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>>47847600

>>47847621
By the other thread I meant the TG one.
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http://poal.me/eceaw2 <-- for those who did not vote for their favorite branching heart girl. miya presently holds the lead, yin places last.

i'll post gifted on behalf of gifted-anon.
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Can someone post the new familiar CYOA?
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>>47847673
NOOOOO ANON this is not the updated version
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>>47847670
since when did plaid become a dyke fashion statement? i missed that one.
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>>47847688
oh. it was already updated, huh? i'll go recollect that then. my bad.
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>>47847670
AA, are you a redhead?

If you are, I don't think we'll be able to stop SDA.
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>>47847670
>That uneven breast sizes
So you're a trap that stuffs?
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take 2, commence.
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>>47847717
don't worry I just do my part cuz I have shit internet
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>>47847754
Sadly, in real life most tiddies are uneven,
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apologies to gifted-anon for misle
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>>47847673
>favorite branching heart girl
Beri
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Relinking Familiars.

>>47829807
>>47835220
>>47836324

Aside from that. I found something ancient, /cyoag/.

Making the Familiar CYOA reminded me of 4-5 years ago, when I was a hopelessly addicted to Ponies. I'm not in that phase anymore, thank god, I moved on a long ass time ago, but I remembered that I actually designed a CYOA that puts you in Equestria. Found it on the old forum I used to browse.

Dare I post it?
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ading your people. my comments get cut off all the time and i don't know why.

>>47847792
wasn't a poll option. it would have been a landslide otherwise.
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>>47847806
Global Rule 15 means it's a ban worthy offense.
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>>47847806
don't see why not. cyoa is cyoa. people can ignore it if they want.
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>>47847806
Sure dude for the lols
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>finally get around to reading the setting doc for the familiar CYOA
>pic related
Seriously, Ren, what's the place with our wizard academy and our magical girl orphanage like? Big bustling city, or small hamlet? What's the tech level like - do we see clockwork towers and airships, cobblestone castles and full plate, or Renaissance dandies and painted women? Is a wizard going to cause a panic in the world at large, or is it "Oh, it's one of THEM?" GIVE ME MORE INFORMATION!

Also, continuing to beg that you add some degree of conflict. Conflict is the source of all drama, after all, and drama pushes the plot forward. Make it as mediocre or as overly dramatic as you like - just make it something, so we don't hate each other over our conflicting fanwanks.

>>47847806
>that spoiler
VOMITING INTENSIFIES
Seriously, though, don't. Global rule 15 expressly forbids miniature horses anywhere but /mlp/.
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>>47847806
>>47847850
on second thought, maybe not.
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>>47847768
Even so, that level of asymmetry seems exceptional.
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>>47847678
That statement seems kinda... oxymoronic.

>>47847792
... heart you, too, Anon.
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>>47847889
>That statement seems kinda... oxymoronic.
Familiar, but different.

But nah I meant >>47847806

You're the best, Beri.
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>>47847889
Only if familar's an adjective. He was using it as a noun. Seriously though, Ren, post the actual images again instead of just linking them all. It's a pain in the ass to go back to the old thread.
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also, fresh content is always worth re-posting in a new thread.
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>>47847670
>No face
Cool story bro.
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didn't mention it before, but this was good ren. thanks for making this.
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>>47847806
Do yourself a favor and don't, here. Imgur would be fine, though. Rule 15 or whatever
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>>47847880
Look at the arms, right arm is pushing the shirt forwards, leading to the shirt being looser in that area.
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>>47847905
>>47847910
I knew what he was asking for. I was just trying to be... humorous? That's not quite the word, though. Snarky? That seems too malevolent. Maybe something like the straight man in Japanese duo comedy? Hmm.... I won't dwell on it. I need sleep, anyhow.
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>>47848038
Go back to being the bed, anon.
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>>47847914
Sooo how to become Slime familiar here?~
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>>47848038
Now that's a water bed.
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>>47847956
>No "implausibly stretchy" option.
5/7
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>>47847850
>>47847871
Well fuck that noise then, I'd rather not get banned. maybe if we asked the mods or janitors politely, but I'd rather play it safe than sorry. And I ain't steppin foot in /mlp/.

ANYWAY.

Finished GMing my session so I got time for Familiars again. Yeah, sorry for pulling you around in a worthless circle with that site, I didn't realise how fucking empty it was. So have a bit of fun, quick lore.

And yes I will make an (optional) page 4 of Familiars that will have fluff and places of conflict.

Xeria is the primary country of the Familiar quest, a once great empire that fell into decline after Xer vanished from the face of the planet. Over the past 200 years, though, the country's been having a rise in prominence.

Befitting being the country where a great Wizard King once ruled the fucking world from, Xeria is THE leading country in magic, magical studies, magical goods, and magical influence. Ambition City stems from Xer's ideals, an ever expanding, great, magical metropolis with impossibly soaring towers and equally deep alleyways. And appropriately is the largest city in all of Catheridge. The city is nestled against the great Silent Lake, from which a wide, calm river flows south until reaching the ocean. Steep foothills and steppes line the northern border of the city, and deciduous, temperate forests are everywhere around it. With farmland dotting the woods out for many miles.
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>>47848059
You're no fun. You need arms to cuddle. But fine, I'll get right to i-

>>47848061
Now I want to wait for an answer to this.

>>47848070
of the most comfortable kind. You *jelly*?
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>>47847914
Wizard
Aspiring Student
Avian (Raven)
Transmutation (Wallop)
Speedy, Ignite (Stone), Sturdy
I am the heatseeking missile he always wanted!
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>>47847914
Goin' in blind, page by page.
>Witch
>Waifish Orphan
>Insect, centipede
>The Body, Cleanse
>Freedom
>Guide
>Sturdy
Good enough for me, since I live a new life.
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>>47848098
Is there anywhere nice and chilly?
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>>47847755

I'm probably only one, but I liked it better when there were less points and I had to take curses.

>16yo Woman
>Experimental

Emotional
>Strengthened 37
Physical
>Perfect 33
Mental
>Dulled 40
Life
>Leech 40
Memory
>Dissonance 40
Spiritual
>Magnet 45

>Pyrokinesis
>Control
>Catalyst
>Source
32
>Healing
>Self Service
25
>Telekinesis
>Precision
>Power
16
>Barrier
>Permanent
10
>Weather Control
>Precision
4
>Interference
>Destructive
>Uncontrollable
1

>Nobody
>Gaia
Still thinking about friends and allies...

>traumatized by the experiments done to her, she wonders the world always one step ahead of the shady organizations wishing to study her
>but she can only stay in one place for so long as her powers are ruled by her emotions and she can easily become a walking natural disaster, intentionally or not
>maybe this "Earth Goddess" can help her find her way.....

>>47847701

Idk exactly. Been a thing for awhile though.

>>47847725

No. I dyed it. I wish though:(

>>47847754

See >>47847768 and >>47848003

>>47847947

>posting my face on 4chan

No thanks.
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>>47848151
Canada. Antartica. Siberia. And house that has good AC.
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>>47847673
>Posting the poll but not the CYOA

At least post the first few pages with the girls, Anon.
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>>47847914
>>47847939
>>47847956

Witch
Wandering Mistress
Avian

The Winds
Tease the Wind

Talkative
Freedom
Wand User

Nigga I'm a falcon that talks. It's the best.
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>>47848232
ok anon. just the blurbs with each girls' description. my heart just isn't in it for all 22.
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>>47847874
If I'm taking a lot of curses, then I have a ton of points anyway. I don't really need more.
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>>47848326
What do you mean?
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>>47848294
>>47848134
>not going living missile mode
you have disgraced the avian brotherhood
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>>47848294
i'm unoriginal, to say the least, but i was going to go the traditional route of black cat.
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>>47848343
The overcome perk is unneeded, perhaps?
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>>47848372
Nah, curses are way too harsh by default so it's meant to mitigate that. It also replaces an old perk that gave you even more extra points.
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>>47847956
Aw thanks. Anyway. More lore.

The King's Academy and Madame's Orphanage both exist in the city, albeit in totally different environs for it. The King's Academy lies attached to the great Castle Catheridge, upon the soaring buttresses and walkways of the High District (pic sorta related).

Down in the shadowed, cramped alleyways of Ambition City, the Madame's Orphanage lies, well away from, but still uncomfortably close to the King's Academy. The Madame has many housemaids and servants to keep the establishment running, but Circe (with her Mystic Cat familiar) herself handpicks any girls she senses to have potential skill in Spirit Magic.

The technology level in Catheridge is a little schizophrenic. Catheridge has had no less than three world scarring catastrophes abuse the realm, each one stymying and pushing back the technology level by a fair amount. Airships once flew across the realm at the height of Xer's reign, but the Dragon Reckoning pushed the world back into a dark, chaotic age for several hundred years. When the Shadow Witch cursed Ironfar City, it heralded the event known as Light's End, when the Divine Family returned to Catheridge, and Rex began killing the Old Gods. It's now roughly 200 years after Light's End (233 After Light [AL] to be precise). The Divine Family are the prominently worshipped figures across the land, and the Heroes of Old ascended by their hand to fill the necessary gaps and help restore the world.

As a result of these catastrophes, You're as like to see a knight in full armor traipsing down the Ambition streets as you are a musketeer with a frilly hat and pistols at his side.

As for Spellcasters, Xeria has always held wizards in high regard and treated witches with caution at best. Ironic considering Eva, their patron deity, is the most worshiped of the Divine Family. The great northern lands of Fulheim has always distrusted magic and forbade its practices, a custom that's spurred a lot of tension with Xeria.
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>>47847755
>>47847783
>>47847825
>>47847851
>>47847874

Male, 16

Power Source: Genetic (No downsides, no outside interference)

30 Points

Emotional: No Change
Physical: Perfect -4
Mental: Shapened -6
Life: No Change +10
Memory: Dissonance
Spiritual: Magnet +5

(Brains AND beauty for effectively no cost?)

30+5=35

Gifts:

Dowsing -1
+Specific -1
Vitality -3
Athleticism -3
+Raw Power -6
Interference -2
+Targeted -2
+Destructive -2
Tongues -1
+Non-Verbal -1
Blessing -4
Empathy -2
Mechanics -3
+Inner Focus -4

35-35=0

Curses:
None needed

Guardian: Ally (Better than being a orphan)

Home: Westwood Heights (I would rather not live in the middle of nowhere or in a ghetto)

Allies:
-Students
Danny Glass
Leah Dawson
Peter Blake

-Adults
Eric Strickland
Louise Webb
Henry Morris

Perks:
Inheritance (Money is the best power)
First Impressions

It matters little if supernatural stuff is draw to me, it's not like I was going to hide and pretend like it all does not exist.
Besides, I'm less of a spooky psychic child and more of a action movie hero with some hopefully strechable powers (I sense the water in people bodies! I bless my cellphone to be a more effective hand grenade and throw it!)
Not only that, but my adoptive dad is a repected police officer, my teacher is cool, I know a guy who sell magic stuff, and behind me are my two bros and a witch.
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>>47848401
No help for the slime familiar question >>47848061
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>>47847939
>>47847956
If Ren sees this, I would totally take a perk that lets me take the second focis power.

Maybe another more circumstantial one where you can trade (one of) your focus power(s) for one from a different focus.
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>>47848401
So I should seek to burn down the orphanage and make Io more popular.
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>>47848465

>>47848401
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>>47848401
To the east of Xeria lies the High Pass mountains, the greatest mountain range in Catheridge and border of Eurreach, the Hearthland further east, and the Cold Wastes to the Northeast.

The Cold Wastes is regarded with fear and respect to the world at large, as it's home to relentless Ice Giants, Evil Fey, and is considered to be the birthplace of Witchcraft (a theory that's never been proven true, or false, but the existence of The North mystery provides many implications). The mountains and northern warriors known as the Garoh are all that keep the evils of the Cold Wastes from spreading south. And the Garoh are very good at their job.

Further East, past Eurreach, lies the great Elimine Forest, homeland of the Fey and where Titania and Oberon rule. Very few travellers enter Elimine, and very few emerge.
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>>47847914
Wizard (aspiring student)
Type: snek
Focus:cheer
Perks: charming, talkative, venemous

I'm a pimp ass snake on a quest to help my awkward teenage master get the ladies. Girls think I'm adorable and also want to cuddle me and give me headpats, which will really help him get a cute gf. Don't mess with the hat though.

Also I got some dank ass venom incase any of these trifling ass bullies try to step out of line and pick on my boy.

As soon as I'm summoned I give my master a lecture on confidence which immediately breaks out into a Disney style rendition of mambo no.5

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EK_LN3XEcnw

Aww yeah. Now check these dubs
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>>47848390
alright, but it costs perks to get the extra curse points. If you don't pick up a lot of curses, then it's a waste of perk points. If you do pick up a lot of curses, then you have points coming out of your ears anyway. So in both cases, why would you spend perks on it?
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>>47848527
For extra ear points.
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>>47848364
can you post the gia and buoy pages? i havent seen them before
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>>47848350
I cast Arrest Momentum.
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Whew. Sorry, I didn't mean to splurge and writefage all over /cyoag/, Addressing questions now.

>>47848061
Slime Familiars aren't presently an option, since slimes in the animu sense aren't in the setting. Oozes exist, but I'm pretty sure no one wants to be a small puddle of burning acid as a familiar, and no wizards or witches certainly want one.

>>47848465
I was considering letting you burn 2 perks for a second focus, but thematically that clashes with Elder Wizards/Wizened Hags and their familiars. If a younger mage can get two school focuses, then why the fuck wouldn't an elder one have them or even three?

So my alternative was messing around with the Perk/School distribution depending on your master, with young students having a lot of perks, but no focus, adults having less perks and 1 focus, and elders having 2 perks or so, and 2 focuses. And making it so elders don't start with improved familiars by default.
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>>47848587
If the familiar got you to spend a standard action stopping its attack instead of defending or attacking its master then it did its job to be fair
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>>47847914
>The Loli
>Mammal
>Body: Cleanse
>Warp, Talkative, Pickpocket

I'll take this CYOA up on that monkey offer and be an urban primate, warping and scurrying about the city. Life as a small animal is bound to be not as fun, but at least I'll have hands. The focus isn't really worth much(other than the fact that I can just be a nice guy and heal some of the likely poor bastards in the slums), but body seems to be the only witch school that'll be able to use some sort of polymorph in the future(and also shotamode isn't that appealing either).
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>>47848521
>Aww yeah. Now check these dubs
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>>47848521
>>47848627
Dang I almost had it
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>>47847825
Not a single one of these is worth it. They're all suicide.
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>>47848592
Nobody said anything about extra focuses, just blowing a perk to take your other focus power, so you get more power in one way. Humanize AND Cleanse, Cheer AND Heckle. None of the perks are mutually exclusive.

Also, fuck it, build:
>Waifish Orphan
Incoming magical girl alert.
>Mammal: Raccoon
Yep, it's me. I can climb, run, AND I've got hands? Sign me the fuck up.
>Focus: The Alleys, Urban Whispers
Home and Hearth is actually more or less useless. A respected witch can easily find food and shelter just for being a well-to-do old woman, a travelling witch won't stay in a city long enough to gain the perks, and a waif lives with Madam Circe. Maybe you should change that up a little to make it more useful.
>Perks: Talkative, Vanish, Speedy
Talkative lets me be the snarky reluctant helper I was born to be, Vanish is a useful as fuck tool, and...well, raccoons may be sneaky little shits, but they aren't the fastest out there. Uber powers are for wusses.

