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>What is this thread about?
This thread revolves around stories about ponies being enslaved.

>Can you elaborate more?
Sure! SPG (Slave Pony General) is mostly about characters dealing with the actual implications of the horrifying thing that is chattel slavery. It's more looking at how people with modern sensibilities deal with the ownership of another sentient being, and how most people aren't total cunts.
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Penis.
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>>29928710
You know…you probably should censor the pictures, HB is serious about that rule.
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>>29928801
Yeah definitely, Celestia is showing serious cleavage in that picture.
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Slave pones are very useful for police.
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>>29929052
MARE IS FOR WHIPPING
STALLION IS FOR RIDING
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>>29929052
Glimmer had made herself useful to one police officer, but not AS a police officer.
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>>29929196
Riding and whipping.
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>>29928710
>You will never have the princess Celestia disguised as a slave strangling you with chains
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Bump
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>>29929052
I want to pet a police pony
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>>29929836
Rarity is for spanking.
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>>29929952
Don't pet police ponies, they are very aggressive and vicious.
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New thread? Time for more green m8
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>>29930267
>time for
EVERY time is green time. MOAR!
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>>29930065
Whatever you say, criminal scum.

Stop trying to run away and you won't get chased down and bitten by the police pony.
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>>29930267

>You just finished breakfast
>A simple dish of oatmeal and raisins
>Celestia still said she didn't deserve it
>The begs the question of what she ate previously
>Scraps?
>Random debree off her masters kitchen floor?
>You place the last clean bowl in the drying rack and flick it into the wall
>You can hear the heater activate as the dishes are blasted dry by hot fans
>A quick glance out the window confirms Celestia hasn't moved
>She's just sitting out in the back garden
>Staring at the sky as one of the local stars passes overhead
>Just what were you going to do with her?
>She seemed to avoid talking about her previous home outside of what she was expected to do
>You understand this, it must have been fucking awful
>But you know that you're going to have to ask sooner rather than later
>All of this leads back to the two main things you wish to know
>How long was she in that box
>And what the symbol still engraved in your bedroom wall had to do with it
>You suppose you could always try searching for her online
>You doubt you'll find anything, what with the fact that she's supposed to be dead
>But it's worth a shot
>Pulling your tablet across the counter, you search the Galnet for anything to do with her
"Nope, nope, not that, definitely not that... Ahah!"
>You seem to have stumbled apon an old slave trading website
>You're surprised the servers have remained up, what with the lack of slaves to trade, but you ain't gonna complain
>The website looks pretty professional, and it probably was
>You remember from your collage education that pony slave trading was one of the biggest markets on the galaxy
>Not even rare minerals could keep up with that shit
>There's a search bar near the top, displaying the usual magnifying glass
>'Find a slave'
>You enter Celestia's name into the bar and press search
>0 results
>You try 'Sun horse'
>0 results
>Maybe it's just dead
>You decide to just enter a general description
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>>29930416

>If you remember correctly her type were pretty rare
>You can't remember the name given to them
>Fuck it, 'winged unicorn' will have to do
>5 results
>Oh shit
>You look at each of the options
>[Redacted] Twilight Sparkle
>[Redacted] Cadence
>[Redacted] Flurry Heart
>[Redacted] Celestia
>There she is!
>You touch the expansion icon, enlarging the image and description
>'[Redacted] Celestia is the former [Redacted] of [Redacted]'
>Okay...
>Helpful...
>You read on
>'Height well above average, the largest ever recorded'
>Yup, you got that
>'Age [Redacted]'
>Fuckin okay then
>'Mane displays non-physical properties'
>You take a glance out the window
>Your pink haired Celestia is sniffing a flower with an alien insect on it
>No non-physical mane there
>'Has mark of a star on flank'
>Yup
>The page then ends in an image and a price tag
>You find it hard to believe that the regal and beautiful being in the image is in any way related to the pony that is hobbling quickly away from an angry alien insect outside
>But that mark doesn't lie
>It's the same horse
>You then look at the price tag
>And your jaw hits the floor
>Half a billion credits
>That's well over 300 times the cost of your ship
>Jesus that old fart must have been loaded
>Fuck him and his money
>Dick
>You then notice a last line of writing in italics
>'Item comes in conjunction with it's counterpart'
>'Prologued absence from each other's near vicinity will cause auditory and visual hallucinations for both parts.'
>Wut
>'If you are thinking of buying this product, please read the following articles surrounding [Redacted] Celestia's sister...'
>'[Redacted] Luna...'
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Just a small one tonight, I'll try and get more done in the morning. Sleep well /spg/
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>>29930372
Nah, police pony is a loose cannon who needs to turn in her badge.
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>>29930606
Man, every this part really hurt
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>>29930606
>>You find it hard to believe that the regal and beautiful being in the image is in any way related to the pony that is hobbling quickly away from an angry alien insect outside
kek
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>>29928710
Would you enslave a saddle arabian?
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>>29931057
I would! Then saddle her and take a ride through the starry desert night.
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>>29931125
>Saddling a saddle arabian.
Checks out.
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Hello onto yous SPG, this is my present of my story. I did a hear you need more of a writefag, so I lend of my services. I’m of a newly writefag although, but maybe some of the yous might find this of enjoy.

"A Wrinkle In Grime"

>Be Anon
>You live in an apartment near your college that you attend.
>You study mechanical engineering, and you are quite the prodigy if you do say so yourself. All A's, even with the piece of shit Dr. Schajeeb that you're pretty sure literally everyone on campus hates.
>He was the only one available to teach differential equations, so you couldn't get away from him.
>He was also one of the few that tempted you to put to use that .45 you take to school every day. He wouldn't know about that though, no one would.
>It's not like you're stupid enough to tell anybody about it.
>You made the weapon in design class for your semester long project.
>You didn't know anything about gunsmithing before, but it only took you a couple weeks to finish. You're not sure gunsmithing even falls under mechanical engineering, but you are a prodigy after all.
>When you're not studying, going to class, or working as a tutor, you enjoy going to the range to practice shooting your gun, and browsing the internet, specifically /pol/.
>You were red-pilled early on in your college life, and you hold the unpopular opinion that the allies defeated the wrong enemy in WWII. You are very verbal about this on /pol/, and take pleasure in spreading the untold truth of the past century's largest conflict.
>On a dreary weekend morning, you take a break from your righteous polfagging and ponder these things.
>Through your open window you can see the darkened overcast sky, despite being morning. The trees are swaying slightly, indicating the presence of a strong wind. An unusual sight for your area in July, but not unheard of.
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>>29931583
>Though you hold steadfast in your beliefs, and enjoy your pursuit of knowledge, you can't help but feel something is missing. You know what it is. You're lonely. No matter how much you would want to, there's no way you could branch out and get yourself some friends.
>It makes your heart fall, but there is very little chance that anyone you meet would share your views.
>In fact, you're afraid word would spread of your unsavory opinions, and everyone on campus would look down on you, mock you, or worse.
>Perhaps it's just a remnant of your high school years staying with you. But you can't take that risk. You can't just pretend you're someone else, or that you have no personality. You wouldn't gain anything of substance if you did, and your relationships would be empty at best.
>/pol/ is a large part of your life, and it leaks into just about every facet of your life. Including your family.
>They stopped talking to you and ultimately cut ties with you after your dad found out about what you believe from checking your internet history.
>Luckily, you got a full-ride scholarship, and your tutoring job pays for your basic living.
>You made the .45 in large part because you wanted to vent your frustration on something for both your family’s rejection, and the mistakes of your forefathers for not only ignoring the Jewish attempts to upset the west, but also destroying the few nations that sought to do something about it.
>It also helps that it's damn fun to shoot at the range.
>Raindrops slowly start appearing on your window. Looks like the storm is finally here.
>You turn from the window, back to your computer.
>No use in sulking on something you can't change, right?
>You're about to refresh the main page when a sharp boom like that of a grenade goes off nearby. Very nearby. As in, inside your apartment, by the front door you would guess.
>What the hell?
>Alarmed, you pick up your .45 and jump out of your seat.
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>>29931593

>The only possibility you can think of in your panic is that someone just busted through your front door.
>Quickly turning off the safety and opening your bedroom door, you deftly aim your firearm towards the front of your apartment, prepared for anything.
>Or so you thought.
>”Wait, don’t shoot! I mean you no harm!”
>In front of you stands an alien.
>Gigantic eyeballs with light purple irises stare at you in fear and surprise, not unlike your own at the moment you can imagine, besides the sheer size of them.
>This quadrupedal creature has darkish blue skin, a horn jutting from its head, the same color as its skin, and solid white hair that curls to the side of its head, and at the back forms a single curl down its neck.
>Oddest of all, it wears a Wehrmacht Officer uniform.
”Wha-hat the fuck?!?”
>Without hesitation, you bring your gun to bear on it.
>It’s horn glows light blue. You immediately pull the trigger, but a glow envelops your gun, and it’s somehow forced to point at the ceiling right before it fires.
>It speaks harshly in a feminine voice:
>”Mr. Anonymous, please release the gun, I can explain everything.”
>The creature holds out one of its front blocky appendages towards you, and slightly lowers its head, its horn still glowing.
>Hyperventilating, you attempt to wrestle the gun back down to the bizarre abomination in front of you, but to no avail. Your weapon remains fixed on your ceiling. Your hands shake violently as adrenaline pulses through you, but your eyes stay glued to the creature.
>Your trigger finger doesn’t even lay on the trigger anymore, your sole effort focused on regaining control of your weapon.
>The fact that it knows your name is doing nothing to help your nerves.
>You shout at it:
“What in the fuck are you, and why are you here?!?”
>It takes on an annoyed, but pleading tone.
>”I am a pony, and I’m here to ask for your help.”
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>>29931604

“Ponies don’t talk, a-animals like you don’t fucking TALK! You’re an ALIEN!”
>Your palms are becoming sweaty, and you grip your gun harder to make sure it doesn’t slip, which causes the gun to vibrate even harder.
>Your heart races as your addled mind tries to comprehend the sheer oddity of the alien standing before you.
>The “pony” continues looking into your eyes, her own betraying nothing to you in your panicked state.
>It replies in a tender tone, like that of a mother to an upset child:
>”You’re right, I am an alien, and I mean you no harm, I give you my word. Let’s just put the gun aside and just sit down and talk, ok?”
>She slowly moves her appendage to gesture to your couch.
>”Just take a few deep breaths, there’s no rush.”
“H-how can I know that you won’t kidnap me, o-or charge me the second my guard is down?”
>”..If I wanted to harm you, I would have brought my own weapon, which you can see I do not have. I could also turn your gun against you easily, and yet I choose not to.”
>You know she’s right. No matter which direction you pulled, the strange force made no move but to keep the pistol stationary and pointing in an upward direction.
>You stare at it for a few seconds more, still shivering like you’re in hypothermia.
>Listening to its words, you take a jittery deep breath. And then another.
>The “pony” remains stock still in her posture, and its expression remains frozen, waiting on you.
>Your shaking calms down, but it’s not entirely gone.
>But just because you’re over the initial shock, doesn’t mean there aren’t problems with this entire situation.
>You rapidly scan your eyes over her, seeing no evidence of a weapon. Not even the horn. It’s so rounded at the edge that you doubt it could pop a balloon.
“Well… you don’t have any open weapons, but that doesn’t mean you have nothing concealed. Empty out your pockets.”
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>>29931620

>It proceeds to take out a pocket watch, and a wallet, and then turns all of its pockets inside out, and spins in a slow circle so you can see that it got everything.
>Ok, this is happening, get a grip. Let’s talk to the alien pony thing.
>You can hear the rain pelting your windows not five feet away.
>It takes a great deal of courage, but you manage to slowly remove your hands from the gun.
>Your muscles ache from the effort you put into trying to regain control of your weapon, and you’re left panting as you massage your hands.
“Ok then, let’s talk.”
>After a few more seconds of collecting yourself, you slowly move over to your three-seater leather couch, your pistol floating to the other side of the room..
>Only its eyes move, following your path.
>You sit on the furthest seat from it.
“Come s-sit.”
>The pony returns its things to its pockets, and comes and casually, but slowly joins you on the couch, breaking eye contact in order to sit down.
>It chose the seat furthest from you.
>Dread still courses through your veins, as you feel like a prisoner in your own home. You are completely at the mercy of this freakish alien in your apartment.
>Peals of thunder sound from outside.
>”My name is Heiene Trecksie. I am from another dimension. Recent breakthroughs in magic have allowed us to not only travel through dimensions, but to do so selectively and with purpose. My world is in troubling times, and my government can see where things are headed, so they sent me to find the most suitable candidates from across the vast number of different dimensions to find those who would be best suited and most willing to help our cause.”
>Who does she take you for? Magic? Were you really supposed to believe that?
>Though now that you think about it, you can’t come up with another way for it to remotely take your gun away from you like that.
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>>29931631

>”Now, this magic is new, and I don’t quite know why you are suited or willing to help us. Do you happen to want to leave your current way of living?”
>You think on this question.
>Assuming this Trecksie isn’t completely full of shit, do you really have it that bad?
>Sure, you basically don’t have a family anymore, and you haven’t had friends in much too long for your preferences, but you are going to a renowned college on a full ride scholarship with a great major. You’re set up well economically. Maybe you’ll develop interests later on that won’t get you ostracized from the general public.
>Your eyes finally leave her face, and travel to her outfit.
>Why on earth would she be wearing such an obvious symbol of the nazis?
>You decide to ask her:
“That outfit you are wearing, I recognize it from this world. Why are you wearing it if you’re an alien?”
>She regards her outfit.
>”This is the standard officer’s uniform for the Wehrmacht, the armed forces of my nation: The Third Reich.”
“Bullshit.”
>”I assure you, I am not lying. This is my uniform.”
>Her face has not faltered in the slightest.
>”It is possible, likely even, that similar political environments would arise across the infinite possibilities of all the different dimensions out there. Perhaps you would be so inclined to help save a world in crisis, through joining the cause of a group that you at least seem to recognize from your time in this world?”
>She was giving you the opportunity to help right the wrongs of the past.
>But you didn’t want to be some common foot soldier.
>One additional soldier, no matter how heroic he might be, would not save the German Reich.
“...Suppose that I did join you, what would you have me do to ‘help’ you.”
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>>29931638

>”Well, the way we used our magic to search was for someone willing and able to help us strategize and design effective weapons of war. You would be placed as an advisor to High Command, and any designs you create would be given priority by our engineers for prototyping.”
>This was too good to be true.
>You would actually have a purpose in life if all of this was accurate.
>That’s a big “if”.
>There’s little reason to believe her besides her uniform, she could easily be lying to trick you to go with her. There’s also that little detail where you’re still doubtful that magic exists. Is this great new life for you worth the possibility of deception?
“How can I trust that you aren’t lying to me?”
>For the first time, Trecksie’s expression changes.
>Her forehead scrunches up a little in confusion.
>”Why would I lie to you?”
>That’s a good point.
>You’ve stopped shaking by now, but your heart rate continues at its high pace.
>Tired, frustrated, and fully prepared to throw your current life away for a cause you believe in, you reply filled with determination and a sense of duty:
“I’ll do it.”
>Trecksie adopts a small smile as more thunder crackles outside, louder this time.
>”Excellent, when can you start?”
“Right now, I have nothing left here.”
>...

>...
>It’s been about a week since Trecksie took you to her world.
>The current date is July 30th, 1938.
>It turns out it was almost identical to the early 20th century in yours.
>Besides the ponies of course.
>The country names, the geography, the technology, the clothing, all indistinguishable to your eyes.
>Even the food.
>It certainly helped the transition to living on an alien world.
>You never would have thought you’d have seen ponies eating bratwurst before.
>Oddly enough, you weren’t the only human here. In fact, they were quite common, maybe about one human for every 5 ponies, but they were all native to this world. You were the alien now.
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>>29931650

>Anyways, you got set up with a nice suite in the Reichstag.
>The past week was spent acquainting you with your new setting.
>You were provided with a military uniform, some civilian clothing, a box of .45 ammo, and a generous wage of gold coins.
>You had thought that they had some other form of currency, but it turns out that inflation had reduced the value of the Reichsmark too low to be practical.
>You were to have weekly meetings with the rest of German High Command.
>Any other “advisors” Trecksie would find would join your meetings, but none besides you had joined up so far.
>Hitler wasn’t present at this first meeting.
>You weren’t told why, but you suspect that he doesn’t feel it necessary to be present at what was essentially the “introductory” meeting.
>It turns out that, in this world at least, the holocaust really was going to happen.
>In fact, it was already under way to a large extent, three years earlier than it was “supposed” to, if historians from your world were to be believed.
>The jews were almost all gathered in camps around the country.
>You say almost because there are probably some hiding in a few sympathizers’ houses.
>You managed to convince High Command to stop wasting valuable manpower making a bunch of jews sit around all day, doing useless work and starving.
>Instead, they were all sold into slavery en masse, and manumission was made illegal.
>You’re surprised your words held that much weight with them.
>A letter recently appeared in your mailbox outside your door.
>It was a bunch of kiss-ass stuff about how much they valued your help, and them awarding you your own personal slave as a gift.
>But the identity of the slave was an interesting one indeed.
>It was Hitler’s main political opponent to coming into office, the letter claimed, and you could do with her what you wished.
>You were pretty sure that you could do anything you wanted with a slave anyways, but it’s the thought that counts, right?
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>>29931663

>The letter said the slave’s name was “Twilight Sparkle”.
>That’s odd, that’s not a very German or Jewish sounding name at all.
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>>29931669

And that's all I have for now. Thanks @Tuner for helping me edit.
Here's a pastebin: https://pastebin.com/R4mH07cS
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>>29931663
Uh.

Ok.

That was a thing.
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>>29931681
Ok.
Anon is Albert Speer, Twilight is Philipp Scheidemann, and the future where the Allies win is not going to happen. It's just weird enough to be interesting!
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I know this is the wrong place to ask, but I've been gone from /mlp/ for a while. Is the SiM thread still around? If so, does anyone know if Escapade ever finished up his stuff?

Thanks!
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>>29930606
>hobbling quickly away from an angry alien insect
that is pretty damn sadly adorable.

Poor Luna probably long gone though.
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>>29931681
0/10

Death to the Nazis of any imaginary reality that you can delude
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>>29932163
/sim/fag here. We had a thread up, but we're intermittently posting now when writefags have green rather than trying to always keep up a thread with bumps and imagedumps.

Escapade never finished Octavia PoV, if that's what you're asking about. He was in the last /sim/ thread posting other green, though.
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>>29932232
That's a shame. I loved his take on Anon and NMM. Octavia thrown in there was great as well. Thanks for the update anon.
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>>29932223
Meh, it's been 70 years, how many National Socialists have you put to death recently? It's time for them to loose this weird mistique of Ultimate Villiany and become an ordinary part of history we can mine for memes like pirates, ninjas, werewolves, vikings, or any other baddies of the past.
>MongolAnon when?
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>>29932330
I miss corona
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>>29931125
>>29931125
>>29931140

>She can barely handle the strain.
>You're a grown ass man, she isn't even the size of ponies back on Earth.
>She keeps going at a slow steady pace through sheer willpower to not disappoint her new master.
>Tales of what might happen to slaves that fail to perform swim across her mind.
>Meanwhile, Anon is breaking the silence of the desert.
>"Araabiaaaan niiiiights! Like Aaaraaabian dayyyys! More often than not are hotter than hot in a lot of good waaaayyys~!"
>"ماذا يحدث؟"
>Spending the rest of his travel funds buying a slave for a stupid play on words was the correct choice
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>>29932550
Everything about this is perfect. Hang in there, Arabian pony-slave!
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>bump that slave
>with a belt
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>>29930664
You need to turn in YOUR badge
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>>29933176
>You will never have a slave dutifully suck your cock while you watch TV
>You'll never look down to see her big, innocent eyes and happy smile.
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>>29933235

Why even live
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>>29932550
what the fuck would be the point of enslaving them if they were that tiny?
think about the implications of the things you write god
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>>29933642
For cuddles.
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>>29933642
We would just use them like sled dogs.
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>>29933642
For sex.
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Happy horse bump
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Landscape Applejack is for harsh whipping.
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>>29933642
They're sapient and can be ordered to do things, even without supervision and month long periods of training to do one simple trick. They won't be able to carry as much but they also don't need to eat and drink as much so hauling smaller amounts of supplies, say for one merchant, is still doable.
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>>29934055
YOU are for harsh whipping!
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>>29933676

>Be that same Anon.
>While singing your way through the desert you came across a temple of doom sort of place.
>Raid it for treasure with your Saddle Arabian slave.
>You now have enough money to live off of for quite some time.
>But after doing the trading at the bazaar you spot a slave merchant with a haul of fresh mares.
>Must resist...
>...

>The dozen or so Saddle Arabians are all tied together and to a small cart you made into a makeshift sled.
>There's a cacophony of high pitched Kebab speak as you whip the air.
>Mush, Mush! you say followed by a whipcrack.
>The first pony you bought was now at the front of the pack, now she didn't have to carry someone twice her size if she stood up on her hindlegs.
>You are actually going fast now, practically gliding through the sand and feeling the crisp desert night air blowing through your face.
>"Araabiaaaan niiiiights! 'neath Aaaraaabian moooooons! A fool off his guard could fall and fall hard out there on the dunes~"
>Spending all the treasure you found buying out the slave merchant was clearly the right option.
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>>29933642
Well, I've always thought these ponies to be as small as large dogs when on all fours, considering the size disparity with actual horses in the show, basically Celestia would be the only one the size of an actual pony from Earth.
And are you implying the only use for a slave is manual labor? Because it's not, besides, for the lack of strength you could still get a bunch of them to pool it together, or enslave or tame larger animals to cover for it, you think the pyramids was all the work of human slaves?
Besides, the smaller size would make it easier to keep around the house without extra accommodations and do other slave things.
In fact if they were taller then they'd mostly be used exclusively for outdoor manual labor and to carry and pull shit and nothing else, the fact they are tiny means they'd be able to spread around every niche better so the market for them would be wider, their aptitudes would vary: like bookkeeping, management, housework, manservant and to the more lewd aptitudes that the smaller size would make more desirable because trying to cuddle in bed with a large pony sounds like a bad time.
Why wouldn't you want to enslave them if they were that tiny?
Think about the implications of the things you write, God
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>>29934985
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>>29934608
That picture is pretty old, desu. They've been other sizes based on other facts. So far they're either medium dog size, regular irl pony size, or large dog size. I prefer dog size myself. They're supposed to be little ponies.
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>>29935068
Yeah, it's literally in the name. My Little Ponies, they're not supposed to be big.
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>>29935063
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>Be Anonymous in Equestria.
>An Equestria that has quite the hard on for slavery.
>Some Roman shit going on where you are either a citizen or a slave that can work their ass off to high positions like physician, teacher, accounting and secretarial services while holding no rights whatsoever in the eyes of the people or state.
>Have no place to stay or call home
>About to starve to death
>Learn about something called "Nexum"
>Take a loan and pledge your person as collateral.
>"We have come to collect, Ape."
>Can't pay back the loan obviously, but already indulged in the finest wines, foods and little bitches until you couldn't any longer.
"Do what you must little horse, for I've already won."
>Become Anonymous the slave.
>The one who lent you money, was in fact a very reputable horse lanista and he saw you as an exotic catch to have in his ludus.
>Forcedly become gladiator
>Shit bricks
>Then proceed to shove those bricks back up your ass because this is some PG shit and fights aren't as brutal as you'd expect, there's even a rule that forbids any besides criminals or beasts to actually fight to the death.
>Get pretty good at punching ponies in the snout and getting them into locks until they submit.
>Become Anonymous the Dreaded Anguis of Canterlot.
>Prized fighter with all the perks.
>Your own room, wine and food and all the slave mares you can handle, which is a lot because equine anatomy.
>Have a reputation of being insatiable, they can't get enough of the HMD, rich mares often pay exuberant amounts for a private showing, some even join in too
>Get rich, buy back your freedom
>Become a volunteer gladiator immediately
>The money you get is used to buy more slave mares.
>It's a literal "gotta Catch 'em all" thing
>After years of this, your age catches up to you and you die of an heart attack fucking your cuddly harem like a hero.
>Have a statue raised in your honor and be forever engraved in Equestrian history as the lustful, warmongering ape man you actually were.
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>>29935422
Nice.
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>>29935422
High quality green, appropriate pic, and dubs. Posts just don't get any better.
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>>29935422
Yes. YES. FUCK YES.
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>She eagerly picks up the knife and fork set on the table. How she managed it with hooves, you'll never guess.
>And you don't even want to.
>This is far from the weirdest thing you've seen from where these horses come from.
>Who knew unicorns and magic were real?
>And that horses came in those colors?
>And that those seemingly harmless and innocent creatures could rival humankind's superior technology and weaponry?
>Whatever.
>You can't be arsed to make another batch of pancakes for yourself, and you don't have the heart to take anything from Ditzy's plate.
>Doesn't matter, you weren't hungry. You spot a stray granola bar left on the kitchen counter. That'll have to do for now.
>You tear the wrapper open and take a bite out of the bar.
>You chew slowly.
>...
>You hate this stuff, why'd you even buy it?
>Munching absentmindedly on your granola bar, you watch Ditzy eat her pancakes with gusto.
>At least one of you is enjoying breakfast.
"Hey, slow down there. You'll choke on that stuff if you keep going like that."
>Ditzy stops shoveling food into her mouth.
>At least she's got the tact to appear somewhat embarrassed.
>"Mmmph – shworry 'bout dat."
>...but apparently not enough of it to swallow before speaking.
>She swallows, then continues.
>"It's just been so long since I had some real food!"
>Right. She had it tough back with her old master. Fucker probably didn't feed her right.
>You were about to ask her about it, but you remembered how she reacted the last time you asked about her past.
>She just let her guard down for the first time after she came here, you don't want to go back to square one with her.
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Whoops, forgot my trip.

