but Ameridote? Never heard of it though. What is it?

>>50132286
Or Mormon; Allowed up to three.

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>>50132224
We will wait together, anon.

>>50132301
Just checked out the website; either it's a meme or it's lethal.

>>50132286
You can´t have more than one waifu regardless of your religion, a waifu and a wife are two different things.

>>50132347
Behead all kafirs.

>>50132287
Part of it was to hide the lyrics, the other part is because I already had it on my computer and it looks pretty cool going down the sides like that.

>>50132108
Like 90% of the builds for this one have been Woven. It appeals to more people than the others. I've actually never seen anyone pick reincarnation, though.

Of course I wrote the entire thing in a bout of suicidal depression, so it's tinged with that feeling.

>>50132347
remember: more than one waifu will ruin your laifu

>>50132280
Half of these aren't even martial arts. /fit/ is retarded.

>>50132321
>>50132301
It's /fit/ it's a meme. /fit/ are massive memelords.

>>50132286
>Crusader Armor
>Muslim
Are you insane?

Also he can't be Muslim, his waifus aren't 9-years old.

>>50132392

For you.

>>50132377
Do you have any more statistics about the various choices?

I'd be interested to find out more about anons' preferences, like whether >>50132176's claim about Crystal was true.

>>50128431
You need it to explore outside.

>>50132391
But the other half are martial arts.

>>50132407
I'ma be honest.

Aisha is a pretty cool name.

>>50132429
This is all from my crappy memory and scatterbrained notes, so I could be missing some bits.

I haven't seen anyone pick Flower yet. Most people like Sand or Crystal the most, with some anons going for Circuit.

The vast majority of the builds have been Woven, with a few Avatars and like one Forgotten. I guess the trade off of size for presence of self kind of wasn't terribly that hard for most people to think through. Though a lot of people want to use Woven to prevent another Collapse.

As for >>50132176, while I would say that's not really what it would turn out to be, the story's in his hands now. I just made the setup.

>>50132377
>Like 90% of the builds for this one have been Woven.
Most of the people doing so have posted stupid shit like "I fanwank that I'm still aware despite the CYOA saying otherwise!"

>>50132502
That's the implication, yes.

>>50132536
I've only seen one guy do that so far. It does say that "you lose yourself", so you're pretty much gone, by my interpretation of those words.

A lot of people seem to like the idea of being able to have their "children" interact with other universes and possibly stop the next Collapse.

>>50131028
H is cute, and I love fencer girls.

>>50132589
Most have that in their mind or are suicidal.

>>50131028
G is the best one

>>50132651
I can't fault them for being suicidal. If people are here, it's because of some combination of their lives sucking or them sucking.

>>50132463

>going outside

Are you telling me you aren't a NEET who hasn't left his place in years?

>>50124661
what's the difference between the Divisions and the Departments?
Can you reside in a different hubworld than you work on?
Are Manich and Arian supposed to have the same +/-'s?

So tell me if I've got this right:
First came Order (The First)
Chaos/Corruption/Void (The Second) came about as a consequence of the existence of Order
The Third came next, probably a consequence of the interplay between the First and Second. This was the first entity with something close enough to sentience to be able to make a decision. It chose to dissolve itself, spreading Agency/Purpose all over everything.
Agency interacted with Order, causing Order to dissolve into the multiverse, creating all of us, and notably imposing linear time.
Agency interacted with Void, fracturing it without totally dissolving it, creating the Great Old Ones. These GOO stood outside the multiverse, but thought it would be great if they could conquer it.

The GOO had two instruments to act through: Voidlings that had been injected with bits of multiverse, and people from the multiverse that had been corrupted with bits of Void. The latter were the first generation of Travellers.
The Travellers ultimately betrayed their first generation, fighting off the GOO invasion. Then before even leaving the battlefield, they had their fist civil war over what to do with their Void-tainted inheritance.

Some people are 'dense' in The Third in some sense. They're called 'Children of the Third,' or 'Third-born,' or 'Watchers of the Third,' and they're better at thinking or perceiving outside linear time.
This includes Adokori (sometimes called Adokiri), who can perceive other 'realities' or 'possibilities,' but have to be careful not to look at the Void between realities.
It includes Voidlings who've been tainted with reality, some of whom have been accepted by the Travellers.
It includes Prophets of the Third, who see the past and the future in a similar manner as they see the present.

>>50132846
it may include Augurs (sometimes called Augers) and sub-augurs (sometimes called under-augers) who somehow hook themselves up to an entity called "The Augur," sharing his perception.

>>50129600
>before

As if anon, as if. . .

>>50132869

And what exactly is the augur?