Anyway, like I said, Home and Hearth is fairly useless unless either the world is one big city, or you're too old to stay with Madame Circe but you're still homeless. Since option A is not true and option B won't be true for a while, then why do you have it? Sorry, it seemed like a good idea at the time. Ideas for a replacement:
>Home on the Stones
>- You've lived in this city forever - or if you haven't, you may as well. You blend in to the city as if you've been there forever. No matter how strange you are, so long as you don't call attention to yourself, people's eyes will just slide over you. This can extend to your master. It won't let you into someplace you clearly aren't supposed to be, but it'll let you blend in as just another face in the crowd. As an addition, the streets are just as familiar to you as you are to them, and you can practically find your way around by the feel of the cobblestones under your feet and the bricks in the walls.
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>>47848825
>the same autist from the last thread that won't stop bitching
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>>47847914
>Avian
>The Body - Humanize
(This is assuming the transformation is instant or takes seconds at most.)
>Speedy
>Sturdy
>Warper
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>>47847755
>Identity
Male, 12
>Power Source
Psychic Energy
>Changes
Emotional: No Change. Physical: Deformity. Mental: No Change
Life: Prime. Memory: No Change. Spiritual: Magnet.
>>47847783
>Gifts
Telekinesis (Precision, Power), Pyrokinesis (Control, Catalyst, Source)
Healing (Self Service, Miracle), Vitality (Immunity), Athleticism (Raw Power)
>>47847825
>Curses
Asexual (Neutered) +10, Unsettling +8
>>47847851
>Guardian
Nobody
>Home
Withermouth
>Allies
Students: Leah Dawson, Adam Wiley, Mia Cross
>>47847874
Adults:Isaac Bowman, Julie Slater
>Perks
Overcome (x2)

And now, the news at 11.
Earlier this week it was discovered that a young homeless boy had metamorphosed into a psionic space creature overnight. The cause of this is unknown, but what is known is the damages. Several millions have been tabulated in property damages as this anomaly of nature attempts to maintain his weekly gradeschool routine. Suspected parents of the child refused to comment on the matter, save for the supposed father stating "I ain't payin that shit, bill my ex wife's cosmic side man". The local fishman tribes were interviewed on the matter, but their chanting "Ia! Ia!" gave little insight. Currently researchers of all fields, both truly scientific and paranormal, have come from across the globe to study the miracle monster child, with one woman, a one Julie Slater stating "Eat it monkeys I fucking told you they were real!" Back to you, Tom.
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>>47848913
No I just saw the thing and i've never seen a cyoa with drawbacks this worthless.
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>>47848913
Or maybe people generally don't like them anon.
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>>47848959
Nobody likes everything. They're not supposed to. I think the only way you could like everything would be if you had severe brain damage.

So where does this expectation come from? If you don't like something you have to bitch about it? Grow up.
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>>47849000
Pretty logical for someone to point out that every single drawback is awful and isn't worth taking.
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>>47848942
>>47848959
Then don't take any drawbacks.
>b..b..b.but then I won't be able to take all the powers
>it's not like drawbacks should have a downside to them!
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>>47849000
>If you don't like something you have to bitch about it?
It's called critique. The guy wasn't even overly insulting to you. You're getting offended that someone has an opinion and a criticism and they simply expressed it. You're the one that needs to grow up here, because you sound like a teenage deviantard.
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>>47849017
>logical
I don't think you know what that word means.
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>>47849018
Drawbacks should have downsides, but the downside for basically all of these drawbacks is that they kill you.
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>>47849029
>you
No anon, we've been over this. Not everyone on 4chan is the same person :^)

That was my first post in this entire thread, and I haven't been here for like two or three previous threads.
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>>47847755
Boy, 14. I'll view this as a second chance to take school a bit more seriously.

So, 30 points from the get-go.

Power Source: genetic. Seems like a safe move.

Changes (+8)
________

Emotional (dulled; +5), Physical (perfect; -4), Mental (sharpened; -3), Life (no change; +10), Memory (knowledge; -5), Spiritual (magnet; +5)

Gifts (38; 62 with curses)
________

Teleportation (quick step, indirect sight; -10), Telekinesis (precision, power; -9), Barrier (permanent, wide; -8), Dowsing (specific; -2), Psychometry (muscle memory; -4), Tongues (siren; -3), Mechanics (inner focus; -7), Apportation (-2), Vitality (-3)

Familiar [black cat] (-14)
-Interference (-2)
-Friend of Nature (animal friends; -6)
-Barrier (permanent; -6)
-Teleportation (-4)
-Empathy (-2)

Curses (+24)
______

Unsettling (+6), Asexual (neutered; +8), Insomnia (+10)

Guardian: nobody (I just can't see anyone replacing my folks.)

Home: Gloverisle (looks like a nice place to live.)

Allies: Danny Glass, Kate Fox, Carl Knight

Adults: Eric Strickland, Holly Osborne

Perks: Overcome (+3 P), Boarding School.

I think I'll have fun with this group. When adventures get tough I'll have to leave them at home though, since nearly all of the powers I took are for me. The cat, Shadow (original, right?), will be able to join and aid me from time to time.
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>>47849031
I certainly know you don't.
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>>47849053
To him then, it hardly matters. The point is getting excessively offended at someone not liking something.
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>>47849057
That's funny from someone who misuses it that badly. Open a dictionary, dumbass.
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>>47848942
>They're all suicide
I mean, honestly? Most of those are nowhere near suicidal level bad. They are bad, but not insanely bad.
>Unsettling just marks you as an outcast, that's it
>Migraine is annoying
>Empathy just makes you a dick
>Ego is just you being a dick
>Inhuman is just "I am better than you" but doesn't mean you gotta show it
>Night person is annoying and changes your scheduling
>Eyesight is annoying, but disabilities don't kill you.
>Mute same boat
>deaf same boat
>Weakness I admit is fucking bad, nobody in their right mind would take that
>Cowardly isn't that bad, world is full of cowards
>Asexual is more than fine and the Neutered section is a plus for some
>Cycles is all about timing
>Lust gets you into trouble, but nothing extreme as death
>Insomnia is just annoying
>Anxiety
I mean, come on.
Did you even read any of them before dismissing them?
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>>47849086
You first. I'll wait.
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>>47848546
right here >>47848364, anon.
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>>47849036
>Social Anxiety or not being able to have sex kill you

Explain how you are still alive then
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>>47849073
No, the point is someone getting excessively offended and vocal over not liking something.
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>>47849095
Yes I did. They're all insanely terrible and not even slightly worth it.
Ego is going to get you killed. Read it again, empathy makes you a sociopath which will get you killed.
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>>47849099
Nah. I said it first. I also already know what it means, and your use didn't fall under any of the common definitions, even the nebulous ones.

You're not just an idiot, you're a willful idiot, aren't you.
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>>47849036
>they all kill you
That's not even hyberoble, it's a straight up lie
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>>47849126
I really don't care turbo autist, I'm still waiting.
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>>47849095
>>Migraine is annoying
You've never had chronic migraines.
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>>47849111
>Ego will get you killed
EXISTING will get you killed too. Fact of life. Ego just means you don't give a shit about your weak points, which you are making up for with the extra points from Ego anyway in most cases.
>Empathy turns you into a sociopath
And?
>will get you killed.
There are plenty of sociopaths in modern societies who live relatively normal lives. They don't really give a fuck about others, but they can be normal, productive members of society. Do you know nothing of the world outside?
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Wow, there is a lot of yelling going on. I honestly have no idea what's going on, and I'd like it to stay that way. How about you all shut up and fuck already?
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>>47849106
One single post when you started insulting him. That's the card before the horse.
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>>47849142
That's funny.
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>>47849166
Ego literally states that you think you're unbeatable and will ignore your weakness. That's suicide.
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>>47849166
>they can be normal, productive members of society.
Serial killers aren't productive.
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>>47849111
checked, but i'm not feeling what you're feeling. i think this is the part where we just agree to disagree.

wouldn't kill you to say you don't like or agree with something in a nicer way either, man. someone did take the time to make that content, ya know.
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>>47849175
Oh fuck you. This post is the first one I used an insult in, because you're being an annoying cunt.

Where exactly did I insult anyone there? The part where I said someone would have to have severe brain damage to like everything ever? How does that hypothetical even apply? Do YOU have severe brain damage or something?
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>>47849202
The rest of the content is good, the drawbacks are among the worst I've ever seen. They're just godawful and not even slightly worth it.
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Yo gifted anon
if you're still here
don't change the drawbacks
they're fine as they are, and people have enough points without them. You have no obligation to sprinkle the crybabies with more points without mild-to-extreme suffering.
If they don't want the listed drawbacks, they can live with 30 points + whatever they get from the Changes section.
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>>47849188
>ignoring weakness = they are more exploitable
Yes.
But that doesn't mean someone will straight up kill you EVERY TIME you take it. It's a CYOA, you consider your actions afterward, not a "what if" as fact.

>>47849201
>Sociopaths are psychopaths
Have a wonderful night, Anons. I'm done for the night.
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>>47849238
You're going to die if you ignore your weakness, getting lucky while fighting someone stupid means. Nothing, ego means you will never do anything about your weaknesses. You're completely fucked, you might as well just make the points 10000 because it doesn't matter. Because you're just going to get killed because drawback makes you too stupid to live.
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>>47849226
I never got people who only held opinions out of spite. It's like "How dare people think things. Let me try and sabotage it because I'm 14 and still think trolling is cool."
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>>47849225
Then don't take any, you whiny autist
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>>47849202
Is that Numbah Five and that asshole treasure hunter rival?
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>>47849297
Only autistic thing going on right now is you being offended about this.
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>>47849309
The one who was actually a cute girl who was transmogrified into a chubby asshole boy by a cursed treasure, yeah.
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>>47849297
Just stop replying Anon. It's devolved into pure bait now.
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>>47849321
Wait, really? I don't remember that.
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>>47847956
I'll take Wizard, and my master will be the Aspiring Student. I also want to be a Carbuncle Familiar.
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>>47849349
Yep. It only comes up in like his/her... third episode or so? It was a weird twist but it's true, Heiny was originally a cute friendly adventurer girl who got cursed by her greed into a perma-asshole fatboy.
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>>47849349
Not him, yeah.
http://knd.wikia.com/wiki/Henrietta_Von_Marzipan
Cursed Caramels turned her into a boy, she went ape shit trying to fix it until she was finally saved after FIVE years.
Henrietta into Heinrich.
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>>47849225
Not the guy you're arguing with, but I think you're exaggerating a little. Let's go through them all in order:
>Emotion Link
Dangerous, but not lethal depending on how hard your powers respond.
>Rage
You're right about this one, it'll fuck you over.
>Unsettling
Bad, creepy, but not actually crippling, especially because you have allies.
>The Voices
Yeah, you're definitely fucked.
>Phobia
Fairly fucked. Probably not as bad as some, but pretty fucked anyway.
>Migraine
Nasty stuff, and just might be crippling. Non-lethal, but still nasty.
>Sleepwalker
Unless you're living in a tent in the middle of nowhere, you're fucked as soon as you accidentally kill someone.
>Drained
Tolerable. Not good, but tolerable.
>Empathy
You are definitely, entirely fucked. Humans are, by definition, social creatures, and dumping that is a one-way ticket to go fuck yourself.
>Ego
Dangerous, but not deadly.
>Inhuman
Same as Empathy.
>Night Person
Not bad, not bad at all. There's still danger, but there's no real harm to long clothes and sunglasses if you just claim you have a skin condition. It's not a lie, either.
>Eyesight
Problem, sure, but not overmuch. Unless you pick Blind. Don't pick Blind.
>Muted
Yet another one-way ticket to Fucksville.
>Deafness
You underestimate how much we rely on our sense of hearing. This is a bad one.
>Weakness
You're fighting supernatural monsters. Do not.
>Cowardly
Ew. Not crippling, but ew.
>Asexual
The most harmless curse out there.
>Cycles
That's definitely going to sting, especially because Murphy dictates everything comes at you at your weakest. Could be bad.
>Bound
This is the equivalent of being a tactical suicide boss in vidya. Don't do it. Your friend doesn't have supernatural powers to defend themselves with.
>Animal Foes
As it says, inconvenient in an urban area, but dangerous in the wild. Inadvisable.
>Sickly
Again, you're fighting a load of monsters. Don't do this.

You get the point. Bad, yes; instant death, no.
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>>47849281
Sabotage what? People are complaining that there are no easymode drawbacks for free points, when there are, so long as you're actually creative, as exemplified by the fact that 3/4 of the builds posted do use the drawbacks. The drawbacks are in need of no change, and these guys who cant figure out how to thematically work in how the drawbacks presented could correspond to their powers don't really have good justification for demanding change.

I mean, unless you were implying they were sabotaging the CYOA. Then I could almost see where you're coming from, but to say that the complainers have that much influence is a bit of a stretch IMO.
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>>47849415
Looking at your list, you skipped Lustful.
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>>47849415
>>Ego
>Dangerous, but not deadly.
see
>>47849263
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>>47849437
It's an issue with how you present your opinion, rather as a standalone view you're framing it as a counter with the motivation of spite.
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>>47849437
>people
It's one guy
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>>47849111
Both of those are correct, but you're neglecting to consider the others he mentioned - Night Person is mostly harmless, Asexual is harmless, Unsettling is basically you at the lunch table. What's wrong with those?
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>>47849471
What's with this recent trend in CYOA threads where everyone is just one guy? I'm starting to think we're all fusing together if this is really the case as some anons very desperately declare.
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major change
i would like to thank Mac And keine for the correction
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>>47849387
>trivia
>the second villain to be melted under a heat source while being made of chocolate

That's really specific.
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>>47848903
Ah, I see how you mean. And Home and Hearth is good for Witches that aren't the little girl. Wandering Mistress is certainly going to visit many cities... but also has her own wagon to sleep in, and Wizened Hag... Has a coven... and...

...

Yeah, it's shit. I'll change it in the next version I make.

Anway, general question for the /cyoag/ thread concerning Familiars. Do you guys like bars? Like a changing scale that represents some general fact. I was thinking about reformatting the master choices and adding some bars to represent what living with them would be like. Namely

>DANGER
The overall threat and risk of injury of the life your master lives. Lower is safer while higher is, well, not.
>POWER
The magical capabilities of your master. The higher this is, the more power and influence they command at your time of becoming their familiar.
>COMPASSION
How much your master initially and will overall care for you. The higher this is, the more likely you two will get along. Being friendly and dutiful helps, of course.
>SOLITUDE
How lonely your life is going to be, initially. The higher this is, the less of other mages and familiars you'll see.

Comments?
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>>47848592
Well, I didn't get to the end. Ran out of post space.

>>47848592
You still here?
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>>47849500
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>>47849525
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>>47849500
>>47849525
Did you start out thinking you were going to use one art style and then change your mind halfway through?
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>>47849415
>Not bad, not bad at all.
If even artificial light bothers you, your life is pretty much over.
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>>47849463
ah, well, I mean
okay yeah a bit of spite, I can admit to that
the way I see it it's a little unjust to alter an entire system to satisfy an individual's inability to adapt, and I guess it gets on my nerves seeing content creators having to try and argue against these individuals rather than simply ignoring them as they should. So, I guess, fair, you got me there.

>>47849471
nah, I'm sure there's more than one of them who think the same way, but I will say it does very certainly seem to be a minority opinion
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>>47849517
Yes, KND had a myriad of odd moments like that.
Not nearly as many as Jimmy Neutron, good GOD that show had a ton of weird episodes, but still a lot.
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>>47849545
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>>47849486
>Night Person is mostly harmless,
Hope you don't ever want to use a computer again. Or watch tv, or be near tv, or really exist in the digital age.
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>>47849523
I'm always here.
Watching. Waiting.
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>>47849521
Ah, there you are. I kinda like the concept, but you might want to include some measure for Influence - what people think of your master, whether good, ill, or they don't give a shit.

