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FAQ: http://pastebin.com/MhAQAJiw
IRC Chat Channel
https://client01.chat.mibbit.com/?url=irc%3A%2F%2Firc.rizon.net%2Fcyoa

Here's a dropbox with a LOT of CYOA's:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/9ijwopa42ke49q1/AAA40vUS2BzstD9eHyyBLTr8a?dl=0
Here's Beri's OC (genie cyoa+)
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bxbrh3Q2CTiyfjM3SjU2TWNJQ3VpZ2pWYk0xRUJ4LVZYRkgyTTlwUTQwZjZhN0FNTTJ3LUE
Here's Liminal Phrenic's blog with most of his cyoa stuff theouterworlds.blogspot.com
Here's Spadesy's wordpress with most of his cyoa stuff feathersnake.wordpress.com

List of Image Resources:
http://game-icons.net
http://www.pixiv.net
http://drawcrowd.com
http://digital-art-gallery.com
https://www.artstation.com
http://coolvibe.com
http://www.zerochan.net
http://danbooru.donmai.us
http://www.deviantart.com
http://fantasygallery.net
http://grognard.booru.org
http://fantasy-art-engine.tumblr.com
https://www.pinterest.com
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>>44500049

I really like this Disciples CYOA. If Only I had a group to GM in this setting.
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>>44500028
Race: Fairy

Perks:
- White Magic
- Illusion Magic
- Stealthiness
- Talisman
- Extra Time
- Luck

Protagonist: Battlemage

Hey, listen!
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>>44500074
Anyone know what happened to Thrallherd?
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>>44500116
Still working on the new versions of the Conduit world pages, last I heard. Prison was more-or-less done, I think.
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>>44500028
Elf - 5
White magic - 20
Elemental magic - Air - 30
Pet - 40 (otter, fully intelligent)
Luck - 50
Narrator - 100

>>44500049
The 'alpha' lifestyle doesn't sit with me so I'll just choose what I think is useful.
Option C
Option D so I can have a friend ;_;
Option D
Option D

>>44500062
Amlia because I'm a peace-loving hippy who just wants everyone to get along.

>>44500074
Enemy - I'm fucked whatever I choose but I'll go with Network.
Exhibition - So I can actually understand what's going on.
Officer - Because I can't fight.

I really like the thought put into this one.

>>44500116
I don't remember the Queen being there last time I saw this.

I choose Poland though.
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>>44500116
Let's get some more /pol/ in it
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>>44500116
>Russian chick for looks
>Finnish chick for personality
>Swiss chick for how her friends will use the machine
>Polish chick is second place in both personality and national aspirations

I'd have to go with Switzerland. Their use of the machine is the most harmless. And even though Sonia Wyss wouldn't quite be my first pick for a waifu, she's still very awesome.
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>>44500049
You know, for being described as "looks plain," Natasha looks great in her picture.

Anyway, I'd probably go B, A, D, and D
1: I already work out a fair bit. 10x gains would be insane.
2: Equipment, just for the sheer convenience.
3: Five more languages is probably the most ridiculously good pick in this whole CYOA based on general useful alone. Seriously, how many people could honestly say they speak seven languages?
4: Natasha. She's smart, really in to me, and her "downside" isn't actually in evidence.
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>>44500492
who would be your first pick?
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>>44500116
France. Hot waifu who shares my interests and is a great cook.

That or Brazil, because Brazil and France actually want to do something positive with the machine.
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>>44500116
I was reading this CYOA and got to wondering how much of /tg/ is actually American. I guess an American wrote this CYOA because of the stuff about the Queen and how the USA waifu is described, but I could be wrong. I'd love to know how many people from other countries are writing CYOAs I would never have known weren't written by an American.
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>>44500611
>tfw no shurikens for sale
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>>44500539
>no more Italian food
>no more Chinese food
>positive
...m8

>>44500116
Poland wins on all fronts
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>>44500655
Only english food gets totally obliterated.
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>>44500589
There are a lot of Brits, like Highlander, Outer Worlds guy, Angelanon and Spadesy. And Scientist is from Australia.
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>>44500633
Why would an ice witch have a load of starfish and shells stuck to her head?
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>>44500116
Brazil's waifu is hot and funny, and if they make a world-wide party where everyone has fun, then her drawback isn't actually that bad. Travel the world and enjoy the party with a girl who is willing to try anything. Anything.
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>>44500589
Dane
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>>44501004
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>>44500116
poland is best girl, and switzerland would also be a good option, but microsoft has to win.
i would legit trust bill gates to rule the world well.
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>>44501015
One day I'll figure out how to redo page 1.
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>>44501000
>Fancy Mansion
>leve 6 Demon
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>>44501000
You spelled guarantee wrong again dude. Just grab the text and spellcheck it somewhere.

Still think it's a top CYOA.
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>>44500943
>Erelyra
>Fancy Manor
>Sirens
>Styx HQ
I've been told I tend to spoil and pamper people, so might as well pamper a demon
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Ugh. Only been posted for a few hours and we've gone through 4 versions already. Hopefully this is the last.

>>44501072
>>44501075
Spellcheck is for pussies. Thanks guys.

Spellcheck aint actually for pussies.
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>>44501139
see >>44501138
Azure seems nice too
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>>44501145
I would love Azure if she was into more kinky stuff. I guess I can't complain since she represents sloth.
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>>44501139
Now I want a harem with these girls where they all try to make you sign the contract to be their slave. They all fit harem tropes.
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>>44501139
>the soil in hell is very fertile

That's pretty far form ideal for wine.
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>>44501309
Is it?

Fuck it. It's magical Hell soil, it's good for everything.
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Has anyone got the Space Reffuge CYOA? not sure if PDF or not
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>>44501139
I'm in love with Kyleth. She might be pride, but she sounds like a bro.

I'm gonna enslave her of course, but I'd treat her well. Like marriage.

I'm gonna live in her gothic mansion and work at Styx HQ. I'll take Siren maids.
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>>44501414
Thanks mate, you're star!
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>>44501435
No problem, it's one of my favourite CYOAs. Especially companion section, many interesting characters.
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>>44500589
I'm a little confused, do you think non-Americans have shitty English, or are you just wondering if our phrasing is different / we have different prejudices etc.?
I think the only think that affects me is I don't know many idioms.
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>>44501465
Which language is your mother tongue? There's a lot of parallel idioms throughout Western Europe.
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>>44500655
>Poland wins on all fronts

I think this is accurate.
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>>44500419
gib mystery box
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Good mello and da uppity evening I bring you favor to make me crack fic called "the huntin of da butchered search engine and doom 2"

Starring theses plot elements

were bear
maralith
big fight 9
halo warthog
big fight 1
halfling rogue
big fight 3
fallout gatling laser
big fight 10
scene changes to warhammer fantasy
i am caught in a underword firefight 40k plasma pistol
succubus paladin
Chest of gold
big fight 6 obtained armored void suit journey ends
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>>44501789
Why won't you just leave forever and not come back?
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>>44500589
I don't believe too many Americans say "maths".
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>>44501536
I already told you, Danish.
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>>44499670
>wants to get on the cyoa maker waifu cyoa
>grossed out at being waifu'd
Why? It's like... the explicit purpose of the thing. The waifu-er in question just answered the questions given right in the cyoa itself.
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>>44501139
>Erelyra
>Poolside Villa
>Balrog Bodyguards
>Erelyra's Bank

I've been enamored with the idea of hell as big business ever since Broquest.
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anyone got the cyoa where a bunch of families are offering you wife and wealth because you got magic blood?

they all have some magic power (jews can smell money, africans do voodoo, etc) and you could blow them all off and go for the street urchin telling you all this.

as I recall it was pretty basic and had a grey background.
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>>44502026
In the hope that this doesn't turn into a thing, I'm the person who wrote >>44499237 and >>44499342.

I apologize if I made things weird. I was just tired of that CYOA being an author drama magnet and thought it would be fun to see it actually played straight and sort of romantic for once instead of just using it as an excuse to bitch at each other. I honestly didn't think my treatment was too R-rated in light of what sorts of themes are commonplace here.

Again, I want everyone and Spadesy in particular to know that I'm really very sorry if people found it went far beyond the pale.
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>>44501139
Thanks for making this
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>>44501139
How did you come up with the names for the demons?
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>>44502197
You are literally the only one I have ever seen who bitched about the CYOA. Christ you're insufferable and deserve whinyness 10/10 if you were on it.
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>>44502197
oh, bunny... you are too adorable for this place.
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>>44501746
You want funny or nice?
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>>44502410
Fantasy name generator. Though, I usually splice up names from the suggestions generated rather than copy-paste to make them sound better.

http://fantasynamegenerators.com/

Seriously, I love this website. Helps when you have a shitload of names to come out with. I used it for SD.
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>>44500505
Probably Russian chick for waifu if I could disregard global Soviet Empire.
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>>44502494
Same. She and the Jap waifu are the best. Too bad their political systems are shit.
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>>44501139
Gluttony
Extended Contract

every day is overdose day
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>>44502448
What? I've never complained about that CYOA. Who do you think I am? What are you talking about?
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>>44502474
mmm come again?
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>>44502492
Oh nice. I've used it before, but I didn't know it had this many.
Christ, it can generate backstories, item descriptions and make quests... Randomized CYOA when?
You can make goddamn armor, a coat of arm, an emblem
Fucking christ all mighty.
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>>44502492
Thanks, bro. I've used name generators before, but that site looks a lot better.
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>>44502492
Sandra? You made this >>44501139 in two fucking days? Holy shit.
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>>44502613
> I want everyone and Spadesy in particular to know that I'm really very sorry if people found it went far beyond the pale.
That's adorably sweet.
>>44502492
So anon, who would you pick?
>used it for SD
whait what?
What?
I kinda understand now why I felt "this is supposed to be SDA, right?" twice.
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>>44502411
Oh i guess that is an unfinished version, i recall there was a finished one, but can't find it.
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>>44502671
>>44502685
Yeah, it's me. Sometimes I forget I don't tell everyone these things. I know I told some people on the IRC but I was pretty drunk last night.
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>>44501139
>You only get powers if you enslave your previous mistress
>Even though your blood is of a higher purity than most others

Oh well. Still going with Mhyrienne and getting her powers. Lyleth is tempting since she can do a bit of everything and I want to imagine that since she's clearance 4 and I'm clearance 6 that means I'm able to use the other powers at an equal, or close to it, strength that the clearance 5's can. But that's probably not the case, and I don't want my shapeshifting to be limited.

