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... but it IS allowed to post specific CYOAs
Last Thread: >>47765417
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UPDATE - Two new girls. A full 20 pages, now.
(1/20)

(4/20) - >>47770161 Fei La & Mishe
(5/20) - >>47710938 Twile & Harmony
(6/20) - >>47710983 Omne & Pan
(7/20) - >>47711012 Alice & Andrea
(8/20) - >>47711031 Kaila & Jeanne
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Why is Erica the best girl?
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>>47772954
(2/20)

(9/20) - >>47711047 Kataline & Floof
(10/20) - >>47771855 Saki & Oki
(11/20) - >>47711085 Chere & Yin
(12/20) - >>47713393 Lillan & Bloom
(13/20) - >>47713427 #056 "Bunny" & Medi
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>>47772973
Because you believe she is the most attractive or has the best personality. People may disagree with you, but that is mostly because there is no objective best girl.
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>>47772982
Uh.

Three-word descriptions sound interesting, at least.
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>>47772976
Smug loli billionaire and demonic bully witch.
(3/20)

(14/20) - >>47740655 Flo & Beyn
(15/20) - >>47754845 Melody & Falchion
(16/20) - >>47770008 Caldera & Lyze

(20/20) - >>47754884 Miya

Whoops it didn't attach. Let's try that again.
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>>47773010
(17/20) - Avarice & Hex
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>>47772931
How does the first part of the Planar power work? I'm unsure.
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>>47773010
I was right when I said these sounded interesting.
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>>47773029
That was the NEW PAGE, by the way.
(18/20) - Library 1
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>>47773010
I think there may be a typo in hex's description: just spend a few hours instead of house
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>>47773010
Quick question; what would happen if I "accidentally" kill my new monstergirl roommate?
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>>47773029
So if she's usually confident enough not to use Sex Money, does that mean sometimes she does work as a prostitute?
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>>47773050
(19/20) - Library 2

>>47773053
Weird. When I proofread her actual page, I found that same typo, where she said she wasn't going to put on a maid house (uniform). I think I have houses on my mind. I'll post a fix in a second.

>>47773038
Glad you like it!

>>47773064
Well, definitely jailtime. Quite possibly for life. If they had any special connections, it could even be worse.
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>>47773029
Huh Smug Loli actually interesting, and Hex is viable choice due to how varied her power are.
Infact Hex's up there with Fei La and Jeanne.

I like this Beri~
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>>47773114
Huh, Thought the punishment for murdering monstergirls would be higher, given I'm being put in charge of them by an organization that deals with supernatural beings.
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>>47773029
>Hex is literally an NTR option.
Why do people keep forcing this shit in?
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>>47773029
What would being Hex's 'pet' entail?
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>>47772931
>Soul
because Cosmic has a timer, and Mystic is being a nerd
>Ghost
Psionic's weirdmess factor is nice and all, but you can't compete with Ice magic
>Mobility evolved
gotta fuck up those nerds trying to flee
>Restoration
Since I didn't pick Evolved Form

Gotta fuck those Mystic nerds up.
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>>47773182
Looks like she'll fuck you and turn you into soup and a maid like she does other people she kidnaps.
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>this is OC btw
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>>47773029
These new ones keep running into the problem where you make EVIL characters, in an organization that's trying to integrate humans and monsters. Avarice is generically evil rich person stereotype, which some can tolerate, but Hex literally kidnaps, tortures, and rapes people. Why would the organization tolerate that?
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>>47773204
The full CYOA is
>9,600 words
and the intro is
>520 words
It's totally fine if you're turned off by that and you're not interested, or you're only reading the descriptions for the companions you want to bang.
The intro is basically "you're a character, not you transported to a magical world, and you'll basically become the #1 greatest guy of all time" in case you don't feel like reading it.
Again, that's totally fine.

>Page 1: 5276 words
>Page 2: 4333 words
>Average 150 words per companion
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>>47773204
Oh, sweet, you redid this one!
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>>47773204
My love for you repeats twice.
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>>47773111
No, that means that sometimes she gets tired of being called a loli & otherwise bullied by Concupiscence.

>>47773119
Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoy it!

>>47773171
It really depends on their individual connections. There's a lot of people that wish Chere was dead. Sometimes, she's even one of them. There wouldn't be much consequence beyond normal murder charges, there.

>>47773114
(3/20) - I fixed that one typo. No *need* to save this, though, since it'll just update again when I add more.

>>47773179
Is she? She just wants you to help her torment people. Like a husband-and-wife supervillain kinda deal. She doesn't have sex with the kidnapped people. She'd rather call them pathetic after having orgasms from command alone.

>>47773182
She'd do the same sorts of things she does to other people, except more gentle about it, only doing the ones you're "okay" with, unless you make her mad. That makes the cards still useful if you take her bonus, because she won't be extra mean, even if you upset her.

>>47773206
Yeah, I'm turning away from the "evil" trend, now. The next pair won't be as grim.
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>>47772973

No submissive option at all?
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>>47773204
My Love for You at special is supposed to be 2 option? ~
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>>47773241
>Is she?
He kidnaps people to 'play' with and uses her arousal powers to get them off.
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>>47773241
>It isn't NTR to kidnap some married woman and force her to cum from you.
>It isn't NTR to you to kidnap random women and get them off.
No matter the method, doing these things is cheating.
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>>47773204
>>47773216
I'm going to read it now and build for it but I already wanted to tell you that this looks amazing!
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>>47773241
Turning away from the 'evil' trend doesn't make it less of a problem that it was a thing at all. It doesn't make sense for your organization to tolerate them.
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>>47773268
What if they're singles and she doesn't lay a finger on them when casting Arouse?
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>>47773029

AVARICE:
Can I take her up on her offer to find Concupiscence? /s

Orb of Life
Welfare - Could use more money for powers like this.

Money makes the world go round and round,,,

...Those seven sins in red are making me nervous.

Prime The Pump - Fuck up some commas, yeah! $40000 to $100000...

Sex Money - It feels good to do what I want! It feels good to see the disgust in their eyes!

Penny - I mean, the other two will bring horror and ruin to me...

Bonus - This isn't really an option you can choose yes or no to immediately, is it?

Ranks: #7, between Miya and Fei La. You might think I love her for her money but I know what I really love her for: it's the fetish bait. And also the money.

...Although I don't mind too much sin in real life, it seems a bit darker here, though (probably on purpose), and that's why she's not higher (which might be a good thing, all things considered. Especially because I'm an anti-capitalist).


HEX:
She submits as she dominates, she gets out of her head as she talks to the ceiling.

Dream Home
Library of the Supernatural - I read the description for Mini Soup, and I kind of draw the line at making people think they're going to die. While I'm almost never going to use it, I'm going to make sure she stays out of real trouble.

Cleanse - Stay clean!

Ideal Form - This should be interesting. For both me and people's therapists.

Portal Hole - Useful!

Bonus - I usually like this shit, but Magic Cards are useful when I'm too tired for this shit.

Ranks: #3, between Melody and Harmony. (What, no music-related name? Breaks the juxtaposition there). This is pure fetish bait and I am completely okay with this. Just... don't go overboard, or I might faint.
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>>47773302
Then it's NTR to you, because she's doing magic sex things to people. It's like trying to say it's not cheating if she jerked some guy off with psychic powers. It's still her and her methods doing it.
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>>47773285
Maybe that's why they're rooming them with you, so you can correct their behaviour with your justice boner.
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>>47773319
How? No indication that you're expected to or method to do so is provided or suggested.
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>>47773204
>>47773234
Thick headed also has Camoflauge's description.
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>>47773029
If this is what you turn out, I regret being nice to you last thread.
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Whoah, what the fuck happened? I went to bed like seven hours ago and everything suddenly turned into a huge discussion about the drawbacks Hero Academy?
Jeez, I didn't realize CYOAs were such serious business.

>>47773204
Doing this, but damn that's a lot of words. This is literally longer 4 times as long as my exam assignments for university's.
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>>47773316
Is jacking off to chinese porn pictures NTR then? Because you're pleasuring yourself with your waifu, not your 3d gurl/guai/apache attack helicopter. Not that you have any, so a hypothetical question.
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>>47773336
You shoould help them integrate with society anon~ Isn't it's normal for to also correct their behaviour just like with lyze?
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>>47773361
Everything is serious business when you're autistic enough.
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>>47773368
>Anon is comparing masturbating yourself, to using your magic or psychic powers to get someone else off.
Are you stupid? Porn isn't real.
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>>47773242
>CYOA about gentle femdom by a physically superior woman
>why isn't anyone into being anon's fucktoy
gee I wonder why
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>>47773256
>>47773268
She does things ironically. Sexual punishments apply to people that come on to her, ie people that aren't in a relationship / faithful.

>>47773285
Well, the library bonuses for Fei La don't apply to witches. Even if they have vaults full of Orbs of Life, they're a bit lacking in the justice department. But also, >>47773319 . It's the best way to deal with the problem that fits into their mission statement.

>>47773348
You don't like them, then... Well, I'm almost halfway done with the next page. Maybe it'll be more to your liking.
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>>47773348
>not liking smug demon lolis
>not liking sociopathic dominatrix witches
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>>47773368
For most anon it's probably true as Emotionbal betrayal or something stupid like that.~
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What type of cyoa would you like to come true, anons? A waifu cyoa or a cyoa where you get power(s)?
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>>47773384
Neither is magic or psychic power, doesn't stop others from arguing about it.
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>>47773391
>She does things ironically.
>She cheats on you ironically
Wow that totally makes it better. Not.

>Sexual punishments apply to people that come on to her...
No indication of that, doesn't mean she's not cheating on you when she does it.
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>>47773396
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>>47773396
Seven Sins. Superpowers that give me retarded powers + no one knows I have powers even when I use them right in front of them + it's on Earth + it's me, not a character = yes.
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>>47773206
>>47773285
Well, to be fair, it's a less stupid idea than those two "Criminal Girls" CYOAs a while back.

If I could suspend my disbelief for that, it's a lot easier to suspend my disbelief for this.

>>47773405
I don't think you got what he meant...
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>>47773391
>It's the best way to deal with the problem that fits into their mission statement.
But that's NOT a mission statement, don't you get it? You're giving us evil people and not telling us we're expected to reform them, not giving us the ability to, and are ACTIVELY ENCOURAGING us to do evil with them, sabotaging the group's goals.
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>>47773429
You're right, I don't. Because nothing he said really counteracted what I was. He just said she's being 'ironic'. Doesn't mean she's not getting people off.
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>>47773432
Well, I'm not Beri, but I could make an argument for the Library of the Supernatural (especially the two entries for the new, evil waifus) showing that the organization really does FIGHT FOR JUSTICE!
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>>47773432
>ACTIVELY ENCOURAGING us to do evil with them

Are they? Or is the girls themselves, whose offers you can turn down?
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>>47773394
>He likes cheating
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>>47773447
Of course it's ironic Anon, afterall she cursed the one that flirt with her~

>>47773432
Salty anon is salty~
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>>47773426
This one?
I take you prefer power.
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>>47773450
Maybe Avarice's, but Hex's only protects you, it doesn't help you stop her.