Also, here's another idea for a perk replacement, because I should have been in bed half an hour ago but I'm busy shitposting:
>Friendly Face
>- Some people are wallflowers, keeping their heads down and going about their business while talking to as few people as possible. You and your mistress are not like them. People naturally like you because you like them. You're a common face around the city, and people will expect to see you and your mistress wandering around. They'll be more likely to offer help, share gossip, or give headpats.
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>>47849567
>>47849553
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>>47849521
I think there's not too much point, the options are fairly freeform so we should be allowed to imagine those factors ourselves.
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>>47847755
Gender: Male
Age: 11
>Genetic
Seems pretty good. No ups, no downs.
>Emotional
No Change
>Physical
No Change
>Mental
No Change
>Life
No Change
>Memory
Fresh Start: +10
>Spiritual
Magnet: +5
>Gifts: 45 total
Pyrokinesis, Control, Catalyst, Source: 13
Healing, Self Service, Miracle: 23
Athleticism, Raw power, Peak Human: 36
Vitality, Immunity: 42
Mechanics: 45
>Guardian
Ally
>Home
Westwood Heights
>Allies
Students: Derek Wright, Carl Knight, Scarlet Manning
Adults: Jane Farley (Guardian), Charlie
>Perks
First Impressions: Peter Blake
Boarding School

I've got great firepower with Peter, Derek, Carl, and Jane. They can teach me to fight and shoot, and Carl can help me grow even stronger. Scarlet is go to waifu. If she cucks me with someone else I'll start an illicit relationship with Jane. When things turn to shit we'll retreat to Charlie's hideouts.
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Is Italics kill?
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>>47849553
>>47849601
fug didn't typed my message, it was a suggestion from Mac on the perk and armor he said change as i see fit and i think it kinda fit
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>>47847755
>>47847783
>>47847825
>>47847851
>>47847874
Wewww, this was fun.

Age: 16
Power-Source: Genetic

Changes:
Emotional: Fixed + 10 (Ok, I might effectively be Bonesaw 2.0, but, everything will be fine!)
Physical: Perfect -4
Mental: Enhanced -6
Life: Leech/Provisional. Spend time in a hospital with terminal patients holding their hands.
Memory: No change
Spiritual: Magnet +5 (Just means more friends!)

Gifts:
Telekinesis + Precision + Power -9 (This is by itself incredible)
Mechanics + Inner Focus -7 (Combine this with telepathy...)
Barrier + Permanent -6
Healing + Self Service + Miracle -10
Future Sight + Relevant + Clarity -6
Empathy + Influence -3
Psychometry -1
Pyrokinesis + Catalyst -5
Levitation -2 (In case of falls)
Mediumship + Command -3 (Spy on my enemies!)

Curses:
Ego + 7
Animal Foes + 8 (Barrier will keep me safe!)

Guardian: Nobody

Yarrow Falls (Come on Twin Peaks!)

Companions:
Leah Dawson (Someone in the Lodge might want to help her!)
Adam Wiley (Can help solving mysteries)
Scarlet Manning (Every group needs a straightman)

Julie Slater (Can help when needing lab analysis)
Jane Farley (Assistance against bears)

Overcome (Just needed a few more points for what I wanteed)
Boarding School

Meet new and interesting friends in the Black Lodge. Get attacked by and kill owls. Hunt down, chase and get pursued by other worldly killers. FUN! Hoping the FBI gets involved too.

Basically I just track down and solve mysteries, unnervingly cheerful at all the horror and death, killing birds as I go.
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ah fuck I was in a rush and messed up the page
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>>47849617
Italics isn't really a public face, he pops in mysteriously to post his OC when he's done.
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>>47849500
>>47849525
>>47849545
>>47849567
>>47849601
>>47849647
>>47849627

Sorted page of my OC, kthxbye
Mac or Keine if you're reading this, please leave out another correct
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>>47849633
But what gender are you?
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>>47849602
>not wanting more ideas to base your build off of
>wanting to build practically in a vacuum
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>>47849655
Weird. So this is why he never uses a name in his posts even though he's a named author?
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>DRAINED
HOLY FUCKING SHIT YOU'LL FEEL TIRED AFTER USING YOUR ABILITIES, AND THEN YOU'LL PROBABLY HAVE TO TAKE A NAP

GOD FUCKING DAMNIT THIS DRAWBACK IS USELESS!!!!
WHO WANTS TO FEEL TIRED AFTER SUING THE SUPERWPOERS AMIRITE?
JUST GIVE ME 100000 POINTS
REEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>47849500

This is a fun one. I didn't catch the major change though...

>RS-Stalwart Hawk

>Female
>Thin

>Light Feet (Free)
>Sharpshooter
>Double Perception (Free)
>Medic
>Melee Mastery

>General Trench Coat

>Super Shotgun
>Laser Pistol

>Flashlight
>Comlink Watch
>First Aid Kit

>Chainsaw Katana

>Wind Goddess Hopea
>Demon Hunter Kaori
>Alzena Coldhart

>Light Desert Jeep

>Resource Bot (Free)
>Work Bot

Time to be space bounty hunter/assassin/whatever pays with my ninja like skills, awesome trenchcoat and chainsaw katana. Start out alone stranded in this strange new world, but find some friends along the way. Become less of a bounty hunter and more of a demon hunter as we discover the scale of the demonic threat to the world. Become partners with Hopea and we adopt Kaori. Get bullied some by Alzena, but it's ok. Will help all companions with their quests. Bots take care of ship while we pile into buggy and go adventuring! Don't worry to much about local politics, work for whoever needs us and will pay.
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>>47849596
Go to bed Anon. I'll work out a replacement for Hearth. Both of your suggestions are pretty good.

>>47849602
>>47849701
Woah, easy there, Anon. The first guy has a point, sometimes building freeform with whatever you wanna shape from your imagination is plenty rewarding. But at the same time, it's not like I'm replacing the text provided with the charts. I don't think a handy visual reference would detract too much, eh?
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>>47849701
>Ideas
More like 'enforced rules'. Bars are absolutes, they limit ideas, not increase them.
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>>47849743
Whoa, hey, Drained will fuck you. Once you get tried and go take a nap, BAM, someone put your hand in a glass of water and you peed yourself. This of course kills you.
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>>47849793
See >>47849816 , it's more information, but it's information that boxes you in and forces you into roles.
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>>47849733
No, it's more like he would rather work himself to death making OC than discuss them. He does look at the thread and sometimes posts if someone has a question, but he's mostly too busy to talk.

Surprisingly he tends to respond to the annoying "What CYOA are you making Anons" question, probably just to give people insight on what his next 4 or so projects are.
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>>47847914
>Waifish Orphan
Always start young, they can grow up to be something later.

I assume a familiar's lifespan is tied to its master's, provided that it isn't killed first.

>Avian: Crow
Or raven as the CYOA mentions, there's no actual distinction between the categories. It's appropriate, and common enough to blend in completely.

Interestingly, Crows are naturally capable of speech like parrots (probably better, they are much smarter). I'm going to assume for the purposes of this CYOA that I CAN use this without purchasing "talkative", but that learning to do so is extremely difficult and will never be perfect, compared to automatically being able to speak fluently.

>Focus: The Spirit
The other reason why Crow is so thematically appropriate. Ghostwalk effectively supersedes the "freedom" perk (except on cooldown rather than permanent). I'm going to assume that it is just as effective letting me pass through living matter (eg hands, claws etc) as it is through inanimate objects, but ineffective against purely magical attacks.

Spirit's call is what essentially gives us our purpose in magic, as well as providing an essential ace in the hole.

>Speedy
No need to pick a fast bird of prey, since I'll be faster with this no matter my species

>Sturdy
"Living bullet" sounds useful when subtlety and magic both fail.

>Guide
Won't be useful NOW, but witches being what they are a settled life isn't very likely, so this is sure to come in handy eventually.

I was tempted to take Pickpocket, but I don't want to cause MORE trouble.
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>>47849696
I'm glad you asked! I'm a nonbinary neutrois two-spirit androgyne. I hope that's clarified things for you!
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>>47849793
SLEEP IS MERELY AN INADEQUATE SUBSTITUTE FOR CAFFEINE.

>>47849838
I would heartily disagree. You can't make a decision without knowing what the world looks like.
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>>47847874
>Identity
Male, 16
>Power Source
Alien
>Changes
Emotional: No change
Physical: Perfect (-4)
Mental: Sharpened (-3)
Life: No change (+10)
Memory: No change
Spiritual: Magnet (+5)
>Gifts
Telekinesis, Percision, Power (-9)
Healing, Self-service, Miracle (-10)
Teleportation, Quick-step (-8)
Barrier, Permanent (-6)
Mechanics, Inner focus (-7)
Vitality (-3)
Apportation (-2)
Dousing (-1)
>Curses
Unsettling (+8)
>Guardian
Ally (Scarlet Manning)
>Home
Yarrow Falls
>Allies
Danny Glass
Peter Blake
Scarlet Manning
Henry Morris
Louise Webb
>Perks
Overcome x2
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>>47847755
>power source: dark magic
>changes: sickly appearance (+7), sharpened mental (-3), Leech life, no change in the rest

Gifts: (49)
>mind control, flawless (20)
>remote viewing, presence (9)
>barrier, permanent (6)
>familiar (14)
-possession, amnesia (5)
-blessing (2)
-barrier, permanent (3)

curses: (15)
>inhuman (5)
>night person (5)
>unsettling (5)

>guardian: ally (Julie Slater)
>home: riverfront east

allies:
>anna, victoria, mia
>julie, louise

perks:
family and inheritance, I guess. Honestly, none of these are very attractive.

I don't need friends allies or money because I can just enslave people. My familiar can take control of someone rapidly if need be, since my power takes hours. My familiar can also Bless me.

Lots of people no one care about to steal youth from in the inner city. I'm inhuman, so I won't feel bad about it.
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>>47847670
Why do you come to CYOA Gen of all places to seek attention? It's an incredibly odd choice. There's literally thousands of other venues where you could flash your tits and get all the attention you want. Why a forum dedicated to ttrpgs and cyoas?
If you insist on sticking around, at least post more lizardmen.
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>>47849930
Nice build. You're effectively right with your assumptions. Don't worry too much about needing or not needing Talkative, because I'm still thinking about removing it entirely and making it so Familiars can speak freely by default.

Ghostwalk does indeed let you pass through living things. Magic will still pose a problem, but it poses a problem to the familiars with Freedom as well.

...Is it weird that I haven't made a build for my own CYOA?
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>>47850042
some people never do.
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>>47850042
For more complicated CYOA, it's 100% understandable.
For less complicated 1-3 pagers, it's more taste than anything. You like to play the role of the game maker, not the player in some cases.
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>>47850042
Please, please do add Talkative as a free perk. Maybe switch it up for something else? Hell with it, last suggestion before I turn in for the night:
>Therapy Pet: You're calming to be around. Something about stroking your fur, feathers, or scales just takes the edge off any stress your master might be feeling. Not combat-strength, but just nice.
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>>47850193
That sounds like it could be lumped into Charming, desu.
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>>47850257
Uh...I mean, maybe? I was thinking Charming basically gave people diabetes by looking at me, and this basically just made me into a security blanket - a source of courage, calm, serenity, and hope, no matter what I'm really like.
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>>47850042
I don't really NEED to talk to mundanes anyway, except maybe to shout at them for some stupid thing. I didn't pick a crow for that, I just thought it was an interesting bonus.
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>>47847755
>>47847783
>>47847825
>>47847851
>>47847874

>Identity
Male, 12

>Power Source
Genetic

>Changes
>Emotional
No Change: Happy 40
>Physical
Perfect 36
>Mental
Enhanced 30
>Life
Prime 15
>Memory
No Change 15
>Spiritual
No Change 15

>Gifts
>Telekinesis 11
Precision 9
Power 6
>Future Sight 4
Relevant 3
Clarity 0
>Healing -2
Self-Service -7
>Levitation -9
Flight -14
Efficient -18
>Vitality -21
Immunity -24
Painless -21
>Athleticism -25
>Barrier -28
Permanent -31
>Interference -33
Uncontrollable -28
>Charm -31
>Mechanics -34
Inner Focus -38

>Curses
>Empathy -28
>Ego -18
>Inhuman -10
>Asexual -2
Neutered 0

>Guardian
Nobody

>Home
Westwood Heights

>Students
Adam Wiley
Peter Blake
Scarlet Manning

>Adults
Julie Foster
Holly Osborne

>Perks
Overcome x2


Humanity is overrated.
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>>47849685
I was out and about yesterday. I'll finish grammatical corrections for page 2 and start 3. As always, change what you see fit.

THE NEW ORDER DEFLECTOR
>Compact defense, the red...
"Compact armor that provides a stellar defense and a high rate of mobility due to the lightweight materials used to make it. Comes with a free red paint job after several violent interactions."

>armor had built in...
"Capable of emitting a deflector shield that will redirect most any projectile. The shield is not nearly as strong as the nano shield, but is able to last for a longer duration. Requires resources to use and maintain."

>If the deflector...
This part's perfect, minus the space between 'penetrated' and the comma.

HEAVY MOBILITY SUIT

>superior defense
"Grants superior defense. The armor is incredibly durable, able to withstand standard infantry firepower without sustaining damage; however, the armor is tremendously heavy."

>jetpack can't make...
"The built-in jetpack allows for quick bursts of speed in the direction your body is facing. You will not be able to sustain flight, but you can blitz enemies head-on."

>this armor rely...
"This armor relies heavily on the jetpack for a high mobility rate. Without it, the armor is very cumbersome. Naturally, you will have an easier time moving if you are Buff or took Strong."

ULTIMATE BULLDOZER ARMOR

>Extreme Defense...
Extreme Defense -> Extremely defensible; "combat-assistant".

>capable of...
"Highly effective for close-quarter encounters. Capable of rending flesh and piercing think armor with vibranium [we are making things up now] claws."

>require battery...
"Requires battery to function. When prolonged exposure to conflict is foreseeable, be sure to bring an extra battery to charge the suit."

1/?
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>>47847755
+30 baseline

Psychic Energy, No Guardian, Riverfront East

Kids: Kate Fox, Adam Wiley, Scarlet Manning
Adults: Julie Slater, Lorie Copeland
Perks: Overcome x2

Emotional (No change)
Physical (+7 Sickly)
Mental (-3 Sharpened)
Life (-15 Prime)
Memory (No change)
Spiritual (+5 Magnet)

+5 Asexual
+5 Night Person
+5 Muted
+5 Unsettling
+12 Overcome

...for a total of 56 points.

-9 (-2 Remote Viewing, -7 Presence)
-9 (-4 Telekinesis, -2 Precision, -3 Power)
-4 Blessing
-4 Curse
-10 (-6 Possession, -4 Amnesia)
-4 (-2 Interference, -2 Targeted)
-5 Invisibility (+3Ghost/-3Invisibility Field)
-4 Mind Reading
-3 Mechanics
-4 Teleportation

Jonah's setup is simple in effect: he never is physically present if he can help it. Though the name is a riff on the sailors' superstition, Jonah is a boon to his allies. He projects himself astrally to interfere in events with mechanically precise telekinesis and blessings/curses. If the lights go out at just the right moment to give you cover, thank Jonah. If one of your enemies suddenly clutches his head right before turning his gun on his comrades, thank Jonah. If a monster that was about to eat you suddenly explodes after being hit with tons of invisible force, definitely thank Jonah.

His nigh-permanent invisibility renders concealment effortless; Jonah's allies have no idea that the mysterious force aiding them is actually an unkempt youth sleeping in an alcove beneath a bridge, possessing passersby to bring him food and money. Communicating with telekinesis or through the occasional possessed pawn renders the mute Curse irrelevant, and though people definitely find his actions and the way he always seems to know what you're thinking unsettling, he's never around to suffer the physical consequences of his meddling. Should anyone stumble upon his physical body, he flees with teleportation.
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>>47850429
>Immortal, invisible hobo recluse.
>Remote viewing OP, please nerf.
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>>47850257
Hey Ren, if you're still here, how hideable can Aberrant Anatomy be?

would it be possible to just have a smile like pic related?
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>>47850554
I made it a point to throw a lot of examples in there, but only list what the power actually grants. Being "hard to kill, hard to mentally control, and hard to restrain." All of which can be had while you still look relatively "normal."

So yeah, go ahead, be a fox with a creepy smile bro.
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>>47849545
The super weapons for basic and advanced arseal seem like they should be switched around.