Taking the Pool-side villa too, since none of the others mentioned having a pool. Changeling maids too, since variety is the spice of life. Or death, I suppose, as the case may be. I'll work at Styx HQ too, it doesn't seem too bad and there's no novelty to wear off after a while like there is with the Colosseum.
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>>44502765
this is bullshit. I can't compete with you.
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>>44502197
I'm the person in question and I don't mind at all. It's just a Cyoa and policing other people's fantasies is silly.
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>>44501139
Mhyrie a goddamned cute.
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>>44502835
Their fantasies are one thing. How they act on their fantasies is another. If you don't mind there is not much I can say, but I think people should have enough basic respect to not be totally disgusting.
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>>44501139
Felira
Hellish Castle
Changelings
Valhalla Colosseum

I'll practice for the Colosseum on all those 7th circle demons. Turnabout on Felira will be fun as well.
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>>44502572
I was hoping someone would pick Daeliph.
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>>44502805
Oh, no, I meant to imply that you do get powers if you don't choose to enslave your mistress. You're a level 6 demon, after all. I should've added that blip in.
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>>44502983
Class
>Death Knight
Weapon
>Staff of Aether
Powers
>Necromancy level 4
>Deception level 4
>Chaotic level 1
Companions
>Necromancer
Residence
>Ancient Tower

I'm just gonna chill in my tower researching the art of the dead with my fellow necromancer, and lure unsuspecting peasants to the tower with my illusions for experimentation
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>>44501139
Could you tell me how many words the intro is, and how many words you have under one of the girls + the text under their job and house?
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>>44501139
>Lyleth
>Floating Fortress
>Changelings
>Be My Slave

So obviously the long term goal here is to be Big D’s big D. The best way to do that is to get an eye on everything that’s coming into or going out of the city: enter Lyleth. With her control of the point of entry and her finger on the admin side of things, she’s in a great position to provide information whatever’s going on in Hell. Also? Giant tits and anal is winning. Also her jack of all trades abilities when wielded by her, and passed on to me, will allow me to get an idea of how to use all manner of operatives.

The changelings are great for reasons both lewd, do I need to explain this?, and practical.

The flying fortress is just all manner of pimp, which should impress Big D and provide a degree of mobility.

And finally, the career: Be Her Slave. It’s a risk, that’s for sure, but lookit her; she’s all kinds of amazing, and she runs a massive empire. That’s hot for a variety of reasons. So I build my little empire of intel and bureaucracy and use it to help The Boss.

Imma fan of this CYOA; thanks for making it.
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>>44500992
>Identity
Erika Marte
she seems the happiest of the bunch
>Family
Foster parents
so no one tries to micromanage me
>Siblings and Friends
Protective big brother
Nerd
>Bonus
Extra cuteness
W.I.T.C.H
Rich
>Quests
Alien Integration
Get your brother a girlfriend

Young, rich, magical, and good-looking. Seems like a nice life.
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>>44501139
I'd like to be able to pick a power rather than being stuck with the one our mistress had.
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>>44501139
>Felira
>Hellish Castle
>Succubi
>Valhala Colosseum
Warrior Waifu for laifu
but Mhyrienne and Lynneth are also cute, I'm just don’t think I would really appreciate all that they would offer
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>>44500649
Faction
>The Red Dominion
Race
>Orc
Disciplines
>Melee x2
>Defense x3
Skills
>Two Handed
>Attrition
>Knight
>Rogue
>Charge
Items (60g)
>Longaxe (-8g)
>Helmet (-7g)
>Plate Armor (-20g)
>Gauntlets (-10g)
>Nice Boots (-5g)
>Wanderer's Cloak (-10g)
Boons
>Powerful Weapon
>Strange Animal
Drawbacks
>Disfigured
>No Companions
Quests
>The Storming of Gurk's Shield
>Our King's Ascent
Final Foe
>The Golden Horde
Stats
>STR 18
>AGI 6
>CON 11
>LUK 6
>INT 4
>WIS 4
>CHA 2
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>>44503982
I want to befriend all three of them.
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>>44502832
It's really all in a matter of practice with photoshop. It took me years but I just ended up eventually learning a whole bunch of cool tricks. My suggestion is to make a really big CYOA and make it as graphically impressive as you can.

Most of my techniques involve blending options on layers, image/layer clipping, and very careful colour choices. Seriously, the colours you pick make a big impact.

Here's a timelapse on how I made the name bar things.

>>44503697
Intro has exactly 360 words with 1931 characters.

All the text under Erelyra counts up to 478 words, or 2544 characters.

Why do you want to know? I'm curious. I can release the .psd if you'd like, as well.

>>44503945
When I release the next update (more text fixes), it'll have a blip in Big D's text that you'll eventually develop your powers. What they are is entirely up to you.
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>>44501139
>Mhyrienne
>Floating Fortress
>Changelings
>Valhalla Colosseum
Mhyrienne seems like the nicest option and when i gain her power i can change into any kind of monster to fight in the colosseum.
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>>44504055
You and your self-inserts
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>>44504035
yes anon that would be nice
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Posting version 1.0.4. Just some more simple text changes and also a blip in Big D's text that now says you get your own powers if you don't choose to enslave your mistress.

>>44504162
Here's the .psd. It's 58.2mb large:

https://mega.nz/#!VZUFhDKT!NTW-oEY7Nxe1PpVx5aPU9TOrxMkZ72RnAqRJGgp6MQ4

And for anyone who cares, most of the art I used for the demons are from this artist:
http://dantewontdie.deviantart.com/

Unfortunately, most of it is touhou fanart.
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>>44504055
>Big D
I wouldn't mind hearing more from or about her, as >>44503741 was my build and is my plan.
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>>44504055
how do I slow this down?
>make a really big CYOA
On whose standards? Three pages was plenty long for me.
I mean, I think this looks really cool, and that's just a blur on rectangles at top/bottom and the sides
Most of the words you use mean nothing to me.

Just curiosity. My intro right now is 2400 characters. I felt reading the whole thing in one go was a bit of a drag. No wonder, it's a full A4 page.
And nah, I don't need it. It doesnt' show me how you did thinks, or why you did it or what you thought while doing it.

Regarding powers in your cyoa, do you mean you can pick from any of the girls', or a generic "whatever you can think up" ?
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>>44504256
you want the Big D uh?
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>>44501139

How far can you interrupt the lives of your slaves? I mean it says that they still have their jobs and homes so I assume that means they can't come live with you while they work at their jobs? Or that you now own their property as well? I mean I guess they can't stop you from living at their place.

Also if Mhyrienne is your slave and you get changeling powers can you permanently switch your form to a cute little girl?
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>>44504247
Of course, I'd forget to actually post the image. Here it is.

>>44504188
I wish I was a sexy demon girl with sexual powers.

>>44504300
Whatever you can think up of.
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>>44501139
Mhyrienne
Floating Fortress
Balrogs
Valhalla Colosseum (should be interesting one with new demon powers and Mhyrie`s tech)
>>44504055
I suggest adding Big D`s template similar to other girls and more job options and/or possibility of doing same job as previous mistress had.
Really love that CYOA.
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>>44504309
She's da best. And, yes, I would like to sling as much of my D at Big D as possible.
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>>44504055
>That best girl at the end of that gif there
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>>44500028

Fairy, all magic choices, Luck, Lone-Wolf Anti-Hero.

Excitement, adventure and explosions ahoy!
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>>44504300
>how do I slow this down?

Grab someting that edits animated gifs, look at each frame at your leisure.
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>>44504312
As soon as they're out of work, they're all yours, anon. Lock them up in your sex dungeon if you want.

I really don't know what to do with the properly. I'd say it's technically still theirs.

Mhyrienne is the obligatory little girl option.

>>44504376
>>44504256
>>44504381
Considered it, but I wanted to keep Big D a little vague. Make her out to what you want her to be.

>>44504391
I have a thing for redheads.

>>44504300
>how do I slow this down?
Oh yeah. Just open up the gif in photoshop and each frame will load as a layer. Or, this >>44504423
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>>44504448
>Considered it, but I wanted to keep Big D a little vague. Make her out to what you want her to be.
Fair enough.
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>>44500028
>Race
0 - Human
>Perks
15 - Princess
05 - Money
10 - Palace
20 - Weapon Master (all)
15 - White Magic
10 - Elemental Magic (Air)
10 - Illusion Magic
30 - Mind Magic
05 - Artist
10 - Stealthiness
15 - Talisman
10 - Luck
>Protagonist
+50 - Lone Wolf Anti-Hero

Believe it or not, I'm not just being a whore for points. I've always had a wet spot for the Lone Wolf Anti-Hero, and the uphill battle to get him to, you know, "cleave" to me. Ever since I was little. That and I just like being human, especially if I can control my age for free. You almost got me with your "Me" option right at the end, though. Like it was really close. Dark Lord a respectable third.

I'm also holding out a tiny hope that Elemental Magic (Air) will let me fly or least glide or something cool like that.
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>>44504277
>Myhrienne
I could probably influence her a lot, as well as learn science from her job. At the end, I'd probably forgo enslaving her in favor of just coming over and subtly teasing her every once in a while.
>Floating Fortress
Customized so it's just a little bit bigger than Myhr's.
>Balrogs
I don't really care if my humongous fortress isn't sparkling clean, watching them try to be cute would more than make up for it.
>Styx HQ
If I could net myself a place at wherever Myhrene works, I would. Otherwise, this should get enough vacation days to be worthwhile.

My demon power would hopefully end up being something bullshit like improvement, but I'd be satisfied with most anything.
I'd definitely make sure to sidle my fortress up by Mhyrienne's occasionally and 'chat' with her.
If I could, I'd also drive it all the way up to Limbo (with supertech assistance) to pick up some random shmucks so I'm not as lonely.
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>>44504585
>I'd definitely make sure to sidle my fortress up by Mhyrienne's occasionally and 'chat' with her.
Drive-by demon insults in Hell. I'll admit, I laughed.