>>47773465
That part of the post is referring to Beri.
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>>47773447
He means she's doing it as an ironic punishment instead of in a sexual/romantic way, like in, for example, Dante's Inferno.
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>>47773114

Avarice seems dangerous, albeit, the lesser danger of the two

Is it possible for one to manage not to end up in crippling soul debt just by being careful, or would it require turbo-vigilance?
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>>47773029
Couldn't finish reading Hex. Fucking disgusting.
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>>47773466
It's not cheating if both knows anon~
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>>47773484
That doesn't mean she's not cheating by getting people off. Especially when they come to her and she indulges them. It's not saying being a prostitute isn't cheating because she's just doing it for work, not romantically.
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>>47773466
Well, tax evasion is a horrible crime.
...Not what you meant?

>>47773481
Perhaps if you use it cleverly enough.

>>47773487
I disagree. Hex isn't actively malicious.

...Since this is just a CYOA, though, I can ignore both.
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>>47773504
>Perhaps if you use it cleverly enough.
Being an annoyance doesn't change her personality, anon.
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>>47773497
A prostitute would get actual sexual pleasure from work; Hex is just doing it for (what I presume is) the smug feeling of poetic justice and nothing sexual.
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>>47773497
Is it cheating if you play with your neighbors dog in front of neighbor? No it's not.
>>47773519
Well she also do it justforthelul...
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>>47773477
>you prefer power.
I prefer power when no one knows I have it.
Pride 2/3 + Sloth 2/3 + Lust 1 is the greatest ever. Everyone assumes I have the best skills, I can live with people and they'll do whatever I say without question.
Power + no one questions my power, that's the best, anon.
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>>47773519
No, they really don't. It's just a job. If you're talking about the raw physical reaction, then that's not necessary either, footjobs, handjobs etc are things.

>>47773527
Playing isn't cheating. Sex is.
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>>47773533
She's not even do any sex with her toys anon, she only cast arouse.....
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>>47773533
Okay, maybe they don't actually get much pleasure from the work, but theoretically speaking. You know what I mean.
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>>47773531
So you want power and anonymity. That's reasonable.
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>>47773539
Which is getting them off. She's using magic to satisfy them sexually.

>>47773543
I do, but that's why I mentioned handjobs and the like. A sex act doesn't need to be pleasurable to both parties.
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>>47773555
Satisfy? Is it really satisfying instead of forcing them anon?

Besideds if you really THAT desperate to say she's cheating, you always, you know, TALK to her?
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>>47773391
Beri! Don't get discouraged because of these one or two negative responses!

Most of us still love this CYOA--in fact, this is statistically one of my favorite pages if I calculate the average ratings for both girls on them.
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>>47773230
ay. It was going to be much bigger, with a Marketplace and library and I already planned 5 "chapters" you could read, like The Beginning of the World, the First War, how Hope came to be, but I couldn't add a CYOA element to it.
I'm sorry.

>>47773247
No. "My love for you is ticking clock" is a reference. You don't have to pick both, it's just, they're kinda opposite and amazing to have both.
>>47773270
thanks.

Apparently I fucked up with some discussion. Please, if you see more fuckups, let me know.
>>47773361
Yeah... It would've been more if I wrote those chapters out.
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Guys, we haven't even had 100 posts yet and your already starting a shit storm? If your going to have one, at least wait until halfway through the thread.
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>>47773570
Force? If you want to talk about force, are you implying that if she raped someone (which this basically is), then it's not cheating because she used force?

Cheating is an inexcusable act in a relationship. Talking about it or not.
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>>47773555
> Satisfy
> Implying suddenly having a stiffy and no way to use it short of finding a bush is to wank off in is satisfying.

But I digress, this is another stupid conversation.
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>79 replies
>16 IPs

I don't even wanna see how y'all are gonna react to my OC if I ever finish it.
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>>47773575
>One or two
Ignorant. You don't have to suck his cock when he does something stupid.
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>>47773396
>>47773418
>36k pixels wide
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>>47773599
Maybe that's my fetish, anon.
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Does anyone have a good image for a:

>Blink style short range teleportation.
>Portal creation.
>Running fast.
>Person with wings.
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>>47773551
yes, I suppose. I don't want people to know I have powers. I don't want people to expect me to be a hero, or to abuse my powers, to avoid me or know I did shit to them.
I guess I want both powers and to be comfy?
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>>47773204
>one weapon, one armour, one object
>no "object" section

Does it mean I get one weapon, one armour and another one of either?
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>>47773590
Aroused makes them orgasm too.
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>>47773596
Don't lose your way anon.
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>>47772954
>>47773029
Good job, Beri.

>Orb of Life
>Surveillance
>Welfare

>Hex
>Yes to her offer
>Cleaning House
>Ideal Form
>Arouse
>Portal Hole

I would totally use Ideal Form on myself, because I want to be a little futa. I would use Arouse to bully the maids, and Portal hole for cheap travel to places I have been to (exactly how many of these holes do I have?).
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>>47772954
I'm equally in love with and terrified of this CYOA. Soon enough it will eclipse the sheer insanity of Alice and ascend to the realm of legend.
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>>47773586
Cheating imply she felt romantically to her toys anon, now is she looks like attracted to her toys romantically? nope.

Saying cast arouse is a sex act is dumb anon.

Also she told you about it when you met her, so it's not even "cheating" yet.

So you could talk her out of it if you so inclined.

Or you could just whine and whine anon~
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>>47773581
When Beri opens with a cuck CYOA, it can't be helped.
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>>47773575
Both girls are shit.
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>>47773204
Also, "My love for you" skill is there twice
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>>47773620
I suppose this IS a way to be more strong...
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>>47773629
>Cheating imply she felt romantically to her toys anon
No it doesn't. Cheating is just sleeping around on your partner. Romance doesn't enter into the definition.
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>>47773635
But they're good shit.

[insert that overused copypasta here]
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>>47773010
Hex's victims spend 'a few house as toys'.
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>>47773632
How? Why are people complaining so much over this... cucking thing?
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>>47773653
That whole character was extremely poorly thought out, it's no surprise it's full of typos. He didn't try at all.
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>>47773650
Cheating is sleeping around on your partner when they don't know, anon.

You know full well what she's doing, and you could just ask that she not use Arouse on anyone else.
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>>47773670
No, it's them doing it and you not liking it. Knowledge isn't part of the equation. If you like it, then it's cucking.
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>>47773664
>Why are people complaining about a waifu in a waifu CYOA cheating on them?
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>>47773664
Extremely tiny cocks lead to low self esteem.
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>>47773614
Personally, I do not care whether people notice my power or not; they are not the ones who can lift tanks or move buildings with their minds. Let them think of me as they will, I have bigger fish to fry.
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>>47773679
From the dictionary:

Noun
cuckold (plural "cuckolds")

1. A man married to an unfaithful wife, especially when he is unaware or unaccepting of the fact.
2. A West Indian plectognath fish, Rhinesomus.
3. The cowfish, Acanthostracion quadricornis and allied species.

I doubt you're calling us fishes, so...
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>>47773679
You know her habits before choosing her, you could TALK to her when you met her the first time before she does it again anon.

>>47773695
Is it cheating when you already know about it before you have any bond with her, and could talk her out of it?

>>47773707
Well anon is unaccepting for the sake of complaining so..
is this waht people feel when met SJW?~
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>>47773707
You think the dictionary is the best place for fetish definitions? It's used to refer to men with a fetish for wives who sleep around.

Anyway, that's not the goal of this conversation, it's about Hex.
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>>47773615
fuck me right up senpai
No.
I had some ideas for obejcts, but they were boring, like "gain resistance to X".
So I didn't includ them.
>>47773636
yeah, that's been mentioned twice. I added it to the list!
>>47773699
and I like powers where people don't notice them. Or rather, a power that makes it so people don't seem to grasp I have superpowers / they don't give a hoot.
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>>47773695
>>47773707
So that's what cucking is. Huh. You learn something new everyday.
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>>47773729
>Anon continues to assume talking to someone is magic and changes their personality.
I bet if I ask that cop not to shoot me he won't!
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>>47773204
>Dragonlord
Mostly for the anti-magic shields and the relationship bonus with dragons.

>Dearg
Spears look good on a dragonlord. Now I just need to find a way to increase its pierce rating.

>Soar
I'm starting to feel like a stereotype here.

>Anticipation
Slitted throats are a no-no.
>Strength
This should help make Dearg deadlier.
>Acrobatics
Great synergy with my build.
>Stamina
Some battles can last for days... probably.

>*Indomitable
Nothing worse than someone messing with your mind.
>*Magnetism
Being a leader is important.
>*Beast Master
Fluff option due to Dragonlord.

>Blink
>Grappling Hook
>Purify
>Shield
>Analyze Item
>*Heal Minor Wounds
>*Earth Wall
Mostly utility spells, since I'm not a caster.

>Heal Major
>Cure
>*Elementalize
>*Nullify
>*Wave
Once again mostly utility stuff.

>Green
>Maroon
>Aron
Yes, this is a male harem and I'm loving every second of it. Green was especially expensive but he's extremely protective so I hope he pulls his weight.
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>>47773742
Well, right now, /pol/ has adopted it as its hot new word for "person who says something I don't like."

But that was the original definition.
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>>47773743
...anon have you ever in relationship before?

Also she's only you roommate if you prefer and don't have to waifu her if you hate her so much~
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>>47773734
>and I like powers where people don't notice them.
Your entitled to your own preferences. I was just mentioning mine and hoping to push this shitstorm out of the way.
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>>47773730
Cuckoldry is not the name of a fetish.
A cuckoldry fetish is a fetish for cuckoldry and has no word of its own.
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>>47773034
It sounds like you can generate extremely dense matter and then fire it like bullets
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>>47773707
maybe he is calling us fish...
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>>47773767
Yes, which is why I know trying to tell a girl to do something doesn't mean she's going to fucking do it like a robot.
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>>47773010
>>47773029
Mm, I don't hate them, but submission isn't really my cup of tea.

But it appears that I missed a few updates, and I do like Falchion, so good job there.
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>>47773784
No but you could discuss to her about it anon~ Reall go outside sometimes and make some friend.