I need special permit for a flamethrower or mini gun but anybody can have a nuke launcher or rapid fire rpg? Those seem like the advanced weapons to me
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>>47850024
Hi! You seem fun. Mind control and possession huh? That's nice. It's not as great as commanding the dead, but you know, still impressive. Anywho, I'm about to go light some owls on fire. Maybe some bears. You ever been to the Lodge? Great people, I love the lodgers. You'll fit right in.
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>>47850629
Perfect. The creepy ass sage fox dream lives.
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>>47849525
STALINGRAD TITAN

>Unpenetrable defense...
"Built for war, the armor has proven to be nearly impervious to damage. Only the most powerful assaults can leave a dent or scratch on this suit. Comes with a free, very stylish ushanka."

>able to move...
"The armor is capable of traversing any and all kinds of terrain without difficulty. If you plan on walking across the ocean floor, it is advised that you trade in the ushanka for a pressurized diving helmet."

>can only use...
"May only use the machine gun that was designed for the power armor. Additionally, the suit may try to brainwash you and any others in the vicinity by playing communist speeches on a built-in speaker, replete with surround sound."

"Comes with a built-in speaker and HD surround sound."

HERCULES

>shit man...
"Designed for planetary conquests, the model HERCULES is completely indestructible and impenetrable, as well as being tireless due to what the developers called a 'perfect core'."

>capable of flight...
"The armor additionally has superb aviation capabilities and a built-in weapons system that is capable wiping a modest town off of the map in moments."

>you'll rot in...
"Your body will atrophy in the armor; HERCULES will fuse to the first pilot who enters the suit. You may still receive nourishment through the suit, but you will not be able to take off the armor."

"Muscle wizards have nothing on you."

>CHOOSE MOBILE SUIT only...
I'll take a stab in the dark and say you were indicating this: "You may take both a Mobile Suit and a Power Armor if you took the Factory Cruiser as your ship, as well as the appropriate perks."

"FINALLY! A ...
>I knew you ... knew me?
"you, but you didn't know me?"

>To made me feel better...
made -> make

>topic, Where are we now?
topic; where

>when we decide to go
decide -> decided

>ended up to a place
to a -> in a

>possible but you manage to...
possible, but you managed to...
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what are some occultist powers people like?
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Alright /cyoag/. It's time for Ren to sleep. Be excited for tomorrow, as I plan on making a lot of tweaks and changes to Mage's Familiar. Toodles!
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>>47849525
Still on the halfling companion.

>maybe i'll give you
i'll -> I'll (English is funny--it's one of [or the only, I forget] the only languages that capitalizes the i's.)

>my mobile suit and I will teach you
mobile suits and teach you... (You don't need the 'I will' here.)

>pilot it properly,
properly. (End sentence.)

>well not really mine but...
Well, isn't really mine, but...

>"oh and if...
Now that's a bold woman; "Oh, and if you're wondering, I'm perfectly legal."

BLADE VALKYRIE
>Flight based ... suit, very fast
Flight-based; suit, it's very...

>excel at cqc...
"Excels at close-quarter-combat, has a secondary laser funnel."

>cost less resources...
"The mobile suit requires less resources to maintain."

>light armor that...
"The suit is designed for superior agility and evasive maneuvers. It will not sustain much damage before becoming inoperable."

ANNIHILATOR

>humongous as...
"Completely impervious to damage, this suit is second to protection only to the HERCULES model."

>see that big...
"ANNIHILATOR comes with a factory-new anti-matter [we make more things up] cannon that is capable of wiping a small country off of the planet. Effectively eliminates the need for a primary weapon."

>everything is an...
>slow as fuck...
"The suit is colossal; by virtue of size, this is one of the fastest suits in existence. It is capable of crushing nearly everything that is underfoot--including allies. Move with caution."

>Require huge amount...
"ANNIHILATOR consumes and incredible amount of energy, requiring a great deal of resources to sustain it. Furthermore, after firing the cannon, the suit will temporarily shut down due to overheating."
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>>47851084
TOMORROW HAS ARRIVED! EXCITEMENT LEVELS CANNOT BE CONTAINED!
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>>47849930
Shit I'm only supposed to pick ONE of the two focus abilities. >>47850042 You are supposed to call me out on that shit.

I suppose I just take Ghostwalk. Makes things rather boring, without "spirit's call" there's not really anything explicit for us to DO and all of my perks are basically focused around simply exisiting, but ghostwalk is by far the more functional.

>>47848592
Really IMO they should just grant both anyway (by default, not a choice). This sets your theme and purpose, everything else is just survival.
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>>47851133
ANNIHILATOR needs a secondary weapon. at least a heavy MG, otherwise it's only weapon leaves it very vulnerable if you fuck up a shot. What do I do if I need to kill something that isn't a small country?
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>>47851266
Stomp.
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>>47851266
I considered that when revising, which is why I worded the change the way I did; "eliminates the need for a primary weapon." As far as interpretations go, a secondary weapon is still available.
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Is there a yandere waifu cyoa based around the 9 types of yanderes?
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>>47849102
i meant the individual pages
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>>47851293
What if it's too far away to stomp? What if it's bigger than my foot? Just gimmie the damn MG Anon.
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>>47851349
Fuck yeah, friend.
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>>47851349
There's more than 1 type of yandere? What do the moon runes say?
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>>47851367
>What if it's too far away to stomp?
Walk closer.
>What if it's bigger than my foot?
Stomp on one part at a time.
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>>47851379
There's a translation somewhere, but it's basically >>47851370
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>>47851363
Don't think he knew what you meant. Here you go.
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>>47850938
What do you mean by occultist?
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>>47851379
I don't have a translated version, but here is a link to a page that has a translation.
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2166000
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>>47851349
>>47851370
There was another one that listed the actual names for them. I think that was a waifu one, unlike the one I posted. Don't believe I have it saved.
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>>47851379
1. Dependent - Yandere who can't live without, and needs you to be her support.
2. Monopolizing - Yandere who will go to the extreme to hog you to herself, and lock you away if she has to.
3. Eliminating - Yandere who kills those who get in the way of her, and her love.
4. Attack - Yandere who will get you physically to fall in line. It can be rape or he physically beating you.
5. Stalker - Yandere who stalks their love and knows everything about them.
6. Harmless - Yandere who does everything to see their beloved happy, but quietly hurts themselves.
7. Worshipping - Yandere who worships their beloved and will do anything for them.
8. Delusional - Yandere who makes up stories and heavy ass revisionism to make the world perfect for her, and her beloved.
9. Isolating - Yandere who makes you rely on her as she ruins your life secretly or openly.

>>47851370
I was talking about a real yandere waifu cyoa, not become a waifu.
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>>47851393
thank you
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>>47851464
Yeah, figured. I know one exists, may have even been made recently (last few months), but I never saved it. May or may not have been based off of cyoa authors too. I forget.
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>>47849685
how soon can we get this PDF'ed? it looks good, but .jpg formats are awkward.
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>>47847914
>>47847939
>>47847956
>Aspiring Student (Prodigy)
>Carbuncle
>Abjuration; Forcefield
Gonna protect that little boy to the best my ability.
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>>47847670
No fucking way.
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>>47847670
Wait, I thought you said you had a "boyish build", but you have breasts?
How does that work out?
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>>47851884
A girl having a boyish build doesn't mean without tits, it means a general lack of figure. Such as not having notable hips or lacking a narrowing of the waist. As for just about any girl saying they have a boyish build, it almost always means their body isn't as clearly feminine as they would like.
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>>47851953
Ah, okay. I get that. So like T Swift?
I'll pretend Angelanon looks llike T Swift but with somewhat larger boobs, and there is nothing you can do to stop me.
Not like it matters since she's lesbian.
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>>47852020
>So like T Swift?
Sure, though I doubt Angelanon is as tall as her.
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>>47852020
>Not like it matters since she's lesbian.
>like it matters
>since she's lesbian.
>matters
She's an attention whore in a Cambodian painting newsgroup. Her and her beta orbiters existence shouldn't even be tolerated unless she's doing something relevant.
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>>47852075
that's not a bad thing. T Swift is lanky as fuck.
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Witch: Wandering Mistress
Insect: Giant Centipede

Focus: Forest Stride - can't see me coming
Speedy - can't outrun me
Sturdy - can't crush me
Resistance: Fire - can't kill it with fire

kekekekeke
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>>47852075
Short chicks are best chicks.
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>>47852246
leave my domain, peasant
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>>47847670
And so much for having no fashion taste at all.
Bet this one looks beautiful on you if the wind plays with it.
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>>47852246
>>47852334
They only need to be short enough for you to be able to throw them into any position you want.
Another reason to get your lazy asses into the gym.
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>>47852383
But I want them to throw ME, anon!
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>>47852396
See >>47852334
manlets...
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>>47852402
don't use my own post against me motherfucker
i wish i was a manlet
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>>47852087
Then why do you tolerate yourself?
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>>47852411
>don't use my own post against me motherfucker
>Achievement unlocked: Butthurt by his own petard
Oh nice, thanks.
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>>47852383
>>47852334
The best height difference is that of Hafthor Bjornsson and his girlfriend.

Tall girls are nice, but short girls are where it's at.

>>47852435
>Butthurt by his own petard
top pep
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>>47852087
I agree, don't understand why those idiots lash out on everyone speaking out against her attention whoring
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>>47845189
>22 pages
>11 of which are irrelevant to you
>can't go to the Netherlands
It's shit, Quiet. Shit.
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I love it when AQCanon spurts random arabic in a sophisticated english sentence.
Keep analyzing his previews guys, I want more
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>>47852454
>Quiet
>Shit
That's redundant.
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>>47852516
anon pls, stop being so damn salty. Why are you so salty?
He said he isn't including muh memorydeath this time around, so it can't be that. Is it the mysteries?
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>>47852536
Quiet likes to write half the story and then laugh at you for not reading his mind about the other half. So I guess that's the mysteries
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>>47852536
...Trusting quiet? Really anon, i thought better of you.

Then again most people believe Quiet's "Lost Notes"...
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>>47852516
I was going to say something like this, but ended up not bothering. Thanks for doing it for me.
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>>47852546
fair point. I like not being given all the information, being able to guess as to how the setting is.
>>47852555
>>47852587
so you can't answer why you're salty?
You know, you could always just not whine. I don't see the point, really. You're just giving off bad vibes.
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>>47852605
>so you can't answer why you're salty?
Well, no.

Can you answer why you're a giraffe?
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>>47852605
Whining could be stating facts, but stating fact is not always whining dear anon.

Also i am different person, not salty anon.

I enjoyed quiet CYOA really. Still can't think why people believes at "Lost my notes" though.
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>>47852634
>Can you answer why you're a giraffe?
Chuck Norris uppercutted me.
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>>47852605
>fair point. I like not being given all the information, being able to guess as to how the setting is.

That's fine NORMALLY, but quiet wants to make that impossible. Everything is a curveball, everything is worse than it appears, and the only one who knows how fucked you really are is him.

In a normal CYOA you are given some details and expected to fill in the blanks, but those blanks are supposed to logically follow from what you are given, not be massive unknowable twists.
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>>47852689
That's not how CYOAs work. If the author doesn't put something in, then it doesn't exist. If the author goes and adds or changes something, then you can just change your build too.

It's doomed to failure.
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>>47851133
>>47850848
>>47850422
Thanks Mac <3

>>47851567
maybe after I finished all of this, I wish i could finish this already so I can move on to my next cyoa but rushing cyoa isn't really good
next cyoa is immortal post apocalyotic, with a mix of supernatural and scifi and all picture are hand drawn by me
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>>47852435
>butthurt
what
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Cheers for the massive shitstorm earlier in this thread, enjoyed reading through it this morning.

Might make taking a couple of curses mandatory, it'd be a laugh.
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>>47852843
You, you I like
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>>47847914
>CHOOSE
Witch, Wandering Mistress - Wassup, witchy baby?

>Species
Mammal - Cat-nyan.

>Witch Mysteries
The Body, Humanize - I can disguise myself as the witch's daughter! They'll never see me coming! Also, I don't like being a furry. :(

>Perks
Charming - What, we can't even get this one while in human form? But it's the only one that at least makes sense...
Guide - Have to be useful to my mistress somehow.
Wand User - Need self-defense somehow, too.
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>>47853072
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>>47853072
>>47853082
>ultimate troll waifu CYOA
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>>47847701
>since when did plaid become a dyke fashion statement?
I wear plaid and I'm not a dyke I'm a boy.
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>>47848098
>maybe if we asked the mods or janitors politely,
RETARD ALERT
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>>47847956
>Witch
Waifish Orphan

>Species
Pseudo-Dragon

>Perks
The Prodigy
Breath Weapon (Light)
Sturdy
Telepathic

>Future Focus
Witch of The Mind
Through Your Eyes

Well the main job is protection really like the ultimate bodyguard from lusty teenage boys all the way to annoying teachers are gonna get their eyeballs burnt.
Aint gonna trust nobody with this girls innocence unless its them who feeds me gives me shelter and a few headpats now and then....
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>>47849960
>be qt androgynous fuccboi
>charm the socks off boys and girls
>boarding school still insists on female uniforms
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>>47849627
the fuck is it?
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>>47851370
The image compression on this one is shit. Have a better-quality image:
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>>47847871
>wizard academy and our magical girl orphanage
And do they have corporal punishment?

I'm assuming Gifted does because it implies a realistic setting.
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>>47852843
Please don't. There's nothing wrong with your curses, they're just a lot more harsh than we're used to.

That was also not a massive shitstorm: a massive shitstorm is one that spans over multiple threads and devours all of them.
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>>47850025

I suspected elegan/tg/entlemen like lizardmen more than girls!

>>47851806

Way.

>>47853129

Anybody can wear plaid, just lesbians wear it a bit more.
http://lesbianswhatsupwithyouguys.tumblr.com/post/18816301854

>>47851884

Well when I posted pics in clothes that I'm most comfortable in, everybody said they couldn't see my figure at all. So I must be pretty boyish>:(

>>47852020
>>47852075

>tfw womanlet who'll never look like Goddess TayTay.

At least I got the somewhat larger boobs...

>>47852364

Aaaah Thanks anon!

>>47848187
>>47849773

Picture got (You)s, but nobody likes my builds;_;
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>>47853365
don't worry anon, I saved your build.
it's one of the build of my cyoa that i really remembered
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>>47853365
Cool blog post!
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>>47853365
I like your lesbian builds, and I like your dream princess cyoa too because it lets me become Slaanesh. So you just keep doing your thing.
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>>47853365
I think it's more that no one cares.
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>>47847755
>select a gender
If, when I get through last thread, no one picked to be a hermaphrodite, I will be terribly disappointed in y'all. Well, chances are they're pussies and are 2scurred to post it.
>girl
don't judge me
>16 years
I'd go Dark Magic if it didn't leave me traumatized as fuck from nearly being murdered in a ritual. Chances are my parents were in on it.
>Divine
because I'm playing this as if it happened to me. I'd go Dark magic if this was a game, because I'd only use it for selfish reasons.
>Emotional: No change
>Physical: No change
>Mental: Enhanced 24
Will be real useful when trying to not get caught in lies or using these powers
>Life: Leech 24
Eh, I'm not so concerned with immortality, but it should be possible, even if my backstory is Divine. Just gotta find some rapists.
>Fresh start 34
Oh shit, cool, I get points for playing the CYOA how I always do them. Also helps with avoiding being transsexual / getting a new body in general
>Spiritual: Repellent 32
I mean, if I'm Divine and get a new body/mind, I'll definitely attract shit I don't want.

>Future sight + Relevant + Clarity 26
Nice way to make God or whoever happy, and it'll really help with not dying / helping people... even if it only shows MY future
>Clairvoyance + Direct 24
Hopefully I can pull some bullshit and combine Future sight with Clairvoyance, so I can tell their future in my dreams. That's probably a little too cheesy.
>Psychometry 23
>Mind reading 19
>Dowsing 18
>Healing 16
Of course
>Apportation + Pocket dimension 12
We UBW now. I don't really know what to use, but that's too useful to skip
>Barrier 9
>Blessing 5
Yeah, we UBW now. I assume we can instantly terminate blessings?
>Interference 3
>Tongues + Siren 0
I also wanted Mediumship (1) and Mechanics (3)(for even more UBW)
Well shit, I'd have picked Drained, but fuck being useless even after "moderate usage". Have you run 100 km+ ever? I sure haven't.
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>>47853465
>Ally
ah, so all towns fuck you over. Got it. Well, I'd pick Riverfront East if this was a game. Perfect chance to make God happy, but I don't have plot armor, so
>Westwood Heights
It's a not-shitty place, and witches are much less frightening than ayylmaos.

