Alone in Equestria Girls Verse #14: The gangs all here edition

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>>30191991
You forgot to move Sea Urchin from the Dead list to Completed
Latest update from: https://pastebin.com/LLukQs1V

>Well, you certainly didn’t think that Rainbow Dash would come all the way over here
>How much time do they even have?
>Sliding your lab coat sleeve back you check the time
>7AM on the dot
>She said to expect her in ten, so you should have approximately 1 hour and 45 minutes before school starts when she gets here
>Better review the security recordings more closely before those two get here
>Pulling your desk chair out you set a fresh mug below your coffee maker
>You push the brew button as you log into your computer
>Ok, since you didn’t get a security warning nor did Spike wake up then that means someone either
>A) Hacked into your house’s security system and gave themselves access
>While not likely, it’s certainly not impossible
>There’s always someone better than you no matter how skilled you are
>Or the even more unlikely scenario B) being that the intruders already had access to your abode
>But besides you and Shiny, no one else knows the code
>Bringing up the list of login times and when someone was allowed entry into the house you notice an outlier right away
>Between you locking up before heading out and you coming in 20 minutes ago
>1:10AM yesterday
>That was when you were at the warehouse party…
>Your thoughts are interrupted by the spurting of coffee into your mug
>That’s right, not time to think about that right now
>You have to see who walked straight into your inner sanctum!
>Bringing up the camera records for yesterday you select the front door camera
>Typing in 1:10AM you’re greeted with a chilling still image
>Two hooded figures standing in front of your door
>Their clothing in particular is what catches your eye

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>>30192083
>It’s very, odd to say the least
>It looks to be some sort of dark burgundy sleeveless gi with glowing gold runes of some sort adorned all over them
>Besides that they seem to have some bandages wrapping around their arms like mummies
>Then black harem pants tied into tabi shoes
>Did some sort of ninja infiltrate your home?
>An obvious fault only brings itself to your attention as you stare at the still image
>You can’t make out their faces
>Even though you know you should be able to clearly see their faces in the picture they’re somewhat blurred
>Almost like someone rubbed oil over the lens specifically on their faces
>Though perhaps that’s a bit lackluster of a comparison considering that for some reason you can’t even discern their skin or hair color either
>Playing the video to see if it’s perhaps a glitch startles you
>Even when in motion the distortion on their faces follows throughout
>Even going frame by frame it follows!
>What could that mean?
>You take a sip of your freshly brewed coffee
>Hmm, not as strong as you’re used to…
>You stop drinking mid sip and set the mug down
>Wait that’s not right
>You look over to your dispenser of single use coffee shots
>Counting them your eye twitches
>You’re short one
>Couple that with a weaker than usual coffee even though you always leave a sealed shot in the dispenser…
>Someone had your coffee while they stole your prototypes
>Could they have…
>As quickly as you can you check the last time you logged into the computer
>No
>1:15AM!
>Not only did they walk into your house with no trouble what-so-ever, they managed to get into your computer?!
>That shouldn’t be possible!

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>>30192087
>You’re the only one who knows your current password, and you cycle through a pool of 20 different ones!
>So even if anyone knew your password there’s almost no way anyone could feasibly guess the new one you were using!
>Unless whoever did this had some serious ICE breaking tech
>But who could’ve even known about your prototypes?
>Too many questions and not enough answers
>Perhaps you really should take up Vice principal Luna on her offer to use the facilities at her safe house?
>The security system there seemed to be even tighter than yours even though the place looked like it hadn’t been used in years
>But you should check to see if whoever came in here fiddled around with your computer in any harmful ways
>You’ll have run a diagnostic to check if anything’s been changed from your last login
>Maybe you could find some way to trace these two if you find something?
>For now though…
>Checking the security cameras you tail the intruders as they walk through your house towards your basement
>They stop near the corner that Spike and Jordan were sleeping in and do, something?
>The taller of the two, oddly jittery and lanky, waves his hands over the two causing a pale yellow bubble to form around them
>Perhaps that's the cause as to Jordan's current state?
>As the shorter more feminine looking figure walks in the taller one sits on the bubble and points to its cohort
>They appear to converse for a few moments, but for some reason you can’t pick up anything
>Did they cover their tracks by deleting the audio?
>Wait, if they got into your computer, why would they only delete the audio?
>It should be child’s play to just loop the video footage for however long they were here

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>>30192096
>Maybe they had some sort of magic that silences their speech?
>Your palms are starting to sweat as you watch the taller one pantomime to the shorter seemingly uninterested one
>The short one is the one who seems to put their foot down before marching towards the basement
>Before you can switch to the basement cam an alert pops up
>Suspicious activity outside?
>The front lawn facing camera pops up as a loud *SRRRRREEEEEECHHH* explodes from the speakers
>You jump little at the sudden burst of noise
>Who in their right mind would cause such a ruckus so early in the morning?
>Panning the camera you catch a blue blur drift into frame
>Oh, OH
>Hayai!
>Rainbow Dash is already here?!
>You quickly glance at the time in the lower right hand corner of the screen
>7:07AM
>NANI!?
>Rainbow Dash shouldn’t be driving THAT fast!
>Wait, didn’t she say she hadn’t renewed her insurance yet?
>SHE SHOULDN’T BE DRIVING AT ALL!
>You need to talk some sense into her
>Yes this is somewhat an emergency, but you don’t think anyone is in imminent danger
>You can’t say the same though for anyone in her way when she’s driving though!
>You still remember the first time you foolishly asked her for a ride
>You grip your side as your stomach already feels queasy thinking about it
>You’d have to have an iron lined stomach in order to not regurgitate your last me—
>ANON!
>SHE DROVE HIM HERE!
>Why didn't you stop her as soon as she said she'd be here in ten minutes!?
>It didn't even register that she would be DRIVING!
>He might need emergency attention!
>You quickly grab your desk’s first aid kit before running towards the stairs
>Rainbow Dash said she was driving casually when she brought you home, and now she thinks she has a reason to hurry!
>You almost shudder to think about the g forces he must’ve been subject to
>Don’t worry Anon, help is on the way!

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>>30192103
>“Ha, here in record time; guess I still got it.”
>Forcing yourself to do so you manage to actually open your eyes for the first time in what feels like years
>Is it finally over?
>Has the nightmare ended?
>Your hand clamped firmly to the “oh fuck me” bar won’t stop vibrating
>Oh god, you think you’re gonna be sick
>That shit in anime always looked so cool
>You didn’t think you’d turn out to be Itsuki when it came to first hand to high speed drifting, but you did
>Though you stopped screaming around the same time you stopped hearing onlookers do so
>”Hey, you ok?”
>Tearing your eyes from the, thankfully, still road you level them at the rainbow haired Takumi
“Like a glove.”
>Oh god, that wasn’t right
>Did your brain get rattled into stupid?
>Furrowing her brow she nods slowly
>”Yeaaaaa, riiiiiiight.”
>She shouldn’t patronize you
>Not after the crime against humanity she just committed
>You swear human beans were never meant to go that fast on land
>Not to mention that you might be as disabled as Flash is now
“I’m gonna get out of the death trap now.”
>Shaking her head you hear the speed demon from hell mutter to herself
>”Why does everyone always act like that after I drive?”
>Why?
>WHY!?
>You almost slam the door in righteous fury, but think better of it at the last minute
>God forbid as a punishment she forces you into the passenger’s seat again
>You really don’t want to tempt fate into making you end up as Canterlot's very own Pual Walker
>As you step out of the deathmobile into the warm light of the gloriously still morning you spot the ever endearing little weeb in her lab-coat rushing out towards the two of you
>”Thank goodness you’re alright Anon!”

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>>30192108
>Alright?
>That’s not a word you’d use to describe yourself right now, but hey to each their own
>Striding into the street in a frenzy Twilight yells at Dash
>”Why would you DRIVE here Rainbow Dash, don’t you remember what almost happened last time!?”
>What almost happened last time?
>What the hell does that mean!?
>Shutting the door behind her the terrible monster of the road herself shrugs
>”You said you needed to tell Anon about Jordan, and besides, I wanted to see the damage myself.”
>Stopping next to you with what looks like a first aid kit in her hands Twilight cocks her head to the side as she stares at Dash
>”What damage?”
>Holding her hands up in confusion Dash looks at Twilight like she’s crazy
>”What, are you telling me that someone was able to get inside your house without needing to blow a hole in your wall or something?”
>Placing both her hand behind her and rocking on the balls of her feet Twilight avoids looking Dash in the eyes
>”While that may have been a bit more, exciting, they sorta just en...”
>She trails off as she tries her best to inspect the asphalt your standing on for any imperfections
>Dash looks to you as if to ask if you heard her
>Shrugging you look at the now somewhat downtrodden looking Twilight
“Could you say that again?”
>Standing still she groans a bit before looking up to you
>”They may have been able to walk in the front door with no problem…”
>What, WHAT?!
>You aren’t the only one caught off guard as Dash also voices her thoughts
>”What?”
>That’s what you said!
>Looking away from both your and Dash’s stares of disbelief Twilight sighs
>”I don’t know how, but the two people who stole my prototype exo suits managed to either hack into my home security or figure out my door code.”