>>29935950
"Pfft, yeah? Well, 'm glad you like it."
>You scratch the back of your head.
"You know, it's been a while since I made anything in the kitchen."
>She blinks.
>"Could've fooled me, mas – Anon."
>She awkwardly clears her throat with her eyes shut, pretending to ignore her mistake.
>"I mean, this stuff is amazing! You must work as a chef or something!"
>You haven't had a stable job in ages.
"Y-yeah."
>She beams.
>"I knew it!"
>The sheer amount of happiness and cuteness she's exuding is enough to give you type-2 diabetes.
>You recall keeping insulin shots in your bedroom's medicine cabinet.
>Deep breaths, Anon.
>...
>Phew, okay.
>But seriously, you've got to calm her dow–
>...is her chair bouncing up and down?
"Hey, quit that. Don't expect things to be like this everyday."
>As much as you'd love to keep her this happy (and consequentially shorten your lifespan by a good 30 years by increased risk of heart attacks), you just can't afford feeding her food like this.
>There's only so much disposable income you've got left.
>And with the war affecting the cities now, prices of all kinds of stuff has been skyrocketing recently.
>Besides, you can't bring yourself to find work right now.
>You're not ready to leave the safety of your home just yet.
>You're broken out of your thoughts by Derpy's soft voice.
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>>29935954
>"O-oh... I knew this was too good to be true..."
>Oh, come on.
>She's taking it this hard? It's only pancakes. It's not like she'd die without it.
>"S-so, what's going to happen to me now?"
"Huh?"
>She gulps nervously.
>"My old master never trusted me to do chores around his house. S-said a retard like me couldn't really do anything useful."
>A sad smile settles on her face.
>"Maybe he was right."
>First thing that came to your mind was to comfort Ditzy. Tell her she's wrong, tell her that her master was an asshole and she shouldn't even begin to consider what he told her.
>But at the same time, this is as good a chance as any to find out more about her and her past.
>You hesitate before opening your mouth.
"Then... What did you do when you were with that man?"
>The expression on her face wavers and is replaced by one of faint horror.
>You grimace, but this was something you needed to get out of the way.
"Tell me, Ditzy."
>She seems on the verge of breaking down into tears, but she's doing a great job at reining her emotions in.
>You're not sure if you should feel terrible for her, or if you should respect her self-restraint.
>"...he liked hearing my screams most."
"W...what?"
>"He kept me around just so he could beat me, cut me, burn me... H-he said it was all I was good for. Being his plaything."
>Your fists clench and unclench, an unfamiliar wave of cold fury washing over you.
>"Every time he was done... H-he'd patch me up just so he could do it again the next day."
>That sadistic FUCK.
>"Things stayed that way for... I don't even remember how long it's been. It can't have been too long, though."
"Why?"
>"I was one of the luckier ones. S-some of the others couldn't even think straight after how long they were with h-him. He'd just got done with me when the war got to where he lived. Ceiling collapsed and crushed him before he could heal my wounds for the night."
>That's probably when Dave found her.
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>>29935959
>"S-so... What are you going to do to me? The pancakes were nice, but they weren't for free, were they?"
>"Please, just don't hurt me too much. I-I'll be good, I promise, just–"
>You interrupt her before she can finish.
>Even you're surprised that you've got your arms tightly wrapped around her small frame.
"Shut up. Nothing's gonna happen to you here."
>Ditzy doesn't seem to responding to the hug. She sits there dumbfounded.
>"But... You told me not to expect getting treated like this–"
"Fucking.... That's not what I meant! I meant that I won't be able to feed you like this all the time! Me and the rest of humanity's in a tough spot right now, so forgive me if I can't scrape enough cash for decent food for you to eat!"
>"I-I..."
"Just stop, okay? As far as I'm concerned, you're gonna be fine here with me. You've got fucking nothing to be afraid of."
>She falls silent.
"I promise I'll protect you, you don't need to be scared anymore. You don't need to be scared anymore, Ditzy."
>She still sits there, frozen in place.
>Then she raises two trembling hooves around your waist.
>And starts crying.
>And crying.
>And crying.
>She's sobbing, she's wailing, she's covering the front of your shirt in tears and snot.
>She's hanging onto you for dear life.
>All you can do is stroke her mane and hug her back.
"It'll be okay."
"It's all going to be okay, Ditzy."
"It'll be okay."

https://pastebin.com/6VC6kHTk

Sorry I took forever for this update. I'll try to work a little faster. And, uh. I still need help with naming the story. Any ideas would be really cool.
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>>29935422
>Rich mares often pay exuberant amounts for a private showing, some even join in too

>Mid way through his career his reputation both as a fighter and as a lover reach the chambers of the princesses.
>The royals want to see this facet, that of the insatiable beast.
>They arrange a private showing with the lanista, who allows it free of charge, no doubt to get their good graces.
>He gets taken to the castle and soon he's being carefully cleaned and washed by a group of royal hoofmaidens.
>He gets taken to a large, lavish, decadent room where the Royal Sisters take in every aspect of his body in person, with various well groomed slave mares to attend their every need.
>Shit's awkward as fuck
>Soon enough they settle into their cushioned seats.
>Their eyes go from your naked body to the line of mares not making any sort of eye contact back.
>The princesses whisper and giggle amongst each other before picking a rather young mare from the bunch.
>"Tell us, my little pony, have you had your flower plucked?"
>"N-No master..."
>The moon princess smiles "We told thee dearest sister, our eye doth have a gift of discernment."
>"That is very true, indeed." sun princess says, before adopting an authoritative tone. "Rut."
>"Y-Yes master."
>The petite equine drops the cloth she had quickly, and presents her winking marehood to Anonymous.
>Anonymous ends up taking the young mare's virginity, in front of not only the perverted looks of the royals but also the bashful looks of the other mare slaves
>This makes him last even longer than usual.
>The room is soon filled with the sound of lewd wet slapping of his thrusts accompanied by the high pitched yelps and moans the little slave kept trying to hide
>The princesses bet on how many more thrusts before he cums, but sit mesmerized as he keeps outdoing their estimates.
>Ends up fucking the poor girl into a stupor and they have another take her place, then another, as if they were maidens being offered to subdue a wild beast.
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>>29935966
>It's all going to be okay, Ditzy.
Betting it's not going to be, but great update. Was Anon diabetic and got better, or were those syringes for someone else, or what?
>also checked.
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>>29935966
daww
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>>29936145
oh my
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>>29936348
Moonhorse a good slave, she has many uses.
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Back lads, it's time to cont

>>29930606

>You hover you finger over the link before giving it an uneasy press
>The file is similar in layout to Celestia's
>A few loose statements and an image
>The spooks really went all out on this
>What was it they were so desperately trying to cover up?
>You read the first line
>'[Redacted] Luna is the former [Redacted] of [Redacted]'
>Most of what follows is a repeat of before, the only difference being the actual visible data
>Then something catches your eye
>'Has mark of crescent moon on flank'
>Hang the fuck up
>You scroll down to the image
>Just as her file reads, she has a dark blue coat and a mane full of stars
>On her flank is a black splodge with a crescent moon at it's centre
>An exact mirror of the one scratched into your bedroom wall
>Spooky
>Luna's price tag is similarly outrageous, standing at 300 million credits
>The disclaimer is also repeated, warning the buyer not to separate her from her sister
>Did that old cunt own both of them?
>Did he own all of these...
>You check the actual name of her species before continuing
>Alicorns?
>It's then that you notice the other feature of the website
>'Where to buy'
>You quickly bang 'Luna' into the search bar
>Nothing
>Shit, try again
>'Alicorn'
>3 results
>Luna isn't one of them
>Neither is Celestia
>Out of curiosity, you check the occupation of 'Cadence'
>Up pops a bright pink pony with a three tone mane
>'Current location: Deceased -12/07/2784'
>Oh...
>You just sit in silence for a moment
>Well, let's try another one
>Twilight Sparkle
>A smaller purple pony with a rather straight fringe
>'Current location: Deceased - 30/06/2976'
>Oh...
>Losing hope, you decide to check the last one
>Flurry Heart
>A child most definitely, judging by the size
>'Current location: Unknown, but presumed deceased'
>You turn off the pad and flop back into the couch
>What if Celestia really is the last of her kind?
>What then?
>No, you mustn't give up hope
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>>29936603
>everyone is dead
Well fuck. That's a dark and bleak future of ponykind.
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>>29936638
We have to breed Celly and repopulate Equestria!
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>>29933235
>>29933304

>You lean back and rest your chin on your knuckles and your elbow on the single seated couch's armrest.
>You keep fiddling through the channels but nothing good's on.
>Why do you still watch TV again?
>*Bazinga! *laugh track**
>*What do you think Horatio, foul play?*
>*Previously on Criminal Min-*
>*- befooore the final blow was struck I tore open a por-*
>...
>You just turn the damn thing off.
>Immediately the room is filled with only the wet sounds coming from your crotch area.
>You guess watching your slave work beats the crap on TV.
>She services you with the utmost concentration, like this task is the most important thing in the world, which it might as well be for her.
>She licks and slurps your member lewdly, letting out a quiet mewl of pleasure once she notices you watching.
>"Ah~, master is the TV no good again?"
>She nuzzles your cock before taking it into her mouth.
>You grunt in approval as she takes it deeper, eyes still looking up at you and gag reflex non existent.
>Before long she comes back up and breathes.
>"I can take it all the way now~, praise me master~"
>You smile and stroke her lustrous mane and ear with your free hand, before guiding her back to your dick.
>"Hm~"
>You keep your hand in place as she bops her head rhythmically up and down while using her tongue to massage your shaft
>Soon enough you feel your climax approaching
>She seems to notice as she picks up the pace, her petite hooves finding their way to your thighs for leverage
>With a low groan you let go and release rope after rope of cum in spurts, straight down her gullet.
>Your little slave swallows it all eagerly, careful not to waste any, her beautiful eyes still looking up at you.
>"Ah~... hmah~ thank you, for the meal master."
>She stays a few moments longer, making sure your dick is clean, before asking permission to carry out her housework
>Once she's gone, you recline on your couch and close your eyes, a nap would probably be pretty good right now
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>>29936751
Those prehensile equine lips...
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>>29936751
>>29936820
im more interested in the southern lips if you get my meaning
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>>29936686
But what would we breed her with? Horses?
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>>29936864
It's the FUTURE, I'm sure they have some kind of genetic fuckery which can make her compatible with humans or vice versa.

Also magic.
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>>29936603
>The spooks really went all out on this
Seems they are censoring the political structure of Equestria, that it was a diarchy with the Sisters. But Anon already knows vaguely what happened from general knowledge, perhaps the cover-up will only highlight what is covered up? Anon should just ask Celly where she last saw Luna.
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>>29936880
Sayter abomination GTFO
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>>29936899
>Anon asks Celly about Luna
>Cellys memories relapse and she keeps wailing for half of a day, hugging Anon in her iron grip, him unable to do anything else than wait it out.
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>>29936916
>Implying the human-pone crossbreeding program would produce inferior Satyrs.
Nah, it's gonna produce the future of slave labor, centaurs.
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>>29936971
>Strength and speed of a horse
>Endurance and durability of a human
Anon better copyright that shit and get stupidly rich off his new slave spawn offspring.
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>>29936916
Nah.
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>>29936603

>Looking out at your garden, you see that Celestia has now obtained a large alien insect face mask
>You couldn't just ask her about this
>As much as it would make it easier, you had a sneaking suspicion that she had been separated from Luna for a very long time, and you don't want to reopen any old wounds
>Even if you've only known her for a day, this horse certainly has found her way into your heart and mind
>Mind...
>Mind! That's it!
>Perhaps the sisters use some sort of telepathic communication
>You remember reading that the arcane energy that was sucked out of their planet could be used for such things
>Maybe that's why they get sick
>If the connection is severed then they cannot communicate properly, so that could be causing the hallucinations
>And what would disrupt a signal more than destroying the emitter?
>If you repaired her horn, then maybe Celestia could lead you straight to her sister, or vice versa
>But if Luna really is dead, then at least she'll have her magic back...
>Who are you kidding, you doubt she'd even have the willpower to go on by that point
>But there's only one way to find out
>All you have to do is work out how to fix a mythical magic head wand
>...
>You were gonna need some shit
>While you've been thinking, more of those large, moth like creatures have appeared
>They seem to like her, and are covering her from head to tail
>You can't tell if she's scared or not
>You also don't know what kind of bugs those are, and should probably do something about them before you have to patch her up again
>Grabbing the edge of the sofa, you hoist yourself up and move to the door
>There's a pair of metal waste units by the fence to your left
>You can see a single sun horse eye follow you through a think layer of moths
>You pull the lids off both the bins and approach her trembling, moth ridden form
>With a mighty force, you bang the bin lids together, startling the swarm of insects, their sunny perch and yourself
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>>29937014
>Celly blanketed in huge moths
Absolutely Cute.
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>>29937070
CUTE!
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>>29937037
How huge are we talking here?
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>>29936880
>>29936916
>>29936993

>Anons go wild with their slaves because they think it's completely safe.
>Turns out for some reason mares can get pregnant, because pony magic.
>Offspring becomes a new cast of slave, one treated poorly by both human and ponykind alike because they are not only bastards birthed from slaves but they're also the result of a union between two different species.
>Have the lower half of horses and the upper half of humans and walk upright.
>Slightly taller than ponies yet still shorter than humans.
>Have dexterous hands as well as vestigial traits from ponykind like strength, wings, or magic depending on pairing.
>Despite being considered lesser than both species and having enormous stigma surrounding their existence, they are actually highly sought after by both in the slave business.
>Ponies get them mostly for fetish purposes or because they are cheaper and less risky than unicorns for dexterous work, humans get them because some prefer the more human counterpart, though many still default to ponies because it gets progressively harder to own someone when they resemble you.
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>>29936988
Dubs confirm this is the course of action Anon must take.
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>>29937014

>Angry bugs descend apon you, ripping and tearing at your bones
>You feel one pull out your heart and eat it while it still beats
>You scream in agony
>The beasts laugh with a... Light and girly tone?
>You crack open an eye
>Your lying in the middle of the grass, shielding yourself with a bin lid and shivering in fright
>And Celestia is laughing at you
>She has a really nice laugh
>It's the kind of laugh you want to hear more often
>To bad it stops
>"I-Im sorry master! I dint know what came over me. It won't happen again I swe-"
>You cut her off by hitting her in the head
>With a clump of dried grass you pulled out of the earth
>She sits there for a moment, attempting to process what just happened
"Fucking wildlife."
You roll upwards, tossing the bin lids across the garden to be picked up later
"Come on Sunhorse, I think there's icecream or something in the fridge."
You stroll back into the house, leaving her sitting in the middle of the lawn with grass on her nose and a returning moth on her head
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>would like to take this opportunity to apologize for my namefaggotry, posting as 'n'
>also guilty of mobilefaggotry, the latter caused the former
>I will try to be a better anon, and stay anon.
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>>29937070

Holy shit this image is perfect, I sweat the stuff you find on the Internet is foretelling
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>>29937162

>sweat

Whoops
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>>29937162
Whoa, just assumed you wrote the green after seeing the pic!
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>>29937193

I've never seen that image before now, and I'm so glad I did. It is truly a masterpiece
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>>29932470
Corona a dead mare. A DEAD MARE.
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>>29937107
>>Offspring becomes a new cast of slave, one treated poorly by both human and ponykind alike because they are not only bastards birthed from slaves but they're also the result of a union between two different species.
YA LOST ME

they would literally be miracles of the universe

two completely different species coming together and somehow managing to produce completely healthy and adorable offspring
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>>29937208
Image-poster here. I genuinely thought it was a reference too.
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>>29937264

Fucking bamboozeled. Anywho, I think I'm going to retire for the evening, sleep well spg.
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>>29937237
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>>29937232
Somewritefag may well have a dead mare soon, but Corona will still live.
>right, Somewritefag?
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>>29935966
Thanks for continuing. Glad to hear about more updates.
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>>29937070
>laying eggs.
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>>29937780
Celestia chestburster green when?
>or perhaps that belongs in the pony horror thread
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>>29935422
The best Green of all times in this thread

You're the Man
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>>29937875
Naaaa she just periodically caughs up some catapillers. Puts them on the shrubs and tends them like they are her young. Chasing off birds and such.
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>>29936988
>You will never cross-breed with your slave pone to create centaurs.
>You will never raise the first generation of an entirely new species.
>You will never sell them off to make shitloads of dosh.
Why even live?
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>>29938420
First is for riding.
Second carries you around.
Third you sell.
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>>29938440
>First is for riding.
>Second carries you around.
So the second is also for riding? Well, makes sense, a backup mount is always useful in case the first one is for whatever reason unable to be ridden.
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>>29936145
>>Mid way through his career his reputation both as a fighter and as a lover reach the chambers of the princesses.


Celestia and Luna or EVERYPRINCESS?
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29922823
sure hope it's not too late to respond
>Preening her wings
I love Cadance/Flurry interactions but anyone else notice they do this every time?
>Flurry going to Master for comfort on her father
That must have stung Cadance something fierce. eager to see if Shining ever does get a chance to go into CYOS
>Sunburst
I'm gonna vote Anon saying no on this because, unlike Cadance, Sunburst hasn't earned our trust yet (though no reason why he couldn't), but I believe i'm outvoted on this
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>>29938547
meant to quote >>29922823
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>>29938420
>selling off your own children
[screeching intensifies]
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>>29936864
Clonation maybe?
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>>29938564
>Selling own children
It was a routine thing with American slavery. Brings 'deadbeat dad' to a whole new level when he actually sells them off and keeps the cash! Not sure how other slaver cultures dealt with the issue.
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>>29939045
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>>29936250
Honestly, I put that bit about the insulin as a lame gag. Maybe I should do something with it later down the road.
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>>29936348
I wanna spank a princess.
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>>29939150
But Rarity is for spanking, silly
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>>29939097
>tfw you will never get a sweet deal on an appulcamel from Crazy Hassan
feels bad, man
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>You can’t remember the last time you’ve galloped at full speed like this.
>The young master is a near full grown human.
>Unmounted, your hooves seem to effortlessly fly across the planes.
>You’d almost relish this if it didn’t mean he wasn’t right here with you.
>Ponies are rarely bound and have free reign you like to stick close to master’s home anyways.
>Though it’s been happening less and less as he’s gotten bigger, but every now and then he'll to come out to play with you.
>Always best to be sure.
>You can never be too sure out here.
>Ears rotate and a grin shines through the rope as neither hide nor feather of that slizzard gizzard is heard.
>After a few more strides you can turn tail and head back for your master.
>Being this good warrants a belly rub for doing so well.
>Maybe even a couple.
>Even now, you can almost feel his blunted claws prod, scratch, and massage you.
>The thoughts alone cause a warmth to spread through your body.
>As beautiful and ornate as your saddle is, you’d have to get this pesky thing off first.
>Maybe he’ll even let you curl up in his coat with him afterwards.
>Right in front of a warm fire.
>Just a few more...
>The rustling wisp of flight feathers pull you from your day dream.
>There’s no way.
>You skid across the snow, jerking the rope as you take a sharp turn.
>Turning your head just enough to catch her bolt right past, you catch her barely glancing off the snow.
>Again, you can never be too sure.
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>>29939442
>She must be diving at you to pick up extra speed.
>You keep your eyes trailed on her as you change direction.
>The way she wobbles in the air almost resembles waddling ducks you saw in Equestria when you were a filly.
>You’ll be sure to mention that later.
>Eyes forward, you scan the plains, looking for something, anything to give you cover.
>Nothing.
>You're not sure what you were expecting.
>You snort, lightly chewing the rope in thought.
>The steep hills to your far right catch your attention.
>No.
>Trying to get up to higher ground won’t do you any better and climbing will leave you even more vulnerable.
>Not to mention, one steep fall, you might be looking at an injury far more harmful than a few cuts.
>Hearing the fanning of wings once more, you force yourself to pick up even more speed, lungs starting to burn with strain.
>You let go of the bit of rope in your mouth trying to fill your lungs with much needed oxygen, feeling the pull of the rope concentrated on your saddle.
>Then, you don’t feel the weight of it anymore.
>Nor under your hind legs.
>You don’t even get to look back before you limply flop across the snow like a fish out of water, making noises just as intelligible as one as the snot snow piles into your face.
>Not a moment too soon, it stops, and you gasp for air, eyes red with cold and anger as you see her perched back on master's shoulder, who’s jogging towards you, trying to fight back laughter.
“You know. For an earthpony you sure have your head in the clouds,” the cock roc chuckles.
>You're so upset that you almost buck when you feel a light tugging at your reigns.
>Master barks in surprise at your hostility, grimacing down at you while making surprised human noises.
>Ears pinned back, you face your master, leaning your forehead into his knee.
>You need to be more careful about that temper of yours.
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>>29939150
>>29939255
Rarity and Twilight are the most deserving for sure. I wrote too much Rarity lately though so its twi's turn as far as i'm concerned.
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>>29939449
>As he reaches over you, you almost collapse the the ground in submission again, though you fight through the fear, widening your shaky stance.
>It’s best to not make him any more angry.
>The young master leans in, fumbling with the buckle on your saddle as he loosens it up the strap.
>Cold air slips in, cooling your sweaty hide.
>You can’t help but slightly shiver and breathe in deeply, much more comfortable with the loosed pressure on your torso.
>Master is always looking out for you.
>Even when you mess up.
>Though you doubt you’re off the hook just yet.
>He pats the side of his leg, beckoning you to follow.


Sorry for the long hiatus, been focusing more on drawfagging. https://pastebin.com/Ay9ifYBL Pastebin
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>>29939456
>Tibetanon

OH MY FUCK NIGGA I THOUGHT YOU WAS DEAD

Uh oh. Pony misbehave. Pony get punish...?
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>>29936348
I want to make a princess pull heavy loads from dawn to dusk on an empty stomach.
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>>29939568
I want to fuck your mother
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>>29939528
Just been drawing super important things trying to get better at art. ;_;
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>>29936145
>Unfortunately, they underestimated his lust
>The mares they had could not sate him
>They were left with but one option when the last mare fell into an orgasmic stupor and he turned his eye to the room
>Celestia and Luna learned that day that he was unaffected by even their strongest spells
>Not that they did anything with that knowledge, having long since submitted to his insatiable lust
>And so, though none knew it, Anon became the true shadow ruler of Equestria
>His loyal slaves Celestia and Luna devoted themselves to the rest of his life
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>>29937368
Corona is a dead girl. A DEAD GIRL!
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>>29931681
I really like this. More?
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>>29939456
Welcome back.

>>29939580
Frogate is kinda cute in a hauntingly disturbing way.
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>>29935422
Ay.
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Eh, it's good enough. If I read over it six times and can't think of anything to change, it's good enough.

Pastebin: https://pastebin.com/GeEg7ELu

Posting one (1) Vinyl for verification.

>A strange noise roused you from your sleep.
>Something out of place, something that wasn’t snoring, muffled sleep panicking or quiet breathing.
>With your bed going to a pregnant mare, you’d been forced into the cuddle puddle.
>It was warm, at least.
>And the gentle, rhythmic breathing of the ponies would normally lull you to sleep quickly.
>Fluttershy had graciously let you use her as a pillow so you could fit in.
>Unfortunately, one of the stallions had let her sleep on his stomach, and with the angles coming together…
>Occasionally you woke up to morning wood in your face.
>The first night had been rough, so had the second, but after that you’d gotten used to it.
>It wasn’t like you could sleep well anyway.
>Coffee was still remaining difficult.
>She’d opened up to Rainbow more, being the pony that spent the second most time with her.
>But not as much as Sea Swirl.
>The two were rarely seen apart anymore.
>Coffee still hated you, but she was growing softer.
>Though she was perfectly content to let the days waste away, let the noose slowly tighten around your neck as time skipped past.
>Ponies were getting anxious.
>They knew just as well as you did that if Coffee didn’t spill the beans soon…
>No one was going home.
>It was very stressful.
>Too tired to fully wake up, you simply rest there with your eyes closed while you wait for the noise to come back.
>It sounded like talking.
>But muffled, quiet.
>”-elp, please! Someone!”
>Probably just someone talking in their sleep.
>It happened a lot.
>It wasn’t until the second voice that you realized something was wrong.
>”I told you to be quiet!”
>The first voice died down.
>”Good!”
>Something was wrong.
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>>29941021

>You rose softly to avoid waking anyone else up.
>Not easy to do when two ponies were resting against you.
>At first glance, everything looked normal.
>Dash was still there, sleeping.
>Everything seemed in place.
>You count the ponies.
>You count again when you come up short, hoping it was just the darkness.
>There’s a pony missing.
>It drives a spike of fear into your chest when you quickly swing the bathroom door open.
>Coffee and Sea Swirl were gone as well.
>Stumbling forward, you walk over to Rainbow.
“Rainbow…Rains, wake up.”
>She rolls over, snoring loudly, before suddenly choking and waking up.
>”Anon?”
“Come with me. Something’s not right.”
>”What time is…”
“Just get up.”
>Hovering into the air, Dash yawns and follows you out into the cold night air.
>The moon is bright tonight.
>The deck is empty, so you turn around, following the noise towards the bridge.
>Maybe everything was fine.
>Maybe someone had just decided to give Coffee a chance.
>In the middle of the night.
>Alone.
>You pick up the pace when you hear someone crying.
>Or not.
>The whispers become clearer.
>”Now listen, you fucking whore. When Anon wakes up in the morning, you’re going to go to him, and you’re going to tell him exactly where our Twilight is, understand?”
>There’s no response except for a muffled scream.
>You motion for Dash to be quiet, and she lands.
>”And you won’t tell him anything about this, right traitor? Or else I’ll just wake you up again, and again, and again. Forever. You think Anon is going to help a bitch like you anyway? He’s glad I’m doing this.”
>There’s nothing but a pained neigh.
>Turning the corner, you take in the scene as quickly as you can.
>Oh god, there was blood.
>It covered Coffee, running down her front legs.
>To your left, Sea Swirl struggled in her magical bonds, a glowing aura pinning her to the ground and wrapping around her mouth.
“What the fuck?”
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>>29941024

>Dash reacts before the unicorn can speak.
>You’re not sure if she understands the situation, or even if she recognizes the pony on the ground, but she sees someone in pain, and just attacks.
>Wings flapping, her body collides with the pony beating Coffee and pulls her across the boat, slamming into the railing.
>The knife clatters to the ground.
>She hesitates before coming to blows though, reluctant to swing first.
>The pony beneath her just cowers.
>Dash twists her head around as the pony begins to speak.
>”We have no choice, don’t you understand that?”
>”Anon, check on Coffee!”
>Snapping back to reality, you walk towards Coffee.
>She’s doing her best not to move.
>It must hurt when she tries.
>You try to pull her out of the ball she’s curled into, but she just shouts at you instead.
>”Don’t touch me! I don’t…want you to help me. Not you.”
>You ignore her protests.
>Maybe if she wasn’t injured, she might have been strong enough to stop you, but as she was, it’s easy to unravel and inspect her.
>There were cuts over the back of her front legs, where you wouldn’t see them, but even still she’s trying to keep a blank look on her face.
>Not letting you see how much it hurts.
>There’s a sound of hooves behind you, and you turn to see Sea Swirl, free from the unicorn’s magic.
>There are bruises on her as well.
“Go get the first aid kit, quickly.”
>Coffee would be fine, hopefully.
>The unicorn didn’t want her to die, but it was better to be safe.
>She squirms beneath you.
>”Let go of me.”
“Coffee, for once, can you please just sit still and let me help you?”
>”No.”
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>>29941028

>Dash keeps the pony beneath her as she watches; indignation on her face.
>”I’m trying to help!”
>Dash snaps back at her.
>”Shut up!”
>”I’m not going back to Jacob, I don’t care what you two think. I’m not letting her take me back. Can’t you see I’m right?”
>”All I see is someone beating on my friend.”
>”Friend? Her?”
>Dash tightens her grip.
>”I’m friends with every pony on Anon’s ship. Even if they’re someone like Coffee. Even if we don’t get along. We’re all together in this, like it or not.”
>The unicorn scowls.
>”Really though? Her? After everything she’s done?”
>An out of place grin spreads on her face.
>”Wasn’t she there, Rainbow? Wasn’t she there when you were raped?”
>Dash doesn’t react, as far as you can see.
>She’s been through worse, and picking into that wound isn’t going to distract her.
>Not that it stops the unicorn.
>”She was, wasn’t she? She watched and smiled and laughed while you were getting fucked! She’s not your friend, Rainbow, she hates you. I bet she’d do the entire thing to you again if you let her, just out of spite.”
>Dash’s breathing picks up.
>”That wasn’t her fault.”
>The unicorn doesn’t let up.
>”No, it was Jacob’s. But she helped. And this! This is her fault. She wants to send you back there, Rainbow, unless we stop her, are you gonna…”
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>>29941030

>”It wasn’t Jacob’s fault! It was mine! And this…this is my fault as well. And if you think I’m going to let a manipulative little shit like you rile me up and turn us against each other, you’re wrong.”
>Dash fluffs herself up, standing tall.
>”Element of loyalty, remember? I’ll stand by anyone on this ship, no matter how angry they make me. But I won’t stand by while someone tries to divide us when now more than ever we need to stay united.”
>”And she’s not dividing us, is she? She’s not for us, she’s as against us as she can possibly be.”
>”Because you’ve made her against us! You think she’s ever going to trust us now that you’ve kicked her teeth in? You think she’s ever going to tell us the truth when everyone here is waiting for an excuse to attack her?
>”She was against us long before I touched her and you know it. This is the only way.”
>”She was changing! She was growing to trust us! To trust me! All we needed to do was…”
>She pauses.
>”Be patient.”
>Her attention is pulled away as Swirl returns, the box in her mouth and a bucket of water on her back.
>She wastes little time pulling the box open, and taking some bandages out from within.
>You take them from her, and try to apply them to Coffee’s injuries.
>She fights you the entire time.
>Carefully, Swirl takes the bandages back.
>”Let…let me do it, sir.”
>You take a step back as Sea Swirl takes control.
>You watch for a while, but can easily see that Coffee struggles less when it’s not you.
>Leaving Swirl to her work, you turn to the unicorn.
“Get up.”
>Dash slowly lets go of her.
>It’s not like she can run anywhere.
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>>29941034

>The pony stands defiantly as Rainbow swings around to your side.
>She likes it there. It makes her feel equal.
>Waiting patiently for you to begin, Rainbow simply stares at the assaulter.
>You do the same.
>”Well? Stop staring and get it over with! What are you gonna do? Starve me? Lock me up? Whip me? You don’t even own a whip, if you did I would have used it on Coffee.”
>You just stare at her some more.
>Behind you, Coffee is struggling back to her hooves, but falls every time.
“What’s your name? Primrose, right?”
>You had tried to, at least, learn everyone’s names.
>”Yes.”
>You waited for the anger to come.
>Waited for the right words to well up inside you, waited to chew her out for everything she’d done.
>The grievous mistakes she’d made.
>But it never did.
“I expected better from you.”
>There’s more silence.
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>>29941039

>Primrose speaks up, clearly uncomfortable at having to wait.
>”I’m doing what I have to! Because the two of you are too weak to take command! We need to know where Twilight is, there’s no other way! We’re doomed otherwise!”
>You step closer and ignore her insult.
“And you think we don’t realize this?”
>She flinches
“You think you’re the only person on this ship that realizes how fucked we are? If we get caught, Rainbow is going to lose her friend for the third time now; and if that happens, I don’t think I’m going to have a partner for much longer. Sunshine and Moonlight are going to lose their children and spend the rest of their lives making and losing more. Even I’m going to get punished and probably spend years in jail. You think me and Rainbow don’t realize this?”
>Primrose breaks eye contact
“We know things are bad!”
>You sigh
>Tried to rationalize everything you were saying
>Even now, there was a sliver of yourself that agreed with Primrose
>It was the smart thing to do
>But you hadn’t saved these mares because it was the smart thing to do
“But attacking Coffee is only going to make them worse.”
>Primrose speaks up
>”We don’t have a choice!”
“Coffee is a broken mare, and you don’t fix a broken mare by breaking them more. She needs time to rest, time to become herself again. In time, she will change. Everything does. And there’s nothing we can do until she does. We only risk making things worse. You just need to wait, Primrose.”
>”If you think…”
>You cut her off.
“You hurt Coffee badly. Dash, ‘Shy, and myself will think of an appropriate punishment in the morning. Rainbow, if you could escort her back to the rest?”
>”Yea, okay, but what if she…attacks me?”
“Then she’ll just need a bigger punishment, now won’t she?”
>Nodding, Dash lands next to Primrose, roughly shoving her forward
>You watch the two of them leave, before focusing your attention back on Coffee and Swirl
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>>29941042