>Leah Dawson
Yeah, she's gonna get raped by an Incubus soon. She's an in into the witch society.
>Adam Wiley
Let's live with him. Why not. He doesn't know magic or other shit.
There's no one else I'm interested in, so I guess I'll pick
>Victoria Bainbridge
since that would be a good deed when I exorcise her. Or maybe not. I'll have to figure out what will make God happiest.

None of the adults are interesting, so
>Louise Webb
Might as well make school easier, even with my upgrade to INT.
>Henry Morris
Free shit.

>Boarding school
I'd have gone Family instead, but with Boarding school it doesn't matter
>Inheritance
I'd have picked Armed if I could get extra bullets through UBW. Still, that is a good way to use UBW. Let's see if Henry can help me get a gun or any other weapon.

I'd have loved more lore. It feels so empty.
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>>47853365
>look like Goddess TayTay.
it took me a while to find a picture of her that wasn't boring as shit. I'll never get the fascination with her or Emma Watson aka. zero-tits.
>tfw Angel isn't straight
You're so mean.
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>>47853465
>If, when I get through last thread, no one picked to be a hermaphrodite, I will be terribly disappointed in y'all.
Yeah, because anyone wants to be a freak irl
>I'd go Dark Magic if it didn't leave me traumatized as fuck from nearly being murdered in a ritual. Chances are my parents were in on it.
Both of those are not in the desription, almost being murdered is a great stress, but not necessary traumatize you.
>Victoria Bainbridge
>I exorcise her.
>taking a companion in order to kill it

The bait is strong in this one.
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Someone already posted my poll, but I must shill it for the shekels. Vote for all the waifus you would be happy with. Waifu science thanks you for your contribution.

http://poal.me/eceaw2

>>47810254
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>>47853389

Really?! I didn't think it'd stand out to the author! That's very nice of you to remember it! Glad you like it!

>>47853398

Hey! I'm posting /tg/ and cyoa stuff!

>>47853442

Glad you like them! I like your Slaanesh build. It's very creative way to use Dream Princess powers.

>>47853446

;_;

>>47853607

She has perfect face, looks good with short hair, and has tall slim figure. I like her more than Emma Watson. Hermione wasn't even the qtiest character in Harry Potter movies. That was Bellatrix.
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>>47848187
>No. I dyed it.

And another piece of the crazy Angel puzzle is revealed.
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>>47847755
30+67 points=97 points

emotional: no change
physical: perfect (93)
mental: enhanced (87)
life: prime, 24 (72)
memory: no change
spiritual: magnet (77)

telekinesis, precision, power (68)
future sight, relevant, clarity (62)
clairvoyance, direct (60)
mind reading, deep dive (53)
psychometry (52)
healing, self service, miracle (42)
tongues, siren, non verbal (38)
charm, adored (30)
pyrokinesis, control, catalyst, source (17)
athleticism, peak human, raw power (4)
vitality, (1)
dowsing (0)

The voices +11
Ego +10
Inhuman +8
empathy +10
unsettling +8
night person +8
insomnia +12

None of these where difficult to take. Except for maybe the voices but since its canon that my power is divine I just do what they tell me to do.

ally (julie)
riverfront east
kate, mia, scarlet
julie, louise

Overcome x2
I think I did my math right.
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>>47853655
>She has perfect face
I'd have to disagree
>tall slim
aka lanky, aka bad.
When you say you're womanlet, are we talking 5'2" or 5'4" because that's perfect, or actual womanlet aka. 4'10" to 5'0"?
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>>47853655
Of course you would love the tall woman with barely any curves. Deep down, your body is aching for a man to completely dominate you. I want to kill whoever molested you and turned you into this feminist freak.
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>>47853666
The second one from bottom right is hot.
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>>47853631
>because anyone wants to be a freak irl
apparently there are some.
>Both of those are not in the desription
anon, what? I'm allowed to fluff it out that my parents were occultists, and they left me because the ritual failed.
If you don't want to believe that, fine

>he doesn't exorcise ghosts, bringing them peace
that's okay, anon. You do you. I wasn't interested in any of the other companions, so I'd rather do a good deed and make God happy

>The bait is strong in this one.
And I can say the same to you? Am I not allowed to interpret the CYOA differently from you? Am I not allowed to pick differently from you?
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>All of this obsession with AngelAnon
It's not even that, there's more stuff that isn't entirely cyoa-related that frequently pops up. Can we get back on-topic?
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>>47851229
Indeed it has.

I'm up earlier than usual, and a little grumpy about it. I might find sleep later, but for now, time to get cracking on Familiar CYOA. For those who want a head's up, I aim to change how Perk/Focus distribution works, make familiars be able to talk by default, and replace Talkative with a "Mage Hand" perk, that's essentially the Universalist ability, and then soup up Telekinesis to balance it out.

And also a bunch of rewrites.
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>>47853754
you should have 123 points to spend from what I can tell.
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>>47853835
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>>47853754
So you can't sleep, are creepy as fuck, are a sociopath, hear insane voices and can't live near any form of natural or artificial light. What exactly do you plan to do? Live under a rock for the rest of your immortal life?
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>>47853880
Unless overcome is supposed to give +6 per curse I don't think that's right. I already applied the +3 I get per perk

>>47853926
>So you can't sleep
I can sleep well enough to function

> are creepy as fuck, are a sociopath
I don't care about other peoples opinion of me. If I really need a good relationship with someone I can just charm them

> hear insane voices
Those voices come to me directly from the heaven

> can't live near any form of natural or artificial light
night person isn't that harsh. I just need to not expose skin and wear sunglasses and I can live go outside just fine

>What exactly do you plan to do
I'm a trouble magnet, so I plan to solve trouble. I also get orders directly from god so I plan to follow those unless I find them really questionable.
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>>47853914
Nice picture. I now want to be the little girl. Good thing I'm in CYOA General.
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>>47853804
by posting more about angel? No. But I can post another off-topic comment if that'll make you feel better.
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>>47853966
>not expose skin and wear sunglasses and I can live go outside just fine
You're going to wear a balaclava or something outdoors during the day to protect the skin on your face, and that's beyond silly. That, or something like a hijab. Just saying.
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>>47854005
I put sunscreen on my face.
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>>47853966
Mind I could be wrong with this
>Initial points
30 points
>Curses
67 points
>Overcome
21 points
>Spiritual Magnet
5 points

>Total
123 points
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>>47853995
Last time I checked, posting about how much you wuv a lesbian who visits the thread isn't anywhere near talking about CYOA's.
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>>47854025
no, the curses+overcome are 67 points. Without it I would only get 46 from them.
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>>47854005

I might need to reword it.

It's meant to be unpleasant, not painful, and certainly not dangerous if you just lather up with plenty of strong suncream.

You can easily function in the day if you have to, but it'll be irritating enough that you'll want to avoid it if you can.
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>>47851884
They're small breasts. A boy could easily have those after less than a year of hormones.

>>47853365
Literally my favorite WHFB army, although that doesn't mean much since I don't play. Are those yours? You're quite good at painting if so.
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>>47854044
Why the artificial light clause though?
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>>47854036
You've singlehandedly caused four off-topic posts. Good job, anon. Shall we make it six?
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>>47854038
Then it's all good.
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>>47854118
Why not? You don't seem intent on stopping any time soon, and you've made far more than I. How about we make it seven? Eight? Maybe even ten?
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>>47852843
What's with creators having stunted emotional maturity? It seems common that they act like twelve year olds.
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>>47854117
We're talking sitting in a room with all the lights turned on being a problem, not just looking at a computer screen or whatever.
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>>47853655
>Bellatrix
No shit, she pretty much deep throats her wand.
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>>47854145
Sure, lets
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>>47854184

Don't know if you're reading sarcasm into the comment or something, but I was being genuine, it was an amusing read to see people getting so worked up on both sides about a dumb internet choice game.
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>>47853089
>Best girl doesn't get remotely worse in the second page: the CYOA
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>>47853966
>night person isn't that harsh.
It makes it suffering to be near your computer.
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>>47854221
If I thought it was sarcasm I would've pegged you as being older than twelve.
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>>47854191
Then you really should reword it. I've got the feeling that's what causing some people to dislike the drawbacks: they sound a lot worse than they probably are. Like how Lust sounds like you'll be rubbing your own dick limp and bloody.
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>>47854221
It's yet more bait.
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>>47854272
desu I think people calling bait at everything are more of a problem than dissenting opinions.

It's like that annoying guy that keeps shouting at you not to listen or talk to anybody else.
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>>47854221
> a dumb internet choice game.

Where do you think you are?
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>>47854292
I just point out the obvious ones. I've only called two, cause Anons just go for it without a care in the world.
Apologies for being "that guy."
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>>47854237

What's the mature course of action here then?

To join in the shit flinging about something as silly as people not liking my OC?

To vehemently attack or immediately cave to any negative opinion?
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>>47854336
>immediately cave to any negative opinion
You better satisfy all our whims. You dirty slut.
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>>47847673
This seems fun. Here we go.
Genetic inheritance
Emotional: Strengthened+7
Physical: Perfect-4
Mental: Sharpened-3
Life: Reset-5
Memory: Knowledge-5
Spiritual: Magnet+5
Current points 25 for powers
>>47847701
Utility stuff and abilities first, then damage.
Charm-3, Mechanics-3, Interference-2(uncontrollable+5 to pay itself), Friend of nature-3, Athleticism-4( raw power-6), Vitality-3(Immunity-3), Tongues-2(non verbal-1), >with more powers from the curses I will now get Pyrokinesis-3 (Control-3,Catalyst-2,Source-5) my punches make fireballs now, Teleportation-4 (Quick step-4 for flash), Barrier-3 (Permanent-3, Wide-2 to protect allies), Apportation-2 never know when a got to hide something quick to get it later, Healing-2 because there wont be a lot that can stop me but don't want to risk friends, and with 1p left over I'll take Mediumship-1 to talk to any ghost that come up.
>>47847825
ok getting a few things from here to get some extra back. Getting Phobia 3 times for 21 they will be fear of flying, drowning, and suffocation, (don't know technical names bear with it), Unsettling+5 and off balanced by charm more or less, Animal foes will be last and minimal thanks to friend of nature so +8 giving me 34p to work some more powers in.
>>47847851
Guardian:I will take ally
Home: Yarrow Falls. (My pyromancy control should be just fine here)
Student Allies: Danny Glass because he seems to be a bro that wont be to put off by my power fuckery, Leah Dawson because I don't trust a self training witch to not do something irreversibly stupid and I might as well be around to keep an eye on her, then Adam Wiley because I think between the two of us we can have enough brain power to take out whatever might come at us( barring that get info that wont get Leah killed and us by extension) also dumb experiments for fun times sound as good time killer as anything else.
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>>47854336
To explain why you made the choices you made, let people argue their case, consider their arguments, and then make a decision explaining why you did or did not decide to make the desired changes.
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>>47854184
I can name a few creators who are pretty chill.

>>47854221
>Dumb internet choice games
What mate?
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>>47853655
>Bellatrix
Superior taste.
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>>47848187
I've never actually heard of anything bad happening from putting a face on /tg/. Even on /b/, people forget quickly if you're not abusing animals or something.
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>>47853666

There's literally nothing wrong with dyed hair.

>>47853757

5'1"

>>47854096

>They're small breasts.

I know. I wish they were bigger;_;

>Are those yours? You're quite good at painting if so.

Thanks! Yeah, they're mine. I been teaching myself to paint for awhile. I don't play Warhammer either. The army I posted in that other thread is the first actual army I painted for a game. I don't know if I'm really going to like wargamng, but a coworker talked me into trying.

Was gonna post more mini pics, but all of a sudden phone doesn't want to show up on computer...maybe later:(
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>>47854336
>To join in the shit flinging about something as silly as people not liking my OC?

>To vehemently attack or immediately cave to any negative opinion?
None of that, obviously. Stay above it, don't put your name on the posts if you're going to shitpost about it, explain your decision once and don't let anyone else sway you from doing what you want to do and you think is best.

Never get into a fight over it, and never apologize for what you're doing ultimately for yourself. Sure, you can say you're sorry that some anon doesn't like your stuff, but not that you're sorry you made it the way you wanted to make it.
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>>47854423
>don't let anyone else sway you
This is a bad mindset. People can have legitimate arguments that are reasonable and worth consideration. Don't be that hardheaded guy who refuses to listen to anyone and end up crippling yourself, like a deviantart child.
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>>47847806
>spoiler
I guess that explains some of your design decisions.
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>>47854445
Right, sure, but I was talking in the context of the shitstorm here.
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>>47854504
You mean the anons telling Gifted that his curses are pretty fucking intense which they are? Nothing wrong with that though.
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>>47854517
Look, it's obvious he'd already considered the opinions if he's asking which out of the two choices of either returning fire or cucking himself he should take.
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>>47854517
Not him, I'm pretty sure he means the people saying things like "they are shit" or "Not a single one of these is worth it. They're all suicide."
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>>47854402
>There's literally nothing wrong with dyed hair.
This is what degenerates really believe.
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>>47854536
>Listening to other people's opinions is cheating on your spouse
What
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>>47854544
>>There's something wrong with dyed hair
>This is what retards really believe
Just a quick question, do you think there is anything wrong with hammers?
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>>47854567
If you make a hammer out of part of your body which was not designed to be a hammer, then yes. Otherwise, what the fuck is the relevance of that question?
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>>47854370
Ran out of space for the rest of the build so back to it.
Adult allies (I don't know whether or not the adopting parent counts toward the maximum ally count so I went with it didn't, tell me if I am wrong): Adopted by Louise Webb so class wont be to much of a issue, Eric Strickland so I have some form of backup in case shit hits the fan too hard for me to handle, and second ally would be Henry Morris because a old antiquarian is bound to have some sage advise for our motley crew, or a Deus Ex Machina shtick to pull our asses out of the fire.
Perks: Inheritance so I can take care of things as necessary( also date/equipment money) and if needed for the third adult First Impressions , if not Synchonicity be myself or Overcome to minimize the phobias. How does it look?
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>>47854567
I'm not him, but hammers are great for cutie white mages who want to bring the smackdown on degenerates.
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>>47854561
No, anon. Cukcing yourself. You first have to marry yourself, and then cheat on yourself. Possibly also with yourself.

You fucking autist.
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>>47854583
>What the fuck is the relevance of that question?
Hammers are a tool of trade.
Dyed hair is a tool of trade.
What trade?
Social interaction. It is a defining characteristic and can sway people one way or the other.
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>>47854567
Basically, crazy special snowflakes are the only people that dye hair weird colors.
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>>47854599
Now you are changing goalposts.
Dying hair was all that was up for debate.
Nothing like rainbow barf, pastel barf, purple, or the color of the inside of one's soul.
Even odd colors aren't that big of a deal, but yeah. You gotta be a tad fucked in the head to commit to blue or some shit.
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>>47854538
We're in the midst of an era of author generosity, receiving omnipotence and eternal beauty free with a side of rice, so this might not be the best time to make a cyoa where "you have to torture small animals once every 24h or go insane" is a reasonable drawback.
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>>47853804
>>47854036
>>47854145
STOP TALKING ABOUT THINGS THAT AREN'T CYOAS YOU RETARD
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>>47854598
Social interaction is not a trade unless you're a courtesan or a therapist. Appearance is not relevant to the latter.

>>47854599
Red is a naturally occurring hair color in humanity, and it's sort of borderline on the "subtly broken but still functional" versus "complete and utter tumblrtard" line. But dying in general indicates a failure to accept who you are and work from that solid base, and is both unhealthy and unattractive, though mildly enough in both cases that it is less odious than many other habits. Nonetheless, it's nowhere near "nothing wrong".