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>>50131672
Might be worth taking half an hour to watch the World of Remnant videos on youtube, gives you plenty of context to work with.

What's the difference between Mercenary and Hands for Hire, aside from maybe scrupples on an individual scale?
Are spies tied to a specific kingdom or can they freelance and work in information or espionage for higher bids?

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>>50130357
Is ther a part 2 to this cause it seems like their should be

Also more Kung Fu

>>50130296
I really like this one because it's short with an interesting premise and meaningful choices.

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>>50133043

So is Traveler getting an update soon? I was going to make a build but if it's getting an update soon I'll just wait.

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>>50133016
>What's the difference between Mercenary and Hands for Hire, aside from maybe scrupples on an individual scale?
Glad you asked, here's an update.
>Are spies tied to a specific kingdom or can they freelance and work in information or espionage for higher bids?
I'm going to add like three more pages to this I think, but there'll be oppurtunities(jobs) for every career.

>>50132939
yeah, no clue. Igra (head of the Administrator faction, first of the council) considers the Eyes of the Third to be basically this one dude. It has given up its humanity, and is tended to by the Eyes like a piece of equipment.

AFAIK we don't have enough information for conjecture.

>>50133279

It's a wonder any of this shit can be explained.

>>50133307
It's amazing the cyoa is 160 pages long yet it answers so few questions.

>>50133197
I am already picking Hands for Hire for pure villain opportunities.

God, I hope there are a shitload of semblances to choose from, and that some are straight up evil or metal.

>>50129924
So far I've got:

Catfolk
Kappa
Bixieren (the image I posted before)
Yakcha (tetra arms)
Tengu
Bai Ze (Hakutaku from Monster Girl Encyclopedia)
Intelligent monkeys that have existed on all three lands and have annoyed the ever loving shit out of everyone since time began.

I'm also thinking of classes as well:

Samurai
Shinobi
Monk
Gunner
Archer
Barbarian

Though I'm uncertain of what types of magic to include, just typical ones?

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>>50126661
Sorry for the late response.

Just gonna give you a pasta:

>Originally, I designed it so that there would be 20 different spells for each element "tree", and that seemed like a decent idea at the time. Across the four trees I originally came up with, there were 80 spells I had to create. It became pretty apparent that as the more element trees I wanted to come out with, 20 spells per element became a nightmare. This led to many problems, such as "reskinned" spells appearing across several of the trees, or the strain to find 20 images that fit the spell descriptions I'd struggled to come out with. I went into a writer's block on this CYOA for many months. I don't consider myself very creative in terms of coming up with things like these, so I had to make a design choice half-way through the CYOA's development to cut the amount of spells per element tree in half. This helped get rid of the "reskinned" spell problem, allowed more uniqueness in the choices readers would make, and above all, it rekindled my motivation. Designing new element trees was no longer as straining, and I went on to complete the CYOA. Many people still complain that 20 spells per element would have been better, but my largest argument against this is that I simply am incapable of achieving this. It's either I cut down the CYOA's scope to accommodate my weakness, or I attempt to keep up with my ambition which would probably have resulted in an abandoned CYOA.

tl;dr I can't manage to come up with 200+ unique spells so I cut the amount of work effort needed in half.

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>>50133555

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>>50129244
I left some space on the top so you can add your own title

Hope you like it.

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>>50133197
Ah, so the difference is what got you there in the first place, and potentially if you're hiring yourself out or being hired out.

Digging it so far.

Sorry to ask again, but does anyone have Angel's army builder cyoa?

>>50133796
Team 1 is the clear winner. They're the only ones with a weapon.

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Alright /tg/, I'm working on a new CYOA. Got the lore/text down, but working on the images.

Before I committed, wanted to know if you guys had any design advice for what I have so far - especially from those of you who've made CYOAs before. The map's concrete, but the nation (posted below) is just a template using some images I had lying around. Am I missing any crucial stats? Not enough text?

Please be as thorough and as constructive as you like - I won't improve if you're not honest! Cheers, lads

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>>50133956
p.s. it's my first CYOA :)

>>50132846
A few things to consider.

Order wasn't technically the first, chaos was, which may be connected to the second as it sought to return to that initial state of reality. Maybe.

Second, Augurs, Prophets of the third and Adokori are all technically the same category in that they're all 'thick' in the third. It just manifests differently.

Last. We don't know if the GOO are sapient, or even alive, they're referred to as conceptual entities. They aren't doing the entering, it's cults that worship them doing that, sponsored by their third tainted children and grand children. The closest thing we have to a GOO is Azathoth, and he's a blind idiot god.