Or just try to connect with your parents anon.
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>>47773029
Just want to say that just because some people are mad doesn't mean this sucks. I like these girls, they're fascinating and entertaining. Still not beating out Yin, but they'd be fun(ny) roommates.
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>>47773784
anon, this person is baiting you
the constant use of ~ should have tipped you off
you are wasting you time
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>>47773797
No, they suck because he put an NTR character in a waifu CYOA.
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>>47773777
It sounds like it's more generally about density and momentum, which would make that an application of it.
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>>47773758
It still fits. It's an insult for failed men, men who can't satisfy their women or let them control them.
If you're a male feminist or whiny guy you get called a cuck.
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>>47773801
I know he's baiting, but I'm pissed and Beri went to go hide in a hole so I was using him to vent. But his latest post pretty much isn't even addressing the argument anymore, so there's no point.
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>>47773029
What he said >>47773797, except for the Yin part. Hex is the new best girl.
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>>47773795
Not him but if she has already did it in the past she's used goods anyway.
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Hey, my internet came back.

>>47773447
You're being offer a "roommate," not a "lover." Yes, there's clear romance connotations, but as it is, she's telling you what she does as a single woman. She's not cheating on anyone. Never has. You could ask her to stop those particular actions or to make you her only & private toy for when she wants to do *those* types of games.

>>47773487
It wouldn't be too hard, but she might try to trick you sometimes into trying outrageously priced food or something. Beware free samples; they exist to make you want more. Or maybe, she'll offer free hot peppers when "whoopse, the plumbing is out. I do have this wonderful, ice-cold glass of milk, if you'd like... for a price." Any tricks done, will be fairly obvious, though. Tricking you into debt is more like a game to her, so she has a lot of tells, unlike during business meetings when she'd be serious.

>>47773312
No, you can't go find the Sin of lewd. That would kill her pride as a woman. You *can* immediately choose yes to Avarice's offer. It's called raiding the fridge.
Oh, you like Hex a lot, I see.
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>>47773029
Absolute Dominate has 'your worlds are absolute' in it. Figure you probably meant words.
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>>47773825
>Best girl
Just admit you like cheaters.
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>>47773819
And that's where the descent began. Now every thirteen year old fuckboi is using it and like faggot, autist, and all words like it. Cuck means nothing now.
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>>47773801
Which one is the baiting i wonder~ The one who always think everything is cuck/NTR?

>>47773803
Oh you anon.~

>>47773821
Please then what's your point? Hex is hexing someone to arouse them? Talk about it, discuss about it with her anon.

Besides if a choice really disturbs you you could not choose her.

>>47773833
Has she though? Still i wonder peoples obsesseion with women's virginity and yet calling a man out because he hasn't fuck in college
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>>47772954
Beri we are getting worried about, you. Your obsession of monster waifu's is out of control you need to eat something man, before this gets out of hand.
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>>47773840
>You could ask her to stop
Have you ever been near a woman? Since when has telling them to do anything actually fucking resulted in them doing what you say?
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>>47773757
>Catgirl (2)
>A cute (3)
>Feminine (4)
>Lustful (6)
>Lifetime (12)
>Sweet (13)
>Yan (14)
>General Magic + Specialized (18)
>Kellie (20)

I'm gonna be the best waifu.
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>>47773860
Yeah, even I think twenty image pages is too much.
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>>47773861
...pfftwahahaaha. i will just laugh to you. Yes anon they did, infact most of my male friends is worse in that regards.
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>>47773860
On the contrary, I want to see where this crazy train goes.

...Although, Beri, you really should eat something.
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>>47773879
>>47773860
>Please stop making content I don't like
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>>47773840
>Beri ignoring the entire argument about how he's encouraging you to do evil and not giving you the tools to stop it, thus sabotaging the organization's goals.
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>>47773840
>free hot peppers
Ha! Joke's on her! I hate spicy food!
...Although for the past eighteen years, the joke has been on my tastebuds.
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>>47773029
'She one of the more' in Hex should be 'She's'.

C'mon Beri. Read it through at least once.
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>>47773887
But before that, he should finish the next page.
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>>47773913
See >>47773665
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>>47773918
Or eat something while finishing the next page!

...Is that how we got Pan?
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>>47773889
I'm not saying I don't like it, in fact this Berri fellow can keep going all day long.

Though when an image cyoa gets over twenty pages, one can only wonder where it will go from here. I worry the cyoa will get bogged down with too much content.

Though If Berri wants to continue, he damn well can. Sorry if I sounded demanding.
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>>47773730
>You think the dictionary is the best place for fetish definitions?
Dictionaries are usually the place to look for the definition of words so I don't see why it would be different for fetishes.
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Can someone post slut life?
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>>47773917
>Beri
>Italics
>BoxWIne

I want to protect their smiles.
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>>47773954
Because they're more colloquialisms than they are anything else. Do you think a dictionary will tell you what a dirty sanchez is, for example?
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>>47773746
>he's extremely protective so I hope he pulls his weight.
That he do. Green is not someone who would let his friends get hurt.
I take it anon likes the male companions? I guess that's good
I don't enjoy writing them.

So you got the embodiment of Void, a Battlemage and the most loyal of guys ever. You might have benefited from more magic, but that's pretty good, anon.
>>47773864
Good, anon. If you're gonna be the waifu, you gonna be the best waifu or bust.
Gotta be the best.

>tfw anons are arguing about cuckholding
I knew this would happen. Somehow Beri will steal the limelight.
I'm gonna go cry in the conrern now

>>47773917
please stop. There's now four of my cyoas in one thread.
This is too much for even me.
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Requesting most recent Stardust, i'm bored of this waifus
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>>47773917
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>>47773936
More content is not bad per se but, the quality and caopability to be reposted could go down at this rate so yeah..

Though it's all in Beri, do whatever you want Beri~

Also stupid captcha is stupid
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>>47773204
>Vindicator
>Dearg
>Revier
>Strength, Weapon Mastery, Quick Study, Acrobatics
>Indomitable, My Love For You, Is Ticking Clock, Terror
>Heal Minor Wounds, Shield, Blink, Grappling Hook, Hyper Jump
>Heal Major, Cure, Elementalize, Nullify, Spirit Claw
>Emilia, Alistaire, Gila, Ascet, Aron
Start out pure berserker mode that can go real fast and ignore any kind of armor or defensive spell!
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>>47774015
Quality is definitely dropping imho
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>>47773840
>Orb of Life
>Library
>Luxury
>Heart's Desire
>Penny
>Decline her offer, as while lolidom can be hot it sounds quite dangerous with an actual demon

Hopefully that's enough to neuter most of the danger. It's a bit of a shame that one can only get one waifu/roommate, as I'm curious what would happen with both Kaila and Avarice.
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>>47773492
That's a shame to hear.

>>47773575
Thanks!

>>47773621
>Good job, Beri.
Thanks!
You only get 2 holes. On one hand, I want to point out that Ideal Form has to be "human." On the other hand, that's *probably* in the range of acceptable.

>>47773627
>the realm of legend.
That sounds wonderful.
Glad you like it.

>>47773787
I'm happy you like one of them.

>>47773797
Thanks, glad you enjoy them.

>>47773843
Yeah, that should be "words" I'll see about uploading a fix in a bit.

>>47773860
I eat, sometimes. Typically only after I finish a page, though.

>>47773861
rude.

>>47773904
I don't know what you *want* exactly... so I don't know what replying would accomplish. All you made clear was dissatisfaction, even when I said I was moving away from that direction. Do you want me to remove existing girls? Because that's flat-out not at option.

>>47773910
That's not the only trick in her book.

>>47773913
I fixed that one.

>>47773933
Actually, I just had a dream once where I was Pan & there were Spirits of all sorts of things setting up shop in a sort of Spirit-town. Bread was just my element, so I went with it.

>>47774015
It's already impossible to re-post. That's not going to change much if there's more.

>>47774033
>I'm curious what would happen with both Kaila and Avarice.
You'd be living with two lolis.
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>>47774067
>I don't know what you *want* exactly...
Less of this evil crap, or at least REAL solid methods to stop their evil provided on their page or in the library.
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>>47774067
>You'd be living with two lolis.

Well yes, but one is a demon and the other one claims to fight demons so...
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>>47774085
I already told you I was moving away from it... I don't know what else I could do there.
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>>47774067
>rude.
It's a statement of fact. You saying 'you could talk' does NOT change the problem of her cheating on you, because saying something is not a guarantee she would care or be willing to stop.
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>>47773029
I think these are the first two girls who I actively dislike. Just not my thing.

>Only stupid people want "mature" human cows
YOU'RE STUPID

Is there a limit to how many people I can use ideal form on? Does it ever wear off?

Can I shrink myself with the mini soup?

Error on Avarice's last part. "You're my roommate so I've give you a special deal"
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>>47774095
Hex needs a new library entry, if nothing else, or something to help you stop her from being a horrible rapist/kidnapper/ torturer.
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>>47774095

I think he wants stronger library options so he can give them a paladin spanking whenever they're being evil.
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>>47774067
Nahh it's not THAT impossible, afterall Italiics exist.

>>47774096
What's cheating anon? You just meet her and just her roommate. It's notlike she's your girlfirend.~

Besides WHY would you care? Are you really jealous of her so much? Are your really attracted to hex despite so much hate you spew

Are you...tsundere? not really dere, but still..
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>>47774123
Library for Avarice is soo underpowered..

Many of them is not that good too. Like, most of the latest girl's library.
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>>47773746
I find it mildly humourous how you and I ended up making almost the exact same build. (>>47774024)
I find it far more humourous that your "Dragoon" doesn't have the Jump spell.
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>>47773204
>>47773216
Class
>Vindicator
Weapon
>Gel
Armor
>Shade
General Skills (4)
>Acrobat
>Stamina
>Strength
>Weapon Mastery
Special Skills (3)
>Magnetism
>Terror
>Indomitable
Basic Spells (3)
>Blink
>Hyper Jump
>Blind
Advanced Spells (6: 2 base, 4 from mentor)
>Elementalize
>Tremor
>Umbral
>Nullify
>Lava Circle
>Air Burst
Companions
>Azek
>Asarel
>Riley
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>>47774123
I think he could just not take them then. You're a pretty shitty roommate if you beat people up whenever you disagree with them, and you're even worse if you then expect her to date you.
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>>47773029
Hex manages to fail for me despite hitting my biggest fetishes. I definitely like ideal form+arouse (used on me), but she's the abusive kind of dom, so it's not good to start with and unworkable for forever.

It's not even about what she does with/too other people. If I ended up with her as a roommate I would be looking for the first chance to run.