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>>30192112
>Holy shit
>You don’t know the first thing about hacking, but you do know one thing for sure
>Twilight is a literal genius
>You’re going to go out on a limb here and say that she probably made the damn security system in place on her house
>So knowing both these, that means whoever broke into her house manage to outwit HER security system
>You blink as you process that unbelievable tidbit of info
>You want to go back bed now
>Maybe if you sleep right now you’ll wake up back on the couch not having nightmares
>Well, discounting this one and earlier
>Twilight scrunches her face up into a major frown as she grips her arm
>”Though the fiends didn’t stop there, they somehow managed to get into my computer as well.”
>God damn
>They really bent her over a fucking barrel and just had a field day huh?
“Did they fuck with your computer?”
>Shrugging she looks towards her house
>”I don’t know, I’m going to have to run a full system wide scan to check for sure, but I don’t know if I’ll be able to find anything honestly.”
>She shakes her head with a deep sigh
>”There’s no telling what they did with unbridled access to my, well everything.”
>You don't really want to think about just how much she must have on her computer
"Well, you've got copies of the important stuff as a backup elsewhere right?"
>Shaking her head she scrunches her face up slightly
>"Kind of, I only have one physical backup from the start of the week as backing it up on a cloud would be asking for trouble.”
>More so than just on a physical drive?
>Wait a sec
“Does whoever gives you stipends not even have copies of your current work?”

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>>30192119
>You can see something in Twilight’s face as her eye twitches at your words
>As if a sudden flash of insight struck her
>”They might have needed to log on just so they could figure out how to transport and complete the suits safely…”
>Looking down with her eyes darting back and forth as if examining an imaginary list she mutters to herself
>”Having my door code, being able to hack into my computer, and ignoring everything else besides the prototypes and Jordan…”
>Looking over from across the car Dash scratches her head
>”Are you on to something there Twi?”
>Dash’s words seem to snap Twilight out of her trance like state as she blinks
>”Perhaps, but nothing conclusive so I won’t jump the gun for now. Suffice to say I now have a theory.”
>That’s certainly not cryptic at all or anything
>Clapping her hands together suddenly Twilight nods
>”Alright, that can come later, first since you two are here; we’ve got to watch the video recordings of the culprits as they committed the act!”
>You guess that’s a good of a place as any to start
>Dash nods as she turns to the house
>”Always good to get someone else to examine something, the more eyes the better after all.”
>It’s becoming less and less surprising when Dash says something somewhat smart, and you don’t know how to feel about that
>Walking away from the death car behind the other two you realize you completely forgot the main reason you needed to come here
“Oh, by the way Twilight, what’s up with Jordan?”
>Flinching Twilight stiffens up as she stops at the gate before turning to you
>”About that…”
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Alright, it looks like my tism only really acts up and kicks my production into gear if I physically set a deadline for myself. As such the next one will be in three days before 10:30AM Central time. See you then guys, and not in like an hour because the thread is finished!

>>30192108
>end up as Canterlot's very own Paul Walker
Is it bad that I kek'd a bit at this line?

Great Update by the way

JORDON NOO!!!!

Page 9 bump

>>30192127
Nice, will read when I have a moment.

>>30191991
BASED SEA ALREADY FINISHED HIS >GREEN REEEEEE

That's a good OP pic btw.

>>30192083
>Sea Urchin. Finished.
I don't think he actually finished, but I will check just in case. It might have been a typo.

>>30194528
Uhhh, hold your horses bud>>30194743

>>30194751
>>30194528
>>30194743
nevermind he did, I don't remember when it happened, but I will fix that next thread.

>>30192108
>You swear human beans
Did Rainbow drive so fast that the people she drove past looked like beans?

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>>30192127
RIP buggo

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So who's the better driver?

>>30195708
What do you mean?

>>30195708
Yes.

DAILY REMINDER THAT FAPMAN IS A FAGET

>>30197328
....waste of a post to say something obvious, but good on you I guess.

>>30198139
Sour is so fucking Sweet....I am going to sleep now.

>>30198745
you only like her because of her big breasts

>>30198139
>>30198745
>TFW no bipolar gf that goes to private school and gives you shit for being in a public school.

>>30199647
>This kills the Anon.

Bamp

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Coming up with a story is hard. I've already scrapped eight stories because of various reasons.

Need some brainstorming ideas. Throw them at me.

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>>30195708
In what way? Who would you even compare Dash to?

>>30200907
I'm not really good at brainstorming, but I hear the It Hurts thread needs writefags. Maybe you could write a story for them?

>>30200908
Is there even anyone to compare?

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>>30200931
>Asking the best writer on the thread to go write somewhere else
You're kidding right?

>>30200907
What ideas did you scrap?

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>>30200958

Mass Effect crossover (Works better if it was Equestria)
Teacher
Two Hero/Cape stories
- One of them was very much a Green Lantern based one.
Alien Anon
Duck Hunter (This one was really just vent writing)
One that eventually spiraled into giant robots (this one kind of wrote itself into a corner).
Disgruntled brother (With a retry that kind of mixed with Hero/Cape).
Serial killer killer (I admit, I was on a Dexter binge watching session when I started this one).

I know nothing I write is going to "top" my previous story, but its honestly the starting-off point that's getting to me.

>>30200907
How about some Sci-Fi PSI? What if the human worlds magic isn't magic? What if it's just PSI?

>>30201132
>>30201175
>Hero/Cape story
Take a nod from Worm. Spoilered in case anyone's currently reading it. The Cutie Map and the Tree of Harmony are just expressions of a multidimensional being that took root in Equestria, where it sadly found itself alone. Now that it has access to human world, it's spreading magic to draw the attention of another entity. It may or may not care about the chaos it's causing.

>>30201132
I've seen it thrown around before but the idea of an undead anon or lich anon has always appealed to me.

Usually it's one of the main good guys dabbling with dark magic (Twi/ Sunset), but a disgruntled anon waking up in a shallow grave and having to take down a necromancer or something would be neat in my mind.

I dunno, food for thought. You seem pretty set on some form of crossover though.

>>30199647
>>30200207
>"Do you honestly believe a public school boy has a chance getting this?! You're lucky you're cute."

>>30201132
>Mass Effect crossover
I'd like that, it wouldn't cause me to go out and buy an entire series as I actually know the ME universe, at least the original trilogy

>Two Hero/Cape stories
Got just the thread for you if you plan to write those >>30166870.

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>>30201132
How do you feel about Castlevania?

>>30201175
Maybe...

>>30201321
Crossovers are fun (if done right).

>>30201456
Good, because it wouldn't be taking many cues from Andromeda.

Plus, I like it here. Why would I ever want to leave?

>>30201510
Unfortunately while I've played a couple (mostly the very early ones), I've never really gotten into the Castlevania series too much. Not really something I would ever feel confident writing about.

I have a couple things to think about now. Thanks Anons.

>>30201591
If there's a thread for your topic why not post it there; there's no rule saying you can't post in both as long as it fits the theme/topic of the thread. Besides it's probably the best thread community on the whole board, here is certainly good but nothing like the superhero thread.

>>30200947
I didn't mean it in a horrible way, I just meant he could look in another thread if he wanted to find some ideas. I'd rather he didn't leave either, but he doesn't have to stay with us. If he wanted to move to a different thread I wouldn't stop him doing what he wanted to do.

>>30202020

They're quite nice digits.
Can we have a discussion about cars and who drives the best between the characters? We now know Rainbow has a car and drives, so who's the best?

>>30201591
Well, there was that roll off thing we did awhile back, the Mercer virus thing? If anyone could pull it off, its you.
>>30201857
We are close enough that its fine, sending a big time writefag away is just retarded. Besides, we are just sup light.
>>30202282
...are we /o/ now?

>>30202299
...Wow, I have been getting fucking gets out the ass lately.>>30201591
If you don't want to do the Mercer thing, you could do what we do over in sup instead. I can get you a list of super powers, and you can pic one out to use in a theme story.

>>30202299
Double dubs, nice.
I just want to discuss who would be the best driver, like we did awhile back where we pondered who would win in a fight.

>>30202425
Ah, well Rainbow would be the obvious choice, ms bluefast herself and all that. Then I would say AxiiAnon by proxy of him being the oldest. And that isn't even considering Sabre, who is by default the best at driving, unless Rider is around...kinda hard to have such a conversation her when we get such big jumps in competency.

>>30202458
conversation here* not her.

>>30202458
Who is Sabre? Is he from Fate's green because I haven't been reading it?
And I though witcher anon didn't drive much?
Also keep in mind it's not just who can drive the fastest, it's also about taking corner, drifting, track racing all of it.

>>30202425
>>30202458
Who are we supposed to be including in this comparison? Everyone or a few?

>>30202533
First off
>Not reading Fate's green, do it
Second, AxiiAnon can drive, and pretty well, he just doesn't do it that often in story. Kinda hard to do it with swords on your back and all that.
>>30202546
Don't know, I wasn't particularly interested in who's the best driver, with Hitman Anon not being around we don't have any crazy shootout drivefests to really peak interest. Ask the /o/ guy>>30202425

>>30202577
Not into anime type stuff, sorry.
So who are all the anons from the stories can we compare against? We have axii, sabre?, driver, hitman anon, I don't think YFN drives, I can't recall him driving.

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>>30202546
All the anons from the current stories, unknown stories like hitman anon etc.