I don't think you need to go to limbo to get people. You're a demon now, why not forge your own contracts?
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>>44504055
>release the .psd
Please! I'm working on a really large cyoa for a different genre of my own and while the presentation is decent, it's nowhere near the quality of yours. Clipping masks are a true godsend in ps.
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>>44504671
See >>44504247
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>>44504735
whoops, guess I got too excited
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>>44501139
Lynneth

Floating Fortress
Fallen Angels
Be My Slave

First and foremost, I like how Lynneth immediately comes off as though she legitimately loves you already. I also like her castle. Next, none of the other job postings are exceedingly appealing to me, so why not be the slave of the Demon who runs the whole show. I'd probably get a lot of perks from that, and it seems like she's already taken a liking to me or is pretty much a bro. I also get to keep Lynneth as a slave and perhaps even help rule Hell one day.
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>>44504448
>I have a thing for red heads
Yes, this is becoming obvious now.
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>>44500049
1 B. 10x Gains
2 A. Always Available Equipment
3 D. Languages (Korean, Icelandic, Armenian, Bulgarian, Arabic)
4 A. Jessica (dumb, hot, threesomes, anal)
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>>44504350

I go with Mhyrienne. Even if I were not to be a higher level she is right up my ally. If not her either Lynneth (for kink factor) or Aezureth (for bro factor). Get to snuggle and I tell her how pretty she is. Wearing a chastity belt will be an annoyance but as long as she keeps me edging the payoff will be worth it. Plus I bet she can design a pretty nifty one.

After the year I would enslave her though. Just for her powers and to become the little girl. And to guarantee that I can try some yuri action if she is a bit reluctant. I would much rather she was into it and if she is really against it I won't force her besides once or twice at the start. Can't be sure she will really hate it until she tries it right? Eh we are in hell morals went out the window long ago. Still won't do anything really lewd like hand holding unless she is fine with it and we have been going for a while. Otherwise I will just hang out with her trying to be her friend and help her on any projects she is working on. She seems like a really nice girl And I really think she is pretty and will tell her all the time <3

I pick a sky castle to live in and just dock it with Mhyrienne's making it a super sky castle. I guess I get Fallen Angels as maids. Don't really care which ones I get and I doubt I will use them at all for funtime unless Mhyrienne is really turned off by girls. I end up getting a job at Valhalla Colosseum and use my shapeshifting powers to spice up the fights. Match that up with Mhyrienne's inventions and that will make for quite a show.
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>>44500255
>Ce-ci n'est pas une CYOA.
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>>44504938
Angel go home.
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>>44504350
>I wish I was a sexy demon girl with sexual powers.
Greedy. I'd settle for being a girl.
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>>44504977

If I was angel I would not need shapeshift... wait. Nevermind I remember the conversations now.
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>>44504350
>Lyleth
Fucks sake anon
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>>44505038

>anon
>not realizing its Sandra
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>>44505052
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>>44505052
This is 4chan, anon, everyone is anon.
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>>44504643
>You're a demon now, why not forge your own contracts?
Because shut up is why.
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>>44504350
I don't know why the one without horns is making a big deal. Half of the others have little wings coming out of their heads.

I mean can you imagine growing up with something like that? They would be bullied on general principles. "What, is your head going to fly away? Nerd."
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>>44505052
She doesn't have white hair, though.
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>>44505038
What's wrong with Lyleth?
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>>44505314
If you're going to make up a stupid spelling at least also make up your own word to go with it.
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>>44504448
>Having to let them go every day to work a job.
Can't you get them fired or something?
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>>44505314
probably the y
I dunno it's not like she's THE Lilith anyway
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>>44505337
She wouldn't necessarily be the original Lilith even if her name was spelled Lilith.
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>>44500116
>Switzerland: Sonia Wyss
Only acceptable character in terms of written traits, and pretty good in terms of physical appearance.

>>44500419
Elisha Cuthbert, every time - wait, this is really different, I need to read this... mm-hmm... ok, alright... huh I see... After all that change, Column B wins anyway. Had me wondering for a bit there, though.
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>>44501139
>no guys
1/10 this is literally hell.
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>>44501139
Is Mhyrienne a virgin?
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>>44505354
You still need to choose three options from it. Now it's got 7 in all.
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>>44505372
>What is Mhyrienne
>What is Lynneth
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>>44505333
Remember what I said when I first posted this CYOA?

>>44505337
This >>44505353

It's just a name. Besides, I've actually been pronouncing it "lie-leth". I didn't even think of her being a lilith when I made her.

>>44505396
Would you believe me if I said they're all pure?

Except maybe Lynneth
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>>44505396

Highly unlikely. She is a shapeshifting demon who could fulfill anyone's desires. Only if she is completely uninterested in sex (which looks doubtful considering she has kinks) would she still be a virgin.

However I would be interested in Sanda's opinion.
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>>44505431
>Remember what I said when I first posted this CYOA?
No.

>It's just a name. Besides, I've actually been pronouncing it "lie-leth". I didn't even think of her being a lilith when I made her.
Then make it more obvious in the spelling.
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>>44505431
doesn't she, the Demon of Lust, say she hasn't had a lover before?
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>>44505434
>it's impossible to be attractive and a virgin at the same time
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>>44505420
Those two? Women.
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>>44505431
>Would you believe me if I said they're all pure?

I knew you wouldn't let me down, sensei.
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>>44505431

>spoiler text
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>>44505472
>Shapeshifting
>Runs unisex brothel
You can still have your fill of cock.
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>>44505459
I meant that in the sense that she'd be most likely to have done the deed before. In my head canon, she's still pure.

>>44505454
I made this unserious CYOA in two days.

Nah.
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>>44505564
But anon, i don't have a carving for cock, i just don't really like female shapes.
especially breasts
i am scum, i know
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>>44505434
>Virgins can't have favorite fantasies that develop into kinks
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>>44501139
Speaking of demon-themed ones, this one exists. Long-winded and pretentious, but at least it's different.
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>>44505575
How can her litteraly saying she's never had a partner and has saved herself for a "special someone", possibly mean she's definitely fucked before?
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>>44505582
What? You want men but no cocks?
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>>44505631
>men
rather guys/boys.

And yes, i generally prefer androgyny to masculine/feminine sexual characteristics.
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>>44505622
I don't know. But she's the demon of lust, so I was just putting it out there.

I never explicitly state who's pure in the CYOA. That's up to you.
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>>44505650
how does that even work?
>>44505664
What, are you telling me an archdemon trying to make a deal with me that will make me their slave, would like to me?
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>>44505622
Easy, she could just be talking about emotional attachment.
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>>44505692
>how does that even work?
It's a fetish, anon. It's based on a random collection of impressions, not on any kind of logical structure.
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>>44505692
I don't HATE cocks, in fact i find them to be less disgusting than vaginas. However, I do not have a craving for them.
And i don't like them to be HUGE MASSIVE MONSTROUS COCKS OF DOOM either.

You know... trap mode stuff.
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>>44505734

Just pick Mhyrienne. If you having her powers can make you into the little girl then she can become the cute shota trap.
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>>44505734
You're gay, son.
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>>44505782
Could be a girl.

I get more of a pedo vibe desu
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>>44505591
Do I get to choose the specifics of the blueprints beyond what's outlined, such as where they live in their countries of citizenship? I'm not picking Cat Sellers if she lives in London or Rotherham.
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>>44505782
>You're gay, son.
HOLY SHIT! YOU'RE RIGHT!

****Tune in next time, when /tg/ discovers that water is wet.

>>44505797
that might also be true anon.

>>44505779
But what if she doesn't want to. She's a demon.
Also, i don't wish to be the little girl.
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>>44505820
Yes. That's intentionally up to you. Small things like residence are your choice, though of course within reason.
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>>44505011
Angel wouldn't need shapeshift to /u/boat. But she might want it anyway.
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>>44505797
Same here.
>>44505847
If she wants to fuck you, and you can only get off to children with small willies, I'm sure she'd be accommodating.
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>>44504350
I want to like Mhyrienne, but I don't want things shoved in my ass. So that's disappointing.
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>>44505914
She doesn't need me to get off though. She just wants to fuck me.
Also i'm not only into shotas.
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>>44505962

I am thinking more milking machines and such rather then anal probes. Really it is vague enough to do either.
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>>44504350
How does Lyleth's not as good version of Empress work?

Cupboard with no time elapsing?

Dimension where time elapses slowly?
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>>44504448
Angry Redheads is your fetish?
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>>44505962
>I want to like Mhyrienne, but I don't want things shoved in my ass.
Already rationalized how you might avoid being on the recieving end of anything you don't like.
>>44498898
>>44499064
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>>44506002
The intent is pretty obvious here. When people say 'toys', they mean dildos. Which is gross.


My other choices are
>Violent asshole
>Asshole celebrity musician
>Someone who smells like a wet fishy asshole
>Slut
>Bitchy businesswoman
>Party whore
>SDA

None of which are my type or things I like. The nerdy one that'd normally be a good choice is ruined by also being the one that makes you do gay shit.
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>>44506036
Keep in mind, the nerd has self-esteem issues. You could probably convince her to not stick anything anywhere you don't want, so long as you pay enough attention to her enough.
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>>44506080
That seems too tenuous to be a trustworthy conclusion.
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>>44506036

First again that does not 100% mean dildos. There is wiggle room for each girl anyway.

Second even if it is only dildos its just for a year. Suck it up pansy. Still better then the other choices and you don't really have an option to say no.
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>>44506098
I'm not going to choose to get raped in the ass for a year.
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>>44506036
She also says that she just wants to try the "toys" out, and is fine if they're used on her instead of by her. So you could take the dominant role in the relationship and never get anything put into you that you didn't want to, as long as you were putting things into her.
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Rolled 1 (1d8)

>>44506112

Well then roll a d8. Hell I will do it for you.
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>>44506036
Only because you choose to interpret each choice that way. You only have yourself to blame for n good choices.
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>>44506136
That's just a basic statement of their personality though. That's their archetype. Except for the one where I just bitched about how she smelled, which is an assumption derived from how she doesn't shower.
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>>44505962
Hey, I already said that.
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>>44506173
Great minds think alike and all that.
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>>44505431
>Spoiler
Awww yeah son
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>>44505999
Luckily I don't know what that is other than fetishshit.
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>>44506190
shota is the male counterpart of loli
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>>44506190
It's little boys. You're welcome. :^)
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>>44506124
>Dominant
you're a slave anon.
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>>44506162
I don't think so bud.