>Coffee tenses up as you approach, doing her best to turn away so that she doesn’t have to look at you.
>Swirl’s done a good job bandaging her, and the red-stained cloth makes it easier to see the extent of the damage.
>Sea Swirl moves behind you to give you more room.
>Most of the wounds are around her front legs, with the rest in places you wouldn’t even think to look.
>Her tail dock and the bottom of her hooves.
>All superficial, thankfully.
>But still…to think one of your ponies could do something so horrible.
>So monstrous.
>The smell of blood hits you, and you have to take a step back.
>You can’t even begin to think of an appropriate punishment.
>Swirl smiles awkwardly as you take it all in.
>Noticing her attention, you snap back to reality.
“Oh, sorry, I forgot. Are you…okay as well? Primrose didn’t hurt you too bad, right?”
>”Just bruises from struggling. Coffee got the worst of it, sir. She was already out here by the time I woke up.”
“I shouldn’t have let this happen, I’m so sorry. I should have noticed.”
>”It’s okay, Anon. You already do so much for us, I just thought…maybe I could have taken this off your hands. I thought, between me and Coffee, we could keep each other safe. Sir.”
“You should have woken me and Rainbow. We could have kept you safe, at least.”
>Swirl glances away guiltily.
>You take a deep breath.
“I just…can’t believe this happened. I’m sorry.”
>Coffee speaks up from in front of you.
>”Well it did! Maybe if you weren’t such a horse-fucking cuck you could take care of your own ponies. Jacob never had infighting, he kept his ponies happy!”
>You suspect he kept them scared, more than anything.
>But you don’t say it.
>”Ponies are scared, sir. They don’t act right when they’re scared. When she calms down, Primrose will apologize. We are not a violent race, not usually. Not in our hearts, sir.”
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>>29941049

“Is she…going to be okay? The cuts…”
>Swirl is quiet for a moment.
>”I don’t know, sir. She won’t die from them but… there are a lot of important things in the back of your leg. I can’t say for sure that they’re all…uninjured. I’m not… I can’t be a doctor.”
>Swirl looks away for a moment; a hoof rising to her face.
>It wipes the beginnings of a tear out of her eye.
>She takes a deep, quivering breath, before regaining her composure.
>”Sorry, I’m still a little shaken, sir.”
>Wriggling away from you, Coffee speaks up.
>”Don’t worry, Swirls. Just remember, soon we’ll both be home again. That’s soothing, right?”
>You stare at her for a moment before focusing in Swirl.
“Do you need anything? Some water?”
>”No, no, I don’t want to bother you. I think it would be best if we just calmed down and went back to sleep. I’ve already done…everything I know how to do, sir. Only time will help her now. And maybe we can forget how Coffee and I were nearly…”
>She goes quiet.
“It’s okay to be scared.”
>”I know, I know. It’s just…I followed you, because I was tired of being scared. Of ponies hating one another. Of people hating me. Of Jacob. And I thought maybe, everything would work out. That we could escape all this. That we could give everyone a chance. And for a moment, we were safe. But now I just don’t…feel that safety anymore. We’re never gonna escape it. Slavery’s broken us in ways we haven’t even realized. We’ll never…be the ponies we were back in Equestria, nor can we ever return to them. We’ll always be scared.”
>You listen carefully.
“I’m sorry.”
>”It’s not your fault, sir.”
“Don’t worry, from now on, me and Dash are going to sleep with you and Coffee, okay? No one’s gonna get the chance to hurt you.”
>”Thanks. It…means a lot.”
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>>29941053

>You sit in silence for a moment longer, before Coffee ruins it by coughing loudly.
>”Fuck off already, get away from me. Haven’t you done enough tonight?”
>You ignore her, looking over to Swirl.
>”I think we’ll be fine for tonight, Anon. You don’t need to stick around.”
“Are you sure?”
>”Coffee’ll sleep better if you’re gone, and tonight…she needs her sleep. You don’t need to worry, everything will be fine.”
>Reluctantly, you stand up.
>Swirl slips around you, bending down and helping Coffee to her hooves.
>She shakes uncertainly, leaning heavily on Swirl.
>”Relax, Coffee. Just…lean on me. Everything will be fine. I’m here for you.”
>Coffee gives a rare smile as Swirl carries her across the deck.
>Her words are slightly slurred from pain.
>”You’re…you’re the only good pony here, Swirl. You’re a good little pony slave. When…when we get home, I hope…I hope they make you like me.”
>To any rational person, Coffee’s words might have sounded like an insult, or even a threat.
>But she didn’t see it like that.
>She was smiling.
>She truly wanted Sea Swirl to be happy.
>To find the same kind of joy in submission that Coffee did.
>You could only watch as the two of them limped over to the bridge.
>”There there, let’s just get you fixed up, okay? You’re…getting blood all over my coat.”
>Just to be sure, you watched them for a couple hours more.
>You said you’d leave, but that was a lie.
>They sat down back to back; Coffee talking and Swirl merely listening.
>Eventually, the talking stopped, and they fell into a needed sleep.
>And you were left alone to figure out what to do next.
>How to punish the offender.
>Damn ponies.
>There was no way Coffee was going to help you now.
>Why did they have to make everything so difficult?
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>>29941055

And that's it.
What will Anon do next?
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>>29941060
You know, i was just reading the pastebin of this wondering when it would update next, and volia!

now desu im most looking forward to rainbow getting some sweet loving or at least some happiness in her life.

This fic is great dont get me wrong, but ive read many a fic that ruin themselves by it just being a constant never ending downer. You've gotta have hope spots and breather chapters every now and again. Balance the good with the bad you know?

Anyways, continue writing. Ill keep reading.
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>>29928710
I want to see her spread dat thick mare placenta
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>>29941060
I know you got a plan and all, but damn does Prim need her ass whipped with Anon's belt, and hard. With Coffee watching, too. That way, Coffee might get the idea that Anon is a "strong, tough" master or whatever and maybe become more willing to open up to him.
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>>29941060
Keelhaul Primrose's ass.
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>>29941060
Anon won't have a real horn limiter on hand, but could he improvise one? Would a few loops of steel wire and some JB Weld work? That would be fairly mild as a punishment, but fairy effective as a deterrent.
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>>29941194
That isn't even really a punishment, just a precaution for her. Hate to say it, but he needs to whip her ass.
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>>29940040
Definitely, however I have finals this week, and the week after I'm going on a week's vacation where I won't have my computer, so it'll be a little bit in coming.
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Dirty Slave Bump
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>>299391566
I want celestia to be spanked until she is bawling and has a very red bottom. Thoroughly humiliated
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>>29941644

Hmmm... Sun horse is not for spank. Sun horse is for snuggles and space adventures
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>>29941735
Speaking of space adventures, let's cont

>Sol tracer moths
>That's what they're called
>A fitting name, actually
>The way their wings look like solar flares as the dance in the breeze
>Completely harmless and surprisingly docile
>In fact they're often kept as pets
>They aren't even native to this planet, they just happen to thrive here
>You find it funny that you've never seen one before, as they are supposedly a common sight around this stretch of the galaxy
>You need to get out more
>On that topic, you've recently discovered that your horse house mate enjoys the simple game of hide and seek
>There isn't much too it, one person hides, the other finds
>You can't believe you had to have that explained to you
>It's not something you ever played as a kid
>You are enjoying it thoug- AHAH!
>A bit of pink is poking out from behind your fusion plant
>Also a jagged horn
>And a limp wing
>Yeah, she may like it...
>But she's shit at it
>By this point you're actively avoiding finding her, just to make the rounds last longer
>You stalk towards the reactor, keeping low and silent
>Jesus you can hear her giggling meters away
>You crouch in front of the reactor, and a large magenta eye finds it's way round the side
>She can't see you
>You'd think eyes that size would have a massive field of view, but she's completely blind to your advance
>The soft humming of the generator concedes your every movement as you prepare to pounce on your prey
>3...
>2...
>1...
>You leap up in front of her, giving a mighty roar
>Her reaction is priceless
>A scream of fright, followed by a flex of every muscle in her body
>Needless to say she travels quite far backwards, landing in a pile of legs and feathers
>You're laughing now
"Your fucking face!"
In your fit of hysteria, you manage to switch from laughing to coughing pretty quickly
>Fucking dry throat
>You'll need to pick up she meds tomorrow when you're out
>Along with a whole bunch of other stuff
>Like a lot more
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>>29941887

>Celestia has managed to untangle herself by this point, and now stands before you expectantly
>You check your watch
>10 pm
>It might be time to retire for the night
"Right Sun horse, I think it might be time to clean up for the night."
>She visibly deflates, but her smile remains
>"Okay Anon, I'll go..."
>What?
>She quickly disappears into the house, leaving you standing around in the garden amongst the strewn remains of a day of fun
>You didn't even know horses could play swing ball, let alone a hundred times better that you
>A noise disrupts you train of thought as Celestia can be seen attacking the floor of your home with a broom
>Oh, she must have taken 'clean up' literally
>"Anon? Why is your communication device blinking?"
>You have a call apparently
"I'll get that, and you don't actually have to clean up, it was a figure of speech."
>She either doesn't hear you or chooses to ignore you, as she continues to push the broom around
>Why the fuck so you even have a broom?
>Eh, forget it
>Picking up your phone, you see that the call is from none other that your lovely boss
>You almost wish they had never invented faster than light phone calls
>At least then he wouldn't be able to bother you with his over exaggerated sighs of disappointment
>Fucking dick
>You slide your finger across the screen and lift it up to your ear...
>...And then you take it away from your ear to stop it from rupturing
>"ANONYMOUS! I HAVE BEEN CALLING YOU ALL FUCKING DAY, WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU!?"
>Uh oh
>His secretary probably forgot to relay information again
"G-good evening sir, what's the issue?"
>You can actually hear the animalistic snarls he's emitting
>"DON'T YOU GIVE ME THAT HORSE CRAP! I needed your courier here this morning for a supply run! Where were you!?"
"I called in sick sir, your new secretary answered the phone and told me it was green."
>"I DON'T HAVE A FUCKING SECRETARY DIPSHIT! WHEN HAVE I EVER HAD A SECRETARY?!"
>Oh, looks like you got pranked
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>>29941060
That was a good update nice size too.
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>>29942185

"I swear sir, someone answered the phone and said they were your secretary."
>"Sure they did, and I own a unicorn!"
>You take a look at Celestia, who is now washing the windows with a dirty dish cloth
"Look I swear! I'll make up the time tomorrow!"
>"You fucking better, or your ass is fired! You hear! I don't have time to deal with truancy. Turn up or no pay up. Kapeesh?"
"Y-yes sir."
>"Good, now I expect to see you on your next shift. And be fucking punctual or I swear to god I'll fire you right there and then!"
>There was a blip as he hung up
>What a dick
>To be fair he probably had to redirect another ship to do your job, but that doesn't mean you enjoy getting yelled at down the phone
>Whichever intern pulled this one would most definitely be getting smacked when you saw them
>Celestia has now finished 'cleaning' the windows
>It's actually not that bad, just a bit of dish grease here and there
>She's now attempting to reorganise your cutlery by type rather than by most used
"Hey Celestia?"
>"Yes Anon?"
>"I can't be fucked cooking, wanna order a pizza and watch a movie?"
>She puts down one of your least used eating impliments, the dreaded knife, and gives you a confused look
>"Okay... What's a pizza? I-if you don't mind me asking."
>...
>...
>You were gonna teach this horse so many things...
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>>29941735
She is indeed for snuggles and space adventures. That pounce was was darling. Do you suppose she might be letting him win? Even regular horses are pretty impossible to sneak up on.
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She could be... ;)
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Bump
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>>29939456
I like this story. I've been hoping you'd update again.
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>>29941034
>>”She was changing! She was growing to trust us! To trust me! All we needed to do was…”
>>She pauses.
>>”Be patient.”
Hey, she's learning.
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>>29941060
Give Primrose a literal spanking. Bend her over his knee in front of the ones she hurt and bare handed, flat palmed spank her butt.
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>>29941887
>>Jesus you can hear her giggling meters away
fuck thats cute
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>>299410000
Snuggling can come after she has a smarting bottom
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>>29923138
>>29923524
>>29924403

"Alright. We'll give it a shot. The first time, though, I'll be there. I want to have a chance to talk to this pony before I let him anywhere near my house."
> "Of course!"
> You scowl again at Cadance's instant - and honestly, less than sincere sounding - acquiescence.
"I'm serious, Cadance. If he says anything..."
> This time she seems to sense your concern.
> "Sunburst isn't a dedicated rebel. He's clinging to the only pony here he really knows, and I won't be going anywhere. Letting him see Flurry again will be just another reason for him to behave."
"Then there shouldn't be any issue when he talks to me. Or if someone else sits in on his lessons."
> "Agreed."
> Looking down at the alicorn at your side, you suddenly offer a spontaneous chuckle.
"I think we'll be alright here, Cadance. If this does work out, building bridges across - if you can leverage his opinion, he's got to have... whatever the phrase is, 'street cred? For his role. If they see him working with us..."
> The alicorn makes a face.
> " 'Street cred'?"
"Y'know, like, respect among the-"
> "I know what it means. Isn't that phrase ridiculously out of date, though?"
> You roll your eyes sharply; of course the slave pony who didn't even leave the camp was more up to date on slang than you.
> But you're also grinning still, and reach down to pat her mane.
"...yeah, yeah. You know what I meant."
> "I do, and I think you're right as well. It's like with Rumble: He saw that Mocha was genuinely helping, and he was willing to open his mind and think about what that means."
"I hope so, Cadance..."
> Her mouth half-opens, but no words come out - again, hesitating to bring her thoughts to your attention.
"Speak your mind, Cadance."
> "...Master, when this works - and it will work - I hope you'll see that you can't just rely on us to be... ambassadors for you. You have to come out and make your presence felt as well."
> Snorting gently, you shake your head.
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>>29943458

"I somehow don't think I'm going to be received with the same open minds, Cadance."
> "Then that's what you have to change. You're too distant right now. The only time most of them saw you was when you came down to see the whipping! If you ever want them to see you as something else you have to become more directly involved."
> Looking down, you raise an eyebrow.
"You're speaking frankly today."
> "A leader sometimes has to."
"Noted. But for now, I think you're doing plenty. Let me manage this expansion, and you keep the camp in line."

> Watching Anonymous go, you surpress a quiet sigh of frustration.
> When would he see that this sort of isolation was doing more damage than good?
> Even so, it's all you could do to keep from doing a little dance in place when Anonymous had agreed to your suggestion.
> Sunburst - teaching Flurry Heart!
> All you could have hoped for, and more.
> Moments like this are what make you think all your aunt used to say about destiny setting things right might still somehow be true.
> Not only would it give you another set of eyes and ears with you daughter, one you trusted absolutely, but it would add an extra layer of protection onto Sunburst as well:
> Should any of his notes or tomes on magic be found, there'd be an easy and simple explanation for their existence.
> Of course he would need those kinds of notes - he was teaching an alicorn, after all!
"I'm sure Sunburst will be delighted to hear you accept. I'll see about setting up a proper time for the first lesson and relay it to you?"
> "Sounds good, Cadance. And I'll have Mocha deliver the copies of these images as soon as we get them scanned, resized, and printed."
> Departing as he does, you quickly turn back to your own internal little celebration.
> As you are leaving the manor, however, another man steps out in front of you.
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>>29943463

> So lost in your own thoughts are you that you nearly collide with him - and, in fact, he had made absolutely no effort to get out of your way either.
> Why becomes abundantly clear when you look up - up to the mirrored glasses and long white cane held in his hand.
"Ah, Randall - I apologize, I wasn't looking where I was going."
> "Quite alright; I will admit the same. Cadance, yes?"
> His joke draws a small smile to your lips.
"Yes, Sir."
> He reaches out with surprising accuracy, feeling for you and slipping a hand around your cheek.
> "Ah, there you are. My apologies, I just didn't want to hit you with my cane."
"Not at all. I've heard that humans sometimes use touch to 'see' when they, ah, cannot..."
> "Afraid that's a bit of a myth. Although-"
> He pats around your muzzle a little further.
> "-although you are shaped a fair bit differently than most ponies, I will admit."
"Yes, Sir."
> A moment later the full implication of his carrying a cane comes down on you:
"Posey isn't with you, sir?"
> "No, not right now. I've been here enough times that I'm starting to get a sense of where things are in the house, and there's no need to have her constantly at my side. She's a helpful little thing, but she deserves a little time off too."
> Helpful, you wonder, or terrified of what would happen if she found herself anything less than essential?
> Either way, an idea is taking shape in your head.
"Forgive me for asking, Sir, but if she has some time off - perhaps she would like to spend it in the camp?"
> "Nothing needs to be forgiven! It's an excellent idea, if you can get her out of the room..."
> Ah, of course.
> Haute Glamour's influence there again, working on top of Posey's already introverted nature.
> Even without seeing you, Randall seems to sense what you are thinking.
> "I do wish I could get her out more. She's better with the others back home, but there's so few she knows here."
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>>29943476

"I'm sure I can find someone who would be willing to be her friend."
> Yet, at the same time, you can't feel a nagging sense that what you are doing is less than friendly.
> Do you want to help her?
> Save her from the shadow that was cast over her?
> Absolutely.
> But at the same time you also want to use her:
> Wield her as a tool to strike out at Haute Glamour.
> A little shiver runs down your spine.
> It isn't using her.
> You swear that.
> It isn't-
> "-ance? Are you alright?"
"Ah - yes, I'm alright. I'm sorry. A - bad thought crept into my head."
> "Not about me, I hope."
"No, no! Not at -"
> But he is grinning, and you issue a small sigh of mixed relief and annoyance.
> "I understand. It happens."
> After he passes, though, your thoughts return.
> Whatever the reason, Posey was still your key to undermining Haute and seeing the pretentious unicorn's reign of terror on Randall's ponies done away with.
> And that would start when you showed her that there was any other way to live at all.
> You owed it to Posey to send the pony who could actually speak to her.
> Not just put pressure on her to speak up but actually show her that she could have friends, that there was no need for her to live under the hoof of another.
> ...yourself?
> Certainly you could show her the greater picture of what you'd done in the camp.
> But you also knew that your status as an alicorn could be... overbearing for some, and she was already reactionary enough to overbearing presences.
> Thunderlane, possibly; he could absolutely show her the safety and protection you'd brought from the camp.
> Made it a place where ponies didn't have to fear random brutality simply for being slaves.
> Mocha would be another option.
> The two were alike in many respects, but Mocha had also shown a deep personal strength that might rub off on Posey.
> Or - and you almost chuckle at the thought - Flurry Heart.
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>>29943486

> She had, after all, come into this camp from abuse and neglect to a degree of safety, protection, and comfort.
> Not that you'd forgotten about Anonymous' ominous warning looming over her head, but if Flurry could show Posey that there wasn't a need to hide how things really were from Randall...
> It might just do the trick.

So, who are we sending?

>>29938547
>not too late
It's really never too late, but unfortunate this time it was just outvoted
>preening her wings
Yeah, it's a parental thing. Poor lovehorse doesn't get to see her daughter often enough, so she does pegasus parent things whenever she sees her out of parental instinct.
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>>29943486
I think Mocha would be a good choice for this task. Both of them are very similar in nature, they're both their master's vital assistants, and they want nothing more than to please and be useful to their masters, thus she would provide a good other for Posey to relate to. Mocha has come a long way from the shy little girl she was, and they would probably like each other.
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>>29943495
>So, who are we sending?
It's time for Mochas second spy mission!
In the best covert operations tradition, she won't even be aware of the larger goals, well just try to steer them together. She has all the qualities we need and her loyalties are well understood.
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>>29941060
totally unseriously
fuck her in the ass hard with a fishing rod
use her as bait for the fish
make her pull the boat
fuck her in the ears
fishing rods make a nice whip
shave her coat, everyone gets a turn!
use as a beanbag for workout?
morning wood eliminator
i heard that the glue was running out
reduced food
use her as a nutcracker (dont ask where to get nuts from in the middle of the ocean)
drill into her horn to get rid of her magic
toilet slave?
sleep deprivation for at least 3 days
shave her tail and die her mane
use her as a 4 legged lamp by soaking her tail in oil and lighting it from the end (maybe it wont catch fire instantly but burn nicely)

ok im done, pls ignore me senpaí
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>>29943495
>> ...yourself?
first hand hoof info is better
Also Cadence could try to make it look like that the going out idea come from Posey's mind somehow.
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>>29943495
Also voting for Cadance. Mocha a good girl and is working hard for us, but Cadance brings the protective authority that Posey needs to see before she can feel safe.

Let Mocha keep helping us by running the suggestions box stuff out of the camp and building bridges there, where she is already doing good wor for us. This falls to Cadance.
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>>29944593
Well, one particular stallion is anyway.
>somewritefag: we need you!
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>>29941060
>What will Anon do next?

That this does not finish as Jonestown, That this does not finish as Jonestown....

Please
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>>29941060
In the morning Anon celebrates a small trial and reports what happened at dawn in detail, that as a punishment Primrose must clean the deck twice a day for the rest of the trip to the view of everyponies, that she herself testify what it is to be seen as a Coffee
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>>29943463
>"Then that's what you have to change. You're too distant right now. The only time most of them saw you was when you came down to see the whipping! If you ever want them to see you as something else you have to become more directly involved."

And to associate its human owner with the whip and the machines of torture of Corona will only incite more to the annoying ponies
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>>29943476
>Posey's already introverted nature.

>"I do wish I could get her out more. She's better with the others back home, but there's so few she knows here."

>Sunburst teaching Flurry Heart!

Posey's + Sunburts =I like what I am thinking in this moment
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>>29945223
wait, posey's a stallion?
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>>29944806
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>>29945236
What is not a mare?
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>>29945331
Corona is a good harnessed poner
Shiny is a good saddled poner
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>>29943495
> You roll your eyes sharply; of course the slave pony who didn't even leave the camp was more up to date
Cadance should savor it while it lasts.

Where does Anon shop for fresh stock? Are free born still available from Equestria, foals from dedicated breeding facilities, rejects from other camps, or is this one of the dreaded 'labour camps' that ponies from other stories do anything to avoid? Anon must consider what source is most profitable and least destabilizing! It would seem to be literally a one-way trip through the gate, with all of them dieing here even if it's of old age. Has the dialect and culture of this isolated population had time to diverge much? 'Street cred' and other slang might still be current here many years after it is disused outside.
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>>29945043
>The ponies decide that they'd rather die than return to Jacob.
>They sink the ship.

Oh shit, how did you guess the ending?

No, but seriously, we've already discussed that the ultimate depressive ending is the ship sinks, but Fluttershy survives and is broken from the knowledge that she killed everyone.
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>>29945331
I want to ride the Shiny.
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>>29945618
don't forget her getting picked up by another human, one possible worse than Jacob or - darkest scenario - a kind one who can never get through to her because of how broken she is
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>>29945618
Ultimate depressive ending = IHLAOY ending.
>don't think we've forgotten Regards
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>>29945651
But he doesn't want you to.
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>>29943495
Why not to Sunburst?

Thunderlane already has too many obligations on his back and Mocha has the job of intermediary between the population and his too far Master, Sunburst is kind, educated and almost harmless could be a good guide on the property
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>>29945699
He'll get over it when he realizes there are belly rubs, a nice bath, ear scritchies, and cartoons in it for him at the end.
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>>29945712
And a blowjob?
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>>29945712
>when you find out he's not watching children's cartoons
>that's Legend of the Overfiend
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>>29945670
The psychological wounds are so severe that Fluttershy develops a sadistic and cruel personality, his new master, terrified dies in an 'accident' and Fluttershy wanders for a while before finding a group of profuse ponies who try to flee from a group of bountyhunters, She ends up betraying them and giving them to the humans in exchange for a place in her gang, eventually she gets the reputation of the cruelest pony that ever existed.