>>47854655
Bullshit, nigga. A CYOA can and should stand on its own. Not everything has to be full-on wish fulfillment, and his CYOA is the best one I've seen released this month.
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>>47854674
Angelanon is an author of a cyoa, so any discussion involving Angelanon is a cyoa-related discussion, hun.
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>>47854598
What kind of retarded logic is that?
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>>47854674
Angel Defense Force please go
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>>47854699
No.
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>>47854655
>Author generosity
I agree, it's great.
>2nd half
>Variety and serious choice is bad
I mean, come on. Not everything can be sunshine and rainbows. It's a CYOA, not a godgame. You are supposed to choose your own ADVENTURE. Dealing with extreme mental problems are complications in an adventure.
>>47854679
I disagree with your first line on the basis that social interaction, while not a monetary trade, is a trade of information and interest. Agree to disagree, perhaps?
As for your last line, I agree wholeheartedly. Easily the best non-waifu piece. With Heart taking the Waifu slot. I wonder if Quiet's Urban will top Gifted, though.
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>>47854674
Anon, they KNOW they're the ones dragging up this shit. They enjoy it. It's called bait. Telling them to stop will only make them do it harder. Stop.

>>47854690
The author herself and things about her life has nothing to do with the CYOA in a specific context like this.
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>>47854598
>Dyed hair is a tool of trade.
>What trade?
Whoring.
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>>47847755
>>47847783
>>47847825
>>47847851
>>47847874
I liked this.
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>>47854690
I wasn't talking about Angelanon discussion. I was talking about Angelanon discussion discussion.
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>>47847806
do it faggot.
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>>47852760
This post is correct.
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>>47854690
That kind of indirect correlation is shoddy logic. I like the relaxed atmosphere here, but that doesn't mean that everything we say is necessarily related.

>>47854699
Though I disagree with his mindset, his exhortation is reasonable.

>>47854730
By your definition, a trade would be any gainful activity. I think that's too broad of a definition to be useful, and doesn't cleave to common usage. But by your definition, you're right. Even then though, I'd find the idea that dyed hair is useful to be pretty suspect. While an altered appearance could be situationally useful, dyeing hair also damages it and makes it look altered, especially if you change it often, and I can't think of any reasonable case where that's an advantage.
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>>47854737
STOP TALKING ABOUT WHAT ISN'T CYOA RELATED
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>>47854730
>Dealing with extreme mental problems are complications in an adventure.

I'm more bothered with how over-the-top most curses are in this cyoa. In any other cyoa Sadism would be "you enjoy inflicting pain, and grow restless when you go to long without doing so" but here it's "torture an animal or cut off a finger once every 24h, or you'll go insane!". Same with Lust. Being extremely horny or a nymphomaniac would be a big drawback in most cyoas but here we need to regularly rub ourselves bloody and raw to function properly. It's a bit too much imo.
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>>47854229
I don't even know which girl you like best, and I can tell you you're either trolling or wrong.
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>>47854791
NO YOU YOU STOP TALKING ABOUT IT
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>>47847755
>>47847783

My name is Ian Gladstone. A portentous name, but most people just call me Gladstone. I have just turned 16. I have rusty hair and ice blue eyes.

/ 30pts

Power source:
Nature

Im thinking that Gladstone got his powers from discovering a "barrow hill" of a sect of ancient celtic druids in the UK. But when he moved he went to Main New England in the US.

Changes:
Emotional - No change
Physical - Perfect -4P
Mental - Sharpened -3P
Life - No change +10P
Memory - No change
Spiritual - Magnet +5P

/ 38pts

Future Sight
- Clarity -5P
Psychometry
- Muscle memory -4P
Interference
- Targeted -4P
Tongues
- Siren -3P
Blessing -4P
Apportation
- Pocket Dimension 4P
Familiar -4P Black/White tabby Cat (Total = 7P)
- - Invisibility 5pts (3pts = 6pts -5 = 1pt)
- - Possession -6pts (3pts = 6pts)
- - Mechanics -3pts (1pts = 2pts +1pt = 3pts)

Total = 38P

I have the ability to see the future. Use objects with the same skill as their owner, i can also summon these objects, so i can summon and use an M4 carbine aswell as the soldier it belongs to. I can also nock out electronics like security cameras and lights. I can also bless others to improve their lot in life, but i tend to do this secretly. My familiar is an extremely powerfull Black/White tabby cat. Hes able to turn invisible and spend time guarding me in school, hes also pretty mischievous and might try possessing the principle to get me out of trouble by talking to the teacher. Hes also a genius of mechanics and can use things like a ball rolled down a school drain gutter to create a noise and distract a guard. Im thinking my enemies would range from devil cultists to government G-men to protecting the town from Lovecraftian Horrors.
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>>47854782
Dyed hair isn't degenerate because it's a tool of leftist activists.
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>>47847783
>>47847755

Continued from
>>47854810

I'd also like to be able to heal myself and others when surrounded by nature, but that option wasnt really available so i chose healing.

Phobia +7P (Blood)
Healing
- Self service -7P

A phobia of blood is runs pretty deep in Gladstone. Blood will even make him immediatly throw up. He eschews all forms of violence in most cases. Except where its life or death. This is also probably a side motive for hating blood sacrifices of the evil monks and hating war in general.

Guardian:
Ally.

Mr. and Mrs Creed. A nice couple who adopted me after both of their children grew up and left to make lives for themselves. Mr. Creed is a strong lumberjack type who works in a fishing shop. Mrs. Creed is a kind woman with a hard intellegence who works as a General Practitioner at the local surgery. Both of them are united in there respect for nature and lifeforces. Though both of them know theres something wrong with me, they dont know what it is.

Home:
Gloverisle, Main

Continued...
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>>47854805
I'M NOT TALKING ABOUT IT, I'M TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT IT.

STOP TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT IT.
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>>47847783
>>47847755
>Continued from
>>47854810
>>47854832


Allies: Students
Kate Fox - A social outcast just like Gladstone. Her knowledge of the paranormal and conspricies will come in extremely usefull because Gladstone doesnt understand the powers that be, such as the government or illuminati, or even his own powers. Kate is pretty pleased with herself that she discovered Gladstone, she wasnt going to let anything stop her from finding the first geniunly paranormal thing to happen at her school.
Scarlet Manning - Scarlet enjoys playing the social game almost as much as keeping others down if they dont fit into the circle of friends shes drawn around herself. In short, shes a bully. But all that had to be put on hold when the evil monks turned up. Now shes been thrown together with the nerds such as Gladstone and Kate who are the only ones who seem to to know whats going on... or atleast they think they do, she'll criticise any weakness in their plans and strategies, shes actually a pretty good planner and tactician hereself... because Scarlets not gonna let the comfortable life shes created for herself suddenly get pulled into "some nerds fantasy dream". In reality shes one of the great survivalists, able to turn any social situation to her advantage, beneith her icey demeanor shes actually pretty flexible and is the only one able to understand the subtleties of social situations... like the meanings of rituals the monks perform... is this intuition or some understanding shes inherited along with her wealth? She also thinks she'll inherit Carl Knight as her property, but what Carl thinks about this is another thing...

Continued...
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>>47854791
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>>47854782
Oh no, he's somewhat right. Discussion about meta things like this isn't entirely good, but I felt that it was reasonable to point out that posts about social life, the fact that people think she looks like taylor swift, and talk about boyish body sizes and the likes aren't really CYOA-related. And it seems we partly share the agreement.
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>>47854803
Meshara Brown, obviously.
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>>47847783
>>47847755
Continued from
>>47854810 (You)
>>47854832 (You)
>>47854850


Carl Knight - Sometimes you just need a knight. With a stable personality and good sense of humour hes in the year above the rest of the group. Carl enjoys pumping iron and playing racing car games on his x-box. Carl feels like hes spent most of his life "on pause" waiting for something to happen. He yearns to have somebody in need he can help, which is what drew him to Kate Fox and Gladstone after things started to "get spicy". Hes also the only one with a driving licence... y'know... to get to the GYM.

I like the idea that i can bless either Carl Knight or Scarlet to truely unlock their powers.

Adults

Dr. Julie Slater - The schools biology teacher. General science boffin she has several side research projects shes always working on, which may or maynot be paranormal.
Eric Strickland - You first meet Officer Strickland while playing frisby with yourself. He stops and get out the patrol car to show you how to play frisby properly, bonding you both together. When the black tie G-men turn up Eric is unfortunatly bound to help them in any way he can. But in reality he has serious misgivings about their purpose in this town. Willing to let anyone he catches go, and putting the good of the town first, you'd be better off dealing with Eric than the G-men.

Perks:
Apprentice - Officer Strickland.
First Impressions - Doreen Chapman
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>>47854799
Except that's somewhat wrong.
>Or you'll go insane from Sadism after 24 hours
It says "you're going to feel terrible."
That implies you are going to be depressed or equivalent.
And lustful is really just a "more extreme" view on what other CYOA view it as.
You could pull an all-night wank-job in any of them, really. It's just not actively portrayed that way in others. If it's that big of a deal, ignore the non-mandatory text. I.E. "Cannot be taken with asexual" and "You just can't stop getting off!"
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To put a lid on the Curse balance stuff, I felt from the start they were roughly at the right level with some little shifts in balance needed, or even just clarification like with the Night Person talk in this thread, so when the criticisms was that they were a million miles away from being balanced, implying they should be so much milder they'd be basically irrelevant, we're at the point where people aren't asking for balance changes, they're asking for a different CYOA altogether..

Last thing I did before this was Super Solider, which is about as pure power fantasy as it gets (which to be fair, is probably why it's the only content I've put out which gets reposted regularly), so this was always meant to be something different. It started as straight up "you're going to be the bad guy" where you'd need to load up on curses to have even a half viable build, but I think in it's current state it hits a pretty nice middle ground where you can ignore the downsides if you want and still have fun, but you're not going to become all powerful without a few of them.
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>>47854853
>Discussion about meta things like this isn't entirely good
Discussions about discussions about meta things are even worse, so congratulations on being the shittiest poster in the thread.
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>>47854845
I'M NOT TALKING ABOUT IT EITHER, I'M TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE TALKING ABOUT HER

STOP BEING ONE OF THOSE PEOPLE WITH A RIDICULOUS RECURSIVE DESCRIPTION
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>>47854862
>Super Solider was a pure power fantasy

Is there a second super soldier cyoa because the one I remember has huge factions of super soldiers, little girl allies which are objectively stronger than we are, and scary as fuck enemies. It's a good cyoa but it's not a ffa power fantasy.
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>>47847783
Here's a musing.
I'm debating running a Quest soon over on /qst/.
Text stuff cause I'm ass at art.
Which would make a better premise?
>Gifted
or
>The Net Libram of Random Magical Effects
http://www.traykon.com/pdf/The_Net_Libram_of_Random_Magical_Effects.pdf
First would be a mostly-serious Quest (assuming no Fixed) with mass character creation at the start.
The latter would be more of a semi-serious thing where you are a Wild Mage whose ability to cast spells has been massively inhibited, but you can still rend holes to the Magical planes in the fabric of reality and hope you get something good.
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>>47854756
>>47854544
>>47854599

Lies.

>>47854400

Idk. Maybe not. Idea always kinda worried me though.

>>47854397
>>47854211

I just want her to spank me while calling me a filthy mudblood,then lift up her skirt and tell me to serve her like a good little muggle spawn, while smiling wickedly and pointing her wand at me threateningly...
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>>47854854
You mean the cunt hungry slut who has cheated on you numerous times and will no doubt continue to do so?
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>>47854928
Quests are both shit and offtopic.
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>come back 45 minutes later
>60 new responses
what. in the fuck?
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>>47854918
The one you're describing is the second one. Here is the first.
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>>47854939
It's reasonable to be worried and not do it, but it's not actually a significant danger. Hell, I've posted my face before, when it was relevant, probably multiple times that I don't recall all of.
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>>47854862
Don't worry so much Gifted is a excelent CYOA!
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>>47854940
The CYOA author specified that once she's fallen for you then she's not going to touch anyone else but you. He wouldn't specify if that was when you started actually getting together, so it's up to you to decide. You can easily say that from the moment you fuck Meshara in the ass, she drops all her guy friends and stops trying to pick up women and it won't defy canon.
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>>47854939
You showed your nips, and now I want to see your hips.
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>>47854940
>Had sex thousands of years before I was even born
>cheated on me
>Explicitly wants nothing more than to settle down and live out the rest of her life after getting direct application of the dick
>will no doubt continue to do so

I know that you infantile fears about your lack of sexual adequacy makes you terrified of women having sex, but rest assured that actual people are nowhere near as bad about that as you.
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>>47854947
It's not off topic when it's related to CYOA.
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>>47854918

You become a badass supersoldier with a ton of powers from the generous point pool, and all the downsides like being restricted to a faction have opt out options.

Honestly can't see the appeal of a CYOA which is just a few pages of telling you just how brilliant at everything you are and how all the girls want to be your waifu and you're indestructible and so good at doing sick rock guitar solos while riding your skateboard over volcanoes and can stay up like 2 whole hours past your normal bedtime.
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>>47854966

They're both mine, second is just a remake of that with more pages and prettier formatting.
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>>47854993
To be fair, he'd have ground to stand on if Meshara would continue to fuck other men after he's done it in her pooper but before she gives in and takes it vaginally, but as I said >>47854980 , the CYOA maker left it ambiguous as to what point she'd have fallen for you enough to drop everyone else, so he can easily decide it's from first meating.
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>>47855027
Nice. It's one of my favorites.
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>>47855011
it ok gifted anon
rabu
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>>47855011
What's the point if the little girl is gonna beat our ass no matter what?
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>>47855011
That's all fine and reasonable, but don't call your cyoa a pure power fantasy if you're not going to provide that skareboard and/or volcano.
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>>47855060

Don't choose her as a companion or enemy?

Offering the option for a character to exist doesn't mean you have to take them.
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>>47855092
That just means we won't know when she's coming to kill us.
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>>47854961
Don't worry, none of them are about CYOAs.
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>>47855117
maybe she is stronger but you have more experience.
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>>47847655
Does golden horde have a third page?
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>>47855160
So you're saying we should lead her into a trap, and murder her violently before she gets the chance to become THE Mary Stu?
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>>47855011
There can be a point. I made a CYOA that was mostly wish fulfillment but introduced the ideas of having a personal domain and becoming godlike, and dodged around the then-prominent idea that everything needs drawbacks and penalization. People were adding that kind of stuff because they felt like they needed to but doing a lot of stuff that aimed at wish fulfillment anyway, ending up with awkward and inelegant products. It was a popular CYOA for a while but I stopped updating it years ago and there are other options now which do the same thing in more elaborate and aesthetically pleasing ways. But my point is, it was pure wish fulfillment but served a meta purpose and had elements to make it engaging.
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>>47855166
Not that I know of.
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>>47855117

If you want to read the CYOA that way, sure.

I usually read character sections as choosing which characters will exist in the world and the others aren't present, unless otherwise stated.

Made a point of deliberately leaving that open in Gifted, it specifically states others may or may not be present so you can fluff it whichever way you want, and the intention is the same in Super Soldier.

I always read these things as more of an imagination prompt that something with nailed down mechanics. It's why I've no interest in anything with stats (like, your rank in Ability X is Y/10) and try to make my stuff deliberately vague enough that you can read it whichever way you want.
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>>47855190
well yes if you want to kill a little girl, my rute is more like been a mentor for her.
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>>47855226
>Training your replacement
Suicidal.
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>tfw can't shitpost with SDA, our new lesbian overlord or Quiet because timezones. this is all bullshit.
>>47845368
I couldn't wish you good luck, but I eagerly await you telling us all about it!
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>>47855240
He probably means he's going to sabotage her training so she becomes an overpowered, unskilled mess.
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>>47855252
Just fuck your sleep schedule, become a night owl.
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>>47854402
>5'1"
jesus that's small.
Well, it could be worse - you could be tall with small boobs.
>dying hair an unnatural color
at least you don't have tattoos, right?
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wait, we're talking about the Hannah Caldwell character, right? IT's never directly stated what her powerset is, so I mean sure she could be infinitely more powerful than you in terms of firepower but that doesn't mean she can win against you if you have a powerset that counters hers.