>Violent asshole
Explicitly stated to be "very protective" of you
>Asshole celebrity musician
Explicitly stated to be friendly and fun to be around
>Someone who smells like a wet fishy asshole
Basically what you said.
>Slut
Explicitly stated to never have had a partner before
>Bitchy business woman
I kind of agree here.
>Party whore
Eh, pretty accurate I guess. But this isn't necessarily a bad thing.
>SDA
What? Are you saying you wouldn't an SDA? Fag.
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>>44500116
Poland will finally into space, with help from the machine,
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>>44506269
Only legally. You could turn that around in the actual interaction with her.
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>>44506232
And? This doesn't mean that she's actually a dom herself.
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>>44506124
Dang nammit, now I have to figure out if Azure's cozy life with the best kink is still be best option
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>>44506269
>Explicitly stated to be "very protective" of you
In his defense, she says she wants to test if sex is a stress reliever, that she wants to fuck, that she's aggressive after bad night at the job and her power is being unstoppable.
She will rape you.
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>>44506371
>She will rape you.
>Implying it's rape if it were me
I will welcome wrathful sex with Felira with open arms, forceful or not.
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>>44506371
Some people are into that ya know.
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>>44506269
>Explicitly stated to be "very protective" of you
It also says she'll take her anger out on you.
>Explicitly stated to be friendly and fun to be around
She has an aura of superiority and makes you feel inferior. She'll also make you do what you don't want to.
>Basically what you said.
At least we agree on this.
>Explicitly stated to never have had a partner before
Her personality is 'slut' though, even if she's a virginal one.
>I kind of agree here.
Guess that's 2/8.
>Eh, pretty accurate I guess. But this isn't necessarily a bad thing.
3/8. And it's not that it's a bad thing, is that I don't like it. Pretty much just why I'm disappointed in Mhyrienne.
>What? Are you saying you wouldn't an SDA? Fag.
I'd feel weird banging the CYOA maker.
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>>44506269
Who is "smells like wet fish"? The lazy one?
Her only downsides are falling asleep during sex, and low self esteem… have you seen her? How could she think I wouldn't be attracted to her body?
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>>44506436
It says she doesn't clean.
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>>44506162
It doesn't say that, she says she doesn't clean. Like the house.
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>>44506475
That sounds delusional anon.
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>>44506445
As in, her loft above the shop. She place is way messier than that pic, but you can probably clean up if you want to.
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>>44506406
Literal rape or pretend rape?
I've never heard of anyone intentionally going into a dark alley at night in a dress that's easy to rip off, but maybe you're right.
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>>44501004
>Contract
I know a lot of susceptible souls that I can use to get stuff, I don't know what you trade contracts for but I'm sure I can work it out.
>Tongues
>Paths
>Health
These will either make my life better or make me a better contract negotiator.
>Door
I'd like to appear, it would lend credence to my reality shifting contract abilities.

No Companion for me.
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>>44506509
Anon your waifu is this CYOA's smelly neet pussy.
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>>44506486
"She doesn't wash" or "she doesn't shower" would mean she's a neck beard minus being ugly and having a beard.
That's not what it says
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>>44506556
Synonyms.
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>>44505906
But none of them are actually talking about rape in that screenshot...
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>>44506575
Ah, the old, "I am right, you are wrong, there is nothing you can say to make me change my mind and I will repeat the same lines over and over again until you stop caring and I win"
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>>44506431
I should clarify, with regards to Azure I agree with your own assessment that you were just assuming she never smells. Not that I agree with you that she does.

>It also says she'll take her anger out on you.
Only if you provoke her or otherwise give her a reason to. A lot like any angry person.
>She has an aura of superiority and makes you feel inferior. She'll also make you do what you don't want to.
Chances are it's going to be pretty fucking normal to feel inferior to the most popular rock star in Hell. It's also pretty much established that all you're really going to be forced to do for her is do roadie shit.
>Her personality is 'slut' though, even if she's a virginal one.
Virgins can't be sluts, anon.
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>>44506620
Dude she's literally the smelly neet pussy option.
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>>44506553
Not even my pick from the choices, I'm just willing to take the bait because your lack of reading comprehension is annoying.
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>>44501139
Felira
Floating fortress.
Changelings
Valhalla Colosseum.

This is going to be fun as hell. aww hell yes.
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>>44506628
The core of it is just that I don't like those personalities, really. If you like them or don't mind their downsides that's fine, it's just not a good choice for me. The one with the personality I do like though, is also the one who wants to put things in your butt. And that's bad. To me.
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>>44506620
Just ignore them, it's obviously bait. Why else would they complain about having a shitty interpretation of an intentionally vague description?
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>>44506684
The personalities are intentionally open-ended so you can interpret them in the way that appeals to you most. This is a staple of CYOA's.
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>>44506700
Because their brand of "autism" insists their reading is right and anyone who says different is obviously baiting them? To great success?
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>>44500116
Either Brazil or Bill Gates. Honestly, not because of the Wafus (Brazil is to skinny, and we'd probably break up quickly, as I don't like to travel too much, and the robot is... well... a robot) but because they are the only two that are going to genuinely create a better world.
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>>44505431
is Big Dick pure too?
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>>44506732
That's why in my statement on them I tried to distill it down to the basic component, though. Felira for example, always has a bad temper, no matter what else you interpret about her. Lynneth is always sexual. Daeliph always likes parties. That I put them into a negative light is just that I don't like those.
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>>44506580
Pretty sure rape talk is what lead to into that.
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>>44506684
>...machines I'd like to try on you.
Yeah, sounds like good odds something is going in somewhere. But with her super tech it might be a mechanized onahole or some robo-sluts too.
>Or...or you to try on me.
Yeah, I don't think she's going to mind if you wanted to take charge. Really she seems like she'd be happy if you strap her into her machines and tell her how perfect she is just as Electrostim Cycle #1 starts up.
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>>44506816
Or possibly some sort of sex "laser" or some kind of implant that enhances some kind of thing.

I hear the vibrate option is popular.
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>>44506816
I'd say it's more likely that it's onaholes and robosexmaids that she'd like to try on you. After all she can easily try out any dildos or anal beads on herself.
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>>44506868
>>44506887
>>44506816
Three words: Mind-altering chemicals.
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>>44505052
Seriously when became the name sandra a thing?
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>>44506916
On Christmas.
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>>44506916
Some anon made a Christmas waifu CYOA with waifus based on CYOAAs.
Sandra was the mystery box.
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>>44506902
Could be interesting, and she's clearly not going to do anything permanent, or she wouldn't be so concerned about your compliments. She needs you to be genuine, otherwise just having a computer dispense random praises would have been enough.
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>>44506944
I'd like to put it in Sandra's mystery box.
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>>44506916
>>44506944

And then SDA when finishing Star Dust Final posted under Sandra rather then SDA. So forever now she is Sandra.
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>>44506996
Yes, but getting you totally-not-drunk to find your true feelings wouldn't be out of character.
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>>44507011
I nearly regret having 40 derees fever then.

Also I sincerely approve of Sandras redhead fetish. You're a fem-bro Sandra
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>>44507092
>40 degrees
>A fever
Are you Victor Fries or something?
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man lots of talk over that hell roommate cyoa. speaking of, who agree's that Felira, warrior woman, incarnate of rage, owner of valhalla, is best girl?

and that myth's cons are harsh.
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>>44507155
Celsius dude
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>>44507201
It's more fun to imagine Mr. Freeze complaining about his temperature on 4chan.
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>>44507212
Okay. Now imagine the second line was the reason
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>>44507167
I do.
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Is it wrong I can't stop staring at Mhyrienne's tight ass?
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>>44507411
It would be wrong not to.
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>>44504350
I can't tell: Is Erelyra about giving or receiving?
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>>44507431
Up to your interpretation.
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>>44507431
Yes.
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>>44505591
The "Blueprint" lives really aren't that much better than my own to the point that throwing my current one away would be worth the switch, even ignoring the strings attached. Which makes me wonder if that's possibly the point, maybe the blueprints are just swapping around, such that if you take the deal, that makes your own life available as a blueprint to the next person.

...But some of those items are actually really useful if used right, The coffee cup in particular has two pretty simple workarounds for it's "Plagerism" drawback. One is just to use public domain shit. Shakespeare, Poe, Caroll, Lovecraft, etc. The other is to use original material to begin with, hire some mediocre writers to spew off some shit for you, then re-write it better with the cup.

You could easily make a living with that cup. I'd consider a deal just for the damn cup.
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I've been away for two days, what did I miss?
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>>44507615
Demon waifus.
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>>44507615
New hell roommate cyoa that's really great but some faggots are over- analyzing to death...
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>>44507615
SDA made a new CYOA
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>>44507625
>>44507640
>>44507699
Thank you, glad I did not miss a whole lot of things.
I've noticed that some people found out that it's made by SDA, I wonder how they do that.
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>>44507732
If it involves buttstuff, it's by SDA.
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>>44507732

I hear he slipped it in IRC. Next he mentioned when making Star Dust in one of his posts. And then there are all the anal references.
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>>44507411
:^)
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So when is Archangel waifu cyoa coming out?
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>>44507843
Whenever SDA has it ready i guess
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>>44507839

Thank you anon. If you are SDA I love you ^_^
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>>44507805
Also the great design/layout.
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>>44501139
Reminds me of another one with the same premise. Some demon gets your soul as a slave but it wasn't limited to powerful ones and they were overall less waifuy and they'd reshape you to suit their preferences.

As for this one, Kyleth seems like the best fit for me skill wise because I'm a musician myself so I'd know how to handle the equipment and can do recording studio work. I'm actually a fairly strong dude so hauling around equipment's no problem. So it wouldn't be a bad gig for me at all.

Mhyrienne doesn't even seem to come with duties. She specifically wants you to stay out of her way while she's working and stays in the lab for days at a time, so I'd probably have a shit ton of free time. You basically just need to tend to her insecurities and maybe run errands and shit for her.

So it'd be one of those two.

But then with the meta knowledge of the one year later thing, I'd definitely take Mhyrienne. Because if you turn the tables on her, then you can have her work on whatever gadgets you like AND you get shapeshifting powers.

Then I can get the Floating Fortress and we can just stay as neighbors. All those job openings are unessesary since I'm pretty sure I can just start my own business mass producing and marketing some of Mhyrienee's more marketable inventions. I guess I can start with "Retail" and rent out a storefront to do so from.
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>>44508042
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>>44507745
>>44507805
Got it. I thought he was going to make a fantasy cyoa next but I suppose he got kinky.
That said, I decided to roll my choice and got Kyleth, which is interesting. I like music as much as next man but I really suck at anything related to it beside casual listening. Back in school I always had very high grades in all subjects, except music which I always go the lowest rating possible (no, I did not slack it). Wonder if she will be able to make a musician out a zero talented guy like myself.
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>>44508129
>I thought he was going to make a fantasy cyoa next but I suppose he got kinky.
I am.