It's the birth of Flutterhunter
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>>29945730
Anon is also a vintage anime Connoisseur. Their bond grows deeper with every tentacle rape scene.
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>You rub your hooves against the band holding your muzzle shut, growling as they fail to catch hold.
>If you can get this off, then you SHOULD be able to use your mouth to open the door.
>It didn’t sound like he locked it last time.
>As the sides of your mouth grow raw, you start to slap your tail against the ground in frustration, your hooves' scrabbling getting more and more forceful.
>Finally, having made no progress, you roll over on your side and punch the wall.
“Nnnn!”
>Blinking back tears, you punch it again and again and again, feeling...nothing.
>You never thought you’d miss your hands.
>The three of you spent...you don’t even know how long trying to get home, to get back to normal.
>Of course you took the first opportunity you saw, regardless of what the other two said.
>After Adagio’s screw-up lost you three your magic, you told her to drink bleach and followed the princess bitch back through the portal.
>Boy, was she surprised to see a giant sea-monster appear right before her.
>A giant sea-monster who, as it turned out, couldn’t do a whole lot besides flop around in front of her.
>Turns out..no magic, no flight.
>No flight means you can barely move out of the water.
>She almost killed you right then and there. Then she took pity on you, that was even worse.
>You curl up in a ball.
>You don’t even know what you’re going to do once you get the door open.
>It’s doubtful you could get away before he catches you.
>But you never were one for plans. Sure, you can deal with the immediate issue, but anything beyond that was Adagio’s department-and she wasn’t even good at it!
>Adagio...you wonder what those two are up to?
>Is there even anything left? No magic means no flight, no singing, no immortality, no plans.
>Do they even care that you’re gone?
>...Of course they do!
>They’re probably trying to follow you right now!
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>>29945909
>Then it’s only a matter of time before they hear you disappeared and figure out a way to rescue you.
>Your blood runs cold as you hear the door open.
>He’s back.
>You shut your eyes tight and curl in harder on yourself, hoping he gets distracted, that doesn’t see you.
>Right. Like a human wouldn’t notice YOU.
>Then again, it always worked with Sonata.
>Maybe he's just going to hose you down again? It's been a while.
>’I know a way to restore your magic.’ You HAD to believe him didn’t you?
>It made sense at the time...how else could he have gotten to Equestria and stayed a human, unless he had magic?
>The last thing you expected was for him to drug you and wake up down here, with him pouring water over you, declaring that you're his “new pet.”
>He even had the gall to claim that Princess Bitch said he could "hold you captive until you're rehabilitated."
>You’re still trying to figure out if it was a lie or not.
>Apparently you're still 'dangerous.'
>Which you are! Just...not out of water anymore.
>Your heart beats like a drum as his heavy footsteps draw closer.
>Your still-sore facial tendrils are demonstration of how creative he is at inflicting pain for the sake of it.
>Speaking of, pain soon lances into your skull as he grabs your dorsal fin, pulling your head back.
>Your blood boils as indignant rage swoops in to replace that fear.
>He's human-they've been your prey for centuries!
>How DARE he touch you?! He's food!
>”Look at me, Aria.”
>You open your eyes, glaring daggers at him as you snarl as best you can.
>”How’s my little seahorse doing? Still as feisty as ever?”
>If your looks could still kill…
“ ‘uck you.”
>That’s the best reply you can make with that band on.
>He chuckles, his hand twisting your fin.
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>>29945916
>You tense up, trying not give that...prey the satisfaction of knowing how much that hurts.
>”That’s the spirit. We wouldn’t want to ruin the fun by giving up too soon, would we?”
>He lets go of your fin and stands up, towering over you.
>You’re nearly twice the size of him but it doesn’t matter when you’re stuck on your belly.
>”Now I have a game for us to play...one that might be more fun for me than you, but we’ll see.”
>You seethe, just glaring at him.
>You’re not going to beg for mercy-you won’t give him that satisfaction.
>He gets NOTHING from you.
>”How about a fun little game of dress up?”
>Wait...what?
>You blink twice as he holds up a bag.
>That was...not...quite what you were expecting. Most foal-nappers wouldn’t do something like that, would they?
>You three never did.
>”You’re familiar with the concept of a mermaid, I hope?"
>Familiar?
>Ha! Shows what he knows! You three practically invented them!
>But you don't let up your death glare for a second.
>Seeing he’s not getting a response, he crouches back down, cupping a hand to his ear.
>"I'm sorry, I didn't quite catch that. Let's try again. Do you know what a mermaid is?"
>He growls out that last sentence.
>Your chest heaves, a snarl on your face as you decide how to properly respond.
>He’s too far back for you to reach with your tail…
>And your...arms? Legs? Forelimbs aren’t as flexible as they were as human.
>He’s at the wrong angle for you to attack him.
>Not that the last two times have been very successful...he’s faster than you are on land.
>...You don’t care.
>No human deserves to be anything more than your next meal!
>You lash your tail back, flipping over to bring your hooves to bare.
>”Woah!”
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>>29945924
>You only get half way before his hand grabs your snout, slamming your head back against the floor, his other arm sweeps up, hooking under your leg and presses to your chest, pinning your withers to the floor.
>No!
>You let out out a scream of rage.
>Thrashing your hooves, you kick your tail, your fins making a wet slapping noise against the stone floor as you try to break his hold on you.
>He laughs as he holds you like that, his grip unyielding.
>His laughter makes you see red.
>You don’t care how useless it is.
>You just want to kill him, hurt him-make him know his place!
>He should be begging you for mercy!
>But the only thing you manage to accomplish with your flailing is to exhaust yourself.
>It’s only once you’re completely limp, your muscles burning, your chest heaving as you try to catch your breath, does he speak,
>”Did you have fun?”
>You start another weak bout of thrashing in response.
>”Alright, enough!” he yells, letting go of you as he stands up.
>This is your chance, you can-
>He stomps his foot down on your chest, right on the scar where your gem used to be, knocking the wind out of you.
>You instinctively curl up again, your eyes wide.
>”It was cute the first time, but now it’s just annoying.”
>He grinds the heel of his shoe into that scaleless scar, causing your eyes to water.
>”You know I’m going to have to punish you for that little outburst. It’s cute, yea, but I can’t be dealing with you trying to hurt yourself every time I want to play with you.”
>Blinking away your tears, you spit out your reply,
“Ea’ a ‘ick”
>You resume snarling at him, trying to will him to have an aneurysm.
>But the look on his face...you recognize that one.
>It’s a look of utter confusion...Sonata’s default expression.
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>>29945941
>Despite the fact that you could barely stand her, a pang of homesickness stabs your heart.
>You can feel your expression softening...it hasn’t been a week you already miss those two.
>”Did you really just say…? Wow. No one’s told me to do that since I got here.”
>Now it’s your turn to be confused as he starts laughing again.
>That laughter stops abruptly an instant before he stomps his foot into your chest again.
>He’s on you in a flash, his hand wrapping around your throat, squeezing your gills shut. It’s not enough to strangle you...just annoy you.
>He straddles your chest, his knees pressing to the perfect spot to pin both of your legs back.
>His snarl mirrors your own, mere inches away.
>”You do NOT talk to your master that way, is that clear?!”
>What's he going to do?
>You're cloaked in a thick, protective coat of scales-you're practically wearing armor, he can't do anything to you with his bare hands!
“ ‘uck-”
>There's a flash before your head's knocked to the side, cutting off your scathing reply-leaving the side of your face stinging.
>Right.
>You forgot the scales on your face are actually REALLY sensitive.
>”Try again. You do NOT talk to me that way. Is that CLEAR?!”
>You aren’t going to let him win.
“ ‘uck y-”
>He slaps your face again, knocking your snout into the floor.
>”And again. You do not. Talk to your master like that. Understand?”
>With a strangled scream of rage, you thrash under him, slamming your tail, trying to throw him off you.
>You might have succeeded if you hadn't just exhausted yourself.
>He switches from open slaps to a closed fist, bring it down on your snout again and again until you stop flailing.
>"Try again."
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>>29945953
>He continues on like this, slapping on the first syllable of your clever insults, switching to full on punching when you try to get him off.
>Finally, you lay under him, panting, your extensive list of brilliant insults exhausted, the human still incessantly repeating the same thing over and over again.
>"Try again. You don't get to talk to your master like that, understand?"
>...Your face hurts.
>How are his hands NOT hurting?!
>You aren't getting anywhere like this...just appease him and move on.
>Trying to avoid looking at him, you nod.
"Yehsss."
>His scowl instantly brightens, his hands slipping from your neck.
>Your throbbing head rolls back as you lay back against the ground, staring up at the ceiling.
>”Good girl Aria, good girl.”
>He pats at your shoulder before getting off you.
>”Look at me, my seahorse.”
>You turn your head to look at the human, refusing to sit up.
>He's reaching inside his coat.
>Yep, the pretentious bastard always wears a full suit and tie, like he's important-you'd want to kill him even if he WASN'T abusing you.
>Just grab that tie and strangle him.
>His gasping cries, begging you for forgiveness, for his life, would be sweet music to your ears.
>"Now, I get it. You've been human for so long, you forgot you're really just a stupid fish. You’re still getting used to your dumb animal brain again."
>Your rage flares anew-ANY siren is smarter than a human! You three more than proved that!
>But he's out of reach...
>Not to mention your muscles are still burning from all your flailing.
>He walks around you, staying out of range of your tail as he walks down to your caudal fin.
>"That's why it takes you so long to learn a lesson. Why you need to be taught the simplest of things."
>He swoops his free hand down, grabbing your tail just before the fin and lifts you up by it.
>You're too exhausted to do anything more than lift your head to watch.
>He pulls his hand out of his coat revealing…
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>>29945959
>A pair of pliers.
>Your heart skips a beat.
>Every other time he’s pulled those out has resulted in you screaming.
>...Not this time. You won’t let him!
>"Which means we had better get started on your punishment!”
>As you try to pull your tail back, he grabs one of your scales with those pliers, causing you to tense up-you know trying to pull away would just cause that scale to be pulled out.
>”What do you think? One for every insult?”
>Without giving you a chance to respond, he yanks hard, ripping that scale out by the root.
“Naaauuh!”
>You arch your back as agony shoots through your tail. You once again try to pull your tail back, you can’t let him-
>Too late.
>The pliers grip another scale, causing you to freeze, save for a slight quiver.
>How many times did you just insult him?
>”Two.”
>He tears out a second one, causing you to scream out yet again.
>But this time you use your spasming, rolling your upper half over.
>Your hooves scrabble against the stone floor, failing to make purchase as you thrash your tail, desperate to try and break his grip.
>His arm wraps around it in response, those pliers grabbing another scale.
>”They don’t count if you’re squirming!”
>With that he rips another one, another bellowed cry of agony being torn from your throat right with it.
>But the message gets through to you, clear as the tropical sea.
>There’s no escaping without making it much, much worse.
>You cover your head with your hooves, pressing your face to the floor as you squeeze your eyes shut, tensing up-preparing to endure this.
>”Three.”
“Nuuuaaggh!”
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>>29945968
>Twenty six.
>He got up to twenty six before he finally let your limp tail drop to the floor with a thud.
>Your breath wheezes in between sobbing.
>It’s not emotional! It’s from the sheer agony…
>The end of your tail feels as though it was dipped in molten lead.
>You actually gave in...you gave in and just...just LET him-your prey-descale you like a complete bitch.
>No...that was only because you were so worn out from fighting him!
>That's the ONLY reason.
>Your ears swivel as you hear him walk around you, soon hearing something jangling.
>A shiver runs down your long spine, but you don't dare look up.
>Not out of submission!
>No. Fuck him.
>You just don’t want to know what he’s playing with right now...not until you can get your breath back.
>Then...then you’ll break him. You’ll make him pay dearly for every one of your gorgeous scales he tore out.
>His hand claps on your withers, sending another shiver running through you.
>”Every time you insult me, I’m going to take another scale. You should be thanking me for only taking one, apparently they’re worth quite a lot...but I know you’re just a dumb animal, and I get the feeling we’re going to have to revisit this lesson quite often.”
>You're in too much pain to get worked up right this second.
>But you’ll make him pay...oohh yes, you’ll make him pay.
>That hand lifts away, soon pulling at your opposite wither.
>”On your side, Aria.”
>Catch your breath...get him to lower his guard...then you’ll go for the kill.
>You do as he says, rolling in the direction he was pulling so that your back is facing him.
>This is related to the “game” he mentioned earlier, isn’t it?
>Fine, whatever...he can ‘dress you up’ however he wants...it’s not exactly like any outfit would be more humiliating than a siren being abused by her own food.
>Your blood runs cold when you feel him grab your tail again, just before the now scaleless bit.
>He’s going to start pulling them again!
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>>29945977
>As if sensing your anxiety, he speaks up,
>”There, there, you’re being good, I’m not going to pull anymore out unless you start running your mouth. Now give me your tail.”
>...Fine.
>You relax, letting your heavy tail go completely limp in his grasp-you won’t fight him, but you aren’t going to do him any favors.
>Your scales drag against the ground as he walks your tail back.
>He curls it around behind you, bending it back until it’s almost touching your upper back.
>Yea, that’s right. You’re the flexible one.
>That one even translated to your human body.
>He still pulls it until it’s well into uncomfortable range, though.
>Let him play with you...he’ll probably pull it in front next and then…then he’ll be in front of your hooves.
>But he stops there.
>”Now hold still my seahorse, or this could hurt.”
>What is he-gah!
>You feel four pin-pricks along the middle of your caudal fin, one after another, the first causing you to jump.
>But you avoid yelping out, or even reacting to the other ones-he may have gotten one reaction out of you today, but that is ALL he’s going to get.
>...Hopefully that won’t encourage him to keep breaking out the pliers.
>There’s another four pinpricks, this time going up your dorsal fin.
>Ha! You didn’t even react that time, you knew he was going to do something else.
>He lets your tail go and walks around you.
>You start to pull it back into a more comfortable position and quickly regret the decision.
>Something pulls painfully at the site of the pinpricks, threatening to tear the delicate membrane of your fins.
“Nnnn!”
>What did he do?!
>He grabs your hooves while you’re preoccupied with what’s going on with your fins.
>”I told you it would hurt.”
>There’s another two pinpricks in each fin under your fetlocks.
>With a roar of fury, you rip your hooves out of his grasp, the human surprisingly stepping back, letting you see what he did.
>Your blood turns to ice.
>...Fish hooks.
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>>29945986
>He jabbed fish hooks through your fins, a line connecting each pair...that’s probably what he did to your back and tail.
>You're too terrified to be pissed off...it feels like that line's stronger than your fins.
>There’s no getting those hooks out without magic or fingers.
>You know that from Sonata coming home with one in her mouth at least once a week.
>At least she usually ate the fisherpony it was attached to.
>You test them anyway, pulling the lines taut as you paw at the hooks with a hoof, feeling the barb dig into your skin.
>Maybe...you could probably get them out with your mouth, you just need the band-
>"These hooks are staying in until you stop trying to flop around like a fish every time I come down here."
>...You're completely helpless...at his mercy.
>You look up at him, your stomach doing flips-whether from rage or terror, you aren't sure.
>Upon seeing him grinning from his little pun, you immediately know which.
>Rage.
>Pure, unbridled rage.
>He did this to you! He tortured you, made it so you can’t move-jabbed HOOKS into you!
>Screaming wordlessly, you squirm, the hooks sending jolts of pain as you twist yourself over to face him.
>You'll use the string as a garrote! He...
>He easily steps along with your hobbled squirming.
>"This right here? This is exactly what I'm talking about. You keep doing this, the hooks stay in longer."
"Shut! Uuu'! I’m ‘unna ‘ill you!”
>Your voice cracks as you scream out, seeing red once again.
>Rather than cower in fear like you'd hope, he simply shrugs, pulling out the pliers again.
>"Okay. That's seven, one for the outburst, and six because I JUST finished explaining it."
>Your rage extinguishes as he walks around, yielding again to fear.
>Your mouth’s running before you realize it.
"No, no nonono wai'!"
>His hand touches your tail. Those hooks are already taunt, you can't pull it away, you can't even flip over!
>"You broke the rules, Aria, you're going to get punished."
>But he hesitates.
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>>29945995
>"However...I'm not trying to be cruel. Tell you what. If you can convince me that outburst was just an honest mistake because of your slow fish brain, that you didn't mean it, then I might be willing to let it slide. But I want to hear you beg.”
>Your eyes bulge out, your body shaking from...fear? No, not fear, from the outrage.
>HE’S the prey not you! HE should be begging YOU not the opposite!
>You won’t do it.
>...Then again.
>You’re already about as humiliated as you could possibly get.
>You-the siren, an apex predator that feasts on things that THINK they’re apex predators-caught by your prey, bound in this ridiculous position...maybe there’s no reason to add even more pain to this.
>Especially if it gets him to leave.
“ ‘rease don’.”
>His response is to grab a scale with those pliers, your breath quickening.
>”That’s it? You didn’t even use the magic word.”
>You said please! That IS the magic word!
>”Hang on...” Those pliers let go of your scale. You breath a sigh of relief before he continues.
>“I get it now. My little seahorse is too stupid to know how to beg properly!”
>Your eye twitches.
>Nooo...You need to stick with your plan.
>Just wait for him to leave or let his guard down...just need to wait. Let him THINK he’s the smart one, if that’s what it takes.
>”Then let me spell it out for you. I want you to apologize. I want you to promise it won’t EVER happen again-and I’ll hold you to it. And I want you to do it, while addressing me as master or it doesn’t count, my seahorse.”
>...You were wrong on the whole ‘being as humiliated as possible’ thing, apparently.
>Well fuck him! You’ll let him take the scales, you aren’t going to BEG him! You’ll take the pain and you won’t even yelp out this time.
>You twist your head back to look at him, ready to tell him he can choke on your scales...but your eye lingers on those pliers.
>How many scales are you willing to lose just to prove a point?
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>>29946003
>For all you know, he might just pull every single one off your tail...would you even survive that?
>Maybe you could’ve before but...you don’t have the gem anymore.
>You can’t recover from these injuries like you used to…
>Anxiety grips you as the true reality of what just happened sinks in.
>”Well? I’m waiting…”
>Will they even grow back after being torn out like that? Sure, one or two would but this many at once?
>You...you don’t remember.
>Oh god, you don’t remember. He might have permanently disfigured you!
>The only way to find out would be time…
>Time you can buy by playing along...following the plan
>Just remember: You’re doing this for the SOLE purpose of getting ahold of him. Of making him pay.
>When you left, Adagio yelled that you’d need her.
>That was a load of crap. You’ve watched her work long enough that you could manipulate anyone to do anything you needed.
>Some of her skill had to have rubbed off on you.
>Time to put it to the test.
>He wants “begging?” Fine, you’ll give him begging.
>You make a big show of closing your eyes and laying your head back down.
“I’m sorry mas’er,”
>Ugh. Even knowing you’re lying, you hate saying that word. “Master.” Hah.
“I’m s’ill 'rying ‘oo learn. I’m ‘ust a stupi’ ‘umb animal who nee’s more ‘ime to learn fings. I won’ ‘oo it again, mas’er.”
(Translation: I’m sorry master. I’m still trying to learn. I’m just a stupid dumb animal who needs more time to learn things. I won’t do it again master.)
>To your immense relief, the pliers let your scale go, his hand pulling away from your trapped tail.
>”Wow….I don’t believe it...I really did break my seahorse. Roll over Aria, I want to look at you.”
>Ha! You win!
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>>29946012
>You’re barely able to keep from grinning as you do as he commands, pinning your tail under you.
>Once you’re on your back, his foot comes down and slams into your chest, pinning the fishing line under his shoe, forcing your hooves to your side.
“Nah!”
>Fire burns in his eyes as he leans down, sneering at you.
>”No. Really. I don’t believe it."
>...Oh shit.
>"There’s NO way my seahorse would give up THAT easily AND give me such a PERFECT apology. You’re far too stupid for that.”
>His free hand grabs your snout, pushing it back to pin your head to the floor yet again.
>You start thrashing under him as best you can-nowhere near what it was before the hooks-your hooves can’t move one bit.
>”That’s five more for wasting my time, and TRIPLE for lying to me!”
>The pliers grab at one of the scales on your neck.
>”How about I spell something out this time? How about LIAR? That way everyone will know what you did! That NOTHING you say can be trusted!”
>Your eyes tear up as you can already imagine it. A giant scar on your neck saying it-everyone knowing exactly what this monster did to you.
>And still thinking you’re the monster.
>The pliers start to pull, wiggling back and forth as they start to tear that scale out by the root.
>As the burning pain shoots through your neck, you can’t stop yourself.
>Whatever pride, whatever fight you had is gone as you sob out.
“No! ‘lea-ea-ea-ease!”
>He pauses-not pulling the pliers away, but not continuing to pull.
>”And why not? You LIED to me Aria, I can’t trust anything you say anymore. You DESERVE this-there’s NOTHING you can say that will convince me otherwise.”
>You break down, fully crying before him.
>This is why Adagio was the leader...why you weren’t the one in charge…
>You never should have left…
>You should have listened and stayed with them.
>This monster’s going to torment you for the rest of your shortened life because you thought you were smarter than her…
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>>29946019
>But ‘at least you got your body back.’
>”...Although…”
>A glimmer of hope shines through your despair as he speaks.
>”There is something you could DO. I can’t believe it if you say it anymore, but if you SHOW me how subservient you are, that you’ll do ANYTHING your master commands…”
>You nod, pressing against his hand to show him you’re willing.
>There’s not a whole lot you can do like this. Maybe he’ll have to remove the hooks?
>Or he’ll probably do the ‘dress up’ thing he wanted earlier.
>”I know you’re like a dolphin down there. I’d need to figure out electro-stim to force you to let me in...so here’s the deal. You show me you’re willing to let me use my pet ANY way I want, I’ll go ahead and forget all penalties. But if you don’t, I’ll take my thirty-six scales.”
>He leans down and hisses into your ear,
>”And because you’re a stupid animal, let me spell it out. You need to let me fuck you. Understand, my seahorse?”
>He...he wants to rape you? Seriously?
>You aren’t even remotely CLOSE to looking human-like. Why would he want to?
>Let’s see...you remember most humans lasting roughly three minutes.
>...
>You were trapped there a long time, and that world had PLENTY of alcohol. No one would judge you.
>Three minutes of unpleasantness...versus losing thirty-six more scales.
>You can deal with that.
>Your voice is still shaky as you speak up,
“Oh-oh’ay...u-use me.”
>You relax yourself down there, making it so your sex is visible.
>”What’s the magic word?”
>Please? No, wait, he said it was master.
>...Why doesn’t that word feel as wrong now?
“Use me ma-mas’ure?”
>The pliers let go of your scale, his hand lifting from your muzzle, your hooves being freed.
>You don’t bother to lift your head, hearing the sound of a belt being unbuckled.
>You don’t want to watch.
>”If this is another trick, I’m going to rip out one of the noodles on your head on top of everything else.”
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>>29946027
>You nod, showing you understand. You can deal with this.
>It was his goal when he came down here, wasn’t it?
>Fine. Let him have his fun.
>You tense up as you feel his fingers rub over your sex-not being rough, but not exactly what you’d call delicate either.
>”That’s my good little seahorse,” He breathes out before shoving a pair of fingers inside you.
”Nuuhh...”
>You shudder, one of your hooves twitching as you feel him inside you. He’s a lesser species, it’s disgusting.
>...It’s not just disgusting, it’s beastiality.
>He simply probes you with his fingers, causing you to twitch occasionally whenever he hits a particularly sensitive spot.
>You’re MUCH more sensitive down there than you were as human.
>Yea, human sex was pretty disappointing.
>He presses his knuckles against you as he rubs back and forth over one of those sensitive spots.
>A small whine escapes your throat, one of your legs twitching.
>But you grit your teeth.
>You aren’t going to let him ‘pleasure’ you. Yea, let him have his fun, but you are NOT going to enjoy this.
>He doesn’t DESERVE being able to pleasure you. You aren’t going to give him that satisfaction.
>...Yea...this is just another way to get him to let down his guard.
>He soon pulls his hand out, seemingly satisfied.
>”Look at me, my seahorse.”
>Reluctantly, you lift your head and see him naked, holding up two slick fingers.
>Presumably the ones that were just inside you.
>”You’re already niiice and wet down there. I can see you want this, that’s a good girl. But I know you might not realize it, so I’m telling you right now. Any funny business, and I’m still going to punish you.”
>You nod, giving a still-shaky “Mmmhmm.” to show you understand.
>You DON’T want it. You’re just naturally wet down there!
>...Not that wet.
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>>29946038
>He places his hand on the fishing line connecting your hooves before laying upon you, killing any idea of attacking him before it could form.
>He unceremoniously shoves his cock inside you, causing you to shudder uncontrollably.
>You literally can’t remember the last time you had sex before you were banished.
>...Drunken experimentation with those two doesn’t count.
>You close your eyes and start to lay your head back again-but you don’t get very far.
>”Nooo. My seahorse needs to watch. You need to learn how to pleasure your master, because I expect you to do this without prompting next time.”
>Wait that wasn’t part of the dee-EEEAAL!
>You arch your back, shuddering, your line of thought interrupted by him pulling back and thrusting hard into you.
>He wastes no time getting to work, fucking you hard.
>You feel his fingers squeeze under the band on your snout, pulling your head back down.
>”Look at me!” He commands, not even slowing down.
>You force your eyes open, looking at him as he fucks you like an animal.
>Uses you for his pleasure.
>You don’t look away, not wanting to tempt his wrath...but without being able to lose yourself mentally, you can’t deny it.
>It’s starting to feel really good.
>It shouldn’t-it’s disgusting! He’s the animal, not you, he’s raping you-it’s a crime against nature!
>...But if you truly didn’t want it, you could force him out.
>His hand squeezes your leg as he starts to grind into you, causing you to shudder despite yourself.
>When he goes back to thrusting, you can think clearly enough to continue your mental argument.
>You’re only-ONLY letting him do this, because it’ll keep him from hurting you.
>That’s it.
>...Then why is your breathing getting quicker?
>Why are you squeezing against his cock?
>That last thought shakes you to the bone. You weren’t even aware you were doing it.
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>>29946046
>Making a conscious effort to stop, you clear your mind, trying to ignore the pleasure, instead focusing on top of his head, his closed eyes.
>Doing your best not to focus on how good it feels for him to rut you.
>But it’s already too late.
>You’re too close...it isn’t long before you can feel yourself tense up, your breath ragged, little whimpers escaping your throat.
>It HAD to have been three minutes by now!
>Hell, it had to have been ten!
>He has to be close...you try to use your whimpering, and squeeze down on his cock, trying to push him over the edge.
>Just need to hold out a little longer...you DON’T want this, he doesn’t DESERVE to know he can do this.
“No, no, no no, nooo-uuuh!”
>You shudder hard against him, your tail twitching painfully against the hooks embedded in your fins as, despite your best efforts, you cum against him.
>Tears spring forth anew while you involuntarily clench down again and again on his thrusting cock.
>He made you cum...you couldn’t stop it.
>You couldn’t stop him from pleasuring you, you couldn’t stop him from hurting you, you couldn’t lie to him, you couldn’t even get away.
>He’s beaten you...at every turn he’s beaten you.
>It isn’t much longer before he shudders, his hands squeezing you as he finishes.
>Without pulling out, he looks up at you, a hand soon stroking your muzzle.
>”Good job, my seahorse….you did a very good job.”
>He then pulls out of you, standing up as he starts to dress himself again.
>”You even came! Do you know why?”
>Your only response is to blink away your tears.
>You want nothing more than to curl up in a ball out of shame...but you can’t.
>The hooks in your tail won’t let you.
>”It’s because you love it. You love your master fucking you, using you like a toy.
>No, that’s not true, he…
>You don’t believe your own denial. He’s right.
>You wouldn’t have came if you didn’t like it.
>His hand strokes over your muzzle.
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>>29946051
>”I think that’s enough for today, don’t you, my seahorse? Now I expect to see you presenting for this every time I come down here from now on.”
>You nod, showing him you understand, the implications not sinking in yet.
>Your mind’s still stuck on the realisation that he completely defeated you.
>”I think our game can wait until tomorrow, don’t you?” He walks over, picking up the nearly forgotten bag.
>”I think you’ll like it, though. Aria, Ariel, it’s perfect for you. But right now, I’m going to go make you dinner. I think you deserve a reward, so no cat food tonight, you’ll get real fish. Then I’m going to tell Twilight that your rehabilitation is coming along swimmingly.”
>...Oddly enough, you don’t even care as he sniggers at the terrible fish pun.
>You’re...numb.
>That’s the only way to describe you mentally right now.
>”She doesn’t need to know the details, though, don’t you think? All she needs to know is next time she sees you, you’ll be a happy, non-evil member of society. Now...what else...oh right!”
>He approaches you, reaching into a pocket and pulling out...the pliers again?!
>Your breath quickens, rolling over onto your side in a vain attempt to wiggle away.
>You were good, you let him rape you!
>”You still had an outburst earlier, which means you still need to be punished for it. Rules are rules.”
>The pliers grab ahold of a scale and quickly tear it right out.
“Naaaauuuh!”
>”One. I’ll be back later, my seahorse.”
>With the loss of that scale, a dam bursts within you.
>You start to sob uncontrollably, burying your face in your newly-bound hooves as best you can, barely registering as the door slams shut.
>Adagio and Sonata need to get here soon…
>You don’t know how much more you can take.

I know it says slave pony, but slave fish-pony works just as well, right? What did you guys think? A nice change of pace, am I right?
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>>29946065
Made my dick hard/10
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>>29946065
I can feel literally no sympathy for what are literal monsters that have remorselessly killed innocent people before.

A monster being tortured by a monster.
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>>29946065
Very SiMmy. Very.
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>>29946172
That's because it IS a SiM story. One of mine, in fact: https://pastebin.com/3hWayLBJ
I guess that means I'm a slave pone writer now?
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>>29946213
why not pry the scales around her vagiber
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>>29942932
>Spank Primrose
>She starts moaning and enjoying it

Good work, you've just given her positive reinforcement. Now Coffee's just gonna get cut up even more.
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>>29946283
hot
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>>29946065
>Unfimus Maximus
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>>29946283
She won't enjoy it, don't be silly.
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>>29946065
The dick was hard, yes. But I've got /s/ for that. It also was well written. I think OP has a point about the subtle, but important, differences between SPG and SiM, and that we should respect them. Good green, but not the right green.
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>>29946065
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I want to fuck Coffee until she's as pregnant as the rest of Jacob's ponies!
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Updates! Or more specifically, edits!

Some anons have been asking me for an update, and I have not written one yet.
This is because I took a few days to polish up what I already have in my pastebin, as well as re-writing many, many sections; again, this is either to capture the scenes better, or to flesh out the details in said sections.

I would recommend re-reading 'Because I Choose To' if you have been following the updates, especially for Insp Anon's first day with Starlight, as my writing style was less developed then (precisely why I needed to edit them).
> There are also a few bits of new, minor information that I included, but not major enough to impact the story.
So I will leave it up to you if you want re-read, but I will recommend it anyways.

I am happy with my green now (I literally read and edited it from start to what I have now), and am ready to tackle an update. You can look forward to one within the next two days.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU

As always, I want to thank you immensely for reading and for all the support you have given me. Leave me your comments, suggestions, ideas and criticisms below yeah?

Stay awesome! ^^

tl;dr No new updates, but loads of edits made on existing content. Recommend re-reading from the start if you liked my work (and loving Glim Glam).
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>>29947003
Should...should I tell him?
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I want to read some more green about ponies on a boat.
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>>29947092
>You chuckle, glad that your new pony is >'dead on the inside.

> You did not like the answer that came.
> …
Good line here!

I'll read more later. Perhaps give a summary of changes?
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>>29948005
Argh fuck!
Thanks for point that out; changes have been made in the pastebin.