Averice, despite being pretty much evil and undesirable, isn't nearly as actively bad for me. I'd have to stay on my toes but the general benefits make it at least worth tolerating.
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>>47774093
Even if you fight demons, breaking the law is wrong, so once Kaila would probably get tricked into debt and become a demon's property. She'd still get to fight evil, but she'd be turned into Avarice's corporate sell-out at the same time.

>>47774110
Ideal Form has no limit. It doesn't wear off, but you can revert it.
Yes, you could shrink yourself.
Thanks for pointing out the error, I'll fix it.

>>47774113
>>47774123
The idea was that you could step in to defend her victims with the reflect. Sometimes, it would stop her. Other times, she'd just redirect towards you. I suppose that's still a pretty steep price to pay, though. I might make it something more direct.

>>47774140
Avarice's Library is actually really effective. She'll no longer be able to do lopsided, sneaky business deals. I mean, she won't become the embodiment of charity, but that's 90% of what evil she does exhibit gone.

>>47774201
That's disappointing.
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>>47774195
The goal of the organization is to help monster/human integration. If they're taking in these pure evil girls, then they need to help you actually change them for the better. Right now you're given NO method to do so for Hex.
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>>47774195
Eh, i agree with him if we have more...assets in our sleeve when we have roommates like that.While not violently or forcefully reform them , mor assurance from the organization would be nice.
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>>47774223
>Ignoring the criticism given to him about his 'method' to stop Hex from cheating not actually working.
Don't ignore valid complaints.
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>>47772931
This CYOA has a very nice visual design. Well done.
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>>47774157
no story? What spells are you taught by your mentor?
Her name is Ascet, btw
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>>47774223
>She'd still get to fight evil, but she'd be turned into Avarice's corporate sell-out at the same time.

That sounds hilarious
Now it's even more of a shame
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>>47774223
Well you could write somethings that makes Hex and Avarice more favourable, even if i like them, Hex's also abduct innocent bystander, Avarice's your standard corporate evil.

Just make them more nice..
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>>47773029
Oh, it must feel just terrible to get this, the most negative reaction to anything you've ever made, right after that little pep talk. It was deserved so nothing can be done, but still.
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>>47774245
As has been said several times, Hex isn't dating anybody. If you want to start a relationship, you can approach her habits, and Berri said she'd change things around if you got together.
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>>47774275
No he didn't. He said you could 'talk'. A talk doesn't mean any actualization.
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>>47774282
If you want to have a problem, fine. But don't bitch about it and throw shit at Beri for your personal deficits.
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>>47773777
>>47773818
Waiting for Bliss.
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>>47774275
>>47774291
These post is not mine, in case someone think so~

>>47774282
Oh you, but i agree though, Hex could do overhaul.
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>>47774245
I wasn't ignoring anything. I said I might make it into something more direct.
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>>47774259
Wasn't this close to the original idea of Iron Man?

Or perhaps it's closer to Tiger & Bunny...
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>>47774291
>Pointing out that voicing a desire doesn't result in achieving that desire is a personal deficit.
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>>47774303
Automatically assuming the worse of everything and refusing to ever try even in a wish-fulfillment fantasy makes you a useless, whiny bitch, and that is a personal deficit.
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>>47774223
Beri's Avarice item is...underwhelming.
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>>47774299
Yes you were, because you were talking about her Library with that quote, NOT her cheating.
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>Barely two hours into thread
>Two hundred Replies

Jaysus.
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>>47774344
See >>47773632
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>>47774344
Blame that turbo autist obsessed with NTR.
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>>47774344
Eh, it's basically all bitching about tuplas.
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>>47774350
Nothing wrong with being against something that disgusting.
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>>47773695
You can not take that one option. You know that, right? I mean, not every single option has to be for you.
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>>47774375
Cuck shit shouldn't be forced into waifu CYOAs.
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>>47774367
There's something wrong with it when you force it everywhere, blaming people you aren't in a relationship with for being whores and claiming that communication is a useless endeavor that has never benefited anyone.
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>>47774310
Are you one of those people that assumes you automatically succeed at everything, ignoring reality, in every CYOA?
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>>47774146
My "Dragoon" build has the superior flying armour which gives me the best form of jump for exactly 0 mana, senpai.
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>>47774384
I think they are trying to be the next cyoag meme after SDA and Angel..what should we name them?
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>>47774413
Those are CYOA makers, not memes.
>>
Whatever happened to making fan content to cyoas as fun add-ons like all the variants to the Island cyoa? Are there new/open cyoas where we can make extra content for?
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>>47774384
>blaming people you aren't in a relationship for being filthy whores

"But Anon, I'm just trying to tell you how disgusting those filthy sluts are!"

New headcanon: NTR Anon is actually a yandere.
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>>47774367
>nothing wrong with spending hours whining about your imaginary girlfriend

>>47774381
It absolutely should. It will help clear out the autists who can't ignore things they don't like.
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>>47774393
Realistically sleeping, it's impossible for anybody to cheat on you because nobody would ever sleep with you in the first place.
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>>47774428
>Anon reveals his plan to get more of his fetish.
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>>47774223
>That's disappointing.
They can't all be winners. Just take it as proof I'm looking for more than just fetish fuel
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>Beri makes longass CYOAs tailored to your incredibly niche fetish
>PRAISE THE B
>Beri includes one (1) fetish they like but you don't
>OMG BURN THE WITCH

With that said I agree Hex is definitely Chaotic Evil and casts the organization's intentions in a strange light
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>>47774434
Too late for that, 14 year old anon.
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>>47773986
I'd like to play this.

But its too much "Stat spreadsheet manager 2019".
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>>47774460
>BURN THE WITCH
WE KNOOOOOOOW WHERE YOU LIIIIIIIIIIIVE
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>>47774460
Eh really, all Beri hafta do is reworks Hex description and dialogue it'll be fine, but oh well.
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>>47774460
>They like
Pretty sure he doesn't, his posts indicate he doesn't understand why people would consider it cheating to use magic to get someone off.
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Am I the only one who took Hex + Library, then bullied her in the rudest most obnoxious way possible so she cast her cruelest spell... which rebounds?
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>>47774493
Doesn't save all those other people she tortures.
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>>47773216
Drenkot
>Vindicator
Weapon
>Dearg
Armour
>Revier
Skills
>Weapon master (Spears)
>Quick study
>Acrobatics
>Strength
Advanced
>*"My love for you..."
>*"... is ticking clock"
>*Terror
>Indomitable
Spells
>Grappling hook
>Whip
>Hyper jump
>Blink
>*Heal minor wounds
>*Foxfire
Advanced
>Umbral
>Blizzard
>*Thunderstorm
>*Nullify
Companions
>GIla
>Himme
>Ann

I tried to orient my build to allow for a lot of movement to counter the fact the vindicator weakness.

Out of all the companions, I see ann as my best pick. She also serves in bringing the group together with her experience to prevent our faults as novices. I can learn strategy and improve my performance in the battlefield as a result
I also like the eye patch

Listen to the whispers in the bar and amongst the chatter you will find tales of our great adventures across the land.
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>>47774313
Oh, I'm sorry. I overlooked the word "cheating" when I read it. Thanks for pointing that out. Let's see...

Hex has no interest in NTR. She's not currently in a relationship. While not as severe as >>47774367 , she has a normal (negative) view of the idea. As a basic example, if you say, "Hey wanna go out?" and she says, "Sure, babe," then she'll stop doing sexual things to her victims. As far as romantic things go, she'd be more interested in just forcing the meido of the week to clean up after the two of you have your fun together or something like that.

>>47774460
>they like
>>47774490
Vaguely like what this anon is saying, NTR is one of my least favorite things. While not directly "disgusting" like some things out there, a lack of faithfulness is a very, very depressing and heartbreaking thing.
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>>47774409
I know, but why not have both?
Slam dunk people from the stratosphere!
The sky is, quite literally, the limit!
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>>47774446
Actually, yes. Impotent tears of aspie rage is my fetish.
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I want to make a wizard cyoa that is 100% about superior illusion magic. How do I make this work?
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>>47774524
Why not give some indication of that while you're working on this part?
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>>47774555
Spell list.
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>>47774555
Make it a skill tree where you can branch out to improve your illusions in different ways.
>Illusions can now partially effect the world
>Illusions are more detailed
>Illusions can move
>Illusions are larger
>Illusions are faster to cast
Etc.
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>>47774556
You're right, I should. It was wrong of me to believe that people wouldn't fearfully assume she has fetishes they don't desire. I'll do "something" to make it more explicit.
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>>47774592
Ominous.
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>>47773847
Fuckboy on the other hand has made a much more malicious history.
Its origin is a prison rapeslave, public use bitches that get passed around and savagely raped to death.
Its format into public use isn't through some sort of implication about someones character, like a weak man or someone that's had a lot of partners. It was lifted straight from its original meaning to be an ill wish. Fuckboy means 'a guy that deserves to be raped' it's a very tumblr word, they think it's the only word for men bad enough to rival 'bitch' for women.
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>>47774583
>>47774586
So a branching spell list? Okay.

What else? I literally just have the concept ILLUSION MAGIC in my head right now, so I could use a premise or any other idea you guys have.
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>>47774614
Infinite Tsukiyomi
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>>47774614
Make magical school wars.
Abjuration and evocation hate each other
Illusion is at odds with divination
Etc.
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Coming to a computer near you. Tears required.

Also could someone help me with this? >>47773612
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>>47774682
I assume you already checked Danbooru and Gelbooru and stuff, right?

Or are you looking for, like, not-anime-style stuff?
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>>47774614
Well, when I think of illusions, Shadowcraft Mages come to mind, as does Yakumo Kurama. If you aren't familiar, the first is a D&D PrC well known for, obviously shadow magic. They're famous for a small exploit enabling you to cast about any spell in the game super easy by using Silent Image to cast certain spells, especially Miracle, at >100% reality. Kurama is a character from Naruto who had this wacky bloodline that made her illusion super strong, she'd imagine fires andpaint lightning bolts to destroy buildings, and (possibly related to her bloodline) mutated into a demon from her repressed emotions.
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>>47774157
I'm wrong, sorry. Apparently there's both a character called "ascet" and "azek"
Fuck I'm a bad author. I have no idea what my characters are named.
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>>47774690
Already checked the boorus. Couldn't find anything good. Tbh, I'd prefer animoo style but if it's differet, that's fine.
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>>47774294
>>47773777
>>47773034
It's
>generate extremely dense matter and then fire it like bullets
Sorry if it wasn't clear.

>>47773189
Love it.
>can't compete with Ice magic
It's my favorite too. You can turn those mystic nerds to despair!