This was just a small project I decided to do on a whim, for fun.

>>44508042
>>44508129
Kyleth is a good girl.
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Anyone heard any news about this one?
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>>44508163
>Make small CYOA for fun
>Instant success
Goddammit SDA
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>>44508215
>waifus
>pure
>anal
Literally what could go wrong
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>>44508196
Nope, not a peep.
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>>44508042

>But then with the meta knowledge of the one year later thing, I'd definitely take Mhyrienne. Because if you turn the tables on her, then you can have her work on whatever gadgets you like AND you get shapeshifting powers.

Well still after the one year is up I am sure if you are still friends with her you could get her to work on stuff for you even without her being enslaved by you. I am only enslaving her for her power and giving her free reign on nearly everything else.
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>>44502411
I really like this one. Does anyone have the finished version?
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>>44505906

Why do you people care about my looks and self esteem problems?
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>>44508513
They have no lives and fill the void with gossip about other people.
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>>44508513
I care because I care about you, love.
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>>44506785
So noone capped the rest? a shame
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>>44504350

I like this type of CYOA where you are suppose to be you and something happens to you. Not some character you make but rather you yourself no matter how implausible.
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>>44508513
I for my part because I like broken, tarnished, tattered and old things. I like to think such things can be made grand and that makes me dream. Even in the wretched hive of anonimity that is 4chan.

Also you make me think of Pollyonna. No matter what the guys throw a you you always come back.
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Hey /cyoa/.

Around a year ago, some guys toyed around with two concepts: CYOAs done for web browsers, and CYOAs generated by web browsers (in other words, allowing people who are bad at art to make CYOAs). Few web CYOAs were really produced.

So I made a Django applet that does the job fairly well. Obviously, I'm not the greatest of front-end designers (pic related is the front end), so any help with that would be appreciated, and I can provide the help needed to implement Django portions of it. I'll work on adding interactivity to it whenever I can (school is work-intensive, though).

For those who have some interest in the backend, it pretty much just lays out tables properly, which was a big pain the ass to make work properly because no one actually does that, it turns out. Any JS people interested in helping me out? I'm terminally bad at it.

If anyone is actually interested, and we think that this will help the community of our little forum game.
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>>44508842
You can export CSS directly from photoshop for certain styles. You're free to steal any from ArchDemon Roommate CYOA >>44504247
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>>44508547

Yeah.....

>>44508567

I'm sure.
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>>44508163
>Kyleth is a good girl.
But Lyleth is best girl.

Tig bitties? Check.
Likes anal? Check.
Notta bitch? Check.

There is no good reason not to waifu her until she can't walk straight.
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>>44508974

Your worthless whore. Has my sweet talking won you over yet?
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>>44508974
Oh hey, for a subject change, love the new CYOA you did.
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>>44509188
They did a new one?
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>>44508513
Because we're a bunch of school girls pretending to be middle aged fat men.
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>>44508513
Don't worry, I don't actually give a fuck about you. I'm just curious as to why everyone else seems to.
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>>44508974
>I'm sure.

Don't deny it, sugar snap. You're my angel now and forever.
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>>44509259
Yup. Pretty sweet, too.
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>>44509319
Oh, that's not new.
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>>44509334
New'ish? First time I saw it was yesterday.
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>>44509142
I am going to anal her several times a day for the rest of eternity. And she's gonna love it, being the semen demon she is.

Fuck everything, this is heaven to me.
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>>44509365
Came out months ago.
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>>44509406
Eh. I took a break from the thread for a while. Thanks for squaring me up, though.

>>44509384
You are a good person and I approve of your life choices.

Autism moment: why can't life be like muh CYOAs?
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>>44509447
>why can't life be like muh CYOAs?

Intersex turboslut demons aren't real, anon.
It's a damned shame, but we've all got to just harden up and accept that.
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>>44509508
The cosmos is cruel and cold.
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>>44509508
>intersex turboslut demons
>harden up

We do that anyway so what's the difference?
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>>44504350
I don't get what the point of the estate and career is if you enslave your mistress. Neither are actually necessary in that case since the mistress-slave can provide both a home and money, you could just quit your job and burn down your new house and there wouldn't be any real difference.
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>>44509606
>Not wanting to be self made
Loser.
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>>44509606
It strikes me as a bureaucratic thing: you're a level 6 demon, therefore you need a job. Even Big D has a job.
Otherwise they just kick you back out into limbo I guess?
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>>44509665
>Even Big D has a job.
That would make sense if the jobs were all appropriate to your level of power or something.
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>>44509606
>I don't get what the point of the estate and career is if you enslave your mistress.

It's called Hell for a reason, even if you're free you still need to work forever. If you don't want to work, you should probably start reforming yourself so you can get into Heaven like the last owner of the Fancy Mansion.
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>>44509733
Gotta work your way up there, bud.
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>>44509733
Bruh I read a manga set in hell once where pain was currency and masochists lived in delirious opulence, shit doesn't have to make sense.
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>>44509776
Why? Just get a slave to do it, it's not like anyone could tell the difference.

>>44509764
Except some of the jobs are really easy, like the secretary one.
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>>44501139
Can't I get a demon roommate by answering a Craigslist Ad instead of dying? If yes, then Aezureah.

If no, then Lynneth. Probably leave slavery after a year but stay working for them because what else am I going to do? Become a Hell based Writer?
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>>44508841

>for my part because I like broken, tarnished, tattered and old things

Ok...

I haven't seen Pollyanna in awhile. I used to love that movie.

>>44509188

Thanks!

>>44509313

You sound like a stalker.

>>44508639

Good. I hate how much rape gets brought up around here.
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>>44500611
>Sadly, their sons did not.
That's why you have them swear an oath of peace while you're still living in order to be named the heir. They can refuse, but then be cast out. They can renege, but then they'd be oathbreakers.

>>44505398
True, thanks. I'm torn between
>Megan Rothschild
>Private Space Suite
>Perfect Plastic Surgery
and
>Efrat
>Magen Rothschild
>Tacky Handkerchief

After considering it, I'm going to go with the second group. Is giving up 60% remaining life span and immunity to STDs and unwanted drug effects stupid? Sure, I guess. But I'm not really looking forward to a life taking long, expensive, and dangerous shuttle flights back and forth from my initially cold trophy wife who eternally holds my inheritance over my head as a way to keep me even more under the thumb of the family and a distant and presumably lonely space station where my only companions will be robot servants and supermodel prostis. That and I don't have much use for the actual plastic surgery part of the Plastic Sugery option; I like how I look, my age, my sex, and my ethnicity. Especially the scars.

Plus, Efrat smooths out that initial period when Megan is still warming up for me, and the hanky sounds like fun, guarantees me immunity from minor illnesses, aches, and pains, and servers as a great reusable get out of the hospital / morgue free card.

What do you think of my choices and reasoning?
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>>44500611
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>>44509869
>You sound like a stalker.

That stings a little.
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>>44501139
Azure seems like the best choice for not getting exploited. Cuddling is a fairly wholesome and wonderful thing. I'll reluctantly enslave her after the one year, but I won't demand anything. Mainly I'd just like to get that sleep power. Enslaving a friend just seems kinda immoral, even if I don't give any orders. She seems relaxed enough not to mind, though. Probably.

I'm content to live in the apartment. Convenience is worth it. I'll go with balrog maids to "watch how flustered they can get." If the apartment is too cramped for them, I'll switch to the Fancy Mansion home instead.

As far as a career is concerned, I'll go into retail. I'll continue to run Azure's game shop. I'm already familiar with it and all.
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>>44509869
>Good. I hate how much rape gets brought up around here.
Don't worry, it was just the bullshit kind of "rape" that some people characterize others as committing when you think they're being unsavoury.
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>>44510037
>I'm afraid that she's gonna outshine all the other options.
As if we didn't know this already.
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>>44510037
She talks like a flaming faggot.
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>>44510050
Oh, I just noticed >>44504350
Definitely won't enslave her then.
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Leave it to me to overlook another goddamn spelling mistake.

>>44501139
As heads is tails, just call me, <filename>, 'cause I'm in need of some restraint!

I'm afraid that she's gonna outshine all the other options.

>>44510086
Like you.
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>>44509964
version 3 someday
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>>44510037
I suppose that file was about being Big D slave? I was interested on that one, I'm torn between Styx HQ and that.
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>>44510037
>outshine all the other options.

I dunno bruh, she's not A Cute like Mhyrienne or bro tier like Felira.
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>>44509845
>Except some of the jobs are really easy, like the secretary one.

That's partly why I pick that job.

The other part is that you can't seem to start your own business like the rank 5's have, and you don't even have the option to work for them if you don't remain their slave, and even then it's just the one that enslaved you.

>Tfw you will never run a rival bank, brothel, band, game store, research lab, winery, or even your own fight club.
>Tfw you will never combine all ideas into a large conglomerate which eventually grows large enough that you're a serious player in the economy.
>Tfw Big D will never nervously try to remain on your best side as you dip your fingers in enough pies to be a legitimate threat to her power, or at least a large enough threat to cause her a massive headache for millennia if the mood struck you.
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>>44508513
Because it makes their our e-dicks hard. It's benign enough, if you don't call the wahmbulance over it.
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>>44510112
>Like you.
I didn't mean it as an insult. That's really the best description I can give for the way she talks.
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>>44510117
She won't shove things in your ass like Mhyr, so there's that.
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>>44510112
Big D is Lucifer? I thought Kyleth were Lucifer, pride and all that.
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>>44510132
Being a flaming faggot isn't a bad thing, anon.
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>>44510112
Well, I guess enslaving myself to her might work out well for me when since I chose Lynneth, which means (whether I want to or not) the one thing I got real good at over the past year is fucking. And since she hasn't fucked anyone in a long time, I think you know where this is going.
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>>44510163
I thought Lucifer was -the- Devil? At least in Christianity.
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>>44510194
>You will never teach the Devil new sex moves and become a loving slave-master couple.
/cyoag/, what have you fucking made me into.
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>>44510158
Doesn't say anywhere she does shove anything into you. I'm sure lots of different toys are possible, and that's just the half of her kink that isn't about you doing things to her.

Also you should try it sometime, the orgasm pleasure is really a lot more intense :^)
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>>44510208
By the book, he is not. By the apocrypha Christianity has picked up over the eons, yes.
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>>44510224
And by enslaving Lynneth too, I can get some real kinky threesomes going.