Edits are generally technical ones in terms of writing: e.g. stitching together fractured sentences, varying the sentence structures, spelling and grammar etc

Minor information includes the expansion of information and dialogue; e.g. the first night that Starlight spends with Insp Anon has been expanded, Anon's thought processes in the beginning are expanded and Starlight's explanation of the various pony races have been expanded.
> These are off the top of my head; there are more.
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>>29948045
> Thanks for pointing* that out
God fucking dammit
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>>29948118
Even professionally edited and commercially published stories will have the odd grammar and logic error. Don't sweat that too much.
It's the story itself that matters. Anons internal conflict comes through very well. The world and supporting characters are all good. Glimmers desire to stick with him on earth in her crippled and helpless state; not so much. It's been less than a week, she is abandoning a lifetime of achievement and commitment back on Equestria. Not saying you can't make it work, but you have work to do. Looking forward to seeing it!
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>>29947814
I wish to ride the dashhorse bareback.
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>>29948445
Not even Windrider has done that.
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>>29948445
How utterly degenerate! I bet you'd call her a good girl too!
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>>29945793
>Corona starts sleeping outside.
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>>29949007
But the tentacle monsters live outside...
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>>29949314
Yeah, but she'd rather be raped than live with a couple of weirdos like Anon and Shiny.
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>>29942365

>This must be it
>Truly you are as comfortable as is humanly possible
>You have your pizza, what little remains steaming in its box in front of you
>You have your movie, which is an ancient classic and never fails to entertain you
>And most importantly you have someone to share it all with
>The big grey-white wing draped heavily over your back is confirmation of that
>Celestia seems to enjoy this kind of activity
>As far as her smile shows
>All around you are hundreds of wrappers for various sweets and baked goods that you pulled out of the 'hang out' cupboard
>Interestingly, you weren't the one to do most of the scoffing
>This mare really loves her cakes, and even when she attempted to dismiss the offer, you could tell it was a losing battle
>"So, the big metal robot just wants to learn how to make friends?"
>The iron giant on screen dives into a lake, covering the surrounding landscape with a Titan wave of water
"Yeah, but he's just too powerful and scary for others to understand."
>She looks sympathetically at the TV
>"And does he?"
"Well, why don't you just watch and see."
>The movie continues, and your reminded of the days as a child when this was the movie you would constantly watch
>Celestia also seems to be reminiscing about something
>You don't know what
>Finally, you get to the ending scene
>Oh shit, you forgot about this part
>You watch as the battle ensues, the once docile machine destroying the military like it was nothing
>With every explosion, a pair of horsey ears flatten
>Then comes the scene you dread most
>Hogarth confronts the machine, pleading with it to see reason
>It works, and you can see Celestia visibly calm
>But then the enviable comes
>The iron giant sacrifices himself to protect the innocent people of Rockwell from nuclear annihilation
>You watch in silence as the sound of animated explosions fills your home
>Jesus this always makes you sad
>Fucking emotions
>You sneak a glance at across the couch
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>>29949604
must be gentile with sweet horse.
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>>29949679
>gentle
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>>29949604
>The Iron Giant
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D4dT2eBWI2M
I love that movie too
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>>29949679
Oy
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>>29949604

>Celestia is teary eyed
>Those familiar streaks of wet fir glistening in the low light
>"T-that was s-so sad..."
>You lean into her wrapping her in a tight hug
"Hey, it's just a movie... It's all right."
>"B-but why did he have to die?"
"Sometimes, those you care about are worth the sacrifice... He loved the young boy, and was willing to give up what his own life to protect him."
>She looks back at the TV, which now showed a snowy landscape
>You smile as she watches the robots parts find their way back to him
"Plus, these films usually have a happy ending. This is no exception"
>Her smile returns as the movie ends with the Giants smile
>You swear she's an emotional roller coaster
>Maybe that's a side effect of being tormented for god knows how long
>As the screen blackens and the lights return, you check the time
>It's 29:37
>Time for sleep, you've got a big day of work tomorrow
"Come on Sun horse, let's get you to bed."
>You walk into your room and are instantly reminded of the mornings events
>There's still wall all over the bed spread
>Well that's out of the question
>I guess she'll just have to rake the couch, and you the floor
"Um, Celestia? The room is still trashed, so your gonna have to sleep on the couch tonight. I hope that's okay."
>"But where will you sleep?"
"I'll take the floor."
>She makes a face of concern, looking between you and the floor
>"No, I will not allow you to put yourself through that for my sake. I'm used to the floor, I'm sure I can manage."
"Sorry Celestia, no can do. You're injured."
>"W-we could always... Share."
>Woah
>Where did that come from
"I'm not sure I'm comfortable with-"
>"I'll be fine, I'll just move over to the back of the couch and you can lie in front. Then both of us will be warm."
>Well, you can't argue with that logic
"Fine."
>She budges back across the couch to make room, and you lie down next to her, facing away
>You pull a blanket over the two of you
>"Good night Anon."
"Night Celestia."
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>>29949957

>As the lights dim away to nothing, you feel a soft feathery wing wrap around you
>"And thank you, for everything..."
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>>29949957
>not Boromir's death from The Fellowship of the Ring
You're /spg/ing wrong.
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>>29949973

Good stuff Anon. Keep up the great writing.
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>>29948362
Thank you for your kind words, and thank you for the feedback, especially the point on Glimmer. I have in mind a few segments to expand on that; one will explicitly show why she is choosing Insp Anon over "a lifetime of achievement and commitment back on Equestria".
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>>29950079

Will do, friend
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>>29946065

it's different for sure, not sure it really fits the SPG theme but i'm not saying i wouldn't read more either.
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>>29939456
Funny and adorable!
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>>29949388
>she'd rather be
Assuming it won't be Corona raping Anon.
She won't take 'no' forever.
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>>29941060
what happened to the nasty infection under RDs wing?
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>>29950549
I'm sure it will be back eventually with a vengeance anon
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>>29949957
>>29949973
Top cute my man
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>>29951120
Rarity is for spank.
Not hard, only gentle spank. She good pony at heart.
She stay good, we take off horn ring, let talk to friends.
But spank if bad!
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>>29888304
“That was… that was pretty heavy. How am I supposed to follow that?”
>Moondancer stares straight into you.
>For the first time today, there’s no hesitation, no awkward hedging or avoidance.
>”Truthfully would be nice.”
>You chuckle.
“Well, that’s ironic.”
>”Why?”
>You glance up and down the hallway.
>It’s clear, but for all you know every ‘room’ could be occupied.
>The flimsy walls wouldn’t stop anything more than a whisper, so that’s how you answer her. At a whisper.
“Because I lied to her, Moondancer. I’m lying to all of you.”
>”How…?”
>You can hear the cautious worry return to her voice, see the nervousness in her body language, but you keep talking anyway.
>Who else would you unburden your worries on?
>*Apple Bloom*?
>She’s not here.
>And if she were…
>You’re glad she’s not.
“I… I don’t care about any of this. I don’t want to make things better for you ponies. Not really. I mean, if I *did*… wouldn’t I have started long ago?”
>Moondancer continues to stare at you in silence.
>She doesn’t have any answer for you, or if she does, she keeps it to herself.
>No, she doesn’t have any answers.
>Her eyes have only questions.
“I mean… I mean… how long were you in the camps? Things were horrible there, right? Well, I didn’t try to help then, did I?”
>”You didn’t know.”
“Because I never cared enough to find out. That’s just the simple truth of things. I don’t want to make things better, I just don’t want to feel guilty anymore.”
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>>29951441
>The mare slowly shakes her head.
>”I told you before and I’ll say it again,” she sighs, “you need to have more faith in yourself.”
“I *lied*.”
>”Maybe I’m wrong, but I don’t think you did.”
“I told her I cared.”
>”You’re telling the truth, to everyone but yourself.”
“She nearly died! Because. I. Don’t. Care.”
>Moondancer’s still staring at you, those huge, purple eyes of hers locked on you.
>Despite the color, despite the glasses, she’s just like Apple Bloom.
>She trusts you too much.
>She doesn’t understand.
>”These are tough times,” she admits quietly, as if it were some kind of secret. “You had problems of your own. I wouldn’t expect you to look beyond your own nose. Plenty don’t.”
“A good man would.”
>”Maybe,” Moondancer admits, putting her hoof on your shoulder. “Or maybe he’d be too busy dealing with his own issues. I can’t expect everypony to try to solve every problem ever. That’s how…”
>For an instant, just an instant, her eyes drop, clouded over by dark shadows.
>”… that’s how… *mistakes*… happen. No, I never would have expected anyone to help us, *just because*. It wouldn’t make sense. Honestly, I would be suspicious. But if a good man learns all the details of a situation like ours…”
>She sighs and glance towards the window framing the grey clouds hovering in the sky.
>”… well, then he has a choice.”
“You’re wrong, Moondancer. A good man wouldn’t.”
>Argument or acceptance, that’s what you expect. Not a soft giggle.
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>>29951448
“What?”
>”Well, isn’t that what you’re so angsty about?”
“About what?”
>”That you don’t have a choice. That you *have* to help us. Doesn’t that mean you’re a good person?”
>You shake your head quickly.
“No. I just… I just don’t care. That’s all. Or – or…”
>”You’re afraid of having the ability to act, because you know you must. And if you must, then you should have earlier.
>”You think that if you don’t care, that absolves you of any guilt. If you don’t care, then you had a reason to turn a blind eye to everything that happened these last three years.”
“A good person would have done something.”
>”Like what? What could you have done?”
“I… I don’t know. I would have figured out something.”
>Moondancer shakes her head.
>”No, you wouldn’t have. You don’t have anything to feel guilty for. It’s not your fault so many ponies died of starvation or abuse at the refugee camps.”
“I could have done something.”
>”But why would you have? Every activist has needed his call to action.”
“Not all.”
>”No, I guess not, but I’ve never quite trusted ones who didn’t have a reason behind their cause, have you?”
>You glance away, unwilling to answer.
>Unwilling to admit she’s right.
>She isn’t.
“I… I’ve known for ever since I came here how my neighbors treat their ponies and I haven’t done anything to help them. Hell, I’ve known since I heard ponies were being sent out here how things would end up!
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>>29951461
“Steffords doesn’t even let his ponies have names! They have to go by their contract numbers.”
>”I know,” Moondancer whispers. “I haven’t done anything about that either, so… does that make me a bad pony?”
“No, because you’re just –”
>She winces before you realize what you’ve said.
“I didn’t mean –“
>”I know what you meant,” she sighs. “And you’re right. I’m just a pony. And you’re just a man. We’re all ‘just’ something.”
“I mean, I could have *actually* done something!”
>”Like what?”
“I don’t know! Sit down and have a talk with them?”
>”Do you *really* think that would change Steffords’ mind?”
“I don’t know. Maybe. I should have tried.”
>Maybe you still can.
>Maybe you should.
>”You and I both know it wouldn’t have done any good.”
>You could still have tried.
“It doesn’t matter anyway.”
>You sigh.
“You’re right. If his own daughter can’t make a difference, what could I do?”
>“Nothing,” Moondancer answers sincerely. “And there’s no shame in that. You can only do what you can do.”
“Then I guess I have nothing to feel bad about, because I can’t do anything. I can’t farm or run a business or help his ponies - and I can’t even help my own.”
>”You’ll find a way.”
“I won’t. Silver Spoon won’t find the money.”
>”She might.”
“She won’t. It would take a miracle.”
>”And?” Moondancer prods. “Don’t you believe in miracles?”
“No, not anymore.”
>You shrug her hoof off.
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>>29951469
“Let me tell you right now what’s going to happen. We’re going to get some houses built, some ponies are going to move in, and then I’ll run out of money.
“I’ll feel a little better because I did something. You ponies will feel a little better because you think I care and some of you had your lives improved just a little bit.
“Then everything is going to start falling apart, because I don’t have any money around to pay for maintenance. Probably not even for the dorm or the farm equipment.
“The farm will go bust and you all will be transferred to other contract holders in the area. Maybe a few will end up in better places in town. Most will go to Steffords or the Andersons, whoever buys up this land first.
“Of the two, one of those is better than the other, but not by much.
“And some, some’ll probably end up with asshole’s like Sterling, all because I tried to help.
“I’m basically kill them, you know.
“That’s how this is going to play out, and I’m going to let it, just for the off-chance it works out and I don’t have to feel like shit anymore.”
>”You should… you should believe in yourself,” Moondancer mumbles. “We’ll find a way.”
“It’ll never happen, because nothing ever does. We just keep going around and around, given just enough hope to keep on keeping on. That’s all, Moondancer. Nothing ever changes and we just keep going in circles.
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>>29951480
“That’s just how this world works.”
>She opens her mouth as if to argue, but closes it with a sigh.
>She knows you’re right.
>You can see the shadow return, the light in her eyes snuffed out by the truth she wants so badly to deny.
>This world is like a machine.
>Flawed and imperfect, but It works. Barely. And it’ll never get any better.
>It doesn’t improve, doesn’t magically become more efficient.
>There’s no magic in this world.
>It just gets more and more worn as time goes on.
>Gears begin to slip, belts become loose, pistons struggle until the buildup of waste become too much and everything comes to a halt.
>Unless someone fixes and maintains it, eventually it’ll break.
>Even then, all that does is postpone the inevitable.
>Every machine breaks eventually.
>And most of all, you don’t care.
>If you did, you don’t think you couldn’t live with yourself, knowing you’re just letting everything rust away.
>Long, awkward minutes pass in silence.
>You try anything you can to keep your mind off the inevitable, how this is all going to go to shit.
>Last night, you’d had hope, but today you have to face the truth.
>Everything is shit.
>You’d go back into Silver’s room and tell her to give up, if you thought you could face her.
>Maybe she would actually have some answers.
>She won’t, but you should check.
>You can’t, though.
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>>29951486
>The only thing keeping you from walking out is the sound of the rain growing heavier and heavier, until you can’t even hear the crack of thunder over the roaring storm beating down.
>The sky outside the window is as black as hope.
>At least tallying up the possible damages and recovery work keeps you occupied.
>It won’t be too bad.
>Pretty much everything is buttoned up for the off-season.
>Might have to check the storerooms and make sure there weren’t any leaks.
>Would be crippling if the harvest rotted before it could be picked up.
>Tomorrow, you’ll have to go back to giving orders and being their owner, not their… whatever you are.
>You didn’t think it was possible, but the air inside the hall grows even colder until you’re thankful for the mare sitting beside you.
>Even if she’s not warm, she’s at least not as cold as everything else.
>She’s also shivering.
>You’re not a good man.
>A good man would have given her his coat long before now.
>You don’t even do that.
>You *share* it, the pair of you huddled together under the coat like it was a tiny blanket.
>You can’t help but press up against her trying to keep as much of yourself covered as you can, but that’s all it is: two people trying to keep warm.
>It doesn’t help much.
>Not you, anyhow. Moondancer stops shivering after a few minutes.
>”The others are probably fine,” she says absentmindedly a few minutes after that, with that tone you recognize all too well.
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>>29951495
>She’s trying to convince herself.
>“The kitchen will keep them all warm,” she mumbles, “even if the massed body heat doesn’t.”
>You’re not a good man.
>A good man would have worried – or even thought – about the rest of his ponies, not just the one he can see.
>”And Silver Spoon has her blankets, so…”
>It’s so cold, you can see her breath in the air, if only briefly.
“I should check, shouldn’t I?”
>The mare shrugs, a gesture that you can barely see thanks to your coat, but feel keenly.
>”She seemed scared of you,” she sighs. “I should be the one to check on her.”
“Yeah, but…”
>There’s some reasons you should do it.
>Showing you care, or being responsible, or trying to convince yourself of… of something.
>Just nothing you can articulate before you realize your phone is ringing.
>You pull it from your coat pocket.
>Lauren.
>Probably about the construction materials, or some other bad news.
>You sigh.
>”Should I…”
>You should take this.
“That’d be great.”
>You answer the call.

LAUREN
“Best price I could get.”
>”Still… shit…”
>Yeah, you know how he’s feelin’.
>’bout the same as you did when Henry gave you the quote, an’ that ain’t no surprise.
>That’s why you’d put off the call ‘til you’d stopped by the supermarket an’ picked up the rest of his stuff. Even got some flowers for ma.
>Just have to pick up his ponies an’ hit up the church.
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>>29951512
>A responsible woman prolly would’ve waited until she’d got in the cab of her truck ‘fore pullin’ out her phone, but hell.
>A responsible woman prolly would’ve called before makin’ the deal. See what he said an’ all that, but…
>This’s for the best.
>Not the callin’ ‘fore you’ve found your keys an’ got inside the cab where if it ain’t warm, you at least got the heater, ‘cause that was pretty stupid of you.
>The putting him ‘tween a rock an’ a hard place, that’s for the best. It’s ‘bout the only way to get him to do shit.
>Guy wants to be a good person, he just don’t know how an’ it’s up to you to show him the way.
“Look, I know it’s more than you wanted to spend, but we’ve got a bit of a shortage goin’ on right now.”
>Now you think about it, that ain’t no surprise either, though it sure comes as one to him.
>”I thought things were supposed to be getting better!”
“They are, just… well… a lot of the local materials are goin’ into workin’ on the bypass.”
>”What bypass?”
>Right, right, he ain’t heard of it. Hell, you hadn’t ‘til today either.
“You know the one ‘tween our places an’ the city? Seems they’re finally getting it done.”
>There’s a rough moment of silence on his end, long enough you’re startin’ to wonder if you’d screwed up.
>He ain’t always gone the right direction when you put him on the spot like this.
>Usually, yeah, but not always.
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>>29951519
>An’ couple times, it’d gone bad.
“That’s got the town all stirred up right now. Everyplace I’ve stopped they ain’t been talking about nothin’ but.”
>An’ that’s been quite a few places. More’n what you’d told the doc, but you hadn’t really thought that all through at the time.
>Couldn’t pick up everything on his list in one go.
>”I guess things got too good, huh?” he eventually sighs. “Fine. I should have seen that coming. Now I just have to find a way to… shit. Shit. That’s going to be a bitch to afford, but they’ve already gotten their hopes up…”
>He sighs ‘gain.
>He ain’t too happy, but that’s fine.
>Warms your heart he thought’ve the ponies first, before thinkin’ ‘bout how you’d already made the deal.
>He’ll get over it.
“Maybe if I sold off a pony or two.”
>You’d known it’d go there.
>Luckily that boy’s got you or he’d be makin’ all kinds’ve stupid calls.
“Well, there’s the first bit of good news. Bargainin’ couldn’t get the price down none, but it weren’t worthless. Henry don’t even know if he can get you everythin’ you’re askin’ for, so he’s agreed to only take half on the first delivery an’ the remainder with th’last.
“You know, just in case he can’t get hold’ve somethin’.”
>”And when will that be?”
“Um… one sec.”
>You riffle through your pockets ‘til you find the slip of paper Henry’d jotted out the numbers on – and find your keys too, on the way.
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>>29951531
>First thing’s first, you get on in and start the truck up ‘fore you so much as even *look* at that paper.
>Only takes a few seconds, but of course you can hear his impatience every step of th’way.
>Well, man’s stressed. Ain’t polite, but you’ll forgive him.
>Ain’t even your money, an’ it was a bitter pill for you too.
“Um… yeah. Got it.”
>”And?”
“He’s gonna stagger th’deliveries so you don’t got a lot of stuff laying around ‘til it’s needed. Prolly ‘cuz he’s got other folks lookin’ for stuff too an’ he’s trying to keep up with demand.”
>”I know how businesses work.”
“Y’don’t know shit.”
>Well, it’s true.
>You ain’t gonna feel bad for that.
>”… fine, but I could have figured that much out on my own.”
>That boy’s damn lucky you’re ‘round.
“So anyhow, first delivery next week. Should be everything you need to lay the foundations.”
>”For houses I don’t know if I’ll even be able to build. Perfect.”
“Look, he’ll come through. Ain’t never had a problem with Henry ‘fore now.”
>”Uh-huh. Well, when’s the last delivery?”
“Should be end of next month, weather and supplies permittin’.”
>”Great. Perfect. At least I have a few weeks to think about how fucked I am.”
“Or t’find the money, y’know.”
>”That too.”
“You’ll find a way.”
>”Maybe.”
“You’ll find a way.”
>You expect him t’argue, but he just sighs.
“Look, it’ll all work out. I promise.”
>”Or what? You’ll sell off one of your ponies again? Or maybe your own –“
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>>29951536
>No. He ain’t goin’ there.
“Nuh-uh, don't you say another damn word.”
>You already owe him one asskickin’, an’ you ain’t gonna let him rack up too big a debt on that account.
>He wouldn’t survive it.
“Besides, there’s more good news.”
>”… what?” he asks suspiciously.
“Henry’ll send out a couple’ve his handymen to help. They ain’t gonna do all the work, but they’ll show you how it’s done.”
>Another one’ve them long, ominous silences.
“Look, I know you ain’t got any ponies that know how to do that sort’ve work.”
>”Well…”
“An’ if that ain’t enough, there’s a few ponies back on daddy’s farm with that kind’ve experience. I can ask daddy if… if he’ll rent ‘em t’you.”
>”Great. So now I have to find the money for that too.”
“Look, I… I can *try* an’ get you a deal…”
>”Yeah. Thanks.”
>Gotta be somethin’ you can do to convince daddy.
>He ain’t got the work to keep ‘em all busy anyhow, and bein’ neighborly’s always a good thing.
>Just gotta convince *him* of that.
>You’ll… you’ll find a way.
>“Don’t… don’t… whatever,” he sighs. ”Don’t worry about it. I’ll just sell off a worthless pony or two.”
>He ain’t gonna.
>He *ain’t*.
>”So, everything’s done?”
“Y-yep, ‘bout to head back.”
>”How’s Apple Bloom?”
“Just on my way to pick up her an’ the foals.”
>”Good. That’s… that’s good.”

ANON
>Best price your ass.
>That was nearly triple what you had estimated.
>Shit.
>Fuck.
>Shit…
>Selling one pony wouldn’t be enough.
>Not unless it was the right one.

end for tonight
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>>29951441
Hell yes. i needed this.
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>>29951495
>This world is like a machine.
>Flawed and imperfect, but It works. Barely. And it’ll never get any better.
>It doesn’t improve, doesn’t magically become more efficient.
>There’s no magic in this world.
>It just gets more and more worn as time goes on.
>Gears begin to slip, belts become loose, pistons struggle until the buildup of waste become too much and everything comes to a halt.
>Unless someone fixes and maintains it, eventually it’ll break.
>Even then, all that does is postpone the inevitable.
>Every machine breaks eventually.
>And most of all, you don’t care.
>If you did, you don’t think you couldn’t live with yourself, knowing you’re just letting everything rust away.
>Long, awkward minutes pass in silence.
>You try anything you can to keep your mind off the inevitable, how this is all going to go to shit.
>Last night, you’d had hope, but today you have to face the truth.
>Everything is shit.

>The sky outside the window is as black as hope.

WEW LAD
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>>29951589
You haven't seen edge until I write that story about the filly being raised by a taxidermist who turns ponies into plushies.
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>>29951603
my sides
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>>29951603
What about a story about a filly brothel?

Shit, I nearly forgot this time.
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>>29951656
Don't forget that CannibalAnon story a few threads ago. Shit was fucked up.
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>>29950549
It's still there, I assume. It's been brought up too often to not be a plot point later. I presume that Vinylfag only mentions it when people start to forget it's there.

Which means we should be seeing it in the next update.
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>>29951603
That sounds like a legitimately good premise for the Pony Horror thread.
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>>29951362
Rare is a good girl who sometimes does bad things, and good girls who do bad things get spankings.

Last Chance when???
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>>29951692
Oooooh, I had no idea there was one of those going right now, but if I'm going to do a proper horror story it would have to be continuing my old fluttervamp thing.
Besides, taxidermy anon isn't supposed to be a horror story. While it should be horrifying to the reader, our littlest heroine is mostly okay with her life because it's all she's ever known.
She gets fed daily, isn't raped like some of her filly brothel friends, and master even goes out of his way to brush her main and tail ever night while they watch cartoons together.
No violence, no gore, no monsters, no jump scares, just "good night filly, good job, I'll most likely kill you in the morning."
And it's not like she's even separated from her family or anything. Mommy is right over there on the sofa! Whenever she feels lonely, she can snuggle under mommy's wing.
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I miss trainer anon
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>>29951860
>Implying the brothel fillies are allowed to leave the brothel and make friends.

Do you know how much money it'd lose if it didn't run around the clock? Like, fifty dollars.
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I miss the good ol' days, when them ponies knew their place!
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New idea for edgiest story:
>Aria and Adiago turned into sushi.
>Served up nyotaimori style with Sonata as the platter.
>She knows she's next.
>Not all of her at once, but piece by piece, until the chef runs out of "optional" parts.
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>>29952011
Fucking labor laws only allow kids to work 8 hours a day, even if they are slaves.
Goddamn government sticking its nose where it doesn't belong.
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All jokes aside, I'd probably read a green about an innocent filly that was raised like a daughter and generally kept away from slavery befriending a filly prostitute slave.
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>Not buying you little slave mare time to be with her formerly missing filly at the filly brothel.
>"Sure it was only a cuddle brothel but she still has to cuddle all those sad strangers and children"
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>>29952412
ponyride slave green when?
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>>29952787
>The two fillies look nearly the same.
>Brothel Filly is tired of hearing about how great Daughter Filly's life is, gets jealous.
>She doesn't even need to suck dick for food, for crying out loud.
>Suggests that they should swap lives for a week. I.E. Brothel goes home with Anon while Daughter goes to the filly brothel.
>Daughter is really sheltered and doesn't know what a brothel is.
>Is tired of being locked inside Anon's house all the time and is curious about the world
>She agrees.
>They swap places.
>Daughter is wondering what's so bad about Brothel's house when someone enters her room.
>Gets saved at the last moment by Anon.

No, stop this. Filly Brothel was supposed to be a joke! A JOKE!
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>>29951667
One of these days man, I'm going to write it just for you.
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>>29951557
Pretty great update.

Thanks for keeping on keepin on.
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>>29953215

>Months later, Anon calms down enough to let his daughter leave the house again.
>Takes her to the park, and tells her not to approach ponies like brothel filly.
>Brothel filly approaches her, ruining everything.
>She has a number branded onto her flank now so she can't attempt to escape again.
>They did it to all the fillies, so she's not very popular at the brothel anymore.
>She gets bullied a lot now.
>She apologizes for nearly getting Anon's daughter raped.
>She asks if they're still friends.
>Anon's daughter doesn't know how to respond.
>Goes home without giving her an answer.