>Captcha: nissan road

How relevant

>>30202614
>>30202600
>>30202577
Oh yeah forgot, it's not just about how well they drive, it's also about what car's they have. And since most of the characters like Dash have a single car, they would be used to it. Put them in a similar but different car they may be total shit at driving and crash.

Of course though when you drive a new car you need to get a feel for it, but think of someone, say a road tester for new cars or modded cars. They need to be good drivers since they would be driving many different cars.
It's all about experience.

>>30202614
Knee sahn

>>30201132
Assassins Creed crossover

>>30202932
>namefagging

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>>30200947
I beg to differ. YFN's updates are getting better imo. And I fucking love his edits

>>30201857
>Besides it's probably the best thread community on the whole board.
>/sup/
Being a hugbox community doesn't mean it's a good thread. I used to be a lurker in /sup/ but the threads weren't improving.
>constantly tripfagging without posting content
>Circlejacking (Hell I even remember a thread who went post limit with less than 20 IPs and little to no green)
>that tripfag (spiderbloke iirc) who always was stalking Beans and who loved t-t-to t-t-talk l-l-l-like this.
The premise is good sure but I can't handle the thread.

>>30203636
I am an editor for sup, its improved, Beans doesn't act like a faggot around there anymore, and Bloke stopped fucking around and just does the OP whenever no on is around to make a new thread. You are right though, keeping our writers in the thread is better than sending them off somewhere else. It splits the thread for no reason.

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>>30203636
You're right that it was like that at one point but it has changed a hell of a lot since then. I've not seen spider bloke for ages I only really see him when he makes the new thread if someone doesn't make it first. Beans is the same I don't really see him that much either and when he does appear he isn't the attention whore like he used to be, normally just a quick progress update. There's also a number of people really helping writefags to improve, it may seem petty picking up on tiny mistakes but the writers, and thread as a whole really appreciates it.

As for sending off writefags nobody is saying that, the dude who brought up the superhero thread straight up says "there's no rule saying you can't post in both" and to me crossposting makes sense. Why limit your audience when you can reach out and possibly attract new people, surely attracting new writefags is better than closing off the thread.

>>30204529

>>30204902
Because this is a more general board while sup is more niche.

>>30205909
I'd personally say this is more specific. From what I can gather the super thread needs any character to have any sort of powers, ranging from obvious superhero stuff to things like vampirism or anything that makes them more than human. Whereas here Anon has to be alone and has to make friends with the M7, it's a lot more specific.

Anyone else thing the characterization needs improving with the stories?

>>30206767
How so?

>>30206772
I don't really know how. That's why I asked, to try and get people's opinion on it and get some idea.

With YFN's latest update, I couldn't find much wrong with it, not including grammar.
I think Dash may be a bit ooc, but 'm not really sure.

>>30206831
So far I think she is being done well enough, I cant think of anyone that is done ooc, or even needing characterization improvements. We do good work around here. Are you sure you aren't just imagining things?

>>30206861
I don't know, maybe I'm being too nitpicky, or imagining as you said. What about the other writers though?

>>30207451
Gonna need to be more specific.

>>30198139
>They will never bully you for being in a public school.

>>30207480
Axii, well he's finished so i don't know. Who's updated recently? I can't remember

>>30207498
....are you a newfag fucking with me or something?

>>30207514
No, sorry if I sound like that. It's just I'm replying to you whilst cooking orders. I'm thinking of people like Fate, hitman anon, damynorb, EDM, etc.

>>30207535
Axii might have had issues in the early chapters but he improved already...did you not read anything here? Fate is busy doing collage stuff, Hitman will be considered dead by the end of the thread, Damynord posted last thread, EDM dropped by to say hi. Because seriously, you are either a newfag or a troll...or retarded. And stop talking here when your working, you bump when you are at work.

>>30207556
I'm trying to remember about the stories characterization, I have slippery memory.
Also I only have one ticket on so it's fine, it's a quiet day.

>>30207572
I am not sure what you mean by characterization at this point.
Reread the stories then.

>>30207588
I think I'm just confusing myself here. I'll change topic. How about the story progression.
We have YFN, where the sin things need to be killed, and with anon having his pin back, he may go all rage again and fuck things up. So far though the story is going smoothly, what do you think of the other stories though? How do you think they could be improved story wise?

>>30207625
YFN is the only one really posting on the regular, our other writefags are busy or dead, but so far I haven't had any problem with the direction the stories are going. I'll just wait and see what the writefags do with it. Otherwise grammatical fixes are the only things that come to mind.

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I can't tell if this is all samefagging now

>>30207676
I am just one dude replying to a maybe retard, or someone drunk when they are working.

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>>30207676
Kek, I thought I was the only one who thought that.

>>30203157
THIS

>>30203157
Fucking this

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>>30211051
>>30203157
>>30210473
Probable samefag, but whatever.
>Anon is the long lost descendent of the greatest pirate captain/assassin to ever live.
>Was given a hereditary superpower from some Piece of Eden that activated in Anon
>Becomes the White Raider
>When attacked by Abstergo, pic related.
>Gets picked up by assassins after getting away and is now staying in Canterlot to hide out.
Have fun.

>>30211168
Yarg

>>30211168
Sorry but that sounds shit.

>>30212342
Yeah, that's the idea. Its a joke.

>>30212343
Now that just sounds like damage control.

>I was only pretending to be retarded

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>>30213150

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>>30211168
Are you Axii? If no then your opinion doesn't matter.

>>30214604
Not trying to be that guy but I don't really think that was an opinion, so your comment is moot.

Bamp

>>30214604
...That was a dumb prompt, not a opinion. Are you stupid?

>>30194743
Pretty sure I finished it, bud.

>>30216388
Read more>>30194789

>>30198139
Poat more Sour Sweet, you nigger.

>>30217338
When its time to bump and you spell post* correctly.

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>>30199647
>>30207493
>Richfags snidely ask "hey anon, what's it like not having enough money to go to a private school?"
>Show them by sneaking into their schools bathroom and drawing shit swastikas and dicks all over the walls

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>>30217371
*incorrectly

>>30217403
Kek

>>30203157
This might Be good but really should axii really just being doing crossovers? What about like small one shots/specials from the Original?

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>>30217633

>Need to sleep
>New green
DAMMIT

>>30217633
The jump from perspectives is jarring, keep it clean by having whoever starts the POV be black text when speaking, the split it to show your shifting perspective.

>>30217648
this>>30217652
You start off with the people talking so far away there is no reason not do it.

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What if anon never spoke because he was a mute and the only reason he was always alone is because every time he attempted to write down that he couldn't speak the overly friendly students tried to keep him from "burying his head in his books"

>>30217666
The devil has a good idea. Would he become friends with Vinyl and Octi?

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>>30217650
>>30217652
>>30217658

>Canterlot High, 2:43 P.M.
>http://picosong.com/MiXR/
”Hey girls, have you ever wondered why the new kid is always alone?” Rainbow Dash asks.
>The girls look at the quiet teen peacefully reading what it looks to be a book on the soccer pitch’s bleachers that are on the opposite side of the bleachers Rainbow and her friends usually hang out at.
>”Err, I dunno. He doesn’t talk much.” Pinkie Pie replies, “he usually goes home once classes end for the day.”
>”Come to think of it…I think he’s in my history class. He never utters a word unless the teacher asks him a question.” Rarity says.
>”And he always eats lunch by himself on those bleachers, never in the cafeteria.” Fluttershy adds.
”Huh…” Rainbow Dash says while juggling a soccer ball with her thighs. “Weird.”
>”He doesn’t seem like a bad fella. Perhaps he’s just very shy.” Applejack says, “just like my brother.”
>”I always run into him on the hallways, and he always has his earbuds on,” Sunset Shimmer adds, “usually bobbing his head to the music.”
>Rainbow Dash grabs the ball in mid-air with both hands.
”Well, he looks like a totally chill guy. How long has he been in our school?”
>”About a month or so, I remembered how he introduced himself back in Ms. Harshwhinny class’. He was so nervous and stuttered a lot.” Rarity says with a smile, “he looked kind of cute.”
“What’s his name again?”
>”Anonymous,” Rarity replies, “or Anon for short.”

>You raise your head a bit and suddenly spot the most popular girls in this high school looking at you.
>Oh no!
>It looks like they’re gossiping about you.
>They start giggling.
>It always hurts…
>They are probably telling each other how much of a loser they think you are.
>You can’t talk to another person, especially a girl, without getting anxious.
>These five weeks have been an absolute nightmare for you.
>You wish you could go back to your old hometown.

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>>30217685

>At least some of the students of your former high school shared the same interests as you, and accepted your anxious nature.
>The few times you’ve tried to communicate with students over here they usually feel uncomfortable by your presence and speech.
>That’s it, you’re getting out of here.
>You pack up your things and leave the bleachers.
>”Aww…he’s leaving already?” Pinkie Pie says, “I wonder what’s wrong with him, he looked real sad once he saw us.”
>Rainbow Dash ponders a thought for a second, and then snaps her fingers.
>”I got it!” She says as she kicks the ball hard enough to travel from her location to yours.
>”HEY!” Rainbow Dash yells at you.
>Oh no, what does she want?
>”Would you mind passing me the ball?” She yells.
>The ball landed a few feet away from you.
“Umm…okay.”
>You walk to the ball and kick it real hard.
>The ball flies back to Rainbow Dash real quick...
>”WHOA!” Rainbow Dash says before dodging the ball, fearing it would hit her.
>Sadly, the ball hits Fluttershy in the face instead.
>”EEEP!”
“Oh fuck…”
>Her friends freak out.
>”Fluttershy? Fluttershy! Are you okay?” Rarity asks.
>Fluttershy tries to hold back her tears, but fails in the end, sobbing in quite a disheartening way.
>Oh God, you’ve done it again you imbecile…you’ve ruined yet another simple request.
>”What’s your problem Anon?!” Rainbow Dash angrily yells at you.
“I-I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to kick the ball that hard!” You yell back.
>You really want to get out of here, but your conscience tells you to go check on Fluttershy and apologize.