>>47855216
Gifted, what's a rough estimate of her set, so that the babies afraid of the little girl can plan around her? Would she be able to trump Immortal's powerset were the two forced into repeated combat?
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>>47855311
>tfw people making fun of Angel for being 5'1" when your mom is 4'9"

Stop. She's not a midget.
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>>47855311
She better not have any. That would be too much for me, and I would have to find another waifu.
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>>47855325
>Immortal

Literally just trap the guy in a reinforced coffin and bury him in cement.
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>>47855367
fuck that, always take immortal as a defector
always
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>>47853072
I like any woman whose answer to "Do you want to go on a killing spree?" is an emphatic "YES!"
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>>47855325
>Gifted, what's a rough estimate of her set, so that the babies afraid of the little girl can plan around her?

Whatever you pick plus a little extra.
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>>47854810
>>47854832
>>47854850
>>47854858
Nice work, I punch shit and act like Ace from One Piece, lets solve crime together, it will hilarious. I am this one>>47854370
>>47854584 and no blood problem because my enemies are piles of ash.
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>>47855325
Hilarious that you'd thought Gifted would be reasonable, anon.
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>>47854862
Love this new gifted thing you made, I saved for reposts later.
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>>47855390
haha shiiiiiiet
so me, her, immortal, max
we just kinda sit around and do nothing for eternity
and she's just, like, got a more comfy seat?
I mean, at least we have enough for a tabletop group
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>>47854968

Maybe some time there'll be a reason and I won't be to afraid.

Mods deleted my other pic:(

>>47855311

>jesus that's small

I know. Everything about me is all wrong;_; I don't have any tattoos though.
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>>47855460
Hell if the two eventually stop aging or can shapeshift so it doesn't matter how old the are, they just get together sense no one else can keep up with them.
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>>47855385
Roberta, than?
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>>47855470
>Everything about me is all wrong
Eh, if you were straight I'd do you. You have all the qualities I like.

>Superior taste
>Small
>caucasian

Now can you stop this nonsense posting? Appreciate it senpai.
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>>47855470
Your height is great and your tits are fine on your small frame. I know you don't understand men, but stop being so retarded.
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>>47855533
>>47855577
>>47855588
Checked.
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>>47855577
Tinkerbell got me into traps. Great taste.
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>>47855619
>Tinkerbell got me into traps.
What?
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>>47855634
Tinkerbell is very good at tucking.
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>>47855345
Is your mom cute? Adorable shorties are adorable.
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>>47853666
I hate how I can't dye myhair without being called a tumlrina. Fuck Tumblr.

>>47854674
Okay fine.

Rapture Academy author please post the missing last page.

Box Wine please come back to us.

>>47854939
>I just want her to spank me while calling me a filthy mudblood,then lift up her skirt and tell me to serve her like a good little muggle spawn, while smiling wickedly and pointing her wand at me threateningly...

I know how you feel.
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>>47855634
Try seeing Tinkerbell as a thick femboy. Delicious.
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>>47854370
I think I will also add on insomnia as curse as well for the 9 points and just get both the upgrades for healing, Miracle-3 and self service-5, then spend the last point on Psychometry-1. I can now replace any part I lose in a fight with crazy monsters.
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>>47855660
>Rapture Academy author please post the missing last page.
At this point we need to make up a fan final page.
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>>47855667
Degenerate.
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>>47855652
No, she's morbidly obese. She's really beautiful though and somehow manages to catch more men than most women. Divorced, not a cheater.
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>>47855690
That's a shame. Oh well.
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>>47855708
Too bad she's also insane, has several mental disorders and is a huge bitch. Not to mention a golddigger. Trust me, everything about her except her face is a shame.

The worst kind of Yandere really.
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>>47851398
Powers like chaos psychic powers frm wh40k.

Horrible, twisting but extremely powerful.
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>>47855577
>>47855588
Sweet lord they speak the truth and have been blessed by the numbers!
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Symbiotes vs Power Armour vs Magical Girl Outfits?
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>>47855669
OFF BY ONE!
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>>47855844
Symbiotes worn underneath Magical Girl Outfits.
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These threads have been overrun with redditors, faggots and blogposts. RIP
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>>47855897
>>47855844

symbiotes being used as an adhesive interface between your power armor and your magical girl outfit
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>>47855844
Power Armour is for fags, Symbiotes and Magical Girls should be allied since thye both run on the power of friendship.
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>>47855917
>faggots

Homophobia is not allowed here, fuckboy!
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>>47855533
If she helps me put 10000 bullets through the dome piece of the senator trying to get rid of due process I'll put a baby in her.
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>>47855844
>>47855897
Symbiote magical girl outfits.
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>>47855917
Welcome to two years ago
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>>47855961
Keep futa on /d/ pls.
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>>47855953
It's always alright to hate fags
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>>47855917
You forgot shitposters like >>47855917
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>>47847755
male 11 (face : Prince noctis pic related)
Genetic

-Emotional = Fixed
-Physical = Perfect
-Mental = Enhanced
-Life = Prime (24 years old)
-Memory = No change
-Spiritual = Repellent

Gifts :
Vitality
Immunity
Painless
Healing
Self Service
Miracle
Athleticism
Raw Power
Pyrokinesis
Pyro Control
Pyro Catalyst
Pyro Source
Levitation
Levitation Efficient
Barrier
Barrier Permanent

Curses : Inhuman, Asexual, Emptahy

Guardian : Ally (Joseph Harrison)
Home : Yarrow Falls (seems comfy)

Students : Leah Dawson, Peter Blake, Adam Wiley

Adults : Jane Farley, Henry Morris

Perks : Overcome curses 2X = 10 Points

i'll be a vigilante
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>>47855980
What futa?
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>>47855271
the posts are from 3 am though. I'll think about it, I really want to banter with SDA and Quiet.
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I miss Box Wine.
It's been, like, 5 days, I don't think he comin' back.
Permission to cry?
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>>47855995
3*3=/=10
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>>47856024
Maybe he is too busy making the new pages to post
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>>47856024
He'll be fine. All authors have a thing that they must return. Once you taste the sweet (You)s of /CYOA/, there is no going back.
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>>47856006
Look at it. I don't trust it.
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>>47855961
Wonder what it feels like to wear that.

CYOA pls
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>>47856075
I prefer shitposting for my (You)s though ;)
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>>47855844
Seriously, anything but power armor IMO. The others are both good, mixed, merged or on their own.
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>>47847755
>gender
Male.
>age
16. That's when I did the most raping, and would be a good time for my life to take another path if I hadn't stopped.

Dark Magic seems appropriate. Although old god power source is cool thematics too, being "chaos" is lame. Being evil is edgy and cool, and makes for good antihero stuff.

Strengthened emotions. The ones I have now are pretty dulled anyway, so this will make me more normal. +7
No physical change
Sharpened brain -3
Leech life is an acceptable form of immortality to me. It'll be tough to get sacrifices, but I'll only need to do it like once a decade.
Dissonance.
No spiritual change. I don't want to be disrupted all the time, but I do want some things to wander into my domain. I should like to enslave them. Plus I don't really want to pay the points.

>>47847783
Flawless mind control (20)
Mind reading with Deep Dive (7/27)
The best powers. I don't like how mind control is just converting humans to drones, but I'll take it. I'm sure I can employ some creativity. Anyway, I can now become the lord of my domain (which will start as my town) without substantial adverse effect on my people.

Vitality, Healing, and Self Service, to keep myself intact while also allowing me to care for my people. 10/37

Weather Control, to keep things pleasant and end the drought.
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>>47855470
I'm with >>47855577 anon on this.
If you'd stop coloring your hair and you were straight, I'd like to befriend you and maybe something lewd, but that's in the air right now until I see your face.
You sound adorable.
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>>47855660
How many lesbians frequent CYOA Gen? Are you all subs like AA?
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>>47856097
Clairvoyance, Scrying, and Psychometry, so I can know everything. 7/44
That adds on to a spy network of drones that I'll get going too, of course. I considered going for a familiar with possession instead, which would be useful for away missions, but it's pretty redundant with flawless mind control. There's one serious downside to taking "scrying" instead of just Remote Viewing, which is that if I'm imprisoned, I can't use it to get myself out. But as long as I get a nice army of loyal minions before arousing ire (as long as I can get a few, getting more should be fairly easy and that's the first thing I'll be doing) there'll be forces in place if I need a rescue, which I don't intend to. It's a reasonable risk that I'm willing to take in exchange for another avenue of information gain.

>>47847825
Unsettling and Inhuman, since I already have those issues to begin with. That's +10, which balances the account.

>>47847851
Being the ward of an ally seems the most overtly normal option.
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>>47856061
yeah, so?
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>>47856113
Withermouth looks like the most pleasant place to live, but I'm not sure if my powers work on the monsters there. Riverfront East is a good base, because it has lots of initial targets available, and I can do a lot of good for the neighborhood. All I have to do is enthrall everyone, and I can eliminate the violence, then we can work together to drive out the hunters, if my powers don't work on them. I hope they do though. A lot of the critters that prey on humans are probably useful in other regards. And the denizens of a neighborhood like this are likely strong people too. Once I get a gang going, we can abduct and enslave people on a massive scale pretty quickly. Once I get enough, the time it takes me to make a convert is probably going to be the main limiting factor. It's also nice that this is a neighborhood in a city, rather than a small town. It makes expansion beyond my current borders a more natural and organic thing. Although I'm sure I'll meet bigger enemies then, and there's enough to deal with in my own back yard, so that's far enough in the future that I don't need to worry too much about it yet. Nonetheless, I plan to control the whole city some day.

Peter Blake and Liam Black seem like good gentlemen to work with. Leah Dawson is a good apprentice/waifu. Her magic can hopefully do stuff my human thralls can't.

>>47847874
Henry Morris seems like a good guardian. He's got access to some very useful things, and should be a great help in eliminating or trapping harmful supernatural beings. Joseph Harrington can help direct public efforts to work together with mine, and can come up with a certain amount of funds as needed.

Apprentice to the mayor seems useful. Ruling the city is my eventual goal, after all, and thereafter building it to be the greatest city in the world under my personal touch. I don't need any of the others, so I'll go with Synchronicity.
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>>47856061
i still got 1 unspent points, so i just add them up
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>>47856076
That is a tongue.
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>>47856170
It's gonna lick you up real good, boy.
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>>47856092
And that's why these threads suck.
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>>47856076
Part of the symbiote, obviously.
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>>47856076
Parasite living in her vagina.
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>>47856076
But she clearly trusts you a whole lot. She just wants to be loved and snuggle with you, inside and out.
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Here's a very simple choice.

Would you accept this offer?
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>>47855844
>anything other than
>MOTHER
>FUCKING
>POWER ARMOUR
you're all small-dicked losers afraid of being caught with your cock out, unable to do shit without being instantly able to summon your pansy magical girl shit, or the symbiote protecting you at all times. Chances are you want it to jerk you off at night, and eat the cum so you don't have to get out of bed.
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>>47856234
>you're all small-dicked losers

>having a dick at all
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>>47856234
If the power armor is fucking your mother, does that make it your dad?

Or just another 12 year old on Xbox live?
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>>47856079
Slut life has an option like that, I'm sure.
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>>47856229
A kingdom, power and immortality. What is the price? Getting depressed or afflicted?

I don't get it.
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>>47856234

Yes, free-balling in power armour, swinging my enormous testicles to activate the crotch-level megacannon is the one for me.
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>>47856106
I like to dom younger girls but sometimes I like to get dominated by a sexy older woman or two.

>>47856068
I hope so
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>>47856229
Yes! GIVE IT TO ME! WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!
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>>47856229
I would really need more background information, considering the demon girl's expression the deal is pretty bad.
Being a queen can be very dangerous to one's health...
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>>47856276
Whiny bitch whore can't take responsibility.
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>>47856229
> Kill Six Billion Demons
KILL THE GODS AND TOPPLE THEIR THRONES
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>>47856229
only if I can kill myself at some point. Immortality without an out is asking for insanity.
>>47856250
Ah. So that's why you're a little bitch. Makes perfect sense, the lack of testosterone has destroyed your brains.
>>47856284
YOU'RE GOD DAMNED RIGHT, ANON. Any TRUE MAN, a real GOD DAMNED PATRIOT would pick the BIG ASS FUCKING POWER ARMOUR
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>>47856234
Sure, it's better to compensate for something by wearing a bulky metal suit.
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>>47856331
>Makes perfect sense, the lack of testosterone has destroyed your brains.
guy logic
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>>47856229
Where's this from? Google isn't helping.
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Right, I'm calling Gifted finished, not bothering with the 6th page I'd half thought about because I want to work on something else.

A remake of what I think might have been the very first thing I made on here a couple of years ago. 10 points if anyone can work out what that was, since I think this is the first time I've stuck a name on, and I never reused the layout template like I've done with Super Soldier/Gifted and other things.
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>>47856276
The tree is her husband. The fruit are what grants the immortality. But the price she speaks of is the burden of ruling.

>>47856320
She's the demiurg of gluttony. One of the others wants to destroy everything and has a decent shot at doing it. And her underlings are mostly not happy with her taxes.

>>47856331
Immortality isn't mandatory.

>>47856354
Kill Six Billion Demons.
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>>47856337
Better than being a little bitch who needs the symbiote to do everything for him. Even worse is the magical girls who can't even fight, they swing their little glowstick around.
>>47856347
ssshhh, anon, we're roleplaying now.
I say everyone who picks other than me is a faggot, and you play along perfectly.
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>>47856271
I'm pretty sure the tentacle options are limited to the Tentacle Monster owner, the Tentacle Pit punishment, the Monster Breeding job, and possibly the Magical Girl job.

Unless you want to assume that Space Future Magical Girls wear Magic Tentacle Fuku, none of them seem to be the "wear tentacle suit" option.
>>47856356
Can you give us any hints? Would it be out of place in /d/? Does it involve a breadbox?
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>>47856271
It does but it only have the vaguest 2 sentence description.
> You will be forced to wear an alien suit that will constantly pleasure you. You will still
be able to wear clothes over it.
I suppose you could take the meta reward and use the symbiote cyoa to upgrade it and give it powers.
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>>47856356
What was the sixth going to be?
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>>47856323
>KILL THE GODS AND TOPPLE THEIR THRONES

There's a sound heard across the land
It's heard across the sea
You'll only hear it if you listen with your hearts
And one day hope to be free

To hear the sound of freedom many gave their lives
They fought for you and me
Those memories will always live inside us
And now it's our time to be free

[Chorus:]
Where the eagles fly - I will soon be there
If you want to - come along with me my friend
Say the words and you'll be free
From the mountains to the sea
We'll fight for freedom again
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>>47856362
>Immortality isn't mandatory.
biiitch, of course I'm taking it. I'm not taking the rulership, of course, I want to earn it with the power I've been given
Is Six Billion Demons good?
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>>47855844
Why not all three?
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>>47856079
>>47856374
Paperwork Error has a tentacle suit.
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>>47856362
>burden of ruling.
What, that's it??
Little fucking whiny bitch!
Can we just eat everyone we don't like?
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>>47856382

Specific foes or challenges.

>>47856374

>Can you give us any hints? Would it be out of place in /d/? Does it involve a breadbox?

Not deliberately, but giving it a quick one over one of the options could be super degenerate in another CYOA, but is not in context.
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>>47856397
Pretty sure it's supposed to be a package deal.
Yes. Although you have to be down with not understanding things.
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>>47856419
Who is this soul eating bitch
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>>47856362
Is there a reason why it needs to be feeding young girl blood? Why not pig blood? A pig physiology is very closely related to human.

>husband
What kind of backwards country marries people to trees. Goddamn hippies.

Purge them. Purge. Them. All.
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>>47856421
It would really benefit from that sixth page.
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>>47856366
Completely agree with you. Nothing better than some cuty wearing power armour.
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>>47856437
>Is there a reason why it needs to be feeding young girl blood?
Those are his wives. He consumes them because that is who he is.