It practically writes itself.
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>>29941081
Being Rainbow Dash is suffering and you will respect that.
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>>29952837
Maybe, some day.
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>>29947092
> “… Master, if it comes down to that, will you… Use… Your weapons on anypony?”
> Adjusting your position as you lay on the couch, you frown as you consider her question. You are already wearing your combat uniform and boots, and the discomfort of them distracts you.
“If you mean ‘anypony’ in a collective sense, then yes. If either a human or pony poses a threat, I will not hesitate to take him or her down… I will rather kill than be killed.”
> Starlight squirms on top of you, and you guess that she is uncomfortable with the forwardness of your answer. Her eyes swivel down to meet yours, but she says nothing. You continue petting her shoulders as your other hand squeezes her cutie mark.
“I want to come back home, Starlight… I want to see you again, and I won’t let any man or pony stop me from doing so.”
> Starlight gives you a soft smile. Holding it for a few moments, it disappears when she frowns.
> “Have you… Ever killed anypony before?”
“Nope, and I hope today will not be the first.”
> Your pony nods slowly.
> “… What happens when a human dies, Master?”
> You chuckle softly, which earns you a frown from Starlight as she tilts her head in confusion.
> “What’s funny?”
> Reaching a hand up, you pet her on the top of her head.
“That, Starlight, is an age-old question that we have been asking ourselves since the beginning of time… Depending on who you talk to, you get varying answers as determined by that person’s culture, beliefs and religion. For me? I believe what the Church has taught me: That there is an afterlife for our souls, and that we are judged for our goodness based on the actions we take when we are still living.”
> “‘Judged’? Master? Judgement for what? And what are ‘souls’?”
> You pause, taking a moment to move your hand back to her mane.
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>>29955168
“Souls are… What is in us as humans. It is… Us. A human being in spirit form. It is what forms our consciousness, rationality, and free-will, and it makes us unique from non-sapient animals. It stays intact when we die, and it is what will go to heaven or hell after judgement. This is what I have been taught.”
> Checking that Starlight understands your explanation, you continue.
“Heaven is an absolute paradise, Starlight, filled with happiness and joy in the presence of God, at least as far as I know, and hell is a terrible place where the evil and sinful are punished for all eternity… Again, these are taught to me, but I don’t agree with the “punished for all eternity” part... I believe that our God loves us enough to save those in hell eventually, even those who are supposedly irredeemably wicked. His love is all powerful, his grace is mighty, and I believe that he will forgive us if we yearn for him hard enough and genuinely repent for our sins. Everyone deserves a second chance, despite what is taught to us by the Church.”
> Starlight raises an eyebrow.
> “You are disagreeing with the teachings of your religion, Master? Aren’t those supposed to be absolute?”
> You smile at your pony.
“They will say that it is absolute, and to deviate from this or to disagree is a form of heresy. I am lucky, I suppose, that our generally secular and modern societies have foregone the harsh punishments that are meted out to religious deviants… If I said what I did just 400 - 500 years ago, I would probably be burnt alive or torn to pieces.”
> Starlight’s eyes widen in horror. Pausing to move your eyes upwards to the ceiling, you think before you continue.
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>>29955171
“In my perspective, the use of this absolutism of condemnation by the Church is a tactic of fear-mongering by its leaders to get people to convert; for more than a thousand years, even as recently as 400 – 500 years ago, this was used alongside threats of death and destruction to force non-believers to convert. After all, every organisation needs new members to survive for long periods of time, so I can see why they needed to do that… Is it morally right or wrong to force people into a belief system for the “salvation of their souls”? I don’t have an answer, and it will be too tedious for me to tackle that.”
> You take a breath and keep your gaze on the ceiling as Starlight nods. From the corner of your eye, you see her head and eyes drift to her right as she considers what you said.
“Personally, I think religion has been corrupted by human influences, especially when you take the political, cultural, social and temporal idiosyncrasies of the context in which religion is practiced into account. For all we know, our understanding of what God wants us to do, as taught by the Church, may be very different from what God actually wants us to do. To follow the Church blindly, or any organisation for that matter, would be dangerous and frankly stupid in my opinion, because we tend to forget that people in power almost always have an agenda; whether good or bad is another issue altogether. To me, this understanding of people in power must apply to other facets of life, like supporting governments, getting an education and participating in politics, if you want to say that you are truly able to make ‘informed’ decisions… We have a tendency to forget that, and our history has shown us the horrors that can happen when we do.”
> Looking down at Starlight, you grin sheepishly at her.
“Sorry for ranting, Starlight. You probably didn’t want to hear all that.”
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>>29955173
> She shakes her head and smiles at you.
> “Actually Master, it is interesting to hear your perspectives. It lets me know you better, and I love a good conversation.”
> You chuckle softly as your eyes move upwards again.
“I’m a terrible person, Starlight. Who the hell is so proud that he thinks he can decide what he wants to accept or reject from his religion? And I must admit, even I think my sense of morality is messed up… After all, here we are: A Master and his slave… His bed slave. His sex slave.”
> Starlight puts a hoof on your cheek, and you turn your attention to her. She smiles softly at you as she shakes her head slowly.
> “Your actions determine who you are, Master, not what you think. Your deeds are kind, generous and compassionate, and so you are, despite what you tell yourself… And no, Master… I am not your sex slave. Not anymore… I am your lover, now.”
> Your pony leans in, planting a soft kiss on your lips as she blinks.
> “And I am happy and proud to be yours.”
> You smile as happiness blossoms in your chest. Reaching your right hand over, you cup the side of her face and she leans into it, still smiling at you softly.
“Did you know that if you asked me, I will let you go back to Equestria? It will hurt me so deeply and so badly, but if Cadance is to appear here, right now, and ask that you follow her home, I will let you go… I meant it every time when I told you that I desire your happiness… If it means that I will have to suffer for it, then so be it… If you are happy with going home, then I will let you.”
> Starlight’s smile widens as tears gather at the corner of her eyes. She wipes them before she boops you on the nose, using the soft bottom of her hoof as she giggles softly.
> “You are being silly, Master. I already told you that I want to stay with you, and this is my home now.”
“Why though?”
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>>29955179
> You reach both hands over to hold that hoof, moving it around as you examine it. The front of it and the sole is hard keratin, and despite her walking on it, it is surprisingly smooth and shiny. The bottom of her hoof, which you think is called the ‘frog’, is soft and fleshy. It is apparently ticklish, as she giggles again when you press your fingers into it. The colour of her entire hoof blends seamlessly with her pink coat.
> Your eyes move up to hers as you continue holding her hoof.
“Why are you choosing me?”
> Starlight blushes when she replies.
> “Because I love you… And because this is my purpose now. To give you my love, to keep you company, and to give you pleasure...”
> Her answer leaves you feeling conflicted. You are sad as you know that part of it stems from her heavy Stockholm Syndrome, but another part of you is elated that you have found love. True love.
> “… And to receive it.”
> Starlight bites her lower lip as she blushes deeper, her eyelids becoming half-lidded again. You cough into a fist a few times in quick succession as your own face burns, making her laugh. Your mind races for a subject to change the topic to as you release her hoof, scratching your eyebrow with a knuckle.
“I told you about my beliefs about the afterlife. What about you? What do you believe in?”
> Fucking hell, Boss. Seconds ago, it’s all lovey-dovey bedroom talk, now you bring up that morbid subject again.
> I PANICKED, ALRIGHT?!
> Starlight does not seem to mind though. She tilts her head slightly but keeps her gaze on yours.
> “Ponies are made of harmony, Master. Our… “Souls”, as you call it, is made of harmony. At the moment of conception, the innate magic from both parents merge with ambient harmony to form new magic and new life; these are replenished naturally over time, and is different from the harmony reserves used for magic and spellcasting.”
“So there are a few types of harmony?”
> Your pony smiles.
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>>29955186
> “I don’t want to get into the technicalities of it, but no. The harmony reserves in every pony are also part of ambient harmony, which for example, are used for spells by unicorns. These are different from the innate magic within us; the former is a resource to be used, and the latter is part of our bodies. Both can be made powerful with time and effort.”
> Still confused, you frown at her explanation.
“So correct me if I’m wrong, but in the context of running, harmony is like your energy reserves and stamina, while the ‘innate magic’ you are talking about is like muscle mass or your body’s physiology?”
> “I guess… It isn’t exactly like that, but I suppose that is a good analogy… A bit crude though.”
> Meh, good enough for you.
> She taps the other hoof against her chin as she thinks.
> “When a pony passes on, the innate magic that makes up a pony disperses into the world, turning into ambient harmony again. So, we become part of everything and everypony else, like those who have passed before us. We live only once, Master, so we honour those who have led remarkable lives and attained great achievements, and are generally very careful in how we treat and interact with others. We value the Elements of Harmony immensely, which are Magic, Laughter, Kindness, Generosity, Loyalty and Honesty, and we always try to live up to them as best as we can… Well, those bullies are the exceptions, I guess.”
“You mean there is no afterlife? When a pony passes away, he or she is just… Gone?”
> Starlight smiles at you. Her expression is almost like you asked her why ‘blue’ is spelled ‘b-l-u-e’.
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>>29955189
> “No, Master, there is no “afterlife”, but a pony doesn’t just disappear after death. Like I said, the magic that makes up a pony disperses into the world, and we become part of everypony and everything. We ‘live’, if you can even call it that, through those who are still alive and through the things in the world. When new life is formed, a small part of us will make up the new unique individual, so it is a cycle of sorts… And as I’ve mentioned, this guides us to generally be mindful of how we treat other ponies; “Will what you would like for yourself unto other ponies, for them to will that unto you”… This is a common Equestrian saying.”
> Interesting. That echoes “do unto others what you want others to do to you”. It seems like some form of karmic justice that guides behaviour is prevalent across different societies, be it human or pony. You cannot recall exactly, but it seems like Equestrian beliefs about life and death are similar to one of Earth’s religions. Probably Taoism or something, but you are likely to be wrong in your guess.
“You mention a place called ‘Tartarus’ before. Is that like hell, where the evil doers are punished?”
> Starlight shakes her head.
> “No, Master. It is more of a prison for magical creatures that threaten Equestria, rather than a place for the wicked dead like you described. We use the term as more of an expression than anything else.”
> You nod slowly.
“What about your Princesses? ‘Olicorns’ or something? You said that they are your living gods. Do they have a role to play in your beliefs about life and death?”
> Starlight giggles.
> “A-li-corns, Master. We call them ‘living gods’ because they possess immense magical abilities and are immortal. Not in the absolute sense though; they may be pass from injuries, but they will not pass from age or disease… And no, they are still subject to the laws of harmony.”
> Interesting.
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>>29955194
“How much magical power are we talking?”
> Starlight snorts and smiles in a bittersweet manner.
> “I have seen Princess Luna use her telekinetic grip to crush one of your big metal cars like a ball of paper, Master. The big green ones with that thin nose which can shoot bombs.”
> Princess Luna crushed a fucking tank? Holy shit.
“How the hell did you guys lose the War then?”
> Starlight recoils as soon as those words left your mouth, and you grimace as you realise what you said. You move a hand to pinch the bridge of your nose.
> You are a fucking idiot, Boss. Sensitivity: 0/10.
“Sorry… I didn’t mean any offense.”
> Your pony just nods slowly, even as she keeps her head and gaze lowered. Leaning in, you put a hand on her mane as you kiss her on the tip of her nose.
“Sorry, Starlight. That was insensitive of me. I am a fucking idiot sometimes.”
> That manages to get her to smile softly at you as she looks up.
> “It’s okay… We never expected your soldiers to infiltrate the Royal Castle in Canterlot with those quiet weapons… You took all our Princesses in a clandestine operation that left more than half of the Guards on duty dead… Only Twilight managed to escape, and that is only with the help of a Changeling that sacrificed himself to take her place.”
> You frown and ask Starlight what Changelings are.
“They are shape-shifters, Master. They can turn into a pony at will and live off love, and are part of our Equestrian societies after they have been re-formed… I don’t want to brag, but I was part of the team that helped in their reformation… I got an Equestrian Pink Heart of Courage for that… It is one of the highest honours to be awarded to a pony.”
> Smiling, you put a finger under her chin and lift her head. Then, you move hands on the sides of her face and lean in to look deep into her violet eyes.
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>>29955198
> “I have seen Princess Luna use her telekinetic grip to crush one of your big metal cars like a ball of paper, Master. The big green ones with that thin nose which can shoot bombs.”
> Princess Luna crushed a fucking tank? Holy shit.
“How the hell did you guys lose the War then?”
> Starlight recoils as soon as those words left your mouth, and you grimace as you realise what you said. You move a hand to pinch the bridge of your nose.
> You are a fucking idiot, Boss. Sensitivity: 0/10.
“Sorry… I didn’t mean any offense.”
> Your pony just nods slowly, even as she keeps her head and gaze lowered. Leaning in, you put a hand on her mane as you kiss her on the tip of her nose.
“Sorry, Starlight. That was insensitive of me. I am a fucking idiot sometimes.”
> That manages to get her to smile softly at you as she looks up.
> “It’s okay… We never expected your soldiers to infiltrate the Royal Castle in Canterlot with those quiet weapons… You took all our Princesses in a clandestine operation that left more than half of the Guards on duty dead… Only Twilight managed to escape, and that is only with the help of a Changeling that sacrificed himself to take her place.”
> You frown and ask Starlight what Changelings are.
“They are shape-shifters, Master. They can turn into a pony at will and live off love, and are part of our Equestrian societies after they have been re-formed… I don’t want to brag, but I was part of the team that helped in their reformation… I got an Equestrian Pink Heart of Courage for that… It is one of the highest honours to be awarded to a pony.”
> Smiling, you put a finger under her chin and lift her head. Then, you move hands on the sides of her face and lean in to look deep into her violet eyes.
“I am so proud of you, my brave little mare. For overcoming your past, for what you have achieved for your kind, and for overcoming your own fears about me… Have I told you that you are amazing?”
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>>29955204
> Starlight giggles.
> “You have, Master.”
“Then I’ll say it again. You are a wonderful, amazing pony… And I love you so fucking much.”
> You lean in, moving your head as you aim to kiss her.
> ‘Tock’. ‘Tock’. ‘Tock’. That came from your front door.
> “Anon! We’re late!”
> Jolting, you glance at the clock. It is 10:47am now.
> Starlight gets off you as you reach over to grab the green case. You give her a quick pet before walking briskly over to your front door.
“No Angela, YOU’RE late!”
> As you reach your hand for the front door, you hear Starlight calling for you. You turn around, and you see your pony has her body turned away as she looks at you from below her shoulder. Her front is lowered, her butt is up in the air, and she has her tail lifted vertically up. She stretches out and spreads her hind legs, giving you an unobscured view of her privates. That cute little donut of her anus. Her pink and moist feminine slit. Those teats with the little nipples. All situated on her curvy, sexy body.
> “Please be safe, Master! I love you! Please come back home and make love to me again, Master! Please…”
> Despite her cheeky words, you can see that she is extremely worried from her frown and by the look in her eyes. Your breath chokes in your throat as you nod at her, giving her the most re-assuring smile that you can make. You say a quick prayer, asking God to watch over and look after Starlight.
> Pulling your front door open, you see Angela wearing her combat uniform and boots. She looks over your shoulder before fixing her eyes on you with a bewildered glare.
> “I heard that. Why is Starlight…? Anon, what the fuck is that about?”
> Glancing back at your pony lover one last time, you close the door and lock it. You turn to Angela with a soft smile.
“I’ll tell you in the car. Let’s go do our duties.”
> …
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>>29955207
Updates! A major one!
> 3k words!

Will be writing another update tomorrow. I really really want to finish this, and I have a ton of ideas that in my mind right now.

I apologise for the wait, but doing the edits gave me something of a writer's block. Hopefully, I can sustain the momentum.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU

Thank you for all your support and for your feedback. Please leave your comments, suggestions, ideas and criticisms, and I look forward to receiving and reading them.

As always, stay awesome! ^^
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>>29955235
>disagreeing with the teachings
TFW Anon is literally a heretic. Why bother with a roll-your-own religion when he could just be an honest and humble Agnostic? That's where this anon has found his spiritual home anyway. A simple faith, but a great comfort to me; I don't need to know.

>So, we become part of everything and everypony else, like those who have passed before us. We live only once.
Our amino acids are immortal, or at least recycled very efficiently. Our proteins are digested and translated back into new proteins in the next life form. Our personalities not so much, unless we practice our writing! Keep posting Glimmer green or you will die forever.

>You took all our Princesses
Does that mean 'took out' as in the world-changing amount of harmony inside the two living gods was suddenly released into Equestrias ambient supply? Or 'took' as in captured and transported back to earth? Cadance, Twilight, and Flurry are alive and free in the Crystal Empire, right?

>prison for magical creatures that threaten Equestria
Powerful prisoners can be released, if non-magical creatures not just threaten but over-run Equestria. How much worse could Tirek and bugbears be than this new scourge? Are there any horrors stashed in there who could thrive in a magic-free environment?
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>>29955100
Rarity is for spanking. FOR SPANKING.
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>>29955520
Rarity bad, only gentle spank. Not hard.
Rarity good, horn ring come off.
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>>29949973

>Beep
>Beep
>Beep
>Bee- Fuck off!
>That's your home's way of telling you to wake the fuck up
>You attempt to silence the infernal noise, but are unable to move because of a large feathery blockade
>You suddenly become aware of the horse snoozing quietly a few inches away
>You don't want to wake her, but you also need to go to work
>Horse hugs or no job
>Comfort physically or comfort financially
>Tough choice, but if you lose your job then you won't be able to repair her horn and thus will never find her sister...
>...
>Sorry Sun horse, it's for your own good
>You slowly begin to shift her wing
>Imagine your surprise when she lets out a huff and clamps it back down again, pinning you to her
>"No is okay [Horse snore] Quill, I'll be up in a minute to raise the [Horse snore]."
>You try again, but yield the same results
>It's time for a new tactic
>Horse tickles
>You pick up a lose pillow feather off the ground
>Actually it could be one of hers, you aren't sure anymore
>Bringing your weapon to bare, you begin to tickle her on the snootle
>Scrunch.jpg
>"Buck off Luna..."
>OwO what's this?
>You guess that's their version of the 'F' bomb
>You move for a second attack, targeting the inside of her left nostril
>"Sister I'm tired..."
>You suddenly realise that her wing prison has released you
>Score!
>Leaping up, you make haste to the bathroom for a shower
>It doesn't take long to get squeaky clean and dry
>Moving into your trashed room, you open the sliding wardrobe with a press of a button
>Inside are the flight suits you've become accustomed to wearing
>Nothing too fancy
>A blue jumpsuit looking thing that comes complete with a helmet in case of depressurisation or a blow out of the canopy
>You've heard it's pretty stressful to fly without a canopy, and would rather avoid it if you could
>But a least the event was covered
>Slipping it on quickly, you return to the main space to make breakfast
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Does the ship have a just a cockpit, a sleeper berth, or a real living area attached? Could a horse poke her head in from the hold, or would she have to ride in an isolated cargo module? Does Anon do EVA much, and is the ship setup for it with an airlock?
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>>29955822

>The clock says you still have an hour to get there
>If the trip takes 20 minutes and breakfast takes 10, then that means you have 30 minutes to prep for the day
>You whisk eggs and milk rapidly while thinking about what you'll need to do
>You'll need to view the roster of loads for the day, and figure out the best routes to take
>You need to wake up your guest and make sure she'll be good for the day
>Your primary multi-cannon needs an ammo top up, but that can wait until after you pick up your cargo
>You put the eggs on high and run through to the couch
"Celestia! Celestia wake up!"
>"Wha... Who are..."
>A look of realisation crosses her as whatever nice dream she was inhabiting wore off
>"A-Anon! I'm sorry I should have gotten up earlier I-"
"It's fine don't worry, but I'm gonna need to go out to work in about..."
>Fuck you're not wearing your watch!
"...Soon. So I need you to get up so we can eat."
>She scrambles out from under the covers as you return to your eggs
>Scrambled nicely
>You serve them up as Celestia rushes to sit at your feet
"Other side, now!"
>"Oh! I forgot."
>You place her plate down on the table and begin to wolf your's standing up
>Noticing this, she begins to eat just as quickly
>You finish in record time, shaving a whole two minutes off your schedule
"Right, I'm gonna have to go out today, so I need to know you'll alright."
>"Anonymous I will be perfectly fine."
"Um, okay then... Do you know where the food is?"
>"Yes"
"Do you know how to work the phone?"
>"Yes"
"Are you capable of using the bathroom?"
>The look she shoots you says enough
"Well okay, I need to plan a route for today. Want to help?"
>You don't know what use she'll be but at least it's something to do
>Pulling out your tab, you open the galaxy map and the trade hub
>Looks like you have three jobs today
>A tonne of spare machinery for a battlecruiser out on patrol
>They must have broken something
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>>29955964

I'm basing/just straight copying his ship on the imperial courier from Elite Dangerous

It's a fighter/light cargo runner with pretty little on board. I'd assume it would have a cargo hold for poners to peek out from, and a bed for space snuggles but beyond that there isn't much
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>>29956057

>Three tonnes of medical aid kits, headed to Farpoint dock in LHS 3591
>And finally, a batch of non-lethal weapons going to Jamison city in...
>Oh fuck
>Iota
>That system is currently in an anarchy state
>No laws, no regulations...
>No back up...
>You'd better pick up that ammo before you go there
>You'd also best take some of your personal fire arms, just in case
>You rise from the sofa and head to the case on the wall
>Celestia watches you with an uneasy fascination
>Bumping in your code, you proceed to pull open the case with a slow yet methodical grasp
>Inside sits a pair of sidearms, one firing plasma, the other regular .45 rounds
>A lot of power for one small gun
>Above your hand cannons is a larger weapon that you really will never have use for
>A specially gifted plasma rifle from the company
>You don't even know why they gave you it
>It's of very little use in boarding combat, seeing as you have very little room to move already
>Unless they expected you to be counter boarding then you really have no answer
>Celestia is standing close behind you, watching you work
>"Why would you need those?"
"Well, I'm gonna have to go deliver supplies to the severely understaffed police force out in Iota. These are just in case things get... Bad."
>"If it's so dangerous, then why are you going?"
"Because it pays the bills, and usually it isn't this bad. Just with the sudden influx of anarchist movements the Feds are a bit surprised, so they call on people like me to deliver supplies where they are needed most."
>"Well... Please be careful. I-I don't want you getting hurt."
>With your pistols firmly strapped in place at your sides, you proceed back to the couch to plot a route
>You decide to hit Iota first, just to get it out of the way
>You'll then get too the cruiser, and deliver those parts, before finally reaching Farpoint
>Looks like a 400Ly round trip
>Not too bad, but with the addition of Iota, you might be in for a difficult time
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>>29956081
tell anon stop being poor and go buy a cutter already, plenty of room to live in there.

That rep grind made me want to kill myself...
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>>29943495
>Flurry Heart
out of the question. while I'm sure she'd be able to get through to her, putting her near Posey puts her near Haute, which is not happening.
>Cadance
Cadance herself is of course an ideal candidate to bring Posey out of her shell, but there is definitely a huge risk of directly becoming involved with her, as if we're caught by Haute she'll definitely pick that up as a warning sign or even a threat, and our work of trying to get her to trust us is for nothing and she'll do what she can to undermine us. We can't afford to involve ourselves directly, not yet
>Thunderlane
Thunderlane is swamped, he has enough shit to deal with at the moment with Crescent alone
>Mocha
Not perfect, but best option we have. While we ARE asking a lot of her as it is as acting as liason between the camp and the house ponies, working through the suggestion box on her off time, it might be poetic justice to have her play a role in taking down Haute after what she did to her. While Mocha is not really a spy, hence our hesitation to use her as Anon, she can at least be a sympathetic ear on behalf of Cadance, who can't afford to be caught trying to sway Posey personally but can rely on Mocha to act as her hoof in this instance to begin getting Haute caught for her actions.
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>>29955822
>>OwO what's this?
>OwO
cease

CEASE
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>>29956255

>Dragging your finger across the screen, you plot a good route between the stars
>Of course you'll need to pick up the cargo first, and that means going to the cargo depot in Kremainn.
>Wholer terminal this time, hopefully they sell multi-cannon ammo
>"Why are you avoiding the brown ones?"
"Celestia is peering over your shoulder as you play a what looks like an extremely advanced version of dot to dot
"Well, the brown ones are what we call 'brown dwarfs', basically failed stars. They don't give off enough energy to provide fuel my craft, so I'm trying to make the route more economical."
>"Failed stars?"
"Like they didn't quite make to star adulthood, and can't produce enough energy to keep the fusion in their cores active. At least that's how I think it works."
>"So I take it the blue and white ones are better for fuel?"
"Exactly, they produce more than enough energy to power my ship, all I've got to do is swoop by and collect it, then away I go!"
>The route looks good enough, and depending on how long you spend at each system, should take between 6 and 8 hours to complete
>Now all that's left is to upload it to the nav computer and go
"Right, I'm gonna go now. I'll be back in about ten hours. There's a place on the way where I'll be picking up groceries and shit, you want anything?"
>"No I'm alright."
"Good good, remember if you need help with anything or just get lonely, my numbers taped to the side of the home phone."
>You walk towards the door, picking up your helmet on the way past
"See you tonight."
>"Goodbye Anon."
>You walk out the front door, letting it slide shut behind you
>It's s short stroll to your courier, which is still parked where you left it
>Right, let's get this show on the road!
>Within minutes the craft is rising off the ground
>You spot Celestia waving at the window, and wave back
>You don't know if she saw you
>Eh, she'll be fine
>With that, you power up the engines and accelerate off into the clouds
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>>29956435

[Desired effect intensifies]
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>>29956255
Will light travel work similarly as irl or not at all?
Because if so then Celly will be waiting for a very long time...
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>>29956731
If we're working by ED rules then no, the Frame shift drive isn't moving you faster than light thus there is minimal time dilation between you and the rest of the universe
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>>29956543

>...Stay safe Anon.
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>>29957124
Not even a sunfag but I want to snuggle that horse until she smiles
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>>29956548

If the desired effect was to make you look like a faggot, then it was done correctly. If it was anything else, I think you failed.
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>>29956548
Is pic related the desired effect? 'Cause that's the only effect it had on me.
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>>29945223
>>29945705

> Or - it occurs to you suddenly - why not have Sunburst speak to her?
> He had suffered the worst you had ever done to any pony in this camp, but he had also kept your trust afterwards.
> And, of course, he would be in the house already too.
> Yes, that would work quite well...
> Sunburst's office is, as you had found it before, a maze of tomes, files, and other mayhem.
> How he had managed to acquire this much you weren't quite sure of, but the stallion always did seem to have an affinity for books that verged on a talent in its own right.
> "Your Highness!"
> Speaking of the stallion in question...
> Rushing out from behind his desk, Sunburst bows deeply to you.
> Shaking your head gently, you reach out with a wing to lightly tap his shoulder.
"It's alright, Sunburst. I was hoping to speak to you, if you have a moment?
> "A moment? Yes; for you, of course I have a moment!"
> Shutting the door behind you - and securing the lock with a spell to boot - you glance around.
"I have something I have to ask of you, Sunburst. It will be... delicate, but you're the single best pony for this task. And, in the end... I think it would be something of a reward for you as well."
> "Princess?"
> He cocks head slightly.
"Anonymous wishes for my daughter to have... an education in magic. She's still young, but-"
> Perhaps you should have approached that from a different, more cautious angle.
> Sunburst is frozen in place, his glasses hanging perilously from the end of his muzzle and pupils shrunken beneath his hanging curl of messy mane.
> Mouth working furiously, he finally manages to push out some words again:
> "I - I am - going to be allowed - to see Flurry Heart again-"
"...Anonymous wishes to speak to you first. He is still very nervous, given your role in the escape plan, but he sees the sense in having the absolute best teacher for Flurry that can be found. I think I have convinced him."
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>>29957851

> Instantly Sunburst dampens, ears falling and half-sinking onto his haunches.
> "Talk to him? I don't know how good I'll be at that - I'm not really a social stallion..."
> You had noticed; the more you looked around the office, the more you were left with the sense he spent most of his waking hours in here.
"It's not a question of being social. All he's concerned about - ah, I'd better start at the beginning."
> Seating yourself across from Sunburst, who himself drops the rest of the way down as well.
"Anonymous intends for Flurry Heart to be working with his own daughter. Not merely serving her as a maid, but working entirely."
> "I've heard the rumors. He wants to start a whole second camp like this."
"Eventually, yes. For now, though, that means she needs to fully grasp her abilities as an alicorn. Not only are you best-skilled to teach her, but... I think a familiar friendly face would do good for both of you."
> "Yes, Princess."
> He practically breathes the words, delight flickering across his face again.
"You're to tutor her at the very least on magic, possibly other subjects. Most likely you will be teaching her in the manor, rather than she coming here."
> "...and so I would be near Anonymous' daughter as well."
"Megan, yes. She is - an innocent soul; truly caring for Flurry, but also unaware of the evils of slavery. I don't think you will have any problems with her."
> "But I do understand now why he wants to - interrogate me first."
> Scuffing gently at the floor with a hoof, Sunburst glances down.
> "I'm just afraid of saying something that will make him take her away. From you."
"I understand, but I don't think you'll have to be afraid. He just wants to make sure that you aren't going to encourage her to rebel, or do something rash yourself."
> "Of course not!"
> You smile reassuringly, reaching out to touch his hoof as it drifted back and forth on the floor with one of your own.
"Then just say that, and I'm sure everything will be fine."
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>>29957858

> Though Sunburst nods, there's clearly something still concerning him.
> After a few moments, he at last gives voice to his worries in a whispered voice that suggests he barely can stand to consider them:
> "Princess... will she remember me?"
"I... expect so. The two of you were so very close, after all, and you last saw her not that long before she and I-"
> Before you sent her away.
> Condemned her to neglect.
> Doomed her to slavery.
"-were separated."
> "And she remembered you."
"Yes. I haven't had a chance to speak to her about this - I haven't been with her nearly as much as a mother should - but I think she will remember you."
> "Does she remember her father?"
> You flinch.
> Not at the mention of Shining Armor, but at the memory of Flurry leaned up against Anonymous in a hug after seeing his image.
> Why hadn't she come to you...?
"Yes. She does."
> This time it is Sunburst who reaches out to you.
> "I'm sorry, Princess. I shouldn't have asked, that was - beyond me."
"No, it's - okay. You, of all ponies, I should be able to speak with about him. You knew Shining, after all. And you've lost so much too."
> "Yes..."
> He sighs looking, away with ears fallen.
> "I still sometimes look for... information about Star-"
"Anything?"
> A silent shake of his head is all that he responds with - and all that needs to be said.
> Just like Shining - most likely dead, in body or mind, as a unicorn of her caliber would surely have been a great prize for some slaver.
"I'm sorry."
> "Don't be. Like you said - at least with you I ought to be able to talk about it some, since you knew Starlight."
> You nod, but say nothing and so an awkward silence falls for a few moments before you speak up again.
"Sunburst, there's one other thing about this job that I'll need you to do..."
> He listens carefully as you tell Posey's story, expression hardening when you talk about Haute Glamour.
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>>29957863

> "Sounds like a few ponies I knew back in the School for Gifted Unicorns. Just as bad as I was at magic, but none of the knowledge either - so instead they just intimidated everypony else into giving them what they wanted."
> Sighing softly, he shakes his head.
> "Of course I'll try to help her, but - why me, Princess? Like I said, I'm not so - socially gifted. There've got to be other ponies who'd be better able to talk to her...?"
"Maybe. But you've done a lot for me, and..."
> You hesitate, struggling to reach for the words.
"...and I hurt you. I hurt you badly, Sunburst, even though you were just doing what I'd encouraged - even ordered - you to do. Haute Glamour hurts ponies too, but you of all ponies can say that I'm not like her."
> It's a long, anxious moment that follows, during which you squeeze your eyes shut to force the thoughts back.
> But that couldn't stop the memories of the way he'd /screamed/ when you'd taken the whip to his back.
> Or the little almost-sniffle that you-
> "P-Princess?"
> Something touches your chest - his hoof..
> "Is - this why you were pushing for Anonymous to allow me to be Flurry Heart's teacher? To - make up what you had to do to me?"
"No... maybe. Part of it."
> "You don't have to, Cadance. It wasn't your fault."
"Just because it's not my fault doesn't mean I didn't..."
> Another shaky breath.
"...I hurt you, Sunburst. You and the other five, so that I could see my daughter again. I put her above all of you. You can tell me that Anonymous didn't give me a choice - I tell myself plenty often enough - but it doesn't change that I did it."
> "Princess... look at me, please?"
> Forcing yourself to, you find Sunburst watching you through his wide glasses with a tired, but sympathetic look.
> "You aren't like Haute Glamour. You want me to tell Posey that, but you need to hear it too. You aren't like her."
> A moment, and you manage an actual real smile.
"Thank you."
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>>29957870

> Sunburst smiles too - then looks back to his desk.
> "Now. Before I go on and start figuring out how I'm going to make up for years of missed opportunities with little Flurry, there's something else I want to show you."
> Turning to his desk, he opens a drawer; at tome is drawn from within, set on the desk, and carefully opened to a particular page.
> "Cherry, how are you feeling in there?"
> To your shock, the book answers back.
> "Feeling fine. Something up out there?"
> "Someone I'd like you to see."
> Joining him, you peer down into the page - where a quite animated image of an earth pony peers straight back up.
> "Oh! Miss Cadance!"
> "Princess, this is Cherry Blossom. How long have you been in there, Cherry?"
> "Nearly twenty hours now, and no problems yet."
> Sunburst glances up to you.
> "We're trying longer lengths now, with Cherry Blossom and the other volunteers. A day is all I think we can do without raising suspicion, but it proves that the Method can be sustained without injury."
"Cherry - what is it like in there?"
> "Strange. I - don't know how to describe it exactly. It's like you're in a window in the sky, but the sky is flat. The ground is the paper, but I'm - standing up, except I'm not. It's weird at first, but I can move around now."
> You nod, and Sunburst opens the drawer again.
> "I'm going to put you back now, okay Cherry?"
> "Sure thing."
> Only once the book is away, you cock your head.
"How else is it coming along?"
> "We've figured out that hold and colt don't really bother them, and as long as there's a unicorn in there they can undo the spell and let many ponies out."
> Sunburst sighs gently.
> "We've even tested it on getting out of the camp itself - not with a pony, obviously, but it doesn't set an alarm. The only holdup is having somewhere to send them to."
"You had a contact outside the camp, yes? Is there any luck with them?"
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>>29957872

> "As far as I can tell she is trustworthy. But there was another idea - all the stuff that was taken from the raid the guards did. There must have been things in there about other anti-slavery groups, right? Free ponies - or people - we could reach out to and definitely trust! We could make use of that!"
> He is, of course, right.
> But getting involved in anything with the types of "resistance" those ponies had been mixed up with made you nervous.
> Not all of them were violent, sure...
> But still.

Do we give him the information?
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>>29957876
No.
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>>29955235
Enjoy the interesting opinion of Anon about life after death and the human dogmas, as well as Starligth's interpretation of what happens with the ponies when dying, it's a shame to think of all the ponies that could have died in our world Where his magic identity could not complete the natural cycle of his native world, but I also believe that at the same time that magic is not lost when being in our world, perhaps, only perhaps its essences are transferred to the ponies that may have been born in the Earth or strengthen the captives in our world by making them capable of some miracle in the future.

Finally an indication of what happened with the princesses and their current whereabouts, for now only Candance remains the only real authority in Equestria, although knowing that Twiligth was not captured gives me hope, hopefully we know about the past and the future

Good job Mercury
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>>29957124
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>>29932470
I want to smear Corona all over my body.
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>>29957876
Not unless he want's all the escapees to end up on a government hit list of anti-slavery terrorists, but if he want's some alphabet agency to swoop in one day and kill them all sure.
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>>29957876
>Do we give him the information?
Of course, but first we scold him about that "definitely trust" remark!
There was serious risk in supporting Sunburst in this. Ponies could have been lost in the books. Anon could discover us, and punish us all very severely. It could mean the end of all the progress he and we have made, putting us back in his torture facility where this story started. It could mean we lose Flurry again.
We have decided the benefit is worth the risk. Anon could change his mind about the worth, to him, of even our limited freedom and happiness. It is a subtle argument he made at that dinner, his investors might yet convince him to adopt more direct paths to profit. Or he could just drop dead or something. Not having an emergency escape plan warmed up and ready to implement would be a breach of our true responsibilities. But no point escaping with nowhere to escape to. Authorizing Sunburst in this is a small additional risk of discovery, but makes his plan very much more likely to succeed.
We hope his plan will never be needed and are in no hurry. Sunburst is already being careful with his cellular organization, not even he should know everything. Successful conspirators barely "definitely trust" themselves, let alone a list of random contacts, from another group who failed, that just passed through enemy hands! The ponies who reach out to these outside groups must be further isolated from the magic experts the plan depends on.