>>47774254
Appreciate it.
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>>47774682
Will the tears be sufficient or do I need to bring my own lube?
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>>47774721
Another question, is the risk with interstellar mainly from trying to use it with Temporal?
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>>47774614
I was thinking something like the braching paths would upgrade your illusions in various ways.
Here, let me show you.

>Casting Branch Tier 1
Each illusions takes five minutes to cast and requires a small blood offering as a medium. A pentagram must be painted with your blood, then a lit candle must be placed in the middle. After five minutes, the illusion will be cast within eyesight of you.
>Tier 2
The time needed to cast the spell is reduced to 1 minute
>Tier 3
You no longer need to draw a pentagram with your blood. The pentagram can now be drawn with chalk, pencil, or in any other way you wish.
>Tier 4
A lit candle is no longer required. Additionally, it now only takes 30 seconds to cast the illusion.
>Tier 5
The illusion can now be cast instantly. A pentagram is still required, however. This can be easily done by tattooing or branding a pentagram onto your skin, or wearing a glove with a pentagram on it.
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Gonna work on a little gun one, then maybe I'll do something with astrology but not really sure how to make that decent. I feel like someone already did it, too, but don't really remember it.
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>>47774742
Space is a vast, vast emptiness. If you leave this solar system, chances are you will never be able to find your way back to earth.
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>>47774682
>Person with wings
Found this on Gelbooru.
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>>47773612
Speed!
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>>47774756
Alright, I'll make sure to enslave NASA so I can keep in mind its relative position to my destination.
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>>47774733
Don't worry, it won't be that bad. But, the mysteries won't be as easy as QuietCYOA.

The reason they'll be better is that you have a metric fuckton of powers to choose from.

That, and the raw customization factor, among other things I shouldn't mention here, make this far superior to QuietCYOA.

>>47774764
Almost tempted to put this in.

>>47774758
>>47774724
Thank you both very much! But, I don't really feel these images work, one's too animu and the other is too little animu.
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>>47774764
Are those sausages falling out of that person's robe?
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>>47774764
>H-he's fast!
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>>47773612
Is anime style allowed?
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>>47773612
Another speed image.
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>>47774721
Bliss, why haven't you posted a build for Guiding Light yet?
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>>47774793
Too obvious reference to too obvious anime. But damn I wish I could put that in.

>>47774794
Will be using these, thank you!
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>>47774791
I'm pretty sure they're flying off of the sausage link that the person is holding.
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Would people be interested in a Tower of God cyoa?
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>>47773204
>Warlord

>Pouret
>Revier

>Strength
>Acrobatics
>Stamina
>Weapon Mastery
>Quick Study

>My love for you
>Is a ticking clock
>Terror

>Hyper Jump
>Blind
>Blink
>Zap

>Elementalize
>Light Beam
>Thunderstorm
>Air Burst
>Shockwave
>Arc Lightning

>Riley
>Wendy
>Himme

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=loSj5Iy1OOs

I was thinking about making a Dragonlord, but I realize it would make the build a little decadent. So I went for of some kind of lightning based heavily armored martial artist. Because that's a lot simpler.

>>47772931
Does anyone know if there is a proper giant mecha CYOA around? Not PACYOA, I'm talking more Pacific Rim style. Because I'm currently putting one together and am looking for ideas. It might end up just being a Pacific Rim CYOA.
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>>47774822
no, Rachel a shit
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>>47774796
Kind of busy right now Kit, but I'll be sure to do that in about half an hour or so!
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>>47774836
She's the Queen of NTR. Not joking.
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>>47774223
The way you wrote them, imo, is great. I also like the medusa. I get that people want their waifus soft but imo I like the mix. You get edgy, harder, options for people interested in that sort of thing and you have the lighter ones for every-one else. Also don't cave to "NTRNTRNTRNTNR" anon at least, please. Neither he, nor anyone like him, will ever accept rationality or the idea that others might enjoy things he doesn't.
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>>47774776
How's this for wings, then?

Also, darn, almost... quadruple dubs? What do you even call that?
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>>47774805
How is this portal pic then?
Gilgamesh would have been cooler though.
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>>47774822
I don't know how you'd make a cyoa on it. It would probably be shit.
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>>47774851
She's such a horrible fucking person, goddamn.
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>>47773996
>Highlander dies
>goes to Hell
>Hell is finishing Traveller + games
>tfw Ol' Lucy is a fan and wants to see it finished
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>>47772973
Skye is the only remotely acceptable one unless you're a pathetic masochistic wreck.
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>>47774856
Beri didn't intend for her to be NTR, idiot. If anything you trying to defend her from that angle just proves the other guy right.
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>>47774805
This could work as a portal image.

Sorry it's from the obvious place, but you know. Most portals are from, well, Portal.
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>>47774891

I was referring to how he constantly whines about NTR. It doesn't matter if she is or isn't the NTR fetish option, idiot, he'll bitch anyway and so will other people. Christ.
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>>47773204
>>47773216
Azmiov
>Class
Sorcerer
>Weapon
Pouret
>Armour
Soar
>General Skills
Quick Study
Meditation
Mana Steal
>Special Skills
Catalyst*
Indomitable*
Academic*
>Basic Spells
Analyse Item
Detect Evil
Purify
Shield
Heal Minor Wounds*
Blink*
Blind*
Fireball*
>Advanced Spells
Elementalize
Nullify
Cure
Heal Major
Light Beam*
Summon Familiar*
>Companions
Tetsu
Aron
Himme

It is the solemn duty of the warriors and battlemages to protect and smite those who would stand against the order of the realm. As Sorcerer, my talents are better put to action where the sword and shield cannot hope to find great use. The healing of the wounded, the bolstering of allies and the arts of supernatural senses are unknown to many of my comrades in the days to come, yet theirs is a burden of physical combat, one worn proudly and with as much precise skill as the weaving of any arcana.
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>>47774870
While this is lovely, and I wish I had an idea that could use this, I kind of meant utilitarian portal transportation for the transportation of goods from one area to another.

>>47774858
Thank you mate, but I meant casual wings not really cool looking things like these. Kinda like a person creating energy wings or an angel trying to blend in.
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>>47774850
Good.
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>>47773917
Highlander is all I will ever need. He is a beautiful creature, too pure for this world but too insane to leave it behind.
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>>47774805
Here's a Blink pic too in case you still need it. The Blink is supposedly implied.
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>>47774891
I think he's just saying she feels more legitimate if Beri doesn't cave and reword her to suit the needs that faggot that freaks out over anything that could be construed as anything but perfectly loyal waifus not interested in anything but you from day one.
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>>47774851
She is a terrible person but how? all she does is tell people to help her climb the tower and then they do that for whatever reason.
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>>47774916
Isn't that the same thing as screaming not to listen to anyone but him? How hypocritical.
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>>47774925
I'll stop attacking him when he stops deserving it.
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>>47774911
This works perfectly! Fits in super well with what I had planned! Thanks!
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>>47774933
You deserve to be attacked as well, anon, for throwing fits about people not liking what you like and having different opinions from you.
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>>47774901
>energy wings
Hopefully this isn't too animu.
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>>47774950
This might also work if obvious source isn't obvious enough.
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>>47774948
I don't care what he likes. I care that he wrecked half the thread in a shitfit about something that was ultimately irrelevant because he has to have God descend from the heavens to wipe his ass before he'll get out of bed in the morning.
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>>47774969
Now you're here to wreck the other half. I don't think you understand that you're just as bad and just as annoying.
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>>47774969
>he has to have God descend from the heavens to wipe his ass before he'll get out of bed in the morning
This is an absolutely hilarious image.
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>>47774962
>>47774950
Thank you both so much, and now I'm stuck in the position of choosing between two images that both fit very well.
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>>47774856
Thanks. That's what I was going for with the recent ones: diversity. I could write sweet, lovey-dovey girls-next-door all day, but I feel like I'd be letting down people that want something a bit more dark or controlling. 30 cookie-cutter waifus wouldn't be nearly as exciting. For those concerned, the next two aren't going to be dark.

>>47774977
I don't think that anon was posting for half of the thread.
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>>47775005
The problem with 'dark' is that your framing just completely falls apart for them. Human/monster integration.
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>>47775005
>I don't think that anon was posting for half of the thread.
This isn't the first time he's come around. He's both perfectly willing to revive the argument and complain for half the thread or, if he gets here early, engage the other guy and shitpost at each other all thread. He can be just as bad.
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>>47774901
>utilitarian portal transportation for the transportation of goods from one area to another

Mami from Madoka Magicka her power could be interpreted as such but I can't find decent art of it. This pic looks more telekinesis. Sorry.
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>>47775023
>>47775005

Make them outsiders then. Make it so that the 'dark' waifus contacted you independently in some way. You can edit their libraries to reflect this by making it so that the reflect spell is only really for 'evil' witches in general.
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>>47774978
>Hey, Lord, it's me again.
>>ARE YOU FUCKING SHITTING ME?
>No, that'd be my bed.
>>I SWEAR TO ME, I SHOULD SMITE YOU.
>But it'd be really swell if you didn't.
>>YOU KNOW WHAT, FINE. JUST GIVE ME TEN MINUTES
>But then I'll start to chafe!
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>>47775040
That's not necessary, he's already going to fiddle with the libraries to help you deal with these last two, and he's not planning on making the next two dark.
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>>47775005
>bit more dark or controlling
This is totally true yes. People want to be made to survive man. Humans will naturally want to minimize conflict, but put them in a situation where it's Fight or Die, no chance of flight, and watch them be at their best. When I put out Dead-Time-Booboo CYOA, there were some amazing builds I hadn't even thought possible. People want to be absolutely murdered and mindraped because otherwise they'll just minimax it and forget.
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>>47774981
Personally I'd go with the first; the second might not be obvious enough as wings.

>>47775005
>>47775023
I disagree, I think that we can suspend disbelief, or think of some justification:

>We're tired of these two girls, please just take them off our hands
>You seem like a gigantic moralfag, maybe you can fix them
>These shouldn't really be in here, but I guess bureaucracy didn't sort them out? Well, policy obligates we have to show you everyone...
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>>47774348
This is really the laziest form of posting.