>>30217685
Nice work mate, continue as you were, I want to see where this goes.

>>30217687
Poor Flutterbutter. She needs a hug.

>>30217670
Vinyl, assuming she's a mute, would probably catch on to his behaviour and much to anons relief attempt to communicate with sign language, making her the first person he can actually communicate with in Canterlot High.

However, the students, being from a backwater hick town, just figured they were doing some kind of secret handshake so they try to "get through" to anon that way, unintentionally saying shit like "I like to shave the balls of goats"

>>30217709
I wonder how many people learning sign language accidentally say weird fetishes.

>Lunch time comes

>Students pour into the cafeteria to eat the shitty food you hate a lot.

>You are Anon and your head hurts a lot.

>Every single facial expression you did or word you uttered was met with a sharp pain ringing throughout your head.

>Sunset held the sleeve of your jacket as she dragged you towards her table.

>Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie sat at the table.

>"Hey girls wheres Applejack and Rarity?"

>Pinkie Pie pointed toward a table across the cafeteria where Rarity and Applejack sat with their family.

>Sunset tugs on your sleeve as she makes you take a seat next to her.

>Pulling out a sheet of paper she reads through the contents.

>"Alright Anon first thing on the list. Get you some friends."

"But I already have friends."

>"We don't count

>Ouch

>She pointed to the table where Rarity and AJ sat at.

>"Go apologize to Rarity and Applejack."

"Why do I need to apologize?"

>"BECAUSE It's on your list."
>She slides forward a paper towards you.
>You pick it up before reading the contents.

"I'm not gonna volunteer at the animal shelter, scratch off the get a job I got my own steady source of income."

>"Like what? Leeching off your parents?"

>You glance towards Sunset a smirk painted on her face.

"It's not called leeching. It's called squatting."

>"Isn't that when you live in a house without paying rent?"
>Rainbow asks

>"You apologize right now and you will have the rest of the day free to yourself."

>Apologize to Rarity and AJ and get the rest of the day off?
>Sold.
>Sighing you get up and start trudging towards them.
>They both glance up at you with frowns.
"Hey, I'm very very sorry about the way I've been treating you two and am asking if we can start over?"
>"No"
>Seriously? You didn't even hesitate you albino fuck.
>"What's in it fer me huh?"
>Applejack leans forward and stares into your eyes.
"Are you trying to bribe me?"
>"Maybe"

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>>30217713
I don't know but I never realized how hilarious sign language was before.

>>30217733

>"If you are going to do a favor for Applejack you might as well do one for me also"
"Who said anything about favors?"
>"I dunno Anon but unless you want me and Rares to fergive you, you must be willing to get dirty."
"Dirty as in?"
>Applejack and Rarity don't respond, only smirk.

>>30217740
Dis gon be gud, also nice to see you back again. >>30217733
It was spread out a bit too much. But whatever.

>>30217748

Yeah sorry about my absence I just didn't know where I was going to take the story because I'm trying to avoid making it edgy.

>>30217764
Fair enough, picking up edgy stupid Anon couldn't be easy. If your still posting next thread I will throw you on the alive list again.

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>>30217687

>https://youtu.be/qK6jbwgayoM
“Oh my goodness, I’m so sorry.” You uncomfortably say, “a-are you okay? I didn’t mean to hurt you!”
>”What on Earth was that Anon?!” Rainbow Dash yells, “why did you kick the ball that hard?! What’s wrong with you?”
“I-I’m so sorry Rainbow Dash! I-I wasn’t thinking straight, I just…kicked the ball and-”
>”And look at what you did you psycho! Letting out your frustrations like that isn’t ”
>”It’s okay Rainbow Dash…” Fluttershy says in that sweet and compassionate voice of hers. ”He didn’t mean to do that, it was just an accident. Right Anon?”
>Wow, Fluttershy doesn’t look mad at you.
“Of course it was an accident! I’m so sorry…”
>Fluttershy wipes away some tears with her fingers, while Rarity pulls a handkerchief out of her purse to wipe away the dirt on her face.
>”Don’t worry about it Anon.”
>”Lucky you Anon.” Rainbow Dash sighs, “Anyways…do you mind explaining us what made you kick the ball like that?”
>You let out an awkward chuckle.
“Well I…uh, I guess I went back to my days as a soccer player.”
>”Wait what? You played soccer?” Rainbow Dash asks.
“Yeah, when I was eight years old; just for a brief time period though,” you say, “my teammates used to call me crooked legs.”
>Rainbow Dash stifles a chuckle.
>”Oh yeah? Why’s that?”
”Because whenever I had the ball and wanted to pass it to my teammates the ball always landed at our rival’s feet. I uh…kind of made my team lost several times.”

>>30217815
>kind of made my team lost
lose.
>do you mind explaining us what
to* us
Also Flutters best girl.

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>>30217815

>”Really now?”
“Yeah, although I was good at doing other things like dribbling the ball, shooting and running very fast.”
>”Well then…show me.”
“Show you what?”
>”How good you really were obviously.”
>Rainbow Dash smirks and places the ball on the grass.
>”You and I, whoever scores five goals first wins.”
“But I already told you I made my team lose several times.”
>”Yeah, but we’re gonna play one against one, you won’t need to pass the ball.”
>Aww, what did you get yourself into?
>It’d be real embarrassing to lose against her.
>”Our game will serve me as warm up for my team’s next match coming up in three days.”
“Your team?”
>”You didn’t know sugarcube?” Applejack says, “Rainbow Dash is the captain of our school’s female soccer team…”
“Really? Huh.”
>”Yep! I sure hope you didn’t lose practice…because that shot was really fast!”
>”And painful…” Fluttershy adds.
>”I’ve never seen such velocity like that before, you probably have a hidden talent waiting to resurface. Come on, let’s play already! Or are you afraid to losing to a girl?”
“…Very well then.”

>>30217847
Ah yes, that reminds me. You are familiar with are OP list rules right? New writefags get added to the unknown section first before bing put in alive.

any stories where anon's an asshole, but one of the girls still wants to befriend him to change him, but the other 5 dont respect that decision and try to tell her he'll always be an asshole?

or how about one where all 6 take turns trying to ask him out, but he's self-loathing and believes he doesnt deserve companionship so he refuses them all. The more the girls try to change his mind, the more he lashes out .

>>30217852
Liquid Plasma?

>>30217852
More?

>>30218007
SciAnon.

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>>30218223
Sci anon will never come back

>>30218466
His story turned to shit anyway.

>>30217852
Are you not in Fingerbang anymore?

>>30218473
Almost forgot this as well

>>30217687
>>That’s it, you’re getting out of here.
>>You pack up your things and leave the bleachers.
>>”Aww…he’s leaving already?” Pinkie Pie says, “I wonder what’s wrong with him, he looked real sad once he saw us.”
>>Rainbow Dash ponders a thought for a second, and then snaps her fingers.
>>”I got it!” She says as she kicks the ball hard enough to travel from her location to yours.
>>”HEY!” Rainbow Dash yells at you.
>>Oh no, what does she want?

That doesn't make a lot of sense. We're in Anons perspective right? Yet we somehow know what the girls said,as if he was standing next to them. It just comes off a little odd.

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>>30192127
>”And that’s all the footage that I was able to capture of the perpetrators during the morning.”
>You sit there staring at the still image on screen
>Ninjas
>Twilight had a home invasion from fucking ninjas!
>”So they’re the reason why none of the alarms went off?”
>Ninja’s who know magic too!
>Isn’t there a rule or something against this?
>”I believe that to be the case; I asked vice Principal Luna about what to do and she said we could discuss it after school.”
>Oh wait, maybe it’s not magic but ninjitsu?
>You sigh as you lean back in your office chair
>”Hm, I guess that’s all we can do for now, we’ll just have to keep an eye out on the shadows.”
>You were never a fan of ninjas
>Too shifty…
>”Spike will keep an eye on Jordan while we’re at school, poor guy feels responsible about what’s happened.”
>Still, you can’t help but wonder why the hell magical ninjas would steal or even know about Twilight’s exo-suits
>”Hopefully he doesn’t blame himself too much; After all, who'd expect Canterlot had any magic ninjas in it!?”
>Not to mention how she has some sort of theory on who did this
>”Not that I know of, do you know anyone who could be Anon?”
>Has Twilight actually not been a weeb this whole time and actually may have ties to some secret underground ninja society?
>”Hang on, I think he’s day dreaming again.”
>She did say she got stipends from someon—
>Your thoughts are violently interrupted as you’re shaken by the shoulder
>”Hey, earth to Anon, are you paying attention?”
>Huh?
>Blinking you realize the other two are staring at you
“Yes.”
>Why would you say that mouth?
>Raising an eyebrow Dash’s eyes dart between you and Twilight
>”Yes you are, or yes you do?”