I'm also pretty sure Lynneth would get off to the idea of having me turn the tables on her and make her my slave. So there's no problem there.
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>>44510158
Mhyrie is willing to have you stick things up her ass instead, even admitting to such right there as you first meet her.
I feel like you could sweet talk her into never actually sticking things up your butt.

She seems like she'd enjoy a proper romantic dicking right in her heart. With toys.
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>>44510208
If I'm correct, Lucifer was the first fallen angel, right?
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>>44510262
>dicking right in her heart
That's not where the penis goes, anon.
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>>44510030
>rejected by a 5/10 with major self-esteem issues
Pathetic.
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>>44510286
It's a metaphorical dicking, like "heart boner"
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>>44510317
There aren't any bones in the heart, anon.
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>>44510286
>Implying it's not in Hell.

The other anon was right. She'll be fine, dick her heart out, she'll wake up in the spawning pools perfectly fine.
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>>44501139

I got to wonder how exactly each girl would react to being enslaved. I know its mostly up to how we interact for the past year but they may have a base attitude to the whole switcharoo.
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>>44510335
Neither is there a bone in your dick, but it's still called a boner.
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>>44510356
No it's not, you'd have to excite me more for that.
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>>44510208
I don't have that deep knowledge regarding theology but as far as I know he is the Demon, yes. He was an archangel or something with Michael but he decided to rebel and got kicked out (honestly I think I'm mixing hebrew text with Paradise Lost but I can't say for sure now). I was pretty sure he is closely related to Pride (the or one of the reasons he rebelled, IIRC), so I googled it and indeed it seems he is related to pride.
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>>44510346

However they react, Mhyrienne would be the cutest. Especially if you also get the Floating Fortress estate, and force her to lower hers closer to the ground so you can "park" yours directly above her place. If she gets too flustered or disrespectful you can just have her change forms to something completely different from her norm for a while.
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>>44510375
Your personal level of excitement is irrelevant to what an erect penis is generally called.
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>>44510278
No, that would be Azazel. The angel and his watchers who were set to protectively observe humanity, fell in love with them, and descended to breed half-angel abomination and teach humans magic. The story of the fallen angels you remember in Genesis refers to this guy.

Lucifer's rebellion of "I don't like god bossing me around/having to respect humans. Fuck him." occurred later. Second rebellion, basically.
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>>44510400
Are you stalking me, anon? Why do you think I have a boner right now?
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>>44510415
Oh ok, thanks for clarifying
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>>44510458
Now you're not even twisting my words into other meanings properly.
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>>44510415
>Lucifer's rebellion of "I don't like god bossing me around/having to respect humans. Fuck him." occurred later. Second rebellion, basically.
Bossing around aside, I too probably wouldn't feel happy if I had to respect (I think it included serving and protecting?) a bunch of glorified monkeys.
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>>44510461
It's pretty obscure stuff because the books explaining this never made it into the mainstream bible. They were set aside by the church to be read mainly by theologians and not for teaching, basically. Much of the Apocrypha wasn't meant to be taken as 'it's not in because it's not true' like some would assume. Beyond that, it also exists in Jewish theology, which not a lot of Christians these days would pay attention to.
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>>44510512
Well yeah, you think this was a serious discussion about physically dicking someone's heart or something? Anon please.
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>>44510521
You can easily understand his motivations, yes. That's why throughout history you've had people express sympathy for him, culminating in books like Paradise Loss that fully frame him as a sympathetic villain (doing that so well that even back when it came out the writer lamented that people were telling him his story made them side with Lucifer). But they're prideful ones, so you can also see why his sin is Pride.
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>>44510555
>Loss
Lost. Oh well make your abortion jokes now. Surprised I haven't seen an edit like that.
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>>44510112
Ha! I knew picking the boss was the way to go.
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>>44504350
>Mhyrienne
I love Sci-fi tech and from the description it sounds like I won't have to do much as her slave. She looks fine in her true form so giving her compliments won't be a problem and I'm not gonna enslave her so that she can remain my ally later on.

>Hillside Manor
>Changelings
>Valhalla Colosseum
I may not be able to fight but I'm sure Mhyrienne wouldn't mind loaning me some of her weapons and suit of power armor.
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>>44510346
I was going to have a section detailing what they would say, but I left it out since I wanted you to interpret them instead. As you said, it would vary greatly depending on your interactions throughout the year. I also couldn't come up with anything but depressing ends for some of them.

But for what I was gonna go for...

Felira would try apologizing and brushing off those times she roughed you up.

Kyleth would start begging you to treat her fairly and start to become upset.

Aezureah wouldn't really mind, but she'd ask you to not make her do anything. If you did, she'll become depressed.

Lynneth would be ecstatic, of course.

Not sure what Erelyra would've said.

Daeliph would laugh it off.

Mhyrienne would whine into sobs.

Lyleth would think it's a mistake at first and then try to take back all the things she's made you do and cite that she meant it in good faith.
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>>44510683
Could I also assume that I'd get bonus points for not enslaving her,or even choosing to remain her slave?
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>>44500611
ravenhall stole demacia's flag!
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>>44510683
>Mhyrienne would whine into sobs.
Poor Mhyrienne-chan :(
I have nothing to do with it though, I rolled Kyleth. By the way, Pool-side Villa, Sirens and Be My Slave (sounds more interesting than Styx, though "eternity" is quite a long time and I will most likely regret it at some point) is my choices.
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>>44510683

>Mhyrienne would whine into sobs.

Wow that is sad. I doubt mine would since when I told her I would embrace her and tell her that I only did it because I could not bear the thought of her being with anyone else as she is just perfect. Then tell her nothing much will change and that I may just ask (not demand) she do certain things for me.
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>>44510112
>Dohohoh!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8qKlu5iGCpU
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>>44510736
Depending on your choice you might also win bonus points for how you treat them after enslaving them. For example if you explicitly did nothing to "get back at" Lyleth for everything she's done. Or immediately forgive Felira's past behavior with no punishment.
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>>44510782
Why not just not enslave her and stay friends?
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>>44510875
Because then she's fucking other people under contract dumbass.

>You're my waifu, but let's just be friends okay?
Literal cuck.
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>>44510875
Because he's enslaving her out of love. So that they never have to separated, and so that he can take care of her forever.
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>>44504350
>Mhyrienne
She's actually very pretty from her picture so I don't see how it would be hard to give her what she wants. Other than that she seems pretty benign so we'd probably get along.

After the year is up I enslave her. Yeah, I wouldn't give her up. I'd tease her over it and enjoy owning her, but we'd still get along well, it's not like it was ever a chore to indulge her.

>pool-side villa
>balrogs
The villa is probably the best choice for comfiness. All of the maids are pretty hot so their looks don't impact anything. Having the big and strong balrogs would probably be very useful sooner or later.

>retail
My career would be selling things that my precious slave makes. It would be a specialty niche, so business wouldn't happen often, but the payout would be big when it did. I figure I'd need to work about as often as Aezureah does.

>>44510683
>Mhyrienne would whine into sobs.
Aw, I'd take good care of her, she'd get over it soon.
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>>44510683
I'm glad you didn't include these, because some of the sad ones could be nice if you explained to them what it would be like and didn't be an asshole master.
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>>44510922
That would still work even if they were included. It's just the initial reaction as far as I see.
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>>44510952
That'd ruin the tone of the relationship and make people feel like shit and put them off from waifuing them.
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>>44510875

Because I really like her and don't want her to be apart from me. I could also take the extended slave contract but since I am a higher level demon it would not really be right. But mostly because I want her shapechanging powers as well.

Plus if she wants I would not be against taking her form and she taking mine and I roleplay as her slave for a decade or so. Its not like anyone would really know the difference.
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>>44510683
As tempting as it would to enslave them and get some commupance, im more interested in seeing what sort of powers developed on your own. I mean, it's basically a huge insight into the nature of your soul

But it's sooo tempting
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>>44510977
Why? The whole enslavement deal already does all of that. Seems like the CYOA would only be enhanced to me.
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>>44511019
No it doesn't.
>THE CYOA IS ENCHANCED FOR FUCKING YOU OVER FOR WANTING TO KEEP A LOVER
Goddamn how pathetic can you be?
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>>44511015
For all we know you slowly start obtaining your own powers over time as you become more and more attuned to your demonic-side.
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>>44511035
You're not "keeping a lover", you're enslaving them. There's a huge difference there. There are no guaranteed equal relationships. Maybe you just didn't notice?
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>>44500028
>you turned into your waifu
>mfw
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>>44511083
There really isn't.
>A relationship has to be equal to be loving
Are you projecting real world morality to literal Hell now? Are you serious?
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>>44510894
You're literally one of the most powerful demons in hell at this point. Why worry about being cucked when you can just kill the fucker?
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>>44510894
I didn't really mean "friends"...
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>>44511122
>there is no difference between having a gf and having a slave
:^)

>morality
Wait, so if you don't care about the consequences of enslaving them, then why do you think the CYOA would be diminished by their reactions?
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>>44502197
>that CYOA being an author drama magnet
What, how? It doesn't attract drama or pettiness in the least, just look at >>44502448.
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>>44511083
>you're enslaving them
They also enslaved you and that worked out just fine, right?

But nevermind that, the real question is what do you need to shapeshift into to help cheer up a sad Mhyrienne
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>>44511134
You can kill her, but you weren't banging her so you'd be silly.
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>>44511192

Herself. Because you think its the most perfect form someone could have.
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>>44511051
That's what it said happens right there in the cyoa.
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>>44511192
>They also enslaved you and that worked out just fine, right?
Exactly. She can whine all she wants, she actively did the same thing to you.
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>>44511167
There's a difference between "positive reaction to being your lover" and "The cyoa making you feel like shit for it" like you keep pushing. I'm simply pointing out to you that the idea that a relationship has to be an equal balance of power, a modern idea, isn't going to have to apply in a fantasy world. Especially not in hell, where worse demons than you are probably raping virgins to death.
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Sometimes I feel that being enslaved by anon is worse fate than being Big D or some Archdemon slave. Maybe worse than the seventh ring. God protect me. Or Big D.
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>>44511197
Presumably he meant the guy trying to cuck you, not the waifu.
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>>44511243
Big D's emphasis on fairness makes it sound like she won't tolerate you being an asshole after you turn the tables, so at least these fictional waifus are safe.
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>>44511278
She's not your waifu in that situation, so why would you? "I totally just want to be your friend and won't have sex with you, but I'll kill everyone who tries to fuck you." What kind of passive aggressive nonsense alternative is that?
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>>44511209
I was thinking about this and it may work into her need for being complimented. I mean, if someone else wants to look like her, that could make her feel amazing if she took it the right way.