>>47774605
Aye, but it's certainly not tumblr enough it goes without use here. Fuck I just want new words that people haven't beaten to death. Can we put some together at some point?
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>>47774981
Thank you Quiet. One of your cyoas has been a great inspiration during the creation of my four horsemen cyoa (which is almost done, just have to polish off famine, get the powers for death, and add a little more fluff and then it is done.) Again, thank you.
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>>47775061
Oh fuck off, Quiet. Not everyone wants your misery shit spreading around.
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>>47775079
Oh, fuck off, anon. Not everyone wants your discouraging shit spreading around.
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>>47775079
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>>47774255
I can't writefag to save my life, so no story unfortunately. And I guess Tremor, Lava Circle, Umbral, and Airburst
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>>47775038

She just can make ribbons into anything so that is more transmutation. Homura at least pulls items from hammerspace.
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>>47775078
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>>47775094
Nothing is more discouraging than Quiet trying to infect other CYOAs with 'you're going to die and have your soul raped' stylings.
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>>47775107
Correct, but Mami's ability "looks" more like weapon summoning for the purpose of pics even though it isn't.
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>>47775112
Fuck that face is creepy shame the movie didn't hold up to that creepy mask.
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>>47775113
He's not forcing anyone to add grimdark to their CYOAs.

There's an audience for that stuff, and as much as I like light, fun CYOAs, it's refreshing to have some variety.
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0 to autosage in two and a half hours.
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>>47775137
Look, I don't care about him doing things how he wants, but Beri makes lighthearted stuff and I want that to keep happening, not for everything to be misery all the time.
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>>47775138
Welcome to /cyoag/. Enjoy your stay.
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>>47774969
I just wanted to post OC and get headpats, and anon would rather talk about cuckolding.
I'll just go cry in the corner while watching Konosuba so i can make of the cyoa
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>>47775149
He already said the next two would be lighter, and that he just made these a little darker because he was worried all the roommates were getting samey.

Besides, I thought that the latest two still had the trademark Beri style despite being darker.
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>>47775072
That really just justifies them giving you better library items to help you.
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>>47775155

Good choice.

Remember. Best waifu. Best Girl.
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>>47775138
It's the waifu posts that fill it up so quick
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>>47775113
In fairness most CYOA have a bit of that, like no one seems to notice your fighting a literal sapient concept that wants to eat the universe in Traveller.
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>>47775173
Well, the library is information, not necessarily items they develop.

It could just be that this is the best they have as of now.
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>>47775171
I didn't, Hex just seemed to be a march of cruelty. The loli I can see someone interpreting as being 'sweet' to you despite owning your ass.
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>>47775155
What the fuck is everyone's obsession with Konosuba all about? Isn't it just another cliched special snowflake in an mmo like world anime?
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>>47775174
Excellent taste.
Megumin is Megumine, though! You can't have her!
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>>47775174
>Megumin
>Not the Goddess
Anon we need to talk.
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>>47775061
You know, sometimes I feel like you're my antithesis. Cute & cuddly is better than miserable and depressing and dangerous.

>>47775072
All of those are good, but that last one is probably the best. It's a new program & you're the first person they're talking to about it. Besides, it isn't like the darker ones couldn't room with a human without the organization's help. Throwing them into the list doesn't "hurt" anything. Miya warns you about them first. Evil or not, living with humans is integration.


I feel a bit feverish. This next page will take a bit longer than I originally planned.
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>>47775197
It's more like a parody thereof.
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>>47775189
I interpret her as being simply playful but not very understanding of human morals.
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>>47775203

>liking a literal damegami
>any year

anon... I...
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>>47775174
Megumin >> Thief girl > doesn't even matter
>>47775197
it's a parody, anon. NEET goes to a fantasy world, thinking it'll be great, but it sucks because he has no skills and no one wants to die.
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>>47775197
It's a comedy show with great humor.
There's no special snowflake MC either, he's a NEET that acts like a pretty normal guy for the most part.
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>>47775212
>Beri likes my ideas
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>>47775212
>Cute & cuddly is better than miserable and depressing and dangerous.
But don't you only feel alive when you know that the next second could mean death? That now is the only moment that matters?
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>>47775212
Really though, they could at least give you help if they're going to do that.
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>>47775228
>Not>Megumin>>Lich Girl>Thief Girl
Come on anon.
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>>47775242
>pretty much immortality
>a gigantic house you only could have wished for
>free money; all expenses covered

I mean, yeah, maybe the darker ones could use a bit more help, but this organization probably doesn't want to make a deal with Avarice to fund it.
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>>47774850
It's been half an hour.
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>>47775155

So you're saying you got cucked out of headpats?
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>>47775242
Quick question, what do you guys think about this one? I mean, the style, not the content. Although you're free to comment on that as well.
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>>47775256

This man has a good point. Although we are forgetting Megumin's sister as well if we are going off the main cast.
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>>47775269
I meant more in the direct sense of counteracting the girls, really.
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>>47775283
yes. Exactly. That is the exact word I would use to describe the situation.
>>47775287
I think your filename says it's nearly 2 am and you should go the fuck to bed.
>inb4 muh insomnia
that isn't made better by a bright screen
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>>47775216
That's more what I was going for.

>>47775240
I'd rather curl into a ball and take a 1,000 year nap, wake up to pet a dozen kittens, roll on a fuzzy and soft shag carpet, and then eat some french toast.

>>47775269
Like this, they're giving you a lot already. The more offered from the general page, the less room I have to work with for the girl-specific pages.
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>>47775287
Looks nice. The content of the power is also nice.
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>>47775287
Ain't no one got 20 murder points for a shield, white boy.
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>>47775298
Are those all Megumin's sisters? They are all look so ripe to bully and tease.
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>>47775212
>I feel a bit feverish. This next page will take a bit longer than I originally planned.

Don't die beri!
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>>47775309
>>47775319
Really wish I could anon, but seriously, I can't. If i had my meds I might have been able to, but thanks to our lovely military, my city has been blocked off for the last month.

>>47775325
Merci.
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>>47775287

Surprisingly expensive for what looks like a substandard shield spell.
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>>47775216
I don't really get that feeling, she reads like she likes torture.
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>Megumin
>best
FOOLS, I don't care what you say, he was the best while he lasted. HE DIDN'T HAVE TO DIE REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>47775319
What's French toast? Is it like Vinian toast?
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>>47775287
Content wise, can this shield thing be used offensively?
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>>47775350
They're surprisingly similar, actually.

>>47775341
Don't worry, I won't die even if I'm killed.
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>>47775348
Why do people like this guy? I'm just curious. I thought he was just a bad guy.
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>>47775345
I don't think she really understands how much her playing can mess some people up.
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>>47775352
Sure, but it moves really slowly.

There are five other shields, two of which are better for what you're asking.
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>>47775364
I'm guessing it's a gay who's mad that Japan won't cater to his fetish.
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What are some lunar magic based powers?

So far I've got moonbeams, charging weapons with lunar energy, raining stars down on foes, gravity control and sleep inducement.
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>>47775415
I regret spending 3 posts on that question earlier if that's all you got out of it.
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>>47775287
The way your words separate is pretty terrible. "amat-eur" for example.
Either don't separate them at all and just go down a line, or make sure to separate them properly. (In this case, ama-teur)
Other than that, this looks interesting. Would play.
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>>47775364
>bad guy

>lived in his castle not targeting anyone
>arrived to city just to teach Megumin not to blast his castle
>put curse on Darkness and gave them enough time to get lift it
>acted only in self-defense
>killed only in self-defense
>didn't want to hurt Darkness
>haven't done anything to deserve death

If you call him "bad guy" you're looking at the wrong side, it's Aqua who is evil
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>>47775449
>It's Aqua who is evil.
I'd say she is more of a brat/arrogant child than evil.
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>>47775449
>killed
>haven't done anything to deserve death
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>>47775348
>>47775298
>>47775228
You guys can have the blowup mages and semen lolis...
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>>47775287
>suboptimal shield spell costs 1/5 of your points

I forgot that was your thing, Quiet. You're going to present me with a buffet of delectable options and then let me pick a few olives and maybe a piece of pie if I give you my left arm.
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>>47775415
Probability/fortune, space, purity, animism, darkness, insanity, time, immortality. change (shapeshifting/transmutation).
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>>47775469
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Castle_doctrine
He was attacked, thus he had right to defend himself
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>>47775474
I'll just take my succubus neesan harem!
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>>47775474
The trap is a bit too thick for my taste but not bad.
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>>47775487
With Cutebus as first waifu.
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>>47773241
What's your name on the author waifu chart I want to pick you
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>>47775493
Which one is the trap?
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>>47775476
>maybe a piece of pie if I give you my left arm.
If a few olives are considered a 100, now way in hell I'm giving you a piece of pie for just an arm.
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>>47775474

Third from the right looks a bit too much like Darkness. Secret succubus Crusader?
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>>47775437
the problem was a lot of those were kind of stuff that didn't fit the CYOA I was making (namely the weaving, dream manipulation, and some others).

>>47775477
>purity
Uh....what the heck is that?
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>>47775493
I think those are all women, though.
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>>47775467
spoiled, self-centered, would throw MC under the buss for 1 gold. She could easily be BBEG if she wasn't that dumb
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>>47775507
>>47775493
The white-haired one modeled after Megumin is a girl, anon
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>>47775507
>Nr. 5
Boyish build. Shy face. No breasts. Compensates with a sweet ass. Tiny boyclit. It's clearly a trap.
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>>47775504
I'm glad! It's beri.
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>>47773216
>Green
Come on man
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>>47775534
>Tiny boyclit
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>>47775534
Lies and slander.
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>>47775415
You don't even have Illusions? That's one of the most obvious moon powers. Hell, I'm pretty sure it's even mentioned on the "The Moon" tarot card.
Whatever.
>Illusions
>Moonbeams
>Charging weapons with lunar energy
>Creating weapons with lunar energy
>Raining stars down on foes (this really doesn't feel like a moon power. Hell, since the sun is a star, it technically makes more sense for a sun power)
>Gravity control
>Sleep inducement
>Tidal wave creation
>Seeing in darkness
>Mana restoration
>Light source
>Darkness source
>Creation of bestial forms (Werewolves, etc)
>Insomnia
>Dream alteration
I came up with those in like 3 minutes. Put a little more effort into this, please.
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>>47775534
>Tiny boyclit.
W-What?
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>>47775510
Still, I'm worried when I see that shild spell. It's not bad but it's somehow worth 1/5 of your points which makes me wonder how screwed we're going to be this time.

Then again, you're usually pretty generous with family options. I wouldn't be surprised if being nobility/ low royalty costs 20 points too.
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>>47772931
Ghost/Form/Guardian is really scary.
People on your shitlist can never be safe, cause you don't tire and are really hard to kill, whilst draining them.
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>>47775554
>>47775568
>tiny boyclit
Penis so small that it cannot with good conscience be called a penis. Thus it is called a boyclit, since it looks more like a clit than a penis. We going off-topic though and that's no good.
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>>47775576
Don't worry, you'll be fine. Probably not though.