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>>30218593
>Uhh
“Both.”
>Dash’s face goes flat before she gives you what you think might be a look of slight disdain
>”So you know someone in town who could be a ninja?”
>Oh shit, do you?
>Maybe you can pull an answer out of your ass instead of looking like an idiot
>As she rolls her eyes you try your best to think as you scan the room for something to spur an idea
>Need to think about anyone who strikes you as a ninja who would know their ninja magi—
>WAIT A SECOND!
>It may not have been the same outfits but you DO know some people who may or may not be ninjas of some sort!
>You clap your hands together forcefully as you smile startling both the girls
“I actually do!”
>They both look at each other before Twilight gives you a curious glance
>”Dare ga, Anon-kun?”
>Nodding you point to the Super Sentai poster behind her on the wall
“The guys I met at the shipping yard on Sunday morning!”
>She cocks her head before widening her eyes and nodding
>”Hmm, the CPPP group I believe you called them?”
>Well Chrissy called them that, but semantics
>Stroking her chin she furrows her brow
>”You said that they all wore skin tight uniforms and used some sort of magic correct?”
>Well you said they wore sentai suits so, yea skin tight
>Not to mention the laser they fired at Chrissy when she was hurdling straight into you
>Nodding you point to the monitor still displaying the ninja guy sitting on the pale yellow ball of magic
“They don’t look exactly the same, but how many costumed magic users could there be in one city?”
>You realize how stupid what you just said was after the words leave your mouth
>Dash has the smuggest look plastered to her face
>”More than you think, but less than you hope; after all, it’s not like we just met one last night.”

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>>30218602
>Twilight sighs
>”Not to mention that we also encountered a group of costumed magic users last night.”
>Seriously?
>How many people get magic and just go, “I guess it’s time to be a superhero”?
>Not that you wouldn’t too if things were a bit less impending doom looming overhead with Nihilem, the SINs, and now the nightmare trifecta of Shadowfright Sombra and Chrissy
>At least you assume all of them are working together, but well you know what they say about playing the assumption game
>Dash does a double take while you think
>”Wait, did they cause that giant orb thing last night?”
>Giant orb thing?
>What the hell is she talking about?
>Twilight shakes her head in a somber manner
>”No, that was due to the use of my insurance policy.”
>Oh, she just used the little black box
>Wait, she EMP’d the shipping yard?
>SHE EMP’D THE SHIPPING YARD!?!
“Just what the hell happened over there!?”
>Shrugging she groans
>”Quite a bit, I’d love to regale you with the monogatari, but we all agreed to swap them all at once after school. We didn’t want to leave anyone out of the loop.”
>At least more than they already are?
>You guess that’s not a terrible idea
>Besides, you’d hate to have to repeat yourself ten times for everyone
>Not to mention that you don’t know what happened for a good 2/3rds of the time
>Though you’re not too happy about the 1/3 you do know
>A yawn escapes from within you betraying how tired you are as your mind wanders
>Dash glances in your direction before looking back to Twilight
>”Well, can you at least tell us about what happened to Jordan now?”
>Nodding Twilight pulls open a drawer in the desk revealing a bunch of old manila folders
>”Using the sources available to me I can only speculate about what happened.”

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>>30218607
>Pulling out one of the folders Twilight places it on the desk flopping it open
>”Spike was able to regain consciousness sometime around 3 o’clock in the afternoon yesterday.”
>She leans against the desk as you look at the dossier laid out before you
>It looks like the one from the slideshow two days ago
>Just getting a solid look at it gives you the impression of a black ops portfolio
>There’s enough redacted lines on that thing to make any conspiracy theorist start pulling their hair
>”Having gone to sleep the previous night before we left for our respective missions totals his sleep time to about 18 hours or so.”
>Some nap, not that you’re one to talk…
>Dash places a hand on her hip as she stands looking over the dossier with you
>”Doesn’t Spike have a problem sleeping for very long?”
>You look up from the aged document to Twilight
>”He does, since he was a pup he usually can only sleep for at most 6 hours at a time.”
>Well that doesn’t bode well if he slept for 3 times the amount he normally does
“Well, at least we know it’s probably a sleep spell of some kind.”
>Her face scrunches up slightly as she looks over the open folder
>”Therein lies the problem however.”
>What?
>Tapping the dossier she adjusts her glasses
>”I’m sure I don’t need to tell you, but Jordan’s physiology is vastly different to Spike’s.”
>Obviously, ones a dog and another is a magical bug thing from horselandia
>Shuffling through the dossier pages she grabs a sheet from the back
>”It wasn’t confirmed, but it was theorized that changelings can not only feed off of emotion, but the raw mana from spells as well.”
>Feed off the raw mana?
>”At least that was before I received the new information from a changeling who confirmed the hypothesis with an added note stating that it was more of a countermeasure for curses.”

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>>30218613
>Placing the sheet that she took from the back on top of the dossier Twilight continues
>”So operating on that new information, Jordan should be able to break down and digest the magic with no ill effects.”
>Her gaze drifts towards the stairs
>”However, that’s not what happened.”
>You furrow your brow as she seemingly dances around the issue instead of just flat out saying what happened
>You gently place your hands on her shoulders causing her to stiffen a bit
“Twilight, please just tell me what happened.”
>You may not be the little buggo’s dad or anything, but you’d be lying if you said it hadn’t grown on you
>Even if you tried not to grow attached, since you’re the one who took it from Chrissy you feel a tad bit responsible
>Doesn’t help that when it’s not shape-shifted into a hot girl that the little guy’s adorable
>Twilight gazes into your eyes for a moment before averting hers
>”I don’t know how to explain what happened Anon, but whatever it is I don’t know how to fix it.”
>That’s not helping!
>Dash pipes up from behind you
>”Alright, then just bring us to Jordan.”
>Yea, that’s a good idea!
>Why didn’t you just ask that?
>Twilight nods quietly before walking towards the stairs motioning to follow behind her
>The way that she looks like she walking to be hanged isn’t doing wonders for your optimism on the situation
>You look to Dash hoping she may offer up a bit of hope in this doom in gloom
>She however, seems just as worried as you before she starts to follow Twilight up the stairs
>You’re getting a really bad vibe from all this, and it is certainly not helping your morning out at all
>You heave a tired sigh as you start walking towards the stairs
>You really should’ve slept more

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>>30218619
>Managing to catch up with the other two on the second floor you stop behind them as Twilight stops at a closed door
>Turning around she frowns
>”You won’t be shocked by what you see right away, but with a few tiny details I will explain in a moment you may very well faint.”
>What?
>Dash and you share a look as Twilight opens the door
>Creaking like a door straight out of the Spencer estate it reveals darkness
>Twilight lets go of the handle before waving a hand into the darkness
>”I was informed that changelings like darker areas so I took the liberty of putting up black out curtains on the windows.”
>Is she sure it wasn’t to just freak you out?
>Because if so, bravo consider you freaked out a bit
>It’s not dark enough that you can’t see, but it’s dark enough to at least obscure everything inside
>Wait
>On the middle of the floor looks like someone is huddled over
>You wait for a moment for something to happen only to stand there in silence
>Twilight looks at both you and Dash who’s still standing next to you
>”Are you going to check on Jordan now or…”
>You were waiting for Twilight to elaborate on that tiny detail thing before you went in
>You gulp audibly as Dash nods for you to go in
“Can I turn a light on first?”
>As your voice travels into the darkness the figure on the floor looks up to you as some rather mood appropriate lighting illuminates their face
>It’s Sunse-Jordan!
>While at first looking a bit, sad(?) its face lightens up upon making eye contact with you both literally and metaphorically
>Twilight moves to the side smiling sheepishly after fiddling with a switch
>”I installed gentle lighting for this room as it was supposed to be a calming space for meditation.”
>Really Twi?

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>>30218626
>Standing up slowly Jordan’s eye seem to stare into your soul
>Discounting the weird mood lighting courtesy of Twilight you feel like something’s off about Jordan
>You can’t quite place it
>You feel an elbow nudge your side
>You turn to Dash who’s cautiously staring at Jordan
>”I think Jordan wants to say hello.”
>What?
>Turning back Jordan stands in the dim illumination with its arms out as if waiting for an embrace
>Well, you’re not one to tell the little cuddle bug no…
>You feel oddly on edge as you walk towards the little guy
>Had Twilight not said that something was wrong you don’t know if you’d had picked up on anything, but now
>Now you can’t help feel like something tiny, minuscule even, is wrong
>As you pass the threshold Jordan begins to slowly pace towards you
>Your heart begins to beat harder as you walk towards what you’re pretty sure is just going to be the normal hug
>Yet still your mind races
>What’s wrong here!?
>What’s the thing that Twilight noticed?!
>It can’t be that bad if she’s just letting you go in and hug it but still
>You’re just a bit worr—
>Your thoughts halt as you feel arms squeezing your torso tightly
>You almost flex in response, but are able to fight back the reflex before you do
>You weren’t paying attention again!
>You really need to fix that
>A soft hum vibrates through your chest as Jordan snuggles your neck
>You stare at the top of Sun-Jordan’s head for a while with the only sounds audible being its content purr
>Walking into the room Dash is the first to break the silence
>”I don’t see what’s wrong here Twilight.”
>You don’t either
>Jordan seems as affectionate as ever
>Though you will say you appreciate Twilight putting clothes on for the bug this time