The wrong way and she might just be creeped out.

>>44511240
>There's a difference between "positive reaction to being your lover" and "The cyoa making you feel like shit for it" like you keep pushing.
Actually I'm saying that their reaction to being ENSLAVED would not and should not in any way make you feel like shit, even in the worst case where she started crying for a while. She kept you as a slave, there's nothing wrong with you doing the same to her as long as you're as nice to her.

The fact that she has personality and is capable of negative reaction enhances her to the point of being a two dimensional character, instead of just one dimensional. At this point you can imagine how you'd reassure her that everything will be fine and so on.

And remember that Mhyr's reaction is the worst, most of the other negative ones are just them getting nervous and guilty over treating you badly in the past.
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>>44511330

>The wrong way and she might just be creeped out.

I am sure it will be the former. She is envy. If you are envious of her form she will love you all the more.
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>>44511330
So again, you think forcing the player to feel like shit is a good thing. Nah fuck off, this isn't an avenue for you to jerk off to your fetish for 'punishing' people.
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>tfw your cyoa will never cause a shitstorm
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>>44511384
>So again, you think forcing the player to feel like shit is a good thing.
Nope, the opposite, like I said. Learn to read or at least put a more interesting fault into your argument.
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>>44511419
You can't claim your words mean something other than what you said and call that an argument.
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>>44511402
It's not a good feeling when it does honestly.
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As a man with no talent for music, I thought I was in rather complicated situation being enslaved to Kyleth (I rolled it) but seeing all this discussion regarding Mhyrienne envy makes me feel comfortable with my prideful mistress.

>>44511197
>>44511278
Is foot massage ok?

>>44511306
I suppose order is required even in Hell to keep things going fubar and Universal Demon Rights is part of it.
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>>44511443
>would not and should not in any way make you feel like shit
Yeah, go be brain damaged somewhere else.
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>>44511307
Why not make her your waifu without the slavery part?
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>>44511402

You just need to have top tier quality and waifus. Bonus points for point buy builds on top of that and you are set. SDA is a genius at all these things and just wants us to have fun but it always turns into this shit. At least people are not demanding things from him this time and making this not fun for everyone.
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im going soft when we make the new thread someone post dark god
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>>44511507
>SDA is a genius at all these things
SDA just makes better looking CYOAs than most other anons. The quality of the content is more or less the same as the average CYOA.
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>>44511507
I'm honestly enjoying watching people fight.
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>>44500028
Is it just me or was this thread noticeably lacking in actual CYOA?
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>>44511506
Because anon is hella possessive dude that can't trust someone (which is a peculiar thing to do with a demoness, I suppose) and have to forcefully enslave them to guarantee their waifu.
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>>44511481
The problem is that's all what you want accomplishes.
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>>44511506

Because its not as romantic. Or creepy as shit. You know that depends on the point of view.
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faction phage
class pistol plus attachment attachments ACOG scope and optic camo
Companions marshall, anya and soren
missions convoy, life and walker
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>>44511581
That's fucked.
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>>44511597
You're in hell. Everything's fucked.
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>>44511578
We're busy arguing about the implications of an individual CYOA, happens whenever a popular one comes up.
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>>44511576
What are they even arguing about? I can't tell.
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>>44511402
You call this discussion a shitstorm?
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>>44511553

When I said top tier quality I meant art quality. And you do have to say he has some nice waifu creation skills. There is only one of the 8 girls that I don't really care for in this one. And Star Dust had some excellent waifuability without giving us too much information but enough to speculate and fill in what we want in them.
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>>44511578
Archdemon Roommate made a lot of people choose who they will be enslaved to for a year and sparked a heated discussion regarding some aspects of it, seems good enough CYOA for me, much better than reposting ancient ones from dropbox over and over until the thread is archived.
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>>44511402
SDA's gonna murder their family for taking it too seriously
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>>44511586
No, what I want would accomplish giving the waifu characters a good characterization that would make them feel like people.

What we have now is exactly one look at every character: the situation where you become her slave.

Getting more than one perspective on them would really improve all of them.

You seem to have the impression that I want them to have negative reactions and feel like they're being punished, but I actually liked Lynneth's and Lyleth's the most.
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>>44511635
But posting a bunch of CYOAs that nobody responds to is totally better! The pointless drudgery reminds me of my empty life!
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>>44511633
This one has nice ones, but SD was pretty lame on the waifu front, even with the sex addon.
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>>44511646
It's honestly not serious business. I'm fucking around on 4chan and arguing shit. Don't know how people can take that so seriously.
>>44511660
There are better ways to do it than metaphorically calling you a piece of shit.
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>>44511051
I read it is an "either/or" statement. You'll notice that the next sentence after mentionion powers starts with "or"

I suppose it could be interpreted either way though
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>>44511611
Except those beautiful Archdemons (except Lynneth), which is somehow virgins (ctrl+f "pure"). I suppose the entire Level 5 Contract purpose is to have someone fuck them and Level 6 demons are Incubus.
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>>44511620
Waifus, anon. Always waifus.
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>>44511697
It could also be interpreted that she just wants to play with legos with you.

It's pretty obvious that she isn't domineering from the rest of her writeup, she's needy and wants approval. So there's no way she'd force anything into your butt if you strongly disagreed with it.

Besides, sex toys don't need to be anal in the first place, I have no idea why the other anon is so obsessed with the idea of getting something in his ass.
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>>44511620
Some people think slavery is romantic...
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>>44511691
>There are better ways to do it than metaphorically calling you a piece of shit.
Sure. Then you agree with me that adding enslavement reactions is a good idea.
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>>44511788

It is. But its like women and rape fantasies. Great concept but execution is badwrong.
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>>44511796
The entire discussion was brought about by a negative reactions to the sad ones. The problem was always that those girls would be unhappy.
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>>44511788
I think one guy wants to enslave his waifu but also wants to not be reminded that he actually enslaved her, or something like that. I'm not actually sure what his deal is.

>>44511812
There's nothing wrong with rape play.
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>>44511812
Pretty much this. It's a fantasy. People fantasize all the time about shit they wouldn't really do. Stop getting buttmad about it.
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>>44511615
>>44511635
Wasn't complaining, just noticing.
>>44511661
Chill, bro.
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>>44511759
>anon responds to the wrong post
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>>44510112
Damn son I guess picking Lady Lust was the right choice then...
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>>44505431
>spoiler
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>>44511830
Only one of them was listed as unhappy, and even she's kind of ambiguous.

You kept saying how the entire thing was a horrible idea.

What if there was an enslavement reaction section and also a "after a few months, here's how she's taking it if you treat her well" section?
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>>44511871
No I didn't. You'll even notice the words "the other anon" in there.
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>>44511856

That being said if this were actually real I probably still would enslave them and just never do anything with it. I really have no idea how I find this acceptable but somehow I do.
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>>44511894
>Kind of ambiguous
>Whines until she breaks down crying
>Ambiguously negative

>You kept saying how the entire thing was a horrible idea.
Because it would make the bad reactions canon.

>what if
That further damages the idea of agency. Saying how they WOULD feel after a few months under you is saying that you WILL treat them a certain way.
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>>44511402

Over 9000 hours in ms paint, just for you.

It's my first cyoa ever.
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>>44511937
If I'm a big shot in hell and there are no consequences in Hell I too would take what I want.
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>>44510683
>Not sure what Erelyra would've said.
Angry on the outside, incredibly turned on on the inside.
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>>44511955
What's in the mystery box?
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>>44511955
box
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>>44511938
>That further damages the idea of agency. Saying how they WOULD feel after a few months under you is saying that you WILL treat them a certain way.
No it doesn't. Look at the word "if" in there. Do you know what "if" means? Or are you still not actually reading the posts you're arguing at?

>Because it would make the bad reactions canon.
No it wouldn't. There wouldn't necessarily be any bad reactions. Those were just ideas, they could be different.

>>Whines until she breaks down crying
>>Ambiguously negative
It's just the first reaction. Who knows how she'd feel about it after a few hours, days, years, etc.

Even if she does break up and cry over it at first, it's still possible that she'd be the happiest in slavery in the long run.
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>>44512014
>>44512036

No take-backs.
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power of the earth
power of filters
power of paths
power of truth
stone
familar
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>>44512055

Whoops, forgot to spoiler. Oh well, thread's almost dead.
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SDA I would like to apoligize for asking about what their reactions would be. Not only did it make a shitstorm but as my demonfu is Mhyrienne it made me a bit sad anyway. Not sure why she would be so upset compared to the rest though.
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>>44512039
>No it doesn't.
Then define 'treating well'.
>No it wouldn't. There wouldn't necessarily be any bad reactions. Those were just ideas, they could be different.
He said he couldn't come up with anything else.
>It's just the first reaction.
Which is all we'd get.
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>>44510112
What kind of work should I expect to do as her slave? Most probably everything, considering the time period, but there must be something I have to do more than others.

Also how safe is my butt (not metaphorical but the actual one)? I'm not very fan of the idea of having something near (or in) it.
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>>44511507
Anon you don't understand, this is how we have fun.
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>>44512147
Again, why do you consider some basic argument a shitstorm?
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>>44512152
>Which is all we'd get.

It's a CYOA, anon. The entire point is imagining how it would go from there.
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>>44511922
In that case you're just retarded
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>>44512152
>Then define 'treating well'.
In a way that keeps her happy I guess? Being nice to her, except in a dominant role instead of a technically submissive one like before.

>He said he couldn't come up with anything else.
Okay, and? There was already a suggestion in the thread.