>>47775600
I need to google this brb
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>>47775519
Purity tends to be pretty neat. It's about being an ideal that stands above the common rabble. It makes you better, tends to involve removing weaknesses and the impure. Sometimes relates to human temperaments and the gap between heaven and earth. Think "angels," which are classically images of perfection, more than "gods," which are classically grand and powerful, but both could fit (and really, "angel" could be called a type of "god.")
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>>47775600

We were past the post limit for autosage. So its OK to Megumin post and talk about boyclits.
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>>47775474
>semen lolis


Good. I'll take two hundred.
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>>47775600
have you thought of posibillity that it's just clit and it's a loli?
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>>47775641
True, but then he couldn't fagpost.
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>>47775364
Its because he used to roll his head over the floor to look at wiz her panties. Second best demon lord general right after vanir.
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>>47775641
I'd rather it to be a smalldicked cute guy than an underage girl. Small penis humiliation is a fun fetish.
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>>47775576
>>47775609
>Gives his arm to get a magial shield
>Can't use it because It requires both hands
I'm going to bet we are going to be super screwed
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>>47775675
This post very clearly encapsulates QuietCYOA and related materials.
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>>47775675
That's what my third arm is for, anon.
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>>47773204
>no one picked Chika yet
You're all horrible people. Chika didn't do nuffin wrong. Chika is pure and needs to be protected from the awful world.
I'm going to bed now and I swear, if no one has picked her when I wake up, I will do absolutely nothing.

Mistakes caught so far:
>Repeat of "My love for you...", "Thick headed" and "Inspire"
>Remove the mention of "Objects"
>The picture + text of Ann doesn't match up with the rest of the row
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>>47775675
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>>47775560
Eh Illusions are going to be separate into another school.

Water is also separate, as is the bestial forms.

As for some of the others, I suppose they could fit.

>Put a little more effort into this, please.
Thanks for the ideas, but fuck you.
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>>47775713
>Thanks for the ideas, but fuck you.
You're welcome.
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>>47775273
Yes, dear. I'm reading.

>Class
Dragonlord.
Going to be a fast, stealthy rogue while the dragon can handle any direct encounters.
I'm so tempted to pick RIP AND TEAR Vindicator for the destructiveness. But I revised it when I saw the items.
>Equipment
Shen
Revier
It says you get one object? Haven't seen any.
A close call between Soar (for dragon riding and dropping) and Shade. I like the lore of all these items.
>General
Camouflage
Weapon Master
Acrobatics
Cold Blooded
Anticipation*
Quick Study*
Picked the typical rogue set. Plus cold blooded because I love frosty lands.

>Special
Magnetism
Terror

>Basic Spells
Blink
Analyze Item
Detect evil
Hyper Jump
Penumbra
Shards*
Blind*
My go to utility load out.

>Advanced spells
Nullify
Powder
Blizzard*
Summon Familiar*
Elementalize*

Again, going with the frost motive and added front-liners.

>Companions
>Wendy
>Emilia
>Green
I really, really enjoyed this one Kit. You earned your headpat, and more. Sorry it took a while, it's long one.
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Should I go workout for an hour or sit here waiting for more OC and shitposts?
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>>47775901
No more OC will be posted this thread.
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>>47775921
Unless someone's an idiot, that is.
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>>47775901
Go work out, thread's almost dead.
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>>47775788
>Picks Green
>Not Shun
actually
>doesn't pick even one Kitsune companion
It looks like I'm having nightmares tonight.
While I absolutely love the headpat sempai, especially when I'm about to go to sleep, I can't help but feel bad because someone posted that exact gif to Berri like, two days ago, and now I'll have to wonder if that was you and if you like Berri more than me and Berri is such a homewrecking whore I swear
Ice is the best element, I'm glad you agree.

>I really enjoyed this one
Guess I gotta get more serious, then.
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>>47775901
It's almost like you're choosing the adventure of real life.

But just go workout, then come back for the shitposts.
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Just gonna keep turning out OC until I get decent at the writing and design part.
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>>47775937
>Ice
>Better than based Lightning in any way, shape, or form.
It's high tier, but it's far from the best.

Also if the girl from that pic is who I think it is, then fuck her.
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>>47775925

kek >>47775966
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>>47775921
>>47775926
>>47775944
Okay, but there better be a shitstorm to join when I get back: running makes me cranky as fuck.
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>>47775937
Got a source for that senpai?
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>>47775937
Don't worry, it wasn't me who posted it for beri then.

You know there's not a single homewrecking whore out there that can compete. You know that.
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>>47775966
>Not a single revolver
Man...

>Luger
But Anon, I already look like that.
Well, almost.
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>>47776042
FUCK meant to put one of those in there. Maybe I'll update it with another rack of guns.
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>>47775966

You're a real bastard, you know that? Making me choose between the M1 Garand and the M2 Browning.
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>>47775966
How is the M1 Garand not everyone's choice.

>>47775998
Then choose a different workout adventure. Bike instead of run. Get an audiobook to cheer you up!
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>>47775937
I have never once wrecked a home!
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>>47776059
If you are Beri, you somehow reminds me alot of Angelanon poster...that tone of writing...brr
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>>47776010
Sakura Sakura sakura I love you
>>47776020
>You know there's not a single homewrecking whore out there that can compete
Thank you. That hits the spot.
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>>47776078
>Anon gets triggered by exclamation points.
You're too far gone.
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>>47776108
Thank you based senpai.
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>>47776109
not the same anon, but now I suspect you
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>>47775921
>>47775901
Today to-2 Days I should 20+ pages worth of cyoa.
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>>47776078
I have a fever & and I've been writing waifus for days. Forgive me if I'm incorporated some habits into my posting for the moment. It least I'm not abusing~ tildes.
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>>47769619

>Implying you would get the drop on Pride before it makes eye contact with you.

With god tier intellect and the ability to manipulate anyone around it I'm pretty sure Pride will find you first.
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>>47776059
And it's going to stay that way.
You stay away from Bliss and we won't have a problem. I can survive without headpats from anon, but not without Bliss.
>>47776134
I liked it. She was Yandere as fuck, but not out to kill anyone.
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>>47776176
Weren't you hanging all over Box Wine a few days ago?
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>>47776109
Agreed. People can't even show enthusiasm anymore. HAVING FUN IS NOT ALLOWED.

>>47776108
You know it.
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>>47773204
Ohh looks cool Kit!
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>>47775966
>M-16 jamming meme
Fuck off you commie bastard.
>HURR DURR THE AK47 IS DA BESS GUN EVR MAED! DA ONLY WEPON MOAR POWERFULL IS DA KATANA!
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>>47776209
THIS ENTIRE THING IS BASED OFF MEMES AND HOLLYWOOD MAGIC WHAT DID YOU EXPECT GOOD GUNS FUCK UP MORE TO ADD SUSPENSE
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>>47776176
It was pretty good, I did not expect the pegging.
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>>47775966
Hard choice between the Ak and the Garand.
I like the Ak's ability better but I can't say no to a fucking Garand, that would be heresy.
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everyone who can't prove that they are NOT angelanon at this exact moment will be branded as one. IT CAN BE ANYONE, it can be >>47776059
it can be >>47776109
it can be ME
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>>47776170
Abusing is too much.~ This is my normal way of typing
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>>47774460
Which one was that?
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>>47776224
Pegging is the worst.
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>>47776186
No?
>>47776187
No really, that comment speaks to me.
I am both a purer Waifu and a dirtier whore than a home wrecker - they have nothing to offer you
>>47776198
Danke
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>>47773204
You should really go through this and fix it there's a lot of mistakes you left in but overall I really like it
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>>47776245
I'd be pretty butthurt if I got pegged like that.
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>>47776276

You can do better, Anon.
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>>47776321
You overestimate me.
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>>47776271
>there's a lot of mistakes
Besides the ones I mentioned in >>47775698
, which?
I'll run trough it tomorrow, and finalize (read: Spellchecking, fix pixels, add 3-6 powers, try to eliminate white space) the short Succubus tomorrow
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>>47776352
Thickheaded skills is the same as camoflage.
I think there alot others too.~
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>>47776341

Do I, Anon? Or do you underestimate yourself?
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>>47776262
>No?
Either Kit doesn't remember his drunken escapades or he can't confront poor Bliss with his sins.
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>>47773581
This would be a sick idea for an anime. The seven rings mysteriously appear to seven people and then of course they'd try and get all the rings.
Would be even better if the first three episodes were a typical ecchi where the protag finds the lust ring and plays around with it, then it takes a 360 when he's murdered by the Wrath guy or the followers of the Pride guy, and the real thing begins.
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>>47776376
>Repeat of "Thick headed"
that was mentioned in the quoted post.
Anon, saying "there are other mistakes" isn't too helpful. I can't read it with fresh eyes like you.
You said there were mistakes, and I'd like to fix them, but you need to tell me what they are.
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>>47776341
That smell, that kind of smelly smell...
That smelly smell that smells...
Smelly.
Dicks.
What?
DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICKS!
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>>47776398
Anon please, what the heck are you talking about?
I can't go to sleep when you accuse me of infidelity.
Box Wine is a nice boy that drinks, but I have no romantic feelings for him (sorry). My love for Bliss is ticking clock, Anon; it only grows.
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>>47776396
Probably a bit of both.
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>>47776431
>ticking clock, Anon; it only grows
what
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>>47776401
Well that is an interesting idea. Maybe someone can write this story. I would, but I am busy with finishing my cyoas.
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>>47776460
Big Ben is one of the oldest clocks known to mankind. Like trees, they just keep getting bigger, the longer they last.
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>>47774434
>Realistically sleeping
Kek.
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>>47776502
First off, Big Ben (1859-ish) is not one of the oldest clocks known to mankind: not even counting sundials, some of the oldest working clocks in history include the one in Salisbury Cathedral (1386-ish) and the Beauvais Cathedral clock (1305-ish).

Second, what kind of clock grows?
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Share your saddest, most depressive idea for a cyoa. I need inspiration so break my heart.
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>>47776562
When did you first learn that you were autistic?
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>>47776591
It's a great CYOA with amazing choices and waifus, but it will never be real.
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>>47776398
Anon, it's almost half past 12, I need to sleep.
>>47776460
Time cannot be stopped. Time always passes. Time can only increase.
"My love for you is ticking clock" - my love increases
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>>47776591

None of your CYOAs will ever be real.

Not that one you love playing, not the one that tickles all of your fantasies, not the one that sounds kind of neat and slightly possible.