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>>30218629
>Twilight stands to the side observing the rest of you curiously
>”Do you two not see it?”
>See it?
“See what exactly?”
>Dash squats down looking at Jordan’s legs
>”That Sunset really needs to build some muscles on her legs?”
>Whoa, hold on a sec
“Hey now, I think her legs are great!”
>Dash grins smugly at you from the floor as you realize what words just left your lips, again
>”I’m going to chalk that up to you being tired and give you your freebie for the day.”
>A wistful smile spreads on your lips as you gladly take the free pass Dash metaphorically hands you
>You really need to get more coffee or something
>Twilight stands next to Dash who's staring at Jordan’s back
>”Do both of you really not see anything?”
>You shrug as best you can in Jordan’s almost vice-like grip
“I’m really not noticing anything.”
>Dash shakes her head in agreement
>Twilight points at your chin
>”Don’t you think it’s odd that suddenly you have to turn your head to the side when Jordan hugs you?”
>What, wait
>Oh yea, you’re way taller than Sunset aren’t you?
>Twilight points at your chest
>”Don’t you feel that Jordan’s bust is 1, maybe 2 cups sizes bigger than Sunsets?”
>Uh, huh?
“How the hell would I know that?”
>Dash only grins at you as Twilight holds her chin in her hand
>”What I’m saying is that Jordan is bigger than Sunset.”
>Huh, you guess you can tell from the height
“But what’s so odd about that, maybe Jordan messed up in changing because of the spell put on it or something.”
>Twilight shakes her head
>”I’d agree with you if not for this.”
>Pulling the shirt down and exposing Jordan’s shoulder reveals an odd sun tattoo you swear you’ve seen before
>”Our Sunset isn’t this big, nor does she have a tattoo.”
>Wait but…
>Twilight makes eye contact with you as Dash stares wide eyed
>”Which can mean only one thing, this isn’t our Sunset.”
.
.
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Sorry, had to scrap update at last second. Next one in 3 days before 10:30 4 real this time!

>>30218636
>Sunny has been captured.
Oh lord how many fucking times is sunset gonna get captured in this thread.
It's gonna be every story isn't it?

>>30218636
Now I'm confused because it wasn't really their Sunser anyway, Jordan just took the image.

>>30218636
Holy shit it's the human worlds Sunset.

>>30218773
Probably.

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>>30218223
why recommend a dead author with little chapters, cocksucker

>>30220450
Cause it's funny to make them feel bad when they realize it.

>Anon is a loser, but not a complete loser
>Despite the odds, you do actually have a few friend in Canterlot High, but they're more just acquaintances you just eat your lunch with so you don't look like a friendless loser
>You don't even really like any of these guys
>But the main 6 see you hanging out with someone every lunch, so you completely escape their notice
>None of them ever walks up to you and tries to involve you in their group
>As far as their concerned you're fine
>But really, you're not
>Oh god Sperg Lord is talking about his mother bathing him again

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>>30218636
NANI!?

>>30220584
Meh, has some promise, who would he hang around with. And would he meet up with them at collage?

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>>30220584
>Sperg Lord

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>>30221259
The human version of this pone would probably be one of them

Haven't been to these threads for awhile, and I need help finding a story. I would look through the OP but I'm at work so don't really have time.

I think it was something like Anon was a mechanic but when the girls went to befriend him, he was sort of hostile to them and being a general asshole. Any ideas? I'm really trying to think of it, but I'll get back if I remember bits.
Back soon, thanks

>>30221522
Damynorb's green.
The pastebin is in the OP

>>30221591
Much appreciated, thank you dude.

>>30221591
Could someone give me a little intel on this story? I want to see what I'm getting into.

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>>30221997

>>30222085
X

>>30222085
X

>>30221997
Anons a technomancer, shit happens, fighting robots, mafia shit or something Filthy Rich and possible lewd rara bike rides

Long shot here but wasn't there a story where anon was a Spetsnaz agent sent by the Russian government to investigate the magical fuckery in Canterlot High and ended up blowing up Sunset Shimmers house?

>>30222129
.....no, that wasn't our thread. You have mistaken us for somewhere else.

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>>30222129
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2pwh2mBDpTw
Spetsnaz?

>>30222132
This, haven't seen that round here.

>>30222188
Call me gay or whatever but I really liked that game, first one was better though.

>>30222132
>>30222188
Probably, it's a vague distant memory, the only part I remember with any clarity is Sunset Shimmers mom opening the door after anon launched an underbarrel grenade into the slumber party, and then shot another over her shoulder making the whole house collapse.

>>30222260
We don't really have a sleepover story, so it was probably from the old sleepover threads. Sorry for wasting your time m8.

>>30222286
Meh, worth a try. Truth is I haven't been on /mlp/ for over a year now.

>>30222300
Yeah, we have been here awhile, but that thread died some time ago. Think it was like 6 months.

>>30217852
More when?

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>>30218466
Don't remind me.

>>30216898
I'm reactionary.

>>30217852
what is your pastebin?

>>30217852
>>30225637
this

Page 9

>>30226707

>>30222129
If you find it, please post the link here. Sounds interesting desu.

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>>30218636
THICKENS

Page 9

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>>30218636
THE PLOT

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>>30191991
So has there ever been a story where anon actually turned out to be a full on Columbine wannabe planning out the high score instead of the sadly misunderstood loner or sperg with a heart of gold?

>>30230388
N-no.....well, kinda?
Sea Urchin's is kind of like that.

>>30217687
R.I.P the Flutters

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>>30230402
It would make for a great non-lewd joke story though, it takes place from Sunset Shimmer or whoever point of view and Anon is portrayed as he usually is as a quiet and kinda spergy loser he always is which the main 6 try to get close to, as they spend more time with him they find a few excentricities but ultimately see that's he's a pretty decent guy.

And then he shows up to school with a big goofy smile, a boom box blaring out Pumped Up Kicks, and a Colt SP1 prompting Sunset to have a "well, we fucked up" moment

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>>30230492
I would read it desu

>>30203157
Requesting

>>30230492
Can they talk him down? Also, doesn't Sunset have mind reading powers?

>>30231931
I mean they probably could if anons motivation for shooting shit up was something edgy like how shit the world is and not just going for the high score.
>"Anon, please, we're your friends, you don't have to do this..."
"You don't understand Sunset! This world is a disease, and I am the vaccination! It's up to me to end the sickness"
>"Anon... You don't really believe that, just in these few short weeks look at all the progress you've made, we're your friends, a lot of the school is your friends. Haven't we shown you that your ideas about what this school was like weren't true?"
"I... I... Oh god what am I doing, I-I'm so sorry, I didn't know there was another way."
>"It's okay anon, it's alright, no ones been hurt yet. But anon, I'm going to have to ask you to put down the weapon because there's a cop aiming a gun at the back of your head"
>Anon turns around too see a glock 22 inches from his face
"Oh, hi officer, look, I knew I was about to kill dozens of teenagers but it's okay because I said I'm sorry and discovered the magic of friends"
>The cop pistol whips anon

>>30230622
Seconding

I'm going to bed now, don't let the thread die.

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I've updated the pastebin, since I forgot to do it.
Also, with perspective changes, would you like me to do something to show it's changed?
...
>something like that?
I know it's a stupid question, but I wouldn't want to confuse anyone.

>>30234584
Don't worry anon, we'll keep it up.

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>>30230388
>>30230492
I'm not much of a writefag but I could give it a shot, I do have the basic outline of a story in my head for it.

Though I do have kinda this autistic thing where I refuse to post any part of a greentext unless the whole thing has been finished and proofread so it's probably take me a few days before I'd have it ready.

>>30231096
"Hey girls, ever wonder why Anon is so alone?"
>You blurt out without thinking much.
>The cafeteria lunch table of your six immediate friends look at you conspicuously.
>Rainbow Dash pipes up.
>"Sunset, if you haven't noticed, he's a bit of a weirdo."
>The others look cautious at that remark, as if to say more but fearing retaliation.
"What's so weird about him. He seems pretty normal to me."
>"Have you seen the way he gets to class?"
"No, but I hardly see that as a reason to be shunned by everyone else."
>You stand up from your chair.
"As a new friendship ambassador, I hereby declare it my duty to befriend Anon!"
>Twilight gives you a reassuring nod.

>Be Incogio Anonymore.
>Master assassin, heir to one of the greatest family bonds in the world, keeper of secrets best kept hidden... or encrypted. Whatever.
>You hear her footsteps toward you long before she says,
>"Hi!"
"Saluti, futura ostaggio."
>"Excuse me?"
>You spin up from your chair, knocking it over.
"I need no introduction, and neither do you, Sunset Shimmer."
>Your cloak billows from your motions.
>"Uh, nice to meet you too."
"My apologies, for this meeting must be cut short. Arrivederci!"
>You leap up onto the table and gracefully jump onto the railing with a white cloth draped over it.
>She mustn't become too familiar with your face, lest she requiescat in pace.

>>30207556
>>30207535
I haven't been here in a while; which story has hitman anon in it? Sounds interesting.

>>30235343
>Okay, you did think that was a little weird.
>Maybe he's only like that because he just needs a friend!
>This renews your determination and you set out to find him again-
>Only for the bell to ring, indicating the next class.
You guess that's why he had to leave so soon.