Don't know about Manich and Arian.
HL confirmed you can jump around like a Tardis asshole.
Departments are R&R, Divisions are subsets of the departments.

Also the idea of the early Travellers waging a war in heaven against what is essentially Time Lords is fucking metal.

>>50133128
Sometime tonight, if HL still breaths.

>>50124418
>an hero ring
>alter the length of the year to 365,000,000 days
>an hero
>live out 20 year life that is more like a 20,000,000 year life

>>50133956
Map is pretty generic looking desu.
Text is bit eye straining when viewed for prolonged periods.

>>50134003
wow, quick response. cheers mate - i'll make the text a little bigger and rethink the map. when you say "generic looking", do you mean the design of the map geographically, or the overlays and text on top of it?

>>50133956
Honestly I'd just number the map and put the names in a box beside. It would make things easier to see.

Interested in seeing what comes of it.

>>50133912
Team 2 uses door to block attack

>>50132378
>2016
>not being polyamorous
laughingwaifus.mkv

>>50134122
I'd say each to his own.
Some people want a harem while others want just the one right partner....

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>>50133956
>posted below

>>50133956

I recognize that black waypoint marker thing from somewhere. Can't put my finger on it.

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>>50134330
I took this as a free asset for a base, and added a circle in it. Didn't specifically copy it from anywhere, unless I'm doing it subconciously ;)

>>50134042
i'm not sure I like the idea of a key - I'll probably make the names bigger for legibility but I'm going for an "old map" feel

>>50134383

You should make a country that looks like a dick

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>>50125566
Kit or bust

>>50127737
>Supreme Body Image
>Supreme Financial Support

Don't have any real friends already, so these downsides don't exist for me haha

>>50132846
>Are Manich and Arian supposed to have the same +/-'s?

They don't. Their first + is different. It displays their philosophies as opposites. Manich believes in a beautiful ideal world, while Arian believes humanity to be flawed but capable of anything.

>>50130042
Fischer King.

Gonna live in my perfect, indestructible, beach-side mansion forever.

>>50129499
black magic easily

>>50133956
>spacebattles

>>50124519
>>50125116
>UK grill moves "from" the UK
Why the fuck did you assume my nationality?

>>50134439
That image is fucking majestic.

>>50131028
I would go with E, but so many choices.

>>50134664
she moved from the UK to America, and then back to the UK

>>50134701
>so many
There are eight, anon.

>>50133796
Finally a cyoa with good balance
>Scissor beats door (wood=paper)
>door beats shovel (obvi)
>Shovel beats scissor
>Helmann's can gunk up Magnifying glass AND camera
>but Magnifying glass can set yarn on fire
>Camera can catch you in the act
>pot and basketball hoop are locked in the timeless stalemate

Team one- Chaotic Evil
Team two- true neutral
Team 3- Lawful good

it's beautiful anon

>>50134723

7 more than I need.

>>50126335
Rebirth, for the sake of past glories.

Feeling is a good option so my ship can be mai waifu.

Comfy chair, I don't need fancy stuff but nice things are nice.

Ship's Choice is a nice design option. I'll take the surprise. After all, I deleted my memories for a reason, right?

Kuudere I guess. I don't think I can handle deredere.

Digital uplink sounds handy.
I guess MMO VR since it's the only one where I can communicate with people.

Ship grown, because I like gardening and cooking.

I guess xeno media, the habbers seem like utterly droll people.

I guess I'll take the ship, although I'd like a population of dolls, the ship's physical form is worth more to me.

>>50133992
oh, I was thinking of GOO as Elder Scrolls Daedric Princes. Daedric Princes are kind of concepts, but they also have sort of sentient aspects via their 'protonymic' and 'neonymic.'

Does anyone have the stuff Highlander said about the differences between Psykers, Psionics, and Infused Essence?

>>50134878
Nevermind I found it.

> Psyker: Magic bound from the body, tied to physicality and emotions. Aggressive and Primal
> Psion: Magic of the Mind, tied to the mental and thought. More thought based
> Infused: Magic within reality, and oneness with the world, monastic and life based.

>>50134593
oh. In that case it seems clear it was intentional. I just stopped reading halfway through the sentence, because at that point I thought it confirmed to be identical.

>>50132108
You know you'll die eventually anyway, right?

>>50134593
Can we assume they each have a RED drawback in PC terms?

>>50134875
The problem is we don't even know what the GOO look like. Let alone if they have names.
They might even just be elemental, compelled like hot air is to rise.

>>50135047
Maybe, maybe not. Probably depends on what kind of Traveller picks them.

>>50134018
Make the text bolder as well.

>>50133043
First, learn some fucking grammar.

Second, the creator promised a second page, then dropped out of existence.