>Which is all we'd get.
Unless we got more.
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>>44512147
As far as my understanding goes, she's hella insecure and have to be as near as possible of the top in hierarchy to feel okay. Being enslaved by her ex-slave goes directly against it.
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>>44512205
So, I'm retarded for agreeing with you, or for disagreeing with you (since I don't know who you are)? What, is there a basic assumption that all posts must be shitflinging arguments around here? I can't just discuss the topic without acting like a retarded monkey?
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>>44512220
>she's hella insecure

Anon if you're not spending your whole year as a slave romancing that out of her then you're doing it wrong.
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>>44512220

You are a level 6 demon(ess). You are above her anyway.
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>>44512215
>In a way that keeps her happy I guess?
Which'll vary for all of them.
>Okay, and?
That means that's what we would have ended up with.
>Unless we got more.
What would 'months later' add to it as a CYOA other than self indulgence?
>>44512200
But that would paint how the relationship would go.
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>>44501139
>Envy
science a best. The denial stuff isn't my favorite, but come on, SCIENCE!!! I don't even have any duties like with the other bitches. And as much as Lynneth SAYS she'll do my fetishes, I'd imagine she's stuck in that form, meaning she can't do loli or furry or xeno (I'm sure I'd be able to find an employee of hers for loli, but ACUTUAL anthros and aliens? I doubt it), the three of which are within my top 5 fetishes. And seriously, you have no idea how much I love science
>regular life in hell
Slavery's not really my thing, and I don't have much interest in changing my form, and it's not something she can really use ON me, so...
>floating fortress
I'mma be next-door neighbors with Mhyrienne
>sirens
It was a hard choice between this, the vamp, and the changeling.
>colosseum
I guess. None of them sound good desu. I'd consider the extended contract if it didn't lose me my stuff. And if I can get some gear from Mhyrie it might be fun being fighting as a spess marine or something. If nothing else I enjoy rapier irl
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>>44512299
>But that would paint how the relationship would go.

No, your entire year as her slave is the bigger factor by far.
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>>44512147
She's already acting mopey and incredibly needy even when everything is going great for her. It could just be her basic reaction to shock.
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>>44512346
Which wouldn't effect their reaction as it'd always be static if he wrote canon ones.
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>thread nearly dead
>time to get some feedback

Does anyone have any ideas for perks to add?
So far i've written 14 of 56 planned perks.
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>>44501139
If ordinary sirens can sing my dick to the Top of the Pops, can Pride?
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>>44511635
>reposting ancient ones

Do you ever shut up about that?
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>>44512391
I don't see how that matters.
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>>44512299
>Which'll vary for all of them.
Jesus christ. Really??? Are you sure? Wow, anon, you must be a genius.

>That means that's what we would have ended up with.
No it doesn't. Stop pretending you have 30 IQ.

>What would 'months later' add to it as a CYOA other than self indulgence?
Anon, this is a work meant for self indulgence (a CYOA) that's fully immersed in one of the most self-indulgent genres possible (waifus). I think that would be the fucking point.

But like I said before, it would add characterization to the characters, make them more interesting.
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>>44512445
Well, it kinda hurts the idea that what you've been through could chance their reaction.
>>44512456
>No it doesn't.
If that's all SDA could come up with, why do you think it would've been different if he had released the CYOA with that?
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>>44512479
>If that's all SDA could come up with, why do you think it would've been different if he had released the CYOA with that?
Because he can come up with more in the future, especially given conversations and outright suggestions from anons in the thread.

I swear, it's like you're spending all your brainpower on finding excuses why this idea couldn't work so you end up falling over yourself on the most basic shit if it happens to support it.
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>>44512510
Those conversations from anons would've traveled into the past and effected past SDA's ideas? That's pretty amazing.
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>>44512267
As far as I know, her insecurity comes from Envy, which seems to be her essence as a demoness, a year or so won't change that.

>>44512277
You don't have to display that or make she actually submit to you. Having a level 6 demon as ex-slave or friend/lover is good for her ego, but being a slave to one is bad.
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>>44512526
So what, you're saying that it's impossible to make or edit CYOAs now? There was a deadline, no OC allowed anymore?

See what I mean? The most basic shit.
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>>44512570
No, I'm trying to point out to you that I was using past tense, so that particular line in the discussion was referring to what he HAD done and what it WOULD have been like.
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>>44512416
You didn't think Oral meant blowjobs did you?
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>>44512178
Because some people are being exceedingly stupid about it, and don't even seem to understand that even after the fact.
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>>44512533
>Envy, which seems to be her essence as a demoness
Nowhere does it state that she's some sort of two dimensional Envy elemental.
It clearly states that she enjoys being complimented and has a burgeoning taste for submission, leaving ample wiggle room for ~*Imagination*~ and romancing this cute waifu into letting you do her in the butt and then shapeshifting into her cute twin or cousin or something.

>what he HAD done and what it WOULD have been
bruh no one gives a shit about that.
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>>44512596
Anon if your starting assumption wasn't that we were talking about how the CYOA could be improved, then this entire conversation goes from being potentially constructive... to just being you shitposting over nothing because it's not like the dreaded [thing you don't like] is in the CYOA in the first place.

In which case fuck you for wasting my time and threadspace.
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>>44501139
>implying free will exist

when will normies learn that instinc dictateseverything
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>>44512674
>free will exists
>free will doesn't exist
I find this argument to be completely semantic.
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>>44512655
The entire conversation is about the future, but that one line was predicated on what it would've been like if he had originally included it. Sorry if that was ambiguous.

Honestly my friend won't shut up about shit he bought on the steam sale so I'm getting tired of juggling conversations anyway.
>>
>>44512410
>monochrome wordswordswords
Sure, I read it all. But you asked for feedback, so.
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>>44512726
It's far from finished.

I meant feedback on the content, and maybe content you'd like to see.
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>>44512533
She is modeled after envy, but she doesn't act that way all the time, for example she wouldn't prefer to stay in her own form if envy of other forms was all she was about.

...unless she's lying that that's her original form.
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>>44512616
No, but it does encompass them.
>>44512711
Good riddance, I guess.
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>>44512789

Yeah each of the first 7 are after the seven deadly sins. She is Envy just based off of the process of elimination.
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>>44510683
>and brushing off those times she roughed you up
Somewhat reduces my opinion of best girl. Apologizing is fine, good even, but minimizing and dismissing seems cowardly.
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>>44512817
No, her personality and power are modeled after the idea of envy. She isn't literally Envy.
>>
>>44512817
>>44512789
So Lyleth is the sin of CYOAs?
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>>44512923
Close. She's the sin of anal.
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>>44512939

This.
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>>44512829
I took that as her not being terribly fond of slavery and hoping that you won't be too harsh on her.
Like maybe she stammers a minute like "Aw come on dude I never roughed you up too bad, right? A-and didn't I always make up for it after? It can't have been that bad if you were still up for a fuck"

Kind of cute desu senpai
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>>44512939
>>44512959
SDA really loves his anal, doesn't he?
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>>44512984
Who doesn't?

I mean, it's not like it's a pain in the ass to do or anything.
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>>44505431
>spoiler text

Even The Big D?
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I wish for a thousand year rain of horse poo
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>>44512410
Yeah, pictures would definitely help, even if it's only a few. As they are right now, I feel like we're going to need a lot of context to tell them apart. Titles are a bit vague, also grouping them (crowdborn/highborn/lowborn could be one row with its own pictures) could be the easiest thing you could do.

There's also a lot of overlap between perks (i.e. Crowdborn and really any type of stealth) which doesn't help unless we're given a good reason to roleplay as that type. I mean you could tweak it with costs and context, but that depends on how far you've planned ahead.

56 seems like an awful lot so I'm interested so see what you have planned. I always found perks hard to write so the cyoas I'm working on have 16 tops.
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>>44504944
Sauf pour les Britbongistes.
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>>44512857
I think that's all they were saying, anon.
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>>44513186
Not that anon but...
Especially him.
In fact i'd like to imagine that he's a colossal hoverhand fedora guy.
>Today i am euphoric. Not because of some phony god's blessing, but because i am enlightened by my own intellect.
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>>44513449
You're saying britbongs would actually ... use that as a real CYOA thinking about whether they should punch gandhi or stop WWII from happening?
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>>44513295
Images i think i can do, i'll have to search the vaults.

I see the perks as not so much what your necromancer is, as what they were before. So a cat burglar necromancer has skills in catr burglary, while a highborn one may have connections, etc.

In the end i may end up trimming the number, but i'm hoping for enough to give each necromancer their own personality.
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>>44510030

Don't feel sad anon.
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>>44512760
Your Perk-titling scheme seems to be flavoured in favour of lore, but there is no context to the choice, defaulting it to "ambiguous generic fantasy cliche" territory.

What feel is this setting supposed to have? What is the context for my choice? Is there a reason for me to go out and do anything specific to the CYOA, or is this just an open-sandbox-style "do whatever" sort of pick 4?

Also, I just realized that this is 14 of 56, I have no idea what larger CYOA concept these Perks belong to and so am not really qualified to comment on their value as content.

There's nothing terminally wrong with them on first scan, if that helps.
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age 4=the same age as i am
background 8
personality 7, 10, 5, 3
knowledge 1+8
hobby 14, 2+5
height 7
skin 4
eyes 10+9
hair 6
build 1
DD 9
features 4
special features 13
weird features 4
monster girl 6+9
curlyhair.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Paige-Turner-183189519
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>>44513694
oh man hes back, I missed him.
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>>44513645
It's the Perks page of the Necromancer CYOA.

It's a way to flavour your backstory, so far, and some helpful little tricks.
>>
>500 posts
We've been getting big booms these past few weeks.
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>>44513762
Wait, a /new/ Necromancer CYOA? Or is the one that you made all that time ago getting bonus content?
>>
>>44513788
It's that holiday season, baby.
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>>44513794
An update, a v2 to the 20-page one's v1.
Hopefully the page count comes down.
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>>44513825
>Removing content
BAD
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>>44513825
Needs more bloat. MORE. BLOAT.
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>>44513583
I admire your goal and, knowing you, am certain you'll figure something out. Based off that, you could try maybe splitting skills up into individual components? Maybe stealth, sleight of hand (lockpicking, etc.), heightened senses, and deception for a cat burglar and just let us mix and match. That way we could use say sleight of card for a gambler or pickpocket too. Also maybe you could make contacts actual companions? It's what I'm doing but you're good at writing companions so it might be a fit. Regardless, good luck buddy
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>>44513860
I've already started reworking lairs, i'm going to take out the ones that are superfluous, and maybe introduce more generic ones to replace the multiple "same as the others, but in this country" lairs.

>>44513911
>Based off that, you could try maybe splitting skills up into individual components?
Thanks, this will help me go towards filling out 56 slots.
>It's what I'm doing but you're good at writing companions so it might be a fit.
The main feedback on these so far is that the companions aren't that great. I hope to rectify this soon.
>Regardless, good luck buddy
Thanks mate
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>>44512410
I hate reincarnation.
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