>Most likely you will be teaching her in the manor
Sounds like a done deal, but what are the other foals, and Megan, being taught in the meantime? Is Anons most trusted slave going to be taught massage, or any other useful skill besides serving tea and folding pants? The camp has many educational needs besides teaching magic to Flurry; let's see 'em.

>, but you need to hear it too. You aren't like her.
>He sighs looking, away with ears fallen
Sunburst is a good friend. Slaveventure is a good writer.

>2000 Char!
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>>29958108
I'm glad you like this update, and thank you immensely for reading and for your comments.
> I will be working on the next update in a few hours time.
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>>29957876
>The ground is the paper, but I'm - standing up, except I'm not.
Cartoon pony describing what it's like to be a cartoon. Deeply trippy, and cool to read!
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To clarify something, there is such a thing as a non-violent anti-slavery group you could contact. They're not necessarily on the right side of the law - some more or less so than others - but they're not violent "blow shit up and kill people" terrorists either.

Even the non-violent ones are willing to do things like shelter and transport escaped slaves, though, which is why they appealed to our rebels (and now, potentially to Sunburst).
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>>29958898
I really wish Corona would have a chance at revenge. Either against anon or cadance.
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>>29957876
>Do we give him the information?

Assuming that that person is not actually cheating them to collect a big reward once you give them away to Anon.

It is necessary to have more information of your contact before taking such a big step, there is too much at stake now to lose everything because of trusting the wrong person, the problem with clandestine groups is the continuous feeling of distrust that exists among its members.

In the absence of something better the best option before risking is asking for a show of trust between both parties
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It is doubly pleasurable to lie to the impostor.
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>>29958898
Or if any of them are in Canada, they don't need to do anything violent or illegal (in Canada) at all! Just sign for a package, open a book, and help some American refugees start a new life. That sort of thing (and hockey and talking about weather) are national past-times. It's a matter of making contact beforehand so escapees don't get returned to sender or rot on a shelf somewhere.
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>>29959170
Fuck off, we have enough refugees
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>>29958937
>Coronas revenge against Cadance
Corona is already keeping the thing she most values (next to Flurry) from her. Corona claims it's to protect Shining from going after them and getting himself killed, but that's implausible. She doesn't dislike Shining, but protecting him from himself would not motivate her. What was he going to do anyway, even with magic let alone without? The only danger he was ever in from Slaveventure was being laughed at. Corona is keeping her silence only to hurt Cadance, and that's why she's distant with him.
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>>29959191
There is about enough now, but not a huge excess. Much less might be bad. A thousand more, who bring exotic magical skills including weather manipulation and enhanced agriculture, could surely pack in somewhere. They're cuter than the Syrians, Tamils, or draft-dodgers too!
>and c'mon: SLAVES
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>>29959247
If Corona speaks the truth runs the risk that the law compels her to return with her former owner: IdonothavethecouragetoactasatrueleaderandalltheproblemsIentrustoCandance, Anon
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>>29956543
Nice.
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>>29959329
>more refugees to vote for Turdeau next election.
No thanks. Go try Mexico, they're probably accepting refugees, or try catching a flight to Germany or Sweden.
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>>29960050
>Equestrian - Canadians voting liberal
Their monarchists and not used to voting at all, but I'm pretty sure the Greens have them sewn up.
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>>29959329
Scrolling past I thought this was a goatse edit. That is all.
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>>29960076
Sure, today they're just poor, helpless refugees abloo bloo have a heart :((

Tomorrow, they're changing our fucking national anthem again. Hasn't our country suffered enough through pandering to minority groups? LEAF US ALONE
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>>29960201
>changing our fucking national anthem again
Say wah?! It's been pretty static since they translated from the original french more than a hundred years ago! Are anglophones the 'minority group' you're bitching about? There's the gender neutral edit going through now, "thy sons" to "of us", but you can't blame that on refugees. Let alone escaped slaves from Equestria.
As for pandering to minorities, that's just democracy. Even if we closed the borders entirely the indians, newfies, fucking Quebec, gays etc, and every other political identity group with some stupid axe to grind would still be with us. There's costs to our openness, but that's not really one of them. Sikhs though, they've been kind of costly to have around... Ponies would be better.

>>29960122
>goatse
You've been on 4chan too long, friendo. GB2 facebook, for you're own good!
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>>29955207
> Stepping out into the open carpark of the Police Headquarters Building, you see a convoy of 5 black armoured vans. You follow the rest of the other officers as they walk over and enter the back of the first vehicle.
> From the briefing earlier by Assistant Commissioner Thor himself, you know that there are 24 officers in the Operation, and each of them are wearing their complete set of equipment: Kevlar helmets with face shields, black balaclavas, bullet-resistant combat vest on top of a dark blue combat uniform, elbow and knee guards, and black combat boots, complete with all the minor accessories and gadgets for communication and use in the field. Every Rescue Team officer is armed like you: a MP5A2 sub-machine gun, a Glock 19 semi-automatic pistol and a combat knife, complete with 3 extra magazines for each firearm and an assortment of small items, like torchlights, handcuffs, plastic cable-ties, and rolls of tape. Other officers are carrying ballistic shields and equipment for urban operations, which includes a sledgehammer, a door-breaching tool, heavy bolt cutters and pin-hole camera sets. You are carrying a door-breaching tool yourself in the black bag on your back.
> Mumbling your thanks to the masked officer who helped you up, you take a sit on a wooden bench inside the already stuffy back of the armoured van. Angela, now given the callsign ‘Charlie’, sits down on your right, panting lightly as she attempts to remove her backpack. After trying for a few moments, she taps you on the arm.
> “Delta, help me with this, won’t you?”
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>>29960356
> You nod, reaching over to untangle the strap for her, which allows Angela to sling it off her shoulder and place it between her legs. Cradling your sub-machinegun, you glance around the cramped van as more officers enter, some having to sit on the floor as the benches are already full. Many of the seated officers are already making small talk, and from the snippets of conversation that you manage to catch, you note that there are both male and female officers in Rescue Team 1, and many of them sound really young.
> Someone taps you lightly on your left shoulder, which captures your attention. You turn to see a masked face looking in your direction.
> “Hey, Delta right? I’m Bravo, and this guy here on my left is Alpha. We’re in the same detachment.”
> The man turns and gestures to the other masked officer beside him, who offers his hand out to you. You shake it as you smile under the mask, only to realise that he cannot see it. Being glad for a distraction from the heat and stuffiness of the van, you introduce Angela (Charlie) to them. Bravo leans in as he speaks, his deep voice getting muffled from the cloth covering his mouth.
> “That AC Thor is something, isn’t he? Scheduling an operation at the exact time that the Equestrian Citizens Bill is to take effect. 1pm right?”
> You nod.
“Yep, that is 6 minutes from now. We are going to hit those sadistic fucks hard... What does the Bill stipulate anyway, if I might ask? I haven’t been following the news this morning.”
> Charlie sighs beside you in exasperation.
> “Of course you aren’t, when you were so busy with Starlight this-”
> You shush her, but the other 2 officers start laughing. Alpha taps his gloved hand against his chest as he speaks.
> “Don’t worry, Delta, I have loads of fun and love with my Derpy Hooves myself. She’s a little klutzy, but she is so obedient and eager to please. God damn is she adorable… I love her dearly, and I am glad I saved her.”
> What.
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>>29960363
> What.
“You mean you have your own ponies as well?”
> This time, Bravo answers you.
> “Many of us in the Rescue Team do, Delta, and each and every one of us was hand-picked by AC Thor himself to be members. Apparently, he only wanted people who have shown a certain level of commitment to the well-being of Equestrian Citizens… How he managed to find us, though, I will never know.”
“How did you come to join ECAD RT 1, Bravo?”
> He chuckles before he answers.
> “I was asked by my Commanding Officer to see AC Thor in his office after my shift… I, uh… Punched a man that assaulted his pony in public and stole her. I mean, if he was properly disciplining her, like maybe a verbal lashing or even a few whips of his belt, then fine; but he was kicking her repeatedly over and over again, and all because she dropped and spilled a bottle of milk in the aisle of a supermarket… I saw what was happening, and I took action. Saved that poor girl from that bastard.”
> Wow. That’s… Something.
“How is she now? Do you still have her?”
> “Spring Step? She’s good. No permanent damage, and she is always cheerful and happy, especially when she plays with and walks my dogs… I was sure that I got into trouble for that incident, but AC Thor somehow made me her legal owner and saved my ass from the Disciplinary Code; would have gotten discharged from the Force otherwise.”
> Bravo punches your shoulder lightly as he chuckles again.
> “And before you ask, no. I just keep her as a caretaker for my dogs… I guess I never saw her in that light, despite all the good things that I have heard about the joys of ponypussy.”
> You laugh, and it is then that you notice that you are not the only one. The back of the van is quiet now, and the officers that you can see are listening to your conversation; some of them are still laughing. One masked officer waves at you to catch your attention; he is seated on your left at the opposite seat.
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>>29960366
> “Hotel here. I bought a stallion from the auction, and his name is Night Light. Pretty decent and hardworking chap. He helps me with my gardening and in my garage when I fix up computers as a small profit-making hobby. Also helps to look after my toddlers when the wife and I are at work.”
> You lean your body towards Hotel and ask him how he came to be in the Rescue Team.
> “Oh, I brought Night Light to an event in Special Investigations and AC Thor interviewed me there.”
> A female voice comes from the opposite seat, this time from your right.
> “Yep, when I met him in the elevator, AC Thor just asked me to meet him in a bar after work. He offered to let me join there and then! Became Quebec after that.”
> Someone asked if she has a pony herself.
> “I… Uh… I do. A stallion called Silverstar, who used to be a sheriff back then… We, uh… Have fun too.”
> The van echoes with laughter as again as Quebec splutters in embarrassment. Another female voice reassures her through the din. It raises in volume as the officer it belongs to addresses the people in the van.
> “I am November, and I have 2 ponies. A married couple in fact, who used to be bakers back in Equestria. They lost their foals in the war, but Cup Cake is already expecting. They help my parents in their bakery, and their recipes are quite the hit in my district.”
> That earned her a few ‘ohhs’ and ‘ahhs’. Then, yet another female voice speaks. This one came from your seat on Angela’s right.
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>>29960373
> “Tango here. I have Rainbow Dash, and she is my ‘comfort mare’. I am not afraid to say it, as I am openly gay. Poor girl will never fly again even if she goes back to Equestria… She had her wings removed for being defiant by her former owner, and when I broke in to steal her from him, she was already broken in mind and spirit… So, I give her the best care that I can, and our relationship grew over the months. Now, she is as healthy as she can be, even though she is still a little quiet. I promised her that we will enjoy ourselves with our toys after this is over… And don’t any of you dare ask me “what will it take to get me back on solids?”, you pricks!”
> You join the rest in their laughter. God damn, you love these guys already.
>Then, Angela (Charlie) taps you on the arm again as she leans in to whisper in your ear.
> “If I get the opportunity later, Anon, I will try to bring home one of the rescued ponies. I always wanted to keep a dog, but maybe a pony-”
> She is interrupted by shouting from outside the vehicle.
> You turn your head as you see a masked officer move to close the backdoors, even as the vehicle starts its engine. According to your briefing earlier, the Rescue Team will now be staging a raid on a warehouse believed to be a major hub for smuggling operations. It will be a classic ‘Snatch Rescue’, where the Rescue Team will storm the premises from multiple locations to confiscate any ponies on the premises, and if need be, you have orders to neutralise any threats. The vehicle you are in now will move out first, followed by the rest 5 minutes later. Those other vans are empty, and they are meant to hold any ponies that you rescue.
> Reaching your left hand up, you glance at the dark digital watch on your wrist. It is 1:07pm.
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>>29960376
> The Equestrian Citizens Bill came into effect 7 minutes earlier. You do not know the full extent of the Bill, but you know that the Government now has the right to confiscate any ponies suspected to be suffering from physical and sexual abuse. If the perpetuators are found guilty, their sentences will follow that of Part 3 of Chapter 12 of the Equestrian Pony Slavery Act, and they will be blacklisted from owning or purchasing a pony slave in the future. The maximum sentences for ‘Cruelty’ will be a fine not exceeding $60,000 and to imprisonment for a term not exceeding 8 years. Judges may also convict the accused to no more than 12 strokes of the cane.
> Angela taps you on the shoulder as the vehicle moves out. Glancing at her, you note the fear in her eyes. ECAD intelligence stated earlier that the slavers in the ring have firearms, and will arrange for the Police Tactical Response Force to activate their standby units if needed. You reach a gloved hand to squeeze hers, nodding softly as she copies your head movement. Your eyes travel to the weapon in your lap as your stomach becomes cold. Despite the fear you feel within, you are ready to perform your duty. For your country. For ponies. For Starlight.
> Closing your eyes, you say a quiet and simple prayer.
“God, if I am to meet you later, please be merciful… And please keep my Starlight safe and happy… Amen.”
> Angela and Bravo echo your ‘amen’.
> …
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>>29960379
Updates!

Short break now.

Will continue on another update after dinner, maybe in 2-3 hours time.
> Do let me know what you think of this segment.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU

Stay awesome! ^^
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>>29960293
>There's the gender neutral edit going through now, "thy sons" to "of us",
Precisely what I'm referring to.

Not the work of refugees, but still pandering to a minority who was vocal about it, which is what we don't need: another minority group to pander to and morph our national identity to please.

John A. would be vomitting in rage if he could see what we've done to the country he poured his blood, sweat, and tears into help building
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>>29941021
>Occasionally you woke up to morning wood in your face.

Stop vinylfag, that's gay. You'll trigger fagfag.
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Nice to see /mlpol/ is alive in our hearts.
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>>29960366
Love this part

Everypeople here there are White Knights
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>>29960373
>“I am November, and I have 2 ponies. A married couple in fact, who used to be bakers back in Equestria. They lost their foals in the war, but Cup Cake is already expecting"

This is sad and cruel Mercury
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>>29960376
>“Tango here. I have Rainbow Dash, and she is my ‘comfort mare’

And during her games we used code names, I was called 'Yun, Yun' and she 'Skittles'
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>>29961241
White knights who boner the poner maybe. As with our protagonist, I'm sure the relationships are complicated. The meaning of 'yes' is the possibility of 'no'.
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>>29951557
>“Don’t… don’t… whatever,” he sighs. ”Don’t worry about it. I’ll just sell off a worthless pony or two.”

Hope no one heard that.
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>>29961849
it's pretty nice to know how much so many of his coworkers care for ponies.

Don't you kill any of them ya bastard. There's already too few as is.

Later if he gets the chance anon should tell them about that guy at the animal shelter. they'd appreciate what he did it and then he could horrify them with what happened there.
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>>29957876
>Free ponies - or people - we could reach out to and definitely trust!

Definitely trust to screw everything up. Before reaching out to anyone they would have to do research on them: their methods, success, and even if they have a way to Equestria or secure sanctuary.
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>>29962013
was for >>29960384

also. pony play-dates when?
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>>29964763
He could carry her on a ride!
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>>29964763
That's Applejack?
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>>29964763
Really need green of this photo
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>>29964763
Someone needs to color that man green and that pony to look like starlight
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>>29965268
For you my good anon
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>>29964171
Carousel impalement is a bit much for /spg/, but could fit the theme I guess. Someone summon tg/n.
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>>29960379
> AC Thor himself opens the back of the van.
> “You have your orders. Move out and get into position.”
> Immediately, the officers of your Rescue Team start spilling out of the vehicle. You get up and walk over to the end, kneeling as you jump off it and landing on both legs whilst bending your back. Wordlessly, you raise your weapon to your eye-level and start a brisk walk towards the stairs on the side of the blue building, passing a gate that just had its chain cut. You keep your eyes down the sights of your sub-machinegun as you twist your body around, following the actions of the other 2 dozen men and women as you scan your surroundings for threats.
> From your briefing earlier, the target location of your raid is a large, light blue warehouse. It has 2 stories: an upper office level that is connected to a staircase outside the building via catwalks; and the big storage floor below. ECAD intelligence showed that the catwalks have been boarded up, and that the office itself has 2 rooms; one that is connected to the catwalk, which has a window that overlooks the storage floor, and one that further inside. The storage floor below houses many cages where the smuggled ponies are kept, and based on a reconnaissance that was conducted this morning, there are at least a dozen men on the floor and 7 ponies in the cages.
> Moving swiftly past several container trucks, your thumb is on the selector of your weapon, ready to flick the safety off at a moment’s notice.
> Each detachment comprises of 6 officers, and each one has been allocated an entry point. Your detachment, Det 1, comprises of Alpha, Bravo, Charlie (Angela), yourself, Echo and Foxtrot, and your task is to storm the upper offices of the warehouse while Dets 2 to 4 each take an entrance to the storage floors below.
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>>29965699
> When you pass a sentry post, your eyes are drawn to the sight of a man with a bullet wound in his head. The inside of the sentry box is smeared with red and bits of pink. Shaking your head quickly, you focus and resume your combat stance as you press forward, reaching the bottom of the metal staircase as 5 other masked officers join you. Alpha, identifiable by the ballistic shield he is carrying, turns and nods at the corpse, which is now 25 metres away from you.
> “Should have known AC Thor to get the Snipers in. Probably had to take out the sentries to prevent alerting the others.”
> Angela gives him 2 swift taps on the side of his arm.
> “Focus now. Weapons ready.”
> He nods as the rest of you do the same. Moving your thumb on the selector, you push it down, feeling your weapon clicking twice. You are now ready to kill.
> Wordlessly, the 6 of you form a human train with Alpha taking the lead, moving up the stairs together as a unit with your weapons pointing forward and upwards. You feel your instincts and training take over as your mind becomes hazy with fear, and you attempt repeatedly to swallow that lump in your throat. Your stomach feels cold again, and you feel detached from your body. Heart thumping against the vest, your legs are moving seemingly by themselves. You hear the series of metallic ‘thumps’ as 6 pairs of boots impact the stairs repeatedly.
> God, I am scared. Please give me strength. Please give me courage. I am so scared. I am-
> ‘Thunk!’
> A crash behind makes you jump, and you are sure the others did as well. You would have fired your weapon if your index finger was on the trigger.
> “Gah! Fucking hell!”
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>>29965424
I love you
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>>29965708
> Spinning around, you see that Echo has fallen, and he is grabbing his knee. You glance at the group, and when they stop, you move down cautiously to help Foxtrot as she picks Echo up, letting him sit on the step as he groans in agony. His chin is bleeding profusely, forming a large dark spot on the bottom of his balaclava, and the uniform above his left knee is also soaking with fresh blood.
> “Fucking lost my step… Gah!”
> Great. Raid has not even started yet and there already is a casualty.
> Angela picks up her radio and speaks into it. You ignore the chatter in your headset as you place a hand on Echo’s shoulder.
“Can you walk?”
> He nods even as he grimaces.
> “I can try. It doesn’t hurt that badly, and I-”
> Foxtrot interrupts him with a hand on his other shoulder and a swift shake of her head.
> “No, Echo. You are going to sit out on this one. You cannot move fast now, and you’ll put the rest of us in danger.”
> Alpha comes down, moving his ballistic shield aside as he grabs Echo’s hand.
> “Always another time to be a hero, man.”
> You decide to chime in.
“Don’t worry about it, Bro. There are plenty of other ponies to save.”
> Even through his balaclava, you can see his eyes narrowing. You cannot tell if it is because he is smiling or frowning. Then, they close as he nods. Slowly, he gets up with Alpha’s help and gives each of you a handshake as he says his thanks. Groaning again, he makes his way down the staircase slowly, one step at a time as he holds on the handrails for support. His MP5 hangs limply in the other hand.
> “Murphy’s law, eh Delta?”
> That was Angela’s voice. You chuckle as you give a signal to get back into position.
“Yeah, and it is a bitch.”
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>>29965715
> With that, your detachment makes its way up to the stop of the stairs. Pausing at the corner, you hear Alpha say “Go!” before he turns the corner sharply with Bravo and Angela, pausing with his ballistic shield up as the other 2 officers point their weapons forwards. Bravo turns and nods at you, so you get in position behind Angela again, weapon raised and ready as your group travels forward. A male voice speaks from your headset.
> “Det 2, in position.”
> You can feel the heat of the afternoon sun through your uniform, and you are panting already from the weight you are carrying. All you can focus now on is the steady, soft metallic ‘thumps’ of boots on metal, the feeling of Angela’s body on the back of your forearm, and the hardness of a bone that presses against your back. You tell yourself to focus.
> “Det 4, in position.”
> Your group stops outside a chained door as Angela helps Bravo to get out his bolt cutters. They move to adjust the tool briefly before pausing, both of them giving Alpha a swift nod. Then, Bravo gestures for Foxtrot and you to take the other side of the door as Angela moves behind Alpha. When you are in position, Alpha reaches for his radio.
> “Det 1, in position.”
> Your heart is thumping rapidly as adrenaline courses through your system. You feel the fear in you again, and you swallow. When AC Thor gives the command, you will move swiftly and with purpose.
> In a few moments, you will have to act.
> Taking a breath to calm yourself, you focus your eyes on the door. Finger still off the trigger. Good.
> If you need to kill someone, then so be it.
> No hesitation. No thinking. No feeling.
> Just do it.

> “Det 3, in position. All in position.”
> “Zulu here. Roger that, Romero Tango 1. Do it. Do it now.”
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>>29965721
> Bravo pushes down on the bolt cutters hard with his shoulders, and the tool cuts through the chain easily. Pausing to keep his equipment, Alpha waits for Bravo to indicate his readiness before nodding at the rest of you. He bashes the door open and storms in, and your detachment follows him. Turning around the corner to the left, he pauses about 3 metres in, waiting for your group to form up behind him as he points his MP5 forward, shield at the ready.
> True enough, the catwalk has been covered entirely, and it is lit by weak lights that are placed in intervals. There is only one way to the office: the door you just passed leads to a walkway on the left, followed by a right turn into another walkway that leads to the first room of the office. The one with the window.
> Foxtrot taps you on the shoulder, and you tap Angela on hers. She passes it on to Bravo, who then taps Alpha. When he moves, the 4 of you stick closely behind, weapons at the ready again. Then, your ears are assaulted by the sounds of shouts and gunfire coming from below you.
> Holy fucking hell, that is so loud!
> You narrow your eyes as you try to ignore the cacophony around you, but it does little to distract you from the bursts of automatic gunfire, the single and distinct shots, and the array of voices. Reaching the corner for the right turn, Alpha pauses again and waits for Foxtrot to start another chain of taps. When it reaches him, he turns around the corner swiftly with Angela and Bravo.
> “Clear.”
> Foxtrot and you stack up behind the group, and keeping your weapon raised, you move forward with them. The double doors to the first room is open, and you can see that it has a long metal table in its centre, a bookshelf on a corner and several filing cabinets at another. There is no one there at the moment. You focus your attention at the closed door on your left, getting ready to react.
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>>29965437
She's not impaled, it's just like that trick where you put the stick under your armpit. There's a little seat under her belly connected to the rod that she sits on.
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>>29965724
> 10 metres away from the double doors to the first room.
> 5 metres away. You hear someone scream from below as the gunfire increases in intensity.
> 2 metres away. The door opens, and a dark-haired man in an orange shirt dashes out. He is carrying a M16 rifle as he goes around the table, choosing the side that is closer to you.
> Immediately you fix your sights on him as your group stops.
“POLICE! PUT THE WEAPON DOWN!”
> He turns and sees you. Don’t do it.
> He twists his body. Your finger moves to the trigger. No compliance.
> He swings his arms, turning the barrel of his rifle towards-
> You squeeze the trigger, and immediately, his body gets peppered with bullets as your ears explode from the sounds of gunfire. He collapses against the table, the rifle now laying on the ground beside him. Blinking rapidly, your right ear rings as you see the smoking barrel of Foxtrot’s sub-machinegun just barely centimetres away from your head. Foxtrot taps you in the shoulder.
> “Move out, Det 1.”
> With a nod, Alpha advances into the first room, shield ready as he does a quick scan of the room. Bravo and Angela moves over to disarm the man and check him. With a swift shake of her head, Angela and Bravo moves back behind Alpha, who is waiting beside the opened door, and your group stacks up behind him. Foxtrot starts a chain of taps again, and when it reaches Alpha, he charges in. You follow behind Angela swiftly, entering the room with your weapon raised.
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>>29965731
> Inside is a rather run-down office, complete with a desk with a laptop on it and files, 2 couches, more filing cabinets and bookcases. Trash and cigarette butts litter the entire area, and the office appears deserted. Your group fans out, checking the room with weapons still raised. Then, a sound from under the desk captures your attention. You move swiftly towards it, weapon at the ready as you turn around the corner. A small whimper draws your attention again. As Foxtrot circles around from the other side, you nod at her before kicking the chair out of the way as the both of you advance quickly, bringing your weapons forward.
“Police!”
> Cowering under the desk is a mare. A Pegasus. She has an off-white coat, and her mane and tail are pink and green. Her light blue eyes are wide with fear, and her pupils have shrunk to the size of pinpricks. Her face and mane is covered in dry crust, and she stinks to high heaven. She is trembling hard, and when you both raised your weapons at her, she pisses herself. Literally.
> Oh fuck.
> Lowering your weapons, Foxtrot kneels and begins to coax the little mare to come out. It is then that Bravo taps you on the shoulder, pointing at the laptop. You turn your eyes to it, and you see that Alpha and Angela are already staring at it in horror.
> On the screen is a website, and there is a red counter on the top that is ticking down from 42 minutes. Below it is a video feed, and you see a pony in it. She is bound to a bed, each hoof to a corner of the frame as a loop of raffia string is around her neck, connected to a device behind the bed. A profile picture and comment section is on the right side of the website, and you see a picture of a mare with short, light blue hair and a cream-coloured coat. Her eyes match the colour of her mane, and a name on the profile tells you that she is one “Coco Pommel”. The mare in the video looks exactly like the one in the profile picture.
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>>29965740
> Alpha picks up his radio and speaks into it, asking for AC Thor to come up to the office urgently, saying that he “needs to see this”.
> Your mouth hangs open as you realise what you are seeing. This is a snuff video, and it is a live-feed with 257 viewers. Reading the comments quickly, you see messages for the maker to do a whole repertoire of cruel and sadistic things to the mare, each ranked in accordance to the number of bids and amount given.
> Your eyes widen. “Knife in poosay :D” ranks the highest, followed by “boiling waterz bathz” and “flay her with a fillet knife”. Shaking your head in disgust, you hear another wave of gunfire and shouts from below. You turn to the others.
“We’ll see what AC Thor wants to do with this. Foxtrot, stay here, look after that mare and brief AC Thor. Bravo, cover the walkway. The rest of us, we gotta support our guys from the window.”
> Bravo gestures towards the laptop.
> “We have 41 minutes to save this mare.”
“I know, but this looks to be a different location. We’ll have to wait for Tech Department to get us a location. Let AC Thor do his job.”
> With a quick exchange of nods, the 4 of you leave the office. Bravo moves to cover the walkway as Alpha, Angela and you move to the window, taking cover below it. Angela speaks urgently as Alpha discards his shield due to its bulkiness.
> “Wait for the shooting to start again. Remember, 4 seconds of exposure. Take your targets down and dive down immediately.”
“Roger that.”
> For now, all you can hear are muffled shouts from below. Then, the sound of automatic gunfire drowns everything out as the gunfire starts again. With a quick exchange of nods, your group gets up, pointing your weapons down at the storage floor below.
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>>29965746
> You see 4 distinct groups of people: a detachment of officers taking cover behind a pile of boxes directly below your position, another detachment on your left using a forklift as a shield, a third detachment on the opposite side, peering around a wall as they open fire on the last group, which comprises of 5 individuals who are hiding behind metal containers. You can see several cages against the wall nearest to the 5, and there are ponies in them. Across the storage floor are the bodies of men, too many for you to count in the precious seconds that you have.
> You take aim at a guy wearing a purple shirt, noting the M16 rifle in his hands as he shoots at the group of officers taking cover behind the forklift.
> NOT MY OFFICERS YOU SHITLORD!
> In unison, the 3 of you open fire, and you feel the recoil on your shoulder as the purple guy falls from the burst of bullets from your sub-machinegun. Instantly, you dive down, laying flat on your tummy. Spinning around quickly, you see that Angela is on the ground too, but Alpha is still standing.
> SHIT!
“GET DOWN!”
> You dive over and grab the back of his vest, pulling him backwards, causing him to fall as the back of his helmet crashes into the metal table. At that instant, you feel 3 distinct impacts on your chest. They are like sledgehammer blows, knocking the wind out of you as you fall back. Pain radiates from them, and you curse through your gritted teeth as more bullets slices through the air where Alpha was standing, impacting the ceiling and causing dust and debris to fall into your open mouth.
> “FUCKING HELL, ALPHA! 4 SECONDS, GOD DAMMIT!”
> That was Angela’s voice. Groaning, you move a hand over your chest, and you can feel 3 holes in the vest that were not there a minute ago. The once solid ceramic plate is now in pieces, and they shift under you press against them. You move your hand away, noting that they are free of blood. Blinking rapidly, you stare at your fingers in disbelief.
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>>29965750
> You are saved. The ceramic plates in your vest saved you.
> Leaning back with a groan, you hear more shouts and gunfire from below. The bullets have stopped now, and in the relative silence, your ears pick up the sound of movement approaching you quickly. Angela appears in your vision, and she drops her weapon as she starts patting you on the chest. You groan as you try to get up.
“I’m okay… I’m okay…”
> She is sniffling as she continues her actions, and when she reaches to unzip the vest, you grab her hands.
“CHARLIE! I’m okay! None of them got through!”
> That made her stop. Then, she covers her face with her gloved hands. You reach over and pet her on her shoulder, and you notice that the gunfire has stopped. Slowly, you get up, groaning again as you feel the bruises on your chest smarting. You crawl to one of the holes made by the bullets that were sent your way, peering at the scene below you.
> Members of your rescue team have over-run the position of the 5 men, and are now standing amongst their corpses. Some of them are already bringing the captive ponies out of the cages. With a sigh, you turn around to see Bravo hunched over Alpha. There is a pool of blood under him.
> Oh fuck.
> FUCK! FUCK!
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>>29965758
> Instantly, you are by his side, doing a quick check of him. He is bleeding badly from right upper arm, his left forearm, his left calf and his left thigh, and his combat vest is punctured in 5 distinct spots. Bravo already has his hands on his thigh wound, applying pressure on it to stop the bleeding as he mumbles incoherently in his panic. You reach over and press the wound on his left forearm, hearing Angela’s voice from your headset as she calls for medical attention. She then moves over to apply pressure on right upper arm. Alpha is groaning behind his balaclava, but he opens his eyes as AC Thor and Foxtrot appears beside you, and the lady officer puts her hands on his calf wound. The Assistant Commissioner is wearing a vest himself under his uniform, and you see that one of his shoulders in his uniform has a bullet hole. Alpha speaks softly as he lifts his head to look at AC Thor.
> “… Sir…”
> “Shush now. Medical personnel are on their way.”
> He nods and slowly moves his head to you.
> “S-sorry, man… I fuck… I f-fucked up.”
> You just shake your head.
“It’s okay. Focus on yourself now. What’s done is done.”
> He groans before looking back at AC Thor.
“… S-sir… Can y-you remove this fuck… This fucking helmet and c-cloth… On my f-face?”
> AC Thor nods silently and does so. Underneath the balaclava is another Causacian man. He is around the same age as you. His hair is a light brown and his skin is fair. His eyes are a pale grey, and his facial features are pleasantly handsome with a strong jawline. Alpha looks at AC Thor again.
> “… Sir, this is it… My t-time has come… Please, I need you… To d-do 2 things for me…”
> AC Thor simply nods as he places a hand on Alpha’s right calf.
> “… Tell my D-Derpy that I love her so v-very much… That I d-don’t want her to cry... And… R-rescue that Pom… Pommel… Fo…”
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>>29965762
> Alpha loses consciousness as Bravo yells in despair. AC Thor gets up and goes over to the room with the laptop. Looking down at the officer in a pool of crimson, you choke on your breath.
> That could have been you… You could easily have been Alpha, choking out your last words as you fight to stay alive from the many bullet wounds in your body.
> Your eyes meet Angela’s, and you see something in her eyes. A fire. Angela is angry. Then, you feel your sadness and fear for Alpha melt away as cold fury courses through your being, igniting a flame that burns in every fibre of your being. Glancing at Bravo and Foxtrot, you can see the same look in their eyes.
> Your detachment wants vengeance.
> Quick footsteps appear from the walkway as Paramedics rush in, carrying a stretcher. You stand up to let them do their work, and you hear AC Thor calling for your detachment to enter the office. Glancing at Alpha again as they work to stabilise him, the 4 of you walk over to join AC Thor, who is staring at the laptop with his phone by the side of his head. The pony mare is now laying down the couch, and she is watching your group silently.
> He points to Foxtrot and does a writing motion with his hand, to which the officer tears a piece of paper from a nearby file and grabs a pen. Holding the tip to the paper, she waits.
> “Block 45, Blue Ridge Road, Unit 11-13, Postal Code… 8514862…”
> Wait. That address.
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>>29965769
> You turn to Angela at the same time she that does to you, and you see the recognition in her eyes. Then, AC Thor says his thanks and hangs up, tapping at the piece of paper with his finger.
> “Storm this address and get the fucker inside. Take one of the armoured vans. The video feed is from this address, and you have 29 minutes to save Coco Pommel… I will follow once I get Blossomforth here to the vans below.”
> He looks up and gives you all a hard look.
> “What are you waiting for? GO!”
> You obey and run out of the office along the other 3 officers, not even turning to glance at the team of medics that have surrounded Alpha. Turning the corner, you flick your thumb, making your weapon ‘safe’ again.
> You are going after Sprinkle Medley’s killer, and you are going to save that mare.
> You have 28 minutes to do so.
> …
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>>29965769
Not stop alpha any more are ya Chad?!
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>>29965778
And another major update!