You're never going to see fully immersive VR that allows for even a crude imitation of any of this.
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>>47776633
I dunno, I just remember you bantering with Box Wine while drunk.
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>>47776591
Design your waifu's husbando. She's your perfect dream girl and you can either make her happy by making her perfect man or ruin her life by making him abusive, alcoholic, etc. Either way she will never be yours. She doesn't even know you exist.
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>>47776647
Why would I care either way?
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>>47776562
Anon... there's different KINDS of clocks. Not all trees grow to the same height given the same time. Big Ben is like a redwood.
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>>47776647
I'm in love with this idea.
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>>47776662
She's your perfect waifu, your soulmate. Your only chance at true love was with her, but it shall never be.
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>>47776673
So? I don't know this girl. I don't care who she ends up with. Why waste my time?
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>>47776647
incoming NTR anon
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>>47775966

>Mosin-Nagant
>Hates Germans and Finns

If I took it, I would probably end up one of those crazy shooters that kill a bunch of people, then kill themselves, because I'm ethnic German and living in the highest concentration of Finns in the entire United States.
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>>47776591
Waifu/husbando builder, where you pick one of a few characters and customize them further. You even get to pick out some powers and such for yourself, then the two of you are going to go on an adventure, where each of you will enter into a dungeon from a different side to meet in the middle, where you have to sacrifice your waifu/husbando for the good of their people. And if you don't sacrifice them, they'll sacrifice you.
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>>47776647
I can barely imagine the apocalyptic shitstorm this cyoa would bring down on us.
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>>47776703
>Design them to be fat, ugly, and weak so they're easier to kill
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>>47776733
But then they don't even make it to the middle of the dungeon and they die for no reason, their people doomed.
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>>47776633
Is it three score passed the bong?
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>>47776748
>their people doomed
Sucks for them.
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>>47776591
>you will never be genderbend into a 9/10 perfect waifu + mind alteration to be a girl and not a transsexual + get some kind of "horniness overdrive" implanted in your brain + slowly fall absolutely and madly in love with a boy, who doesn't understand why someone as perfect as you would even show him the light of day
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>>47776748
Just get four other people to enter with them; one of them has to survive.
>>
Gosh threads go fast these days
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>>47776591
Sauce on that gif?

...Is the filename accurate?
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>>47776770
SHUT UP SHUT UP SHUT UP. Let me dream. Just let me dream. Let me have this.

In every cyoa that lets me be a 9/10 girl I specifically set out to fall in love with a sweet, slightly nerdy guy.
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>>47776777
Nope, just a shitstorm happened. They usually take about... 12 hours?
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>>47776800
No, I just have a strict "if I don't see tits, it's a boy" policy. Don't know where that gif is from either.
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>>47773204
>Vanguard

>Dearg
None shall escape my strike
>The flag
The armor of a leader

>Meditation
Never ill, for the morale of my men
>Weapon mastery
A reason for me to be in the lead
>Acrobatics
>Thickheaded
If it's what I think it should be, since it has the same description as camouflage

>Terror
Fear in the heart of my ennemies...
>Magnetism
...courage for my troops
>Aura
Who doesn't like to have more presence

>Detect evil
>Analyse item
>Hyper jump
More agility in combat

>Nullify
When I want the fight to be more "even" for me
>Cure
Again, a leader who never goes out in the day light is no good

No companions except Green (you went far to change the name).

No let me gather a band of mercenary and call me Griffith
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>>47776644
Anon, how in the darn does that mean I'm cheating on Bliss?
I made a build. I didn't say anything lewd, or even imply it.
Anon, you're breaking my heart here.
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>>47776865
Sorry Kit, I was trying to tease you but now I regret it. Please go to sleep.
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>>47776855
Just a small piece of advice: don't repress your homosexuality this time. It's better to be rejected than to turn into a malaysian transexual demon. Heck, who knows... he might actually like you too.
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>>47776800
Black Rock Shooter, though I don't actually know if it's the series or the movie, and no that's a girl. Also in relation to Black Rock Shooter, someone on /u/ once referred to it as, "the gayest thing I have ever seen". Personally I found the start of the series to be too slow and I didn't bother watching the movie.
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>>47776805
It's my dream too, Anon
It's a nice dream. You're a nice person, and he'd be lucky to have you.
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>>47776906
I dunno, the PSP game wasn't THAT gay.

Of course it's a separate continuity, but that's what you get when the character is designed before anything is written and then used in different mediums without requiring a unified plot.
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>>47776906
>>47776800
It's yuri as fuck, so that's about right.
I believe that's from the series, but don't quote me on that.
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>>47776967
Is there anything fouler than Yuri in this world?
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>>47776967
"I believe that's from the series"
--Anon
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>>47776988
me
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>>47776895
I reread it recently, and I found out (at least from what I think) that Guts liked him in a romantic way too. I was surprised because I remembered the total opposite but hey, if they did spoke about their feelings it would have turned into a Yaoi and we wouldn't have had Dark Souls
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>>47776962
The PSP game and the series have absolutely nothing in common outside of BRS being there.
Like, it's almost laughable how not comparable the two are.
One is an apocalyptic future sci-fi setting, the other is high-school romance with dream sequences that alter real life.
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>>47776888
I can't.
You can tease me with many things, but not this.
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>>47777017
How do I make it up to you Kit?
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>>47776988
Yea your bitch ass.
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>>47777000
FUCK
Quads followed by trips, nice job.
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>>47777009
I'm still praying for a wholesome Guts x Griffith ending, in which they both find forgiveness in one another. That homewrecking slut Casca should be thrown of a cliff or be given to demons as the filthy raped goods she is.
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>>47773204
>Vanguard
>Dearg
>Conch
>Acrobatics, Breath, Strength, Quick Study, Weapon Mastery (Spear)
>Summon Spirit*, Pure Blood*, Indomitable*
>Grappling Hook, Blink, Hyper Jump, Heal Minor Wounds, Fox Fire*, Earth Wall*
>Elementalize, Pull, Spirit Claw*, Wave*, Light Beam*
>Meredith, Asarel, Ann

Agility-based fighter that's skilled with underwater combat. The full team of females is pure coincidence.
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>>47777062
But Griffith was the one who raped her.
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>>47777129
Only to make Guts mad, hell he even fucked her so hard she doesn't remember a thing
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>>47777129
Only because Guts cheated on him with her.
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>>47777129
She shouldn't have come between their relationship. She quite literally caused every single bad thing in the series and somehow as a retard even managed to doom the world once again. Not to mention how she caused the events that lead to her own rape.

Not that it's surprising that a brown waifu is shit tier but still.
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>>47777141
>>47777145
>>47777163
LITERALLY victim blaming a rape survivor. Congratulations, we have reached a new low. Can't this thread sage quicker?
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>>47777203
Wrong site for your kind.
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>>47776812
>Shitstorm
Why?!
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>>47777203
Grittith did nothing wrong
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>>47777213
Some autist raged about what he interpreted as a cuck option again.
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>>47777203
No, I'll keep having fun with my newfound friend of berserk
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>>47777234
Ugh, only shows how inscure people are about their relationships
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>>47777203
Technically it can but it would take a lot more activity on /tg/ as a whole. In the meantime ignore those sluts, and their delusions about fictional characters
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>>47777141
>>47777145
>>47777163
Wha-What mates?
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>>47776988
Gay men. Rape. Gay men raping. Bestiality. Tentacle rape. Ball crushing.
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>>47777234
>Some autist raged about what he interpreted as a cuck option.
Just like the Bastet goddess choice? Some guy gets mad and it takes half of the thread and a little bit of the new one?
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>>47777272
Casca WAS pretty shit desu
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>>47777280
Exactly what we're talking about over here >>47777203
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>>47777300
No, it shouldn't take up the new thread unless you keep being butthurt about it.
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>>47777027
Can you… can you make a CYOA where you become a waifu? Maybe in a fantasy world?
But don't describe your suitor in specifics, and don't mention gender. Just say stuff like "your neighbor" or "the older student", or "the commander of your squad".
>>
I sure hope someone starts a new thread. I have some nice OC I would like to share.
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>>47777322
I could eventually? I'm working on another thing at the moment.

Also all my CYOAs are high fantasy, scifi, or science fantasy so that would be required.
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>>47777322
No wait no actually, if it can be a duality Cyoa, where you can either be the waifu or get a waifu (think Battlemaid, DERE chips or the first Slime girl CYOA), that would be legendary.
I'd be so grateful id make you a cyoa
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>>47777321
>No, it shouldn't take up the new thread unless you keep being butthurt about it.
>You keep being butthurt about it.
I'm not that ntr Anon. Also re-read what I said it's a question man. Calm the fuck down man I'm not butthurt in any form.
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>>47777335
BECOME THE CHANGE YOU WISH TO SEE IN THE WORLD
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>>47777335
Start the thread yourself, mate.
Maybe it'll have a better start with less shitposting this time.
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>>47777349
>>47777357
I can think about it? I'd probably take it in a unique direction though.
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>>47777335
I hereby curse your cyoa with shitstorms and cuckposting. It cannot be undone unless you find a cure for this cancer of mine.
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>>47777366
Okay. I might just...... What is required for posting a cyoa general?
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>>47777391
Backlink
Link to pastebin
CYOA in subject field
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>>47777391
Link the last thread (this one), put one cyoa to begin with and find something witty to say like "Cyoa general, no waifu edition"
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>>47777409
Got it! Will do my best!
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>>47777422
Last time someone did that, the thread got trashed.
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>>47777422
Can the cyoa be a pdf? (there are no images in it, but it is oc.)
Also, how does cyoa general; Power>waifus sound?
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>>47777422
How about, "cyoa general, nonconsensual polyamorous relationship edition"?
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>>47777471
You're taking this way too seriously, mate.
Yes and fine.
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>>47777439
God, it would be so mush fun to watch everyone get butthurt and rage...

>>47777471
Please do it, this is way better than I expected. I don't know if you can start a thread with a PDF
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>>47777498
Sorry, first time.
Also, New Thread; Complete with OC.
>>47777499
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>>47777471
No edition. Just CYOA
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>>47777378
>>47777349
>high fantasy
>either be the waifu or the protagonist
>unique
Anon please
I'd post that image of Jinx with the text bubble
>had enough
if I werent a phone
>>
>>47777528
You'd be surprised at what I can do.

Anyway, does that sound fine Kit? Can you sleep now?
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>>47777524
Shit, a little too late. Sorry about that.
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>>47774822
Only if I get to be a Guide.
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>>47777498
I think his enthusiasm is cute.
>>
>>47777541
I can sleep now, yes, thank you. It sounds lovely so far. I'll try to dream about it!
It's 1:30, but I can finally sleep.
>>
>>47777641
Oh, and please no sci fi.
>>
>>47777690
Okay, no scifi.
>>
>>47777562
SOURCE!
>>
>>47777772
Tower of God.
>>
>>47777741
Goodnight, anon. I wish you good dreams, and that all the Muses may assist you.
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