>The world is but a dark blue matrix to you, as you sit perched up on the edge of Wing A's roof.
>Looking around you eventually find what you're looking for: a box-like blinding white object!
>You kick off from the roof and do a 180 in the air, landing on your back into the box.
>"Hey, what are ya doing in the donation laundry?"
>No time to make more acquaintances, you don a random piece of discarded clothing and do what you do best, hide in plain sight.
>Casually walking by the scrawny kid pulling the cart of clothes, you give him a cursory nod and head toward your next target: class 23A.
>"Whatever."

I'm not continuing this due to succumbing to autism.

>>30230492
>Pumped Up Kicks
>not playing "God's Gonna Cut You Down"
Have some taste anon, don't just meme it up all the time.

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>>30235296
God speed m80

>>30235343
>ostaggio
>don't speak pizza
>google it
>kek

>>30235384
Cookiesfh's green. It's in the OP

>>30235156

>What's that banging?
>It's too early for that shit.
>Grabbing your pillow, you squash it over your head in a futile attempt to mask the noise.
>Thankfully, it stops.
>Now you can sleep in peace.
>Rolling over, you get comfy once more and try to drift off.
>*Briiing*
>This is taking the piss now.
>Through hazy eyes, you sit up and grab your phone.
>You swipe without looking and bring it to your ear.
"Mhmello?" You answer groggily.
>"Hello? Anon it's Twilight, I'm outside."
>Words probably can't describe how irritated you are now.
>Didn't you say you would pick her up at ten?
>Goddamn you're not ready for this shit.
"What the fuck are you doing outside?" I said I would pick you up at ten."
>"Um, it's eleven thirty."
>Wait what?
>Binking a few times, you pull the phone away from your ear and check the time.
>It's eleven fucking thirty.
"Hang on," You reply before ending the call.
>You chuck your phone onto the bed and slowly roll off the bed and on your feet, unwrapping the quilt from your body as you do.
>With achy muscles you stumble out and down the stairs.
>Going to the door, you just about type in the security password and unlock the door.
Twilight steps through, smiling and gazing around.
>"Oh,um hello Anon, sorry I woke you up," She says sheepishly as she gazes at you.
>You are naked, save for your boxers.
"Nah nah, it's no problem at all," You reply sarcastically.
>"Sorry," She fiddles with her hair. "it's just you said-"
"Yeah I know what I said, jeez." You snarkily reply.
>It really is too early for this shit.
>Sighing, you go to the kitchen and pop the kettle on.
>You grab a mug and a teabag, and place it down.
"You want a cup of tea Twiggle?"
>She looks at you, with a hint of a frown and adjusts her glasses.
>"No thank you Anon, I've had coffee already."

>>30236188

"Suit yourself," you mutter as you close the cupboard door.
>Waiting for the kettle, you go to the lounge, bringing Twilight with you.
>You really should have cleaned up.
>You step through the minefield of random bolts and screws, and the odd little pieces of who knows what.
>"Here," you gesture to the sofa, "Get comfy, turn the telly on whatever; Just let me wake up a bit."
>The kettle pops, bringing you to the kitchen.
>You pour the water and wait, grabbing the milk while you do.
>A few minutes later you take the bag out and put in the sugar and milk.
>Lovely start to the day.
>Taking a quick sip, you set it down and go upstairs.
>Shit? Nah.
>Fuck the shower, you can get one later.
>Nipping into the bathroom, brush your teeth and take a piss, then get changed.
>Jeans or work pants?
>Fuck it, work pants it is.
>Slipping your trousers on, you grab a t-shirt from the draw and throw it on.
>A touch of deoderant and you're ready to go.
>Grabbing your phone, you head out and bounce down the stairs.
>Heading for the kitchen, you grab your tea and walk back to the lounge.
>You cock your head slightly to the faint sound of tapping.
>She's messing with your stuff isn't she?
>She really cant help herself.
>Carefully and quietly, you slip into the lounge and take a few steps toward Twilight.
>Of course she's messing with your little dance bots.
>Eh, they're not that important; As long as she doesn't mess with anything else, you'll be fine.
>You take another sip as you wait for the right moment.
"Oi!"
>"GAH!", Twilight gasps as she practically jumps to the other side of the sofa.
"Hahaha!" You laugh heartily, "The look on your face, priceless!"
>You chuckle some more and drink your tea as Twilight recovers.
>"Why would you do that?"
"You were messing with my toys, just be glad I didn't have my spooky mask on."

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>"Spooky mask...?"
"Meh, not important. You ready to go?"
>"Ready if you are Anon." She replies.
>Downing the last of your tea, you put the cup in the sink and grab some munch.
>Monster and a mars bar, sorted.
>You grab all your car keys and go to the garage.
>Popping the Chevy trunk, you grab the tools in there and put them on the floor.
>With that done, you close and lock the boot, and open the Mustang boot.
>Grab your toolbox and pop it in.
>And that's pretty much all you can fit in it.
>Grabbing your Snap-on set, you open the back door, and chuck it into the seat.
>Closing all the doors, you go back inside as Twilight idly stands there.
>You'd rather not have her interferring and buggering something up.
>You don't know what, but you'd rather not take the risk.
>You check the back door is locked, then head for the front.
>Happy with everything, you head back to the garage with Twilight in tow.
>A thought comes to your head as you open the car door.
"Hey Twilight, have you got your crystal gem necklace thing that gives you magic powers?"
>She looks down, feeling her neck.
>"No I left it at home. Why do you ask?"
"You both hop in the car and strap in.
"You get telekinesis or something don't you? I'm thinking it'll come in handy and make things a bit easier.
>"Well we could go back and get it if you want?"
"Might as well," you reply as you start the car up.
>You open the garage door and slowly pull out.
>Off to Twilight's it is.

I know it's small, I try my best.
Next update will be whenever, don't know yet.

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>>30236208
Thanks for the update fag.

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>>30235296
So I got the story written out but it's getting late, gonna proofread and edit after work and try to get it posted then.

Out of curiosity, what is the etiquette around here when it comes to long pre-written stories, do you dump it all at once (it'd be about 28 posts in total), dump sections of it once a day, post one part every ten minutes or so, or just put it all in a pastebin and just post the link?

I don't want to be rude and absolutely flood the thread with the story if that's considered in bad taste

Sperg here. Just know I'm planning on posting next thread. For now I'll lurk.

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>>30237650
>dump sections of it once a day
Best option imo

>>30237793
Neat

Bamp

>>30237650
If you got it all now, then dump sections of it once a day, that way you don't blow your load all at once.
>>30236208
Good work damy

>>30236208
>"You both hop in the car and strap in.
What? Is Anon saying what there doing out loud?

>>30238658
"Your thoughts start to drift while you drive."
>"Uh, Anon?"
"You really didn't like how Twilight touched your dancing robots now that you think about it."
>"Are you monologuing your thoughts?"
"It's your personal property, why does she think she has a right to touch it?"
>Twilight embraces the fact that she is not the only one who does this.

>>30238834
>Anon and Twi bond over their weirdness
>Start doing monologues together at lunch.
sounds comfy.

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>>30238933
>"It was another day going through the monotonous everyday slog that had become your life when you spot your good friend sitting alone in the library during lunch. Deciding to remedy his dilemma you take the seat next to him."
"While drowning your sadness from forgetting lunch in the pages of a story you're suddenly aware of your smartest friend's presence as her wooden chair creaked in the silence of the library."
>"Smiling slightly you pretend not to notice your best friend's happiness clear on his face as the two of you enjoy each others company."
"You sit in the now comforting embrace of the quiet library as you feel a warmth in your heart that always roars when you're near the beautiful purple book worm."
>"Your cheeks begin to redden as you can't help notice the gaze of your green Casanova linger on you between the turning of pages."
"Your mind wanders as you begin to wonder if the smartest girl in school has her eyes on you like you do for her."
>"Your thoughts race as you wonder if the mean green book reading machine across from you may want more than just books."
"Perhaps the last few months were more than her just taking pity on you."
>"Your heart begins to beat faster as you consider how real of a possiblity it could be."
"Maybe if you could just tell her somehow just how much she madde your heart thro—"
*SLAM*
>"For the love of god, you two do this EVERY DAY! JUST GO OUT ALREADY!"
>You blush as the two of you look away from Miss Cheerliee's outburst

>>30237650
I would just dump pieces everyday my dude

>>30236208
>Telekinesis around the workplace
Ohboyherewego.jpg

>>30218636
So I'm going to have to push it back a day once more
Sorry in advance
Hopefully I can make it just a tinge longer of an update though, till then!

>>30239023
Kek, based YFN brings life to the lifeless, and a cute weeb girlfriend in the library.
Its cool boyoh, see you soon.

>>30239062
>brings life to the lifeless
???

>>30239210
Anon and Twi are lifeless weebs, unless near each other, and Twi's friends respectively.
Ergo, life to the lifeless. Don't really know where to go past that.

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>>30237861
>>30238601
>>30239023
Pieces everyday it is, I'll try to keep the number of posts manageable to like four at most if I can help it but might have to do something like six posts a day just to end on a good point.

Gonna go to work soon, expect the first dump around 9-10pm EST

>>30239344
Neat, don't forget a bin and a name before you do it. You can be added to the OP.

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>>30238658
No, must have put the quotation in by accident. It's fixed now.