Was listening to Modern Warfare 2 soundtrack as I wrote this. Had a ton of fun listening and writing, and I am really happy with what I have. I hope you like it.

I will be writing an update in another 2 hours. Also, I have to put up another pastebin as "the filesize is too large for your pastebin." So, there are two links now, which I will provide below.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek

As always, thank you all so much if you have been reading and following. Again, let me know your comments, ideas, suggestions and criticisms.

Stay awesome! ^^

>>29965799
That's really mean of you... He looked after and loved Derpy! :<
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>>29965709
Then my purpose is fulfilled
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>>29965825
Why does Anon, or anyone, carry a combat knife? To stab bad guys if he runs out of bullets? Seems he should ditch the knife and just carry more bullets. OTOH I'm not a /k/ommando and lots of folks carry them so there must be a reason.

Why does the team not know each other much better? They literally just met in the back of the van and don't even know each others names! Don't folks usually train together a while before doing this sort of thing for real?

>Should have known AC Thor to get the Snipers in
They did not know that before going in? I hope the sniper team was briefed about them!

>fine not exceeding $60,000 and to imprisonment for a term not exceeding 8 years
We've already got a fairly high body-count, including an officer fatality, for some fairly minor offenses. AC Thor might have to explain going in all rambo like this when the only victims are non-persons. At least there will be weapons charges to stack on.

>Tell my D-Derpy that I love her
OMG, so cheesy but it really works. Poor Alpha.

>you have 29 minutes to save Coco Pommel
Could be a trap; Anon better watch his flanks.

And generally: Wow, great update! HANG IN THERE COCO
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>>29965731
This is intense Merc
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>>29965740
Dry crust???
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>>29965740
>“Coco Pommel
Fuck Mercury!!! No Coco!
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>>29965746
>This is a snuff video, and it is a live-feed with 257 viewers

Only a waste of space that this world will not miss
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>>29965825
pretty exciting.

Some of the things >>29966083 pointed out trigger my autism too. But i'm stronger than that, and not going to give in to it.


>>29966130
She was under the desk for a reason anon.
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>>29965762
Derpy not deserve this
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>>29965825
And we will be waiting, a really captivating story Mercury, hate, fear, pain and anger, all that and more and surely there will be more to experience

No Coco....

Good Job
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>>29966083
>Why does Anon, or anyone, carry a combat knife?
Utility.
There are times when you just need to cut or pry something, and you would have to be very determined to do so with a gun.
Make no mistake, combat knife is still just a knife, and having a knife at hand is always nice.
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Oh wow, I am simply astounded by the responses that you guys have given me. Thank you all so much!

>>29966083
>>29966230
>Should have known AC Thor to get the Snipers in
Many times in such organisations, many things are told on a 'need-to-know' basis only; and don't forget that 'upper management' often decides what you should or should not know, and often with fucked-up consequences.

> AC Thor might have to explain going in all rambo like this when the only victims are non-persons. At least there will be weapons charges to stack on.
Aye, I already have taken this into account. No spoilers.

>>29966178
> Only a waste of space that this world will not miss
I concur. Fuck them.

>>29966320
Aye. There's more to come.

>>29966321
Yep. A knife is a tool, not just a weapon. Personally, I never felt comfortable without my swiss blade when I was serving in the Army, cause it is just so god damned useful.
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>>29966083
> Why does the team not know each other much better? They literally just met in the back of the van and don't even know each others names! Don't folks usually train together a while before doing this sort of thing for real?
I agree, but the context for the ECAD Rescue Team is that it is a fresh organisation that needed an operationally ready team almost immediately.
> Note that AC Thor just made the announcement for ECAD's formation just 2 days ago, and now they are already operational.
> What you said makes sense in the long term, and I agree: a specialised and trained team of people will be very much more efficient and effective.
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>>29966412
>> Why does the team not know each other much better?

They just met and passed their baptism of fire, (unfortunately with two wounded and perhaps a dead) but all share a same feeling with regard to ponies, from this operation they will learn to improve their interaction and be better prepared for future operations and Most importantly, saving ponies from hell.

>Yep. A knife is a tool, not just a weapon. Personally, I never felt comfortable without my swiss blade when I was serving in the Army, cause it is just so god damned useful.


When Anon and Angela get to the place where the video is made the Snuff video I can assure you that both will know how to give a good use to each and every one of the tools of the Swiss blade in the person of the executioner of Coco Pommel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=45V6db9CKcc
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Ride the mares.
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>>29966937
I'd 'ride' this fine mare right here.
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>>29966321
>utility
Absolutely, I carry a multi-tool everywhere, and had to use it in a really dicey situation two days ago! But a K-bar type combat knife is not very utilitarian. It can chop and pry if it really has to, but not much else. Is Anon just carrying it for the tacti-cool?
>not judging
>he's proud of his work and wants to look good doing it
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>>29966937
>At that exact moment, Max realized that pone currently between his legs is super into it.
>'What in the Tartarus did I get myself into?'
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Keep the good work up guys!

>>29960379
/spg/-partyvan!

>>29946065
A rapefugee from /SiM/

Your writing is good and I enjoyed it but I'd love to see if there is more to the story than breaking her.
The way you wrote her change and inner conflict was well done. But what are Anon's motivations? Will she get her revenge? Will she meet the her companions again? Will she tell the ponies what happened to her once she is "reformed"? Will they help her?
There is a lot of potential despite the very grim nature of what you wrote so far.
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>>29967022
Get back to writing, or you'll get the whip again!
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>>29967358
No! I want to masturbate to my waifu instead.
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>>29968054
Why is the link to this game not in the OP? Looks like a lot of effort was put into it.
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>>29967159
>>'What in the Tartarus did I get myself into?'
A slave mare that is super into being a slave mare. Sounds pretty good to me.
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>>29968429
You dont understand!
All he ever wanted was a pone to pull cart and carry him after a long day of digging for gems.
And there she goes, being all sexual about it!
You can literally track where she went by following drops of marecum dripping out off her snatch!
He wasn't prepared for this.
And the worst part is that even if he would let her go, she would bullshit herself into staying with him.
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>>29951557
Well, fuck. Things were just looking a bit up too.

Silver better figure out a way to find that money - didn't they just put in a ridiculous amount of work to pull off the harvest? - or this is going to just turn into endless depression and misery. Keeping things up to balance out the frustration and pain in your story helps avoid reader burnout.

Moondancer a good poner, though. She really wants to genuinely help, even after everything she's been through.
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>>29968078
which game anon?
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>>29957876
>why didn't she come to you
it hurts too much...

As to the info,
We give him names and info by word of mouth only, we do NOT give him the clippings themselves. If by some reason Sunburst is caught, we can't have any evidence or trace of where he got these organizations from. If he's caught now, there's plausible deniability in saying rumors from those who got the clippings in the first place must have spread around.

Also, he does not contact these people yet. He researches them, see who are trustworthy and who are too dangerous, and only contact if they are reasonable and safe
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>>29968487
The slave pony game.
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>>29968488
Dubs confirm.
But another cell gets the information, does the research, and makes the contacts, not Sunburst. This cell does not need to know about Haycartes method or much else. If they end up in Anons dungeon they try and say they were just searching for ponies they loved back home, it might even be true.
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>>29967633
Vinyl would make a good pet mare. Lots of life, lots of fight in her. Just meeting her head-on and taming that liveliness would be interesting.

Probably have to push things a bit to get her properly obedient, though; I don't see Vinyl as the kind of pony who'd lift her tail just for, say, the opportunity to keep producing music. Have to teach her helplessness first, show her that shit's going to happen whatever she does, and then offer the metaphorical carrot.
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>>29968608
Or you know you could be a decent human being and just help her.

> own DJ pone,
>Let her make music, buy her the gear she needs, inspire her, care for her.
>Work hard and publicize her, get her gigs, get her world famous as an amazing DJ
>Live the jet set life, rich as fuck with your loving pone DJ waifu because you helped her get back what she lost,
>Be the envy of pone fuckers everywhere cuz only you get to snuggle her cute ass
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>>29968608
So you're saying that her submission would be somehow non-optional?
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>>29968449
What, would he rather his mare be whining?
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>>29968750
I suppose you might say it would be mandatory, yes.


>>29968748
>Implying being the living property of another creature wouldn't be the foremost thing on her mind
>Implying having no personal rights, being a legal non-person, wouldn't be permanently weighing on her
>Implying there'd be no humiliation for her in having all her work published under your name
>Implying the fact that none of what she is enjoying is actually hers wouldn't constantly drag her down
>Implying she wouldn't skip town on you the very second you let her out of any sort of tracking and restraint
>Implying she wouldn't empty your wallet as she leaves to give her money for travelling home
Face it, it's break her or lose her.
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>>29969049
>Headcanon: Scratch is albino. Her true colours are white on white, with pink and red. She avoids sunshine, needs her purple shades, and is always very diligent about dying her mane and tail.
>Has body image issues, looking like a "mutant freak" makes her feel naked.
>Slavery has put a big crimp in her style. Shades damaged, roots showing like six inches, only been hosed down in her cage since she was returned to auction.
>Magic, of course, totally suppressed after the last incident.
>No need to be taught helplessness. She knows.
>Anon bids low, but it's a slow day and he wins her.
>Only thing mandatory in SPG is the bath scene!
"Please, master, work the teal streaks in deeper!"
>"Don't worry, I'll take my time and do it right. I think your mane is about done."
"Thank you, master. Is my tail high enough?"
Wub a dub dub. Vinyl in the tub.

>Implying slavery is something done by one person to another (non)person, rather than a culture-wide system
>Implying a celebrity can skip town and disappear, in this information age
>Implying she doesn't live for fame, something not even slavery can take away
>Implying she has somewhere better to go
>Implying that exploring property rights issues isn't what SPG is for
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>>29969382
>Implying she wouldn't shudder every time her owner joins her in the shower
>Implying she doesn't still flinch from his hand caressing over her snow-white coat
>Implying she hasn't learned to hide the fear and rage in her voice when he touches her
>Implying she doesn't know this is the cost of being kept in a safe, "caring" home that will at least allow her to look normal
>Implying she isn't thankful the shower hides her tears as she lifts her tail and lets him work through and beneath it
>Implying she won't begin to feel equally disgusted with herself for prostituting herself out in return for what meager comfort the dye and shades provide
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>>29969428
>Implying she needs to be broken any more than this
>Implying her 'relationship' can't change over time, for better or worse
>Implying this is already pretty good green!

Go on...
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>>29969501
I'd write it, but that would slow down my other work.
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>>29969501
>implying she wouldn't hate herself for everything she's doing
>implying she wouldn't want to become another pony
>implying she wouldn't ask for different color dye so she can be somepony different
>implying she wouldn't shift her self-loathing to this other pony
>implying she wouldn't blame this imaginary pony for everything bad that's happening in her life
>implying she wouldn't scream at a mirror one night about how this other pony is letting the monkey rape her day after day
>implying she wouldn't begin begging this other pony for help between outbursts
>implying Anon wouldn't notice something is wrong
>implying he wouldn't think she was happier when her mane was blue
>implying she wouldn't kick the bottle out of his hand when he tries to redye her mane and tail
>implying she would even want to be herself anymore
>implying she doesn't deep down believe that it really is her own fault
>implying she can accept that
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>>29969613
OMG, broken mare just stripped a gear inside. Next thing she'll be get an accordion and be 'Squeezy', the red and black polka-pony.
>Ohmpa! Ohompa! "I love my master!"

>Implying that would necessarily be a bad thing.
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>>29969703
>Implying this anon is not listening to polka-step right now!
>Implying it's not the best thing ever
>Implying Squeezy would not become more successful on earth than Vinyl Scratch ever was on Equestria
>Implying she doesn't get signed (ie: bought) by Sony
>Implying a 360 deal is any different from slavery anyway
Polka-step. Seriously a thing.
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>>29968783
She whined like that, I'd fry her ass with a hairbrush until she is bawling like a filly.
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>>29958380
>>29959047
>>29962328
>>29968488

"...I'll pass on the information, Sunburst. But -"
> You draw yourself up again, adding just a little touch of 'imposing ruler' to your body language.
"-but, I want to make something clear: We don't trust anyone implicitly. Or even anypony."
> That last bit hurt to say, but was very much the truth - especially since you'd been introduced with to ponies like Haute Glamour.
"You verify any contact with them first. You make sure they're exactly what they say they are, or we don't do anything."
> "Y-Yes, Princess."
> Only then do you sink back down, offering a gentler smile to Sunburst.
"I'm sorry. But we're taking an awful risk here. Already, even just with this testing... it's a terrific gamble. One we have to take - we need a contingency if everything goes wrong - but we can't be anything less than perfectly careful. One mistake and we all lose everything we've gained, no matter how little it is."
> "I understand."
"Good. I'll give you the names and any other relevant information, but not the papers themselves. So if you're caught... it's called plausible deniability."
> "Hmm."
> Rubbing at the little tuft of bear hanging from his chin, Sunburst nods.
> "Makes good sense. We've already got another group investigating help from the outside; I don't even know who's in it, but I trust the pony who talks to them. If I need any other information, We'll have to come back to you."
"Better that than this whole thing collapsing if the papers are discovered. Teaching my daughter gives you an excuse for keeping tomes on magic around and experimenting with them, even the more obscure and unusual ones. But nothing will excuse that connection, if it's discovered."
> If he is upset by the fact that you were ensuring he would be the one punished if the information is uncovered, Sunburst does not show it.
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>>29969840

> Half of you wants to believe that he is actually fine with it, that he recognizes the need and understands.
> But half of you is upset with yourself, and whispers assurances that he is almost certainly as angered as you are and merely equally good at hiding it.
"The urge to just... leap ahead and take advantage of this is strong, I understand. But establishing their trustworthiness and ability to shelter us first is imperative; some sort of - show of faith. If you think they can be safely contacted for that, then go ahead - I trust you to approach this with the proper prudence."
> "I'll pass it on when I send the information. I won't even be doing this - it's another group that does this; I only know
> Sunburst offers a rare smile.
> "I'll do you proud, Your Highness."
> ...
> Shortly after you return to your office, Thunderlane taps gently on the door.
> "Your Highness? Can I come in?"
"Of course, Thunderlane. What is it?"
> "I just wanted to know how the talk went with Anonymous."
"Ah..."
> You beckon the stallion in, and he settles down in front of your desk.
> "He is going to give the material back in the end?"
> Hiding the look of embarrassment on your face is impossible, but not the worst.
> Thunderlane was, after all, a trusted friend.
"He was quite upfront about it, yes. He'll give it all back."
> Sagging in relief, Thunderlane nods.
> "That should take some pressure off. Show everypony we don't have to fear him right now."
"You sound very relieved."
> "I was afraid if this went on for much longer somepony was going to get beaten silly if something didn't come soon."
"Tensions are that high?"
> Your eyebrows shoot up; you'd told Anonymous the camp was balanced on a knife edge, but something like that...
> "Not - not everypony. But there are a few groups. Your most tenacious supporters. The ones who hate you the most. They were getting ready. This will help, though."
> A gentle sigh escapes you.
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>>29969812
>Implying a hairbrush is better than a scrub-brush
Don't worry, LastChance Anon already has it well in hand.
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>>29969850

"Thank you for warning me, Thunderlane... and I hope it does. I can't face having to physically punish anypony else right now."
> "I know.... listen, about that. There's something I thought I should bring up, about the other ponies... involved in that."
"Go ahead."
> "I think we should see about offering some of them a way out. The flogging made its point - violence isn't going to be tolerated - but we don't have to continue to torment them. Give them an option to prove they regret it."
"You're thinking of Crescent Moon."
> Thunderlane winces, but nods.
> "Was it that obvious?"
"No. But I was, and I guessed."
> "So, will you?"
> When you don't answer immediately, Thunderlane snaps - looking up with eyes narrowed:
> "She's a child, Your Highness! A child lead astray by others. Sealing her magic, chaining her to a bed?! Is that really necessary?"
"You were the one who suggested it, I might point out."
> Again he winces, rather more sharply this time and accompanied by a look away.
> "...and you'd better believe I regret it."
"Why, then?"
> "I was - I don't know. Playing the Tirek's advocate, trying to look tough for Anonymous so he wouldn't think I was sympathizing with them too much... I don't know, okay?"
> He really doesn't, you think.
> Or maybe he does, and is just not able to admit what his reason was.
"I'll take it under consideration, Thunderlane. But when you say the camp is balanced on a knife's edge, remember that we are part of the camp too."
> "You made an exception for Rumble. Wasn't he the same?"
> Now it is your turn to flinch.
> In part because not only was Thunderlane right, but because it had been you who lead him astray then.
> And partially because of the thought that flickered through your head at that moment:
> That perhaps you would have been better off not to make an exception.
> No!
> You had to then, and you could now.
"I will bring it up with Anonymous."
> Thunderlane perks up, and you speak before he can get ahead of himself:
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>>29969858

"But - you must remember, everything that you felt he will feel too. Especially appearing tough so others will not think he is weak; after all, to a large degree he still thinks of us as property and feels he will be judged by his ability to exert himself on us. This is also the fact that there are laws he must obey-"
> Not laws about protecting ponies, though.
> No, they didn't extend that far.
> Just laws for protecting humans.
"-and I don't know if he will assent to removing her horn restrictor."
> "I get it, yeah. But that's enough."
> Somehow you force a smile, thankful for Thunderlane's understanding tone.
"Is there anything else?"
> "No, I just wanted to bring that up. I'll take off now, Your Highness."
"Be well, Thunderlane."
> Barely have you looked back down at your desk before there's another tap at the door.
"Don't have to knock again, you know."
> "Oh, um - it's actually, not Thunderlane, Miss Cadance..."
"Oh, Mocha!"
> Beckoning the timid young mare in, you offer a gentle smile.
> "H-Hello, Miss Cadance."
> Settling in her seat, she nervously brushes her maid's uniform flat before reaching into the saddlebags she wears.
> "Master Anonymous wanted me to bring these back to you. It's the papers you gave him."
"Oh, yes! Thank you, Mocha."
> But she returns her muzzle to the saddlebag, drawing out a frame as well.
> "Master also said you would want this..."
> Even before she passes it to you in her magic, you know what it is.
> The image of Shining Armor had been copied, resized, and inserted into a pictureframe.
"Oh, yes. That is - very welcome. Thank you very much, Mocha Cream..."
> "He also said he didn't know if you wanted the picture of Celestia framed, so he only did the one."
"No, that's fine. We'll... figure something out."
> About this, and all the struggles you face.
> Somehow.

> Barely have you stepped from Cadance's office when the front door of the town hall opens and a familiar face steps in.
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>>29969866

> Mocha Cream smiles up at you; she'd become much more warm and friendly, you reflect, since becoming closer with Rumble as well.
> "Hello, Thunderlane."
"Hello, Mocha. Bringing something down for Cadance?"
> "Yes. The documents she wanted back."
"Ah, cool! I won't keep you then; I'm sure she'll be glad to have them back."
> Slipping past the unicorn filly, you turn and step out onto the streets.
> It was good that Anonymous had brought those back so quickly, you think.
> But soon very, very different thoughts are looming once again on your mind:
> The same thoughts that had lingered since you'd spoken to Crescent Moon.
> Spreading your wings, you leap skyward - the flight providing something of a distraction from the considerable fear on your mind.
> Vapor Trail was known by the rebels.
> She couldn't be one of them - she was too kind, too caring towards you to be a violent rebel.
> ...unless she was a spy?
> You nearly lose a wingbeat at that thought, dropping a good five feet in the air before your wings beat again and propel you back up.
> No.
> Vapor Trail was not a spy.
> She was just - mixed up in something she doesn't understand.
> ...you hope.
> You plead.
> Having another pony there to listen to you - one who would support you - had kept you going when everything else seemed set to fall apart.
> A blush sneaks across your ebony cheeks as you reflect that it probably didn't hurt that the pony in question was a cute mare too.
> But still.
> Maybe you should talk to her about this?
> To settle your own mind, but also to clear her name.
> After all, if one of them decided to save their own neck by telling everything they knew and it got around to one of the less sympathetic guards...
> Crescent Moon had said she didn't know much about the organization; if the others potentially knew even more...
> But then again, you didn't want to push Vapor Trail away by seeming like you're interrogating her about it.
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>>29969880

> Tartarus' teats - you'd tried to make her feel safe and welcome here!
> Screwing it up now...
> ...but in counter to that, it might be better to get to the bottom of this with a friendly face.
> Growling softly, you bring yourself down atop a roof and peer over the edge of the roof to the lower building beside it.
> The smells wafting from a pair of fan vents spoke of dinner already well underway - a kitchen, and somewhere within Vapor Trail at work.
> ...it isn't stalking.
> You just want to make sure she's safe.
> By confronting her, or something else?
> Crescent Moon would be no help, at least not until you found a way to reduce her sentence.
> She'd clammed right back up tight as soon as she'd figured out you were probing about Vapor's situation.
> Driving a hoof into the roofline with an angry thud, you allow a small growl out.
> Just what were you going to do...?
> And how much of this was 'keeping the camp peaceful' now, and how much was taking advantage of your position?

Our options!
> Leave her be, Vapor can take care of herself and deal with the consequences
> Tell her, but don't demand answers - she'll tell you when she feels ready
> Confront and question her over her attachments, but be gentle and helpful about it
> Confront and aggressively question her over her attachments
> Other (suggest)

A bit late in the thread, but of course I'll be watching the next one too.
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>>29969886
We like her and she is a friend, but we shouldn't rule out other ponies using her.

Play it passive, feed her false info just dropping the odd fake interesting bit of info, then we see where that goes.
So long as we're mindful of what we say in from the of her there's no need to question her at all.
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>>29969961
This. No need to interrogate her, that would be terrible if she wasn't a spy. Guarantee you would drive her away.
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>>29969886
>Confront and question her over her attachments, but be gentle and helpful about it

>>29969961 has the right idea. We are not hunting any spectacular bust right now. We save those for next time Rumble screws up. We just slowly build betrayable relationships and stay alert for any tidbit of information that comes our way.
If she wants to confide something, that's good. If she comforts us as well, that's better. But if neither happens, it's still fine.
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>>29958330
I want to smear Lanolin Rich Antiseptic Ointment all over Coronas body. And by "all over" I mean ALL over.
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>>29969886
When did we know to Vapor Trail was it a mare emotionally destroyed by the idea of bringing to the world a baby for living all his life as slave, even Anon in a deployment of value and empathy offered to 'adopt' the filly and to avoid a life of submission, in which moment she might have had contact with the rebels? Unless she was already a part of the group before remaining pregnant, if it had happened later that would limit the number of suspects to the ponies that it has treated in the last weeks and would facilitate to Thunderlane to investigate, perhaps the best option would to treat with Vapor of a subtle way, would regret ruining a friendship for an erroneous hunch

>> Confront and question her over her attachments, but be gentle and helpful about it

Because does not talk about his past before coming here, ask him if he saw the same kind of problems where he was before, and then to suggest if there were ponies who tried to fix the situation with others methods
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>>29969613
Damn, this is some good shit.
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>>29970903
Shit is, indeed, quite good.
Jingles? Suppose you could copy the whole string of posts to a pastbin before the thread is lost?
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>>29969886
>> Tell her, but don't demand answers

Her motivation in this is the desperate need to have her child escape slavery. We knew that since she first showed up. She's taking the only option she thinks she has. Vapor doesn't know about Sunburst's escape plans, doesn't know that Cadence approved it, doesn't know it's a matter of staying quiet and not causing trouble until it's ready to implement. All she knows is that she's a slave, her child will be born a slave, and that there's a group who might possibly be able to change that. Maybe she made the first move, maybe they contacted her to get info on Anon's favorite guard. Maybe she actually started the group, just to get any chance she could at getting her child out of there. That would explain why a Wonderbolt was a high ranking member and was completely unwilling to cooperate.

The next time they're cuddling in bed, ask her about it. She doesn't have to tell you, but you want her to trust you. If she comes clean with us voluntarily, tells us why and how she got involved with them, maybe we can give her an alternative. No names, no methods; just that there is a plan in the works, it's heavily compartmentalized to avoid detection, and that you honestly believe it would get the entire camp to freedom all at once. And maybe that Cadence has approved it? She probably thinks Candyass was lying to her in the clinic all that time ago. All it needs is time and an absence of camp-wide problems, and that's why they've been trying so hard to shut down the rebel group and keep Haute from starting trouble. Hell, it would probably be good to tell Rumble at the same time, as long as he swears Mocha wouldn't hear about it. It's not that we don't trust them, it's that any slip could cause the whole thing to come crashing down. We probably should have done that earlier. But if they're going to be involved in this anyway, they may as well be on our side.
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>>29971379
Conspirators recruiting new members without authorization is anathema to opsec. If she is accepted, she joins the cell she can best assist with, after consultation and introspection. Thunderlane arbitrarily expending such an enormous amount of precious trust on a whim is far more than the conspiracy can afford.
But then Thunderlane has never been too concerned about spending other ponies trust on his individual priorities; go for it!
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>ywn have a that is really into being for riding
it hurts
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Buster is inspired by this
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>>29965769
>Derpyfag being killed off in the green
>Im a derpyfag
What did he mean by this? Justice for Derpy or riot!
And i dont mean eye for eye, give her to the corporation or to Thor, i dont care, just dont leave her alone..
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Rarity the fugitive historie when?
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Make this next OP image or riot
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