He wasn't a tree when they were married, that didn't happen until she killed him.
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>>47856469
So is she special or did she kill him so she wouldn't be eaten?
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>>47856433
Kirby from Musaigen no Phantom World.
She sucks like a hoover.
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>>47847851
I think you should make Derek's bullying tendencies less severe, because it's a big turn off to picking him.
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>>47856419
It's mostly social burdens I think.
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>>47853278
CYOA threads.
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>>47856482
I think she just killed him because he was a dick, but doing so made her special.
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>>47855844
>forgetting Skintight High-Tech Bodysuits
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>>47856502
She is such a whiny fucking bitch goddamn.
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>>47856496
Don't. I want to beat, dominate, and assrape him. Guys like him are treasures.
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>>47847914
Wizard
Elder Master
Void Worm
-Freedom
-Luminous
-Mind Shock
-Speedy

Necromancy
-Zombified


M-MASTER HELP ME BECOME AN IMMORTAL HUMAN PLEASEEEEEE
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>>47856397
For perspective, while this philosophy debate is going down, there are two buddy-cop angels (beings of fire, who wear artificial stone bodies in order to exist in this world) are sneaking into the party on a secret mission, kind of bungling the stealth thing, and arguing constantly about politics. One of them doesn't care for mortal life, and considers the other a sentimental fool. The sentimental one doesn't like rampant murder, and even considers itself to have a gender.
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>>47856534
Pretty sure that falls under the ultralight category of power armor.
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>>47856613
In that case, that combined with symbiotes.
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>>47856502
So is there anything preventing her from shutting them all the fuck up?
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>>47856632
She says they would eat her. Them or that red god guy.
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>>47856648
Well they probably would, and red god guy would just fuck shit up afterwords. Really the throne of YISUN is being held together with corpses and crumbling stone.
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>>47856632
>is there anything preventing Stalin from shutting up all those intellectuals who are giving him lip?
Nothing stopping her, strictly speaking, but there would be significant negative repercussions.

There's also external politics.
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>>47856693
>significant negative repercussions.
Can we eat them, too? Violence solves many problems.
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>>47856712
You can, but after a while there won't be much kingdom left. And then Jagganoth will destroy everything since he's better at violence than you.
>>
Hi.
I've been here almost a year now, so I thought I'd go ahead and count all the cyoas I've made
Sixty, give or take.

Here's the original, kinda ranty document:
http://pastebin.com/BncFthPP
Here's the one that's just a list of everything I've made, organized somewhat chronologically.
http://pastebin.com/3UeyUzxh
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>>47856737
How about you zip them up and put them on one of those file sharing sites?
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>>47856737
I'll be back when I can make cyoa again
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>>47856737
Wow. That's a lot.
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>>47856693
> Jagganoth
Is he basically Traveller bait?
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>>47856734
>Jagganoth will destroy everything since he's better at violence than you.
Oh, a tough guy? Challenge accepted!
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There sure is a lot of CYOA discussion going on.
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>>47856835
And then someone shitposts.
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>>47856835
There sure is a lot of ded thread going on.
TODAY IS THE DAY WE DIE.
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>>47856835
We're literally on page 10. Just let it be.
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Just wondering, is there anyone waiting for the next thread to post OC?
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>>47856850
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>>47856884
Who wants OC? I'm just hoping Angel posts more tits.
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>>47856884
I hope highlander is.
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>>47856903
No.Let me hold onto the hope that Angel is a cute boy.
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>>47856920
Gay.
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>>47856913
I'm going to make a build this time! So I hope he does too. Going to have lots of ether manipulation stuff and become a travelling gypsy wizard in some low magic world for fun.
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>>47856932
Exactly <3
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>>47856920
>Let me hold onto the hope that Angel is a cute boy.
It is a false hope. It appears you missed some recent developments in the Angel saga.
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>>47856884
Here's some original content. Choose one option.

1. You get a cute succubutt girlfriend who uses your semen to power her shapeshifting magic.

2. You get the ability to summon and control one element.

3. You get both of the previous options, but your hair turns white.
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>>47856953
Eww.
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>>47856771
Aw, you won't see the CYOA I was making for you.

Guess I'll give up on making OC.
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>>47857023
White hair, if it's like, anime white hair.
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>>47857023
>but your hair turns white.
Jackpot!
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>>47857023
>3)

Now let's argue over which element is superior and why it is metal.
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>>47857023
Is sex an element? Or semen? Because I've seen some mangos where someone apparently has a portal to the splooge dimension in their genitals given their ability to cum a lake.
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>>47857023
3 is definitely the best. I just need to pick a white-based element & it fits. Likely ice or wind or something.
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>>47857051
Ice is the strongest!
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>>47854966
I'm sorry but the drawbacks are incredibly harsh.
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>>47857054
>portal to the splooge dimension in their genitals
Who stole the plans I had for cummoner/spermomancer CYOA?
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>>47857104
What the fuck, is it the new meme to say all drawbacks are too bad? First people bitching about Gifted drawbakcs, which are not so bad in realty, and now this.
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>>47857073
>wind
>WHITE
>ice
>WHITE

You should clean the cum out of your eyes and look again.
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>>47857023
I want to take 3, but that drawback is just too much.
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>>47857131
>Gifted drawbakcs, which are not so bad in realty
Bullshit. You can defend their tone all you want but they're huge ballbusters.
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>>47857023
Can't I become the succubutt and have a boyfriend whose semen powers my shapeshifting magic?
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>>47857141
Take one of Gifted's instead. His drawbacks are super easy, or so I've heard. Would you prefer being neutered, allergic to all forms of light or a finger-cutting sadist?
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>>47857131
Every single one of these would make the concept of becoming a super soldier not worth it. They're literally life-ruining tier. CYOa's are supposed to be fun. having to pick a horrific fate isn't. I like drawbacks so it isn't just a power fantasy but you should still like the idea of it being real.
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>>47857106
Whoever wrote Alice in Sexland, given that Alice literally does cum a lake in that one. The White Rabbit is all like "Wow, this girl fucked the Doorknob so hard the door blew off and now we have to swim for shore."
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>>47857167
For you.
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>>47857179
Wat?
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>>47857184
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>>47857167
Other than Controlled and MAYBE Aging, what the fuck are you even talking about?
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>>47857210
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>>47857143
Rival could be not so bad if you are not in it for fame and glory. And Hated and Valuable could be alright if you already wanted as a Terrorist or Rogue Nation and so on.
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>>47857229
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>>47857167
Then don't take them.
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>>47856953
Anon, just wish to be a girl. Then liking guys is straight.
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>>47857214
>uncanny
enjoy never having real friends or girlfriends. you look like a mannequin
>hated
enjoy having shitty self esteem and being forever depressed
>rival
enjoy feeling forever inadequate and humiliated
>valuable
enjoy sleeping with one eye open for the rest of your life
>neutered
sexual desire is easily one of the best parts of life
>limited
eh. not too bad.
>suppressant
enjoy never being able to travel and be away from a hospital
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>>47857051
>>47857079
>all these non-plantfags
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>>47857214
It must be nice having such a tiny dick that you wouldn't mind getting neutered.
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>>47857185
It makes somewhat more sense if you read Alice in Sexland.
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>>47857286
You're probably just a vegan who wants free food.
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>>47857184
>>47857210
>>47857229
>>47857253
Thanks senpai, you're super cool

>>47857261
i actually misread it and thought you had to take 2. fair enough.
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>>47856759
If I knew how, I could
>>47857026
I'll see it, don't worry, I jsut can't make cyoas for now.
>>47856772
yeah...
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>>47857279
Ahh, see I didn't also take the "whiny and emotionally weak bitch" drawback so a lot of that either doesn't matter, or doesn't matter all that much. It's all pretty well suited to becoming a killing machine, if that's what you're after. They're big chances but nowhere near your life instantly being over.
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>>47857313
I meant, like, "you won't see me" as in "there is zero reason to post with a name, and I won't post OC, so yeah, you won't see me as anyone but Anon"
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>>47857167
>hurrr making fun of balanced ones because you're complete assblasted that the gifted cyoa is full of unbalanced one
Jesus you're retarded
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>>47857273
this desu
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>>47857324
Don't worry. I'll take on the honoured name and will use its power responsibly.

Does anyone else want to have sweaty sex with a champion of Nurgle?
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>>47857322
>whiny and emotionally weak bitch
oh look. we got a tough guy here.
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>>47857355
I like the way I think.
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>>47857324
>you won't see me
Actual image of Kit.

I like your CYOAs. Please make some more someday.
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>>47857279
>enjoy never having real friends or girlfriends. you look like a mannequin
You still can have frienship forged in battle which is based on true things not on superficial. And just find a blind gf.

>enjoy having shitty self esteem and being forever depressed
You need to have a shitty self esteem to begin with for other people opinions to affect you to the point of depressions. Also who cares what cattle think you are still better than them, let them rage all they want because they can never be as good as you.
>enjoy never being able to travel and be away from a hospital
Who says you can't take few doses with you?
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>>47857273
Is it still straight if I like boys but am a masculine girl with a feminine penis?
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>>47857279
All of those are still better than the gifted drawbacks and more balanced.
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>>47857026
>>47857313
>>47857324
Alright, just let me know you're there whenever I get around to posting it

Today I figured out how to make drop shadows, backgrounds and borders so all I need to do now is do the groundwork and find pics
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>>47857359
No, not at all. I just don't think that problems you have to deal with (drawbacks in almost every CYOA) are inherently crippling by the fact that you don't have a magically perfect life for free.
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>>47857381
Now now, anon. There's nothing wrong with having to have sex so often that you'll rip off your own dick out of frustration after you've turned it into a bloody limp piece of flesh.
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>>47857355
Hell yeah, dude. Sign me up.
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>>47857377
>Is it still straight if I like girls but am a feminine girl with a feminine penis?

I made you better.
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>>47857375
>You need to have a shitty self esteem to begin with for other people opinions to affect you to the point of depressions. Also who cares what cattle think you are still better than them, let them rage all they want because they can never be as good as you.

It's all well and good to be better than them, but I think having thousands of people actively hate your guts would be pretty shitty. i mean i guess you could deal with it, but eh
>>
baka guys
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Last several threads were complete cancer, someone, start a /cyoa/ with CYOA's not E-celeb before I piss myself
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>>47854966
This is a proper way of doing drawbacks, has some really bad ones, and some ones that are drawbacks that are actually survivable.
>>
>>47857395
Fun fact mate, Choose your Own Adventure includes the word 'adventure'. These things are supposed to be tough but at the same time escapist fantasies. Maybe we don't enjoy them for the same thing, but that's no reason to shit on me because I personally find that one a bit steep.
>>
>>47857453
>>47857453
>bara guys

Yes, please.
>>
>>47857455
I'd rather watch a cute girl pee herself HINT HINT.
>>
Best element: Flesh
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>>47857467
>but at the same time escapist fantasies
This isn't true of a lot of 'em in some CYOAs. I think Super Soldier is mostly fine, but other ones (like Gifted desu) are too much.
>>
>>47857455

Just throwing this out there guys, but I'm actually a Muslim Lesbian too.

Please don't make a big deal of it or anything. Forget I said anything.
>>
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Vocaloid CYOA how?
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>>47857455
There's only so much you can expect from a thread when the 3rd post is a tripfag showing off her tits.
>>
>>47857485
>anon used summon chicken
>the rioting stopped
>>
>>47857493
Just give me RIN and LEN to do with as I wish.
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>>47857493
Who is lime hair? I like her outfit.
>>
>>47857491
Go fuck highlander
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>>47857506
Wat yu say?
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>>47857372
thank you, anon, that's very sweet of you. I'd post a gif/webm of headpatting, but I don't have one.
There's at least one guy who likes saying everything I make is shit, so this is nice to hear.
>>47857388
That's great progress, anon! I'll let you know I'm there. Someone might claim to be me though, so be prepared for that.
Now play around with opacity for drop shadow until you find just the right amount!
Aw shit nigga, we about to hit 600 posts. Last time I remember that happening was when Bliss posted Kingdom Crusher
>>
>>47857467
I think we actually agree a lot on the broad strokes. To me they're about storytelling, like you said making an adventure. I like the drawbacks in Super Soldier, even though they are tougher and more narrow than some, because they are the spark of conflict. They are difficult problems that lead to something happening but I don't see any of them as being insurmountable.

Well, Neutered is the more classic style drawback where it just makes you worse and Controlled, as written, is pretty fucking stupid. If Controlled was the only drawback available I'd be agreeing with you right now.
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>>47857573
That lewd thing is NOT headpatting.
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>>47857573
Cute trap ruined by breasts. That's blasphemy.
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>>47857571
I agree. i am over exaggerating that they're all the worst things ever, plus I wouldn't even have made my original post if my reading comprehension wasn't retarded and I didn't see they were optional, but generally to me, cyoa's are good if they let you live out a fantasy. That's why I'm the fag in threads asking people to post waifu cyoa's.
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>>47857491
>LOOK AT ME I AM A MUSLIM AND A LESBIAN
>don't mind me
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>>47857610
She's not a trap, she just has puffy vulva
>>
>>47857506
Basically, yeah.
>Summon anything made of mortal flesh
>Morph the body of anyone who isn't an inorganic entity
>All the lewd potential
>Flesh Prison is a viable tactic
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>>47857619
There's no shame in wanting decent drawbacks. Gifted's cyoas would be a lot better if his drawbacks were 20% less harsh.
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>>47857547
>I'd post a gif/webm of headpatting, but I don't have one.

I got you covered, mate.
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>>47857626
Sorry, but I'd rather have a trap than a roastie.
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>>47857672
Puffy vulva and roasties are two different things.
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>>47857594
>>47857661
That's not the kind of head patting I want to give Kit.
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>>47857485
>>47857643
If you want to go full broken, you should choose Change.
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>>47857701
?
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>>47857485
Best element: Hair

You could suffocate someone with his own butt hair.

Best classic element is still Metal though.
>>
>>47857610
You have shit taste.
>>
>>47857672
Puffy vulva = puffy outer vulva
Roasties = large, flappy inner vulva
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>>47856737
Can you post the following ones. Don't seem to have them.

UBW
I don’t have any idea for a title
tunebuggy
time stop
Kill (the CYOA) v1 (30-12-2015)
cute clothes
Waifu Laifu (i have 2 with this name...one is probably yours)
make an author
Everyday life with Angel and Demon
Knights of Circaem
Gentle worlds
Feely Teaching
Help anon decide what's for dinner
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>>47857715
I can't wait to marry Sylvie
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>>47857715
No, I'm talking about that other head.
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>>47857739
Get in line.
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>>47857733
Uh, I can post
>make an author
>Help anon decide what's for dinner
next thread. The others will have to wait for tomorrow
>>
>>47857760
Kind of unattractive to not wash your slave before your wedding.
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>>47857750
You lost me.
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>>47857539
Gumi, desu.
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>>47857720
Okay, yeah. I agree there.
>>
>>47857794
It's a permanent marker.
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>>47857794
Those are burns, Anon.
Also, new thread when?
Cause we're 3 off death.
>>
>>47857812
I thought it was a side effect of her mutant powers.
>>
>>47857750
Kit, like all authors, is a girl, anon.
>>
>>47857834
Whoa, does that mean I'm not gay for wanting to stick my throbbing spelunker in Angelanon?
>>
>>47857313
You could always do a google drive like Beri and the Person who is archiving 2016.
>>
>>47857313
Likewise there's the option of doing a Highlander thing with an exile blog.
>>
>>47856229
>>47856323
REACH HEAVEN THROUGH VIOLENCE.
>>
>>47857852
I want to, too, anon. It's perfectly natural.
>CYOA will never be real
>You will never be a hot, tall, big-tittied wide-hipped girl that Angel has a massive crush on
>You will never tease her at her job, nearly getting her fired
>You will never force her to do things she pretends she doesn't want to do because she's a sweet, innocent angel

Diamonds. Wait, I mean "wet as a fountain"
>>
>>47857852
You must have missed the start of this thread last night. You're definitely not gay for wanting to do that.
>>
>>47857455
Everytime you post this the next thread will be shit.
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