>>30238834
>>30238933
>>30239023
kek

>>30239680
Nice

>>30239680
We refbot soon?

>>30238330

Bamp

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>>30238834
>>30238933
>>30239023
HNNGGG

>>30242889
Yeah.

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Sorry it took longer than estimated, I had some other things to take care of and some computer problems.

Anyway, here's the first part of the anon school shooter story, glad I went with the "few posts every day" route since there's quite a bit I want to revise and this gives me plenty of time.

>"...And that's why I lost the race, I mean, I totally would have won it otherwise"
"Sure Rainbow" you said, rolling your eyes
>The lunch period was a pretty normal one, though thanks to the cold and snow you tended to spend more time in the cafeteria than outside
>The girls were chatting it up as always, but you found yourself focusing on something else
>Until you felt a nudge on your arm and turned to face Rainbow Dash
>"Yo Sunset, what you staring at?"
"Him" you say, pointing towards the corner of the cafeteria
>Sitting there almost completely alone was the new student, Anonymous, at least you thought that was his name
>You couldn't help but notice him, he was a bit odd
>Just showed up one day, taking the only empty table in the place
>If you saw him in the hallways he had his head down and walked just a little too fast
>If you ever saw him on the way out of school he nearly ran away, almost slipping on the ice a few times
>And always wearing that same, or at least a very similar, back suit with red tie and a large black coat over it, even indoors
>"What, you got a crush on him or something?" Rainbow teased
"No, it's just... I've never seen him talk to anyone"
>"Well he is new"
"He's been here for three weeks at least, you'd normally be hanging out with someone by then."
>"Maybe he's just shy" chimed in Applejack
"Maybe..."
>But still, you couldn't help but stare at him
>He never spoke unless a teacher called on him, you never saw him hang around anyone after school
>It's probably not your place, but you were worried about him, there just seemed to be something wrong

>>30243602
"I'm gonna go ask him if he wants to hang out"
>"Wait, what?" Rainbow began to protest, "why?"
"Why not?"
>"Well, I mean, he's weird"
>The other girls glared down Rainbow for saying it, but ultimately couldn't really bring themselves to say anything either
>Well, except other concerns
>"Fella is a might odd, I mean, who wears a suit to school?"
>"There is nothing wrong with wearing a suit anywhere, though I will say that coat is just gaudy."
>"Who cares what he's wearing? I don't think I've ever seen him smile once, and in math classes whenever I make a joke he's the only one not laughing."
"Girls, please. I know he might seem a bit strange, but you have to give him a chance. I mean, you all remember what I was like when I first came here, right?"
>To that the girls had nothing else to say, a few looking ashamed of judging him so quickly
>All except Rainbow Dash, you could tell there was something irking her about him
>She was Rainbow Dash though, so there's that
>Regardless, you would go talk to this strange loner
>You got up from your seat and made your way toward the corner of the cafeteria
>As you did, something began to bug you about anon
>He sat there, headmuffs on and ignoring the world around him as he ate his sandwich
>By all accounts nothing seemed out of place for just some lonely guy
>But as you got closer you began to realize that he seemed... Angry
>His face fixed into a scowl as he doodled in his binder, taking another bite out of his sandwich
>What did he have to be angry about? As far as you knew no one talked to him all day, he shouldn't look happy granted but he had no real reason to be angry
>Maybe something before school happened that bugged him
>Whatever it was, you ignored it and walked up to his table
>He didn't notice you for a few moments, but eventually you managed to catch his attention
>He looked up at you surprised; and quickly, a little too quickly, closed his binder and threw off his headphones

>>30243612
"Hi, your names Anon, right?"
>"Uh, yeah... Do you need something?" He asked, looking completely confused by the situation
"Not really, I was just wondering if you wanted to join me and my friends for lunch?"
>He didn't say a word
>Instead, his eyes began to dart around, confused
>Yet there was something else about the way he scanned the cafereria
>It's like he was looking for something specific
>When he failed to find it, his attention returned to you
>"Why?"
"No reason really, we just saw you looked a little bored and figured you might want to hang out"
>It was the honest truth, but Anon's brows furrowed as he stared at you, running your words through his head like you just told him the sky was green
"I mean, just if you wanted to" you quickly added, trying to put whatever doubts he may have at rest
>After a few more seconds of staring his mouth opened again
>"Sure, why not."
>It didn't sound very convincing, there was scepticism and caution in his voice, and his eyes kept darting about looking for that something
>What was he worried about ?...
>Wait, could it be that he thought you were trying to prank him?
>At that thought you felt a bit of pity for this guy
>He couldn't accept an offer of friendship as legitimate
>Maybe he had some bad times at his old school or something
>All the same he quickly gathered some of his things and began to follow you back to the table

>>30243622
>"So where about ya from?" Applejack asked Anon
>"Most recently we came from Oregon, but my dad has to move around a lot so I'm not really from anywhere"
>It started off a bit bumpy of course, Anon was initially wary when you'd gotten to the table
>The girls tried asking him a few things at first but the answers they'd received were usually just half hearted yes or no's
>Eventually everyone shifted their focus from Anon and just talked about everyday stuff, but still tried to involve him
>And after a few minutes Anon had relaxed and became more open to talking, the idea that you and your friends were setting him up for some kind of prank now seemingly absent
>"What's your pa do?"
>"He's a construction contractor"
>"Hey, my brother did some carpentry over the summer, made a whole heap of cash"
>"Yeah, it's good work but pretty exhausting, not uncommon for him to come home in a bad mood."
>The air around the table got just a little thicker when he mentioned that, none of the girls could really find a decent response
>He tried to change to topic once he realized everyone was just staring at him
>"S-so, you guys got any plans after school?"
>The other girls quickly latched onto the question, happy to avoid the topic of Anon's home life
>"Yeah, all of us were gonna head on down to Sugarcube Corner" Pinkie quickly answered.
>"The cakes make the best strawberry tarts, coffee's pretty good too. You should come!"
>Anon nearly jolted at the suggestion of going to Sugarcube Corner
>Or maybe just the suggestion of going anywhere after school
>"Oh, n-no, I have things I gotta do tonight, maybe some other time"
"Sure dude, but if you ever wanna tag along feel free."
>"Okay, thanks."
>For the first time since you'd met you saw a smile cross Anon's face

That's all for now, gonna get to work revising and editing the rest of it. I don't writefag a whole lot so it may not be very good but I'm trying dammit.

https://pastebin.com/88DRSicq

>>30243602
>back suit with red tie
black*

>>30243651
Sweet. Will add your bin to the list. And the name as well. Where did you writefag at before coming here?

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>>30243810
Of course I'd miss some shit

In my defense I was trying to rush this one out fast

>>30243844
Hey its cool man, its the only one there. The rest is perfect. Who are you? We don't get accomplished writefags that drop by and say hi that often, we usually get first timers here.

>>30243842
Wrote a few quick fics for /dzg/ and later wrote a Vietnam fic for /tlhg/ (Loud House General), you can check them out if you want but the dazzling ones aren't very good.

>>30243861
No one really, like I said, just a few joke fics here and there. Went by Dazzlinganon in /dzg/ and Nam Anon on /tlhg/ but never really namefagged.

>>30243880
Welp, welcome to Alone in Equestria Girls Verse thread. Take a load off.

>>30243897
Thanks for making a guy feel welcome guys, I hope to not disappoint.

>>30243932
You already do better than most first timers, and if you aren't lying and actually have a finished story to post for us, you will be on the fast track to the finished list of fame in the OP. Have you been lurking here for awhile, or is it your first time?

>>30243962
Only been lurking a few days, used to be a big fan of the slumberparty threads.

Truth be told, I haven't been on /mlp/ for over a year, just came back about a week ago after binge watching all the new episodes.

>>30243962
What first timers?

>>30243971
Well, we are one of the most successful EqGs threads, so welcome again. Feel free to go through Axii's story as he is the only one finished, be prepared to by the Witcher series out of excitement from reading it though.
>>30243987
People that start prompts but don't want to continue or have their name up, it used to happen a long time ago when Axii was our only writefag. Hasn't happened lately though.

>>30244004
Scratch that, Sperg is finished too, I just forgot to move him to the finished list.

>>30244004
buy*

>>30191991
Is there a batman anon green?

>>30244062
Nope...unless you count the Witcher as a batman. Check the /sup/ thread.

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>>30244062
That would be interesting desu.

>Inb4 it's just Anon quoting the movie

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goodnight bump

>>30244101
"I'M THE NIGHT!"
>"Well hello there D'nit, how are you?"
"N-No I m-mean..."

>>30244830
rip Flutters

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>>30244876

>>30244876
wrong thread bud.

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>>30244876

>>30244876
AHAHAHAHAHa

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>>30247400
I can't tell who is the biggest faggot. You or him.


Also WRITE!!!!!

>>30247480
this

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>>30247480
Don't worry I know how to hurt him.

>>30247400
Fapwood will never happen.

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>>30244876
Wut?

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>>30247551
>That pic

>>30247571
Blood for the blood god, skulls for the skull throne.

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>>30247579

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>>30247595
What you going to do about it faggot?

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>>30247602
I think you know.

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>>30247622
delet this

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>>30247631
Do something about it heretic. Your gods wont save you now. JUSTICE IS AT HAND!

Can everyone try and update faster, you really need to update more often